/wg/ - Writing General - Shion's Day Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out over three years worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
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>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>77371873 (We loved blondes and we loved racist Ayame.)
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STORY ANCHOR
Give Shion something to read as she goes about her day.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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Story recap!
Unfortunately, there were no stories posted last thread.

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Shiob my beloved

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>>77493931
Love me a good Shiob

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>>77493282
a cozy bread, perfect for breakfast with the family

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>>77494051
>Shiob
Shion turned into a literal moeblob?!

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>>77493349
Shion in her sleep deprived mind casts a spell on herself so that she can sleep easily. Unfortunately for her (because she's so tired) its a spell that'll make her sleep for a VERY, VERY long time. Luckily there's a cure for this, but it involves a true love's kiss

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Why does my cock throb so violently at the sight of Shion's body?

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>>77494419
because you're a filthy man of culture

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>>77494753
there's nothing cultured about pedophilia

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I want to have a loving relationship with shion.

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>>77494766
Don't be silly anon, something like pedophilia couldn't possibly occur in /wg/

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>>77494294
It's the nickname for Shion Shot Type B.

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>>77494891
Tsk, damn. I thought I could finally write a fic about Shion turning into a cuddly moeblob. By that, I mean a literal blob of moe goodness.

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>>77495411
would

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>>77495411
what's stopping you, Anon?

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I dont know why you guys keep pretending that Shion prompts are ever gonna turn into a fic.

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>>77496469
Has Shion inherited the curse of Anya?

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>>77496509
Anya has 5 fics with her tag, Shion has 28.

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>>77496546
I feel like every shion idea in the last 2 years has ended in a dead conversation or an eternal wip while anya at least got a good fic despite being just above iofi

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>>77496667
it's sad that the one Iofi solo fic is almost 2 years old and still the only one. especially because it was just someone fulfilling a prompt instead of writing about Iofi on their own initiative

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>>77496835
A fic being written prompted instead of unprompted doesn't detract from the fact that the writer chose to take this specific prompt and write about said chuuba

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>>77496469
You don't make prompts to have them turned into a story in the first place. The chances of achieving that are quite slim since /wg/'s pool of authors is small and most of them are occupied with their own projects. The real purpose of prompts is to give the thread scenarios to play around with for their entertainment.

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>>77496835
Well, maybe Iofi should try be interesting.

Or you could write one yourself.

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>>77497165
Please don't post the pentagram Lamy anymore. You don't want to find out what happens if you post it in seven editions in a row.

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>>77496546
Ironically Anya shows up a lot as a secondary character

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Members of the press, I have called you here today to inform you of my wish to engage in sexual intercourse with a virtual YouTube affliated with Hololive, Hoshimachi Suisei. Thank you.

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>>77497165
I'm gonna cum on the center of this pentagram to summon SuccuLamy then engage in a sexual battle with her until I inevitably perish.

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>>77498363
if you cum on the pentagram all it does is transform you into Lamy

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Anon come forth

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>>77498265
while your revelation is shocking it does little to inspire thought. May I suggest constructing a fictional Biography Illustrating not only your desire to engage in sexual intercourse with a virtual YouTube affiliated with Hololive, Hoshimachi Suisei but also express how you would have sexual intercourse with a virtual YouTube affiliated with Hololive, Hoshimachi Suisei

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>>77498416
Don't try to hit me with that dollar store Lamyfication curse. But the idea of someone masturbating to one Chuuba so fucking hard that they appear to them in succubus form does sound like some fun H-Doujin plot stuff.

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I feel like Reine or Luna would fit a fic where you have sex in the bushes outside your house and tease them by slowly pushing them out and pretending people are gonna come and see

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>>77498516
Lamy... please get out of that pose.... I'm married...

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>>77498544
I'm warning you anon. Adding your genetic material to the pentagram will only transform you into her. You're playing with fire, anon. Playing. With. Fire.

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>>77498564
You know it'd kind be hot to have a story with a home wrecker chuuba try to make you cheat. Choco be perfect for that.

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>>77498535
Member of the press raises a valid point. This matter shall be dealt with as swiftly as possible within our current constraints.

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>>77494866
>

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Is Shion a witch that keeps to her own devices? Or would she have a lofty goal of some sort?

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>>77499429
she's usually beneath me (being raped)

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>>77499429
In my personal headcanon for writing purposes (source: It came to me in a dream) she's a lolibaba who's been-there-done-that with all the lofty goal stuff and subsequently getting her shit slapped by heroes of eld, and she's just content with watching over what everyone else gets up to and occasionally helping out with stuff she thinks is interesting.

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>>77499705
so she's Merlin after Arthur dies?

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>>77499429
I can't see her having a goal more lofty than wealth or getting someone.

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>>77499429
I'd imagine Shion as a witch who keeps to her own devices with no larger goal than to prove she's better than everyone else. An attitude that is at odds with her magic since Witchcraft both historically and in a modern context is communal magic.

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>>77499801
I admit I'm not overly familiar with Arthurian legend, knowing only really the basics. But more than that she's the progenitor of magic as people know it. The Original Witch. She's just had a long, long time to chill out with the "maybe I could be evil?" moral stuff that supreme power brings.

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>>77498945
Haven’t kept up with this show for a while but I’m rooting for her

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>>77499429
I think she’d be the kind of witch to be cooped up in her hut and refusing to go outside, but when her friends come over she treats them really well. I’m kind of basing this on depreshion

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>>77499955
that's an interesting idea which can lead to a lot of possible outcomes. being the originator she can feel guilt over the evil she unintentionally caused by allowing the knowledge of her power to run rampant, maybe loved one man had children which she has long outlived and desires to be alone, until she's rediscovered by the protagonist

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If someone is planning to write Shion, one aspect of her character you could try to weave in is her anxiety about the future. Shion is (or at least was) really concerned about her future and believed that if this vtubing gig didn’t work out she’d have nothing left. She also has (or again, perhaps had) insane amounts of insomnia and barely eats anything, usually skipping dinner iirc.
I’m writing some Shion myself right now but there’s a lot of other WIPs, so if anyone wants to provide us with some Shion in the meantime, please do.

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>>77489585
>You can do your own take of course, but it would be hypocritical to complain about fan sequels or spin-offs.
Eh. Yeah, I guess so. I still find it weird but I think the ambitions of writers here have since surpassed that concept. I know I would never, I'd rather write my own universe than try and chase someone else's.

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>>77499429
I would write her as a recluse who is slowly coming to terms that she is not a magical genius and is instead a painfully mediocre magician.

Like she used to believe she was a prodigy, and yet the more she reads and knows about magic she sinks deeper and deeper because she was just a very small toad in an even smaller pond

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>>77500474
Hah, cute you think anyone is going to write about Shion.

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>>77500623
?
What are you hoping to gain by posting this?

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>>77500698
Nothing, you just made me laugh and I wanted you to know that.

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>>77500496
>I know I would never, I'd rather write my own universe than try and chase someone else's.
I could see myself doing a "remix" (like that Chloe FC2 prompt) of someone else's story or adding an alternative route, but yeah, doing a sequel or a prequel doesn't interest me at all.

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>>77499487
Daring today aren't we?
>>77499705
I kinda like this idea of her being ageless due to maybe magical means or just her luck of the draw. It can play a lot into a variation of >>77499955 where she may not be the progenitor, but would have key knowledge of first hand experience in the magics of the ancient past. An actual source of for that kinda shit would be a major plot point.
>>77499994
Good concept for how she would have stayed out of the affairs of the world so far. Which can also feed nicely into >>77500474 in her fears for the future, and in this context, doesn't think there is a force among mortals that can change it.
>>77500605
Maybe when it comes to combat magic? She could have a lot academic knowledge, and maybe through years of seclusion she fell out of practice.
This is a lot of good stuff for notes, you guys are alright.

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>>77500605
That's an interesting idea for the reason for her depression. Alternatively, in a modern setting, she could be a real magical prodigy but she gets depressed when she learns that most of the stuff she can do with magic can now be done with technology.

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>>77500605
>because she was just a very small toad in an even smaller pond

I know you didn't mean it literally but my autistic brain just imagined Shion being a very small (yet cute) toad and then her wishing she could become a normal human girl.

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/wg/today
>golly gee, shion's so cute with how depressed and aloof she is! let's talk about how we'd write her!
/wg/ next month
>huh, wasn't i going to write a fic about shion? ahh forget it she's boring anyway, let's get back to talking about suisei's smelly pitpussy

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>>77501727
>>77502534
>Shion is an ancient witch
>she sometimes becomes a recluse for long times to invent new magic
>she becomes depressed because ever since the Industrial Revolution the magic she invents has always been outclassed by recent technology
>>77503225
Maybe she will get lucky and someone will drop their golden ball into the well where toad!Shion lives.
>>77503300
It's called pitussy.

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>>77503300
>let's get back to talking about suisei's smelly pitpussy
that's a weird way to write Fubuki's name, also why don't you write a Shion fic so people can go back to it when people talk about Shion.

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>>77503300
This shit don't get built in a day, son.

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>>77503640
Watame has a lot of lines on her big forehead

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All watamates must be excommunicated from the thread. It's for their own good

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>>77503974
Well she is getting older

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>>77503974
>>77504055
She's really cute like that. Watame is awesome and needs more fics

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Have the femanons left?

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>>77504004
And why should we leave? Huh, punk?

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>>77504971
For thread stability, the moral wellness of our community and to stop the poisoning of our wells and food.

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Let's not make this a third thread in a row derailed by some demographic minority

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>>77505288
Does anyone have the “minority group! Quiet!” Marine image?

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>>77504917
they never truly leave, Anon, they just return to the shadows to blend into society until they are needed once more.

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>>77503592
In fairness, suisei has dethroned fubuki in terms of starring in recent fics and discussions.

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>>77505288
Hey man, Watamates deserve just as much of a voice as anyone else.

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>>77497079
On one hand, I didn't really take the prompt because I care about Iofi. On the other hand, I did it partly because I felt bad for that lone Ioforia who had a prompt for his rarely-considered chuuba - so I guess it's kind of because of her.

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>>77499972
She had a fairly explicit nude scene recently, you're missing out

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>>77505541
for the time perhaps, but one day a new contestant will rise to the challenge and she will be the new hot /wg/ toppic. Until then I'll accept our blue psychotic overlord

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Let's switch gears to the other cunny that has ideas that never get written.
NTRchads why hasn't Rapu been in an NTR fic yet?

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Which is the correct way to write English? British or American?

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>>77505838
Nobody wants to write about Los Angeles Plus Darkness in that way

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>>77505838
I've been working on other creative avenues at the moment (which is my funny way of saying I'm in WIP hell and wanted to make something out of my initial comfort zone.)

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>>77505860
A mix of both

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>>77505860

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>>77505541
As she should. The Pride of Hololive

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>>77505692
We have been too tolerant towards Watamates. Now they think they can do whatever they want without repercussions.

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>>77505860
>mfw brits call soda "fizzy drink"

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>>77506242
Those bastards! They've been writing! How dare they?!

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>>77503300
If only writing stories was as easy as discussing basic ideas, I would've written about Shion already. And not just her, many other girls as well. But alas, dropping a 2 sentence post and a 10 page story require vastly different amounts of time and effort. I only have enough motivation for the former.

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>>77505541
Strangest aberration for me is Marine. Feels like she is a lot less popular on /wg/ and /vt/ in general than in the wider world.

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>>77507252
Not sure what you're talking about. Marine has pretty prominent roles in some of our biggest fics.

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>>77509346
I hope Chloe has a blowhole on top of her head

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>>77505529
Disturbing!

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>>77507252
because her flanderization works for porn but not for stories.
Its easy to draw "huhuhuahaha marine is horny and she fucks...OR DOES SHE? uhauahuahuahua" but its harder when you want to give her some depth in a written scenario.

Its the same with cunny stuff. they can go UOOOOOH and post 20 variations of unfunny "correction" memes but they get asked to write and they crumble to dust, which is why we have so little cunny stuff on the archive compared to the trillions of gura fanart in the internet.

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>>77510912
The fact that you can only see marine one dimensionally shows you have a complete lack of imagination.

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>>77511095
the entire point of the post is that giving marine depth compared to drawing her getting fucked is harder because one doesnt require to think about plot, setting or dialogue. That's why she's more popular in threads where you can ignore all of that
Learn to fucking read, you dumb inbred retard

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>>77511262
learn to correct someone without throwing a little tantrum

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>>77500623
Through my FE thing, I technically am. Mainly by Supports.

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>>77510912
One of my many unfinished and abandoned projects is a story about Marine's time as a black company OL, which would've had a completely opposite tone to what you describe there. Unfortunately, I haven't really been in the mood for Marine for some time.

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Why are we comparing writing stories to drawing fanart?

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>was absolutely on fire yesterday, wrote ten pages and had a plan for the next 5-10
>today my creativity is complete dead and I couldn't even eek a single sentence out

creativity is such a little bastard. I literally knew exactly how it'd go yesterday and now it's just nothing.

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>>77512522
Take a look at these tits and the flow of your creative juices will restart

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>>77511889
Artist and author here.
They are very different. Writing often lets you turn your brain off and just go. Art does not allow that unless you’re flat coloring.

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>>77512752
There are some rekindled juices but they're definitely not of the creative variety...

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>>77505838
I had this concept for an NTR Lappy fic, where it's more like a lost love kind of thing.

The fic starts with you, the brave hero, facing off against the Empress of Darkness, who then throws lava at your feet. Then, the caretaker blows a whistle, and tells both of you to put the toys away. Lappy is mad because she had spent lots of time gathering the red LEGO (lava) and putting them in her bucket, but the teacher isn't having it. Cut to both of you cleaning up the kindergarten classroom that was the stage for your adventure, then, you and Lappy walk home together with your mothers chit chatting

Fast forward, and both of you are grown up. Laplus has a terrible crush on you, but she doesn't understand how to handle her feelings, she doesn't want to ruin the friendship, etc. This turns worse when YOU confess to her first, and she rejects you because she's insecure. However, you're still best friends.

Fast forward a year, and you're in a relationship with (Chuuba). Cue to Laplus hearing all about your problems with (Chuuba), as well as all the things you two do when you're alone.

Ends with an adult Lappy meeting with you, engaged and happy. For extra salt in the wound, you mention the passing crush you had on her when you two were teens.

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>>77513743
Make the (Chuuba) Iroha for more pain for Laplus. Imagine that you're in a loving relationship with Laplus's bestfriend who's also practically her sister and the two of you flirting publically in front of Laplus as well

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>>77514321
Wouldn't it be more painful if it were Lui?

Or is she the caretaker thus it wouldn't make sense?

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>>77514321
how is Iroha so effortlessly sexy

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>>77514568
no because Iroha is Laplus's best friend. Imagine being cucked by your best friend and still having to talk with them normally who would most likely be accompanied by your crush who is now your best friend's boyfriend. She'd have to constantly pretend not to be jealous everytime especially when Iroha and you make out in front of her or something

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>>77515020
>no because Iroha is Laplus's best friend.

Is she really though? I thought she (Laplus) was closer to Lui (and how fandom likes to pair those two together).

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>>77514998
She’s very “plain” and in a world where everyone is trying to be sexy, being plain and confident and cute is ironically more sexy

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>>77515102
At least in holo, those two are very good friends. If you don't want to just include hololive, Karubi would be Laplus's other good friend

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>>77516150
Oh, that's very interesting to hear then. Really hoping >>77513743 likes your idea then because Iroha does deserve a happy ending.

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Why isn’t there more IroSui fics?

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>>77517076
Because Iroha (in my retarded brain) prefers Suisei as a girl and not a boy.

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>>77517240
Then write yuri?
Now that I think about it, I’ve seen hardly any yuri fics. Is this because this hobby is 90% males?

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>>77517675
>Is this because this hobby is 90% males?
Anon this discussion just happened yesterday

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>>77517675
It's because all the yuri is AO3

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>>77517740
Kek I realized that after I posted. Wasn’t trying to rehash, just had a dumb question that I ended up answering myself.
>>77517760
Towa thread recently whipped up a hot yuri fic and it was posted on AO3. Guess I should check there

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AO3 can keep its yuri, women can keep their stockholm syndrome smut. Here we write fics for MEN. With sword fights, interpersonal drama, fucking your enemies into submission, and passionate lovemaking for the purpose of pleasure and procreation. /wg/ is the country we built from scratch for the hopes of a better future.

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>>77518263
>Here we write fics for MEN. With sword fights, interpersonal drama, fucking your enemies into submission, and passionate lovemaking for the purpose of pleasure and procreation.
And wedgies.

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>>77518263
It’s hot when girls kiss though…

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>>77518776
Okay but they will kiss for both their enjoyment and the enjoyment of their MAN.
>>77518489
I'd argue those are for boys, but fair enough. The underwear hiking party is a recognized group of /wg/.

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>>77518776
Sure, but they can do that with me next to them. I'd rather be a participant than just read about it

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>>77518999
>Okay but they will kiss for both their enjoyment and the enjoyment of their MAN.
Holofantasy spoilers (Polka and Marine, Coco will be fingering herself outside the room)

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>>77518776
The only hot girl-on-girl action is when it's rape

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>>77519125
You're fucking outta here with that kinda talk, mister. Walk yourself out, or you're getting thrown out, without your coat.

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>>77518999
>>77519070
That’s not yuri anymore, just a threesome. I want innocent, unrestrained lesbian sex without a man’s filthy presence in it.

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>>77519274
It's still yuri if the girls involved love each other!

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>>77519274
What about the futa compromise?

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>>77519125
>>>77519402
Futas aren’t men so I support it!

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>>77519402
Futa's not a compromise it's own third thing

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>>77517675
Yuri requires you to show female characters' thoughts directly and I feel a bit shy about doing that. I'd rather keep that stuff hidden behind the male observer layer so I won't get exposed as easily.

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>>77519402
Best I can give you is a strap on so you and the dominant lady involved can spitroast the other girl. You're using the vagoo though, can't risk any of that baby batter going to waste. It may be a group dance, but you're still going to shoot from a family.

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>>77519477
The author putting their thoughts and perspectives into the story gives it life, but I understand if you’re shy about it

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>>77519670
But they are putting their thoughts and perspectives into the story, the thoughts and perspectives of a guy observing lesbian sex

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>>77519260
Mark my words the dice will have Polka confront her insecurities and confess properly before he bangs Coco

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>>77519402
100% in support of it. Males being there just throws the whole dynamic off.

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>>77519751
Okay I give up kek. Idk why you guys are so adamant about a man having to be there. Not everything has to be a self insert

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>>77519839
>Not everything has to be a self insert
Yes, just like not every song I listen to has to be from my favorite genre. But I still have a favorite genre which I'll advocate for

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>>77519766
That's fine if Polka confesses. Funny fennec is going to get lots of love this year, but the part I won't tolerate is having Coco fingering herself in another room because she wasn't invited. That's bullshit and you know it.

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>>77505838
Subby denial powerplay is appealing to me but most of the stuff put forth about her so far has been like, really dark high fantasy suffering. Her being the one gender-reversed case of HoloX all engaging in cuckoldry relationships is still pretty good though. That setting has been rent-free in my head for months.

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Most Yuri is just rayona if you want to make it realistic

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What if we have struggle snuggle fantasies because our brain can't justify a girl falling for (us) enough to let us fuck her

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>>77521294
>Her being the one gender-reversed case of HoloX all engaging in cuckoldry relationships is still pretty good though.
Like Laplus' big-dicked bf fucking the other HoloX girls (who all have boyfriends)?

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>>77515478
i dunno if you guys know samurai in another world, because i was pleasently surprised isekai could produce something that doesnt make me want to engineer the third nuke.

The point im triying to make is that it would be cool to follow a Iroha enamoured with the "hagakure" way of life to the point she's obsessed with death and duty. sure she might be a sweetheart outside of battle, but her life literally ammounts to nothing in her own eyes and the only thing she can do to make it better is to die in glorious combat

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>>77522436
What will you suggest next, Anon? That we like incest because we can't imagine meeting a girl outside of our house?

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>>77522436
Snuggling is 100% allowed and encouraged. /wg/ deserves the softest blankets, warmest tea, and perfect outdoor weather for the most fluffy snuggles.
You are all good enough to have a girl fall for you.

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>>77522701
Yeah, like, the other four by sheer happenstance all ended up engaging in NTR play of various types with their partners and eventually finding each other out and bonding over it, then Rapu as the one holdout with a vanilla relationship develops the subby end of the fetish from listening to them talk about it and ultimately her own boyfriend becomes a frequent shared bull between the rest. Room for a really erotic frame or anthology type multipart story that caps off with a reversal of the gender dynamic depicted throughout the rest of it.

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>>77511460
i'd love to read a story about a clueless anon joining a black company, his jaded boss Marine stuck there, trying to leave for years.

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>>77522926
I let my wife read one of my stories once, changed the character names. I think she let me down easy.

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>>77523687
She let you down? Or do you mean let you off

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>>77523945
no that's a real saying, it means she was gentle in her critique

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>>77524067
Thanks, I didn't know that saying. A bit confusing

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>>77505860
I’m in Australia so I write in British English and set my spell-checker accordingly.

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>>77523611
I prefer having Anon and Marine be on the same level in hierarchy and same age.
I had two versions of it. One where Anon and Marine discover some evil conspiracy their company is involved in and the other was a more down-to-earth one where the focus is on Anon and Marine's bonding over their shared suffering and doing slice of life stuff.

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>>77523687
Well on the bright side, your wife was considerate of your feelings and gave your story a try! Some relationships might struggle when it comes to one side showing the other things their own creative mind came up with, it's kinda a window into the soul that some are not ready to, or don't want to see. Even though you might feel that she went easy on you, it's a big deal that you felt comfortable to share it with her.
I did not change the names in the story I showed my own wife. She made fun of Watame's name for being too japanese. I held my tongue. She also keeps forgetting to send me the feedback she had for me. This summer I have a goal to pester her more.

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>>77522436
For me, it's being abused and sexually harassed by a chuuba because I can't imagine a girl being nice to me

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>>77511889
Because people were wondering why a certain chuuba would be more commonly used in works in some creative circles but not others. You can read the beginning of entire chain like, ten posts above yours.

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>>77524574
That could work too. I think you could combine the two ideas if you give it a more mundane conspiracy- discovering biased contractor decisions, falsified data, collusion among higher ups, there's plenty of shady things companies do that don't require an extravagant conspiracy to create tension.
Simply describing an office environment with a few cliques is enough for some drama.

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>>77524548
I prefer British spelling but my vocabulary is overwhelmingly American so for the sake of consistency I end up using American spelling. Maybe that's unnecessary autism though.
t. ESL

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>>77523945
I mean she did that too

>>77524606
She knows I'm super passionate about it and, being the lovely person she is, she didn't get to harsh with it. But that's fine with me. I definitely don't want my editor and my wife to be the same person.

I don't know how you do it frankly. I think it would just create friction between us. Not that I'm bad at criticism, it's just that it's my wife.

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>>77524924
That might be the best direction. My heart isn't in it right now to write that fic but maybe one day.

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>>77525445
Oh your exact concern was the initial reason I took so long to tell her that I was even writing. My wife has a tendency to take control of things, and which is probably part of why I was drawn to her, and I was afraid she would try to influence it to how she would want it to be. She completely respects that it's my own project and that means the world to me. It also helps that she has only read up to chapter 3 so far, since by her own public admission, it becomes a little harder to read a work of fiction by someone you know personally. Which I don't really get, but I respect her feelings on it. I will start to prod her more as time goes on, since I really think she would enjoy the overall story and the magical elements of it. Due to the type of person she is, I fully expect her to rip me open about a plot point or something when she gets to it. That'll be just fine though, because she's my wife.
>Inb4 I didn't include enough of X in the smut

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>people here who write stupid fanfics about menhera e-girls have wives

what a world

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>>77527329
Hobbies only define their participants statistically, after all. You're more likely to be a virgin loser if you're a vtuber fan, but it's nowhere near absolute.

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I WILL fix ze bugs.
And I WILL be happy.

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>>77527850
Everytime I see Millie I get the urge to squeeze her head in one hand like a stress ball

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>>77528347
Her head is huge in the new sprites. Way bigger than the originals, which has a more balanced look due to having a half-body sprite.

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ninisani anon.
we dont know each other.
we are not friends
but please. include a 2 hour scene of me sniffing Nina's hairy sweaty cunt.

Matara took all the hair in the divorce.. i love her, but its not the same

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>>77527329
I thought HJanon was the only one with a wife here.

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>>77528658
Too late now, but I'll keep it in mind for the DLC

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Who would you expect to join the (you)/Mio/Ayame polycule where Mio is your actual girlfriend and Ayame is also subbing while competing for attention and dominance with her?

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>>77531187
Subaru except you're the only one that gives her any live and attention

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>>77531187
Can't they just have a friendly, playful competition where you treat both well?

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>>77531187
Towa but she's the tsundere who's just there to make sure you're not playing with Mio's feelings, at least that's what she says

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>>77519766
It would be fucking hilarious if everyone else somehow gets fast carnal romances while Coco gets a slow burn series wide chaste romance arc. As if the fates are conspiring to make her fall in love with a human as humans do rather than that of the prideful dragons.

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>>77532969
That's a cool role idea, and Towa fits it well. I can hear her say "kimo" as she's about to be gagged with her own panties which are already soaking wet.

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>>77493349
Pulling Raden into a supply closet, hiking up her dress and having animalistic sex with her

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>>77533808
uh i wasn't thinking about that other idea but yea sure that's cool too

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>>77533202
That would be pretty adorable and kinda fitting for the whole harem hierarchy that was explained already in the story.

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>>77529056
Believe it or not, I have one too and I'm sakurasummeranon. If I can get one, anyone can.

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>>77533845
>wake up. its another day in a decent marriage
>your wife is nice to you, you two cook breakfast together and you go to work
>today is monday. the workload is neither backbreaking not meaningful
>talk to your coworker. talk about the game
>the better team won. you then had sex with your wife like every sunday
>boss gives you a pat in the back as you leave.
>you get halfway through the train station and stop
>its been five years of this.
>This disgusting normalcy. this horrendously boring existence where all you do is make money to sometimes allow yourself to go on a painfully average vacation
>you work every single day of your miserable life to go home to a wife you have nothing to talk about to
>even sex, a primal pleasure, follows a rigid timetable. You are not sure its even for pleasure anymore...are you two looking for a kid?
>and even if you had a kid...what next? more kids? more vacations? More meals where the flavor is completely muted?
>get inside a bar. order a drink
>Look around and there's a woman counting change on her wallet, triying to scrunch together enough money for a cheep bear
>Fuck it. Drinks are on you. Drink with me woman
>She's called Raden. Her passion is art and blowing money in stupid stuff. Having the time of your life
>You never knew you could have so much fun drinking and betting over cards
>Watching a shitty movie is somehow so much fun.
>and before you know it, the walls of the motel room echo with depraved sex
>Sex so animalistic and primal that it cant be described in words.
>positions you never thought off. Like its a game to test flexibility and libido
>and yet when you two finish it doesnt have that implict sense of disgust for the naked body.

AKA where the crushing life of a mindless drone meets the indomitable spirit of holy fuck i love this artist that lives a questionable life
The ending better be you two in a cheap house with periods where jobs dont come, and yet you two are the happiest couple in existance

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>>77535349
Are you sure it's not the same wife?

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>>77533908
It was just an example where Towa's tsun catchphrase would be appropriate, really.
And thinking about it, they should really be gagged with the panties of another participant

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>>77523180
>a reversal of the gender dynamic depicted throughout the rest of it.
I don't get what you're implying here.
Would it be (You) watching Laplus be railed by an X year old shota with a Lappy sized dick?

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>>77536990
How about...
Laplus can't fuck her bf because his schlong is too long
Then he meets with Anon, a man who can't please his gf because his peepee is a little weewee
Then, both cucks uncuck themselves by getting together in a small penis appreciation reverse-NTR fic.

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Laplus is a child

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>>77536990
No, the idea is, four vignettes show how Lui, Koyori, Chloe, and Iroha ended up cucking their boyfriends, but then Laplus ends up getting cucked herself rather than following the trend. Allows her and her presumably hung BF to naturally slot in as partners for the other four. the BF satisfying everyone's needs all at once since by dicking them he's cucking both their own respective boyfriends and Laplus at the same time

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>>77533202
>Ollie's battlesexual tendencies lead to her awkwardly blurting out an innocent confession of admiration during Police Mandated Sparring
>Somehow reignites Fubuki's long dormant romantic desires
>Makes Mio feel warm and fuzzy
>Makes Kanata feel something more than just a desire to protect him out of obligation
>Coco is downing whiskey again

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>>77535540
Having midday beers and cigs with Raden!

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Dying so soon?

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>>77535540
I know this prompt kind of requires that whoever (You) married first be as bland and milquetoast as possible in order for the contrast with Raden to work... But the question of what chuuba would be your wife is making me imagine interesting possibilities for who she could be. No horn Nerissa? Human Fubuki? Neutral end Marine (not her dream but not in a black company)?

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>>77551031

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>>77551031
>Fubuki
>bland and milquetoast
I neither respect your opinion nor agree with it

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>>77551031
>Mild and boring
Non chuuba OC like to be 17 again
>safe
A "neutered version" of a chuuba who is boring on purpose
>Spicy
a nice but "boring" girl that ultimately loses you due to lack of attention. Iroha for example would fit here but also a carreer driven woman
>filling the divorce papers, she notices something you have in your pocket
>"I never knew you liked that."
>your hand stops
>"You never asked"

>Good shit
A nice girl that you are going through a rough patch(doesnt need to be a fight, the utmost monotony is enough), like all relationships do. Its Just that you Love Raiden.
A long selections of girls can go here, but ultimately they need to be less interesting than Raden (something like you try an art class with them and they just dont get how to paint from the soul or they dont get why you are now passionate about it) and the cracks start showing with or without Raden's influence

>fantastic
A full on homewrecking experience. You are "happily" married to a chuuba that loves you and is energetic and it all. It can be a nice loving hag, a determined zoomer, a hopeful cake. Someone whose day is better when you are around
But she's not a drunk rakugoka that sucks your dick while smoking a cigarette. They are not as interesting as a woman showing you human suffering in the painting or discussing books with you for fun. Your wife doesnt have the cultural background to satisfy your curiosity.
Every time you try and pull back, Raden pulls you in harder. Your wife slowly starts realizing.
But nooo
It cant be true!
ANon would NEVER cheat! So she desperately tries to reignite the flame that is not gone. its been usurped.
And when it all comes to the surface, when she's sitting there in the couch and she goes
>"Dont you love me?"
you go
>"No...Not anymore"

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>>77548230
Doing hard drugs and having sex with Raden!

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going on a bender with raden sounds like a good time

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>>77533845
>>77554405
Isn't Raden supposed to have small tits?

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>>77493349
Ame's fat ass farting on my face until i have a handsfree ejaculation

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>>77553452
>Mild and boring
Ironically this would be the safest option since it doesn't step on any other chuubas toes in order to have a chuuba as the wife rather than an OC. Probably the best for a pure Raden fic.
>safe
Probably not worth it at that point since it's basically using a chuuba to have a chuuba in that slot.
>Spicy
This would be the bare minimum justification for using an actual chuuba in slot.. Though honestly OC Wife-san could still fit here.
>good shit
This would be the level best for anyone using a chuuba for the wife. Lets them have a good showing with a bit of tragedy (for them) to spice it up. While still making them be a secondary character.
>fantastic
This would elevate the 'boring girl' into main character status, and would absolutely need a good writer that can do both godly smut, heart pounding romance and heartbreaking drama at the same time... this would also basically need someone to devote themselves to writing an ALS/ Our Cures length series since this both the breadth and depth being in a series would provide. Previous levels could theoretically be one-shot length, this concept would need to have it be a series.

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>>77555448
Kinda?
The art for them in idol costumes puts her and Ririka in the same breast size so she's not bounce ball size 1 but there's room for interpretation on whether they're size 2 or 3.

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>>77493349
(You) are Subaru's father, and you are getting increasingly worried about her future as her fertility clock ticks ever closer to midnight. She'll grow into an infertile hag! A Christmas cake left to go stale on the shelf! Oh, the humanity!
So, as any loving father would do, you set out on a quest to find somebody... ANYBODY who is worthy (or even just willing) enough to fuck your daughter!

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>>77555448
Seems to be Premium Mediums for JFT

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>>77555448
mediums which means they get to be noel size in fan art

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>>77556458
Ah yes, the fabled mediums. I sure do love me a nice modestly-sized chest.

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>>77555450
>>72254215
>>72255778
I hate that the ame smell fics have turned me into an unironic brapfag

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>>77557416
Easy, just get a girl to fart on your face IRL and your problem will be solved. Pay for a hooker to do it if you must.

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>>77557692
>"huhehehe did you know fantasy and reality are two different things?!? huehuehe im so smart"

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>>77557803
Anon... Seriously, sometimes some actual experience with the real thing rather than the idea of it is all you need to kill a fetish.

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>>77558226
nta but there's always a nonzero chance that he ends up liking it instead

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>>77560547
he already likes it

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>>77555450
Really swinging for the fences with this prompt, my dude

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>>77563829
Getting Lamy off alcohol by getting her addicted to Dr.Pepper!

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>>77564961
Alcohol is humanity's friend. Can she abandon a friend?

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>>77565467
yes absolutely

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>>77565520
Lamy is only going to get you addicted to alcohol instead

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>>77565706
i'm actually a teetotaler so fat chance of that ever happening. worst case scenario is we butt heads to the point of an irreparable relationship

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>>77538497
So Lappy's bf fucks the 4 girls while their 4 boyfriends and Laplus watch and masturbate?

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>>77565928

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>>77545565
POV: You're my cock

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>>77566230
getting killed by a hot anime girl doesn't sound so bad either

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>>77566340
Midori no Hibi but instead of a miniature girl being attached to your arm you notice one day that your penis is no longer there, it's been replaced with a miniature Ayame.

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>>77566676
That's not how POV works

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>>77567600
I know, I was just using your post as a jump ramp

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>>77566676
>>77567979
...go on?

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>>77567979
Oh, nevermind then. But can you make that deal seem not horrible?

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>>77569110
When you take a piss...
it comes out of Ayame's mouth

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>>77569656
same with cum I imagine. But what's the overarching plot, what's the rising action? the build up? does ayame get a pov experience of what it looks like inside her gennate's pussy? put some mead on those bones, goddammit!!!

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>>77569915
The rest is up to your imagination. Personally I'm not THAT invested in the idea of having an ayamecock.

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>>77566676
>tfw there's only one doujin of this series
At least it's good...

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>>77569915
Do not put mead on bones.

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>>77535540
good prompt. I hope someone picks it up. Always love me a bittersweet romance with a good enough ending!

>>77556019
shit prompt, except if your search fails and (you) do it yourself

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>>77556019
I prefer the idea of her father hunting down (You) after deeming you to be a worthy partner for Subaru, a la Yagoo Redfield.

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>>77570568
but I want the mead to jelotonize.

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>>77571070
>ANON HURRY, YOU NEED TO HAVE SEX WITH MY DAUGHTER! HER APARTMENT BURNT DOWN AMD SHE WONT LEAVE MY HOUSE, THE OTHER DAY SHE BOUGHT A DUCK AS A PET AND NAMED HER 'Shubakami Fububi' PLEASE! THE FAMLY BLOODLINE NEEDS TO GO ON!

I'd like this idea but it's the Ravencroft family begging you to turn Nerissa into a baby making factory

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>>77532969
Is Towa in a close enough relationship with Mio to be saying stuff "This custom paddle you've gotten for her looks heavy. Are you some kind of sadist? Here, I need you to test it on me to make sure it does not hurt too much."

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>>77571088
> jelotonize
Bone apple tea to you as well, my friend </reddit>

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>>77571465
You can write their relationship like that. But make it sound like a flustered and aroused tsundere Towa, not so calm and obvious.

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>>77571992

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>>77566676
https://mangakatana.com/manga/turns-out-my-dick-was-a-cute-girl.26496

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>>77571465
That dialogue is as wooden as the paddle. That's the gist what Towa would want to express but you have to put it through her "filter" before writing it. Think about her emotions and goals and let those change how she says it

[Anonymous No.]

Damn, Watame's live was really good. I wish we had more Watame solo stories.

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>>77566225
That's the gist of it I guess, if a little reductive. I also liked the idea of using it to explore a bunch of NTS subgenres by having the exact type of play each member does with their respective partner be a little different. Like, Lapu is reverse, Chloe is prone to gangbangs rather than a single partner and always gives aftercare (CC-brand), one of them sticks to a single partner but is also pretty kind and accommodating about it outside of bed, one of them is into brutal denial and verbal battering of her cuck, one of them actually cheated but then it turned BF-kun on when he found out and they stuck together, maybe some other mixtures, etc. Depicting them sitting together and sharing tips on how to get their partners to respond is what would make it most worth it to me though, just the sheer perversity and embarrassment of it. Maybe I'll try and knock out a short isolated scene in a bit.

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>>77574732
>Depicting them sitting together and sharing tips on how to get their partners to respond is what would make it most worth it to me though, just the sheer perversity and embarrassment of it.
Having Lui, Chloe, Laplus' boyfriend, Koyo and Iroha talk about it would be pretty fun. Especially if they just had sex.

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>>77573812
Watame is really erotic in 3D for some reason.

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>>77573661
I'm conveying the sentiment, not quoting actual dialogue

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>>77576328
How would you write the line of dialogue

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[Anonymous No.]

When you guys contact a beta reader? Do you send the whole wip?

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>>77577289
Rubbing chilli extract into Fubuki's cooch

[Anonymous No.]

Man, character motivations are hard to write.
Except for the final boss. My antagonist is going to have the dumbest, most ridiculous cringekino "what the fuck" reason that takes itself way too seriously and I'm going to enjoy writing every minute of it.

>>77578957
In all honesty I don't use beta readers. My WIPS are like, 30k words upon completion and it's hard to critique a scene without knowing the context, meaning they have to read the whole thing, but I don't expect anyone to read that much and provide feedback on it. I mean I personally would be happy to if I was on the receiving end, but that's just me.

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>>77578957
I personally would send the whole wip, and if it's on the longer side, you can preface that they don't have to provide feedback on all of it, or can take their time with it.

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>>77522736
The protag of that is cute iirc

[Anonymous No.]

Speaking of antagonists, is it better to have a chuuba be the final villain of a grand epic, or an OC? I feel like it might be hard to write a serious story with a chuuba as the main villain without it feeling a little silly but I'd love to be proven wrong.

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>>77579973
Depends on the chuuba and the story. HoloX are easy inserts into that final villain role, which might be something HoloJourneys is working on building up, but it primarily uses OCs so far. But with the right build up and motivations, any chuuba could fit into that role nicely.

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>>77579973
As long as the villain role vaguely fits the character, why not? The only thing that you can't do is making it feel like them in the villain role is a jab at the actual chuuba.

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>>77493349
You've heard the stories about the kemonomimi girls having more animal traits than just their ears and tails but no one mentioned the bulge.

She's definitely hitting on you but do you risk discovering if she's an animal down there too?
And is the only reason she's noticing you is that she may be coming into heat and are you willing to risk getting knocked up by her?

Non-kemonomimi Holo x kemonomimi Holo

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>>77578967
Wouldn't that be extremely painful for her, anon?

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>>77581302
Hot. But who would be the pairing?

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>>77581992
not sure. Since you can go for "Yep that's definitely not a human cock" and then it comes down to what you want (or in the case of Coco, does it mean there's double as well?) or it's just a regular one and she's gonna get railed anyhow.

You got the classic of like Lamy x Botan or perhaps something more exotic like Subaru being gangbanged by the Gamers (or OKFAMS and Ayame being knowing of what's going down and Saubaru being the newbie to orgy. Which might have 3 knotters and a barbed cock there)

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>>77581881
That’s the point

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>>77582097
The idea of Ayame having fun with GAMERS' cocks and getting her innocent sister to join is pretty funny.

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>>77582097
The Cocock would work. Coco has the right temperament for that stuff. Botan is the safe choice but I think Dom!Botan is a bit overdone. You can always go the clockgen route and give Fauna a horsecock.
For my money though, I love the idea of a Futa!Pekora giving into her urge to breed like a rabbit

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>>77582265
And being an oni Ayame's pretty much seeing it as a challenge to beat all four of them. Sure Subaru's only human but that means she can like at least wear out one of the girls right?

Sure it means that Ayame's gonna be pregnant with one of the GAMERS kids again but eh just proof she managed to defeat their cocks.
Subaru will be more than a little surprised with this turn of events Still it's another hag impregnated

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>>77582785
>I love the idea of a Futa!Pekora giving into her urge to breed like a rabbit
I think I saw that doujin before.

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>>77582891
>Sure it means that Ayame's gonna be pregnant with one of the GAMERS kids again
>again

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>>77582925
Probably. It's admittedly not a novel idea

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>>77582941
Why do you think Ayame vanishes for long periods of time?

Although you'd think with how many babies she's had she'd have a more mature body

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>>77582785
i like the idea of fauna horse because you can build tension with an scene.
Like the girl (Kronii? Mumei?) is kinda giving it some though and then the tent starts getting pitched and they start chickening out

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>>77582156
I just want you to know that you are a heartless monster for putting Fubuki under extreme discomfort, anon.

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>>77583278
Fauna has the right amount of playful flirtiness for the "hitting on" part to work, plus being Mother Nature makes it a good fit. You are kinda losing the kemono part of the idea though.

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>>77583278
i mean she's pretty much a deer in all but name. its also as you said, she fits the bill.
You can also poke at her pride as the girl survives the first barrage and taunts her

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>>77583837
>>77584064
the official site calls her a kirin so its either a dragon dick, a horse dick or a giraffe dick which i wont google because im not brave enough

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>>77583278
>>77583837
Better have some belly bulging with that monster of a horsecock

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>>77583430
lol
lmao

[Anonymous No.]

>>77584149
>giraffe dick
it's pretty weird
it can also get to like 60cm

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>>77584157
it would be funny if fauna ejaculated in under 3 minutes because horsedick means horse stamina regarding mating
>>77584276
i was right to be afraid

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>>77584534
But she keeps reloading fast which means you think you've won but well...

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>>77584064
I'm just saying, Futa!Fauna fucking her genmates is a clockgen staple. The whole "lost in estrus" gets well, lost with her. She's more a "following her role" type of idea.

>>77584149
No need to reinvent the wheel, just give her a horsecock

>>77584157
Indeed. If the flare isn't visible why bother?

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>>77584860
well there's your story
>Fauna scores. Girl tries to easy it up with a blowjob
>She cums. Girl teases
>pride is hurt. she reloads
>cums fast again, but she reloads it once more
>repeat like 2 more times

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>>77585032
And Fauna's VERY fertile so one she dumps a load in you even as little bit she's got you pregnant if not using her abilities to ensure that she's got Kronii extremely pregnant if not leaving her looking pretty pregnant with the sheer volume of cum in her.

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>>77584942
Well I better check what they got in that gen then

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>>77583121
Ayame is over 1500 years old, I don't think she'll grow much more mature at this point. And onis have an easy time with pregnancy in birth, anyway

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>>77587243 (me)
*pregnancy and birth

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>>77587243
A pity about never getting anything up top

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>>77585518
>Fauna has entered estrus
>Sana can withstand the sheer force of Fauna's horsecock without rest but is on an errand in a nearby solar system
>Kronii can use her time powers to keep up with Fauna, but is on a spa trip
>IRyS, Bae and Mumei are the only ones left to quell Fauna's lust

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>>77578957
all my readers are betas so i don't contact them

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>>77587338
Ayame is good with the cuppable breasts she has. She'd be less adorable to me if she was bigger

[Anonymous No.]

>>77587112
Wanna discuss something more vanilla than futa and furry?

[Anonymous No.]

>>77589795
I would actually! Maybe even something not related to sex at all.

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>>77590574
Can you tell me a bit about Pomu/her current alter ego? I don't know much about them aside from the MGS fangirling (she released a short about how to get into the series), and that's kinda reductive. She seems very subdued in her current form, but under that lurks something very active and possibly lewd.

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>>77591176
Mint is actually a degenerate when she's not trying to behave herself. She loves cute idols to a degree that would make most fans squeamish. At her core though she's just a dork who fluctuates between low self-esteem on the inside and outward confidence. She's also the kind of ghost that needs to feel comfortable in her setting to eventually have the courage to be her true self. She plays things very close to the chest initially while she feels things out.

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>>77591176
she's a massive buttslut i hear

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>>77592894
Big if true

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>>77595887
DWEEB!

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>>77592600
So, she is not trusting (you) initially and talks to you only when necessary, like a coworker
But then, after she gets to know you a bit, a dam bursts and she is a lot more open with her attractions and silliness? Does she also tend to overshare things when she gets over the initial fear?
Trying to fit her pattern of behaviour into a box I am way too familiar with (she's literally me fr fr)

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>>77598048
Grab the ojou

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>>77599136
To say that she would straight avoid you at first is an exaggeration. It's more so she will talk less and keep to safe topics for initial interactions, BUT if you open the door to talk about something she is passionate about, she can go off. She will more openly share her attractions when she does become more comfortable, and sometimes do it even unprompted, which is part of her silly charm. She will overshare due to a need to sometimes, even during the sharing she will be like "oh fuck, I really shouldn't have said that, you're gonna think I'm a weirdo." and then in the same breath be like "it's okay, we're all weirdos here."

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Are we allowed to repost stories we posted in distinct threads?

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>>77599806
The OP of that thread is the official license holder of your story according to laws of 4chan so you must negotiate with him first whether you're allowed to post it in /wg/

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>>77599806
As long as it's your story you can post it wherever.

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Mint OP please. As horny as the boards rules allow it.

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>>77600836
Could you fucking not?

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>>77600920
No.

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>>77600209
Well, As the anon who wrote this whole thing, here are the links:
Chapter 1: >>/vt/thread/77181918
Chapter 2: >>/vt/thread/77487309 (https://pastebin.com/MuNX9HXj))

If you need proof I wrote it, I can make a small edit to the pastebin one as proof. Sorry for jumping around platforms.

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>>77599488
So she's got autism

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>>77601064
Throw it to the anchor in the next thread.
>>77601139
Yes.

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>>77601064
And don't forget to add tags too. Can't archive without tags.

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>>77601200
>>77601274

Sorry, I'm a bit of a new tourist here. Could you explain what you mean by the anchor and how to add tags? As far as I can tell, my story is a little on the... unique side.

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>>77601489
No worries mate. Tags can be as specific or as broad as you want, but typically it's good to have a tag that is a high level indicator of the genre, and then you have simple ones like which chuubas are primarily included in your story. Then it's a simple SFW or NSFW tag.

[Anonymous No.]

Okay. The tags are:
Elira, Selen, Dokibird, Nijisanji, SFW, Metafiction

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>>77601489
Oh and each thread as an anchor post which you reply to for saving your story. It'll be near the OP, so just keep your eye out for it. It'll have a pic of the chuuba of the thread's OP.

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>>77601735
Thank you so much. You have been very patient with me, and this is all incredibly helpful. I will repost the links as a reply to the next anchor post.

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>>77601064
Short, but you accomplished what it's supposed to be well. We don't get many topical fics around here, it's mostly about sex, drama and adventure with the holos we love. Now if you reply to the story anchor with a link to your story, Shiori will put it into the archive linked in the OP.

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>>77601064
You saved us from two threads in a row without a story!
They've been quite fast and authors *are* cooking so it's not a bad drought but thank you anyway

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>>77602002
Happy you came across us and wanted to share what you've written.

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>>77602022
>>77602209
Aww thank you. I'm happy I could help. Did you want me to reply to the current anchor? Okay, here it goes:

>>77493308
The Dokibird War - An Epic Retelling of Selen's Termination
Chapter 1: >>/vt/thread/77181918
Chapter 2: https://pastebin.com/MuNX9HXj
Tags: Elira, Dokibird, Metafiction, Selen, Series, SFW

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>>77602639
Shion got something to read just in time! If you're looking for inspiration, something to read, or want to chat about (fan)fiction, feel free to come to future /wg/ editions
And now that you called it a series, will there be more parts?

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>>77602833
Absolutely, there are going to be more parts. Obviously there will need to be some chronological divergence from the IRL events, but barring any sudden new developments within Nijisanji, my intended stop point is a combination of wrestletuber 2024, Mint and Matara's reunion with Dokibird, and recent drama surrounding Victoria Brightshield.

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No fantasy
No incest
No wedgies
No demons
No NTR
Just pure Niji bs

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>>77603290
Yep, that is the plan!

I wish there was more fanfiction surrounding Nijisanji's recent drama. Even while shamelessly plugging in every fantasy plot trope in the book, I still frequently find myself having to guess what plot elements and motifs will have the desired impacts, and which ones won't.

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>>77603767
This thread is pretty insulated from drama, which I guess leaves some potential inspiration on the table. But I'm glad about it overall.

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AZKi-bumper, I want to let you know that I appreciate you.

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>>77603767
the thing with drama fics is that they age like absolute shit.
Either because the drama was a nothingburger (like any drama mori fic that now reads like a schizo rant), the fic is on the wrong side of the argument or the fic cant hold a candle to the actual drama

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Can we have the fabled Watame bread