/wg/ - Writing General - 3rd Anniversary Edition!

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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>72252163 (/wg/ celebrated its third anniversary, our mini flash fiction contest kicked off and HoloX became the NTR gen, for some reason)
/wg/ rentry for bakers: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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STORY ANCHOR
Drop a story here to celebrate the anniversary!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
There were two stories posted last thread:

It's /wg/'s Birthday... Again!
>>72304453
Tags: Ina, Shiori, shitpost, meta, comedy

Pestilent Angel
>>72348044
Tags: Abuse

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CONTEST ANCHOR
>The /wg/ Flash Fiction Festival
>Theme: Chuuba Abuse (Receiving or Giving) - To be tagged with either Sexual, Physical, or Psychological plus Severe
>Word count: 4channel's max character limit
>Time limit: 1 week from the anniversary on March 26, 2024
>Voting: Polling done through poal.me

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Happy Anniversary!

[Anonymous No.]

How time fucking flies. I swear it's only been a few months since I first stumbled upon this thread and the first chapter of Holofantasy had just dropped.

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>I've been writing for this thread for almost three years
Dang
Here's to more propserous years, bountiful writers, revived series and a ticket out of WIP hell!

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>>72441466
Daydreams
[Shiori, (Light) Abuse, Doomed]

The sound of death rings out as you clash for what you hope is the last time.

Every blow makes your body pulse with fatigue. She is aided by forbidden alchemy and insight, but you are only human. For every blow you strike, you are gouged and severed, but it is only flesh.

Her death approaches.

The Archivist, last of her ilk, wields an innocuous letter opener. Her magic has left her, but the blade drips still with blood that is not your own, letted from victims whom the years will not let you forget.

The last strike sends her reeling. She heaves an involuntary gasp, as if reminded suddenly of her own humanity, here at the edge of the cliff. She toes the edge of an invisible circle, mindful as you are of how the coin can flip.

“Don’t… be so eager, my darling jailer,” she pants.

“This story has gone on long enough,” you preempt.

“I disagree. There’s still so much to learn. So much to see. You understand, don’t you?”

“Better than anyone.”

“Anyone?” she teases weakly, her voice a broken lyre whose tune you had once let demand your heart.

“Imprisonment to The Cell is for eternity unto death – prisoner and jailer alike. No friend, lover, nor family member could be so familiar as the Librarians.”

“Your fellow knights… such a dauntless bunch.” She stokes the red inside you. You don’t dare deny the intent.

“Dauntless and greater to me, every one. Only by survival do I claim to be first. It is for them that you must die.”

Their voices echo these halls calling for the end to this wretched tale.

Shiori… she will never stop. Life and death mean nothing to her. Tools and tales all; a single soul weighed against a scrap of knowledge is no sale, but a cycle. Civilizations would fall to feed her gluttonous soul, if not for you and this moment.

“Yes… this must end. Today, both of us leave The Cell.” Coldness is etched into your breath, seeping bitterly into your voice.

Beneath the madness, her golden eyes soften with weariness. “I suppose this is a wonderful end too, is it not?”

“Come and die, Shiori.”

You summon your fury and spring after her. A slip of mana escapes from the Archivist’s foot as reeds of papyrus erupt forth to block your assault.

Though your momentum is slowed and exhaustion crumples you to the floor, your blades collide once again as she is flung into a spire of tomes. You waste no time, but neither does she, adrenaline compelling you both to stand once more.

The air boils close to eruption; the atmosphere bubbles with delirium. You circle – each trying to take the lead, yearning for the intimacy of the kill – to cut your fangs on the other’s throat.

You melt and suffocate beneath the red fugue, drifting lost where your days were spent whiling the intimate hours away in this very chamber – when you loved the hunt as two. You could glimpse into her passion and nearly get swept within, becoming her companion on the endless journey: her prisoner – her knight.

Yes, jailers and prisoners both are inhabitants of The Cell. From Eternity Unto Death. There was indeed a time when you pictured that eternity with her.

You wonder if she saw the same.

Lost in memory, you have suffered another wound, but what is more blood spilt in your home? You grip Shiori’s pale, delicate wrist with your palm, rejecting her as she struggles to pull the dagger free. With the other, you jam your blade through her torso as her widening eyes send you into vertigo.

What did she expect? This was always going to be the end, from the moment she killed your brothers and flew from this cage. That she returned at all is proof she expected this climax.

You slam your blade into the wood beneath with the last of your strength, spearing her to the foundation. In a swift move, you encircle her sorceress fingers with yours and crush until they snap.

You curse the lonesome part of you reminding you to cover her lips, lest she speak enchantment into the air.

Alas, your blade has driven the air from her lungs. She gasps and silently asks her endless questions to the gods above, but no one answers. No one is there but you.

When Shiori is finally called to account before the heavens, she and those lost will be reunited, but you will remain at an empty home amidst the memories gathering dust on the walls. Perhaps the Library will one day have a new prisoner and new jailers, but you will always be hers, locked away in the warmth of yesterday.

You lock eyes. Is there understanding reflected in the glow, or is it the death spiral of two caged animals? The possibilities left unrealized slip away with the scent of blood on the wind, and the flesh in your maw tastes no sweeter for it.

You allow your hatred its due and watch as she fades away. All that remains of you is you. You hold her close and rest with her for the last time.

The world is saved. There is nothing for you but faded golden daydreams.

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>>72441293
>HoloX became the NTR gen, for some reason
In fairness, while a big reason that HoloX is like that is from thread memes. There are a couple of other factors that contribute to them being the most suited to it.
Respectively the group has,
>Strong lore outside of being streamers, which contributes to them having scenarios outside of "Fucked on stream" and generic GF NTR scenarios
>Strong group cohesion, them being HoloX is central enough to all of their characters that having HoloX members in a concept tend to chain/tag in other HoloX members.
>They're different enough to each other that they're all within the strike zones of different NTR men.

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>>72441293
Happy Anniversary, /wg/!

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Need me a yandere peko fic

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>>72446813
How would a yandere peko fic even work?

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>>72346606
Well, fuck
> Because forbidden or not, there was love
>Is Fubuki there?
God fucking dammit, the husband deserved so much better.

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>>72448499
He defended Hana throughout the story, wilfully ignorant of what a bad parent she was. He deserved it.

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>>72447751
>>72446813
POV: You're her monkey
>>72448499
Now you know.

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>>72448625
He was still there for anon, and was the dad he never had. I agreed with his outlook on Fubu and Anon's relationship. He has his flaws but he's still the most innocent character by far aside from say, Mio or her daughter

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>>72441293
May this gen stand forever. Happy anniversary!
I believe this is the 2nd anniversary I'm in that is not a strict talent/company related thread.

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Survive

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>>72447751
She's the princess of Pekoland and you're the man she loves, but she can't marry you because you're a peasant and Pekoland needs a political marriage anyway.
You also love another girl, but you can't marry her because Pekora would have you two executed.

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>>72451431
I'm not calling your idea bad or anything but couldn't she just like, abdicate from her position to the throne or something?

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>>72452621
And give up all the perks? No way. She can have her anon and eat the cake made by the palace chefs too.

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>>72452621
Outside of a principality a princess doesn't rule, so she doesn't get to make decisions like that. But you could write it in a way where she accepts you as her consort or affair for a variety of reasons (she loves her family, she accepts her role in the system, she doesn't mind the arrangement...).

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>>72452890
Or it's just kind of normal for people married for political reasons to cheat on each other as long as they gloss over it in public.

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>>72452976
This sounds like a setup to make her your secretly degenerate buttslut, because only her husband can give her legitimate children.

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>>72447751
Every time something bad happens to you, your Best Friend Pekora comes right by to cheer you up. Bit strange that she always comes by wearing that whole bunny girl ensemble, you thought it was a joke at first but she kept doing it and you stopped asking why. It's also strange that bad things seem to keep happening right when it seems you've turned it around, but your best buddy pekora will never abandon you.

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>>72452747
I guess I'm just the weird one here because its stupid that you can't be with the one you love because of political bullshit and stuff.

But I do love the idea >>72451431

>>72453786
Does this scenario also involve you trying to confess to another girl but she turns you down the next day saying it was a joke?

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>>72453960
>I guess I'm just the weird one here because its stupid that you can't be with the one you love because of political bullshit and stuff.
It is stupid, but also very believable. Reality isn't known for being fair.

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>>72453960
>Does this scenario also involve you trying to confess to another girl but she turns you down the next day saying it was a joke?
Either that or that girl suddenly ceasing all contact with you or their family just up and leaving out of the blue.

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>>72454436
Then would it be entirely pointless to see such a story when that scenario already exists?

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>>72454585
Yes, I know this scenario is just
>So as a joke
But with yandere.
That's the joke anon.

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>>72454875
My apologises then, anon. I wasn't aware that you were making a joke.

I would like to see it though ngl. The story needs an update as the previous scenario involved Rushia

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>>72454988
I feel like yandere Rushia stories are the opposite of outdated, considering the developments.

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>>72453960
>I guess I'm just the weird one here because its stupid that you can't be with the one you love because of political bullshit and stuff.
It is stupid, but it's part of the gig sometimes, and plays out a nice little conflict. There's also no shortage of fun things you can write for these types of scenarios, so the sky's the limit.

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I recall once unintentionally derailing a /wg/ thread into a Rushia drama thread with my prompt, but I can't remember what I said.

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>>72456455
Found it. My prompt didn't cause as much mayhem as I remembered it causing though.
>Rise: Anon becomes friends with Rushia and starts falling in love with her.
>Downfall: Just when it seems like Rushia is starting to fall in love with Anon, the Mafumafu Incident occurs but it's triggered by Anon's discord message on this timeline.
>Aftermath: Anon and Rushia start dating but Rushia's heart isn't in it at all. Rushia retires from vtubing entirely, loses motivation to do anything is completely dependent on Anon.
One possible ending: Anon and Rushia have sex. Anon tells Rushia that he loves her. Rushia answers "Fuck you" with dead eyes.

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>>72446813
>>72455523
Rushia is old hat, the fiction becomes less appealing when it's real. We have plenty of high-pressure troublesome women to choose from just gotta direct it outward.

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>>72457003
Troublesome women you say? I'll take mine with ice.

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>>72457366
Need a drunk Lamy to throw a fit because I had to take a phone call and rape me for not paying enough attention to her

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>>72457862
God what I'm going to write about this troublesome woman doing to me.

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>>72451431
This reminds me of a scenario I was planning and then forgot about. Basically a fantasy story where Anon gets to fuck a new holo every chapter as a reward for his heroics.
In the first chapter Anon gets ambushed and captured on sea by Houshou Pirates who in turn proceed to get ambushed and captured by law enforcement. Anon and Marine join forces and together make a plan to escape from prison and free Marine's crew.
In the second chapter Anon and Houshou Pirates sail to Pekoland where they happen to be in the right place at the right time to stop an assassination attempt on Pekora. Together with Pekora and Marine, Anon discovers a coup d'état plot which he prevents.
In the third chapter Anon travels to oni village to redeem sexing's from Ayame but I've forgotten the details (if there were any in the first place).

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>>72458910
>In the third chapter Anon travels to oni village to redeem sexing's from Ayame but I've forgotten the details (if there were any in the first place).
This would be a good place to insert fightsexuality, if you ever get around to it.

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>>72459323
The probability is quite low so you're all free to treat that post as a prompt.

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>>72457862
>Come home from work late one night to a plastered Lamy
>Tell her about your day at work, she starts going off when you half heartedly mention talking to one of your coworkers (a girl)
>She goes ballistic, cries that you don't love her, you're cheating, ect.
>In the middle of her freakout you get a super important phone call from your boss (who also happens to be a girl)
>She goes crazy, rips the phone out of your hand and drags you to the bed, demanding you impregnate her on the spot to prove your love and loyalty to her

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>>72464062
Love Pervy Poru

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>>72464159
That should be MY butt Polka is trying to sneak a peak at, not hers. It's not fair.

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>>72465375
Wear a short dress like IRyS, maybe it'll attract her.

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>>72465962
For Polka, I would.

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>>72441372
A doomed battle trying to save an evil Bijou.

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>>72467812
I don't know man. I've thought of some pretty seemingly hopeless battles, but this one I'm not even sure I can win. Look at how tall she is. Pebble golem?! I don't think I can combat this kind of edge.

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>>72468004
>>72467812
Oh boy, I can feel the trenchcoat on my shoulders and Linkin Park playing on my headphones just thinking about it.

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Thanks to everyone who read my anniversary fic last thread, which really did not deserve it for being a half-baked shitpost that I cobbled together in a couple of days. I'm glad people enjoyed it though, here's to another year of /wg/.

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>>72470209
The only misgiving I have is that the need for chuuba sex is such a major aspect of both parts, and yet we dont see the climax

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>>72470209

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>>72470862
That's a big wine glass. Koyori must use her finger muscles a lot.

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>>72470209
The title drop was very kino.

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>>72470963
She types a lot every day, not to mention all the meticulous experiments she has to do.

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>>72470209
You’re a treasure to the thread, HCAnon.

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You stay away from page 10.

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Today I shall write

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>>72471391
I guess it's easy when you can pull up floating screens anywhere.

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>>72475248
Let's do this.

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>>72475248
let's WRIIIIITTEEEEEE

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You guys are not ready for what I have cooking.

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>>72481283
flare can go through an entire barrack worth of soldiers!

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>>72481623
And who is as strong as a barrack of soldiers? Me.

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>>72481623
like....in a fight right?

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>>72481283
Lots of toasty babe.

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>>72481283
What the hell is wrong with the bottom right frea?

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>>72481805
She's sucking and fucking

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Get up

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>>72484014
You heard her! Get up

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>>72484014

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>>72487170
Mio, please. My dick needs rest too...

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>>72488894
all these hags are way too active. We need to write a fic about Mio's hornyness far outpacing her hag body

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>>72473873
Koyori feels like she'd be the type to have a gun if throwing vials of wacky chemicals doesn't fit the fiction of that the story is trying to tell. I can't really see her as the sword type.

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>>72489140
I agree 100%. She's just been playing FF7R recently and I think it was a cute koyo pic. Back to what you said though, how about a gun that SHOOTS vials and chemical bombs?
I may actually jot that down for her later encounters, since she was kinda a close range fighter when it came to using her own vials and such. At least when her own mobile inventions weren't doing their thing.

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>>72489428
This is reminding me of another discussion about Koyori having a gun. I don't remember when it was but it ended with the idea of Koyori being the only person in a medieval setting to somehow have a modern gun. Everyone else uses magitech/clockpunk but she somehow just has a Single Action Army she forged herself.

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>>72489818
I think Koyori's should be super magiteched, since she would want to put shit like visuals on it, dials to adjust its own settings, and probably make it pink. Botan is the girl for me to have more modern looking gun that she forged herself.

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>>72484014

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CLEAR

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>>72481805

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>>72494639
She and Noel can take on any number of soldiers together!

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>>72489818
Yeah the discussion was about one man fighting HoloX all at once and Koyori having a M1911. While everyone was using swords and magic Koyori had GUN.

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>>72496240
BUT LIKE.... IN A FIGHT RIGHT?
RIGHT?!?!

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>>72496421
>IN A FIGHT
That too!

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>>72496240
>>72496421
>>72496631

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>>72441372
Revolutionary idea: Sniffing Nene's musk after a long day of dancing and then her sitting on your face.

BUT

She's super chill with it and its happy to indulge in your fetish

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>>72497748
Nene would only let you smell her stinky feet. Any other smells are off limits, sorry.

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>>72497921
shut up lamy, nene is okay with me sniffing her butthole

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>>72497995
>lamy getting jealous that you dont pay her attention and ultimately wanting you to dick her
>You,however, just want to smash Nene and then talk about beetles

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>>72496421
>>72481805
So how many guys can Bae take on simultaneously?

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>>72498452
A room full of men that pass her around like a bong

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>>72498563
Rratzers.

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>>72497748
It sounds similar to the wholesome slut Nene that has sex with people because it's fun and makes them happy.

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>>72500553
i get why you say that but i was going more from the fact that she's also a pervert and could go "oh yeah i totally get it! go ahead and sniff!"

Then again she could also cash in a "fetish coupon" and ask you to sit on her face to huff your balls or some deranged M thing

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>>72500838
Oh yeah. I completely forgot Nene is into abusive men

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>>72500838
>sitting on Nene’s face and making her huff and lick my sack sweat
fuck the original prompt give me that good shit

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>>72500838
I like the idea of holos trading sexual favors with you, but you can't let them notice that you enjoy what they make you do.

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aaaa

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>>72500838
Sittin on her throat then making her swallow ballsdeep

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>>72489031
Do you want your dick to end up in a cast for six months, anon?

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So hows your contest entry coming together anon?

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>>72506254
Right now? I'm still thinking of how to make it sufficiently different from the other thing I'm writing at the moment

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>>72506254
I have a few ideas, but I don't know if they're possible to execute in less than 1000 words. At least finding out shouldn't take to long...

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>>72509497
You could always make a sequel if you need one

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10

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>>72506254
Aint joining no contest, for I am busy making one myself.

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>>72498452
0.5

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>>72512449
You're making your own contest?

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>>72441372
Mori has been picked as the representative of Hololive’s new R18 branch. Whether she consents or not isn’t relevant, Hololive City has its own laws.

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>>72513369
Yes, and only I get to join, therefore making me the sole winner.

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>>72513369
Yes, on the racetrack.

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>>72514940
Will you sign up wg? That'd be nice

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>>72515643
Uhhhhhh I dunno man, I'd rather someone else dew it, it'd kinda be conflict of interest since I am already organizer along with the guy who runs vtrp.

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>>72514839
You're 11 entries too late lol.

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>>72516882
What does it take to do?

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>>72517642
You need to write a short fic about chuuba abuse, about the length of a single 4chan post and enter it with tags to the contest anchor

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>>72518041
I'm talking about the racing competition for vt

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>>72518135
Fill up the form, we'll mail you the template for your main chosen car, then submit it back to us. Then Assetto Corsa ai will take care of the rest.

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>>72519637
Right then, after I bath. Like, a whole rentry?

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>>72521253
Dont mind this, my phone retarded and is acting like a cut snake

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>>72521386
I'm confused.

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>>72522806
Basically, wrong tab.

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>>72441372
Marine teaches you how to kiss

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>>72519637
What does one do with the template before it can be submitted back to you? Does it require graphic design skills or creativity?

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>>72524761
Graphic design? Minimal I'd say.
Creativity? A moderate amount.

And btw, dont forget to indicate which gen are you.

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>>72525126
Cant believe I forgot to say it earlier, but yeah, make a livery out of it.

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Nenechi daddy-daughter incest.
Full biological daughter, or diet 'She was born from your wife's infidelity' incest?

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>>72525359
Depends on the context personally. If it's adult Nene maybe the latter and when you tell her the truth about her birth she immediately jumps your bones because now there's nothing she feels bad about for wanting you. If it's Loli Nene then being her full-blooded widower dad would be good

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>>72526763
>you might not be my father, but I want you to be my daddy...

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>>72527047
Making my daughter a mother!

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>>72528040
Just like Miyuki.

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>>72532710
I can't believe I'm going to get a blowjob from my oshi...! Is this the real life? Or is this just fantasy?
"Ayame... <3"
>Ayame raises her head and accidentally impales your balls with her horns

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>>72533185
Always use protection.

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>>72533185
Put marshmallows on them and then seductively nibble on them

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>>72533516
Does she feel anything in her horns?

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>>72532710
>>72533185
>>72533303
>>72533516
>>72533585
I fucking hate fleshorns so much its unreal

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>>72533677
Ayame doesn't actually have fleshhorns. They're white like keratin

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>>72533736
i know, but one pic had them and now im a full on anti

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>>72441372
I need any variation of Suisei's usual facade demolished and her being completely and utterly embarassed.
I dont care if its about her not having panties, letting a fart out, being blatantly wrong, talking to her plushies, getting caught jerking off, pissing, whatever.
Im giving carte blanche to anyone because i just want suisei utterly embarassed to the point of tears

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>>72534303
>[SHOCKING NEWS] CORRUPTION IN THE IDOL INDUSTRY! SUISEI SEX TAPE LEAKED! HOSHIMACHI SUISEI PLEASING OLD MEN FOR A MAIN EVENT SPOT IN THE ______ FESTIVAL!

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>>72534833
>"Yeah we told her we would sing the contract but then her and the pink one started sucking. A bit unprofessional if you ask me! Back in my day you would fight the deal a bit, but kids these day just dont have any spine"

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>>72535890
The old men had no musical talent and the two were desperate to save their ears.

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>>72536018
kek i didnt realize that. But then again that also feeds into this prompt
>"Hey all of this logistic shit is really boring...when is the sucking starting?"
>All the oji san look up from their contracts
>One coughs
>"The only one sucking is my ex wife! that's 30% of my salary"
>Laughter

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>All of Cover Corp gather to discuss the Suisei sex tape
YAGOO: A-chan, play the tape
>A-chan turns on the projector and the film starts playing on a massive screen
>Suisei rimming some some old man while giving a reach-around
SUISEI: Is this really 100% necessary?

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>>72537292
>"Yes"
>"Also someone bring a bucket. Iroha is leaking"

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>>72534303
Does having to service some guy count even if noone else finds out about it?

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>>72539368
Even if no one found out, I'm sure she'll still be devastated

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>>72506254
I'm a hack who can only write fluff so I'm not entering

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>>72541190
Same, but I'm gonna give it a try anyway. You should too.

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>>72534303
didn't she have a section in that wedgie anthology? otherwise it feels like there should be a couple stories in /ringo/

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>>72541190
>>72541434
You can totally write fluff for the contest, as long as there's abuse somewhere. Even a normally wholesome fluff scene with a dark twist in the last sentence or two would work.

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>>72541446
Yeah, Suisei was embarrassed in the HoloShorts story where she played truth and dare with some others. Mostly when she had to take her jeans off.

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>>72537703
Poor Iroha getting her ideal girlfriend stolen away from her by a dirty old man.

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>>72542084
>Iroha takes over a music company so she can sexually exploit Suisei in return for an album deal

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>>72542448
>Degozaru Records LLC. takes off
>Suisei's contract has wording that has left her trapped, it gets automatically renewed unless she gets a better deal
>Finally her kouhai has come to rescue her and let her earn more $$$ in the process
>It's all worth it
>hfw Iroha demands Suisei crawl under her desk to 'see what she's worth'

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>>72541190
Write a really compelling fluff story then add a twist at the end about how the chuuba has been putting pictures of anon's dick on facebook or something

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>>72542448
>Suisei's agent tells her that he has a great deal lined up, sends her the requirements
>"God, I hope I don't have to eat old man ass again. Let's see what the "favor" is this ti- a romantic dinner followed by cuddling and praise? Who wrote this?

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>>72541434
>>72541520
>>72543171
Ehhh

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>>72545889
You can also start out with abuse and reach a happy ending if you want.

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>>72545889
Give it a try, it might come out better than you think and it's always a great writing exercise to try and step out of your comfort zone.

[Anonymous No.]

Not so fast

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>>72541446
She should be in another if I can finish it God willing

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>>72543352
>Suisei's agent apologizes, says he's got another one lined up and sends her the requirements.
>"Well it can't be worse... Brave the depths of my dungeon. Descend the 100 dungeon levels, defeat the Dark Lord and retrieve the proof of your victory by ripping the shining silmarils from his crown. Only then may you be worthy of this contract."
>...
>"Well it's not the worst offer I've ever gotten..."

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>>72551130
Give us that ultra-embarassed Suisei, wedgiefriend!

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>>72441372
Coming across a chuuba whos trying to kill herself but you stop her

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>>72551186
Now you're making me imagine the Silmarillion but with chuubas. I don't hate it

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>>72551186
>>72553174
If Suisei is Beren, does that mean Miko plays Luthien's part?

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>>72553174
I was making more of a reference to Angband (The rogue like) but yeah, you can't really dodge Tolkien references with that.

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>>72553575
She could just be a doomed adventurer. An @ with equipment and a dream, doomed to be defiled by all manner of evil that lurk in the dark.

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>>72553644
Ironic that the descent to Angband's throneroom is relatively easy for Beren and Luthien, but it makes for a great game.
>>72554327
Like dragons?

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>>72554327
A nice idea, but it would work better with a party.

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>>72554327
time to write holotrap dungeon!

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>>72441372
https://rentry.org/nd4qvww2
Brat correction
TAGS: Takanashi Kiara, SS, Shotacon, Oneeshota


Ok so i think its time to admit defeat and post that edited version by the kind anon.
You see, the cool part about google docs is that it stores a copy of your work in case something really goofy and silly like THE FUCKING BACKUP YOU HAD GETS CORRUPTED FOR SOME UNGODLY REASON and it also autoupdates so you dont lose your progress by accidentally hitting the reset button.
Long story short: im throwing the towel and just publishing it even if i wanted a fucked up budding romance inbetween the two because this fic paralyzes my other wips.

Some spark notes of what i wanted to imply, kinda spoilers for the ending

>Mori showed Kiara the world of shotacon. Only Kiara acted on it so far.
>I rewrote some parts of it so Kiara had information she wasnt supposed to have, thus making the twist hit a bit harder
>Kiara jerks you off with her panties

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>>72561570
>>72441333
COME THE FUCK ON MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN i gotta stop fucking this up

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>>72561863
Don't worry, anon. Just try better next time I guess

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH IM WRITING TOO GODDAMN MUCH. THIS FUCK IS GONNA BE SO FUCKING LONG WHY AM MY SCOPE CREEPING MYSELF I SWORE I WASNT GOING TO AGAIN AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TASUKETE EDITORMAN

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>>72562217
he cant help you! now write for all eternity bwahahahahahaha

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>>72562944
Hand him over and nobody gets hurt.

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CLEAR

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>>72562944
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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>>72441466

At the precipice of madness.
TAGS: (Existential?) Abuse. Hakos Baelz. Gore

Night closes in as you walk through the empty streets. For some, the last train getting canceled is a drag. For you trying to flee the crime scene is a problem.

A police patrol zooms across the empty street and your breath hitches. You hunch and hope they don't notice your blood stained clothes

Please don't let this nightmare continue.

The patrol turns left in the corner and disappears, and so do you as you sneak into an alley. Just a few more blocks and you will reach home. One last push and you can try to fix everything here

Something just outside of your field of vision slams you into the wall, followed by a blow to the stomach that drives the air out of you as a raspy voice assaults your ears

“MONEY!GIVE ME THE FUCKING MONEY”

You protest as you feel his hands dig in your pocket, trying to crawl away as the mugger keeps raining blows on you.
“I…nothing...ack…i have nothing “

Your legs get swept and you hit the floor like a discarded toy, bones rattling as you groan in pain. The man delivers a kick to your face and the world explodes into red and white lights. Hands pat your body, but you are too busy groaning and trying to crawl away. Another blow to your ribs stops that

“Stay put asshole, ill fucking kill you” something metallic digs in your neck. A gun or a knife. His voice sounds more annoyed than rattled. This street rat has done this before

That sobers you up, focusing your mind. Maybe this can end early

“Do…Do it retard…you dickless faggot”
The metal digs in your skin, confirming it's a gun as he delivers another kick in your ribs. You muster more air

“Maybe suck some dicks like your mom, retarded monkey”

Another kick, this one is particularly vicious. He’s losing it.

“Shut the fuck up!”
“Dont waste it all on..coff…on crack you rape monkey”

He grabs a handful of your hair and slams your head in the street. Despite the pain, you feel accomplished because he’s no longer searching for anything to steal.

He’s too busy beating you up

“SHUT THE FUCK UP! ONE MORE WORD AND IM FUCKING KILLING YOU”

Pain spreads through your body, but you know he’s about to blow up. You gather all your strength and roll over, looking him straight in the eye as your bloodied mouth screams at him

“FUCKING ABORTION!”

The Man’s eye hardens, the gun clicks, you hear the safety go off.

And then a loud crack.

For a second, you are free.

The alley, the street, it all goes silent. For a split second there is no pain as the muzzle flash blinds you.

For a second you don't feel fear, guilt and despair. All you feel is elation. For less than a second you are free.

And then the bullet stops in mid air.

The mugger screams, but you don't care. All you feel is despair

“No” you mumble, zoning out the man as he screams “Why do you do this”

The mugger’s scream reaches a crescendo as his skin starts peeling out, exposing his bleeding muscles and nerves. Just like Emilia in the station

“Please” you whimper “Please stop already”

The man is still alive as his muscles and bones are pulled apart, splashing the alley with all the blood in his body. A normal person would have died already.

But she’s not letting him out easily

“PLEASE! HELP! IT HURTS! PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU! HELP ME MOM PLEASE”

Tears run down your face as the chunks of meat slowly tear themselves out of the bones, each one of them probably feeling this. His skin starts disintegrating, as his cries of pain and mercy intensify.

And then a finger wipes away your tears, like she always does. There is no one there except you and the man, whose bones and nerves have evaporated

>”Sssh Darling, its okay”

Her voice is layered, like every single voice you've ever heard in your life speaking at the same time, all in your head

>"I cant do much from here, but suicide will just send you under the heaven's filthy claws"

The chunks of meat that were once the man cry in pain, and yet somehow you wish you could be him.

He, at least, will die once she gets bored. You, however, are forever her favorite.

Every day, you will live in solitude and pain ,knowing that everyone coming close to you is bound to catch her jealous rage

>"Those lousy cops are also gone...heheheh...i fused them to the seat... its so...poetic dont you think?"

Your eyes drift to the floor, where the chunks are weeping and praying to god for the pain to stop. There, in the middle of the chunks, a rat with glowing red eyes stands

>"Ill forgive you for talking to that woman darling...I know you love me, but i just... i just had to, you know?"

Until the day you finally leave this world, chaos herself walks alongside you. Wherever you like it...or not

[Anonymous No.]

Man, I was hoping that for the contest people would be writing stories about chuubas kicking me in the balls and shoving high heels up my ass. You guys take things pretty far.

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>>72570513
Hey man people have different love languages alright?
i wanted to enter the contest but didnt want to take the easy out of having bae do dom play and then her breaking out in tears because she thinks it went too far. So turning people into paste while they still feel everything it is

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>>72570513
I mean there's technically a fic for the second thing already

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>>72571495
Go on...

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>>72571791
Turns out it wasn't actually archived but it was an omake for the 'A Predator's Touch' series. It does also feature Botan being a little rough with your balls too.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSl_7V8Ei1mQo3ztW9o4nvnRlmP28osIZ_xHm8-1V8kAgButcn356BzbIWxd9S5cgiTZbwr62e_PsMV/pub

Also for Backup Shiori, in the series archive 'A Predator's Touch, A Hazy Yellow Line (Part 2)' has a broken link due to missing a 'b' at the end of it.

I hope this guy comes back and finishes this series I think it's really fucking good

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TAA

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>>72572713
we need less dom botan fics and more fics about her hairy stinky cunt

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>>72562217
I JUST REALIZED I FORGOT A SCENE AND ITS ACTUALLY CRUCIAL FOR THE PLOT
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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>>72570513
That still sounds terrifying as abuse

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>>72576895
What if you just wrote around that scene not being seen. Make it entirely a flashback that's never viewed directly.

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>>72580944
Cute kooma

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>>72580944
>Kooma Marine will never break down your door and begin slashing at your pants while making cute bear noises but also easily smashing you around

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>>72559070
>holotrap dungeon!
Man... Both variations of that idea keep bouncing in my head.
>Holos in ero trap getting sluttified by dungeon nasties
>Femanon getting corrupted by Holos
But I have no idea how to actually write it except as an anthology of mostly unconnected bad ends.

[Anonymous No.]

New variation of holotrap dungeon: a sex dungeon where a bunch of trap holos gangbang a-chan and nodoka

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>>72584698
I would simply hunt down the trap version of Okayu and Korone and make them both suck my dick at once while they jerk eachother off on their knees below me.

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>>72582740
What's wrong with that idea? That's the point of that trope, anyway

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>>72585238
I'm not really the type that write porn without plot. So I'd have to write those bad ends to be "thematic" and by nature those would have to be really depressing.
Something like
>Suisei ventures into erotrapband in order to gain a music contract
>*Insert string of corrupting events here*
>Mindbroken and pregnant Suzy with massive milk jugs performing a live in a VERY slutty idol uniform in front of a crowd of maturating demons.
>Story ends with her bukkake'd in demon cum, the finale of her performance being the audience rushing to fuck all of her holes.
The only "wholesome" scenario I could even think of would be
>Depressed Shion enters erotrapband for *vague reasons*
>*Insert corruption sequence here*
>Shion happy being the onahole wife of an orc.
>Happily helping him capture new slaves

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>>72585788
Replace the orc with a dragon and it's great.

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>>72586867
>Replace the orc with a dragon
The orc is supposed to be a stand in for a fat ugly oji-sans, what does the dragon stand in for? A rich guy keeping her as a trophy wife?
I mean... I can kind of envision that. Maybe have it be caused by some cursed artifact that was formerly of the dragon's horde. Like some cursed circlet she wears before identifying that makes her unconsciously go towards his horde.
Have it climax with Shion mind controlled sitting atop a pile of treasure, driven to lust as she sees the dragon, a wry smirk on his face as his beloved treasure returned with an onahole attached. After that, cut to Shion in the afterglow mind broken and accepting of being treasure.

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>>72585788
Everyday I mourn the fact that "Credit where it's due" will never be finished

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>>72587271
You can read it symbolically like that, I just like the idea of women being enslaved to a magical higher being that isn't really evil but just enforcing the natural order.

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>>72587406
Yep, RIP Menhera Wrangler Anon. His commissioned work was hit or miss but damn were they good when he hit.

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>>72587406
It can be finished, anon. You just have to spread that tight little wallet you've got for Daddy.

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>>72588202
He's still writing. Still on a new commission right now, in fact - first SFW commission I've ever requested. Currently he's waiting on my lazy ass to do a partial rewrite of the existing script as part of the feedback process.

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>>72587406
>>72588202
Hey, fanfic as a genre defies the idea of intellectual property. So you can write a sequel yourself if you want

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>>72585788
Is Coco also in it but instead of getting raped she gets cucked instead?

[Anonymous No.]

CLEAR

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>>72561570
Oh hey, definitely gonna read this one later.

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>>72588300
>Stuck in the commision mines
He might as well be dead...

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>>72441372
Koyori's lab gets bought out by a rich politician and she's forced to do sexual favours for him and become his sex slave if she ever wants to reclaim it back.

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>>72588801
How the the fuck would that even work?
Would she enter with a party of her gen mates, and see all of them fall off the slippery slope until she gets absorbed into a wall where the only thing she can do is masturbate while everyone else gets bred and fall ever further into degeneracy. Presumably with it being a really fucking stretched metaphor for graduation.

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>>72592467
https://archive.palanq.win/vt/thread/62642851/#q62715962

Something similar to this.

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>>72441372
Agent Zeta torturing you for information but she's mostly just having fun with it

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>>72594125
(1)

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[Anonymous No.]

Do we have a written tournament arc yet

[Anonymous No.]

> tried to write a chunk of text focusing more on other characters, get some practice in
> ran out of steam and inspiration 200 words in
god I am so sick and tired of being me

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>>72600022
You can still salvage it anon, make it mildly abuse themed and chuck it into the contest race.

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>>72600022
Same.

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>>72581000
It's way too critical to not be seen. The climax hinges on it.

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>>72602276
If you add it right now, we'll keep it a secret

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>>72602276
That's goes for a lot of smut scenes.

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>>72603021
Yeah, I guess smut feels unfinished without the climax.

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>>72599727
Like a tournament arc between writers? Or a tournament arc within a story?

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>>72606627
>(You Won't) Survive AZKi

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>>72600022
Same but with 1000 words

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>>72604931
Actually shonen tournament with fighting and a subplot that eventually disrupts the tournament so they dont have to write a winner (hint it was the main guy all along)

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>>72606867
Isn't she easily distracted with a good game of Geogessur?

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>>72609854
That sound retardedly fun.
>so they dont have to write a winner
/wg/ writers avoiding finishing their stories? Unthinkable.

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>>72441466

Gooberball.

Gura, sexual, severe.

Gura stepped into the room donning a soccer uniform and a skip in her step. -Hoowa! Time to get serious, time for the penalties!-
Across the room she saw her target, your cock and balls sticking out of a hole and eagerly awaiting to be kicked into the stratosphere.

-Ho... - Gura took a few steps back for momentun, and then ran at full throttle towards her balls - Haaa!- She screamed. Despite her determined demeanor, she couldn't outrun her idiocy. Tripping on her own foot, Gura fell with her knee on top of the two testicles. Your muffled screams escaped your prison underneath the floor as the girl's bony knee threatened to turn your balls into mist.

-Is that a homerun? Do I run?- Gura looked around at the nonexistent crowd. -Yeeeah! Told you I was the best!- She said as she ran circles around your twitching member. Whimpers and cries escaped your muffled mouth as you felt the pain rush to your head like a gunshot. Your balls were so sore they felt as if you didn't have them any longer. Just as you thought the show was over, Gura's voice crept inside your hiding spot.

-Huh? 1-1? I have to uneven the scores? -She said as looked back down at your cock and balls. -Alright, I'll do it!

In a macabre twist of fate, the anticipation of Gura's second kick made you shoot a load of cum and blood, one that Gura wouldn't notice as she ran back towards your dick and accidentally slipped foward so hard she was flipped horizontally.

And so, standing on her nose and her bodyweight exerting its pressure, Gura's neck snapped and she died, her limp body coming down on just the right angle for her foot to kick you on the balls again.

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>>72441372

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>>72615594
>Tfw this can pass as "daddy's girl" fanart
damn, impregnation fans win big time with Mio

[Anonymous No.]

You haven't finished that WIP yet?

[Anonymous No.]

>>72619253
I haven't finished in Mio's womb yet...

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>>72613541
Oh nyo

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Up

[Anonymous No.]

>One of my favorite authors liked my own work.

[Anonymous No.]

NO! go up, goddamn

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[Anonymous No.]

Punished Chammers

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>>72623458
That's the good shit.

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>>72619253
I promise that I'm working hard on it every day. Even if I don't even up writing anything that day, I'm brainstorming and imagining my scenes with the OP, ED, and instrumental scene music. I'm doing my best.

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>>72619253
I'm trying my best.

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>>72599727
Thinking about it, I don't think chuuba fic is the kind of fandom that can really support a tournament arc.
Since a tournament arc needs prior stakes and buildup it would need both prior stakes and buildup from previous arcs, and a tone that supports that kind of thing. So it would have to be some kind of multi-arc 'battle' fic.
By nature, this thread is kind of averse to throwaway OCs. So it would have to have a cast of chuubas that are currently unused and unplanned for chapters further in.
...
I think only holojourneys and holofantasy have the kind of story structure to support a tournament arc. Anyone else starting fresh would need to have a prologue/journey's start arc first for their (harem) battle fic.

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>>72619253
see
>>72562217

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>>72632175
How many words are you up to now?

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>>72524276
That's revolting

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>>72633680
The only reason you are alive is because you're not worth the legal trouble your brutal murder would result in

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>>72634687
How much tongue does Marine use?

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>>72635017
A lot. So much that you think 'Do you want to learn how to kiss?' was somehow a mistranslation and she actually asked 'Can I tongue-fuck your throat until you fall over?'

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>>72633592
15,628. 38 pages. Getting "close" to a good splitting point but its probably 20ish pages away,

[Anonymous No.]

Anyone have any tips for rape dialogue? I'm trying to go down a jealous / yandere (for lack of a better word) route with a hint of domination. Basically the usual "I know you want this" "Don't resist, you'll just humiliate yourself" type of shit. However it just feels pretty boring. Any strong tips to get the ball rolling?

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>>72638090
Who is raping who? We can't exactly give specific advice without specifics. Regardless, the best way to make it less generic is to personalize it to the character's particular insecurities.

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>>72638350
Suisei gets killed by Marine and Marine rapes the reader (pov).
>the best way to make it less generic is to personalize it to the character's particular insecurities
Huh, that's actually pretty good advice. Thanks anon.

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>>72638610
NTA but do you want some tips about Marine's menhera?

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>>72640120
A-AZKi, don't look at me like that, I'm writing okay

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>>72640120
Why is it so erotic when women look at me like this?

[Anonymous No.]

How do we cure AA of his stage 4 cancer?

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>>72642939
not him, but have another one anon

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>>72642962
A 10k word fic that’s really just one big, thinly-veiled DMC reference.
>Captcha: AA84

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>>72638610
For some ungodly reason this is just making me imagine Marine doing terrible ship/shipping puns while doing crazed laughter.
>Ahahahaha I guess the Anosui is never getting back to port now.!

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I feel bad about Suisei being my favorite holo to humiliate. She's a kind and hardworking girl who doesn't really deserve it, but the image I have of her makes it fun to imagine how she tries to endure disgusting things for the sake of her career and pride.

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>>72640570
Not him but yes please.

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>>72644174
You should write a story about Suisei's nipples. Specifically rubbing them while she looks at you like you're human garbage, but can't stop herself from cumming from nipple play alone.

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>>72644174
It's kind of inherent to her character concept, such that, even if everyone in holo can kind of fit that "struggler" vibe she embodies it so well that it doesn't feel right for anyone else in her branch.
After all, a shooting star like her has shooting star like her has two trajectories: a star rising to the heavens, and a comet crashing to the earth.

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>>72645148
I'm not very interested in those specifically, I'm more about her psyche and (lack of) power. If she cums it would be more like in Assurance Correction.

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>>72642962
Holofantasy spin-off fan chapter.

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>>72642962
Producing a HoloShorts audiobook.

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>>72648173
Anon no! If you do that AA just sends you the keys to the archive as she fully transcends into being Shiori.

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>>72642962
Another BAD end HF side-chapter that involves Fubuki?

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>>72649403
>involves Fubuki?
Sounds good to me!

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>>72648865
Anon you can’t, it’s not worth it. Forcing a cute girl to say “wedgie” that many times will kill her from embarrassment!

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>>72650791
I probably shouldn't have deleted my reply then because reading >>72648921 made me believed that AA already has enough on his plate and a BAD end chapter involving Fubuki would be 100% pointless since her chapter happened so early on in HF, no?

Do I still wish it happened (the fubuki bad end) though? hell fucking yeah!

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>>72643273
"That day, if our positions were switched... would our fates be different, Moco-chan? Would you have my boobs and I be flat?"
"Hoeh?!"

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>>72650907
I don't think a fubuki bad end would have been game ending anyway, at least going by AA's new HP loss isn't full game end rules. I mean it would be a bad end for her since it would basically be
>Fubuki rapes Anon
>Passionate sex rolls
>Fubuki thinks of running away, taking Anon away with her.
>Coco interrupts
>Kicks the Fox out of Argomery
>Continues onto the next chapter with less max HP and without any of the extra fubuki items.

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>>72651956
Couldn't she have like what, kidnapped anon like what Polka had done?

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>>72651956
Then how come Polka was able to kidnap anon in her bad end without Coco butting in?

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>>72651956
HP loss isn't full game end only if there's something that can realistically save him and the situation would be bad enough to warrant it being a full game end.
For example, if Calli kicked his ass, he wouldn't have died, since she wasn't exactly trying to kill him, just get him to fuck off. He'd just be grievously injured and Marine would've engaged almost immediately before Coco and co. rolled up to get in on the ass beating.
Versus Fubuki, though, there wouldn't have been anything that could've helped him because they weren't aware he was in a situation that required helping to begin with.
Like, Anon would've died when fighting The Dark Knight just because that was a life or death situation. He would've been mindwiped if he lost fighting Ina which would've been a bad end. He would've been stuck aboard the Lustful Maiden for a year due to the terms of the 'duel' he agreed with when he had to fight Marine.
>>72652373
Same as above. Coco didn't even realize he was gone until it would've been way too late.

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>>72652517
Oh, I see. I guess that's why a Fubuki end could never have happened then and while I am kind of disappointed, I can understand why AA didn't want to attempt a repeat with Fubuki like what he did with Polka.

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>>72652517
I thought the new rule was "getting killed does kill you but it rewinds time back before it all happened" with the the world tendency 'blackening' so everything is de facto worse even if Anon does survive... Or is that being walked back?

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>>72652894
It's mixed. The bad end would still be there as something that's written out if it's something...you know, salacious, but no matter what there'd be the opportunity to go back and redo from the critical point with potentially unforeseen consequences; imagine that by some providence something happens to interject, but that thing is potentially severely hurt in the process. It's something that I want to introduce after the (canon) crossover is done. A limited resource.

[Anonymous No.]

>Thread starts talking about holofantasy
>AA returns
>On easter
It is a miracle. He is Risen.

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>>72654424
I never left, I've just been busy and asked a good friend and colleague to help with archiving stuff while handling real life shit.
Happy Easter by the by.

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>>72654598
Do you need money? I can PayPal you like $50 as thanks for your services until now.

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>>72654775
No, thank you. I appreciate it, but I'd prefer to keep money out of a hobby I enjoy for the sake of it. Spend it on something nice for you or your family instead.

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>>72654424
AA is like Shiori. A cryptid
just that instead of stealing your soul or yapping, he's a funky little critter that shows up, organizes your books, slips in a page and then leaves

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>>72654598
Happy easter to you and everyone else too. Hoping it's a relaxing and fun day for all.

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>>72635308
Literally stealing your breath away.

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>>72654251
>no matter what there'd be the opportunity to go back and redo from the critical point with potentially unforeseen consequences
This is making me think the "re do" is either a meta mechanic that's implemented via an out of universe poll... Or the soul/mind of bad end universe!Anon asking himself if he's really satisfied by this end, and if he wants to go back and try again.

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>>72655679
Easter Pekoyakodon to paint their eggs white!

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>>72657276
>I thought rabbits didn't lay eggs?
>Shut up and get back to painting-peko!

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Fuck... now Nerissa egg laying is back on my mind

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>>72657276
I can imagine Pekomama teasing you by telling you that there's eggs hidden on their bodies while Pekora blushes and makes her embarrassed noises.

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>>72658012
Demon eggs?

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>>72658490
>You did it! You found all the colored eggs! No hunt is too challenging for you.
>Pekomama, now flushed and trying to control herself after your gentle but eager searching of her person for the eggs, informs you that there is still another to be found
>Pekora is a steaming mess, it took all her restraint to not flail like a fish out of water when you were retrieving eggs from her
>Pekomama lifts her dress up and gives you a sultry stare and a wetting lick of her lips
>You still have a few more eggs to paint, but oh dear, we used up all the paint earlier, guess you'll have to improvise, peko~
>The lord has risen, and so have I
Captcha:KNHJT

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>>72658533
Bird eggs and her getting more and more embarassed that she keeps popping them

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>>72659037
>you think Nerissa is a kinky buttslut because she wants you to clog her shithole from behind after the second date
>in reality she is afraid that anything else would make you notice her eggs

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>>72660106
She is indeed a bird, so why not

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>>72660106
Coco's eggs and its consequences have been a disaster for my taste

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>>72662597
I have to ask, have you read the holotori (well Subaru, Kiara and Reine) fic where their eggs get eaten?

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>>72663408
Yeah but that one doesnt have the same vibe i kinda like.
The ishisoku reviewers episode is more my speed

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Y'all are going so crazy for eggs, but for some reason bird eggs only
And not Finana's delectable roe
Or Biboo's geode

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>>72665135
>Biboo's geode
...
I don't think those are something biboo can have without dying.

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>>72665135
Splitting biboo with a pickaxe to reach her crystal core