/wg/ - Writing General - Kusogaki Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>43999231

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Marine trying to pick up chicks or (You) with her tricked out tricycle.:>>44023761

Koyori's latest concoction has gone horribly awry; all the stars have been genderbent! Some are horrified, others are...strangely nonplussed, but all have one thing in common; (You) are the only male compatriot they have left. What will you do? Will you strive to restore your friends to their former selves, or will you find some sort of new, strange feelings for the fellas you once knew now that it's no longer gay?:>>44028952

A fic about womb tattoos and impregnation.:>>44042209

A fic.:>>44042548

Miko abuse.:>>44044384

Back in his hometown, Anon loved to play with the kind and sweet Olivia, a girl far older than him. Her tragic death however traumatizes anon, and his parents decide to take him to the big city.:>>44060828

Fic with Bae in her new outfit.:>>44084537

Putting Pikame out to pasture.:>>44090517

It’s the early 2010’s and you get a job – unfortunately however it’s a black company. The only employee in the company who is the same age as you is a red-haired girl with heterochromia. She's prone to daydreaming and interested in strange stuff like the occult and the mysteries of the deep sea and space. The other employees call her the Alien or the Weirdo. You slowly become friends with her and together with this girl you discover that the company you’re working for is connected to an evil conspiracy.:>>44175550

Roboco accidentally downloaded a Virus and now she has russian sex-ads and clickbait on her brain:>>44208554

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>>44222061
Time to punish this brat and her rude behavior, like all brats.

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bumping for smug kusogaki

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>>44224495
Gura’s gaki body getting "unintentionally" flaunted was the highlight of her stream

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>>44225612
I really wish Shion was a part of her 3d debut.

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>>44224495
>>44225612
Hm...

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>>44225612
Crispy critters I wish that was me

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>>44220452
All commissioned. Ch2 was written basically entirely out of ideas I gave for improvement. If you want the fic to be resumed you'll most likely have to pay for it yourself because MWanon is currently writing Unhealthy Addictions.

>>44218522
Wasn't meant to be harsh; just a genuine reflection. Besides, he probably won't see it anyway.

This fic is getting way more reception now that it's abandoned than it did on each chapter's release. Why is that?

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>>44229048
>This fic is getting way more reception now that it's abandoned than it did on each chapter's release. Why is that?

Anons read stories and don't leave feedback, more news at 11

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>>44229048
Probably because of all the Shion shitposting going on from her coming back from her long hiatus, more eyes are on her

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>>44229048
Anon, it was a generic dark smut fic without an interesting twist. You don't exactly get good feedback for smut like that even in more 'serious' writing communities.
The fact that it was all commissioned was honestly more interesting than the fic itself.

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>>44229048
There's more demand for abuse, SM and Shion than there is supply

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>>44231058
ToT

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>>44231058
I like this image a lot because in it Shion's not bratty or being harrassed for once. She's just happy that (You) are on vacation with her.

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>>44229048
>Besides, he probably won't see it anyway.
he probably will

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>>44229341
Yeah, I figure that's probably the most likely answer. Followed by >>44229597, I didn't realize she was on hiatus.

>>44230032
Sorry to hear you didn't like it.

>>44231058
That's the case for any genre or fetish you care to name.

>>44233026
I dunno, I can't remember the last time I saw him talk outside of dropping a fic. Dude's mega busy thanks to his job. I hope he's doing well.

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>>44231058
I think I have an idea.

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>>44233780
Well, don't leave us in suspense, now. Share with the class.

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>>44232733
There's a guy pointing a gun at her to the right of frame and she's giving a footjob to the left of frame

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>>44233780
>>44233971
I'd also like to hear about it. Just share it with both classes

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>>44234046
You immediately made the pic 2x hotter

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>>44233293
I'm doing good, thanks. I know this is probably something we should've talked over email, but I do very much appreciate the opportunities you've given me thus far, and I apologize if some of the works I've done were not up to the standards you had.

In terms of writing, I'm just chunking away at Unhealthy Addictions when I can, and although ironic, the whole spectacle of La+ forgiving her antis and Pikamee's incredibly unfortunate upcoming graduation has fueled a good amount of ideas for the series I have in mind. It'll take a while, but I do want to complete it.

In the meantime, have a Fubuki.

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>>44234509
I stand corrected! I'm happy to hear you're good, man, that's a blessing in a sea of so much bad news recently. I'm not readily sure how La+ and Pikamee are gonna fit into this MW reimagining, but I'm sure we're all eager to see the fruits of your musings - I know I am.
FOX SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

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>>44233971
>>44234081
More S&M with aftercare and brat correction.
I’ll pre-heat the oven and get baking.

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>>44235054
hey nice, you completely ignored his thanks and query over your "disappointment". why dont you just spit in his face too

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>>44235381
Because the specifics of that aren't a topic for discussion here. I've a feeling you're trying to stir the pot.

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>>44235675
no, i think your fake nice corpo bullshit speak is disgusting. you obviously think his work is shit else you wouldnt have spent two threads talking about how "disappointed" you are

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>>44235884
Yeah, I thought his work was so shit that I went and spent around a grand on him. MWanon's writing is stellar and his works are amongst the best here, and fuck you for suggesting otherwise. I didn't say I was fucking disappointed in him, I said I had issues with quality (which was more due to communication problems than anything) and that was what led to me stopping commissions. My own personal circumstances factor into this as well. It has NOTHING to do with bad writing - he has always strived to deliver an excellent product to me and I've always recognized and appreciated that.
You managed to get me pissed. Well done, and enjoy your last (You).

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>>44235054
POV: Your dick is growing bigger than they expected

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>>44236281
cope and seethe more

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>>44236281
Is it weird that I can tell this isn't the bugfag?

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>>44236511
>I can tell this isn't the bugfag?
You are 100% incorrect.

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Good thread, hope Shion gets what’s coming to her.

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>>44236580
Man must be passionate about MWanon then.

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>>44237217
Yeah, consensual and enjoyable BDSM sessions with a dom that she loves.

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>>44236281
>I went and spent around a grand on him.
Man... I don't mean to throw shade at your decisions but given that you throw him prompts/concepts that aren't super chuuba characterization specific you could have pulled some really fucking experienced smut writers with rates like that.

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>>44235054
Love these two

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I read the discussion about this prompt last thread
>"(You) are a Not!Master hired by Hololive to manage/control 'idols' to fight all sorts of supernatural phenomena around the country... and 'idols' from rival organizations"
Given how freeform the concept seems to be how would you write it?
My rough idea would basically be doing it as a quest/doing it as a pseudo freeform rpg like holofantasy since there doesn't really seem to be a big plot to guide it around.

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>>44241127
either a monster of the week format with a changing cast (so you can fuck around with ideas and do cool stuff) or you pick a small cast and you focus on developing them as they move from place to place
taking, say, gen2 (lol) and moving from country to country as you develop relationships with them. However you would have to write it like a jojo-style fight, where you have 3 people screaming on the sidelines and its actually a 1v1 for like 99% of the story.
Otherwise, just rip off mato seihei and have cool battles but have deranged fetish stuff move everything else

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>>44235287
>500 words later
And now that I've actually gotten the ball rolling, I think I can formally announce that the sequel to A Brat's Punishment is in the works.
Hope you like erotic e-stim.

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>>44242092
LoveSense is a given then?

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>>44241340
>you pick a small cast and you focus on developing them as they move from place to place taking, say, gen2 (lol) and moving from country to country as you develop relationships with them
This is making me think of combining it with that holos turn into weapons idea from months back.
Have the initial 'arc' ape holofantasy's (unintentional) structure and be about meeting the idol of the week as you fight with your chuuba weapon so you can 'recruit' them into the agency. With accompanying bits of downtime being about bonding/training with them as myth arc gradually gets revealed.

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>>44243497
What's LoveSense? All google's giving me is Lovense, a sex toy company.

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>>44244199
Anon... If you actually read more you'd see that they're a sex toy company with digitally controlled sex toys, i.e the kind that'll probably be used in that fic.

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>>44244316
I think Mystim might be better suited for e-stim shenanigans. Lovense seems more focused on vibrating toys.

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>>44222173
A fic like this greentext >>44237191 that describes the various tastes of chuuba milk.

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>read NTR fic
>get sad
Why did I do this to myself

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>>44242092
She looks like she just had her orgasm denied for the third time

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>>44245499
Which one was it?

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>>44245739
Sad genuine smile
The ending fucked with ny heart.

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>>44222173
An embarassed but earnest naizuri from your favorite washboard

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>>44245863
>Sad genuine smile
If ever there was a fic that benefited from a rework in direction it would be that one. From what I remember of the thread at the time it was originally meant to be more focused on being a coomfic rather than the heartbreak/drama but it changed direction and focused more on the Towa cucking to great effect.

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>>44242092
How are the chances for pussy clamps?

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>>44244750
The milk fetishizers would never do this. You're only attracting futa with that prompt

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>>44243544
yeah the soul eater system could lead to fun stuff, like the girls bantering as weapons.
question is, aside from the canon forms, which chuuba would be each weapon?
Nene, for me, fits as nunchaku

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>>44247722
Anya would be a dagger

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/vt/ League 4 in 10 minutes! /wg/ doesn't have a team and I'm not in other threads often, but I'm still excited.

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>>44247722
Ayame would be a katana.

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>>44251805
And it would look like a hybrid between Rakshasa and Asura.

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>>44247722
Aqua is a frying pan, L4D2 style.
Botan's a sniper rifle.
Shion's a spanking bat
Lui's a whip
Koyori is a highly powerful flamethrower
Korone is a pair of boxing gloves
>>44248638
heh.

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>>44247722
Avoiding the low-hanging fruit that's a trident, Gura would be the TF2 Holy Mackarel

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>>44253550
And Matsuri would be the Jarate.

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>>44222173
Trying to turn a slutty chuuba into a pure maiden before she turns you into her personal sex toy.

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>>44246461
The part of that fic that always stuck out to me actually, moreso than anything about Towa, was Coco's arc throughout the whole thing. Instead of being kept in the dark about the cheating, she knows from around the start and just kind of has to passively accept it as Kanata gradually feels less and less guilt. That kind of subtle NTR grooming is one of my absolute apex fetishes and I wish there were more of it. Kanata egging Anon on as he throatfucks Coco and then forcing the dragon to eat her out after getting creampied was the hottest thing I'd read in a good minute.

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>>44256935
For me, it's when she can't look Towa straight in the eye because she's in on it. And then later realizes that Towa knows she fucked her boyfriend too.

I honestly can't think of anything more cucked than being Coco.

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>>44259364
Not enough Fauna titfucking fics.

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>>44260474
Not enough Fauna in general.

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>>44236511
Outta curiosity, why'd you think this?

>>44237291
>>44237407
I'm fiercely loyal.

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>>44259447
There's definitely an aspect to it of me not liking her, and a bit of how headstrong she is. Seeing someone like her of all people schlicking to getting cucked of all things and being treated like a subby accessory to bedtime fun is diamonds material. Almost as much of the experience, though, comes from the idea of Kanata having been corrupted by pleasure enough to willingly coax this behavior out of someone she'd previously held a pure love towards.

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>>44222239
That's not Shion...

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>>44262907
I dunno

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>>44261951
Soon brother...

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>>44266536
"I see." said the blind man, but of course he could not.

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>>44261951
*Not enough Fauna in writing general.

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>>44266657
We defo need a fic of Fubuki giving you a buttjob through your clothed crotch with her large ass with the intent to make you cum.

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>>44268300
I'm Commander Bugfag and this is my favourite post in this thread.

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>>44268300
This but it's being done in competition with Kurokami to see who can make you cum the most.

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>>44268300
This but after it happens the first time she's incredibly turned on by the power kick and starts training you to cream your pants over the course of several weeks until all it takes is a quick hotdog in passing

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>>44268300
This but it's initiated by you in a plan to slowly train your reluctant girlfriend Fubuki into enjoying sexual activities involving her posterior with the ultimate goal of turning her into the perfect buttslut.

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>>44260474
I'd want to titfuck nerd Fauna specifically. I want her to keep saying dumb pointless shit about how this isn't technically sex or some other dumb shit terminology or something about the history of titfucking and its naming conventions, I don't know.

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>>44275034
Hot

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>>44268300
This but I cum as soon as her butt grazes my pants

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>>44272001
And I'm admiral buttfag, and I approve this message.

Why is the white fox so damn sexual. I don't even find her THAT sexy, but I can't stop lusting over her.

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>>44250015
cool

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>>44277276
She's shy and hides behind a cute, friendly exterior, but you just know once she warms up to you, she's an absolute freak in the sack.

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>>44279478
Fubuki...is not shy

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>>44279595
Yeah, she is

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>>44279647
Sure

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>>44279478
I hate the foxhand thing but damn this is a hot pic

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>>44279478
god i fucking love girls nuzzling cock, specially if they get hyper horny and want you to put a few buns in their oven
>>44280649
>hating the universal fox mating sign
its okay anon, unless you are in the middle east, being gay is pretty normal

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>>44280649
It's the fox equivalent of a double peace. She's in heat and ready for insemination.

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bringing back the extremely hot prompt of one chuuba getting a breeding fetish and encouraging you to fuck other chuubas to see your extra-fertile seed prosper
Thanks to the anon in that thread that wrote watame in that role btw, however im thinking Koyori
>hey, did you know that anon's sperm volume is thrice as potent as the standard?
>imagine those swimmers getting released into you
>wouldnt you love that?

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>>44222173
Scarle worshipping your cock after a long and sweaty day at work.
https://youtu.be/NMDvLBdcbpQ

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>>44282137
Isn't a breeding fetish just human instinct.

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>>44288326
yes and no
It is human instinct but its taken to a sexual level. Naturally humans want to pass on genes and stuff, but they dont get pleasure out of doing it, just satisfaction, and its not like they are constantly thinking about it
A breeding kink or fetish implies that the sole idea/sight of you passing on your genes gets you going and motivates you to try and do it

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>>44289970
I don't know, sex is pretty pleasurable.

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>>44282137
In the context of breeding all of holox, what about la+? Mostly because I get this really funny image of her doing the chuuni thing to disguise the breeding fetish at first that gradually descends into pure lust the longer she talks about it.

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>>44288326
There's a difference between having regular sex with your wife because you want to have a kid, and getting off to the thought of her leg-locking you and begging at the top of her lungs for you to fuck her pregnant and make her a mother.

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>>44288326
I don't think I've ever heard of a human going into heat, anon

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>>44284732
>coming home to find Scarle huffing your dirty boxers

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>>44284732
Pretty hot desu

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>>44280649
That foxhand thing is how she gives handjobs.

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Im trying to think of chuubas that have copy of themselves as a part of their lore, anybody know any examples? Cause if not I'm just gonna use Koyori and a batch of Koyo-clones.

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>>44277276
Hope you know how to ban evade, BB

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>>44300663
There are infinite Amelia Watsons.

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>>44300663
There were four Guras the other day

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>>44300953
I thought about using Ame, but for some reason I feel like it wouldn't be a good use of her too have 5 or 6 Ame's that all act the same like I'd want.

The idea is that you turn down a chuuba asking you out on account of the fact you're already seeing someone, even though internally it's very tempting. She goes a little yandere, thinking that of she's not enough for you maybe a half-dozen of her will and you don't have the willpower to turn down a personal chuuba harem.

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>>44301442
That's got Koyori written all over it

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>>44301442
That Mahjong stream was something else. Why hasn't there been a Mahjong fic yet?

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>>44301442
Strangely enough that concept feels like it would fit Ame... If it goes in the complete opposite direction and instead of a yandere harem it's a yandere battle royale amongst the Ames' of competing timelines fighting each other with (You) being caught in the cross-fire.

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>>44301286
ToT

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>>44222173
Playing Mahjong with chuubas.

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A small treatise on some aspects of vTubing and fans thereof

The word of the day is kayfabe. The word of the day is parasocoal. The word of the day is symbiosis.

And this is about why none of these are bad words.

Kayfabe -pronounced 'k-feeb'- is acting a role in real life for a real life audience. It's an wrestling term that dates back to the beginning. It's etomology is a little muddy, some are of the opinion that it dates back from carnie culture and is a corruption of the pig-latinized 'be fake'. Which would be 'ee-bay ake-fay'. But I digress. That's what it is, that's what it means; to act a character and be fake.

Parasocial is, to put it bluntly, to simulate being in a society.

Symbosis is to develop a relationship where both entities give and take to and from each other; both being beneficial to each other in some fashion but also using each other.

A vTuber must have all of these aspects. A vTuber must delineate his or her life from the role he or she is acting, however one must also have some measure of play-acting in their routine. To have a digital puppet that one controls and gives personality to, one must be willing to become caught up in the act and find themselves in that character. So saying: a vTuber must enjoy his or her character. If one doesn't they will invariably grow to hate their job and worse, their fans. Fans who are part of the kayfebe. The act cannot be one sided. For example Jane cannot put on her Rikka Tsuchinoko digital puppet and still allow the fans call her Jane, nor can the fans be allowed to call her Jane. Rikka must be Rikka, Jane must be Jane. Rikka must also allow people to form some small attachments to her, and she some small attachments to them, else the kayfebe shall not work.

That, dear reader, is where parasocial comes in. Faux social. Fake social. You know that Rikka isn't real, I know Rikka isn't real, Jane knows Rikka isn't real. But Rikka must be real for a little while to a few people. Rikka must have likes and dislikes, she must have tastes and things she detests, she must be given life. With that life she must allow her viewers to form an attachment with her, a sort of friendship or at least a feeling of camaraderie, and it it imperative that is also returned on her part. Surely, she mustn't remember every aspect of all her viewers but completely disregarding them is ill advised. Pick out names, remember factiods that are interesting, but above all respond to them. Keep in mind that you must do this with people who are not enrolled to a monthly membership to you, but also free viewers as well. Engagement and the relationship formed of engagement -even if it's a pretend relationship- is important for growth of the vTuber in views and in entertainment factor.

Which leads directly into symbiosis. A vTuber must allow herself or himself to grow and change over time. Not necessarily a character arc featured in traditional media but a growth of ability and confidence. The audience, in turn, will do so as well, changing and evolving just as the vTuber does. Yet, just as the vTuber effects the audience, the audience effects the vTuber. Rally behind him or her and they shall get excited. Multiple users have a bad day all by coincidence? The sour attitudes can make the vTuber become dour and moody. Or, in a reversal, the vTuber can cheer the audience up, give joy and enjoyment in an otherwise bad spot.

All three of these aspects, and many more, are imperative to have a genuine vTuber experience, both behind the rig and watching it. Please be cautious to not break these general guidelines, lest your growth stymie or cease or worse your audience/vTuber leave you. An audience/vTuber that is 'in' on the fun and enjoys themselves are ones that stick around.

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>>44309708
Didn't read

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>>44309814
What is the image supposed to be

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>>44309708
Is this AI generated? Anyone using Rikka as an example wouldn't call him a "she".

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>>44310021
Don't worry about it.

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>>44310021
Just some flowers, anon

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>>44310076
Nope, written by a person. I just have always viewed Rikka as a woman's name. Kinda like Betty, even if it's not.

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>>44309814
>>44310117
I got banned for posting the tubgirl one.
Good thing evading takes three seconds.

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hey jannies can you talk to your mod/admin overlords and ask if they can put a wordfilter on this board which replaces 'butthole' with 'fartpussy'
thank you

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>>44310117
I mean, the pumpkins are clearly a replacement for a person...but I can't guess what >>44309814 is about! Intriguing.

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>>44313833
It's a goat eat grass off of a cliff edge

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>>44310021
medical malpractice

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>>44313833
/vt/ really is a board filled with newfags and I hate it.

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>>44316513
Oh nyo! fr

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>>44316513
Imagine boasting about having seen gay porn

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>>44316585
I'm also proud of seeing Tsukasa getting fucked by a deer.

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> 12k words in
> realize I've been switching between present and past tenses
> again

Goddammit.

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>>44316882
FOOL!

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>>44317243
I can't help it, some words sound much nicer in present tense, others in past tense. I just get carried away. The text feels so contrived when I force myself to write exclusively past tense, and present tense only looks awful to me because I don't know when it is actually appropriate to indeed mix the two. It looks nice, but I know if I post it people will say it's jarring and wrong, something I haven't quite managed to accept yet. It feels normal to me, I don't know why

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>>44317401
That used to happen to me a lot in the past. It'll come more natural to you as you keep going. Also, major props for being 12k words in! Keep it up!

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>>44317401
This is why you edit afterwards. Just keep writing till you're finished then iron it out afterwards.

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>>44316882
I have a persistent issue where I write the bulk of a story in past tense, but then have these long sections of past perfect that sort of start to blend together with what bookends them. It makes logical sense to conjugate that way when referring to past events without going full flashback, but after seeing a couple dozen uses of the word "had" in two pages it starts to sound awkward.

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>>44318550
It makes English simpler, but the repetition of "have" and "had" for present perfect and past perfect is a downside of only having one auxiliary verb for those tenses.

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>>44317401
Maybe you could take a part of the fic and make it into a present version, a past version and a mixed version (how you'd prefer it) - then everyone could discuss the issue with specific examples.

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>>44319953
That's one of the reasons why Latin is awesome.

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>>44316882
I try not to think about it too much, to be honest. Some of the novelists I read fuck up their tenses (primarily using 3rd person past tense and mixing in present tense verbs here and there) if only to make their story read smoother. There are just times where the 'correct' grammar isn't necessarily the 'right' grammar, especially in creative writing. English is weird like that

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What you got cookin bros? What you looking forward to seeing after its cooked?

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>>44322835
The fucking holos as servant/weapon discussion is stuck in my head. Enough that I've started to write some notes and ideas for it but I'm not sure if I want to add another wip to the pile.

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>>44323678
I'm interested in that idea too.

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>>44326241
Five dollars have been deposited into your account.

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Every time I hear about Aqua and her in-cap, it makes me want to force her to wear revealing clothing in public.

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>>44330772
Which chuubas would mumei mail a pipebomb to as a prank?

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>>44328694
Aqua wearing a dress that stops high on her thighs and high heels sandals on the middle of the street

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>>44331592
I bet the Kronster gets them weekly

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>>44282137
>Thanks to the anon in that thread that wrote watame in that role btw
Link??

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>>44336030
Warosu

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>>44330772
What was she doing from 68-98?

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>>44339215
Come on, be more specific. I just want to bust a nut to the sheep

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>>44343175
Just read a Watame fic

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>>44336030
You're lucky that I wanted to read it again myself >>/vt/thread/S42087084#p42190323
Try searching the archives for yourself next time - in this instance, searching for "Watame breed" was enough.

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>>44344890
>Try searching the archives for yourself next time - in this instance, searching for "Watame breed" was enough.
Anon, that's why I didn't link him the thread. Since I refuse to believe someone was that tech illiterate that they couldn't find it on their own.

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>>44345066
Hopefully seeing how easy it can be will be encouragement to try it himself next time. Maybe not, but it's better to be overly kind than overly harsh.

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Stay alive.

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Any good shock stories in the archive?

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>>44349132
Apple of Her Eye and the First Train and Kafka series.

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>>44349207
pretty good. surprised there aren't more

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>>44349132
None whatsoever now fuck off

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>>44349132
The Kiara chapter of Menhera Wrangler. I don't know if MWanon hates her or what, but he did not pull his punches.

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>>44352917
Poor little ENshitter gonna cry? Kill yourself

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Threadshitter's really dying for some (you)s
Remember lads, the best way to stop shitting up a thread, is to not reply to trolls

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>>44353997
Lol your seething is so obvious. Chill ENshitter, I'm just kidding around

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>>44353997
what are you even talking about

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>>44354548
He overreacted to me calling him ENshitter

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>>44350382
Author is MIA

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>>44364101
Dumb bitch is drooling on herself

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>>44284732
pic sauce?

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>>44322835
Path of Exile with graduated vtubers became Path of Exile with mechs and graduated vtubers.

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>>44367278
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/105841881

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>>44367368
So the fic is about a bunch of graduated chuubas trying to survive after getting exiled... then they find mechs?

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>>44367813
The mechs are built into the setting. Trust me it will be good. Maybe. If I finish it.

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>>44222173
Yandere Marine chasing a young privateer across the Seven Seas

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Sigh

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> f-fine, but only a peek!
> *whistles* Those are some damn fine breasts you have there
> Don't mind if I do!
> W-What are you doing? You promised you wouldn't touch them!!
> promises are made to be broken, lady
> besides, did you really think just a peek was enough to repay for what you did?
> I don't need to remind you of the alternative, right?
> ...
> That's what I thought, now take your hands off and let me at em
> damn, they are as soft as pudding, shame they're so small though! *laughs*
> *Pekora upset, but doesn't comment*
> Isn't that enough already? I need to get home peko
> hold your horses, lady, there's no need for the rush
> *unzips pants* the night is just getting started

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Draw, o coward!

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>>44377522
Shooting the duck...

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>>44377522
You're a loose cannon, Oozora. But you get results.

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>>44378718
Shooting in the duck

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>>44300726
What? I'd never.

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>>44377519
Thinking about it... It's strange how we've never gotten anyone to write a 'realistic' rape scenario fic outside of that one(now deleted) Fubuki fic.

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>>44380413
It's disturbing if it's too realistic, and people here mostly write pleasant stories. There's always a fucked up minority of people, but apart from them "realistic" rape is an element you'd include to be repulsive and unsettling.

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>>44381088
Yeah, there's a reason 99% of rape doujins have the girl doing ahegao and loving it by the end. Tons of people like the fetish idea of rape, very few people would like to be actual rapists.

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>>44381088
>>44381290
Couple of little bitches.

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>>44381301
I didn't know they had 4chan in Romanian prisons

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>>44381395
Terrified women screaming in pain and sobbing is the hottest fetish in existence.

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>>44381088
I've thought about it before but I'd like feedback of the guy who got raped and i don't think he posts here anymore.

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>>44381763
Are you sure he didn't just do the Rushia bathtub thing?

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>>44381792
Given he lied about being a herm it's not unbelievable his experience of rape was fingering himself in the shower

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>>44381719
No I think it’s wedgies

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>>44381719
No I think it's bugs

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>>44380413
I believe I've pitched the idea before and the reaction was more or less "you can do it, I will read it, but it's not my cup of tea"

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>>44380413
>that one(now deleted) Fubuki fic.
That's the way Fubuki crumbles is still up

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>>44381850
Good point, me

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>>44381972
No, I'm talking about that one fic about stalking Fubuki home. It was posted as an abandoned wip.

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>>44382380
Then there's more than one "realistic" rape fic