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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>52365844

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Asking Shirakami for her permission to date her twin sister Kurokami who you are completely smitten with.:>>52369262

Going on a date with Kaela where she shows you the spreadsheet she made to plan out the day and refuses to deviate from it, no matter what.:>>52374848

Mommy Lui-nee babies you:>>52415987

(You) are the KFP Corporation's newest marketing director, and Kiara is counting on YOU to come up with the company's latest offering. Don't go too crazy now, 'cause we just want to push product. No, really:>>52417695

Reine and Ame preparing for the off-collab but gets fucked by insects out of nowhere:>>52424459

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So anyway, I think Kurokami would be best explored through gentle, fluffy vanilla sex with lots of cuddling. She'd rebuff your pampering constantly but would inwards she'd really enjoy experiencing someone genuinely loving her for who she is despite the prickly outer shell. She'd never lose her sharp tongue, but would start taking the initiative, searching for kisses and bodily contact instead of essentially tolerating your touching her.

>> No.52435770

Mel in unhealthy for my health and my dick.

>> No.52436260

God mel is so fucking hot

>> No.52436913

Isn't Mel the third Hololive member (and the first without brown hair)?

>> No.52437088

>>52435012
I think she’s mentioned on stream before that she would rather be the one pampering you than the other way around. You could ask her for a kiss and she’d just shrug and say “shikata ga nai” and give you one.

>> No.52437424

>>52437088
I think this is true too. I really can't get a hold of her personality, it seems to fluctuate. I really like Kuro though, especially the latest stream. God her model is so sex.

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>>52437088
>she probably could have gotten away with just a quick peck
>but instead she holds the kiss way longer than she has to, only pulling back when she needs to come up for air
>"There. Satisfied?"
>"Quite. Thanks Kuro."
>"Whatever. Just tell me when you want another one."
>her tail is wagging like crazy as she walks away

>> No.52438725

>>52432866
Honestly kurokami is a 'high level' tsundere. She's not going to be doing the gag violence and the "b-baka" but she would be a tsundere in the way it's portrayed for tsnbdere (male) where she'd have the mixed feelings and the indirect expression of feelings. Especially if she's her own character in a fic and not just an alter Fubuki

>> No.52439660

>>52437088
found it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iMKfw-kEou0

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> Fubuki gets tons of lovey dovey fics
> Kuro exists
> People also want tons of lovey dovey fics from her
> Supposed to be different from Fubuki
You dare mock emotionless sex too? Stick to Fubuki, thank you very much.

>> No.52440934

>>52440785
Shut up Risu.

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>>52440785
/wg/ has a very well documented Kitsune bias.

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>maybe I should finish Kurokami's Errand Boy, surely I'll have some time after this current arc
s-surely...

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>>52434432
Laplus does something mildly inconvenient to you, and struggles to keep up the world-conquering brat act up as she feels too bad about it and eventually apologizes.

>> No.52444265

>>52434432
Really clingy chuuba who doesn't like being separated from (You) and the only way to calm her down is through a long period of pampering that ends with her manipulating you into filling her womb with your seed. It takes a toll on your health that she has you run rugged to satisfy her needs but the smile she gives you after you've given her the pampering and sex that she needs washes away your stress and worry.

>> No.52444498

>>52443391
Why haven't you been working on it may I ask?

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>>52444498
I'm just super focused on HoloJourneys because it's fun. I'm also not a writer who can juggle multiple WiPs well. Gotta keep that adventure mindset at the top before I go back to high school shenanigans. I 100% want to finish Kurokami's little story, but this arc of HJ is coming first, there's too much fun shit for me to get to.

>> No.52444795

>>52444701
Fair enough. Its better to focus on stories that have your complete attention first before you go on the ones that you also want to finish.

>> No.52444837

>>52438176
Hot

>> No.52446374

>>52440785
Does it count as emotionless sex if she says it was an amazing time afterwards?

>> No.52446630

>>52446374
Yes if she doesn't express any emotions on her face at all when she says it.

>> No.52446781

>>52446374
>>52446630
>"Wait, you enjoyed it?"
>"I came exactly seven times."

>> No.52448324

Now I want a girl to grab my hand and say "I love you" emotionlessly but sincerely.

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>>52448515
So she's gonna fix it. By having sex with us.

>> No.52448788

>>52448515
>"I wouldn't be a virgin anymore if we had sex."
>"...Guess you've got me there."

>> No.52449521

>>52434432
Suisei's slow descent into exhibitionism

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>>52446781
>Despite her sour disposition, Kurokami will pretty much do whatever you ask her to
>Gets passed around school/office/wherever for a bit only for it to taper off pretty quickly
>Reason being that despite no change in tone or demeanour, she always says "wasn't as good as Anon"

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You guys won't believe what just happened! A home invader broke in to my apartment, and not only did he force me to have another slice of cheesecake...he said that if you guys don't post your word counts...HE'LL KILL ME! PLEASE HELP

>> No.52454573

>>52454272
That's hardly an incentive but my last wip is nowhere near done and is at about 8k

>> No.52454639

>>52454272
Based architect home invader. Enjoy your time together

>> No.52454681

>>52454272
I'll let you know once I've made enough progress to warrant an update

>> No.52454814

>>52448515
I want Fubuki to tell me this while stomping on my testicles

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>>52454272
WIP I started a little while ago. It's been raining a lot here so I've had a decent amount of time inside just writing and snacking. Hope the cheesecake tasted alright.

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>>52454272
Started this yesterday, please spare that anon architectural invader! Could I possibly ask that you visit Kiara instead? Her ass could stand to get a little bigger I think.

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>>52455663
>Her ass could stand to get a little bigger I think.
Based.

>> No.52456852

>>52454272
Stop with the racist imagery and I might tell you

>> No.52457365

>>52456852
We’ve been through this, fucking dumbass. Look up Lovecraft.

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>>52455986
>Ass so phat that it can't quit
>Can also make breeding the fire chicken have an element of self imposed "forbidden love"
ohoho, delightfully devilish anon. I wasn't gonna try at first but I might be convincing myself otherwise.

>> No.52457947

>>52457365
The racist guy

>> No.52458086

>>52456852
I didn’t expect someone with twitter brainrot to know about where Ina’s inspiration came from, but I’m disappointed all the same.

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I just dreamed about being Noel's boytoy being paid to handle her menhera outbreaks. I was not allowed to say a word, or make any sounds if possible. Most of the time I was hugging her in bed while she cried. Very occasionally she would use me for sex. But later on in the dream I just became her punching bag. Punching my face, leaving bruises all over my body, nail marks... At some point in the dream she pulled out a knife and was about to stab me in the stomach. I remember thinking "not paid enough for this", stopping her hand, shaking my head silently, then offering my arm for to stab and bracing for it. Then it ended.

She's so incredibly depressed and menhera right now it is unbelievable. She often breaks down crying while masturbating.

>> No.52458495

>>52458378
Finally, a good dream post.

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>>52458378
>Spoiler
Excuse me? What the fuck?

>> No.52459032

>>52458700
I don't think he's talking about "Noel"

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>>52458378
Another development on this idea, I just imagined Flare coming over to Noel's house, not acknowledging your presence at all, and the both of them take turns riding your cock while they make out with each other all lovey dovey.

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>>52459203
>a world where my half-elf doesn't acknowledge me lovingly.
That's a world I don't wanna live in. That sounds like eighth level hell to me.

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>>52459420
Even if it means you get to have threesomes with her and Noel almost every week or two when they are feeling extremely horny and can't help but get it on? You still wouldn't want it?

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>>52434401

Double Trouble - Mori’s Sock Puppet Fantasy.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vShcrDZrMtTm7FDeYD9Leg0AcFM9V4emmsY641NhCIKepWc1mEcrK0CN7c9NPy4X0XR0XZ4snn2Qin5/pub


Tags: Futa, NSFW, smut, Takanashi Kiara, Calliope Mori, Sock puppet, impregnation.

I incorporated changes based on the feedback from the last one, namely: a less meandering introduction and a slightly increased word count to facilitate more focus on lewd scenes. I hope people enjoy this one too!

>> No.52460378

>>52459869
I don't have time to read fanfiction stories about cartoon characters but good job for finishing this.

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>>52459813
Wanting to bury myself into this tanned halfie's thighs is not just about lust, but love too. I need both.

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>>52460544
Sounds like beggars can't be choosers. You either handle a little hands on abuse from Noel and a bit of coldness from your kni-...your half-elf so that you can actually get your hands on her, or she just will continue to never know about your existence.

>> No.52460833

>>52460805
This isn't a pick your poison, by the way. it's just a statement.

>> No.52460878

>>52459869
That was gross.

>> No.52461015

>>52460878
All my stories are, so I'm glad this one stays true to tone.

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>>52458378
I dreamt about nothing!

>> No.52461664

>>52461015
If that's your goal you succeeded. But the first chapter was way better.

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> see Matsuri pic
> get extremely horny and masturbate immediately after
This happens more often than it should. It's almost always Matsuri too.

>> No.52465446

>>52434432
A story about Marine's dad dying of cancer. Its always hilarious when something bad happens to her so it would make for a funny story.

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>>52465446
Can't you just be happy with her getting blue balled?

>> No.52467898

>>52467511
NTA but Marine is going to have sex with Shion on their next trip and I'm very excited for it

>> No.52468153

>>52467898
That Shion? Me.

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>>52467898
Well good for her then. She deserves a W every once in a while.

>> No.52468516

>>52468406
I have bad feelings about it. Don't celebrate too soon. Shion was jokingly going along with drunk Marine, agreeing to the intimate stuff, but I'm sure she's not taking it nearly as seriously as Marine is. I see another heartbreak story arriving in the future.

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>>52454272
Just 20,000 more...

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>>52468516
Darn. Well even if she can't be happy in real life, I can at least make her happy in fanfiction. After some minor strife that is.

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>>52468587
Keep it up anon. You got this.

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>>52468623
"You wouldn't like to be married to me. I don't/can't cook, and I'll be spending all my time doing streaming or doing this or that. Would you really be happy with such a woman?"
"You should have higher standards for yourself."
"I'm at the age where I can only afford to date someone who's ready to marry me."
> Every time she gets drunk starts ranting about her age and lack of love
> Rushes to hit on every Holomem she can find to try and get a bit of affection

You know. I don't think there's words to describe how much I love these girls. Why can't real life women be like Marine?

>> No.52468820

>>52468623
> Well even if she can't be happy in real life, I can at least make her happy in fanfiction. After some minor strife that is.
Man after my own heart.

>> No.52468840

>>52468667
Thanks, anon. Once this first draft is done, I'll have to go back and add scenes in previous chapters, copyedit the thing, then proofread it. I hope I can have it released within the year or so.

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>>52468840
A man with a plan. You can't be stopped now. Keep having fun bro.
>>52468816
God DAMN! I need to make this haggy pirate happy. It's almost HER time.
>>52468820
I'll do my best to be worthy of that bro.

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Anyone willing to bounce some ''psycho battle autist'' prompts for chuubas? Recently picked up Samurai in Another world and a similar story to it would be really fun

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>>52468816
Poor Marine. While her conscientiousness is one of the things I love about her, I can't help but feel it's a double-edged sword.

>>52469090
All this talk's got me thinking about breaking out the fic I wrote about her out of cold storage and finishing it. But rewrites...

>> No.52469451

>>52441805
>And here, in exhibit B, we can see two fics by the same author, both written around the same time period
>Notice the differences in the prose as they describe the process of mating with the fox and, well, everything else where the fox wasn't involved.

>> No.52469573

>>52469296
Haven't read that, but how battlesexual are we talking? I got a few characters already who are dangerously barked up that tree.

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>>52459869
Ah yes, this is the shit I go to /wg/ for. Just like the last time, very nice work. Now I have the mental image of Kiara and Mori fucking each other with puppets etched into my temporal lobe.
But this line,
>“I-it’s coming out Kiara! Fuuuck, it’s like I’m giving birth~ Don’t look! Please don’t look!”
This line killed me. As I type this review, my sides are probably somewhere in orbit, maybe floating near the International Space Station. Thank you for bringing this into the world, anon. It makes living on this planet that much more beautiful.

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>>52469296
Who even fits that trope? Closest I can think without stretching character is Ayame with Lore characterization. Maybe Nene from Corrupting Nene? I can't really think of much more.
Though speaking of Ayame this just makes me think of rrat!Ayame waking up to the thrill of battle in her heart after trying to fill the void in her heart with sex... Also this maybe because I've been reading a lot of Yugioh fics recently but for some reason I'm imagining this thrill of battle being awakened in her from playing a children's card game.

>> No.52471122

>>52468816
I like my eggs the way I like my women.
Past their best-before date.

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>>52469573
its good read, which is surprising for isekai. Ginko is full on weirdo that just wants to die in the battlefield and becomes giddy with the idea of battling people.
I just love characters who are so obsessed with the thrill of battle and death that they turn into literal weirdos
>>52469990
i mean, any type of determination can be twisted into battle autism. A battle Subaru, Ayame too, Koyori even. Hell you can even take Suisei, change idol for swordswoman and you already have a fanatic weirdo obsessed with fighting

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>>52473269
Having given Anon and Nene a degree of their own battle autism, I can definitely say it is a fun trait to explore sometimes. Neither take it so far as to want their own death, but they both find a clear thrill of the fight and get a little excited and maybe horny when exposed to immense danger.

>> No.52474039

>>52469296
I've always liked the idea of Battle Maid Suisei. Fighting for the glory of her Master but she also enjoys the killing.
You could do Anya since she's a weapon—shes looking for someone worth wielding her.

>> No.52474258

>>52474039
Oh. I just remembered when we bounced the idea of an Aqua who is hyper-competent in a fight but otherwise the same old Aqua.

>> No.52474493

>>52474258
I really like that idea since it allows the "gamer" part of our gaming maid to translate into a non-modern/fight based setting without just running with the incompetent maid part.

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>>52473811
i like when its characters that simply have no regards to their safety, they just want a fight so bad that they are gonna pick it with anyone. Kenpachi Zaraki still, to this day, lives rent free as my favorite character ever
>>52474039
>A bored/uncaring Anya Dagger some shmuck picks up
>She kills him effortlessly and is visibly worked up because she sees (You) as the warrior who will make rivers of blood
>Weird yandere love story inbetween a psychopath and his dagger

>> No.52477446

>>52471122
You're going to get sick,

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>>52477446
More like, I'm going to give this hag morning sickness.

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>>52458378
I had a dream last night where Millie and I were chosen to be in the annual Hunger Games. We were given separate rooms to stay in to prepare for the battle which would be in a week. She came into my room to talk, but when it was time to sleep I took her hand and pulled her into bed with me. She sat in my lap and I wrapped my arms and legs around her since she was so fucking tiny. I started kissing her, then moved down to her neck. She said stuff like "we shouldn't do this" between the soft moans, and I remember spending a lot of time and focus on just kissing her neck. She was also very warm. I went to move onto her chest and she lay on her back, revealing her tits. Millie was flat as a fucking board and it was incredibly hot, and as I was about to go to town I'm pretty sure the dream transitioned into another one (since she suddenly became a beaver plush toy and some dude who was apparently my mentor teleported into the room). It was a good dream while I lasted, and now I feel like gosling for Millie. It's especially weird because the last time I watched her was months ago.

>> No.52481346

>>52480884
Extremely jealous right now.

>> No.52482885
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If you could materialize one fic into existence, what would it be, and which chuubas would be in it?

>> No.52483735

>>52434432
chuuba making fun of you for being to nervous to get an erection

>> No.52483916

>>52483735
Then you finally get hard and it's 30+cm and now she's the nervous one

>> No.52484291

>>52483735
And...

>> No.52484392

>>52483916
>"H-Holy shit...is that...30 cm?"
>"Da--daa-daaaa-szz riiiiigh...RIGHT"
>"What"
>"m-m-muhhh....deeeeee---eeeedeeee-ck"
>"A-Are you alright? is it taking too much blood?"
>"Da?"
>"Should i be worried?"
>*Anons passes out*

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>>52481346
When she's not doing something incredibly stupid, she is in fact quite a cute specimen. It's just a shame that most of her fanart gives her tits.

>> No.52484511
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>>52482885
Mine. I would materialize my own fic and put me in it.

>> No.52485057

>>52484511
You are now forever words in a page. Unmoving, unchanging, unfeeling. BAD ENDING

>> No.52485192

reading is for NERDS. You all are NERDS.

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>>52485192
Y-you're a nerd!!

>> No.52485501

>>52485192
I only write because I am a Chad.

>> No.52485521

>>52482885
HoloX visual novel

>> No.52486171

>>52434432
Anon is a hunter living his life in the edge of the forest.
There, he meets an assortment of whimsical and magical girls

>> No.52486812
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>>52484459
It's actually crazy how small and how flat she is proportionally, according to canon. Millie is the IMAGINE queen

>> No.52488505

>>52482885
A holo vn but it's just a Zero Escape ripoff.

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>>52486812
>150 cm
>4'11"
Uoh...

>> No.52490802

>>52489684
ToT

>> No.52491107

>>52488505
What about Zero Escape would you ripoff?

>> No.52491864
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>>52482885
The FSN rip-off fic.

Saber Fubuki
Lancer Gura
Archer Botan
Rider Marine
Caster Shion
Assassin Chloe
Berserker Coco

Suisei as the Rin stand-in
Sora as the Sakura stand-in
Artia as the Kirei stand-in

>> No.52493166

Which chuuba would make a good yakuza? It’s a little hard to imagine women in the setting but I have to try.

>> No.52493455

>>52491107
Puzzles, Occult themes, and the Titanic.

>> No.52493509

>>52493166
Sora

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>> No.52495113

>>52493166
Uh........ kson

>> No.52496033

>>52493166
Kiryu Coco as Kiryu, Watame as Majima, the three lieutenants are Kurokami, Botan and Suisei, and the head of clan would be Sora.

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>>52493166
The Dragon that Was...

>> No.52497491

>>52469990
Why do I like this back so much? Help

>> No.52498229

>>52459869
Ok I was jerking off to this but it got weird halfway through. Imo Kiara should've gotten behind Mori and narrated what the sock puppet was doing while Mori used it or something

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>> No.52499793

>>52434432
Shion Bellypunching rape correction.

>> No.52500677

>>52499793
Imagine Shion punching your belly

>> No.52500798

>>52499741
ow

>> No.52501888

"You know what my fic needs? Veibae."

-literally no one

>> No.52503022

>>52500677
You wouldn't feel much. It'd be cute though

>> No.52503172

>>52497491
Because imagining Ayame as a sexy, badass warrior oni is peak gap moe.

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>> No.52504545

>>52504247
God I wish she'd sit on my face

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>>52504545
Me too.........

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> was writing
> someone interrupted me
> can't write anymore
Sadge...

>> No.52505593

>>52501888
I'm pretty sure that the only fucking veibae idea thats ever bounced around here is a hatesex thing equally applicable to any slutty chuuba.

>> No.52506243

>>52501888
Literally not a single person wants Sodapoppins sloppy seconds

>> No.52506368

>>52505545
>literally posted seconds before anon got sent to the usual room

>> No.52506711

>>52505545
Tenchou's thighs...

>> No.52510064

>>52469603
Thank you for the very kind words, it really makes writing this shit worth it for kind comments like these. glad you could see some flashes of humor in there too!

>>52498229
I'd recommend in future, in order to avoid such complications (not just with my stories), that you briefly scan latter paragraphs of such stories to get a feel for what direction they are taking. Smut is typically written in a climatic fashion such that the weirder shit is usually saved for last. Thanks for reading though.

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>>52434432
Fluffy Fubuki sex. It's been so long.

>> No.52510412

I keep finding myself worrying the the dialogue in the fight scenes will come off as to "anime" if that makes sense. I'm not making it like a naruto-sasuke fight dialogue or anything that bad but I keep second guessing myself if what I'm writing is cool or just stupid.

>> No.52510666

>>52510412
With vtuber fanfiction, I think you can get away with letting things go a bit "anime."

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>>52510412
Unironically, let yourself go. Cut that Background Noise
Do you laugh at kids triying their best at a school play? Do you laugh at elderly men dancing in parties? Do you laugh at Moms making stuff for their kids?

As long as you are aware of what you are doing and you are doing it earnestly, then people will resonate with your passion. Fuck ''oh its too anime'' and fuck ''Oh i might tone it down"
Embrace pajeet and tanaka autism, go all out in a blaze of glory and be proud that even if some people think you are cringe, a lot more will pat your back and say ''yo that was sick''

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>>52434401
HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 33: A Tropical Welcome and a Scorching Sun

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzHbqEAFDiEWMGNhYovZP2QCdBK8CSLHPMMd5viH8PbHI68VbKg7q7Ere3QdySpCrTuOA6TmmzLDla/pub

Tags: (Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, Botan, Kiara, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

Hey, we're finally at that place that the group wanted to try going to what feels like ages ago. This chapter was fun to write since I got to practice a couple things involving my descriptors, as well as just getting to make fun day to day situations that warm my heart slightly. Getting to write a little battle with a certain style of weaponry was also a treat, and I can't wait to do more of it. Anyway, hope you enjoy it and I'm always happy to read through some feedback.

>> No.52512580

>>52511158
I second this anon's opinion. If you're gonna go down that river, don't get off the boat halfway. Go all the way. People will hate it your work, but others will love it too

>> No.52512775

>>52512580 (me)
>*hate your work
God damn it
*puts pasta gun to mouth*
*pulls trigger*

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>>52512775
*Shoots your corpse with the sauce gun*

Also holotori fics?

>> No.52513723

>>52510666
>>52511158
>>52512580
If you say so. I hope this isn't going to look stupid but I guess the only thing I can do is commit and try to fix it if it's shit.

>> No.52515730

I'm going to gaslight my audience by rewriting earlier chapters that will have huge contradictions in the current chapters then act as though I have no idea what they're talking about when confronted about it

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>>52515730
Diabolical.

>> No.52517527

>>52434432
(You) getting hired to try and save NijiEN while its not too late

>> No.52517780

>>52515730
That sounds cool, but only if there's some kind of meta fuckery in the chapters too. Like there being some kind of monster that fucking kills a character and retcons their memory from everyone in story.

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>>52517527
Fuck EVERYONE. Then they'll be too busy lusting for my cock again to yab

>> No.52518815

>>52459869
Massive improvement over the first part. I know the kinky sock sex may be too much for some, but honestly if you get to this far it isn't that strange for this to happen. Kudos

Only nitpick is that the sex may have been too short, yet again the masturbation part was already hot so i don't mind it

>> No.52519394

>>52518815
Very happy to hear that you consider it an improvement overall; that was my main goal. And thank you for taking the time to both read the story and comment.

That's a fair nitpick, in hindsight an extra paragraph or two would have been a better sweet spot.

>> No.52519787

>>52519394
you're welcome. And yeah, an extra paragraph or two would have worked. I think it's good as it is right now, For next time, you can go all out if you want

>> No.52519892

>>52512450
A great chapter, though I'm always left wanting more because the journey has been so long already and there's much more to come!
I'm still enjoying that you named one of the OCs Bree, it's a cute reference.

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>>52519892
Glad you enjoyed it! This arc is shaping up to be a really fun write so far, and promises to get even better with what I got planned. It's also the perfect setting for the long awaited beach episode. So look forward to that.
I'm also really happy you're enjoying the lioness OCs. They're so cute to write with and I'm hyped for what they're gonna do.

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Bump

>> No.52524554

I had a dream about Zeta

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>>52473269
>Hell you can even take Suisei, change idol for swordswoman and you already have a fanatic weirdo obsessed with fighting
That just sounds wrong. That'd be like seeing a Suisei that's characterized as an idol because she's obsessed with performing
I feel like if anything a battle obsessed Suisei would be fighting not for the fights themselves but for what they represent to her fantasy of being the hero/insert setting appropriate battler term and reaching her dream of... I don't know founding a kingdom or something?

>> No.52526525

>>52525653
But then again suisei is extremely competitive and gets visibly salty at losing.
She could very well fit a "strongest under the heavens" type of arc, where She's intoxicated with the idea of being better than everyone else

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>>52526525
Yeah but I feel like a core part of Suisei's character has to be the dream chasing/star seeking thing of being a diamond in the rough eternally polishing and improving. Like I could absolutely see her being the Shonen esque Rival chasing (You) down to get her salty runback after being defeated but it's one of those things where I could see it developing but it would be weird as a starting point. To use your example, I can see her getting drunk on victory and improvement but it would be weird for her to start off like that.

>> No.52528270

>>52527226
>Suisei as the captain of the guards or whatever. She believes in excellence as a fighter and strives to be the strongest
>Gets into a fight
>Fight is extremely close, her competitive streak makes her enjoy this challenge
>Bloodied and Bruised, she refuses to lose to the point she's grabbing your ankle despite being almost unconcious
>Once she heals, chases you around for the salty runback
>Slowly awakens her fight autism

>> No.52528365

>>52515730
I'm doing the same but it doesn't matter since no one remembers any of my chapters

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