/wg/ - Writing General - Rita Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>7313293

[Anonymous No.]

It's been a while since i asked

What is your favorite story or stories that have been made?
Any new favorites or still the same?

Also any recommendations for new people browsing the thread?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7389825
my three favorite (in no particular order) are the menhera wrangler series, "She's not horny, just lonely" and "While my guitar gently weeps."

[Anonymous No.]

>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

[Anonymous No.]

>Prism
How about a fanfic of luto. I want the aussie GF experience

[Anonymous No.]

STORY ANCHOR
POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

[Anonymous No.]

>>7389825
If I had to choose it would be:
Omarun is Cute and Funny
Kintsugi
Exposure Therapy
(In that Order)

[Anonymous No.]

>>7389666
I'm not late you're late!

(don't for get to copy pasta the prompt bord and anchor post, since it helps archive anon archive your stories easier.)

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
(You) are Fubuki's younger shota brother.
You pretty much live in Fubuki's shadow, since she is much more popular, talented and overall better in anything than you. Despite that, she loves you more than anyone else and does not hesitate to show it - spoiling you, hugging you, buying you your favorite candy, cheering you up whenever she thinks you have to be, etc.
One day, after a particular hard day at school, you get home. The moment you set foot in, Fubuki is already at the door, as if sensing that something is not okay. A long "session" of spoiling follows - hugging you, petting your head, telling you that everything is okay, stuff like that.
However, as time goes on, the "session" gets more and more intimate - tighter hugs, light cheek kisses, her nibbling on your ears, telling you what a good little brother you are, carressing your whole body gently, etc.
(You) can tell it's wrong, yet you don't have it in you to tell your lovely older sister off.
And so, your older sister leads you to her room...

Note: For the prompt, (You) can be either a foxboy or a human. (You) can be adopted or blood-related brother.
These are all up to the willing writer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7389666
Glad to see more people appreciating Rita and how lovely she is.

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>>7389825
Cover high is one of my favorites, Dog years and 90% of Mio stories are also really fucking great
Also still on hopium that someone might write that one Mori Ina love triangle prompt from a couple of threads ago

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>>7390014
Guy who wrote the 2 pregnant selen fics or anyone who is interested

>Selen is hungry late at night again and you take her to go get fast food
>She looks like she can go into labor and any moment
>on the way back home, seems like an ordinary night
>at an intersection
>light turns green and you proceed to move your car
>before you notice a bright light it's already too late
>someone driving a truck ran a red light and who was speeding hit your car on the passenger side
>your pregnant dragon wife is killed instantly
>you are hospitalized

Story could end there or it could be continued

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
kanata-kun x anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Reposting an Anon's request from the previous thread because I'd really love to see it written.

>Fuck Fubuki so hard she shifts into Kurokami.
>She starts dominating you
>Milks you so hard you don't have the opportunity to fuck her back.
Start of a comedy smut fic about trying to fuck Fubuki back to her regular self.
Could also be a fluffy drama piece about fubuki's repressed feelings towards you that she could only release in that state, aka the hidden Menhera side

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>>7392270
> hidden menhera Kurokami
> extremely possessive
> overwhelming presence
> drowns you in pleasure and attention
Approach with caution, or risk being softly dominated into being each others' pets.

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>>7389825
I love part 1 of the loli polka sex fluff fic, still waiting for part 2 tho. I heard that the anon making it was finishing up the hag story.

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>>7392446
I want to be softdom'd by Kurokami!
I want to be stepped on by Kurokami!
I want Kurokami to ride me!
I want to hug her from behind after all's said and done while she tries her hardest not to express how much she likes it when I hold her!
I want to make love with her so hard that she turns back into Shirakami!

[Anonymous No.]

Stories posted last thread

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32559157/chapters/81739798
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTAmEc3FLkRPCuN_QAGw2-ZIem6r8HvVH0P5BUCm97BhEpiIy3ilCbGzdpIrZC16ZmgkgbqMjZ2NMQo/pub
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTK5rL_HXk7lbtT4z-Ccecmwf-cbHd51Lwmfy6bZntxnZk1Lwms0p7Ki_Flbhc85sPVAK3zgamKQr62/pub

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSBM3_HVd08tA2yDoAx2X6JpSHoR5i3fFwV72QKdGrrJhr9vQpvC-00oN7k2TKSrJXqcruHrT4orK8D/pub

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRlsubLFg44mjfNU9_s5Gq8TDKHctvqrcEXUmzvaN_ncd405g5hJyEIutuyK8aJ5NVMXjcGnoWBigBd/pub

(Done from my phone so it may be fucked up, sorry)

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>>7389825
Top of my head, it's Newfoundland and Way of the Gorilla

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>>7389825
Exposure Therapy
Petting Your Fox
No Friend, Waifu!
Fluffy
Late Night Cuddles
Foxfriend and Overly Nice Boyfriend
Doing Fubuki in the Butt
Menhera Wrangler series
Omelas series (and the fan-sequels)
As children, we all wanted nothing but candy for dinner
Fubuki Comfort
Dramatic Miopost
Devilish Deeds
While My Guitar Gently Weeps
Saviourfag series

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>>7393915
>>7390062

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>>7389825
I have a lot stories to catch up on but so far Bad Vibrations is the one I like the best, very cool concept

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>>7393915
Use this link to start on chapter 1, that link starts on chapter 18

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32559157/chapters/80762107

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>>7394561
Woah someone likes wotg enough to be a favorite?

It's nice to hear my first fic here get some love.

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>>7394876
Thank you! It's a good thing we've got the prompt archive, I never would have seen the idea otherwise.

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>>7390014
You have a very strange relationship with a chuuba of your choice. She insists she despises you, yet you have a very sexual relationship with one another. However, it's always very insult-laden and cold - they admonish you the entire time, even though you're never the one to initiate it, in incredibly hurtful ways. One day, after a particularly bad 'session', you finally snap and tell them off, trying to break the arrangement and get them out of your lives, fully driven into hating them because of their cruel actions. As soon as you do, however, they do a complete 180 personality wise and are desperate to keep you with them.

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>>7395586
Anon that’s a textbook abusive relationship

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>>7395642
Could be that way, someone venting their frustrations onto you. They could also be ultra retarded and think you're into it and every time you fought them on it they assumed you were doing your part, only to realize that your hurt or anger the entire time was genuine. They could also just really, really like your cock and are doing what they can to make sure they can keep getting it and they genuinely dislike you for whatever reason besides that.

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>>7395586
This sounds like it'd be a good read if done well. But if you try to make it fluff with this already dark set up I'll come find you and fart on your pillow.

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>>7396014
I really can't see a fluff ending to it, personally. You can only coast on 'free pussy I guess' for so long until they start making more and more pointed comments that attack you relentlessly over and over again until some part of you says "this isn't worth it" and it begins to bloom into resentment. You aren't even dating her - it's just a sex friend relationship. The sex becomes more hateful on your end, but eventually, not even that is enough. You just feel like shit. You hate her. You don't even want to fuck her, you just do because the primate part of your brain says 'sex good', but it's not worth it. Then as soon as you reach your breaking point, she insists she was just trying to get you to fuck her harder or some bullshit like that, that she actually really likes you. I'd be livid.

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>>7395661
To answer this from the last thread, I don't want to speak super-definitively but she does tend to watch seasonal anime. She's a big fan of Demon Slayer and Golden Kamuy so if you just need something that would be reasonable for her to be watching either one is fine.

Good luck on your fic Anon, please don't make me cry over it.

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>>7390014
(You) are a knight in service of the royal house Pavolia. While training you turn your head and see a flash of silver hair whip away from you. You come to notice this whenever you train, sometimes multiple times if you train without your shirt.

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>>7390014
Pekora asks Moona about sex Moona decides a demonstration would be best and grabs (You), a random Cover intern.

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>>7390165
>That top choice.
I'm honestly curious why you consider that to be your favorite, anon; like, there are so many good completed works here with a lot more to offer, but you chose something that still hasn't really picked up the pace and reached a conclusion, or really moved much.

I mean I am honored, but kind of interested what makes you feel that way about it.

>>7396848
Well, hopefully if you do cry, it will be tears of joy. Or out of your willie, because it will be a smutfic.

[Anonymous No.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WGq5gapRt5E
everything about this has fantastic potential for a story

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>>7398309
NTA, but even as it is it's a very cute story about being caring for a sad little girl, throws the saviourfag in me a bone.

The inevitable daughterwifing is a bonus

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>>7381742
I really wonder what's /wg/'s stance on making smut fics of an OC of a daughter of a chuuba. I kinda want to make more fics of her but as of now, she doesn't really have a concrete design and making fics of OCs might be a nono here.

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>>7399511
I think it'd fun to draw her a design. What descriptions of her appearance are there at the moment?

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>>7398309
It's just that Polka is my favorite and I really love her but in a more romantic way than a sexual one, I really want her to succeed and be happy, and the father-daughter dynamics really melt my heart...
Regardless of that I would still FUCK Polka given the chance

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>>7399511
At the end of the day, people can write whatever they want. It does seem slightly off-topic if the story is entirely centered around her with no interaction with Fubuki, though. I certainly wouldn't throw a fit over it, it's not like anyone here is obligated to read things they don't want to, or don't think fit with the thread.

The author gave his blessing, so I guess her personality can be whatever the story needs, so long as the [rivalry for dad's attention and jealousy over Fubuki] part of her character is maintained.

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>>7399511
Making OC's in a thread about chuubas is just no. It's already skirting the line to use those stupid D&D or whatever characters that the EN nerds love. If you're gonna make OC's go do it in Reddit.

Jokes aside, In my honest opinion I think you're a major faggot and should stop trying to push this OC agenda because if you're not writing a chuuba what the fuck are you doing in a thread about writing about chuubas? Literally just go somewhere else.

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>>7399511
It's too off-topic in my opinion. I'd give it a hard "maybe" if you're frequently making reference to actual chuubas in a fic about her and intend to bring them back in some major capacity in a direct sequel, but even that feels a little off. I suggest you go elsewhere if you want to pursue this in any significant capacity

[Anonymous No.]

>>7400022
>>7399858
sux2bu guys, i'm already working on a ~1k word quickie for her

if it bothers you just close your eyes and pretend it doesn't exist

[Anonymous No.]

>>7400292
whatever, i just don't want this to become a generic creative writing general

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>>7400403
i don't believe it should either so i'm keeping it short

[Anonymous No.]

>>7391814
"By the way anon, I want to name our kid-" Truck-kun appears to wish them a happy marriage

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>>7391814
not sure if you were the person who requested for the Selen fics in the first place, but holy shit man why would you want something like that?

>>7389941
>>7394818
always makes me happy when someone says they like the menhera wrangler series I wrote. Thanks, anons.

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>>7399644
Gotcha. I'm glad you like it, and hope I can continue to make it a better story that'll be worthy of praise.
Well, (you) will, since that's where the story sprouted from anyway. I can't wait to write the UOOOH scenes for this story.

>>7399259
I see. Saviourfagging is also a huge motivator for me, I want Polka to be happy!

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>>7398309
Ah, you know I'm always waiting for your stories anon. Keep it up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Youve been getting really close to Amelia lately and everyone is fine with it except for one Nabi-mama, who is trying to ruin your dates either through sabotage or attempting to brain you with her massive tablet pen.

[Lanomymous No.]

>>7404944
you then fuck nabi
my captach was STD RP what does this mean

[Anonymous No.]

>>7405037
Lamification is an STD, so...

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>>7390014
Being raised by your adoptive mom Botan! Her training (You) to be the greatest mercenary on earth! The two of you growing so close that your relationship goes past parent and child! Her abandoning you so she can go on a mission! Botan being severely injured and then hidden in a coverup! Botan secretly returning and forming her own group of militants! You being forced to hunt down and stop Botan! Fighting Botan to the death in a field of flowers!

[Lanomymous No.]

>>7405132
i-i guess so...d-do you want to..perhaps...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7401437
Because the people here are scary man half worried if one of them bumped into a chuba irl they'd turn them into a dream chair

[Anonymous No.]

>>7405841
Condom only.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406512
> Be me
> Bump into my oshi, Marine
> Go on a tangent saying that I'm a big fan and that i respect her and her work, and that she should value herself more
> Marine just sits there listening all the way
> 5 minutes pass, I finish speaking
> "Sorry i dontu speaku ingrishu"
> Say ok, do a nod and walk away

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406617
You can't trust a lamy not poke holes in your condoms anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406658
Your one of the good ones

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>>7406512
I'm more aghast by the request because I'm the one who fucking wrote the Selen fics while pouring all my heart to make it as if Selen were truly my wife. And the worst part? My brain is already feeding me ideas to write out the horrible scene of her dying and you waking up realizing she is no more.

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>>7406803
First off those stories are great good job anon 2and off DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406803
>My brain is already feeding me ideas to write out the horrible scene of her dying and you waking up realizing she is no more.
Do it, I feed off of tragedy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406678
That's part of the fun.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406658
It's fine anon, I think your feelings would still reach her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7406946
Is this like as risk fetish thing potential lamyfication?

[Anonymous No.]

Stay motivated, writeanons.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7399511
Genuinely, I think it crosses the line. A fic about her goes from a fic that's about the relationship with a chuuba to a fic about a chuuba oc. Conceptually it's not technically going over the line into being a nonchuuba writing but it is at the point where it's barely related and would probably go over the line in practice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7407027
Yeah. It's...I dunno, enticing

[Anonymous No.]

Imagine rivulets of water tickling your skin on their journey home, the sun blazing on your salt soaked skin under the clear skies, the soft breeze rocking your small wooden boat as it carries unformed waves beneath; The sea sheltered on her lips as they brush against yours, her hot breath rolling over your mouth, the rough skin of her gray tail rubbing against your bare leg, all feeding the ardent desire ablaze your mind. You, a lone fisherman, and your curious lover from the depths lying on a boat whose entrails can only hold a single human. The girl who, like clockwork, journeys to the surface at the end of the week, who intrigues her neighbors so teasingly, but who, without fail, traverses those treacherous miles to find that small boat under the feverish sun. The scalding heat suffused in your bodies knowing no restraints, any obstacles long removed, and, as a predator does with its prey, you thrashing in a violent frenzy with the fanged girl whose great tail cracks against the old boat. Like a tempest, the strength of the sea behind every move, your bodies breaking against the chipped wood of a vessel at sea until at last, the girl is enveloped in a salty white flood. As the storm passes, the raging waters turn from their earthshaking violence to a tender caress on which your lover drifts off, back to the hidden depths of her dark city, leaving you only with the marks of her love and a promise for more.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7407922
imagine fucking mio right in the pussy

[Anonymous No.]

>>7407922
UUUUUUOOOOOHHHHHH SEX WITH GURA

[Anonymous No.]

>>7407922
>>7390062

Imagine using paragraphs.

It was good but holy shit was it annoying to read.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408045
>Not doing a line break every word
Never gonna hang with the pros

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
(You) are the little brother of one of the non-shotacon Holo's. Constantly in harms way your sister protects you from the hungry wolf-like gazes and actions of her coworkers. It's a thankless job however, as you have no idea of the danger that you're in. To you, your sisters Onee-san friends are just weirdly nice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408045
It looks better in docs since here the paragraph runs for too long before wrapping back. Idk how I'd go about fixing that without just publishing the doc.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408085
Shh someone my feel shitposty enough to actually do that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7407090
Thanks Vergil

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408133
hehe

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408132
Yeah fair enough, I had a story to that to me too.

I found that pastebin is a pretty good tool to counter that since it shows what your spacing will look like before you publish it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408167
yeah but pastebin looks ugly

[Anonymous No.]

Is the anon who said they might do the juniper story still around ? I'm not desperate I swear [/spioler]

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408368
I watched some juniper for the fic but I realized I don't like her so I doubt I'll do the story I planned out with the shota thing since I'm not feeling very inspired. But I don't wanna leave you hanging so I'm just gonna write the final scene the egg laying stuff. I'm thinking of doing it multiple ways since I can't decide what I like best so horror, smut, and maybe something lighthearted.

Anon your spelling and control + s reps...

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>>7409384
What about a rapefic where she lays her brood in an unwilling host? Or even willing?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7409437
I have a matsuri rapes (you) fic that I dropped so it's not something I'm against...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7409594
>>7409437
this sounds weird but hot as fuck, not gonna lie

[Anonymous No.]

>>7408109
writeanons i beg of you...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7389825
Cover High and Dramatic Miopost

[Anonymous No.]

>>7409594
>Dropped
PAIN

[Anonymous No.]

I want to write a rape story where Ina is subject to physical abuse... help

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412464
I'd like to see this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412464
cumon4head

[Anonymous No.]

Strangling a fennec part two, autistic boogaloo

Now with 100% less strangling and 100% more fluff.

https://pastebin.com/E2UkYQQA

[Anonymous No.]

>>7401437
Wasn't the person who requested the selen fics in the first place

I was here when this general was an abusive chuuba general and that kind of writing intrigued me and i stuck around

I still like fluff fics like exposure therapy, aqua/manger series, and the subaru childhood friend story, but stories like omelas have stuck with me

It's probably because it was the first time I've seen anything like abusive stories and it entertained me

[Anonymous No.]

>>7413354
Also good job on the first 2 stories, made me smile

[Anonymous No.]

>>7392270
Imagine coming to a moment of clarity after getting milked by Kurokami you come to a realization.
>Confess your love to Kurokami
>She starts to break down as you throw out your heart to her.
>She tries to pin you down to get you to stop but her heart isn't in it.
>You hold her hand.
>She want to hear this. She needs to hear this.
>You finish you confession, hold her hand and kiss her

[Anonymous No.]

>>7409384
:( ah well fair enough not every chuba is for everyone but if you still write that last bit that'd be cool

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412815
>due to my brains insistence on informing me that I am in fact a retard
oh my god its literally me

[Anonymous No.]

It's one of those days

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414031
It doesn't have to be, it is still early
Go workout or something and just come back to it

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414031
What, slow thread? Talk about something.

>>7412815
What's going on in this story? It's all over the place

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414439
It's supposed to be from a sleep deprived half insane polkas point of view.

I also ended it quickly since it was starting to run on, but I want to do a more detailed coherent chapter next.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414582
Well, if it's shishipolka, I'm all for it. This one was a bit mentally straining to follow, though...

[Anonymous No.]

Fingering Oillie at the beach

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414720
Well its meant to be a spin off/continuation of

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSXK8Fs0Qsd-0gxus0j1_xysLwsMXVpSHD7PQ9AdCsP8dWt_R2pzNsjvhvtDZiOHeA8Ywj7W0i4o_U9/pub

That got too wordy to just post here in one chunk.

I suppose if you didn't read that first you'd have no context huh.

My bad.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7413599
Writeanons onegai...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
Sorry, never really liked Kurokami

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
I forgot how to write today.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
I'm busy writing some dirty smut.

[Anonymous No.]

I hate this. I hate that I read the prompt, and I hate how my brain kept screaming at me to write this, like a primal urge I could not resist. I hate that I was given the talent to turn my thoughts into words and sentences. It is as much as a curse as it is a gift, but here it is. A tragic, tragic, end to the pregnant Selen fics I wrote.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR9U29n2HCM0NJQS5IFl8t6QcDxCcKRx6Q6gkGJSp1RdTTQVn5qiHPQhIcgnmRlaSK5i9jqGV5oKLir/pub

Tags: Selen, SFW, pain, so much pain

>>7413354
I hope you are pleased with this. It's shorter than I usually write, but that's only because I couldn't bear to make it any worse than I did.

>>7390062
anchoring

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
Anon RETCON THIS

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415065
agreed, fubuki is better in every way

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
This is not canon. I refuse to believe this is canon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
Smashing business! Truck-kun claims another. I'm not familiar with Selen, but read this anyway, and I must say it's delectable. If I may, an extension of the story to describe the perpetual torment of existence in a world without Selen would elevate this story to a ten. At the moment it ends around the time the reader would feel the dread sinking in, but doesn't capitalize on that to drive the knife in, so to speak.

Or at the very least, a brief description of the baby squirting out of her during the crash would be stiffy-inducing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
I agree with this anons plead

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415414
Pick up the metaphorical pen and give it a shot

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415428
Use that pen to give Kurokami a shot.

In the mouth.

[Anonymous No.]

I'M TRYING TO WRITE BUT THE WORDS WON'T FUCKING COME

GAAAAAAH

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415428
Im bad at writing + ESL

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415400
do not get me wrong. I could've written more things. waking up next to her mangled body, refusing all medication in the hospital, needing to explain to her sister, Elira, on what happened, holding Ember, her pet while you cry, all those cursed memories resurfacing. But I do not wish to pain myself, nor others with that sort of suffering. I am tired, anon. This is one of my nightmares that I wrote down. I apologize if it doesn't meet your expectations, but it has far exceeded my own fears.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
HE CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH IT

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415697
It does that and I can sypathise with that.

Let me help you. Just write something in a notepad/google doc and save it. Like a sentence or something, then save it and close it.

Then come back to it later and add to it or rewrite the sentence.

Grats, you're writing now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
hey, its that anon who has no idea who the fuck selen is, I just wanted to let you know, this hurt man. more than it should for a chuuba I dont even know.
>"I CAN STILL BE WITH HER! I CAN STILL BE HAPPY!”
this one hurt the most.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
Maybe I'll pick this up later, and I mean much later. Uni has started up again and I've got a backlog of prompts I want to write.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415043
just know that I was intending to insert some Kurokami stuff into the Fubuki smut I'm writing but writing that Selen fic totally derailed me. The Fubuki smut fic is delayed yet again

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416012
You're a Godsent Anon, truly!
Delayed or not, I'm looking forward to it!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416012
>fubuki smut delayed
news that hits like a semi-trailer

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415400
Did someone hurt you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414759
COLD, SANDY VAG
COLD, SANDY VAG

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412815
I want to strangle Polka so bad brahs and after that tell her how great of a women she is

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415834
It's more I can't figure out a way to start. The beginning shapes the direction of the story, but I just can't figure out how to - or perhaps am genuinely afraid of - writing dialogue for a character I am completely unfamiliar with, incestanon's OC Miyuki. I don't even know what kind of fic I want it to be, apart from smut and include Fubuki.

Does anyone else start so poorly thought out? Tempted to call it quits and jump into traffic

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416307
>a character I am completely unfamiliar with
Well from his fic we know she is:
Eager to please
Ambitious
Insecure
Talented
Jealous
Manipulative

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416307
If it helps you, usually I listen to music or watch streams to entertain myself while writing and usually the ideas and inspiration flow out naturally once you get the flow.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415736
so what anon, the best way to learn is through doing and if you use something like google docs it will help with grammar and spelling.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416307
I'd like to refer you to >>7412815

This thing I wrote confused the utter shit out of one anon, but it was still fun as fuck to write like a polka.

Whats important about writing is that you have fun doing it, and you take it at your pace. I rewrote this thing so many times, and I may republish it later and give it a better direction. I dunno.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416375
We've got those traits from one specific situation in a presumably extraordinary emotionally-charged set of circumstances... it feels like flanderization to stick those same traits in again, but you're right that it's all we've got to go on

>>7416405
That is an excellent idea, I've been trying to write in silence so far

>>7416426
I am that anon, sorry

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416472
Its perfectly fine, and pretty hallarious that I was talking about you to your face. Oops.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
A war is about to break out between heaven and hell, both sides are equally powerful so no one knows who will win. However at the same time both Hell and Heaven receive a prophecy: "In human world there lives a man named Anon, a seemingly ordinary man with ordinary strength, however that man has a gift. The man spends his days posting rrats online, and those rrats keep on predicting future events, whichever side gets him to work for them will be able to see through the enemy plans and change the tides of war". Now, both factions send out agents in hopes of recruiting the man to ensure their victory. Who will the man choose? The Heaven and it's battalion of angels or Hell and it's army of demons?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414759
>>7416270

Does it have to be Anon doing the finger blasting or could it be one of her genmates instead? Wouldn't mind banging out a flash fic of this prompt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416546
one of her genmates sounds hot as fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416546
I'd be better without it being yet another shitty self insert

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416518
That's creative as fuck anon, are you sure you're not a writer in disguise?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416562
>>7416573

Genmate it is.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416546
>>7416573
Make it a self insert just to spite this anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416546
How about her chad boyfriend instead cucking anon? That'd make it analogous to real life.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416546
hoping for Anya to do it
I can see the brat just casually doing it to embarrass Ollie in front of Reine

[Anonymous No.]

>so a talking shark, phoenix, reaper, and eldritch octopus all walk into my house. I forgot the rest of the joke, send help.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416659
After Oille mad a jab at Anyas ridiculous fat tits

[Anonymous No.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Q_zT7bi5Go

someone please write story about how Marine keeps annoying you with small talks and request that arent annoying itself but she keeps asking in times where you're very busy until one day you snap and hit her like that. But to your suprise she keeps asking for more slaps and for you to hit her

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416307
Incest Anon here, thanks for writing about my character! What >>7416375 is mostly true and if you want to write her interactions with someone other than papa Anon, she's kinda like Fubuki but accepts being everyone's waifu kinda like Nene. But she still has the playfulness and teasing nature of Fubuki towards her viewers and fans. Hope this helps out in fleshing her character for you. I'll be looking forward to the fic if you do decide to make it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417135
Word of the creator is law. Thanks for fleshing her out a bit more for me, it's given me a lot more leeway.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416659
>it was ME Ollie
>I'm the one behind every yab
>I fingered you in that phasmophobia collab
>I introduced you to Connor
>I convinced you Sodafunk was a girl

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417653
>I was the one who set the sink on fire and made your dad look like Homer Simpson

[Anonymous No.]

>>7416659
>>7416849
>>7417653

I'm taking a creative liberty and having Iofi go on the beach date with Ollie/doing the fingering because I've never watched an Anya stream before and would not be able to do her justice. Plus I think Ollie/Iofi would have an interesting (power) dynamic alone together. Please no hateirino.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
I-itai....

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417755
noone watches Apnya

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
Now continue the story by having Selen reincarnated to another world thanks to truck-kun and have Anon use dark magic to open up a portal to where his wife and unborn daughter are.

I'm not coping shut up, that's what totally happened next

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417755
Wow this the second time Anya got skipped for being in a fic because no one watches her. RIP.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417755
Considering you're doing Iofi, that more than makes up for it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417935
If she wants people to watch her, perhaps she should try being interesting.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7417755
That's good too

[Anonymous No.]

>>7414759
>>7390062

A Day at the Beach with Iofi Senpai

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRN8aPeR31yKTRbXCIa8YacDgwNj86p1QyT3Ab6QqIKyU2h7hXeyfBiOjfOZtJiMpXc_k2b-oq9H41r/pub

This was the fastest I've ever written anything, completely got in the groove. Turned out to be way more fluffy than I had planned, hope you all enjoy.

Tags : Fingering, orgasm denial, FxF

[Anonymous No.]

>>7415187
Anon who requested the story here
Gotta say i loved it, thank you anon

It has been a while since i read a good abuse fic, it's nice to take a break from all the smut and fluff once in a while

But if i could make a couple of more requests if you're interested, if not i can understand that writing something like this can leave you mentally drained for some time

Make this not cannon and continue the fluff

A continuation of the story and how anon learns to deal with the loss of his wife and daughter and move on without forgetting, so he can live a better life or he can just kill himself

Or as dumb and stupid and cliche as this sounds, a revenge story?

Again thanks for taking time to write my prompt, good read

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419244
you can rescind what has been asked. Even in spirit, the consequences have reverberated throughout the thread.

in other words, I am not willing to write this off as non-canon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419840
fuck i meant to say to you cannot* rescind what has been asked.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419244
>>7419840
Gaze upon what you have wrought, anon. Your careless, offhanded suggestion has forever tainted everyone who views this thread.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm honestly surprised there's no smut of anya since that's all they talk about on her threads.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420063
>that's all they talk about on her threads
Well, what else is there to talk about?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419840
>>7419860
Incredible


Sorry for everyone else who wanted more pregnant Selen wife fluff(not really)

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419244
And what have we learned today, class?

Actions have consequences.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420019
I
Regret
Nothing

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419840
so selen really died?

would you say you killed her or the anon that made the prompt did? tag team effort?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420063
She's the writeanon slayer. Any who attempt to write a story about her end up losing all hope and giving up after seeing how boring she is. It will take a man of extraordinary willpower to write smut on her

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420272
It may have been the promptanon's words that sowed the idea, but it was my hands that wrote the story. To say I did not wish to write this story would be hypocrisy, I only wished I was more disciplined in ignoring the devilish whispers in my mind.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420437
Just let go anon and open up
Let it consume you

[Anonymous No.]

I have no clue who Selen is and right now I'm quite thankful for that

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420734
she's a goofball

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420734
she's a retarded valorant streamer that breaths laughing gas instead of air, less said the better

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Amelia Watson is bored, the games she plays, the movies she watches just don't interest her anymore, she misses the feeling of solving mysteries, that kind of thrill. Today might just happen to be the day when she finally gets to solve one. Her new co-worker IRyS just joined the company. And there's this strange feeling Amelia has when thinking about her, mainly about the fact that she introduced herself as a Nephilim, the child of an angel and a demon. Amelia doesn't know much about religion or mythology, but she has hear the name before, so she knows that that's wrong, nephilims are children of humans and angels. But why would IRyS, who does indeed look like a Nephilim say that? There's no way she wouldn't know something about her own kind that Amelia can learn by a simple google search...Amelia decides to investigate further... The story can take a dark turn where Amelia finds out that IRyS sees one of her parents as a devil for some reason, revealing more and more of the darkness IRyS experienced in childhood or you could take it in a more lighthearted direction and make IRyS a complete dork

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7420437
I hear Hell's a hotter tourist destination anyway.

[Anonymous No.]

i get all the best ideas after i've stopped writing and gone to bed

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421506
pen and pad by your bed

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421506
Write in your sleep

Duh

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421530
>>7421506
anons plz

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421704
stop bitching and write, loser. hemingway wrote the entirely of for who the toll bell ttolls from his bed while blackout drunk

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421763
who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421805
hemingway!!!!!!!! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ernest_Hemingway

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421506
lucid dream about them and then write what happened once you wake up

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421763
>>7421865
That doesn't look like he's blackout drunk in bed...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421506
You don't REALLY have better ideas when you stop writing. It's just that you stopped yourself before your inspiration ended, so when an idea comes up in your head and you can't immediately write it down, you feel like it's much more important than the rest of the ideas that you had but DID write down. You feel restless because you can't write it and thus the value of that idea seems to be increased due to how much you're thinking about it.

Tl;dr all your ideas are equally worthless

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421928
twist ending got me chuckling good

[Anonymous No.]

>>7419172
Great story Anon better then I could have hoped for

[Anonymous No.]

>>7423006
Thanks anon, glad you liked it!

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

https://youtu.be/Cyoo2WiM4Uw

The song really doesn't have much of a meaning to the fic, but maybe it shares an atmosphere? Really just a flash of inspiration from the title.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSCFf3N2I6nzi_2qSUzP5Y6z5-ARobuWWYxa8oQWSN9ln7aWe2MKB2oiAiSjUvypASk4g67ITJfs7Bm/pub

>>7390062

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412815
>>7390062

[Anonymous No.]

>>7425138
UUUOOOHHHH SEX WITH FES-

oh.

It's a nice, lewd bittersweet story. Well done.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7426567
Glad you enjoyed it.

[Anonymous No.]

peko

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428192
Pekora! I'm gonna impregnate your bunny cunny with dozens of our children!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428192
Painal peko...

[Anonymous No.]

https://gdoc.pub/doc/e/2PACX-1vTXaDsM-rGZ3j6yTKFD8ZIvfmR0aXQzAIsvsYUZmfrrUF34HP6GhNZ10nMlDWTx1TOS4EZ_G2-aKdvF

ANYA UOOHHH BOOBS SO FAT AAAAA
Happy to introduce the very first anya fic, phone posted but everything should be fine

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428935
>>7420283
I bow anon, I bow

also anchor
>>7390062

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428935
>Anya's personality is an intentional effort to drive people away, lest they be consumed by their own lust and killed
You may be on to something

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428935
Congrats. Love the humor you have, my story is a bit more serious, content-wise, but I put mine on hold to jump around the... 19 wip's I have.

Small errors in Paragraph 12 "you brests" and paragraph 15 "Don't touch just watch" should have a comma. Pointing out mistakes makes me feel like an asshole.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
>Young Vibes part 2
You had my curiosity. Now you have my attention.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
fixed. Thanks anon, there's nothing wrong with pointing out mistakes that need to be fixed. We're all here to do our best after all.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
>Shy Noel
>Lonely Polka
>Mio mama
I'm interested

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
>Fucking a crazy girl
>Lonely polka
These better be related I swear to god

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429810
Lonely polka is pretty fleshed out as an idea. You're a handyman having to deal with a tenant who makes up issues just for attention
The lonely girl doc is just a quote from someone that I saw either here or another thread on /vt/, I had to write it down because it tugs at my soul. It really could be anyone

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429598
I really need to go back and re-read it. I know exactly what was blocking me, not sure if it's still there.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430092
>You're a handyman having to deal with a tenant who makes up issues just for attention

[Anonymous No.]

How much an immortal being would be fucked up in the head? I'm talking about our Phoenix.
Why does Ina call herself a priestess to the Ancient Ones, if they don't exactly give two shits about worship as they are too powerful to even consider humans?
What circumstances would force someone to become Death's apprentice? How does she feel, sharing the burden of all the human deaths in the world?
How exactly does one live for 9k+ years and remain as mature as a 14-16 year old?
What business has a detective with all of the aforementioned deities?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430622
>How much an immortal being would be fucked up in the head?
Unironically watch/read The Last Unicorn, does a really good job of portraying how disconnected an immortal would be from mortals

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
>Boss Okayu
Let's fucking goooooooooooo

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430092
>>7430266
Supremely annoying. Almost as bad as the ones who manufacture genuine issues for attention.
Just-
Just pay your rent on time, you FUCKS. That's literally all you need to do. This isn't a porno, I don't want to fuck you, we're not friends. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430622
Questions....for another time.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430622
>How exactly does one live for 9k+ years and remain as mature as a 14-16 year old?
I have a theory that Gura either just ages incredibly slowly overall or just hits a wall with physical aging that just slows her down for Lord knows how long.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430908
>Atlanteans have a weird time scale where if they go to the surface they'll age very rapidly when they get back
>If Gura goes back home now she'll just turn to dust

[Anonymous No.]

>>7428935
LEEETTTTTSSSSS GOOOOOOOOOOO SEEEEEEEXXXXXXXX ANYA SEXXXXXXXXXXX OPPAI LOLI EROTIC UOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430996
>You cause Gura to go full menhera.
>You live in Atlantis
>Instead of killing herself, she swims down to your house, pounds on your door, carves fuck you on it, and turns to dust on your doorstep

[Anonymous No.]

>>7431580
>You look out your window to see a shark girl angrily flipping you the bird as she crumbles into dust

[Anonymous No.]

>>7431834
>Collect the dust in a jar
>Jack off on it
>Atlantean cum has resurrective properties
>Gura is now trapped in your house and if she leaves the crumbles to dust again

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>7412464
ao3 writeanon here, I'm going to start this story now because I'm feeling the creative juices flowing.

This is the outline I've got so far, what do you guys think?

My lady fair

[Characters]
>Main character Ina – Regular girl born into a noble family – Sweet and naïve – Willing to forgive any slight against herself – Transformed Priestess persona is exact opposite.
>Traveling bard Gura – Wise but outwardly foolish – Magical abilities with music and persuasion – Older than she seems.
>Court alchemist Amelia – Eccentric and foolhardy but good natured – No magical aptitude – Rick Sanchez level of plot armor a la alchemical concoctions.

[Outline]
>Setting: Medieval with magic with DnD-like monsters.
>Ina is cast into the sea by her parent’s men. She is 19 and the coastal fiefdom her family rules over is being plagued by shipwrecks. The leviathan that lives bellow their docks is relentless.
>Dying to the fall before being devoured by the beast, but retains her soul to communicate with it, striking up a deal. Transformation into the priestess of (name of monster here).
>Washes ashore onto a rival kingdom’s land.
>Captured and tortured inside the castle dungeon, possibly raped as well.
>Ina’s powers unveil.
>The aftermath leaves Ina traumatized. She finds herself stumbling into an inn where Gura the Simple is entertaining a crowd.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7432140
>possibly raped as well
based, make sure to make it a fat ugly bastard

[Anonymous No.]

>>7425138
Oh, uh... ok.

[Anonymous No.]

Finishing up (another) story to get the backlog cleared up a little bit. Something fun.

I honestly don't have a song for this stupidity, but have something from the Bosstones. The world can't be all dark and painful all the time. https://youtu.be/trSLI4kEXKg

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzQs6uHBv8bSnUjB8RSi1U_DsZhyRwgp-R7zfZdEPC_yyHk5XDpAAntGU0Bwwb3QwW1ujgJvIRUNLB/pub

>>7390062

[Anonymous No.]

>>7430884
Imagine if you were a doctor/nurse or a cute girl

My uncle would tell me tales of the ladies who would offer 'alternative payments' after he finished his carpentry jobs. He would still bill their husbands.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7432695
Laughed out loud at 'bags of sand' anon, thanks for that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7432695
>Those last paragraphs

[Anonymous No.]

why the fuck did I read the Selen dying story

[Anonymous No.]

>>7433376
Hertz donut?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7433468
yes and I love daft punk too this is exceptionally awful

[Anonymous No.]

>>7433110
Thanks, reminded me that I should have noted that. Fixed.

...the flesh is torn away, and she throws it toward the table you were leaning against, landing with a dead ‘plop’.

Again she approaches you, kicking through the piles of sand, and presses her less impressive ribs against you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7432883
What a Chad. He should've added an adultery discount so the husbands would know they married lying, cheating whores.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Suisei is on edge because she's recently gained weight but none of it has gone to her chest. (You) don't think it's a bad thing though, because she doesn't know it's all gone to her ass instead.

[Anonymous No.]

god does this little animation+music make me feel strong emotions
I can't even think of an actual story, but I need one

[Anonymous No.]

>>7436306
As much as I want to read about fucking Suisei in the ass, I don't get how she wouldn't notice her ass getting bigger.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7436306
>>7437997

[Anonymous No.]

>>7437997
>skirts only
>nopan
idk sounds easy to miss to me

[Anonymous No.]

For the Anon who's been waiting on my lazy ass to release that prompt where Aqua accosts you with marriage after you save her from a flight of stairs, I'm sorry for the wait.

Bubblegum Wedlock -

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HONXUINzHzijSbDMM0st8yfAbxKVoxetG3yM9w6UEyw/edit?usp=sharing

Here it is! I'm not absolutely satisfied as it feels like the story begs for a sequel instead of being a complete entity by itself, and I probably should've added a bit more fluff between (You) and Aqua, but this is my first go at this, and I aim to improve. I hope you all find at least a sliver of enjoyment in this, I guess. Meh.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7437066
>unable to cope with her current life, Sora seeks to return to her brighter past
>but not without dragging (You) along to be her "best friend" forever
> the time warp also turns you into a helpless child, which is why she seems so tall here

[Anonymous No.]

>>7438599
anon, use the publish function

[Anonymous No.]

>>7438687
I know the actual 'game' would probably just be a shitty collect X objects while sora chases you but fuck I need something like this because Sora's yandere is so different from the lolstab meme yandere.
She may be fucked in the head but she is still in control. She will find you. She will break you. She will make you feel her love. You will love her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7429414
>Lamy hunt

[Anonymous No.]

>>7439450
That one hurts me a bit. I started writing it and then someone Lulu stopped streaming. It kind of kills motivation when someone retires like that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7439450
Haha what if instead of Lamy hunt it said Lamy cunt. That would be pretty cool I think.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Reine's delicious exposed tummy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7438599
you should probably publish it because now your google account is visible

[Anonymous No.]

>>7438775
>>7440146

Thanks for the heads-up. Had no fucking idea. Here's the new link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSSciM7XHT4K1U_NoNGh1TtcWbSv5N8EzZcBza6dHVOzyhz3WSi4ANs5EiNStCCvp7DdzkAPhnx1wWZ/pub

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440075

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440358
Blackmailing women into doing lewd things with me and being completely disgusted all the while is the only way I can fantasize as a self-insert. I'd rather read about OCs fucking chuubas than a generic MC.

[Anonymous No.]

I've been seeing more dislike towards self insert narrators recently so I'd like to hear opinions on what type of narrator you prefer? Do you like self insert or would you prefer another chuuba's pov or maybe even something else?

[Lanomymous No.]

>>7439972
yeah haha

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440649
Nah I wanna feel like I'm fucking the chuuba. I don't really have much interest in reading about someone else fucking a chuuba because that's a second degree cuck.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440764
Anon... the author is fucking the chuuba, all you get to do is jerk off in the corner

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440649
I'm just horribly autistic broken mess, don't cater to me

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440837
I've always seen the self insert character as all of us and me at the same time. So we're all fucking her but at the same time only I'm fucking her. Anon-kun is just as much me as he is you, he is a collective representation of all of us.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440902
I'm a horribly autistic broken mess too, but as weird as it may be, the self insert stories make me feel a little less alone

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440837
>the author is fucking the chuuba
Now that is a spicy fucking take.
As an occasional author though, I like it. In my next fic (You) will literally be me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440995
That's nice anon but I'd rather be in you

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440995
That's a little selfish anon, save some for the rest of us

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440984
It ruins my immersion to think of myself as ever being worthwhile, much less mate potential.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441169
Don't self-insert as yourself, just self-insert as a more perfect version of yourself

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441169
now we need a fic about you spying on a chuuba as she has sex with someone

[Anonymous No.]

>>7439128
Anon, please, I can only be so erect. And yeah, sadly, games like that usually devolve into "collect X" types. I've had an idea for something like it before - something like Monstrum with multiple girls with different hunting patterns and several means of completing the game rather than just 'bro get all the pages lmfao' but it still doesn't do it justice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440910
This.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441199
The perfect version of myself would be fertilizer in a bucolic flower bed somewhere in Northern France.

>>7441231
This has potential as a new genre...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7432140
Some more world building lore.

[Characters cont.]
>The Leviathan/Ancient One – An alien super intelligence that came on-planet from an egg – Wants to dominate the world – Fears its own power might destroy the planet before it can rule – Channels its consciousness and powers into its disciple, Ina, to gather information and worshippers.
>Kingdom of Garlentia – Medieval fantasy European country – At war with Haejong – Famed for its philosophers, expensive luxury wines, and massive army – Notorious for conquering helpless city states, mistreating its poor, and severe floods.
>Kingdom of Haejong – Medieval fantasy Asian country – At war with Garlentia – Famed for its magical adepts, fertile soil, and naval tactics – Notorious for its political assassinations, human experimentations, and seasonal plague.

[Anonymous No.]

https://gdoc.pub/doc/e/2PACX-1vSmeirp12-JnRfNS1yeChfQPIx88wCMFRn0zWzDVxyagjjgU0ivqfdWI6ZpXpxs3VOlsfHYyBf-DE0d

You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441054
And i'd rather turn (You) into my oshi and knock you up. We can't always get what we want.

>>7441059
No.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
Do you accept constructive criticism?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
>someone actually pick up that prompt
I can't fucking believe this

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
no...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440649
Not sure why some people would dislike it, especially considering the culture of the website as a whole. The term Anon refers to (You), and whether it's a self-insert or a wholly independent character, the point is that it makes it relatable to (You). At the end of the day, (You) want to be able to lie next to your favourite chuuba, hearing their heartbeat in sync with yours as you slowly stroke their hair while they sleep, mumbling how much they love (You), don't you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441540
I do but constructive criticism has no place near my magnum opus

[Anonymous No.]

>>7438775
>>7440146
Wtf is this about? Publish function? What's that? I thought there was no way to hide your google account, even archive anon didn't do it. Tell me more, even if I write on my burner account I prefer not to show it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441652
Absolutely, yes. Anyone who disagrees is depressed, a cuck, or both.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441699
I don't care, my criticism is that it's too short! You can expand on this, showing the new Lamy interacting with the other hololive members would be great! This has real series potential anon, potential which you should capitalize upon!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441712
On the doc you wanna publish
File > Publish to the web
simple as

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441712

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441777
>>7441833
Damn I don't think I can do it on mobile, what a pain. From my perspective my only sharing option was always this as far as I knew.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
oh right that reminds me

>>7390014
After having several drinks, Mori starts to strip for you.

She's pretty clumsy and is basically just ripping her clothes off with no sense of teasing.
Not a great combination for avoiding an accident that leaves a deep cut in her arm.
She just laughs it off though, and in her drunken stupor she has a crazy thought and goes through with it.
"You wanna see me take it off?"

[Anonymous No.]

>>7442451
I want Mori to cut off her arm and use it to jack me off!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441774
Anon... I'm touched. You're right! I can't let tapeworm-anon meets his end like this. I have a human sacrifice to a moth goddess to finish but soon Anon will travel again and he might have to change bodies

[Anonymous No.]

>>7442495
I will be waiting eagerly!

[Anonymous No.]

>>7442495
>>7442546
fucking degenerate

[Anonymous No.]

>>7442495
Wait so would tapeworm-anon evacuate himself from Lamy's body or would Lamy-tapeworm-anon just crawl up another girls asshole? Would it eventually become a hive mind of multiple holo's+anon inside the body of a single girl? Would they meld together physically or would they be like matryoshka's?

[Lanomymous No.]

>>7441458
yeah

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
God damnit anon. I actually want to see more of this.
You're somehow wrote for a shitty prompt and made me want more.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441231
I was actually thinking about writing a story like that earlier today

[Anonymous No.]

>>7440304
I kinda liked it, but to give some criticism I felt like some paragraphs were too descriptive and just added a lot of words or analogies that weren’t needed. A personal gripe I have is that using Japanese words in an English story are a bit weird, like for example instead of “eto” you could just use “um”. Other than that though it was pretty good

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390062
>>7441458
sorry archiveanon I always forget to anchor

[Anonymous No.]

>>7439128
What to do if we alrealy love her, huh?
Take that liberals

[Anonymous No.]

>>7437066
>You tell your best friend Sora the unfortunate truth, you are moving away. And you won't be back anytime soon.
>She takes it surprisingly well, but as you get ready to leave, the school starts to change. Shift.
>Suddenly, the hallways and staircase no longer connect like they should, and any door or window you try is locked shut, and seemingly unbreakable.
>Your 'friend' Sora wanders the halls looking for you, but instead of the normal comforting presence she provides, you're left with a fear that trigger the reptilian part of your brain telling you to run

[Anonymous No.]

>>7444676
>If you run at Sora second one you get the secret 18+ ending

[Anonymous No.]

>>7444676
What?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7421865
Who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445256
Mr. Based himself that's who.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7444676
Fedchama.....

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445285
Literally who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445256
slim shady

[Anonymous No.]

>>7390014
Suisei somehow knows that you've had sexual thoughts about her and she's FUCKING PISSED. So she's hunting you down to ensure that one way or another you won't 'think' about her sexually again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7444676
Why are you bring up politics?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445343
I already told you he's Mr. Based.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445429
again, who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445396
You approach Mori from a dark alley, hearing she's trying to be big and you've been coasting for a while now. Need to stretch your legs again.
Taking a sip of your tall boy you walk up and clear your throat.
https://youtu.be/OD9CtIiBb6s

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445451
A pseud favorite author

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445543
oh okay

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>7445568

[Anonymous No.]

Who are these chuubas? What do they want from me?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7445821
Anon, not only are you a virgin, you don't have sexual thoughts, making your vital essence the only one that can satisfy them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7441458
I hate you

[Anonymous No.]

Archiv

You knock on your little sister's door. For a few seconds you hear the sound of empty cups, napkins, and fast food wrappers shifting around. Then the door opens, and there she is - your vtuber imouto, Gawr Gura.

"Got some more for me?" she asks, clearly enjoying the guilty look on your face. She's wearing her hoodie and smells like a mix of girly shampoo and Taco Bell nacho fries. Her room is lit only by her TV and monitor, and it's an absolute mess. She has the day off from streaming, so you've already stopped by twice now - but just knowing she's next door has brought you back again.

Gura locks the door behind you, and - with a surreptitious smile - pulls the jar out from under her bed. It's not even ten percent full yet, but it's starting to look more and more like she was telling the truth. This magic jar has kept your collected cum from becoming one of those horror stories off the internet. In fact, if anything it's made it look even more white and pure than it was when it first came out of you. They sure invented some interesting things in Atlantis.

While you were thinking about the powers of the chum jar, Gura has impatiently pulled down on your shorts. "Holy moley," she says as your hard cock pops out over the waistband. "You really do get hard just thinkin' about me."

She removes the lid and, steadying the jar on her bed with one hand, she angles your cock down toward it with the other. Once the tip is just inside the rim, she begins to stroke you slowly. Her hand is small and warm as it works its way up and down from the head to the base of the shaft. It's not really a handjob. It's more like you're being milked. She isn't making any special effort to make this feel sexy, but she's enjoying herself - as well as the fact that you're enjoying it too. "Remember how the first five times we tried doing this, we gave up halfway through?" she recalls, looking up at you with an amused grin on her face. "I kicked you out a bunch of times, then there was that one time you ran off because you lost your boner."

For a moment she closes her knees around the jar to hold it steady and uses her now-free hand to cup your balls and squeeze them gently. "We were both so embarrassed but you kept coming back, and I was thinkin' like...wow, maybe he really means it? Maybe he's really that much of a weirdo," she says, looking back down at your cock. It's oozing so much precum that a long strand of it is just dangling off the very tip, almost all the way to the bottom of the jar. "You really are...totally shameless..." she adds, slowly, losing her train of thought a little bit as she watches the rope of precum finally break off and fall into the pool of cum at the bottom of the jar. You think you hear one of her exhalations catch in her throat a little bit, as though she was a little bit excited by the sight, but you can't be sure. It's still hard to believe this is actually happening.

Gura continues to milk your cock, eventually starting to use both her hands to stroke you, the jar between her bare knees. The bottom of her hoodie rides up bit by bit, and soon you can make out a pair of white underwear in the shadows between her thighs. You're so hard it almost hurts. Gura is acting a little less goofy as she focuses on her work. At a couple points, when she sees another wave of precum start to issue from your cock, she holds out one of her hands palm-up to catch it as it drips down, and resumes stroking you. "I bet you save a lot of money on lube," she says, impressed, as another strand of precum hits the bottom of the jar. She's now grabbing your cock with both hands around the base and, squeezing harder, slides them downwards to the head before letting go of your cock and repeating the motion. She really is milking you.

And she's starting to learn about you and the signs that you're about to lose control. Maybe your cock throbs in a certain way or the sound of your breathing changes, because she knows when you're about to cum without you needing to tell her. "Go on," Gura says, her voice breathier than usual. You watch as she does something you've never seen her do before - she reaches up the bottom of her hoodie, and you see her white panties bulge outwards as her hand descends into them. "Go on and cum," she repeats. Her stroking is making a lot of noise but you hear a different wet sound coming from between her thighs. You probably could have held on for another twenty seconds, but not after seeing and hearing that. Your cum paints the inside walls of the jar white, shooting from your cock in six consecutive bursts. Despite being the third time you've donated to the chum jar today, it's by far your biggest cumshot.

"Any day now, you'll finish filling this jar up," Gura says, a little breathlessly, still working your cock slowly. You see her pull her hand out of her panties, her fingers glistening in the low light.

"And then I guess a deal's a deal, and you'll get to fuck your little shark sister..."

[Anonymous No.]

>>7446781
Hot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7446781
I read a lot of smut. Little of it gives me an erection. Yours is special in that regard.

[Anonymous No.]

Before the thread dies, does anyone have that piss tierlist?

[Anonymous No.]

>>7447200
>>7447268
Not mine, it was posted a couple threads ago but archive anon didn't catch it. I was gonna say that in the post but the story is literally 4994 characters right under 4Chan's post limit, so I couldn't say anything other than "Archiv".

Archiveanon I love you but please archive this this time...

[Anonymous No.]

>>7446781
>>7390062

[Anonymous No.]

>>7447617
Don't worry. You replied to me. It's already in. Was it posted to the anchor or in a pastebin at all? I didn't see it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7447632
There were no anchors at the time of posting it. No pastebin either it was just crossposted which wasn't that smart but at the time I didn't know if cross posting was valid for the archive so i hesitated.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7447703
Crossposted as in linked from another thread? Someone mentioned that I missed some things from those before and I really feel bad about that. Need to be more diligent in that regard. Either way, it's been tucked away for safekeeping in the meantime. Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

[Anonymous No.]

>>7446781
UUUUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH