/wg/ - Writing General - Crazed Psycho Killer Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>47813665

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

The morning after a long night of hag impregnation correction:>>47818408

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I'm tired mr krabs

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>Thread slid off while I was distracted photoshopping an image for a pic
Well, at least it seems the Anon's here are more well-adjusted than it seems, if they're mostly indisposed on a Friday night.

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>>47854653
I pity the people who spend their time making bait threads.

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This board is becoming insanely fast

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So worst case, what are the threads we could merge with? The drawthread?

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Everybody who cared about this thread has been chased away by the earlyfag. It's over.

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>>47856648
I wouldn't mind a merge, but there would be a lot of confusion and disparity over the thread cultures. They would have to learn ours and we would have to learn theirs (if it's anything like ours). It isn't like two regular threads merging where they can just continue discussing their vtubers like normal.

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>>47856648
>>47856776
And on top of that, if we did merge with the drawthread the entire thread would be filled with requests and it would be hard to have discussions about writing.
I briefly considered /vtwbg/, but they're too autsitic with their OCs so no thanks.

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>>47856776
Yeah that's the problem ain't it? Of the other options vtwbg is too autistic even for us, while a regular chuuba general would be too awkward of a merge to really work.

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>Thread dies early
>Instead of taking this chance to just talk about past fics, or work in progress, to get a discussion going, doompost instead, therefore repeating the cycle again.
I refuse to believe people are this dumb.

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>>47857025
"We are totally dying bros" is my favorite /wg/ timeloop.

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>>47857025
I wouldn't warrant this as doomposting, it's just exploring options.
You aren't one to talk either, if you want to disuss past fics or WIPs, bring it up instead of complaining.

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Okay then.
This is just an idea that came to me, most of the chuubas with Mechas ideas I've seen bounced around/written here go for the real robot/harder scifi angle; but wouldn't super robot level shenanigans be more apt?
I.e something like chuubas in a Mecha battle royal with all of them in weird gimmick machines like a giant fox that shoots corn missiles from its tails or a sheep with horn drill cannons.

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>>47857324
I'd be down with that. I was actually designing a mech for something in progress but I feel like coming up with one for all of them would be uh...hard. Nene's would probably be a melee oriented mech with sharp claws.

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>>47857603
At least with prose designing a mech is more a matter of thinking up some cool and fitting details while making up some cool fluff for the machines rather than actually having to draw and think up how the thing would work in a picture.

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>>47857324
So G Gundam but with chuubas?

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>>47857854
True. I was thinking more on the Nene one and thought it'd be interesting if it had things like air thrusters for enhanced ground maneuverability alongside re-enforced legs for kicks; I keep thinking about her Chinese look before the redesign and how it reminded me of some martial arts stuff. I'll probably keep dwelling on it at work.

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>>47857324
Eh... Mecha's not for me.

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>>47854201
RomCom fic of anon getting rejected by his crush after finally working up the courage to ask her out but soon after anon's hag chuuba neighbor/roommate learns of this and aims to be the rebound.

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>>47859463
This but the hag is the mother of the girl that rejected you.

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The rentry reached 200k views? Holy shit, let me do the maths.
The first instance of the rentry link I can find is on the 3rd of July 2021. It’s been 658 days since then.
200,000 / 658 = 303 views per day.

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>>47860094
Could be botted

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Read
>Dense Treasure
This was fucking hilarious. I wish we got more misunderstanding/dense idiot type comedy. Too bad this was never continued though honestly the joke had maybe 5 more scenes before it got old without either needing more of a cast to have more joke fodder or a central plot to drive it forward beyond being dense idiot jokes.

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>>47859898
Finally... The peko oyakodon fic...

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>>47863001
Has pekomama ever got anything more than that big reveal stream and subsequent fanart boom?

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What the fuck? I just had a dream in which there was a character speaking like the king of kings, perfectly arrogant with an incredible vocabulary that sounded really well constructed and fluent. They were all words I knew so it wasn't mind gibberish, but now that I'm awake, I can't even begin to put them together in such a way. Why is my brain better at writing than me? Is that my full potential that I could one day unlock?

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>>47865374
Was the character a chuuba?

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>>47865703
It will be now

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I haven't been to the thread in a while and was looking through past ones, why have things been dying so fast lately? Has everyone willing to just talk about writing finally been chased away for good?

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>>47865992
>Has everyone willing to just talk about writing finally been chased away for good?
Yes

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>>47866043
Seeing threads die so early makes me sad, so I should probably make more of an effort to talk here instead of just quietly writing to myself

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>>47866238
I try to bump when I can but there's only so much I can do against bait thread #40228

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>>47865992
Well I was banned for 3 days, for one. This thread will reach bump limit, and so will the next one.

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>>47866396
Good luck with that

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>>47866571
Thank you!

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>>47866382
Bait over the past week has gotten pretty aggressive, so I get it

>>47866396
Good luck anon I'd ask what you got banned for but I don't want you to go on vacation again already

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>>47865992
Bait has once more exploded out of control around hours where most people are working, in class, etc. The majority of the thread is from the Americas of some kind, so when Europeans are going absolutely ballistic we're kind of fucked.

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>>47866799
The last thread died at 7am CEST. Yuros are innocent...

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Anyone have prompts/ideas they want to discuss and build up? I love when the thread builds ideas up like the fujocast prompt or the Ina swat thing.

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>>47867189
Mech fic onegai

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>>47867297
I'll bite, who's your oshi and what battletech faction is she a part of?

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>>47867648
NTA but I think it would be very funny if The Clans were all kemonomimi.
Also what kind of plot could you even do with Battletech + chuubas? The standard Self-insert plot of build up a merc unit then go on an expedition with them to steal the Helm Core + the mechs there years before it's found in canon?

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>>47868048
That'd honestly be pretty good. And if I'm being honest, my main excuse for it is to just to be able to stuff chuubas in mechs I like and pit them against eachother.

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>>47857324
Honestly, a Gundam Wing-like fic where the five chuubas of a Holo gen would stand in for the five guys would be kind of lit in my opinion

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Gimme some really stupid prompts. Thread dying got me in a silly mood

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>>47868417
A police stand-off with Luna, who, after mastering her gun and raping (You), is now holding you hostage and arguing with the negotiator.

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>>47868359
Trowa...
By extension this also made me imagine Coco doing that thing where she tears up the indication and says she'll kill you

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>>47867648
Battletech is just a poor man's Macross.

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>>47868417
I forget the exact wording of it but I remember a prompt about Luna holding You and Subaru at gunpoint and forcing You to rape Subaru all the while she makes lewd comments about how you fuck.

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>>47868417
Okay then. I'll rapid-fire these things as they come out of my brain
>Pokemon but instead you catch chuubas
>The Hololive office, but it's a Waco last-stand situation where Yagoo is basically David Koresh
>Fauna is slowly driven insane by the fact that her fellow chuubas insist on eating meat, and she begins a crusade to bomb the meat industrial complex back to the stone age
>Kronii, but she likes Chick-Fil-A instead of Subway
>Gura's tail is an erogenous zone
>Sex with Polka but when you grope one of her boobs, a clown horn goes off. When she cums, confetti comes out
>Fight Club but it's Akai Haato against Haachama
>Again, a chuuba of choice finds out that (You) write fics on /wg/, specifically fics about her
>Again, the /wg/ fic archive is like a Death Note that turns chuubas into either the sweetest Cinnamon buns or the most harcore degenerates, and Yagoo is desperate for (You)r help

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>>47868505
I have uber-autistic daydreams where I imagine the Season 1 OP but it's chuubas https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oNJ4aBoRipg
Specifically Myth, but now that you've mentioned it, the Gen 4 girls will work too
Who's best to fill in for Relena?

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>>47868417
Polka has decided to follow her new dream of becoming a radio talk show host and has brought Nene along for the ride

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>>47868417
Combine these two
>>47868706
>>47868484

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>>47854201
After revealing your masochistic tendencies to Koyori, she goes on a scientific crusade testing everything she can think of to try and determine what makes you tick, completely crossing your comfort line several times in the process but also managing to push it a little further than you'd thought yourself okay with

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>>47868887
>>Pokemon but instead you catch chuubas
Lapras...

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>>47867189
I was thinking about how Sweden and Poland from this era https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deluge_(history) create a good foundation for a LOGH/Three Kingdoms type of story.
>Kingdom of Hololive
Strict religion, disciplined army, peasants are free and there's no serfdom.
>Nijisanji Republic
A corrupt magnate oligarchy in a constant state of anarchy. Paradise for a nobleman, hell on earth for a peasant.

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>>47869413
Koyori letting herself get fucked while you watch to exploit your masochistic tendencies. Got it

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>>47869629
With Fire and Sword but with chuubas?

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>>47869629
I'd be down for that.
Alternatively, it could be the Polish-Soviet war, but the Holos are Polish and the Nijis are, well... you know.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DstyaGotWFM

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>>47862346
Why the fuck would someone bot a random vtuber fanfiction archive? Or were you just trying to bump the thread?

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>>47868887
I'm baffled noone made a Pokemon hack with a hololive theme yet.

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>>47870071
In fairness there was that one polka rentry fic that an anon admitted to bot because they were testing something (I think).

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Vtuber Sengoku Rance could pretty fun as well.

>>47869881
I guess you're talking about the game? In the books/movies that's just the Cossack rebellion part.
>>47870052
That'd probably work as well.

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>>47869628
I am more than okay with this

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>>47870479
Anykind of chuuba sengoku period just calls for a joke about Polka leading the Oda clan.

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>>47870353
I also remember this. It was just a test though and I don’t think he pushed it past big numbers, so it probably doesn’t fudge the actual likely visits too much.

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>>47870439
He didn't bot it but was positive someone else.

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>>47870825
Meant this for >>47870439

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>>47870353
I think it's because there literally isn't a big enough cast to really justify having every chuuba be a pokemon, and since no one wants to just catch mascots and memes it's kind of something no one has had a desire to make yet.

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>>47871093
You could make individual chuubas into evolution lines, or use more vtubers than just holos

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Yuzuki Vet Services 2...

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>>47871263
I don't think that anon's with us anymore. Pretty sure they got pissed and left after that one anon made an edit of their demon lord fic with Towa in a bunny suit and without cheating.

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>>47862655
>>Dense Treasure
Yeah, I wanted to write a sequel but I couldn't think up of any more scenes to use and decided to abandon it. It was a fun write, though.

>Warm Air, Warm Feelings
Ahh, rrat!Ayame, home... I really hope this gets a continuation to become a trilogy, or even a fourth installment. I remember the author might have mentioned he was writing one, but I can't quite remember. Reading through this again was great, I love dialogue between two characters that hate each other but are forced to tolerate one another's presence. I don't think there needed to be that many Ryan Gosling references, but that didn't take anything away.

>The Taste of Sin
Oh shit, I almost forgot this existed. Fuck me, this was an EXTREMELY hot fic, it's a shame we haven't seen a sequel yet. I'm glad I don't have a sister because I assume it wouldn't be a huge turn on otherwise. Only thing I would change is have Suisei talk more and have her be more curious rather than horny. Other than that I love it.

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>>47868417
Every single Hololive member has experienced this phenomenon at least once. Sometimes, when they are struggling with a relatively simple task (opening a packet, fixing their mic, reaching for something on a higher shelf), an extremely large, well-built man breaks into their house by kicking the door down, sprinting towards the chuuba in question, helping her with her problem and then leaving all in a matter of seconds. The door is even magically fixed when they go to check.

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>>47868417
That one prompt that has Koyori trying to extract your cum but it always backfires on her in hilarious results.
Think of it like Wile e coyote trying to catch Road Runner.

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>>47867189
I remember two prompts from previous threads (more will come to mind later I'm sure) that seemed interesting.
The first one was Miko incest, where you and Miko are siblings. The two of you grow up sleeping in the same bed and always kiss each other good night. As you get older your parents try to separate you two because you're getting to the age where it's becoming weird, but you sneak into her room to kiss her anyway. One day, the kiss goes quite deep and there's some groping involved as well. You and Miko are confused about what it is you're both feeling (horniness) since there's been a severe lack of sex education in your lives, but it feels good so each night you sneak in and keep escalating the kiss until you come across a certain discovery...

The second one is a brief discussion that was brought up because of Yakuza Ishin where (You), a foreigner, get stranded in Edo (or Meiji?) period Japan. I don't think there was much expanded on this, but it seemed like an interesting premise.

>>47872903
This reminds me of Mioposting.

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>>47873365
>Mikocest
Man I remember that prompt.
Not really sure where that can be expanded. The structure of it seems like it points to either an in medias res opening of the two of you just on the cusp of making these good night kisses something more or starting at the very beginning with (You) giving your Big sis a good night kiss. Before it starts the series of scenes of the 'Good night kisses' getting more and more unwholesome as the two of you get older until it gets to the point where the two of you are now, living together with your sister.

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>>47857324
i honestly like ''realistic'' mecha much more, but im down to tussle with superobot
will have to find some time to try and think how the fuck do i write a story where someone like nene gets extremely angry at her friends for calling her totally not a sazabi a fat fuck

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>>47862655
>Lape Ramy
its so dumb but it got a chuckle out of me, i like these type of absurd comedy fics

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>>47873924
Huh, I missed reading that when it was first posted. It's a dumb fic... I'd call it a comedy but it seems to have just gone for absurdity and hoped it turned out funny rather than being funny in and of itself.

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>>47868887
Most of these would be good story foundations for full length fics. Kronii being a hyper Christian who hates the gays and is explicitly forbidden from tampering with the death of Christ/altering anything related to gay rights would be a good short comedy fic though

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>>47876288
>hyper-trad Kronii
Huh. Could be nice. Have her eventually be a cross between Joseph Seed and Shoko Asahara -- a charismatic, deeply-religious, but ultimately bumbling warden because, well, it's Kronii

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How exactly does the archive script search function work? When I search "lape" it of course comes up with Lape Ramy, but it also shows Roboco's gift, which doesn't have lape in its title or tags.

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>>47876885
That also does sarin gas attacks

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>>47877464
Of course. The non-believers will know the Supreme Truth and cover the planet with their corpses while Kronies inherit the Earth.

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>>47877024
it seems to include the url in it's search

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>>47877670
What's crazy is that the cult is still around just under a different name.

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>>47871664
>>The Taste of Sin
Reread this now too.
Fuck. This was a good kissing fic, I wish that anon comes back and writes a second chapter because Suisei descending into deeper incest by way of kissing is a really enticing concept.

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>Conversation about the Kronii prompt got deleted
How was that off-topic?
Was it the idea of Kronii being an anti-LGBT fundamentalist
If so, I'm the guy who replied to the guy who brought it up. My apologies

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>>47854201
Kidnap a random girl off the street and brainwash her into your own Rushia

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>>47879059
Wouldn't be allowed into the archive as per AA rules

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Theory on why /wg/ ain't doing so well:

All vanilla content has already been done, which means that both prompts, discussions and fics released will be of niche content that alienates the larger part of writers who used to be here. For example, no futa content is being made and the only futa discussion is on two topics, premature ejaculation and gokkun, which are fairly niche. NTR had a whole thread recently which most vanilla writers despise. Etc...

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>>47878964
It's okay
I'm going to write the fic now

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>>47879158
Why not?

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>>47879433
No one's done that Yagoo's birthday prompt yet though

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>>47879433
>no vanilla content
>like futa
You can just be honest and upfront about what you're begging for, Anon, we don't judge

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>>47879562
Doesn't include a Vtuber

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>>47879433
The guy who worked on the new archive really should've coded in a feature to see how many clicks each fic gets. Kinda dumb not to have done that

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>>47879059
>>47879654
Kidnap Nazuna off the streets and brainwash her back into Rushia

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>>47879433
>All vanilla content has already been done
The existence of 'low hanging fruit' fics disproves this. There are still hundreds of fics to be made that are just simple concepts whether it be 'generic hentai scenarios but with chuubas the writer find hot' (The mind controls, chikans, and flavors of rape) or 'idea that extends from a chuuba's concept/lore' to simple 'stock plot but with chuubas I like'.

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>>47879654
Huh? I thought become/transformation content still counts as for it being chuuba fic?

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>>47880105
Become's kinda of a grey area, because maybe it could be the real Lamy.

Fortunately that place was taken out back and shot in the the fucking head so it's not really a problem anymore

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>>47879059
What's the source for this cropped porn?

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>>47880442
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/103465320
gay shit

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>>47879433
>Discussions and fics released will be of niche content
>no futa content is being made
lol. Lmao even

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>>47879433
I don't even know how many actual writers we have left

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>>47881566
I'm one writer!

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>>47860094
That's crazy analytics for a thread with 40 IPs. Has to be shenanigans, I'm not checking the rentry 9 times a day.

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>>47857324
Go the Armored Core from mercs route and I'll read it

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>>47882031
Maybe we just have a lot of lurkers?

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>>47857324
>>47882071 (me)
Or you could make it an early mech thing, where the idols get chosen as the pilots for the first mecha and have to battle and prepare using low tech, early development mechs
Like the US vs. Japan fight
https://youtu.be/ZTkVrRkziDI

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>>47866799
It's not the catalog baits, it's the explosion of new generals.
Not saying they're wrong for discussing vtubers on a vtubing board, but I think the competition for generals is getting smaller.

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>>47881566
I’m a writer as well.

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>>47881566
I'm also a writer

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>>47881566
I'm a writer, technically
I just haven't been able to put anything out for months

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>>47854201
AZKi trying to act nonchalant as she's getting railed on the other end of the TV she's stuck in

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I feel like taking down and rewriting a chapter of a series I released a long time ago because I realized that it was hindering its progress.

At the same time, I feel like it's not a healthy mentality to have, like I'll never be satisfied.

Have any fellow writefags struggled with something like this? How'd you deal with it?

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>>47886068
I think it's okay, with limitations to not fall into the trap of endless editing. You should limit yourself to retconning a chapter (partly or as a whole) once, or twice at most.

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>>47885391
When did she become Sadako

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>>47854201
Koyori rehearsing a presentation/class she has to do for uni with you, despite the fact that you know nothing about chemistry. The day of the presentation comes and as she finishes with "Any questions?" you ask her something that allows her to reinforce her thesis.
Afterwards, she gets so fucking horny she lovingly rapes you in one of the bathrooms.

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>>47886068
I've thought about it, mainly due to just how night and day the quality and length of the following chapters are to me, but I feel ultimately that if I rework the base of the story that I'll inevitably go all the way up and it'll never stop. So it's better to leave it as is and use it as a learning experience for next time, at least in my experience.

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>>47886068
I used to think the same way, but I eventually rewrote chapters 1-3 of my own series. I told myself that I was only going to do those 3 since they really needed the TLC, but there was still an urge to do 4-7. I’ll also say that I felt really good after the rewrite was done. It not only helped the chapters be more aligned with what my current level of writing was at, it also helped me really see how far I’ve come since writing them initially. I would say to give yourself a limit on what to rewrite and give it a go.

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I was thinking about giving my own promt of "falling in love with Mio in a Hogwarts setting" a try. Was thinking of a vanilla snippets-of-life kind of approach, but I need a few more scenarios to make it work. So far I have
>you first meet Mio at the sorting ceremony where you bond over the fact that you involuntarily ended up in Ravenclaw
>at some point in Astronomy Class, Mio gets horribly embarrassed over the fortune she laid out for herself. Hufflepuff-Nene whips out her textbook and touts that the meaning is something cliché along the lines of "the love of your life is closer than you think"
>first kiss (?)
>maybe a little dramatic peak in-between where Mio gets into an argument with an old friend (Fubuki) over growing distant and cold ever since she was sorted into Slytherin
>Optional: Misusing the Room of Requirement for the selfish needs of a young couple, maybe practicing the ol' fetus deletus
Ideas for a few more snippets to fill the school years would be appreciated.

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>>47888898
It honestly depends on how long you want your timeline. You can also do some fun teenage romping at hogsmead. Say you or her join different clubs to expand your interests and use those skills to hopefully woo the other.

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>>47886644
She's a virtual diva, so always
https://youtu.be/T0dml5y2jZ4
But here is where it comes from

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>>47885391
ASSki

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>>47886068
I think at the end of the day it's ultimately on you if you want to take on a clean slate and restart the fic from a different chapter. Ultimately it's your story and if it's the only way you can see to writing it better then so be it.
Also let me guess what fic this is. To be 17 again?

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>>47885391
is she getting railed by one guy or is she a public onahole?

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>>47900014
Up to whoever writes it

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>>47900014
>>47900467

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>>47854201
Ina raping Mori, using her powers to wipe Mori’s memory then doing it again

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>>47901064
Why would she do something like that??

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>>47901146
She can't let the blue ones win.

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>>47901146
Revenge for the swimsuit drawing stream

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>>47901372
>>47901586
Does she feel good from it or something? How?

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>>47900947
This image makes me imagine the hags all getting gathered together like a heist movie for one last shota hunt.

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>>47900947
>Sadistic big dick shota
oh no

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>>47902947
What's so bad about them?

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>>47904094
Undefeatable

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>>47897549
>spoiler
nope

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>>47902609
Ookami's 11

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Weird to look at the old SFW fics I've written. Even though they weren't very well received, it's kind of crazy that I just sat down and, in 2 hours, wrote almost 5k words of whatever I had in mind without any brakes many times. Man, it takes me 6 hours to write like 2.5k now. I had a vision and nothing else mattered. Feedback didn't matter, plot making sense didn't matter, future plot holes didn't matter. I just wrote down all the cool ideas I had in mind and posted them for the world to see. I wonder what happened to that old me?

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>>47906554
You became more serious about your craft. I myself experienced what you do. To write for fun simply because writing seemed like a fun hobby is one thing, once you enjoy the smaller details, down to every last word in your prose, you begin to become way more demanding of yourself, you aspire for something better.
Don't worry anon, there's an intermediate's plateau everywhere, you're just stagnating temporarily.

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All I wrote today was this post.

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>>47910263
Better than me already. All I did was to masturbate and sleep. I always end up overdoing it in the weekends. My prostate hurts...

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>>47886068
Ohohoho you have no clue how much pain the earlier chapters of Holocaylpse cause me each time I try to return to writing it. If I had infinite time, I would love nothing more than to redo the whole thing and release an updated version that retcons at least half of the story I've written. I'd name it "Holocalypse: The Definitive Edition" or some shit.
>How'd you deal with it?
By ignoring my story for over a year to work on other WIPs.

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>>47904745
How close was my guess?

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>>47912474
>Holocalypse: Unheroic Saviour Edition - $129.99

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>>47911432
Change write for draw and thats a marine prompt

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>>47854201
You wriggle up Lamy's butt and wear her like a suit.

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>>47913435
I'm the same author, at least.

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>>47911432
You use a dildo or massager?

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>>47915131
>What happens next to our hero Anon?
>Will he survive that fatal blow?
>Who was that blonde knight?
>And what plans does Ina's former master have for the world?
>Purchase the first Holofantasy DLC, "Shadow of the Ancient Ones" for only $59.99 to find out!

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>>47918410
Dark Knight Temma should have been in the main game, he was clearly cut out of it for the expansion that's bullshit.

>buys it anyway

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>>47854201
Tickle torturing Laplus

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>>47854201
Ina walking around the Cover office with her new outfit hiding that she's only wearing the hoodie and nothing on underneath it

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>>47920856
Zipperhead

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>>47920856
Maybe it's just me, but I've always believed that Ina has a chronic masturbation problem and does it constantly while drawing. This outfit is more soft evidence.

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>>47886068
I disagree with the others. You need to commit. Take a finished work as a finished work and move on.
It's a bad habit to get into to continually look at the past works. Allow them to remain in the past, allow them to be bad. It's a reflection of your writing ability and where you were at at the time, and shouldn't be disrespected

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>>47923208
I suppose it's just a natural consequence of being the Futa of myth.

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>>47906554
I've found the opposite effect as I get more talented. I write looser, quicker, and more spontanteously. I can do anything with a blank sheet of paper, but the the rough draft ends up being pretty damn rough

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>>47923208
It wouldn't surprise if me just takes care of it the second she gets horny, wipes her fingers off on her sweater, and gets back to drawing.

It's funny how often the stink stuff permeates throughout Chloe's depictions since she just said she doesn't bathe often, but Ina straight has talked about how much of a mess her room is, how poor she eats and how little effort she puts into cleaning herself up just to stream.

No woman with a man in her life would live like that.

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Outlining has killed another story. Realized it was too ambitious. Threw it in the trash. At least this time I didn't start writing it coming back the next day, stalling out and become unable to even think about the story without becoming depressed
Every story I try to outline or even add one to in the future implodes. Just endless wall of blank documents and staring into infinity.

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>>47924637
Don't be so dramatic. Just start writing and see where it takes you, you might find a way to make it shorter or find the drive to finish your grand story. If you can't, then write a one-shot.

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>>47924637
You're on the wrong board. The "Little Bitch" board is /r9k/, not /vt/. This is the board for schizophrenics.

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>>47920856
>working at Cover HQ as an intern
>carrying a stack of papers to the fax machine to request permissions for streaming the first twenty minutes of a PS2 game
>accidently trip at Ina's feet because you're a klutz
>look up and get an eyeful of Ina's thick sweaty bush
>you can barely see her pussy behind that musky jungle of pubes
>smiling warmly, she helps you to your feet and then goes about her day like nothing happened

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>>47925052
While the Little Bitch board might be /r9k/, the Little Bitch Writing board is /lit/. Drop by their writing general sometime, it's filled with people who hate the very notion of writing

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>>47925137
Brilliant.

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>>47924637
What was it about?

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>>47920856
...Need to lick Ina pussy...I hate how much long hoodies with nothing underneath make me horny.

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>>47879750
Doesnt quite has the same punch when they literally have the same personality.
I was imagining her barely holding the act and herself together in fear of punishment

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>>47918410
>Didn't save his pulls for True Potential Fusion Anon
ngmi

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>>47854201
Eating out Ina's hairy pussy.

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>>47924637
Post your outline anon. If you're throwing it away you might as well submit it to the archive, who knows someone might pick it up.

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>>47926535
It's various /become/ prompts which just kinda vanished and I never bothered to save the documents as just if I wasn't going to use it just dump it. My folders are a fucking mess enough as is.
Don't help that the newfag jannies are going on another purge of board culture so 4cc threads are getting deleted now. Just whan I thought /become/ could slightly reduce how hidden it is. Although most of us have left

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>>47930027
This but you explicitly get some pubes stuck in your teeth

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>>47931076
So just tell the various fic premises you were messing around with. Even if you were just fucking around and never actually saved your autistic outlining, you should at least know what you were making up.

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>>47931076
>spoiler
>rampant gigabaiting the likes of which not seen since Kiara
>go after threads that have existed for forever instead
Literally what the fuck is the point

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>>47931076
What in fuck's name could have been so ambitious about fucking /become/? You made it sound like there was an actually great story with lots of content you had in mind.

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>>47932745
In his defense, /become/ does pop up every now and then usually disguised as a Lamy thread.

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>>47854201
Execution by having your dick sucked until your balls shrivel up and you die.

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>>47935299
I don’t usually report porn but you get a special exception.

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>>47935299
Sorry Gregor, but Botan is on her way with the flamethrower.

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>>47933565
Yea but if you formally declare it as one you get a 3 day ban for creating it. The hidden threads tend to die somewhat fast but if traction starts it gets deleted and people involved in the thread get 3 day bans.
Usually the threads get people screaming about trannies (aka tourists) who probably report it for being "off topic" and thus it gets destroyed.

>>47932942
Trying to make a multichapter story for a slower burn setup as opposed to a blink and it's done event.

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>>47935360
>>47935382
Oh, sorry. The translation is:
"I'm gonna cum, this feels amazing!"
"Shoot it all up inside me! Give me all of your stinky cockroach semen!"

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>>47935427
What fucking outlining is there to be done for a slow-burn /become/ fic?
It's either cribbing notes from transformation horror on one side of the spectrum or taking cues from transformation porn on the other. How the fuck do you scope creep that?

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>>47935427
What >>47935648 said. What kind of slow-burn story can be created out of /become/?

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Seriesanons doko?

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>>47937799
Most of them died in Ukraine fighting Botan fans.

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>>47937799
Get a ouija board

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>>47937799
>>47906554

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>>47937799
Last week of uni, bear with me.

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>>47937799
Stuck in editing hell

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>>47937799
Get off my lawn

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Is the guy who wrote the hormoning still around?

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>>47941539
That's a fennec with you, though

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>>47937799
Hard at work

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>>47944783
If what I remember about the last time auntieanon posted about what works were his is right. Hr has posted in this very thread.
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>>47916186
G-gura?

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What writing experience did you have before writing for this thread?

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>>47946524
A few casual fapfics in a fetish gallery/forum site

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>>47946524
played a couple characters in an RP group centered around another series on steam over 10 years ago. I then began to write some epilogues for some of the plot lines we did. After that I did a little personal writing of fanfics for myself around another series. This thread made me come back to writing.

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>>47946524
Almost none, so going from zero to doing it consistently for almost two years really is something.

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>>47946524
Writing novels and novellas since a teen. None are published, but still, they're completed works

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>>47949525
I hope to be able to claim one of my works as completed one day.

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>>47949901
Once you finish a story, it becomes easier to finish another. I feel bad for webnovelists and mangakas because there's this constant pressure to keep running with no end goal in sight

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>>47949961
I feel like I have to imagine it does get easier. For me it's more so I've started a story that is turning out longer than I could have ever imagined, but I'm not exactly bothered by that fact either. I would feel bad for any writer who feels they have to stretch their own story out to meet the approvals of external stakeholders. My story is long because I want it to be.

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>>47854201
Preening Lui's head wings

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>>47952159
do you think those little wings can support her weight and help her fly?

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>>47953827
No, they just flutter when she's scared, excited or aroused.

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>>47952159
Nightmare fuel

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>>47953884
Really now? I'll have to note that for later,

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>>47944783
Yep. It's just at the bottom of the to-do list.
>>47946193
You got me. I don't stream because I can't stop piling up WIPs.

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>>47954357
How rude

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>>47957928
It scares me

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>>47953827
No, but they can help her glide down gracefully.

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>>47962155
I have spent the past few days depressed knowing I'll never get to date Risu and that life is hopeless. Getting into Vtubers if you're emotionally crippled really is a terrible idea

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God dammit, I was minutes away from finishing filthy Ina sex but now I have to go out with friends. Damn them. Oh well, later tonight.

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>>47963994
Your friends can wait

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>>47963994
See if they'd like to read your filthy smut fic.

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>>47965168
>friends and family
>ever reading something you wrote
Lmao
I could make a 9 second Tiktok excerpt of the summary and they still would never get around to it

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>>47946524
Virtually none. I remember I wrote two short stories for fun when I was in primary school but that’s about it.

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>>47946524
School creative writing and danganronpa fics

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>>47946524
Short stories.
Poems.
Roleplaying
posting on /ddlc/

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>>47968963
I'm curious as to how many ex-/ddlc/ people there are here now

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>>47969516
At least 2 I think.

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Have you ever rewritten an old fic from scratch? How did it go?

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>>47963398
It's ok, unless you're packing a foot long you never had a shot anyway

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>>47970154
How is that even possible?

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>>47970310
That only makes it worse, because even if hypothetically I could meet her and make her somehow fall in love with me, she would disappointed with me anyway. Don't worry, I've thought about this a lot in bed

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>>47970704
Hot.

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>>47970852
Yes. But only when I'm horny. Otherwise it's soul crushing...

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>>47970475
Which, somehow being worse or restarting

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>>47970475
NTA but I'm not entirely sure how. Even if you decided to completely rewrite something from the ground up, it wouldn't be completely from scratch since you'd have your old knowledge of it influencing your work in some way. Maybe they meant to ask if you just completely rewrote an old fic from a blank doc with the same content in mind, but it now benefits from your experience and such.

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>>47972874
What sort of nitpicking is this? Your experience isn't a fic. What you have written is a fic.

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>>47972873
>>47972874
Oh sorry I was talking about the picture, how do you get worse in over 9 years?

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>>47973030
He didn't get worse at all, wdym?

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>>47973156
2008 at least had a bit of SOVL, 2017 is just ugly.

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>>47973620
Literally everything about the drawing is better in the 2017 version, even if it isn't the improvement one expects from 9 years. But you can't argue with soulfags anyway

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>>47973763
t. bug eater

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>>47976467
N-no...

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>>47854201
Pomu shrinking into her fairy form and huffing your crotch while masturbating

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>>47976574
Why?

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>>47977034
her being smaller would mean the smell of your musk is extra strong

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>>47977197
I don't believe in that's how smells work, anon.

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>>47977427
fairies arent real who cares
i just want pomu to get cockdrunk and to worship a penis, preferably mine

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>>47977751
Fairies do exist.

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>>47978042
And they ate my ass.

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>>47976574
>>47977751
>Pomu shrinking to fit in your boxers
Girls getting cockdrunk is such an underappreciated fetish here, what's wrong with lbecoming a drooling horny mess

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>>47976574
>pomu keeping warm inside your armpit while huffing your armpit musk

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>>47854201
After a long and painfull night of rejections, you slump in the bar counter. You and the bartender, Takane Lui, are the only people left.
A story of two people with horrendous luck in love

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>>47979704
You drink a few shots, she flirts with you, you don't realize it until two days later when she's long gone and you were bored at work

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>>47980737
which is why you come back, and flirt with her
only for her to miss her chance, and after 2 days she realizes she fumbled the bag

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>>47981682
We both know that the two of you would never meet again after the first encounter, even if you wanted to.

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>>47981995
anon...she's the bartender...

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>>47981995
She's the bartender. You know where she works.

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>>47980737
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOP
DON'T BRING REAL LIFE INTO THIS

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>>47979613
>Pomu sneaking into your bed to bask in your smell under the covers
>Worshipping your cock until you cum and smear her
>you keep wondering why you have so many wet dreams

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>>47982086
>>47982095
The bartender listens and pours the drink. This is unrealistic. It's better if Lui is just another one like you, drowning their sorrows on a weekday afternoon.

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>>47985437
the bartender is a person too yknow. not to mention they dont actually have to play nice if both of you are alone in the bar.
Lui being the bartender gives you a chance to keep seeing her while both of you fail, instead of hooking up instantly

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>>47986276
How many bartenders have you had sex with so far? Or meaningful conversations about their life?

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>>47986632
two. i fucked one girl and the other was a guy who told me it was his last day because the bar was going underhe gave me a free whisky

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>>47986632
NTA I have a friend who was bartender during his time in Uni and he got laid by flirting with patrons at least once a month

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>>47986632
How many women have had sex with insects?

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>>47986874
>>47986893
I don't drink alcohol so I'll trust you. Enjoy your bartender sex then.

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>>47986957
More than you might think, actually

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>>47987248
Exactly.
Wait, what?

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>>47979704
I had always thought my desire to impregnate hags was spread equally to each and every woman... but this one...

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>>47989104
>''It sucks that you couldnt find a date anon, if only there was an ovulating fertile woman down to fuck with you in this very room''

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>>47989897
Can women feel themselves ovulating or do they just guess?

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>>47990110
Not really guessing as it's usually a few days after their period ends IIRC, but I suppose they can 'feel' it as if they aren't on birth control they do kinda tend to get hornier around that time.

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>>47990110
It depends on the girl
Some have thicker discharges, others dont feel at all
My sister for example says that she can feel it, which is why her and her husband nailed both of their kid attempts first time

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>>47990448
That's pretty interesting. Congrats on being an uncle.

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End of the thread so I'll talk about something a bit off topic. It's technically possible to be younger than your nephew/niece, right? Has anyone ever seen that happen?

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>>47994055
>Has anyone ever seen that happen?
Why are you asking us? Literally google it if it matters that much to you.

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>>47994055
S-Sex with your niece who’s two years older than you?

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>>47994055
Yes it is technically possible if your sister/brother has kids before you're even born.

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>>47995147
Is this another flavor of incest we've just discovered?
Who'd be suited to be your older 'niece' you can be the creepy uncle to? Bae? Shion? Okayu?

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>>47996610
>creepy uncle
But you'd be younger than them, so wouldn't they be... coming onto you?

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>>47994055
Yes, and you could push the age gap decently far if you needed to. If your mom and sibling both had their first child at 14 and your mom had you at 46 that's an 18 year gap.

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>>47999050
>child at 14
Holy shit, she might die
>had you at 46
You would be a mega autist

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>>47998311
No, imagine you're like a big dick sadistic shota since you're younger than them but you're also the creepy uncle since they're your niece.

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>>47999685
The best of both worlds.

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>>48000998
>>47999685
>>47999285
>>47999050
>>47998311
>>47996610
>>47996467
>>47995147
>>47994055
>>47994556
what does this have to do with Chuubas?

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>>47999285
It can all work out, it's just less likely. I'd accept it if it's necessary for the story setup

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^bait

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>>48001506
That isn't bait at all.

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>>48001440
I don't even know if anyone has a fetish like that. I can imagine someone being into uncle on niece shit, but not when the niece is older. Why not just go for a regular hag incest story with an aunt at that point? It's a unique idea, but feels like a lot of unnecessary hoops to jump through.

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>>47996610
The question is, would cunny or hag suit this better? Hag because they're older, but cunny because they're your niece.

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>>48001440
In theory, I could see it being part of the story setup. Like one of those Niece needs to move in but suprise they're actually older than you thought. Though it's probably better if the age gap is only like 5-10 years at most because the hag/shota difference would basically be better fit by just making it a standard aunt/nephew thing >>48001813 like this anon says.
Personally I think the younger uncle/older niece thing would better fit in as a modified kissing cousins thing with like Bae or Shion being the older girl that you've mistakenly been handed responsibility for as their uncle.

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>>48002003
Lolibaba to double down on the convoluted age shenanigans

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>>48002308
How the fuck would gura work? She's your niece by way of Poseidon being your dad and Triton being hers?

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>>48002226
>Parents die in a crash while you're still a teenager
>Uncle and aunt died three years ago
>Custody of you is given to your niece, Shion, who is five years older than you
Yeesh, this sounds complicated, but we might just be onto something.

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>>48002226
>>48003004
You fucking geniuses.

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Fuck off, I don't need anymore WIPs. Dammit. *Opens blank document*

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>>48001317
Nothing at all.

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>>48004005
Why are you talking about it then?

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>>48004807
I'm not, just pointing out that they're just shitposting.

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>>48003004
I might use this idea, but have her be your half-niece (or whatever it's called). So her granfather is your father, but her grandmother is not your mother, you were born to someone younger, maybe a bastard child from an affair. Not because I dislike incest, but because that just makes things more feasible.

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>>48003934
Better than me
>I need to work on this WIP so I can start another one.
>Stare at the doc for 30 minutes, give up and do something else.

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>>47868887
>offering to cook Fauna's meals and using the opportunity to sneak increasing amounts of meat into her diet over an extended period of time

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Finally got this done after stalling on it for weeks. Shame pastebin doesn't allow for smut anymore:

https://gmyza.blogspot.com/2023/04/woolcraft-eira-woolcott-mf.html

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>>48006347
Holy shit she's ugly.

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>>47984210
Who the hell is pomu?

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>>47952159
nice

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New thread
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>>48006545
I'm Pomu. Or are you thinking of Ban Hada

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>>48006347
Was this supposed to be unanchored? If not, you should anchor it in the new thread.

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>>48006347
I ain't clucking that link