>>23722382
No problem. Something that I should note is that the weather description kind of implies that it's set during the hot season of /meat/, which also gives favourable wind condition to sail from /risu/, since it means the trade wind will be blowing southeast in the South Holo Sea. The season not being rainy probably helps with outdoor activities as well. Since /meat/ is in the southern hemisphere, it means the time of the story is likely around October~November (assuming it's based on northern hemisphere), meaning that the ship likely set sail around late summer~autumn for the risuners. I totally didn't forget I live in the northern hemisphere when thinking about the weather while I write
>>23722906
That looks pretty cool! Remind me to tidy it up a bit and add it to the lore rentry.
>>23724996
>not building seaplanes and flying boats
>>23727663
Won't the underground environment favours shorter weapons? Maybe something more defensive in nature? I imagine some kind of shield-integrated weapon would work well for them.
>>23728867
I don't, funnily enough. I usually just open a random stream and leave it as background noise while I write.