/wg/ - Writing General - Onyan Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>69612224 (where the thread talked about a love triangle with Bae, a gyarufication virus, and how Flare WILL touch you. No exceptions)
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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Story recap!
There were 2 (technically 3) stories posted last thread.

Tower of Tattle Tower of Tattle Part VI Episode 02 >>69619775
Tags: SFW, Fantasy, Shiori, OC MC Friend, Female MC

Tower of Tattle Part VI Episode 03! >>69736757
Tags: SFW, Fantasy, Shiori, OC MC Friend, Female MC

Goldfeather, Ch1. >>69739455
Tags: Reine, incest, Indonesia, drama

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My daughter.

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>>69786831
I NEED to shit in Aqua's mouth.

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>>69786831
I NEED Aqua to get raped by 2 mean negroes

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Cute onion.

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>>69788346
That's really hot.

I NEED Aqua to fall in love with the pleasure her two negro rapists provide her and cuck me repeatedly with them.

"Dusk that follows an autumn onion" when?

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>>69788159
>>69788346
Be the change you want to be in the world, anons. Write the fics of your dreams!

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>>69791621
Damn right! Don't let your ideas stay as just ideas. Give them life.

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Clear.

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>>69786884
Does this onyan know what that means?

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>>69794488
>Onyan wearing a 'Bleached' bra thinking 'ooohhhh eigo kakoii desu'
>Onyan wearing a Queen of Spades earring because she thinks it looks cute
>Onyan getting a (removable) butterfly tattoo because the design is so pretty
I can see a fic from this idea.

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>>69795392
>"Suichan this is my friend from overseas!"
>
>"Wow thanks for introducing me to Hoshimachi-san Aqutan... she gave me so many tips for controlling my voice"
>"Yeah! now you can finally become a soul singer"
>"Thanks Aqutan...you have done so much for me..."
>"Now its time for me and my friends to repay you"
>
>"Woaah...i never had jamaican bbq before!"
>"Bomboclaat! dis girl eats a lot mon!"

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>>69795823
Aqutan is literally BUILT for BB&WC
No idea what the butterfly one means

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>>69795392
What does the butterfly one mean? I know the first two but I've never seen the third.
Though this is just making me imagine Aqua just getting more mixed messages on her like a removable teardrop tattoo.

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>>69796288
A butterfly tattooed just around the back waistline is also called a Tramp Stamp. Basically it means you're a slut.

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>>69796288
>Lwook! This one is like *slurp* a buddhist symbol!
>It's a fucking swastika

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>>69786960
>look at the picture
>"Oh what a nice Aqua drawing, let's use it as one of the pictures for the thread..."
>Look at it again, this time more closely.
Fuck, I didn't even notice that

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>>69794488
>look at the picture
>"Oh what a nice Aqua drawing, let's use it as one of the pictures for the thread..."
>Look at it again, this time more closely.
Fuck, I didn't even notice that

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>>69797633
don't worry it's hot
now I will forever imagine this shortstack as a slut for white men

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>>69797456
>>69797633
Congratulation Anon, this is the second time a 'subtle edit' managed to get posted without the original poster knowing what they were posting.
If I remember right the first time was the brrat writer posting a Fauna and Bae laughing with their holofes shirts edited.

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>>69797793
shut up. it was saved from a thread...

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>>69786960
>(You) are Aqua's manager and are horrified to find out that she's been getting tramp stamps, blacked tattoos and 'bleached'-branded clothing and see her hanging out with black and white men at night. Rumors about her spread on social media, and you assume the worst.
>You find out the truth: Aqua's been hanging out with the white dudes because they're Onyan fans, while the black dudes invited her to a wholesome barbecue. The (removable) tramp stamps, blacked tats and 'bleached' clothes were just her not understanding what they meant
>Her reputation isn't ruined, but the assumptions are now stuck. She gets spades and [bleached] spammed in her chat, and she responds with cute Onyan noises as you cringe helplessly, not wanting to hurt her with the truth

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What chuuba would be in a stereotypical occult club? Hard Mode: No Watson.

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>>69799884
Mio, Shiori. Shion

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>>69799884
Shiori

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>>69799884
Mio
Shiori
Lap

If I remember right Marine is into UFOs and stuff but I wouldn't put her in an occult club

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>>69796449
Swastikas are fine, it's the Hakenkreuz that's the spicy one.

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>>69800261
>>69800788
>Mio
That one was an obvious one. Guess I had a brainfart (mental retardation).

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>>69786960
Yagoo calling in a favor to get Coco to do one last job... and it's taking down the black dragon of Nijisanji.

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I was bouncing the idea of AltSuisei in my mind and i realized there could also be AltMio
>Off the rails hag that holds a very tight net of blackmail and has her fingers in every pie
>Everyone dreads the day they have to inevitably ask her for a favor.
>Unlike Suisei's explosive rage, mio is all smiles and patience
>

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>>69803026
I suppose

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>>69802294
But she's cyan?

Capcha: nmgs2

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Bad thread! No dying!

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>buy Aqua "bleached"-branded clothing, with her completely ignorant of the meaning, so she'll put it on anyway, and seeing her in it makes my dick hard
my plan is foolproof

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>>69803026
That makes it sound like alt!mio is the queen-bitch of alt!hololive's clique.

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All this Aqua Bleached talk has got me thinking about how Play in the Rain and You get Wet said the quiet part out loud

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>>69807463
It would be hotter if she knew what it meant but was happy to wear it out of appreciation for your cock.

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>>69808912
don't worry, she'll learn what it means eventually and then that'll be the case

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>>69808681
What quiet part?

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>>69808681
Eh, it'd be hotter if she was blacked instead.

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>>69809465
About how (You) are a foreigner. Wasnt really a fan of it being directly addressed and it took me out of the story really hard.

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>>69807732
>queen-bitch

I literally can hear this in Kerrigan's voice from Brood War in the final BW Zerg mission...the one where she had to face UED, Dominion, and the Protoss all at once.

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>>69810083
Speaking of, I wonder how Starcraft would look like with its characters filled in by Holopro.

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>>69810124
There NEEDS to be a chuuba that says, "In the pipe, five by five."
Or "In the rear with the gear."
Or at the very least, "Well, butter my biscuit."

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>>69807216
Man Anya is so cute
I really wanna hug her and fuck her brains out

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>>69810415
At least we can cope with Moona and Selen going through Starcraft 1...

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>>69812418
Selen killed Tassadar on purpose I'll never forgive her

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>>69812418
Nina also played Starcraft 1

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>>69786831
Thanks for fufilling my request a couple of threads back, anon.

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>>69813657
Of course, anon.

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>>69807463
More women should wear these anime-ass "each breast has its own pocket" swimsuits irl, they're great

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I didn't really care for Aqua's design when she was a flattie, but the big tits make her into a very cute shortstack. If only Cover had the courage to have official models with wider and softer tummies and hips, too.

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>>69813489
WAT?

>>69813651
Did she continue onto 2?

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>>69817487
Okayu's new outfit made me think the same thing. Add some tummy to that fatto catto and she's literally perfect.
Too bad all japs are fags.

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>>69818062
>WAT?
In the last Protoss mission she deliberately sent the Gantrithor towards the Zerg base head-first while being like "Sorry Gantrithor it's been fun but you gotta die now" or something along these lines
I'll never forgive her

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>>69819822
But...that's the plot? Guessing supply issues...

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>>69820667
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U_2C-ImsFrI
Only video I could find of the stream since her videos are bye-bye

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>>69820667
Yes but Tassadar crashes the Gantrithor into the Overmind only once you've brought down the Overmind's HP to 0, you're not meant to lose it prior to that.

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>>69821240
I know, because Kurosanji.

>>69821298
I see, gotta see the clip now

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>>69821840
Ok, reviewed the clip

First of all, I know the channel, I just returned to his server after leaving because he announced inactivity due to compulsory military service.

Second, damn you Kurosanji, we'll never get the full context...unless...

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>>69811209
If anya's hair is the blade and her body is the handle. Would making anya a shortstack involve making her handle wider?

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>>69823012
The breasts are part of the handguard

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>>69786960
Seducing your college-aged tutor Ms. Mori with your awkward high schooler charms.

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>>69823978
We need a cute romance fic that captures her new Moe Kawaiiope arc. And also more sex. Always need more sex...

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>>69786960
I'm going to throw out a bunch of low-hanging fruit smut prompts:
Marine buttjob
Kobo brat correction
Chloe tonguebath
Giantess Sana using you like a human dildo
Mori paizuri
Mumei oral fixation
Kronii using time powers to drain your balls in ways that defy fundamental laws of the universe
Nerissa facesitting
Marathon emotionless sex with Kaela
Zeta thighjob under the guise of interrogation
Chubby Moona breaking your pelvis and/or bed
Fauna nursing handjob

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>>69826600
>Marathon emotionless sex with Kaela
So like this? https://exhentai.org/g/2832608/f7a1bfa2f8/

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>>69786960
Flare gets baby-crazy and cucks Marine

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Goldfeather anon here, how should I now progress into the sex part, now that Ch2 is on the horizon?

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>>69833815
cute office lady

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>>69831451
With descriptions and explanations of the character's emotions and decisions so that the sex feels earned and natural.

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>>69834246
Got it.
Adverbs and adjectives.

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>>69831451
I'd recommend reading some more fics that have proper build up for smut and learning what you can from those.

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>>69824759
please sit on my face mommy

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>>69795823
>>69796288
>>69794488
Only burgers would go to blacked shit in a clearly Bleached image. GSH cucks

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>>69826600
>Kronii promised to have sex with you if you treat her like a princess
>after months the time has finally come
>suddenly, a time portal exit opens
>you from a hour into the future emerges from the portal, fucking Kronii instead
>"at least I'll get to fuck her in an hour when I come through that portal"
>after an hour in the cuck chair, the portal entrance finally opens
>you try to go in, but Kronii holds you back
>your future self goes into the portal with a smug look on his face
>"bootstrap paradox, bitch."

I'm not sure if this breaks fundamental laws of the universe, actually, because every effect still has a cause - just in a loop.

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wake up

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Up

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>>69839876
im sorry i was triying to edit but all i did was sleep.

With that being said. Grab a fic from the archive using the random function and give some thoughts
>Bad Vibrations
This feels really unfinished. It paints a great initial picture , sets up an interesting angle...and then it just fizzles out. Its not hard to piece it together, but it builds itself really strong for a split second only to not pay off.
Even so, i think its well written and paints an interesting scenario, so i quite liked it

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>>69842248
Got
>Daddy's Girl
First, but I remember giving my thoughts on this one when it came out. Overall it was delightfully fluffy and a really soothing depiction of a happy family with Mio as well as a temperamental teenage daughter. Let's roll for another.
>Teddy Bear
It's kinda funny how the next fic I roll starts out in a similar way with walking alone on a street at night. I'm pretty sure I've read this before too, but nonetheless, it's incredibly cute and showcases a hyperactive and somewhat silly Nene when it comes to her man. The bit between the two of them is pretty cute and on brand for her. As far as constructive feedback goes, there could have been a little more detail into how Nene suddenly got to the top where their apartment is. One second you give her the signal that she should be there when you get home, and the next she's just there. Overall, a sweet and heartwarming little fic about a Nene who just wants to be your forever teddy bear. Got good rolls twice. Fluff chads will stay winning.

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>>69842248
Shit...that was both my third fic ever and my first prompt fill. Probably explains why it's that way, but I'm glad you liked it all the same!

>A (Shrine) Maiden's Burden
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MIKO MIKO MIKO I WANNA MARRY MIKO AND HALF A THOUSAND CUTE DOMESTIC MOMENTS JUST LIKE THIS

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>>69846685
I gotta think they just copy pasted the standard legs onto Kobo. Or she just hit an early growth spurt or something. But enough about her, let's talk about her mom. I want to breed this wonderful rain shaman hag.

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>>69847126
>I gotta think they just copy pasted the standard legs onto Kobo.
That's a bit disrespectful towards her designer. I reckon that Kobo's childish image would be less prominent with a more mature act behind it.

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>>69847278
The face and clothing exude enough of a childish front. The long toothpick legs are actually a little out of place.

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>>69847619
honestly have you seen a kid when they are 11-12 and hit a growth spurt? they look like freaks.
I think Kobo's proportions perfectly encompass that weird as fuck transition period

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>>69786831
Has anyone done a same size vore fic yet?

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>>69847907
>same size
141cm?

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>>69847810
I guess I didn't think about it that way. Alright,fair enough.

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>>69842248
>Long Awaited Meeting
I liked it. A funny shitposty fluff fic with Reine involving the whole "mafia princess" rrat. No complaints from me other than I think it could be longer.

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>>69786960
(You) meeting a vampire named Kaela and forming a bond with heronly for you to pass awayand then keep finding her through every reincarnation

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>>69852862
I always liked stories that include stuff like "I'll find you with every version of me". It's cute.

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Rise

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>>69845078
Me too bro...
Me too...

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>>69846685
Kono can assert her dominance...

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>>69797769
the body proportions on this look kinda fucked
the torso so be slightly more to the left, to match up with the next and shoulders more

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>>69860199
I won't stick my dick in crazy

I won't stick my dick in crazy

I WON'T STICK MY DICK IN CRAZY GOD DAMN IT I WON'T

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>>69860219
I'm not seeing what you're talking about

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>>69860473
You think you don't want to, anon. But you do.
What the hell was the title of that Matsuri fic again...?

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>>69861747
honestly 99% of Matsuri's fics are "dont dick the crazy"

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No way.

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>>69863890
Yeah but there was one that had Fubuki in it too. I vaguely remember reading that Anon thought Foobs rejected him then Matsuri took advantage of the whole thing

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>>69867273
Ahh, you're thinking of 'I Thought You Wanted to Dance'

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>>69868194
Yes, that's it, Anon! Thanks for jogging my memory. I'll read it again then. I want to correct summer festival so bad...

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>2k words on just the prologue/first flashback.
Oh no... this is going to be a long one, isn't it?

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>>69871054
Let the words demon consume you.

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>>69872568
No, I swore I'd never write some super long again!

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>>69875654
Sounds like you already don't have a choice in the matter.

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>>69876201

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>>69875654
you have been afflicted by the Curse of Holojourneys

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>>69880443
And then the gear has a mind control curse. Suddenly, knight onahole.

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>>69882913
>knight onahole
Imagine the passionate mind-controlled paizuri

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>>69880443
Noel's the prettiest holo. I must write her more.

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no

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>>69885483
I am diamonds. Making her arms stay at the back while you plow her throat...making her doggy while she at all fours...uooooogh

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Rise

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what do you guys think is a good word count for a dedicated sex scene?

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>>69890535
500 maybe? As much or little as you need to.

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>>69882913
>>69885483
God, we need more fics with scumbag protags that do skeevy doujin tier shit.
>>69890535
It depends on your intent. If you're actually intending it for making the audience coom you have like a 2k minimum in order for it to be long enough for people to fap to. Meanwhile if you're intending it for plot progression the length is entirely on how long it takes for the emotional progression you want to happen in the prose you're writing.

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>>69890535
2k minimum.

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>>69860473
You don't have to stick it in yourself, just let her put the cuffs on you and do her thing.

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Before dinner bump

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>>69891464
>God, we need more fics with scumbag protags that do skeevy doujin tier shit.
I agree, but preferably in third person. I don't want to be the bad guy.

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>>69895007
Except for maaaaaaaaaaybe post Selen-termination Elira/Millie/Enna.

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>>69895158
We already have one for Elira. One down, two to go...

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>>69895158
I still wouldn't want to be the protagonist in that, I feel. Even if you think they're as evil as people doing skeevy doujin shit, "eye for an eye" will leave everyone blind.

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>>69831451
Maybe take a step back and rethink what you want out of the fic. You've yet to give a proper reason as to why Reine and Basuki would want to fuck.

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>>69895007
I think we need at least one longform fic that has an evil anon/ or at least one working for the bad guys. Subjection is close in spirit, but I could never get into that fic's prose. And for short form fics I think some skeevy povs might be fun once in a while.
Though I get why someone wouldn't want to write 2nd person scumbag pov given how close it is to first person.

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>>69896855
First person feels pretty harmless too, it's still another person telling the story from their perspective.
With second person, the page is pointing right at me.

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>>69896855
I think the caveat to an "evil" Anon is that they have to be a bit more interesting than just your boilerplate doujin scumbag. Give them ruthless ambition or mental health issues or have them gradually undergo moral degradation as the story goes on. Heartbreak Tokyo does a pretty good job of having a protagonist who is very much NOT a good person. I also liked what little characterization was given to Anon in the Corrupting Nene greentexts from a couple years ago.

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>>69897069
Honestly, while I do enjoy those fics a lot. They don't really scratch that same itch; yeah the anons in those fics aren't good people but they aren't the kind of evil scum I want to see in coom fics. The kind of energy I want to see is like in those holos as slaves discussion from a few weeks back. I.e the have kemonos have sex with animals to break them discussion.
I know it's kind of edgy but there's something weirdly hot about that scumbag fantasy.
>Corrupting Nene
Man I remember my half baked fanchapter for that. Kind of wish the original anon for that story would write another real chapter. The snowgrave route inspired psychopath corrupter dynamic kind of needs at least one more chapter, even if it would just go to a 'the adventure... corruption continues' kind of thing.

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>>69896072
My brother.

>>69895828
Oh right, it got anchored two threads back...


>>69896603
For Basuki, his hormones take over and Reine loves her nephew so much. This is also where I begin revealing that her eggs are dying.

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>>69897548
>spoiler
Like, because of an illness? Because that's not how biology usually works; the issue is a limited supply that is eventually used up.

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>>69898179
Well Reine is a bird woman, maybe she just can't lay more in her advanced age?

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>>69897548
>spoiler
Depending on the tone you're planning for the fic, a somewhat comedic take could be her thinking that her eggs are dried up, but actually aren't or if it's dramatic, make it so that she realizes how her age is getting to her and other subtle hints; no need to explicitly say 'aaaaa no, my eggs...!' ALS handled this well enough with how it shows Foobs trying with her husband to no avail despite being married for years

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>>69886767
Same bro, same.

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>>69898179
Not illness, age.

>>69898240
Kek, they all are sorta-humans here.

>>69898501
Defo the latter route. However...there's no husband to try make babies with, except if I maybe twist it so "her husband" is the Merakyats.

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>>69898759
Then you'll have to think of a somewhat different route or it might end up as ALS, but Reine. Perhaps now that she's getting old, she's being pressured to marry. But that's not exactly the kind of life she wants for herself. Then Basuki comes into the picture... See what I'm getting at? Give it some thought.

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>>69898759
Age means she is running out of eggs, not that they die.

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>>69897548
>spoiler
If you just try to slap that in the reader's face with how things are progressing now, it's gonna be silly. If Reine is hung up on that, she wouldn't be so intent on being a shut in streamer weeb. That's also a big jump between loving her nephew more than platonically and wanting him to get her pregnant. If the clock is supposed to be motivation for Reine, you need to establish why other prospects have been failing, be it that she doesn't feel a connection to anyone else, her job (but you'll really need to properly sell this point in a way that's not "I'm in hololive so I can't date anyone, since that's just a cop out), or just rejecting arranged suitors out of spite for her family. I think you should follow the other anon's advice and really think about what you want for your fic, since if you just want to fuck Reine while she wears an Aunt nametag, that's more suited for a oneshot and won't have the emotional baggage along with it that you seem to want.

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So how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: Do you have any wips you've dropped because their concept just aged poorly for you? i.e yab/event just passed by, you changed your opinion on that chuuba, you stopped caring for them, etc.

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>>69900726
It's coming along. I got the bulk of the outline done the other day and started on the actual writing. Just got a few paragraphs done so far with the end of the week, but hopefully I'll have a few hours this weekend to write some more.

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>>69900726
Unforeseen health issues have put a damper on my ability to write. I'm hoping it'll go away soon.

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>>69900726
Sluggish. I begin writing one thing, then I make a complete outline for a different fic in my head. Then I make a folder and a document for that other fic, I write a few words, and then the inspiration flatlines.
I want to give a spin on the La+ scumbag hero NTR outline from before. I wonder if for the ending I should leave it as it was written (La+ kills you, gets carryfucked) or if I should go full chuuni in a 'Suddenly she remembers you and if consumed by a bottomless rage)

>Bonus
My oneshot folder is exactly that. A bunch of them died at 1k or 2k, and never moved past that.
>Unlicensed nurse reaches a remote town, meets with LoliMio and her father. Little sister antics ensue until Mio is of age.
>Go out with your friends, one of them urges you to 'take one for the team' and butter up the hot girl's fat friend (Polka) so he can get laid. Years down the line, you and Polka are engaged.
>Sad sack of shit with no social life or luck with women meets with Choco in a bar, gets used for some fun and subsequently heartbroken
>Swordsexual Iroha NTR fic where Luna invades your kingdom and repeatedly draws your sword in front of Iroha with such a grip and technique you get mindbroken. Cue the sad ending where you just can't enjoy sparring with Iroha anymore, and you receive letters from Luna asking if you want her to draw your blade.
>Comforting Mio as she passes from cancer. Your children try to help you cope. You go out to buy something for Mio (Who's already dead) and you repeatedly say shit like 'Maybe we should go to X place again, I'm sure she'll enjoy it'. You don't accept she's gone until you come back home and see her in the casket.
All of these just fall into the 'Maaaaybe, but not today' category.

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>>69901463
health problems are a bitch. Hoping you have a swift recovery.

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>>69900726
Well, I just rolled out a chapter so...

Bonus: meh, not been able to do WIPs in a while. Still have to finish my "years after HS" Calli fic.

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>>69901488
I'd rather you leave it as a bleak and tragic ending instead of the chuuni because it'll feel like an ass-pull imo. But it is up to you as an author so the freedom's yours to choose.

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>>69901488
>I want to give a spin on the La+ scumbag hero NTR outline from before. I wonder if for the ending I should leave it as it was written (La+ kills you, gets carryfucked) or if I should go full chuuni in a 'Suddenly she remembers you and if consumed by a bottomless rage)
I have a document open for this concept that's like half outline, and half worldbuilding notes. I'm working with my own little twist to the concept but my idea for how to handle the ending is to do both. Have the 'impotent rage' ending be the default that the reader gets if they just read through the document, and have like a mini-puzzle embedded in flashback scenes that'll lead to like a rentry link that either leads to/is the secret chuuni ending where the scumbag hero gets defeated and Anon and Laplus manage to escape together.
If you do decide to pick this up maybe you could use this idea to. Good luck to your second cake if you decide to pick up this idea.

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>>69900726
got a bit further than i thought (+600 words) after making a "table of contents" with events and scenes and then realized that I can skip to a different scene if I'm stuck or prefer to write one over the other.

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>>69900726
Just finished up the Rosemi scenes.
Rosemi and Selen are very energetic girls, their animation was a total pain to stage.
With over half of the major long scenes out of the way, I think next I'm going to clean up the Zaion and Scarle sprites and get started on the main route.

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>>69903710
Rosemi-sama is our era's Socrates.

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>>69900726
I'm inching along bit by bit.
>Bonus:
thankfully none of my WIP were canceled because of a controversy. Half if it is self confidence related, but the other half is I wanna finish SD first.

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>>69903226
>>69901488
I don't like the "she suddenly kills you and cucks you with the hero as you die" ending. It feels generic and makes the POV character die before the twist can lead to something more, effectively turning it into an abrupt twist ending.
It would be more interesting to develop the ending into a dark mirror version of the original situation. Laplus is on the "good side" now but treats you like a slave, much worse than when she was evil. You now get to have the sex that you desired before, but she merely uses you as a biological dildo while worshipping the hero romantically and sexually.

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>>69903148
>>69903226
I had other things planned for it, see if you can do anything with it.
>Lighteners and Darkeners are at constant war.
>You and La+ are from a poor darkener village, and you two barely survive a raid
>La+ there swears that she'll take her revenge
>A couple of months later, her horns sprout, signiffying that her magic powers have begun growing inside her and trains like hell to make them reach their peak
>La+ makes a seal/tattoo on her womb, tying her purity as a maiden to a boost in her overall power level
>A hundred or so years later, you two storm the castle of the Lighteners followed by hordes of Darkeners and Beasts, slaying everyone in your path effortlessly
>As the Empress of Darkness takes over, and has you execute the Lightener's queen, her chuuni edgelord persona makes way for a childlike joy, she jumps in your arms, she's ecstastic, etc, etc
>After a celebration and a thousand years (which feel like nothing to ethereal beings), the Hero storms the castle, and he's overpowered as fuck
>Anon loses an arm, while La+ is kidnapped.

>The hero plasters a bunch of sygils on La+ to seal her power, cue the shackles or such
>His party is composed of three people, A hotheaded magic caster, an honor bound cleric, and Iroha
>La+ refuses to give him a blowjob, and like that the hero locks her in place with his legs, begins to lime down one of her horns, and snaps it off.
>La+ gets threatened that if she doesn't comply, he'll rip off the other one right there, breaking her skull
>His party opposes his methods (except for the magic caster) but the Hero reminds everyone that his will is the will of the light, that he's the chosen one, etc
>Cue Anon training to match his previous power level whilst missing an arm.

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>>69904620
>La+ gets locked up, daily rape ensues, including a painful defloration that she cries over while chanting anon's name, but the Hero forces to orgasm, etc
>Iroha and Anon shared a necklace that was basically their promise to marry after they ruled the world
>La+ had lost that necklace during the Hero's attack
>Iroha sneaks into La+'s cell, claims she will help her
>Sneaks into the darkener's camp, Anon visibly wary
>She tells him of her plan, because she opposes the hero, and Anon complies
>There he gives her La+ half of the necklace, which Iroha returns and La+ cherishes with her life
>The Hero finds out, Iroha stands her ground and dies while doing so
>The Hero throws her corpse into La+'s cell, verbally abuses La+.
>The necklace is latter shattered by the hero, and with that, La+'s looses it, becoming mindbroken by cock and accepting her role as an onahole
>Anon is almost ready to do a sneak mission and break La+ out
>He's broken enough to murder guards and golems effortlessly, crosses with the magic caster and the cleric
>Effortlessly kills the magic caster, gives the cleric a painful death as he apologizes for the way the hero handled everything
>Cue him finding the broken La+. who now speaks in babbles and monotone murmurs
>Cue the fight with the Hero, in which La+ kills him
>Anon's half of the Necklace shines, the Hero tells La+ to get whatever it is, and as she does, she remembers everything.
>Cue the chuuni moment where La+ burns the seals off her body, the shackles break, her horns grow back, her eyes glow pruple, she wails with an ear piercing sadness, and turns into a full-on demon of hatred with no shape or form. A blundering mountain of rage
>The Hero's hand trembbles, he can't defeat this thing
>Hears the voice of the Light, telling him she would handle it
>The hero is sealed inside the prison, being told that La+ will eventually die because she can't handle that much energy
>The Light ignores the Hero's pleas for rescue, letting him know his sacrifice will never be forgotten
>After La+ kills the Hero, she crawls with what little strenght she has left to Anon's body
>And she dies trying to hug him

I know it's overly chuuni but I have a taste for that sort of cringekino stuff. Black Souls is one of my favorite games for that reason.

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>>69854645
I love that cheesy fucking trope.

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>>69905127
Better than Redo of Healer kek

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>>69900726
The star is finally starting to move again. I wrote the first quarter and I think that should be a good baseline for what's coming after. I'm going to make Anemachi a bigger part but it's difficult to find clips of her so please be patient with me if it doesn't quite stack up (and any advice on how to write her is always appreciated. The guy who commented last time was supremely helpful).

>bonus

I was at one point going to write a yandere drama about Matsuri being your sister. It was going to be a sex fic where your mom died and she becomes so mind broken by it that she dresses up as your dead mom and tries fucking with you. It became so dark that even I couldn't continue it so it's never gonna see daylight unfortunately.

I dropped Cybermoona as well mainly because it was when I was in my greentext phase and writing the whole thing again in novel form would be a huge pain in the ass.

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uppy

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why is the board moving so fucking fast? It sinks to page nine after like ten minutes

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>>69786960
You know how we always have >>69900726 but the anon uses a Polka image? well how about we have a story where Polka (could be your gf or a close friend) helps you become a better writer when you are at an all time low and need motivation?

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>>69900726
production was halted for a while. will try to muster some energy and do some writing.
>Bonus
not really, but i do have a wip pile where i wrote a good chunk, then came two hours later and went "what the fuck was i thinking? this shit is WORTHLESS"

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>>69911421
/vt/ got a lot of exposure to the wider vtuber community through the Niji drama because the Gurrat and other revelations started here.

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Ah!

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>>69914007
Who cut her like that?

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>>69914502
Someone who came to regret it before their time on earth came to an abrupt end

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>>69912480
The craziest thing about /vt/ to me is that someone will post the laziest bait thread imaginable and then bump it for the whole day.

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>>69919343
>Cover has big work trip to some place
>Due to a booking error at the hotel, you and Mio have to share a room
>Neither you nor Mio want to sleep on the floor, so resolve to share the bed platonically and keep a comfortable distance apart
>Being so close to a pretty woman near twice your age is pretty difficult, doubly so because you haven't jacked off in a hot minute so sleep just won't come to you
>Mio doesn't mention her tendency to stretch out in her sleep
>Or that she doesn't wear underwear

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Okay /wg/ you forced my hand. HERE'S MY SUPER ORIGINAL STRONG PROMPT THAT WILL DEFEAT YOU ORRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
>>69786960
Love hina with Chuubas

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>>69919343
>>69920188

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>>69914502
Me, and you think that's bad you should see the shape I'm in.

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>>69920188
She'll go on a year long break after that night with me

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>>69924235
God I can't wait to put a bun in this wolf's oven.

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>>69925464
I mean, you literally can't wait with how limited her remaining egg supply is.

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>>69925464
imagine the smell of those pits. She hasn't shaved them since she was in her late twenties and she doesn't shower than much due to the fact that she isn't trying to impress anyone.

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>>69925944
watch me

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>>69926085
Taiga will trick Mio into washing and shaving the day before you get to her

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>>69926085
A stinky, musk filled mating session with Mio sounds heavenly.

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>>69926322
it just isn't hag sex without the old woman smell that makes you gag slightly but is somehow supremely erotic

>>69926204
a hag should ALWAYS be unshaven.

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>>69926402
It just isn't hag sex without a half-white bush hiding a hideous, worn-out pussy. You're not giving her a baby, just back pain.

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>>69926402
Each hag's smell is just as pungent, but completely unique. Mio's has a feral scent that is almost assaulting as it is meant to help her mark you as hers. It's also exotically enticing after you get over the initial introduction.

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You've forced my hand once again...

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>>69926718
Well that is a good point. I guess... hey! wait a minute! That mustache looks fake. You wouldn't happen to be taiga, would you?

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>>69928118
...no, I'm Tawa.

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>>69927549
Why would you forcibly remove a feature that is both beautiful and natural?

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>>69928206
Because if I'm going to go down there I'm not getting hair in my mouth.
And I AM going down there.

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if this bush includes the asshole then im all in.
okay im all in already, but it would be fantastic

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>>69928342
Yeah I can understand you on that one, but it's not all that bad once you're there. It kinda makes a comfy resting spot for your chin and cheeks sometimes.

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>>69928876
Nah, I've been there before. It's not great.

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>>69928970
>>69928876
It really depends on how wiry and long it is.

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>>69929085
or
you could just not have to worry about that shit at all

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>>69928970
I just might be too addicted to lapping up puss. I absolutely getting to go down, so a bit of hair doesn't bother.

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>>69786960
A naive Anon has finally moved in with his first girlfriend. Unfortunately for him, he hadn't quite realized just how baby crazy Nerissa was until the lease was signed. The problem is, he's still got a couple years of grad school left and knows he can't have kids and finish his stupidly expensive and time demanding degree at the same time. But that doesn't stop Nerissa from trying to trick him into impregnating her at any chance she gets... how will Anon survive her increasingly more unhinged attempts to steal his seed?

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>>69930340
a vasectomy

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the only bush I'll accept is a full-body one

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>>69920203
>spoiler
Wouldn't be a bad idea. Nostalgic too.

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>>69930340
Tying her up in bondage at night

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>>69930340
I'd just bet that because she's such a girlfailure that even her womb would bungle getting fertilized.

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>>69935057
Overnight bondage is a bad idea if you want her to get decent sleep. Trust me

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>>69786960
Iroha is forced to return home to fulfill an arranged marriage, when all she wants is to fight on the battlefield

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Have any chuubas mentioned Buddhism?

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>>69916821
Especially if its dirt about males or male adjacent chuubas. Sometimes, even if imagined.

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>>69945256
>me looking at your oshi's mengens for signs of unhappiness

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>>69945896
good try, but she's actually looking at this

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There was a discussion about "Hags become zoomers and its up to you to figure out why". That im sure.
What im asking is if that ever got some elaboration?

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>>69930340
>>69936806
After finally willingly getting you to have sex with her, Nerissa finds she's not immediately pregnant.
In shock she decides to adopt and picks up Biboo as her new adopted child that the two of you must raise together. (She's a 17 year old kid that rissa just picked up from the local highschool.)

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>>69948238
Now THIS is some good fiction.

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>>69947243
I remember this one post about it >>56638347 where an anon posts their notes about a mystery comedy investigating it.

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>>69946083
stupid sexy Sana

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>>69949241
heh that's a funny idea. I remembered it and i waas wondering if someone ever elaborated on it. thanks for the archive dive.
I think the concept could work, but its one of those where the person writing it needs to have a real clear fic on their head in order to utilize the idea

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>>69941946
Nothing explicit off the top of my head

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQnLxZ5JHUa5knIgdcRQ-WJR_2NsQJRJYJgJHy2ZeHJ48oTsgoz0sUO9HWBfThDyos0cYCeFIElRuBj/pub

dunno if i should anchor this. its just a shitpost using that "Mori gets turned into an airhead" idea and combining a few more jokes.

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>>69949472
>Sana unintentionally being sexy all day until you snap and pin her down

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how is there not a single solid smut fic of this meaty chocolate goddess anyway

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>>69955555
Write her wearing a buttplug but no one realizing because her gyatt is massive

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>>69955555
There's too little /choc/ presence.

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Oozora Subaru being a member of the secret police in a totalitarian state where she commits a series of atrocities surpassing Pekora's war crimes.

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>>69953671
>>69786884
This should be archived, it's fucking hilarious. I usually hate doing direct comparisons between authors, but your comedy style is like wav2's without the caustic spite in some of them combined with having an actual punchline to end things off combined with having the perfect length for a one-shot comedy fic.
>>69955555
It's kind of funny how the best sana smut fic /here/ is the San shota correction one.

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>>69964745
of all the fics that had to be gay...why...
also I just realized the gravity of this get >>69955555

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>>69786831
I started reading fan stuff for the girls for the first time today and I was suprised to see that there are only about 230 stories on fanfiction.net about Hololive. Most being very short one-shots at best. Are there any other sources for it besides on here and ff.net? I really crave some good (serious) Myth fics desu

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>>69966102
archiveofourown is the go-to fanfic site these days

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>>69965778
The fact we never got a San gives a BEEG ROCKET to all of CouncilRyS is sad.

Also with FuwaMoco moving to Japan they get invited to Lui's place for an off collab. It is a mistake as they can't leave until Lui gets to live out all her twincest fantasies with them.
Will the pair escape or will they be broken down to being incestuous slaves for Mistress Lui?

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>>69966456
Man I would've settled for San getting to plow just ONE of the girls

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>>69966102
>good (serious) Myth fics
Yeah, you're only going to find that on ao3. The fics here are mostly anon-insert fics with ensembles casts of holos the writers likes.
Archiveofourown meanwhile is where you're going to find myth generation fics... Though you're going to have to get real good at using their filters if you're not a shipper looking for fics like those.

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I should really finish that Mumei fic I left half written... all if the other ones too, but especially the Mumei one...

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>>69972645
Damn, that's a cute fox.

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>>69972645
The thumbnail made me think it was that artist who's name begins with "u" that I can't pronounce correctly but is known for drawing very soft looking Fubuki's.

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I wonder what it would be like to be eaten.

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>>69973780
Speaking as someone who has watched a lot of nature documentaries, it seems unpleasant.

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>>69786960
Dune, but chuubas.

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>>69973780
With chewing or without? Because the former isn't especially exciting.

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>>69975561
Definitely with chewing, but ignore the pain and focus on the feeling; the liquid squirting from your limbs, the spreading numbness, sudden loss of sensation from parts of you as your nerves are cut. It seems almost sensual.

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>>69975639
I don't know, I'd rather be swallowed by a toothless whale and cut myself out.

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>>69975639
>ignore the pain
How do you learn this skill?

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>>69976297
It costs 10XP

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>>69976297
Contract leprosy

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>>69977786
>that pussy detail
Bro...

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>>69977786
Mmmm... Fubuki on the cob.

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>>69966456
>>69967613
I mean there's plenty of fanart of it.
At the end of the day, San was basically just a one note hung shota joke, and given that no one here writes ao3 'plot what plot' contextless smut scenes I can understand why no one's wrote a San fic /here/ outside of the gay one.