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/wg/ - Writing General - Battle Maid Suisei Edition Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:36:30 2023 No.45311089 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>45145566

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:36:45 2023 No.45311103 File: 1.08 MB, 2894x4093, __hoshimachi_suisei_hololive_drawn_by_hz_helu_2__344ac105bc8d4b4f25214356d9b06cf0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:37:48 2023 No.45311162
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:40:12 2023 No.45311300
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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

The Cover Job, chapter 2 (18k words): Tags: Watame, Lamy, Oga, Shien, SFW:>>45158059

OPERATION ECLIPSE: tags: Short fic, dossier, Holo X: >>45208636

Shrek Forever After Sucked:Tags: SFW, Mori:>>45293724

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:42:56 2023 No.45311440
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Same user as last thread, but condensing my prompt so it's more likely to be filled:>>45147654

Gura violently pegging and dominating Mori. Slapping hair pulling the whole shebang.:>>45170233

Sitting on Shion and forcing her head-first into your anus, absorbing and converting her to primordial essence increasing your own power.:>>45170628

Fubuki taking care of a sickly (You) who needs medicine in order to feel better and not suffer a slow, painful death:>>45173672

Reine agrees to become the center of an entire tribe's fertility ritual:>>45202108

Koyori decides to make the perfect vtuber from comining genetic samples of every successful Hololive talent:>>45205010

Mori comes home crying after Kronii and Gura sandbag her attempt at discussing shrek. (you) comfort her and tell her that shrek is not cringe.:>>45212429

Watching Azki play GeoGuessr and by pure coincidence she gets a location right by where you live and wanders over to stare at your house in silence for a minute before getting a 0m guess without even thinking about it:>>45222976

Gura loses a bet and has to smell (you)r used socks. She initially balks at the idea of smelling a man's used socks but she can't stop thinking about the noticeably more rugged smell in comparison to a woman's once she satisfies the bet.:>>45263471

Trying to figure out what kind of sex with Kaela will make her start showing emotion:>>45268058

Vestia Zeta is an international spy who's attempting to steal data from a prolific criminal organization. She's using the classic honeypot technique, but she doesn't know that her cover has been blown and that she's going to have to give up far more than a few gropes to obtain her prize.:>>45270070

Towa and Rurudo oyakodon:>>45277902

You get one wish from your guardian angel after she screws up protecting you, and after you ask for sex, Kanata tries to dissuade you by saying she can only do anal sex. It doesn't work.:>>45293032

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 07:59:50 2023 No.45312355 I see Holo festival is underway going to be difficult for the next few days.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 08:45:58 2023 No.45315205 >>45312355 Only going to be to two days.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 09:00:40 2023 No.45316452 >>45312355 It's the best time of the year~

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 09:15:27 2023 No.45318527 >>45312355 >he isn't enjoying the festival

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 09:35:10 2023 No.45321324 To the dude who wrote Our Cures - I’m not taking a cheating whore back, not even Ayame. I implore you to reconsider.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 10:11:23 2023 No.45326539 >>45321324 Wot

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 10:27:25 2023 No.45329120 >>45326539 I think he's talking about the cheating plotline for the our cures sequel discussed/theorized last thread.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 11:19:12 2023 No.45337498

>>45311162
You're dating Tokino Sora, and she really likes to switch her contact lenses. She almost seems to have a different personality when she puts in her contacts.
What you don't know is that for the last 6 months you've been dating twins, and they don't know how to break the news.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 12:27:57 2023 No.45346763 >>45312355 Usually is. Not to mention bait threads going insane

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:04:49 2023 No.45349141 >>45311162 Professional, emotionless sex with your maid Suisei.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:30:03 2023 No.45350471 File: 2.13 MB, 1322x1643, Sora.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45337498 Which one's Soda and which one's Sora?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:36:12 2023 No.45350779 >>45337498 I swear if this ends up like that Ace Attorney plotline...

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:37:48 2023 No.45350866 >>45312355 Don't pretend like the thread hasn't made it to bump limit for almost a month now. The festival won't change shit.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:39:26 2023 No.45350949 >>45350866 Anon the thread made it to bump limit earlier this week

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 13:42:50 2023 No.45351133 >>45350866 You ok Anon?

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 14:11:42 2023 No.45352599

>>45337498
How would you distinguish between the two Sora's? By which I mean, which part of the idea of Sora will each twin embody, the easy solution is the brown eyed one being the normal girl and the blue eyed one being the idol, but it's almost too simple.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 14:15:41 2023 No.45352841

>>45352599
The brown eyed one knows how to cook, and sometimes forgets that she's not supposed to. Occasionally you'll walk in on her cooking, causing her to get flustered and make an excuse about wanting to try and improve, before intentionally screwing up as badly as she possibly can.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 14:21:32 2023 No.45353162
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>>45311103
Not a story but I really, REALLY love when anime girls have these kinds of expressions on their faces. They are quite hot (this Chloe isn't as good as this Sui but is still sex).

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 14:26:24 2023 No.45353404 File: 352 KB, 1280x800, 1675796317463284.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Bros, some of those performances were so damn good. I'm hyped and I have to WRITE!

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 14:44:19 2023 No.45354339 >>45352841 So they'd be both identical twins but the slobby/messy one managed to grab the idol job meanwhile the responsible one learned stuff like cooking? Wait a minute this is just Suisei and Anemachi but as the Tokino twins.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 15:24:06 2023 No.45356606 File: 355 KB, 1170x2048, LaplusUnicorn.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45353404 Cute girls are cute

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 15:25:14 2023 No.45356663 File: 671 KB, 1000x500, 1676395974744604.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45356606 The live version of repaint was so damn cool. That's exactly the level of taking over the world via charisma, fame, and shiny promises I want HoloX to do.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 15:40:14 2023 No.45357481
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>>45349141
I have to ask what's the appeal of emotionless sex with suisei? To me her character seems more suited for passionate (hate)sex, especially in maid form since there's a certain appeal in feeling like your dragging the comet down to earth and making a mess in it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 15:59:32 2023 No.45358576 >>45357481 From one PoV, it could be like Suisei has given up or completely submitted to you. I agree that hatesex is more her bag, but I think ANY SUISEX can be appealing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 16:20:03 2023 No.45359682 >>45352599 (You) can't tell the difference between brown and blue when it comes to eyes so seeing Sora with blue eyes when she's suppose to have brown eyes doesn't register in your head because the only thing you see is Sora with brown eyes.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 16:21:58 2023 No.45359757
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>>45358576
Huh, hadn't thought of that. The words
>Professional, emotionless sex with your maid Suisei
Made me imagine it being her doing the sex acts with practiced professionalism and cold emotional distance, even as her master does every single pervy thing that comes to mind.
Hadn't really though of the scenario of 'suisei completely broken reduced to being the sex maid'. Though even then I feel like it's a disservice to her since the better kind of Suisei breaking would be the of the degenerating kind where she breaks into being so sex-crazed she sacrifices the things she'd previously fought for all for more pleasure. She just seems more suited for a scenario where the comet falls catastrophically rather than one where she mind breaks.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 17:16:56 2023 No.45362339 File: 2.11 MB, 900x1600, 1671464885076533.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45359757 Why not both? A maid's job is to clean after all.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 17:53:47 2023 No.45364245 File: 646 KB, 1284x699, sora_1btru91ih8t.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45354339 Would explain her pigsty room

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 18:26:03 2023 No.45365946 >>45364245 What did she mean by this?

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 19:29:15 2023 No.45369422 File: 588 KB, 848x1200, sorasweet.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45365946 Daisenpai is truly mysterious...

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>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 22:00:13 2023 No.45377164 >>45306692 Okay

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 22:05:46 2023 No.45377489 >>45365946 She's trying to hint she wants to move in to their houses

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 22:13:43 2023 No.45377937

>>45311162
Sora keeps trying to attract a new roommate for splitting the rent and (You) are the only one who takes her up on the offer. Nothing could prepare for you what an absolute mess this girl is in her own home. You slowly rehabilitate her into being a functioning adult. There will be laughs, tears, and cum.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 22:54:52 2023 No.45380041 >>45377937 >Sora learns that keeping her room clean means she gets orgasms and cuddles >you have to use pavlovian conditioning like a dog to teach her better habits

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:20:03 2023 No.45381359 >>45372804 >I don't want to be silly anymore

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:26:49 2023 No.45381699

>>45293724

>Short dialogue practice based on that Shrek prompt. Feedback is greatly appreciated. Enjoy!

Aight here is my general impression since feedback was asked. The general flow of the text feels strange at times.

>There was a crash in the doorway as the door leading out of your dingy apartment slammed against the wall knocking jackets and umbrellas onto the ground

I can't really place why but the placement of everything just seems odd. It feels like the slamming of the door should be mentioned first, followed by the crash and paired up with the mention of jackets and umbrellas.

The hug scene felt a little bit too descriptive. The sudden shift to describing her breasts felt pretty jarring with what was supposed to be a comforting hug. The Pearl Harbor reference also felt jarring but that's probably because I never watched it.

You also don't give any descriptive text for going to the couch. That's not in and of itself bad but it does feel odd considering you still gave a little bit of descriptive text for everything before it.

I also think Mori should have given a little bit more context to what happened with Kronii and Gura.

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:29:57 2023 No.45381893 >>45381699 Do you have any particular thoughts on his dialogue? It was dialogue practice, after all.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:43:18 2023 No.45382574

>>45381893
Oops, missed that bit completely.

It's serviceable? It's not glaringly bad (except for maybe the pearl harbor joke) but also not anything to write home about. I don't really see it as a dialogue-focused piece so I'm not sure if that is good or bad considering the goal.

If the goal was to make the dialogue stand out more I think it could have benefitted from some fluffing to extend things.

Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:55:36 2023 No.45383157

>>45380041
>the hardest habit to break is her obsession with hatsune miku merchandise
>you've yet to discover a kink so toe curling and hip arching that will break the vocaloidhead of her addiction
>A delightfully devilish scheme comes to mind which involves Miku cosplay, it may be trading one evil for another, but at least you can store clothes more effectively than merchandise

>>	Anonymous Sat Mar 18 23:59:40 2023 No.45383357 File: 70 KB, 128x128, 1641357105574.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45381699 >The Pearl Harbor reference also felt jarring but that's probably because I never watched it. I envy you.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 00:45:13 2023 No.45385584 >>45383157 >eventually just cleaning up the plates after dinner makes Sora orgasm >and you realize you've made a monster

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 00:57:39 2023 No.45386300 How does one prevent gosling?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 01:01:28 2023 No.45386508 >>45386300 By reading fluff fanfiction.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 01:05:42 2023 No.45386767 >>45386300 like, gosling how? I feel like the meaning has been memed so much that I have no idea what it actually means anymore.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 01:56:13 2023 No.45389920 >>45386300 Cumming and getting over it

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 02:25:49 2023 No.45392358 File: 56 KB, 1280x720, maxresdefault (1).jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45386300

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 02:31:22 2023 No.45392803 >>45386300 By accepting that oshis are like stars. They are objects of worship but only a madman think they can reach them

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 02:52:35 2023 No.45394631 File: 341 KB, 1898x2048, SuiseiWink.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45392803 Maybe for you, but call me Bruce Willis the way I'll be drilling this Comet

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 03:04:52 2023 No.45395984 >>45337498 >keep escalating >have sex with both of them >knock both of them up >marry both of them Seems simple enough to me.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 03:20:13 2023 No.45398005

>>45382574
>think it could have benefitted from some fluffing to extend things.
I'd agree with this assessment. Dialogue feels a little bit bare-bones, but with some additional polish on the punctuation and extra descriptive text, it could turn into something special.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 03:53:54 2023 No.45402145 >>45311162 Taking Kobo on her first European vacation.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 04:21:07 2023 No.45405960 Is the VN maker anon still lurking?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 04:33:15 2023 No.45407892 >Bae's 3D model MY WRITING HAND IS MOVING ON ITS OWN

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 04:40:51 2023 No.45408958 File: 307 KB, 459x493, smol bae.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45407892 MY OSHI HAS GIVEN ME THE POWER TO SLAY A GOD

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:20:33 2023 No.45414971 Could any chuuba solve the Riddle of Steel?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:23:01 2023 No.45415405 File: 893 KB, 698x394, BaeDancing.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45407892 CUTE RAT CUTE RAT CUTE RAT

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:26:42 2023 No.45415949 Could any chuuba beat the broodmother Alpha with only mid tier megalotheriums?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:27:42 2023 No.45416094 >>45415949 Yeah, goku

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:30:39 2023 No.45416531 >>45414971 I'm not sure any chuuba would be interested in that kind of autistic ttrpg.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:31:42 2023 No.45416748 >>45416531 Kaela would eat that garbage and ask for seconds

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:32:21 2023 No.45416845 File: 136 KB, 1920x1080, 1679200851587593.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45407892 >>45415405 SEXO

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:34:08 2023 No.45417046 File: 482 KB, 813x900, KiaraSmug.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45414971 Kiara did, and in turn she was rewarded with a place in Hololive

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:45:38 2023 No.45418570 >>45416748 This made me imagine a fucking ttrpg stream with Kaela but all the players and the GM is just her.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 05:56:43 2023 No.45419468

>>45337498
I knew a guy who was in the same situation around here but in reverse. Things escalated till he inseminated both of them (both wanted kids). He then didn't knew how to break the news to them that their nephews are half-brother and sister. Mind you, both sisters don't really interact much because they had a family feud and live in the same city but far away from each other, they still kind of talk but don't know (or atleast, didn't knew at said time) that the guys they were dating were the same dude.
>So?
I'm actually lying to you all, turns out, and he didn't knew this, that both sisters actually discovered his game months before the pregnancies, but decided to slowly drive him into knocking both of em up so they could force him to care for both kids without having to threaten him or go into legal actions, they KNEW they betted that his concious wouldn't let him abandon one of the kids nor break the truth to any of em without he looking like the guilty one and both moms as the shocked victims, they won the bet.
>Source: My uncle knows one of the women and despises the guy because of some old stuff, she broke the truth to him for laughs, he leaved hiding his shock with fake laughs.

This had nothing to do with VTubers so I'm going to say that I would marry Peko-chan but I wouldd fuck Koyori and kill Choco.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 06:12:38 2023 No.45420580 File: 2.02 MB, 1440x900, 1679204632177824.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45416845 >the skindentation from her spats FROM DAY FUCKING ONE >>8030988 I HAVE WANTED RAT SEX AND I CONTINUE TO BE PROVEN JUSTIFIED

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 06:16:06 2023 No.45420821 >>45419468 >his shock He dated and knocked up a pair of twins. I'd declare total victory and the cost of raising the kids as the price of glory at that point.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 06:26:19 2023 No.45421447 >>45419468 I'm jealous of that guy.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 06:31:35 2023 No.45421754

>>45420821
My uncle was the shocked one at the revelation, guy wasn't there and likely still doesn't know they know lol.
Last thing we knew about him, he was breaking his back working to maintain both kids, he was still fucking both women so yeah, likely still a win, he toying with 2 variants of the same character while being the puppet LMAO.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 07:14:21 2023 No.45424183 File: 1.37 MB, 1280x720, 1676248081336650.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45311162 Steamy, post-concert sex with a horny and sweaty IRyS

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 07:19:20 2023 No.45424474 >>45424183 I never thought I'd say this but her model looks good.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 07:37:39 2023 No.45425794 File: 643 KB, 1920x1080, screenshot0001.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I did it. I'll give a critique tomorrow if the author is still here.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 08:50:20 2023 No.45430212 File: 3.85 MB, 1800x2701, 106359034_p0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] MIKO'S MIKUNNY

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 09:32:04 2023 No.45436041 >>45425794 I'm sure he's lurking.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 10:34:40 2023 No.45448126
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>>45419468
That sounds like a fun concept to base a fic around. (You) 've been secretly dating two chuubas that have been feuding for a long time but unknown to you they've reconciled and are trying to get knocked up at the same time.
Probably needs either a feud like Miko/Pekora or have it be a pairing that in-story is implied to have broken down violently before the fic takes place.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 10:44:32 2023 No.45449956 File: 147 KB, 1920x1080, bae4thfes.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45408958 >>45415405 >>45416845 IM GONNA DO IT. IM GONNA WRITE A BAE FIC NEXT

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 11:45:57 2023 No.45459806 >>45449956 Do it anon, I believe in you.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 12:08:04 2023 No.45463609 >>45449956 Do it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 12:55:20 2023 No.45468039 >>45449956 She was a great dancer, I was surprised.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 13:38:01 2023 No.45470741
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>>45293724
Giving feedback purely off of the dialogue. It works, and tells the story it wants to tell but it needs something 'more' in it to shine.
Admitedlly if you wanted to make a fic where the dialogue is the star, basing the fic off of a meme prompt probably wasn't the best choice but the dialogue serves the joke of the fic and sounds enough like Mori that it doesn't feel off.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 13:51:25 2023 No.45471590 >>45470741 >Mori looking at you after catching you listening to the horse audio for the 10th time

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 14:31:20 2023 No.45473798 >>45468039 Indeed

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 15:09:46 2023 No.45476240 File: 1.38 MB, 960x1440, 1648930623019488.webm [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45449956 WRITE THAT SHIT

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>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 16:27:59 2023 No.45481171 File: 687 KB, 2340x3508, 1674406311878630.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45311103 Little sapling. A short erotica I wanted to write since forever. https://rentry.org/cumh5e tags: Ceres Fauna, NSFW, /ss/, dry humping, incest

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 16:52:11 2023 No.45482537

>>45481171
This was really fucking engaging, like yeah, you had some bits of awkward prose here and there but once it got going it flowed together really well.
I hope you can write more because this was really compelling and not just from the smut, you have a really good narrative voice in this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:23:27 2023 No.45484309 >>45482537 Thanks for the feedback. >Awkward prose I get this a lot, I might not notice it because I'm an ESL. Could you point me to what verse you mean?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:34:10 2023 No.45484954 >>45311162 Towa sucks your dick because she's trying her absolute best to stop smoking and she needs something in her mouth to help soothe her nerves.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:35:51 2023 No.45485060 >>45484954 I'm imagining this as her not even sucking your dick 90% of the time, she just has it in her mouth while you both chill on the couch.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:51:19 2023 No.45485928 >>45485060 If she has the erect member in her mouth but isn't doing anything can you still cum from it?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:52:10 2023 No.45485975 >>45485928 I don't think so, unless you're moving or can cum to your imagination alone.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 17:55:23 2023 No.45486158 >>45311162 Kronii starts dating (you) without knowing that (you) work for Subway and she relapses hard into her subway sandwich addiction by abusing your employee discount

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 18:09:21 2023 No.45486852

>>45485975
I like your idea anon because I also want to imagine that while the both of you are chilling on the couch and she has your dick in her mouth, the taste of your meaty member makes her fall asleep and you can't even move (hope you don't need to pee) until your member goes flaccid and pops out of her mouth or until she wakes up.
And yes when the both of you go to bed she'll sleep at your crotch area so your dick is constantly in her mouth.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 18:17:56 2023 No.45487332 File: 109 KB, 716x1119, TowaPenlight.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45486852 Towel's oral fixation...

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 18:19:12 2023 No.45487406 Forget the Collarverse, I want the Dick-always-in-her-mouth-verse.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 18:23:56 2023 No.45487643 >>45486852 >Towa gnawing and nibbling on your cock in her sleep Imagine the arousal and fear

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 18:51:23 2023 No.45489096

>>45485928
>>45485975
Clearly you have not heard of premature ejaculation. Men can cum even from a woman looking their way flirtatiously if their condition is bad enough. It isn't just about lasting little during sex. Absolutely it would be possible for you to cum just from having a woman's mouth around your penis, even if she isn't doing anything beyond that

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:03:38 2023 No.45489744 >>45489096 That's fair.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:05:35 2023 No.45489843 >>45489096 I thought premature ejaculation only existed in hentai doujins where the guy blows the fattest load on a hot girls face because she poked his dick with her pinkie?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:11:13 2023 No.45490154 >>45489843 my coworker told me his brother came on his first kiss. Premature ejaculation is a real thing and its fucked up

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:16:58 2023 No.45490461 >>45489843 When you get old enough you either cum at the first touch or don't cum at all.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:17:15 2023 No.45490476

>>45490154
Damn that must be really scary to suffer something like that. Bet the poor soul can't even get a girlfriend because the premature ejaculation would fuck him up.
I really don't want to see this kind of thing in my prompt because I don't want to imagine Towa having to abruptly remove herself from your dick because you suddenly cummed in her mouth and she doesn't like the taste so she goes to the bathroom to spit it all out and then chew you out for blowing your load into her mouth without warning and then offering to clean you up with her tongue because your seed is all over your crotch area and she doesn't want your seed all over the couch.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:22:27 2023 No.45490735

>>45490476
What would actually happen is that anon would go "ah ah ah stop get off" then push Towa off then she would stare at him in confusion and a couple seconds later his dick will start shooting ropes making her even more confused or likely to break her down into hysterical laughter after her confusion. You can feel it coming and you get really nervous about it because you don't want it to happen. At least that's what I've seen in the accident videos I frequently watch

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:25:53 2023 No.45490937 >>45490476 I mean, you could also imagine her liking it and waking up horny.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:28:39 2023 No.45491097 >>45425794 Nice! How long did it take you! Favorite route? Favorite jukebox CG?

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:30:58 2023 No.45491241

>>45490476
yeah it pretty much kills your sex life unless you find a partner completely divorced from the idea of sex or someone who loves the emasculating feel of deniying that/forcing him to spill his goo.
from what i know, its either a hormonal inbalance or psychological shit, so you can in theory help delay your ejaculation until you perform acceptably, but it requires a lot of willpower and practice.
Also there's your fic idea, anon has premature ejaculation and he blasts at the slightest touch, which makes Towa take pity on him so she tries to help him fix it

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:38:03 2023 No.45491633 >>45491241 >Towa wants to have cum shot into her mouth but her bf ejaculates prematurely >starts surprise foreplay by quickly getting his cock into her mouth

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:39:35 2023 No.45491714 >>45491633 >Argue with Towapi >Grabs your crotch and causes you to cum over yourself >Settles the argument like that.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 19:47:02 2023 No.45492132 >>45490461 Death grip syndrome is a brutal and self-perpetuating cycle.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 20:05:24 2023 No.45493107 >>45492132 I'M IN YOUR AREA I'M IN YOUR AREA

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 20:21:13 2023 No.45494024 Cant get stinky selen out of my head but i have like 4 wips already

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 20:29:13 2023 No.45494515

>>45491714
>Despite your best efforts to endure her slight touches, her sudden grab movement where she holds your dick in her hand (sometimes she'll waggle it left and right), or a suprise blowjob, you are unable to build up a resistance on not cumming so suddenly so anything Towa does to you you'll cum really hard no matter what
>This doesn't upset Towa in the slightest because she doesn't like having to work for her cum and she'd rather you cum instantly so she can lap it all up and do it again until your balls empty themselves

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:03:35 2023 No.45496471 what's a good deepthroat fic?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:14:39 2023 No.45497161 >>45496471 The one with brrat and Mori

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:19:02 2023 No.45497397 >>45496471 That one chapter of hololive subjection where you brutally throat fuck Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:20:03 2023 No.45497466 >>45496471 Shrunken Blessings, Bunny Trap 3 and Nursery Monogatari have some great deepthroat action.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:21:29 2023 No.45497563 >>45491714 Premature ejaculation humiliation is one of my top fetishes which is funny because I usually have the opposite problem. Or maybe it's because of that. Either way I would love to see it in a fic.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:24:10 2023 No.45497731 >>45497563 Is it okay if it happens to a futa

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:27:10 2023 No.45497949 >>45497731 Other anons will be put off by it but I wouldn't mind seeing it as it would be interesting to see Towa be a premature ejaculator and its (You) that's making her cum her brains out just by touching the tip of her fat head with your finger.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:45:26 2023 No.45499105 >>45497731 Marine is the prime target for that kind of fic

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 21:59:52 2023 No.45500190 >>45497161 name?

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:02:33 2023 No.45500408

>>45491097
Not sure how long it took me, over 12 hours maybe? I know that getting Selen and Elira as well as the perfect run took the most time.

>Favorite route
Pomu. Her's felt like an actual route from a traditional VN and her scenes are great. Rosemi otherwise, I think her theme is subtle and I appreciate that. I also liked Enna's

>Favorite jukebox
I got a few. The Sight of Spring cause it's very Rosemi. Dusk Polorid and Marie Onette because I think they capture what you were going for with Enna really well. Enna looking at you pensively and then looking away in Marie Onette makes me feel a certain way. Dusk Polaroid is a great moody track. I like Negra Afuera de la Pinguino for similar reasons.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:09:29 2023 No.45500924 >>45490476 Haha yeah that would suck, who would want that?

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:16:41 2023 No.45501416

>>45500408
>pomu
That's interesting, I haven't had anyone frame it like that.
>I think her theme is subtle and I appreciate that
I was going to make the VN a little more drama focused, but it ended up less fun, so I opted for subtlety. Glad you could appreciate it.
>jukebox
Ah, so you like the darker ones. That's neat, I like Maria Onette too, it kinda fills in the gaps to her story

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:34:09 2023 No.45502485 >>45311162 (you) watch the disaster artist with Calli and slowly realize that the relationship between Tommy and Greg in the movie somewhat mirrors your own relationship with Calli.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:35:31 2023 No.45502575 >>45501416 Oh hey are you the VN maker anon?

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:38:59 2023 No.45502769 >>45502575 Yep, I lurk around /wg/ mostly. Sometimes I make threads on the catalog Thanks again for giving it a shot, I'm glad.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 22:50:09 2023 No.45503385 >>45502769 Ah no I'm >>45502575 a different anon than the one you were/are talking to. I was thinking of taking a swing at a hololive VN and wanted to ask for some advice

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:11:43 2023 No.45504642

>>45500924
Premature is fun to watch and jerk off to but I would absolutely not want to be premature. Not lasting 5 minutes is already bad enough as is for my self esteem, now cumming from a chick breathing on your dick for a few seconds? That's horrible. You'd be hard pressed to find a girlfriend that's okay with it

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:14:36 2023 No.45504840 >>45503385 Ah, that's no trouble. You can ask anything, I'd be happy to help! I love VNs and would be hyped to see some more chuuba VNs

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:19:28 2023 No.45505191

>>45500408
>Pomu
Are you screwing with me? I legitimately thought Pomu didn't have a route aside from whatever the perfect run unlocks. I tried both dumpstering my opportunities with all girls as well as following her advice throughout the day and all I end up with is a lonely cork board

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:20:08 2023 No.45505237 >>45504840 Would you ever do a more serious one? I'm not the biggest fan of NijiEN but your VN had me laughing like a hyena. The two ones that standout to me was the Auschwitz joke and the Imperial Dragon from Skyrim joke.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:21:16 2023 No.45505311 >>45497731 Yes

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:23:43 2023 No.45505446 >>45505191 You have to get no lines. She has 2 endings.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:38:37 2023 No.45506448

>>45501416
>Pomu
In your bog-standard VN, the first few days are typically a common route where you get introduced to the cast and once you pick a girl, you go down their story that's unique to that girl and pretty independent of the rest of the VN. Sometimes they dovetail back in but not always. Since Pomu's route "kicks in early" and you don't ever go back to school, it gives that same vibe, especially during the fairy banquet. Its a feeling that you cant this feeling with any other girl.

>Rosemi
Yeah, I appreciate that the route never hits you over the head with "treat her like a person." or "she feels lonely and alienated." A lot of subtle queues in how she reacts to you is your tip off and I think that's great. I appreciate Millie's route for similar reasons but hers is a bit more vocal, not that there's anything wrong with that.

>Jukebox
Yeah, the darker ones just mesh well with Enna and her routes theme. This kind of sad girl who wants to be noticed and can't be as honest as she says she is. Dark Polaroid also reminds me of one of my favorite tracks from Fate Stay/Night, New Dawn. Dark Polaroid would make a great ED.

Anyways, I'll give a more throughout analysis either later tonight or tomorrow, I'm kind of exhausted from 4th FES.

>>45505191
Yeah, you gotta get no bitches.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:46:16 2023 No.45506923 >>45497949 Sounds fun in principle, but I'm not sure about Futa x (You) fics. I think futas work best with regular girls

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:48:14 2023 No.45507033 >>45505446 I see my problem now. I was very confident for some reason that telling Enna to fuck off was the correct option and consequently getting her number every time. I figured it was just unavoidable

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:50:04 2023 No.45507144

>>45505237
Ah, nobody's ever mentioned the Auchwitz one so I thought it flew over some heads, but I was laughing like a bastard when I made it.
As for more serious, I don't know. Part of the draw in making this for me was being able to tell any sort of dumb jokes I want with zero shame. A more serious work can be heartfelt, but also lose some of that comedic pull that keeps people invested. I'd probably struke the same balance I do here.

Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:55:26 2023 No.45507468

>>45506448
>pomu
Right, Pomu skips the rest of the collab scenes that are meant to further get to know the girls.
>Rosemi
It also goes to show MC-kun's personality as well. He's blunt, but sensitive to other people's personalities. Gentle in his idiocy, almost.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:56:04 2023 No.45507505 >>45507033 She's kind of a slut. It's harder to not get her line than it is to get it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Mar 19 23:56:46 2023 No.45507562 >>45507033 YES MS. STALKER LADY HERE'S MY NAME AND ADDRESS FEEL FREE TO KIDNAP ME AT ANY TIME

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:02:36 2023 No.45507923

>>45507144
It wasn't subtle so I'm surprised I'm the first to mention it. I do agree with your point about getting away with a bunch of jokes and they're good too. It matched my humor perfectly. I just mentioned a more serious tone because most, but not all, Western VNs are self referential.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:11:12 2023 No.45508492

>>45506923
It honestly depends on the kind of story you want to tell. 'Normal' Futa is about girls having sex without writing about girls having Yuri sex while Futa/Male stuff is (assuming their cock is involved of course) effectively either femboy/trap sex or not!gay anal on (You).

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:18:48 2023 No.45508988

>>45507923
>it wasn't subtle
It really wasn't. Even so, I was afraid to put screenshots of it on the store page, in fear of getting jannied, even though it's a pretty innocent joke, all things considered.
>matched humor
:) always great to hear. I do just tend to say the retarded things that come into my head, and sometimes I wonder if anybody but me thinks they're funny.
Also, what do you mean when you say self-referential? With the humor?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:32:44 2023 No.45509779 File: 1.34 MB, 850x1361, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] https://rentry.org/39s3so TAGS: Parody, Bimbofication, Ouro Kronii, NTR Parody, NSFW dont ask me how i got this idea, i just wrote it

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:33:46 2023 No.45509845 >>45311103 >>45509779 Fuck me sideways just when i thought i had it anchored

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 00:46:42 2023 No.45510605

>>45508988
>Also, what do you mean when you say self-referential?
Ever since DDLC a lot of VNs are joke VNs like Hatoful Boyfriend and Goodbye Volcano High. They lack the autistic sincerity of Japanese ones. That isn't to say all Western VNs are bad of course but there's a feeling of insincerity while playing them.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 01:12:06 2023 No.45512203

>>45510605
Oh I know precisely what you mean. It's disappointing and a waste.
And yet it's understandavle why they do it, because VNs are a very underconsumed medium, and to draw in people that usually don't read them, a gimmick is almost a necessity.
DDLC had a good gimmick, but I almost feel like more people connected with the Sayori depression angle than got spooked by the ARG.
People these days are tired of ARG anyways.
There still are good gimmick games coming out though, like Monster Prom coming out with a multiplayer VN statraiser, but I think VNs need a tad more quality and serious effort put behind them to be mature, yet inviting enough to go for stuff beyond jokes. Not sure if I'm conveying it quite right.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 01:37:27 2023 No.45513793 >>45505237 >The two ones that standout to me was the Auschwitz joke and the Imperial Dragon from Skyrim joke. Fuck, I think I missed both of those.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 01:48:21 2023 No.45514609 >>45512203 I understand what you mean >>45513793 The Auschwitz joke appears when you first get to the school and the Skyrim joke happens when you buy Rosemi choccy milk.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 02:21:32 2023 No.45517016 >>45509779 Got a laugh out of me, though I think the ending is a little too hardcore for what's supposed to just be a "she was just like me fr fr" mania.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 02:30:36 2023 No.45517696

>>45517016
im on the same train.
i was chuckling and liking how Kronii was getting healed but then the ending is a bit too much compared to the first half.
i feel like if anon wrote a first half that was a bit more ''heavy'' and then a lighter ending and stapled everything together, he could have 2 good fics

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 03:04:10 2023 No.45520255

>>45504840
Aight, two main things I wanna ask then:

1. Any resources/tips for someone with basically no prior knowledge about making a VN? I know how to write semi-decently but that's pretty much it

2. How did the process of actually getting clean images of the nijisanji talents to use in the VN go?

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 03:39:28 2023 No.45522800

>>45520255
>Any resources/tips for someone with basically no prior knowledge about making a VN?
To start, download Renpy. There's a tutorial in visual novel form (lol) about the basics of using the program. There's also a sample VN called The Question, that has its script laid out in a very easy way. It wouldn't be a bad idea to mess around with it, replace assets and write lines.
For opening scripts .rpy files, use a program called Editra.
For image manipulation, you WILL learn how to use photoshop and it WILL be absolute monkey business.
Gimp lacked features, MSpaint is a joke, despite it's size, Adobe Photoshop is the best and most versatile thing on the market. Layers, filters, text, etc.
>How did the process of actually getting clean images of the nijisanji talents to use in the VN go?
Frankly, it made me wanna cry it took so ling to get them clean and not have the green screen bleed into the character. . But then when I was cleaning alternate sprites for the extras menu, it didn't take that long.
I think it's just because I learned how to use the selection tool. In the selection tool in photoshop, there's a magic wandwhere you click a pixel and it grabs similar pixels to that color. The key thing is tolerance. Tolerance goes from 0-200 and determines how many green pixels of the green screen you end up picking up. Find one that picks up the green pixels but doesn't erode the borders of the sprite. Sometimes it won't be possible. Even in the current iteration of Ninisanni Scenario, you can see she's slightly greenish, because she's a smaller sprite and the pixels bleed easier.
Green screens arent necessary though, you can take sprites from any old stream, but it might take longer to clean depending on the coloration. I'd advise to just go to a stream where the sprite is big (like a zatsudan) and that has a bunch of varied expressions. Generally, you want a mix, but it's now problem if it's slanted toward psoitive or negative emotions. Selen has like, six expressions, and only two negative ones. This is low, but it works for her character. It also helps you tune dialogue to accomadate their facial expression.

I'm kinda just info dumping here. Start with Renpy tutorial and putting your own images in The Question or your own project.
I wrote my script before I started work on Ninisanni Scenario, but I only did so because I knew what I could accomplish in Renpy from past experience. It might be fun to write as you go, or implement a past work into visual novel form.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 03:43:04 2023 No.45523041

>>45522800 (me)
I really should have proofread this post. Spelling and grammar mistakes on every line.
To clarify
>she's slightly greenish
I meant Pomu's slightly greenish. Smaller size means less pixels, which means it's easier for pixels to bleed into borders

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 04:11:39 2023 No.45524863

>>45522800
The madman actually ripped sprites from streams. That's how I thought you did at first but I brushed it off thinking that it would've taken too long and that there must of been some library you were pulling from. That's dedication right there.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 04:28:50 2023 No.45525774
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>>45524863
I WISH Niji just dropped 3D models for free off their website. Could you imagine how great that sould be for fanart?
Nah, I stole them from streams. The interesting part was filtering them. All of the models are both light, soft, and 3D. I had a bunch of different filters to use to with which to use, but I used dark strokes, which creates a somewhat painted effect, flattens the image a little, and makes everyone look more emo with hard shading of their contours. With Petra, I went the extra mile and made her a little blacker because it made her look super cute.
I considered the Posterize filter, which is what you see on Reimu with the I Won't Let You Change Oshis jukebox track, but it didn't look good with every character. It looked REALLY good with Elira (probably something about the way the original artist made the lines) but with others like Selen and Nina, it just didn't come across all too well. Plus, it was cartoony and flat, and part of my artistic vision was incorporating the girls into 3D BGs so as to capture a sense of realism. I didn't want a cheery, jaunty technicolor VN, I wanted one a little more grounded and not afraid to have desaturated colors and dim environments.

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Anonymous Mon Mar 20 05:46:45 2023 No.45529615
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The Tinkerhell ending in the VN has given me and idea for a Pomu horror/grooming fic, I hope I can get around to it soon.

>>45529441
Even though I was certain she was gonna do something like that after the front-flip got memed to hell and back, I still cheered for the cartwheels when they happened.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 05:51:08 2023 No.45529813 File: 438 KB, 380x737, Suibuff.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45311162 Suisei's pads fall out mid-performance!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:05:05 2023 No.45530362 >>45529813 Her spandex shifts upwards slightly too much revealing the huge ballsack stuck to her leg. Later she comes out revealing she has no penis, just a vagina hidden beneath a pair of swinging nads

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:07:44 2023 No.45530464 >>45529813 Why is Sussy so stacked? Disgusting!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:08:36 2023 No.45530500 File: 358 KB, 1447x2070, Suiboy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45530362 Suisei's Comets! Let's crushed them!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:26:06 2023 No.45531182 File: 1.22 MB, 1200x2000, SuiseiBig.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45529813 >Suisei giving you paizuri while she's wearing a pair of those big fake silicone breasts

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:51:11 2023 No.45532039 >>45531182 This but she gets upstaged by another chuuba with naturally large tits.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 06:58:41 2023 No.45532263
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>>45532039
>Suisei uses the fact you didn't cum as proof that fat tits aren't all they're cracked up to be
>has to sit there like a moron as a big booba chuuba effortlessly draws out load after load until you're shooting blanks with her chest

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:10:52 2023 No.45534605 >>45532263 >Koyori will never run tests to determine whose paizuri makes you cum the fastest

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:27:10 2023 No.45535158 File: 718 KB, 714x1000, Tabletennis.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45311162 Towel marriage!

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:44:36 2023 No.45535751 File: 159 KB, 220x220, 6524352345.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:49:07 2023 No.45535897 >>45535751 Holy shit, it's been ages. I missed this gif.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:53:11 2023 No.45536036 >>45535897 Been a while since it was last wheeled out and it certainly fits the bill right now.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 08:56:21 2023 No.45536121 What's a good name for a sword? I'm thinking 世界の王 but that sounds too generic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:04:49 2023 No.45536404 >>45536121 >but that sounds too generic. Yeah, that'll never work. Way too overdone. Anyway, how about the Muramasa or the Masamune?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:16:39 2023 No.45536776 >>45536121 >King of the world That doesn't even sound like a sword name. Also please tell me you weren't actually planning to put that kanji in the middle of an English script.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:18:56 2023 No.45536860 >>45536121 I recommend the 'Fartstopper', and every battle scene should have an inexplicable or otherwise contrived reason to finish with the sword sheathed inside the bad guy's colon.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:21:35 2023 No.45536962 >>45536121 Anon just stick to normal fantasy sword naming conventions of two nouns or noun + verb + er, with exceptions of jokes and truly special swords.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:36:32 2023 No.45537459

>>45536404
Those are good options but I want it to sound cool so I might just revert back to German.
>>45536776
No I only wrote it in kanji because I'm too lazy to get an accent mark on the "O" and some anons might not know that "ou" is the long version of "o".

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:38:14 2023 No.45537510 >>45537459 >Those are good options They're not, buddy, I was just fucking with you. They're horribly overused anime/video game sword names.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:40:12 2023 No.45537577 >>45537459 >I might just revert back to German. How about Erst der Letzt?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:46:36 2023 No.45537788 >>45537459 Again anon, just use the standard naming convention for fantasy swords and call it a day.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:47:05 2023 No.45537805 >>45537788 You're lazy.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:48:32 2023 No.45537861 >>45537788 I guess that's my only option.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 09:50:16 2023 No.45537916 >>45536121 It depends on its role in the world and story. The name should either tell us something about its past or its future.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:01:35 2023 No.45538256 >>45537805 It's practical. If it was actually a super special sword in universe you'd make it a chuuba reference since ya know this is a chuuba fic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:03:18 2023 No.45538313 >>45538256 >It's practical It's uninteresting. Boring, even. You're a boring person with no creative soul trying to kill art.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:08:06 2023 No.45538454 >>45538313 Are you ogey?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:08:34 2023 No.45538473 >>45538454 What a boring reply

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:08:49 2023 No.45538484 >>45538313 I mean if you want to go for foreign words for your sword names go for it. Nothing is stopping you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:17:14 2023 No.45538736 >>45538484 Hey, the schizo you're replying to isn't the same guy who's asking for sword name recommendations.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:17:53 2023 No.45538758 >>45538484 When was that ever in question?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:50:15 2023 No.45539836 So did dustbunny ever debut?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 10:59:17 2023 No.45540159 >>45539836 Why don't you try and find out? I don't think anyone here has a better idea than you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:00:37 2023 No.45540205 >>45539836 A quick search on youtube gives me nothing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:02:34 2023 No.45540278 >>45539836 That was just a vchanner, the more based but no less sad equivalent of a vtweeter.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:02:42 2023 No.45540282 >>45540205 Me neither. Was hoping maybe there was a history, a hidden rise and fall that somebody here might know more of.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:23:45 2023 No.45540938
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>>45311162
A comedy/SOL fic where you are in relationship with a chuuba (or multiple) except they're constantly trying to kill you for some reason (maybe they're ultra menhera). Almost every day your life is put in danger as they come after you with a variety of weapons, but most of the time you effortlessly parry or avoid them until they tire themselves out. Occasionally you'll take some pretty bad injuries, but you're always able to calm them down in the end and sit down for some tea, or a fuck. Maybe you don't even have to be in a relationship with the chuubas, they can be your mortal enemy or you could be living with some of them.
Like a combination of Helltaker, Beyond the Boundary and Just a Little Crazy. Could be fun.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:39:23 2023 No.45541494

>>45540938
It could work if Anon was inmortal/respawned
You could have comedic deaths, anon killing himself to escape an awkward situation or even a chuuba killing you as she cums (intended or not)
Specially if chuubas are more lore accurate
>Nene hugs you
>Breaks your bones
>Instead of finishing You to make you heal, she fireman carries you to a meeting

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 11:44:45 2023 No.45541718
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>>45541494
That could be good too. You could write a concept where your existence is the reason something bad (but not apocalypse-inducing) is happening around the world, so they've made it their job to try and kill you. You, however, have already tried every suicide trick in the book and know it's impossible, so you just lounge around and let them do their thing and maybe your reason for dodging their attacks is to avoid the pain.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 12:02:01 2023 No.45542392

>>45541718
Sure. If it were me i would go hard on the lighhearted black comedy angle. Something like
>Suisei arrives to the office, visibly ticked off
>Grabs anon and shoves him into a broom closet
>Screams, moans, punches, wet sounds and broken bones
>She emerges, visibly happier and covered in blood and gore
>Janitor enters the closet and sees Anon 's head in the floor
>"Women am i right Anon?"
>Anon reforms/respawns
>"Can live with them, cant live without them Carlos"

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 12:04:33 2023 No.45542511 >>45541494 >"I'm nervous about the concert coming up, Anon..." >"Relax Noel, you've done this a million times. Just give it your breast-b-bu-best-b-Excuse me for a moment." >throw yourself out the nearest window and fall to your death

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 12:15:32 2023 No.45543040 >>45542511 >Anon gets on the elevator at floor 1 >Aqua gets on the elevator at floor 2 >Pekora gets on floor 3 >"Maid" >"Rabbit" >"Im fucking out" says anon as he pulls a gun and blows his brains out

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 12:36:17 2023 No.45544043 >>45543040 >New chuubas don't know of anons power >welcoming party that opens up with him blowing his fucking brains out >screams of horror, laughs of enjoyment >anon respawns, gets introduced as a free use stress reliever

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 12:52:57 2023 No.45544808 >>45541494 >Botan eats you alive >Watame notices you curled up on the floor afterward, visibly traumatized >"First time?"

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 13:24:00 2023 No.45546410 >>45536121 "Woman companion" is a good name for a sword

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 14:14:13 2023 No.45548778 >>45536121 Better yet, just call it a 'sword'. Make it clear it's one of the best swords in the story, if not the best. But it'll always be called 'sword'.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 14:48:46 2023 No.45550627 >>45548778 kek

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 14:59:03 2023 No.45551212 File: 397 KB, 1080x1024, 1679312685502680.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45536121 Don't give it a name. Just write a whole-ass sentence on it.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 15:02:09 2023 No.45551381
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>>45509779
Huh, I think this might be the first fic here that's actually ran with an 'actual viewer' pov.
The style weirdly works even if the story concept kind of needs to throw off the idea that it's 'vtubing' since the action and visuals needed to be shown as if they were fleshtubers rather than vtubers. Like I get that in order for the final scene to work the rest of the fic had to not have avatars but it's kind of weird to think about.
Also, An amusing typo
>He ran to the fridge to get some beet
Ah nothing like some beets and chuubas.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 15:42:30 2023 No.45553519
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>>45534605
>the test results say that pink-haired kemos somehow are the best in the world at paizuri
>She cheated by using a skin soluble aphrodisiac oil she invented
>instead of Koyori just doing it again without it, she makes everyone do it again but using it themselves for a "wider amount of data"

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 16:38:17 2023 No.45556247
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What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: Are you writing anything special for any upcoming dates? Specifically April Fool's?

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 16:48:03 2023 No.45556764

>>45556247
The first draft is almost done and will be finished today. It's an absolute mess, so I'll let it sit for the next one or two weeks before touching it again.
>bonus question
Not for any specific dates, but I'm thinking of writing a short based on Suisei's "Stellar, Stellar" song as a palate cleanser before doing the copyedits on my current fic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 16:51:48 2023 No.45557015 >>45556247 I'm attempting to fill the "Kronii relapses in her Subway addiction because anon works at Subway" prompt

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:04:10 2023 No.45557695
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>>45550627
>Iroha pulls out her sword to show it to you. The blade seems to sparkle as the moonlight travels along its edge. You know that only a master smith could've made such a fine piece of art.
>"What's it called?" you ask.
>She eyes you for a few moments, deliberating with herself whether you should be trusted with the name of such a blade. A weapon's moniker reveals ages of history related to its owner, giving a potential enemy an advantage in battle.
>This samurai was merely safeguarding herself. Understandable.
>"If you don't wanna tell me, it's fine," you say. Though in truth it would've been rather cool if she played along...
>"... Ken."
>What was that? "Pardon?"
>"Ken," she repeats, after a long silence. "My family blade is called 'Ken', de gozaru."
"Ken..." you repeat to yourself, nodding sagely. As if to absorb knowledge of the blade by invoking its name. "Ken..."
>Why is it so familiar? You whip out your phone and go to DeepL. Ken, Ken, Ken...
>"Sorry, but..." You hesitate for a few moments, hoping maybe you just misunderstood what she said. "Isn't 'Ken' just 'sword' in Japanese?"
>"Yes, de gozaru."
>"..."
>"..."
>"... huh?"

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:12:26 2023 No.45558157 >>45557695 >"Does it have a twin named Barbie?" >"What?" >"Nothing."

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:12:49 2023 No.45558178
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>>45556247
Chugging along with chapter work. I'm hoping I can put a nice bow on this current arc by next week.
>bonus question
I honestly don't know what I would want to write about involving specific dates, and certainly not anything that's coming up soon. Maybe when the holidays come around this year I'll think of something cute to write for that. Or I could plan to make a certain arc I have planned come around Halloween.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:19:13 2023 No.45558495 File: 1.59 MB, 1500x2000, irohaaaaaa.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45558157 I was thinking of making anon ask why her legendary sword was named after some random white guy, but this is better

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:24:05 2023 No.45558769 Have you read any senteces, lines, or scenes in a fic that have actually stuck with you? Whether because it cut deep inside you, or because you couldn't stop laughing, etc.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:41:48 2023 No.45559700 >>45558769 The Holo academy with the anon x pekora pairing. Specifically when Marine asks the MC "You don't like yourself, do you?" Or something along them lines.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:53:35 2023 No.45560406 >>45559700 It took me a distressing amount of time to remember the name 'Cover High'. I kept wanting to say Holocalypse even though I know it's wrong...

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 17:56:06 2023 No.45560545 >>45560406 What about a fic about chuubas in highschool surviving the post-apocalyptic future?

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 18:08:24 2023 No.45561260

>>45556247
Going slightly faster than fossilization, partly out of indecision of which direction to go with the general plot, partly out of desire to just rewrite the damn thing from the ground up. Partly out of "whoops, slipped and cracked my ass on a few dozen hours of Yakuza 8 again"
I should probably just sit down and brainstorm from the beginning again.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 18:09:47 2023 No.45561346 >>45560545 How is that different from a regular post apoc story?

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 18:11:45 2023 No.45561475 >>45561346 nta though anon could go the School-Live! route and have one of the chuubas live in a delusion that they're in a normal high school, while the others struggle to take care of her and survive

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 18:23:56 2023 No.45562223

>>45517016
>>45517696
I can see what you mean there, and while i'd argue that its just to show that an entire year of ''idolification'' happened, i can accept i went a bit too far. Still i wanted to write a parody of those dogshit NTR stories that always get a laugh out of me because its always
>oh i love anon
>oh i tasted dick but i cant say anything because (Dumb reason)
>Full slut while the cuck jerks off
its just so funny and i could see a world where a guy genuinely loses his shit over a girl getting a better life
>>45551381
seriously? i wasnt aware it was an unpopular PoV, but then again i cant recall any similar fic. Regarding the beet thing, yeah it was a fuckup but no way im fixing it, its just to funny to picture a guy munching a raw beet and going ''fucking whore, she betrayed me''

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 19:03:42 2023 No.45564647
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>>45556247
Same old same old, switching back and forth between horny chapter and normal one depending on my mood so it hasn't been as fast as I'd like.

>>45562223
Yeah I got the intent, I just felt that the ending made it seem more like she actually was the CouncilRyS fuck pet when the cameras are off as opposed to it just her not being a doomer anymore.

>its just so funny and i could see a world where a guy genuinely loses his shit over a girl getting a better life
look I just want my oshi to cry on stream and look to chat for comfort all the time. Rather that than her being a normie, that's for damn sure.

Really though it is difficult to find chuubas who are the right brand of menhera while having enough structure to not be total downward spirals. Like I feel terrible for anybody who had it in them to oshi someone like Yuuna Dasai, but at the end of the day that's just a pit of despair to fall into that should have been obvious.

Basically what I'm saying is that Polka is the best vtuber ever

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 19:18:49 2023 No.45565487

>>45564647
I dunno. While i find some menheras hot specially IRL ones that you can actually interact and comprenhend i've come to realize that what i want from an Idol isnt a co-dependency
I see why some people like it but for me it creates this weird feedback of misery for the two parts.
For me the girl on the screen, even if i can see myself liking them as a human being, is more of a...warlord? im following. Someone with drive that makes me go ''okay this is interesting ,show me where it goes''.
Take Aqua for example. Im not hating on her because people clearly like her content and her music but for me she feels like she wont even qualify for background noise, she hasnt pushed her content forward in a while and she remains this cloystered girl that barely talks to others.
Again, this is not hating, she's not my style of streamer, that's it
TLDR: i like polka but her relationship with chat drives me away

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 19:26:17 2023 No.45565947 File: 65 KB, 828x812, myman.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45565487 I was mostly joking about the crying thing, but I suppose you're more into chuubas like Suisei which I can respect.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 19:42:37 2023 No.45566990 >10 in 17 ridiculous

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 20:09:09 2023 No.45568624 >>45558769 In Match-Made 3 where Koyori goes something to the effect of: "wow they sure do like to ride daddy, what a coincidence so do I!" Made me laugh then and makes me laugh now

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 20:24:41 2023 No.45569648 >>45558769 >"... does this make me gay?" You wonder.No,you swear.I'm not gay. Not today. Final Chapter: Omega is hilarious

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 20:32:34 2023 No.45570250 >>45558769 >Your cock was so erect that it hurt, but you didn’t masturbate in front of Kuro because that would’ve been weird. Made me laugh like a hyena. Whole story was great.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 21:10:22 2023 No.45573015 >>45566990 This time it took an hour for 9.

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 21:59:16 2023 No.45576272
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So let's say someone were to hypothetically stream Ninisanni. Aside from Saturday and the Pomu route, are there any other bits of explicitly sexual text to avoid/censor? Purely hypothetical, of course.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 22:01:48 2023 No.45576448 >>45576272 The piano scene and strip trivia scene maybe? I don't know how seiso you'd want it to be. Either way, ganbatte 2view-san.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 22:02:46 2023 No.45576519 >>45576448 I'm not planning on streaming it. A friend is/was. What's wrong with the strip trivia scene? No body parts fall out, right?

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 22:15:05 2023 No.45577389

>>45576519
Nope, just booba in bras.
Piano scene has buttes on boner.
Both pretty softcore stuff.
You're basically safe up until the corkboard exception screen. The only exception is if you get on Pomu's route, but you already know that, so you're all gucci

Anonymous Mon Mar 20 22:27:35 2023 No.45578322
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>>45577389
Thanks, friend. I really want to see this game start to be streamed. Even more so by NijiEN members. I think the latter would be absolutely hysterical. Pomu's into VNs, if I remember right.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 23:12:26 2023 No.45581410 >>45578322 Something tells me management wouldn't let them stream the game although someone allowed that /vt/ seethe stream to happen.

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 23:16:59 2023 No.45581726 >>45581410 Not unless the guy makes a censored version

>>	Anonymous Mon Mar 20 23:47:15 2023 No.45583688 >>45578322 >>45581410 >>45581726 The word tranny being in the VN guarantees it wont be streamed by anyone in Niji

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 00:03:16 2023 No.45584869 >>45583688 I love the game, but I wouldn't want any Niji to play it lest the incur the wrath of the jews, trannies, gays, Chinese, or any woman with a Twitter account.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 00:48:17 2023 No.45587762

>>45578322
Can you imagine how funny the stream would be? It would be like a You Laugh You Lose hostage situation where the NijiGirl is one snicker away from being supercancelled.
>>45581726
Hey, it's no nudity so there's a chance.
>>45584869
Imagine Rosemi and Petra's mughsots on the ADL website

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 00:51:38 2023 No.45587971 >>45587762 >It would be like a You Laugh You Lose hostage situation where the NijiGirl is one snicker away from being supercancelled I think they'd all immediately laugh once they heard Elira talk.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:10:12 2023 No.45589074 >>45584869 Honestly I feel like it'd be funnier if it breached containment rather than remaining obscure

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:12:43 2023 No.45589230 >>45584869 I don't get me wrong, I don't really care either way. I'm just pointing it out. Of all the things in the VN that paints the biggest target.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:14:46 2023 No.45589352 >>45589074 So long as they don't start brigading where the game can be hosted. It would be hilarious to see the backlash. It's one thing to be controversial, it's another thing to be funny as you do it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:28:20 2023 No.45590120 File: 71 KB, 1280x720, pain.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45522800 >Cleaned up the images manually Hoo boy... I'll play around with renpy then and go from there.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:34:29 2023 No.45590466 >>45590120 That's what I would recommend

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:38:09 2023 No.45590668 >>45589230 >mental patients are now sacred cows What went wrong?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 01:56:44 2023 No.45591715 > try to make the VN more popular hoping Niji will play it > end up getting a cease and desist from Anycolor for defamation and copyrighted characters Sounds like a good plan

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:02:54 2023 No.45592057 >>45591715 >use cease and desist as leverage to get finana's number for a quick suck and fuck

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:03:53 2023 No.45592112 >>45592057 If only. It'd be the corp issuing the C&D.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:07:59 2023 No.45592365
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>>45558769
That one part in HC where anon is about to ditch everyone to go on a suicide mission and Aqua tries to stop him.
>"But what about our promise...?"
I felt like a piece of shit vicariously.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:10:04 2023 No.45592502 >>45591715 Parody law protects VNanon if he's american which I assume he his.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:10:47 2023 No.45592548 >>45592365 HC?

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:18:53 2023 No.45593046

>>45558769
Elysium isnt a great fic (i remember the author mentioning it was his first) but this exchange is both really funny and super cute, and it has lived in my head for a while
>''I dunno, im just... so overwhelmed'' she sobs and yells ''Im too hormonal''
>10!
>''What?''
>9!
>''Yeah, from the pregnancy''
>8!
>''THE WHAT?!'' You yell in a mix of surprise, happiness and nerves
>7!
>''THE WHAT?!'' yells Gura, in a mix of surprise, horror and disbelief
>6!
>''IM HAVING A SISTER!!?!?!'' shrieks Zoe, in complete glee
>5!
>Mori slams her hands in her face
>4!
>''IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE A FUCKING SECRET!''
>3!
>''wait babe'' you try to make yoursel be heard over the chorus of people
>2!
>''WE ARE NOT TALKING ABOUT THIS RIGHT NOW!''

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:20:40 2023 No.45593139 >>45592548 Holocalypse

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:25:03 2023 No.45593375 >>45592502 Not entirely, anon. His use of official assets removes that protection. He would need to use completely original ones.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:35:07 2023 No.45593920

>>45593375
I wonder how the law would view his use of samples? The images are changed up a bit, but not at all significantly. And does a screenshot of a chuuba have copyright protection? What if someone were to use a photograph of a real person in a VN?

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:38:40 2023 No.45594088

>>45593920
I'd say there's a 99% chance that they're not okay. Doesn't exactly transform it in any meaningful way and is still clearly meant to depict the talents. As for a photograph of a real person, whoever took the picture of a person would own the copyright.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:45:15 2023 No.45594429 >>45587762 Nude mod when?!

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:46:37 2023 No.45594517 >>45594429 Send me nude sprites and I'll implement them.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:46:37 2023 No.45594518 >>45594088 If Disney can't do shit to South Park then I think VNanon is fine.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:52:25 2023 No.45594909 >>45594518 South Park doesn't use Disney assets. VNanon will be fine regardless most likely since I don't see anycolor coming for him.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 02:56:07 2023 No.45595111 >>45593920 You could argue it's samples but no sane judge would ever side with you. The legal area of copyright is very grey and so it's up to the judge to use common sense to decide

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:10:02 2023 No.45596026 Even if he did get slapped with a C&D, the game has already been distributed and can easily keep spreading through file-sharing websites. You can't un-cook that egg.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:11:38 2023 No.45596146 >>45595111 What should I wear to my court hearing? I'm thinking cosplay, but of who?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:13:32 2023 No.45596262 >>45596026 If it gets popular enough (like twitter outrage popular) I can always take the financial hit to host it on my own site, like Katawa Shoujo or Unteralterbach

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:14:06 2023 No.45596296 File: 323 KB, 1600x900, 1679364479948821.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45596146 If we're not limiting ourselves to Nijisanji, there's really only one option.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:15:41 2023 No.45596413 >>45596262 >Unteralterbach Ah, memories....

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:26:51 2023 No.45597095 File: 215 KB, 1920x1080, animaru mio.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>45311162 (Chuuba of your choice) decides to engage in petplay

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 03:30:56 2023 No.45597331 >>45596296 >answers every question with peko at the end Trial of the century. I might just pay my little sister to cosplay as Rosemi and answer every question in her diminutive and polite way.

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Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:09:54 2023 No.45602920
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Hey bros, looking for some advice, I slipped out of my writing and would like a good refresher course.

got any fics with good smut scenes for me to research, or do you have any advice on writing smut?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:16:55 2023 No.45603218 >>45602920 >I slipped out of my writing and would like a good refresher course. Yeah, just write. The simplest and effedtive advice you can receive.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:18:44 2023 No.45603305 >>45602920 Don't worry too much about quality for your first draft. Just fantasize about the sex in your head and then put it down on paper as best you can. You can focus on refining it later.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:21:04 2023 No.45603427 >>45602920 Just do what this anon >>45603218 says and just write.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:21:31 2023 No.45603452
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>>45311162
You open up the Valentines Day with hololive youtube video to rewatch and realize that the video is saying that it's "live" and the chatbox is open, but empty. You ignore it and watch on, however when the video would normally end, it continues onward as if it was a live stream. The representations of the Holo EN members act confused, noting that the video should have ended, and yet it's still going on. Weirded out, you decide to enter a message into the chat. To your surprise the characters in the video react to your message as if the "you" in the video said it.

Basics: The Valentines video continues infinitely from the first video and the girls are fully aware of it. Up to the author if they are trapped in Mori's house or if they can leave. Anon can interact with each girl via the chat box. Anon can review old footage by scrolling the video bar back.

Complicated idea/prompt but I felt like I should toss it out there

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:38:03 2023 No.45604219 >>45602920 While just write is correct, just read is true as well. Read anything. If it's good, figure out why. If it's bad, figure out why. Lots to learn from anything.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:42:13 2023 No.45604423
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>>45602920
Outside of just writing like the other anons suggest. You should also read, and not just the good stuff that gets recommended, read the garbage, read the mediocre.
You'll learn more from writing and reading if you do it with purpose. You should still have fun with it of course but just because your learning how to make better smut doesn't mean you can't have fun.

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 05:42:33 2023 No.45604438

>>45604219
This. Reading can help get you into a better mindspace for writing. As for recommendations, I personally appreciate the Catto stories, High-Density Comet, POLlatio, and the smut in Our Cures (which, as a bonus, has a lot of great story buildup surrounding it to make the first time a lot more visceral; foreplay, even in the form of just context between characters, can lead to better smut!)

Anonymous Tue Mar 21 06:30:20 2023 No.45606397

>>45602920
>got any fics with good smut scenes for me to research
Huh. Depends on what kink you're trying to improve on, really. No singular fic does everything at once.

Gonna go with a vanilla recommendation and say try Festival of Sensations, particularly the second chapter.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:07:36 2023 No.45607711 >>45602920 Pick at random until you land on a NSFW non shitpost tag

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:15:24 2023 No.45607971 >>45597095 Do you have anything in mind existing fics haven't done yet?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:18:46 2023 No.45608093 >>45607971 That's for the person who's going to write decide.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:21:53 2023 No.45608209 Hey what does "saviourfag" mean in the context of the fanfic with that title?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:24:10 2023 No.45608305 >>45608209 Kiara wants to save a 2view

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:24:40 2023 No.45608324 >>45608209 Should be obvious from the title alone.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:29:16 2023 No.45608471 >>45602920 In terms of sex scenes, it's Subjection and Princess' Scepter for me. Non(standard)-sex smut is a lot rarer, but if you want to know about any specific fetish feel free to ask.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:29:40 2023 No.45608489 >>45608209 Exactly what it sounds like. The desire to "save" someone, usually from either obscurity or an unpleasant life.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:31:09 2023 No.45608538 >>45608093 I mean, that's always the case ultimately. I was just asking for ideas that could inspire someone

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:32:26 2023 No.45608575 >>45608538 >I was just asking for ideas that could inspire someone I'm sure they can come up with their own ideas, anon.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:33:17 2023 No.45608598 >>45608575 Yeah, but they can do that either wa...Oh you're just the threadschizo, nevermind.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:35:19 2023 No.45608647 >>45597095 Uhh

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:36:24 2023 No.45608672 >>45608598 Anon, are you okay?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:36:24 2023 No.45608673 >>45608209 Use your brain, it should be obvious from the context

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:40:24 2023 No.45608786 >>45558769 > "That really was... the HoloFantasy!" Kino, can't wait for part 35

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:45:38 2023 No.45608956 >>45608598 He's a real fucking lunatic. Good on ya for noticing.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:51:26 2023 No.45609139 >>45608786 Fuck you, I just checked and the chapters it goes to chapter 7

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:51:56 2023 No.45609159 >>45609139 >Doesn't have a time machine

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:53:12 2023 No.45609196 >>45609159 NTA but where'd you get your flux capacitor? I can't find one for the life of me.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:54:12 2023 No.45609230 >>45609139 Did you count the multiple parts of the later chapters?

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:54:15 2023 No.45609231 >>45609159 I'm just a bit mad because for a second I actually thought an author might have used that line unironically and wanted to check

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:54:48 2023 No.45609247 >>45609196 As a bong, I can just step into the nearest phone booth.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 07:54:55 2023 No.45609252 >>45609230 Not him, but there’s only seven chapters and extras.

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 08:06:18 2023 No.45609601 New thread >>45609410

>>	Anonymous Tue Mar 21 08:33:23 2023 No.45610375 >>45608471 >In terms of sex scenes, it's Subjection based hairy pussy enjoyer

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