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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>84381490

(Where we discussed The day of Raora's wedding, AJAB, unhinged Shiori and jobbers)
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Story Anchor
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Story recap. There was one story posted last thread:

HoloJourneys Chapter 48: An Oceanic Smorgasbord >>84402942
Tags: Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, Botan, Kiara, Marine, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff

>> No.84544685

>>84543147
I think Liz is a "Ethical" racist. Or I think a better term is that she does not know she is racist. She thinks racism died when the demons did something equivalent to the civil rights movement for them.

She has reservations about "demon culture" and does not tie it to the fact that she cant stand it to the fact that she simply does not stand demons.

She simply thinks that she is Justice simpy giving to dirty demons what they deserve even if its racial profilling. They are cops after all.

>> No.84544744

>>84541612
the lore vid makes it out like she turned into a Gremlin after a traumatic event
it feels to me like some kind of fairy tail curse

>> No.84544806

Anyways yeah I think it would be interesting to write liz that way

>> No.84545263

Trauma and Chuubas. You cant go wrong with a mixture like that.

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>>84544235
>jobbers
What other chuubas make good Jobbers... But in the romance anime way. By which I mean, what chuuba's make good losing heroines?
>Laplus
If she's not introduced as the main heroine her chances drop to near zero as the token loli.
>Subaru
Unless this is a childhood friend romance she doesn't have a chance at winning.
>Marine
Zero chances unless this is a series where the characters can fuck.

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>"Ojou, have you considered that restoring the Japanese Empire is kinda toxic and problematic?"

>> No.84545953

>>84545762
Literally any loli not introduced as first girl is a good pick, they never win.
>Choco
In any sort of cohesive setting she's gonna be pinned as significantly older than the main cast and that creates all kinds of problems.
>Sora
Unironically too vanilla, she hits the childhood friend nail on the head personality-wise while also creating an unattainable image through being *the* Hololive member
>Noel & Flare
You can really replace these two with any significantly shipped yuri duo, I don't think many authors are writing "two gay chicks go bi because this dick is really good"
>The Entire Dev_is Lineup
Literally nobody pays attention to them, they lose by never being included unless somebody needs Raden to show up for a joke or something.

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>>84545762
I think Suisei would make for a good jobbing romantic interest because she just tries too hard and a combination her own pride getting in the way, with being too slow to let someone in properly.

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>>84545953
>Literally any loli not introduced as first girl is a good pick, they never win.
The worst thing about these anime is that you always know who is going to win from the first episode. I fucking hate the author of Toradora and Golden Time. She's put me twice through that torture where I know the absolute worst girl ever is going to fucking win but I still just can't stop watching. Fuck Golden Time especially.

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ENReco has been a good source of inspiration. But I can't decide between
>IRyS is the town bicycle and constantly gets plowed by the other girls during quests
or
>everyone gets tired of Kronii's queen schtick, so she gets locked up in the pillory in town square and reamed from both sides all day

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>>84546112
Suisei is the kind of shining star that either warps the series around her or gets killed.
She's too powerful.

>> No.84546512

>>84546411
>Kronii going into a debtor's prison with how many loans she takes out to convince people she's queen. You tell her there's another way she can vacate her sentence.....

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>>84546501
Shining stars have to be careful, they run the risk of burning out before their journey can complete.
The brighter she shines, the bigger her shadow becomes.

>> No.84546743

>>84546512
>She's to be a model for a new line of fashion for the highest nobles of the realm—her proportions are perfect for one of the dresses the designer has planned.
>The dress is about 80% sequins and string, of course, but by the time she's seen it it's far too late to back out, and so she'll be forced to attend the gala in the sluttiest clothing money could buy.

>> No.84546786

>>84546634
The star that burns twice as bright burns half as long...

>> No.84546863

>>84546411
>>84546512
>>84546743
Reminder.
The girls are all at least twice the size of the locals.
Imagine all of this but they're so big you're only crotch size compared to them.

>> No.84546882

>>84545762
>subaru
>no chance of winning
Pick one

>Marine
She's either the misato or strictly a comedy relief

>>84545953
>Dev_is
Ao is "mr steal your girl"

>>84546190
At least that late 90s/early 00s fad of the hero chasing after the most boring milquetoast girl with 0 personality is over, but i agree with you.

>> No.84546903

Kronii really does rhyme with rape.

>> No.84546931

>>84546863
Imagine the IRyS upskirt shots...

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>>84546786
Write that down! Write that down!
That will be a cool line to use down the road.

>> No.84546969

>>84546863
Smalldom for the win

>> No.84546994

>>84546112
I see Suisei as a springboard for the real romance of the story. She could be the girl that the protagonist's initially obsessed about as a fan but Anon just gives up on this unreachable idol that's too high among the stars while Suisei stays oblivious, or he manages to get the comet but gets disillusioned by what superstars like her are actually like in real life (and the life of being the boyfriend/husband of such an idol).

>> No.84547062

>>84546994
Suisei really just doesn't feel like a romantic target to me. She feels like the girl that Anon starts the story off hopelessly pining for, only to grow closer with and eventually fall for the other girl whom he befriended to try and get close to her. The plot basically writes itself.

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>>84546994
And therein lies the Comet's trap.
For the more you try to make her a romantic false lead, the more you'll want to make her the real heroine.

>> No.84547303

>>84545762
>le Marine cant score

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>>84546994
That is one of the finer points of Suisei as a character. Her ease of fitting into a role that props her up above over characters or makes her some kind of untouchable entity in a sense, helps give your other characters goals, humbling, and strife. It also opens up your story to delving deeper into what makes the comet tick, and unearthing crevices and quirks that no one else might be privy to. She can also kick your ass, which is just great.

>> No.84547472

>>84544278
Rewrite of the nukige Starless but with holomem
Starring:
Anon as either the MC or the son
Kronii as the new maid
Haachama as the bad end girl
Marine as the lady of the house
Mio as the senior maid
Shion as the youngest daughter
Irys as the eldest daughter

Doesn't have to be the whole thing, just a pick a couple scenes or whatever

>> No.84547867

>>84547123
The way I see it is that Suisei is the #1 hatefuck heroine. It's a route where the relationship turns sour pretty quickly but Anon for some reason can't help but strap himself in and see it reach the deep end. Suisei's fans get a starry sky filled with dreams, you get the bleak view behind that beautiful illusion.

>> No.84547877

>>84545762
For me the platonic ideal of a loser heroine is Iroha

>> No.84547999

>>84546112
I don't think her pride would be the reason. Suisei isn't really a hesitant person when she wants something. Rather I think her jobbing would come from from a naive sense of love. She rests on her laurels because "it's meant to be" only for someone to snatch her crush away from her.

>> No.84548016

>>84547877
>>Iroha
>Exotic looks but not too exotic (still Japanese)
>Fantastical
>Comes with a harems worth of Jobbers that naturally work with her.
How?
Out of everyone in HoloX she has the biggest main heroine energy.

>> No.84548046

>>84547877
Actually zooted. Iroha has the blonde hair buff, the cute vocal tick, she wears a sarashi so she's probably got the hidden big tits buff, what more could a man want?

>> No.84548199

>>84547867
Could this be a complement to that whole "toxic exgf/fwb kiara" from a few threads back? Imagine having the girls pitted against each other with anon getting tugged back and forth

>> No.84548465

>>84548199
Scintillating concept you've got there.
>Dating Suisei, fall apart pretty quickly as her idol schedule and requirements eat away at your relationship, her constantly striving for her dream causing your connection to sour
>Get picked up by Kiara, who shittalks your gf openly to you in ways you find yourself agreeing with. Says that if you were with her she wouldn't treat you like that.
>In a moment of weakness you sleep with her, she then begins to act as if you're in a relatinship despite you never officially breaking things off with Suisei, says "well she'd never even notice anyway with how she treats you"
>Ex Elizabeth reappears in your life, moved recently. Starts strongarming you into taking her places to 'show her the town', Kiara takes it upon herself to 'prtoect you' from her.
>ERB starts asking questions about why Kiara is so close with you if you're dating that idol like you bragged about, eventually the truth begins to come out
>She starts blackmailing you into running errands for her the way she used to when you were in school together
>Suiesei finally gets a break from her practice and wants to go on a trip to make things up to you
et cetera et cetera

>> No.84548692

>>84548465
And an interesting addition as well.
I see it working both ways now. Either the original direction or this one. I'm sure anons will be able to get something good out of this

>> No.84548705

>>84548199
Nah, my relationship with Suisei is just a little bit complicated - it's a mix of hate, admiration and extreme lust. I probably skipped that post if it didn't mention any chuubas I have an interest in.

>> No.84549272

>>84548016
>>84548046
Because she fits the "obviously perfect" trope to a tee. Everyone talks about how sweet she is and what a good wife she'd be and that flags her in my mind as a destined loser. That normalcy and stability is always a losing flag in romcoms. She's the "long time childhood friend who takes care of you " character.
>Biggest heroine energy.
Disagree. I'd give that to Chloe

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>>84546190
i hate Nisekoi's run for a whole different reason: it stretched into infinity because MC was infatuated with a boring stupid cunt whose only relevant moment in the entire series was cooking a cake.

and that brings me to what i consider the essence of romantic jobbing: not doing anyting.
Your character becomes an absolute jobber the second they are "too nice" or "too understanding" because the story is gonna go right past them. As a true jobber, they will get that "oh boy its on!" moment where the girl goes
>i...i always do everything for others senpai! but this time i want to put MY happiness first

That stupid sentence is the death mark, its super vegeta pointing at himself and then eating shit. Nothing more pathetic than having romance fall into your lap and do nothing with it but then go "nyoo >.<"

so with that said i think Marine, Iroha, Shion and Mumei are a good cast of romantic jobbers
>Marine wouldnt DARE step into other's persons love, so she would just back away and watch from the sidelines, even if she's hurting
>Iroha is way too nice and accomodating to a fault. Someone else would swoop and catch her lover and she wouldnt speak up
>Shion hates change and her mental is garbage. Would try to keep everything together for as long as humanly possible while other girls make their move, ultimately making her lose
>Mumei shows initiative and decision, but its just so wrapped up in her own rituals and series of laws that meeting with any resistance makes her bounce and get back to square one.
The most tragic one because she would try but ultimately lose

>> No.84549817

>>84548705
How about you substitute suisei in there then?
It went something like
>You're on a date with your new girl.
>Run into suisei.
>She starts being a bitch.
>The two of you get into it and make a scene.
>Your date bails
>You end up back at suisei's hatefucking each other

>> No.84549841

>>84548465
>Anon and his seven manipulative evil exes.
Let's fill out the rest of the roster!
>Sora
Potential leader/final ex in the chain.
The not so normal normal girl you broke up with.
>Matsuri
The nymphomaniac mistake.
That time you thought with just your dick.
>Noel (and Flare but you didn't date her)
That big titted girl from school you dated for a bit because her P.E. bewitched you.
Now returned with a strangely open lesbian lover.
...
I got nothing else. Maybe a token loli, and a hag could round out the rest. With a justification of (respectively) you 'dated' in elementary and you were groomed for a bit.

>> No.84549932

>>84549764
>Nisekoi
Man that show fucking blowed. Introduced me to the wonders of reverse traps and how good aggressively romantic girls girls could be, though, which advanced my understanding of the world further by leaps and bounds.

>> No.84550114

>>84549841
For the grade school one, how about luna? You gave her a ring pop when you both were 5/6 years old and you played house one time or something and she's latched on to that for decades.
For that last one, do we have a holo with a "stacy's mom" vibe? Chocosen maybe?

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>>84549932
the worst about nisekoi is how its clearly stretched beyond its limits (multiple chapters of characters just looking into the horizon pretending the plot doesnt exist), how the author got the best ideas later on (marika, tsugumi, haru) and how you can actually see good romance beats on it that are buried under tons of sawdust

but yes, smug and/or direct girls are the best

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>>84549932
>Introduced me to the wonders of reverse traps
For me it was Ouran and Minami-ke

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>>84549272
>Chloe
Eh, agree to disagree. In opposing scenarios of them being first girls, Chloe would be the dark horse for Iroha but Laplus would take the spot in Chloe's scenario (unless the two hags get a really good arc in between).
I think Chloe has main heroine energy but her goon energy is too much for her to really win without first girl bias, she'd get close in an Iroha scenario since she'd have that coworker bonus but her gap moe of cute/sexy kind of dooms her in a non first girl scenario.

>> No.84550366

>>84550159
Unrelated but this picture reminded me of a question.
Holobirds, Cloacas or no?

>> No.84550436

>>84550366
For /ringo/ purposes yes. The rest of the time no.

>> No.84550456
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>>84550366
this isnt a "horsepussy vs pussy" argument bro, cloacas are fucking nasty.
end of the story

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>>84550456
>>84550436
But egg laying...

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>>84546190 (me)
If the author of Toradora and Golden Time wrote a romance story with Hololive characters, Fubuki would be the kind lovable girl who always cheers you on that the author baits (frustratingly obviously) as the winner but then makes her lose in the final lap to the most obnoxious cunt in the universe.

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>>84550596
its fanfiction i aint gotta explain shit.
In fact, Fauna has a horse pussy. Deal with it

>> No.84550713

>>84550596
That's not /ringo/, so no

>> No.84550813

>>84550677
A romance fic where Haato-sama wins?

>> No.84550830

>>84549764
You're on the right track with Marine but you misstepped. What makes Marine a jobber heroine is her fear of making herself vulnerable and opening up. She craves intimacy but is afraid of showing her "ugly side". She would only back off if she felt "outclassed and unworthy" by another heroine and doubly so if said heroine was her friend. I think she'd more likely to run interference on other girls than try and push for her own win. Like there's no way she'd let Kanata win, but she might with Noel.

>> No.84551242

>>84550192
Yeah I guess we just have to agree to disagree. Although i do agree with Lap being Chloe's dark horse. I think Chloe is just more interesting that Iroha and depending on how deep you want to lean into her lore, there's some potentially good conflict there

>> No.84551453

>>84550813
If I had to pick someone, probably Laplus while going full shitty brat or Suisei going full diva.

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i think Towa is the dark horse of heroines. just imagine her being the friend character only for you to suddenly go "ah"
and then you turn to her and go
>I love you

>> No.84551701

>>84549764
Spot on with Shion, although I would add that her pride would get in the way. She is afraid of being weak, so she hides behind 7 layers of brattiness as a kind of defense mechanism and as a result it boxes her in and bites her in the ass.
That's how I wrote her anyways.

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For me Marine is more like a shoujo manga protagonist than a character in a harem story.

>> No.84552747

>>84551604
>buddy towa
>acts like your wingman all semester triying to land you a date with X
>for some reason it fails at the last second, on the festival
>lets cheer up and just enyoy the festival
>see towa on the middle of the lights, smiling
>ah fuck

>> No.84552782

>>84552045
I'm with you. She's much more a shoujo heroine than a harem one, which is why i never quite gelled with her depictions in those. (No offense to AA and HJAnon)

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>>84546743
>>84546863
>"You want me to do...this.....to pay off my debt?"

>> No.84552940

>>84552747
>go on a couple practice dates so you'll know what to do and won't be nervous
>she helps you pick your clothes for the big day, compliments you/says you look like a proper boyfriend or like a guy she'd date but it flies over your head
Just throw that in for added fluff before the "ah fuck" moment

>> No.84553314

>>84552940
if you want to go extra melodramatic you can have a scene where you are getting into the train to your date, and Towa is seeing you off in a last "you can do it"
>and when the door closes you can see tears start coming into her eyes

>> No.84553481

>>84550159
I love direct aggressive girls because I'm retarded and will miss any flirting otherwise. I once when on a date where the girl was so frustrated at me missing all her easy layups when it ended and we were walking back to our cars she just grabbed my chin and all but shoved her tongue down my throat. It was hot as fuck and I wish more girls were this aggressive.

>> No.84554118

>>84550159
Nisekoi was great as a one-shot but the ending was so scuffed. A fucking long-distance relationship due to career? REALLY, NIGGA? FUCKIBG MOVE WITH HER
Or it was not that bad and I am just a drama queen for Tsugumi or at least that sweet childhood friend not winning. The art was so nice.

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>>84552782
No offense taken. I also think Marine fits very nicely into a heroine role. She may not be a full on shoujo heroine in my story, but she will be an epic style heroine.

How she fits with Anon will also hopefully come off as a bit more unique than that of a typical harem member. I'm still not sure if the two will even have sex at some point. I'll just have to see how things progress naturally for them.

>> No.84554352

>>84554118
No Nisekoi isn't very good on the whole, too bloated and too tropey. Its got it's moments but there's a reason a lot of post-Nisekoi romcoms are a response to that.

>> No.84554559

If wished for a Holo wife (any permutation or lore or roommate traits) but the genie was actively malicious
What wife would you recieve for the ultimate downfall? hard difficulty: no Ru-chan

>> No.84554731

>>84554210
I should clarify that I like Marine in HJ and HF in isolate. You and AA have a good sense of her personality and character and give her the respect she deserves. She as a character is great, her as a harem member I'm not sold on.

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>>84554352
treating nisekoi as "angra mainyu" is extremely unfair. Is a product of its time and people argue that nisekoi was the author's revenge for his first series (double arts) being an extremely unique and cool story that ended up being axed.

But it did NOT popularize the tropes or the bloat, it was merely using them as a part of its bag of tricks which is really something everyone should clap for because that man kept people reading for over 100 chapters of nothing but tropes and bloat.

It inspired a bunch of "jump romcoms" that love to stretch into infinity yes, but that's just them copying what worked for the original.

If you want a real time capsule right now go to jump plus and read Blue Box (Inspired by Nisekoi) then read Polar Opposites which is far more modern. Main couple gets together in chapter 2

>> No.84555007

>>84554352
Well, I was 15 at the time and the only thing I could think is I am so much better than my peers for Reading in English™, perhaps I am even the Best Ever®
Then I realized that this isn't that cool and my ego wasn't the same since

I didn't have enough awareness, mental maturity or genre-savviness to recognize this as bad.
Imagine the artist succumbing to the Holo

>> No.84555524

I’ve been popping in and out of this thread for a while and noticed that the last few threads I’ve seen have been filled with based people. Did all the mentally broken femdom basedboys leave?

>> No.84555662

>>84555524
What do you mean based?

>> No.84555760

>>84554812
This might just be me but at the time when I read the first few chapters of Nisekoi I thought that Nisekoi's art looked super modern, clean and refreshing. There's nothing amazing about it now but back then It felt like it was at the cutting edge of the "standard" anime/manga style. Basically it went from super high spec slop to average slop.

>> No.84555875

>>84554812
People were calling Nisekoi bad as it was being published weekly, I would know. And the Double Arts thing had aleays been a cope. Besides, I'm not saying it's total shit, it does have its moments and is very "smart" but i'm saying if asked "Is Nisekoi good or bad?" It leans more towards bad, even if thats like 40/60. The post-Nisekoi romcoms, Kaguya, Bokuben, etc are all responses to the nose-pulling, time wasting nature of Nisekoi. Something like Kanokari only exists because Nisekoi paved the way for it baffingly continued success. Is Komi smart for extending his Manga for a long as he did? Sure, but lets not pretend its not disrespectful to the reader. He would have gotten more praise for writing a leaner and more respectful manga.

Polar Opposites IS goated though.

>> No.84556066

>>84555760
Nisekoi was always clean, artstyle wise but your problem thas to do with your brain processing old stuff trough a filter and then seeing how it really is upon re-experiencing it. As an example, try and read old fics from here once more.
I love to be 17 again but reading it for the second time it made me go "wait...this wasnt like this...was it?!"

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>>84554731
Thanks dude, that's a really nice compliment. I hope you end up enjoying however she plays into the grand scheme of things as it goes forward and that it lands how I want it to.

>> No.84556408

>>84554559
A Nene who genuinely loves you and is an awesome person but who can't overcome her deep mental issues and kills herself the night after she has your first child (who commits suicide years later after learning about Nene's fate).

>> No.84556501

>>84555524
The topics ebb and flow, if you're sensitive in this regard you're probably not going to like every /wg/ edition.

>> No.84556603

>>84554210
>epic length harem series
>Marine might still not score

>> No.84556737

>>84556066
I think that in this case, while Nisekoi looks good, it just has the kind of art that doesn't date very interestingly. It doesn't have a particularly strong flavor and neither does it have the freshness of the modern stuff.

>> No.84556849

>>84556603
It's fine she scored in the other one

>> No.84556965
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okay this might be too much of a revolutionary idea but
>Zeta trolls you (lovingly)
>you correct her (lovingly)

put the check in the mail once you write it, and send Shiori my regards

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>>84556066
>wait...this wasnt like this...was it?!
Please don't, I cringe enough at my own old works already

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>>84556993
im gonna read it and enjoy it while admitting its flawed while you sit there and cry

>> No.84557054

>>84556993
I still like 17 again, even after reading it a couple times

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>>84556965
what if instead of doing it lovingly it was bed breaking sex huh?

>> No.84557470

>>84557319
i would still jerk off to it but i would shake my head so everyone knows i disprove

>> No.84557523

>>84555662
I think 4chan or autocorrect turned the word for tofu products into “based”

Let’s test it.

S o y

Onions

Basedboys

>> No.84557532

>>84556603
A long romantic comedy harem story called "Marine Can't Score" where she keeps loosing to other girls for Anon's affections, coming up with increasingly absurd and bizzarre schemes in an attempt to finally bag her man

>> No.84557555

>>84557523
...

>> No.84557575

>>84556501
It was full of femdom and abusive chuubas and only like one or two maledom stories for a really really long time.

>> No.84557647

>>84556965
Zeta is the most mysterious holo for me. I don't see her mentioned anywhere ever and until just now I had never heard her voice. That webm is fucking hot though.

>> No.84557746

>>84557319
Those two are not mutually exclusive.
also chuubas in bunny suits are always relevant

>>84557532
I'm writing something like that only not comedic and it's another holomem, not marine

>> No.84557960

>>84555524
>>84556501
If you want to see more of a certain kind of fic, write it yourself. If you do a really good job, you might inspire someone else to write something similar. We have trends that come and go, wait a week or so and it'll change.

>> No.84558040

>>84552747
So it's gotta be Suisei based on the earlier discussion right?

>> No.84558102

>>84557575
What's your favorite maledom in the archive?
>>84557647
Zeta is pretty vanilla and thus overlooked in the big pool of (English-speaking) holos, but her 3D debut is a must watch for anyone into thighs. Her ASMR voice is decent, and she had some fun puzzle game streams.

>> No.84558205

Fuck Suisei
in the ass I will
t. Yoda

>> No.84558421

>>84546952
thats from inFamous 2 you buffool

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>>84557647
Zeta occupies a similar spot to lopi.
A cute girl with a really soothing voice but its not unhinged enough to stand out nor is she particularly amazing at anything.
She's not as ignored as loafy though because she's associated with Kaela and Zeta and thus gets more exposure to her cute teasing antics or general little sister bits

Both, however, are made for rough anal, wearing collars, petplay, pissplay, impregnation and then being a cute mother that shouldnt be cooking because they have broken tastebuds

>> No.84558580
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84558580

What would be your West x East Hololive crossover masterpiece?

>> No.84558839

>>84558580
Ayame x Me

>> No.84559298

>>84558580
Bugs bunny messing with pekora.

Alternatively, Pekora gets raped and killed by a bunch of hillbilles

>> No.84559687

>>84558580
>>84559298
Raora x Garfield. Sylvester was going to make a pass at Okayu but nopes out of it at the first second, considers chasing a holobird and nopes even harder.
Tom puts bae on a pillory or something

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>>84558580
Chuuba Wars: Knights of the Old Hololive

>> No.84560796

>>84544235
>>84533261
>Anon is practically Sora

>> No.84562785

>>84557647
The best secret agents remain unseen.

>> No.84562834

>>84558102
Hmm it’s been a while. The Calliope one was okay. I’ll have to think about it and do a little browsing.

>> No.84563889

>>84546882
kek, imagine a scenario in which Ao steals your hologirl but then you reverse uno her ass and make her fall for you too, props if you can convincingly write how to make your ex-holo agree to the 3way relationship.

>> No.84564103

>>84545953
Sora can pull a Megumi Katou from SaeKano and practically stealth zerg rush the protagonist. It's not that difficult, especially if everyone else is playing games, not being serious, oblivious or outright childish if not chuuni.

>> No.84564112

>>84562834
Sadly there hasn't been too much abuse or BDSM lately

>> No.84564741

>>84551604
>>84552747

I cannot think or comprehend [etc...]

>> No.84565267

>>84556501
Some topics (mdom vs fdom, action vs romance, hags vs young, stacked vs thin, hairy vs shaved) fluctuate naturally. Other topics, like scat, NTR, niggers and insects, are 100% a samefagging schizophrenic replying to himself, as was made amply clear back when the thread still had IP counts.

>> No.84565848

>>84563889
It's not much of a challenge for Ao to steal your hologirl, but she'll also make your non hologirl gay for her.
At most you can probably share the girl with her

>> No.84565976

>>84556993
It'd be less cringe if you FINISHED IT

>> No.84566301

>>84550596
eggs are periods, therefore the pussy laid the egg

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>>84549817
>Raw sex
>Suisei cleans and goes to sleep
>Forgot the fucking pill in the afterglow of gloating in her mind about her victory and how anon really can't live without her
>Wake up
>Tells anon that he's incomplete without her in the most diva way possible, bathes, dresses and goes out while teasing him about next time he should be more rough
>Anon just stays quite and doesn't know what to do next
>Fastforward Suipov
>Goes with her idol schedule for like 3 weeks without seeing anon but scheduling another "leads to hatefuck scenario" next month
>Period doesn't come when the month hits
>No period
>Says nothing, a little late is not surprising as one ages
>Searches alternative reasons for why she could have no period
>A few things pop-up but no symptoms
>Voluntarily avoid by sight anything that might imply gestation
>Goes to sleep slightly worried
>Wakes up in a cold sweat
>Pukes in the toilet
>Didn't eat anything last night
>"Can't be", she thinks to herself
>But curiosity and worry start to pinch the back of her brain
>Still silent
>Idol Shield costume engaged
>Goes out at like 3 AM to a different than usual convenience store
>Buy a preggo test
>Shaking voice through the whole ordeal
>Very slow walk back home, dead fucking stare, feels like if the world has somehow put its weight over her shoulders
>Goes to the toilet
>A legit 5 mins of internal monologue about convincing herself that this is just to get her mind at peace and that once this is cleared, she will go to practice tomorrow and drink a little bit more than usual to celebrate that nothing happened.
>Apply test
>Look up
>...
>Body shaking
>2 bars
>Thousand yard stare
>A billion memories flood through her mind
>10x speed recap of her last encounter with anon
>Remembers that she left the pill at the side of the sink and didn't take it after cleaning herself, might have rolled into the sink too.
>Pupils go small
>Expression goes to pale
>"Yabai..."
>Diva persona collapses
>SuiOS.exe crashes
>Faints and folds instantly with a huge fucking "THUD!" when she slams on the ground, no real injuries sustained
>A chapter or two about Sui calling in sick and having a whole ass day of self-introspection and what should she do
>This is technically her ultimate win but at the same time the only win she could, cannot afford to get in this career
>For once and just once, decides that she should be honest to Anon about it.
>Fast forward a few hours or days afterwards
>Arrives to anon's housedoor, wait till he returns
>"Fuck's sake" he thinks "What do you w-"
>"Can we talk seriously for once?", she says in a really calm and somewhat sad tone while pointing at the door
>Anon assumes she's playing him but agrees
>Sitting on the ground on those tables they use in Japan
>Anon's mad and decides to just lay it out head-on to her because last time he did him dirty
>"What fucking game did you came to play today", anon goes off the fucking rails verbally over and over, Sui starts to look really really worked up until she just screams it out loud after slamming the table.
>"I'M PREGNANT AND IT'S YOURS!!!"
>Pic related pose ensues
>"I don't know what to do..."- She says while about to cry
I ran out of inspiration, might WIP it later. Might never too. Never wrote something like this but with Suisei it's really easy to write fall from grace or humbled scenarios.
Divas are only untouchable until they remember they have been touched by choice or not and there's consequences to it. Always.

>> No.84566919

>>84545859
What a beautiful dress this is. Especially the big bow over her belly

>> No.84566951

>>84566713
Do go on. I hope something comes out of this

>> No.84567035

>>84546952
Too late, Anon. I already have lmao

>> No.84567132

>>84564112
I'll finish the Ayame trilogy one day...once I get the other stories, that I got more pressing inspiration for, out of the way.

>> No.84567206

>>84566713
If you want to add some more drama, when Suisei knocks on his door, his latest girl is the one that answers.

>> No.84567342

I NEED JK pussy or I'm going to DIE
HEELLLLPPPP MEEEEE

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>>84567035
>Spoiler
You can't do this to me. It was gonna be pure kino. I just needed another year.

>> No.84567612

>>84567342
Shut up Miko.

>> No.84568505

All day I think about sex Gigi Murin. I fall asleep thinking about sex with Gigi Murin. I wake up thinking about sex with Gigi Murin.

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>>84568505
>Shoot the thickest and strongest nut of your life in gigi's tight cunt after you rearranged her guts
>She whispers "nice shot dude"
>Instantly hard again

>> No.84569113

>>84568689
>mfw GIgi can go from your girl to your bro with a single flip of a switch
I have a dream.

>> No.84569210

>>84568689
>Texts you a yaoi manga panel while you're at work
>"This is like absolutely us....hehe 0w0"

>> No.84569512
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>>84569113
>Gigi doing her usual memeshtick and having fun
>But then dresses up in a girly cute dress for a date with you

>> No.84569715

>>84544485
you, my friend, are a man among boys. Truly your love knows no bounds and you've proven yourself ten fold.

>> No.84569846

>>84569512
2 > 5 > 1 > 4 > 3 > 6

>> No.84569955

>>84569846
5 is to watch teen wolf and then blasting four nuts in her womb
6 is for teaching your kids the shapes

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uooooooh

>> No.84572412

>>84571145
King Arthur couldn't pull my tongue out her cunt.

>> No.84572798

>>84551604
I've always wanted to write a fic where at a climactic scene you go:
>Oh. I'm in love with this girl.
My original chuuba was for that was gonna be Aqua though. I like Wingman Towa though, might pocket that for later.

>> No.84574604

>>84569512
>Gigi getting drunk and becoming needy and clingy with you

>> No.84575538

>>84545953
>>The Entire Dev_is Lineup
The entirety of ReGLOSS is the definition of first girl or bust
>Ao
She's either the first girl with a gap moe gimmick of 'technically the one with the harem" or the star of a gag arc where she tries her shtick on the harem
>Kanade
First girl or funny foreigner arc
>Ririka
Gyarus will never win unless it's their series
>Raden
This arthoe either sets the series tone as the first girl or gets shoved aside after her arc clears up her major issues.
>Hajime
"Leader" types either headline the harem or get reduced to gags.

>> No.84575540

>>84544485
>I ask you: Do you want total rape? If necessary, do you want a rape more total and radical than anything that we can even imagine today?

>> No.84576410

>>84555524
I've been in these threads back when they were called "abuse general". Fuck off and go back.

>> No.84576526

All this harem talk is missing the very big detail that harems are broad appeal stories and thats why they are mostly extint.

The "worst girl" usually wins because its the first one and thus the one with most screentime/popularity

>> No.84577356

>>84576526
i think harems are fun in their own way, but they're best as VNs since you have full control asto who the mc ends up with. and you dont usually get a cop out ending where the mc doesn't choose anyone.

>> No.84577724

>>84533261
Thought about this while trying to sleep last night. It would be fun to combine it with one of those 'girls act like guys' reversal world concepts.
>Anon is a streamer who uses his soothing masculing voice to charm women while playing VNs and reading books, his persona is that of an older gentleman
>Fends off flirting from chat by reminding them he's an old man and it would be crass to blush
>Everyone keeps calling him a hag and begging him to read smutty eroges in chat
>Eventually hosts a virtual meetup at a convention
>Crazed fan(holo) breaks into backroom, discovers he's not actually a hag after all but a cute 20-something who just happens to have a deep voice
>Threatens huge audience schism unless he does something for them
that's about as far as I got

>> No.84578172

>>84576526
i liked the quintuplets approach where every girl seemed to have a chance at most points in the story
for pure harems, winners come down to pacing and planning ahead so every girl has decent development (therefore plausible a chance with the mc and a popularity increase) little ironic tho since yotsuba was rushed

>> No.84578301

>>84577356
>you dont usually get a cop out ending where the mc doesn't choose anyone.
Or an even worse ending where the MC makes his choice, rejects another girl in the process, only to also get inexplicably rejected by the girl he chose so he goes crawling back to the one he rejected in the first fucking place.

I'm gonna kill the artist behind Nearsighted Sister

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>>84575538
>Ririka
>Gyarus will never win unless it's their series
But when they win, holy fuck they win.

>> No.84579174

Harem manga are fun if you treat it like watching a sports team. You would need a pretty long fic though if you wanted people to become fans of specific girls though. Plus this is fanfic so all the readers would probably have biases before they even starred reading...

>> No.84581387

>>84578301
>MC makes his choice, rejects another girl in the process, only to also get inexplicably rejected by the girl he chose so he goes crawling back to the one he rejected in the first fucking place.
Holy shit thats next level...

>>84579174
i think it's fun if you also have friends who are into a different girl amd you're all watching it weekly and having your little waifu war...so long as you dont have that one guy that takes it too seriously

>> No.84582355

>>84544245
Just wanted to get my GonJyon head canon out there before the stream starts...
>>84581998
>>84550032
https://rentry.org/o5bwwm7b
tags: ENreco, GonJyon/AmeGG

>> No.84583022

>>84566713
Plan B works up to 48 hours past sex. Your virginity is showing.

>> No.84583239

Rather than a typical harem, what if anon was a therapist and the chuubas his clients?

>> No.84583583

>>84583022
It was clearly a moment where she thought she ran through the motions of taking the pill.

>> No.84584305

>>84578301
This happened Kana Imouto or whatever it's called. Sure, the entire VN was a setup for the little sister, but I only chose the childhood friend choices and just got a bad end with the little sister + sex scene. Why even add the childhood friend side character?

>> No.84584357

Myth Sitcom but its similar to Its Always Sunny in Philadelphia.

>> No.84584978
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Any good Iroha smut in the archives?

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>>84583239
So instead of a typical ending it's instead going to be a big episode where Anon gets his medical license revoked for fucking his patients.
Before he gets picked up by his girls and they ride off into the sunset.

>> No.84587898

>>84583239
Raora becomes his client and begins to share details about her life as the boss of a small mafia family. He knows that professionally he shouldn't involve himself, but the stories are too exciting.

>> No.84588840

Did anyone ever finish Gen 0 gets buff? The one where all the Gen 0 girls get gigantic pecs, especially AZKi?

>> No.84589250

>>84578301
Is that a doujin? Imageset?

>> No.84589526

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nahBb73uSd8
Yanderebros we are eating good.

>> No.84589590

>>84583239
that makes me think of the anime "Happy Lesson" where the mc is an orphaned teen and the girls are all his teachers, and instead of trying to be the mc's girlfriend, they're trying to be his mom. and i mean be an actual parent, not in the fetishised incest way

>> No.84589624

>>84589526
>Shiori is deredere instead of yandere
they just don't know what they're doing

>> No.84589822

>>84584305
I mean you really need the power of love to get through the situation the sister was in.

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>>84589624
>Shiori
>yandere
YOU dont know what you are talking about.

>You better love me anon! or dont, my parents dont but you can! or else ill stab you! i bet you would like that huh? you dirty stab liker

>> No.84589987

>>84544485
Can we make this our anthem?

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sex exclusively with the bassist

>> No.84590169

>>84589250
Bit of both

https://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/17513

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>>84589526
>yandere bae
still wont buy these but ill definitely pirate it

>> No.84590496

>>84588840
The two people that tried both quit.

>> No.84590828

>>84590077
Romcom with Mori where she discovers the reason her band is breaking up is because the singer was fucking every other member (except her because she's married to you)

>> No.84591272
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>>84590828
romcom where the lead bassist is a permavirgin and is tired of being the only one on the band that never scores

>> No.84591598

>>84591272
>Meet a sad bassist in a bunny girl outfit eating neopolitan at an ice cream shop.
>Listen to her yap about how she's never scoring

>> No.84592032

>>84589526
>Yandere AZKi
Oh fuck bros prepare your WIPs

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>>84592032
gimme that, its dirty

>> No.84592298

>>84592107
Oh shit sorry, here hold on let me get a replacement post.

...Hmm...maybe....

ah here we go

>>84589526
>Yandere Bijou, Gigi, Hajime, and FuwaMoco
I can't wait to hear what those sound like lmao

>> No.84592442

>>84592032
I've been working on mine daily, so I think I'm safe from AZKi's Penis Inspection Day

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84592457

*blocks ur path*

>> No.84593441

If there's a harem, I don't want a choice of just one. Just make it an actual harem, if one of them doesn't like it they can leave.

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>>84544278
A spy spoof filled with gags where your superior is Kronii and she's always accompanied by a big boob joke
>"Motorboating huh? yeah i can do that, coronel"
>"I cant reach Coronel Kronii...guess ill Page-Zuru"
>"Booba huh...not my cup of tea,really"

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>>84577724
What's the relationship of the girl to him? Crazed, obsessed fan? Former femcel classmate that recognized him from details he described? Old coworker from a job before his streaming days? And is he a "normal" guy (i.e. from our world) or from the reverse world?
What does she want, a relationship? Sex? Punishing him for 'betraying' her over some imagined slight?
There's a few ways you could take it. I love the "Reverse World" concept but unfortunately most of the ones I've read are either written by ESL retards or the author abandons the entire concept after a few chapters and it devolves into mediocre unoriginal smut.

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>>84568505
i can't thinking about her thighs would feel, they look soft but there's probably some strong muscles under there

>> No.84600382
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>> No.84601333

>>84594624
I always felt like making the main character a stranger to the reverse world was kind of a cop out. Examining how the reversal in social positions affects a man seems like the most interesting part.

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>>84590327
commander Bae marking you as her property with her lips

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>>84575540
JAAAA

>> No.84602495

>>84544278
A story where Anon talks and acts like a /vt/ poster

>> No.84602559

>>84601333
I mean it is but it is kind of necessary in order to keep the fetish part of the concept active.
Since, Having pov from our world (or at least somewhere relatively normal) means 1) they recognize the oddity of their position, 2) means they can have said oddity be either explained or understood, and 3) they can use said oddity for fetish/smut purposes.
There is a story there for pure non-smut like with monster girl worlds but having the pov be of an out of world foreigner just makes the concept as used in erodoujins and smut fics, be in a place where it can be played for smut rather than plot.

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>>84567342
You should say manko; you can unlock magical gates only by words that are imbued with magic. The word pussy lacks the deep spiritual dimension of manko and gods will not listen to requests that don't adhere to proper ritual etiquette.

>> No.84605053

>>84602559
Without the POV of an outside observer it would be like any other romance story, just all the characters gender swapped. I guess it also depends on the reasoning/justification behind the reversal. Handwave it away ("just is") , a ratio of 10:1 women to men, some sort of physical power discrepancy, whatever reasoning, even if it's flimsy, to explain the reversal will influence the outside character in different ways.
The whole appeal, at least to me, is that the situation is flipped, there are countless new and novel scenarios you can encounter that are simply impossible otherwise, having a character that doesn't recognize this (as a "native") really diminishes that opportunity and novelty. It's like reading a garbage isekai where the MC thinks it's completely normal to wake up in another world and his past life and experiences are ignored completely like it never happened...at that point how is it an isekai?

>> No.84606511

>>84605053
While I do agree that having an outsider/isekaied pov would be the best way to start up a reverse gender roles plot... To play devil's advocate, the reader's assumed familiarity with the chuubas inside could act as the same sort of "bridge of familiarity" that the isekai pov uses to bridge the understanding between the reader and what's "common knowledge" in-universe.
I don't think doing that would actually work but there's a string of logic I can kind of follow there.
Though the isekaied pov can also use that familiarity with the chuuba (with an in-universe justification of being a chuuba fan Otaku like the audience) so that's not really something the 'native' pov really holds.
...
Though thinking of native povs, an isekai from the pov of the natives could make some fun interlude chapters... Even if in this scenario it would basically be "Oh my god my oshi Anon is willing to bang me".

>> No.84608129

Live.

>> No.84608251

>>84544278
Try a comfy fic with Gen 0 (AZKi, Sora, Roboco, Miko, Suisei). I notice they don't get a lot of love as a group, but from a fiction standpoint if might be interesting to see their personalities bounce off of each other.

This, but it's a bodybuilding contest. All five girls have muscles bigger than the Incredible Hulk, especially gigantic pectorals. They're all hanging out backstage, casually chatting and lifting impossible amounts of weight. But it's all light-hearted and cheerful. Lots of flexing to show off for each other. Then they each take the stage to do their posing routines, all growing with each flex, then the final posedown together on stage.

My personal preference: AZKi wins, she ends up getting bigger than everyone else with even bigger pecs, but she's humble and honored to be on stage flexing with her honored friends.

The core of the story was about AZKi, Suisei, Sora, Miko and Roboco all growing ridiculously gigantic muscles, especially their pectorals, with AZKi being the biggest and most pectacular by far. Tons of flexing and showing off and posing, pressing muscle against muscle, maybe some very light les stuff between AZKi and Sora, and ending with my favorite, AZKi, just outpecflexing everything. And some interaction, dialogue, etc, to show off their peronalities and show they're not just empty YCH. Something that could have been easily done with a simple bodybuilding contest and concert or something.

>> No.84608325

>>84602208
Miko noooo
You have to ask for consent

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>>84589526
>other yandere previews: girls acting jealous
>gigi's preview: locks you in her basement

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>>84596166

>> No.84612479

>>84611785
>>84544278
Experiencing the consequences of feeding Gigi Murin after midnight.

>> No.84613142

>>84612479
nursing gigi after she ate too much!

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>>84612479
that implies a consequence for getting her wet

>> No.84614792

>>84608689
Wait that's in the preview? Source?

>> No.84614846

>>84614792
it's only the four of them it seems
i don't speak japanese but the art for the voice pack does include ayame holding a pair of handcuffs, as a consolation prize

>> No.84615402

>>84614846
Being abducted and made into an oni's sex slave is just hot

>> No.84615661

>>84613681
>on the fast food line
>open my jacket
>"pocket gigi what should i get?"
>"fucked by the cashier, he's a hunk"
>close my jacket before anyone can notice the stench

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mori gets racist in her bunny girl roleplay and ends up exposing her "no-kemono-bathrooms" plan to you

>> No.84616436

>>84616200
>Ending then reveals that Anon was a rabbit getting really uncomfortable with how horny he's getting from Mori's racist role play.

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>>84616436
>"Oniichan she's so fucking racist-peko"
>"Peko you need to understand that when the crime statistics come out i get so hard i faint-peko"

>> No.84616753

>>84616497
>don't you think it's funny how despite only making 39% of the population, kemomo are responsible for 78% of homewrecking incidents?

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>>84616497
i cant stress this enough but that pekora outfit with short hair is made for taking cock for an entire day straight.

Like not even a mating season, just pekora begging you for a break as you make her stain the futon for the sixth time this friday or her insulting you because she wanted a pissbreak and you banged her so hard her bladder just went off. just nonstop sex

>> No.84617579
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>>84617249
why is the hero of the children such a sexual being?

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>>84614846
i don't know anything but just her saying "ningen" in a degrading tone is super hot
>>84614792
there's previews for every girl in the shop
https://files.catbox.moe/a0th16.mp3

>> No.84618337

>>84617852
I can't believe Gigi has banished (You) to the backrooms.

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>> No.84620255

I feel like Gigi is designed for sitting on the couch with and eating snacks while watching tv shows where she explains every single thing that happens on screen and how it affects the fan relationship charts for three times the episode's runtime

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>>84620255
gigi is built for being constantly heartbroken by you because you dont know she's head over heels and keep dating women in front of her, then getting drunk and sharing one night with her that keeps giving her hope that one day you'll notice

>> No.84620817

>>84620382
Gigi is built for being your adorable mogwai buddy that watches all this happen till she eventually snaps, rapes you, before turning into an unhinged gremlin skittering off into the night.
She still lives in your walls.

>> No.84622465

Up

>> No.84623942

>>84618337
So there's now a real possibility of being gangraped by an army of Gigis?

>> No.84625760

Stooooop dying

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So how about them books? Crazy stuff huh?

Bonus question: Have you gotten any decent inspiration lately? How do you want to use it?
Liz's performance in reENcollection has been stellar and has easily won me over. I want this stupid, gay, duty bound knight in my story. The effort she puts into her monologues and the bits is commendable.

>> No.84628157

>>84626858
Enreco had been a lot of fun, I wish I could catch more of it. I like "Kiara leading armies" bit from it. Personally I'm pocketing the aethetics of Ina and Gura's dungeons to serve as a jumping off point for later.

>> No.84629052

>>84544278
Smelling Gigi's armpits and spats-covered crotch after she has been chasing criminals in the summer heat all day

>> No.84630240

Rise

>> No.84631568

>>84629052
Gigismell...

>> No.84632118

I really hope someone is writing some Gigi sex. I would do it myself but the bank says if I start another WIP I'll lose the house...

>> No.84632272

>>84626858
Just struggling to get anything that would remotely tie towards any vtuber writing or I remember enough to write down

>> No.84632693

Neuro-sama is doing a fanfiction stream right now (though it seems more like an RP stream).
https://www.twitch.tv/vedal987

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>>84632118

>> No.84636585

Get up you

>> No.84637167

>>84629052
She probably fucking reeks
I definitely wouldn't steal her sweaty spats and sniff them when she took them off to change haha no way

>> No.84637266

>>84629052
Her pits are probably fine they've got vents and fans. Her spats are probably a biohazard

>> No.84638839

i fear that my futa fic might have suffered scorecreep

>> No.84640067

>>84638839
Did they start jelqing?

>> No.84641012

>>84640067
nope. it was going to be a rimming and milking thing but it kinda spiraled out of control

>> No.84642206

>>84613681
>my Warhammer army

>> No.84643295

>>84641012
I see this as potentially good news

>> No.84645581

whoa there

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>> No.84646219

>>84608251
Nobody will ever write this.

>> No.84648016

>>84638839
Jesus man, how many dicks did you give them?

>> No.84648628

>>84648016
more like there's a lot of dickgirls in EN

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>open wip
>write
>not feeling it
>open other wip
>write
>delete
>open other wip
>nothing comes out
>open another wip

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>>84649234
You might just not be in the writing groove at the moment mate. Take a night to chill, do something else you enjoy.

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>>84649540
its over...maybe i SHOULD destroy the earth after all

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>>84649698
If you think I'm going to just let you do that before I get to finish MY story, you got another thing coming. I'm not one of those "talk and make it better" types either. If you try to follow through with your threat, I will beat your ass, or kill you. I don't care which.

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>>84544278
Ina fucking reeks and you should make it worse by caking her armpits in cum

>> No.84651820

>>84544278
Shiori wants to try BDSM, so you gag her, tie her, and then proceed to name a bunch of incorrect facts about her favorite subjects, causing her to writhe in pain

>> No.84652765

>>84650319
Gotta lick them first

>>84651820
This is great, someone get on it please

>> No.84653824

>>84650319
You should also cake Ina's face in cum

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>> No.84657213

>>84649234
Clearly the answer is to start another wip

>> No.84657391

>>84651820
>"MMMM!MMMMMMM!" she kicks her legs around defiantly while her arms are chained to the wall, making any noise to drown your voice out.
>"And then there's Dimitri of the black hawks, turns out he's just as gay as he looks and he--"
>in the blink of an eye, shiori shatters the chains and bites through her ball gag, shattering it against her teeth before lunging at you like a wild animal

>> No.84659298

>>84657391
>>84651820
Man...
This sounds word for word like a weirdanonv2 'comedy' fic with an idiot protagonist ranting on a barely related topic while a chuuba is forced to listen.
...
In fact I'm pretty sure that was a gura fic. Wasn't good from what I remember since it leaned too heavily on the retarded rant and not so much on the chuuba reacting.

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>>84651820
There's a number of ways you can do the "Shiori has to deal with incorrect trivia" thing. With bondage alone: you can tie her up in front of a mirror and write them on her body. Or tie her bent over and bottom up in front of a whiteboard where you write stuff she thinks is wrong, and she's forced to read it out loud, if she doesn't she gets paddled.

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>> No.84668239

>>84649234
Finishing WIPs will help you overcome such indecision.
I finished a lot of smaller private ones for practice and that helped me actually finish bigger ones.

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you're all writing today, right?

>> No.84668701

Here's a challenge for all the writers here:

write a zombie fic that doesn't suck ass

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>>84668305
yes finally. I figured out the missing link to get White December moving and I cannot believe I didn't think of it sooner. I'm going to give Fubuki and her crew some actual plot relevance outside of being assholes.

Getting close to the second half as well. I'd say Sora will be getting deployed in 3-4 chapters.

>> No.84669222

>>84649525
Usually such drawing would fill me with sadness, instead, now I have a mission. A life goal.
I wanna see it.

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>>84668701
Like a fic about zombie or an actual apocalyptic one?

>> No.84670499

>>84668305
Yes, AZKi. I even had a beef bowl because my characters were also eating beef bowls in my scene.

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>>84651820
Make it extra hardcore
>Forcing her to watch tiktoks or other form of short videos with WRONG info on purpose but those look legit enough for her to think the guys got it wrong by accident
>Making one of those desserts she likes but she can't eat it due to the position she's in.
>Make several for yourself and keep throwing them in the thrash while she's forced to watch all that sweet get wasted (if you wanna avoid wasting food, fake a trashcan and instead it's a clean bag of plastic where it is all going in
>Play her music while complimenting her voice and she can't even cover her face in embarassment, at best she can just close her eyes.
>Bring up the Dimitri A.I. and start having a conversation with it while she can talk, telling it made up Shiori things that are really embarassing and she can't refute them right there.
>Bring up a normal A.I. chat, be it on the phone, computer or tablet and keep asking the A.I. facts, and then tell it its wrong and Shiori can't do anything to stop you. Props if the A.I. has a voice function. Even more props if it is Character A.I. and you are using the Shiori voice and she hears herself agreeing with your wrong facts.
>Start feeding the A.I. WRONG Shiori info for the algorithm until she starts spasming like a worm and spitting out the safeword like she's singing Rap God.
>Untie the locks, ropes, etc with a single button press
>With open arms, accept the fate you have brought upon yourself.

>> No.84671021

>>84670881
>while she can't talk*
got it wrong in a single word by accident. Sorry.

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>> No.84675126

>>84668305
No i'm fucking sick with the coof

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>>84544278
Fucking a despondent Gigi after her brutal cucking

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>>84669665
God what I wouldn't give to absolutely dick her down while she yelled profanity throughout the entire thing

>> No.84679213

>>84670881
If you're trying to break her like that, I'd make it a bet about whether you can make her say the safeword from purely psychological torture.

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> writing the boring filler parts to get to write the cool parts

>> No.84682002

>>84680451
Try writing the filler parts in a way that they have things that contribute to the overall ending or some kind of twist you're setting up. Every scene in a story has to contribute something, no matter how trivial it looks

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If you win, you don't lose.

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>>84683495
Scintillating genius insight from Ojou, truly those rural Oni village schools teach them well! Wait till you hear how high she can count too, it's almost to a hundred!

send your kids to Elven schools

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>>84683811
An idiot admires complexity, a genius admires simplicity.

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>>84685203
Ojou must be admired by a lot of geniuses

>> No.84685850

>>84675563
Is Gonathan G, the true honorable knight made to be mindbroken by cock?

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>>84685446
You make fun of Ojou because you are a mere 221 years old rascal not mature enough to understand the true beauty and depth of the simplicity Ojou has cultivated for over 1500 years.

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>>84649234

>> No.84687710

>>84683495
If only I could win the lady's heart for a tiny part of her long, long life...

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>>84685850
Definitely. You'll never hear a peep about that goofy-ass Pearl again

>> No.84688106

>>84675563
>>84687971
Alright, alright. What did Gigi do? My cuckquean bone is ticking.

>> No.84689013

>>84688106
(In-character) She got cucked by gura while third-wheeling in their party. Then on another day when Ame cleared her own dungeon and 'regained her memories', she was forgotten about. (while Violet was playing in the background).

>> No.84690361

I will save Gigi by fucking a man in front of her

>> No.84690419

>>84675563
>>84687971
>>84689013
She did not get cucked. Initially gonathan proposed to jyon (gigi to ame) and she acepted.
Gura joined later and ame tried to spin the ntr plot. It failed because gura is terrible at rp.
Then when "ame" regained her memories gigi let her go, but gura was nowhere.
The gigi was cucked bit is once more amesame fans being faggots and not letting any of thr people involved in the ship do anything else

>> No.84690768

>>84690419
It's not just that Ame regained her memories, she forgot her husband Gonathan in the process.

>> No.84691038

>>84690768
That still wpuldnt make it cucking because gonathon loved jyon, not ame. Also ame is not on a relationship, she just forgot

>> No.84691040

>>84690419
I find the scenario to be more more existentially dreadful than anything else really.
Kinda like Total Recall, Gigi realizes her memories might make her into a completely different person than she is now.

>> No.84691962

>>84691040
yeah, luckily the people who call it ntr are just shippers because everyone else agrees its a tragic tale that gigi masterfully punctuated with her diary entry
this is one thing i find really insufferable about RP events and im glad they are not more widespread. mentally ill Fans of the event want it to be hardcanon and they constantly clash with other mentally ill fans wit their perceived headcannons

>> No.84692107

>>84691962
But it would make any gigi smut following this event hotter if it had that NTR angle right?
Like a bad ending where something tragic gets followed up by something even worse but kinda hotter.

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>>84692107
NO IT WOULDNT! BECAUSE ITS NOT FUCKING NTR!

>> No.84692436

>>84692235
>BECAUSE ITS NOT FUCKING NTR
You're saying an anon/hentai monster fucking and mindbreaking gonathan g and making them forget about their pearl through the power of cock would not be at the very least netori?

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>>84692436
if, and IF this happened...it still wouldnt be netori because gonathan g gave up on the love of his pearl.
he suffers because he's a good knight in a cruel world, just like how elizabeth is doomed to fall due to not being able to say no to the witches


But that's all gay shit. Lets talk about the REAL plotline: Mococo becoming a crack addict that blows her money on lottery tickets

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ydpggr1sBGs

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>>84668305
1.1k words, chugging along while writing down the process of what gets me going so i don't have to fumble through this in the future

>> No.84693915
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>>84668305
Looking to get out my intro WIP today next thread for advice, started this morning, but probably going to break soon to mow my lawn before the rain.

Figured I'd ask before the thread gets out, but if an Anon had to estimate Ao's BWH sizes, what would you say they'd be? This is important for the story, I swear.

>> No.84695180

Stuck on a scene, please give me a hand. Trapped on a deserted island with a chuuba, you talk and then…?

>> No.84695194

>>84544278
Yet another relationship fails. A random number sent you a video of your girlfriend gasping for air, vibrating in pleasure and you rang up your best friend, bro for life, Ao, to vent about it.
Ao listens to you and tells you that there's a lot of fish in the sea, and that such a great catch like you shouldn't be worrying about these sardines.
Little did you know, Ao was sabotaging all your relationships by mindbreaking your girlfriends with the power of her strapon to expose them as the whores they were, naturally undeserving of such a great man like you.
Ao just wants to keep you away from them of course, she wants the best for you so she's making sure the girls you date are high quality material.

>> No.84695272

>>84695180
You begin getting desperate at the prospect that this island might be your grave. You know jack shit about survival, and you sure aren't gonna learn now. This poor girl too, is trapped in this shared hell with no one to hear your cries for help.
In a moment of frenzy, you overpower her and beat her into submission, raping her.

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>>84695180
You must determine which chuuba is the real one and which is an evil simulacra created by the island to keep you trapped.

>> No.84696193

>>84695401
>Nice try evil fauna. Quick, this way fauna!
>Boy is your arm surprisingly thick. Been working out recently?

>> No.84697625

No dying. Not yet.

>> No.84697951

If an individual human person was strong enough and smart enough, given enough time, would they eventually have no need for a society? If we were a bit better in every aspect, would our need for chuuba fanfic gently wither away, like a baby no longer strictly needing breast milk or formula to eat.

>> No.84698043

>>84544278
The young hero defeats the evil aristocrat Pavolia Reine and fucks the evil out of her
He then has to take responsibility and support her gaming and skirt chasing lifestyle

>> No.84699204

>>84695401
>>84696193
Futa Fauna Fic...

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https://youtu.be/lFVgWdtXacc

thinking about shioAI

>> No.84699527

>>84695180
...sex happens.

Make sure to mention me in your Pulitzer speech.

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>>84697951
No man is an island, as the saying goes. There will always be a need for a community in one form or another.
>would our need for chuuba fanfic gently wither away
As all other things. But new blood comes in every week, taking the place of the old. Have faith.
Now, look at Shiori's fat tits.

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>>84544278
you and other chuuba annoy shion until she intertwines and shuffles your senses with a spell

now both of you need to pass a week triying not to cum or receive sharp pain from random stuff

>> No.84700893

>>84686040
Source on the image?

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>>84700855
Baked. Migrate when ready

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