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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>44768728

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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44896398

Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

another shitty shitpost: tags: shitpost, short fic, LanZa Zaion, Vox Akuma, Enna Alouette, Kaneko Kyo, Luca Kaneshiro, Kyoran Meloco, Torahime Kotoka:>>44770802

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Gaki's fight for the last drop of oji-san cum:>>44795205

A fic about a bunch of blue chuubas competing over who can win over a shota they've all spotted first.:>>44820508

>>44830350 :>>44830350

Koyori making a speech/class/presentation about something scientific in uni that she rehearsed with you beforehand, then, as she asks "Any questions?" you raise you hand and ask something she can use to reaffirm her thesis/main points
Afterwards she gives you the eyes, and once you're home she fucks your brains out.:>>44842196

Scarle loses a bet and has to be your loyal pet dog for a weekend:>>44848108

I know it doesn't fit her character at all but ever since Toko released that cute na kanojo cover last year, yandere toko has been in the back of my mind. I need it.:>>44852537

Zaion wants to relieve some stress after everything that's happened and seduces (You), Enna's boyfriend who has become fed up with her shit:>>44872476

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Love me some funny fennec clown. Okaywrite bros, what you got going on? How's your progress coming along?
I'm nearing the end of my current chapter, so I'll hopefully finish that up and do the proofreading and editing today.

>> No.44897163

>>44896999
I haven't been able to muster up the willpower to write anything lately.

>> No.44897594

>>44897163
Take some of mine then. Do you got the ideas you want in your head and its just hard to find the time or motivation to start putting them on paper?

>> No.44897779

Given the thread edition. Has the anon writing Omarun abandoned that concept/fic or is it still on ye olde wip pile?

>> No.44898089

>>44897594
Pretty much. The framework is there, but there just isn't any fire in my belly to put it down on paper. Part of me is telling me that I have to do it, but another part of me is complaining that it feels like a chore.

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>>44898089
I've been where you are bro. The start or getting back into the swing of things can feel like a chore, but it's times like that where I remind myself of parts of my story I want to bring to life, even if they are parts I may not be writing right away. Those exciting things help me take that dive and get things rolling again. Above all else though, you should prioritize your fun. When it's fun for you, everything else will follow. If you WANT to write, I believe you can get there.

>> No.44899870

The board's been going so fucking fast lately

>> No.44900717

>>44896262
Fucking your slampig wife Polka.

>> No.44900782

>>44896398
Bot-chama, the fic had an actual title.....

>> No.44901978

>>44899870
for some reason there needs to be 10 different threads in the catalog about niijiyabs.

>> No.44902070

>>44901978
Half of those threads are interns running damage control.

>> No.44902635
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>>44896999
I'm planning and writing an outline/setting for that Holos turn into weapons/ recruited into a supernatural agency concept that was discussed here about a week ago. Progress is pretty slow going but I'm at least putting something together.
Honestly at a bit of an impass for how to handle the 'other Holo weapon wielders'. Because the 'easy' solution I'm thinking is to make a half/quarter of them the human wielders of the supernatural weapon holos but that kind of ties up a bunch of them conceptually. While the other way I've thought up is to have them be wielded by the managers which runs straight into the wall of only having a few 'named' managers with the rest theoretically getting filled up by effectively OCs.
Another alternative I've thought up right now is to have them 'wield' each other with all of them being supernaturals that can turn into weapons with (You) being the special exception.
Also if anyone has ideas for holos and their weapons forms I'm open to suggestions. Current idea for all of them is to have them be rwbyesque weapons that can switch between two forms, i.e Mio can turn into a katana or a deck of cards, Gura can turn into her Trident or a gun, etc.

>> No.44903374

>>44902635
Can it just be a mix of OCs wielding Holo weapons and others that may not be suited to turn into a weapon? Someone like Matsuri comes to mind for that role, as well as Marine and Noel would be cool weapon wielders.
I would also consider limiting who can turn into multiple types of weapons. Make it more of a show of skill or experience rather than the default rule. That will also allow you to write in good development segments where a specific holo reaches a new potential.
I'd give Mio a different weapon instead of a katana, since you already got a few holos that would either turn into one, or wield one.
>Iroha
>Ayame
>Fubuki
>Korokami
I think the deck of cards works for her really well. It's honestly something I have planned for her to use in my own series.

>> No.44904065

>>44902635
Ocs can be fun so go for it. My ideas for weapons are
>Sora can turn into wing Blades
>Flare is either dual guns or a Bo staff
>Nene is dust knuckles or Nunchucks
>Baelz is a kusarigana
>Kaela is a warhammer or gauntlets (like beowulf from dmc)
>Lui is a whip (duh)
>Koyori is a dagger

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>>44896262
More suicest fics onegai.

>> No.44905426

>>44905217
I'll go out of my way to write the characters aren't blood related to spite you

>> No.44905534
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>>44905426
>Suisei's face when the DNA test confirms you and Anon are actually related and were separated at birth

>> No.44905761

>>44905534
damn, you ruined the twist I was cooking

>> No.44905793

>>44905426
So like porn-style where they call each other step-bro and step-sis but are treated like siblings for everything else?

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>>44905761
I'm sorry I didn't let you cook, anon. Have some suisex to make up for it.

>> No.44906091

>>44905761
I don't think that post would have ruined the twist, because it wouldn't be expected anyway

>> No.44906550

>>44906009
more
>>44905793
pretty much. Sounded good in my head for a parody fic of suicest fics

>> No.44906890

>>44906550
Is there even enough to parody? There's like two fics and some concepts thrown around with the only constant being that Suisei is your sister and the two of you have an incestous relationship that you keep hidden from anyone that knows the both of you.

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Hey, Anon who had that Zaion Exile fic, I think it's safe to say you can post it

>> No.44908288

>>44908195
The convenient thing is that basically noone here watched her and she's gone now, so one can write her almost however one wants

>> No.44908537

>>44908288
All they have to include are jokes from the 00s then she'd be in character.

>> No.44908589

>>44908537
All Your Shota Are Belong To Me?

>> No.44909008

>>44902635
>Kiara: flaming sword and shield / wrist-mounted crossbow that shoots fireball
>Gura: dual pistols/ water-manipulating harpoon, forming the trident shape
>Ina: tentacle-filled book/ reality-altering canvas
>Ame: clockwork revolver / syringe injection gun
>Calli: scythe/ guitar

>> No.44910668

>>44902635
I don't think turning all of them into transforming weapons is the call. You could have the weapons have unique properties that change how they're used instead i.e. Koyori could be a flamethrower/gun hybrid that shoots chemicals as either a stream or bullet like burst, Bae could be a dice that the user can roll to see what actual weapon they get depending on their luck which fits her chaos theme, etc

>> No.44910721

>>44909008 (me)
Fuck do i want to let my autism run wild and create a list for every chuuba

>> No.44911205

>>44902635
Isn't Anya canonically a sheathe or a sword or something?

>> No.44911293

>>44911205
She's a Kris, an Indonesian kind of dagger.

>> No.44912560

>>44896999
Working on my Laplus fic

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>>44905217
Based

>> No.44913431

>>44911293
Kris Redfield, an agent of (holo)STARS...

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>>44912560
What's the super villain brat gonna be up to, if you don't mind me asking.

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>>44913431
>ANON YOU HAVE TO FUCK MY GENMATES

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>>44913641
daughter fic

>> No.44914045

>>44913790
ANON PLEASE
KAELA IS DOING ANOTHER 10 HOUR MINECRAFT STREAM, HER EGGS ARE DRYING UP ANON
YOU HAVE TO SAVE HER bLOODLINE

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>>44913914
You have my attention. Do your best bro!

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>>44914045
ANON SHE HASN'T MISSED A LEAGUE LOG-IN IN MONTHS I'M BEGGING YOU

>> No.44915642

>>44913914
Will she be a brat?

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>>44915642
Of course

>> No.44917037

>>44916076
Nice.

>> No.44919875

>>44914537
Cute

>> No.44922180

I'm starting to think that anon lied about having a Zaion fic ready.

>> No.44923655

>>44922180
Niji management was nice enough to provide like 20 reasons she got fired, I can only imagine he has parts that need rewriting.

>> No.44925868

>>44923655
And most of it was shit other talents had done, curious.

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>one guy talking to himself again

>> No.44926611

>>44925960
I wish this board had post IDs so it'd make retards like you shut the fuck up.

>> No.44926699

>>44926611
Yeah, so does everyone else, kid.

>> No.44927127

>>44926699
>kid
How did you know?

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What chuubas do you want to see in more fics? How would you like to see them be portrayed? Is there a particular series you'd like to them show up in? Or better yet, do you want that chuuba to star in her own series?

>> No.44927583

>>44927205
i want Kronii fics
a)she's sex
b) the idea of diving down in her depressed mind and helping her find joy is attractive to me
c) she probably stinks and that's hot

>> No.44927715

>>44927583
Doesn't she have her own archive of fics in her general?

>> No.44927788

>>44927715
arent those like 90% schizo shit and/or namefag shit?

>> No.44927837

>>44927788
Yeah, there's a lot of namefaggotry in clock gen.

>> No.44927980

>>44927205
i feel like its been forever since the last irys fic

>> No.44928068

>>44927788
>>44927837
Enlighten me on what exactly that means for their fics? Are they from the POV and name a namefag specifically?
In regards to Kroni getting fics in general, I think there's a lot of potential to do fun stuff with Kroni, a couple people have already taken advantage of the whole warden of time aspect.

>> No.44928466

>>44927980
What type of fic would suit Irys anyway? I honestly don't know much about the girl and her lore is vague as fuck to work with.

>> No.44928467

>>44928068
Even before their general went off the rails because of their thead's collective bad decisions the fics in their archive had a tendency to be 'wilder'.

>> No.44929090

>>44928466
She wants to be treated like a princess.

>> No.44929350

>>44928068
you need to understand that kronii got dealt a bad hand
coomers flocked to her, and if you have seen even a bit to her, you'll realize she's not comfortable playing that angle of her model. She's more chill and relaxed and has a more absurdist sense of humor.
This kinda broke some people in her general +her actual real depressed ass (she has gotten better thankfully) not streaming as much as her general wants and suddenly they decided that they need to cope by writing every single fantasy about her. Add namefags/thread celebrities to the mix and its the equivalent of writing a fic about pekofag and his discord buttbuddy and everyone starts jerking off to it and writing more.
I want to save Kronii from her fans and the cataolog fuckers, she never fed the unicorns or the weirdo schizos that stalk her every move in the catalog, but they just decided she's the target

>> No.44930026

>>44929350
Yeah I knew early on that Kroni does not like how much boob her model shows off. I also had an early pet peeve with her model since it shows jack shit about how she has to do with time. I'm not really buying the cope of the helicopter halo either, and her clock hand swords are never shown. I'm honestly surprised that people stuck with her in the sense of that general and just cling to this false interpretation of her. I would think as soon as they realize shes not playing into the GFE or coomer angles, they would fuck off to someone else.

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>>44930026
wada is such a hack. People suck her off because WOOOO FGOOOO COOM COOM but her and raita should be banned from drawing hideous balloon tits on skeleton bodies and calling it a day
Kronii's casual clothes are such a blessing

>> No.44932324

>>44930857
She's all legs anyways.

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>>44927205
I would like to see more cute, cheeky and humourous Ojou. Whether it's smut about a self insert fucking her, or the fluffiest slice of life, or epic fantasy...doesnt really matter. I like all the stories that include Ojou in a way that's just fun to read about, including the narrative based ones.

>> No.44933614

>>44930857
Whoever did the rigging for that casual outfit needs to get a talking too though.

>> No.44934269

>>44932375
She's got a lot of elements that work well with fantasy. Onis can be fun to work with in general.

>> No.44934901

>>44934269
Oh Ayame as a oni sword master with spirits in a fantasy story would be awesome. But I think even if you put her in a modern world (as a streamer or not) it would be cool if she had her magic swords and some oni like attributes

>> No.44935476

Are any of the BL/yaoi stories good?

>> No.44935994

>>44935476
NITROUS and Escape Velocity are alright if you ask me, though you shouldn't because I wrote them. The ones about all the indies are kind of a mixed bag and I personally haven't cared for them much.

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>>44896198
Uh, I was going to release this all at once but then I got worried that the intended audience wouldn't like so now I'm releasing the first half of the first part. I'll link the main google doc as well as a rentry because it's a little on the longer end of things. Also, I should mention that I'm finally doing commissions though I have a feeling only one person would be interested (the email can be found at the bottom of the renty link). I'll write anything although the quality might not be good. Anyways, feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRtrryZx5KJrPg0gudabHFxHtjrgg882lsRJTmuQAkQzyKfKpeAYVp7qUxF6wk2R-Pm0uZwoUB9KwmT/pub

https://rentry.org/owywqw

Tags: NSFW, Mel, Fubuki, Matsuri, Aki, Oviposition, Cervix Penetration, Anal, Insect, Corruption

>> No.44937331

>>44937102
>enjoy!
no one except the guy paying for it will

>> No.44937777

Anyone working on anything slampig related? craving for that content

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>>44896198
HoloJourneys (Restoring Nature and Pomu: A Summoner's Vow) Chapter 22: An old adage once said, 'With friends like these...'

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRe3rnSuPC15McrisVh0kyn19W7RwGY_UsI2vAtwsXffSCfw_gkUU7JQc0TpfLYuqiVCgWZuAdjXQqs/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

I had a lot of fun with this one. The silly fairy is so satisfying to write so far. This arcs also really ramping up, and I'm excited to get working on the next part. Hope you find it fun and I'm always looking for feedback.

>> No.44938593

>>44937102
Weirdanonv2, is this you?

>> No.44938759

>>44937826
Honestly HJanon, I dropped this fic at chapter 1, but you've written like 3 novels worth of stuff so I have to imagine you're better now. If you ever start an arc with a soft recap, I'll start reading there.

>> No.44939436

>>44937102
I have to ask. Was this written because you enjoyed writing the content, or because you wanted to catch a whale?

>> No.44940080

>>44935476
The Suisei femboy ones are pretty good for one-shots, with safety spats probably being the closest thing to a M/M romance I've read here.

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>>44938759
I think I've improved a lot since then, and I've even rewritten the first three chapters to try and make them read better. In terms of recaps, the landing page has a spoiler free description of each arc. I'm not sure if that is exactly what you're looking for, but it's at least an option for now. Past events tend to get mentioned here and there through conversations as well. If fantasy is something you enjoy reading, I hope you give it another chance down the road.

>> No.44940682

>>44938593
Yes
>>44939436
I wouldn't necessarily say I enjoy the content but the idea for this story has been burning in the back of my head for a year so I'm just now writing it out.

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>>44937777
I'm writing about Kson and there's mentions of her having a soft and squishy tummy though I don't think that directly counts

>> No.44941721

>>44937777
I lost an Okayu slampig drama WIP on a pc format
I have the basic outline still but I just sort of lost motivation after that

>> No.44941802

>>44941307
I mean, a slampig doesn't even have to be super chubby or ugly. It can just be someone who in some way is way below your normal standards and you may not even like them as a person, but damn do you need to nut and they are willing to receive.

>> No.44942560

>>44930857
Raita's my guilty pleasure right next to Tanishi and I'll always forgive Wada because of "SEXY DOKO???"

>> No.44943607

Well fellas, I finally did it. I have 100%'d the NijiEN dating sim. I'll write a detailed review tomorrow. [Spoiler]Finana best girl[/Spoiler]

>> No.44943613

>>44932375
Even the rrat Ayame ones?

>> No.44943690

>>44943607
Before then I will learn how to use spoiler tag

>> No.44943771

>>44943690
Ctrl+S

>> No.44945384

>>44937826
Another chapter, another load of shit for the gang to deal with.

The kitchen scene felt a little out of place and knocked the wind out of me until I realized they probably have been there for a while, I like to think that whoever's controlling the castle was just sitting there wondering what was taking so long before checking out the magic security cameras and realizing the only raiding happening at the moment was towards her pantry. I am expecting a magic midget to be the final boss of this arc.

The fluff was good, love that shit, put it right in my veins.

I think my biggest criticism would be that antagonists would work better if they were already known vtubers from both agencies, I think that way they would perform better because I can definitely hate someone I've seen, rather than new characters like the sprites which I can't really bring myself to dislike, it's why imo HoloX worked well when you brought them into the story. Can't wait for the next chapter though I'm honestly curious to see what you'll do.

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>>44927205
I want to see more Haato. Mostly because I feel like her schizo arc scared off writers because either embraced they it and wrote those horror/Haachama fics or they got turned off by the schizo stuff. Which means that for the most part she's kind of ignored aside from brief spouts of hornyposting.

>> No.44949487

>>44896999
Took a gander at the archives and came across that 'Post-Mortem Yandere Mumei starts a religion in your name' discussion from a while ago so I started writing out an idea I had for it to see where it takes me.

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Bump

>> No.44952410

>>44952064
IMAGINE the Hara pan

>> No.44953510

>>44943613
Yeah. Of course Our Cures Ayame starts out pretty annoying but shes still got entertaining wits and you learn what she needs to get better.
Hedonist Reckoning Ayame is a horny, bratty sub that just loves to have fun and get herself in trouble. Kind of basic but it works for me

>> No.44954771

>>44949404
I wish this guy did more of her being fucked

>> No.44956698

>>44952064
>the girls i don't sub found out and decided to convince me.

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>> No.44958153

>>44937826
Keep up the good work.

>> No.44959151

>>44943607
How the hell do you get all routes in one playthrough? I'm struggling to get both Elira and Selen + Millie and Enna. It's always one or the other.

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>>44943607
>>44959151
I was able to get all but Enna and Millie. When I see them at the cafe, I only have the options for "conflict resolution" or "violence", the former being Millie's route while the latter goes with Enna. I have no clue how to get both. I must suck at VNs, since there's no guide or online forums to help me out this time.

>> No.44960506

https://www.losethevery.com/
This is an awesome site functioning in a similar manner to a thesaurus, but it exclusively works as a repository of synonyms that could replace 'very' when you're looking for a way to place emphasis on an adjective.

>> No.44960576

>>44960506
Somewhat disappointed it didn't use the Mark Twain quote.

>> No.44960761

>>44960576
For the uneducated, what quote is that?

>> No.44960763
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>>44960506
It even helps to improve my posts on /vt/

>> No.44961348

>>44960761
"Substitute 'damn' every time you're inclined to write 'very;' your editor will delete it and the writing will be just as it should be."
-William Allen White

Turns out the quote is wrongly attributed to Mark Twain sort of like that one neo-nazi quote being wrongly attributed to Voltaire.

>> No.44962300

>>44961348
Oh, I see. He has a good point, although part of me really wants to see a published work where all the emphasis is established with the word "damn" preceding every adjective.

>> No.44964950

>>44937826
Wake up babe, new HoloJourneys chapter dropped

>> No.44965013

Get a random fic from the script archive and share your thoughts.
>For we may or might never
Ah, I remember this fic. Taking the time to reread it made me appreciate it more, there's a fluffy charm to the school scene it set up that makes the 'tragic' end to it land better. It's honestly a shame that the sequel to this kind of rushed its concept in order to make the writer's anniversary deadline. Still it's a great one-shot.

>> No.44967409

>>44959151
Enna is an easy slut. As long as you go Read it to me -> Nice to meet you during the first encounter she's already done. For Selen and Elira you have to do their first encounters perfectly, say you're an American during the club part, and then during the library scene go the aggressive option with Elira -> kinda -> (pathetic).

>> No.44967676
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>>44945384
Yeah I can see how the kitchen scene came almost a little out of nowhere. It was honestly something I just wanted to write since it would cute, funny, and give the group a little break amidst all the shit they've been dealing with back to back. I do agree that other vtubers would be good antagonists, but when I mostly just need a one and done villain, I'll just make them up so they fit the setting. HoloX is no where near done yet by the way, and expect to see some moves by them in the future.
There's also a few other holos I have in mind for antagonistic roles. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

>> No.44968207

>>44967409
Ah, I didn't realise the first encounter with Enna mattered since I got her LINE. Arigatou.

>> No.44970075

>>44949487
Give it your all dude! The idea has cool potential.
>>44949404
Was her schizo arc really that offputting? I feel like more chuubas do worse shit without purposely trying to do so.

>> No.44970265

>>44970075
>Was her schizo arc really that offputting?
I can see why it would make non-horror writers less likely to put Haato in their smut or fluff stories. Her image changed, and it doesn't even need to be dislike - just not thinking about the tsundere school girl as much anymore.

>> No.44971204

>>44896262
Punishing Flare because she keeps acting too cute instead of being cool.

>> No.44971516
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>>44971204
She has cute days and cool days. She doesn't always get to choose.

>> No.44971623

>>44971516
>that thigh fat
This artist jerked off furiously in the planning phase, during drawing, and while finishing this piece.

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>>44971623
Thanks, now I have a mighty need for fat half-elf thighs and ass again. That wasn't the plan bro. Now you're messing everything up.

>> No.44973656
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>>44937826
Great chapter as always

Good to see that at least WataFurea win something from the beating that anon receives

Like other anon said, the kitchen scene felt a lttle bit out of place but was very funny and lovely so I am not complaining

I look forward to the next chapter, I'm curious to see how this arc will end.

>> No.44974440

>>44973656
this brand of image always puts a smile on my face

>> No.44974680
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>>44970075
>Was her schizo arc really that offputting?
It had a lot of knock on effects on her own streams during the entirety of the arc which kind of made writing the character 'difficult', especially as the school of thought for chuuba characterization here is to pull more from streams rather than memes/lore.
She doesn't do it anymore, but now she's known more for the 'lore arc' than her current state especially since Haato is streaming less ever since she's gotten into college.

>> No.44975067

>>44970265
>>44974680
Gotcha that kinda makes sense. I will end up looking more into Haato eventually since I was given a decent idea for a small event involving her. For me personally, I've been going for a mix of characterization from streams with the established lore of the respective chuuba. There are times where their lore overlaps with their personality in spots which is the real good shit, but for some that's much more rare.

>> No.44975559

>>44902635
some autistic idea
https://pastebin.com/5Xk0DUHt

>> No.44975588
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>>44937777
Chloe is definitely slampig material, surprised there's no one that wrote about breeding this bitch yet

>> No.44975703

>>44975588
I would if I could get her character right.
Slampig sex is just so good

>> No.44975813

>>44975703
Isn't she just the typical brat who likes to tease her audience sometimes?

>> No.44975981

>>44975813
Dunno, don't watch her but I do nut to her

>> No.44978594
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44978594

I try to use chuubas backgrounds as their canon living spaces but some of them are bizarre. Like, Flare's is borderline alien to me, with the one chair in front of the t.v and single bed all in her living room. Is the upstairs just empty? Rooms to be used for children she'll never have? I don't get it.

>> No.44978917
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>>44978594
I looks more like a live in basement to me. The upstairs has lots of rooms for our many children, so don't worry about that.

>> No.44978965

>>44978594
Upstairs is just the attic, and her hobby room.

>> No.44979564

>>44978917
Why would the children of you and >>44978594 live in Flare's home?

>> No.44980051
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44980051

>>44978917
I thought it might be too, but there's a door, a window, and a hat rack at the bottom of the stairs so I think it might be the living room. Which leads me to believe she doesn't have guests over often. Lonely Hag.

Polka also lives in a fucking treehouse, or maybe a den?

>> No.44980406

>>44980051
I think the fact that the stairs lead up implies she lives in a basement/her room is downstairs.

>> No.44980429

>>44980051
That bed doesn't look too comfortable.

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>>44980429
Since it's just a giant pillow I bet she sleeps all curled up like an actual fox

>> No.44980922
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>>44980800
Cute.

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>>44973656
Thanks bro. This arc will probably wrap up in the next couple chapters, and I'm stoked for its conclusion. I'm also quickly approaching next arc hype for myself, since where the story is going next should be pretty fun. And things might finally get exceptionally sheepy if you catch my drift.

>> No.44984476

>>44982927
I hope for some sheep milk action.

>> No.44984986
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>>44984476
Can't say I'm really into the lactation fetish, so I don't really know how that's supposed to play out or how a person is into it.
That's not to say it couldn't happen in a way where both sides are caught unaware by it and just kinda roll with it. It might work more into the awkwardness of mutual v-card loss.

>> No.44985867

>>44941307
damn i lost my slampig kson fic. hopefully yours is safe
my idea (since i lost my motivation after the wipe) was
>Anon is living on a ratty apartment after he had to skip town cuz he crossed the yakuza
>can setup another money laundry business but needs to lay low for at least two months
>constant distress and anger (since he used to be at the top of the world, fooling around with cabaret girls)
>also has to live next to the trashy biker who is always doing gods know what and eating pizza/drinking beer
>finally, after two months of living in fear, he decides to buy a pizza to celebrate
>kson tells him to share on the way back
>''blow me bitch''
>cue to the sloppiest nastiest blowjob with beer in his life
>ends up paying for her services daily because she's down to do even the most depraved shit as long as it feels good and gets her booze and pizza
best of lucks trooper, im already dead and i dont have it in me to write it again because i know i will never write another rimjob as good as that one

>> No.44985879

>>44984986
I think it'd be cute if Watame starts lactating in the afterglow and you suckle her milk spontaneously, which would surprise and kind of embarrass her until she notices that she is actually enjoying it and cuddles up to you.

>> No.44986582
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>>44985879
That is a cute idea, but I almost feel like it would be harder to justify putting foreign liquids in your mouth once you're in the afterglow yourself, since you're not just jazzed up on horny and willing to try anything while you feel good. If only she was currently in the afterglow while (You) are still ready to go, I think that could work. There's a few ways I think I can spin it too that even if it was at the end of round 1, it could easily segway into round 2.
Are there any preferred fics in the archive that have the lactation fetish in a way someone who isn't into that initially could understand a little more about the appeal and probably how to describe it?

>> No.44986976

>>44986582
To be honest, I don't think it's really a fetish like that for me. I think of it as a romantic, wholesome activity rather than something sexual; more mutual aftercare and sharing a moment of bonding than a segway into another round.

>> No.44987342
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>>44986976
That's good. Why that's very good. Yes, I like that! I never really thought about it that way since I've never been with a girl who was lactating, and again, don't really know the surface of why people are into it. If that's how some of it starts, I can understand that. For the bond in the story that mutual aftercare is 100% on brand.

>> No.44987806

>>44987342
To be honest, I've never experienced it with milk either; I just enjoy gently sucking on and licking nipples. I'm not sure I'd even like the taste of actual breast milk, but it seems enticing in my fantasies.

>> No.44989078

>>44987806
Same. It's just another pleasure center so I'm in there.

>> No.44989952

>>44959966
Millie will hard pass no matter how many points you have if you escalate the violence (what a cinnamon bun), but you can still get on Enna's route if you choose conflict resolution.

>> No.44991693

>>44937826
You wrote 22 chapters of this, so I’ll start reading from chapter 1.

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44994156

Draw, o coward!

>> No.44994448

>>44994156
I'm sorry Ame, I think you came to the wrong thread for that. >>>/vt/drawthread

>> No.44995615
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44995615

>>44994448
Write, o etirw! Doesn't have the same ring to it and gives me less reason to post a chuuba packing heat

>> No.44995725

>>44995615
Plus it's definitely true you're not writing anything yourself.

>> No.44997722

>>44985867
>i will never write another rimjob as good as that one
What's the term for missing something you never had? Damn.

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