/wg/ - Writing General - Abune Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>60617287, wherein /wg/’s avatar for the next Lord of the Board was discussed.
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[Anonymous No.]

Story anchor.
Do it, peko!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Story recap!
There were 5 stories posted last thread, ending our dry spell.

The Oni's Rebellion
>>60631942
Tags: Ayame, NSFW, Romance, BDSM, Blowjob


HoloCORP: Database.
>>60646327
Tags: Dossier, SFW, Idea dump, Chuuni

Balsa Chapter Twenty Nine: The Man From Hijau
>>60660368
Tags: (you), Fubuki, Ayame, Watame, Civia, Fantasy

Apocalypse's Fury
>>60662809
Tags: NSFW, Calli, Ame, Gura, Romance, Action-Adventure

Snoffy
>>60684308
Tags: Snuffy, /lig/, lost bet, wedgie

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What if Marine almost had sex with Pekora but got pussyblocked Pekomama as a prank?

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>>60772742 (me)
by Pekomama

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I call dibs on Pekomama.

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>see Pekomama
>urge for more Pekomama /ss/ arises
>fuck wait I already wrote that

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>>60773064
POV: You're Marine and came early

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>>60773543
>came early

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>>60773064
Not if she calls dibs on me first! In hopefully just 4-5 short months.

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>>60773543
My names not Marine...

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>>60774025
So you switched bodies with her?

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>>60773257
I have made four separate fics about co-living with and having sex with Miosha.
Don't let repetition hinder your creativity, specially if you can give it a new spin.

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>>60774355
>four separate fics
With this much spinning, you might as well call it a carousel.

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>>60774430
The Mio sex carousel, as I like to call it.

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>>60774601
The ride never ends I hope?

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>>60774355
You're a god. I pray that I can muster the juices needed to at least write four different sex scenes with Miosha. I got a few different scenarios I hope to write.
>Initial sex between the two, full of fluff and fulfillment, creampie is a must
>Sex with mio in her ball outfit
>Sex with mio at the beach
>maybe the genderbent thing that happened a few threads ago
The part about (fem)anon leglocking mio and whispering that he wants to make a big family with her gave me sparks dude.

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>>60775454
For me, it's the part where she gets all possesive. Something about wiring a chuuba to get absolutely primal regarding her ownership of her partner pushes all my buttons.

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>>60775454
>>Sex with mio in her ball outfit
>>the genderbent thing
heh

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>>60775924
That's an aspect of it I'm really looking forward to portraying. Since she will be late to the game in a sense, it's gonna be interesting to see this girl go completely feral over her man when it comes to how she shares with others. The animalistic dominance will also push my own buttons.
>>60776179
Pun intended.

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>>60778264
This design gives me some souls vibes
>"I am Ookami Mio. Seer of the stars. The Empress of the Arcana"
>"I love you.please marry me"
>"Hawawawa"

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>>60778975
>oh...that does remind me
>i seemed to have lost my pet,
>do be kind as to look for him in my stead?
>he's a horned hawk. you won't be able to miss him
>but...do be warned, he can be a little bit of a rascal. but worry not he's just playing. he's practically harmless

>you spend an unknown amount of time looking for a bird around the map just for a massive juggernaut drop down on you and give you the beating of a life time

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>>60775454
>>60775924
Mio? More like dios mio, esta anciana esta tan arrugada e infertil.

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>>60778975
Pretty much. After the initial shock of the meeting, Anon is going to get way into his own bullshit and think things like
>"If there is something I can slay around here to prove my love to this impeccable woman, I will destroy it ten times over. I'll kill a fucking god if I have to. I NEED this wolf."

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>>60778264
I'm looking forward to the gradual shift in group dynamics as the group slowly transforms from a "who gets the man?" competition into a harem.

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>>60771617
All 5 of these were terrible. I'm just assuming with Balsa, because I didn't read it.

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>>60780121
Some girls will naturally fall into that dynamic before others. I will say I'm pretty excited to meet the challenge of building these dynamics correctly and making them feel as natural as I can.

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>>60780661
I'd be concerned about that - if I believed you had actually read my story in good faith, or even at all.
At least be specific if you're going to try upsetting authors.

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>>60780830
Can we have a buildup of tensions and conflicts that is (mostly) resolved by Anon gathering everyone for a serious group discussion which ends in success and an orgy?

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>>60781239
I can promise you some tension in spades when this blue haired lady gets into the mix. I can see a few possibly smaller conflicts arise with current members though earlier on though. It's gonna be a big adjustment.

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>>60774669
Not while she's on top of me.
Send help.

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>>60771532
Ah, yes, the legendary rabbit thread.

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>>60781108
Tell me which story you wrote and I'll tell you what's wrong with it.

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>>60782659
Oni's Rebellion! It's not too long, no worries.

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>>60775454
>maybe the genderbent thing that happened a few threads ago
>The part about (fem)anon leglocking mio and whispering that he wants to make a big family with her gave me sparks dude.
the what

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>>60783337
See >>60037970 and a lot of the following posts

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>>60771617
>HoloCORP: Database. >>60646327
Contrary to what has been said last thread I like the spectrum from serious to humorous entries, it doesn't need consistency if it just exists as entertaintment without further ambition. You could imagine it as different people writing the entries, or just one guy writing them at different times and with different moods/perspectives, though the errors took away from the professional SCP-like feel. Fitting with that I found the humorous and more creative bits to be more engaging than the moderately chuuni and predictable ones, probably because there's no actual plot (or even the promise of one) that would give those weight. And because we know that the actual holos are mostly silly goobers.
It won't be a seminal part of /wg/ history at the end of the day, and if it was the start of something larger it'd probably be best to polish it and give it a clearer direction. But as it is it's fine entertainment in written form, something you can be proud of. Luckily HoloX missing was compensated for by >>60647290

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>>60782659
Mandarin

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>A-Chan
>Gura
>Fauna
>Mori
What color are their buttholes? Are they shaven, and is the hair the same wacky anime color?

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>>60788963
Fag

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>>60788963
Pink, waxed, yes.

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>>60783762
Man, it's weird how the genderbend thing only really works/is interesting for fics in a recursive fanfic kind of way since the "interesting" bit of it flipping relationships on its head only really works when you have something to add texture to the gender flipping.
Though I guess it's more interesting in a "if there's a group" way since a group gender bending actually has the texture to be interesting where a singular chuuba doesn't.

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>>60771585
You love lean and skinny girls...until Chubby fauna comes into your life

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Damn I love outlining. It's such a chill and good time. I hope all my writebros are having good days and are making progress in their own ways. No matter how big or small you think it is, every step is a step closer. So how's everything going for your current WiPs? I bet you're kicking ass where it counts.

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>>60795655
you too HJ anon! finally found the spark to keep writing, myself after about a month (I blame the change of the seasons)

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>>60795655
For me, it's character profiles. I end up writing all sorts of ancillary bullshit on the side just to flesh them out. Though it does take time away from writing the actual fic, it's not exactly something I can skimp on either. Or else the characters in the fic will suck because I wouldn't know what to do with them.

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>>60798443
Right on! I've refound my own flame through finally getting my next piece near completion and thinking about the next part. It feels like over a month since I got to do that too. I blame several things for that, and like the seasons they were out of my control.
>>60798523
I should make some character profile docs at some point. I've been telling myself to at least make a spell/abilities compendium so I don't lose track of things I've had my characters do, and what the names they were given. It might also come in handy later when inter-character dynamics get a little more saucy.

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>>60799169
On the larger scale of things, they're not THAT important; I personally just do them so I have an idea of how the character "thinks."
It's rather autistic, actually, because I would first write their profile in third person, before writing a monologue in first person in "their" voice. That way, when I write the actual fic, I would go like, "what would be going on inside character X's mind in this situation?" and write accordingly. I find that the fic becomes more character-driven that way. But that's just how it works for me; other people might have other (maybe more efficient) methods to achieve that.

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>>60800243
What works for you is the most important part. The idea of the profile sounds like it allows you to really get into that character's head, know their life a little, learn what a typical reaction from them might be. I myself don't have a real method for that so I'm a little jealous that you worked out a good system for yourself. I think another good takeaway from that method is that it can help shake up the routine a little when it comes to writing. It lets you take a step back and do something that's tangible progress without writing the actual content itself. Supplementary work can be refreshing and ultimately better for you in the long run.

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>>60795655
I'm working on the BBD-like story now but I'm definitely struggling for a title. I want to include Kiara since she's a great fit for this story but I'll be up and honest: I do not like her very much lol. I've tried watching streams and clips and I don't know why but I do not like to watch her. As much as it pains me, I will likely have to use someone else.

I have ideas for abuse fics but honestly I want to take a break from those. They're too sad to write.

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>>60800480
True - you can't keep on writing prose day in and day out. In my case, even if I space out writing sessions, the quality of my writing decreases as the week goes on, meaning more stuff to edit and maybe even scrap by the week's end. One really has to mix it up somehow.
Thanks for hearing me out, HJanon; this helped me make sense of the shit I've been doing lately.

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>>60795655
Speaking of outlining, I've come to an impasse in regards to reaching the end of something I've outlined ages ago. The finale is in essence the same, but I had an idea I kind of like more in the interim and without spoiling anything, someone was gonna die during the climax but now I'm thinking of them dying afterwards unbeknownst to the rest of the cast as a result of the climax. But, my issue is that 'why only they die' is a question I haven't been able to answer yet.

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Live god damn it

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>>60771585
Mating pressing Bae one too many times turns her into your demure submissive housewife, and the lack of chaos causes the Universe to implode and reset. Can you control yourself or doom existence to the timeloop for rat pussy?

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Jump her, hump her, keep humping her.

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>>60813035
Too old

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>>60813037
Where did the whole Marine bear thing come from?

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>>60814913
Because she is a "coomer"

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>>60814972
oh my fucking god

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>>60814972
lmao

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>>60771585
A Mori CBT fic with lots of feet kissing and ball kicking.

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>>60814972
Took me a second. Well played.

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>>60814972
I don't get it.

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>>60813035
This but its (You) she's humping nonstop because you let out a "scent" that has her horny 24/7 and the only way its going away is if she milks you bone dry and leaves you a husk of a man.
And even when you black out from all the pleasure she's been doing to you, she doesn't stop being her libido isn't satisfied and she'll keep riding you even if your dick has gone flaccid and it hurts to cum.

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>>60817852
kuma = bear in nihongo

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>>60818105
Damn, now I feel stupid for not getting it. Thanks.

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>>60771561
A shark's tail
Tags: gura, reader, NSFW, tailjob
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1EMfii2kgTx1p2TwKbPZiwOC64Zh4nVRLPPospDV1iuw/edit?usp=drivesdk
It's just gura fucking you with her tail and feminizing you into another gura

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>>60818708
>It's just gura fucking you with her tail
nice, we can always use more tailjob fics-
>and feminizing you into another gura
beg pardon?

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>>60818752
You can beg all you want, god is incapable of stopping me

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>>60818708
Is this a reference I'm not aware of or do you just have a becoming Gura fetish?

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>>60804672
Perhaps their proximity to the climax, personal actions, or just plain bad luck could be the reason they are the only one to die? If your story allows you could give a small foreshadow to a pre-existing condition that might make them susceptible. Keep at it though, the answer will come to you and it'll kick ass.
>>60803258
No problem man! Always happy to hear how other people run shop. We all got our unique methods and they all hold a special power for us.
>>60800495
Kiara grew on me after a while. I also found that I'm a person where after I start writing a chuuba, I tend to start liking them more. I find out more about their subtle charms and what kinda lies underneath the initial impressions and what antis and simps alike try to get you to see. If your heart isn't feeling like writing abuse, then don't. This is supposed to be a fun hobby. Write what is fun for you.

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>>60771617
thank you for organizing these

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>>60818708
Meh, a bit too short to really work. I think you have the essence of the fetish down since I can see what makes this erotic but the overall scene is just too short to really work as smutty prose.
It's like the outline for a comic but without the art to make it work. Everything's here it's just not done in the kind of detail it needs to work erotically.

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>>60822988
That pic reminds me of the time when colour threads were the new hot thing and I thought /blue/ would become a mainstay thread. Turns out only /pink/ and /choc/ had what it took to survive.

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>>60771585
(You) and Mori are best friends but unbeknownst to her you have depression. One day you can't take it anymore and off yourself only for Mori to be angry at you in the underworld and have correct you with angry sex not wanting to let you go she will do everything she can to stop you crossing into hell and bring your soul back to the living world

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>>60823859
So do you know she's an apprentice reaper beforehand? Seems like a dumb move to just off yourself when you know she's just gonna be there waiting.

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>>60824334
NTA but I could see it being one of those things where it's made ambiguous whether you didn't do it and she's just an illusion or if she's real and you're actually dead... Though thinking about it, the answer is so heavily weighted towards her being an actual reaper that actually playing that ambiguity seems a bit futile writing wise since unless you actually go with Mori not being a reaper it's a bit pointless to leave the question hanging when everyone's default is assuming the supernatural.
Though I could see a fun scene of Anon thinking it's a dying dream and Mori immediately shutting down that talk as she un-un-alives you.

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>>60771561
HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 39: A Proper Instruction in Pirate Etiquette

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTrxHysV5he1PSD0btlZ3vCcWuPEDfP_Ql7eFhqRGlxMkn40J1bEgAyZqexGk3TiiqR84dS5hoowrX3/pub

Tags: (Pomu, Kiara, Marine, Watame, Botan, Flare, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

Hard to believe it's already been just over a year since I submitted my first chapter of this series. I've seen and done so much since finding this thread on a whim and I'm so glad I did. Refinding my love for writing and telling the story my heart always wanted to tell has been a godsend for me. I love this hobby so much, with all its ups and downs. While I know I still have a long way to go as a writer, I'm going to keep doing my best to improve with every chapter I create. I wouldn't even had made it this far without you anons that not only gave me the inspiration and confidence to make my own thing and put it out there for others to see, but for giving me the kinda feedback I needed to help me take steps toward getting better. So thanks, thanks to all you anons for being you.
Anyway, blog over. Hope you enjoy this chapter. It doesn't have the content I wanted to have in place by the story's anniversary; steamy half-elf sex complete with ear nibbling, but it was still a blast to write this one and get myself out of a dry spell so to speak. Life hit me with some pretty heavy punches and tried to keep me down, but as long as I'm still breathing I'll keep getting up. There's a story to tell so I can't let myself stay on the floor, and you should never settle for that either.

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>>60824334
I don't see how it becomes a dumb move with that knowledge. Your best friend is probably the one part of your life you wouldn't mind not escaping from through suicide.

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>>60825904
I guess you could take an angle where through Mori's own interests and general outlook, your own subconscious puts her as the role as your reaper as you linger between life and death. Through Mori's own affection for you, her own feelings seep into your soul and she (as a reaper) helps you return.
>>60826024
Because you'd know she would be 100% pissed that you did that.

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>>60826657
>Because you'd know she would be 100% pissed that you did that.
You could write it in a way where that is a major deterring factor because you're afraid of confrontations, but you don't have to. At least you'll get to say sorry.

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>>60822988
I appreciate the criticism, and i get where you're coming from, it really is kinda lacking in detail.
But for me, and a lot of other people in the "transformation fetish". It's about the transformation itself, as long as the feminization has enough details, we bustin, everything else is a bonus

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Thanks to everyone who took the time to read the HOLOCORP dossier. Ive given it a second pass (not that in depth because im busy) and reworded some stuff. If more mistakes arise, i will try to get them pronto

Here's some changes and general trivia

>Added HOLOX.
The great king of terror descended in 1999, and thanks to Nostradamus, humanity was prepared. The "Curved saber of the South Liberator" is just the saber that the south american revolutionaries used. When i was researching south america for a weapon idea, i found that there were 2 movements, one that came from the north (venezuela) and one that came from the south (Argentina). That's cool because both met in the middle and that liberated South America.
>Reworked Anya
Abiogenesis creating miss one million is a cool idea and maybe the step that Dr mayodog is looking for. A puppet with free will, created out of death matter. I like that kind of ideas
>Rewrote Kobo
Thanks to that Anon, i touched up a bit some other paragraphs.
>Reworked Marine
Her initial idea was lame. I wanted to imply she was, originally, THE ponce de leon. That was left behind because i like the idea of Marine just getting there before him. Maybe she was blackbeard, maybe she wasnt who knows. pirates should be free.

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>>60824334
I was just thinking that (You) really aren't sure if she's a reaper and if she's (You) are hoping she's going to miss your soul since she's only the apprentice but I don't really think much on this part since the main point I really want to see is the aftermath of (Your) suicide lol

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>>60825999
Glad to have you back on track, dude.

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>>60771585
Everybody's shocked when (You) and Kronii start dating, because up until then it seems like you two never got along, but they all accept it because of how happy you seem to make her and put up with seemingly having nothing else to talk about other than (You). Turns out you hypnotized her into your bimbo fuckpet

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>>60825999
Because of the anniversary I actually just started reading HJ (which is quite the task for a slow reader like me lol)
At this point I'm only through chapter 1 and a bit into chapter 2. So far, I can say that MC's absolute selflessness is driving me insane. Other than that, I quite like it. It could also use some more commas in many places.

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>>60829518
It feels good to be back on track. I can honestly say we are so back.
>>60832889
First off, thanks for giving it a read, and I'm glad you like it so far. For Anon's selflessness, he's just the kinda guy to want to give to others, and with others actually to give to finally, he's going all in. I'll also say that some of his actions while they are rooted in selflessness sometimes, they do fulfill some of his own desires in the process, which hopefully become more apparent as things go on.
>Second Spoiler
Nuts, I'll make a reminder to comb through those again at some point and brush it up. Thanks for the heads up.

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>>60833846
Watame looks good with thighs thicker than her waist.

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>>60834074
Watame looks good all the time, but I agree that her with thicker thighs is where it's at. Add a little plush chub to her belly and we're cookin a real lamb chop now.

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>>60834349
>Watame mistakes your mild architectural scheming for you fattening her up to eat her

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>>60834759
Girl will scarf chips by the bagfull. I don't gotta scheme shit.
>Implying she wouldn't be into the "I'm gonna get eaten" roleplay
There's one for the list.

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>>60834896
I'd like to put Watame in suspension bondage as part of us pretending that she's going to be roasted over a fire (the fire is me lying on the ground and tickling her).

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>>60835129
The idea of having a predator and prey kink with Watame sounds too good to leave unused.
>Hfw she says it's her turn to be the predator

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>>60771617
>Snoffy >>60684308
Not too much to say about this one. It's a short fic catering to a fetish so if you don't have that fetish it's not going to give you much and that's fine. I guess Snuffy fans or more general humiliation/SM enjoyers could get a kick out of it too, but that might require more length and depth. But you have to respect wedgieanon's dedication to his personal niche. /wg/ could use more people just writing piece after piece about their favorite specific thing, not just prompting or talking about it.

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>>60839284
That is a back I'd like to blow one day.

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>>60840866
Incredibly based and same

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>>60841059
What kinda things does a man need to go to get Noel to spread em?

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>>60841455
become a dark elf

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>>60771561
Closing the Book

https://rentry.org/r53zv

At the end of a long day, Shiori's relentless motormouth is keeping Nerissa awake. One thing leads to another, and suddenly the archivist's face and throat are in very real danger of being thoroughly, lovingly brutalized.

Tags: Shiori, Nerissa, futa, NSFW, ryona, deepthroat, asphyxiation

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>>60841455
be her brother/be under the age of 15/be yourself lol I dunno cows belong in a barn

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Hey /wg/, Lord of the Board 2 submissions have opened already >>60801374
There was some discussion on whether to keep The Fly as the rep or send someone else in a previous thread, has a consensus been reached? Or did you not poll for rep suggestions yet?

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>>60842212
Son of The Fly

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>>60842212
I'm afraid there won't be a consensus, but I'm in favour of the not!Shiori idea based on the fact that we already sent The Fly last time. It won't be nearly as intriguing and funny a second time.

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>>60842389
Also that fic has been unlisted since making it even more of an obtuse reference so something like a fat Shiori would be good

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>>60842212
I say stick with The Fly. It's too good of a character to let go. Iconic, eye-catching characters like this - the kind everyone wants to know more about as soon as they see them - are the stuff of legends.

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make a poll you lunatics

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>>60842926
Any polls out there that don't have any chance of being botted?

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>>60841699
I plan to bang the half-elf, but that sounds like it'll work more against me than it'll help me.
>>60841914
No dice on the age thing, but I can swing the brother thing in a way that her own degenerate mind can probably latch on to. A knightly bond of brotherhood based on the desire to protect their world, and their half-elf. It might be fun to go that route, and slowly have Noel confuse herself as she hates Anon less and less.
>Muses to herself that she could have seen him as a brother if their lives were different
>After accepting how Flare feels about him, muses that he would be a brother-in-law of sorts anyway with how things are going
>I CAN NOW FUCK MY BROTHER

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>>60843094
>no magic potion shotafication shenanigans
Unfortunate.

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>>60842926
>>60843008
I'd rather hear more arguments and proposals before going with some anonymous poll. There is so much time left and ultimately the person submitting the wrestler decides. As long as the submission doesn't try to misrepresent/troll its thread it should be fine regardless of what some poll says, unless it's super onesided.

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>>60843215
>Putting a small child anon amidst his hag harem
>i'm in danger.jpg

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>>60842711
No tourist will know to read shrunken troubles off the bat. They will come to our thread and ask where the fly is from, whereupon they can be pointed to the fic in the MEGA backup of the archive

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>>60843339
>surprisingly, anon retains his dick size
>shotadom ensues

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>>60843553
That happened last time, to some extent. Not to be overly negative about LotB 2, but I don't think there will be many new viewers.

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>>60843245
ok my two cents its
>Keep the Fly
>Make a nimbler Lucha voladora version called Son of The Fly
>Make a really heavy fighter called Archive Anon (No correlation)
then we should theorize some new fighters, for this i propose we synthetize some of the most discussed/usual things in here
>HaremMC- A wrestler that gets all the bitches and is loved by everyone
>The Ryona wrestler- Maybe a joke spopovich from DBZ like? we moved a long time ago from ryona but its fine

We should compile at least two or three more

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>>60844148
Yup, that's fine. It's not about advertising or promotions in the first place, it's just a fun activity.

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>>60844320
>>HaremMC- A wrestler that gets all the bitches and is loved by everyone
I guess we all are Anon, the most prominent character in /wg/ fics who fucks dozens of chuubas across the multiverse. But that's hard to represent in a wrestler.

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>>60844320
I mean if you make a human luchadore with just the fly's head as "El Hijo del Mosca" I wouldn't mind that

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>>60841914
>lol I dunno cows belong in a barn
Farmer Flare milking Noel...

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>>60841781
Well. Even as someone who is not into ryona at all, this was pretty superb.
The intro is kind of rushed and it not having sex is kind of a bummer but the smut content in itself is top notch, same as the characterization.
Hell, im not that into Futa either but imma crank to this later, so really good job man

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if we get one or two more suggestions i can make a poll

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>>60843644
His dick might still be the same size, but he's still shorter and has less muscle now. He ain't dominating any of the animal girls if they want to pounce on him.

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>>60843339
>>60843644
>>60846406
Feels similar to the orgy with surprise gender swap in concept, but I liked that idea more

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>>60846817
I just like /ss/

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>>60845834
Someone suggested Shiori. And seeing how actual Shiori thread is sending the fanbase representation, that might be an option.

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>>60846406
True, but the ones whose first instincts are to pamper and coddle him would get surprised and taken for a ride.

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>>60846817
Same. I think I'll definitely do that at some point.
>>60848290
I feel like with that scenario I'd want to focus on the pampering and coddling, as it would give Anon a first hand glimpse into what his girls would be like as a mother, and also what having a mother might have been like.

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>>60841781
That was fantastic. 10/10 work. I'm not really ryona enjoyer, but for some reason when Shiori is the one getting walloped it just clicks.

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>>60842212
I think in terms of gags we've seemingly settled on two jokes.
One being The Fly/The Fly junior.
The other being Shiori/"Archiver Anon" no relation.
So if we are going for a poll I think in order to prevent vote splitting we should have the poll be for the gag, then we have a follow-up poll about the angle for the gag.
Also since LotB is back we should also start planning for making the writing rumble 2. I think we settled on a Christmas theme, and open categories last time?

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>>60850288
Vote splitting? You should be able to vote for as many options as you want anyway.

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>>60848487
But anon, think of the power dynamic!
The curvy older woman goes in expecting a cute, passive version of her lover only to get slammed into the sheets by an even more energetic, youthful version of him, driven by instinct and hormones!
The taboo of his appearance combined with his unexpected fervor overwhelms her mind!

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>>60850373
In theory the two camps of the Fly and "Archiver Anon" no relation are on opposite sides. If we go with a first past the post system any side candidates (i.e fly jr and literally just Shiori) would be spoiler candidates for their side.

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>>60851181
>Youthful, driven by instinct and hormones
Not seeing how that's much different from him right now. I got power dynamic swaps also planned. I will admit that the idea of one of the girls fighting with their urges and being like "he's so small and innocent looking, I can't! I must! I have a MIGHTY NEED!" is pretty interesting.

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>>60851632
Okay but what if like half of the hags also got a dose of the youth potion and also turned X years old?

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>>60851342
Yes, that is why it should be multiple-vote - to meaningfully include more candidates.

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>>60852060
That's just young people fucking, which is inferior to older people fucking.

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>>60852060
that's like my one favorite shitpost idea that never made the cut for a fic
The conspiracy of every hag actually being 17 year old girls

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>>60842212
I’m for the “Archive Anon” (no relation) idea, mostly because I think it’d be fun to come up with a new contestant every year and keep things fresh, assuming there will be a Lord of the Board 3. The Fly was still good fun though, so I won’t be fussed either way.
>>60850288
I’m fine with setting up another contest, but it might overlap with LotB if we’re to give the writers a longer time period for writing.

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>>60852060
Yeah what >>60852151 said. The only nuance I could think of is if by the transformation both parties forget how their bodies fully work when it comes to sex. Or rather use it as a chance to have a "first time" with each other. The regression would also make a few of them smaller in certain areas, which might have its own charm to it I guess.

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>>60852456
This makes me think of a scenario where a couple always uses some conveniently specific amnesia-inducing method to experience their "first time" over and over again (but with the benefit that they know each other, and how to do it, well).

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>>60852233
That's just making me think of mio ending a stream then immediately switching to Zoomer speak
>Ayo, that stream was finna lit fr fr.

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>>60855217
Turns out Taiga was the good guy all along

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>>60855217
However she talks, she's still my mio.

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>>60852233
I remember that, the idea of Anon breaking out into a cold sweat because Mio's I.D says 2005 is really funny

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>>60858885
>Anon in shock as he reads Mio's ID
>Doesn't notice as she locks the doors, turns off the city pop and opens the blinders to her Zoomer bedroom.

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>>60858885
Id kill for a version that is played totally straight like a detective story
someone like anon slowly figuring out stuff like discrepancies on dates or details in photos

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>>60863972
Okay I know you're proposing this as a serious detective thing but this is just making me imagine Mio photoshopping herself into major historical events but like without respect to the actual time of it so Mio's "proof" of her age just has her photoshopped all over the time line from Live Aid to Gettysburg.

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>>60865008
i mean it could work. If its played straight, that's the joke
>"so mio, how old did you say you were?"
>"oh im like..totes o- totally old... like at least 45"
>"oh really? do you have...evidence?"
>"sure do bru-bruddha, haha i watch wwe like old people hahah...here's this photo"
>Anon gets a poorly photoshopped black and white picture of Mio in a carriage
>"Oh god...she's so old...this is so hot..."

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>>60865411
>"Mio, did you watch Kamen Rider growing up?"
>"Of course! Who didn't!?"
>"True...which one did you see growing up?"
>"Well when I was five I saw Fourz- I m-mean Black!"
>"Damn....that's hot..."

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>>60872658
stop hitting bae, she's a well behaved girl

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>>60872714
She's well behaved BECAUSE I hit her

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>>60872915
hitting is only allowed for bratty girls.
Good bottoms get pats

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>>60872976
I pat her bottom as well

[Anonymous No.]

Any prompt you liked that you want to give a second go at a discussion?
I still think "Anon's political enemies set him up with Mio in order to extinguish his clan" set in feudal japan has a lot of potential

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>>60873736
Chloe and Iroha forcing you at swordpoint to buy them as prostitutes was discussed a bit ago and getting mugged for both my cash and cum sounds super hot

>>60875666
Would also accept sukeban PekoMari doing it as well

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>>60873736
That idea has potential but it's basically at the best point anonymous discussion will leave it at unless someone can make up a good idea for like a setting, or a good selection of other characters.
With the setting I think you have like three options. Full fantasy set in not!japan, historical fantasy set in (insert your favorite japanese historical period), or full on modern with it literally happening circa today but without vtubers. Not really sure what's best so it's probably best left to author's taste.
For characters, you basically already have a good list with OKFAMS for Mio's side; though for the characters on your side it's basically a toss up/author's choice. Maybe someone like Iroha as your bodyguard?

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>>60875920
>oh, you came already? let's hope your cock is as good at going up again as this bill of yours...

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I want to lick her

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>>60878807
Do not like Friend

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>>60879543
I'll like her as much as I damn please

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>>60771585
You become Chloe's sugar daddy. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Enjo_k%C5%8Dsai
Technically you're the one taking advantage of a young vulnerable girl, but in reality if feels like she's the one toying with you.

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I just want to read more content with hags being sweaty, hairy, and in heat.

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>>60880111
>I assure you Chloe. Making you going on dates with gyaruo delinquents is absolutely necessary.

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>>60880111
I liked the true, forbbiden love variant more because I was in love with one of my teachers

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>>60883053
As the man behind both prompts, I agree to be quite honest.
Same, twice actually, and both of them were English teachers funnily enough.

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>>60884435
Fuck this fox

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>>60884775
I'd gladly give up my next breath if I could fuck Fubuki with just the air in my lungs right now.

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Why do the most menhera authors have to have the best stories?

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>>60885309
I'll bite. Of whom are you referring?

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>>60885309
Hard to be a creative genius and normal at the same time. Not impossible, but hard.

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>>60885309
Only the most autistic writers fall through enough cracks to come here and write fanfiction about anime girls without a setting, and only the craziest of those are going to make the best fanfics.

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>>60885309
That's not true. The Balsa guy is a fucked up nutjob and 90% of his work sucks.

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>>60885309
Consider that to write a good story you probably need to not be stupid. Now, for someone to not be stupid and spend their time writing niche fan fiction for the same like 30 guys, we can only conclude that they probably need to also be weird as hell. So I think it's likely that the less stupid an author here is, the more likely they are to be a menhera.

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>>60885340
definitely talking about pekofag

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>>60886774
He was prolific, but his writing felt about average. He would have done great in his mother tongue though, I wager.

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>>60887590
Not the most eloquent author by any means, but way above average IMHO. NTA by the way.

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>>60886230
Man you are obsessed with that guy. You two should kiss at this point lol

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>>60885309
Hard disagree. The authors that I like the work of the most tend to be level-headed and decent human beings. There have been some decent stories written by menheras I'll admit, but my favourite works come from the chill authors.

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>>60880455
And I just want to write that content. We're both gonna have to wait though.

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>>60887897
There's always a strong subjective element, of course. Some people care a lot more for the plot itself than the way it's told.

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>>60828722
>>60771617
>Holocorp
I already this last thread but, I'll give my thoughts on the additions
>HoloX
Meh, I feel like this misses the essence of holoX if Laplus isn't running around being a bratty demon child. Not to disparage you, but I feel like in a pseudo-SCP setting they'd either be the demon child and her 4 organization minders trying their best to either distract her/ guide her to believing that working for holocorp is the coolest thing she could do... or they're a goldfish poop gang of ne'er-do-wells that only have a file due to being a minor annoyance with like a big spoiler/addendum hiding the real story behind laplus.
>Anya
Eh, not really given enough detail to be an interesting idea.
>Kobo
It's better in terms of it being formally written but lacks any interesting story beats to plant.
>Marine
>Eh, not really given enough detail to be an interesting idea.
Overall I think it's an interesting idea but I think the format kind of screwed by the fact that you decided to go for everyone rather than focusing on the ones you could make interesting stories/articles out of meaning you kind of end up with lots of stuff that's meh to could be interesting if it was given more content.
>>60887590
I liked his shorter form fics better... mostly because his longer fics kind of expose his autistic inability to grok some chuubas personalities. Honestly think he was fucking burnt out of chuubas by the end, either that or devoting weeks to writing commision fics to, at most, middling reception was fucking with him more than any insult ever could.

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Don't fuckin did on me

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>>60873736
I think that Suisei's doppelganger greentext has potential to be an amazing drama fic, but it's kind of in state where the idea is less concept and more outline waiting for an author to take a crack at it.
Like outside of thinking up what exactly Ao-kun/old!Suisei's plan will be there's not really much more to it outside of the thread workshopping the outline.

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>>60888259
thanks for the 2.0 review.
I did try that with holox and frankly it doesnt sit well with me. while "team rocket goons taking care of one superpowered being" is kinda fun, id like them to be an actual organization for once.
hell id say that my biggest gripe with holox is that they are too fun for their concept, and could use a being less of a goober squad.

I do agree that the format is a problem,but then again this is a dumping ground of stuff i like but i dont think i can ever use without hard time commitment, so thanks for checking it anyway

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>>60873736
That old Matsuri outline where she molested you as a kid.

[Anonymous No.]

Board is on fucking cocaine today, wonder why?

>>60873736
That Hoshikawa steals (You) from Suisei idea is floating around in my head, but I have way too much on my plate to take a crack at it.

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>>60892216
Ela 3d and Niji ID got cut.
Also the usual bad faith retards with the AIEEEEEEEEEEEE THEY ARE GOING TO VSHOJO TO HAVE SEX WITH TWENTY CONGOLESE WARRIORS when vshojo is finally healing

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>>60771585
Lui doesn't understand how her boyfriend always know when she's in the mood

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>>60891922
HoloX being an actual threat from the shadows is actually a really cool concept to slowly weave together. I haven't really gotten to a point where the true scale of their influence is shown just yet, but I'm hoping to make it a real eye popping moment.

[Anonymous No.]

Is that guy who wrote Ruffling some Feathers still around?

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>>60893371
swamped with work, but alive yes. What do you require cool misterious guy?

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>>60892614
To be fair they do seem like they could be a threatening organization as long as none of them open their mouths and dispell the illusion due to being so pon.
I think there's a misunderstanding comedy fic here. Something like a fic where holoX themselves never realize they're getting a rep for being an evil organization because they keep stumbling into unintentionally doing big scores while doing their small time villainy jobs (which they of course fail at).

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>>60892368
>Ela 3d and Niji ID got cut
I thought you were saying that both Kaela's 3D and Niji ID were cut, which made me rush to check her channel.
Sucks to hear about Niji ID though, I watched Mika now and then becuase her model was sex.

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>>60893499
I, mysterious cool guy, am wondering if you have a sequel planned. The smut in your story was written well and I especially liked the dynamic between Anon and Kiara towards the end.

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>>60894558
oh yeah of course. Its on the pipeline but its one of those things i WILL write eventually
so far the idea is to follow up on the "second date" idea, namely rearranging her guts with hot and bothered buttplay maybe that goes both ways but not into peggle territory
Glad you liked it, im really flattered

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>>60894966
>peggle territory
I know what you mean by this but this is just making me imagine a fic where it's a date where Kiara is going to imply an interest in peg- then she kidnapped mid sentence and it's up to you to rescue Kiara by going on a peggle adventure through 64 dangerous levels while fighting a bevy of lesbian boss fights.

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>>60771617
>Apocalypse's Fury >>60662809
Weird formatting, but it was done to cover up the author if I remember the last thread correctly. I don't really have much experience with shitposty comedy fics, but this was fine. Using anime cliches and hololive history as a backdrop for a joke barrage is a good, if standard, foundation for something like this. That the fic retained the girl's personalities according to its circumstances also works to the fic's benefit. It felt a bit stretched for the amount of jokes and substance it has, but that will be less of an issue if you read it quicker than I did.

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>>60894966
Looking forward to it!

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>Balsa 27 goes to 29
...Did I miss something? I don't see it in the threads...

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>>60895251
>"You know...i feel like we should try some.."
>she takes a look around the restaurant, its full, so she leans in
>"Peggle"
>Your eyes light up
>"holy shit yes"
>"woah...eager boy huh"
>"sorry haha..it takes me back to those days with my aunt"
>"wha"
>"yeah, non stop peggle for hours"
>"HUH?!"
>"yup. Just a jug of water, a sandwich and a peggle marathon"
>"w-what?"
>"Dude i remember one day, after four hours, i could barely stand up"
>"FOUR HOURS?!"
>"yeah, i had that kind of energy when i was 14"
>Kiara screams

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>Balsa 27 goes directly to 29 with no 28
...Did I miss something? I don't see it in the threads...
I CHOSE THE WRONG IMAGE FUCK

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>>60895654
>>60895762
Should have appreciated his fics more and left reviews that let him keep writing.

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>>60895762
I'm working on 28 now. I got burnt out and a little frustrated with not making progress so I wrote the ending prematurely.

I already know how it's going to go I just wasn't thinking it through. Sorry. I will get it done soon. That was stupid of me to do.

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>>60895762
>Spoiler
Seems always correct to me. God I want to hug Polka, and then her mother for creating such a wonderful creature.
I tried to find 28 too, but I didn't see it anywhere in recent threads, I even asked in the previous thread after I read through 27 and 29.

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>>60895762
>>60895950
This Clown is illegally cute

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>>60895942
Alright, just wanted to make sure I didn't fuck up and miss it for the sake of archiving it. Thanks.
>>60895950
I fucked up and posted a Tarkov shitpost instead of literally me. They were right next to each other...

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>>60896062
It's so damn illegal it commits story crimes.
>Okay, gonna focus on fluff with a different girl
>Oh hey Polka is in this scene
>Literally cannot stop myself from writing more Polka fluff and bonding
Every. Fucking. Time.
>Post arc is gonna be heavy half-elf focused since we getting into those coffee thighs and making building waking sex
>Planned for a tender scene with Polka anyway
If this is wrong, I don't wanna be right.
>>60896073
Still don't seem that wrong, that shit is funny.

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>>60896073
Thank you for being patient with me. I am trying hard to stop acting menhera but sometimes I don't succeed lol. Thank you for putting up with me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>60896300
Authors aren't always in control of their characters, after all. Sometimes they just start doing things and all you can do is record it.

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>>60896470
Someone who gets it! Sometimes I just get into a scene and the characters just start moving. I can't stop some of these girls from getting what they want sometimes.

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>>60896746
To be honest I didn't get it by myself, I'm not an author. I read about it one of Tolkien's letters to his son, from 1944.

>A new character has come on the scene (I am sure I did not invent him, I did not even
>want him, though I like him, but there he came walking into the woods of Ithilien): Faramir, the
>brother of Boromir – and he is holding up the 'catastrophe' by a lot of stuff about the history of
>Gondor and Rohan (with some very sound reflections no doubt on martial glory and true glory): but
>if he goes on much more a lot of him will have to be removed to the appendices[...]

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>>60894966
All this Anal talk and no one brings pekora.
Anal bunny needs her shithole wrecked

[Anonymous No.]

>>60897505
Stop reading those degenerate doujins, Miko

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>>60897505

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>>60897505
Awful

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>>60897634
>>60898097
>>60898319
Dont act like you wouldnt do it so hard that by the next morning she walks like the letter A

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>>60898845
I would do that if she consented.

[Anonymous No.]

Hey anons, I wanted to make a novel centered around Myth as characters with Ame being the main character, but I want to add romance in it with a male side character who's into Ame but quietly supports throughout her journey. In the end after the final battle, Ame would ponder on what to do and she settles on marriage with the guy. Is it good?

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>>60898845
Pill me on why everyone wants to stick it in Peko's A. Is it just cause she's got a cute little bunny butt? I guess there's the angle of denying her vaginal as a power play.
>>60898920
If that's what you want to go for, go out there and make it good. Always write for yourself.

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>>60898920
Talk is cheap, and a concept like that is easy to roast.
Come back after writing with a snippet, a chapter or even just an outline and you'll get some actual feedback on what you've made.

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>>60899264
I've made an excel sheet already for characters and the story progression for the first few chapters. Kinda hard when the characters are above 40 from Hololive. I'm testing prompts on how to make chatgpt write the story for me. So far, it's bad. Really hard to make it into WN-like.

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>>60898920
>>60899392
Cuck fiction has gone too far

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>>60899189
>perky butt that is big and bouncy enough to hide her butthole in a really erotic way
>Bunnysuit brings attention to her legs and butt. On top of this, bunnytail atop her butt gives the feel of a gift bow. A decoration in your gift (her ass)
>the contrast inbetween a really erotic design (Big butt bunny girl with great legs) and Pekora's personality (Prude-fun loving bunny with a really haughty streak) makes for a great gap moe
>Anal is kind of degrading, added that to the point above, its an ideal method of correction
>pekora is pretty small. Perfect height and size to topple over/manhandle her and get rowdy
>The fact that, if you go with porn logic, Bunnies are always horny and down to breed. You are deniying her a chance to pass on her genes in favour of her ass
>on top of all of that, bullying a short girl's ass by getting too rowdy and her not being able to do anything its amazing
>Pekora, being small and having a perky butt, probably also has a really tight asshole
That's my sparknotes on why you should pound pekora into the bed, while she wets herself and bites the pillow

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>>60899392
> I'm testing prompts on how to make chatgpt write the story for me
There's like 3 AIshill containment threads and we still get them all over the site, damn

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>>60898845
I wouldn't fuck her even if she were the last female on the planet and Koyori had drugged me up so my penis is in constant agony and I'm severely horny.
She (peko) lacks one important thing; sex appeal.

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>>60899680

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>>60899392
>I'm testing prompts on how to make chatgpt write the story for me

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>>60898920
Only if the guy is Hattori Hanzo.

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>>60899392
1. AI can't write a worthwhile narrative or even good dialogue without massive manual editing
2. Even you wanted to use an AI, you should use one that is designed for writing novels. Using ChatGPT for this is like writing a story using crayons, on paper.

[Anonymous No.]

>>60892368
Those twenty Congolese warriors? All me.

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>>60899680
This post is just making me imagine it's being said before getting raped corrected by Pekora herself. With like the one saying it on their knees due to how horny they are as they stare Pekora in the face. Also they're turning into a rabbit boy that's slowly starting to slip in peko at the end of their sentences.

[Anonymous No.]

Pekora is pretty sexy when she doesn't talk. I recomend a strict gag

[Anonymous No.]

>>60888009
Bless you

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>>60899589
You know what? I like your passion. I just might make Peko the first anal experience of my story. Which is gonna be a toughie since I've never stuck it up someone else's butt, so I won't have first hand experience on how it feels on my end (but the end is actually Peko's ha ha ha). I hear it's just generally tighter to an almost constricting level, while there's a lot of ways to do it wrong and make it painful for your partner if you're not grooving correctly.

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>>60900992
well here's some pointers,

Yes. You can hurt the girl if you go in hogwild, but in general buttsex feels weird and it smarts a bit because you are putting something that doesnt belong in a hole that isnt used havingthings going in. Still its that sensation that makes people crave it. My ex described it as "scratching yourself hard. It stings but its a great sting"

Its real tight, and number one reason for people bouncing from it/hurting themselves is that the guy is pushing too hard and the girl has not relaxed the sphinter. If you want to give yourself an idea, make a fist and then try to force a finger from the side, you'll notice that clenching too hard makes your finger scrap against your palm in an unpleasant way, while your finger starts hurting because its digging in.
While lube is prefered, you can get away with spit, foreplay and taking your time if you are going raw (which you really shouldnt but its anime world) since precum will do the work.
With a condom, lube is a must.

Aside from that, it can be really sensual since both parties need to cooperate in a slow and rythmic matter or can be really primal once you get a good rythm going, since the girl will stop clenching as hard and you can enjoy a really tight hole

[Anonymous No.]

>>60901660
Thank you anal education anon. That made it pretty easy to understand. I'll store your explanation for later when the time eventually comes and so will I in peko's bum.

[Anonymous No.]

>>60886774
>>60887590
>>60887897
Also NTA but he just yesterday finished a new comm for me that absolutely nuked the previous one I got and anything else I've read by him out of the water. I wish I could've shared the experience here more conventionally but alas. Architectanon btw

[Anonymous No.]

>>60900992
It might make a good end for Pekora's
Prude/shy -> sex for breeding -> oh god just fuck me
arc.

[Anonymous No.]

>>60902313
Just post it in the secret /wg/ Skype room

[Anonymous No.]

>>60902413
>Skype rooms
damn bro....take me back.

[Anonymous No.]

>>60901660
>and number one reason for people bouncing from it/hurting themselves is that the guy is pushing too hard and the girl has not relaxed the sphinter
My friend told about a couple he knows who tried anal and they fucked up, now the girl has to wear diapers for the rest of her life.

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>>60902841
And that's why anal is prime material for fiction.

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>>60902339
It's gonna be quite the roller coaster to be sure. I'm looking forward to the introduction and the evolution of the relationship.

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I might just be weird but it's a massive turn-off if the girl gets too sex-crazed, even if it's your dick she lusting after. I've dropped some visual novels after a sex scene for that reason.

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>>60904500
If they act like crazed drug addicts? Yeah, that's usually not very hot.

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>>60904684
"Fuck me babeh~ oh yeah oh yeah" type of sex crosses the line too.

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>>60904957
You like them more rational and articulate?

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>>60905026
Innocent and pure

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>>60905026
Ideally with a spreadsheet and a minimum 1k word essay explaining why we should have sex citing at least three credible sources yes

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>>60905026
>Is your sphincter sufficiently elastic for this to be enjoyable for you, my dear?
>Oh yes, I quite enjoy the feeling of your penis in my poopyhole. You may commence pistoning.

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>>60899996
>not putting up with her voice
Weakling.

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>>60902841
some people have 0 regard or idea when it comes to sex and just jam it in without any idea.
That's when you get the "what do you mean sticking your dick raw in a butthole then sticking it in the pussy gave us both an infection?" crowd

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>>60906725
Is it okay if I don't mind her voice but still want to gag her? I guess it could be one that still allows muffled talk.

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>>60906395
Now, that's classic intercourse

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>>60905155
Ela's poem today was really heartwarming.
ID3 is so good

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>>60771585
Koyori accidentally drank a pettan concoction she had made earlier and it's up to you to fondle and massage her chest until they're back to her normal size.
I just want to post flat Koyori

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>>60908635
This, but you have to make her pregnant so her tits grow through milk production.

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>>60907365
Is that the legendary Futa Pekora?

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>>60909534
It could also be the legendary Iron Fist Pekora

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>>60908271
>There are nights when I wonder
>What does the universe want from me?
>There are mornings where I
>no longer want to want to see the sun
>Because I know
>I will have to struggle in another day of uncertainty

>But that was in the past
>Now I realize
>The key to happiness is not something to be searched for
>Happiness is not provided for free
>For those of us who are engrossed in comfort

>If we want to be happy
>Then we have to be the one to create it
>I know it won't be easy
>They only say we have to be strong
>But what is strength?
>What does having strength look like?

>Strength right there within us
>Maybe our lives won't always be okay
>But if we keep trying
>Trying to keep on living
>Trying to keep improving ourselves
>That is the definition of strength

>Thank you
>Thank you for always being there
>This bittersweet journey
>Until I'm able to be here today
>Tonight

>Everything is thanks to you guys
>Everything is for you guys
>You guys are my happiness
>You guys are my strength
>So
>Keep being strong okay!

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>>60909990
Fuck yea!!! That's the feel good shit I love! This penguin blacksmith is such a cool chick. I can't wait to write about meeting her.

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>>60909679
I'm sure Marine would enjoy her, no matter if fist or cock.

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>>60911226
She might even enjoy something as hardcore as...

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>>60911626

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>>60911626
I'm about this life.

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>>60887995
>The Chill authors
I think we're all menhera to some degree honestly. You don't exactly wind up writing fanfiction of women pretending to be anime girls all by yourself.

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Inside every chill vtuber fanfiction author is a menhera trying to get out

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I work alongside my menhera. We're two sides of the same coin after all. If you can channel and control your menhera, you can be capable of great things.

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>>60911626
Delete this

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Name ONE (1) author who isn't menhera.

HJ anon doesn't count. Do you really believe a sane person could write 30 plus chapters of adventuring SOLELY so he could have perfect excuses for his smut? I think not.

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>>60902413
I might share it here if he's okay with it post-revisions tommorowish, doubt he wants it archived though. It's definitely getting posted over on /ag/ at least. Incidentally I've just learned he lives in absolute squalor so I feel good about how it all turned out.

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>>60915798
me! im the most normal person in this thread

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>>60915798
Hey getting smutty is just a natural part of the journey. That doesn't automatically make me menhera. What you should have said though what sane person needs 30 plus chapters of buildup just to get to the first smut. That should easily mark me with a little menhera.

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>>60916584
No, that would be me.

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>>60916584
If you have to tell people that you're normal, then I regret to inform you that that is not the actual case.

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>>60919034
I wanna marry Mio's neglected daughter and treat my new in-laws with disdain

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>>60919326

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>>60912234
Well sure, just based purely off the fact that they spend time here. But they don’t let it spread to the thread by having breakdowns or causing trouble for the general’s residents.
>>60915798
AA (unless he is Shiori)
HCAnon
HBTAnon (unless his MC is a true self insert)
CHAnon
Ninnisanni scenario’s author
All have yet to sperg out as far as I am aware.

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>>60895741
I mean who wouldn't want to play peggle when you have an aunt like this.

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>>60921140
What about both weirdanons? Also theres that wedgie guy too. I don't think he's done anything either.

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>>60922387
>aunt

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>>60922428
Respectively, took down their fics after an incident I barely remember, had that shit out a spite fic after every yab arc, killed a guy back in 83.

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>>60922902
>…ie’s little secret

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>>60921140
>HBTAnon (unless his MC is a true self insert)
Ehh, I threw a fit a year and a bit ago. I'm not perfect

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Are ugly bastards popular in this thread?

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>>60928558
If (You) are an ugly bastard, then whenever you read a fic you're the popular one.

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>>60916775
The most menhera thing about you is that you seem to unironically have the personality of a shounen MC before any of his friends have died.

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>>60923092
None of those fit the definition of menhera.

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>>60922902
>>60925729
Bastard...

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>>60930905
Look man, life wasn't always easy for me or the people around me. Through reasons I still don't fully understand, people always came to me for an ear or help, so I just kinda fell into a role of being someone who brighten up a bad day, even if just a little. It always felt good to help my friends and even strangers that way. Some of those stories didn't always end well though, but we do what we can. Being positive is the only way I got through a lot of things, there wasn't any other choice but to believe it would work out, or that I could pull through. The amount of times I've to pull someone back from the brink, including my own wife, is more than anyone should have to experience. It's fucking terrifying. I think I was only able to make a better outcome out of those because of the person I ended up being. Yeah, it could be menhera, cringe, whatever, but because of all those things, people I care about are still around. That's seems pretty worth it.

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>>60932849
Whatcha deleting this for?

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>>60930905
Look man, life wasn't always easy for me or the people around me. Through reasons I still don't fully understand, people always came to me for an ear or help, so I just kinda fell into a role of being someone who brighten up a bad day, even if just a little. It always felt good to help my friends and even strangers that way. Some of those stories didn't always end well though, but we do what we can. Being positive is the only way I got through a lot of things, there wasn't any other choice but to believe it would work out, or that I could pull through. The amount of times I've to pull someone back from the brink, including some people more important to me than anything, is more than anyone should have to experience. It's fucking terrifying. I think I was only able to make a better outcome out of those because of the person I ended up being. Yeah, it could be menhera, cringe, whatever, but because of all those things, people I care about are still around. That's seems pretty worth it.

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>>60933076
My luna pic fit it better.

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>>60933096
Now this is a good menhera moment.

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>>60922428
>wedgie guy
I’m not menhera I swear ): I just have a weird kink

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>>60921140
AA is Shiori. I will die on this hill

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>>60936509
actually I fucking take that back, having a crisis of confidence every other day doesn’t seem especially mentally stable

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>>60921140
what about novellite and the brrat? did they have a melty?

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>>60921140
CC seems normal enough

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>>60900992
If Pekora has her anal virginity taken, Pekomama should make a joke about Anon being a pain in the butt the next day.

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>>60902841
Accounts like that are why I decided against having anal sex in my story without proper preparation. It'd be too convenient otherwise.

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>>60902841
>now the girl has to wear diapers for the rest of her life.
What the fuck? I call bullshit.

Getting it in the booty hurts unprepared, but even if they're colossal morons, short of shoving in some kind of oversized spiked club it's not doing to do much worse than cause anal fissues and minor to moderate bleeding.
Not even a porn dick is going to be able to cause intestinal perforations without serious effort, and destroying the sphincter? What, did she sit on a watermelon or something?

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>>60944397
What that Anon forgot to mention was that this friend of a friend was an elephant

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>>60904500
>I might just be weird but it's a massive turn-off if the girl gets too sex-crazed
That is very weird

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>>60945008
NTA but I don't think so. If she gets mind-broken and dick is all she can think of and stutter about, it's a hard pass from me. Instant boner deflation. I like a pervert girl as much as the next guy, but they've gotta be in full control of their faculties.

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BAKERCHAMA IT'S YOUR MOMENT

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>>60945475
Welp guess I'll have to bake... one second please

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>>60945736 (me)
All right, freshly-baked:
>>60946049
>>60946049
>>60946049

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>>60946363
SEXBOT THREAD IKUZOOOO

[Anonymous No.]

It’s kind of frustrating when I write non-chuuba fiction, because I want to share it with you guys and then I remember it’s off topic.

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>>60947330
Yup, off-topic, don't care. Take it to /lit/.

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>>60947330
Plug your ao3

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>>60947330
Post a chuuba fic next to it on whatever site you use and then you can link that.