It's been a week since I drew that Reimu. I had actually adjusted the skirt slightly to improve the proportions a bit but didn't bother post here https://files.catbox.moe/x571hr.png
Anyway as I expected, with fresh eyes I can see how much it sucks. The proportions (torso) and pose are ASS. And I know why, I didn't know to sketch or pose her before hand. Not really drawn before, I'm oblivious to some really basic technique.
But now I know. I drew this Marisa today. Much better proportions, and a more natural pose, even if simple still.
Quite a few things I still want to adjust, detail and clean up. But tell me what you're seeing, what's to improve?
I also want to figure out how can I color her with something else than the easy-moodo flat pastel, without it looking like ass.