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/wg/ - Writing General - Spider Queen Edition Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:13:40 2023 No.47502721 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>47428833

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:13:59 2023 No.47502747 File: 3.46 MB, 1500x2000, __akai_haato_hololive_drawn_by_magowasabi__f1dca846484ea2753d31027ed39cc892.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:15:01 2023 No.47502844
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:16:04 2023 No.47502914
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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

"Tetris Rage" tags: suisei, miko, wedgie, tetris, short story:>>47493226

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Pretending to be Towa's BF after girls won't stop being thirsty for her. It works initially but sooner or later more unhinged girls try to take you out of the picture, permanently. How far are you willing to go for this charade for the sake of your friend's comfort?:>>47430803

Kemonomimi ear sex onegai.:>>47442822

Sex with full moon Mio!:>>47444665

Futa Towa hardfucking Tsuna, who intends to introduce Beni to the Twapper shaft.:>>47452860

botan sex:>>47455218

I think a story about an unwanted pregnancy would be really interesting, and could go a lot of different ways:>>47470664

Convincing Towa to use her natural voice to whisper in your ear while she jerks you off:>>47475795

Fubuki overcoming her childhood trauma of getting absolutely trashed in games:>>47476112

Solving the captcha for Roboco's ESL shitposts:>>47492441

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:21:09 2023 No.47503311 File: 8 KB, 249x243, 1680795856402803.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] So there's like, what, eight/nine threads to sift through for stories now?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:29:56 2023 No.47503942 >>47503311 The moment I step away to go for a quick drive it dies. It feels like I’m the only one bumping the threads.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:43:50 2023 No.47504897 File: 511 KB, 1008x916, 1680749172572938.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] There might be tough times write and readbros, but they will pass. No amount of bait or schizos can take away the passion (You) have.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:45:17 2023 No.47504990 Looking for wedgie story prompts again! Short and simple is appreciated

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 00:52:41 2023 No.47505396

>>47504990
Not to shit on your kink, but could it literally be ANYTHING besides pulling a girl's underwear so high that it begins to tear at the elastic waistband? You could also dig through the prompt archive and just pick one at random and whatever fluffy romance or sex was asked for, you could just replace it with a wedgie and call yourself golden.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:12:25 2023 No.47506761 >>47503311 I was making chicken fried rice, gomenasai. >>47504990 Saving Rushia from jumping off a building by giving her a wedgie.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:14:30 2023 No.47506922 >>47506761 Lmfao I won’t do that because it’s really dark but that’s really funny >>47505396 I also like swirlies, if that helps

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:16:22 2023 No.47507072 File: 1.05 MB, 2560x1440, 1681533762267561.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47506922 It honestly doesn't. It makes me a little concerned where it all comes from. I'm worried about you, anon.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:18:14 2023 No.47507212 >>47507072 I can trace it back to one art piece I saw at 10 years old lol

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:25:23 2023 No.47507733 >>47507212 It always starts young doesn't it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:26:39 2023 No.47507817 >>47507733 Yes If you have suggestions I’d love to hear them owo

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:27:27 2023 No.47507862

>>47506761
Well that just gave me the hilarious image of Rushia hanging off a building hook via her panties because you went to look for someone to help catch her after savinf her via wedgie... Then the rest of gen 3 comes rushing out to try and save her from the suicide attempt only to start laughing as they see her wedgied off a building.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:32:28 2023 No.47508217 >>47507862 The idea is fucking hilarious but the story would be like, morally questionable. I can envision something similar where someone is like “watch this!” And tries to jump off something as a stunt only to get caught via wedgie

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:35:44 2023 No.47508414 >>47508217 NTA but the fact that it was an attempted suicide being prevented by a wedgie and not just dumb shenanigans makes it way funnier.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:38:53 2023 No.47508619

>>47508414
While I do think there's a dark humor to be found in Rushia wedgied off a building and getting laughed at by her genmates after a failed suicide attempt, you'd have to write that shit with a firm hand if you don't want to go to either extreme of full shitpost or full darkfic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:38:59 2023 No.47508632 File: 114 KB, 986x940, 1666702070950078.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47507212 It was definitely just art you saw, surely no interpersonal events led to this at all.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:41:01 2023 No.47508786 >>47508632 It earnestly wasn’t. I’ve never once given or gotten a wedgie, and have never once been bullied in a physical way. I think if I was I wouldn’t think it’s hot.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:43:04 2023 No.47508925 >>47508786 So is this like an incest thing where were people with actual siblings/have actually gotten wedgied wouldn't like it then?

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 01:51:50 2023 No.47509515

>>47508925
I mean we’re getting pretty down in the weeds here, but there are plenty of people who do like wedgies and that was caused by getting them, and often that expresses itself as them liking to get wedgies. I don’t like that, only looking at them. But maybe they’re all liars, idk. I’m not them.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:10:23 2023 No.47510959 >>47509515 Were you in an orphanage once?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:22:05 2023 No.47511810 >>47504897 The cycle of trying for pregnancy...

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:28:16 2023 No.47512265

>>47504990
One troublesome Anon has been running around the hololive offices giving all of the girls wedgies for no reason. Fed up with this, all of hololive teams up to capture wedgy Anon, hang him up by his underpants, and then take turns kicking his balls until they explode.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:39:44 2023 No.47513019
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>>47511810
Koyori doesn't need to "try". She has sex calculated down to the nearest decimal for optimum impregnation. Finding the right anon on the other hand, is another story.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:45:55 2023 No.47513406 >>47504990 Pekora and Miko sneakily giving each other worse and worse wedgies while forced to record the Deco*27 song for holofes together

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 02:53:20 2023 No.47513796 >>47502844 Susei becomes a Luna apprentice in her attempts of raping Aqua and Mori

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:07:39 2023 No.47514655 >>47513796 Is Luna a good teacher for that? I feel like she'd just rely on abusing her position of royal authority.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:09:16 2023 No.47514744

>>47508632
Not wedgieanon but I got mine by being a perverted kid who liked butt and panties at 6 years of age thanks to the og dragon ball. the rare 2 cartoon scenes where girls got their girly undies wedgied had me feeling weird, the tabooness of it lead me to wonder. And maybe part of it was that I liked to pester and be mean to girls because of the ‘girls suck’ thing? I don’t know but goddamn I was dumb

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:09:19 2023 No.47514751 >>47513796 Luna raping Suisei to teach her how to do it? Wouldn't Miko be a better practical teacher?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:12:21 2023 No.47514917 >>47513406 What song

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:14:10 2023 No.47515009 >>47510959 No.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:17:55 2023 No.47515194
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>>47514655
ask subaru
>>47514751
honestly i was thinking a bit of a shitpost angle, with suisei walking into a dark room where luna is sitting in a throne and choco is kneeling next to her, with the bit being luna using ye olde english with her retarded accent

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 03:36:11 2023 No.47516053

>>47503942
There's too many generals being made lately. You're getting 100 to 200 reply threads for literal who chuubas, new small corpos, redebuted termination victims.
I think as long as we persist and keep making new breads, some of these generals will die or combine.
The worst thing we can do is sink into despair and mass suicide ourselves like /rose/

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 04:08:04 2023 No.47517699 >>47503942 You wouldn't be if you stopped being a schizo shitposter.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 04:09:10 2023 No.47517760 >>47513019 >Anon walks into the bedroom >''honey i have the best instrument to help you'' >pulls out a sextant

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 04:42:43 2023 No.47519538 >>47513019 sex the dog

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 04:44:51 2023 No.47519659

>>47513019
>Finding the right anon on the other hand, is another story
I‘m right here and willing. Dunno how many times I‘ve rewatched her latest live and thought: „Man she really dances like a genki, desperate hag.“
It’s like a mating dance and it’s pulling me in.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 05:06:38 2023 No.47520693 >>47514655 Ever since she mastered that magnum she's been unstoppable Her pussy has finally received the stretching it needed but it has awoken a beast

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 05:39:20 2023 No.47522063 >>47520693 Did Ocelot fuck Luna?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 06:23:33 2023 No.47523708 >>47514917 They performed this one on the Holo*27 stage https://youtu.be/_ZJ8MrEXIio

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 06:29:24 2023 No.47523906 >>47523708 Oh ok, neat! Personally though I’m more partial to https://youtu.be/_ZJ8MrEXIio

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 06:51:06 2023 No.47524438 >>47523906 You linked the same song I don't think it's that good, but it's the only song they performed together after they had their falling out so it fits the story idea best.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 06:55:20 2023 No.47524530 >>47524438 Wait, I swear I copied the right link. Maybe I just had a senior moment. This is the one I meant https://youtu.be/NjtIAuZQN_E

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:00:45 2023 No.47524667
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>>47504990
Shion trying to use magic to give idunfuckingknown Noel a wedgie and just giving her self one of those over the head ones accidentally

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:05:18 2023 No.47524780 >>47504990 Has there been a prompt involving living clothes? Magic/science fuckery could be a good premise.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:06:30 2023 No.47524808 >>47524667 She absolutely would lol (for reference, that one’s called an “atomic wedgie”). Any more thoughts on the why/where of it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:16:30 2023 No.47525021 >>47524780 There hasn’t yet! Do you have any ideas for specifics?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:22:29 2023 No.47525153 >>47469641 Top text should've said "all janitor applications have been successfully thrown in the trash"

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:31:29 2023 No.47525363 >>47525153 >"all janitor applications have been successfully thrown in the trash" No wonder we get such shitty janitors if they're recruited from the trash

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 07:58:54 2023 No.47525954 Is the guy who wrote Positive ID still here?

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:08:15 2023 No.47526130

>>47525021
I can think of a few but I can only come up with generic stuff.
One chuuba introducing another to a "super secret premium" shop that sells "exotic underwear", which is basically living underwear,
Chuubas fighting in a fantasy setting but one enemy/trap inflicts a curse that turns their underwear into living clothes, which will screw with the chuubas at the worst possible timing.
Or perhaps a chuuba striking a deal with an otherworldly entity and circumstances require said entity to disguise as the chuuba's panties.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:15:33 2023 No.47526295

>>47526130
>Or perhaps a chuuba striking a deal with an otherworldly entity and circumstances require said entity to disguise as the chuuba's panties.
That sounds like the premise for a blatant fetish fic but like for something a bit degenerate than wedgies

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:42:07 2023 No.47526934 >>47526295 Well when you think about it, wedgies are essentially one part of a broader fetish, in the same way steak is one part of a bigger meal.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:44:36 2023 No.47527013 >>47526934 >steak is one part of a bigger meal The cow?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:49:54 2023 No.47527160 >>47527013 I was thinking along the lines of those European full-course meals but technically you're also correct.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 08:51:04 2023 No.47527187 >>47527160 >those European full-course meals Do they eat the whole herd?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 09:21:03 2023 No.47527975 >>47527160 Everyone should be familiar with the concept of a dessert following the main course, at least. But I highly recommend trying at least 6-9 courses at a good restaurant once, it's very different from one or two.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 09:28:20 2023 No.47528142 >>47527975 What the hell

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 09:29:34 2023 No.47528166 >>47528142 Quality post

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 09:57:17 2023 No.47528724 >>47528166 I'm just baffled at how someone can eat a six course meal.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:07:00 2023 No.47528960 >>47528724 With very, very small portions. That are still fully-priced.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:07:34 2023 No.47528974 >>47528724 My understanding is that they're much tinier than full courses by US standards.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:07:37 2023 No.47528976
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Get a random fic from the archive and share your thoughts
>Love Bites 2 Bloody Kisses
...And it's a deleted fic, good thing we have the hard archive.
I haven't read the original, but damn this is some rough prose; and the fact that it's supposed to be first person gura only makes it read weirder since the 'narrative voice' used in it just doesn't feel like her.
The quality does gets better when it goes to the cannibalism fetish stuff but even then the entire thing feels weirdly distant from being erotic despite the prose trying to be hot. I suppose the detail it goes into the cannibalism thing is how someone into the fetish would find this hot but as for me the lack of 'feelings' coming from the narration just exacerbates the gross out from the /meat/ tier content.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:12:06 2023 No.47529074

>>47528724
I've heard that some meals can go up to 20+
Effectively a Royal feast. And that is not hyperbolic.
These meals also tend to take hours to cook & eat and are treated as full-on social event. You're not just gobbling them down like a speed-eating contest in a typical burger joint.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:33:03 2023 No.47529510 >>47529074 Damn, I wish I wasn't poor.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 10:35:36 2023 No.47529580

>>47528724
Up to 12 courses isn't extremely rare (though I think 7-9 is best). Most are small, and they're spread out over hours; you can find a great variety of food orders and structures depending on the circumstances.
It's a nice way to structure an evening with many guests because you have breaks where people get up or switch seats to make conversation with different folks than the people seated around them, until the next course comes in and you get back to your seat. Between some courses there's also plenty of time for speeches or music performances, if someone feels so inclined.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 11:12:48 2023 No.47530492 >>47529580 Sounds fancy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 11:33:12 2023 No.47531072 >>47528976 >Mommy issues I despise saplings. This is well written but i find it disgusting

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 11:37:53 2023 No.47531234 why is the suisei raping mori prompt so common? is it just one guy who really wants the story or multiple anons who just happen to share this?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 11:42:15 2023 No.47531385 >>47531234 Is it that common? Ive seen it once every few threads and it has been bounced around so even if it was one guy, some people at least entertain the idea

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:05:08 2023 No.47532197 >>47531234 Its more than one guy because i posted it once or twice but someone else posted the prompt after i got banned Flatties fucking titcows is just right

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:07:12 2023 No.47532272 >>47524808 STR builds are overrated t. gaki, moments before humiliating herself Wouldn't the office make the most sense? Or I guess backstage somewhere.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:14:25 2023 No.47532583
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>>47528976
I'll do a few
>Assassin's creed: Hololive
Ehh, a direct crossover doesn't really work. It feels a bit creatively bankrupt. Instead of literally naming it "AC: Hololive" and setting it in the AC universe with AC characters, what the author should have done was just make a chuuba fanfic about assassins. Something that's been inspried by AC and is similar, but not literally AC. Prose was ok, but there was something very off about the dialogue. It felt flat and too quick to progress. It's hard to explain, but maybe it wasn't flowery enough? I don't know why I'm writing a full on review though, the author already left.

>Death Before Dishonour
Nice. This is the GOOD shit. I still prefered the orignal over this sequel but the dialogue is so witty and amusing. It was such a blast to read through again. I struggle to understand how some people can come up with such good metaphors, vocabulary and comparisons in their prose.

>Senchou Really Needs A Man
Oh nice, some Marine fluff about marrying a desperate hag? Let's give it a re-
No, no, no, no. Fuck that.

>Receive you
Maaaan, this takes me fucking back, I can't believe we used pastebin for that long. Was this made while the thread was still "Post chuubas being abusive"? I've never been too into abuse but I can give it a pass when it's Pol, and when the story has Yakuza references.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:26:09 2023 No.47533162 hey what the fuck happened to the heartlock guy

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:27:51 2023 No.47533253 >>47528976 I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna read Holofantasy again.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 12:35:47 2023 No.47533643 >>47533162 I'm reasonably certain he's auntieanon and going by the last post I found >>46862247 he's stuck with work and uni alongside being in wip hell for two other fics.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 13:13:59 2023 No.47535294 >>47533253 Make sure to read the April Fool's chapter.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 13:39:08 2023 No.47536310
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>>47533253
I re-read the castle arc recently. It's so damn good in all the developments it makes, how the traversing the spire felt, and the scenes themselves. I fucking love spooky themed areas. I can't wait to try writing my own someday.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 13:40:59 2023 No.47536379 >>47535294 Unironically one of the most high-quality April fool's joke chapters someone has ever made for a fic.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 13:42:05 2023 No.47536418
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>>47502844
Fubuki makes good on her threat to turn Okayu into her cumpet after defeating her in the PuyoTetris tournament.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOFXeA2h3tY&t=11145s

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 13:58:32 2023 No.47537101

>>47536310
Honestly? The castle arc might have been my least favourite. Don’t get me wrong, I enjoyed it, but it was LONG, to the point where it felt like a slog at times. It didn’t help that we only had one party member with us instead of the whole crew. Like I said, I still enjoyed it, but my favourite chapters were the painting world and the first meeting with Marine. I hope AA continues pure black too.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:05:35 2023 No.47537431
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>>47537101
I felt like the entire arc flowed really well. I also didn't mind the length at all. Says man whose past two arcs were 6 and 7 chapters long. I also feel the dynamic of the reduced party really helped add to the tension of the arc. I'm also a sucker for the emotional revelation anon went through due to the challenges he faced.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:51:42 2023 No.47539670 File: 126 KB, 850x1172, sickos.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] So how are your wips going anon?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:53:20 2023 No.47539760 >>47539670 I opened a blank doc and typed out the title.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:55:57 2023 No.47539911 >>47539760 So you're done with the most difficult part?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:57:14 2023 No.47539975 >>47537431 >>47536310 >>47537101 Anything you feel could've been done better?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:57:36 2023 No.47540003 File: 84 KB, 310x289, 1659277437029377.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47539760 >managed to do the title first I kneel to whoever can do this.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:59:36 2023 No.47540117 >>47539911 >>47540003 Are titles really that big a deal? I just put down the first thing that comes to mind, and then change it later if I come up with something better.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 14:59:52 2023 No.47540136 File: 166 KB, 438x617, 1681096041099002.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47539670 slowly but surely

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:01:27 2023 No.47540244 >>47540117 Oh, if you tend to change it later it's not that impressive. I tend to not really give one at all until I find good ones

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:06:14 2023 No.47540532

>>47540117
For me, it's about making a title that I feel encompasses either the content of the chapter overall, but also doesn't really spoil much. Finding a title that strikes a balance between physical imagery and the themes of the chapter is also tough for me sometimes.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:10:02 2023 No.47540748 File: 5 KB, 225x225, descarga (5).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47539670 Very minimal progress on main story but i started cooking something on the side that shows promise

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:16:32 2023 No.47541156 >>47533162 What >>47533643 said All fics are dropped and dead until updated

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:17:34 2023 No.47541212 >>47539670 Wrote 4 k and then realized it didn't work.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:22:02 2023 No.47541463 >>47539670 Currently reading One Piece instead of writing anything.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:24:46 2023 No.47541640
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>>47539975
While I know the issue of trust was a very central theme to the arc, I think it was getting a little heavy handed in some parts. It had almost a little TOO much angst. This also might be my own styling talking, but almost every major room and floor having a big encounter in it must have been exhausting for the heroes as well as the writer. It might have benefited from things like how the two skellebros helped out slightly early on. Little things also like finding an alternate route to sidestep danger, or removing obstacles in a way that doesn't involve slashing through them can help shake things up while still keeping the threats of the castle looming and real.
I do want to say I think the details and love you gave this arc really shine through. The little things like the menu in separate docs was a really awesome idea. I might have to try that for myself at some point when I find an good opportunity, I actually might have one soon!

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>>47539670
Not bad. This current chapter is moving along swimmingly. Managing to write 3k over a weekend is actually a huge win for me considering how busy my weekends usually are; this one particularly so since I went out and touched grass for 6+ hours each day starting Friday. The content of this one is also really fun for me to write, so I'm having a blast no matter how slow the progress might be.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:35:04 2023 No.47542263

>>47539975
I know Rushia didn't get a fight because the party was in the 'good end' scenario for the ending but I feel like she should have gotten something after all the buildup rather than just being the fight that got skipped because the party got all the mcguffins.
I know as a dice based narrative shit like that is bound to happen but I feel like it was kind of unsatisfying ended even if that was kind of 'the point' of the good end scenario.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:43:28 2023 No.47542734

>>47542263
I kinda got the impression that Rushia DIDN'T want to fight the entire time unless her efforts to reverse the curse was being threatened. Everyone who knew her described her as kind and selfless in that she's putting in all this time and effort to help free their souls. With how the plotline went, maybe something like her and anon having to team up the final lingering energies of the curse that take up the form of some monster would have given you that fight you were looking for? It might have been overkill at that point though. I also think the fact that she didn't have to fight was satisfying in its own way.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:52:16 2023 No.47543241

>>47542734
I was kind of assuming that the 'neutral/ could turn to a good' end was going to have a Rushia fight if you didn't have ALL pieces of the phylactery, presumably as some last ditch 'master of the castle possesses the current host' thing.
Like yeah, narratively it's kind of fitting that she didn't have a fight but in effect she kind of got screwed for screentime given that most of the chapter was basically the beat down and the resolving.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 15:55:41 2023 No.47543439

>>47542263
Both routes had potential for a Rushia fight.
If Rushia failed to control the amulet directly, she would've been possessed by the last vestiges of Andras' soul, which would had lead to a fight with the Possessed Necromancer - which is where the track I linked forever ago, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pp6Uzj91iy8 , would've come into play as Anon and probably Marine were forced to play ghostbuster, HOPEFULLY without killing her, though that was on the table.
In the "failure to find the pieces" route, it was just a coinflip, same as the 'good' route. Rushia had a sheet, somewhere, I don't remember where it was.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 16:20:57 2023 No.47544902
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>>47543439
It's so damn impressive and inspiring to know you had multiple routes planned out for all these stories and encounters. I've only completely flipped on what my original planned ending for something was twice so far, and that was mainly because I wanted a different feel for the conclusion than what I originally set out for.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 16:24:53 2023 No.47545126 File: 92 KB, 400x300, Suichanwa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47502844 Suisei yandere fic with as little suicopathy as possible.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 16:26:28 2023 No.47545202 >>47545126 How's that gonna work? Yanderes are psychotic in nature aren't they?

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 16:35:43 2023 No.47545682

>>47545202
That's why I said as little suicopathy as possible. You're going to need at least a little bit of it in order to make a yandere Suisei since there needs to be something twisted in there to be a yandere. Well, unless you want to go that 'yandere but not psychopath' concept that one anon gave out a couple of threads back.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 17:17:31 2023 No.47547751 >>47502844 Suisei leg worship

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 17:37:59 2023 No.47548716 >>47547751 This, but she worships (You)r legs

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 17:40:53 2023 No.47548884 File: 7 KB, 234x234, suiseipog.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47548716 Mutual leg worship.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 17:44:55 2023 No.47549075 >>47548884 >you will never trade compliments with Suichan about how beautiful her slin and womanly legs are as she congratulates you on your powerful quads Why even live

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 17:46:23 2023 No.47549142 >>47548884 A lexty-nine, so to say.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 18:08:00 2023 No.47550155 File: 489 KB, 611x497, 1679358289258331.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47549075 >Mutual compliments on the others physique IN ADDITION TO hatesex. Oh that's good. That's very good. Yes, I like that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 18:41:30 2023 No.47551597 >>47549142 lexty-nine doesn't even make sense

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 18:44:35 2023 No.47551723 >>47551597 Why not?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:03:34 2023 No.47552587 >>47502721 Would you be interesting in participate on Lord of The Board? we could decide our rep through a Poll or something >>47489806 >>47490063

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:08:40 2023 No.47552824 >>47552587 like the vt league divegrass but with wrestling? sounds fun

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:25:11 2023 No.47553670 >>47549075 >Implying (You) have powerful quads

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:35:19 2023 No.47554193
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Alright, so I've been working on something that would involve adding images on the Google Doc but every time I try to upload the image I want to use, it instantly goes blank with a warning sign. Anyone know how to fix that ?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:37:09 2023 No.47554300 >>47554193 Try asking google. Got the answer within seconds, so I don’t know why you just don’t do that instead.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 19:51:02 2023 No.47554973 >>47554300 Nigga, did you think I'd be asking here if I didn't do that ?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 20:22:04 2023 No.47556565 >>47552587 Send in the Fly

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 20:26:07 2023 No.47556764 File: 155 KB, 448x448, 1646883124367.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47556565 Holy fucking shit, this so much. That'd be hilarious.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 20:36:11 2023 No.47557213 >>47556565 Yes

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:01:12 2023 No.47558402 >>47554300 >>47554973 (Me) Nevermind, I just put it in a Word document end exported it.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:06:38 2023 No.47558775

>>47502747
Alright, so, while working on my Mori fic, I figured I'd be doing a little something to show you a glimpse of what I had in store past the introduction arc and make the wait mroe bearable (as well as letting people know that I didn't abandon the project). Think of it as a supplementary material of sorts: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRx8GiHxdbXejta2gtwPNQypV2B05Iy1vfv7Bup2rnPmpzE-C2nEofwopfTEHieFbdW845n8W1Nh4gb/pub

Tags: Fantasy, SFW, mentioned Mori, Supplementary material

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:23:40 2023 No.47559735 >>47558775 >mori Hard pass.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:25:39 2023 No.47559844 >>47558775 >mori lets fucking go!

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:26:45 2023 No.47559910 >>47559735 >>47559844 The duality of man.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:26:47 2023 No.47559913 >>47552587 Interesting, who would our representative wrestler be, /vt/? >>47556565 Ehh…

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:44:38 2023 No.47560867

>>47559910
And the duality of Deadbeats, more specifically.

>>47556565
I was about to say that you would might have a hard time making a fly-like wrestler in that game but apparently you can just give the organizers a good description of what you want the character to look like and they will try to make it. I do not have any better idea, so unless something better comes along I would be fine with you submitting it via the form in >>47489806 But it is probably best to give more people time to chime in, I think.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 21:44:48 2023 No.47560878
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>>47558775
Not bad. I'm interested to see what the first installment of this story you have looks like. I think the grammar could use a little once over though. For example: "However, not every soul is pleased with that idea and escape form the Underworld."
Unless it's meant to be implied that any soul who doesn't want to be there escapes the underworld, it would flow better to to word it as they attempt it, rather than succeed indefinitely.
"try to escape from the underworld." Another proofread might help you find the sentences that could flow just a little bit better too. I got no hard opinions for or against the rapping reaper, but the flavor and potential of her lore is sometimes too good to pass up. Another potential piece of feedback if you intend to continue with a bestiary / journal styling, make full use of spacing formatting, like adding notes of just things like "weapons to have: 1, 2, 3, etc" or "Number encountered so far: 7, got a bad gash from number 4" There's a lot of fun things you can do to make it really eye catching while also sprinkling fun info here and there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 22:18:11 2023 No.47562643 >>47556565 Shit. There really is no better option for a thread rep, it's simultaneously funny while also being a reference to us.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 22:19:19 2023 No.47562702

>>47560878
I already put the first chapter actually, look up "Diary of a new life" in the archive (series directory), second chapter is getting out of my WIP of shame and I just made that to make the wait more bearable in the meantime (I'll also add more entries to this bestiary after the introduction arc ends and the story proper begins though).

TL;DR: Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind.

Anonymous Mon Apr 17 22:38:37 2023 No.47563699
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>>47562702
Dang. Didn't mean to to flake over that. Thanks for the direction, I gave the first chapter a read. I think you gave the anon the right amount of skepticism, and also resigning to playing with the hand he's dealt. Giving him a life he regrets leaving at least on the surface was also a great choice. It might also be my personal preference, but I like to separate lines between when two different characters are speaking, I feel like it can visually make it easier to see who is talking. I think you also got Mori's dialect nailed in some spots. Overall, I like the idea and your execution will only get better with practice. Keep up the good work dude.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 23:06:08 2023 No.47565122 >>47528976 >Ameranthine I liked it. The story itself stuck with me. >“Why…? I just… want to be happy.” That line hit me out of nowhere, man, goddamn. Then the ending, Jesus Christ. Good work, overall.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 23:08:59 2023 No.47565271 >>47563699 Yeah, I've been told that too when I released it. I took care of that lining problem, don't worry. That was more me being rusty than anything lol

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 23:45:41 2023 No.47567311 File: 797 KB, 1443x1019, 1681509861343778.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47565271 Good stuff. Looking forward to the next piece.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 23:46:36 2023 No.47567351 >>47553670 Suisei makes sure you don't skip leg day

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 17 23:53:53 2023 No.47567771 >>47567311 Thanks, hopefully it'll meet the expectations I set up.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 00:32:41 2023 No.47570376 File: 158 KB, 1063x1063, 1670377433514899.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47567771 The most important expectations are (You)rs. It's gotta be the story YOU want.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 00:52:12 2023 No.47571797 >>47525954 I am! What's up?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 01:00:46 2023 No.47572387 >>47571797 NTA, but I liked your story a lot

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 01:07:09 2023 No.47572824 >>47570376 I know, but people told me that my project looked promising, so I don't wanna disappoint them either, ya know ? But thanks for the encouragement, I really appreciate it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 01:37:53 2023 No.47574941 >>47571797 Any plans to continue it? I quite liked the concept and your writing.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 01:40:08 2023 No.47575100 >>47556565 I don’t know if I want bug-fucking to be what defines /wg/. It’s funny, but is that an accurate representation of the stories we share?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 01:49:18 2023 No.47575719 >>47556565 I'll cast my vote for it. >>47575100 No, but it shows the creative freedom and desenetization we keep around here

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 02:01:19 2023 No.47576593 >>47575100 Not really but it's funny and is like the one fic where making a wrestler for it is feasible.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 02:51:44 2023 No.47580003 >>47556565 >mediocre commissioned fic that was written by a notorious threadshitter and is an overused joke is now the face of /wg/ Well, it was fun while it lasted.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 02:52:10 2023 No.47580034 Bump

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 03:01:28 2023 No.47580670 >>47580003 I'm pretty sure the only other real option would be making Miyuki by taking the hfz Fubuki and adding the details as shown in that one picture. Any other fic kind of sufffers from the fact that we all mostly use reader inserts as protags.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 03:30:34 2023 No.47582605 >>47556565 No.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 03:48:40 2023 No.47583643 >>47552587 We don't participate in Divegrass, we don't participate in VTuber Worldbuilding, why the fuck do you think we would want to participate in this?

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 04:03:01 2023 No.47584529

>>47572387
Hey thanks! Means a lot that people remember and like my stuff.

>>47574941
I do have plans for more. A chapter for each of missing ID's that each have different types of combat(Close quarters zombie horde combat for Ollie, Vietnam esque jungle warfare for Anya, mountain sniping fight for Iofi) as well as prequel chapter for how you and Reine got close after she gets honeypotted and almost kidnapped.

It'll probably be a while though, I've got a few other things I'd like to work on first.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 04:09:20 2023 No.47584899 >>47583643 to be fair no one participates in Vtuber Worldbuilding. Those anons who write stuff there never leave that thread

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 04:17:29 2023 No.47585326 >>47552587 >>47556565 I'm making a submission for The Fly right now for the form. Honestly just confused at the range of options other than the fact that I'm 100% confident that he'd be a heel.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 04:52:10 2023 No.47586971 >>47585326 lol

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 05:37:17 2023 No.47588706

>>47502844
All right, a simple prompt this time. (You) discover that Gura's tail is actually rather sensitive... in more ways than one.
>*bump*
>"Aaaahnn~"
>"Ah-oh, Gura, sorry for bumping into ya," you say as you lean in to check on her tail. "I hope this isn't bruised or anything."
>"Oh, no, Anon, don't worry about it-- ahhhnn~"
>You touched the tail to check it for bruises, but for some reason, it twitched as Gura moaned.
>"What in the world...?"
>"A-Anon, d-d-don't say anything! I'm sorry! It's, uh... it's an embarrassing secret of mine..."

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 05:54:43 2023 No.47589464 >>47585326 >I'm 100% confident that he'd be a heel. What does this mean in sports terminology?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 05:55:48 2023 No.47589507 >>47589464 The team you want to lose.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 05:56:49 2023 No.47589568 >>47589464 In wrestling it's the bad guy

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 06:14:46 2023 No.47590376 >>47589507 Oh, I see. Wait, you'd want the Fly to lose!?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 06:25:42 2023 No.47590780 >>47590376 The Fly is someone to be booed at rather than cheered.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 06:31:40 2023 No.47591043 >>47590780 No way, Jose. He IS the gigachad, the epitome of masculinity. Women want him, men want to BE him.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 06:31:57 2023 No.47591055 >>47590376 He seems like a villain, really. I mean, if he wins, he gets to violate the defeated. Also, sometimes, Heels win too.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 06:41:06 2023 No.47591413 >>47591055 He seems like an underdog to me. I'll be rooting for him.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 07:25:07 2023 No.47592767 >>47591413 Oh yeah, me too. I love seeing both underdogs and villains win. It'd be funny as fuck if he makes it to the top.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 07:25:22 2023 No.47592774 Test

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 07:48:21 2023 No.47593391
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>>47502747
I still need to change one little thing about this, but I just woke up and felt like posting it. I like how I did my Okayu here, though I wish I knew how to incorporate an accent into her speech a bit more. It was fun trying out a new fetish as always, and even though I had some difficulty at the end, from what I heard this was quite satisfactory. Anyway, read it if you want to, I guess.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT1nTDkY4WSh_svzSntyNOzQLx7yd71EI-tt9Sg4MaEY80BMVNSlbmSHDrlGYA2xBKzDIGTaw0hsVZV/pub

Tags: NSFW, Okayu, NTR/NTS, femdom, handjob

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 07:53:09 2023 No.47593531 File: 9 KB, 268x200, c3509e6c0c2f2408abe09e5157798255.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47593391 >fat cat story >it's NTR

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:18:56 2023 No.47594116 >>47593391 I don't think it's really for me, but if Chloecuck isn't around anymore he has missed out on something great.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:31:49 2023 No.47594431 What do the words "hot, wet and tight" mean to you?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:33:46 2023 No.47594491 >>47594431 Nothing. They’re just words. Why would they have any meaning.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:33:50 2023 No.47594494 File: 45 KB, 640x358, despy4.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47594431 Getting trapped in a washing machine

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:34:56 2023 No.47594521 File: 208 KB, 1062x1394, 1666784706394226.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47594431 Vesper's arsehole...

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:35:34 2023 No.47594535 >>47594431 They make me think of an enticing vagina that I would like to thrust my penis into repeatedly.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:52:59 2023 No.47594934 >>47594431 I think it'd be better if it was "warm, wet, and tight" than "hot, wet, and tight." The latter gives me the mental image of an exhaust pipe or someone's puckered bunghole.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:54:13 2023 No.47594966 >>47594934 The temperature difference is what separates an exhaust pipe from a vagina for you? Damn, anon.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 08:56:25 2023 No.47595016

>>47594966
More like the connotations of the word. In my mind, the word "hot" is more intense. Like the sun, or the barrel of an artillery gun after it fired off a few shells, or the engine of a T-34 during the Battle of Kursk.
"Warm" is a lot more inviting. It's the temperature of soup on a snowy evening, of fireplaces, and the pleasant temperature in tropical jungles whenever it's not April.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 09:01:30 2023 No.47595156

>>47595016
I getcha, it's just a difference in word association. I agree warm's better in general - if a chick's cunt was hot like the tray I bake my chicken tendies on, it'd be fucking weird; but for me, arousal somehow has gained association with temperature. Hot doesn't just mean a comfy place to park your todger, it also means she's rearing to go. Or he, if you swing that way.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 09:08:32 2023 No.47595337

>>47595156
True. It's probably because of how we say 'hot' when we mean 'sexy' and all that. For me, I'd use 'hot' if the scene is more "vulgar" in a sense. Like "sex under a table while your friends are around and unaware". 'Warm' meanwhile would be good if the scene's more intimate. Like the first time between two lovers.
The difference is subtle, I think. Like, "Oh yeah, that's hot," is said when you watch your oshi fingerbang herself silly, and "You're so... warm," is said when she snuggles up to your chest in bed.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 09:10:00 2023 No.47595379

>>47541640
I was too wiped at the moment but thanks for this minor writeup. I appreciate it. Ch. 6 had a few encounters that could've been dodged but only one actually was, I was trying to set it up to be sort of like the actual Castle Drachenfels supplement for WHFRP in which there was something horrible around every turn but still within reason, such as why other encounters were sort of mentioned/only seen briefly after different vignettes.
I'm also glad that you liked the small Rentry pages that were made for it; a bit tangential but still related, but I wanted to try and use music a bit more deliberately in that chapter but I ended up deciding against it in the end and kept it reserved for just the menus and Calliope's fight theme. But now I know that shops are an excellent place to use it too. I'm really glad you enjoyed it either way.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 09:48:29 2023 No.47596282 >>47594431 Moist

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 09:55:19 2023 No.47596434 File: 36 KB, 500x398, 1411176157465.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47594494 You smarmy cunt, you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 10:38:47 2023 No.47597500 >>47593531 What's wrong with that?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 10:40:09 2023 No.47597533 >>47597500 >what's wrong with NTR This general has really turned to shit

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 10:48:14 2023 No.47597725

>>47593391
Thanks for working with me on this, it really scratches an itch that no content posted here has managed to yet.
>>47594116
He better be. I haven't given up on Lui just quite yet - I just got rabbitholed by a terrible roguelike for months and have recently been freed

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 10:56:26 2023 No.47597925
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>>47539975
As I said before, it did feel a little long. Rather than there being too many characters and scenes, I think it was more a problem of spending too much time with those characters and in those scenes. Like the time with Mio could have been shortened, or the time resting at Mel's cafe.
Your prose tends to be quite flowery and often delves deep into the characters' thoughts and emotions to expand on them. While that is a good thing 90% of the time and often leaves me wishing I could write like you, it sometimes makes the word count bloated, and goes on a little too long about how the character is feeling or thinking when the story could be progressing instead.
That's just me personally, some might consider it better that way. Regardless, Holofantasy is one of the main reasons I've stuck around and continued writing stories here, so I'm always looking forward to the next installment.

Christ, I've been responding to so many emails at work lately, I nearly wrote "Kind regards" at the end.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 11:01:09 2023 No.47598046 >>47597925 >I nearly wrote "Kind regards" at the end. I feel that. On a spiritual level.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 11:01:09 2023 No.47598047 >>47597725 Damn, you just blew mind. You're not that guy then

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:07:40 2023 No.47599922

>>47558775
I didn't actually expect this series fic to ever come back. Hope you can make the next chapter soon.
As for the supplementary chapter, it's interesting worldbuilding. Kind of expected invisible text in the double wide space between the 'Secondly' and 'Finally' paragraph, so that should probably get fixed by deleting the extra space.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:21:49 2023 No.47600354

>>47558775
>>47562702
>Diary of a new life
>First chapter posted Oct 2021
Damnnn, I vaguely remember this and that someone kept talking about how it's being worked on. I mean hey, respect for continuing it, we all work at our own paces. I can't say much about this little info doc but I'll read and give a reveiw of chapter 2 if you release it.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:25:02 2023 No.47600475
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>>47595379
>There was another encounter that the heroes just barely dodged
Dios mio, my poor pirate hag. Thanks though for explaining the influence behind the castle itself and how it was so packed with danger. It also kinda adds to the detail of how Polka was freaking the fuck out when she learned where anon was taken to.
The Rentry pages were such a nice little addition. I should really try working with it myself sometime to add some flair to my own chapters. I've wanted to add music for a while too, but I've always been stuck on how I make it the most accessible, and finding something less lyrical that fits as well. I've actually played with the idea of linking songs I considered to be OP and EDs for arcs / character songs.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:33:27 2023 No.47600727 >>47600475 NTA, but KHInsider has a massive library of game OSTs that you can use. I prefer using that over youtube to avoid autoplay switching to a new song and potentially ruining the tone of a scene. Plus the audio tends to be higher quality.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:45:35 2023 No.47601122 >>47600727 Gotcha. This looks good to dive into. Since it's download based I'm guessing I'll embed the mp3 file itself into whatever doc I decide to put it in?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:47:53 2023 No.47601193 >>47601122 It would probably be easier to just link directly to the mp3 file on the site. It will let you play the music without having to download it.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:55:07 2023 No.47601439
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>>47600475
i remember reading a really bad but soulful crossover fanfic in like the year 2010 that had this kind of thing.
it was really nice but the gimmick runs out fast, specially if you start injecting weird songs that dont fit the mood i will never forgive Anubis Armor X vs Dark Gold saint Jack using a distubed song, damn you author

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 12:59:26 2023 No.47601575

>>47601122
For a simple fic hosted on gdocs its much better to just have it be linked so its an option rather than 'forced' on the reader.
Though I'm pretty sure there's no way to 'fully integrate' an mp3 on something gdocs published. Pretty sure that the only way to do something like that is if you're going to make something bigger than a fic like a twine game or something like that.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 13:10:05 2023 No.47601990
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>>47601193
Yup. I would have realized that if I clicked on literally anything instead of just reading how the home page just mentioned downloads.
>>47601439
I would be careful not to overkill it. If anything I would place a song during a final encounter fight, or a heart to heart between two characters. I like the idea of shop/tavern ambiance music as well.
>>47601575
Good to know, thanks anon!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 13:20:22 2023 No.47602415 >>47600354 Yeah, I know. Real life shit made it so that I had less time to work on it than I wanted to, and eventually it went to my WIP pile of shame until very recently. But thanks, hopefully I'll live up to your expectations.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 13:27:01 2023 No.47602655 >>47593391 Can't read it, sorry. I love the cat too much for that. From the bit I did read I think you got her general demeanor down pretty well.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 13:35:26 2023 No.47602975 >>47601439 >bad but soulful crossover fanfic What crossover with chuubas could have that potential?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 14:13:53 2023 No.47604463 >>47602655 But in this story Okayu loves you a lot too, so I don't see the problem

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 14:46:08 2023 No.47605857 File: 726 KB, 1563x2048, PolEarRub.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47502844 Making Polka cum from ear stimulation alone

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 14:49:27 2023 No.47606012 >>47605857 Is ear sex/penetration just something too weird for prose?

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 14:57:03 2023 No.47606355
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>>47606012
I don't think anything's too weird for prose but it is definitely foreign enough to dissuade people. Hard to compare fucking a kemo ear canal with something people can relate to, and just making it a pussy on their head seems kinda cheap and lazy. I wouldn't be against someone taking a crack at it though.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 15:02:08 2023 No.47606622

>>47606012
>>47606355
I honestly might just stick with making the ears an erogenous zone. Let touching and stimulating her ears add to her pleasure which translates back down below where (You) might already be buried into. Otherwise you're writing about sticking your D in her canal and talking about how the little hairs tickle you and stuff.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 15:31:28 2023 No.47607956 >>47605857 >touch Polka's big fluffy ears out of curiosity >she moans >a long and awkward pause follows as she realizes what she just did

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 15:39:09 2023 No.47608293 >>47593391 kys

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 15:39:37 2023 No.47608312 File: 266 KB, 1067x795, 1680823271560682.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47607956 There's an idea I should use sooner rather than later.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 15:40:29 2023 No.47608355 >Mori >NTR This thread is pure shit for now

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:07:10 2023 No.47609669 File: 136 KB, 400x400, HimeMori.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47608355 Hating Mori is so 2022 sister

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:24:00 2023 No.47610512 >>47609669 Cuna...

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:24:46 2023 No.47610551 >>47609669 Loving mori is so reddit, cuckbeat.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:41:26 2023 No.47611461
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>>47608355
Does it really make you seethe that badly that stories that contain content that doesn't interest you show up? You can just ignore the things with tags that don't do anything for you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:46:30 2023 No.47611760 >>47611461 Yeah, it bothers me when /wg/ gets filled with shit.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:49:39 2023 No.47611930

>>47611760
but it's not shit to someone else. Someone obviously has some amount of passion for those things that drove them to write it. You don't have to enjoy it, but just be cool with the fact that others might. Who knows? The story you don't like might just be that writer's stepping stone to another thing that you might end up enjoying.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 16:53:37 2023 No.47612125 >>47611930 Cucks don't deserve to be treated as human beings. and most NTR shit are written by schizo fags that you wants the (You)

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:05:59 2023 No.47612796 why are you guys repliying to him

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:06:11 2023 No.47612805 >>47612125 Holy ESL

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:36:51 2023 No.47614433 >>47612125 Who hurt you?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:38:37 2023 No.47614555 >>47612805 >minor spelling mistake >>47614433 Who hurt you to make you masturbate to the idea of getting cucked lmao

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:39:51 2023 No.47614633 >>47614555 What have you written?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:44:37 2023 No.47614921 >>47614633 No Cuck shit, that's for sure

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 17:47:11 2023 No.47615077 >>47614921 Is that the name of you fic? No Cuck Shit?

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 18:19:28 2023 No.47616798

>>47612796
/wg/ still has to learn the rule of not replying to threadshitters. Seriously, even when the board's slow this garbage happens.

If you see someone making an absolutely abhorrent post that serves no purpose as critique or at least as a funny shitpost, just ignore it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:11:34 2023 No.47619545 File: 133 KB, 850x1328, IrohaKneeling.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:19:33 2023 No.47619972 File: 971 KB, 1500x1500, 1681523943089893.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47619545 I WILL make Iroha kneel one day.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:25:28 2023 No.47620337 File: 115 KB, 850x1239, IrohaField.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47619972 Yeah, maybe at your grave after she kills you in a duel

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:29:13 2023 No.47620536 File: 649 KB, 2447x1835, 1678951854624381.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47620337 She may wound me immensely, but she will purposely make it not a lethal blow. I'm too handsome to kill.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:39:24 2023 No.47621136 File: 687 KB, 1500x500, IrohaStance.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47620536 I think she'll let Chakimaru be the judge of that

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:55:03 2023 No.47622022 File: 100 KB, 768x834, 1681347834767179.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47621136 Do I automatically lose if my sword doesn't have a cool name?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:55:41 2023 No.47622052 >>47619972 I'm also still thinking of the defeating Iroha prompt.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 19:58:56 2023 No.47622242 >>47622052 Does it end in humiliating sex?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:00:49 2023 No.47622344 File: 760 KB, 1327x2048, IrohaRain.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47622022 It's a significant handicap. Especially if you want her to spare you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:01:01 2023 No.47622358 >>47622242 You could write it that way, but she might also be willing to submit to a superior warrior.

Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:02:28 2023 No.47622442
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>>47622242
NTA, but it would have a smidge of humiliation at first, but then both parties just letting themselves fall into the attraction they have for one another and bump hips until the sun goes down.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:04:16 2023 No.47622561 File: 2.62 MB, 256x256, 1652650852324.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47622344 Anon might be fucked then.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:18:01 2023 No.47623380 File: 126 KB, 736x1200, FtrAxHQacAAFSyF.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47622344 Anon getting disgraced by Iroha prompt???

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:38:37 2023 No.47624547 Still baffles me how Iroha got so popular with such a bland and generic model

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:41:31 2023 No.47624713 >>47624547 She's one of too many blondes and her face doesn't stand out, but her clothes and Samurai theme aren't that generic. I'm glad she has now found her footing after the initial trouble.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 20:43:55 2023 No.47624867 File: 694 KB, 4096x2216, IrohaDesignSheet.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47623380 >ywn lose to Iroha and have to be her slave until you get good enough to earn your freedom >>47624547 Simplicity =/= bland and generic

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 21:09:53 2023 No.47626233 >>47621136 Does that name mean something?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 21:11:45 2023 No.47626339 >>47626233 >he doesn't know the significance of Chakimaru Foolish, ignorant gaijin

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 21:30:12 2023 No.47627321 >>47626339 Can't disagree with you there

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:11:01 2023 No.47629699 >>47624547 Because >Iroha-san daishouri

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:20:24 2023 No.47630288 >>47626233 It’s the name of her sword you, you foolish, ignorant gaijin.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:21:46 2023 No.47630389 Can you list all the blade names of hololive?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:23:27 2023 No.47630511 File: 1.13 MB, 2896x4096, 1674049648549675.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47624867 God that sarashi cloth is so hot

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:25:07 2023 No.47630614 >>47630389 bro i just cum to the designs i didn't know their fucking weapons have names

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:26:54 2023 No.47630721 >>47630389 I know Chakimaru, Rakshasa, Asura and Anya Melfissa.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:36:56 2023 No.47631293 >>47630389 Can you?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:37:25 2023 No.47631320 >>47631293 No, I forgot Anya.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:39:27 2023 No.47631446 >>47631320 that's okay, so did everyone else

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:43:52 2023 No.47631764 >>47624867 iroha is cute and loyal, she would willingly submit to the cock in a consensual way >Iroha patiently kneeling in front of your dick, salivating a little but waitinga for your orders

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 22:57:37 2023 No.47632641 File: 1.21 MB, 1032x1437, IrohaGrab.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47630511 Her not being a titcow makes it even hotter

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 23:54:16 2023 No.47635657 >>47631764 Self-control is key

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 18 23:55:04 2023 No.47635699 I approve of this Iroha discussion, and while on the topic, would like to request more Iroha stories.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 00:21:19 2023 No.47637002 >>47635699 What do you wanna see?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 00:43:46 2023 No.47638063 >>47635699 Do you know anything about her that might help in getting stories made?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 01:17:54 2023 No.47639895 File: 291 KB, 1155x2048, Fl_8NIpaAAA-nb_.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47621136 茶器丸?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 01:17:58 2023 No.47639898 >>47637002 >>47638063 NTA but a story about you being a feudal lord and having iroha be your bodyguard/wife could work that or you defeat her and the struggle snuggle happens

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 02:15:20 2023 No.47642706 >>47639895 ﾁｬｷ丸 as per Iroha's Hologra debut

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 02:24:27 2023 No.47643194 >>47637002 Anything Iroha would be great. Maybe Iroha sex or an Iroha fight. >>47638063 I gave a brief outline to someone that asked a few threads ago, but >Highest wife power in Hololive >Complete pon >Pure and embarrassed easily >Hoshiyomi >Fit

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 02:43:52 2023 No.47644212 >>47502844 stinky selen sex >>45223108 >>45224451 >>45225430

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 03:33:36 2023 No.47647074 >>47637002 anal with iroha!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 04:12:48 2023 No.47649073 File: 1.52 MB, 2480x3508, good design.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47630721 >Anya Melfissa Good one. I still want to see an action story where she acts as your sword, even just a one shot.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 04:40:26 2023 No.47650222 File: 948 KB, 1273x715, Anya_sus.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47649073 Make it a Soul Eater crossover so we can finally get that trashy anime fanfiction we pretend we don't want

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 04:48:14 2023 No.47650513 >>47558775 >mori Hard pass.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 04:51:50 2023 No.47650636 >>47650513 This

Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:08:15 2023 No.47651200

>>47649073
>"You call that a swing? You couldn't cut butter with moves like that."
>"Shut up."
>"I didn't realize my new owner was going to be such a weakling."
>"Shut UP."
>"Why don't you just put me back where you found me and pick up a plough like the peasant you are?"
>"Bitch, I will melt you down and have you reforged into a CHAMBER POT!"

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:19:25 2023 No.47651516 >>47651200 >later taking your revenge for her snark by slowly and laboriously cleaning her blade with oil

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:21:17 2023 No.47651571 >>47650636 There’s really nothing likeable about Mori.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:21:18 2023 No.47651573 >>47651200 >you're the only one who can actually hear her talk >from everyone else's perspective, you're just constantly yelling at your sword like a lunatic

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:25:19 2023 No.47651702 File: 197 KB, 1920x1080, 【Den_Visit】KIMONO_DETAILS_REVEAL_!【hololive_ID_2nd_Generation___Anya_Melfissa】_35-59_screenshot.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47651516 >making Anya cum in Kris form

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:26:51 2023 No.47651762 File: 3.83 MB, 2107x1424, Hand-made_Kris.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47651702 Remember to use protection.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:29:10 2023 No.47651852 >>47651571 Looks like the Seanigs woke up.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:44:06 2023 No.47652387 >>47649073 I've been debating it for awhile as a way to introduce her to a story but I know next to nothing about her personality and keep putting off watching her.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:58:17 2023 No.47652798 >>47651852 What?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 05:59:01 2023 No.47652821 File: 84 KB, 1135x811, FOmXby2VsAER4aK.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47651702

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:02:03 2023 No.47652931 I've been thinking. Why do we say "thank you" to the bus driver? They're just doing a job, and yet it feels wrong to leave without thanking them. >>47652798 He's baiting. Don't bite.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:20:36 2023 No.47653525 >>47652798 Indonesians have a hatred for all things Mori. >>47652931 You're a faggot.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:24:06 2023 No.47653618 >>47652931 > Why do we say "thank you" to the bus driver? They're just doing a job, and yet it feels wrong to leave without thanking them. How is this related to writing or chuubas?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:33:36 2023 No.47653910 >>47653618 He's baiting. Don't bite.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:34:57 2023 No.47653951 >>47653525 >>47653618 >>47653910 Looks like the Seanig woke up.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:49:31 2023 No.47654418 >>47651852 >>47653910 >>47653951 Get a life, this is honestly pathetic.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 06:58:26 2023 No.47654677 >>47593391 The NTR/NTS tags is a hard pass from me, sorry.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:03:17 2023 No.47654824 >>47624867 >Simplicity =/= bland and generic Zoomers just can’t appreciate simplicity. It’s why they’re the biggest proponent of that shit art style post-modernism.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:17:19 2023 No.47655199 >>47540117 >Are titles really that big a deal? No, not really.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:22:28 2023 No.47655351 >>47631320 Who?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:32:28 2023 No.47655658 >>47609669 Is hating Luna the new thing now?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:47:47 2023 No.47656153 >>47655658 God, I hope so. That bitch has been flying under the radar for a while now.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:52:47 2023 No.47656305 >>47651852 /wg/ has never liked Mori, so I don’t know why you’re pretending otherwise.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:53:53 2023 No.47656343 >>47656305 Just hurry up and make the new thread retard

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:58:13 2023 No.47656501 >>47651573 >"Anon, who the hell are you talking to?" >"The knife." >"What?" >"Her name is Anya." >"Uh..." >"She's an asshole."

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 07:59:23 2023 No.47656543 >>47656305 >/wg/ has never liked Mori Pretty sure it’s just one schizo who dislikes Mori. Because I’m pretty sure Noel and Marine also gets some hate for some unknown reason.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:01:00 2023 No.47656597 >>47656343 Take your meds. >>47656543 >Pretty sure it’s just one schizo who dislikes Mori. Nah, it’s multiple people. Hololive EN is just hated here. Don’t know why, but it is.

Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:03:08 2023 No.47656664

>>47656543
>Because I’m pretty sure Noel and Marine also gets some hate for some unknown reason.
Those are Marineschizos and Noelschizos. They aren’t part of /wg/. They’re just fags that lurk the catalog and start being antis whenever they see someone praise those two.

Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:08:17 2023 No.47656827

>>47656543
Noel and marine aren’t hated here, at least as far as I can tell. Like this anon >>47656664 said, just two schizos who are from the catalog. Maybe you have retards egging them on, but that’s because you have idiots who reply to threadshitters for shits and giggles.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:15:54 2023 No.47657060 >>47624547 Try watching her before making such an ignorant post.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:21:08 2023 No.47657246 File: 123 KB, 319x337, Eyes of a killer.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47656597 >Hololive EN is just hated here. I don’t hate them, in fact, Mumei is my oshi, my muse, light of my life, fire of my loins.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:24:53 2023 No.47657374 File: 161 KB, 1000x1499, 1681866973919080.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47657246 Mumei isn’t that lewd that she should fire up your loins.

Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:26:57 2023 No.47657442

>>47656664
While I'm sure those two did have their schizo slapfights here a couple times, I'm reasonably certain the last few times it happened was mostly shitposters larping as them to shit up the thread; or at least that's how I remember it being a tactic of an earlyfag a few months back.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:27:29 2023 No.47657460 >>47657246 Calm the fuck down Nabokov. Mumei ain’t no Lolita.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:30:15 2023 No.47657555 >>47657374 Maybe he really likes GNDs.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:32:58 2023 No.47657643 >>47657246 Fauna is better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:34:52 2023 No.47657694 >>47656664 >They aren’t part of /wg/. They never were to begin with. Don’t know why people think otherwise. They’re pretty much the reason why the ahoy and Noel generals are dead.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:35:36 2023 No.47657714 >>47657555 GNDs?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:36:17 2023 No.47657733 >>47657374 Mumei is pretty lewd in that image.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:37:09 2023 No.47657754 >>47657714 Girl Next Door

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:39:15 2023 No.47657807 >>47657754 Oh, makes more sense now.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:40:09 2023 No.47657843 File: 2.87 MB, 1504x2160, NoelWhore.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Noel's a whore

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:48:18 2023 No.47658059 New thread >>47657779

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 19 08:52:47 2023 No.47658167 >>47657843 You sure showed her.

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