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how would you improve the design

>> No.560988

>>560678
Make her naked

>> No.561067

>>560678
make her a mahou shoujo thats 10 years too old and barely fits into her uniform

that might be overlapping too much with marine's character tho

>> No.561069

>>560678
More kamen rider!
also they need to graduate the talent

>> No.561099

>>560678
Remove the two hats
give her something else that is not a fast food restaurant uniform

would improve her immensely

>> No.561105

>>560678
More hats, just to fuck with anons like >>561099

>> No.561239

Different uniform maybe? I'm not really a fan of the skirt and sleeves. I love watching her though, shes fun

>> No.561314

Just take away the chef hat and focus on the beret.

>> No.561321

>>560678
I agree with >>561105 pretty much. I don't understand the fast food meme besides le epic American joke. They should have kept to the myth design and perhaps given her a nice, feathery dress to really dig into the phoenix theme.

>> No.561336

Remove the white hat. Keep the red one but adjust size/angle a bit since there's no need to make room for the other one.
Change the color of either the earrings or her hair so they don't blend into each other.
Make the detached sleeves sleek instead of baggy.
Make the top of the socks straight instead of that bumpy shape to enhance the zettai ryouiki effect. Making the thighs a bit ticker also wouldn't hurt.
Get rid of the sword, shield and belt buckle since she never references those items and even said on stream she doesn't care about tokusatsu. Save that theme for another talent that's actually willing to work with it.

>> No.561368

More hats!
They make zero sense that's why Kiara does it.

>> No.561381

>>561336
>earrings
They're not

>> No.561418

ketchup

>> No.561434

more meat
less clothes

>> No.561692 [SPOILER] 
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561692

Do people really not know, that the two hats are supposed to invoke the image of a chickens legs and thigh?
The white head is is like those paper chef hats on turkey legs

>> No.561722 [DELETED] 

>>560988
>her
>>561067
>her
>>561099
>her
>>561239
>her
>>561321
>her

>> No.561877

>>561722
yes...?

>> No.561952

>>561722
>He's doing this every thread

Take your meds schizo

>> No.562007
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562007

>>560678
Jalter color scheme. Make the turkey legs raw and bloody.

>> No.562164

>>562007
>Jalter
Go back to /r/eddit

>> No.562239

I'm not saying it's a great design but it's pretty pretentious to say you can improve on something huke made.

>> No.562247

>>562164
>Go back to /r/eddit
no

>> No.562381

Can't improve perfection

>> No.562445

>>562239
Everyone can use some outside perspective every once in a while.

>> No.563045

>>562164
Jeanne d'Arc La Pucelle d'Orléans Alter version
happy?

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563318

>>561692

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