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[/wg/ - Writing General - Contest Edition VIII No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble, a writing contest for the whole board to get involved in. The info page & contest archive can be found here: rentry.org/WGWC

Check the main archive below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!
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"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>55643001 (where there was some talk of sharing a freshly shorn Watame, an Advent smut fic, and spanking Ayame!)
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This OP was baked by an author who will likely kill himself if he doesn't finish his contest entry on time.

[/wg/ - Writing General - Contest Edition VIII No.]

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[/wg/ - Writing General - Contest Edition VIII No.]

STORY RECAP!

There was one fic posted last thread-

>>55725778
House of Leaves - Tags: NSFW, Koseki Bijou, Nerissa Ravencroft, Shiori Novella, cunnilingus

[/wg/ - Writing General - Contest Edition VIII No.]

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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[Anonymous No.]

>>55794920
Oh beautiful, a new thread. Thank you, OP.

[Anonymous No.]

What a trash thread. Kill yourself immediately.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55794920
Proof that the thread was human-made, I guess

[Anonymous No.]

Lol he baked it funny

[Anonymous No.]

Well at least we have it. Also Bae lookin' good.

[Anonymous No.]

Hello?

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>>55800130
I'm at work, anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>55800130
*cums on you*

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>>55795357
>(You) are the new flight commander for the JASDF. Because of rising tensions between Japan and its neighbors, the government has decided to expand the country's air defense capabilities by recruiting specially-trained personnel.
>That's why Cover Corp. has volunteered its chuubas to be trained by you into becoming specialized multi-role fighter pilots.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55800623
>final battle has (You) and (You)r squadron fly Zeros after all the jets are hacked.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55800792
>You and your chuuba squadron are standing on the airfield, preparing to ride your metal coffins.
>Subaru's eyes swell with tears as she's scribbling her farewell letter to Ui.
>The brass has decided to give Pekora all the carrots she could eat.
>Marine requested if she could have a hot air force stud the night before, but was denied, so she mostly sulks.
>A-Chan is pouring sake into the little cups each one of you is holding in your hands.
>Fubuki drinks her shot and smashes the cup into the tarmac.
>"BANZAI!"

[Anonymous No.]

>>55795357
I am once again humbly requesting Korone being swallowed whole by a giant monitor lizard and having her flesh slowly melted away from her bones.

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>>55800130
I gently stroke your neck, with one hand, the other slipping underneath the sheets. "My, you really are excited, aren't you?" I remark with a chuckle, toying with you. A hot breath escapes my lips as I lean in to kiss your sensitive neck, and I see you blush. "Ahhh, Anon, you're so cute!" Slips out in a whisper before my lips come in contact with you.

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>>55801614
Shut up Shiori.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55801614
looks like pekofag's back

[Anonymous No.]

>>55801614
>>55801656
>>55801668
Shit, I meant "Hi, anon!". Fuckin' autocorrect.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55801656
>>55801668
Aren't those the same person

[Anonymous No.]

>Shiori was pekofag that whole time

What a world

[Anonymous No.]

>>55801847
>Shiori is Brazillian
No...

[Anonymous No.]

>>55800130
Is it me you're looking for?

[Anonymous No.]

y we so ded tho

[Anonymous No.]

>>55804740
It's early morning, anon, Jesus
If it's worth anything, I'm gonna write more of my fic
>>55802558
The rrat is that she's Latino-Filipino so make that of what you will

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>>55804797
you ain't writin shit son

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>>55804818
I beg to differ, anon. Writing this thing's been killing me but I'll finish it before the 25th.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55804887
nah you wont

[Anonymous No.]

>>55804949
Alrighty then

[Anonymous No.]

>>55804818
One day Mio woke up and decided to take a shit because, hey, she's Mio. So, she walked up to Shion and said "Shion, I want you to be my shitter." and since Shion was Mio's bitch she opened her mouth. Mio pulled down her stained granny panties and began to shit in Shions's mouth. Shion was forbidden to express any emotions but at this moment she was feeling very aroused. Mio's face turned red as she grunted and strained to push her log of shit out of her ass. She farted and little shit particles flew into Shion's eyes. Shion's eyes teared up, not from the pain of the shit particles nor from the paint-peeling stench coming from Mio's unwashed ass, but from the sheer ecstasy of being Mio's shitter. Mio noticed this and began to grunt harder, teasing the horny witch. Mio also noticed that Shion was fiddling around with her loli-cunny, which had become quite wet. "Stop that this instant!" commanded Mio, noticing her own 2" clit was growing hard as well. Shion whined and reluctantly lowered her hands. With a final grunt and a smelly fart, Mio's log of shit finally dropped from her ass into Shions's mouth. Mio turned around and watched as Shion chewed the shit log. "Eat it bitch. Eat it all." Commanded Mio. Shion pretended she hated doing this so much but her dripping cunny and moans of joy told Mio otherwise. "Swallow it." ordered Mio, but Shion didn't want to swallow it yet. She wanted to savor the shit. "SWALLOW IT RIGHT NOW" screamed Mio as she began clir-slapping Shion across the face. Mio, hands on her hips, thrust her pelvis from side to side across Shion's face, punishing the kusogaki witch. "YOU DO WHAT MIO TELLS YOU" she screamed. After about fourty clit-slaps her clit started to become sore so she stopped. By now the shit log had gone down Shion's throat.

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>>55805203

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>>55805203
>>55795049

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>>55805292
DO NOT CATALOG THAT, it is a 1:1 retool of a Mario Scatfic

https://m.fanfiction.net/s/10266404/1/One-Day-Mario-Woke-Up

I plagiarized it for a meme. I will not be doing any more, so don't catalog it.

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>>55805405
so you didn't write shit

[Anonymous No.]

>>55805790
Where's yours?

[Anonymous No.]

>>55805863
busy fuckin ur mom

[Anonymous No.]

>>55805926
>Yo momma joke
This you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>55805965
nah that's ur dad n this is u

[Anonymous No.]

>>55795049
>>55795138
Thug Hunter

Tags: Botan, NePoLaBo, SFW, western, comedy

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQgoxanbsfwM7SXISd84mubPB_DMEX3lDRfeclABMANp6sxUHM59N62INKKGSp6aMTiTlyz340ZhNdv/pub

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>>55806301
Funny as hell. Was smiling the entire way through.
My favorite part, made me laugh out loud
>“That seat is taken,” the lion informs me, “My friend is sitting here.”
>I quickly get up, “S-sorry."

In terms of writing, the pacing and the line-by-line progression were good. I'd advise working on vocabulary since it'll push you over the edge.

I do love these comedy fics

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>>55808440
I badly want this witch/
to make me her bitch.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55808440
I can't do anything but imagine her sucking down Mio's logs now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55806301
Honest first impression. You need to work on your first person narration and monologue. The pace of it at the start just feels way too slow and pondering, especially for a comedy fic.
Still it does get way better once you actually get the characters to bounce off of each other. Even then it doesn't really come together as more than a series of jokes strung together by the plot. I feel like this is missing a big punchkine to tie it all together, so instead all the jokes feel like light jabs building up to nothing.

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>>55808440
What is life like being Shion's prisoner?

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>>55809604
She ties you up against the wall, feeds you aphrodisiac and then puts a small portal on the wall right in front of your dick, but you can't tell what you'd be fucking if you put your cock in.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55795049
HoloJourneys The Parallel Pages: Advent’s Archiver

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRKRGrrG55PGdIL3_OTozIHsavYod7I8zstOr15_QU5eeNEWKL_T4IoyTbyJD-5UIJ3fYC5LKJGQ45m/pub

Tags: Shiori, NSFW

So the idea of Shiori narrating her own smut would not get the hell out of my head, so I had to write my own take on it.
The "Parallel Pages" title is likely a bucket for the series that will include side stories that are either supplementing the world, or just something close to an offshoot that I wanted to write but would be considered canon.
There are very minor HJ spoilers inside, but nothing you probably couldn't already discern from the tags within the series, titles, and arc synopses.
Anyway hope you enjoy this quick little thing I drummed up out of inspiration and impulse. I'm always happy to look at feedback as well.

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>>55806301
Holy fuck AnonHumphrey is pathetic. This was a good comedy. There weren't any gut-busting jokes but it kept a smile on my face throughout the whole thing. Your dialogue worked well for the type of story, and the prose achieved what it needed to.

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>>55806301
I had a few good chuckles. Anon getting self-conscious about his hat and lighting his notes on fire in front of everyone out of embarrassment were probably my favorite parts

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>>55808440
I'm going to correct this fucking brat... tempting adult like that... she's asking for it...

[Anonymous No.]

>>55810192
I really enjoy how fruitful your interaction with the thread is!
Shiori masturbating is really hot - though it can't match the same situation except with Anon actually there, of course.

[Anonymous No.]

How many words are you planning on writing today anon?

[Anonymous No.]

>>55812370
I'm going to pop a ritalin when I wake up and spend the whole day in front of the doc. shooting for 1k at least, hopefully more

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>>55812370
Well I was planning to write a lot then I got distracted with bullshit so

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>>55812370
I think I'm deleting more than writing today, but that's also progress.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55812564
Hate how life gets in the way with its inane bullshit

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>>55812802
it was less life getting in the way and more me deciding "I'll just play one more hour of Bulder's Gate 3" and that one hour become like six.

I certainly thought of what I'm going to write. Briefly.

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>>55812978
Playing Baldur's Gate 3 is decently close to creating a story, at least - far more than with most video game RPGs. And I'm saying that as one of the fa/tg/uys who hates DnD.

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>>55812370
Gonna shoot for 3-4k today. I got some yard work to do, but I should have enough time in between to make some decent progress. I'm in the middle of an action scene right now, and things tend to cruise pretty smoothly from there.

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>>55811786
I enjoy how much the thread inspires me!
There is nothing like a good schlicking session every now and then. While it can't hold a candle to the interaction actually taking place, everything has to start somewhere. I'd love to make it happen in actuality someday, but it'll take time to get there.

[Anonymous No.]

Thanks to that Anon who engaged with the Futa bijou discussion, this is finally going somewhere.
Thanks a bunch and have a wip

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>>55809920
I'm not sure I enjoy the thought of not being able to tell who it is I am fucking. I'm fine with it as long as the person on the other end isn't Marine, Botan, Ame or Mori

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>>55814412
I think half the time it'd be some kind of prank that makes Shion and her friends laugh at you. Like orgasm denial, or having your dick pulled and pinched.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55814347
>referencing my favorite shiori pic
you are okay futafag

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>>55814347
Ah, HomieJournals. My favourite series.

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>>55814510
Orgasm denial can't be as bad as having my dick pinched over and over. I hardly jerk off as it is so being denied the right to cum when I'm at my limit shouldn't be too bad. I'm sure it'd drive me near insane though the more its done over time and the cum builds up and its just waiting to explode.

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>>55809920
Shion offering you relief and comfort in exchange for you embarrassing and demeaning yourself does sound like something she'd do. She won't give you water for two days, and then do her bratty giggle and taunt you while you drink out of a bowl like a dog.

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>>55812370
This is all I got so far, plus the five pages I wrote that are going to have to be reserved for the kickoff of the final arc.

This chapter is going to be fun. Going to try to do a little mini horror story.

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>>55814347
That reference. Did you just? Regardless, I'm glad the discussion helped you out! The dialogue you got going so far is making me chuckle. You are really painting a clear picture for Shiori's high standard for smut. I'm not even into futa, but I'll definitely be giving this a read when you're done.

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[Anonymous No.]

these threads have gotten a lot comfier since the coup

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>>55806301
This was an an enjoyable read. I'll echo what another anon said about the first person narration feeling a little clunky here and there. Some of anon's thoughts just kinda trail off awkwardly without the need for a sudden introspection or internal monologue. Once the characters got rolling though, your dialogue really shines. Nene, Lamy, and Polka's contributions were great. I think you should have built a little more off the banter in the end instead of that bit about the sunset though, that would have lead to a stronger punchline or since this is a comedy, do a bit about how maybe anon is in the wrong line of work, or even about how he should switch to hag hunting instead.

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>>55825574
>the brat who gets corrected every night
>the slut who found love
>the girl who was cucked to death

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>>55825713
Together, they're Manjigumi!

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>>55825872
I miss 卍組 so much...

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>>55825574
Despite having a majorly fat and slappable ass, I'm not sure how I would ever work a part where I plow the socially inept maid. Which is a shame since I'd really wanna pound that butt.

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>>55826363
She's been getting increasingly distracted at work, zoning out and fantasizing. Her master grows concerned and, knowing your reputation, enlists (You) to give her a good fucking so she can get it out of her system and focus on her work again

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>>55826363
What if she was Shiori's maid?

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>>55826814
I'd be a little concerned how I established a reputation for fucking, and how said fucking somehow fixes work ethic. I'd have several questions for WHY I was being enlisted.
>>55826887
I'm not sure how that would even happen, but ya know what? I'll bite on this. Tell me more.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55827941
>how I established a reputation for fucking
Having an entire harem of breeded hags may have contributed somewhat

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>>55807167
>>55809459
>>55810335
>>55810763
>>55824096
Thank you all for reading and for the feedback.

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>>55827941
It was just a spontaneous idea. But maybe Aqua got a bit weird/messed up by serving Shiori, and then Aqua totally fails the part she was supposed to play in Shiori's "Conquering Anon's Cock" master plan, which leads her to being captured by Anon and his harem. But after the wiser hags spent a bit of time with Aqua, they convince Anon to take her with them because she is harmless and well-meaning at heart - she just needs companionship, and being around people that do not obsess about stories and narrate their own lives all day.

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>>55828100
Yo that's private! You don't just walk up to a man who has a gang of hot older women at his back and get to say out in the open that he's fucking them all.
>>55828873
I've actually had an exchange in my head that's more of a comedic introduction to dumpy maid.
>Anon! I found a cabin-girl for the ship! She'll do all the stuff I've been making you do, but with less bitching
>Oh great, I can finally takes some nights off cooking then
>She can't cook
>Then she cleans
>No
>Organizes the supply closet
>Nuh uh
>What the hell does she do?
>Eat and look cute
>I fucking hate you marine
>Hey! What did we talk about!?
>I fucking hate you Captain Marine
I hadn't really considered the idea that other chuubas would be involved with Advent like that though. It might be an interesting avenue to explore. I've had a few in mind that HoloX will have dealings with and use in their own ways, but not advent yet. Aqua might be a decent hire for them when I think about it more.

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>>55795357
Going over to your girlfriend Fuwawa's home, both of you really, really want to fuck but her parents are turbo strict. So, she tells you to sneak into her room in like 10 minutes.
You do, and have sex in the dark with her in the dark. After that her mother calls you, you go out, and some time passes before you see Fuwawa again. After that she leads you to the room herself.
Turns out, you accidentally fucked Morocco.

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>>55829182
I wasn't really thinking of connections between groups or such things, to be honest. Just an angle where Aqua joins the harem because she needs to be saved, because going after her for other reasons feels a bit predatory if she's going to be useless and dumb.

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>>55829236
This seems hard to make believable. Considering their bust size difference, you'd need to avoid touching Mococo's tits to still confuse her with Fuwawa. Maybe if you did her doggy sty-ooohhh...

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>>55829749
NOW you're thinking!

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>>55829236
>>55829749
>>55829945
>Missing the extremely easy joke of being invited by fuwawa, sneaking into mococos bed but fucking perochino

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>>55830715

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>>55830715
You'd know in about two milliseconds if you touched that FAT FUCK case he'd let you know

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>>55829595
I actually thought of a slightly better way to bring her into things through another character. I might workshop a little and see how I like the look of it.

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>>55828873
So does that mean Aqua doesn't get the dicking she needs and becomes your daughter instead?

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>>55831217
It would be cute if Aqua autistically watched Anon breed some hags without really understanding it beyond them having a good time, and eventually asked for it being her turn all innocent-like.

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>>55831371
No, she's well into adulthood after all. She just needs to catch up in her maturity by being around older women.

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>>55831474
She's never getting the dick then. The hags will all fuss over her and spoil her rotten and they will forbid you for laying a hand on their "daughter".

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>>55831541
Have we been reading the same chapters and posts?

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>>55831576
I've been reading >>55828873 so I assume Aqua is not getting the dick?

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>>55831635
Sounds like you have a lot of HJ and archive reps to catch up on. Let's talk again afterwards!

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>>55831700
I'll save you the hassle and say outright that I haven't read that fic at all. Not because of the chance Marine is in it, but I just genuinely cannot read.
So feel free to disregard everything I said, okay?

[Anonymous No.]

>marine hears about a really hot BL book from Noel or whoever else is into that
>"you gotta see it, it's super hot. Also it's magical, if you shlick to it, the shotas come ro life and bang you all night!
>marine goes to shiori about it
>"i'm sorry, senchou. You can't have it?"
>"wtf why!"
>"it's over a year overdue"
>"who has it?"
>"let me check... Ayame-senpai"
Marine never gets any because of rrat!Ayame's origin story

[Anonymous No.]

>>55830782
I will fuck your protege and not you you fat bitch

[Anonymous No.]

>>55830782
>>55830715
BAU BAU BAU BAU BAU

[Anonymous No.]

>>55832503
Nice butt. Bet it smells good too, proper doggy style requires sniffing it thoroughly

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>>55831376
Is someone selling tickets to Anon's nightly breeding shows and not telling him? How are people always watching him make love?
Inb4 it's Pomu.
>>55831371
I haven't thought of a real daughterfu character yet. It's something I certainly want. It will likely just manifest itself naturally though at some point. And the hag gang would like also do >>55831541 except they won't try to save her purity, they might encourage the opposite.

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>>55832827
what if the daughter was ayame

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>>55832935
what if the therapist was ayame

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>>55832827
What about Laplus? She needs someone to raise her alongside Lui after the whole conquering the world thing falls through.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55834018
That's gonna be an awkward conversation when (You) are the reason that plan falls through in the first place. That said though, I do have a more innocent meeting with the demon herself planned at some point.
>>55832935
I got slightly different plans for the oni.

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>>55834437
You have to convince Lui that letting Laplus indulge in these domination fantasies just isn't healthy for her or the world, and that it's best when you guide her into a simple daughter life (simple until Anon's first wave of self-baked children arrives, that is).

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>>55834910
having to help babysit the many children might actually help la+ become more mature.

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>>55835928
Or make her want to take over the world again.
Or use the hybrid children of seasoned adventurers to try again.
>Inb4 most of the kids like to play pretend with La+ where they constantly gang up on her and try to reenact how their dad and moms defeated her like in the stories they get told

[Anonymous No.]

>>55836730
>Or use the hybrid children of seasoned adventurers to try again.
What is this, Fire Emblem Awakening?

[Anonymous No.]

>>55836816
Yes

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>>55836730
She'll make due with ruling over her siblings and room after receiving thorough daughter correction. I believe in Anon's&The Hag's parenting powers

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>>55832827
>I haven't thought of a real daughterfu character yet.
Kobo!

[Anonymous No.]

>>55838889
>Rain shaman
>deep connection to water
>has cool shoes that let her walk on water that anon can be jealous of
>has cool hair
>is generally cute and sassy "NOOOOOOOOO that is not how you make rain. R U stoopid!? *rain shaman gibberish*"
Oh good. Why that's very good. Yes, I like that!

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>>55689206
>>55711072
Seggs is here. https://files.catbox.moe/vsf9hg.png
>>55775350
>>55776004
>>55777124
>>55781126
Also this was pretty hot too nora. For some reason the prompts here are consistently hotter than the ones I've seen in any drawthreads I've been which is whack https://files.catbox.moe/z4s6oc.png

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>>55840038
I am disgusted.

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>>55840038
jesus christ yes
I usually don't like them this big but something about the way you do it
good shit drawanon

[Anonymous No.]

>>55840038
You are a god.
If I kneel any harder I will physically phase through my floor
Could we get something fluffy? Post sex snuggling with fatto catto?

[Anonymous No.]

>>55839436
Does Kobo ever play into her being a rain shaman?

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>>55842196
I remember a few distinct times that she does. Nothing too substantial, but the typical "oh yes I am the thing." I could be wrong, but I haven't watched a ton of kobo.

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>>55812370
Time for another thousand.

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>>55840038
It's kind of the natural way for prompts to get picked. Having an interesting angle or hot idea is pretty much the only way it'll get picked. Especially with how this thread's culture has gone away from prompt repostings due to schizo shit from a couple years back.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55840038
I love a full moon....

[Anonymous No.]

Has any fic from /wg/ introduced you to the appeal of a new fetish? I didn't care much about lactation/pregnancy stuff until I read PD, PT

[Anonymous No.]

>>55795357
A fic in which you cuck Okayu. The fic must be named Nekorare.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55846145
Would Okayu even react to being cucked? If she saw you were doing your best at plowing Sora or Miko, she might just say that's alright. You might as well just put her in the cuckshed with a fresh supply of snacks.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55847760
>"you're still gonna bang me later though, right?" Okayu said, looking as smug as ever
What's gonna be anon? Are you gonna stuff that shit eating grin with your cock again or will you pronebone every other holo instead?

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>>55795357
This scenario please >>55839709

[Anonymous No.]

>>55849694
I'll do both just to spite her, which also.
>Make a note to include spiteful sex at some point
Don't know who, where, when, or why, but that might be fun to write.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55850390
>"well, as long as i get mine i don't mind"
>is this bitch ever not smug

[Anonymous No.]

>>55849694
Intentionally denying a formerly smug Okayu sex sounds immensely satisfying. Watching her confidence that you'll eventually break and dick her down fade day by day as you drown in her friend's pussies, giving way to a submissive penchant for masturbating at your direction. Soon she's begging you for videos of you plowing other girls and getting fits of nervous, masochistic ecstasy when she's alone at home imagining what you're out doing.

[Anonymous No.]

Calling all bros from >>55812370
How are you doing so far today? I'm almost at 3k.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55853780
I'm almost at 3k words for a chapter that's been untouched since last year. Finally managed to write myself out of a corner so i'll take it as a win.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55853780
More than a thousand words. Writing physical intimacy is hard, but enjoyable.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55845473
Sweat is now incredibly hot to me thanks to Run.

[Anonymous No.]

>>55856459
That's awesome to hear dude! You busted out of that corner and you're well on you're way, keep going!
>>55857843
The fun is where it's at. Even the toughest scenes are more than worth it when it's enjoyable to write. keep at it.

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>>55843076
Well whatever it is, it certainly works wonders. Every time I come here I wonder why I don't browse this place more often when I can get total gems like the fuwamoco backseating sex greentexts when I check this place out. I definitely need to come here more often- there's some neat stories here that could be really hot prompts for sketches, and I can definitely use a lot more practice with some stuff that's outside my typical line of work. I came for the architecture but I'm also fucked up and wanna draw a lot of other things.
I should be a lot freer to draw some stuff this weekend, so if you guys don't mind my drawfagging I've got some more gas in the tank. I should also get over my embarrassment over writing fanfics eventually so my posting here can actually be justified

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>>55859494
Thank you, Watamelon.

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>>55859973
>Spoiler
You don't have to write to feel like you can post here. There are a ton of regular readers and posters in that regard. That said though, whenever you do want to hop on that saddle and write something for yourself, you can always ask around for any pointers, feedback, or just general idea bouncing. As a drawfriend you might have an innate consciousness of visual detail that you can transfer into your words.

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>>55812370
I want to get at least five hundred. It would be way more if I could work on my longer WIPs, but I'm tryng to finish my contest entry.

[Anonymous No.]

>3k words into a story
>Think of an amazing idea that would make it twice as good
>Will require rewriting the whole thing

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>>55853780
Just got up and the inspiration is flowing strong, so I'm hoping it'll be a lot

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>>55840038
There's a lot of competition for prompts to be among the few to be picked up by a writer or to at least receive the discussion/greentext treatment.
Accordingly, low quality prompts quickly go under and it's the high quality ones get refined and elaborated on.
In the end this is a thread for writers, would be embarrassing if it couldn't outwrite drawthreads in the prompt writing department!

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>>55840038
>>55871555
There's some good stuff that shows up in /vt/ drawthread, problem is with the way this fucking board is, thread has to constantly stay bumped somehow. /wg/ gets to discuss prompts and writing to stay alive, but drawthread barely has anything to discuss, so it has to rely on weak prompts as bump filler, and even then it still gets a bunch of empty bumps. It's a fuckin rough life in there.

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Hate to ask this question again but I just want to make sure I'm doing this right. Spoiler is for Balsa.

Am I over explaining here? This is the rough draft so I am going to add more flavor and action when I go through it again, I just want to know if this is isn't too much. Later in this chapter there will be a lot more demonstration than speaking as well but for it to work I need to lay the groundwork.

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>>55872108
For me, I think it's okay. As a rule of thumb, as long as it would make sense for the character making the infodump to actually make infodumps in the first place, then it's all good.
Of course, the explanation should have a payoff of sorts later in the story. Then again there are stories that do infodumps just for the sake of it. It depends on the execution.

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>>55872516
it definitely will. Like I said, later in the chapter all of this information is going to be demonstrated but it won't make a lot of sense unless the reader knows all this stuff. I just want to make sure I'm not expositing too much.

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>>55859973
Will you write and illustrate our first Light Novel?

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>>55795357
Reine x Lamy friends-to-lovers featuring sheltered rich girl lesbian sex

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>>55876415
Lord why do I love this troublesome woman so much

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>>55877014
The best thing about Wamy is the gap moe. Sure, she might be a sake loving, troublesome ojou-sama, but she's also a goofball. Ironically, I think Polka might be the least goofy member of that gen...

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>>55873956
What would be rich girl about it? I guess they could put on fancy lingerie and try to behave ladylike in their luxurious bedroom. Maybe some expensive toys?

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>>55878809
Considering how rich people (like Reine) love trying out some... sophisticated things, probably using some exotic sex toys, renting out fancy accommodations, accompanied by their personal attendants and servants, or even hiring some 'experts' who provide 'niche services'.

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>>55880292
>or even hiring some 'experts' who provide 'niche services'.
Like... a fly?

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>>55810192
Man, I really need to catch up to holojourneys. Your prose has genuinely gotten way better compared to when I dropped it. (I think it was in the middle of the first arc)
Anyway this was pretty hot take on the Shiori narrating while she gets fucked concept. I think I'm taking the plunge and going to try and catch up to this series now.
Also spotted a typo
>Shiroi

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>>55880622
>Reine and Lamy's families agree to fund a bio-research lab
>Somehow and for whatever reason, manages to produce a human-sized fly with a phallic ovipositor
>Fly also emits an aphrodisiac musk
>Reine and Lamy happen to be touring the facility
>Sniff.webm
>Either of them trying to come up with excuses and attempting to goad the other to try monster fly cock-vipositor
>unauthorized an unprotected /d/ sex

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>>55873956
>>55880292
What if they were so sheltered and raised on traditional ideas of what sex is that they think "lesbian sex" is two women making out while having sex with a man?

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>>55880855
>the same bio-lab focuses its research on mutagenic mushroom samples that show significant promise for galvanizing the human digestive system
>reine shows particular interest in its applications as a weight-loss aid and funnels enormous amounts of funding into the project
>with boundless eagerness, wants to be a patient for clinical trials
>lamy tells her it's unwise and there are plenty of bums who'd be willing to risk their lives for pay but reine's interest and faith are steadfast
>eats mushroom derivatives
>digestive system goes into overdrive, melting, processing and repurposing nutrients into mostly usable byproducts
>mostly
>waste starts building at incredible speeds
>within minutes, reine's packed full of fudge
>lamy realizes what she needs to do
>kneels down and opens wide as reine begins shitting into her mouth and crying

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>>55880855
>>55881365
So this is the plot of 'Shrunken Troubles 3: Big Fly, Big Troubles' right?

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>>55839436
No offense but how many vtubers are you planning to include in your series? 60?

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>>55882714
No, Shrunken Troubles 3 was that Shiori outline from a week or so ago.

I like "Buzzed and Bothered" better. Don't get me wrong, though, "Big Fly, Big Troubles" is fantastic too, but it just doesn't roll off the tongue the same way.

Keyword being 'was', mind. I have no clue what Pekoanon is doing but whatever it is, it doesn't seem to be his commissions.

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>>55882876
Sooo... what was Shrunken Troubles 2?

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>>55882898
Shrunken Blessings. That was released... 5 months ago, I think. It's not in the archive anymore.

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>>55882898
The friends we made along the way

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>>55882966
>Shrunken Blessings really was the sequel
After a quick dose of Google fu, I was able to find it. I'll give it a read after I get some work done.
>>55883016
>this is the moral lesson the Fly learns at the very end of his journey

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>>55882966
Genuinely forgot that was a thing that got released. Man, I kinda see why he left and took his fics off the archive if he was getting his fics ignored like that.

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>>55883690
He said himself that he only cares about the opnion of his commissioner. On top of everything else, of course he'd get his fics ignored by saying shit like that.

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>>55883690
It'd be a hard thing for even the most well-defended mental fortresses to accept all their work being ignored time and time again.

>>55883851
Yeah... that was definitely a lie.

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>>55885929
For some reason I'm imagining Fubuki doing this exact pose in order to look big and scare off a larger animal.

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>>55886434
Ahh, yes. The terrifying Peeping Tom, bane of young female skinny dippers everywhere.

[Anonymous No.]

https://youtu.be/m4QO5jyEw2E
everybody should watch this

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>>55886779
That sounds like a scene in a comedy fic where they start posing to look big and the Peeping Tom skitters off like a wild animal

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>>55883851
You're being willfully malicious at this point repeatedly trying to push this narrative. The dude cared about constructive criticism just as much as the next guy - why do you think he had his fit and left? You, personally, were probably at least 30% responsible by giving those disclaimers not to read his content whenever he released for the last few times. Kill yourself.

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>>55887880
Seconding this, never found the instant dismissal funny when he dropped a 10k+ fic even if he used to be a shitposter

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>>55887295
This is a very well made and informative video, but I fail to see how it relates to the topic(s) this thread covers.

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>>55887952
it doesnt, i was just hoping youd get mad

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>>55883870
Take your pity party elsewhere, he was a cunt to other anons and truly didnt care about anything except his comission.
He started getting ignored because he agressively shilled his comission even when someone else posted a story and because he didnt care about any feedback

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>>55887397
The twist is that the HoloCanines chase him down and start eating him.

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>>55888038
NTA, but it'd be best if you were a bit less harsh and sweeping with your claims before you're perceived as shitposting. He did, constructively, take part in discussions about his fics sometimes.

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>>55887880
What the hell are the voices in your head telling you? I never told anyone to not read his stories, I don't give enough of a shit to do that. While you're correct in saying that he did care about what people thought of his works, I'm saying that he claimed the opposite, regardless of the truth. Back when he released that Suisei story that apparently had poor characterization, he said something along the lines of not being upset about the general audience feedback, but only about his commissioner's feedback.
>You, personally, were probably at least 30% responsible
This reads like a reddit post. Where the hell did you pull this statistic from? I want to make it clear that I don't give a shit about pekofag. I don't hate him, nor do I like him. He was annoying two years ago, but calmed down enough to the point where I don't mind his occasional cringey shill. I'm simply laying out the facts on why people didn't like him or his stories.

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>>55887880
If the dismissal was 30% of why he left then the other 70% is on him releasing big mediocre fics no one cared enough to even give pity replies to.
We can argue all we want about whether he deserved having haters for all of his dumb shit antics, but it's on him that he was only releasing/making big commision smut fics no one cared about enough that he had to beg for more replies and thoughts on it.

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>repeatedly shit on a guy over and over again because he once said he cared more about the opinion of the guy paying him than anyone else
>"i don't give a shit about pekofag!!!!"

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>>55888344
The only legitimate criticism here. His smut fics were really hit and miss.

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>>55888412
Which was a hit for you? They were all misses for me, thinking about it

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>>55888281
>I never told anyone to not read his stories
Someone was unironically doing this, probably for the last 10 or so stories he released. It was always one of the first two or three replies, even when he didn't immediately sign his work or "attentionwhore" as you'd probably put it, and then the thread would always devolve into meta-shitposting without even a hint of discussion about the fic. The reality constructed in your head simply doesn't match fact. Even if it did at one point, he was making a clear, concerted effort to improve and people like (You) refused to acknowledge it on some petty basis that every word out of his mouth somehow had an ulterior motive to it.
>>55888344
They were often underwhelming, but not so much as to get completely swept under the rug like they were. You can't deny it was mostly external interference putting people off of them. That bullshit number I came up with was just the single "Don't read this, it's Pekofag" guy, but there were three or four people that weren't much better popping out of the woodworks right alongside him to derail the thread every time

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>>55888387
If you have something to say, reply to my post. I'll ask again, what are the voices in your head telling you? I never read any of his stories, which meant I never shat on any of his works either. The only time I gave him shit was two years ago when he was doing his split personality roleplay and making the thread unusable. Beyond that, I've ignored him. If all you can do is scream about how I made him leave and tell me to kill myself without addressing what I have to say, you're not making a very convincing case.

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>>55888344
Nah it was 100% his shtick.
The guy who links to his site and that wrote a bunch of 2views indies never got any flack because he admitted he was in for the money.
He delivered, posted and peaced out if no one wanted to discuss his stuff.
Pekofag would shill, try to pass it as he didnt care, intentionally fight to drive engagement and then dismiss anything that wasnt positive. His nene fic had some genuine criticisms that werent malicious and he skipped over those to keep derailing thr thread

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>>55888558
I remember thinking the Suisei fic was decent and the first chapter of Bunny Trap was great. I thought the setting was well imagined and the plot was interesting, and the tentacle sex was hot as hell.
If only it stayed like that instead of becoming bugshit next chapter.

I guess it's mostly misses, then. To be fair, though, I really don't remember which ones he's done.

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>>55888644
>His nene fic had some genuine criticisms that werent malicious and he skipped over those to keep derailing thr thread
This is the kind of thing I'm talking about:
>oh he actually got one or two posts of constructive criticism (in the middle of the thread-destroying hellstorm) and he IGNORED them!?!? what a selfish asshole!
Good Samaritans be damned, no discussion was gonna get done in that thread. Trying to turn the culpability for that around on him is absurd. I'm not gonna keep sitting here dickriding him all day, but jesus, how much is it to ask to just treat his fics like any other amateur smut author's and keep your 'tism boner for him quiet whenever he's mentioned?

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>>55888728
See I didn't like Stellar Steam at all. Suisei just didn't feel like Suisei at all, she felt super generic and unlike her streaming personality and that is 90% of a fics attraction to me, that you write the character as the character

I haven't read Bunny Trap, the synopsis isn't my thing

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>>55888590
>Someone was unironically doing this
I'm well aware this was happening, but I don't think there's any basis for pointing fingers at me. I'm more than happy to admit I didn't read many of his stories, not because of the warnings but simply because the fetishes weren't for me. I recall enjoying one or two. As I said, I didn't hate him, I just largely ignored him.
>people like (You) refused to acknowledge it
I'm not obligated to read stories I don't like. If you're going to tell me off for ignoring his stories then tell the whole thread off for not leaving a review on everything ever posted.

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>>55888836
>>55888590
>>55887880
Is this bugfag? No way in hell anyone else is jerking him off this hard.

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>>55888412
Yeah honestly I don't think I've enjoyed any of his larger commisioned fics but the shorter ones he wrote like the Rushia NTR or the Risu JOI were pretty good for what they were.

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>>55888922
Nope. My last post was >>55886779.
My own conjecture is that it's AA.

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>>55888893
Yeah, I felt the same about Stellar Steam. I admit I did like the smut but it was still hard to get into it because he wrote Suisei like she was some diva, which couldn't be any further from her character.

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I was going to complain about the arguing like a hypocrite, but it spawned actual discussions of fics and not just gossiping. That's nice.

I liked Stellar Steam, but I don't watch Suisei or know much about her outside of the most common tropes/memes surrounding her. If you're someone with high standards for accurate portrayal of characters, I can see why it would be a flop to you. Maybe it should have been something akin to the alt!Suisei that was discussed some time ago to find a compromise.

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>>55888898
I mistook you for that guy because he had a habit of claiming Pekofag didn't care about improving in the same breath as shooing people off from his stuff, which he continued even after the exodus and often derailed just to say it. He is the single biggest faggot we're host to. I mean, just look how the vomit he spewed spread to you simply because he screamed it loud enough?
>I'm not obligated to read stories I don't like.
Fair, no one's asking you to. The appropriate reaction to mediocrity is silence. We only have two or three people reading and responding to literally every single fic, after all.

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>>55888644
Y'know I paid 375 euros for that Nene fic and still haven't read it yet

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>>55889252
If you don't want to, can I read it instead?

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>>55889281
Knock yourself out https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSdM9N13zRRu_ri8T7zJ5H-_ItMEgvt-hC9-THOQl1AM4Enm69ZkQuPNiyQohHftrb3A-hs_SVVftFk/pub

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>>55889252
Fucking why?

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>>55888893
>>55889058
I think Stellar Steam was around the time I started to ignore his commisioned fics since I got burned by getting excited for it since he hyped it up a bit in prior threads then getting disappointed enough that while I did write a reply for it in thread >>30198261 I just ignored any other fic he posted after that.

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>>55889385
Thank you, if you need it back let me know

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>>55889485
Yup, yup. Memeing aside, I hope you do read it, enjoy it, and bust a fat nut to it.

>>55889401
Shit happened, but mostly retardation. On my part.

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>>55889028
I highly doubt AA would get involved with thread drama.

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>>55889529
Anal section near the end is actually pretty gold all the exposition aside. You should skim to that if you have a few free minutes

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>>55889252
Oh my fucking god

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>>55889252
You know on some level your overpaying his rates and not doing quality checks on his works is probably responsible for pekofag's commision fics being ignored for being mediocre.

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>>55889176
>the vomit he spewed spread to you simply because he screamed it loud enough
So close. We were going to come to an understanding if it weren't for this, but it seems you want to continue arguing. He didn't """spread""" anything to me. If you want me to make my opinion on pekofag any clearer, I'll give you a fucking flowchart since I'm not getting through to you.

Pekofag shits up thread 2 years ago -> Dislike him -> PF calms down, starts making stories -> Don't care about him -> PF says it's not the audience that upset him, but just his commissioner -> Still don't care, continue ignoring him.

None of what that guy who warned everyone did affected my opinion. As I said at the beginning of this, all I'm doing is laying out what I've seen. There's a reason his fics were ignored by the thread, but that is separate from my opinions. And if we're including that guy who gave warnings as part of why his stories were ignored, it's likely he was someone holding a grudge over the shit PF did in the past, which falls under my reasoning of why his fics were ignored.

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>>55889529
Sorry, you can have it back right now. It's a story about raping my wife and it hurts my soul.

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>>55889967
>pekofag mentioned in passing
>Hey everyone remember how Pekofag hates improving and is an awful person? Remember how much he sucked and everyone hated him? Remember? Remember!?
>I don't actually care all that much though. Carry on with your business everyone

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>>55889763
Hey, that's good to hear. Anal's a massive fetish of mine. I'll get around to it eventually.

>>55889796
I definitely overpaid for that one, because it was to get his ass in gear. You know he finished that thing in 7 days? I was really impressed.
The "not quality checking" thing is nonsense, though, on every fic but the Nene one. Only time I've ever been really unsatisfied was the first pass of BoSS where I wanted a partial rewrite.
None of them are perfect - except Shrunken Troubles - but with something like writing commissions, you gotta make compromises. Rewriting thousands of words delivers some serious mental strain and I don't want to put the writers I commission through that because I want them to retain enjoyment of writing as a hobby, which I think is difficult when money gets involved.

>>55889996
Yeah, a-ha-ha-ha... I don't think that was the intention at the start, but it did kind of turn out that way... I dunno. Think it's too late to ask for changes 2 months after delivery and whilst he's (supposedly) working on someone else's commission?

Alright, I'm going to bed. You all take care of yourselves.

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>>55889252
Wait a minute I just spotted a contradiction. You said back then you already read and loved this fic >>51147056

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>>55890173
You're twisting my words and putting entirely new ones in my mouth instead of addressing what I've said, or even looking at the reply chain. My original post was >>55883851 and it would have ended there. I never told anyone to remember anything but guess what? Someone decided it was a good idea to point fingers, tell me to kill myself and string along the argument. Who's really in the wrong here?

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>>55890353
Nice memory you've got there. Yeah, I lied. To defend him.

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are we getting raided? we went for like a month without anyone even mentioning pekofag to suddenly there's a defense force deployed triying to paint him as some kind of martyr

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>>55890467
It's not memory, I'm just good at digging shit up from the archive.

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>>55890353
You forgot to yell "Objection!"

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>>55890180
Damn, that thigh easily beats her waist in circumference. That's so hot.

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>>55890434
Probably the one that went out of their way to derail an otherwise mundane conversation into timeloop drama almost out of thin air. Do you possess good enough detective skills to figure out who that was?

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>>55890180
When I see thighs like this my first thoughts are weirdly always about how much fat would be dripping off them if you were roasting them over an open flame.

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>>55890557
It's the stirrings of the core of The Holy Grail powering the writing rumble ritual. As we approach the end of the contest it will only awaken to more power unless slain by a pair of pure hearted fics, one SFW, the other NSFW.

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>>55890557
It's literally one guy.

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>>55890733
I certainly do. I also possess enough detective skills to know that it stopped being a mundane conversation the moment >>55887880 was posted. It COULD have been a mundane, productive discussion to sway the thread's opinion, but playground insults are always more important, right?

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>>55890826
>snapshot of the end of the Writing Rumble

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I know I'm late to the topic but didn't people only hate that Nene fic because PF put his peko shit right at the end of the story?

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>>55890994
Peko shit right at the end of the story...?

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>>55890994
It got more than that, like actual complaints about prose quality, but you know what here's the post number so you can yourself.
>>51137891

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>>55890994
It's got the usual advertisement at the end of the story but I don't know what you mean by peko shit.

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>>55891059
>>55891175
I don't know if its there now because I remember PF acting in character right at the end of the story and adding "Peko~" as well. I think it made 1 or 2 anons refuse to read it.

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Fuck off with that att whore shit and lets go back into topic.
What about this prompt? >>51129971
The idea of exploiting Nene, be it for shit and giggles or for sexual favors is really attractive

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>>55891383 (me)
Nevermind im retarded, i meant this one >>51132513

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>>55806301
That was really good. Especially the last line and Polmao. Hope there will be a sequel and if not I will guilt trip you every time someone asks "Which oneshot do you wish had a sequel?"

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>>55891428
Is Nene smart enough to use protection so that she doesn't get an unwanted pregnancy?

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>>55891654
Nene the type of girl to take it raw once outta curiosity and get completely addicted. Same for creampies.

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>>55891654
i mean that could be a good karmic nut punch.
Nene gets stuffed with triplets or some shit after Anon skips one day of giving her the pill because he got too used to cumming inside
Nene is just delighted she's gonna have kids

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>>55891654
Nene would make you wear armor during sex because she heard men need to wear protection.

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>>55795357
Speaking of Nene fic concepts from an old thread how about this idea >>51106237 about Nene being sad about you being the only person in the school who hasn't slept with her.

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>>55891857
>Anon wants to bolt but is physically unable because of Nenechi's pute unbrilded joy

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>>55891745
Why did I suddenly get reminded of Aqua when I read this?

>>55891857
As long as Anon isn't a scumbag and he actually becomes faithful to her and takes responsibility, then I'd be very happy with this kind of ending. Only a heartless monster would dump Nene after flooding her womb with cum.

>>55891920
That would be a hilarious sight to see. Nene making you wear armour because she thinks that what you need when having sex and having to break her illusion and tell her that men wear condoms when having sex.

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>>55892158
>Why did I suddenly get reminded of Aqua when I read this?

>Be you
>Bang (chuuba) regularly
>Aqua is hwr friend/sister/maid/etc, spends a lot of time there
>walks in on you mating pressing your gf, gets curios
>stay the night one time
>wake up to Aqua touching your dick with that glue sniffer face
>can't resist the plumpy maid

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>>55892138
>>55892158
Yeah that's a fun one. Im anchoring it

>>55795357
Anon exploits Nene's ingenuity for sex, until it backfires and he's forced to take responsability.
In doing so, he falls in love

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>>55890893
Where would /wg/'s HQ be? AA's house?

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>>55891920
>Have Nene over, head over to tour room
>shit, you forgot the condom
>Nene, I forgot to bring protection!
>"Protection? W-Why do you need it? What's in your room?"

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>>55880676
Thanks bro. That means a lot. I'm glad to say that I think I am always improving, and while I can visibly see the my own progress, it goes a long way to hear that another pair of eyes thinks so too. Also thanks for spotting the typo, that's all fixed up now. It's funny the type of spelling errors you can make typing on mobile vs desktop, at least when it comes to names.
>>55882784
As many as I want to. Not everyone is a permanent cast member of course. This is MY story, and I like a lot of chuubas.

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>>55891920
>Strap on a bulletproof vest
>Nene immediately gets wet

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>>55892091
Sounds like Our Cures, except with an innocent slut instead of a broken one.

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>>55795357
Story about a chuuba who has an insatiable libido and suffers from depression about how she'll never get to have a normal relationship because every man she's been with can never fully satisfy her hunger in the bedroom.

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>>55892816
It makes me think of this being like an inverse Our Cures. Like a story about a school council type who's popular with the girls but hated by the guys.

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>>55892091
>>55892814
>Nene looking at herself in the mirror
>"I don't get it. Why doesn't he like me? I like him. I like him a lot! But he never wants to play with me...is Nene not sexy enough...?"

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>>55893494
I won't lie when I said that I was thinking about that story, but rather than a happy end it would end in a sad ending where the chuuba "does" find love but in the end she has to let him go because he just cannot satisfy her libido and she doesn't want to hurt him any further or worse, accidentally take his life.

And the chuuba in question? I was maybe thinking about either Koyori or Mio but in the latters case, she's physically unable to have children and her only way of coping (despite it depressing her) is by having an unhealthy amount of sex.

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>>55893961
Choose Koyori, we need more Koyo stories here especially since Koyo herself is quite perverted.

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>>55893961
What about the inverse of rrat!Ayame, lore!Ayame the student council president of an underworld academy hiding the dark secret of her insatiable libido?

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>>55893961
She should try recording some of their sex sessions, and then getting off to watching that with toys et al.

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>>55893636
>Nene brings out the cheerleader outfit
>Anon's virginity shivers in fear

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>>55894245
I don't think being perverted gets you more NSFW stories in relation to it, ironically enough.

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>>55894324
>"What do you think, Anon? Isn't it cute? Isn't it ecchi? You must be having lots of lewd thoughts right now, right? You can make all those thoughts real with Nenechi!"
>lord give you strength...

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>>55894257
Would lore!Ayame even be interested in things like sex?

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>>55894585
Unless she's explicitly shown disinterest in sex, I default any chuuba to "normal woman with normal libido." She gets horny just like everybody else, even if she doesn't talk about it.

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>>55894585
Her wacky aloofness and airheadedness is the only way she can keep that insatiable sexual hunger inside of her contained. It's like a seal keeping her sexual power levels contained. The underworld is not ready for Oni forma la Libido.

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Demons are evil
Sex is evil
qed

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>>55894563
>through sheer willpower, anon survives the cute-buss' charms
>Before he can flee, Nenechi begins crying
>Oh lord, oh no
>ask her whats wrong
>Nenechi just belives that anon hates her
>Anon has to explain himself
>Nenechi asks if she goes out with him she'll fuck her
>Anon asks why she wants him so badly
>"Because I love you!"
>Of course, she's talking about the time he saved an orphanage of kittens from nuclear fallout
>...or maybe just a bunch of interactions between the two in which he was genuinely nice to her
>It's just that sex is the only love language Nenechi believes will help her win him over

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>>55894245
Only if (You) in the story attempt to teach her that there's other joys to life than sex but it always fails because Koyori is more interested in fucking your brains out to satisfy her libido.

>>55894792
She must use a lot of dildo's when she's at home if she's able to contain her libido in public. I fear for the poor male demon (or human should Ayame surface to the world above) that ever shows a bit of interest in her.

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>>55894918
>you're convinced that she sees you as nothing more than another box to tick off her list, and challenge her to name a single time you've actually been as great as she says
>she proceeds to rattle off an entire grocery list of every nice thing she's ever seen you do
>she has a similar list for every other person she's ever slept with, along with their birthdays, things they like, what they enjoy the most about her, and more
>just because she sleeps around doesn't cheapen her feelings. all of Nene's "husbands" are dear to her in their own way
>including you, if you're willing

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>>55895462
Cute slut!
I had a different spin on it too.
>Nenechi got wooed once, liked sex
>Gets to sex quickly with her male friends
>Doesn't understand jealousy or such, because she does love the people she fucks
>In the end, she obliterates her generation's virginities
>and just genuinely loves anon
>wants to fuck him because it's what she knows
>Anon DIYs himself the perfect gf after showing Nene there's more to love than sex
>ties into >>55892332

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>>55895158
The Underworld Academy isn't just attended by demons, right? Rushia, Lamy, Mel and Shion are there too.

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>>55895797
I thought it was? Then again my only knowledge about the underworld that involves schools is Disgaea. And I believe that mostly had demon classes or demon like creatures that look near enough human.

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Man, going over the old threads it's weird how fast the story and prompt recap got taken over and turned into a format post despite starting off as an honest recap post.
>>20253135
>>20317982
>>20394507
>>20492074
>>20630093
Then again the first recap post seems like the kind if thing you'd need a dedicated thread baker for since you can't really make that if we quickly need a new thread. Though it did lead to that dumb
>There... were
thing due to dumb thread makers of the past following format.

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>>55895883
I was thinking of official lore and the Underworld Academy manga.

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>>55895954
Ah. That's the manga that has Towa as the mc no?
Whoever picks up the prompt could go with that scenario then as I don't think we've had a story that's set in the underworld yet?

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>Already establish that Nene and Anon find it hot when the other is covered in blood and battle scars
Yup. Armor seems like the next mutual kink between the two of them.
>Anon tries on just a pair of gauntlets and leg guards, Nene is frozen solid with a stare that is unflinching, her body begins to slightly tremble.
>She grabs him by the collar and drags him into the nearest changing room. The armor stays on.
Inversely
>Anon thinks that armored shoulderpads and a bladed skirt looks so mindblowingly hot on Nene that he has a complete wardrobe malfunction

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>>55895797
I mean going by the underworld academy manga it seems to have the same kind of species diversity as in the holoX manga where pretty much any things goes... Though I'm pretty sure the manga is only in canon with the alternative lore since Ayame doesn't show up there despite being the supposed student council president due to being a part of the other holoalt manga's cast.

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>>55896068
>>55895954
I always liked the Underworld Academy part of the lore, but the manga is missing Rushia (for obvious reasons) and Ayame (because she's already in the other manga with Fubuki and Mio, with the shrine setting that was also in the HoloAlt trailer). It's not a bad manga, but I wouldn't want to take inspiration from it as much anymore.

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>>55896293
>>55896383
Lore Nerd brain sync

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>>55896264
>Pomu puts her ear to the door, excited to hear sex noises
>CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK CLANK

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>all the Nene love in this thread
You love to see it.

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>>55897044
I would like to see Nene being loved very much

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>>55897088
The time will come soon, and so will she.
>only planned 2 sex scenes to be written this summer
>it's now escalated to at least 5

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I can get baking on the next thread if no-one else has

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>>55897088
I love to see my wife enjoy herself when we have our scheduled gangbang with all of the other husbands. All of them are great guys, nenechi loves us a lot.

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>>55795357
Grooming friendless JK Fubuki over MySpace when you see that you both like the same band

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>>55897471
Shit, I didn't even realise we hit 280. I can if you'd like, but if you've already got one ready then go for it.

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>>55896068
I'm not really sure that cast would work even if you go for the underworld academy setting. Mostly because I can't think of this prompt with Ayame as anything else but a mirror universe our cures and that fics limited cast is making me blank on where you'd fit the other holos into this.
Other than my head thinking it would be funny if mirror universe Mark is called Akuma due to the Japanese pronunciation being Maaku.
I think if anyone wants to run with this concept as fic they'd have to try and expand the concept to make it less inverse our cures.

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>>55897551
You know age difference relationships often sre because of grooming but I think there can be genuine love.
One of my female friends had dated one of her brother's college friends when she was 15 and he was 22. They stayed together for 7 years, then the guy (whi was sterile) cheated on her with a single mom. She broke up with him, and after like 10 years he still thinks of her.

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Baked up and ready to go.

>>55897657

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>>55897887
>realize I copied the stories from the contest anchor and not the general story anchor
Shit, SHIT! I CAN FIX THIS!

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>>55897551
I don't think you quite know what grooming means. This sounds like more innocent flirting with the idea that the girl is an easier target. I'm gonna take this prompt a step further with some personal experience of mine.
>Meeting Fubuki who went alone to a concert where the band you both liked headlined
>You ended up going too since your buddy last minute bailed on you for a chance at coochie, not that you blame him
>Fubuki's unmatched enthusiasm (and cute ears) draw you to her, and you later end up reaching for the same shirt at the merch table
>She stammers out an apology but you do the gentlemanly thing and allow her to have the shirt, her little fox tail points straight up and she exclaims how its the last one she needs for her collection
>you end up trading myspace info and go from there

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>>55897708
Genuine romantic/sexual love can be between any two people mature enough to feel it, really. The partners being too different can result in the relationship being more difficult, but noone should be faulted for trying.

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>>55897887
>Missed one story in the recap
>Didn't do the tell the thread about a story they wrote or a fic they liked
I don't know about this one guys.

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>>55897524
Big wholesome Nene gangbang with her husbands? Sounds fun.

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>>55898127
Only two threads have actually followed that story rule. It's obviously made by a human, stop trying to stir up shit.

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>>55897682
We need an Our Cures spinoff following Mark and his quest for Aqua's dumpy.

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>>55897708
You know there was a similar idea a while ago about Okayu where Korone tries to split you two up because you're like over a decade older than Okayu who's still in high school
Also why the fuck did you mention him being sterile what did that have to do with it

>>55898037
I wouldn't say seeking out an underage girl on social media and using the one thing you have in common to get in with her is innocent flirting

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>>55898697
>spoiler
I don't know. My friend mentioned that and lingered on it as well. Maybe that was the reason he went after a mom?

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>>55898697
I think I half remember that, but I think the thread discussion kinda went to it being a thing where Korone also falls for you in her attempts to keep Okayu away from you.

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>>55898878
Man, that sucks. It's like many can't have unhappy characters or such. For every two happy hearts there might be sad third .

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>>55898697
I guess I assumed that since you were both using myspace, you were both the same age.

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Fanfics up

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>>55902900
No worries, there's already a new thread where everyone's gathering >>55897657