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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"

Previous thread: >>62350684 (Wherein there was discussion about the whole host of new fics we got, romancing a retired Marine, as well as Gura's story potential)
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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Is your fic enough to sate this troublesome woman?

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!

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There were 5 fics posted last thread by either Yukimin or people who don't know they're Yukimin yet!

Holoshorts (updated) >>62367095

Fujo Fantasies Chapter 3 - Bloom and Doom >>62371387
Tags: SFW-ish, High School AU, Bae, IRyS, Mori, Fujoshis, Fauna

Pale Blue Pt. II - SIDE A >>62376129
Tags: Suisei, Anon, A-chan, Sora, Drama, Incest, Romance, Identity

Untitled Sodor Isekai >>62391299
Tags: AZKi, Projekt Melody, Thomas The Tank Engine, Crack, isekai?, very mild ecchi humor.

Holologs >>62407755
Tags: SFW, Comedy, Compilation, Chuuba's Computer Logs

>> No.62503183

ewwwwww el*es

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>> No.62503622

Lamy has some big ol’ titties

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And they're apparently only getting bigger

>> No.62506300

Elves are built for BHC

>> No.62507353

I have no strong feelings about Elves one way or the other

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Read some random fics from the archive and share your thoughts.
>Escape Attempt
It's a short one, a tense chase scene, but not much else. Honestly it's just too short to work. It's in that dead zone where the prose is good, but not good enough to really make it stand on its own.
>Bay of Suvla
Another one I'd say is , reads good but is just too short. This time it's at least a complete story, but it's like the prologue to an 'Ame does a Homura timeloop' fic without the rest of the story.
>Rolling Girl
It just feels like a generic suicide fic that could equally be crossapllied to any other work as fanfiction if you changed the words and context a bit. It at least reads good but the fic just lacks anything to tie it to its source fandom outside of the names. There's some ties, i.e Kronii's a depressed streamer, but even with the details it just feels like it could be any other depressed internet girl.
Does anyone actually read what they get randomly or do you reroll fics you've read too recently/fetishes you know you're not gonna like?

>> No.62507834

Nothing wrong with rerolling a few times - the important part is sharing thoughts. With how many fics we have now it's still essentially random unless you're waiting for specific ones to show up.

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>The last new Fubuki fic was in September
The Age of the White Fox is Over!

>> No.62508352

the last new Fubuki fic was Who You Were Then released a week ago

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The queen is dead, long live the queen

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Oh yeah, forgot about that one since it was so mediocre.
False Alarm Everyone! The Year of the Fox is still here!

>> No.62508510

lol you sound salty

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>> No.62508864

I hate myself. I farted, audibly said "fauna reference" and started laughing like an autistic retard

>> No.62508918

You'd make for a good /here/tuber

>> No.62509118

You make me giggle, anon

>> No.62509326

Hey, maybe she’ll get a holoshort

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>> No.62510595

AA, now that the first rentry page is full what will you do when a fic gets a sequel? It would make sense to put the sequel next to the original, so are you going to push the latest fic to the next page to make room?

>> No.62510630

I don't see it in the archive.

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>Fauna Fart Fic
Finally read through this. I read this expecting a comedy, and I got it. The actual fart is the punchline and it's executed perfectly and got me cackling. Rest of the fic is kinda hit or miss with the gags. Overall meh, but a solid meh.

>> No.62511474

second page

>> No.62511518

also it's actually called who you were before

>> No.62511829

This made me check, their presence in tagged fics are actually pretty close 116 for Foobs vs 100 for Suzy.

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Yeah, probably. I can cut off a bit of the archive of the bottom - which I already did when moving it over to the next page to make room for stuff in the 'newly added' section - to make room for additional sequels. All I'd have to do is take some from the bottom of the first page and move it to the top of the second and it'd all still be in order.
This is unrelated to this, but on the topic of Fauna, I want to fuck Emo Fauna. Thank you.

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>> No.62513093

Chuuby fauna/Hachaama breaking you into a fatty chaser PLEASEEE

>> No.62513630

Looks like the kind of kid who’d get the shit bullied out of her. I mean really, a Muse shirt? Those socks? What a dweeb

>> No.62516241

On the topic of series; is there any reason you haven't moved some stuff to the series archive even when they're clearly series like Auntie's little secret, kurokami's errand boy, Partners in crime, etc? I thought the hard and fast rule was that you had to have 3 chapters at minimum.

>> No.62517204

It's crazy that Lamy, Noel, and Marine are all living in the same building. Is there a higher density of tit and ass anywhere in Tokyo? Is there a more dangerous place for an innocent shota to run in to try to escape the rain?

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Laziness. I've been in Hell for a long while and it just never crossed my mind to do it. There's at least seven or so that could probably qualify, I just need to actually do it.

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Keep doing your best AA, you're gonna make it.
Also whenever you need, I can give you a series description for Kurokami's errand boy if you need it. I'm a little ashamed I haven't gotten around to continuing that story yet so I'm more than good on avoiding thinking on it more for now.

>> No.62522115

Putting a drunk Lamy to bed while politely yet firmly fending off her sexual advances

>> No.62522144

this but rape

>> No.62522404

No, there's not. They could probably lift him with their asses or their tits, even.

>> No.62523600

Futa reine attemps no nut november

>> No.62524516

add in risu constantly tempting her to fail and you've got something there

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Anon somehow decides to agree to join his friends on a night out at the club where he happens to see his senior colleague Sora really tearing up the dance floor with scorching hot moves.

>> No.62525595

>Risu keeps walking by Reine's room in her underwear
>sometime she'll forget to wear her bra or panties. Or both.
>puffs out her cheeks and jokes about how much nut she can hold in her mouth
>"accidentally" brushes against Reine's junk when they pass each other in the halls
>spams Reine's DMs with nudes and audio files of her masturbating
>teases Reine about why a supposed member of royalty is lugging around such beastly, overfull balls

>> No.62526166

>9AM November 1st
>Reine wakes up and checks her phone
>(1) new message from Takanashi Kiara
>"Good Morning Reine!"
>Reine fails NNN

>> No.62526184

Can you catbox that? I wanna save it

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My ISP blocked catbox for some reason so no.

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>TSDAnon standing watch, trying his very hardest not to get an erection at work

>> No.62527265

Their clothes are too wide for my taste. Makes their stick torsos look weird

>> No.62527343

That’s the fashion design yes

>> No.62527550

This except with Kiara.

>> No.62527742

I guess one man's fashion is another man's mismeasure.

>> No.62528209

All I’m saying is I wanna slap Nene’s tummy

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I want to grab suityan's through her clothes.

>> No.62528340

>all the girls teasing Suisei about getting the hidden tummy outfit
Suisei the naive virgin...

>> No.62529093

She's hiding her 'PROPERTY OF MY BROTHER' womb tattoo

>> No.62530184

Reminder that Nene has visible abs so your hand would just bounce right off

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the jokes about tasty big nuts doesn't work if it isn't risu

>> No.62530598

dear wedgie anon, I was drunk as a skunk when I posted that Ame and Gura prompt last thread.
Don't drink and prompt, kids.
Still wishing Amelia is the focus of the next Short

>> No.62530950

The two posible outcomes
>At the last day, futa risu reveals she too was doing NNN and starts describing how she's gonna fire it all
>Reine fails, spilling on the floor and risu then pumps the rest out of her
>Reine endures, and the second the clock strikes midnight she jumps risu, using her as a cheap.onahole

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>> No.62531204

It is kind of suspicious that wedgies are supposedly his sexual fetish and yet none of the fics he writes are even remotely horny...

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the act of giving a wedgie is the horny part of the fetish, to go with the humiliation and- huh.

Uh, do wedgies count as ryona? Either way, it doesn't need to be sexual in the traditional sense.

>> No.62531422

Talent Security Division aka cover high anon

>> No.62531694

Wedgie guy here
Legitimately tf do you mean by that?

>> No.62532723

this but lamy is the one doing the raping

>> No.62532922

Risu would be doing nonstop nut november and tease Reine about how good it feels to coom.

>> No.62533053
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I could go for a little Lamy forcing herself on me. Maybe she'll freeze my wrists and ankles to the bed, and get off on the power fantasy. She can start going off about how her human isn't so tough when faced with elf supremacy. That's a pleasant idea, anon. Thanks.

>> No.62533563

God imagine grabbing her hips and throwing her over a desk so you can nail her to your heart's content

>> No.62534022

t. futa Iroha

>> No.62534936

good one, but the marine one is underwhelming

>> No.62535948

board is fast, someone talk about their fic so we can stop hitting page 8

>> No.62536386
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I've been really busy lately so I felt like my pace was in the gutter, but I try to remind myself that action scenes take me a little longer to write. I am starting to finally break through that mental dam I get every once in a while, and going to the gym more has been helping in that regard too. I also saw a shooting star last night, so that made me feel pretty inspired as well. I got a lot of cool scenes to write out with the pay off being something I've been looking forward to for a long time.

>> No.62536425

It's not a fic yet, but I'm thinking about Nakirin yuri.

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I'm writing about Towa!

>> No.62536583

Deal with a devil 3?

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I'm making progress on it. I find myself having to do a lot of research on navy life and interactions between varying levels of officers for accuracy. I also am still very stuck on where the hell I'm taking this

>> No.62536632

Sorry but no.

>> No.62536639

I saw a shooting star dancing and covering her sexy tummy.

>> No.62536696

are you writing about his banana?

>> No.62536708

What's it about then? Always interested in some Twa.

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My man. Suisei is a master of making the concealed even more desirable.
Should I include a lapdance scene at some point?

>> No.62536928

A Suisei one? Yeah, that fits her perfectly, do it

>> No.62536994

It is coming along, as always.

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We'll be waiting an extra long time for that one. Let's just say Suisei isn't going to be most cordial with Anon for a while.
But the idea that she sets one up anyway as a trap could be extremely dangerous and erotic.

>> No.62537077

it's funny how in her effort to desexualize herself, it only makes her more sexy since the forbidden fruit always tastes the sweetest.

She's way, way, way hotter to me than someone like Marine because of how wrong it would be to sex her.

>> No.62537096

Too busy with work to even roll the fuckin wheel

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I think Marine is hot too, but in a different way. Suisei does add a certain thrill to the hunt. Marine has that appeal where your libidos are both in fucking overdrive and you just really need to fuck like beasts sometimes. An easily obtained prize, but can still be satisfying. Still that doesn't come close to the climax of finally tearing down Suisei's walls and filling her inner ones up to the brim.

>> No.62537461

Have you wondered whether or not she actually does it on purpose? Imagine: Say 'no,' then watch as your fans get pumped up to do it anyway. Do some not-teasing, and boom: Suisex

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If you do, keep in mind she's only good at choreographed dancing. Her natural dancing skills are definitely something else lol.

>> No.62537564

Definitely not with Suisei. She's someone who gets uncomfortable being sexualized.

Sora on the other hand? Absolutely. She knows /exactly/ what she's doing and it seems like she gets off to being just sexy enough to drive men wild.

I don't think even I could keep up with her honestly. Apparently there are days for her where she's literally just masturbating all day without any breaks, so bad it interferes with her work. No man can sate her lust.

>> No.62537804

>Apparently there are days for her where she's literally just masturbating all day without any breaks, so bad it interferes with her work
Is this actually true? I thought she was just joking when she talked about having a high libido

>> No.62537911

A story where Suisei's workout water bottle is spiked with a fuckton of aphrodisiac and she spends the rest of the day horny out of her mind but trying her best to stay cool and unsexual

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No "banana" but there is a joke involving bananas

Both of you are teenage strays who spend a year loitering around the city and you take care of a cat. Been working on that on and off. My hope is to get it published by the end of the month

Only if it is clumsy and awkward at first

Marine got prescribed hormone blockers in an effort to curb her sexual appetite.

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Yeah I'm pretty familiar with how she dances like a total dork without a routine. I love it though. It would be the most awkward lapdance ever and would have anon questioning what the hell is even going on.
I have days where I feel kinda similarly, but it definitely gets tiring after a few rounds. Marine would be the ceiling of lust anyone should strive to reach.

>> No.62537929

yeah. She's complained about it on twitter and on stream before. On stream she literally said "horny has ruined my life" and while I can't seem to find the cap, she made a tweet stating how she hated herself and felt like shit because she was masturbating instead of doing her projects.

It's hot and all but I do feel bad for her. You can tell that it actually really bothers her deep down.

>> No.62537949

She's mentioned it happening a couple of times, and recently it was the last straw so she's finally biting the bullet and taking medication that will curb her hormones a bit.

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What no refractory period does to a mf...

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Have you talked about this fic before? I feel like I remember reading something about a similar premise a while ago unless I'm misremembering things. Either way, sounds right up my alley, can't wait.

>It would be the most awkward lapdance ever and would have anon questioning what the hell is even going on.
And this sounds amazing too

>> No.62539375

It was posted as a prompt so that's probably where you heard it. I don't really talk about my WIPs in specifics.

>> No.62540049

The first chapter of the Holocalypse remake is coming together. The word count is already triple that of the original since I’ve added a lot more worldbuilding and character backstories/interactions.
More yakuza-inspired fights too. A lot of those.

>> No.62540455

Iroha in the back doin the hand wiggle, adorable

>> No.62541431

Who is the funniest author?

>> No.62541741


>> No.62542186

it varies from fic to fic, but i think everyone agrees its me

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>> No.62542820

Im in the mood for a Kiara fic, any recomendations? it doesnt matter if its yuri or not

>> No.62543007

Kiara having holotori sex with Reine while the intern has to watch.

>> No.62543054

>>62543007 (me)
Oh, you meant reading one. Nevermind

>> No.62543076

uh...sorry im not a writer..i just came here to read and i kinda wanted to learn if someone had an idea on what was a good one

>> No.62543809

Ruffling some feathers.

>> No.62543952

Hand in the cookie jar

>> No.62544324

Fuck it man anyone have an idea for a Lui wedgie fic?

>> No.62545038

Lap makes her wrench her own thong over her face so Lap can plan how to use wedgies for world domination

>> No.62545379

Weirdanonv2's comedy fics tickle me the right way every time. His blunt delivery and low-effort shitposts consistently make me chuckle, sometimes even cracking me up - as was the case with Paradise Regained.

>> No.62545526

>Laplus comes in, dumb kid briefs pulled up over her horns
>”not one damn word about it”
>Lui stifles her laughter and suggests something since wedgies seem to be such an effective tool to render people subordinate
>”have you considered using them for our goals”
>”how effective are they on someone as tough as you?”
>”I don’t know, I’ve never gotten one”
>”as your boss, I command you to give yourself one like this to see how they work on tough women like you!”
>”I’m wearing a thong… do I really have to…?”
>”do it or you’re on toilet cleaning duty for the next three weeks!”
>”damn it… hnng!!”

>> No.62545714

Exactly like that. Lap won't let her get away with anything but the worst self-wedgie she can manage to give herself.
>Koyori, Chloe and Iroha just across the room wondering if they should run or start going commando while they watch

>> No.62546090

>Lui confirms it sucks ass
>Laplus decides they need to practice resistance
>”you three, underwear over the head! We’ve got to train for wedgie warfare!”

>> No.62546364

I liked Saviourfag and KFP-collaborator but both of those fics have been dead for years now.

>> No.62546382 [DELETED] 

>Lui and Koyori have ruined their fancy underwear for this
>Chloe is trying not to get
>Iroha can taste her fundoshi in the back of her throat
>"hey boss, did you know an atomic from the front is the worst?"
>Lap Fucking Dies
>roll credits

>> No.62546469

>Lui and Koyori have ruined their fancy underwear for this
>Chloe is trying not to gag
>Iroha can taste her fundoshi in the back of her throat
>"hey boss, did you know an atomic from the front is the worst?"
>Lap Fucking Dies
>roll credits

>> No.62546979

thanks. i liked the first one quite a bit, not horny right now so i wont wank it but the blowjob there was great.
the second one oh boy. im sorry but i find spanking extremely cringe, like a deviantart tier fetish i cant help but cringe. Im sure whoever made it liked it a lot but i just stopped reading after i realized it was just gonna be spanking
oof. i think i might not read if they are abandoned, since if i like them then i will just get mad when there's not a lot. Do you guys like, write series in collaborations or by yourselves? because i hear the problem with collaborations is that almost all of the series end up abandoned by one party and the other party not wanting to work on it alone

>> No.62547450

Most series here are pretty much solo works by an author that uses this thread for feedback and occasional idea building.
Though sometimes you do end up with series like Saviourfag where the entire thing is basically thought up by collective greentext into an outline and concept.

>> No.62549712

Is there going to be another contest before the end of the year?

>> No.62549883

The end of the year is just over a month away and LOTB is still ongoing. No, no contest til next year

>> No.62550630

I could run a contest, I'm not the anon that ran the first one but I think a November 25 to December 25 submission period with the rest of the month for voting sounds like a reasonable contest time.
Since I'm running it I'd do it with that idea of the authors themselves tagging themselves into what categories they're competing in. So something like 2 word count based categories, X genre categories, and 2 for smut and not smut.

>> No.62552763

What does Lord of the Board have to do with us?

I just know there was some rumbling of interest, so I figured I'd ask.

>> No.62553083
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I just read the Mio wedgie story, and I have to say it the best holy shit. The feeling of a young girl humiliating a hag with her own embarrassing and plain underwear was amazing. Most of the holoshorts used wedgies as a way to pleasure the girl (which is also okay), but for me yanking the panties as a way of shame the girl and that she feels genuinely embarrassed is the best

>> No.62553495

Not him, though if we're gonna make the contest board-wide just like the first one, most of the board's attention will be on LoTB (same reason why we waited until the last one ended before holding the Writing Rumble). But if it's just a /wg/-wide contest, I don't see any issue with the potential overlap.

>> No.62553636

>What does Lord of the Board have to do with us?
We did delay the first contest to after LoTB 1 since the first contest was blatantly our attempt to fish for new writers from the rest of the board. If the thread wants to have a smaller friendly competition as a contest 2 (or 1 and a half), then having some overlap with LoTB should be fine.
I'll cook up a rentry later. Then the thread can argue over the rules.

>> No.62553979

Oh, I see. I was unaware of that fact. Honestly, I'm okay with the contest being annual. Like I said, I knew there was some interest in one during the winter but some hesitance on it being themed. So I wanted to ask to make sure to bank an idea for it/spoiler]

>> No.62554945

Again, >>62550630 (me) if no one else is planning on running a contest I can cook up a rentry and open submissions over Nov 25 to Dec 25. Plan isn't specifically to have it be Christmas/winter/holiday themed but it could totally be a category you can enter it in.

>> No.62555844

>Chloe is trying not to gag

False, Chloe has too bad a personal hygiene to be affected by such things. She doesn't bathe after all.

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As an expert on smelly women, I promise you she knows and can make her own nose wrinkle sometimes.
She knows her fans love it though so she plays with them about it.

>> No.62558366

there's a bit of that in all of them that the author includes of it rubbing their crotch and making them feel a bit tingly but most of them seem mostly entirely painful or humiliating. That being said, I do feel like the dynamic in that one is particularly hot. You have Suisei very clearly dominant in a bullying way without being particularly malicious or cruel and Mio not feeling particularly hurt (emotionally) or cheated.
There is this unspoken level of playfulness to the interaction that fits perfectly, including Suisei's annoyance at the smell and sweat and Mio's disgust with it.

>> No.62559216
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Yeah, the discomfort and humiliation is just the best part for me. I also think Mio was the perfect victim, seeing this grown woman getting humiliated by a high school prank just makes it better. I just love a hag getting her fat ass flossed while all she can do is blush like a little kid

>> No.62560020

I think Mio and Polka fit the "bullyable hag" selection the best, yeah. I think wedgie anon does a pretty good job at humiliation, but I feel like his personal preferences keep him from adding a "killing blow" of humiliation to wrap the story up climatically sometimes, often in the interest of not being too mean. That's fine and all but it can be a bit of a stinger when you buildup to something and then back out of it at the last second. The Mio HoloShort doesn't have that issue, in my opinion. It promises you early that Mio is going to get her panties yanked, teases that it's gonna be when she's sweaty and gross, and then delivers exactly that with no holds barred.

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I think that's fine too, it just preference, some people prefer more romantic or sift stuff like the A-chan story (which was also amazing btw, I love rippings), other like more the humiliating dynamic, like me. For example, I'm not too fond fo frontals, but some people like them

>> No.62562188

Wouldn't it be better to let the original host make the rentry since they have the wgwritingcontest email?

>> No.62562564

i need girl hands around my throat

>> No.62562894 [SPOILER] 
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damn there's a lot of hololive wedgie art

>> No.62562946
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do you want them to actually choke you or just threaten to?

>> No.62562990

I hate this image

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>> No.62563914

I’m responsible for a lot of it, gomen.

>> No.62564297

Most of it isn't any good.

>> No.62564430

Cartoon fetish, cartoon art

>> No.62564586

Marginally related, but an underwear swap sounds fun.

>> No.62565822

Feeding chocolate to Korone and watching as her heart explodes and dies.

>> No.62565867
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Probably, but as far as I know they haven't shown interest in running one for the holidays
Here's the rentry it's mostly a copy paste of the wgwc format but with the amended rule change of it being based on multiple categories that are opt-in + an optional winter/holiday/christmas theme to those that want to write for that. Also changed the email to the one I use for beta reading.
I'm open to changing anything while we're still away from the submission period.

>> No.62566134

Okayu giving Korone a laced blunt

>> No.62566423
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>> No.62566552

>”ey korosan smoke this shit”
>”hell yeah ogayu pass that shit”
>”yeahhhh bitch get that shit hell yeah”

>> No.62568193

Which vtubers would smoke weed if it was offered to them in a country in which it's legal? Besides Kronii.

>> No.62568568

putting aside cultural indoctrination as well? cause im fairly certain none of the nipnongs would touch it if given the free chance to

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>> No.62569587

Try it once?
>Aqua (peer pressured?)
>Nene (controversial but I figure she’d be the “what can it hurt?” kind of person)
>Risu (big maybe)
>Kronii (duh lol)
>Raden (I feel like this is a given)

Get hooked?
Total tossup. I guess it would just depend on preexisting addictive habits.

Followup question:
Dream Holo blunt rotation?

>> No.62570749

For some reason this just makes me imagine Laplus getting caught with a blunt she finds on accident and getting punished with the weed equivalent of "smoking the entire pack".

>> No.62570981

>”you want to smoke it so bad? smoke the whole kilo”

>> No.62571739

>the entirety of HoloX HQ is filled with secondhand smoke
>Laplus is passed out on the floor
>Koyori is curled up in a ball, stroking her own tail and giggling to herself
>Iroha is trying her best to keep her cool, but keeps stumbling over her words as she struggles to maintain her old-timey samurai speech
>Chloe is fingerblasting herself in her room, melting her brain with stoned giga-orgasms
>Lui is just looking down at Laplus, her eyes completely bloodshot
>"It seemed like a good idea at the time, but..."

>> No.62572070

>Dream Holo blunt rotation
Me, Fauna, Miko, Korone, Noel, Kaela, IRyS.

I do love the idea of peer pressuring Aqua into smoking though. Also I wanted to put JFT in my rotation, but she talks too much.

>> No.62572264

>Laplus looks up
>"....what what?"
>"... what?"
Repeat for 3 hours

>> No.62572802

Underwear swap for wedgies or really any purpose is hot as fuck for a thousand reasons you can cook up but it's also dry as fuck to write unless you handwave it away.
Wedgie anon prove me wrong by all means

>> No.62572914

Just use
>vague undefined mmmmagic

>> No.62573001

The Underwear Goblin strikes again

>> No.62573057

Somehow this is Shion's fault

>> No.62573114

That sounds like a nice cock rotation, too. Except for you probably

>> No.62573235

Shion would magically replace everyone's underwear with exact copies of hers if they made fun of her choice of underwear.

>> No.62573273

Crossover concept: Shion goes to Hogwarts.
What house is she in? My money is on Hufflepluff.

>> No.62573362

smug brats belong in either Ravenclaw or Slytherin, depending on whether they're smug because of their smarts or their blood

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>"do you really write your name on the waistband?"
>"didn't you have this pair on yesterday?"
>"that's a weird stain on the crotch."

>> No.62574403

Silly Shion pissed her panties again. I sure hope she remembered to change this time after the skid marks got too itchy.

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Was going for a masturbation joke but kek

>> No.62574615

I love this kusogaki

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>> No.62575768

still mad

>> No.62576101
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I thought the ending was funny. And I never really understood why people got so invested in shipping in Prison School out of all manga.

>> No.62578483

no dying

>> No.62578874

I love this image

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>> No.62579440

Wedgies funny

>> No.62579945

Wedgies are hot

>> No.62579999

Lui is hot

>> No.62580142

Lui funny

>> No.62580587

I made these posts

>> No.62582106
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>> No.62582390

Nah, t’s not like I own the rights to hosting a contest or anything. If someone else wants to set one up I don’t see a problem with that. The only reason I haven’t started another one is because the thread doesn’t seem all that engaged with the idea compared to last time, so I thought I’d wait until interest in a contest builds back up or we have a eureka moment and come up with a great contest theme/idea/challenge.

>> No.62583446

there's barely any femdom fics, and even fewer if you exclude reverse rape fics

>> No.62584785

It's weird, considering how prevalent a desire to be dominated is among vtuber fans.

>> No.62584843

That's what I felt too. Like where are all the dudes who talk about wanting to be beat up or strangled or their balls busted by Botan? Too busy jerking it to write?

>> No.62584899

Sorry, Botan drains my balls so much I'm left with no time to write.

>> No.62584906
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I'm slowly writing to reach mud wrestling with Botan followed by wild outdoors sex. These things need time. Let me cook bro.

>> No.62584926

Are there really a lot more maledom sm fics? Maybe a focus on power dynamics isn't super popular general.

>> No.62584982

there's definitely a healthy amount of uohbro stories that talk about manhandling matsuri or shion or any of the girls around that size

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There's someone here who always talks about how hot consensual domination is and i agree with him, but he's also a bitch ass nigga.
You cant talk about cock worship and girls happily smelling your crotch and not deliver

>> No.62585273

I was about to ask why every single word is being flagged as wrong but it's probably because you're not set for english

>> No.62585283

less talk about women smelling dicks i want to be held facefirst in an armpit by a hag until i croak or cum

>> No.62585302
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As you walk up to the concert venue, no one else is around. Strange. There should be a mile-long queue. You're only an hour early, right?
You look at the posters lined up on the wall.
>AZKi's 5th Anniversary Live "with U -みんなと一緒にこれからも-", today at 8 PM JST, only at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7TtlKURvLDI
Comparing the time on your phone... Oh, it's 7 AM now, not 7 PM. You're still so jetlagged you didn't realise, now you feel stupid. Of course no one in Hololive would hold a concert at 8 AM, none of them can even wake up at 8 AM.
Dejected, as you turn around to leave, down the street you spot a woman in a white and beige coat (she's wearing glasses, so you do not recognize her). She seems to be looking around frantically. As you approach her, she calls out to you and asks if you can help her find her lost pet. She shows you a picture of a weird pink beaver-thing.
Having nothing better to do for until evening, you decide to help the woman.

>> No.62585629

It's worse because even a lot of the ones that could be construed that way, and no offense to the authors who like this kind of thing, are really crazy extreme stuff like abuse or yandere. Power dynamics don't hit quite as hard for me unless the sub gives up control of their own free, weak, horny will in the face of sultry teasing as opposed to forceful compulsion.

>> No.62585720

Yeah, I can see a few of them do swing really hard into yandere or guro that will always be a small niche. There's very, very little of more "normal" femdom

>> No.62586013

Big same for me. Love handing over the reigns purely because of the horn.

>> No.62586107

I feel a bit of a timeloop because didnt this conversation happen with collar stuff? Pure consensual submission

>> No.62586263

I think it's also a question of who would even fit that extreme shit y'know? Of course, you could just slap that on to any chuuba but I personally don't think it'll hit hard enough unless it's believable. Of course, there's people like micheal cat though.

>> No.62586371

it's unfortunately the box that Suisei gets put in a lot.

>> No.62586856

There isnt much crotch smelling I can remember. Maybe that old fic with Risu extensively worshipping nuts? In terms of more recent stories Onis Rebellion had a bit of a cock worship aspect because of the bj and how eager Ayame was to submit with consent.

>> No.62588391

While I do agree that actual femdom is pretty underused here. (I'd fucking love a fic that runs with the 'your dick is too small to get past their fat ass' idea)
You have to understand that abuse and yandere have a completely different appeal than pure femdom, (also this thread started as the chuuba abuse thread, of course we're going to have a bias of abuse from the early days).

>> No.62588498

>While I do agree that actual femdom is pretty underused here. (I'd fucking love a fic that runs with the 'your dick is too small to get past their fat ass' idea)
need suisei laughing into her pillow that you're actually 3 inches of meat too short to fuck her properly

>> No.62588724

Regularish femdom is in short enough supply, but denial play is almost necrotic. That's my favorite brand, where Anon doesn't even end up nutting in a hole if at all. About the only thing I can think of where it's a focus is The Lioness's Paws

>> No.62588771

doesnt that one still end with a handy or footjob? that only half-counts

>> No.62588904

No, the focus scene ends without him getting anything. It does have a quick epilogue next day with implied impending role reversal and full-on sex though, so it's not like a long term controlling relationship or anything

>> No.62589076

So something like holding her hand while she's being fucked and still being the first to nut?

>> No.62589105

Femdom posters in chat

>> No.62589128

listen im waiting on wedgie anon, i got nothing better to do besides shitpost

>> No.62589272

No, that's just regular cuckoldry. I guess anon means something like not having any penetration.

>> No.62589398

>man i want a girl to bully me
/wg/'s brightest minds

>> No.62589541

Combine into a girl giving you a wedgie

>> No.62589598

So Anon watches his girlfriend getting wedgied by another man, cumming from said wedgie, and then cum himself, hands free?

>> No.62589642

A more than acceptable subgenre but I'm not here to alienate even more people
Yeah, I guess the critical point is that the girl is getting off enough on her partner debasing himself that denying him is more important than directly getting action herself. Using her feet or hands, making him jerk himself off, causing him to nut somewhere he didn't intend like into a trashcan or onto his chest, taking him to ruined orgasm or maybe even blueballing him outright. That kind of nervously smug attitude where she has the power to make him do whatever she wants and gradually pushes the boundary of what's they'll both tolerate.

>> No.62589652

Whilst she's wedging you, of course.

>> No.62589664

>I’ll crush balls too, so long as it hurts!” She clenched her hands into fists as though she was envisioning them curled around a waistband,
from HoloShorts has been living rent-free in my head for a few days.

>> No.62589730

I thought you were talking about me, until the crotch-smelling and not delivering part. But I wish there were more people talking about consensual domination (especially with you as the dom), so it's nice to read from a kindred spirit in any case!

>> No.62590146
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NTA but I plan to get into some condom at some point. Sounds like it could be fun to depict.

>> No.62590185

Is it really called ConDom

>> No.62590204
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>wrote condom since I thought I was being cute with consensual-Dom
>just reads like I'm getting into some rubbers
welp. Guess I'll die.

>> No.62590676

Quick anon make up the lore for how modern condoms can exist in your fantasy setting.

>> No.62590799

NTA, but I'd almost prefer to stop reading over wearing a condom on my HoloJourneys.

>> No.62590967

Historically, sheep intestines were used as crude condoms

>> No.62591015
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I will do no such thing. Anon will never be a man who wraps when he makes love.
That's not to say he might not have to use his mana to protect his dong from the intense heat of possible dragon pussy. Not sure if that's really worth the detail or not, but it could be neat to really get into how different species and breeds can operate sexually.

>> No.62591290

holy shit I posted that prompt ages ago! Literally the brainchild of the most gosling-fueled dream I ever had. Glad to see someone inspired by it, even after all this time. Man, I really should pick up my own WIPs... maybe it'll trigger another of those dreams...

>> No.62591406

Good news: I'm 6k words into a femdom fic

>> No.62592579
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Would submit something like this a prompt but it'd never get taken, even by the wedgie writer guy

>> No.62593562

Oh boy, you gave me an idea
>Despite all her might, Coco is a virgin because dragons need someone to beat them or some shit
>Once Anon beats her, she mocks him, thinking he can't possible defile her because his human prick won't withstand dragon pussy
>Anon aligns his shaft with her folds, she's snickering waiting for him to burn his prick
>Anon fucking rips through her hymen, sending her into a shock of pleasure
>"H-How...! *pant pant pant* "How are you alive?!"
>Anon smirks
>"Mana condom, bitch. And with a whole in the tip!"
>Anon impregnates Coco.

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Now that's getting creative with both your heads. The hole in the tip would likely not be a conscious detail by anon in my case. His need to breed is so strong that he would have just added that feature without even realizing it.

>> No.62594756

It would not because I do not write men getting, gomen

HoloX entry is coming soon, no peeking until I’m done.

>> No.62595729

There was that one with koyori fucked up futa

>> No.62596679

So do you have any thoughts about this proposed contest going from 25 to 25 like last time?

>> No.62597220

Contemplate the scent

>> No.62600189

no die

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>> No.62603421

New? If not, I can post something fun.

>> No.62603506

Still 60 posts from bumplimit

>> No.62603842
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Bing bong

Anchoring Holoshorts again!

New entry up with picrel. This one is looong

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Damn, you actually got all 5 of them in one prompt. I think this is really, really good. Impressive stuff for sure. Iroha being turned on by it was unexpected but pretty neat.

>> No.62606003

How say you to >>62564586 and >>62572802 's idea of underwear swapping related wedgies?

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>> No.62608696

vine boom

>> No.62608829
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>no decent biboo smut in the archive

>> No.62609057

Biboo is not for smut, dang it.

>> No.62609944

bullSHIT that little brat isn't for smut

>> No.62610281

After the 'rock hard' joke I don't believe that.

>> No.62610500
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get your beeping mind out of the gutter

>> No.62610540
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I came here to share a picture
>be (You)
>oversee dance practice for the holos
>watch them. that Sora girl's moving it like crazy
>the rest of the girls ain't half bad
>and of them got their midriffs out
>just imagine all the sweat dripping down their stomachs
>you want to just grab any one of them and run your tongue from their belly button up to their chest
>drink yourself some of that sweet, sweet nectar
>but there's one girl who doesn't have her midriff out
>it's that Suisei chick
>she's got a sweat absorbent shirt on that's real thin
>so thin, she might as well not have it there at all
>imagine all the sweat that shirt will soak up
>just run your tongue up along the fabric, tracing those abs, her ribs...
>shit, does she even wear a bra?
>nah, man. her tits are too small for that
>so every time she bends and sways her hips to the beat, you can bet her nipples are rubbing on the fabric
>there's no way.
>there's no fucking way you can let her get outta here.
>not without getting a single. fucking. lick.

>> No.62610801

There is a rrat that it is a leotard, how does that make you feel?

>> No.62611192

>peel off Suisei's top, revealing the thin leotard underneath
>slide your hands up along the fabric covering her waist, take hold of her shoulders, and pull the leotard down to reveal the immaculate white skin underneath
>the skin that glistens with sweat from the heat of anxiety. the anxiety of thinking what exactly you're going to do to her for daring to wear this thing in the first place
Even better, anon. Even better.

>> No.62611531

Sure maybe, whatever I guess

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>> No.62613134
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you don't have to if you don't want to, it was only a suggestion to spice things up

>> No.62613237

Sorry man, I’m extremely pissed off for unrelated reasons. Sorry to take it out on the thread.

Side note, that image is insanely good

>> No.62613337

My thoughts? I personally would have given it a longer submission period since a lot of writers reported struggling to finish their stories in the previous contest’s given timeframe of a month. That or set a maximum word limit so people’s ideas don’t snowball out of control (like mine did, multiple times).

>> No.62613520
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the tags say they're lamy's panties. she seems to get hers stolen a lot, though I think that's nene's fault.
I'll leave a prompt in the next thread, hope things get better for you!

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>Miko Noises
This is such a cute fic. I love this dynamic of (You) hopelessly in love, and Miko who's learned to deal with it. It's like the ideal endstate of a miko romance.
>Punch Whore
Man I love this fucking concept but damn does this concept kind of need Rushia to work.
In theory, I could see this getting retooled to Myth by way of Kiara but the dynamic hits different.
>Peaceful Day
I don't get it. The narration is solid but the central concept feels like it's missing a few steps so that the reader reaches the same idea as the author when they wrote it.

>> No.62615135

Apple of Her Eye anon, shoot off a series descriptor when you're around, please and thanks.

>> No.62615318

NTA, but he has posted that fic to ao3
With this description
>Sora, star idol of Hololive Generation 0, leaves her son with her genmate Hoshimachi Suisei. Little does she know, she's leaving her son for one of the worst traumatic experiences he will ever face.

>> No.62615357
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Coolio, thanks man.
On the topic of series descriptions, I ended up writing one for Fujo Fantasies that is 100% subject to author change if they desire it.

>> No.62615659

>me posting 'funny fennec I love you' for the 26th time today

>> No.62615678

Why is there two entries for chapter 4 for apple of her eye?

>> No.62615719
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Good catch. Must've been a copy error on my part. Fixed it.

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>> No.62617412

i'd fuck that mouth

>> No.62617602

The mouth where being too girthy is dangerous

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>> No.62620016

On Archive of our Own, there are a few fics by the author named SSRBTypes. They feature futa, feet and a bit of teasing/bullying dynamic in them (think surprise snowballing or feet in face). Any like those by other authors?

>> No.62620067

Yes, absolutely. Try Paradise Lost.

>> No.62620129


>> No.62620186

It's kind of like surprise snowballing, just with a different hole.

>> No.62620231

anon, i think you need to learn what snowballing is

>> No.62620856

Either way you end up with hot liquids in your mouth.

>> No.62621043

totally organic and "for fun" posts! so hecking funny hahaha

>> No.62621890

You shouldn't shitpost, anon. It's bad for you.

>> No.62622087

Yeah we don't really have much in the way of yuri Futa fics, we have some but it's not a lot.
General rule for finding them in the archive is a Futa tag with two or more character tags, anything with just one is going to be Futa/male reader.

>> No.62623577

Not yet!

>> No.62623873

Just let it die and create a new one you autist

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You're right...

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Since the threads at its last few posts, Anyone have more ideas for the winter contest https://rentry.org/VTWRWWW
Like >>62613337 , right now I'm thinking of amending the rules to extend the contest from Nov 25 to New Years, with a max word count of 50000.

>> No.62624944
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>max 5000
Anon you can’t do this to me…

>> No.62625008

>>62624944 (me)
Wait I’m fucking retarded

>> No.62625315

Personally I'd say 20k or 30k maximum, but ultimately it's personal preference whether you want to focus on getting as many submissions as possible or on having more comparable contest entries to make comparison and analysis more fruitful.

>> No.62626194

Shiori is a nun. Not like a sexy hot nun, but an actual nun and she does nun things.
Then you rape her.

>> No.62626656

Honestly the 50,000 word count max is mostly there to act as a sanity check for anyone writing a fic for the contest to see if their concept would be better served as a series.
The rules variation for this already has room for more people to win since there are 7 categories. I suppose if I wanted to encourage more short fics for people to just give writing a shot we could lower the word count minimum even more and have a category specifically for short fics.

>> No.62628810

A separate (Winter-themed?) short category sounds fun.

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Good luck with your current project. I"m sure it'll taste delicious. Stay motivated.

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Thanks funny bunny. You too.

>> No.62634308

At least one shortie category where Laplus can't make fun of my small word count would be great

>> No.62634380

Dont worry, Ollie thinks you wrote way too much

>> No.62634666

I'm sure your word count has a nice personality.

>> No.62634717

Damn I’m at a loss for where to go next. Hopefully Pizzakora is right
(Im hungry for pizza now…)

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I'll try.

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>"Its okay bro... you can always add more adjectives"
>"yeah dude! its the content that matters! dont let pornos trick you into thinking girls love multi-book narratives"
>Your friends were good to you, but you knew the truth
>You knew that your measly wip of 10 pages could barely get a girl to emotionally resonate with your protagonist
>and it all ended in college, when your first girlfriend dumped you
>"im sorry Anon" risu said, she had been a good girlfriend, but she couldnt live with it
>"I dont feel satisfied with your paragraphs...your prose is too simplistic for me to care about the antagonist...and the title drops... i know they are not everything... but you never earned one"
>She turns around
>"Im sorry...we can still bounce ideas with each other if you want"
>you flew in rage and despair, drowned yourself in substantives. Even Emailed a beta reader
>but it wasnt the same.
>And thus, you decided to delete your wip
>In the library, the public one, with the old timey pc. at 2pm
>that would traumatize people, but you didnt care
>what good is living if your WIP never makes it?
>as you are about to hit delete, someone tackles you
>Its ollie. Your childhood friend
>she slaps you
>You freeze, as she sobs
>She hugs you
>Oh ollie!
>oh Anon!
>"You always get me with your title drops!"

>> No.62636048

Top kek

>> No.62636309

Oh my fucking god, that was so good.

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Fucking kek anon. That got me good.
If girls don't love multi-book narratives, I'm in a lot of trouble.

>> No.62636838

Your wife likes your series, right? Who cares about the other girls.

>> No.62636839

Im sorry HJ anon. Only sizequeens like shiori and Risu love those. For normal girls, a book is more than enough

>> No.62636916

>Even Emailed a beta reader

>> No.62636957

Shiori is a sizequeen?

>> No.62637124

Yes, she only likes men with absurdly large and pungent balls.

>> No.62637202

My balls aren't pungent

>> No.62637209

I like how this has different angles
a) she loves books, so yes, she's a sizequeen
b) she's a sheltered christian girl, so she says she loves big cocks but will probably faint if she sees one
c)She's a sheltered christian girl, so she says she's fine with a normal one but is probably into freaky shit

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It has the bones of something she would like, I believe that for sure. She also likes that I wrote a lot. She hasn't gotten past the first couple pages yet since she recently opened up to me that she was having difficulty reading it out of jealousy. She had always wanted to try writing but could never really get herself rolling in that regard. So I guess suddenly saying "hey I wrote several books within a year, they might be ass but I wrote them!" might have made her seethe a little silently. Though she has been hog wild about chain reading books for months now, so I didn't even know writing as a hobby was even on her radar anymore. While the reasoning kinda made me sad, I can at least understand and appreciate her honesty while being patient with her. She'll get to it eventually, and when she works past this thing of hers, she will be a better person for it, since she's always had these types of insecurities while she was growing up.
I guess normal is overrated anyway.

>> No.62637326

This is somehow a bit Ollie would 100% run

>> No.62637377

Better she's jealous out of your writing and not because it's a SI fic that's half about wanting to fuck like over half a dozen 30+ year old women who are relatively speaking real people

>> No.62637547

Is AI far enough to make decent audiobooks yet?

>> No.62637696

in the very weird case you are not being annoying
>no, its not
> it wont be for years, and by that point they will charge you for using it
>it will probably sound like shit
> you have three AI threads, why come bother us?

>> No.62637827

To answer without being mean
>It costs a lot
>You have to be careful because it can’t figure out uncommon words (prepare for a lot of phonetically spelling Nee Jee San Jee and Hollow Live)
>It depends on the voice samples you get. Tone is hard to enforce

You’d be better off trying to copy inflection and reading it yourself, then using a voice morph to paste the desired narration voice on top of yours.

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I suppose that's a good way to look at it. I don't think the smut or the romance content will be an issue anyway since she's been reading a lot of other smut books.

>> No.62638266

Would be pretty funny if someone from here commissioned someone on fiverr to make an audiobook out of their fic

>> No.62638377

I'm pretty blind so sometimes I use screen readers. They're fine, I guess. Not good, but fine.

>> No.62638381

It'd be bankrupting depending on what it was

>> No.62638416

Like ages ago someone said they were gonna do that for KFP Employee Chronicles, and even shared a voice clip of who he got for Kiara, but the girl didn't even have an accent.

>> No.62638468

>Can hear the speaker wanking it to my smut scene

>> No.62638633

Could you ask her about the second person perspective with a male self insert named Anon as protagonist?
I wonder if that comes across as weird to total outsiders.

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She did initially ask me why I went with the second person perspective. I explained how that was the go-to in the writing circle I found myself in that inspired me to try writing again, and I just kinda found its charms from there. Anon as the name may not have even registered as anything besides a made up name to her.