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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>42817309

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were six stories posted in the last thread.

HoloJourneys: A Summoner's Recollection (Series Landing Page): tags: Watame, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Long?:>>42835310

Lape Ramy: tags: Lamy,Comedy, Rape:>>42846299

Marine short fic: tags: Marine, You, train, art:>>42875019

Partners in crime, chapter 2: Lunch with the Kami: Tags: Kurokami, Fubuki, Ayame, Iroha, SFW:>>42906137

Butterfly Bound, Chapter 1: Tags: Rushia, Marine, Coco, SFW, Fluff:>>43006603

Marine lewd story: Marine, You, NSFW, short: >>43013813

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Manhandling Kobo.:>>42839103

"I love bugs, I love big bugs.":>>42863549

You're the caretaker/manager or assistant of the Hag Football team, your duty is to satisfy the hags needs after and before a match:>>42870278

Ollie has to hold in your cum when you creampie her right before a ninja mission:>>42924627

Kuro giving you a footjob:>>42977134

Lore-accurate Kronii:>>43013003

anything with marine:>>43013299

Lore accurate Kroni being fucked by lore accurate Aurelion Sol:>>43013351

>> No.43031635

>>43030963
Half elf, half rabbit? I guess that would help with the declining elf population

>> No.43032210

>>43031635
>average rabbit litter size is 7
>rabbit lamy could have as many as 15 children at once

>> No.43032275

>>43031635
7 new elves every 200 years isn't enough to make a dent

>> No.43032412

>>43032275
Elves have a 200 year gestation period?

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>>43032210
>the size of her stomach eclipses her body as 15 healthy elven babies grow in her for 9 months

>> No.43033973

>>43006603
This was... better than I expected. The introduction was particularly impressive, I quite enjoyed reading it as it was written well. The overall prose quality dropped off just a tiny bit after a few paragraphs, but still remained really solid.
The dialogue wasn't the greatest at some points, it occasionally felt like it was going around in circles and was meaningless as well as too long. The same can be send with the inner thoughts of Anon. An example of dialogue could be when Anon was trying to convince Rushia he didn't squeal, and as for narration the part where Rushia was in the bathroom could have been condensed a little better. Throughout the story he must have mentioned that the Boss will kill him over the money about 10 times. But it wasn't a major problem, I only say this as a nitpick.
I think it's a bit of a wasted opportunity for Anon to remember most of what happened, as I think it would be interesting for him to remember nothing and be forced to try and retrace his steps purely by using clues given to him by the people he interacted with the previous night. Like a chuuba could rush out from her store as Anon walks by and begin to berate him for fucking her daughter, to which Anon apologises and asks if she knows where he went after that or where he was before. Through this he discovers things like the fact that he's now married, owns shares in a company that makes sex toys, whatever other shit he did, and pieces things together like that one quest in Skyrim. I guess I only say this because I had ideas for my own version of this prompt that I ended up dropping. I'm sure you'll find a way to make this shine, I'm looking forward to more.

>> No.43036217

>>43030963
The things I would do to Lamy once I get my hands on her.

>> No.43036667

>>43036217
Throw playing cards around?

>> No.43036709

>>43036217
Wriggle up her butt and wear her like a suit?

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another v-day with the /wg/ lads...

>> No.43037913

>>43037671
The single best thing for helping you appreciate just how wonderful loneliness is, is actually getting a girlfriend

>> No.43038045

>>43037913
I don't want a girlfriend, I just want valentine sex. But I can't find a match for shit

>> No.43038159

>>43038045
Suck it up and go back to bed with Jane Palmer and her five daughters

>> No.43038260

>>43038045
Even your smartphone's screen is much better than a match for finding the hole in the dark.

>> No.43039015

>>43037913
This. Granted being lonely ALL the time isn't fantastic, but only getting to be actually alone maybe 2-6 hours total in a week, can be fucking rough on a soul like mine. You'll learn to appreciate having solitude when you want it real damn quick with a serious significant other.

>> No.43039962

It's valentine's day so it's obviously a good time for NTR stories

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>>43039962

>> No.43041190

>>43040540
I'd do one for you Chloe anon, but i'm afraid I may disappoint you

>> No.43041586

>>43040540
I'll fuck Chloe in front of you, but only if you send me a copy of any pictures you take of us.

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What do you guys think of removing a chuuba's fantasy elements in a story? Like an elf's ears or a kemomimi's ears and tail? The group I have in mind is gen 5 and I thought it would make sense to remove their non-human aspects as the story is set in the real world. I already know HOW I'm going to explain that they are regular humans through prose (in a hopefully natural way), but I'm just wondering if I SHOULD. Are they essential parts of the character or are they unnecessary?

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>>43041190
I'm flattered you value my opinion that much anon, but if its something you're into you should go for it

>>43041586
https://files.catbox.moe/a92t76.jpg

>> No.43042900

>>43042551
>https://files.catbox.moe/a92t76.jpg
I didn't expect Chloe to be able to dual wield in one hole, what a champ

>but if its something you're into you should go for it
alright, thanks for the consent to do something horrible

>> No.43044303

>>43042423
It's one of those things where it can work. Its just that it's ironically harder to set up than having be be normal kemonomimi/fantasy girls due to the fact that you need to be really fucking explicit about establishing that they're normal since you need to break the reader's preconceived image of Normal Polka. I don't think they're explicitly core to the chuuba's personality but the fantastic parts are a part of their 'fantasy' so its kind of baked in hard enough that you need to devote a scene to making it clear so and so isn't a kemonomimi.
Anyway, how are you planning on showing that they're not fantastic creatures? My spitball idea for that would basically be
>Chuuba ends stream
>Takes off kemono parts, then looks at herself in the mirror.
With the entire point of the scene being establishing how chuubas work in setting alongside establishing that 'yes, she's still a yellow haired anime girl, she's just not a fennec'.

>> No.43045005

>>43042423
It "makes sense" to remove any fantasy elements for a real world setting, but unless it's important for the plot it's easier to just let them have their animal features and pretend they're normal, instead of going out of your way to explain what happened to them.

>> No.43045948

>>43042423
I honestly just forget they have animal ears and tail sometimes. Like I'll finish a story and will be like "Damn, I could have used some tail grabbing or ear fucking instead of this vanilla sex"

>> No.43049203

>>43030963
KA BOINK

>> No.43049308

>>43042423
Fagshit end of line.

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WIP bros. How are your wordcounts and progress coming along?

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Clearly not going very well

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>>43050660
>>43052708
i still dont know how to advance my wip. I have the general idea but i just cant connect the dots
that and the fact im going on a trip in a few days which means i simply dont have time to sit down and brainstorm

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>>43052708
Sorry anon. Things aren't so great right now.

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>>43050660
I'm meant to edit my fic and study for a test but I've done neither in the past week.

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>>43052708
>>43052907
I've definitely had better days as well. I'm trying to push past this emotional funk I woke up in today. Let's do our best to take things one day at a time, they will get better.
>>43052865
Sometimes when I have trouble connecting the dots myself, I try to let myself mull over the ideas I have while I'm specifically not trying to write. You can use that trip to mull things over bit by bit during your free time or just as you're doing whatever. Bursts of inspiration can be great for overcoming those hurdles and tend to come when you least expect them to. Hope your trip goes well though.
>>43052997
Make this the week you do BOTH.

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don't stop the struggle

>> No.43054852

>>43032210
>>43033621
/preg/GODS win again

>> No.43055325

>>43031635
>>43032210
>>43054852
>>43033621
Anons I think that's a bunny suit I don't think she's an actual part rabbit

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>>43050660
The second half of February and the first half of march is always a very busy time for me, but even still I'm a little disappointed in the lack of progress on all the shit I wanted to work on

>> No.43058394

>>43055325
meds

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>>43050660
I finally managed to sit down and do some editing, and the additions to FFC that I wanted to do for well over a month. It's about 1000 words longer in the end but the last 20% of the story reads better in my opinion with less repetition and more flavor.
Sides that I have tried working on the Suisei beach story, and for some reason I can picture exactly how I want things to go in my mind, but when it comes to translate that to paper, I lock up. I need less distractions in my life...

Also
>Tfw Watame will never feed me her homemade chocolate (made with her breastmilk) mouth-to-mouth for valentine's day. Why live...

>> No.43060002

>>43059024
Gonna have to read that. Did you see my feedback post or nah?

>> No.43061966

>>43059024
It reads more or less unchanged to me.

>> No.43062561

>>43059024
Ganbatte! I need publicly exposed Suisei nipples.

>> No.43062583

>>43060002
>>43061966
Really? Huh. Maybe it was just me then, getting caught up in small stuff as usual.
And I didn't, haven't been around for a few days and can't find it on the last archived threads, do you have the post number?

>> No.43063048

>>43062583
Sure. >>42606984
I didn't feel as if there was a great amount of repetition to begin with. Variety of descriptive language was always fairly good - or at least good enough that I didn't pick up on it in my horny state - and my main gripes were with the climax. There just wasn't enough about dumping a hot load in their booty-holes.

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>>43063048
>I can go further into detail if you'd like and offer suggestions
I wouldn't mind it, but not sure I would go back to change or rework the scene. I think you mentioned before that anal toys don't really fit your fancy, but of all the scenes I wanted to include that was the one I was dying to write the most, even though once I got there, I had trouble actually writing at length about it.
I think it's the Achilles heel of 2nd person perspective in smut when (you) are just observing the actions of two other characters and not doing much. You can't really enter the mind of the two girls to describe feelings and sensations in detail, so this kind of scene falls flat...

The second point I do agree with. A good chunk of what I wrote extra was to lengthen the final orgasm and make it more impactful and hopefully I achieved that (from the post date you posted basically the night I was correcting stuff so if you didn't refresh the page, it's the old text). I get it though, splitting up definitely means bellies only end up half full, but that would go against the "sharing" spirit of the story. But I did try my best to make it as erotic as I could the second time around. Re-reading it, it was almost embarrassing how little there was of it. Then again I was rushing to go eat some turkey when I posted, so...

In any case the Suisei story isn't going to have toys or anything, just good old comet butt drilling, so it might end up scratching the itch a little better.

>>43062561
Goddamn it, me too!

>> No.43065792

>>43059024
>Suisei beach story
Good to hear that's still being plugged away at

>> No.43066447

>>43044303
The idea I had in mind was that they’re not streamers at all. Gen 5 is a group of friends who go to a fantasy-themed Halloween party and wear their particular accessories (Botan’s ears and tail, Lamy’s ears). When you meet them later, you obviously notice they’re no longer wearing the accessories.
>>43045005
I suppose it’s not important to the plot besides making more sense. If creatures like oni and komomimi are the norm in society, I feel as though it would be less surprising if humans discovered that monsters have started appearing around the world. These monsters are admittedly non-humanoid, but if there’s such a large variation to what can be considered a regular person, I feel like people would be less surprised at strange creatures appearing.
>>43045948
I’ll write tail-play someday. It’s severely under-explored.
>>43049308
This is an English-speaking board, anonchama.

>> No.43066731

>>43065749
>I think it's the Achilles heel of 2nd person perspective in smut when (you) are just observing the actions of two other characters and not doing much. You can't really enter the mind of the two girls to describe feelings and sensations in detail, so this kind of scene falls flat...
I think you could afford to have a perspective shift/inconsistency for that. It's much hotter when you read about their experience and feelings first hand.

>> No.43070205

>>43058207
Tax season?

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Cool. I just figured out a new direction in which to take my old series that I never released a second chapter to. I'll explore it for 700 words then drop it for 5 months again

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>>43070205
No, it's just there's a bunch of personal and family stuff that has me running around while things get abut busier at my job

Though I forgot about my taxes too FUCK

>> No.43074934

>>43070635
I do my taxes as soon as I get my W-2.

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Feels good to live in a country where paying taxes is completely optional

>> No.43078149

>>43076516
I can't believe you live in Sealand, what's it like out there?
>>43070205
Don't remind me, man, I'm still years late on some business taxes that I have to settle by next month. Not looking forward to getting raped by the IRS.
>>43066731
Possibly, but I think the better approach would be for the girls themselves to maybe be vocal about what they're feeling in those cases. It's kind of hot when they talk dirty, too.

>> No.43078354

>>43065749
Yeah, figured. It comes mostly down to a difference in tastes. With that being said,
> that would go against the "sharing" spirit of the story
I do believe this is putting the cart before the horse.
Anyways, that's it for feedback. Looking forward to your Suisei fic.

>> No.43082402

bump

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>>43031041
Sex with Fubuki.

>> No.43086604

>>43086128
Go read one of the hundreds of other stories already that fulfil this. Alternatively, be more specific.

>> No.43087302

In this thread we talk about tax laws and which chuubas never pay their taxes

>> No.43089161

>>43087302
Easily gura.

>> No.43089606

>>43086128
A fantastic idea! I like it.

>> No.43096340

>>43087302
Ame

>> No.43097674

>>43031153
>Lape Ramy
I actually laughed, this was funny. Simple and short, but funny. Adds a new definition to the meaning of reverse rape.

>> No.43101916

>>43096340
She's such a rebel.

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>>43101916
What a mean woman
She threw my stuff away
Said that in her bed
I can't lie in it anymore
The house is mine
You go away
Get out to your mother
And leave my bed

She is a pro in the art
Of pestering and tormenting
She's the world champion
The anger were so much
I didn't noticed
That the moon decreased

The crazy woman is kissing me for hours
Said if without me
She doesn't want to live anymore
Tell me, God, what do I do now?

When she looks at me like that
She has me wrapped around her little finger
Son, hold on, who told you to love
This woman of phases?

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>>43031041
Elira wants to make it up to (You) after her 'we're not friends' thing by becoming your wife/love slave

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>>43108839
Towa's inability to stand still when she's on camera is super cute. I wonder what other cute autistic quirks like that other chuubas have.

>> No.43112509

>>43108839
Towa used to be one of the holos that I paid the least attention to. Now she’s grown on me to the point that anything and everything she does feels cute.

>> No.43112575

>>43112509
She was better when she didn't hide that she was smoking for uwu points

>> No.43112616

>>43112575
Agreed, trying to hide the obvious smoker's lung threw any and all interest I had for her out the window

>> No.43113171

https://files.catbox.moe/60t5iq.mp4

>> No.43113630

>>43113171
See how she almost slipped up in her giddiness over the thought of her next smoke? God, her breath must be acrid 24/7 and her clothes must absolutely stink.

>> No.43115885

>>43113171
What a cute dork.

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>>43110402
You should come to realise that you cannot match the autism of Towa.

>> No.43116282

>>43115925
>Koyori expressing her feelings on your premature ejaculation

>> No.43116775

>>43116282
>>43115925
SPH requires such a pinpoint accuracy on how the chuuba would act, it's a damn shame how hard it would be to write it. Any fanfiction that specialises in berating the viewer/reader is undoubtedly much harder to get a good feel for than just getting them aroused through regular sex. I guess this is why NTR fails so often

>> No.43118031

>>43116775
I think it's less from the difficulties of getting the mood and tone right, and more from the fetish not being palatable.
Don't get me wrong pretty much every fucking Domme chuuba rp/writer piles on the fetish so hard that they don't really feel like the character and just feel like a caricature that's 99% fetish with only the barest resemblance to the actual character's character, but most of the dislike doesn't really stem from that. (For clarity's sake this is referring to stuff from twitter/ao3, mostly twitter).

>> No.43119323

>>43031041

Managing a concentration camp with Kiara, cooking jews by the half-dozen while eating a candlelit dinner and listening to their screams.

>> No.43119550

>>43119323
That's a really horrible prompt you've come up with, anon. Good thing nothing like that ever happened in real life.

>> No.43119920

>>43119323
KFP Collaborator...

>> No.43121353

>>43033973
We really need more posts like this for stories.

>> No.43122029

>>43121353
You'll find them around, it just takes time and effort to write a lengthy review. I'd rather someone leave a quick "I liked this story" than worry about having to write a paragraph of feedback and end up not writing anything at all because it's too much effort.

>> No.43122776

>>43086604
NTA but how about being milked dry like a cow every day by Fubuki?

>> No.43122847

>>43122776
NTA but you've got udders?

>> No.43123069

>>43122847
No. I probably shouldn't have worded it like that and got your hopes up.
What I had in mind was that you live with Fubuki but rather than treat you as a lover she instead treats you like a pet. Anytime you get horny she would take you to the usual room and she would milk you dry until you could shoot no more cum out of your dick. All the cum you shoot out would be stored in containers but what she would do with those cum containers is up to you.

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>>43123069
>what she would do with those cum containers is up to you.
I know what I'd be doing with them.

>> No.43123153

>>43123069
Okay, I know this is probably meant for a normal reader insert but this is making me imagine Fubuki milking one of those little sukonbu mascots by tickling them.

>> No.43124712

>>43123153
I imagine myself as a sukonbu.

>> No.43124754

>>43124712
But do you cum from being tickled?

>> No.43125037

>>43124754
NTA but I sure would like to tickle Fubuki until she cums

>> No.43125089

>>43125037
Sounds like a tickle competition. Who cums first loses

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>>43030991
Sakura-tinted Glasses

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRtlVCp9QKIEiDWSLyNF61uzn3EXNoBhr7pwh8eumoEkLY-fMzkLGk4LaPu_r0eTtH6BqHP8NrIgjLI/pub

Tags: Suisei, Miko, SFW, Gore, Zombies

>> No.43126117

>>43125711
Man, I'm surprised we haven't had a zombie apocalypse series. It seems like some really low-hanging fruit, and while it might seem like too basic of an idea, so is "penis in vagina".

>> No.43127294

>>43125711
I liked that Miko was a zombie.

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lamy bump

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>>43128833
Wuv me some Wamy. Can't wait till I can write about this buxom drunk knife ear. Just months worth of writing away...haha.

>> No.43130731

>>43125711
It's an interesting 'twist fic', even if the entire fic is basically a 'pitch' for a miko/suisei arc in a post apocalyptic setting due to the length. I liked it but, the shortness of it does leave it feeling rather weak for the impact.

>> No.43131399

>>43125711
damn i liked this a lot. kudos for not taking the stupid easy way of ''LOL LMAO SHE DOESNT REALIZE SHE'S A ZOMBIE!!!''
Also this opens a lot of cool ideas for zombie-themed drama/survivors
>Lamy walking around with NEPOBO in chains, like watchdogs
>Luna getting carried by her personal undead knight (subaru)

>> No.43131780

>>43031041
I want some hard femdom with Botan or someone else. Not one where the anon secretly likes it like I see in other stories, but one where he's reverse raped and milked desperately trying to escape and resist only to realise it's fruitless. Reverse rape is only fun if they actually resist.

>> No.43133004

>>43131780
Which chuuba would be the best role for the fic?

>> No.43133857

>>43133004
Unironically, Mori.
She's either hard domme or hard sub and nothing in between.

>> No.43135492

>>43133857
Sounds perfect.

>> No.43136446

>>43135492
>>43133857
Give me the hard dom with really bad dirty talk in it. Since I refuse to believe she can utter a single sexy sentence without it sounding completely boner killing, or just botched.

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>>43131399
>Be Anon
>Stumble upon a small hideout, out of bullets and hungry
>Come across a snow elf, who is warming up next to a fire
>And behind her there is a hefty stack of food and water
>Raise the gun and tell her you only want food, she doesnt have to die
>she seems terrified, she asks you to leave her alone
>Point the gun straight at her, repeat that all you want is food, you will be on your way if she gives you some
>''Please...leave...you are not safe''
>safety off, the gun sounds loaded
>she stumbles and grabs a few cans, you open your bag and point at it
>She starts whimpering as she closes the distance.
>she silently loads two cans into your bag, and reaches for a third
>Maybe its the adrenaline of the situation, or the fact you are in power, but you feel yourself wanting to defile her
>Put the gun in her temple and attempt to force yourself in
>She screams
>Suddenly, your gun is missing
>No, your entire hand is missing. Blood spurts as you scream
>Something jumps at you and you manage to shake it off, its an infected
>Except her claws and long teeth are nothing like a normal infected. She's like the cross between a zombie and a lion
>Kick her and turn back, A second infected lungs at you and bowls you over
>A third infected joins, all you can do is scream as they tear you to pieces
>Lamy reaches for your gun, and looks straight in your eyes as she points it at your face
>*Click*
>The infected dont kill you instantly, instead they eat you alive
>and all you can do is watch the snow elf, looking at you with a terrified expression muttering ''im sorry'' as she cries

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43137843

I have no clue how to write a healing fic, but I've been thinking about (You) as a deeply scarred war veteran (not necessarily a soldier of any flag, can be a mercenary/contractor) being pampered by someone like Yuzuki Choco... or some other chuuba. Motherly, dotting and soft-spoken.

>> No.43137876

>>43126117
Give me a decent scenario for 28 Chuubas Later and I might write it. No promises it won't devolve into porn by chapter two or so though.

>> No.43138154

>>43137843
You have never been in a war

>> No.43138206

>>43137843
Unlike all the smut and the SFW stories with more complex plots, something like that could work pretty well with an Army Nurse Choco chatbot.

>> No.43138286

>>43137843
>Choco
>not calling you a pussy because you're a shell-shocked mess instead of making six figures and then telling you to fuck off to your own place because she's going to be busy
lol
lmao, even

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>>43137843
I have a NEED to FEED this succubus. Into the future ideas pile she goes, right next to the hagpire.

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43138563

>>43138286
>not trusting a lonely desperate cakes motherly instincts to come surging out when seeing the human equivalent of sad injured stray dog

>> No.43138649

>>43138206
you have your own thread, leave

>> No.43138690

>>43138154
And by god I would like to keep it that way, but the world is slowly slipping down the path to war I suppose.

>>43138509
Mel also works too

>> No.43139118

>>43137843
Mio or Watame would fit the story better imo.

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>Meet Mel
>Little cautious of the fact she's a vampire, but become cool with it since the cleavage and ass game are fucking tight and she promises that she only nibbles and won't flat out drain your blood
>Mel's hagpire nibbles act like an aphrodisiac like you wouldn't believe
>A few days after you start feeling funny, random erections constantly, fapping doesn't stave off the hunger either
>Mel directs you to a friend of hers that specializes in super natural medicine
>Meet Choco who prescribes a massive ball draining; stat
>After hours of succubus boning, finally go limp, she gives you some antibiotics to take and report back in a week. Surprise, it's a slow acting aphrodisiac
>Mel sneaks into your house later that week and nibbles you again, the cycle repeats itself
>These two hags perfected a process for constant D with you being passed back and forth
>Catch both in a room and unleash your full power under the effects of both hagpire nibbles and succubus drugs

>> No.43139577

>>43139455
Cool idea, only nitpick is that Choco's not a succubus

>> No.43139632
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43139632

Been putting this off for a couple days out of sheer embarrassment, but I've been struggling and figured I may as well come here to ask.
I've been plotting this sort of fanfic involving Mio, going from like girl next door to motherly wife material (nothing hardcore), and this is going to sound super autistic, but I feel like I'm struggling to make her character feel real. Yeah I want the character to feel grounded even in fanfiction, stupid I know lmao. It's just I don't know how to go about writing a believable story with her that isn't just "She's nice, kind, motherly, etc."
Do I just watch more of her streams to get a better grasp of her character (just started watching her over a week ago)? Or is there a trick to this?
Thanks

>> No.43139656

>>43139577
What the hell is she then? Just a rando demon?

>> No.43139779

>>43139632
If the story is supposed to be detailed everyday stuff and you care to make the character accurate, watching zatsus is your best option. Clips usually miss out on the more "casual" moments.

>>43139656
Yes, she's a non-specific kind of demon - the school nurse at the Underworld Academy.

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>>43139632
Streams are definitely a good place to start. Watching how she interacts with her fellow members and how she exemplifies that kind wrangler sort of nature will go pretty far. Also a lot of it will come and be shown to the reader through her reactions and interactions within your story. Try to come up with situations that let's the traits you want to highlight really shine. Also try to come up with moments and events that show off how she may NOT be all those things all the time. If it fits into your story, you can include a bit where the expectation people have for her just tires her out sometimes. Sometimes SHE wants to be the one who gets to be silly self, and someone else can worry about the consequences and safety of it. Reading other people's fics that involve Mio is also a good way to go. You can get a feel for how other writers have portrayed her and see how that lines up with what you had in mind, or doesn't. Not everyone's interpretation will be the same, and it shouldn't be since they are placed in practically different worlds with different backgrounds and experiences.

>> No.43139938

>>43139779
I'll refrain from calling her a succubus in the future then. Thanks for the clarification anon.

>> No.43140004

>>43139938
To be honest, I only know it because Holocure had her horns as the Succubus Horns item initially, before people pointed out the error and it got changed to Nurse Horns.

>> No.43140105

>>43139632
If you want to learn about her motherly behaviour you should watch collabs of her, especially with Ayame.

>> No.43140106

>>43140004
I just figured that's what she was since
>trademark horns
>trademark tail (it even has the heart shaped end)
>tat on a erogenous area (its even a dang heart)
>dressed to give you a boner
The nurse angle is fine too. Either way, she's succing a bus' worth out of me.

>> No.43140353

>>43139779
Thanks for the advice, anon. Anything zatsus related in particular I should look for or just go at it?
>>43140105
Adding onto this, would starting off with an Ayame collab be good?
>>43139885
I'll be honest, I'm not the best at picking up on all the little things a person does, but as daunting as that sounds, I feel like this is doable. I especially like your suggestion of having her go outside her comfort zone, the Mio we don't really see, while still being true to her.
Was on the fence about reading other Mio fics because I didn't want to feel too samey or steal from them, but I see no harm in using them as a crutch to help. If there's any good ones you got, please share! Thanks!

>> No.43140376

>>43140004
I honestly didn't even notice that and I've been getting the horns almost every time since the update.

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>>43140353
The main fics that come to mind that really go into Mio more as a person are To Be 17 Again, and some of her appearance in HoloFantasy. Also likely upwards of 60% of the Mio fics in the archive are NSFW. Wolf hag invokes those types of feelings in a lot of us, myself included. I'm actually looking forward to writing her in my own story when it eventually gets there. I wouldn't worry too much about your own characterization feeling samey to another, since again, the difference in situations and reactions will help set them apart.

>> No.43140737 [DELETED] 

>>43138690
>but the world is slowly slipping down the path to war I suppose.
The world is not dying; it is being killed, and those killing it have names and addresses.

It's too bad humanity seems to only realize what had to be done after not doing it led to catastrophe. We're always very proud to not repeat the mistakes of the past, except we always do and just call it a different name.

>> No.43140980

>>43140725
I'm gonna start To Be 17 Again, looks really interesting from the description. I don't mind the NSFW readings just so long as they don't derail. I'm trying to study her as a character, that's my goal.

>> No.43141239

>>43140353
Zatsu: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUHnie5TouM
Mama Mio taking care of her favourite daughter: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5TtD46pJNo8

>> No.43141527

>>43141239
Perfect! Thanks, anon!

>> No.43141784

>>43141239
>>43141527
oh yeah I forgot to add that I don't speak japanese lmao. How fucked am I?

>> No.43141936

>>43141784
Anonchama...
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCCz-_ns0sn7fppx35HMznFw

>> No.43142725

>>43140004
>>43140106
>>43140376
that could be a nice idea for a fic
>Choco desperately triying to prove she's a succubus despite being a low level imp

>> No.43142855

>>43141936
sankyu sankyu

>> No.43144646

>>43140737
Very cool story bro, can’t say I can see how it’s related to VTubers though. Seriously, why don’t you just go to /pol/ for this? You’d be on topic and there’d be people actually willing to talk about it with you there. What did you hope to achieve by whining about it here?

>> No.43144997

>>43144646
It's no different to talking about Conan

>> No.43145547

>>43140737
stfu you stupid doomer

>> No.43145600

>>43144997
>muh Conan
we already stablished that was also cancer and offtopic, just because 2 trannys want to make this about themselves doesnt mean its okay
that applies to AI shit and /become/ too

>> No.43145657

>>43145600
>trannys
And you're telling others to go to /pol/ lol

>> No.43146509

>>43144997
Very cool story bro. But you see, I still don’t understand how that justifies screeching about the state of the world on a VTuber board. While the Conan shit was off topic, two people were still actively engaging in the discussion. With this, you’re the only one trying to push for the discussion of the state of the world, nobody is interested in talking about it with you.
So I ask, again, why are you here and not /pol/? I’m genuinely curious.

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The fuck do people have against Conan?

>> No.43146629

>>43146509
Not even the anon you're talking to, I'm just cool with him talking about it here

>>43146594
Off-topic garbage

>> No.43146683

>>43146629
So you’re ok with political bullshit but not writing?

>> No.43146724

>>43146594
Nothing, but this is not the place to talk about it. There were a group of shitposters a while back that insisted on talking about it here and that it was on-topic because "books".

>> No.43146729

>>43146594
A couple of people were having a civil discussion about it a couple threads ago and near the end, a schizo started becoming agressive making it into an non-issue.

>> No.43146748

>>43146683
Both are equally cancerous and as we've established, off-topic garbage is allowed here

>> No.43146790

>>43146729
t. shitposter

>> No.43146892

>>43146748
>Both are equally cancerous
You just said you’re cool with him talking about geopolitics here 2 seconds ago.

>> No.43146925

>>43140737
"History never repeats itself, but so often it rhymes" - Mark Twain

We've completely fucked ourselves but much like the scorpion stinging the frog, it's just in our nature.

>> No.43146957

>>43146892
Because others are cool with talking about Conan. Can't have one and not the other.

>> No.43147235

>C-Conan bad
Did you all miss the part at the end of that thread where anons started discussing different types of fantasy worlds they could write? How they could build worlds that attempt to be separated from Tolkien’s influence? It obviously lead to some discussion and was more on topic than geopolitics. Anyone who argues otherwise is just trying to use “Conan is off topic” as an excuse to talk about whatever they want.

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>>43146594
It started in this thread >>/vt/thread/S42418775 a couple of people were talking about a few fantasy series, lord of the rings, and Conan for inspiration for a few fics. Like a A fic of mythic proportions about killing corrupted hololive members ala Silmarillion or Mumei taking on a Barbarian that’s an anarchism-primitivism. It was alright until an anon or two just started going schizo being mean to everyone for no reason.

>> No.43147315

>>43147235
You can talk about that without derailing the thread for 100 posts. The end doesn't justify the means and anyone who disagrees is a shitposter trying to use "g-geopolitics bad" as an excuse to talk about whatever they want

>> No.43147367

You're all shitposters.

>> No.43147455

>>43147281
>pulp fiction is/isn't a genre
>arguing over what genre conan is
I can see why those anons were pissed. None of that is related to vtubers.

>> No.43147535

>>43147281
i dont have a problem with conan or coming up with stuff in itself, the problem was when half of the thread was discussing Conan's influences and major literature works/genres that had no relationship to chuubas or wasnt being used for chuubas. When someone called it out they went ''OH BUT ITS OKAY BECAUSE ITS ABOUT WRITING'' which set off the powder keg
it would have been just a footnote but there is one guy here who clearly got ass blasted that thread because whenever people call out oftoppic he flips and brings up conan saying ''but its not so different to that!''

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>>43146594
Any short post with unwarranted negativity/rudeness is just the seetheschizo trying to shit up the thread by insulting others and arguing with himself. Don't mind those.

>> No.43147578

>>43147455
They desperately tried to justify it though just like they're doing now
I'm sure /wg/ is the target of a discord at this point

>> No.43147657

>>43147535
Give an inch and you'll lose a mile bitch

>> No.43147742

>>43147535
>which set off the powder keg
There was no powder keg. It's literally just one guy still seething about it a week later. No one but him keeps mentioning it.

>> No.43147765

>>43147575
>Don't mind those.
Hard to do when the guy just screeches it every chance he gets.

>> No.43147824

>>43147535
its very clearly just one guy who got mad at being told he should go to /lit/ to discuss some stupid label that at the end of the day doesnt matter because you can call anything with wizards fantasy and anything with laser guns sci-fi

>> No.43147843

>>43147315
>>43147535
It was 30-40 posts, with people still talking about chuuba in between. The thread only began to derail after the schizo started screeching at people.

>> No.43147918

>>43147742
I wonder if he’s a regular shitposter that’s just mad that his shitposts are getting deleted now that jannies and mods are getting stricter. Because I have notice shitposts are getting deleted.

>> No.43148040

>>43147843
Lol it derailed as soon as you started arguing about genres. Continue seething at getting called out

>> No.43148224

>>43147843
Can you stop using ''schizo'' for everything? the word already lost all its meaning because you keep throwing it out
no one has a problem with people bringing up something offtopic to spice up a thing/prove a point or whatever as long as it serves it purpose. The reason people here call out AI bots,Become, Fate and stuff like this is because it has already derailed the thread once. If the discussion was ''oh i wanna do a Fate related chuuba fic'' then sure, we can talk about how to mesh the concepts but if you start going on vns and different kinds of vns then its off-topic and its not adding anything.

>> No.43148607

>>43148224
What are you trying to say? Because Conan was brought up legitimately a total of one time and actually lead to story discussion. The only reason it’s mentioned now is because people want to justify talking about things that will lead to no story discussion at all.

>> No.43148630

Using fate as a springboard, which chuuba could work for the protagonist of a chuuni battle royal story?

>> No.43148685

>>43148224
Do you have a link to past Chatbot AI discussion in /wg/? I'm really interested in exploring which kinds of fics are writeable/reenactable by an AI and which are still human-only, and all that separates us from them still.
Noone at >>>/g/ or >>>/vt/waifu really cares about writing fanfiction that much.

>> No.43148756

>>43147918
I don't know, but at this point, it wouldn't surprise me at all if he is. Thread is slow and comfy yet gets disruptive due to one fag who can't let shit go.

>> No.43148870

>>43148607
How do you know it wouldn't have generated any story discussion? You started throwing a tantrum too soon for discussion to pick up. You're exactly the same kind of person that you're crying about.

>>43148630
I reckon Botan and Lancer (original) have an identical personality

>> No.43149084

>>43148630
As in Master or Servant? Either way, if you're following a typical HGW then both need some kind of "wish" they want to be granted.

I personally would pick Suisei or Sora as (You)r Servant. I think you can pull a Saber and use their regrets as their motivation.

>> No.43149199

>>43148870
If you can’t see the creative difference between 2-3 people discussing genres in writing and 1 person trying to push his political views, then there’s not much point in this argument.

>> No.43149203

>>43148630
Obviously Pekora would be Gilgamesh

>> No.43149255

>>43148870
>>43149084
>>43149203
I didnt meant LIKE fate, because fate is unironic thrash. It could be fornite for all i care, but the idea was to make a protag out of a chuuba

>> No.43149289

>>43149199
All I see is two people screeching because the conversation isn't/wasn't going the way they want it to.

>> No.43150138

>>43149255
Then whoever you want? The idea is still the same (a wish/reward they want) and you can make anything chuuni if you try hard enough.

>> No.43152541

>>43145547
This.

>> No.43154250

>>43147235
Did it create any fics though

>> No.43154328

>>43154250
Nope.

>> No.43154345

>>43149203
Pekora literally wants to be Gilgamesh's pet cum toy idk what you're talking about. She doesn't fit as the king of kings

>> No.43154457

>>43154345
Adding to that, she very much so knows that Gilgamesh wouldn't even give her the light of day, but I imagine Pekora wearing one of those belly dancer outfits that are almost completely transparent and that's quite erotic

>> No.43154458

>>43154345
>She doesn't fit as the king of kings
There is no-one in Hololive as arrogant and narcissistic as Gilgamesh, but Pekora at least is well-suited to playing that kind of personality for laughs. Helps that she wants to choke on his cock and use his balls as eye-blinds

>> No.43154554

> Gura in Jack the Ripper outfit
Uooh...

>> No.43156247

>>43149203
Pekora doesn't really 'fit' into either of Gil's roles except superficially. She's kind of locked into either being an underdog protagonist, or a comedic nuisance that occasionally gets threatening.

>> No.43156328

>>43156247
>a comedic nuisance that occasionally gets threatening
>Pekora would be Shinji
Damn

>> No.43156375

>>43156328
Shinji would be a good fit for Pekora too.

>> No.43156513

>>43154554
My dick couldn't handle that.

>> No.43156652

>>43156328
That...
That fits too well. Especially since she would be the exact type of person to brag about her super powerful servant.
The only difference is that she's less rapey.

>> No.43156918

>>43154458
The worst thing is you can't even be mad at her for lusting for him

>> No.43157152

>>43156918
Of course not. Tomokazu Seki's performance is incredible. I'm not even gay and I'd let him fuck me.

>> No.43158764

>>43140737
So it was off-topic. Thanks for the clarification.

>> No.43161141

>>43157152
I got news for you, that means you're gay.

>> No.43161328

>>43161141
I'm not gay. I have relationships with women, and sex with Tomokazu Seki.

>> No.43161685

>>43154250
NTA but that doesn’t mean much. There’s been plenty of discussions that haven’t generated fics. Fujocast, streamers still streaming after the apocalypse, Holox hypnotism, etc.

>> No.43161810

>>43161685
Notice all of your examples have something to do with chuubas, whereas Conan and geopolitical discussion do not.

>> No.43161875

I just searched up this Gilgamesh character and he looks like a fucking twink. I can’t wait for Pekora to finally evolve into a hag and have good taste like all hags do.

>> No.43161943

>>43161810
Eh, true. I’m not talking about Conan, though, I’m more focusing on the last part where different types of fantasy worlds were discussed.

>> No.43162101

>>43161875
No no, he's actually based because he has a big ego.
Despite the fact that he jobs to, in order by route: a woman, a teenage boy, and a teenage girl.

>> No.43162251

>>43161875
He's got the design of a smug little twink but in the Fate universe... well, power levels fluctuate in accordance with the script, but Gilgamesh is easily one of the strongest, most arrogant servants, and because of the way he flickers between being both good and pure evil in accordance with his whims, he's quite an interesting character.
Pekora's taste is pretty good, although truly god-tier taste would be appreciation of Fate/Stay Night's Archer.

>> No.43163716

Gilgamesh contains all the world's treasuries whether from past present or future, and has also experienced all the wordly pleasures. Does that mean he has tasted Pekora's bunny cunny, or am I just confused?

>> No.43163814

no one cares about your garbage franchise, go to your own thread

>> No.43163832

>>43163716
I guess it means that if Pekolandians were a real race, Gilgamesh would have fucked one of them at least once

>> No.43163892

>>43163716
Gilgamesh only wants to fuck his BFF

>> No.43163911

>>43163716
Technically because the world and all its bounties are his possessions, Pekora's beardless clam is his to taste if he wishes.

>> No.43163940

>>43163814
No different from Conan

>> No.43164019 [DELETED] 

well this confirms its pekofag and his tranny buddy from discord
AA can you take off his garbage from the archive?

>> No.43164070

>>43163911
There's no way Pekora shaves.

>> No.43164092

>>43163911
I don't think that's how it works. Though he does have Enkidu, they are a special case... Pekora would have to qualify as a treasure for her to be there

>> No.43164151

>>43164070
Hey, we're already talking fantasy, so this one's mine, and she's as smooth as the day she was born.

>> No.43164212

>>43164070
I think Pekora would be easily convinced to shave, but I don't think she shaves on the day to day basis.

>> No.43164389

>>43164092
It depends on past vs present; what existed during his time and what didn't. Pekora didn't exist during his time and therefore couldn't have been one of his treasures but as Gilgamesh views all of humanity as his slaves, as a descendant she's probably his property in his eyes

>> No.43164671

>>43164389
He doesn't see all of humanity as his slaves, and in fact he values slaves very much

>> No.43164726

>>43164671
IIRC he did view all of humanity as his slaves and while he did value them highly during his reign, the entire reason he tried to wipe mankind out in FSN was because he viewed modern humans as unsightly maggots on his world.

>> No.43164819

>>43164019
at this point i dont know why its still there
he shits the thread so often that he should be rightfully punished

>> No.43165905
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43165905

Add me to the /wg/ discord
I'm certain there are no fatetrannies in there

>> No.43166141

>>43165905
where do you think they come from

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>>43165905

>> No.43166821

>>43164819
If you report him, he does get punish.

>> No.43166968

>>43166821
People here are reluctant to do that for some reason, even though it's the quickest way to deal with shitposters.

>> No.43167022

>>43164070
She wears a bodysuit and no panties. That shit will chafe like crazy if you don't at least trim down there.

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>>43167022
>She wears a bodysuit and no panties

>> No.43167101

>>43166968
That’s because the shitposters double down on their retardation and continue to evade their bans.

>> No.43167158

>>43166821
No, he does not get "punish".

>> No.43167309

>>43167158
He does. He was spamming his futa bullshit and it all got deleted and ban

>> No.43167492

>>43167309
What?

>> No.43167620

>>43167492
He's talking about this thread
>>/vt/thread/S42087084
Just scroll down and see. We had three days of peace.

>> No.43167779

>>43167620
We haven't had a single peaceful thread in a long long time.

>> No.43167897

>>43167779
No, we do. And I think shitposters know it as well, which is why they do all that bullshit aggressive posting.

>> No.43167976

>>43167897
We haven't.

>> No.43168112

>>43167779
Depends on what you consider peaceful. The threads are slowing down to the point where it sometimes takes two days to reach the bump limit. if that's not peaceful, then I don't know what you're talking about

>> No.43168153

>>43168112
A peaceful thread is a thread without any of this retarded shitslinging.

>> No.43168200

>>43168112
>peaceful=slow
What kind of hogwash is this

>> No.43168227

>>43167620
I actually didn't get banned for that and continued on as usual. When you accidentally prove yourself wrong...

>> No.43168271

>>43168200
The best /wg/ threads have always been slow. I don’t know why you’re taken aback by that.

>> No.43168290

>>43168227
I don't think he cares about being correct so much as spamming his opinion until he's satisfied it's the only one in sight.

>> No.43168315

>>43168271
Probably because it's not true lmao

>> No.43168522

>>43030963
>No valentines fics.
It had so much potential.

>> No.43168541

>>43168522
Write one yourself.

>> No.43168555

>>43031041
Fauna begging you to please god just eat one vegetable (you won't, they're icky)

>> No.43168727

>>43168522
Technically we have a fic set on valentine's day linked to the anchor right now, but it's about as Valentine's related as die hard is to Christmas; and I'm saying that as someone who thinks it's an interesting one-shot

>> No.43168792

>>43168727
Yeah, I know. But I wanted one specifically set on Valentine’s Day. Like how we had our Christmas miracle.

>> No.43168834

>>43168792
Be the change you want to see

>> No.43168835

>>43168792
>>43168541

>> No.43168872

>>43168522
I had something I wanted to drop on Valentine's Day but I procrastinated too hard, gomen.

>> No.43169231

>>43168522
Valentine's is in 3 months

>> No.43169323

>>43169231
Brazil may as well be filled with SEAmonkeys for how stupid the people are if you're any indication

>> No.43169753

>>43169231
Stop being such an idiot. It was yesterday.

>> No.43170038

>>43168555
>(you won't, they're icky)
What steam vegetables with white rice and fish is great.

>> No.43170090

>>43170038
Sounds like a nonwhite meal

>> No.43170219

>>43170090
What?

>> No.43170222

>>43170090
Why would race have anything to do with the food you eat?

>> No.43170506 [DELETED] 

>>43170222
Race has everything to do with what you eat, that's why niggers eat nothing but fried chicken and watermelon when given the opportunity.

>> No.43170756

>>43170090
>>43170506
Holy shit, you’re dumb.

>> No.43170878

>>43170756
t. seanigger. I knew it was one of you. Enjoy your poverty food as I sit here eating dried sausage, cheese and grapes

>> No.43171007

>>43170878
If you think Steamed Fish and Vegetables is only done by southeast Asians, then you need to get off /pol/.

>> No.43171340

>>43168872
Are you still planning on finish it?

>> No.43171419

>>43171340
He'll post it on June 12th

>> No.43171520

>>43171419
Nobody cares about your backwards country, stop trying to force it.

>> No.43171625

>>43171340
Yeah, it's a short thing so it won't take long(er) as long as I get off my ass and do it. Which I am doing right now.

>>43171419
As funny as that would be, I doubt anyone would remember the bit.

>> No.43171630

>>43171520
Nobody cares about your backwards opinion, stop trying to force it.

>> No.43171699

>>43171007
Whatever you say, SEAnigger. Keep seething over being born in a shithole.

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>>43168522
I looked at EN's Valentine's VN thing for ideas, and while there's a few things you could do with it and some of the routes are cute, that whole thing is so weird and skirts the line on being meta, or straight up fourth wall breaking in Mori's routes case, that it it doesn't really work if you want ROMANCE.

Mumei basically refuting Kromei by saying she only views Kronii as eye candy was funny, though that whole Gura Fauna Mumei branch I think was hilarious

>> No.43171953

>>43171007
>newfag thinks everyone he doesnt like comes from /pol/

>> No.43171962

>>43171893
They read the lines but there's that thin veil of irony or distancing themselves from it which all EN Vtubers do and thus it doesn't hit right at all. I wonder what prevents Western people from ignoring cringe and just doing it like JP do.

>> No.43172024

>>43171893
>if you want ROMANCE.
How sad and pathetic could you be to be looking for romance in that?

>> No.43172137

>>43172024
"Why would anyone want romance in a romance VN?"
Kill yourself.

>> No.43172272

>>43172137
Incel

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>>43171962
I wasn't even talking about their acting, though that is kinda all over the place. Some of IRyS' sound like it's her first time actually reading it. I was talking about the actual script itself, which I thought was bizarre at times.

Kronii probably had the best delivery, but given her desire to be a "Voice Actor" that's not terribly surprising.

>>43172024
It was a fucking VN on Valentine's Day nigga that wouldn't be unexpected

>> No.43172439

>>43172364
She looks really squashed and tiny and breedable in that image

>> No.43172444

>>43172364
>that wouldn't be unexpected
Watch streams

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>>43172439
Little Bae was extremely cute doing show and tell so long as you didn't look at her full body which appears horribly misshapen

>> No.43172890

>>43171893
I only watched Kiara's because she's my oshi, but are any of the others worth watching? Most of the EN girls make me cringe when they voice act lol

>> No.43172996

>>43172364
Mori was the one who wrote the scripts. The EN girls then had the option to tune and adjust it to their desire. I forget who went with their first draft of their script, I think it was Irys?

>> No.43173039

>>43172890
I mean they're all about the same length so it's up to you but I liked all of SNOT + IRyS. Bae's was the most disappointing to me but she did a full stream that's much better

>> No.43173438

>>43173039
Bae's is the worst imo because its kneecapped by the whole Baerys shtick. I agree with you on SNOT and IryS, theirs felt the most genuine.

>> No.43173834

>>43172444
But then I won't be able to post here if I do.

>> No.43173868

>>43173834
That's for the better

>> No.43174028

>>43173834
Do people here really not watch streams or is this just one giant meme.

>> No.43174282

>>43174028
It's a meme.

>> No.43174317

>>43174028
>>43174282
It's largely a meme, though a few have admitted to watching clips over streams so take that as you will.

>> No.43174955

>>43147281
>A fic of mythic proportions about killing corrupted hololive members
Hey I remember that prompt. I was thinking about how you'd write it. Since the dynamic of corrupted chuubas getting hunted by pure/new chuubas in danger of falling and becoming the things they hunt sounds like it would be a fun 'mechanic' to build a story around.... Even if that does like the setting conceit of madoka magica.

>> No.43175200

>>43174955
Anon, its literally the Silmarillion. The guy who said that prompt just said that taking the piss since another person wanted to write a fantasy fic with no influence from tolkien.

>> No.43175293

>>43175200
No I'm referring to the mythender idea at the end of that thread and not the silmarillion talk.

>> No.43175539

>>43175293
Must have gotten confuse, but someone did say they were planning on writing it.

>> No.43175811

>>43174955
Sounds really interesting and from the sounds of it, like elden ring. I really hope he writes it.

>> No.43176299

Notice how it's always 'hoping someone else writes X' in this general

>> No.43176413

>>43176299
What are you trying to imply?

>> No.43176420

>>43176299
Yes, been like that since the beginning. You new or something?

>> No.43176459

>>43176299
Everyone's already juggling a wip or two, I'm pretty sure the participants of this general are like 90% writers at this point.

>> No.43176606

>>43176299
Why would anyone say 'hoping I write X'?

>> No.43176773

>>43176299
Yeah, the loudest people here are also the biggest leeches. To the surprise of no-one, of course.

>> No.43176910

>>43176773
You must have written nothing in that case.

>> No.43176949

>>43176910
Yes, I "must have". Struck a nerve, did I?

>> No.43177863

>>43176773
Anon...
The biggest shitposter here has unironically written dozens of fics, say what you will about pekofag but he's probably written the most fics here by title volume.

>> No.43177917

>>43177863
I think AA and another fairly popular writer at some point had written more than me. Now, I'm not sure. Actually, AA wrote like 200 stories now that I think about it

>> No.43177943

>>43176773
>>43176910
>>43176949
>>43176299
samefag

>> No.43177979

>>43177863
>he's probably written the most fics here by title volume.
Way to out yourself as a newfag.

>> No.43178226

>>43177863
He's definitely not even close to the biggest shitposter here anymore.

>> No.43178505

>>43177979
By title volume I meant one-shot stories and fics not chapter count. I know SSanon is a goddamn machine that can write a new chapter every other day back when he was still active here but I was referring to his greentexts, one-shots and other short fics.

>> No.43178906

>>43178505
>By title volume I meant one-shot stories and fics not chapter count.
Even then AA has him beat. MWAnon probably has around the same amount, and SSAnon also likely stands with the same amount of titles, despite most of them being unfinished.

>> No.43179072

>>43178505
I thought the hermaphrodite was working on something?

>> No.43179133

>>43179072
He got bored of chatbots, came back here and asked for requests, realized he didn't have the spark for writing anymore and left to do something else

>> No.43179134

>>43176299
You’re just reaching at this point.

>> No.43179152

>>43179134
Go away, shitposter.

>> No.43179192

>>43179133
That's a shame. It would've been nice to see him finish that shadow series.

>> No.43179227

>>43179192
It is, but nothing lasts forever, except death and taxation

>> No.43179293

New thread
>>43179159

>> No.43179402

>>43179192
Eh, I think he'll probably come back. This isn't even the first time he got burned out of writing in this thread's history.

>> No.43179630

>>43179402
Well the first time he had a menhera attack and deleted a bunch of works.

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