/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3721698
Just like when getting (You)s?

Everybody give me (you)s. Don't forget to leave a (you).

>>3721701
Eh, for different reasons unless they specifically give praise or give CC. And even that's not very impactful because it's freaking 4chan, why should I care too much about what anons think?

>>3721714
Hi
>>3721698
Same

>>3721673
sent ;)

>>3721681 I do agree that I am kind of a wimp about trying out drawing men, and I do agree that I should try at least once, but again I just have art block and I would maybe like to hear other's ideas, never forced you at gunpoint to send a reference. But thanks for the criticism sometimes I do lack. Same goes for you >>3721680 (also I'm not trying to be passive)

>>3721696
>art block
This is just a euphemism for procrastination because you're scared to draw. That's why you're here asking for references instead of actually drawing.

I literally draw for a hobby, I'm bored an wanna draw but have no good ideas if I was scared to draw I wouldn't do it for fun. I don't know who shit in your cheerios today, but I just can't find up any good ideas and its good to hear some different ideas. It's nothing more than that.

>>3721707
we all draw for a hobby. just draw stupid

Remember those idiots who said /ic/ wouldn't be overrun by tumblrfags?

>>3721639
You must be new.

>>3721595
Murals are degenerate and should be outlawed.

I think there should be a dialogue instead of an outing. To further clarify, individual eccentricities of opinion are not the same as state segregation.

>>3721595
no
drawings don't hurt people
/thread

>>3721631
This.

>>we

>>3721549
Forgot the text. Critique on this please?

>>3721549
I'd work on anatomy and forms. It looks nice, but you should be able to see some of the left eye from this angle. Also her bobs are out of place. The one on the left sticks out to the side instead of draping around the ribcage.

>>3721548
Looks like shit. Why do they all look the same?

>>3721562
I apologize critique anon, that wasn't my work.

>>3721562
>>3721621
Although I would definitely agree with your critique.

call her granny tits

Jenny Titfuck

>>3721463
Pedro Infante

>>3721463
Bigjug McFug

Christopher Poole

>>3721530
Your premise that the value range is too wide is completely wrong. With reflective, shining metal, the values can freely go anywhere. The crucial part is having the knowledge on how to place them, which is what OP lacks first and foremost. You've changed the metal texture completely into something more resembling slightly damp stone, and that's definitely not the answer. The first and most important thing OP needs to do right now is study up on lighting and form, which is the best advice I can give him right now. Design wise, it is possible to raise the contrast without turning the blue all gaudy like that too. I can go on about the design aspect more, but I'm tired right now.

Here's a pic of some completely random knight concept art I grabbed from Google Images to illustrate some of my points.

Hmm. Can't be bothered with what other people said but I'll give my lazy response!

My best tip would be to look at things as they are. The metal is just another surface that reflects things according to its attributes. My suggestion is: Take a random scene from google and paint it from the point of view of the armor. Like what would this plate see? then just dim it down and it'll look like you knew what you were doing. The more matte it is, the more you want to mix the local diffuse color to your image... Tere are tons of ways to utilize this shit... Study 3d. Do drugs. I don't care!

>>3721663

Like, I just took this random painting and thought about how it would reflect to my eyes from that armor... If you want to make it more worn you can just dim it down or put some more scratches on there.

Remember that everything in our reality works with the same rules so basically every material is the same. You just decide the attributes...

Oh and sorry if I'm being too proactive here but Sinix made a pretty good video about shit like this about 4658 years ago.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3JZeeTKCTs4

You're asking a good question because every material works like a mirror. there are just differen levels of specularity and shit...

>>3721637
My point was that OP has too much extreme value and almost no midtones, even you own picture agrees with me, color pick it and you'll see most of of it ranges in the values of 30-70% while OPs is 90-100% or 0-10%

>>3721725
What a battle-axe

>>3721726
who's that old chunk of coal?

>>3721728
What are you? Downs?

>>3721730
that's colder than a vampire's demeanor man

>>3721728
CHICKEN, STEAK, HAS NEVER TASTED SO GOOD.

>>3721348
told her, she's coming up stairs now

Oh NO ReEeEeeEeeeEEeEeEeeeEEeeEe

>>3721350
okay seriously now fuck off you cunt, delete this trash thread before I knock you out through your monitor

i am anonymous so you can suck my hairy cock

>>3721337
Pretty good, would fit right in to Half Life.

>>3721284
everyone has a mother

>>3721286
i dont

>>3721289
i apologize

>>3721289
Well, you can still you her as a reference

bump

>>3721149

Where's the art?

>>3721149
You really suck man, and your OC is garbage.

>>3721706
>(you can tell he's kinda insecure despite his accomplishments as a professional artist, made me feel a bit sad for him)
Why are Atelier owners like this? I've met a few and even attended one, and every single one of those motherfuckers is an insecure, passive asshole.

>>3721232
why do you even need a course then?

just figure all out dummy, life is all around you

christ

>>3721369
you can't use depth perception provided by a binocular vison using software

you need real models to realy learn space

>>3721145
>all those hard work
Several hours of that is just Jeff reclining on his antique leather chair while he quotes from the Art Spirit, his eyes glistening as he slowly dabs them with his imported red velvet handkerchief. Another solid chunk of content is the "How to hold your pencil like a late 18th century Parisian dandy" video series

>>3721732
I don't need a course though. You're unironically correct. If you can't look at life and figure out how to draw it, you're probably just not very intelligent.

>>3721018
..why don't you post your work so we can actually tell you what's wrong with it?

>>3721018
try to understand the bone and knuckle since most of the hand is the bone

>>3721018
loomis has a book exactly on that

>>3721018
think of a face as a mountain. sculpt the face like it's a kind of strange, bumpy architecture.

practice drawing hands by drawing your own hand like a hundred times from different angles. always try to imagine "looking through" your hand, like looking through your fingers to the side of the hand that you can't see. think 3D, but translate 2D. take a good look at shadows, folds, wrinkles, muscles.

>>3721018
Here you go.

>>3721000

When god says "my son (or daughter) you re not going to make it"

>>3721000
that hack of richard schmid had a saying: it takes you a few years to learn to paint, and a whole lifetime to learn when to stop painting

>>3721000
Art is never finished only abandoned. You could theoretically make 600 seasons of spice and wolf and it would not be done.

>>3721075
Totally.

>>3721000
When is good.

sticky

fag

I just need your love baby.

>>3720928
Start drawing cocks.

Then you draw it again.

>>3721504
Post work. I dont want ur crit if u cant back up ur pounts

>>3721504
Op:gives critique
Thread: this critique is not helpful
Op: yes it is. I know more than you

>>3721196
Maybe she's just really fat and the tire is bent?

>>3721506

I think op just necked herself.

>>3721175
it's actually a plain old outdoor charcoal-grill.
but thanks for the thorough social analysis anyway

>>3720742
No

not happening

>tfw you transcend immature and impulsive lack of self control and now look down on weeb faplets

feels superior man

Literally impossible

>>3720742
I dont fape. I dont even fmoke.