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*thump, thump, thump*
>why ame? why? you told me nobody would like me there... you told me they just laugh at me.
>gura... im sorry... stop.... HURGGG
*thump, thump, the sound of gura kicking her small, pure white foot into ames ribcage*
>you told me im better with you and that you were the only one who would love you.... why did you say it? why??
>im.... sorry... i just didnt want you to... I didnt want to.... youre all i have guraaaAAA!!
*ames eyes widen as she looks down to see she had been kicked again, unsure if she even felt it, as she rolls back on the ground with blood gushing from her chest, amazed such a small and pure looking foot could do this much damage in what felt like a split second*
>aaaaaAAAA!! gura... GURAA!!! im SORRY GURRAAA STOP!!!!
>stop? stop what???? stop lying? because im not the one who lied! they love me ame. they love me, the jp branch they love me. i even made new friends now. amazing friends.... elite friends.... hehe... you lied to me. why dont YOU stop? why dont YOU!!!! you need me to MAKE you stop??? is that the ONLY way you will ever stop lying to me and hurting me?!
*crunch crunch as gura steps on her friend ame's broken chest, laughing as her foot effortlessly lips in ame's chest as easy as a firm step on a frozen puddle*
>AAAAAH.... aaaAAAA!!!! GURA... gura stop im... GURA YOURE GOING TO KILL ME, STOP... STOP!!! IM SORRY IM SORRY, GURA... AAHAHAAHAAA....... HEEELP SOMEONE HELP..gura... AAA..... I LOVE YOU, I love you i .... i love you... i love... i love you i love you.... please... please ill do anythaaaahaahaAAAAAAAHHH
*crunchy squelchy sounds as gura giggles and enjoys splashing in the puddle she has created in ames chest, as ames eyes roll back with a twisted smile on her face, not even shedding a tear as she lays still just waiting for her last breath to finally come out*

this is just my rrat of what will happen now that gura has new friends in jp, and about to be best friends with elite miko

>> No.5750473

Delete /vt/

>> No.5750496

hot

>> No.5750577

cringe

this is what you get for letting enmonkeys on the board

>> No.5750597

>>5750428
Anon post this 30 min before!!!! She was still mia and it would have been fun to post
>It's true...
>So this is why Ame isn't streaming...
What a missed opportunity

>> No.5750664

>>5750428
You guys are terrible writers, just letting you know.

>> No.5750723

Thank you, cumchud, very cool!

>> No.5750737

I got hard

>> No.5750771
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>>5750664
sir I am world renowned author my pen name is T. Cumbud you maybe just heard of me before...... heh, sorry if i kill off your favourite character...... but dont worry because gura just find love in next chapter with sakura miko! so it will be ok for you dont worry about it!

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5750818

Uhhh buddy, wattpad is down the internet block downstairs so uhhhhh
Fuck ofr

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>> No.5751108

>>5750428
Kino of the highest order. OP, I want you writing a book ASAP, I'm in talks with Yagoo right now to hire you to work on a set of books centered around Gura in the world of Hololive. Maybe you'll even get to work on Hololive Alt and meet Gura herself. You're going places, OP.

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>>5751108
yagoo email me already, I just tell him i dont work for black company until he stops banning haachama from being on EN minecraft server or to make collab with her sister ame etc (oh wait, ame now is dead from gura soon maybe)

>> No.5751644

>>5750664
For u

>> No.5751661

>>5750428
Why are chumbuds like this?

>> No.5751997

the concept is interesting, but the dialogue is stilted and out of character and the ending is too sad.

>> No.5756350

>>5751997
A better writer could make it work. The dialogue just needs to look like anything except what OP wrote originally.

>> No.5758140

>>5750664
I don't think these threads are meant to be taken as serious pieces of creative writing. It's just having a goof.

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>>5750428

>> No.5764912

>>5750428
Thanks anon I hate it

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>>5750428
Have chumbuds been the real schizos this whole time?

>> No.5768641

worst fanbase

>> No.5768687

>>5768478
Anon, all best writers you learn at school were schizos

>> No.5770915

>>5750428
gura isnt depressed enough. 4/9. try again next time.

>> No.5773307

>>5751537
>he turned down a billion dollar opportunity to stay true to his core values
based, why are all the greatest writers on earth like this?

>> No.5773829

>>5750428
I'M CHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGG

>> No.5778931

>>5758140
>>5756350
i mean, i do think there's something interesting in this concept of gura getting angry at amelia for separating her from potential friends. it's far too outrageous to take seriously as a realistic portrayal of them, but with good execution it would be possible to suspend disbelief. this rendition just doesn't achieve that.

>> No.5779823

>>5768478
actually I am haaton firstly but I also am cumbud (yes I’m op btw) when I post in ggg they love me but secretly I love haachama more then gura and they don’t know it and meanwhile I am very influential there hehe!

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>>5768478
You weren't supposed to say that out loud, bro...

>> No.5780910

>>5779823
Kek haatons false flagging as chumbuds explains a lot. Seriously

>> No.5786777

>>5758140
I thought this quality is enough. Even more than that considering it might've been possible in a scenario where "Gawr" is taking over Gura's consciousness.
Where are you from? /ggg/? /hic/? /wg/?

>> No.5790061

>>5750428
uoh they are

>> No.5791472

>>5750428
Is this the sequel to the Amelia beating up Gura copypasta?

>> No.5791541

>>5750664
It's bad but I've also seen published stuff with even worse writing.
Which makes it no less bad and just makes me feel tired.

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