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TIL that comments have a character limit.

Because I am too impatient to wait for my burner a03 account to be ready.

Thank you to everyone who has provided me encouragement and support! Feedback of any kind is highly appreciated!

>> No.77488028

For anyone wondering, yes, Rosemi is technically a sentient rose that is attached to an empty husk of a human woman that acts as a vessel.

>> No.77488082

>>77488028
Is that a thing in her lore? If it isn't, it should be. That's a cool concept.

>> No.77489054

>>77488082
https://virtualyoutuber.fandom.com/wiki/Rosemi_Lovelock#Lore

Despite her being effectively a parasitoid plant entity that leeches off what is effectively a zombie, I gave her a fairly neutral portrayal. There are some who say she deserves condemnation for retweeting the black stream. I'm not as sure. And it reflects in my story.

>> No.77489167

>>77487309
Good stuff dude

>> No.77489209

keep up the good work!

>> No.77489227

Who?

>> No.77490895

>>77487309
This is so dumb, but i want more

>> No.77493512

>>77488082
Good idea

>> No.77495029

>peak autismkino is back
Best thread on the board right now.

>> No.77496677

Pretty good OP, you're not a faggot today

>> No.77498096

Good job, OP

>> No.77498447

>>77487309
nice OP.
also, i think the kingdom's name should be Anycolor and Nijisanji EN, JP, etc the name it's provinces

>> No.77501287

>>77498447
That's a good point. I think by this point I've "committed", but if I were to remaster this at some point, I should take this into account.

>> No.77502311

This story makes Selen look like some innocent martyr and Elira and the company like evil tyrants. I bet a self-professed dragoon wrote this.

>> No.77502608

>77502311
Don't you have any 14 year old kids to dox, sister? Or was one good enough for you.

>> No.77505544

>>77488082
It would be

>> No.77506846

>>77487309
I don't remember the timeline, but Selen's mods reactivating her 100k celebration stream and funneling them to Doki's debut stream was probably one of the biggest fuck yous to Nij management I've ever seen. I hope you'll put that in when you write about her debut.

>> No.77507234

>>77502608
You should be watching Dookie's streams instead of making these pathetic posts glorifying her cuckgoon. She's gonna drop to 3view at this rate.

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>> No.77508277

>>77507234
Author here, I both watch here streams AND write my mediocre fanfiction. Did you take the time to read it? I love almost all feedback, so a thorough, paragraph-by-paragraph critique by such a rare, endangered species as a nijisister would truly make my day.

>> No.77509900

AIIIIIEEEEEE THREAD IS DYING and I'm not bumping

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