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>>69344673
Me too. I'll do my best to deliver.

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>>55326072
>everything just keeps snowballing
I feel that brother. I want to get to writing my Hag Mio beach romance oneshot, but it's just hard to pull myself away to focus on it.
Glad to hear you got something cooking for your own story! I'll be looking forward to giving that a read.

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>>52120814
Thanks bro. My current chapter is slogging a little, but I got hit with a surprise situation last night.
My wife was asked if we could foster nine puppies for the night since the original foster had an emergency and couldn't pick them up yesterday. It was kinda chaos since they all just got dewormed, but they're with their actual fosters now and out of my life. I'm brutally tired though, might just stick to outlining my scenes instead of writing for today. We are all gonna make it though.

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>>51368792
Omedetto

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>>51260398
THIS. This dude perfectly encapsulated a key part I forgot to mention too that's true as fuck. One of the best motivators and ways to have fun with it, is to find out where the story goes. You won't truly know what happens in that adventure until it's on paper. I got several arcs worth of stuff I want to see fully realized. I know that some stuff WILL happen, like breeding the wolf hag, but I don't know for sure HOW it'll happen yet. There's just nothing better than moving forward and seeing how your own story will play out.

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>>48611206
So you're 4k closer than you ever have been before. Each step is as important as the last. Just keep that fire you have from wanting to see the things you planned come to life, and that will fuel you for untold amounts of words to come.

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>>47601193
Yup. I would have realized that if I clicked on literally anything instead of just reading how the home page just mentioned downloads.
>>47601439
I would be careful not to overkill it. If anything I would place a song during a final encounter fight, or a heart to heart between two characters. I like the idea of shop/tavern ambiance music as well.
>>47601575
Good to know, thanks anon!

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>>46657534
The premise and core of the story is cute overall. The first part before the scene break was really strong in painting the scene and kinda establishing the two personalities on a base level. It might be more of a personal preference, but the formatting could benefit from a little distinction between the back and forths the anon and kaela have.
I think a little more background info on the anon itself, his motivations, and how he weighed the risks involved vs the rewards would have been beneficial. Likewise for Kaela I think. Overall it was a cute read and you have the chops and makings to create something cute and interesting with this premise if you choose to use this as a springboard.
Probably just as important, I want to point out that it's awesome that you went from a previously scrapped idea, to taking the plunge and doing something with it anyway! Those kinda guts will take you far, and your stories farther.

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>>45692747
Well whoever it is, ganbatte writebro. You're living some people's dreams right now. May we all have some vtuber; 1view, 2view, 3view, corpo, reading some of our stuff someday. Hope she has fun with what you've written.

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>>44986976
That's good. Why that's very good. Yes, I like that! I never really thought about it that way since I've never been with a girl who was lactating, and again, don't really know the surface of why people are into it. If that's how some of it starts, I can understand that. For the bond in the story that mutual aftercare is 100% on brand.

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>>44406780
Nearing the end of this chapter. Will hopefully finish tonight and then proofread and edit tomorrow.

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>>43454886
That's a two way street bro. The fire you all have for your works further fuels my own.

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>>42722042
Sounds like you're well on your way then! Do your best anon.

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>>42192203
I'm not sure about references, but you I think you are getting it down pretty well. She was not afraid to start taking matters into her own hands and get things even hotter. If you are looking for ways to improve upon it, I'd say let her get into the dirty talk even more. Have her whisper in the ear of whoever her husband is about to breed how he knows just how to find the exact spots to make you lose all sense of who you are. You can also have the sheep give her husband a little prostate pick-me-up if he starts slowing down. Anon may be doing the breeding, but it's Watame's show, and it'll go exactly how she wants it to.

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This is a thread theme I greatly approve of. I'm gonna keep doing my best with my story and moving it along so I can fulfill my MIGHTY NEED for this sheep.

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>>40729689
Thanks for making it. I'm gonna see this through to the end, don't you worry. It would eat me up too much if the story was left unfinished or unresolved. Though I am starting to feel an itch to get back to HJ soon, this current arc I'm on has some shit I need to get out of my head and onto paper. Kuro will still have my focus though till it's done, since it's not gonna be a multi-arc thing to give her the errand boy bond she never knew she wanted. Gonna outline chapter 3 once I'm back from the gym. Gotta keep making those gains like HJ anon AND errand boy.

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>>40159373
Based "does it for me" chad. You love to see it.

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>>40012566
This is OUR year writechads, and our year means its readerchads year too!

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>>39076609
I plan to crank out at least another 2k words today. I know you can too.

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>>33786425
I just marathoned the first 4 episodes of The Rings of Power today, and I enjoyed way more than I expected,
So, picrel

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>>30874498
Harimau because Watame

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>>17150083
Considering I go to bed at 10am and don't wake up till 6pm I'd say pretty well

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