/wg/ - Writing General - Devil in the Details Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>73923282 (Where we discussed making elves drink cum, being a family with Marine and Aqua, and as always, incest)
/wg/ rentry (for bakers): https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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Story Anchor
Twap em if you got em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story Recap. There was one story posted last thread:

Tower of Tattle Part VI Episode 10: A Stupid Game >>73953485
Tags: Shiori Novella, FeMC, SFW, fantasy, mystery, nasu-inspired, childhood

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Thread died because it's boring and no one has any interest in forcing conversation for the millionth time just for the sake of keeping this corpse on the board. It's time to let go.

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>>74001151
Those details? My house.

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Towa!

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>>74001502
Threads die because /vt/ is one of the fastest boards on 4chan and it's not a corpse as long as there's people who write and read vtuber fanfiction. Unless we create a full-fledged vtuber fanfiction website, an archive 2.0, /wg/ is still in demand.

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>>74004189
This Nene looks very undorky

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>>74004331
Nene is a dork, but she is also a woman.

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Wake up

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The mama Marine stuff really tickled my heart in a good way. It's going to be some good inspiration for me.

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>>74004189
My face goes in the middle. Then they create a gas chamber of farting for me

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>>74005854
Same. I think I'm gonna pick up that "Aqua figuring out she's adopted" prompt. Drama ending with some wholesome family fluff? Sounds right up my alley.

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>>74006083
Nene's farts would be average.
Lamy's farts would be absolutely horrible.

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>>74007742
What a lovely cake. And the food is nice too

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>>74006730
Best of luck to you Anon. It's a delightful concept. I might end going the route of Marine finding Aqua from whatever circumstances I'll come up with that have her wandering homeless, and just bringing her aboard and just laying it on you.

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>>74008089
Please do NOT eat the Chloe! Cannibalism is bad!

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>>74006730
Make Aqua black, solely so it'll be funny for her to realize the white redhead and the green guy in a suit aren't her biological parents.

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>>74008494
(1) It's not cannibalism if it's a different species
(2) I was referring to Chloe when I said "cake"

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>>74008536
Aqua's surname being different is already a pretty big missed hint

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>>74008494
I will write about going down on this orca.

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>>74008536
Pretty sure Marine is Asian

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Sex with towa after kicking out bibi and kotachi!!!

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>>74010105
This looks like Pekora's older sister

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>>74001208
Helping Bae get dressed

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>>74008748
The biggest clue is probably that Marine didn't adopt her until she was already in her mid twenties.

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Here's a silly name for the potential son of Anon and Pekora: Pekorino
>Pecorino is an Italian hard cheese produced from sheep's milk. The name pecorino derives from pecora, which means 'sheep' in Italian.

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>>74001208
The best dancers of Hololive try to outgrind each other for (you)r dick in a strip dance.

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>>74014121
>"Mr pekorino...anything to add?"
>"I cooka da pizza...badabing"

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>>74001208
(You) are ririka's english teacher and after she made a very bad financial choice (she bought REDACTED amount of wieners) you need to collect the payment with sex

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>>74015237
the hoshimachi project uniform has demolished my brain.
all i can think is girls reeking and sitting in my face

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>>74015237
Man Ririka eats dirt cheap. She must have bought the entire konbini out

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Finana no! The recorder incident was enough, you can't going down this dark road!

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Survive

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>>73955210
I've got an outline for this idea made, I'm gonna see if I can write something for it soon.

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>>74020763
Glad I could inspire you!

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>>74001502
Thread dies because it is the same two dozen or so people yammering about, of which only about seven or eight of whom actually write.

If there was an actual beta-ing community, where people posted their previews and such all the time, even scrapped ideas/paragraphs would be enough, maybe there would be more legit conversation instead of repetitive "haha marine shota anon hag sex" and the like being pretty much the only sentences in the whole thread.

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>>74021841
I'll read your next preview and give you feedback, if you'd like!

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>>74021841
>scrapped ideas
I post these all the time (disguised as prompts)

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>>74021841
im sorry i have autism i cannot publish something unless it is 90% done

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>>74021841
If we gave attention to people who posted previews and snippets productivity would reach absolute lows. Only those who finish a story should be given any dopamine.

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>>74021841
Personally can't do that because I don't like people knowing what I'm working on

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>>74021841
>scrapped ideas
They're scrapped because they're shit.

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>>74021841
I posted a thing of dialog snippets asking for advice and feedback but it didn't get a lot of responses + thread shitter

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It is true that it's important to give writers their due in terms of reading their stories and posting about them, especially if you're not writing yourself
I'll see that I read more of the posted stories and give my thoughts about them in the future

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>>74026419
Marine's so pretty...

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>>74027000
Well, she's my wife after all. Of course she's pretty.

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>>74001208
A sequel to suisei needs a shower

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How come there's so little fics about regloss?

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>>74029345
I think it's somewhat due to the attribute of being the newest gen on the block (even if it's been more than half a year since they debuted). I remember HoloX being barren in terms of fics for the longest time too.

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>>74029345
Too Japanese

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>>74029345
I think a few of them are pretty fun, but I can't really think of a good include with them at the moment. Maybe when I get to outlining more cities/towns I can find a good fit.

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>>74029345
For me the time when I paid attention to everything going on in Hololive was over looong before Regloss debuted. My Hololive experience is an extremely curated selection of content now. Basically, I don't know enough about them to write about them.

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>>74001208
Bae finally lets you meet her mom, and the entire time you're fighting to suppress your hag lust as she keeps being unintentionally sexy.

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>>74029345
>new
>no lore
>no hype
>one is a boy
>two can't talk right
>we're all too tired

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>>74021841
You missed the incest!
But yeah I agree. You know what? I'll post some old WIPs once I get home

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>>74029345
For me there's just not enough there for me to chew on.
I like Ririka but she's so boyish and carefree struggle to come up with a nice fluff piece for her
Raden has potential but I don't want to pigeon hold her into "art hoe gf"
Kanade is unironically TOO retarded
The ikemen girl trope never appealed to me, so Ao is basically no go
I do have an idea for Hajime but whether I'll ever get around to it is another story, by the time I do I bet there will be more info on her so I'm in no rush.

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>>74029345
HoloX is way more interesting conceptually and they got very few fics in their first year.

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>>74029345
I believe it's a combination of things. One their lore just making them normal humans means there's nothing fantastical to act as the base, (there's a bit of idol fantasy inherent to every chuuba but that's also kind of played down with how they're currently presented.) This mostly kills off fics with non-horny ideas that aren't specifically made for oshi reasons.
Two, they're still relatively new, so 'they're my oshi' -based fics will of course be rarer.
Three, regloss did kind of have a weirdly screwed over debut when it came to /here/ sentiment. As much as we're independent of the catalog we're still a /vt/ thread.

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>>74031472
Ririka has her april's fool persona for a posible fic idea

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>>74031472
>Kanade is unironically TOO retarded
idk Kanade and Aqua have a retard-off sounds great

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Is Polka cute enough to write a story on? I'm not so sure...

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>>74001208
You want to penetrate Hajime's vagina, but first you must penetrate the language barrier

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>>74032218
>Looks at the archive
Really gets the noggin a joggin

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>>74032218
I was gonna make a joke and say no but I think it would be wise not to invoke the wrath of both AA and HJ anon

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>>74032567
I dunno... i mean she seems cute but are we really sure she's cute enough to make a story about? Does this face and those ears really make for a cute story

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Is the anon writing that Lamy yakuza princess fic still here? any progress?

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>>74032712
This adorable fennec's adorable smile, ears, tail, everything about her, is a fountain of inspiration for cute. I'm getting inspired just looking at her and listening to her voice.

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>>74033724
that fennec... she sure is cute...

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>>74032712
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>>74033808
She certainly is... alright, you've convinced me. I'll buy that fennec.

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>>74032218
This fantastic fennec is fairly fetching to find a few folios for her. For your fancy: favor a fic where you fornicate a feisty fennec. Or a fluff feature in which you form a feverous fondness for this fair fennec.

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>>74035148
You won't be disappointed!

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>>74001208
(You) are known far and wide in Hololive High as a badass delinquent, destroyer of gangs and shadow leader of the school who even has the principal cowering behind his desk. In reality, you're just a normal guy who every yankee keeps trying to fight because you're tall, have resting bitchface, and know judo. The only one who knows the truth is your best friend, %male_chuuba% and your childhood friend, %female_chuuba%.

One day, a new girl transfers, Todoroki Hajime, a self-proclaimed bancho and badass with a baby voice who decides that she taking over this school by dethroning you. After giving you a thorough trouncing, she declares you her lieutenant and you find yourself drawn into the world of wacky delinquent hijinks as Hajime is more infamous than you thought. Part enforcer, part brother, part translator, can (You) navigate this new world you find yourself in and maybe figure out why Hajime keeps avoiding your eyes lately?

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>>74036065
So do you want to be a baddass boss? The intro of you is kinda conflicting since you're both an undisputed monster and just a dude who doesn't choose violence first. It could be a better slip into the role of Hajime's right hand / wrangler, if she shows up and straight up starts trashing the place and trying to throw smaller kids out of windows to assert dominance. You then just let her beat you enough to appease her, and she decides you'll be her aid in which you need to subtly steer her towards the path of least destruction.

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>>74036663
>So do you want to be a baddass boss? The intro of you is kinda conflicting since you're both an undisputed monster and just a dude who doesn't choose violence first.
Its a misunderstanding based on a rumor was my idea. Punks pick a fight because "you look badass" so you use defensive judo and the beaten-up punks further spread the rumor, causing the scenario to repeat. All you want is to have a normal highschool life, maybe even get a girlfriend. Think along the lines of Ryuji from Toradora before that anime quickly shoved that aspect of the plot under the rug.
You stick with Hajime because you're a peaceful dude who is worried about her.

The story can then go about rehabilitating Hajime/Hajime trying to be a normal girl because she catches feelings for you. Or turning the rumors into a self-fulfilling prophecy because you want to be strong enough to stand by her side. Or maybe both. Depends on how shounen you want it to be.

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>>74027517
Weird, I don't remember making this post.

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>>74037910
It sounded like you were going for a Ryuji-esc impression, but it was just a little unclear what your actual status was. I think if she is strong in her own right, it wouldn't make sense to worry about her, and you would likely want to distance yourself as much as possible from someone who actively seeks conflict.
Perhaps a better "forced" meeting is that she transfers with her own reputation that she feels she needs to uphold, but you when you cross paths by chance down by the city canal on your way home, she scoffs and welcomes the fight, saying something about it was only a matter of time before you came for her.
However the writer wants to play that scene is up to then, but it might be cute that the point gets across that neither one of them asked to be these unapproachable tough kids. Hajime has no idea how to be anything else, but she does want real friends, not lackeys, and you just want a normal life, so you join forces to somehow squash your own images. But you two hanging out only makes it worse at the start.

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>>74038743
> I think if she is strong in her own right, it wouldn't make sense to worry about her
What if you were just a huge moralfag? Have it so that his first thought after she beats your ass isn't "wtf this midget just thrashed me" its "This girl is going to get into a fight she cant win." You can even have that pay off later when Anon's intuition is correct and he has to come save the day.

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>>74037910
sex with jimmy

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>>74032685
Smart man.

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>>74039900
That route puts them on too much of unequal ground I feel like. He can have a strong moral compass, but I don't think playing the hero to have her learn a harsh lesson is the best this story can do.

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>Me spending over 2 hours trying to come up with made up lyrics
>Get 2 and half lines of it done.

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What do you find most erotic about Aki?

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>>74052110
The troublesome woman aura, just like Lamy.
Like, maybe you're on a business trip, and you get a taste of alien elf pussy. Have you seen how Aki fucking MOVES?
She'd ruin me, my wife, and what's left of my sex life after its peak.

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>>74052110
Mostly the way she can move herself like a professional. That kinda confidence and control can let her put the moves on a man like nothing you've ever experienced before. That muscle control is to die for.

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>>74001151
this bread is deceptively sweet and airy despite its dark color. pleasant initial bite but has a slight gunpowdery aftertaste.

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>>74052110
Her fat ass.

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>>74052315
her creating empires in VCR and ARK collabs because she carefully think every move is ripe for some evil hag sex

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>>74056106
How could an antagonistic Aki work? What would some of her selfish or evil aspirations be? Asking for a friend.

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>>74056388
it depends on the setting but since we are taking those kind of collabs in mind id say a very competitive business rival/loan shark that rides you like a carnival attraction after she closes a deal in front of you, or steals your sale after she fucked you into a near coma last night (she prepared alarms and scheduled stuff knowing you'd be dead).

In those games she loves to procure resources early on and does so in a very effective way to attract followers and then prances around the map strenghtening her gang, flexing and scamming people with big loans of course for the lolz and just being in control. She has talked about liking that feel of power and having so much "money" or resources to the point she can kickback and fuck around

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Make sure you survive this time, okay?

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>>74050727
I still consider that progress. Sometimes you just gotta have a good think.

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>>74063172
https://youtu.be/ygajdYnD8xQ?si=kh9LOXv8FJpBznph

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>>74001235
I really enjoyed this Episode, but I haven't read any others. I guess the start is the best place to start.

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I've got a crossover fic in the works and I'm wondering something. I don't really know how to properly introduce the other setting, because the crossover itself isn't really the story, the story just take place there so I don't know how much of the world I should explain just through the story and what I should write in the opening so they know going in. I don't want to put in none to start because I'd rather not just assume everybody knows the deal, like how there's no need to explain what a Vtuber is normally.

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>>74032218
What kind of cute, anon?

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>>74064740
why are you looking at me like that? I need to sun my nuts, every guy does.

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>>74064740
I thought AI was the future...

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>>74065228
Honestly, this is why we have beta readers. Write up a snippet or a couple scenes and pitch it around to some of the beta readers for opinions on if the fused setting is confusing or not.
Alternately, just post the snippet in thread then ask the question once we know more about what you're talking about.
This isn't really something where general advice can help. There's a world of difference in needed explanation between standard Japanese isekai world and autistic alternate timeline where Major historical event going different made the world funny.

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Bamf

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Is there any nice poetry in the archive?

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>>74070765
We have some but like the best poem in the archive is a joke poem about banging peko's mom.

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>>74065228
What >>74068101 said is something I can't endorse enough, but if you want to try and refine it a little more before doing any of that, maybe the crossover world itself doesn't really need to be explained? If you have a cast that is crossing over, the most you might want to do at the start is just establish that they are somewhere unfamiliar.

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>>74032973
Uh yeah, I’m still around, assuming you mean my yakuza brainrot fic. But no progress has been made on it and my other WIPs haven’t moved at all lately.

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>>74074385
>For the last fucking time, nasi kangkang is not on the menu

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>>74067125
I guess the kind that makes you smile because of how funny she is?
Silly me, Polka could never be cute and funny...

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>>74074720
I wouldn't mind seeing that. You could make it as (You) in the scenario is having a soul-crushingly depressing day (you could be at your absolute lowest) and your beautiful girlfriend (or wife) Polka does her absolute best to make you feel better. Hell, it doesn't even have to be lewd at all and just be cute and fluffy instead.

But I'm not certain (could be wrong though) anyone would want to write that. Wasn't what I just mentioned already done but it involved Watame instead?

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>>74074865
As if we could ever have enough fluff.

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Speaking of fluff. which vtuber's tail is the most ideal for hardcore mofu mofu action?

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>>74076198
You make a good point there, anon. I really hope someone does a fluffy Polka story for >>74032218 because I think we all need it.

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>>74076594
Polka's. Koyori's would come in second.

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>>74076594
Fuwawa probably has a very fluffy tail, given her name.

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>>74076836
I got a lot of fennec fluff on the way because I've been denied its full splendor for too long.

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>>74076594
1. Fuwawa
2. Polka
3. Risu
4. Koyori

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>>74077549
I apologize if I sound rude but I hope you don't disappoint us when you release it for our eyes, anon.

But do you want to know what I think you have in store when you posted that image? Polka telling anon a bedtime story because he has difficulty sleeping. And no he wouldn't be a child but a grown man but he genuinely loves listening to Polka's stories.

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>>74080154
*makes save state*

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>>74078158
I sure as hell won't be disappointed, I can definitely assure you of that.
>Spoiler
I may have bad news for you anon. While I do plan to have Polka do that at some point it's also part of HoloJourneys. So either good luck getting through the monster of a story I've already created so far, or power to you to say fuck me, and fuck all that. There will also be overdue talks of how Polka's specific brand of intimacy works, ear rubbing, tail brushing, mutual reassurance in one another and tasteful swimwear. Maybe Polka will get a tan? Who knows?

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>>74071141
You mean "Memoirs of Bunny Cunny", right?
I liked it a lot, so here's a rendition: https://vocaroo.com/18V8khA5Fcju

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>>74080609
AI is scary (and a jerk for doing that to Pekora)

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>>74080428
>HoloJourneys.
Why did you have to break my heart with that, anon? You know (I think I've said it multiple times on this thread) that I have difficulty reading stuff and behemoths like that would destroy my brain as well as my attention span.

>or power to you to say fuck me, and fuck all that.
I'll never say something like that because that would just be an insult to you and you've done nothing wrong. Would it be wrong to read that one chapter you've planned despite having problems reading and only wanting to see Polka fluff?

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>>74081076
I'm just an evil bastard like that I guess. But in all seriousness, it wouldn't be wrong just to read the Polka centric chapter. Hell some people probably did the same when Watame sex finally happened, I can't control how people want to read it, so it doesn't bother me. If you still get some enjoyment out of it, that's more than good enough for me.
You could also just get really lucky some day and I might get a wild inclination to write another oneshot with a focus on Polka at some point. It sure as fuck wouldn't happen any time soon due to where my head is at with current stuff, but maybe later this year. Maybe not. Who knows?

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>>74081076
I'm also not the only guy who adores this frisky frolicking fennec. You could get your wish for more Polka fluff at any time.

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>>74080154
Truly the Rance of vtuber fanfiction

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Training Towa

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>>74081624
>Hell some people probably did the same when Watame sex finally happened,
Not that I'm accusing you of lying or anything, but is such a thing possible? I really thought I was the only idiot here that skipped things and only read the chapters that have the juicy bits.

>If you still get some enjoyment out of it, that's more than good enough for me.
I cannot make any promises that I'll read it 100% because I've got so much unrelated shit (and tabs opened) that's on my mind to take care of first. But if I "do" read it (I'll even keep the thread you release the chapter on so I don't lose it), I'll at least do my best to read it even if it does hurt my head. I'll even attempt to review it even though the best I can say about stuff is something like "i really enjoy what you write and I hope you keep going". I envy people who can write severely long assed reviews about what they like.

>You could also just get really lucky some day and I might get a wild inclination to write another oneshot with a focus on Polka at some point.
It doesn't matter how long it takes for you to write it, anon. Release it when you are 100% ready to as at the end of the day, a rushed story isn't a good story, right?

>>74082439
When you say "frisky" (I'm probably using it wrong) there is one Polka story that my dick craves more of (but probably won't happen). And that story is "POLaltio".

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>>74085292
Like I said, I can't know how everyone chooses to read, and everyone has their own style and way of intaking and processing information. Whatever works for them is cool by me as long as they enjoy themselves.
If you do get around to reading what I make after I write it, I hope you enjoy it, but make sure to do things at your own comfortable pace. It's no good to force ourselves too hard sometimes, both with reading and writing.
And yes, I do mean FRISKY. Polka is a beautiful fennec woman who has needs.

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>>74085105
Putting your dick in Towa's lips and watching her salivate because She's not allowed to suck!

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>>74085105
Training her to do what?

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>>74085292
You're never the only one.

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>>74086933
training her to give you a kiss without totally spilling her spaghetti

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>>74086495
This sounds like a twist on the "Towa has your dick in her mouth all the time" prompt where Towa is punished by having her oral penetration perms revoked for a time.

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>>74086933
how to properly embrace her horny side

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>>74087725
Nah i want her to do cock worship.
I dont like that prompt and Towa is ripe for making a messy bottom that just wants to be fucked

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>>74086933
operate a forklift

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>>74086933
To cum through her portio

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>>74088751
>Bullying Towa's tummy so much she starts covering it
Dun wanna. Her navel is so sexy

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>>74088499
As the person who created the "Towa wants your dick in her mouth to help calm her / stop her smoking habit" do you think it'd be more interesting if it instead involved cock worship?

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>>74090778
Not really. Nothing against your prompt, i just dont find it interesting and kinda awkward to imagine.
But then again i love body worship so i might give it a shot if it includes that

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>>74091373
Oh, I wasn't offended or anything, anon. I was just curious because I genuinely have no clue what made me even think of "towa puts your dick in her mouth but she doesn't do anything lewd to you and just wants to calm her nerves / smoking habit".

I mean being serious, wouldn't it be near enough impossible for a cute girl to have your dick in her mouth but she doesn't do anything at all? I know for damn sure it would drive me insane because I would want to be sucked off and if she isn't doing it then it leaves me blue balled.

Sorry if I sounded passive aggressive when I typed that.

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>>74091612
Nah its alright,didnt think bad of your comment. I think the prompt in of itself is one of those where you just run it as it is if you want it out of the ground.
Elfs drinking jizz was a hot topic last thread and that is in a similar headspace of "who cares. Here, elfs drinking jizz" that you need.
In a sense it's like those people that sneak into places because they carry a ladder: just go forward with confidence and an excuse and you can go really far before someone questions you

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>>74089538
Or she starts presenting it to you unconsciously whenever you're near

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>>74001208
A fic set in the late 80's where Anon's life is just neverending stream of Yakuza 0 substories involving holos who in this timeline were born too early to join Hololive so they have to do something else.

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>>74094441
>You meet a rabbit at the local circuit who might be a little too into pocket cars, but on your pride and love for this hobby, you can't lose to her.

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>>74096858
It was probably the hardest I've ever laughed playing a video game when I saw the animation that plays when Kiryu loses in a pocket car race

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>>74097131
Kiryu's expressions, general interest in things he gets involved with, and his takeaways are something I think are top notch in what is supposed to be a crime drama. The man never does anything half-assed, and he fucking means it.

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>>74094441
I have a story on indefinite hold where a chuuba (Mio) who has fallen on hard times moves into the apartment next to yours. She realizes you're a shady type of character with lot's of connections to the underworld, so in her desperation to feed her daughter (Subaru), she decides to knock on your door one night and sell her body to you.
After a trial run, she looks distraught but still ask's if you could could commend her to a somewhat decent soapland downtown, which you scoff at, telling her she's too old to satisfy the clientele there.
Sensing the opportunity, you offer her an out as your personal comfort woman, where she takes care of your culinary and other needs and gets to keep the generous change.
It was supposed to evolve into an unconventional love story. Maybe I should pick it back up...

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>>74098740
>second spoiler
Now that's a plot twist.

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>>74101380
damn. Time to read Our Cures again, I guess...

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>>74094441
>Anon as The Bear of Shinjuku, named for his muscular build. Rising superstar of the Nanashi Clan
>Marine as the Mamasan of the hostess club: Houhou's Crew
>Aqua as the orphan you two adopt.

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>>74103182
wait a second...this is just holomoms!

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>>74103644
Sorta. The Marine in Holomoms is a hostess herself, not the madame.

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>>74103182
The Bear of Shinjuku makes it sound like Anon is some legendary figure in Tokyo's gay scene. Make it at least the Tiger of Nanashi or the Unicorn of Nanashi.

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>>74102739
Always a good idea!

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>>74104099
yeah it was a joke. i like the holomoms version better but this version is nice
>>74104144
Why not the Oni? Marine already is the "red oni" archetype with her being passionate, while Anon can be the blue oni, as in the more subdued one

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Actually make Anon be a yakuza for the Nakiri clan. Ayame would be a perfect yakuza clan princess.
t. >>74104144

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Will he be a permavirgin like kiryu or the exact opposite: he gets roped into all these situatiions because he cant stop himself from fucking troublesome woman

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>>74104524
We do need more badass Ayame (especially in a non-fantasy context)

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>>74104494
Well, what about the Serpent of Nakiri? Also give him a Jörmungandr tattoo. Vikings were pirates, Marine is a (cosplay) pirate.

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>>74104877
>Anon crashes through a window covered with a blanket to not cut himself
>rolls in the floor, people turn around confused on why this naked man is running
>oh shit! his tattoed back! he is with the yakuza!
>Like clockwork, some goons emerge and start shooting at him. he runs for his life
>"CATCH THAT LIYING PIECE OF SHIT! I WANT HIM DEAD BY TOMORROW!"
>oh god he angered The Ice queen of the Yukihana syndicate.
>Although...why is she also half naked and screaming from the broken window?

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>>74105227
If he's the serpent, wouldnt it be better to take a page of that old discussion about anon managing the yakuza brothel and making him a decent fighter that is great at bullshitting his way out of stuff?
Like he can deal with street level trash, but yakuza characters would clean the floor with him

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>>74105151
We also need more badass Ayame IN a fantasy context.

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>>74106027
>In Norse mythology, Jörmungandr also known as the Midgard Serpent or World Serpent is an unfathomably large sea serpent
The name is actually a reference to the size of his dick

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>>74106156
>"Hey man i couldnt think of anything cool!"

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>>74105584
>YOU SAID YOU'D LET ME STACK DONUTS ON IT!

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>>74106270
>Back in the day when Anon was a rookie in the Nakiri clan
>"Hahahaha, you're still a virgin, Anon? Alright, I'll have some women come over."
>"Holy shit Anon, that thing is fucking gigantic. Take it easy. I don't wanna spend my night digging a hole in the mountains for some hooker."

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>>74104144
I picked a bear because Marine likes bears and bears can be cool! If you're first thought when you hear "The Bear" is gay clubs that sounds like a you problem

>>74104494
I like this version more because it gives her more agency.

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>>74107170
Marine likes bears because she's a "coomer"

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>>74107170
Bear is a super famous slang word though, everyone knows it, and Shinjuku Ni-chome is THE gay district in Tokyo.

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>>74001208
Kanata refuses to let you come in her vagina, so you have to use her mouth or ass

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>>74107226
>>74107749
why not
>Anon picks bear because its intimidating and cool
>everyone thinks he's gay/makes fun of his moniker
>Marine doesnt say anything because she thinks its funny
>and Aqua also thinks its cool

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>>74108261
I don't mind the Bear so much but combining it together with Shinjuku ruins it for me. The Bear of [Clan name] would still be fine. The Bruin is a possibility too. Oh, and you don't nickname yourself. Truly legendary figures are given a nickname by the people.

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>>74107749
> Shinjuku Ni-chome is THE gay district in Tokyo.
Alright well, you got me there.

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>>74108723
I think it'd be funny if anon tried to come up with a name for himself and insists everyone should call him that but everyone else just agrees to call him something entirely different.

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>>74105151
>>74106151
I'll write an Ayame fic set in Edo period with light fantasy elements when I've rewatched and re-read my favorite anime and manga that'll work as a reference.

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>>74110117
Nice, I'm sure I'll have a good time reading that when the time comes. Have fun and enjoy your revisiting of your favorite stuff for inspiration.

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>>74106027
>yakuza brothe
Pretty sure the old idea was Yakuza hostess club.
I don't remember the exact discussion but I'm pretty sure it came to that since it was easier to write comedically and makes it easier (and more tasteful) to justify why *insert holo* is there as a hostess.

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>>74110471
Thanks m8. I'll ganbarimasu my best.

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>>74102191
Man, I don't know what it is about Kanata but she drives me wild.

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>>74114193
It's that double whammy of wanting to corrupt an angel and a lesbian.

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>>74114193
She's cute and pretty, and would make good expressions during sex

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>>74113290
>this makes femnovellites cream themselves

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>>74107749
That would be so fucking hilarious
>Anon thinks of a cool name
>"The Bear of Shinjuku!"
>He starts kicking ass
>Because of his nickname, rumors start spreading that he fucks asses too
>His enemies think he's gay, but they're doubly terrified of getting fucked in the ass if he ever beats them
>Anon furiously denies the allegations
>One scene involves Anon and a particularly tough enemy beating each other up until they're buck naked
>Marine and/or Aqua arrive at the right time
>"No, I can explain!" Anon cries as he has this burly Japanese man in a naked bear hug
>Marine is visibly disgusted and depressed.

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>>74117601
>Marine is visibly disgusted
*EXTREMELY LOUD INCORRECT BUZZER*

It plays off like
>Anon clashes with the guy, fist against fist
>Aqua and Marine arrive, aqua can follow the battle thanks to her tard senses
>She sees the men clashing and thinks to herself that this is a battle against men putting their life on the line
>Enemy keeps saying shit like "GOOD JOB BEAR, BUT YOU CANNOT DEFEAT THE OTTER OF THE SAKAMATA CLAN"
>Aqua then snaps and looks at her mother, worried that she's gonna cry if she sees her father struggle this much against this violent thug
>Marine is just looking with a stoic expression. Aqua slaps herself mentally for doubting
>
>Marine has a spongebob like gag in her brain where thousands of marine are gearing for war.
>One faction loves seeing two burly men, a bear and an otter, clashing naked, with their sweaty bodies
>Another is exploring this weird feeling of what if anon is actually gay and he's being stolen from her...is this NTR? why does this work?
>A third faction wants to get angry at him for engaging in this homoerotic shit
>and in the middle, surrounded, its the common sense, criying for help

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>>74118225
Oh lol right it has to be a little bit more subtle than just being disgusted
Part of her would actually like it

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>>74118225
how funny would it be if all the girls in Marine's cabaret slowly became fujoshi over the course of the story due to bear related shenanigans.

>"So Anon! doing some..heheh..fighting lately?"
>"Oh yeah plenty. Took some guys in Shinjuku, like 5...all by myself too"
>"Glup...ALL by yourself? No help?"
>"yeah i just cant help it yknow? i see more than 3 and i get excited... 5 is a good number because you feel like every part of you is being used"
>"R-Really? And you can go higher than five?"
>"Me? pfft, Five is where it gets fun! I say line em up and let everyone have a turn!"
>The girl excuses herself to the toilet while two others furiously write and illustrate it

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>>74001171
Chained Promises: Part 1

Tags: Flare, Noel, Polka, Miko, Suisei, Slavery, NSFW

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQo3RtjDLKhM9l72aOqhrzuQ7lofzVTwwPvCJPRBb4fXqkkz-O0_nWyPhyY6BEylSmxGIyMuqCSds-P/pub

Here is the delivery.
This one was tough because I don't really read a lot of fantasy or enjoy the concept of slavery. Honestly I didn't even understand what the guy who asked me for this wanted. But I cobbled together something that seems to me to be a vaguely interesting story.

>Wasn't this supposed to be a oneshot?
A lot of things were supposed to be a lot of things. This part just happened to be nearly 5k words and ended well.
>Part 2?
If people care. I already wrote a couple good scenes, but it's nowhere near done.
>You suck at naming things.
Correct

As always, any feedback would be nice.

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>>74118225
>The three of them sit at the bar in Marine's club, closed for "maintenance"
>"You know Anon, maybe you should consider a new nickname. Why not talk to Coco? One utterance from her and it'll be the talk of the town." Marine says.
>Anon scratches his head embarrassed. "Yeah... maybe you're right."
>Aqua looks up from her coloring book, "Y-you're gonna change it?! But bears are cool!"
>She reaches for her randorosu and pulls out a book on bears.
>"T-they're super big! and tall! And nothing else in the forest can beat them! Just like Papa! They even fight tigers! A-a-and-"
>Anon gives Marine a troubled stare.
>"Anon. No."
>He closes his eyes and nods, accepting his fate.
Marine rolls her eyes, "I said no! That's it, I'm calling Coco."

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>>74118225
>The three of them sit at the bar in Marine's club, closed for "maintenance"
>"You know Anon, maybe you should consider a new nickname. Why not talk to Coco? One utterance from her and it'll be the talk of the town." Marine says.
>Anon scratches his head embarrassed. "Yeah... maybe you're right."
>Aqua looks up from her coloring book, "Y-you're gonna change it?! But bears are cool!"
>She reaches for her randorosu and pulls out a book on bears.
>"T-they're super big! and tall! And nothing else in the forest can beat them! Just like Papa! They even fight tigers! A-a-and-"
>Anon gives Marine a troubled stare.
>"Anon. No."
>He closes his eyes and nods, accepting his fate.
>Marine rolls her eyes, "I said no! That's it, I'm calling Coco."

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>>74001208
You play into Marine's dirty talk fetish, but it gets progressively more awkwards.
>Fucking Marine and slapping her ass
>Ah, I wanna have sex on the beach...
>Oh... You want the others to see us fuck?
>Yeah...
>That turns you on?
>Mhm...! And then... someone would record it...
>Ah, fuck, yeah...
>And then I'd get put on the internet...!
>You want everyone to see you get fucked? Like the little whore you-?
>Yeah, and then my parents would see the video and disown me
>You thrusting stops, and your dick sighs and goes limp

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>>74119359
I liked it quite a lot, its a fun world to try and pierce together and i like that you didnt pull punches without dipping into edgyness. I think you need to slow the pace a bit, since its a bit breakneck how it will just jump from scene to scene. Maybe paint the world a bit more.
I also liked the magician thing. Good thinking there
Id be interested in reading more of this, so keep ait it
>I suck at naming things
Not really. A bad name would be like "Slavetopia" and "Freedomland" or some dumb shit

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>>74121326
I live in the capital of Slavetopid: Rape City

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>>74122478
Dont doxx yourself Rance

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>>74122478
Slavetopid: Rape City sounds like a XXX TTRPG from the 90's that never took off

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>>74123192
playing slavetopid: Rape city with some chuubas to try and get the mood for a three/foursome but everyone is triying their best to try and play the shitty kusoge with retarded rules

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>>74105151
In my FE mod, Yammers is an urban legend nicknamed the Giggling Menace. Witnesses can hear a giggle as she cuts down those inadequate enough to face her.

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>>74119359
Hey I just got finished reading that! I liked the light touches of world building you did and the prose was easy on the eyes. You approached a darker tone and subject matter and made it pretty easy to digest. Thanks for the grub.

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>>74123371
>"I decide to rape Lamy!"
>"Do you have three struggle cards? if so throw 3d6 and then divide your CON by your CHARM"
>"Its huuuh...29?"
>"Well that's a failure. Do you have any lust counter?"
>"YEah i have one"
>"Okay. Roll your 1D6 and add your strenght"
>"I also wish to activate balls full of cum"
>"Very well. Add two cum counters and then Lamy has to also roll"
>Everyone sighs

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>>74001171
Reposting for that Anon without the image lol

"Chained Promises: Part 1

Tags: Flare, Noel, Polka, Miko, Suisei, Slavery, NSFW

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQo3RtjDLKhM9l72aOqhrzuQ7lofzVTwwPvCJPRBb4fXqkkz-O0_nWyPhyY6BEylSmxGIyMuqCSds-P/pub

Here is the delivery.
This one was tough because I don't really read a lot of fantasy or enjoy the concept of slavery. Honestly I didn't even understand what the guy who asked me for this wanted. But I cobbled together something that seems to me to be a vaguely interesting story.

>Wasn't this supposed to be a oneshot?
A lot of things were supposed to be a lot of things. This part just happened to be nearly 5k words and ended well.
>Part 2?
If people care. I already wrote a couple good scenes, but it's nowhere near done.
>You suck at naming things.
Correct

As always, any feedback would be nice."

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>>74115110
Not for me. Kanata can be pretty pervy when she wants to be, and there's better lesbo correction in Hololive.

>>74115499
I agree with that. Kanata strikes me as the type who cant hide how good shes feeling.

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>>74121271
>you thrusting stops

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>>74125001
I imagine Kanata as the type to make those loud moans that hentai asmrs tend to have and thats pretty hot.

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>>74127787
>A member of Holo stays the night at Kanata's place and can't look her in the eyes the next morning

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>>74118225
The Mad Otter of Sakamata Clan? It's me

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>>74001208
helping moona shed some extra pounds with sex

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>>74126157

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>>74129081
Which one of Kanata's friends would be the most embarrassed hearing her fucking her boyfriend all night? Who would be the most annoyed?

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Survive

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>>74134060
>most embarrassed
Marine, she assumed didn't have it in her to be so bold

>Most annoyed
Coco, she didn't want her to have it in her

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>>74137161
>Coco
All she wants is a good night sleep, that or for Kanata to start wearing a gag

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>>74119359
>>74124497
This was a surprisingly engaging fic, like I expected 5k words of "training" with rotors, vibrators, and whips from the posted image. So it's kind of surprising that this reads like the start of a lowish fantasy adventure story about going through dark age not!europe.
I like it enough that I'd read more, not really sure what kind of plot you'd have to continue this but your prose is interesting enough that I'd give a continuation a shot.

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>>74137161
>Marine stumbles into the kitchen where Kanata is sitting drinking some tea
>"Oh Marine, good morning. Did you sleep well?" Kanata asks
>Marine looks away and blushes, "I-I had some trouble at first but once I... relaxed... I managed to fall asleep."
>"Oh that's good!" Kanata says, "I slept pretty great myself."
>"Y-yeah I bet," Marine mutters, she looks around the kitchen, "Wheres is Mr. Boyfriend? It's already noon."
>"Ah. He had a pretty stressful day at work yesterday so I'm letting him sleep in," Kanata says
>"Thats certainly what it sounded like- I mean, I could tell, f-from this voice you know?
>Kanata tilts her head, confused.

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>A solid chunk of spitballing and funny greentexts because one Anon elucidated the thread on Tokyo's gay scene
You guys are alright sometimes.

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Keep fighting.

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>>74140983
Now there's just the matter of writing the tale of the "Bear of Shinjuku"...

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>>74124497
I don't fully know what I wanted myself, it was just a spontaneous idea....probably born out of reading a lot about ancient Rome and knights, and an interest in Shiraken.
But I really love what you did with it! Even without interacting with the girls much in this part. Feels like the second part has even more potential by exploring the characters more.
And don't worry about the names, your worldbuilding worked well. Lotr showed the great merits of language-based worldbuilding, but as long as you bother to have distinct names that's good enough.

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>>74110117
That sounds great! Ayame's magic swords are so interesting but barely ever relevant.

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>>74140983
Thank you Asobi Asobase

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>Thread talks about 80's yakuza
>polka gets this outfit
yagoo himself reads fanfics and he can bend time

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>>74148480
that is fucking ugly, especially the sunglasses

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>>74148572
if you were just a tad gayer we could make you debut in holostars

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>>74148655
It's the only half-decent outfit Polka has.

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>>74148480
I like this one, but Polka's default outfit has never been surpassed. It just fits her detailed eyes, colorful hair and personality so well.

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>>74148973
polka's default outfit is her best by far and i will throw hands if you think otherwise

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>>74001208
When drinking a half drunk Botan admits to Lamy that she's running out of time to have a child and is starting to get desperate.
The Elf did have something from Koyori to help deal with that but would she be willing to spike her friend's drink to get Botan into heat and take advantage of her?
After all there's plenty of elf magic about becoming a futanari, and one for becoming a fertile one.
So will Lamy just drug and fuck her friend and maybe give her the baby she desires so much?

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>>74148484
Hey, who's controlling the other cursor?

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>>74052110
The gap between her really sweet and reserved regular demeanor and how she can turn into a balls-draining dommy mommy with the flip of a switch. It feels extra perverted somehow, like you're getting serviced by your local nun or charity worker. The belly dancing and ASMR skills are the cherry on top. Would bust in seconds to her honey sweet earlicking handjob while she talks about cucking me sorry I couldn't resist

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>>74150461
All me multi-mouse drifting

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>>74150516
The aki cuck thing is something where I can kind of understand it in an erotica fantasy kind of way but I genuinely can't see it from a storytelling pov.

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Anyone with Bijou ideas?

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>>74151595
You're a 19th century British explorer looking for treasures in exotic lands but the jewel you find isn't what you expected

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>>74151595
This is an old idea but I still think there's a cute fic here >>55511182 >>55511685
about biboo desperately trying to get you to fuck her.

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>>74144548
Not in my FE world. She comes with her Rasetsu which tears through physical defense and is capable of lethal strokes.

Tho...it'd be kinda cheating if she had two prfs while the rest get just the one

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>>74148655
Keep Holostars outta this

>>74148480
Eh, this is more Elvis-y imo

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>>74151860
Shouldn't her twin swords count as one weapon mechanically if she can use both of them at the same time?

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>>74151797
Would Luna be her best friend in this scenario since she also has difficulty trying to get people to fuck her?

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>>74153063
They'd be part of an alliance of cute women desperately wanting to be taken seriously.

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>>74153300
>And wear this sexy underwear and you'll wow them, nanora

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>>74152152
Too long for the engine even if I narrowfont it. Also, I think those two do different things.

Iirc, what I got is the Rasetsu, the red one.

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>>74001208
rough anal sex with Fauna, who is clearly inexperienced and getting her brain rocked, until she cant walk straight the day after

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>>74001208
All fics in the archive are Anon's past lives. Anon meets a powerful magician who makes Anon remember all of them. Everyday in school every girl he sees unleashes a tidal wave of memories within Anon.

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>>74157852
Now THAT is a meta fic

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>>74157852
>all the orgasms hitting all at once
that anon is blowing up like a sperm grenade

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>>74157852
>Anon meets with Fubuki
>Remembers how he's loved her, how he's hated her, how he's raped her, been raped by her, cheated on her, gotten cheated on, killed her, been murdered by her

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>>74155571
You know ever since I discovered HeroHeroTom, I really, really want to see some fat chuubas. I just can do that with Fauna because began and all, and those don't look like vegan fried chicke wraps.

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>>74159193
God fucking dammit
>can't*
>vegan*
>chicken*

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>>74159193
>>74159699
Meat substitutes look pretty much like the real thing these days and have the calories to match, so that's fine.

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>>74160820
>Vegetable meat has come far enough that Fauna can finally get a read on what she's been missing her whole life
>gets addicted to it and plumps up eating nothing but veggie straws and fake chicken

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>>74001208
You flirt with Flare, who doesn’t get it. You die, and 79 elven years later she realizes you liked her

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>>74153063
Can't they just do it with each other

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>>74162294
Better:
>Vegetable meat has come far enough that Fauna can finally get a read on what she's been missing her whole life but still doesn't hold a candle to real meat - only about 70% of the way there
>Gets addicted to it and plumps up eating nothing but veggie straws and fake chicken
>So tantalized by that 30% she's allegedly missing out on that she can't help but snatch a burger from a cookout pile she's been drooling over all evening
>Most delicious thing that's ever graced her tongue. Fatty flavor melts away any lingering guilt in her mind
>180s into becoming comically carnivorous to the point she's loading up on BBQ while sneering at veggies like a redneck and coming to the conclusion it's "better to have some meat on your bones than starve"

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>>74159141
>how he's eaten her shit

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>>74159141
>killed her
Genuine question; but do we actually have a story that involves You directly killing Fubuki?

>>74163080
No because the joke is that there's been prompts where Luna's been trying to get fucked badly (or am I getting that wrong) but because she's too eager (and talks like a baby), people get put off by her advances.

Someone please correct if I'm wrong on this.

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>>74164485
There was that kind of prompt. There was also a weird "rapeworld" version of it where she wanted to get fucked by a rapist, but the rapists always stopped when they noticed she was into it.

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>>74164633
>There was also a weird "rapeworld" version of it where she wanted to get fucked by a rapist, but the rapists always stopped when they noticed she was into it.
Can you pretty please tell me what words I need to put in the search bar in the archives (4chan archives) so I can find it for myself? I'm kind of curious as this is the first I'm hearing of it.

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>>74164485
Yes. I forgot what it's called but the premise is that Fubuki acts like a fox eating your chickens so you wait until she comes back the next day and shoot her in the head.

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>>74164922
Oh, that's right! That Damn Fox I think it was called. Probably the funniest response I've ever gotten for my prompts

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>>74164838
See >>33695936

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>>74164922
"That Damn Fox" and I honestly forgot all about that fic. Really a shame because I think the previous options would have been a better end for her (1 or 2 that is).

>>74165118
Can I admit something to you? I had instantly thought you were talking about Fubuki (don't know why because you never mentioned her at all) so when I saw the word "rapeworld", I had thought there was a new Fubuki prompt that I wasn't aware of where she WANTED to be raped badly but everyone just ignored her because she was so eager.

Really am sorry about that as I had no clue what I was even thinking. But I do remember that Luna prompt and its a shame that people just don't find Luna interesting to write it.

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>>74151595
We had one a few threads ago about her healing a menhera magnet by being normal: >>73636282

I remember posting about an idea of an awkward yet burgeoning high school romance with Biboo. The late bloomer kind where you both kinda like each other but don't know how to deal with those strange new emotions so you're kinda stumbling around each other.

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>>74151122
>but I genuinely can't see it from a storytelling pov
How so? Like, you don't think it fits her character? You don't see how someone could bring it up to their partner and get the play off the ground?

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>>74151122
Read Plastic Little

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>>74001208
Beating Korone on the head with a lead pipe.

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>>74169941
>hit her
>The pipe bends around Koro's head and she's completely fine

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>>74169941
Take this anon to the re-education camp

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>>74172882
God I wish Korone was a giantess that likes bullying me and crushing my skeleton between her molars

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>>74173478
I'd rather be eternally trapped in a giant Korone's sweaty boobs

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>>74173478
>>74174091

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>>74175502
Man Matsuri really exudes a special type of eroi~ for me

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>>74124497
Good prose, interesting setting, unusual and hot premise. I like it.

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>>74134060
>the most embarrassed hearing her fucking her boyfriend
I know what you mean, but oh god, I want to say Towa.

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>>74166231
I genuinely can't see Aki as the type of person that can 1) get into that sort of play while 2) sticking to it 3) keeping the sex with other men thing purely physical
>>74168302
That's the fetish writ large... Well written bare minimum, with a plot that doesn't really work as fapfuel unless you're already jacking it to something else.

Admittedly my problem here is less to do with making a hot smut fic and more for making the character work out... Which doesn't really matter for one-shots but given that the more 'cerebral' parts of the fetish seems more suited for long-form works rather than a one-shot. Which would inevitably bring out questions of why does she do it, why does she keep doing it, and why does she stay with him?

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>>74176409
The cute, yet menhera type is classic

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>>74177548
>I genuinely can't see Aki as the type of person that can 1) get into that sort of play while 2) sticking to it 3) keeping the sex with other men thing purely physical
NTA but I think that's due to your own hangups because I can absolutely see someone being able to view one-night stands and sex with strangers as glorified masturbation.

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>>74171236
>Falls off a cliff
>She leaves an exaggerated dog eared hole on the ground, covered in dirt but otherwise unharmed
>Caught in explosion
>Completely fine, just covered in soot
>Every injury she gets results in some sort of cartoon logic injury
>Any other character injury is treated normal
>No explanation is ever given for Korone being different

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>>74177724
>Stick a shotgun to Korone's mouth and shoot
>Her cheeks inflate, spits the bullets back at you with the same strenght as the trigger, splattering your brains over the wall.

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>>74177705
Not really this is something in specific rather than general. I can see that kind of casual sex and intimate netorase happening to other character but Akirose, the character, doesn't really feel like that kind of person. It feels like the type of character departure that needs build up in order to feel right and not OOC.
It's like my hangup with Suisei, I can see her being turned/trained into a turbo slut but her starting off as one just feels 'off'. (In a storytelling sense, I can accept it in a pure mindless smut sense.)

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>>74177548
That's funny you think that because a decent portion of what attracts me to Aki in the first place is that I think she's a particularly good match for this kind of thing out of the whole Hololive roster. Not in the sense that I think she's already into it (barely any of them are liable to be) but in that she seems one of the most likely to indulge a partner's /d/-tier fetish regardless of her initial gut reaction to it. She's thus far displayed very high tolerance for ecchi situations on par with more overt coombrains like Senchou and Festival, and she has a well-documented enjoyment of seeing her partner lose themselves in pleasure to the point of actively encouraging them to indulge more deeply. Actually her having not much history with NTR in particular I'd say makes her a better candidate even for lighthearted play because she'd be less likely than others to take things too far with the bull(s) and/or fail to respect the cuck's boundaries. Sweet, intimate, very horny, switch tendencies, all the boxes are checked.

You're right about this kind of thing not really being suited for oneshot length though. That's a frequent problem fans of it experience when searching for content, creators generally not being willing to go the full mile on exposition to make all the subsequent stuff hit properly. Even the most basic type of narrative shell, if it wants to make no compromises on quality, involves at minimum 3-4 complete scenes.

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Not yet

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>>74096077
cute feet

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>>74179285
Pekora/Marine and Noel/Flare double date in a cinema where Lucia sells the popcorn and drinks

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>>74182568
Who's Lucia?

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>>74182596
The green-haired necromancer, except the Japanese turned her name into Rushia because they can't into English.

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>>74182733
Oh, that's what I thought.

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Fine baker, your finest Nene flavored bread please.

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>>74183435
sure alright

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>>74184519
Baked. Migrate when ready.

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>>74151595
Anon sells parts of her body on the black market for massive profit