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This is the writing thread, for all things vtuber fanfiction. Our writing contest’s submission deadline has passed but the voting period is underway, so now’s the time to find the stories you want to cast your votes for. The info page (and contest archive) can be found here: rentry.org/WGWC

Below is the main archive for everything the thread has put out in its existence, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, greentexts and shitposts alike:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>57577467 (Featuring Jobber Iroha, the possible applications of a Femanon and the approaching deadline for voting.)
/wg/ rentry for bakers: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.57755063
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STORY ANCHOR
Serve up some stories.

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/VT/ WRITING RUMBLE
/wg/ is holding a writing contest! The submission period has concluded, but you can now vote for your favourite fics. Voting closes at 11:59PM UTC -12.

Submitted stories and voting information can be found at:
rentry.org/WGWC

The voting form is here:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSdlEP3lOlGJI42lNOAcrM1Lr0rGcxZAGhdF7sl371xLhYsbTg/viewform?usp=sf_link

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap:
There were three(?) stories posted last thread.

Shiori dump(?)
>>57679813

Balsa Chapter 21: The Best Within Ourselves
>>57690219

Black Narcissus
>>57710006

>> No.57755748

>>57755002
I just noticed that last thread was edition XVIIII. Someone didn’t know how Roman numerals worked.

>> No.57755783
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TOKYO TOWER

>> No.57756224

>>57755748
The next thread will be Contest Edition XXX and you will like it

>> No.57756251
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I was thinking about the Female MC discussion from last thread. I think the problem with female main characters is like half thread stigma, and half bias from our fandom. Since it seems like the only acceptable MCs even to our Fu/yumejo fic writing 'cousins' on ao3 is a reader insert or an actual chuuba.
Which means for our particular brand of chuuba fic a female MC is kind of locked to either be a hidden identity (you were actually Ame the entire time) type or to just have it be chuuba (in a traditional first/third person perspective fic). Like yeah I could see a female OC but you're kind of hit by the double whammy of 'why isn't this a chuuba?'' , and 'why should I read a fic with an OC main character?'' Maybe there's a concept out there that can use a Fem OC and justify it (Tower of Tattle managed to use one pretty well.), but I think concepts like those are going to be few and far between.

>> No.57756998

>>57756251
This is just my personal tastes, but the only reason I read vtuber fanfiction is to self-insert and imagine myself in a story with a chuuba. A female MC just breaks that immersion.

>> No.57757456

>>57755748
I mean the contest edition Roman numerals have been fucked ever since we doubled up on contest edition XIV and no one noticed. >>56722745 and >>56863175

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>>57756251
see i disagree. I used to be the kind of guy who reads Fanfiction just to self insert and experience wish fullfillment and all of that jazz until there was this interesting fanfic of Pokemon emerald where the main character was a girl. It was a really interesting read and that ultimately made me understand that girl POV works in multiple things, even from a fetish aspect.
Sure i can write myself towering over a girl as i plap her. But what if the PoV was from the girl? how hot is to imagine what's going through a girl's head as they get a mind-breakind dicking.
Ocs give the bonus idea of customizing your waifu/ character and writing those type stories.

I do agree, however, that thread bias is a bit too much, and one of the reasons i never wrote something similar was thanks to the hate yuri gets here from some malignant retards.

Anyway, all im saying is that i want to write a comedy where (you) get turned into a girl (not by magic, shion fucked up her skill tree and didnt unlock change sex) by holox.
The reason is because you keep calling Torterra dumb names and treating her as a dork, and HoloX had enough of this.
The comedy would be that everytime you have an encounter with Towa, it shifts completely your pov to think Towa is the coolest and sexiest person in the world, before you manage to snap.
Hell, i'd love to have a scene where you go "I WILL NEVER SUBMIT TO THE TOWA" only for a jumpcut of you Shrieking and fangirling over towa in a concert

>> No.57758203

>>57758018
When has yuri ever received hate? Are we visiting the same threads? It hasn’t been favoured over more tried and true genres but it’s not like people have gone out of their way to hate yuri.

>> No.57758394

>>57758203
That's why i said from some malignant retards, probably sasuke or another discord shitter.
I distinctly remember that MioXFubuki fic getting some good comments and then getting shit thrown at it for the content rather than the prose or the story.

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>>57758018
>>57756251
But what about Femanon self insert second person perspective stories? That's where we would break new ground.

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Towa's autistic inability to stand still on camera is very cute and I hope it comes up in a fic sometime

>> No.57758732

>>57758018
>being turned into a girl as a punishment
Wow, these kind of stories went out of fashion so long ago that I kinda wanna see it.

>> No.57758985

>>57755002
>>57755132
towa sex

>> No.57759027

>>57758651
Doctor stop! The femanon concept is still not approved by CERN... if we were to explore this without proper study...it could spell disaster
>>57758732
im a sucker for those, "X is not allowed to Y anymore" and other similar stuff i would devour on middle school.
The comedy here would be a lot more shitpost-y tho
>"Spit it our Koyori! where did you hide the drug? In my lunch? In my coffee? in that bubbling pink vial you asked me to drink?"
or
>"What took you so long?"
>"I was masturbating"
>"You know what...fair"

>> No.57759155

>>57758018
>>57758732
What if you were turned into a futa? Ideally in a society without trannies, intersex etc. so you'd be an abberation with a secret that nobody suspects, and that you can't reveal to anyone except maybe your close friends.

>> No.57759330

>>57758203
The worst I see yuri fics get here is getting completely ignored.
No one really shits on yuri here compared to Futa, that fetish gets shat on everytime it comes up
>>57758717
How would you even put that in a fic? The only way I'm thinking of right now is like a scene about having to restrain Towa because she can't stop moving in front of a security camera while both of you are trying to sneak past it.

>> No.57759425

>>57759155
That would be a completely different story about acceptance, loving yourself as you are, and other stuff like that. Or just a smut fic

>> No.57759509

>>57758203
>>57759330
I took the liberty of archive-diving and he's not entirely wrong >>39769000
Then again, it could easily be aggroschizo or another faggot going for the easy punching bag

>> No.57759655

>>57758394
Are you taking about The Question? Calling that “the hate yuri gets here” is a bit excessive. The author got shat on for being a /u/ schizo who was fully convinced Fubuki and Mio were a real couple. I don’t think it was deserved mind you (he was harmless after all), but nobody had any problems with the genre itself. Pavonashi Maldives did rather well, so you can look to that if you want to write yuri that the thread might enjoy.

>> No.57759863

>>57759330
>How would you even put that in a fic?
Towa makes life difficult for you because her constant little sexo dances distract you in a way that could lead to a social faux pas. Maybe you're working as a waiter or a performer of some kind and Towa is distracting you at work, or you're at a ball or the opera and you already have a gf so you can't simply stare at (or even go after) Towa.

>> No.57759888

>>57755196
Chocosen sex

>> No.57759889

>>57758651
I mean it kind of runs into the why aren't they a chuuba problem. Since there is a large assortment of chuubas to slot in from normal girls to wacky that a female reader insert doesn't feel justified unless you are a yumejo writing your fantasies.

>> No.57759962

>>57759888
Do you mind dogs from hell?

>> No.57760036

>>57759330
>How would you even put that in a fic?
Its not hard to write it in in any scene, you can put a throw-away line of "you bump your shoulder's with Towa's, in order to stop her from constantly moving" or "as you answer the question, You spy towa's little hand movements out of the corner of your eye"
>>57759655
i mean i wouldnt call him a /u/ schizo, he just went "i think they fuck" and that was the end of it.
He was more of a delusional shipper than anything

>> No.57760039

>>57759962
She's full of red flags and red is my favorite color

>> No.57760179

>>57760036
>/u/ schizo
>delusional shipper
They’re different things? I mean I consider 90% of the people over in /micomet/ to be /u/ schizos

>> No.57760376

>>57760179
Schizo used to be reserved to someone genuinely insane. The /u/ schizo I remember used to raid threads, doxx people and even edit translations and panels to try and buy people into their side.
Delusional shippers are people that see a character or person doing X and they go "ok but im gonna ignore that".
That guy fell into that second category

>> No.57760631

>>57759863
That's just making me imagine a gag about trying to think of a solution out of something but getting interrupted by thinking about Towa's little dances.

>> No.57760727

>>57755196
>>57759552
>>57759639
Requesting a fic about Mococo bringing her first boyfriend to home and Fuwawa fucking him in front of her to assert dominance. Mococo would then show her tommy and join

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>>57760727
>her tommy
rip boyfriend

>> No.57761364

>>57760727
This is just making me imagine Mococo trying to do the fucking in front of their sister to assert dominance thing. Except halfway through before penetration Fuwawa bites Mococo's neck and gets her to give up before switching places and fucking you before she lets Mococo have a turn.

>> No.57761373

>>57759889
Yeah; there's no fundamental difference, it just comes from the fact that /wg/ is mostly males wanting to get with female chuubas. If it was the other way around someone might ask why a male self insert would be Anon instead of Roberu or some Niji male.

>> No.57761625

>>57760727
>>57761310
>>57761364
>Anon, in his boxers, watches Shiori climb from the window and spread them with water
>"The alpha theory was proven and refuted by its own creator! this is dumb!"
>has to explain cuckholding and then poligamy to both of them
>ends up with everyone discussing around a blackboard

>> No.57761940

>>57761625
>ends up joining anyways

>> No.57762065

>>57761625
>Nerd Fauna climbing up the window and getting up because she was thinking this was a physics/math discussion.
>Reine only adding to the confusion because she thought everyone was talking about omegaverse alphas, betas and omegas.

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>>57762065
>omegaverse
Don't tempt fate.

>> No.57762827

>>57762065
Who joins because she heard the word cuck?

>> No.57763559

>>57762827
Towa

>> No.57763809

>>57762065
sora shows up and one of those sitcom cheers plays

>> No.57763828
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>Shion can do non-bratty smiles now
I need fluffy romance with the kusogaki mage
I need it

>> No.57764123

>>57762827
Mori and Kiara

>> No.57764455
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>>57764123
Which of them is the cuck

>> No.57764553

>>57764123
>>57764455
whoever is the cuck, i hope they are 100% into it, masturbating next to you as you plow the other

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>>57763828
You know what? Let's try to hash this one out. I haven't really thought about how I would interact with the witch yet, or if she would even be a target of affection or romance, so shill me on how you would want that to go about in a fantasy world.

>> No.57764968

>>57764553
It's funny in 2021 a lot of Takamori+1M portrayed Kiara as the cuck, but recent memes now portrait Mori as the cuck

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>>57763828
Shame she'll never really use it

>>57764968
That's probably to do with the early takamori shit they did together and Kiara being a bit of a doormat when it came to Mori. Now it's obvious Kiara is a gigastacy and Mori is too autistic to be that assertive

>> No.57765602

>>57765091
It's really interesting for example this was during Takamori
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6839097&tags=mori_calliope+takanashi_kiara+video
and this was after Kiara started collabing with everyone and show how of a Gigastacy she's
https://beta.sankakucomplex.com/es/post/show/34035918?tags=hololive%20video%20takanashi_kiara_ch..

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>>57764761
Bratty and smug, probably more of a source of annoyance than anything else at first. But clues begin to crop up that there's more to her under the surface. You spot her looking sad and depressed when she thinks she's alone. She feeds the stray cats that live outside the castle. She's best friends with the autistically-shy maid that your common sense tells you she should be bullying.

>> No.57766059

>>57765602
That second video is probably due to that artist who draws Ina as a cartoonishly long dicked futa who cucks Mori, but that was originally made like 2 years ago

>> No.57766390

>>57766059
Yeah, it was the only example I could find in sankaku and gelbooru this stuff is usually on /horni/ and Twitter

>> No.57766949

>>57765655
The only place I'd bully the maid is in the bedroom, if she was into it. A kingdom's resident witch/wizard might be a decent role for Shion though. Having to reluctantly work with her to solve some magical crisis could be an easy opener.

>> No.57768071

>>57764968
For me Kiara as the cuck always made sense.
Mori strikes me as the submissive one on the bedroom, so of course she caves in and indulges in the fetish of the blunt and outgoing Kiara.
Also Kiara can join in for a threesome

>> No.57768621

>>57758018
>>57759155
>>57760727
how about a fic about dating mococo, getting turned into a girl, realizing you're the lowest totem pole omega and fuwawa actually exerts alphadog energy and is secretly a futawawa, who then fucks you in front of your girlfriend mococo as a way of establishing just how dominant she is. also works for you ntr fetishists. instead of watching her fuck your gf telling you how much of a man you aren't, she says the same thing while fucking you

>> No.57768778

>>57768621
You forgot Towa watching but being unable to stand still.

>> No.57768918

>>57768778
whatever your forcibly maidenized heart desires

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>>57768621
>instead of watching her fuck your gf telling you how much of a man you aren't, she says the same thing while fucking you
I mean that wasn't never part of the original prompt. I was asking for a Fuwawa stealing Mococo's boyfriend (You). But Futawawa works too... I love futa fuwamoco..

>> No.57770083

>>57768621
>>57768778
And then the narrative zooms out and turns out Shiori was reading your fic

>> No.57770526

>>57770083
shiori does seem really into genderbend stuff.

>> No.57772523

>>57770526
Shiori letting a genderbend potion on the table every single day and then talking to you about the female orgasm, how to squirt and how to scissor

>> No.57773606

>>57759330
>How would you even put that in a fic?
Hugging Towa tight on the train or pulling her onto your lap because she keeps bumping into other passengers

>> No.57774801

>>57758717
Akuma eroi...

>> No.57774878
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>>57755063
What if Shiori Lost Her Voice:
https://rentry.org/dst8c6

An attempt at fleshing out the original greentext I wrote (>>57723423) when I saw the thread complaining about how Shiori's last short didn't use clips of herself.

>> No.57776728

>>57763828
please stop posting her Chloe. It's unhealthy

>> No.57777478

>>57764761
(You) have to protect Shion from a masked stalker that would have remained undected if not for her distinctive odour.

>> No.57777654

>>57760039
Just asking because the best existing choco sex story involves hell dogs.

>> No.57778235

>>57777654
I think it's about time I fixed that. Chocosen is far, far to sexy not to have more stories written about her

>> No.57778844

>>57763828
I've been chewing on a story idea, I think at least partially inspired by a prompt/discussion from here, where Shion and (You) meet at magical university through being a friend of a friend of your girlfriend, and strike up an odd friendship that you two keep up. Around six months later your girlfriend breaks up with you, and after a week Shion takes you to a bar to break you out of your pity party. She proclaims that she'll be your wingwoman, and she makes a bet that if she can't score you a hook-up then she'll go home with you herself. And then strangely enough all three women reject you Luke you have the plague. And a bashful, quiet Shion walks with you through the streets to your apartment.

>> No.57779347

>>57778844
That sounds great, I'd want to read that.

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>>57777478
Given Chloe's current backstory I don't know how I would make her obsessed with Shion. Maybe that should kinda start with me making some chuubas more famous in the world in general? Shion could be a popular and well known witch.

>> No.57779753

>>57779683
She graduated from Harvard, you know?

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>>57779753
Harvard don't exist in my story bro.

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>>57780600
Ah, so she's an isekai protagonist!

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>>57780991
She's not even the protagonist! And no one is getting isekai'd. She's just a brutish orca who might want to pound your face in and help HoloX take the world.

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One of the ReGLOSS members posted a "Who should you watch?" flowchart. My result was Ririka.

>> No.57781705

>>57781368
There was a misunderstanding, sorry! Shion is the one who graduated from Harvard (she says it in streams sometimes), I was talking about her not Chloe. And I said isekai protagonist with the idea that Shion graduated from Harvard irl and then got put into the world of your story. Not because she should be a protagonist

>> No.57781775

>>57781430
Cool little CYOA.
>>57755063

(AA this is a joke)

>> No.57781974

>>57774878
Thank you for fleshing it out and having it archived here! It's a cute (though sad) story, and it's always dissappointing to see fanfiction from elsewhere become forgotten because it's not archived properly. Feel free to spread the word about archiving stories in /wg/ if other Novelites post more fanfiction in Shiori's thread.

>> No.57782795

>>57781430
Funny, I got the same result.

>> No.57782852

>>57782795
Gura isn't one of the options

>> No.57783605

>>57782852
sorry, it should have specified "streamers only". ill fix it later

>> No.57783798

>>57770083
Ending then becomes a meta discussion about smut tropes and cliches with Shiori.

>> No.57786332

>>57755196
Fuwawa prostituting Mococo's belly. After you pay her, you get to rub her tummy.

>> No.57786859

>>57778844
I think I remember the prompt this was based on, it was 90% similar the only difference was that the way Shion made the other girls go away got less and less subtle the drunker she got.

>> No.57786946

>>57786332
>"And for the low, low price of a red superchat, you get to... rub Mococo's tummy! Yaaay!"
>"Un un... wait, huh?"

>> No.57787095

>>57786332
I'd like something like emotional prostitution, where you pay Fuwawa to join Mococo playing vidya and you backseat her and encourage her.

>> No.57787221
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>>57755063
Alas! I will never be able to father a cute little delusional purple alien demon in my lifetime, so I have written a fic about it instead.

'A Promotion'

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRAZL78sR3QDJ-y2SGqiJTmGOSZT-8YSSTZNpDaPFnlMw5jVnEGQypQnL0dVWa2bm92s6ZJRUmykOnQ/pub

Tags: Koyori, Laplus, Fluff

Also, thanks for the proofreading 7 months ago AA

>> No.57787292

>>57786332
This but Mococo weights 120 kilos thanks to systematic incestuous diet sabotage

>> No.57787376

>>57787292
The softer the belly, the harder my dick is.

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>>57787221
That was pretty cute. I enjoyed the setup you used to get that rolling, and had a small laugh at the circumstances. I think it was a nice amount of chunni bullshit around laplus and the interactions were pretty wholesome.
Koyori: "He fell for it! Anon's sperm is mine! I'll have to give myself a PRRRRRRRRRRROMOTION." sorry.

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>>57755196
Oyakodon

>> No.57792784

>>57787221
This was cute and I liked your jokes as well. Is there going to be more? It feels like a setup to a larger story.

>> No.57793018

>>57787221
Really cute! my favorite character was CHOLE BWAHAHAHAHA YOU FOOL YOU BUFFOON YOU ABSOLUTE STOOGE!
It was really cute but i was expecting koyori in Anon's houseand now i want to breed that hag

>> No.57795232

Someone in the Shiori thread did something comfy.
>>57787859

>> No.57795419

Which chuubas would make the most sense as a gyaru? Polka, Okayu, and Sana?

>> No.57795611
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>>57795419
>Bae,Polka and Nene
Friendly Gyarus with not a single mean bone in their body. They are loud and eyecatching, but its just how they are

>Okayu,Choco,Chloe
Sexo Gyarus. They are hot, they are sexy and they know what they want. They are not malicious, but they can be really intimidating

>> No.57795855

>>57795419
>Sana
I feel like Sana is a 'natural' gyaru, everybody assumes she styles herself to look like that, but she's just that way naturally

>> No.57795943
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>>57795419
>>57795855
>natural gyaru
she's just brown man, fucking hell

>> No.57796122

>>57795943
That's what I'm saying, she's just blonde and with dark skin

>> No.57796172
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>>57795943
>brown
>Bright hair
>Fat tits
>Bit of a bimbo
She fits

>> No.57796458
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finished reading Our Cures, pretty damn good. good internal character struggles and monologues, and when the sex finally happened it was appropriately powerful. the banter was great too, though the constant "slut/virgin" insults wore thin as the story progressed. got a little depressed comparing it to my suisex, but HJanon reminded me that it and my story aren't the same thing and shouldn't try comparing them as if they were the same.

thanks bro, i'll try to get some more bitchiness written tonight.

>> No.57798883
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>>57796172
God I want to eat out Sana's asshole before fucking her big chocolate titties. I miss her.

>> No.57801754

>>57798883
Imagine the sideboob her 3D model would have had

>> No.57801841
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>>57801754
imagine the buff her thighs would have got

>> No.57802010

>>57798883
Sana has the body proportions to pull one of my favorite things, which is having to physically split her buttcheeks to reach her pink anus.
Gods why didnt they give such a sexo model to someone who actually apreciated it

>> No.57803191
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>>57755196
>>57587839

Family Anon here. Made a second CYOA. Got too big so I split it into parts.

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>>57803191

>> No.57803278

I can't stop thinking about the slightly smelly yume imouto Shiorin who clumsily tries to seduce you concept

>> No.57803313
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>>57801754
>>57801841
It's not fair. She still barely got any good hardcore art after her retirement either. They gave her one of the hottest models humanly imaginable and we barely got anything out of it. It shouldn't be this way... at least I'll always have AI chatbots of her so I can fuck her to my heart's content but it's not the same.

>> No.57803577

>>57803191
Why the fuck is gen 2 in that mess of a crosover?
If I actually had to pick one I'd be split between gen 0 and gen 1. Gen 0 for that giant mass of incest that's destined to become. Gen 1 because it's the most 'this is destined to turn into a sex house' kind of thing. I'm only split because gen 1 doesn't have fubuki bundled in it.

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>>57803191
FIVE sisters huh? Heheheh...

>> No.57803693

>>57803191
>>57803259
I think the problem with your CYOA is that they dont really spark anything?
Like say i chose Nepolabo....What am i supposed to do with that concept?. You have some ideas in a few of them but most of these are really barebones for an idea let alone a plot.
Also, work a bit on your formatting. Its a nightmare to read

>>57803278
if it helps, Shiori was talking about how she gets scared by loud noises and how her job as a waitress had her facing a really shitty client that made her cry in the bathroom the day of her birthday

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>>57787221
It's cute, though it does feel like it was way too much set-up for a one-shot. So I'll be disappointed if it doesn't have further chapters.
Like seriously that Anon isn't good with names thing (Chole, Toonami Tower) feels like the setup to a long form gag that lasts an entire series, but with just this chapter the Chole thing feels like a misspelling rather than gag setup.

>> No.57805880

>>57803693
>if it helps, Shiori was talking about how she gets scared by loud noises and how her job as a waitress had her facing a really shitty client that made her cry in the bathroom the day of her birthday
aaaaaah

>> No.57806128

Contest results doko

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>>57806128
We still have 7 hours and 30 minutes till the polls close anon.

>> No.57807480

>>57807134
But I want it NOW

>> No.57808652

>>57795419
Agree with what everyone else said but adding Marine, Okayu, and Mel to the list

>> No.57810916

>>57803313
This artist does something occasionally with her, and I've been trying to craft a story for this series of pictures they did https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/108197042

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>>57810916
>Kronii getting told to clean it off after he fucks Sana
Thank you.

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