/wg/ - Writing General - Onyan Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>73728229 (where we talked about... fighting Nene, beating up Bae, just ryona in general plus evil women)
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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Story recap!
There were 3 stories posted last thread.

The Whale >>73833822
Tags: NSFW, Architecture, Reine

Sleep Tight Moco-chan >>73852603
Tags: NSFW, Fuwawa, Mococo, Incest

Heated Negotiations >>73899561
Tags: Blackmail, Mori calliope

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>>73922089
>Laplus has another shackle, around her small cock
>it would grow massive once the shackle comes off

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>>73923282
this bread is a tad watery with a bit of a citrusy-soapy after taste...almost like it had been dropped in a mop bucket and hastily served

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>>73923725
It might have been dropped into a mop bucket by an incompetent maid.

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>>73923725
It also has her pubic hair

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>>73923821
ah I see...
>takes another bite

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>>73923725
No es agua, es aqua.

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My daughter!

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>>73923317
Captain Ahab hunting an elusive "white whale" but it turns out that's highly architecturized Fauna just chilling and slacking away from her nature duties, going on a rant about how going on land was a mistake.

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>>73923317
Any chuuba, but the story is the most 90s thing ever. I'm talking Surf Ninjas-tier 90s, The Karate Kid-tier 90s, Casper-tier 90s, The X Files-tier 90s, whatever

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>>73925235
Hello father in law

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>>73923317
All the chuubas with pointy ears (elfs or adjacents) compete over who can drink the most cum. Throwing up is ground for discualification but burping and farting is allowed ( in case they need to make some space)

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>>73926174
Wouldn't that be quite a lot of them?

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>>73926174
Aki > Coco > Lamy > Choco > Laplus > Ina > Flare > IRyS

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>>73926574
the more the merrier. also you can pick one or two and focus while the others get knocked out
>>73926623
>Flare
First to go. Maybe downs one pint and burps before tapping out and saying this is dumb elf corrected offscreen for being a killjoy
>Ina
Makes an honest attempt, but the amount of protein doesn't sit well with her stomach and she taps out
>Choco
A crowd favorite due to the idea of being a succubus. She actually isnt (just a pointy ear slut) and gets decently far before it doesnt sit well with her stomach and she has to run to the WC
>Irys
Actually a half succubus. She didnt understand the rules and for a while thinks this is a degustation. She drinks a lot but the "flavours" of the essence end up mixing too much and she hurls
>Laplus
Inititally discouraged for the cum being bitter and salty, someone in the audience taunts her and she takes it personal to try and win this stuff. Awakens a lot of lolicons in the public as she struggless and gets really far, but just doesnt have the volume to compete
>Coco
Similar situation where her pride doesnt let her tap out despite how much she doesnt want to be here, so she keeps chugging. Pride in tatters after so much farting and getting third place
>Akirose and Lamy
Chugging like maniacs. It takes a while for them to realize its semen and not alcohol. They keep going for a while with Lamy tapping out and Akiroze licking her lips as she finishes her last one

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>>73927356
Fun ideas, but couldn't they drink it more directly from the tap?

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>>73928350
>but couldn't they drink it more directly from the tap?

How do you solve the refactory period?

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>>73928510
A lot of taps

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>>73928523
Oh. I honestly thought the "straight from the tap" meant that you were literally taking it from the mans dick.

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>>73928601
I did mean that. Just have a lot of guys ready to supply them!

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>>73928627
>Just have a lot of guys ready to supply them!

As in they cum as many times as they can into the source that's connected to the tap and the girls drink it from there?

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>>73928700
I mean, you can do it that way. But I was always using tap as a euphemism for dick.

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>>73928350
Sure why not.
Can even have a peanuts gallery of guys commenting
>Laplus is awakening lolicons left and right
>The guys sucked by Choco are in heaven
>the guys sucked by Irys are complaining she has no fucking idea how to suck a cock but she's still somehow a jizz wizard
>Flare is getting throatfucked
>someone complains about Ina's smell and other tells him he's a faggot

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>>73928350
>>73927356
If there is already a big audience they may as well suck off the audience for the cum

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>>73928721
Oh. Now I understand what you mean by a lot of taps, anon. I was thinking you meant actual taps that release water when you turn it on but you actually meant the male dick.

I feel stupid now. Yeah I think that idea would work but wouldn't the girls need like a LOT of men in order to hold the cum drinking contest?

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>>73928829
that goes against the spirit of elfchugging. Its an ancient and venerated sport and it does NOT need the current day politics

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>>73928829
Yeah but you'd also be writing like 48 dudes getting sucked. them chugging pre-extracted cum or having the guys filling the glasses offscreen kind of sidesteps that and allows the reader and writer to reach a middle point inbetween cum drinking and dick sucking.

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>>73928921
They would need many, but if they each invite their fanbase it'll be enough for sure.
>>73929136
Having it be the audience's recently-extracted cum would be a good middle ground, I guess. You could even have a kind of ultimate goal, of managing to drink all that the audience can provide that day.

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>>73926174
I like this prompt a lot. The main difficulty in writing it would be juggling all the different contestants at once. I'll have to think about this.
There's also the question of the context for the contest. Is it a traditional event for the town? Are they competing for a prize?

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>>73929231
I think whoever likes the prompt and decides to write it should go with the "fanbase getting invited to a competition and get their dick sucked bone dry" as I think it'd be really, really interesting.

Beats my idea that they use their magic and make it so that the guy they're sucking off cums over and over and over as their refactory period has been shut down.

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>>73929231
could also factor in the competition itself
>Laplus drinks her first glass/pint/whatever
>The second one she gets is way more thick
>The third one is steaming and way too thick because more and more people are getting overestimulated by her
>>73929327
I think this one needs some good ol suspension of disbelief. Write it as its a fundraiser or a special stream. Risu's NNN was discussed last thread and that is enough IMO.
Acknowledge its happening but dont go too much into the details because we are here to see elfs suck dick and drink cum

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>/wg/ discussing about making elfs drink cum

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My wife and stepdaughter
>>73925235
What a coincidence that Aqua's biological dad posts here too.

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>>73930085
After all this thread is, according to international reviewers, on the forefront of western literature.

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>>73923317
Aqua figuring out that you and Marine adopted her and confronting you both.(She looks nothing like you two and her siblings)

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>>73931396
This could make for a really nice drama and wholesome family story. I imagine Marine would be caught off guard by her little dependent girl suddenly being confused and hurt over how Marine isn't her real mom, and you are unsure how to really handle it yourself so all you do is try to assure Aqua that she is your little onion girl.
Aqua could then run away on an impulse and try to search for her real parents, but she just ends up gravitating towards all the comfort places she knows. Places you and Marine would take her to make fond memories.

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>>73931396
>>73931956
Marine's husband should of course be a big muscular guy (which is Marine's stated ideal IIRC) who loves banter and dirty jokes (which is a reflection of her chat). It's fun to imagine this Ichimi!Anon awkwardly trying to connect with his gamer daughter by taking her to the gym or doing outdoors stuff with her.
>They all go together on a family camping trip
>"I wish I were home playing Apex..."

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>>73933460
That could open up a fun bonding moment where Aqua accuses you of not being her dad because you're so different from her, and that you could never understand her.
>Cue coming into her room while she cries carrying a small shoebox and old 3-ring binder
>Sit down with her and show her a prized relic of your past, your TCG collection
>You were a huge card nerd back in the day, but the second you laid eyes on Marine while at a competitive event at an convention she had an art booth for, your life took a drastic change
>"Your mama...there was no way she would have looked twice at a guy like me, so I changed how I did things a little. I started working out, eating better, applying myself more to work. My card playing took a nose dive, but that was alright, I was still good enough to compete just so I had the chance to find your mother again, and well, I think it's obvious how that turned out. Even after she said 'I do', I made sure to keep myself as peak as I could. I remember a certain someone enjoying the airplane rides I would give her atop my guns. I could still do that ya know. It's a nice day out."
"....Okay."

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>>73934241
I remember there being a lot people who got inspired to get fit after hearing about Marine's ideal type, so that sort of backstory would actually fit quite nicely.

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>>73934241
Wholesome.

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What if you only married Marine (Aqua's mother) after Aqua's dad died and you had to prove your worth by teaching Aqua about how boys work and how to handle them?

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>>73937936
Prove my worth to who? I'm already married to Marine, and becoming who Aqua sees as a father is a natural progression in this scenario.

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I prefer auntie Aqua. I'd have to restrain myself with daughter Aqua

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>>73938280
Not if she gets a shitty manipulative boyfriend that turns her against you

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>>73938436
That's as much on Marine to help handle as it is me, it's a team effort after all. Also we can't control every aspect of Aqua's life, especially her relationships. Shitty boyfriends are a dime a dozen, but a father who always shows up will never be outdone.
>>73938361
Do not try to fuck your daughter Aqua please. Do not even think it.

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>dying

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>>73938436
>>73938626
Personally I imagine Marine being much more strict about that matter than (You).

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>Nu-Anon wants to date Aqua
>Nu-Anon is too weak and skinny, Ichimi!Anon and Marine don't approve
And that's the beginning of a martial arts coming-of-age epic

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>>73941999
Let's add some of Aqua's SAO autism to the mix
>Ichimi!Anon tosses a sword down in front of Nu-Anon after his latest failed attempt to get him and Marine to accept him and that he would take care of Aqua
>The sword fucking makes an indent twice its height into the dirt
>"If you can learn how to wield that little toothpick, I'll give you a chance to prove your worth."
>At first Nu-Anon can't even pick it up off the ground, even when he's red in the face, but he refuses to quit
>Each day he comes back, trying to pick up the sword, Ichimi!Anon occasionally comes out on breaks to crack a beer and watch, having expected him to give up, but he keeps trying, Aqua also shows up to cheer him on with her cringey anime lines
>Eventually Nu-Anon can lift the sword, and begins to stumble around to maintain his balance
We can give Ichimi!Anon a cool pirate saber too and give Marine something to gush over.

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>>73926623
>>73927356
God what a succubus... need this auntie to get drunk and have her way with me...

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>>73942321
>SAO autism
>Nu-Anon accidentally isekais all four of them into the world of the video game he is playing

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We need more wholesome romances between a young man and his big tiddy older sister

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>>73943657
Why does she need to be his sister though?

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>>73943827
Well what would you prefer then?

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>>73944259
It can be any big tiddy girl that's older than you. Neighborhood girl, classmate, girl working a job in the mall you run into.

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>>73944497
I mean yeah but I really want to fuck my older big tiddy sister (in fanfiction form)

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>>73943827
Because it's the ultimate fusion of forbidden love and childhood friend

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>>73945817
Older sister that finds out you have a girlfriend, gets jealous, and tries to sabotage the relationship because she wants your full attention

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>>73945817
>>73946298
>>73946446
But in the appeal of the forbidden aspect of it, you're trading away the effort of having to earn that love since by default your sister loves you and has seen all that you are. There's no avenue of discovery and adventure that newer relationships get to enjoy to the fullest. Like in this case you're just likely bumbling around your life and suddenly your older sister wants you to sandwich your hotdog between her chest buns. Where's the pizazz? The flavor? Oh but anon then we don't get the aspect of
>Oh gee, maybe we shouldn't be doing this, ah nuts
You can have that apprehension and carefulness about moving too fast or too far in non-incestual relationships too.

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>>73946939
Doesn't necessarily start out that way, you might not have a close relationship, maybe you drift apart when she leaves to study at a university or something, only for her to realize what she was missing out on in your absence. Meanwhile you're moving on without her. You could also be estranged siblings meeting for the first time as adults, combining the learning about each other aspect with the taboo and anxiety of the relationship progressing far beyond that of just siblings.

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>>73923317
You want Lamy to become your girlfriend but all your plans get derailed either because of your weakness to alcohol or because Polka and Nene's trolling or both at the same time. The web of misunderstandings between you and Lamy get so messy that you have no idea how to unravel it anymore.

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>>73947392
Why don't you just write meeting a brand new person then? Since by that route you both are barely the people you once knew each other as and just have a shared past that only can really open itself up to
>"You used to like this thing ya know."
>"Remember how our cousins used to get/act?"

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>weakness to alcohol
This is a bit misleading way to phrase it, low alcohol tolerance is what I meant
t. >>73948167

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>>73942321
When I read this I instantly thought of Clannad where the mc wants Nagisa's father to hand over Nagisa to him but he won't do it unless he's able to hit a homerun.

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>>73946298
bangs Shiori started as a joke and somehow ended producing fantastic fanart about her what the fuck

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>>73923317
A fic about vtubing but it's written like it's Kaiji

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>>73946939
There is an appeal to love evolving so strongly it towers over taboo.

And also, I want to fuck my sister.

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Sister you didn't really know until you were older is a good compromise for me.

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>>73951974
Your heart and bond isn't what's towering over the taboo in your case, it's your dick. Your dick is coming first in this scenario, and yes, it means that in all ways in your head. I know your type. You would stick it in your sister and discard her like a crusty rag as soon as another blood relation struts your way.

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>>73952201
Suisei....it's not like that I swear.....

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>>73951974
>And also, I want to fuck my sister.
You unlocked an over twenty year old memory within me. A Russian guy I used to hang out with in school pointed at a girl and said: "That's my sister, isn't she fuckable?"

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incest does nothing for me unless its oneeshota, and it deals critical damage because fuck its hot

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>>73952405
Did you take the hint?

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>>73952576
Naaah, that's not what he was going for

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>>73952517
After reading ALS I can't picture anyone but Fubuki in something like this

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>>73952816
i can! i wrote an entire story about it!

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>>73950334
It makes her look aesthetic and mysterious.

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>>73923466
I sure hope futa Laplus isn't going to visit me tonight

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>>73923293
>>73575490
https://anonymousnovelite.github.io/TowerOfTattle/PartVI/episode10/index.html

Tower of Tattle Part VI Episode 10: A Stupid Game
Tags: Shiori Novella, FeMC, SFW, fantasy, mystery, nasu-inspired, childhood

Yeah, I feel you man. You know, when I was planning part vi i actually was heavily debating between what it is now, which is meet all the murder victims one by one, and victim intro, murder, victim intro, murder, where it would not be the actual timeline of original events but more just that they were jumping back and forth. I decided that would probably be too schizo, but part of me is wondering if that might've been the right move.

There's definitely an inherent tension between like... you know, once I got an inkling of a story idea I really liked, I realized it was only ever gonna be fractionally about Shiori, especially since she isn't even the main character. I know for a lot of these things people kinda go why not just write an original story then. I think that's fair. Idk if I'd care to do it. And I might be way off, but somehow I feel like that wouldn't work quite right either. I don't know for sure why, because for sure the amount of lore I was working with to make this story from the start was always scant since it started the month of their debut and I don't think that lore has been much expanded anyway. Maybe the best way to put it is that, I do think it's a legitimate criticism that this work is not an exceptional highlight of Shiori since so much of it really isn't about her. But despite that, the work is still dependent on the personality of Shiori the vtuber to tick. Like... I think the character Shiori is a reasonably good interpretation that matches her idiosyncrasies, and that interpretation is part of the fundamental vibe and rhythm, and legally distinct Shioreo would not quite work.

Well, anyway, despite the fact that i'm not watching chuubas much right now out of sheer busyness, shiori's still the closest thing i've got to an oshi so the most honest answer is just that legally distinct shioreo isn't super appealing to me. btw, now that i've written this post out, i realize a lot of this ramble isn't even a proper response to what you said and is more me talking to myself.

anyway anyway, part vi has a little bit further yet. i'm running close to the end of my backlog without adding much more cuz i'm working on my wn, but hopefully... maybe... when i get a rhythm going on that... it'll work out. part vi will continue to be a lot of these murder victims. part of me hopes that maybe by the end of part vi, and then later on the full story, these characters will have also endeared a few people. but i'm aware that may not be a super realistic expectation. so mostly just ty for soldiering through, and i hope one way or another the story shifts to really grabbing people's attention back

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>>73953485
i feel really stupid that i didn't respond to that post earlier because it's now completely deleted

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>>73953405
shiori will NEVER not be a dork

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>>73953571
I mean, that post is archived on archive sites. If you have 4chanX it loads on click, even.

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>>73953622
She's a cute, mysterious looking dork!

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>>73952943
Bless you for that story.

>>73953485
>part of me hopes that maybe by the end of part vi, and then later on the full story, these characters will have also endeared a few people.
I for one have really come to like Al.

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>>73952943
Kiaranee and her best friend inviting to play in their room...

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>>73953683
POV: Your aunt is coming to visit because of a spontaneous desire to

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>>73953683
Oh hey Fubuki it's, uh...... 2:26 am, what brings you to my place at this hour? Maybe next time you could knock instead of ripping off the doorknob?
And what's with that....look?

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>>73953842
*i rush to the microphone stand, fighting off waves of anons*
MATING SEASON, WE NEED MATING SEASON FICS YOU COWARDS! WE NEED TO GET DOMINATED BY GIRLS WITH PRIMAL STRENGHT AS THEY GO FERAL AAAAAAAH

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>>73952201
You dare to label me as as a ephemeral lover? That my love for my dearest older sister is nothing but sexual attraction? The days we've turned from bickering siblings to the only people we can rely on, the only people we have left, do you believe I take them for granted? Do you truly believe I'd change the lifetime I've spent forging a bond with this woman, solely to go and nut inside another? That there's another woman that I'd dedicate the rest of my life to? You insult me.
I love this big tiddy dork that I am blessed to call my older sister.

also I really want to fuck her.

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>>73952405
Holy shit, Bryan?

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>>73952816
You know? Same. The /ss/ bits walked a tighrope between obscenity and taboo, as well as that of a genuine bond, that I think it's the best /ss/ content this thread has produced. Not in terms of pure smut, per se, but in the shota 'experience'
>>73953835
A desire to what?
TO WHAT ANON?!

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>>73954475
A desire to visit, of course. I just didn't put the full stop at the end to make the grammatical construction ambiguous.

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>>73953925
>*i rush to the microphone stand, fighting off waves of anons*

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I am trying to write Veibae and capture her personality right, but all I end up typing is fart noises and descriptions of vomiting. What do I do?

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>>73954695
You're on the right track, but try adding more descriptions of her getting plowed (not by you) and cum dripping from her overstretched cooter.

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>>73954695
I dunno go ask the liggers

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>>73923317
Sana and Kronii bisexual threesome

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>>73923317
This image and the concept about spoiling them as their protector from last thread gave me an idea.
You're a hero who helped to save the world by fighting off invaders from hell, but all the violence and anger made you hate yourself and damaged your soul. As penance, you decide to move to a remote place and raise the only "enemies" who survived your rampage - two girls who were still babies when you turned them into orphans.

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Azkisurvive.png

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>>73955104
>Sana's indominable enthusiasm as she smothers your cock with her gigantic chocolate J-cups
>meanwhile Kronii straddles your face and makes you eat out her sweaty bush
>Sana's all encouragement and compliments, keeps mentioning how beeg you are
>Kronii tries her best to talk dirty but can't stop cringing at her own words

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>>73954053

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>>73957368
I will plap your older sister too, anon.

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Exist!

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>>73942321
>After some time, Nu-Anon is able to swing the sword around without teetering
>A wolfish grin spreads across Ichimi!Anon's face
"Marine, get my stuff," he says.
>Marine scuttles into their home and emerges a bit later with a small chest.
>Ichimi!Anon opens it up
>"Do you know what they used to call me?" he asks Nu-Anon
>In one swift motion, Ichimi!Anon pulls out and puts on a black trench coat, a golden heart skewered by two golden cutlasses emblazoned on the back
>"Before I met Marine, I was the Bear of Shinjuku, soon I became known as The King of Hearts."
>He turns around and somehow in that same coat-throwing motion he also took off his shirt?
>Marine shudders in joy, making Aqua look at her side-eyed.
>Ichimi!Anon then pulls out a cutlass in a black leather sheathe. He hooks it on his side and draws an intimidatingly sharp blade, a shining red ruby on the pommel
>"I gave your dad that sword," Marine leans and whispers to Aqua, a huge loving smile on her face.
"R-right..."
>Ichimi!Anon raises his hand, becoming Nu-Anon, "Lets go."
>Marine squeals and Aqua suppresses a gag at the sound.
>The two men fight, the sound of clashing steel echoing across the sky as it changes from day to night and back again
>The entire time Marine and Aqua watch, whenever Aqua's eyes wander over to her mother, she sees her squirming, her thighs rubbing and fidgeting against each other. Marine lifts a finger and bites it in anticipation. Aqua swears she sees hearts in her mom's eyes.
>Aqua looks away and tries to keep her gaze straight like her life depends on it, less she sees her mom acting like a schoolgirl.
>Eventually, Ichimi!Anon relents. "Alright, you pass." he nods.
>Ichimi!Anon turns towards Marine, "Did you hear that Marine? I think he's earned-"
>Marine stomps across the yard and yanks Ichimi!Anon down to her level by his collar, her face flushed and her breathing heavy.
>"Bedroom. NOW."
>Marine drags Ichimi!Anon into the bowels of their home, slamming the door behind her.
>"What... just happened?" Nu-Anon asks Aqua.
>Aqua grimaces, she looks down at her shoes and gives a strained hiss. "...I think I'm getting a new sibling..."
>"..."
>"..."
>"...Wanna go get some McDonalds then...?" Nu-Anon asks.
>"...Un. That sounds like a good idea... They'll be a while..."
"...We can go see a movie too."

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>>73942321
>After some time, Nu-Anon is able to swing the sword around without teetering
>A wolfish grin spreads across Ichimi!Anon's face
>"Marine, get my stuff," he says.
>Marine scuttles into their home and emerges a bit later with a small chest.
>Ichimi!Anon opens it up
>"Do you know what they used to call me?" he asks Nu-Anon
>In one swift motion, Ichimi!Anon pulls out and puts on a black trench coat, a golden heart skewered by two golden cutlasses emblazoned on the back
>"Before I met Marine, I was the Bear of Shinjuku, soon I became known as The King of Hearts."
>He turns around and somehow in that same coat-throwing motion he also took off his shirt?
>Marine shudders in joy, making Aqua look at her side-eyed.
>Ichimi!Anon then pulls out a cutlass in a black leather sheathe. He hooks it on his side and draws an intimidatingly sharp blade, a shining red ruby on the pommel
>"I gave your dad that sword," Marine leans and whispers to Aqua, a huge loving smile on her face.
>"R-right..."
>Ichimi!Anon raises his hand, becoming Nu-Anon, "Lets go."
>Marine squeals and Aqua suppresses a gag at the sound.
>The two men fight, the sound of clashing steel echoing across the sky as it changes from day to night and back again
>The entire time Marine and Aqua watch, whenever Aqua's eyes wander over to her mother, she sees her squirming, her thighs rubbing and fidgeting against each other. Marine lifts a finger and bites it in anticipation. Aqua swears she sees hearts in her mom's eyes.
>Aqua looks away and tries to keep her gaze straight like her life depends on it, less she sees her mom acting like a schoolgirl.
>Eventually, Ichimi!Anon relents. "Alright, you pass." he nods.
>Ichimi!Anon turns towards Marine, "Did you hear that Marine? I think he's earned-"
>Marine stomps across the yard and yanks Ichimi!Anon down to her level by his collar, her face flushed and her breathing heavy.
>"Bedroom. NOW."
>Marine drags Ichimi!Anon into the bowels of their home, slamming the door behind her.
>"What... just happened?" Nu-Anon asks Aqua.
>Aqua grimaces, she looks down at her shoes and gives a strained hiss. "...I think I'm getting a new sibling..."
>"..."
>"..."
>"...Wanna go get some McDonalds then...?" Nu-Anon asks.
>"...Un. That sounds like a good idea... They'll be a while..."
>"...We can go see a movie too."

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>>73961162
I need a pomu rimjob so much its unreal

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>>73961846
You thought you were getting an Aqua fic? Nope, this is Marine's fic now, and she's having her best life. With me.

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>>73962285

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>>73962473
I made this post

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>>73957161
>Sana eats out Kronii while you pound her from behind
>her fat chocolate ass jiggles every time you thrust
>Sana is making Kronii go weak in the knees
>Sana's orgasm wrings your out load while Kronii clutches Sana's head into her crotch
>Sana only basks in the afterglow for a moment before pushing Kronii onto her back
>Kronii only has a split-second before she sees Sana's ass descending onto her face
>You line up gently with Kronii's hole and gently ease yourself in
>Kronii is diligently cleaning Sana of your gift as the two of you appreciate her body
>her breasts are fully on display, glistening with sweat
>her mounds are groped and squeezed, her nipples pulled and tweaked as she inches closer to her orgasm

[Anonymous No.]

Have you ever thought about a 'what if' scenario for a fic you've read?

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>>73962285
normal size or fairy size?

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>230 BGs so far
Really hoping I can get this one under 2 gigs. I'm below that right now, but I still have a couple more scenes, as well as extras to add.

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>>73964792
Hey, that's my wife you're talking about there, guy.

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>>73966528
Fairy so she can crawl up my rectum and knewd on my prostate.

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>>73968283
Excuse me, buddy? I think you mean my wife.

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>>73968283
Sir, you are delusional. Marine is married to one person only and that's me.

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>>73969786
>>73969785
Fellas, this is a bit awkward, but your wife is my boss and only pays me in paizuri. I'm not letting you know because she's a cheater, but because my children are very hungry yet I can't stop.

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Ill be a self entitled motherfucker and ask for a wholesome startend hanging out, thanks

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>>73972588
How about the three going to an FYE? Suisei and Towa would be glued to the CDs while Aqua was trying to find some overpriced anime dvd boxes.

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>>73952943
Brat correction starring spicy chicken!

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>>73973883
>Akwa is jealous of switwi
>Twa is jealous of akuswi
>Swisway is jealous of akutwa
As long as all of them go out together, then it's fine. All three of them hated the thought of being the 3rd wheel, funny and wholesome

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>>73979210
>Psst, hey kid, wanna survive?

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>>73974302
Onee san bae sounds great

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>>73966342
For fics I've read? Not really. I respect the decisions the authors make here in terms of plot and character development, even if I don't necessarily like the execution. I have gotten a lot of what-ifs during feedback for my own fics though.

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>>73923317
Noel asks you to teach her how to tie a tie

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>>73967043
Feels like we need to post at least one digital image of a virtual idol Azki from Hololive with a caption "Survive" just for you
Or is there a Nijisanji EN idol that could play that role for you?
Keep it up!

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>>73982085
Aka her Murasaki character.

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>>73966342
Holofantasy
>What if Matsuri won and kidnapped Anon.
Presumably in this timeline Matsuri rolls a hard one and actually becomes an avatar of kuanke.
It's probably the story's biggest what if especially since it nearly came about from the actual chapter.
Especially since the thread kind of ran with a little greentext chain when AA decided to break the news of the dice rolls in thread.