/wg/ - Writing General - Have A Drink On Me Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble - Winter Writing War, a friendly competition for the holiday season! The info page & contest archive can be found here: https://rentry.org/VTWRWWW

Check the main archive below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!
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"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>65707665 (Where we talked about doppelganger Shiori, our oshis, New Year resolutions, and Towa)

/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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Story Anchor
Post em if you got em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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Story recap. There was 1 story posted last thread.

Holoshorts update, feat. Roboco. >>65845177

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CONTEST ANCHOR
The submission period for the contest has ended. However, you have this week (01/01 - 01/07) to read the entries and decide your favorites before voting opens. Please give them their due!

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Lamy my beloved. Even if you're troublesome, I think you're just swell.

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>>65921248
What a fat drunk snow cow!

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>>65921423
Looking scarce this time

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>be me
>find random fan fic
>go to random chapter
>silently curse the author for making such a confusing, our of context story
>close fic and never touch it again

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i got recommended present day present time but it got deleted before i got to read it :(

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>>65922845
It might be on the hard archive still.

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>>65924053
It'll definitely be on the hard archive but good luck trying to find which story you're looking for out of the thousand we have, all given gibberish filenames.

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>>65924675
i tried to look for like 20 min but couldn't find it. i'll try again some other time

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>>65924675
>>65924893
Anons...
Use the fucking hard archive master index. It's not that hard, it literally links to the wacky filename it's saved under. It only gets hard if you're on phone and have to cross reference to find the file.

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>>65921502
Is there a list of fics submitted to the contest?

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>>65927822
They're in the VTWRWWW rentry in the OP

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>>65829130
>>65829479
This is taking a minute but this is already looking super fun to draw. Might draw an alt also and I have a burning urge to animate this as well, but i'll see if I can even do the keys tomorrow though lol
https://files.catbox.moe/hwfpvz.png

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>>65928898
A-chan's expression is golden.
>NODOKA! YOU TIT COW, COME HERE RIGHT THIS INSTANT
>I NEED TL FUCKING UNWIND

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>>65928898
It's always architecture with you isn't it

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>>65929825
>basically the only chuuba artist I know of who consistently draws regularly chunky girls being lewd instead of absurd hyper architecture with that jank-ass food fetish, burping shit
this man is far more of a hero than you'll ever be
he does what needs to be done

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>>65929825
For what it's worth I HAVE been holding back on that one and mostly focused it on Nodoka's cow tits.

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>>65929825
are you mistaking the chair for her body anon

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>>65898561
>Perhaps it's just me but, this felt strangely melancholic. Like there's a thread of sadness running through it despite how fluffy everything is supposed to be looking from the outside.
That was kinda the idea. Towa and Anon are two isolated and alienated people who find joy in each other. I wanted to communicate this sensation that their bond could be just as easily be disintegrated as it was forged by the very same winds of fate. That each moment was a genuine effort to preserve it and that each moment of tenderness itself was a victory against the world.
Funny enough I had written Anon to be more angry and frustrated with life. If you ever listened to American Idiot by Green Day I'd compare him to St. Jimmy. But I quickly scrapped it when I realized Towa wouldn't associate with such a person. So I wrote him instead to be more numb, someone okay with drifting so long as he was alive. Until he met the devil at the crossroads so to speak.
> If there was anything I'd say wasn't working it would be that the contest limit of 25k made this entire piece feel like it's stretched thin
I had actually scrapped a bunch of scene concepts in the Fall. Including an arcade date, and a scene where Towa introduces Bibi. Although that wasn't the contest's fault but my own self-consciousness about overwriting. It happened to fall under the word count so I submitted it. I had considered scrapping the smoking subplot as well. While I never planned on a longer timeskip sequence, I think you have a point in that I could have been more retrospective or even made the reading assume a bad ending.
>The bandaid scene feels weirdly orphaned with where the need for it came from.
Finger injuries are common when playing guitar, bleeding/blisters are pretty common for beginners. The idea is that Anon played for hours and I wanted to scene of intimacy to show the growth of their relationship.

Thanks for reading and the review, I appreciate the feedback.

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>>65930285
This isn't /d/ you fucking weirdo.

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>>65932574
that's exactly my fucking point

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>>65929825
The guy with the pen draws the dick.

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Does the bugfag still come here?

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went on ao3 out of curiosity and saw that the top fic is vox x shoto and most of the top ones are yaoi niji fics. I guess ao3 has always been more female-dominated, but still kind of surprising.
anyways, does anyone have a good action story to recommend? I see a few in the directory but was wondering if any in particular stood out.

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>>65933575
>I guess ao3 has always been more female-dominated
fanfics in general are more female-dominated

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>>65933955
Makes you wonder how many of us are actually chicks LARPing as men.

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>>65933099
Allegedly, but since he's a commissioner he hasn't been seen a lot since the guys he's commissioning are respectively on self-exile, completely missing, and hasn't taken one in a while.
>>65933955
Mostly, the more autistic a fandom is the more likely the fic writers are men rather than women.

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>>65934073
>fics written by girls
fics featuring kiara
>fics written by woman
the rest

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>>65934707
>ALSanon is a cute sexually frustrated hag venting her frustrations over not being able to fondle her nephew through the medium of writing

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>>65934073
Guys I don't want to alarm you, but there may be a woman or women in the thread!

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>>65934707
>>65935131
>Do a /wg/ meet up
>"hey guys were are you? all i see is a lot of woman who stink"

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>>65935265
the one male anon who shows at that meet up is 100% getting pegged

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>>65935959
Not if I still have two fists and consciousness that says otherwise.

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>>65936236
Holofantasy Anon typed this post

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>>65936236
Then your consciousness will be swiftly taken away from you, along with your anal virginity. You can't hope to win against a group of coombrain nerd girls driven into a frenzy by the possibility of experimentation with the male body. You're going to learn just how wide your sphincter can stretch, anon.

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>>65928898
do you by chance make requests?

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>>65936753
Sure, I've mostly just been drawing random prompts/stories here to get my hand warmed up. If it's good, I can give it a try tonight god willing

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>>65934905
Please be real....

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>>65937556
can you draw an overweight Kiara shitting on the mouth of a KFP employee please?

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>>65935265

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>>65937556
Can do you draw Mori blowing a young shota?
I need it for, uh, reasons.

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>>65937556
How would you feel about drawing a big chonky Sana getting dicked hard from behind while her belly gets squeezed

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>>65937556
if it's not too much trouble, could you draw Chloe in a microkini that's maybe a size too small for her so it hugs her skin tightly, and she looks to the foreground similar to pic rel, while holding an onahole?

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>>65933575
If you're looking for something with action, we got quite a few different series that focus on that along with other stuff. Check out the archive and see what chuubas you're in the mood to read about, and go nuts.

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>>65933575
wait until i finish cooking

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>>65921351
Oga x Chloe and how Oga learned about Chloe's charms the hard way

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>>65936560
Not if I can rizz em enough to submit to ME.

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i suggest you take all the energy regarding stinky girls and rewire it so you can write Nerissa

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>>65942630
Stinky girls just make me think of the fujocast rather than nerizzler.

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>>65942765
Nerissa has that girlfailure stank though.
She's like Marine, where she's a pathetic horny creature you want to see fail, impregnate and also lovingly kiss all at once

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>>65942857
I would like to give her a wedgie. Girls like her make me want to bully them.

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>>65930285
You'd be more at home over there: >>>/d/

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>>65943617
Where the hell do you think all the bullshit that takes architecture too far that I'm complaining about is at
I'm unironically LESS at home at /d/

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>>65943059
While i dont like wedgies, i do agree that some light bullying is needed.
only for them to kiss the loser

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>>65943951
NTA but this isn't the place for you or the drawfag. It's for discussion of vtubers, whereas you and him are plainly more interested in fetish content with a vtuber skin draped over it. Your interest is purely surface-level and thus disingenuous.

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>>65928898
https://files.catbox.moe/er4c61.png
https://files.catbox.moe/3zvfln.png
Took a minute longer than planned (and it is a fair bit rougher) but there we are. Really gotta be better at focusing on the forest instead of the trees on these, but I'm happy enough with this gay office sex.
>>65938075
If you aren't serious about this, 10/10 bit, you had me there. If you are serious, jokes on you I probably could do /ringo/ stuff I am that fucked up.
>>65938642
I don't like Mori. :(
>>65938715
>>65939149
Might be able to do these tomorrow, didn't expect this drawing to take that long. Should be fun though
>>65942630
Please elaborate.

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>>65944095
>doesnt like Mori
Pls tell me not for reasons similar to catalog...

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>>65944263
It's nothing personal, Houston is just a bad city

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>>65944018
Wedgies, noogies, verbal teasing, whatever. I have my personal preference, but any of it will do the trick. Nerissa is just the type of woman you wanna (metaphorically) smear with mud (lovingly)

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>>65944077
This is some "no true Scotsman" shit right here

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>>65944095
i understand your trepidation but i am serious about this, the scat request mirrors the fic winner winner chocolate dinner

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>>65944095
hot drawings.

Also regarding Nerissa. She is beatiful but her loser aura outs her as a femcel inmediatly.

She completely missed her shot at rizzing up Kiara because she spent 30 minutes in a Naruto tangent, triying to sell her favorite character Rock Lee. Kiara's pussy dried up.

She wants to fuck Shiori, who always rebukes her. Nerissa however, rather than do the "bweeeh" bit that Marine does, triples down in an attempt to catch at least the boot. Its why Shiori always goes "Heel girl", treating her like a horny dog (And Nerissa gets off to that)

Last, but not least, she has had multiple moments where she vaporized her dignity for both the bit and getting exposed. She's the type of gal to drop her phone, you catching the porn on the screen and her pretending to be cool about it by going "I havent masturbated to this one yet"

Extremely cute, Bullying target, stinky, has "Pathetic Wet cat" energy, can pull out rizz moves (but they will blow up) and is tall. She's great.

That's it, thanks for coming to my ted talk. I love losers!

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>>65944095
You need to work on drawing hands, those are some seriously ugly meat-claws.

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>>65944629
Okay so if I were to write about say, battling through her raven tower and breeding her sisters and not her, would that be pretty on brand for her?

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>>65945169
>Okay so if I were to write
Don't get his hopes up, we both know you've never written anything before nor will you ever.

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>>65944629
What a losercow, I've gotta do something with her eventually
>>65944551
Gotcha, just getting a /ringo/ tier request immediately was funny

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>>65945169
i mean it could be on brand, but it would be cruel.

Reine has her plans blow up on her face because she never takes the last step, while Marine blows up at the last step because he who chases two hares catches neither (and she who tries to have sex with like 7 girls never gets one).
Nerissa would bomb the initial exchange (probably pretending to be a cool edgy bird), with her ultimately scoring due to (you) going "Sigh...fine..just shut up *unzips dick*".

So what im saying is that she keeps pestering you through the tower, you breeding the sisters until she's the last one. You are a bit annoyed but she's worshiping the floor you walk on because you are seriously cool and so strong and oh mah gawd what a hunk...and she might also cum all over the floor at the idea of wearing a leash

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I have a severe case of half-elf fever and the only cures are sex with her or fics about sex with her that I can self insert into

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I had to essentially write ten pages without progress because I had one flashback scene that was good on its own but as the chapter progressed I came up with a flashback sequence that better fit the chapter. I basically made both no progress and a lot of it at the same. That'll be a good flashback for chapter 8 at least.

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>>65945842
>starting out as a wanna be edgelord but slowly degrades into a submissive, desperate, thirstmonger
That could work out nicely. It would kinda tie together the final revelation that this demon songstress is not actually dangerous to the world but is just desperate for affection and sex.
It can also work as an act of jealousy since Shiori is obsessed with (You) by this point.

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>>65946202
Oh yeah
>Nerissa drools all over Shiori but hates (you)
>Shiori doesnt hate her, but her antics sometimes get to her. This is where she learns that beating the dog is ineffective if the dog is into it
>Tower stuff. Maybe she "kidnaps" shiori by convincing her that this will help her chances.
>You win. Shiori is rescued and Nerissa is pacified
>
>Wait why is she coming in with a travel bag?
>*Nerissa has joined your party without your consentment*
>Now two failgirls are in your party

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>>65946640
Advent is planned to drive Anon fucking nuts, I'll tell you that much right now.
>Shiori is basically a stalker
>Fuwawa and Mococo have their own respective baggage and Polka convinces you to try and reform them since she wants them
>Bijou has her own set of issues based around her origin
>Nerissa will have all this girlfailure shit going on, but at least her sisters would have been good lays

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>>65944095
>Might be able to do these tomorrow, didn't expect this drawing to take that long. Should be fun though
It's okay, I appreciate the thought! Thank you!

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>>65921351
Anon bullying Nerissa with his penis (yes this just implies sex but also the idea of a loogie with cum drip or a wet willie with semen cones to mind)

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>>65922618
People blew their load over the holiday. Happened last year too

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>>65933099
Yup, still come here regularly. Whatcha want?

>>65934701
>but since he's a commissioner he hasn't been seen a lot
I post reasonably frequently, I just don't go, "Hey everyone! Remember me!? I'm BUGFAG!"

MWanon is extremely busy with life to the point any commission is going to take months, I still regularly talk with PF although despite his insistence to the contrary I'm not 100% sure he is committed to commissions, and Weirdanonv2... well, he just sort of up and disappeared.

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>>65951211
What even is a loogie?

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>>65956205
A wad of spit

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>>65947196
Question: if Polka wants the dogoo's that badly why doesn't she try and reform them herself?

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>>65947196
>but at least her sisters would have been good lays
The wording of this being in past tense is just making me imagine Anon going up the tower getting teased and seduced into fucking Nerissa's sisters but like halfway through foreplay they drop a complete deal breaking fact about themselves that just makes Anon jump off the tower to get out of this madhouse.

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>>65945842
You could probably leash all of Advent pretty well.

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>>65959394
MUH
>has flashbacks to a certain fanart when Towa defeated all of HoloX in Clubhouse Games

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>>65956205
Generally speaking it’s a wad of spit, usually with some amount of mucus mixed in to give it form

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>>65961492
Kinda disgusting ngl

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>>65962204
Well, it’s bullying, so that’s kind of the point.

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>>65962621
NTA but there are many types of bullying, physically and psychologically. There's no need to choose the weirdest, most juvenile and disgusting forms if you want to degrade someone.

You're just a freak.

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>>65962689
I dunno I think it’s funny (not sexually scintillating)

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>>65936236
YOU GONNA GIT ROOFIED

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>>65921351
Getting Lamy drunk and blowing her back, doing this several times while everyone thinks you are a great person for taking care of the drunkard.
Meanwhile you are doing stuff like writing on a marker the number of times you fucked her and taking photos of her after sex just for the sake of it

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>>65964662
You'd probably die of alcohol poisoning before that happens lol

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>>65964662
>blowing her back
So this is futa Lamy??

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>>65962883
>Finally! I can describe date rape and a penis in prose!

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>>65964969
>Hey lamy wanna drink?
>OH BOY DO I WANNA?
then drink a bit until you can start drinking water. As someone who hangs around alcoholics, as long as you follow their mood they will drink
>>65965298
i mean im not opposed to lamy growing a dick and learning all the stuff about it on the worst way posible.
>Lamy getting her spanking the monkey session interrupted and then learning how terrible blueballs are

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>>65965298
I could be wrong but I think "blowing her back" means she's fucked up her back.

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>>65958159
Because it's more fun to rope Anon into these things. Plus she likes seeing her man do stuff like that and it'll extra spice to the quadruple hag seggss.
>>65958319
There could be some pretty big red flags, but a magical raven tower does not come without its own bag of tricks. Even if he jumps off, he might just find himself right back in anirissa's chambers. There's no getting out of this mess, and there's pulling out either.

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>>65965509
> Plus she likes seeing her man do stuff like that and it'll extra spice to the quadruple hag seggss.
I wanna say something like "Trust Polka to get someone to do her dirty work in getting what she wants" but I admit, I am genuinely curious because I genuinely want to see how successful / wrong the plan is going to turn out.
And I say this as someone who would probably do the same thing Polka is doing and taking the easy way to get what she wants. Polka is VERY smart and I hope (seriously) that it doesn't bite her in the arse and mindbreaks her into being the dogoo's beloved toy.

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>>65965766
>Polka is VERY smart and I hope (seriously) that it doesn't bite her in the arse and mindbreaks her into being the dogoo's beloved toy.
I don't think there will be sub-hierarchies like that in the harem, but I wouldn't hate to be proven wrong.

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>>65964969
This prompt should be reversed then

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>>65964662
>just for the sake of it
Hehehe

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>>65944095
>I don't like Mori. :(
Can I still get a cute shota trying to pound a woman 2.5x times his size...?
Moona?

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>>65965766
Polka and Anon's relationship thrives a little on the fennec pushing anon to do things he normally wouldn't, which ends up helping him grow for the better. She herself also finds stability in how he will do his best to rectify any situation that blows up in his face (which is often), so she feels enabled to take those kinds of risks with him and wear a big goofy smile while doing it.
>>65966104
Might be too soon to say one way or the other. I'm only going to make the first dive into how this harem will work in practice soon, and it's a challenging subject to work out correctly. I have a feeling it'll play out like it's supposed to though.

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>>65967670
Hold on, could you perhaps be that same anon who has Polka whisk Fuwa away for her own needs and she leaves poor anon having to deal with Moco?

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>>65967670
look at how smug that fennec is

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>>65921351
A group of people invited to a sake drinking with Lamy.
Everyone thinking it's a chance to either fuck Lamy or gangbang her.
The booze flows and the it's rather strong.
Ideas of taking advantage of Lamy get lost in the alcoholic haze. None notice when their hair grows long and starts to get blue streaks... And by the time they do it's far too late.
The Lamys have a celebratory orgy

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>>65967810
Sure am. That's a scenario I'm strongly considering and hope it works out that way for the initial run in with the abyssguard twins.
>>65967950
She hasn't even begun to smug. Just you wait till she gets something she's been waiting for.

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>>65968336
I think I read a Byleth fic like that...
Men drink with fem-Leth, have an orgy with fem-Leth, the men give out after they coom their brains and soul out. All while Fem-leth is unfazed as ever.

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>>65969213
>Sure am.
I'm going to stop talking now and just wait eagerly to see how well you can write out your scenario.

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>>65970005
Don't let me stop you from discussing it. It's gonna be a while before my story gets to those two. I'll probably foreshadow advent here and there via intermissions in the coming stories, but I still have quite a ways to go before their proper introduction.

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>>65970588
I'm not stopping because I don't want to discuss it, I'm stopping because I don't want to run my mouth off and say something severely retarded / stupid and clog up the thread with my shite.
I want to make it my new year resolution to not say anything negative / mean to scenarios I do not like. I want to think positive and I REALLY want to see how your story turns out.

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>>65970801
As long as you're separating your ideas from how others should write their stories I don't see what the danger is, especially in an anonymous forum where being able to ignore some posts is almost required. There's always the possibility that you come up with something stupid in a creative endeavour, but that's just a part of the human experience.

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>inspiration strikes for the first time in months
I was afraid the burnout was going to last forever

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>>65958319
>"Wow...you're so much bigger than my dad~"
>Anon hurls himself through the fucking window without even trying to find where his belt went

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>>65970801
I admire your resolution, but don't silence yourself too much where you might be sparking an exchange of ideas or even constructive feedback. Both the good and the bad helps us all improve as creators and writers.
>>65971159
Fucking knock it out of the park, anon. Keep that fire burning.

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>>65971352
I wretched a little at that. Thanks anon, that would 100% get me to peace out of there any never look back.

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>>65971352
Maybe she just saw him in the shower

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>>65971712
*retched
Ftfy

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>>65972058
I had a feeling I used the wrong one. Thanks bro, won't make that mistake ever again.

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>>65971072
>>65971536
Fine then I'll say this.
I don't like the idea of Polka using (You) so that she can get the dogoo twins all to herself. It just feels "wrong" in my head but I will admit, I want to see it written because at the end of the day, curiosity got the better of me and I genuinely would do what Polka is doing if it meant I could get what I want.
That's all I'm going to say on the matter. I'd say more but like I mentioned earlier, I don't WANT to be negative and lash out and I want to be positive. I want to SEE what comes out in the scenario and I'm willing to wait forever for it.

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>>65972329
Spelling champ at your service!

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>>65972519
Well you might be happy to know that the Polka in my story would never keep something from Anon if it was clearly making him sad or hurt. Their relationship is built on a foundation of sharing something precious with one another that is a unique experience for her race. While the original intent might be a tad selfish from Polka's end, at the end of the day she knows her man, and knows they both will enjoy the potential outcome. Anon is also a big softie at times and Polka knows he can't resist a chance to change things for the better without violence. While also knowing that if he has to wrestle the dogs a little he will enjoy that just as much.
That's not to say that maybe eventually Polka might be a little selfish when it comes to the twins, especially in the case where she prefers to pamper fuwawa while mococo is left with you and turns ravenous if she is without her backseating handler.
Also, the scenario itself could turn out in any number of ways for all I know at the moment. A lot of things will play into it that I might not have even written yet.

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>>65972519
I don't think "all to herself" would fit HoloJourneys, which we're talking about. In the end they're all still part of the MC's harem and love him.

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>>65971352
hmmm....a Nerissa free use family fic....

>be Nerissa's boyfriend
>you've been dating for months and she finally wants to introduce you to her family
>"alright, I just want to give you a warning, my family is...very friendly and comfortable around one another and guests. So if you see them act a certain way around either each other, me, or extend that behavior to you, don't panic it's 100% normal for us and it's okay if you get involved."
>you raise your brow at her phrasing but don't think too much of it
>as soon as you open the front door the distinct smell of sweat and bodily fluids hits you.
>you ignore the smell for now but shortly after you and nerissa step in you're greeted to the eldest sister walking in view in a micro naked.
>"oh my~ so you're the man after my baby sister's heart? I heard you were really packing." sshe gropes your crotch to confirm.
>"isn't your sister married with children?" you ask Nerissa
>"yeah, but they're at their home right now so don't worry~" she speaks like nothing is happening.,
>"big sisteer~" ytou hear a guys voice call out from the distance and a shirtless 19 year old guy hug tackles nerissa, in which she catches him with ease while he starts groping her and helping her out of her clothes.
>in the short time you've been their oneerisa has already pulled your pants down and starting to suck your dick while the younger brother starts fucking Nerissa in front of you
>"What kind of family is this?" you call out trying to escape but oneerissa's vacuum grip has you in place
>"its not that big of a deal bro," the little brother informs you while he's blowing nerissa's back out, her eyes rolled back while being held up by her arms "did you know the romans had a deep fascination with interfamilial relationships, and even the deities they worship were all incestuous?" he speaks as a matter of factly, completely ignoring Nerissa's moans and screams while gleaming at you like he wanted you to be impressed by his knowledge.

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>>65973339
Damned unicorns...blocking us glorious Nerissa x Brorissa insex...

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>>65973233
>would fit HoloJourneys, which we're talking about.
Okay please disregard everything I said then because I thought this scenario was going to be an entirely new story or something.
I haven't read HoloJourneys in full due to having difficulty in reading (and a extremely short attention span), but I will try my utmost hardest (even if it kills my throat and brain) when you write that part involing Polka and the dogoo twins.

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>>65973339
When in Rome...

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>>65970588
Yo those are some sick puppies

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>>65973470
Sorry for the confusion. I should make a better habit about mentioning if something I'm talking about writing is for my current series or not. What you said though has some good food for thought though, so I appreciate the ideas.

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>>65973470
You could listen to it in bed via text to speech, it's what I did for intimidatingly long stories sometimes.

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>>65976132
I now wonder if HJ anon could convince Mrs. HJanon to do an audio reading of holo ourneys

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>>65976603
Maybe someday. She actually started listening to it via text to speech as well and she makes fun of me whenever something including a tilde appears since the speech just voices out "tilde". During our night out on new years and after a few drinks I told her that there's smut later one and she was like "now you see, that motivates me to continue." and I'm like, mother fucker, no one cares who you are till you write the smut! It keeps happening!

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>>65977335
i mean, if you wanna think about it like this, it's also her chance to peer into the window of your mind and give her ideas of things you're into for *ehem* future reference

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>>65977335
Does the story work without knowing the vtubers?

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>>65977335
>I'm like, mother fucker, no one cares who you are till you write the smut! It keeps happening!
Heh. Some things never change.

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>>65921351
(You) are a talent manager and one day you are isekai'd into a world where you're the vtuber and your talent is the manager will you ask for stupid thing in revenge for what she has you do before or will you convince her to start streaming

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>>65977606
That is a good way to look at it, as well as the offer she put on the table to do the inverse and help find inspiration for some of the smut.
>>65978521
That is sort of my intent when going into this story that a reader should be able to digest the information and get some enjoyment out of the characters regardless if they are aware of the vtubers or not. It's the feedback I'm actually most interested to hear from her once she gets into the real meat of the story. So far she's enjoyed it, so I assume it's working to some extent.
>>65978807
It is the world we live in, and the cross we must bear.

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>>65978978
Does this change anything? Are you a maletuber? Do you become a wacky character or you are just john doe (anon doxx ABAYO).
Whatever. Fund it. We need more girls wearing suits

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>>65981469
I think you would have to build it up properly, things like establishing that your chuuba in question was hard to wrangle, had problems climbing the popularity chain, etc. Then she would smear it in your face about how it's not all that easy, and crack the whip on you. Develop a kayfabe, learn to dance, sing, be the video game playing monkey.
We need more monkey girl vtubers.

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>>65979498
I can't pinpoint why, exactly, but I feel like some of Watame's music would be a good companion to chapters focused on her.

[Anonymous No.]

Yo ArchiveAnon, looks like the Kiara facesitting fic is listed twice in the archive.

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>>65982426
Thanks for the heads up, I'll get that.

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>>65983069
While people are bugging you, could you correct the "Azkui" part of Cooking and a Comet Epilogue into "Azuki"? I misspelled it when I anchored the story.

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>>65983253
Sure thing.

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>>65983853
Thanks Hoss.

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>>65982322
A lot of her original music has tones that vibe really well with some of the scenes that focus heavily on her and her development. Some of the lyrics themselves lend well to her overall outlook in the story as well in regards to moving forward and making the best of everything around you. This sheep is great.

[Anonymous No.]

I want to flood this hag's heart with my warm love

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>>65985868
I'm going to overflow this hag's life with precious memories.

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>>65985868
>>65987624
I will fill this hag up with all the love and affection she deserves

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>>65985868
>>65987624
>>65987873
That's pretty cool guys, while you do that, I will fuck her silly, impregnate her, and walk out on her after promising my eternal love.

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>>65985868
>>65987624
>>65987873
now turn her into a jk

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>>65989056
Done. She is now alienated from her supposed peers. What did you expect, to throw her into a highschool and for her to blend in?
He beauty is flowering once more on the outside, but her feelings are withering even more on the inside.
Can (you), a young grasshopper by her standards, thaw her freezing heart once more?

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>>65964662
https://files.catbox.moe/z1ly41.png
Tried a different approach here that's kinda messy but this one was fun.

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>>65983069
While you're editing the archive, are you sure about having ALS just be the landing page on the main archive? I feel like it deserves at least a 'series link' tag with how many chapters there are.

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>>65989797
??? How much of this is her torso? Has she just fused with the bed?

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>>65989056
Fine. I'll go right with her. We'll both raise our respective hells until we cross paths and I decide that she's the girl I want to date, and I'll find some way to make her laugh and give this moron without any direction a chance.

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>>65989797
Ideal female form

>>65989962
I think she's supposed to wearing an unbuttoned shirt kinda like pic related

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>>65989874
I was thinking about it but I'm not sure. It's just the one link, now, as opposed to a collection of other links. I guess you could argue that any series with a landing page sort of falls out of that category because of it, but ALS is *just* that one link now. I could put it in the series archive either way.

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>>65990553
I can hand you the individual links and tags if that helps.

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>>65990676
If you want. I could also just put the main link there and call it good. I think I lost the series descriptor, though. If you still have it on hand - or want to pen another - I'd be appreciative.

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>>65989797
wuv me some wamy sex. Thanks drawanon. I like how you kept her thigh highs on.

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>>65990747
Sure, for copy pasting ease.

######->*Auntie's Little Secret*<-
>Shirakami Fubuki lives a normal life. Normal as life can get. She works as a virtual idol for the company 'Cover Corp', she's married to a great man, and she takes care of her little nephew like a mother would. Hidden underneath a mask, she holds a terrible secret, and much to her demise, it would draw in the person she loved the most. Her nephew.


[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 1.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTMCye7RXxhgeWukpzY4Hc1O8gw4xRu9gKukQKPsRheiskt8rFt7Z-KbhAy32MiGWiZSqSY3wUB4Zrk/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 2.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRa-3ZKu_z5WQCfliK2Z2Fq-RSTR_zBDMo1MqbXiSOljszUh-0oTmqba4e-8YkUHhN5jmxmrjaKGgOT/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 3.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSryi0NGvLuJpUyFKVA-vz2ovVBMaJpoQMGSZ0AymjlUl0SkcjiGha85Bl6y8s8mpbmFEApSYfthwvc/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 4.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ-w2QqAbVz_EUHXjfBhC6_PTxVpQ9XZROz4S3qK3DH1Q_XmiBJuuaJN69YE6SoUID7tYrKfLF_VUMC/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 5.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSpKmFz-UM5TFCl7aeR9ySXEDjoiYgr8_9Tr8I9SSKwdYLuKxQh2xYBrCP7bdm1eiZxtlCPfX_Jt-vY/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 6.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vReBcJAiJtBjWSaaMmx2f5b2jdYSAOzo9TnnjCjjQEMmM-plKGuFibEF9-jSk_obAwZcaD54I81G2Jz/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 7.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS3vPwxp8K4im8egsoFhK2HbVWzb5MLmUmgpcDlUgVmHhqaT8G0X4MJ4X6F1tzOnu90hQwSFt7AOPn3/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 8.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRTAQZXAD7DO0Fu6Tv1BYORNe3qT-Pg2-F0_UCt6BWgGybudNlvyw3_-bFhufLMjvKdJHePiHhxiSBu/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[Auntie's Little Secret. Ch. 9.](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRUZawHO_T8lER_RZuiL60iwOCNpdbR7_wT0txChWf-eq-EtgODJkLEjadX5B640RyvFCcXW9euXsdq/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

[The last page of the journal - Auntie's Little Secret: Epilogue](https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTbnhWP5rDaWlXaX0he6LBspVkq3p40JxO31cwG-18VF_Zg8KKEgpzOS-EobtMJgrP8CIggQGX0pvyl/pub)) (tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, fluff, /ss/, grooming, dark)

Hope I didn't fuck this up.
Also, thank you for your service, ArchiveAnon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>65991123
Thank *you*, this is great. I appreciate it a lot. I'll sort it all out in a minute.

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>>65991451
Ah, and I fucked this up. I missed the landing page link.

[Auntie's Little Secret - Landing Page.](https://rentry.org/als18))

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How's the WIP coming along?
I just wrote 1.5k of the world's most fire fanfiction ever conceived.
Surely, I will not fall into WIP hell this time.

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>>65994111
Finished and outline for one and currently waste deep in research for another. Almost certainly wont use the majority of it but here we are.

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>>65994111
127000 or some such number

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>>65994111
I'm flip-flopping between two WIPs but they're going somewhere at least

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>>65994111
Still going through it. A bit slower than I would like, but it's getting there.

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>>65994111
this one and the NSFW one at 2640 words. Multi wip drifting, but going swell

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>>65994111
Started writing before I left work. Probably a tenth of the way there, but who knows how long it'll take. Third person is not really my strong suit, but sometimes you gotta be like a tree, stop writing romcom, and branch out

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>>65999347
>>66000385
Forgot to post mine before I shut down for the night, but I'm halfway on to my 3k target for the chapter.

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>>65994111
Good. I can feel myself growing again as an author.

The A plot as it stands now is perfectly serviceable, but then I realized nobody really learns anything from it and there's no character progression, especially for an event with such significance with all characters involved in it. I'm going to re work it so that (hopefully anyway) by the end of it, the three of them all come away from that experience taking something significant from it.

I'm slowly but surely starting to write adventure stories that are actually worth reading. It's quite exciting.

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>>65994111
It's coming along. Real-world stresses are still eating away at me, but I got some ideas for the scene I was stuck on. I'll try and get some writing done over the weekend.

[Anonymous No.]

God I love Mococo.

[Anonymous No.]

Gotta keep edging the thread.

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>>66004783
Plap plap plap

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>>65994111
inching along hoping to be finished before the mo th ends

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>>66008905
I am confident somewhat I'll finish Ch1 and reach 3k before this month ends. On a good day, I'll reach it before the halfway mark.

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>>65921351
Thank you for posting

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>>65921351
Marathon sex with Bae

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>>65994111
Editing hell right now. So much of my work doesn't sound quite right and definitely needs fixing, but I don't know how to go about it.

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>>66013669
I feel your pain on a spiritual level.

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>>66013669
Have you gone around asking for beta readers? That's kind of the point of the rolodex.

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>>66015223
Yeah, it's a lot of effort and real slow going.
>>66015261
I plan on handing the second chapter of this over to a beta reader, but I'm not sure if I'll need one this time round. It's mostly just the overall prose and wording of each individual sentence that needs working on, and I doubt any beta reader would be dedicated to fixing all 7000 of my sentences.

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>>66017005
I think my hair just turned pink and my tounge shortened seeing this image...

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>>66017349

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>>66017005
>Filename
That they are. I need to write a new Ame fic. It's been so long...

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>>65921351
Cheating sex with Lamy

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/6987201

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>>66019264
Who would be the worst/best person to cheat on if you were cheating with Lamy? Polka feels like an obvious answer but I feel like she'd be a 50/50 between doing a murder-suicide and just doing the suicide part.

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>>66019813
If we're going with genmates I'd say Botan because I feel like she would try and hide her pain. Although I can't imagine her withholding sex.

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>>66019813
Best person to cheat on -- some sort of obsessive-possessive menhera that makes (you) feel hungry for at least some emotional security and stability (Rushia, Matsuri)
Worst -- our resident cinnamon rolls (Sora, Towa, Subaru) that would probably spring back eventually or, the sin of sins, another senior citizen (Marine, Mio), which would probably haunt them for the rest of their days

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>>66020485
Mio would probably blame herself for not being attractive or interesting enough to keep you.

She'd be right, too. She's fucking boring.

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>>66020485
>Marine
>New hormone medication doesn't just curb her libido it kills it outright
>She's happy, got a ton more time to work on stuff but doesn't realize how much the lack of sex is bothering you with going from every day to none in like a month
>Lamy is only a floor away

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>>66020593
t.aiga

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>>66020593
YOU'RE fucking boring.

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[Anonymous No.]

>>66020485
Profesional cucker not really here
>A Girl with decent enough libido. You two havent been doing it for reasons
make it someone who genuinely loves you but doesnt "Get" relationships and dynamics based around sex. Nene, Kanade, Bae, Mumei, Iofi

>Carreer driven woman that loves you, you are her pillar, but at this point of her life she needs to press the advantage
Not the japanese salaryman dogshit, but a person who is genuinely on the cusp of something great, and who you truly support at the cost of shedding away your defenses. That's when you commit the act. Suisei, Mori,Kaela, Pekora, Kiara
>Woman falling into a spiral/who climbed out of it
DANGER: HIGH SCUMBAG CONTENT HERE. Basically girls at their lowest point or who managed to avoid hitting rock bottom and are hanging on by a thread (you). If you wanna go full dramatic, make it so you cheat when the relationship has problems (a fight or something), but then things pick up and the guilt starts swallowing you. Kronii, Polka, Ollie,Matsuri.
>SCUMBAG MUST DIE
Mask off piece of shit that dates a good girl that doesnt deserve it, but wont put out because they are scared/not ready yet. Sora, Towa, Ina, Zeta, Anya

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>>66025306
>SCUMBAG MUST DIE
Okay, completely unrelated to the lamy thing but this just makes me imagine a fic with the premise of "chuuba tries to prove you're a scumbag to your cinnamon roll tier girlfriend by seducing you and having you cheat but accidentally finds themselves falling in love as she tries."
Going by the list of
>Sora, Towa, Ina, Zeta, Anya
First thought is Towa with Kanata trying to prove you're a scumbag... but even typing this out, that setup just sounds like Sad Genuine Smile with the set up remixed. Maybe Laplus? She tries to protect her oshi by proving that (You) are a scumbag that would cheat on Towa but then things happen and now she's cucking Towa.

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>>66025306
Expand on this list, please.

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>>66020758
>Lamy dirty talks by mentioning both your wife and her husband

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>>66027044
sure.
>Childhood sweetheart where the flame has died down
you two have been together for a long time and it just isnt the same. Maybe a fight over the same tired stuff happened, maybe you get a false impression of them cheating. Hell maybe you just couldnt help but want a different woman,one that you dont have figured out. The hags or Gozaru work here, but its also an avenue worth exploring with Shuba.

>I cant help it. the charm of a mature woman overpowers my childish wife.
Sure, there's not a dull day in your marriage. But you are tired, you want a woman who can take matters on their own hand and doesnt need you to come rushing to save her. Miko, Kobo,Fauna,Gura work here. The type of girl that might or not be incompetent at simple stuff, that loves you and gives you poonus, but you NEED that break.

>Age gap.
You date a hag/zoomer and while things are not bad, there is some disconnect. The troublesome woman that entered your life though? oooh boy does she get you down to a t. Any young/old Member applies

>The man of the house
Your girlfriend/wife worships the floor you walk in. All she talks is how her hubbie could solve any situation. Its nice.
Its also exhausting to be put into a pedestal and to be paraded around as a prime specimen (even if there's no ill intentions behind it). This new woman is not taking any of that shit, she's your equal...or even stronger. Easy candidates include Nerissa,Marine, Reine or even Fubuki
>The woman of the house
The reverse situation. Your wife is overly capable. Even if you say it doesnt bother you, there is a part of you that wishes you could be that conqueror male. Good thing lamy wants to be fucked as hard and mean as you can muster. Botan, Korone, Lui, Kiara and even Aki enter here

AND there's also the person in question doing the cucking. lamy is a mendokusaionna but she's not the only one that might cause some cheating
>danger. Sex engaged
Girls that didnt mean to be so sexo. They activated something in you, and before you know it you are three raw cumshots in. Marine, Nerissa, Moona
>Old friend, New problems
She's your wife's best friend. Her number one supporter. The drama of sneaking with her and doing stuff that your wife wont do while both of you sink into despair? Mio, Okayu,Ririka
>One of the boys
Your wife sleeps soundly, knowing you dont see this friend as a woman. That changes one night, and now you are ankle deep into this affair. Subaru, Ao,Mori
>Little Miss ticking Bomb.
Its a charity case on the office. You are just being nice. You calling your wife and saying you are getting delayed while she sucks you off its also charity. Matsuri, Polka, Choco.

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>Pomu is graduating
fucking hell

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>>66029391
>>66025306
>Nene feeling stranged that despite always wanting to fondle her tits and ass, tonight it seems as if you're not paying attention to her
>Suisei nervously calling you to tell you she's about to go on a big concert, and she hears a faint 'Good luck!' buried between pants and moans
>While Kronii is stoned out of her mind, you sneak towards the bedroom with your gf.
>Towa watching Kanata drag you into the bedroom
>Iroha having a mental breakdown as she finds incriminating texts between you and your mistress
>Kobo throwing a tantrum as she finds the sexy lingiere you bought for your girlfriend, knowing damn well she doesn't fit in it.
>Bae coping with the fact that you cheated on her with someone twice her fucking age
>Marine rationalizing to herself that you deserved someone better and that she was never good enough for you
>Korone grabbing you by your shirt's collar, tears in her eyes, asking what did that whore have that she didn't, how did she make you happy that she couldn't

My... dick...

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>>66030550
what

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>>66030737
I know this is meant as a bunch of independent scenarios but I'm getting a kick imagining all of these happening in the same 'chain' with each girl independently finding out who you're cheating on them with and getting confronted by the girl who they were cheating with you.

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>>65921351
Pomu loads up and goes on a killing spree at NijiHQ.

[Anonymous No.]

Fucking hell, I had plans to write her eventually. Shit.

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>>66030550
I knew it was coming. The writing had been on the wall for a little bit now. I'm sad she will no longer be Pomu, but I want the absolute best for her.

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>>66032950
We're still getting Coco fics, you can write about whatever vtuber you want.

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>>66032807
and when they are about to shoot her down, someone guns the guards.
>You thought i would leave you alone?
Selen helps her kill all the managers

[Anonymous No.]

ATTENTION

CATALOG SURGE IMMINENT DUE TO POMU RAINPUFF GRADUATION

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>>66032950
You can easily keep writing her. I'd sure as hell read it. I still write Sana, and will keep writing Pomu and eventually Coco.

[Anonymous No.]

Well, shit.

[Anonymous No.]

Are there any giantess-related chuuba fanfictions out there for reference to read? Planning to write a short and silly one starring Nerissa, wanted to see if any other anons tried the concept yet.

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>>66033742
Brace yourselves! Deflection threads inbound!

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ou know it's kinda funny, because i had a fic idea cooking in my head where you're a general for the hololive army and you're fighting against the nijisanji legion that's invading, but now i wonder if the idea is a little mean spirited...

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>>66034270
Catalog threads imminent!
All hands on deck!

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>>66034783
Good thing I never included Niji in my HoloEmblem thing in any major capacity. They do still exist tho in their respective nations. Pomu even gets a whole province even.

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>>66034783
As a pomudachi myself, I wouldn't really take any offense to it. Most of my pomu bros had a sinking feeling this was coming. What you could do though, is write a part where Kiara saves the enemy Pomu from death for no discernible reason at first, and then eventually recruits her.

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>>66034783
So Hololive: Subjection, except from the holo side instead of the niji side?

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>>66032950
She didn't get the Rushia (terminated) treatment so its safe to write about Pomu.

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>>66035160
funny you mention that because the idea i had an idea of some members like selen and Pomu join the holo faction

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>>66034783
That's literally the short story I'm writing for Holoslavia.
Pomu's in it so I don't know if I should still include her

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>>66035398
Unity is where it's at.

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>>66034783
heh i always hated those kind of fics. In general i hate all tribal stuff
perhaps im too old but the console wars started fun (halo??? more like...GAYLO AHAAAAAAA and ONE GAME) and then it escalated into fanatical weirdo stuff to the point that it killed /v/ forever.
I dont wanna see the same happen here, i want all chuubaswho deserve it to have fun

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>>66035560
while admittedly I'm biased towards holo, its less about being a tribal fag than it is just having fun fights with characters that Parelle. like Nerissa vs Nina, or Koyori vs Ange,

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>>66035560
I think we as a writing community are not really into tribal hate. It's just an idea for a war story where the idea of companies being their own countries is used for the setting. We also got stories of chuubas from various orgs having fun. We can only rise up from here.

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>>66035352
>That guy was proud of dropping Mori for Pomu and Enna
I'd say sucks to be him but he kinda deserves it

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>>66035995
I dunno, I am actually having more fun making problems of the chuubasphere into tangible enemy entities.

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>>66036923
That's a little different than blind tribalism. You're using a situation as inspiration and cultivating something interesting and antagonistic from it for the purposes of your story.

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>>66034226
In the archive there's
>Mamma Mio
>Ame of Destruction
>Depraved Pomutori Smut
>Giantess Kiara
I'm curious what kind of plot you have in store for giantess Nerissa

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>>65921502
Going through all the under 5k NSFW fics
>A Cozy Evening in The Foxhole
Short and honestly outside of the holojourneys joke, kind of unmemorable.
>The Joy of Acceptance
I already knew the twist from reading this previously, but pretending I didn't know who the narrator is...
The narration is actually pretty good at hiding the twist, honestly the only real flaw I can point out is that the reveal isn't really used for much effect outside of giving away that it's kanata narrating. Still it's an interesting twist, even if the actual twist isn't used for much payoff.
>Shiori's Fucking Monologue
Goddamn this is the most in character monologue I've read. It's not hot, but it was incredibly in-character.
>Heaven, Hell and the USDA (All chapters)
This was refreshingly vulgar and straight to the point with prose it uses for the smut.
Outside of that the weird AU this is set in. Which feels weirdly uncanny. Like everyone is 90% accurate but it's like you were adapting their personalities from a non-existent manga adaptation of the characters rather than directly from streams; which leads to them being a bit more 'lore-colored' than I'm used to... especially since they're all from gen 4 which is up there in having the least lore connection characterization wise. Combine that with everyone feeling like their guided by their non-existent dicks makes this entire series just feel weird character wise.
>Homely Relief
Ah, I remember this being released in that impromptu mass release of mio fics. Looking at this again. It's rather meh, I remember liking the choking bit more but right now this entire fic just feels okay.
>Stacy Pacification
This is a greentext, and it feels more like an outline of a chapter 1/prologue rather than something deliberately using it as a story telling medium. It's fine. I like the idea behind it conceptually but a greentext like this doesn't really build up the idea of suisei and sara being love rivals in a Stacy off interrupted by aqua more than the discussion that inspired it.

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>>66037286
Thanks surprisingly to this board, I had better ideas on how to write the unicorn nation.

I wrote in their backstory that they werent always like that until a coup occured right around when JP3 were inducted into The Order (aka HoloPro)

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I'm fucking breaking bros. Pomu is crying.

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>>66040497
will this affect pomu's place in HJ?

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>>66040704
Nah. She's there to stay. I enjoy writing her too much and I don't want to give that up.

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>>65921351
https://twitter.com/ricegnat/status/1675526924213387265/photo/1
https://twitter.com/ricegnat/status/1675753217127325697
https://twitter.com/ricegnat/status/1685735522453319680/photo/1

A fic where Pomu peggs Selen so hard that it affects her erections goodbye little fairy, i love you

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>>66037340
Idea is Nerissa drinks a magic/scientific concoction that turns her gigantic, her clothes don't grow with her, and she goes off to have fun around the city and with other small HL girls, while Advent tries to either shrink her or get her to put on some clothes to save Yagoo's dream.
Thanks for the recommends, will read each tonight to get a feel for interest areas.

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It is 100% over.

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>>66012919
You'll run out of stamina long before she does

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>>66044842
why is she so fucking HOT

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>>66044842
>>66045922
the last mariokart streams, where she just wouldnt quit because "she wasnt satisfied with the run" and would grind for next to three hours made me realize that if she wasnt such a bottom, she would be the CBT chuuba

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>>66044787
It's your fault I started watching her. I blame you for this pain.

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>>66046906
If she's still horny even after the third orgasm and she gives the pleading, desperate look for you to keep going, could she really be told no?

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>>66047205
>well after you've mating-pressed her until your balls are empty, you lie next to her fingering her g-spot while internally begging for this to be over

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>>66047086
If it hurts it means it meant something and that it was real.
I can't believe how hard it's raining today.

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>>66046906
>>66047205
>furiously triying to get hard for the sixth shot because she keeps giving you puppy eyes but its too nice to ask for more
Is this emotional CBT? is this like a mental BDSM?

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>>66049841
>Is this emotional CBT? is this like a mental BDSM?
That's called love and empathy, wanting your partner to be sexually satisfied

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>>66051085
That's true, but not mutually exclusive.

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Stand strong

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>>66041789
The solution is to make Pomu the main romantic interest and mating press her so hard she feels the collective love and lust of every Pomu lover.

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>>66056100
Why does everyone want to plow the fairy so badly?

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>>66056893
NTA but Pomu seems like a fun lay, lots of dynamism and giggle.

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>>66058321
I don't think you're wrong, but the idea of writing sex with Pomu in the context of my current story feels wrong. Her and Anon would need be drunk or drugged off their gourds to go through with it.

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>>66058935
So make them get drunk or high.

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>>66058935
It could easily be sequestered into a what-if scenario that they dreamt up or saw in some Magical Mirror of Endless Possibilities(tm) and afterwards are extremely weirded out about it and agree to never bring it up
> oh remember that one time when we watched ourselves have sex?
> haha it sure was very uncomfortable to look at

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>>66059489
Alright, kinda neat, on brand a little. That could work, and if something like >>66058992 happened, it could cause the act to repeat itself.
>Pomu ends up turning your appearance into Pomu because of that one time you told her to go fuck herself.
>Don't mind if I do!

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>>66056893
Pomu is hot. I don't know what to tell you. I've always wanted to bang her. It might be because I think fairy bodyjobs are hot as fuck combined with her personality but I want her to wrap her whole body around my shaft and tongue my urethra.

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>>66056893
>really cute
>really hot
>kind of a freak
And yes, before you ask, im the guy that wants to make her bathe in my nut or drink gallons of my cum.
luv the fairy

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>>66061912
>>66062300
You made your points. I thought I escaped wanting to sex the fairy I've been building into a more sibling role within my story, but I guess the invasive thoughts are coming back.

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>>66064175
She might feel left out if she couldn't join the harem!

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>>66035480
>spoiler
I’d say keep her in. It’s a good way to honour her memory.

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>>66064385
She's kinda a gal who enjoys watching what she's helped cultivate come to fruition.
She does want big bad dragon girl cock though. Hopefully Anon can help wingman her on that one.

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>>66060341
> POMU WHAT THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE THIS TIME
> very_nervous_teehee.aac
> WHAT IS THIS FAE BULLSHIT GIVE ME MY BODY BACK
> But this *is* your body! It is also me, don't get me wrong, but there is something of yours left over (wink)

Is true masculinity:
> to be able to perform mating press correction of the fairy even in this ungodly form
> or to refuse any and all attempts of engaging in sex until body is returned to normal?

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>>66067581
After becoming a more adventurous fucker, Anon will 100% just jackhammer Pomu until her magical concentration gives up and he's returned to normal.

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Rise

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Waning Crescent
Bad omen

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>>66072239
Mio what are you doing here?

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>>66074292
getting her pubes shaved again

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>>66074524
She would never.

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Any Shiokko here? How would you describe Shion outside of the "secretly depressed kusogaki"?

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>>66078454
Prime rape candidate even more rapeable than Ui

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>>66078454
She's really into piss. Not joking, not memeing, she constantly talks about her piss every time she goes to the bathroom.

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>>66065789
You've got a point. Alright then, anon, thanks.

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>>65921248

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>>66086311
Don't look at me like that Shiori. I'm working on it.

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So what fics have you been reading lately anons?

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>>66094057
I'm reading By That Sea again to brush up on my prose.

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>>66076825
She's gonna show up in a bikini soon. It's more a trimming than a full shaving. A thick well groomed bikini compliant bush is fine too[/spoiled]

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>>66102019
A good trim I can abide by. As long as she still has her wild wolfy glory under that small patch of clothing.

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>>65921351
Kimono sex with advent

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>>66102566
Fuwawa's wawas are bursting out of the sides! Good lord man!

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>>66102566
the waist to hips ratio in Nerissa is so fucking erotic.
she truly is EN marine

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>>66102566
My wife Shiori is so pretty...

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>>66094057
Just finished Knightly Collaborations.

Are there any more het in the archive?

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>>66102566
3 shinobis, one doll one prostitute.
I fucking love this gen goddamit, best kimonos since Coco's

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>>66104428
Between chuubas? Not really.
A supermajority of the het nsfw stuff here is reader insert/anon x chuuba.

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>>66106645
Would also do

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>>66107555
Then it depends what kinda flavor you're in the mood for. Do you want to read something quick and dirty? Or do you prefer a slower burn? How much story and build up do you enjoy?

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>>66102566
I can imagine having sex with all the others (especially that god damned sideboob succubus) but what depravity could you possibly do with the rock baby?

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>>66108156
Any would do.

I very much enjoyed ALS

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>>66109737
I feel obligated to recommend Our Cures. It features rrat!Ayame but can still be enjoyed by people who normally like Ayame since it gets real sweet by the end. It only becomes "true" smut after a long (and satisfying) build up, but there's a lot of sexually explicit writing littered about the whole story. The dynamic between Ayame and Anon is one of my favourites in the archive.

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>>66109737
Some of my personal favorites that include smut are Holofantasy, To Be 17 Again, Our Cures, and My Girlfriend Polka. ALS is also a banger, but I was more about the presentation of the relationship than the smut itself. The sexual acts are very well written, don't get me wrong, but it more ehances the story to me than it is for fapping because of the subject matter.

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>>66102566
Nerissa's big fat white ass

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>>66111371
Go on...

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>>66112194
Imagine the jiggle of giving it a healthy smack while plowing her and hearing her give out a low moan

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>>66111019
>Polka

You got my attention.

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Today I wrote a chuuba related fivesome sex scene. Never thought I would, but I think the way it comes together and splits apart is handled quite nicely.

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>>66109737
Have three recs.
I like present day present time as a smut anthology (I I liked the chapters individually but not as a bigger story) unfortunately that fic now only exists on the hard archive since the author has fully fucking vanished.
Your Time is gonna 'come' is a really hot Kronii smut series, unfortunately it's incomplete but all the nsfw chapters were already done so it's still good smut even if the plot's not finished.
The Clubroom is a really good CHADcast harem smutfic that takes the concept of them being a club of smelly fujoshis you're forced to join and get hypnotized by and uses it for some really hot fetish sex.

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Just a reminder to everybody that it's okay to skip the SFW stories in the contest; if authors actually cared about what they were writing, they'd be writing NSFW

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>>66120568
I'll be looking into those.
Especially the latter two since oshi.

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bakers doko?

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>>66124150
Sure I can do it before bed

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>>66124379
A bit early but baked. Migrate when ready

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>>66120568
I wish they at least stuck around to do a before and after with Fuwamoco and Mococo maybe getting solid breast growth when pregnant. Flatties getting stacked is just hot