/wg/ - Writing General - CONTEST EDITION X

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This is the writing thread, for all things fanfiction. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble, a writing contest for the whole board. The info page (and contest archive) can be found here: rentry.org/WGWC

Below is the main archive for everything the thread has put out in its existence, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, greentexts and shitposts alike:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>55897657 (It seems we’re yet to have our fill of rrat!Ayame)
/wg/ rentry for bakers: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

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STORY ANCHOR
Regale us with your tales!

[Anonymous No.]

/VT/ WRITING RUMBLE STORY ANCHOR
Reply to this post with your contest entries (submissions close 08/25).

Rules, stories that have been submitted so far and other information can be found at:
rentry.org/WGWC

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
Last thread had two stories, with the return of a long running series.

A Predator's Touch, A Hazy Yellow Line (Part 4) >>56016094

Three Sisters >>56052611

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I'm minorly stealing the fightsexual Ayame thing for my own purposes. Thank you to whoever invented it.

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A story told in four images. Very cute bread.

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>>56071403
It's also very cute because it's ojou-themed!

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>yammers thread
perfect

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I hate to break the Ayame posting with a hag... but I really need more Lui stories. She's on Iroha's stream right now, tiredly and calmly guiding Iroha through a horror game and her voice is turning me on.
I just want to have a busy day raising a child with her, then lie in bed together as she whispers how much she loves me.
God I'm so lonely...

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>>56072078
Ayame is a very strong hag magnet, after all.
If you need help with your Lui story, let the thread know!

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>>56072078
You make me want to write a lui saviorfag story.

Problem is is I am terrible at writing Lui. I keep watching her streams but it doesn't seem to be translating to my work.

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>>56072078
>luilookingatbabyphotos.png

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>>56073246
Don't look

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>>56073166
>Problem is is I am terrible at writing Lui
You can't know that until other people have told you so. I say give it a go, you might be overthinking how much personality you have to pack into her character. Lui is a pretty well adjusted individual (hags are great like that) so it's not like you need to write her having menhera breakdowns.

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>>56073574
People have told me so lol. And I know practice makes perfect but I can tell Lui is pretty important to you and I don't want to screw it up seeing as you're so passionate for her.

I mean I can try, but I should warn you ahead of time that it will probably not be as true to Lui as the real thing. I don't want to write something mediocre about someone you seem so passionate for.

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>>56073574
For some reason this made me imagine the sad image of going to your friend Laplus' house to play video games then hearing her (adopted?) Lui have a drunken breakdown outside that's just louder than the sounds of your vidya.

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>>56073854
>People have told me so
O-oh. My condolences, but don't worry about screwing her up. Some of the best stories here have meh characterization.

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>>56073357
>>56073884
LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME IN

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>>56073854
Just write the perfect Lui story for yourself, how you want her to be. Don't let some guy on a Mongolian Basket Weaving Forum (by accident) dictate what is okay and what isn't.
You don't even have to publish it if you're afraid of negative feedback.

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>>56074497
Honestly I'm pretty sure even 'normal' lore!underworld in the hololive world is pretty much just like that academy manga. So I'm pretty sure normal lore!ayame wouldn't have traits like those... but honestly I think going with what makes a more interesting story is better. So if you want to make her have some bits of fightsexual in her or making her have some deep seated wrath hidden deep within her blood I think it could make an interesting twist to her character.

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>>56074078
Examples?

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>>56070774
What a cute Ayame. Very nice.

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>>56075118
I have a really hard time with the academy manga. They replaced Ayame and Rushia with much less fitting characters and the story is, probably partly as a result of that, not taking advantage of its intriguing setting enough.
Ayame isn't in it, so I won't look at it for inspiration about her.

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>>56075361
Kintsugi is a classic example. Mio is not really Mio, but it's still a fantastic story.

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>>56075512
>They replaced Ayame and Rushia with much less fitting characters and the story is,
Who would those be? Towa and Lamy?

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>>56075943
Lamy is a snow elf and Mel was changed to be from the underworld. Nips tend to be lax with foreign tropes like we are with theirs but vampires and elfs from the underworld? I dont know

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>>56076495
You'd think with an entire team of paid writers and such they could be a little more expansive with this kinda stuff. I'm doing this shit for free and feel like I'm doing a better job with chuuba locations and backgrounds.

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I have made it canon

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>>56076495
Anon...
>"Sweet bites! It's Yozora Mel, the Underworld's vampire prodigy!"
>A vampire prodigy from the Underworld. She might be a vampire, but she is not into blood. She likes her acerola juice quite a lot.
Lamy at least seems like she's the one that got placed into the cast because they needed someone to fill in for Rushia (or more likely Ayame) with the only 'real' reason being that she has that bit in her bio about being a transfer student.
Towa meanwhile seems like she was the one filling in for Rushia due to her lore being pretty explicit about her being a visitor to the human world.

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>>56077177
Where did you get the quote?
I said it is retconned the old lore didnt mention it. Probably they changed it for the manga.

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>>56077293
From the actual hololive website.
Admittedly going by the vtuber wiki it seems like it was a retcon that got shoved in by the new site so I guess you're not completely making shit up.

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>>56075943
Lamy doesn't seem to fit much at all, but to be honest, I'm unsure about the precise workings. I'm just miffed that the underworld lost Rushia (forever) and Ayame (for this manga).

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>>56077787
>Ayame
Admittedly the student council president part of her lore is so underused I'm pretty sure /wg/ only has it in mind because Our Cures mentioned it in passing. With only Fujo Fantasies using it as part of her character in a fic... Unless I'm missing a fic.
Though I'm not gonna lie, the fact that people have forgotten she is one is a hilarious way to implement it in real lore.

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>>56078414
Yeah, and that manga would've been a great opportunity to finally make something fun out of the student president role. I don't mind her hanging out with her mother and her mother's wife on the mountain of course, but it's still a shame.

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>>56077177
You're definitely wrong about Towa, she's a natural shoe-in for the role since her lore is a newbie who came to the human world to learn, that's a very easy leap into being a new student in the underworld. If anything Lamy is the Rushia substitute, Mel isn't that bad. Ayame wasn't added because she has her own manga.

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>>56077020
I don't know. It was alright as a joke, but it seems incredibly impractical that a process imagined for making a person strong enough to fight monsters would end up giving them a physical handicap like this. I'd also be 100% sure you want to commit to this piece of lore, since that means you'll need to go into detail how Anon's junk is now considerably larger and everything that goes with that.

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>>56077020
Big booba Ayame is lame

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>>56081110
I'm sure they can justify it by saying some magic mumbo jumbo about it how it enhances their inherent yin/yang energies which by extension makes them bigger.

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>>56079581
I'm a natural shoe in in something of Towa's if you catch my drift

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>>56081545
>the transformation is literally a blessing by the Goddess Aki
>her giving them bigger boobs is a deliberate choice that enhances stored energies

I'm liking where this is going

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>>56081110
I might make it just a gag then. I'll think about it. Does kinda seem like Botan to mess with him like that.

And I would indeed describe, in great detail, how much larger Anon's cock got, assuming he does go through it at some point in the future.

>>56081388
ur lame.

>>56081545
>>56081958
lol

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>>56081903
What does this mean? Please elaborate.

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>>56082133
His penis fits into Towa's vagina very well.

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>>56082164
...huh?

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>>56082334
You asked what it meant

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Yo, the main archive hasn't been updated since August 8th. What the fuck is happening ?

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>>56083149
AA is Shiori

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>>56083165
I choose to believe this.

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>>56083149
Let's not bother the kind archiver until she has been missing for some weeks or so.

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>>56083262

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>>56083149
Shiori is currently visiting family.

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>>56083261
the only way to know for sure is to send him (her) cum tributes of shirori to his (her) email.

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>>56083403
How would Shiori react to Gokkun

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>>56070927
The 1957 horror short "The Fly" by George Langelaan except instead of a dude and a fly it's Ayame and a rrat

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>>56084683
Why not Fubuki?

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>>56084727
She can't have all the animal dicks for herself

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>>56084683
>rrat
Bae cucking her partner with Ayame?

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>>56084081
>doesn't mind eating weird stuff like bugs
>avid supporter of her fan's creations
>likes when her fans work together
I hadn't thought about it before but it looks like I might have to write some Shiori gokkun

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>>56084683
so... you want one of us to plagiarize a story but just change the names?

>>56084727
don;t we have enough Fubuki stories?

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>>56085484
>don;t we have enough Fubuki stories?
1. That's the joke
2. He mentioned a fly

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>>56085484
>enough foobs
Blasphemy

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>>56085484
you are mentally unsound on two counts

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i'm putting a moratorium on all fubu stories in this thread for the foreseeable future

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>>56070774
Ayame cute!

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>>56086030
You can't do that to my wife's mother's wife, you villain!

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Question for Komodo anon: I'm working on the fic. Do you want Mori, who's also in fic, to get eaten as well?

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>>56090740
Ame after another story gets thrown into WIP hell.

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>>56091951
After all this Ayame discussion and on the occasion of this Ayame thread, I'll rescue one from WIP hell to make up for it. Just need to work all the new ideas in.

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>>56093283
What's it about?

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>>56096476
Playing with your horny oni girlfriend.

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>>56079193
I do wonder why they added that part of her lore in the first place. None of her alts are even a school uniform.

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>>56097752
That was back in an era where vtuber lore was one or two sentences long and only 1-2 aspects of it served as flavour for design, behaviour etc. Cover was also small and new.
Some office worker probably looked at the designs for Gen 2 and thought "Maybe we can make something of it if the Oni, the Demon nurse and the loli witch all have a role in some kind of underworld school."
And then nothing really happened because nobody wanted to do something with it until this manga.

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>>56083165
No...

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So how much have you written today anon?

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>>56102083
Did a really good amount today. Chapter went from 8 pages to 15 and it's not even halfway done. Can't wait to do more tomorrow

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>>56083149
He's dead. Finally given up on the thread.

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>>56102083
3 pages! Im slow but its good progress for me

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>>56085484
>enough Fubuki
No such thing. Rather, I think we've got more than enough stories of whomever your oshi is.

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>review of “Escapades and Sexcapades: Endurance”
I was unsure about its premise of directly adapting a stream. Using dialogue and events lifted from the talent's performance could easily serve as a unsatisfying crutch for believable characterization. Fortunately that was not the case here. From the lengthy domestic introduction focusing on fluff and banter, it was clear that the author had a solid understanding of Bae’s personality and wasn’t relying on pre-canned snippets to give her life.

Of the three chapters, I found the first part, “Training”, to be the most memorable. This could be due to personal preference or maybe the scenario at play was more unique among smut fics. The cheeky arguments and teasing glimpses into Bae’s room led perfectly into the linchpin of the work– the slow burning voyeuristic prelude. By taking the time to properly muse on the thickness and eroticism of Bae’s sweaty shortstack figure, the author thoroughly reintroduced the lust many listeners experienced when originally watching the stream. Even prior to any physical contact, the many pages relishing in the detail of Bae’s skimpy underwear or the plumpness of her tits and thighs were incredibly effective.

The chapters plowing Bae were long, dense, and capitalized nicely on the horny energy that had built up from the previous part. Though a lot of the scenes in these chapters blended together. This isn’t necessarily a bad thing, it’s more of a testament to how much rat fucking there was to chew through. It may have gone on a bit long if you were reading everything in one sitting, but it fits the “endurance” theme and the scenes themselves found ways to consistently up the ante.

I think the story’s biggest strength is tapping into the “god I wish that me” feeling that underpin a lot of erotic works. By grounding the plot in the context of an actual stream (ideally one that the audience had watched and enjoyed before reading), it makes the process of self-inserting as frictionless as possible. All this to say that this story ended up as my favorite Bae fic in the archive. It’s long without being plodding and there are a good amount of smut scenes worth coming back to. I hope there will be more entries in this series with whatever streams the author feels motivated by in the future.

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This writing contest sounds interesting. I kinda want to participate. Has this contest ever happened in the past and if so is there a link to the past winners?

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>>56107276
This is our first go at hosting a contest. Glad to see you might be interested! Do you have a fic in mind you might want to start writing?

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>>56107276
This is our first writing contest and we’re using it to test the waters. There hasn’t been anything like this in the past but if you need some stories for inspiration, our main archive has over a thousand entries.

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>>56084081
>>56085252
>Advent Cum chugging stream
>Fuwawa and Mococo get both one tankard each. Fuwawa can barely drink twice before tapping out.Mococo manages to get halfway through hers before she starts retching and has to go puke. Fuwawa joins her with the bucket since she got disgusted at her Sibling's progress
>Nerissa tries to go the speed route and downs around 30% in one swing, then downs another 30% in another swing. The amount of air and the consistency made her really gassy, and both fighting to prevent a fart and the constant burping makes her tap out. She does rip one on stream
>Bijou is a mess. She's criying,retching and coughing, but she manages to down the glass after a lot of effort. She takes two steps outside of the frame and then runs to the bathroom. No one dares go check on her
>Shiori is casually drinking it, since it comes from her fans
>licks her lips and dowsn to the last drop
>Asks production if she can get another glass

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>>56070927
You wriggle up Lamy's butt and wear her like a suit.

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>>56107925
>>56107977
That's cool! I've been working on my story for the last half year or so. It's a movie script for a Hololive psychological drama I'm making that I post on youtube (I posted part 1 of it here too I think two months ago). I feel that the screenplay itself would also be fun to share. It's still a work in progress but I'll see how much I can get done before the deadline.

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>20 pages
Maybe I should split this into two chapters

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>>56102083
Around 500 words
Really wish I could do what HJ anon does

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>>56116944

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>>56102083
100 words
I just woke up, ask me again in like 12 hours

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>>56116962
And who says you can't? You're already 500 words closer to finishing the next part of your own story. That's pretty good! The count is just a count, what matters is the scenes you're writing and the happiness it brings you when every new step and new interaction comes to life on paper.
I don't know what the hell I apparently do. I just like to write about hags and adventures.

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>>56070927
Reine and Nerissa get into a sexy cat fight over who gets dibs on plowing Kiara. After beating her pasty mid west ass, Reine asserts dominance by forcing her to eat her muff until she almost passes out and then taking her anal virginity with a massive strap on. When all is said and done, Kiara walks in and announces that she is pregnant with Pomu's child.

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Reread
>Pain and Pleasure
It's not much of a smut fic but it is an interesting twist on Fubuki ryona/abuse. Not much more to say because it's quite short but it's at least an interesting one shot.

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>>56070927
In the prestigious (only in name) Saint Mary's all girl school, Kiara finds herself tangled with a band of bullies.
One of those Bullies is specially vicious, and her light harassment quickly scalates until she's being beaten in the bathroom.
Except it doesnt stop there, because once the others are gone, this person forces themselves into Kiara, dumping all of their repressed feelings into "the new little faggot"
Can Kiara survive her schoolyear? will she tolerate this abuse any longer?

A prompt where YOU get to pick who is the one raping/Eventually falling in love with Kiara you can even make a femanon if you want

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>>56128270
It's Mori

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>>56070807
>>56070867
Never ask me for anything ever again.

Yuzuki Veterinary Services-Second Opinion
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ346TAZwSIjTMyIe2c73cVdv79-AzEpZ8dmhCupGFnQ6N5uvqK-iuyds-5VQF4WYCbMrDg9Rmnjo_-/pub
Tags: NSFW, Towa, Choco, Bestiality, Gangbang

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>>56070927
Fucking Toko in front of Suisei

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>>56130634
Look who the cat dragged in. Come crawling back after your freakout, have you?

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>>56133085
>Look who the cat dragged in.
You mean the dog. The dog dragged in two demon sluts getting piped. Plowed. Screwed. Nailed. Crucified.

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>>56081110
Boobs could be bigger to serve as extra padding against blows and as a fat reserve in case of starvation.
Penises could be bigger as a byproduct of intensified bloodflow.

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>>56130634
Ohh, are you back? I missed you!

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>>56133705
Wouldn't count on too much more, just if and when I happen to feel like it
Contest seemed fun and it looked like you guys have fewer retarded cockroaches in here now so I decided to finally get this one squared away

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>>56133671
>Anon's basically perma Viagra'd
>his dick fucking dies

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>>56133844
Fuck off, you're not worth shit. /wg/ has gone on without you just fine. Flourished, even. You think you're a big shot contributor whose shit smells sweeter than everyone else when in fact you're a larger cancer than the shitposters you complain about.

Delete your story post and fuck off.

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>>56133705
Looks like you still have a retarded cockroach, though

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>>56135342
It's a reverse Gregor Samsa! Don't pay mind to their wacky antics.

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>HJ Shiori smut chapter's acronym is AA
H-Haha...

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>>56135342
Yeah, you. Stop shitting up the thread and commit suicide. Your mother doesn't love you.

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>literally "no u"

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>>56135246
>>56137259
Did he kill your dog or something?

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>>56137375
>3 word post
>reductio ad absurdum
Just confirms you're here for no reason other than attention-seeking. All your work should be deleted from the archive, you're exactly the same as pekofag.

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>>56136781
The writer of HJ is actually Shiori trying to avoid attention.

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>>56137947
I knew someone who wrote THAT much fanfiction for vtubers on 4chan couldn't be a well-adjusted married oji-san

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>>56137547
qrd?

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Thinking about trying to write some Pekomama /ss/.
Anyone have a good idea what to do about her name?
Ironically, I want it to be explicitly non-incestual, not even any sort of incest roleplay, so I don't really want her to be "Pekomama" the whole way.
Was thinking maybe "Pekohana" or "Pekomi" for her real name?

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>>56138214
Pekokasan

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>>56138187
>was in a bit of a slump
>guy “””improves””” one of my old stories(barely changes shit)
>I say that’s not cool
>express desire to get back to writing out of some spite
>guy takes credit for getting me writing again
>I see red and say stupid shit
>immediately take back said stupid shit, realizing it was stupid
>take extended leave for a long while
>now we’re here

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>>56138214
Mrs. Usada

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>>56138329
I hope you have a good day today. Every positive contributor's appreciated.

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>>56130634
Nice, as a degenerate who really liked the first one, I was looking forward to this. I'm glad you came back around and posted it. As always your cock worshiping scenes are excellent and I like Towa getting off on the smell. Great stuff. I like Choco's role in this as a coach/mentor but also a temptress into depravity. Her dialog during those scenes is well done and does an excellent job of capturing the "role" she has. Portraying Towa as someone pent-up was a smart move, in my opinion, that makes jumping that hoop easier.

My criticisms are that I think it's a missed opportunity to not tease the reader with the scenes Towa talks about in the beginning. I understand why you would skip over them, but Towa finding herself slipping cause she enjoys the recordings I think would lend more credence to her rather fast acceptance of being a bitch. On a similar note, Choco's role as a temptress with her commentary falls short IMO since Towa is already into it from the get-go. Usually, that role serves as the "real voice" of the "heroine" and as such, pushes them over the edge. A little bit of resistance from Towa, even as she's getting her back blown out, makes that "device" go a lot farther. Finally, as you probably guessed I think Towa is a bit too eager. Her being sexually frustrated does a good enough job at sidestepping the issue but the build-up is a part of the appeal.

Also no tail scene?

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>>56138187
He basically threatened to pull all of his works from the archive, blaming the thread for being full of shitposting all because one guy said his work was shit. The entire thread immediately jumped on him and put him in his place, he sperged out and vanished.

Now he's back and picking up exactly where he left off.

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>>56139309
I think the main idea I had for it was that she came in 100% ready and willing to go in for 1, then got blindsided with 5, so she gets swept up in Choco's pace because she wasn't really ready to set her own. She knows she wants it, but she doesn't know HOW she wants it so she just defers to the "expert".
And yeah, the only way I could really write the build-up better would've been to go into more detail on her spying, but fuck, that's a whole two or three more scenes to write of Choco getting slammed by a dog. There are only so many ways I can write that.
For the tail thing, honestly, I got like 2/3 through writing before my break so I kind of forgot the extra little flairs I could've done for the last third. I don't see myself going back in and adding anything, though, I'm just ready to be done with it. This story's been in the back of my mind for like half a damn year by now and I want to move on.

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>>56072078
that reminds me, did that one anon ever finish his cuckold Lui fic? Asking for a friend.

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>>56139822
I don't remember it actually becoming a thing. Chloecuck dissappeared as well...

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>>56139788
Okay, yeah when you phrase it that way I can see it, it's Choco more or less "grooming" her than it being her Id.

I think in the hypothetical, it would be less of a focus on Choco and more on Towa, her thoughts and feelings as she masturbates and voyeurs to her friend experiencing taboo pleasure. Each time her thoughts get more and more pink and willing. But again I don't really fault you for skipping over it, we've all been there.

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>>56139979
shame but it happens,
and I'm Chloecuck

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>>56140508
Have you gotten around to writing anything other than that one fic? I forget the title but it was about Chloe getting hit by a Koyori aphrodisiac and getting train raped.

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>>56140645
I haven't done much other than work for the last few months. I came back for the writing challenge (no ntr involved) and hoped at least participating would rekindle the flame so to speak.

I did take the anons advice for me and was working on something more akin to my tastes but I'll get to that once I'm done with the challenge.

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>>56116944
What is the consensus for too long vs too short? I've always found people don't complain about the length if it's above 15 pages but I don't think I've ever written a single chapter that exceeded 20. Is there a point where a chapter becomes too many pages?

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>>56140829
Well for one thing we, the readers, don't actually see anything in pages when you publish something so page count is kind of a meaningless metric to readers but generally you should consider splitting shit into chapters when even you, the author, start thinking it's too much for a single chapter. Because if even your instincts are saying it's too long then you should consider splitting it.

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Should horror fics be written in first person?

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>>56138214
Follow-up question: what’s a better scenario
>Pekopapa is dead and Pekomama is pent-up because she hasn’t gotten laid since he died
>Pekopapa is neglectful of his wife’s needs due to being busy as king of Pekoland and Pekomama is thus sexually frustrated and cheats on him

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>>56142009
I like the former much more. A widow that needs affection and love is more sympathetic and motherly than someone who resorts to cheating rather than working on their relationship problems.

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>>56142009
>Pekopapa is neglectful of his wife’s needs due to being busy as king of Pekoland and Pekomama is thus sexually frustrated and cheats on him

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>>56140508
Nice to see you! You were always cute with your images.

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>>56138214
I think keeping the first part of their name as peko- is cute so Pekomi sounds pretty good.
>>56142009
Honestly that cheating one sounds hotter. [special] Especially if you play up the kemonomimi fucking a human aspect. That fantasy world raceplay is always hot.
>>56141781
It honestly depends on your personal tastes. We've got a lot of pretty good second person horror fics but if you're more comfortable with first person then there's no reason not to use it.

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>>56141781
Horror is scarier in second person to me. What's someone else being threatened compared to being threatened myself?

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>>56130634
Thanks for coming back and giving a sequel. Not really sure what I can add other than that I jacked off to this.
I agree with the other anon that story telling wise the 'fall' of Towa as she witnesses and sees what she told in the beggining is a missed opportunity. Though the actual sex scene is hot enough that I think it makes up for it... Even if a short "montage" showing Towa gradually falling into would have made a way better intro.

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>>56130634
>>56143252 (me)
Also congratulations I'm pretty sure if this story doesn't fall afoul of contest rule 5 you're now the front runner in the nsfw category since this is the only fic so far in the contest that I've found hot enough to masturbated to.

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>>56139822
>>56139979
No I didn't and yes I still intend to. It's #2 on the priority list though, need to clean something else out of the way first, and both will likely take quite a while. Minor chance the first could be done in time for the contest but I wouldn't hold your breath

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>>56102083
>>56117351
Final count: 1.5k

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>>56142361
I appreciate it, I hope everything's been going well for you too!

>>56143397
take your time anon, best of luck with your writing anon!

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>>56128270
I had a similar prompt
>Kiara, a bottom feeder in the pecking order, decides to kickstart her whoring business in her girls only highschool
>After a few bathroom quickies, she gets paid a fat wad of money for an overnight Stay
>The client is Mori, local bully and hopeless virgin
>Kiara fucks her brains out.
>Mori keeps coming back every weekend, clearly smitten by the KFP dumpy
>There, Kiara realizes that, by fucking the right people, she's gonna shoot to the top of rhe food chain
Change kiara for anon and you can recycle it, if gay sex isnt your thing

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>>56145375
>Change kiara for anon and you can recycle it, if gay sex isnt your thing
Why would Anon/(You) be in an all girls school as the only guy?

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>>56147186
It stopped being a girls-only school legally, but the administration is trying its best to reject all male pupils. Your parents sued the school for you being let in.

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>>56070927
Something based on this image.

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>>56147186
Yeah my bad. Maybe the school has just opened and (you) are one of the few guys around.
Then Kiara, the school slut, helps you take over the school.

Or just write Slut Kiara, i jerked off to that idea before

[Anonymous No.]

wishing you all a productive day
hope all of your entries are coming along.

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>>56142009
I'm personally going with the option that pekopapa is dead. I'm not trying to be a homewrecker, but I really wanna breed pekomama. The dad being dead will also play into peko and mama's backgrounds a little bit, along with peko's brother.

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>>56151428
Why aren't you her brother?

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>>56151428
she has two brothers. one 3 years older than her, the other 6 years older.

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>>56151566
I thought the anon wanted
>I want it to be explicitly non-incestual, not even any sort of incest roleplay,
So it's not supposed to be incest.

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>>56151696
Oh, I thought it was a different take on the concept. Sorry

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>>56151726
Has pekoyakodon + pekocest every been proposed before? I don't remember that idea ever getting thrown out here.

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>>56153734
Is this one of Marine's new schemes in her attempts to get laid?

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>>56154027
>"what do you think anon? does this drive you wild? want to ravage me like a beast in heat?"

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>>56153734
Ok i know Marine never scores but can we get make a compromise and fuck her asshole? Its still a L

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>>56154130
>No matter how hard you try to be sexy, you'll never turn me on like your daughter Aqua does
But rather than leave her heartbroken, I would give her a pity fondle and then give her some pity sex with a condom on.

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>>56154130
>no way fag

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>>56151566
Because I'm anon, and not part rabbit.
>>56151662
Ah right, I had a feeling I was missing something. Thanks bro, I'll update my notes with this.
>>56151726
I don't remember what the concept is, I just planned to breed pekomama in HJ, and likely peko too.

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>>56154557
Will you use those rabbit in heat ideas from some time ago for Pekora sex? They were so hot!

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>>56154557
If you want to do more research, I found a neat site while browsing the Sora general that has a massive amount of information about all of the holos, including likes/dislikes, family information, their dynamic with frequent collab partners, and a ton more. No doxx stuff or gossip either, only info that they've talked about themselves on stream.
Here's the article about Pekora. There's a whole section dedicated to Pekomama and everything that's been told about her thus far: https://seesaawiki.jp/hololivetv/d/%c5%c6%c5%c4%a4%da%a4%b3%a4%e9

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>>56154760
I think I might end up using that to accelerate the pekosex. Knowing me, it would be five arcs and over five countries away before Peko and Anon would decide to get nasty with each other without a clear biological push like that. Plus making it come up in the same arc, that gives me a chance to write that mother/daughter threesome. Which also on the topic, I gotta figure out a name for Pekomama like the other anon brought up. Pekomi sounds cute.

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>>56155202
This is some good stuff bro! Thank you, this will surely come in handy.

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>>56155594
It's a great place to research any holo chuuba you may be thinking of writing. I highly recommend it to all of /wg/. The articles for the newer girls are a bit more sparse for obvious reasons, but from what I've seen it gets regularly updated as new information comes in. Just make sure you have a "translate this page" tool handy.

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>>56151428
Oh neat you’re going to be writing something like that too
Guess I’ll run with the cheating option then

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So there were two takes on the concept.

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>>56107925
polpol is a cute girl

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>>56157016
You should write whichever take on it speaks to you more. Odds are super likely that my approach and buildup to the rabbit sex will pretty different from your own. It is a fantasy story after all, so there's a lot I can do with that. If you WANT to take the cheating route though, definitely go for it. I just don't want you to feel pressured to write one or the other based on what other people might be writing.

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>>56147186
>Somehow you being a boy never comes up during the application process and you/your parents never notice it's an all-girls school
>Transferring to another school is gonna take a few months due to everywhere else already being packed full and the hectic time of a new school year

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So, with 10 days left in the submission period for the writing rumble; do you think you can finish your wip in time? I probably can't.
Bonus Question : You probably had other ideas about what you wanted to write for this contest. Tell me what were they?

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>>56157659
Honestly, I was kind of vibing towards that route anyway, I just wanted to see if anons really preferred it one way or the other
(now my only personal conundrum is whether to include anal sex in a fic with the concept of ”two Pekolandians are in their heat period”

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>>56157834
I was hoping to finish a long time WIP and then write something quick for the contest. All things considered, I don't I'll finish either before the 25th lol pain peko

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>>56157834
No.
>Bonus
I tried to finish slampig Okayu but hit multiple walls
Courting and loving your deaf gf Kanata
Getting molested by Noel, you friend's older sister.

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>>56157911
>spoiler
My main question for you in regards to your conundrum is, Why not? There's a lot of ways to just get in there.
>Maybe you're just teasing the smaller peko and getting high off the power play
>Maybe older peko likes it
You can always dive into the normal hole, but what happens in the heat of the moment is all up to you and usually anything goes when someone is horny enough.

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>>56157911
I mean if you're going the cheating route why not just make Anon a scumbag that takes advantage of their heat pressures both of them into anal. With maybe an angle of" pekopapa never did this" for pekomama.

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>new kobo outfit
>my rain shaman daughter cannot possibly be this cool
I fucking LOVE when new outfits give me a mighty urge to write and flesh out a new concept and interaction. This outfit is fucking bonkers for my setting. I cannot fucking wait.

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>>56157834
I fucking hope so, otherwise I might have to turn it into the more proof-of-concept version I had in mind and I don't really want to do that.

>Bonus:
Had an idea for a fic about taking Miko to the hospital after her chronic illness flare's up in the middle of sex, and trying to keep her comfortable and happy when she has to have another extended stay. Just didn't have the drive for that idea the way I do for the one I'm working on


>>56158911
Oh that does look cool. Nice to see she's got an actual rain shaman-esque outfit now

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>>56158652
Yeah that sounds like a solid plan. Probably gonna run with “shoved it in the wrong hole by accident but it feels good so fuck it push on”
>>56158879
Definitely doesn’t fit the scenario I’ve got in mind; the /ss/ I’m going for is more of a “innocently experiencing extreme horniness for the first time” deal

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>>56157834
I'd really like to start and finish that Mio beach romance oneshot I had in mind, but my current chapter is coming along pretty slowly at the moment due to other things taking up my time. I might still give it a shot, but this month alone I did that Shiori smut side piece, so I'm at least happy that I wrote something that wasn't the next direct piece of my current series.
>>56159000
It looks great. I absolutely dig this outfit. I think I would likely introduce Kobo in her default clothes, mostly to show her immaturity as well as those fucking awesome shoes. Her getting this outfit at the end of her arc would be a pretty nice icing on the cake, since it could play into how she is a full fledged (beginner) rain shaman now after getting help from anon and the overcoming the conflicts presented in the arc.

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>>56159199
>"w-wrong hole! Peko!"
my sides are slightly leaving at the idea. Now you got me thinking who would be best to have a wrong hole situation with.

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>>56158911
Okay I can't be the only one that sees a boy here right?

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>>56130634
I appreciate that this sequel really builds on the things that were good about the original. A competent continuation up until the ending where they get paw tattoos and scream about giving up the idol grind, but don't even go to the dog park? Really?

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>>56159524
that’s for a potential third entry I may or may not write eventually one day where they get Laplus involved

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>>56158911
Welcome to the rice fields, motherfucker.

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>>56159418
>Aki gets wrong hole’d
>she reflexively clenches her anus so tight she crushes your dick

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>>56160077
I want to fuck Aki's hair portals. I don't even care where my dick might end up, I've gotta try it.

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>>56159418
Mori but (You) are a young Japanese shota that doesn't understand what the hell she's saying and she lets you finish because starts enjoying it halfway through.

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>>56159418
You already named her.

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>>56160646
Maybe at a later time, but I'm not gonna put the poor girl through surprise anal in the midst of everything else she will have going on.

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>>56160646
>huge fan of ass and ass-related activities
>Peko-chan canonically has a great ass
>CH's bonus chapter is her first time where no ass-related activities can feasibly be involved
motherfucker

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A rabbit in heat doesn't tolerate anything but vaginal until she is pregnant.

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>>56161564
>Pekora angrily demanding you put it in her pussy because all your gonna do is make her heat worse
>"ehh maybe tomorrow"

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>>56161564
>>56162003
>try to act cheeky with pekora during heat sex, threaten to deny her vaginal
>she reaches her fucking limit "If you're not gonna give me what i need, i'll just take it, peko!"
>proceeds to reverse rape you since you underestimated how strong demi-humans can become while theyre in heat
Another lesson will be learned that day.

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>>56070927
Animal chuuba making you cum your brains out and become more stupid by lovingly running her tongue over your balls and sucking on them when she has them in her moiuth.

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>>56157834
I mean fuck, I’ll try, but even if I do get it done in time it’ll probably come out a little rough since I wouldn’t have had time to step back and edit it. My free time has just been slashed to bits these past few weeks.
>Bonus
I got about 10k words into the Holox hypnosis story before realising I won’t be finishing it and jumped to a shorter idea (which still ended up snowballing a bit). I plan on continuing it, just after the contest.

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>>56159000
That Miko story sounds great. A shrine maiden’s burden made me want to pamper Miko more.

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>>56157834
I'm buckling down on my entry today and try to finish the first draft by today. i may post it here for beta reading but I'll probably wait till i revise it myself

>bonus
I had the idea of (you) living in a world where Chuuba are basically spirits that humans forge contracts with and become weapons that you channel their powers though, similar to how the swords in bleach work, but I'm far too autistic and spent too much time explaining the rules of the world instead of just writing the story, and i didn't feel as passioned about it as i hoped, i may go back to it one day but not for the contest.

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>>56163158
Yeah I might still get around to it at some point, just have a mountain of shit I'd rather churn through first. That's the fic that gave me the inspiration for it too, though this was gonna be a bit more sombre and dramatic.

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>According to a tweet from Pekora, Pekomama's name is "Christine"
That's kind of disappointingly plain and also very close to my own mother's name so I'll stick with Pekomi.

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>>56164563
I think I would feel a little strange using what could be her real name. Especially in the context that she's going to be bred hard. I'm gonna go with something made up as well.

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>>56164563
Somehow I doubt her brother's name are also Michael and Diablo, so it's probably fake

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>>56162526
PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP GET ME PEKONANT GET ME PEKONANT GET ME PEKONANT PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP PLAP

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>>56164563
>>56164782
you'd think she would come up with fake names that have "peko" somewhere in them given how much she reuses it

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>>56164563
Somebody write a fic about anon's mom Christina

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>>56164782
I presumed that too, but I usually like using whatever official material I have access to in order to make my stories more accurate, and this is what we have. It's just a pretty lame made-up name, though, so I'll deviate from that policy this time.

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>>56164837
I can't get her pregnant if I'm busy laughing about her saying "Pekonant".

[Anonymous No.]

Why is Pekomama so hot?

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>>56166396
She's a charming and comforting MILF who knows what she's doing.

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>>56166396
She's peko but BIGGER THICKER and a HAG

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>>56166829
And all the holos who are hags are defined by not having children yet. Someone has to fill the milf niche

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>>56167797
>Milf
Such a fantastic genre and we have just explored the Surface
>Two girls in college and feeling alone Mio
>Responsible Widow, mother of a spoiled kid Lui
And then imagine when we go EVEN FURTHER BEYOND
>Teen pregnancy but doing all she can Ollie
>Mother of one (sweet) infernal brat, cheated on by her husband Mori

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>>56168664
>Banging Mori then eating Kobo's cereal because she insisted CSgo was shit and looked old
Damn... that sounds fantastic

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>>56168664
>Two girls in college and feeling alone Mio
My retard brain was thinking how Mio had two children while in college until I realized the two children are Ayame and Subaru.

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>>56070927
Korone and Pekora get addicted to Street Fighter 6 so much that they believe they're getting into matches IRL with their colleagues complete with them copying moves from the game.

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>>56169894
It confuses me how people pushed these two as SF6heads(especially Korone) when they barely played and never got very good at it

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>>56170333
Korone got better than 50% of the playerbase with JP. She choked on that tournament.
Pekora tho, no idea

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>>56170333
Korone cared enough to participate in a small SF6 tourney and Pekora did an FT10 against both Botan and Korone. More than enough reason imo.

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>>56170467
Silver 5 isn't exactly making waves, anon

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>>56168835
>Getting into petty arguments with Kobo while Mori lies in bed recovering from another wild breeding session
>Telling her you'll make sure her younger siblings won't be such little shitheads

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>>56170589
you seriously underestimate how shit the average casual in SF is.
The only difference inbetween silver and gold is if you keep playing and can beat gimmicks

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>>56170966
>"KOBO! BEHAVE YOURSELF!"
>"ANON STOP MOCKING HER FROM BEHIND ME!"

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>>56171307
In a way, that's my point
If you're only good enough to beat the shitters, is it justified to really get pushed as "big real fightan gamer"?

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>>56170333
My theory is that it's Capcomshills advertising their game using chuubas.

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>>56172035
>Capcomshills advertising their game using chuubas.
Anon I hate to break it to you but SF6 does not need the help

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>>56173786
Like that would stop Capcom shilling /here/.

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>>56176202
Women her age shouldn't be dressing like that

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>>56178720
Least heterosexual man

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>>56164563
How about a compromise. Instead of Christine, she's Pekostine?

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>>56180478
Nah, that just sounds strange.
I've started writing it out and a mix of "Pekomi" and "Mrs. Usada" in dialogue has sounded really natural and fitting to me so far, so I think I've made up my mind.

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>>56180478
Pekosutina?

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>>56180478
I think I'm gonna go with Pekomi, "Pekomi Christella Usada". I figure I can add it as her middle name and give it a more regal flair to it. Gives a slight nod to the potential name while also making it so anon is shouting "Christine" when he is plowing her fat dumptruck of a bunny booty.

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>>56180783
Yeah that sounds better.
Maybe make her brothers Pekoel and Pekolo if you want it to be consistent.

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>>56157834
I should be able to finish it, unless it suddenly starts to snowball out of control.
>bonus
I had an idea of a fic that plays on the "the treasure was inside us all along/was the friends we made along the way" cliche. (You) fuck Marine to get information about her treasure box out of her, only to find out that there was no treasure box, the song lyrics were just full of euphemisms for her pussy. But then I looked into the lyrics and it turned out that there are no euphemisms, the lyrics are as blunt and straightforward as they get. Since there could not possibly be an anon dense enough to misunderstand these lyrics, I ended up dropping the idea.

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>>56181812
I think at that point you go for the double juke, and have marine point out that the treasure box is very clearly her pussy before you slap her/torture her and finally get her to break about where she buries her real treasure. It's an ancient cache of BL.

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>>56182004
This, except the torture is that you deny her orgasm and threaten her with a chastity belt.

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>>56181582
>Pekolo
And he will have a medical license.
>>56180783
I'm also liking this a little bit too. It sounds more girly and princess like, despite her being a queen for my purposes.

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>>56182131
What address are you planning to use? Denka, Her Royal Highness, Queen Usada?

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>>56182388
Queen mostly, and with that the interchangeable "your highness" whenever the appropriate people are addressing her.

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>>56182541
Is this the fic where her husband the King is dead? Does that mean Pekora's older brother is King now?

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>>56182929
The king is dead in the ground. Nah to the second question. Usada kingdom rule is structured where the queen holds all the power. As for the current state of the kingdom itself and its current rulers, you'll just have to wait to read what happens. What I got cooking might definitely turn some heads.

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>>56183336
Okay, I was just thinking that Your Highness would be inappropriate if she was the head of state as Queen. You'd use Your Majesty instead.

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>>56181482
So wait, did I just suddenly start working on a Pekomama smut fic as you were? Are we kinda stepping on each others' toes here?
I don't think you're doing /ss/ at least, so that's a difference between the two. And I think you're doing oyakodon while I'm writing 100% Pekomama lewdness? I aint used to shit like this happening, usually, nobody else is writing anything similar to what I am

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>>56184453
So there's a /ss/ fic with Pekomama, a Peko oyakodon fic and the future HJ Peko arc. Unless the latter two are the same.

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>>56184453
Welcome to the world of two cakes anon.

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ATTENTION CITIZENS OF /WG/

WE HAVE ENDURED THE HAGGOTS FOR FAR TOO LONG. THEIR BARREN PROMISES ARE ONLY MATCHED BY THE WOMBS OF THE WOMEN THEY WOO.
LOOK AROUND YOU! IMAGINE THE FERTILITY SOME ZOOMERS COULD BRING TO OUR LANDS!

WE, THE REPUBLIC OF ZOOMER BREEDING DO NOT SUGARCOAT OR DELUDE OURSELVES. TIMES WILL BE HARD, BUT THEY WILL BE BOUNTYFUL FOR YEARS TO COME.

VOTE FOR ZOOMERS AND ZOOMER SEX, WE DO NOT NEED MORE HAGS IN POWER

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>>56184453
I'm the HJ guy. The Usada arc is the one after this current one, so I won't be starting it for a little while. There's a fair amount to do still in this current arc, and a fair amount of sex. It will have oyakodon at some point if things line up as planned, but I also plan to primarily breed Pekomama on her own. That's part of what spurred the outline for the next arc: "How can I have sex with Pekomama?" and it just escalates from there usual.

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>>56185316
As a card-carrying member of the Incest Unity Party myself, I think we should seek to form a unity government with the Haglovers, as well as the other fetishes. It is so we can maintain the state's monopoly on eroticism during this time of national emergency.

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>>56070927
Holoslavia but with this fucking concept>>56185316
>>56185918

[Anonymous No.]

That's it, I'm washed up....

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>>56186001
Fortunately, anon, I just came back from a writing marathon.
No promises, but this could be a one shot parody spin-off of sorts
Editing of Operation: Nimrod will resume once I've finished my contest fic

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>>56185316
But what if I want to breed both?

[Anonymous No.]

>>56186070
Before you have your menhera breakdown and delete your fics can you at least say what your problems are?

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>>56186494
Then join the Milf Union

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>>56185496
Ok cool
I anticipate our stories are gonna end up pretty different then, you're running second person from Anon's perspective, I'm running third person from primarily Pekomama's perspective, I'm focusing on the hybrid of /ss/ and cheating, and my male lead isn't gonna be "anon" so that's plenty of difference between the two ideas
(I know I shouldn't care but that's what autism does to you)

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>>56185316
>>56185918
>>56187124
>The Zoomer Breeding Coalition
>The Incest Unity Party
>The MILF Union
So many parties running for this election; it's so hard to choose... what if I'm just a vanilla lover?

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>>56187399
i think this little....incentive...might help. Our circles are...small

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>>56187581
B-But I thought the Cunny Connoisseurs' Coalition had been outlawed...

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>>56187399
Then you need to do some strategic voting. Surely voting in those crazies in the Party for Enforced Chastity won't do any harm.

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>>56187399
Stay on the vanilla independeny path. Appreciation of women at any age range or blood relation is where true longterm love lies

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>>56187268
It's all good man. You give your fic all you got! Even though your focuses aren't very much my bag, I'll be looking forward to giving it a read and seeing what you come up with.

[Anonymous No.]

>>56187858
>t. National Virginist

[Anonymous No.]

Vote fluff. In the end, everyone comes back to fluff.

[Anonymous No.]

>>56188972
I don't

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>>56187399
All of you sheep are falling for the bait. The corpos are keeping you fighthing between yourself so you won't see the greater evil, the ones who are actually fucking your oshi
THE LESBIAN LEGION

[Anonymous No.]

Have pride in your roots! Vote ABUSE!

[Anonymous No.]

>>56188972
Fluff party rise up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>56186529
Oh I'm not deleting anything, I'm just being a bitch.

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>>56188972
Funny mogs fluff. Everyone is going to be voting funny over fluff

[Anonymous No.]

>>56188972
FLUFF SCUM I dont have that fluff vs ruff pic that gets posted in global

[Anonymous No.]

Where does nene land in this political turmoil? i just busted twice to her

[Anonymous No.]

>>56189067
The Eternal Lesbian strikes again!

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>>56190548
I think she's running with the Polygamy Anonymous Party. She had an awful lot of men with her during her last political sex rally...

[Anonymous No.]

>>56190703
>Nene holds the sex monopoly, keeping both ojisan and shounen
She's the jewish banker of the vtubing world!

[Anonymous No.]

Fantasy has become over-represented in our legislative body. They've maintained a supermajority for months and keep passing new fics nonstop without anyone to stop them.

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>>56191020
It's become a problem.
Talent Security anon passed something small and dipped, Holoslavia is finished but still SoonTM, Ninisanni 2 is still months out. We have Last Day bill, but that was a one off. Modern fiction bros, where are the bills? I voted for you, now do your job!

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>>56191852
>Be me
>Run for fiction
>Promise fics for all tastes and fetishes
>Take the (You)s and run
Sorry bucko, no refunds.

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>>56191020
>me over here working on another fantasy chapter that I hope to have done this week
And what are you gonna do to stop me?

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>>56191852
Since you are a loyal constituent, you will not have just one but TWO modern fics submitted by the end of this election cycle. I guarantee it!

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>>56193112
>more promises
Eh, I'll give you a shot. I like the cut of your jive. I saw that ad where you kissed a baby, and you even shook my hand! Take my electoral votes for life, good sir.

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>>56191852
I'm working as quickly as I can. This is a long bill. It's going to take time.

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>>56191020
>>56191852
the LITERAL rat that writes Lost and Found has failed the SoL party! i say we drag his ass and force him to keep writing

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>>56193726
Isn't he writing a chuuba themed CYOA?

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>>56193726
>>56194214
My classes started again this monday, please kind sire do not beat me just yet.
The current status of all my stuff is...frozen.
I could, theorethically, clean up "moth to a flame" and submit it to the contest, but im exhausted. Might do it this weekend

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What are you opinions on scenes that don't involve the MC in a heavily first person fic? Does it take you out of the experience?

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>>56195770
I guess it would depend on the context. If there's a clear scene transition and shift in perspective, it should work just fine and keep the experience. Personally, I don't feel like it takes me out of the experience when I do a shift every once in a while to a scene or area that Anon is not currently in. I actually enjoy when I get to write those, since it lets me get to focus on the perspective and thoughts of another within the story.

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>>56195770
Not really, there's a reason a standard web fiction staple is first person all throughout except for interludes from other characters set in third person. As long as you only ever use first person for one character it should work.

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>>56195770
I've never seen a problem with it. Sometimes it makes for necessary storytelling. Just make sure it's clear there's been a switch in perspective.

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Even amongst all these beautiful Fubuki pictures, this is the best image I have on my phone. Blessed be whomever made it.

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>>56200188
so we can all agree that shiori is more than likely /here/ in /wg/ specifically, right?

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>>56200598
I would say she's already here, anon. Breathing our air, whittling away the hours while she's on vacation by helping herself to the archive one story at a time...

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>>56200697
I wonder what her favorite fic would be...

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>>56200781

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10 days left in the contest. Can you finish your entry in time? Can I?
New thread has been baked >>56201236

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>>56201548
isn't it a little early to bake a new thread?

Aside from that, what's your progress looking like? I think i got a few pages to go till im done with the first draft.

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>>56200188
I feel like an ass every time I laugh at my own joke but "Translator's Note: keikaku means plan" makes me chuckle every time.

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>>56201859
All we can do is make this thread hit bump limit faster then

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>>56200598
She still needs to give a subtle nod. It's all I ask before I drop everything to gove a dedication fic to her

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>>56202087
it's my head canon that she's actually AA only because its tied to her kayfabe

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>>56201859
I'm being a little safe. I considered waiting until after bump limit but I want to avoid letting the bot get there first when we hit 310, since the mods will (usually) delete the newer thread. Maybe next thread we can test the waters and wait.

As for my contest entry, it's about a third of the way done. University and a new game I've been trying out has sucked up all my time. At this rate it's not on track to being finished by the 25th, so I'll have to change something up...

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>>56202617
fuck, there's STILL a fucking thread bot?

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>>56202761
I don't know. It hasn't turned up since we took back control of the threads, so I'm leaning towards going back to making threads once the old one falls off as we did two years ago.

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>>56202617
ooh, makes sense
best of luck to you anon, admittedly I'm starting to get cold feet, but I'm going to try to work through it

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>>56202863
I mean the thread before last was made on like page 9 after BL so I think we're okay

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>>56203070
You mean this one or the Nene one?

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>>56203261
The one before the Nene thread, the Bae one and I know it was because I made it high outta my fucking mind which is why I fucked the name up

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>>56130634
I'm really glad that you finished this, I had quietly accepted that it wasn't getting a sequel.
You did an excellent job, I especially liked the last part with Towa trapped between the three, it really captured the no going back from this for Towa

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>>56201548
Honestly I probably can't make it with the nsfw wip I have but I want to give it shot and see if I can make it.
>>56202761
Anon there has always been a schizo that tries to take control of the thread opening post then camps in the thread to shit it up and gaslight everyone else into thinking it's not happening. I used to think the other anons were overexagerating but archive diving really makes the trend obvious. The only thing I'm not convinced is if it's the same guy all the time.

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I thought it was called the Hag Lover's Association...