/wg/ - Writing General - Behind Blue Eyes Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy.
You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>89821078
(Where we discussed Fauna of the Forest, JKs, Marine's Perfect Math Class and Shubalter)

/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

[Anonymous No.]

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

[Anonymous No.]

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story Recap. There were two stories posted last thread:

Fantasy/High Chapter 2 >>89872825
Tags: SFW, Crossover Collab, Pekora, Coco, Marine, Multiple Chuubas, Fluff/Romance, Comedy, Isekai

A White December Chapter Ten >>89932373
Tags: Sora, AZKi, Botan, Suisei, Fauna, military, romance

[Anonymous No.]

I finally started writing. I haven't gotten far and I don't know where it's going but it's a start.

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>>90037779
That's great bro. It all starts when you get something onto the page. Have fun and keep at it. The rest will come to you as it's meant to.

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>>90037095
A wife swap between you, Mio, Fubuki, and your very own OC, complete with a creampie from the opposing partner. In the end, it's revealed that it's Mio having a daydreaming fantasy and she proposes the idea the idea to you. The moment Fubuki tries to lock lips with you, Mio starts to cry and begs to stop while screaming the safeword.

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>>90038323
God yes, and you ignore Mio's wimpering and begin making out passionately with Foobs, who is somewhat surprised by your fierce kissing before responding in turn. Mio has to sit there, regretting her idea with every fibre of her being as her life falls apart in front of her.

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>>90038323
>>90038783
Then Mio starts crying when it's her turn and she has to get fucked by Fubuki's fourth husband (Rip In Piece Nephew-kun and Fly-san) an OC, An Oceanic Creature!

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>>90039691
>an OC, An Oceanic Creature
Koyori's unholy orca/human experiment.

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>>90040967
why are you so mean to sakamata

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>>90041064
I heard she's a disgusting whore who cheats on her loved ones.

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>>90041219
Only with their consent, you ill-spoken rat.

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>>90038783
>Mio welcoming her best friend knowing she's here to get railed by her husband
>Mio sitting outside knowing her body rejects anyone but her soulmate
>Mio crying as Fubuki screeches on her fifth orgasm

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>"Project O.R.C.A huh...yeah i remember her"
>"Saw her work. Shit chills you to the bone"
>"This line of work is full of liars. Type of guys who will bomb a village and then pretend they are fine yet they drown themselves in every vice on earth"
>"They waste millionare paychecks in excess and luxury...and yet this one..."
>"Ever heard of Talkam? It was suppsoed to be this nice village that housed a military facility. Was"
>"every single person was killed with frightening efficience...and it was sickening. Im not a saint and i know im gonna burn into hell"
>"But shit. Every single living thing that wasnt our squad was eviscerated"
>"and you wanna know what she said? the first words that came out of a mouth after burning an entire building full of children and non combatants?"
>"He's making pasta today. I should buy some bread on the way home"

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>>90042242
>"How can you shoot women and children?"
>"Poepoepoepoepoe."

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>>90042242
hyper leather Chloe my beloved.
I still think about the Yunaka FE comparison an anon made and how she instantly drops a low voice when in kill mode

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>>90042242
Hyper leather vector is such a good character interpretation for Chloe. It's basically the ideal fusion where their character/debut lore can coexist in the same space as their stream characterization without much conflict.

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>>90037095
Requesting futa Mori on FWMC inspired by picrel

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>>90050534
>"Chloe."
>"Haaaai, what is it Lap-chan~?"
>"I need you to put on the mask tonight."
>"...Understood."

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Dozo!

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>>90042242
I want a fic where you and Chloe are rivals who try to kill each other with all your nights every time the two of you meet.

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>>90037095
>>90055775
You are dating both Sakamata and Koyori, but then you learn that they want to kill each other so you decide that it's time to get yourself out of this situation before they meet or realize what's going on. This inevitably turns into a massive farce of course.

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>>90028764
>I mean it's never 100% consensual if it's with someone underage
You just have to balance the scales by making anon a hikikomori manchild whose only life experiences are watching anime and playing videos games. That way it's 100% consensual in spirit for anon to date an underage girl!

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>>90028764
I mean if the child is in her early fifties does that also work

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>>90038323
Then but instead of Fubuki trying to forcefully kiss you you walk out on MIo disgusted because she proposed the idea of a 'open relationship' when you only had eyes for Mio and Mio only.

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>>90060475
Mio just thought a foursome between her soulmate and her best friend was kinky and nice, she wasn't ready for th emotional turmoil it would bring her.

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>>90058787
She's practically a toddler dude!

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Damn, slow day

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>>90064288
Well tough! You're either faithful or you're not faithful.

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>>90066357
Punchable old bint

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>>90067028
And it's all your fault anon, it's all because you made THAT post
It's only natural that no one feels like spending the rest of their day on /wg/ after THAT

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>>90047204
Anya selling her body for gacha pulls...

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>>90068956
I though my prompt about Fubuki fucking 20 niggers and then turning into a bug was a fresh concept!

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>>90069309
It's all so tiresome

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>>90037095
Marine decides to invite Noel and Flare for a foursome with (You), but instead of joining in, she annoys everyone by sitting in the cuck chair and melodramatically bemoaning her fate, so the three of you have to drag her off of it and fuck her senseless

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>>90050534
What is Hyper Leather?

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>>90070007
>The three of them manage to pry off Marine from the cuck chair.
>Noel holding her from the front, Flare holding her from the back but Anon...
>The Cuck Chair starts calling out to him like The One Ring

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Maybe this is one of those weekends I try to stay heads down.

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>>90070449
It's a Halo reference. The most proficient Spartans would be given the designation 'Hyper Lethal', and both the Master Chief and Noble Six were referred to as "Hyper Lethal Vectors", aka 'guys who'll kill everything in their path"

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>>90070740
The mispelling of Lethal as "Leather" really threw me off

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>>90070917
That's just a play on words, since the orca wears leather

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>>90070640
"Three for Ebony-kings, blackest of guys
Seven for the Goon-lords in their caves of stone
Nine for Normal Fags, doomed to like
One for the Cuck Lord on his cuck throne
In the House of Marine where the Virgins die.
One Chair to rule them all, One Chair to find them,
One Chair to bring them all, and in the corner bind them.
In the House of Marine where the Virgins die."

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>>90070449
Look it up in the archive, it's a character concept for Chloe. Ironically for something so centered around violence its only been used in CC's fic shameful desires.

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>>90071136
>stab Chloe
>her skin is too thick to budge

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dozo

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>>90073711
Who turned Watame into a cow

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>>90073897
It was me I shot her with my cowification gun.

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>>90037095
Coming home to find your wife in bed, reading another man's stories.

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>>90075418
>You have read those stories as well, and spend the night just talking about the plot, characters, and scenes.
>You have not stayed up past 3 AM just talking like this in who knows how long.
>Connected from head to heart like you were at the biggest milestones of your lives, you hold each other as you drift off

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>>90076180
>Bonding with your wife by talking about another man's sexual fantasies

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>>90076897
What kind of advanced cuckolding is this?
>His vocabulary is so much bigger than yours~

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>>90076897
>>90078529
>Sharing an enjoyment of a fictional work not written by (You) with your significant other is now cuckholding
The brainrot some of you have is terminal. Get some help.

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>>90078722
Yes

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>>90080839
That's a good step, I hope you find the help you want to get

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>>90037095
>Gigi shows you what's in the shoebox
>it's the mummified fetus of her miscarriage

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>>90082823
What did I miss?

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>>90083689
Nothing. He's just shitposting

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>>90037095
Fubuki is ambushed and raped by 20 niggers on her way to the convenience store, but she clearly enjoys it. After they've had their way with her, she turns into a massive fox-mantis hybrid, then kills and eats them.

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>>90087614
Even her nephew?

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>>90088473
Specially her nephew

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what's with all this retarded edge lately.

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>>90088759
You tell me.

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>>90088759
its one guy in case you havent noticed

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>>90037095
(You) have special needs (or HFA) and Ayame REALLY wants to get in your pants.

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>>90089223
Two actually

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>>90091026
Isn't that Our Cures, kind of

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>>90091966
Kinda, yes.
But NO ONE wins in the end.

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>>90092084
Sounds sad

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>>90089223
>>90091768
Proof next thread?

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>>90027830
>>90027677
Being seduced by your aunt and "introduced" to her friends, only for you to gain confidence and slowly build your hag harem.

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>>90092587
I mean not all the edgeposts are mine, so it must be at least two

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>>90093105
>Be you, a little innocent shota in love with your auntie Fubuki
>She indulges in your more grown up games, and while she knows it's wrong, you're her favorite sin
>She gives you funny kisses on your mouth, she lets you kiss the upper side of her bust, she tells you to grope her butt, she likes tickling you in your funny place, and so on.
>One night, as you're snuggling and watching a movie, someone knocks. You go get it, and see a brown haired woman with green eyes.
>Your auntie tells you to go to her room, you obey and hear a fight downstairs.
>"Fubu-chan please, just give me a chance, I can make this-!" But the door slams, and your auntie comes to join you, visibly distressed
>Because of a mandatory even scheduled by cover and Murphy's law on your parents' end, bunch of talents reuninite at Fubu-chan's house while you're there, and that brown haired girl is there too.
You have to stay in your aunt's bedroom so you don't interfere. You pout, but she assures you after it's over, it's going to be just you two again, and she gives you a funny kiss
>And the brown haired girl saw it
>Time passes, you hear people downstairs
>You need to pee, and there's only one bathroom
>Sneaking around, you go inside, forgetting to lock the door
>Someone else joins you, and it's her, the brown haired girl
>With your pants pulled down, you cover yourself as she ducks and aims your little cock at the toilet, her hand covering your mouth as she tells you Fubuki sent her. She's here to make sure you don't make too much noise.
>Easing up, you let her hold your peepee and slap it around. She's pulling on it forcefully, it hurts.
>You tell her to stop, and she doesn't listen. You slap her hands gently to let her know she's going overboard, but clicking her tongue, she slaps you.
>The second it takes for the pain to set in, she covers your mouth again to prevent you from screaming. She sits your on the sink as her foot keeps the door closed, and says that if you scream, she's going to hit you again.
>She locks the door, a tear rolls down your face.
>Says she knows how to make the pain go away, but you can't tell anyone
>You don't want to play this game, and she pulls out her trump card
>If you don't she's going to tell your parents about what you do with your aunt, and while being a bluff, it's enough to scare you. Your auntie's told you not to tell when a girl does it.
>Matsuri sucks your tiny cock, covering your mouth, and forcing your first dry orgasm through.
>Your peepee is sore and it turns when she pulls your underwear back up
>She's smiling and giggling, she tells you to go, and that if you tell anyone, she will tell your aunt you cheated on her.
>Spend the rest of the afternoon curled up in Fubuki's bedroom,crying, feeling the need to pee again but not wanting to go by yourself.
>By the time the event's over, Fubuki comes to get you,and you beg her to take you to the toilet.
>She laughs, saying you're too old to be scared, but gives in seeing how distressed you are. She waits outside, and again you forgot to lock the door
>She opens it, hoping to ask what this was about, and you panic, thinking it's her again
>You cry and beg as you wet yourself, and your auntie panics
>In her bed, she asks if you want her to comfort you, and you say yes
>She kisses your scalp, she scratches your head, she caresses your back and your chest
>... and she rubs your crotch, making you cry and panic again.

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>>90094648
>shota

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>>90095449
we love shotacon here

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>>90095449
Sorry bucko, but men peak when they're 12.

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>>90093105
A budding romance with my nice aunt and a hag harem for my 18th birthday? Sign me up

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Surviving a night of anarchy with Reine

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Back in my day we didn't do any of this newfangled meta-cuckolding to engagement bait. It was a sacred act kept between a man, a woman, and her boyfriend.

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>>90098212
>It was a sacred act kept between a man, a woman, and her boyfriend.
I shouldn't have laughed at this.

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Cuckolding? What an old, tired trope! Consenting cuckquean is the future!

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>>90094648

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>>90100560
>>90037095
>Kiara cheering from the cuck chair as Kronii takes Mori's virginity

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Fucking another woman with your girlfriend is the future, you get the pussy, your girlfriends goes for butt with a strap-on

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Unpopular opinion: Harems are gay and cringe.

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>>90037095
Gigi showing you her cringy fujo fanfic of Gonathan and Aron (with absolutely no relation to you)

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>>90103239
>Gigi I don't think I like this, that sex scene was super awkward and I don't think these two have much chemistry

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>>90037095
The last of the dragonslayers killing the last dragon
a somber story about how dragons are some kind of natural transformation that befalls some kemonos. It turns them into violent creatures that need to be put downand is your duty to slay the woman you once loved
https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=ufAmIBRFohM

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>>90104724
I like this one

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I'm really, really sad we'll never get to see dullachan's writing of Twisty.

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>>90099505
How would you write a High School AU Luna?

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>>90114823
>acts like a spoiled princess
>you don't believe her and assume she's just larping
>later find out she actually is a no-bullshit princess, or her family is otherwise fucking loaded
>despite talking like a retard she's one of the smartest kids in your grade and is a pretty good pianist
>may or may not have a fanclub of the most militant simps you've ever seen
>has a frail constitution and often suffers from health problems that sometimes cause her to miss days at school
>cries into your chest out of frustration one day when tendonitis has rendered her unable to play the piano

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life

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>>90116394
>Having to dodge Luna's fanclub every time the two of you want to meet
>Giving Luna support by showing up to her recitals

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>>90120454
Amen, anon.

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>>90037095
Hitting Bae with an epic prank

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>>90096679
I believe the quote was "first 40 years of childhood are the hardest for a man" but you do you

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>"Really? You wanted to see this old thing?"

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>>90128358
Silly anon, that's not the direction you're supposed to pull.

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>>90128358
Dominatrix outfit Bae wearing strawberry pink panties might be my favorite thing

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>>90133317
I love domming rats in dominatrix outfits

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>>90122829
The morning after a night spent clubbing

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>>90131234
Remember; completing a generally well-regarded fic entitles you to one dream where Azki watches you masturbate for her. This effect stacks and grows stronger with subsequent fics until you can have full-blown steaming hot penis in vagina with her complete with the premium Mating Press package where she leglocks you.

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live

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Consider this rabbit.

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bup

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>Reine's magic is to summon peacocks (male)
Naruhodo

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>>90037095
Battle Maid Raora spoiling the young master

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How do you guys stay motivated and willing to share when your work is shit? Note, I'm not saying all of your work is shit, I'm referring to the times where it is.

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>>90147584
Can't get better if you don't put out a couple of crappy works and get some genuine feedback on where you went wrong.
I live for the reviews that tear me a new asshole, not only because I'm masochistic, but because they're usually the greatest pointers to where I went wrong, what could've been better, and what I can improve.

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>>90147584
Even if it's shit, I put time into it. I put my effort and passion into creating it, and even if it's a failure, that's an opportunity to try again. You learn much more from loss than you do from victory.

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>>90147584
I never publish anything that I believe to be less than mediocre, and as long as I believe I executed my concept well enough I don't mind much if people dislike the concept itself. Ultimately, you're only going to get a very limited sample size of feedback anyway.

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>>90147584
I tend to get to the point I can't even look at my stuff and it just joins the endless pile of failures, abandoned stories and depression.

It doesn't matter what I aim for it always seems to be just too ambitious and well I'm just throwing it into trash to the point I can't even fucking put out goddamn greentexts in order.
Doesn't help that the /wg/ standard is 2nd person perspective because MUH SELF INSERT! I just can't write that way a self insert would be someone who's pretty much on the edge of painting the wall with the back of their head.
Why would a chuuba want to deal with such a loser?
So I'm caught in the infinite research to try and get proper tone and style for the chuubas and well it's pray I find a translator or decently TL'd clips to work off as I just can't even start to even wrap my head around basic Japanese teach yourself stuff no matter the guide

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>>90148488
You don't have to write in second person just because a lot of other people here do. It's a pretty specific perspective with how closely it ties the reader to the POV character.
That said, you can write second person self inserts that aren't close to you, they can be written to be like assumed readers instead. Like what femanons do here

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>>90148488
I would agree with the other anon and say that you shouldn't feel pressured to write in second person. When it comes down to it, a lot of us just want to read and appreciate good, fun stories.

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>>90148488
>the /wg/ standard is 2nd person perspective
You can always write in 3rd person and then switch to 2nd person by just swapping out pronouns afterwards.

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>>90148488
>Why would a chuuba want to deal with such a loser?
You could write a self-insert similar to you getting with a chuuba who wants to fix you (which is believable for almost all of them)
Whether she succeeds defines the genre of the story

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>>90148488
>he immediately thinks the self-insert to be a loser
That's just you man, my self insert is a socially shy virgin chad who's 8ft tall, has a 20 inch cock, correct opinions on everything and willing to better himself for his oshi

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>>90148902
I doubt a woman here has written a male self-insert.

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>>90148146
What masterpieces have you written?

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>>90150975
Oh, you know, THAT fic.

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>>90150577
That's what they want you to believe

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Guys I dont want to alarm you, but there may be a woman or WOMEN in THE THREAD

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>>90152656
I don't know what you are talking about at all

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>>90152656
No matter how much you fantasize about it, it doesn't make it true.

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>>90152656
Yeah, (You).

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How would you guys write an unshackled Laplus compared to her current form?

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>>90156017
She grows 2 cm taller

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>>90148488
Who knows, maybe a chuuba dealing with a suicidial loser might be fire

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>>90156017
Six feet tall with child-bearing hips but still the same flat-chested brat as before and royally insecure about it

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>>90156017
Greater and more mature all around.
8 feet tall, very big tits/ass/hips/thighs/horns, soft but not chubby, extremely powerful, funny and dominant with a caring mommy streak.

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>>90037095
being one of the first Europeans to discover an unknown island in Indonesia filled with people of a stone age tribe and taking the treasure you deserve (that treasure being sex with unwilling inhabitants)

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>>90159728
Well fuck I'd be going YES MY DARK on my knees if only for the size and figure.

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>>90150975
None, I can't touch the best writers here. The story of mine that got the most recognition was Shiori's Fucking Monologue which won a category in the winter contest. It's where both the concept and the execution worked out pretty well, but that's easier with a shorter story and a fun concept.

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>>90156017
It would depend on how deep you want to go, and for what purpose she's unshackled. On the "Demon Lord" end Lap's core personally should still be there but she should be more callous, calculating, and selfish. On the "6000 trillion years old" end, Almost none of Lap's original personality should remain. She should be like a machine until the power of love/friendship rekindles the core personality

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>>90160036
>I can't touch the best writers here
Whi told you that? You can touch molest them whenever you want.

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>>90037095
Shiori sends you incredilbly unhinged "Us <3?" content on your socials.
>If we were part of the Flight 571 of the Uruguayan Airfoce crash, I'd be your Numa.
>Me with you <3: Shows a picture of flesh eating bacteria
>Sends you a pic of a fish being eaten by butterflies saying this is how you make her feel
>Getting railed isn't enough I need to crawl inside your stomach and grow like a fetus

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>>90156017
I think it would be fucking hilarious if she acted like an 8 foot tall demon dommy mommy but just grew like an inch or two (mostly in horns).

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>>90164155
this but the other way around

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>>90162109
Bullshit. Most of the writers here know how to fend off molestation.

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>>90164599
"Most"?

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>>90111492
Boobies!!

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i think chuubas should fuse

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>>90167476
>Moona with the sex drive of a rabbit
She'd become too poweful

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>>90167476
>end up with a lazy nagging lion that behaves like a brat
>>90167635
She'd inherit the autism and become the most unapproachable woman in the universe

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>>90168134
>She'd inherit the autism and become the most unapproachable woman in the universe
She'd act unapproachable until her lust overwhelms her, she randomly drags some unwitting schmuck into a closet, fucks him senseless and stoically leaves him a dried out husk as she sashays away

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>>90167476
i think chuubas should raceswap

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>>90168593
turning into kemonos is easy.
who becomes an elf?

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>>90169000
>hyperfixation on the smallest things, whiny and building autism
Nerissa

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who is the ssj4 gogeta of hololive

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>>90170541
>widly overhyped, completely useless in canon,never had any real feats, hideous design, the definition of nostalgia bait and with the worst fanbase known to man.
I dont wanna say Rushia because even she had good points

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>>90037095
Your girlfriend Akai Haato dragging you into probably haunted buildings and areas to have sex in, but you're not afraid because they're not the scariest thing there anymore after you two enter

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>>90170728
How can one man be so incredibly wrong

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>>90172115
hey man rushia could make some fun streams

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>>90170728
>imagine slandering the great Goget4
Someone sure must hate fun, stylish hair, and the power to flex on the whole universe.

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>>90172257
dogshit body hair makes him ugly, ssj4 is ugly and makes no sense.Its like a bara fursona of someone who was really into the pink panther. GT was a piece of shit and people always suck off gogeta as the only good thing about it but he showed up for less than an episode, didnt even win his fight against an ugly dragon retard and i had to endure years of people sucking him off because he throws a beam that wouldnt have scratched the ultimate form of omega shenron. He's the ultimate jobber and i hate him so much
okay im not derailing the thread any longer

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>>90170541
I will not elaborate further.

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>>90173259
I think bratbro died

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>>90176497
Pitsluts

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are there any medical drama fics

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>>90177844
I don't think so, unless that one Marine dementia fic counts

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>>90037095
The last thing your dumbass Merc face sees

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bup

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>>90037095
Turning Ao into your bitch because she keeps flirting with your girlfriend Marine

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>Punch yourself in the face and tell Chloe you were mugged
>She gets all sad and teary-eyed like a normal hapless girlfriend, but you know her better than that
>Chloe asks if you saw who did
>Give her the description of somebody you don't like
>she asks if you wanna call the police
>Tell her it'd be too much trouble and they probably wouldn't help anyway
>She begrudgingly says okay
>Later that night you hear leave while thinking you're asleep, and you smile
'>Later when she sneaks back inside, you hear her immediately go the bathroom and you get up to peep on her
>Catch her washing off blood mumbling about how annoying get rid of that guy and his family was
>Sneak back into bed and let her think you're still asleep when she tip-toes in and starts spooning you from behind, whispering in your ear how much she loves you

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>>90186070
This seems like it would backfire
Now Ao is even more present in Marine's life, and Marine probably uses Ao to get off in some way

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>>90182167
Vored by a giant Oceanic Creature?

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>>90187454
It's a mindbreak prompt. The whole point is to make Ao subservient to (You) by the power of your cock. Hell, you could even use Ao as bait to turn both of them into your masochist pets

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>>90187079
I like the idea that holos are somehow extremely competent at their job but their goofy selves at home. Like Zeta being the best secret agent in the world, but you only ever see her pon and cute at home.

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>>90186070
>>90188059
What about the inverse?
Ao-kun flirting with Marine in order to disarm her and get alone with (You) to break you into a man slave that hugs her tight and says she loves her.

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>>90189022
I had an idea for a fic where Marine is actually an autist about sailboats and the Golden Age of Piracy, but feigns ignorance because she thinks it's not girly and that (You) would find it unattractive.

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>>90190763
What if she was an actual pirate?

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>>90159995
You sure you wouldn't say Yamada and see what she does to you?

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>>90191714
Technically she's not actually a pirate, in her lore her Vtubing career is just to make enough cash to finance a sailboat and THEN be a pirate

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>>90190763
sailboats arent sexy
submarines are sexy

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>>90195268
>submarines
Must...not...Torrespost

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>>90193798
>>90195268
>Marine pilots the Titanic Submarine and blows up

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>>90187079
>starts spooning you from behind
>"Bad boy...you made me do it again"
>You smile. She smiles

TFW no murderhobo relationship

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>>90197692
>you get bullied at school
>your friend, Chloe sayd she'll go talk to them
>three bullies, they think they're about to fuck Chloe and promise not to bully you again
>the last one of the three sees as his friend gets his eyes carved out, and he can't scream because Chloe cut off his tongue.

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>>90177844
The one I'm writing

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>>90197991
I vaguely remember a Rushia prompt that went in this direction.
I think the idea was some kind of bait and switch NTR turned into a psycho yandere reveal.

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>>90037095
Your first Christmas with Noel

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>>90200485
We need more Christmas episodes.

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>>90200485
This just makes me imagine the joke being that you're a baby and this is your onee-san's first Christmas with you.

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>>90200485
Waking up to find Noel tied up under the tree as your present

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>Christmas Eve had taken a strange turn
>Mama had to be rushed to the hospital, and Noel was mad.
>Something about her little brother, who wasn't even her yet. She wanted her presents! She wanted to eat her dinner! But no, here they were, in a hospital room.
>She wanted to go home, she was getting tired and wanted to sleep, she wanted her toys, she wanted this dumb idiot of a boy to stop ruining her Christmas.
>A few hours later, a nurse comes to get her papa, and she goes with him
>There she sees him in her mother's arms, and her heart skips a beat.
>This... is her little brother.
>And something inside her switched, her heart grew three times its size that day, she cried.
>And she decided she would dedicate her life to this boy.
>20 years later she had a breakdown as her brother brought a flatty home and presented her as her girlfriend

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>>90202338
Noel will have to date the flatty's little brother as revenge, leading to a happy ending with two couples.

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What a bold and daring interception by the incestoids. And the concept is just as big of a surprise. Again.

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>>90202748
Will there be partner swapping?

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>>90203294
I mean, it's not really incest, it's more like emotional attachment to her ototo and knowing he's all grown up.
I remember my sister crying when I got married because she said she would miss me, now that I didn't 'need her to look after me'. Sometimes it really just is the passage of time making you realize that a period of your life is over.

She's such a sweet woman, I still fuck her from time to time for old time's sake.

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>>90203294
>incestoids
I mean... Fubuki's nephew could have been a fly.

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>>90038323
>>90037095
An unsaved number sends you a video of your wife riding another man. And while it completely destroys you mentally, you don't bring it up because you don't want to believe it's true. You suck it up and keep going about your day.
Then, one afternoon as you come out of your workplace, you're approached by no one other than Fubuki, saying she just happened to be in the area and happened to need a lift. You accept.
You know she's close to Mio, and you feel like asking things, but while you struggle to speak, Fubuki's hands creep on your legs. You want to say no, your heart, body and soul belong to Mio, and yet, you let her blow you and ride you in your car.
So what, now you're even? But you don't want to be even. Mio leaves while you work from home and you start to think she's getting fucked. (Sure enough, she's getting bent over a public toilet) while Fubuki shows up unannounced looking for Mio. She asks if she can wait inside, and what do you know, you rail her.
More and more shenanigans ensue until you're going out with Fubuki, and you find Mio on the street with her lover -Oga, Fubuki's husband- Both you and him are horrified while the girls take it casually. The night ends in a hotel and a foursome with two pleased women, and two confused men.
Turns out, the two agreed to swap their hubbies and cornered them at times they knew they would fuck them senseless -but no kissing on the mouth, because they're not whores nor unfaithful-

Oga and you have some beer and play co-op elden ring while your wives blow you two.

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>>90203559
>She's such a sweet woman, I still fuck her from time to time for old time's sake.
I laughed. Fuck you.

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i wonder if we got posted on the catalog or something because these weird edgy kids appeared overnight and keep flooding with low effort cuck and rape shit.

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>>90204270
>Overnight.

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>>90204321
yes overnight. There's a very marked difference in between our resident cucks that do not act like a fucking /pol/ mongoloid and this new kid that seems to have learned the word nigger one week ago

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>>90037095
Shiori watches from the cuck chair in disbelief as the threesome she planned with you and Flayon turns into you reshaping his rectum to your cock's shape while you whisper words of love in his ear that Shakespeare could only dream of.

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>>90204518
You're right we need to unite the two camps and have a frank discussion on the potential of incest netorase.

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>>90195982
Everything's fine

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>>90204965
I like this idea, so let's take a seat and bring up arguments.
While NTR is the fetishization of betrayal, incest adds a different spice into the mix. Emotional incest (For example, mothers who get jealous of the girls their baby boys date, or who depend on their children as 'surrogate' partners does lead to a lot of drama by itself. If we were to bring NTR to the table, it would be from this angle, such as, your useless neet older sister needs you to live, and while her ototo won't ask her to get a job, she has to welcome his girlfriend into the house. Suddenly, she finds him eating her cooking, washing his clothes, they have fights like all couples do and she wants to comfort her ototo, but of course, she can't do such things.

This kind of mogging can lead to pseudo NTR that ties with the incest bond, but not directly with the sexual aspect of it and I believe that if we were to merge both genres there would need to be a different angle for the betrayal.

Ages ago I watched a blackmail NTR hentai where a girl wants to give her older brother her virginity as a graduation gift, but an ugly bastard catches them doing anal and uses it to blackmail her into becoming a sex toy.

While it was emotional at times, the thing that kills it for me is that it's only incest on the surface. Just as they are introduced as siblings, they could've been introduced as just a regular couple and nothing would've changed. It's half-baked as NTR, and half-baked as incest.

Therefore, for there to be a true NTR/NTRS incest story, the betrayal must've only be sexual, but emotional as well, and the angle we can approach it from, is precisely from mothers, aunts, sisters and whatnot having their spot replaced.

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>>90200986
I might start something Christmas themed this Thanksgiving weekend.

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>>90200986
>>90037095
Die Hard in the Hololive Office!

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Sorry fellas, I can't write for this thread anymore. Someone slipped a Lamyfication potion into my drink. I am now Lamy.

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>>90169000
Flare. She looks at herself in the mirror and screams in horror. She looks just like a goddam Elver.

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>>90200986
>>90037095
Flare gets mistaken for one of Santa's elves and is whisked off to the North Pole

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>>90207016
...Not Lamy?

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>>90208452
>Flare arrives
>"Okay Shortbears! get to work!"
>"L-lamy?"
>"Oh hi Flare"
>"What are you doing here?"
>"Im not letting my degree in Factory organization go to waste. Besides its only a seasonal job"

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So, how's that WIP going? You HAVE made some progress, right?
>Bonus
What's a fic that you wish was updated or continued? What would you like to see in it? Fan sequels are cool too!

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>>90209671
Life's been a tornado. im dual wielding two wips to try and push past life and a writer's block that prevents me from going all in one one of the two.
First is 4100 words, is mostly "done" and needs a final scene+funny omake to tie it all together. This one im triying my hardest to polish so i will be recruiting a beta reader as soon as i can put a bow on the climax since the Omake is floating on my brain.

The second one is at 3500 words, the general skeleton of the story is planned and i have the ending there on the page, i just have to write the guts and the omake which i also have there on the page
>why the omakes? can you just end?
Well in the second one (my planned contest entry that had to be frozen due to a surprise teacher's strike that put all our exams in the same month) the omake is the nice bow on top of the story. Its more like an epilogue.

The first one is funny and i want to use it since its not "main story" material

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>>90037095
Autism queen Kaela takes advice from her friends to woo you. You're all sitting around campfire, and they tell her to sit on top of you and cuddle you saying she's cold.

Kaela sits on top of your knees, upright, and says she's cold. You, autism king Anon, tell her to let you get up. Like that, you get some more dry timber to make a better fire while Kaela stands next to the empty chair.

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Fuck you *Un-nerds your shiori*

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>>90213156
1 or 3 will be my endgame Shiori.

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>>90204965
>>90205396
It's possible to execute this in a more lowbrow and literal manner. Try 135334 or 312645 for example. I get where you're coming from with it intruding into the daily household routine though. That's something I also really like in non-incest scenarios that only works with well-established married couples.

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>>90200485
>Noel being EXTRA dorky because she's nervous about spending the holiday with you.

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>>90213644
I'll read these when I get home.
Now, since I have a professional cuckold here, can I ask you if you have any recommendations where the NTR leans more on the emotional side from the bull/heroine's perspective?

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>>90202319
Did she tie herself up?

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>>90215230
Not usually my cup of tea but a fine middle ground between our interests (that is to say, NTS that becomes emotionally weighty with the bull) that I suspect you haven't read is the moderate length serialization contained in these three galleries:
193306
193293
193300

Generally speaking I prefer when the girl is enjoying herself rather than feeling torn, and when the bull doesn't have much presence from the reader's perspective. Cuck's feelings don't matter as much to me. The spectrum of how he responds determines how it ranges from playful teasing to brutal humiliation, both of which are good.

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>>90209671
Broken Heartlock.
I hate that story but I want to see the Hindenburg explode, goddamnit. I was emotionally invested out of spite from having been in that situation before. At least it had a somewhat good ending for (You) planned where you get a Lui GF who actually respects your boundaries.
That one with Kiara in the concentration camp as a German officer also had insane potential to be fucking wild. I was into it.

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>>90213156
wait a minute

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>>90209671
It has and hasn't. The next chapter hasn't started yet, but I did do a bit of extra stuff on the second half. It's been my strategy to have the second half to write in so I don't get too antsy when writing this part and rush. I've been reading and listening to a lot of first hand accounts of WW1 soldiers and it's the most visceral, horrifying shit you can imagine so I intend to reflect that in After Sora get's deployed.

I redacted the spoiler bits, but here's a segment of White December Second Half if you want to see what's upcoming. I also now know how the story will end. I'm bucking the trend I usually take and I'm giving it a happy ending, although bitter sweet.

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>>90216768
i think all the "nazi" prompts are a recipe for total disaster.
not because i think the setting is problematic or whatever, but because there's two extremes of people who feel compelled to write those
>unironic /pol/ brainrotted creature that think they are writing something juicy and it just comes at hilariously edgy and juvenile
>ultra /k/ historian that will spend 20 pages describing the logistics of the supply chain the protag alluded in a throwaway line.
the second one is more akin to holoslavia and it requires a very specific mindset and focus to make work and the first one reads like those very early fics about beheading that one chuuba the author doesnt like

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>>90218009
You know this isn't really related but I feel it's loosely related.

One of the reasons why I could never get intot he whole coffee plantation autism was because of how many twists on the prompt tried to make the slaver the good guy.

House slaves were a thing in multiple cultures and they lived cozy lives (by comparasion), but slavers and by extension slave owners were rarely good people. You really expect me a powerful man just keeps dozens of feral, strong kemono down with some dick? We're not in Classic rome or Greece either, where slaves could be teachers or artisans, it's one of the most brutal instances of slavery.


It might have something to do with my disdain for harems, as well, but the fact that so many twists on the CP AU tried to make the owner the good guy just felt off with me, like you're taking an inherently dark concept and treating it like a regular fluff fic.

I'm not saying that you can't make such a thing, just that if you want to and you want to have all this fun autism about Mio having tattoos for each of her children and shit like that, you also have to commit to the fact that you're literally owning fucking slaves, and it has nasty implications.

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>>90218554
You reminded me of the pseudo-Roman slavery fic and now I'm sad it didn't get continued. That protagonist might have lived by his slave-owning culture, but had a good heart.

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>>90219601
.... name?

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>>90219787
Chained Promises

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...Why does the protag have to be a good guy? Why do their actions have to be justified?

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>>90209671
I am dying but yeah, it's going.

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>>90220091
He doesn't have to be, you do you. But if I'm invited to imagine myself as him interacting with chuubas I like, I would prefer him to have a decent character.

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>>90218554
i kinda agree with you in the sense that you have to admit the owning slaves part but you are also ignoring the very big part of slaves: they were not cheap.
Even the portuguese, who initially had a monopoly over them, would start search parties for escaped slaves because each of them was worth a good chunk of money. Beating and abuses were part of a system to keep them in line but if they were in line then you wouldnt need to beat them.
So a decent slave owner wasnt out of the picture, as long as the slaves were okay with the working conditions. Those born into slavery were pretty used to this song and dance and would quietly do their job and just try to keep themselves from getting whipped to hell and back.
Ironically to our "plantation" fic, newcomers were the major instigators because they still had fight in them and either spearheaded the revolts...or they were broken into the system.

UNLESS, and this is where it gets weird, we were to approach this from the angle of slavery from the spanish regime.
You see, when they discovered america,natives were considered servants of god, not tools like the blacks, and there were legislation and multiple laws to protect them as well as the need to evangelize them.
The precognition came from the fact that they did not have a culture and/or political structure (or if they had it it was too primitive) and thus could be converted into Catholicism...which would make them servants of god and thus illegal to whip and abuse (they still did when they felt like)

SO if you truly want this to be a guy good situation, you can write a missionary or a soldier going to the new world and inhabiting the towns were they were triying to teach them about god(while also making some cash money on the side). These towns were self sufficient and often protected the natives from incursions from slave traders...which ultimately still preserves the fetish aspect of this being a power dynamic.

hell you can get creative. Anon is a soldier that gets wounded and left for dead in the jungles..when he wakes up a father has healed him and lets him stay as long as he instructs them in military tactics (the jesuits knew but these are not jesuits so whatever). In this town there's kemonos (natives) and free elves or whatever.
Hijinks ensue as elf/kemono pussy grips like a retard holding the class pet and maybe the father passes away and suddenly Anon has contaminated his lineage like 20 times because without an european woman to tell him he shouldnt stick his dick in the fluff, he has gone loco

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>>90187454
It would backfire when Marine finds out her boyfriend is cheating on her with one of her friends

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>>90218554
That fic concept was trying to make the slaver a good guy?
Maybe I'm just misremembering it but the general vibe I was getting from that fic was it was more fetish rather than moral (out of universe at least) .

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>>90037095
You catch your little sister Ina raiding your fridge for pudding, YOUR pudding, and correct her accordingly

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>>90224740
Perfect pose for tummy kicking action

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>>90209671
Having taken a month off to participate in the contest, I have been having some trouble regaining momentum. in my wip.I'll get there but it's been pretty stop and go.
>bonus
First Summer Memories... I just want a conclusion man.

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>>90217479
The way you're describing this, I'm both looking forward to and dreading it.
War is hell.

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>>90037095
Your fiance Chloe desperately trying her to hide her past as an assassin from you as it slowly catches up to her and threatens to tear her normal life apart.

[Anonymous No.]

Hoeh...

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>>90209671

Got scope-creeped. Kinda realized I'm too underlevelled as a writer to actually tackle the story, considering how much shit I would be throwing at the wall.

Sooo, here now hoping that starting a new wip would get me some confidence and get me on right track to write again, maybe even lay out a bit of groundwork for the other one, it'll turn out fine, right?

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>>90233981
nta though if you're going to start another WIP, make sure it's two things:
>much shorter than the first WIP you're trying to finish
>you can actually finish it
Ideally, you'd want something that would take you away from your first WIP for at least half a month/a month or so. That way, when you get back to your first WIP you'll have fresh eyes and fresh ideas.
Usually, any talk about being "too underleveled as a writer" to finish a WIP is more of a confidence issue/interest issue than an actual skill issue. If it really is a skill issue on your part, then just don't release it after you finish it, work on something else, and get back to it after your other project's done and dusted.

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>>90209671
Current WIPs:
> Ame x Mumei
> Anon & several (x2, SFW)
> Sora x dog
> Anon & Ayame (SFW, fantasy)
> Anon x (Matsuri x third party)
> Anon x Risu
> Anon x Ina
> Anon x Ayame
> Anon x Gura
> Anon & Botan (SFW, police)
> All talents x customer
> Marine x random
> Evil Neuro x Harem
> Neuro x Evil Neuro

Word counts generally ranging from 500 to 4000.

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>>90241055
>Marine x random
I know you mean this in a Marine has sex with a random person way but this just makes me think of Marine literally getting fucked by something created by random generation like something rolled off of an rng table.

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>>90243009
> roll for an encounter in D&D except it picks which creature will fuck the chuuba

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>>90209671
It's going. I'd say I'm probably about halfway through this current chapter. My progress will definitely tank this week due to holidays and parents visiting, but I'm aiming to get this one done before the month ends.

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>>90243009
What if we flipped this around, and it was anon rolling dice to determine which chuuba and scenario he has a sexual encounter with.
Then you get some wacky combos paired together, you can play it straight or as some ecchi comedy where the chuuba in question has to roleplay this scenario for some silly reason.

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>>90245943
>Mori magical realm'ing other girls with a DMPC that is very clearly just her boyfriend

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>>90225779
I don't think Ina has the constitution for harapan

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>>90245943
Yeah, and if it was in a fantasy setting in like a city of adventure where Anon can seemingly run into anything while going through a fantasy adventure with chuubas.
A Holofantasy if you will.

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>>90246781
I can't believe nobody's thought of that before!

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>>90246418
>Mori, stop injecting your horrible fetishes into our game

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>>90209671
I had an idea for one where Choco subtly grooms (you) into demonhood and becoming King of Makai set against Ina and the Ancient Ones trying to undo reality. But it sounds like edgy chuuni shit even to me.

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>>90246418
This but the setting is a fantasy version of Canada, and all the female NPCs are Korean with either blue or purple hair

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>>90246418
>>90247682
>Mori... How could your boyfriend be so compelling? You're a genius!
>You're welcome. Now fetch me my cuck chair.

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>>90247682
>>90251534
>mori's magical realm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeE2rQlNZbQ

[Anonymous No.]

How close are we to dying? Should I hold off on posting until next thread?

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>>90255784
Practically? 250+ posts is like more or less half a day till bump limit, so honestly you could probably do another grammar and flow sweep on your fic and wait for next thread

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>>90255942
Nonsense, I’m a first draft poster (except for when I’m not)

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>>90256057
Then post it now? There's not really much of a (You) advantage for posting early in the thread since the thread recap ensures everything at least has eyes on it. So unless you're posting at the the literal tail end (300+) you're not really missing much if you're not going to edit further.

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>>90256242
Fuck it we ball

>>90037021
“Cliche”
Tags: Marine, Flare, wedgie, meta-commentary
https://docs.google.com/document/u/4/d/e/2PACX-1vS3AsPPLnFyUrBNA-3NPiBV38B1aI0w3RP0aO8d596OQimL4SygAIXgs0To220v4gSk0A3mTK-VRf9t/pub

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>>90256401
>wedgie
Don't worry, regardless of when you post no one's going to read it anyway

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>>90256487
Well that’s a little hurtful

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>>90255779
So Dwarf Campaign? Let's go!

IRyS doesn't count as being a disgusting elf... right?

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>>90037095
Story about Koyori drinking cum

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>>90255779
>>90249453
Kronii and Ina go to the anti-magic cave where rapey goblins tribes lurk in the shadows and their powers don't work!

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>>90256506
I'll read it

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>>90225779
I'd go for butt kicking instead. It comes with the added head-to-fridge-door hit.

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>>90225779
>not suplexing her
Come on man you got one job

[Anonymous No.]

>stuck on fic for a few weeks
>re read the entire thing
>move a few scenes around and bow the ideas flow like normal
I'm not sure if this is a good feeling or not, but at least I feel a little productive

[Anonymous No.]

>>90087614
Why are you like this

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>>90259857
Don't downplay it, it's a great feeling to pick out what wasn't working and not have to completely scrap it.

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>>90256401
This feels way too up it's own ass (heh) in meta commentary about how wedgie fetish fics go to be a good fanfic.
With Marine and Flare effectively just stand-ins for your own weariness at the pattern.

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>>90256401
I feel like i get what the joke is...but you are not switching it up. Meta commentary that does exactly what it mocks is kind of a dead end, so you going "hahah loool these scenarios are dumb" but not switching it up just makes the writer scratch their head at what was the point of it.

Like im not into the fetish, but if the meta commentary is about how cartoony the scenarios are...then why not try and do a realistic scenario? go all in on absurdity? poke it with dry comedy?.
Like what is this triying to say aside from "im aware this is repetitive"?

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Up

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>>90264336

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>>90265231
shit, this wasn't meant to be a reply

[Anonymous No.]

what's sequel are you guys patiently waiting to see

[Anonymous No.]

>>90266118
ALS 2

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>>90265231
Dir...

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>>90265231
>>90265259
:(

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>>90266118
Without a hint of irony SD 3

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>>90228561
I always knew WW1 was bad and watching documentaries shows that, but hearing first-hand accounts from people who lives is legitimately horrific. I don't know how anyone came back from it sane. It's why I want to give it a happier ending than what I was originally thinking.

I'm glad you're reading. I'll keep working on it.

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>>90266882
Why would you need yo be ironic? I enjoyed shameful desires and I don't condiser myself a cuck.

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>>90267686
the "guilt pleasure" thing is so dumb. you can enjoy something and recognize its stupid.

i know "slut nun becomes the town bycyle" is a tired stupid trope, doesnt mean i dont eat that shit up and love when the sister shows her fat ass in the most whorish garter belt known to man why is she wearing it? who gives a shit

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>>90267686
Not talking about the content of the fic so much as how this thread has been beset by bait. I just really like NTR

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>>90266118
A Deal with the Devil

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>>90233981
God I hate that... I'm always trapped into scope creep hell

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>>90262902
>>90263159
I suppose that was the point, so mission accomplished

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>>90268236
Same.

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>>90270185
It was decent but I reckon you're competent and thoughtful enough to write a meta story that has a better plot, and that plays with the premise rather than insisting on itself.

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>>90037095
After a lot of failed relationships and manchildren, Choco meets you, probably the most decent, stand up guy she's met. While she's wary and you've been dating for almost a year now, she starts to suspect that you're cheating on her just like the others. Anticipating herself to a heartbreak, she cheats on you back with some random guy at a bar and shoves it in your face when she's caught.
Solemn, you reveal that you were actually working overtime to buy her a nice gift for your anniversary.
Choco is left alone and heartbroken as you show yourself the way out, and while she wishes she could turn back time, she just accepts she's a difficult person to love.

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>>90267775
Sister Foobs giving you a private bible study lesson but she doesn't know anything at all and makes up random verses that don't exist or make sense. In reality she's saying crude sexual innuendos to try and seduce you but you're too dense to understand them.

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>>90266118
Red Riding Nene ch 2

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>>90267775
I REALLY want to ear her out. Sit on my face and suffocate me please Sister

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>>90278310
Fat Fox Fanny on my Face for a Fantastic time

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>>90279317
Fat Fanny'd Fox Friends Forced Face-sitting

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>>90279991
I might write something like this solely so I have an excuse to use this title.

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Blitzed a Nene paddling fic in one sitting, feelsgood