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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Previous thread:>>9136712

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Mori Prompt: she's friends-with-benefits with Anon, keeps telling him 'it's only weird if you make it weird' and 'not to get it twisted' only to immediately make it weird herself when he gets a girlfriend and tries to break it off.

>> No.9177208

how long will it take for you to write this yourself?

>> No.9177648

How new?

>> No.9177857

let me be optimistic anon. Maybe one day we can groom promptanons into proper writeanons

>> No.9178011

I mean, I used to be a promptfag until I was guilted into writing by people calling promptfags leeches

>> No.9178145

I didn't stay long here before I realized that Risu fics were never happening. This was why I started writing originally. Then when I released my first smut and had people tell me they enjoyed it made me put in a whole lot of effort into this.

>> No.9178156

Late night nut delivery?

>> No.9178208

I didn't enjoy her personality in that fic. I feel like she could've been replaced with a couple other chuubas without much change. Some people like to say it was Ayunda but I don't buy it.

>> No.9178225

You haven't seen optimistic if you haven't seen autists asking for the same thing in drawthreads for literal years. If they show up once a thread to repost their shitty prompt, they will never, ever be a productive poster.

>> No.9178798

Honestly if I wasn't shitscared of fucking up Mori's character I'd have done that prompt already. I already dropped a Mori story beforehand because of that. I'd love to see weird desperate Mori. But also I'd like to see that with most chuubas. I have a fetish for being stabbed to death.

>> No.9178800

I'd agree with you, but he stopped posting it for a while and only started to post it again because the early thread would die otherwise.

>> No.9178835

Were you the other guy working on the prompt Psycho Killed came from?

>> No.9178885

Nope. But I really liked Psycho Killer's execution as well. The story I was working on regarding Mori was never discussed outloud, so don't worry.

>> No.9179587

Ah, gotcha.

Thanks for the compliment

>> No.9179721

OFFICAL /WG/ RULES (no bitching!):
1.) You can request or write about any single topic that comes to mind, as long as it centrally involves chuubas
2.) Don’t reply to bait
3.) Don’t reply to bait from last thread either
4.) Don’t spam prompts first thing each and every thread
5.) If you post a prompt before the prompt board is up you’re a fag (Deadbraps especially)
6.) Archiveanon Love!
7.) Don’t complain about stories no matter how disgusting their material may be
8.) EarlyOP is a fag
9.) If the thread goes to shit just close it and think of a cool story or prompt
10.) Reps, reps, reps, always improve
11.) Fanfiction is not serious literature, don’t critique it as such
12.) Your favorite story sucks
13.) Everyone better at writing than you is a hack, everyone worse isn’t trying hard enough
14.) Reps once again
15.) Archiveanon love! once again

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>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!

>> No.9180010

Planning to write a simple fic of Botan vigorously exercising in the gym to try to stave away her horniness due to being in heat, and you were (un)fortunate enough to be in the vicinity.

[/spoiler]yes I've been listening to Olivia Newton Johnson's Physical while looking at Botan's new outfit[/spoiler]

>> No.9180057

Writeanon....... spoiler reps.........

bless you for lion hag anon......

>> No.9180058

Ah fuck my spoiler reps are failing me

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The tag system is a helpful tool put in place to help you find stories you want more easily. If you're on desktop, the command is CTRL + F and then you simply input the words you're looking for. On mobile, you need to go at the 3 dots at the top right of the screen and select "Find in page", then input the words just like you'd do in a computer. Currently, there are a few guidelines set in place as to how the tags work, and it usually goes something along the lines of:

Is it NSFW? This can result in the NSFW and SFW tag.

What genre is it? It can be comedy, action, fantasy, etc. It's best to not use more than one genre but if you really must, then go ahead.

Characters. Which chuubas appear in this story? You should add all the ones that have direct dialogue or interact with the others. Them simply being mentioned by name is not enough to add them as a tag.

Fetishes (if it applies). Usually reserved for NSFW but it may be possible to have them in a SFW story. It can be things like footjob, anal, giantess, handjob and so on. It's usually best not to use more than 2 of these as to not clutter the tags too much. Try to use only the main fetish of the story.

And finally, you have theme. It can be abuse, it can be fluff, it can be tragedy, it can be shitpost or greentext. This area is a bit of a mixed bag and resides on a gray area. Usually you can have as many themes as you need so long as they don't contradict themselves. For example, abuse and tragedy can be put in just fine. Fluff and abuse? Not so much (though there might be exceptions).

this should be all? Obviously this requires a lot more polishing but generally that's the gist of it I think. Please do help me refine this more if you think something like this might help the archives. Also a list of all tags we currently have would be amazing. Thank you for your time.

>> No.9180903

The smell of new beginnings

>> No.9180932

The tags I generally use are...well, you sort of summed it up. SFW, NSFW, Abuse (which someone has pointed out can be better defined based on the context of the story, something I agree with), Fluff, Adventure, Action, Horror, Gore, Snuff...that's off the top of my head. This is a good start, I think. I really need to work on a more globalized tag system/list.

>> No.9181139

The scary thing about changing tags is having to go through every single story, particularly the older ones and see if it fits. But the abuser/abused change would be pretty good.

>> No.9181194

I wanna fall asleep on Guras chest...

>> No.9181204

Dom Botan gets me feeling ways. Ganbatte anon.

>> No.9181252

Yeah, that one should be relatively easy, just time consuming at worst. It'd definitely be a big help. I'll try to get to work on it later tonight.

>> No.9182188

Nothing new is beginning. This thread is still full of shitposters.

>> No.9182391

Sorry for the confusion, the beginning of my cock is in Guras ass

>> No.9182414

What the fuck, based?

>> No.9183237

"Full" isn't accurate cause we found out one guy was like four of them. Now it's really just the early threadmaker and the FUCKING DEADBEAT who always posts his prompt when the thread gets to page 10 and would die before the old one

>> No.9183317

"Beating the shit out of Sana because she won't shut the fuck up about astrology"-anon here. How the fuck do I write an Australian accent?

>> No.9183523

Write the Sniper from TF2 but add in the words "Rippah".

>> No.9183743

To the Anon that realeased another chapter of Bad Civ last thread:
Thank you, the story is getting really interesting and i'm glad you are making the villagers have a somewhat realistic reaction to her exhibitionist behaviour
Really looking forward to the next chapter !

>> No.9183838

new fag here, just finished reading HoloFantasy, really good story and the rolling mechanic was very interesting, the way the author actually made a bunch of world building really rises it apart from some other fics, i gotta ask tho... is the story completely over?

>> No.9184093

Linking it again for the new thread, Bad Civ 5, where Mumei finally gets in trouble.

>> No.9184145

Don't force it or it will turn out goofy, her accent isn't too heavy anyway. Just remember, and this is important, thongs mean flip-flops over there. eg, "I smashed my thong across Sana's face because she called me a cancer."

>> No.9184422

No. It's on minor hiatus at the moment due to a lot of real life things colliding alongside just generally being burnt out for a little while, but no. Ch. 6 is in an early state that I'll probably rewrite, and I've plenty of other ideas for chapters.

>> No.9184451

Yeah this pretty concisely explains the tag system as it is and gives enough of a style guide that anyone can follow. Whatever tag system revamp happens I hope it still maintains the same form factor for the archive. The easy searchability and lack of massive tag spam like ao3 is one of its strengths.

>> No.9184566

>How the fuck do I write an Australian accent?
Like so: https://e-hentai.org/s/d2da16e4ec/743731-1

>> No.9184665

For right now the only real plans I have involving tags is the abuse one. A major tag overhaul would be a kind of wacky undertaking at the moment. Maybe in the future. For the time being, I feel like the tags that exist serve a well enough purpose, besides the Abuse tag, which is admittedly a sort of umbrella term that could house several dozen possibilities, unlike, say, tragedy or fluff, which are pretty universal. Abuse has a lot of interpretations that could be clarified.

>> No.9184830

I want all my hentai in Australian English from now on.

>> No.9185280

Yeah honestly even as someone that gets what the abuse tag generally represents I can also see how splitting the tag into abuses chuuba and abused by chuuba would have valid reasoning for the benefit of finding the story you want.
Especially since right now even outside of the abusing/abused thing it also big tents physical and mental abuse into one thing.

>> No.9186011

The early thread guy is a hero in my eyes, and there's nothing wrong with the mori prompt guy posting his shit.

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another shitpost

>> No.9187971

I dunno if I'd call him a hero, but he does prevent fighting over making the thread, so yeah, I'd say I don't mind

>> No.9188054

You're right in that it's a shitpost.

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>> No.9188811

God fucking damnit. I love racist words of power so much. Fuck.

>> No.9190416

I will now refuse to read any flare that doesn't talk like this

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I was having a nice dream where apparently I'm fighting with this faceless thugster for a common love interest and it was kind of light hearted and fun and then all of a sudden when I'm alone in the dark in a starway to grab money i left behind in there from talking to that thug just now, I suddenly hear some giggling and my mind starts telling me "the rare friend is visiting" then Fubuki starts talking somewhere from above me in the pitch black. I look up and then try to run out of the starway but I'm attacked jumpscare style as soon as i open the fireproof door from behind and woke up in a panic. Fubuki...

>> No.9191101

>Will never be jumpscared by a chuuba in a dream
The last dream I had involving one was with Ame. We were playing Sonic games and it was fun. Why can't I have cool horror dreams...

>> No.9191164

write a dream diary, you'll slowly be able to influence your dreams

>> No.9191180

Only chuuba dream I had was one where Gura sat at the edge of my bed and sang to me. She's not even my oshi...

>> No.9191230

of course its about fubuki.

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Man, I felt legit primal fear when the rare friend line was said. Images flashed in my head very quickly, picture the smile dog creepypasta image but more abstract and darker. A bunch of nightmarish hellscapes flashed in my eyes very briefly and then this completely fun and relaxed dream turned into a fight for my fucking life. Holy shit. This is some nice story fuel tho... Fubuki is the rare friend that appears in your dreams every couple of nights waking you up immediately. I don't think this line will ever leave my mind... "the rare friend is coming".

>> No.9191680

Fuck off, pekofag.

>> No.9191694

i keked
thanks anon

>> No.9192250

It's a sort of dream terror where your brain knows that "oh, this is bad" without ever giving you context. Just that instinctual, deep feeling that even though you have no idea why, this is a terrible situation to be in. Something I wish I could harness for the sake of stories. Horror is my absolute favorite genre but I've never been the best at it.

>> No.9193166

I wonder which writeanon has written the most words for the thread? Some stories are 20k words while others are under 1000 so I don’t think we can compare those, but I’m curious as to who has written the most words in their stories.

>> No.9193295

Unironically think its Archive Anon. He's written a shitton, beyond just Hofantasy.

>> No.9193376

We can put the writer who has written the most words on a pedestal, and delete all the fics with <2k words.

>> No.9193440

sounds like a stupid thing to argue about since it will just turn into a dick measuring contest that will lead to even more retardation infecting the general

>> No.9193486

Yeah he at least got have 50 stories in the 'stories i've authored' section on pastebin and that hasn't been updated for a while.

>> No.9193734

As anons have noted before, the length doesn't correlate with quality. 20k+ word fics can be bad while some fics with only 1k words are great, and while I haven't seen any shorts that blew my mind yet, it's true that most of the seriesfics in the archive are hot dogshit.

>> No.9193747

Archiveanon already posted a full list of all things he wrote, you just need to find it. >>9193486 if he does have 50 it's because he slaps stories that are posted only here into a document and publishes it himself. Archiveanon wrote less than 15 stories.

>> No.9193813

Guess he's not as much of a bigshot as I thought.

>> No.9193856

What the fuck are you saying? I've written at least 40+.

>> No.9193893

>It's true that most of the seriesfics in the archive are hot dogshit
eh, most series end up having a lot of thought put into them, which do you consider dogshit? is actually any fic in the archive considered by everyone bad?

>> No.9193946

There isn't a single fic that's universally considered bad apart from those fucking OC fics.

>> No.9193985

Even the scat fics had some anons laughing at them.

>> No.9194086

And thus the owl falls further into degeneracy. Hoping this can continue.

>> No.9194139

NTA but the only series I've read from here was that Fubuki roll the dice chapter and while it was written well and was engaging, I really hated how it ended because Fubuki literally raped you and betrayed your trust but you didn't care at all and continued treating her like a friend. The author just kinda went "magic be wack yo, they knew it was dangerous" and it never really sat right with me. After this I never touched another series fic, don't wanna invest myself into em.

>> No.9194301

A lot of thought put into a series doesn't necessarily translate into being good. Holocalypse is probably the biggest offender of this, it's overwritten garbage which exemplifies fanfiction in the worst sense of the word. Menhera wrangler is almost as bad, possible made worse because it tries to be sad straight-faced but is just a huge joke.
Cover high isn't bad, it's just drawn-out and becomes boring the later chapters, and I haven't read Holofantasy because I don't like TTRPGS.

>> No.9194467

Funny you should say that, my favourite stories in the archive are the all the series. Guess different things float different boats though

>> No.9194807

Quick count brings it in at 56 or so unless my ability to do numbers is truly that bad. From the very top of the archive down to The Pegging of Anon + Matsuri's Baby Carrot (and Disastrously Tight ass) is me. Where on Earth did you get the idea that I only put out 15?

>> No.9194953

I think a new bait strategy is starting. The obnoxious posts about writing subject preference didn't work, so now it's obnoxious posts about the writers themselves.

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Joyous. At least I won't have to repeat myself later down the line.

>> No.9195072

Makes sense based on the last few posts

>> No.9195653

Jesus Christ I'm not buying it. You're telling me you wrote 1/3 of the stories in the archive? The fuck is this?

>> No.9195824

This is exactly what I meant when I said pekoanon's schizo arc would just feed into paranoia here.

>> No.9195953

Don’t forget he’s been here a long time. Also I don’t think that’s 1/3, more like 1/8, I think there’s like 400 stories in the archive

>> No.9196273

I dunno man, I guess? I don't count how much I've written. I've been here since these were abuse threads, as >>9195953 stated. For along time, whenever the thread was in threat of dying, I'd hammer something out to pump some blood back into it. The Kiara quadrology as some people have started calling it sprouted from that mixed with immense horny, for example. The abuse threads - and subsequently, /wg/ - really helped shoot the fire back into my veins for writing. As a result...there's a lot there written over the course of the past few months.

>> No.9197083

Oh boy, I can't wait to whole-heartedly agree with everyone who says my writing is shit.

>> No.9197204

I agree with your assessment of Holocalypse but you've got shit opinions everywhere else

>> No.9197919

>OC fics.
I quite like the miuki fics. I busted to Fox family bonding a few days ago

>> No.9198045

Anon there’s over 500 stories in the archive

>> No.9198150

Think he's talking more about that garbage fan sequel written by a hack.

>> No.9198182

Yeah I thought they were fine even if dad-on-daughter incest is a bit much for my tastes. I understand the worry about OCs when it comes to this stuff as it's very easy to step over the line with how relevant it is to chuuba fanfics but I thought those were alright.

>> No.9198266

Yeah I can understand why people where concerned especially given the state the threads where in

>> No.9198317

At this point I'm going to assume this is the author being self-depreciating

>> No.9198408

Wouldn't really blame him. The story did not do well. I'd be ashamed to associate myself with it.

>> No.9198488

I argued against its creation when the author first raised the idea. I didn't mind too much the fox family bonding one because it was only the second one, but a fan sequel is going way too far.

>> No.9198668

Any suggestions on how I could improve it? I’m always open to criticism as long as you’re not being a dick.

>> No.9198996

I've got a sneaking suspicion he left a few threads ago anyway, purely based on writing style.

>> No.9199327

>as long as you’re not being a dick.
You're in the wrong general for that.

>> No.9199439

anons are usually pretty nice with their feedback.

>> No.9199593

Alright. Getting started on the first draft of the proposed abuse tag changes where I try to go into a little bit more detail as to what the story holds. First four stories are the examples, but it looks like this if you don't care enough to open it up.
(Polka, SFW, abuse? [Chuuba abusing You, kidnapping, psychological torment])
Suggested changes?

>> No.9199708

You've got your work cut out for you if you're going to be doing this for the whole archive. Ganbatte.

>> No.9199791

Just do it? Does anybody actually care about these changes? We haven't had any problems with the abuse tags so far, so I think you're just being autismo.

>> No.9200175

Kidnapping sounds more like a spoiler than a tag desu. I think you can remove the "chuuba abusing you" by simply changing the tag from abuse to abused and then when you are the one doing the harm the tag would be abuser. Psychological torment sounds odd, I feel like there's a more popular term for it that I can't really remember.

>> No.9200222

You obviously haven’t been here long. There’s usually only one or two dickheads per thread that try to shit on all the stories and discussion, everyone else is usually pretty reasonable.

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The protagonist meets Mumei, a pained and quiet young woman who seems to carry the world on her shoulders. Accidentally bumping into her, several pill bottles tumble out of her pocket, which upon a quick internet search the protagonist notes seem to be designed to treat chronic neurological degeneration. As the two continue to bump into each other by happenstance, Mumei's demeanor improves day by day, and she becomes a bright yet airheaded girl. But at the same time, the world falls to chaos, as if it lost one of its key protectors. How will the protagonist influence Mumei? Is there hope for these two to be happy together?

>> No.9200407

Yeah that format change seems fine. As long as each oneshot fic only takes up a line it doesn't change the format too much and keeps it reasonable.
The only thing I'd say, and this might be a personal preference, but it might be easier to have the fetishes be in standard hentai tags for easier searching but again that's just a personal preference of mine.

>> No.9200424

I don’t think you need to go through the trouble of making it that complicated. IMO all you needed to do with those tags was change “abuse” to “abused”. You’ll really be there for a long time if you add those extra tags, not to mention it could be kind of spoilery like >>9200175 said. Good work all the same though, you’re a real one.

>> No.9200483

Chuuba Abuse / Abusive Chuuba

>> No.9200575

I think I'll go with this one. Feels more right.
Thanks for the feedback.

>> No.9200713

This is a good middle ground honestly but I'm worried if making tags longer than 1 word will clutter up too much. We can barely fit in fetishes. Like >>9200407 said, Hentai tags are really good, handjob, footjob, anal, etc. So it kind of needs to be short or else you'll end up not being able to add everything you originally intended to.

>> No.9200817

This has got to be the longest smut fic I've ever read. It hasn't even gotten to the smut yet. You're dragging things out way too long.

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You will wear those socks. You will take the shots. You will write my prompts.

Polka had somehow convinced you to go on a date with her. A romantic and expensive restaurant for the two of you to go together. The date goes like shit, Polka just can't seem to stop messing up. After you two leave the restaurant, through tears she looks at her notes:

w̶h̶e̶n̶ if we get intimate, do this for a fun night:
>Let him hold my hand
>Its fake
>Let him Grope my Breasts
>Honk noises
>Lift up my skirt
>Paper snakes fly out
>let him try to take off my pantsu
>More keep appearing
>Finally cum
>Confetti instead
Unfortunately, what actually ended happening was:
>she agrees to rough anal due to low self esteem
>you plow her asshole and she starts crying
>feel sorry for her and switch to cowgirl vaginal
>she's out of breath after 30 seconds
>you jerk yourself off and finish on her face
>you can see her die inside when you degrade her by covering her face in cum
>you feel like shit
>night ends, you leave while she is sleeping and never talk to her again

Polka accepted to suck you off, but as a joke, after she pulled down your pants and saw your throbbing erection, she honked at it with her clown horn. She starts laughing very hard until she hears: "That felt good, more please". She takes it as a joke at first, but through her embarrassment, she starts honking away at your cock, enveloping it around your cock and squeezing. It doesn't take long for you to cum, much to her surprise... what other crazy circus tricks can she bring to bed?

After a bad slip up on stream, Polka lost her job. The days go by without much ever happening in her life. Tired all the time, sleeping through most of them, Polka is left without much hope for the future.
>In one month, I'll end my life
She marks on the calendar, a deadline to live, and nothing will change her decision. That's when she meets you on a cold and lonely night, wandering through the dimly lit roads without a goal in mind. Will you be able to convince her that life is worth living?

Polka calls you. She is crying again. Something about people calling her fat all the time and that she hates herself. However, at the end of the call she asks you to help her lose weight. "How can I help?" You ask. Polka tells you of this new method that supposedly works wonders. Eating fresh sperm, twice a day for 6 months. You feel like telling her the study is bullshit but... you couldn't bring yourself to do it. Once you arrive at her place, Okayu is standing next to her. It's time to take off your pants and help out these poor girls.

During her usual antics, Mel gave Polka a surprise kiss. Polka was not ready and her reaction made Mel bite her lips by accident. As expected, Polka turned into a vampire not many days later. You agreed to help her with her urges but after a while, you were diagnosed with Anemia and Polka was forced to go cold turkey by doctor's orders. She lasted a good month, but one night while you were sleeping, you wake up to Polka on top of you with a scary look on her face, ready to suck your blood dry. To save your life from this crazy bloodlust of hers, you tell her that if she wants to suck you dry, she can do it through your cock! She agreed to it on the condition that if you ever run out of semen while she is still hungry, you can kiss your cock goodbye. Without many options, you accept her terms.

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Matsuri and (you) are out dining, in a restaurant or something. Matsuri starts rubbing your crotch, and makes you touch hers, revealing that she has a dick. She pulls it out of her skirt and jerks herself off right there in public while she also tries to jerk (you) off. You blow your load in her hand which causes her to cum as well, she gets up and blows her load on the table, leaving it there next to an empty mayo packet for disguise. Alternatively you could make her cum on her food and force to eat it!

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Korone has to deal with her fear of maggots in the most straightforward way possible, being thrown in a pit full of them, having them run all over her, inside her, raping her in every orifice for many days until her fear is fixed... or she is broken.

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Risu asks Korone to help her to extract all the nuts from a listener.
Listener is strapped to a table. Risu is giving him a hand job with one hand while holding a half-full jar with cum in the other. Korone is lubing up a strap-on (or her cock) preparing to give him additional stimulation. They make listener cum over and over again until their dick and prostate hurt; the jar must be filled no matter what!

Towa being a shy futa that can't resist her urges and constantly asking Kanata to help her with her boner, no matter where they are, clothed or not, in public spaces, against walls, with someone sleeping next to them, even jerking off onto Kanata while she is sleeping! Possibly behind Coco's back or in the same room!

Risu visiting OkaKoro and they have a fun off collab stream, but Korone has to leave for something for a while and Risu suddenly switches to Ayunda dominating Okayu and fucking the shit out of her. Korone gets back and smells the sex, but doesn't confront them about it, only being much colder to Risu. Later that day Korone kidnaps Risu and makes her cum over and over without ever touching her pussy to show who is boss!

A whole story about Haachama losing her virginity but written in the famous pepperoni copypasta speech style, aka Haachama's english speach pattern. The more brain cells i lose the better. Bonus if you can actually make me nut with it.

>> No.9201494

Write these stories, bitches.

>> No.9201629
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>Miko banishing Flare with 'Nigga'
>Ayame banishing every American with 'Burger'
>The Europeans think they're safe before she whips out 'Europoors' and the entire continent just fucking vanishes

>> No.9201875

I mean you could shorten it to Abusing/Abused with the vtuber being implied but honestly as long as each oneshot doesn't get over one line in tags I think it's fine.

>> No.9202811

Stop writing. That'd be a massive improvement.

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>> No.9203025

First runthrough of it is done. As for hentai-esque tags, that'll be later. That'd involve going through every single NSFW story again and getting the main fetishes within them (if they're featured) rather than just confirming who was abusing who in the stories - a much bigger task.

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>> No.9205542

Let it die.

>> No.9205716

Bump at page 7? What's this for?

>> No.9205730

I don't have a Pekora image handy, but you know what they'd say?
Stay motivated.

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Stay motivated peko...

>> No.9205933

There's 20 people left and a few lurkers. Probably fewer writers. We outed a massive shitposter, but there's no guarantee he's not still going anonymously, and on top of that, we've still got other no-name shitposters disparaging works in the archive for seemingly no reason.
Or maybe they're not shitposters and it's actual writers attacking other writers, which would be even worse.
It's going to take more than posting a picture of Pekora's ass and a link to Bury the light.

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Oi. That's my shtick.

>> No.9206002

I've been lusting for a Pekora thighjob ever since Coco in Cover High talked about her legs

>> No.9206170

It's obvious that I'm still here. But I didn't make a 1000 word essay calling a cease fire just to continue doing it right after. There's the impostor who posted my prompts right now, he is the main shitposter of this thread. Other than that it's pretty peaceful. Gotta say, it's cozy seeing the thread so slow again.

Get better images then. I have tons of them saved that I was planning on using to pekofag post. You're getting rusty.

>> No.9206267

Admission from the shitposter himself that he's still here, and he's even impersonating Vergilanon.

>> No.9206742

Right, to that anon who posted the PPT corruption prompt, would you prefer the lewd/mature PPT to be in greentext or story based? Might get around to doing that specific prompt but just need to work out kinks and details.

>> No.9206909

Story-based, please!

>> No.9207014
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Y'all need to internalize the concept of volumetric shit compression

>> No.9207167

What about Advanced Race Theory?

>> No.9207219

That's the last kind of spiel I'd want to read here

>> No.9207329

Which Holo is closest to Measurehead?

>inb4 Ayame
let's be more original here folks.

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>> No.9207487

What is this...

>> No.9207498

Detectiveposting will forever be my favorite so long as it stays tasteful. Truthfully, despite all the hooks lingering in the thread, I feel great. Last night was a trip and this thread's been lovely so far. Bait is getting all replies it should; none. Comfy times.

>> No.9207501

What did I just say?

>> No.9207726

>Comfy times.
Wonder how long that'll last.

Ayame is the only one who displays behavior similar to an active dislike of foreigners, though. The only other one I can think of would be Lamy, although I've heard she's just not comfortable speaking English.

>> No.9207766

Somehow quoted the wrong post

>> No.9208390

Lamy is just uncomfortable around any and all commoners for reasons that have to do with her suspected background. Ayame I fully believe at this point is at least a teensie bit nippon nationalist. All others that seem racist are actually just autistic.

>> No.9208620

>Ayame I fully believe at this point is at least a teensie bit nippon nationalist
This is probably a better way of describing it than "she hates foreigners."

>All others that seem racist are actually just autistic.
Couldn't have put it better.

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Basically, fish are cold blooded. So if you're gonna fuck a fish, it's gonna be at whatever water temperature you got it stored at. Unfortunately, a woman's (human) vagina is at roughly blood temperature, 99.5 F. So in order to emulate a good pussy, you basically gotta semicook your fish so the texture is all ruined. If you store it at a colder temperature, it's gonna make your dick feel all weird. It's not the right temp. Stick your dick in a bucket of water at whatever temp you think would be good for a fish pussy and you'll see what I mean.
Additionally, they barely have pussies. More like... holes where they store eggs. You can cut that up and open it. But it's always gonna get loose or stay loose (the cut will open up). Overall, not fun.

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>> No.9210508

That's oddly specific anon...

>> No.9210655

Why is she covered in yogurt?

>> No.9210716

Well, it's only Niggersanjifags that would try to do something so silly, so there's no real reason to describe such a thing in the Hololive writing thread.

>> No.9210754

All I can say, I recommend the mouth.

>> No.9210805

I think I saw a webm of something like that once.
It was a rather large bass.

>> No.9210856

Why did you have to remind me

>> No.9210876 [DELETED] 

But have you seen the snake one?

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>> No.9210918

I'm curious now

>> No.9210951

I'll bet you are, freak.

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It must've felt pretty good because just the snake tightening it's throat against the dude's cock for like 3 minutes made him bust a nut just like that. He wasn't even using it as a fleshlight, he just let it swallow his cock and try to eat it. I personally loved seeing the snake immediately recoil once it felt the cum at the back of its throat and then the guy finishes his load outside it. Honestly, the farthest I've gone is the mosquito one. I've heard of dolphin ones but never got to see it. I think a shark would be good too, probably would feel just like a dolphin, but with prickly scales in the way. I wonder if Gura's pussy is shark shaped...

>> No.9211209

She spilled it, the dumb bitch. I even blended in some Lychees and vanilla extract to give it a nice taste, but she spilled it all. I could have just given her a factory made cup of flavored yogurt, but I took the time out of my day to make her yogurt filled with love and flavor, and this is what she does

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>> No.9211316

What the fuck is wrong with you?

>> No.9211609

Huh, did he get b&? Or just deleted his posts out of shame?

>> No.9211728

Probably the former

>> No.9212123

This would make a great story. An autistic chuuba trying to do something to be seductive but just fucking it up and pissing you off in the process because of wasted effort

>> No.9212204

Great idea! Write it yourself.

>> No.9212257

See >>9201183 part 1.

>> No.9212361

Nobody here's going to pick up your prompts, idiot.

>> No.9213109

If I didn't know that it would've actually been me posting the prompts but it is what it is.

>> No.9213187

Can you just fuck off?

>> No.9215163

AAAAAAAAHHHH fuck I'm writing this and holy shit my erection won't go down as I'm imagining Botan asking you to spot her bench press while at the same she commands you to press your crotch against her face.

>> No.9215221

We were so fucking close to being free...

>> No.9215492

Shmeat rest

>> No.9215600

Go Anon, go! Feel the heat in your heart! The heat in your hand! The heat in your dick! Harness that horny!

>> No.9216547
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You convince Mori to have sex with you while she's depressed because her songs were treated as garbage. She feels that it's wrong but can't stop because you are one of the last people supporting her. It could also be reversed and Mori forces herself on you after her songs are rejected.

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I'm desperate for some musclegirl content,
take this as motivation.

>> No.9216739

Tomorrow's another day. Here's a little bump to make sure we see it, together. Go get some rest, if you're still awake. We need you in top form. For those of you just waking up? Hold the fort, keep the faith. Brighter times ahead.

>> No.9216749

Here's the second chapter to my girlboss Watson story, maybe it's good.
I gotta admit I'm a pretty big /K/ fag, I can't stop myself from writing detailed descriptions of guns, you anons will have to deal with that autism. Most of the time there's a plot reason why I namedrop guns, but sometimes it's just for me. I wish I have the energy and time to write (you) and the chuubas with more depth instead of kinda rushing through establishing character motivations and development. But I know my audience, I can't expect you retards to notice every subtlety, there's still some foreshadowing though.
For tags, I'll order an 'Ameila', 'SFW', 'drama', and maybe something like '/K/ faggotry' if Archive Anon thinks that's funny and whatever else he thinks fits. Don't tag the newest chuuba though, I want that to be a surprise, thanks

>> No.9216807

I think the thread's time has come, and we're just holding off the inevitable.

>> No.9216961

Nonsense. Don't let the bad in the world burden your heart. You're still here, aren't you? So am I, and many others. Works are still being written. The Archivist is still alive and with us. Are things a bit bent out of shape? Yeah. But it's nothing we can't fix. Overcome, together. Set good examples, do what we know is right, avoid what's wrong. The thread is only as dead as you want it to be. When you finally give up, that's when it's truly dead. That's what certain parties want. Outlast them. Break their resolve upon the steel wall of your will. Stay motivated.

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oh and this

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and I just noticed this, so might as well

>> No.9217379

Cool beans. Is it weird I read this from bottom to top?

>> No.9217454

I don't know what you mean. My post or the story? Is there something wrong with the google doc format?

>> No.9217462

I think I've said it before when you posted the first chapter of this but damn does your worldbuilding and dialogue read significantly better than your action and gun stuff. Because the action and gun stuff kind of feels off in a way that's hard to describe, if I had to try and describe it; it kind of feels like it's trying to hard.
In contrast the interactions with Amelia and the dialogue between them flows smooth and continuously. Maybe it's because in your 'rushing' of the character stuff you manage to keep the story moving, but honestly this seems like something where I'd need more to actually see if that's a problem
Eagerly awaiting more.

>> No.9217552

I liked your story but i meant I read it from the end then to the beginning

>> No.9217678

I think you're being had, friend.

>> No.9217795

I'm not your "friend", mate.

>> No.9217848

Thanks anon, I think I get you. maybe having detailed depiction of the weapons comes off as "cringe" when they're not directly related to the story, I feel that too. But like I said, it's just my autism everytime I write a scene that involves guns. I could say that it's a part of (you)'s personality, but I'll admit that's just me inserting myself into (you). Sorry I'm like this, you might not like the next chapter where there's more of that, but I'll try to add in some things to spice up the /K/ faggotry.
Glad you enjoy the worldbuilding and dialogue though, I always try to fit in lore naturally and have the chuubas talk like they would IRL. Hopefully I don't write any chuuba too OOC.
But would the schizo do this to himself? I guess it doesn't bother me how retards want to read anything.

>> No.9217918

Wise words
It’s looking pretty good so far but sometimes it feels like you’re trying a bit too hard to make the character seem like a badass. Just small comments and bits of dialogue that are kinda cringe(?). Still though, it’s pretty good other than that and I’m looking forward to the next part

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More of this girl
Don't care what

>> No.9218134

Jesus she's curvy in this one. Nice.

>> No.9218189

Yeah, totally. I'm realizing that I'm very susceptible to just writing cringe. I can't pick that shit up, since I wrote it, but if you anons see anything retarded, just let me know and if I agree I'll fix it.

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Here's the source if you care for it

>> No.9218339

Nice, you’ve still got me interested in where this is all going

>> No.9218391

Hey, thanks bro.

>> No.9218682

Even if it's of her being raped by maggots?

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If that's what you want to write, I don't mind if it's Friend.
If possible though, I would like for her to enjoy it

>> No.9221655

I hope somebody picks this up.

>> No.9221846

I hope nobody does. Write it yourself, leech.

>> No.9222107

You telling me you guys would fuck catgirls but bestiality is too far?

>> No.9224372

Which chuubas would be able to crush your pelvis from sex? I'm talking like 3 minor fractures from the cowgirl position

>> No.9224415

Okayu and Polka.

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any high-endurance girls

>> No.9226476

More like stamina.

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Another smut fic written, fueled by an unquenching desire to have hagsex with a muscular lioness in heat.


Tags: Botan, NSFW, femdom, mommy kink

As always, let me know what you think.

>> No.9229276

Just to know, how's your relationship with your mother? Is she still with us in this world?

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I fapped recently, but I'm already feeling horny again

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I'll echo>>92295429

>> No.9229616

Oops, how the fuck did i do that? I meant

>> No.9230138

Everytime I see this prompt I think "I want to see this but I'm afraid of messing her up". I think today may be the day I swallow the fear of the latter.

>> No.9230463


Iofi Slays some Zombie Strange :


An unrequested sequel to the cold sandy vag Ollie beach episode prompt, guest starring Iofi a la futa fic that nobody read (and understandably so I admit).

Tags: NSFW, Ollie, Iofi, Futa, Implied NTR

>> No.9230478

Good stuff my dude. Hopefully Anon survives the week with his balls intact

>> No.9230996

Gura should reconsider not letting me put my cock in her jaws

>> No.9231162

Pretty good second chapter dude, really interested in where this goes. The banter with Amelia was very fun to read and some of the lines in the story were pretty great as well. the lines "pre-emptive wartime disruption" made me chuckle and "New York might be the city that never sleeps, but Tokyo has a pretty bad case of insomnia also." was pretty a pretty good line
Also I gotta agree with what >>9217462 said, your talent for worldbuilding and dialogue is WAY better than everything else but it's hard to pinpoint exactly why that is. Overall, barring a few grammar mistakes and a few lines that felt stiff, it was an enjoyable chapter.

>> No.9232624

Damn, I can’t believe this is just the second chapter.

>> No.9235039

Should this be a rape thing? Just a tragedy thing with people fighting? Current plans are to have Anon link up with a girl offscreen because frankly I do not feel like writing an entire date with a girl that is ultimately unimportant to the story/main prompt but I just want some direction.

>> No.9236521

>Should this be a rape thing? Just a tragedy thing with people fighting?
It should be both, don't know why you have to limit it to just one. I feel like both aspects would be great for the story.

>Current plans are to have Anon link up with a girl offscreen because frankly I do not feel like writing an entire date with a girl that is ultimately unimportant to the story/main prompt but I just want some direction.
Nah, I feel like not showing the Girlfriend is detrimental to the story, you have to show the girlfriend and show how she's different than Mori.

>> No.9236756

Y'know, both of these are fair assessments.

>> No.9237894

Keep having false starts with this. I can write the psychology and physicality of the situation but it just reads like a list of emotions and sensations. Plus how can Korone as a character even exist in this situation beyond what I assume would be screaming or other such vocalizations, that or being comatose? Both of which could apply to literally any chubba. In other words is there a way she could react her that would make her identifiable other than describing how she looks? As for how this situation came about, the cost-benefit of subjecting oneself to this torment to absolve a relatively niche fear seems like a gargantuan miscalculation. So the story would have to start in medias res. Either that or it was forced upon her, but then it's no longer about facing a fear. So she would have to have at least some knowledge of what this would entail prior, how could she be ok with this then? Further still is this even supposed to be erotic? Actually now that I think about it, I'm not even sure the answer to that question would even have any bearing on the tone of the passages because of how confined the aspects of her psychosomatic situation is.

I'm way overthinking this but what I've written so far is just, well, mad.

>> No.9238746

>I can write the psychology and physicality of the situation but it just reads like a list of emotions and sensations. Plus how can Korone as a character even exist in this situation beyond what I assume would be screaming or other such vocalizations, that or being comatose? Both of which could apply to literally any chubba. In other words is there a way she could react her that would make her identifiable other than describing how she looks?
This is an incredibly bizarre yet wholly understandable dilemma. Maybe try to play up dog aspects? More sensitive nose, hearing, that kind of stuff to help really sink in how disgusting it is, ie being able to clearly hear the maggots slithering or some such. The more I think about it, the more I find myself wondering how this sort of thing would be done as well. Maybe have some other character there overseeing it like Okayu so you can draw on their relationship aspects?

>> No.9238894

Not the prompt poster, but l'll think some on your former questions. To answer the lattermost, however, I *will* be whacking off to it. This shit sounds hot like you wouldn't believe in an extremely fucked up way.

>> No.9239310

Good reference:

She'd probably start out like very mild fear and disgust, picture her saying"mooo yadda!" "Kimochi warui x4" etc as they climb up her. From then on she would start being violated and it would devolve into her screaming and stuff as her clothes slowly are eaten away, after that probably begging to be let go from this place and then once the maggots start breeding her she would realize her situation, feel despair, disgust and hopelessness and then she would be broken. At least that's how I pictured it. The problem with my prompt is that maggots don't really have dicks large enough to describe the mating process but Fate (the origin of that image) makes it so it's a worm pit and the worms are sometimes shaped like cocks, and that's kind of what I had in mind. Cock maggots large enough for every hole in the human body, from her pussy to her mouth from the ears all the way to her pores. I want them all being fucked, them sliding inside her skin and stuff. Also them just sliding all over her and periodically ejaculating on her without even any penetration, so slowly but surely she starts being fully covered in insect cum.

>> No.9239550

The same problem exists, if Okayu is there witnessing Korone being subjected to what amounts to a form of torture, what could she reasonably be expected to do other than to help or seek help? It just complicates things further still. Maybe it's a parallel world Okayu who is truly malevolent and taunts Korone while she is suffering, maybe even getting off to it? That's the only solution I can think of.

>> No.9239636

>someone is actually writing the pekoschizo's prompt
No self respect

>> No.9239673

That's what my idea would be. Maybe Korone did something to piss Okayu off. Cats are petty assholes.

>> No.9240139

Also you could have a character that is a bit dumb or fearless (Luna? Sora? Doesn't really apply but Okayu could be that person Idk) that gives the idea in the first place, and then when Korone reaches the pit they were talking about, she doesn't want to go in but is as the prompt says pushed into the pit against her will. She tries to endure the idea at first, that way you won't have her always just asking to get out of there, but after a while she would inevitably want an out. And yes, it is supposed to be erotic.

>> No.9240171

This definitely lends itself more so towards a visual medium rather than a written one and I'm not saying that as an excuse of any sort. However I'd have to essentially parrot what you've said here in the story. But it gives me a foothold, as the Metal Slug maggots are vastly different than what I had in mind originally. If I don't crack this in a few days I'm going to have give up on it though.

>> No.9240335

It does not have to be maggots. She has a fear of bugs in general. I only used maggots because I got the idea from her Metal Slug video. You can use any bug you had in mind, I don't really care about the specifics. Up to you.

>> No.9240365

This sounds revolting. Best of luck, dude. Looking forward to the gag.

>> No.9240734

I'm not someone interested in this seeing this produced at all, but I do love stories that can do a lot with seemingly little "plot".

Might seem obvious, but take inspiration from stories about people confined in tight places.
Like Stephen King's Misery, or 127 hours.

>> No.9241178

This. It could be dickworms, a la Fate... it could be lots of little spiders, who get inside her and consume her innards... she could have her womb stuffed chock-full of new life and her colon turned into an egg sausage, with her belly increasing exponentially in size...

>> No.9241247

The thought is making me shiver. I'm unbearably horny now.

>> No.9241338

The duality of /wg/. Fluff on one, whatever this is on the other.

>> No.9241535

One cannot exist without the other.

>> No.9241596

Wouldn't have it any other way.

>> No.9241602

It's pretty simple. In here, we are all mentally broken. No one comes to a writing general in 4Chan as a normal sane person. Thus, there are two kinds of reasons someone would come here for. Fluff, mommy play, pretending to have a wife, writing about tragedy. All these are coping mechanisms to escape what life has done to them. On the other side, you have people who are broken and instead of trying to escape their perversion, they embrace it. Rape, cuckery, ryona, etc. All it takes is one wrong turn for one to become one or the other. One bad day...

>> No.9243987

Archiveanon I know whatever comes out of that experiment, you're gonna read it and that makes you a much stronger willed person than I am. Ganbatte.

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I'm honestly looking forward to it, in a morbid sense

>> No.9244401

aahh. not a request from here but i want to share a story i wrote as its theme aligns with most of whats on the archive. Takamori rape :


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Futa on male please.

>> No.9245195

And that's why I absolutely love this place. There's no way in hell you could request or post half the shit found here without getting weird looks or anything. It feels safe, ironically 4chan of all places.

>> No.9245460

this was kinda fucked up but you wrote it short and sweet
does the ending imply that Kiara dies for good?

>> No.9246218

thanks, but no, Calliope just gets punished for what she's done and of course isn't responsible for Kiara any longer

>> No.9246540

Sweet fuck that's a fat assed Aki, wew
>Futa on male
Not my thing but here's hoping someone else takes it. I think we actually had a discussion about this somewhat recently; being unable to convincingly write being the one taking it or some such.

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It's a shame really. Prostate play isn't really immersive so you'd somehow have to either focus on the pleasure of the futa's dick or yours. This basically rules out futa on male doing the fucking. And if the futa is focusing on your dick then there's not much point in her having a dick in the first place. Shame shame shame... I still want to try it out tho.

>> No.9247049

In theory you could do it in third person so that the focus is still on her pleasure and not on you.
That's one way I could see it working in a written medium.

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I think a futa on male third person style would not be great unless you're using a defined character as the male (which is too gay for me). Doing a futa on faceless male third person isn't very good. "Fubuki stroked his cock as her thick veiny member made its way inside his colon. The sensation sent a shock up his spine, making his toes curl up in pleasure from having his prostate being pressed against by Fubuki's girly cock. " Idk, sounds odd to me. A (You) is much more reasonable. If you're doing third person it's just best to use another futa chuuba at this point desu

>> No.9249161

Can attest to this. I want to be lovingly cared for and loved by a chuuba, but at the same time, I want to them to emotionally break me until I belong to them.

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What happened to the google doc archive? Was it ever official? I'm guessing not.

>> No.9249319

Anyone can update it. It was never official, but it was meant to be easier to browse back when we were Pastebin only.

>> No.9249479

I didn't even realize it was back, last time I checked it was completely erased and I assumed that was the end of it.

>> No.9250154

Man I just wanna read about kissing my oshi. Is that so much to ask...?

>> No.9250206

No, see, that's part of it. That's part of *us*. You can read about kissing your oshi. You can also read about her dying thoughts as she finally succumbs to bloodloss.

>> No.9252663

Agreed. But maybe another author out there is better than I am at being the sub. I've only ever seen things from the angle of being...well, the dom. Trying to imagine not being that is creating a disconnect in my head.

>> No.9254039

Katawa shoujo with chuubas

>> No.9256837

Who would get the lemon lube treatment?

>> No.9256942

She'd need to have her legs cut off first. For authenticity.

>> No.9257013

Ollie as Emi?

>> No.9257105

Ayame, so she can't escape the gaijin seed

>> No.9257269

Horseshit taste.

Would be appropriately funny, but as far as I know she's a layabout, whereas Korone is athletic as a hobby.

>> No.9257697

Is Ko'one genki enough though?

>> No.9257869

I don't think anyone's genki enough to match Emi, but I recall her being pretty enthusiastic during the gamers' ringfit collab from ages ago.

>> No.9259072

Right, then. Which Chuuba would try to cuck the other whilst being their best friend? This idea is really funny to me.

>> No.9259319

Probably Gundou?

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>> No.9260064

How about Subaru? She seems genki enough

>> No.9260453


>> No.9260914

I knew there was one I was forgetting, itching away at the top of my mind. Yeah, Subaru is a perfect fit.

>> No.9261359

Your tomboy reps anonchama...

>> No.9262225

I mean there is the rrat that Mumei is wheelchair bound.

>> No.9262331

Yeah but she's not genki. In this situation we're looking for who fits the personality archetype and then crippling them. So most likely Subaru is going to tragically lose her legs in a terrible accident.

>> No.9263670
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Shizune - Kanata
Emi - Subaru(?)
Hanako - Aqua (worst girl btw)
Lily - idk one of the hags like Mio
Rin - Iofi I guess... (Best girl)

>> No.9263755

>Hanako and Aqua
Fighting words.

>> No.9264514

>Hanako - Aqua (worst girl btw)

>> No.9265211
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How is this bait? Objectively worst girl. Actively pushes away her best friend and lover trying to help her, doesn't ever say what she wants so you have to fucking guess and despite being relieved you picked an option, she'll explode at you later for no reason, will agree to sex despite not being into it at all and have basically an extremely awkward almost rape first time, doesn't ever leave her room because she is too autistic from past life experiences + she doesn't take care of herself well. Both Hanako and Aqua apply under this and it would suck to date them. Obviously Rin isn't all rain and fluff but the difference is just too much.

>> No.9265906

While I've thought this before and come to the same conclusion, how fucking dare you?

>> No.9266078
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>Iofi I guess... (Best girl)

>> No.9266307

>Blind Mio
I'M....... I'M.... GONNA........ UOOOHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.9266481

What's in the works, lads?

>> No.9267507


>> No.9267514

Already hitting a bit of a motivation bump with the Calli prompt. This is what I get for taking an extended break from writing. Probably going to continue tomorrow.

>> No.9267680

are these stories only about hololive girls?

>> No.9267690


>> No.9267701

Niggersanjifags aren't welcome. You can write about literally whos if you want, but no-one's going to read them.

>> No.9267728

Amefic. Run into her in an alley and play fightsex with her. I'm new to this so any feedback is welcome.


Tags: Amelia, NSFW, domloss (?)

>> No.9267740

There's a few nonholos. Take a look.

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>> No.9267820
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Stay inspired!

>> No.9267955

You're only supposed to do it once per thread, impostor.

>> No.9267998

Jesus Christ, Anon, these are some vivid descriptions. I thought the fight was pretty funny, too, but wow. Is this really your first time?

>> No.9268058

The whole Babylon Queen shit was kinda weird and I wasn't really into it, but the actual smut was pretty hot. Might save this for later.

>> No.9268116

Doing fanfic, yea. I haven't written anything outside of uni.

Yea wasn't something I completely knew about, cheers for the tip.

>> No.9268181

Well, for a first time fanfic, I'd say you did a pretty nice job, in my opinion. The verbosity caught me off guard at first, but it ended up being a dense (in a good way, IMO) story about, well...fucking Amelia, with some much-appreciated comedy in the beginning. I'd love to see more of your work in the future, if you'd be so kind!

>> No.9268324

Which Mori prompt?

>> No.9268385

When the peko is sus ლ(゚д゚ლ)

>> No.9268404

This one: >>9176903
It's been one I've honestly been interested in for a long time, but I fear writing Mori mostly out of fear of butchering her character, more than I often do in my bumblings. I decided to try and swallow my fear and take a crack at it, and the set up is done, but now I've actually got to flesh it out with a date with the other woman, trying to break it off with Mori, the inevitable fight, and then...Reaper Rape.

>> No.9268437

Holy shit it's almost bump limit time... this thread went by so quickly without any trouble at all. It's nice.

>> No.9268438

Cheers for the input. I'll keep writing when I'm not busy.

>> No.9268779

Sounds interesting, you got a date on the release?

>> No.9268837

Fuck no, because I'll break that deadline. It'll be done when it's done. Could be tomorrow, could be in a week. Motivation and energy ebb and flow like water. I'll obviously try to have it done sooner rather than later, but yeah. Don't get your hopes up.

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>i'm a lazy piece of shit and can't be arsed to measure up to the expectations i create
Dude, don't bother announcing you're taking a prompt at all if you're not going to give a concrete schedule. Work on it in silence or fuck off.

>> No.9268906

RIP Zyzz.

>> No.9268946

Fuck, that hits pretty close to home. What's even worse is when you're really busy and have a lot of shit to do but have lots of ideas and motivation for writing, but then when you're free and have nothing to do the motivation just doesn't come.

>> No.9268962

Suck my balls and leave lipstick marks like the good little faggot you are. Go on, on your knees.
No prob, dude. Looking forward to seeing you around more.

>> No.9268987
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She's practically asking for it

>> No.9269022

Conclusion: Futa on Futa is the only possible path then.

>> No.9269042

>i'm taking this prompt
>don't get your hopes up
You're not a writer, you're just an attention-whoring dipshit.

>> No.9269066

Anon... we were about to go an entire thread with nobody responding to bait...

>> No.9269079
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Sounds like being drained from work. At least, that's the context for the feeling I can sympathize with. Spending the hours working in your head, but by the time you're actually able to do something with it, you're so overworked and tired that it feels like grinding your balls together with sandpaper. Just keep it up, bit by bit. It'll take form.

And for you, the person fuming to see the general doing fairly well again:

>> No.9269082

I mean, he DID say he was new

>> No.9269101

Yeah, I only realized my slip up after the fact. Did a gnarly kickflip onto that hook before I wrenched myself free. Don't worry, eyes are buttered for the future.

>> No.9269148

I thought there was already a matsuri prompt about her cucking (you) with a stranger

>> No.9269155
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That's a lot of sex on two girls to describe. Futa on futa must be pretty hard to write, you got two cocks, two pussies and 4 breasts. Not to mention the extra body parts like tails and such. I did just fine with futa on female but futa x futa would be a pain for sure. It's the most sex dense writing style, you can't leave anything out or else you're not making full use of the concept.

>> No.9269170

as long as you learn from it

>> No.9269172

Was it ever fulfilled? A prompt and a story are different things. More than that, it's been quite some time since I've seen it. Wouldn't exactly be out of the question for a person to make up a new one without having seen the original. I wonder how Matsuri Cuck Anon is doing.

>> No.9269189

New thread

>> No.9269217

Wow, a chuuba somebody knows this time. That's rare

>> No.9269237

...The Story Anchor guy and the Early Thread guy are the same person? The OP is an IP, isn't it?

>> No.9269242

Literally who?

>> No.9269260
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I'm right here, one comment above you. >>9269155 I'm writing a futa Kanata right now and the chances of me taking up the cuck stuff is pretty unlikely given that there's no actual prompt, just a "cuck stuff please", but no one else is interested in writing it really so I guess I'm your best bet...

>> No.9269270

You only just realized it? He posts the thread and the story anchor then fucks off. Only the anchorposts he can freely shove his nobodies into.

>> No.9269290

>The OP is an IP, isn't it?
Literally some anon brought it up but was called a retard for it. Apparently people think that the OP gets a new IP when he makes a second post.

>> No.9269295

Pikamee is one step above nobody, and equally boring and talentless. It's not much better. Only reason she was successful in the slightest was because Coco spoke 90% JP in her streams.

>> No.9269324

Oh, hey dude. Glad to see you're still kicking. May not agree with your fetish, but you've always been civil about it, so props.
I never really looked super hard at the Early OP guy; certainly had bigger problems in recent memory, haven't we? At least I know who Pikamee is. Even as I type this, my dick got hard remembering that prompt of her forcing a blowjob upon you to show you that she isn't retarded with her teeth. Goddamn that bitch needs more blowjob art that really play up the fangs.

>> No.9269332

Doubt he fucks off, that would imply there's more than two shitposters left which isn't likely. There's the impostor and the earlyfag and they both are trying their best to get attention. It was doing well enough but I guess they got it now since we are talking about em

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That's right, you keep fucking bringing them up like an absolute retard, and now they've got a reason to stick around. The entire thread we went without bait jumped on and then you guys blew it at the end.

>> No.9269434 [DELETED] 

Since we're past bump limit, a theory. Do you think the early thread guy is actually that tribalist retard bitching about /wg/ NEEDING to be renamed to Hololive Writing General? Posting a bunch of literally-whos would certainly fit their MO of bitching about it not being Holo related.

>> No.9269445

Good idea, let's give them even MORE attention. That'll totally bore them.

>> No.9269453

You know what you are, Anon? Totally fucking correct.

>> No.9269462

If you know that, then don't do it in the first place.

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>> No.9269495

Sometimes I'm retarded. You can't see it, but my court ordered dunce cap is on. It's making my headphones really awkward, but thank you for pointing out my folly.

>> No.9269723
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You get to fuck what you think is Mio's throatpussy, but there's a 75% chance of getting a random STD and a 5% chance she will not only bite off your cock but chew it while it's still attached to you. You can do it as many times as you want, would you try out your luck?

>> No.9269730

why the fuck is the chance so high?

>> No.9269745

5% is an extremely high chance for almost certain death or, in the event you survive, a fucking miserable existence.

>> No.9269807

Because it's a random STD. Not guaranteed to be AIDS right off the bat. You could get something extremely harmless and treatable. >>9269730
>>9269745 5% is reasonable, if I did 3% it would be a 1/33 chance, which is too low. A 1/20 chance already basically guarantees at least two sucks without having to worry too much. Doing it more than that is dumb tho I'd say.

>> No.9269823

No, motherfucker, I mean why is Mio a fucking Nurgle cultist? Why the fuck has that hag slut been up too if I have a 75% chance of catching some form of crotch rot?

>> No.9269830

Not odds I'd play. Imagine a guaranteed 5% chance of meeting truck-kun every time you step outside.

>> No.9269883

I really honest to god think that that dude is making me hate polka

>> No.9269906

I mean she is clearly been up to being a public glory hole as the image implies. Or she could be at Fubuki's shrine as some sort of test your luck curse kind of deal, if her being in a public toilet is too degrading for you.

Honestly I wouldn't do it not because of the 5% but because of the STD stuff. Sure, there's tons of STD's to happen to you and the chances are low but it's also a death roulette if you get something on the nasty side. So it's a 75% of getting maybe something as easy as a flu that you don't even notice or certain death in 5 years. And then the 5% basically guaranteed horrible death.

>> No.9269919

Seems like he’s archiveanon.

>> No.9269931

I'd write my own Polka, thanks.

>> No.9269948
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> archiveanon answering to bait

>> No.9269956

How the mighty have fallen.

>> No.9269998

Man, I dunno. 75% is still a major fucking chance, then there's the matter of worse shit past that. Genital warts, chlamydia, herpes, addiction to futanari, syphilis. Mio's hot and all, but nah. Overall, you're looking at what, 80% chance of something mangling your dong - and potentially whole body - beyond all recognition.

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You get to fuck Ina's throatpussy while she fondles your balls and jerks you off with her tentacles, but there's a 35% chance she'll stick a tentacle all the way up your ass and a 3% chance she'll erase all your memories by brain fucking you.

Honestly I just like posting these mouth inviting you images

>> No.9270028

>addiction to futanari,
Oh god, the worst STD of them all.

>> No.9270073

> Beyong recognition
What kinda STD are you catching? This is not radiation poisoning, it's a little scratch on your cock from time to time. Even if you got one of the worse ones, medicine has really evolved a fuck ton, it's not gonna be a terrible existence and it certainly won't lead to whole body decay. I'm not arguing against your choice, I'm just saying that STD's are more common than you think and really aren't the end of the world.

>> No.9270082

...How far is all the way up? Like, up into my stomach, or...

>> No.9270144

Let's say it wouldn't kill you or even wound you, she would go all the way through out your mouth. You can still somehow breathe and all, but it would just be extremely uncomfortable. Worst that would happen is your ass would be a bit stretched for a while after. But the blowjob would literally be the most pleasuring thing you've ever experienced. No food or sex or drugs would compare. I should have implied this with Mio too, the blowjob is supposed to be fucking amazing to make it actually worth considering.

>> No.9270157

No downsides though?

>> No.9270169

>It's not just up the ass, it's all the way through
Oh sweet fuck. Why is the Devil making these awful deals?

>> No.9270175

>she'll erase all your memories by brain fucking you.
Including basic learned abilities like speech, social conventions, and even how to walk? Still nope

Y'all niggers gotta understand ephemeral pleasure just isn't worth it

>> No.9270252

I mean it's kinda like drugs or buying a really expensive meal. Maybe a hobby you really enjoy but is dangerous like hiking or mountain climbing? Or you could just have a stroke right now and drop dead. Shit is weird to consider but it isn't all too weird.

Even though you'd be basically as uncomfortable as having a medical tube going through your body, it's lubbed up since it's a tentacle, easy slide in easy slide out. Could argue that it would touch your prostate while at it too. All this while she continues sucking you off of course. I've seen medical tubes before, I've had them in me. Is it fucking uncomfortable? Sure, not exactly traumatizing though.

>> No.9270288

Can you blame him? There's an imposter that's constantly trying to impersonate him, he's gotta make sure people know when it's him or not

>> No.9270312

>There's an imposter

>> No.9270320

Look, man. I get it. I'd fuck Ina's throat raw given the chance...under the assumption that there wasn't a Faustian entity plotting my doom on a coinflip. If there's one thing I can say I'm proud of, it's knowing I'd never have a gambling addiction; those odds are still things I am terrified of. Especially memory loss. Memory loss is something that is truly, truly terrifying to me.

>> No.9270339

I wouldn't ever risk death or similar for a hobby, no. You go BASE jumping all you like, though.

>> No.9270342

I mean I've got my nice little personal impostor too posting my prompts every thread, but you should really trust common sense that people aren't gonna fall for it especially already knowing someone is impersonating others.

>> No.9270389

>I mean I've got my nice little personal impostor too posting my prompts every thread
I don't know why you think anyone would believe this, dude, especially when you've already given away you're the world's biggest schizo.

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You get to fuck Ollie's tight zombiethroat and it would feel amazing with her moaning on your cock while yubing herself but there's a 50% maggots would be all over your cock after you cum and pull out (harmless, they only eat dead flesh) and a 5% chance you can't pleasure yourself or a woman with your hands ever again. Not only that but there's a 1% chance that you'll randomly drop whatever you're holding on your hand every 60 seconds.

>> No.9270431

Stop trying to steal my fucking soul!

>> No.9270448

Anon, this was excellent. Make more.

>> No.9270452

> new IP
What the fuck?

>> No.9270483

Think you're probably imagining it because I most certainly am not.

Still no. Sex really isn't so important that I'd head into harm's way for it.
Even if my oshi straight up asked to marry me I'd refuse and ask for a few dates first. It's one thing to watch someone for entertainment and another to live with them, their needs and all their bad habits.

>> No.9270548
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What if you could take the peppeloni... away! And eat the... the ear of pizza, but there is 5% chance you become haachama!

>> No.9270590

Lamy's gotten better with some of her English especially ones where she's reading off a script such as announcing steam is over/superchat begins/Thanks for watching type things.
Effectively lines she can do off a card.

English mostly for her is reading supers or things on screen but conversational type English is a no-go for her.

That said I'm not sure if the 'above commoners' thing is in part tied to the character archetype and GFE thing (I think I'm using the terms right).

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You get a massive boost to your shitty jrap music but you have to spend 5% of your time streaming as an anime girl.

>> No.9270628

Absolutely, I'd take it, especially with the ridiculous amounts of simp cash and the option to just walk away and take all that fame with me after a couple years.

>> No.9270631

I believe maggotplay should only come into play during rape. Imagine Ollie forcing her lips upon yours as she kisses you roughly. You feel her dead tongue - the stitches holding it, the bitter taste of formaldehyde - and then the writhing. The undulating, something that can't possibly be the cold appendage she claims she can taste with. The horror sinks in.
Anon...if I didn't know any better, I'd say you're trying to make my dick hard.

>> No.9270649

I'm pretty sure long term exposure to Haachama videos tends to cause one to start to mentally become Haachama.

Watch out for signs of Haachama mentality such as
1) Ordering Pepperoni Pizza just to remove the Pepperonis
2) Rapid decay of cooking prowess including but not limited forgetting to add oil to meals which require it
3) Schizophrenia to the point of believing there is a second separate instance of yourself who seeks to harm you.
4) Obsession with Feet both sexually and nonsexually

>> No.9270782

Good descriptions, idk why no one else commented on it. The wonders of writing futa I suppose. Too short for me to nut though I was getting there... a second round would've been nice. Ollie had some weird personality changes that felt too odd but it was fine enough. The orgasm came (heh...) too suddenly and with no warning. If you can improve these, coupled with your description skills, your stuff would be pretty amazing.

Was into it but her sudden personality change from dom to insecure hag killed it for me, sorry.

>> No.9270898

>3) Schizophrenia to the point of believing there is a second separate instance of yourself who seeks to harm you.
Haha. Yeah. Haha. Who would have that, haha?

>> No.9270929

Disco Elysium is like a master class in wordsmithing. It feels like every tenth sentence there's some obtuse, archaic word to be learned. If you're struggling with repetition in your descriptive writing, it's the game to play.

>> No.9270943

Only rotten thread-ruining, attention-seeking turbofaggots.

>> No.9271036

> price
Nah. It's twice the price of a good book. Not worth it. Though I could just pirate it I suppose.

>> No.9271067

thanks for enjoying it, I write often for these threads, so expect more, just not necessarily smut. I still have a long way to go to improve on writing smut.
I see. I intended the scene to showcase a part of her insecurities, but perhaps the shift was too jarring. I'll see how I can work on it further.

>> No.9271070

Go right ahead. This is the writing thread, not the impartialist's forum for moralist philosophy.

>> No.9271075

Go fucking nuts.

>> No.9271258

>I write often for these threads
Uh-huh. Good for you, but nobody else cares.

>> No.9271279

Keep it up bro. Learn and improve.

>> No.9271316

Have you got anything other to say than easily-recognizable platitudes?

>> No.9271405

When the archive Anon is sus ༶ඬ༝ඬ༶

>> No.9271418

Hilarious meme, gentle sir!

>> No.9271530

Make no mention of it, Sir Anon. It is simply the duty of every law abiding citizen to post the hilarist of memes!

>> No.9271551

See you next game.

>> No.9271553

This. Might as well come out and say "You're work's a piece of shit and I don't really care about it."

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