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/wg/ - Writing General - Super nenechi Edition Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 09:20:09 No.41428009 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>41292110

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 09:20:41 No.41428019 File: 782 KB, 2196x1646, 104488303_p3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 09:21:43 No.41428042
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 09:22:46 No.41428066 File: 2.83 MB, 1512x2150, 104587355_p0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 09:23:52 No.41428095
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Choco really wants you to impregnate her:>>41302681

Kronii using Mori as a breeding sow.:>>41312602

Towa making you cum bucket's by blowing smoke on your dick after she's edged you for over 20 hours.:>>41315127

Please, anything with Gura:>>41331968

(You) are a normal everyday manager, but somehow the others have convinced Nene,Aqua, Iroha and Kobo that you are a secret agent.:>>41342970

One of your lesbian chuuba mom's catches you masturbating.:>>41418312

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 10:21:58 No.41429584 >>41428009 Nene is a lovely girl

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 10:42:39 No.41430139 >>41429584 You shouldn't compliment a woman like that to her husbands. It makes you look sussy

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 10:45:08 No.41430196 >>41430139 >husbands >with an s Didn't know /wg/ was a free love commune. Right on, man

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 11:38:15 No.41431923
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When introducing a new character that (You) in the story already know, is it best to write a short explaination paragraph outlining who they are and how they're connected? Or do you reveal that over time through dialogue?
I feel like with the latter you could be leaving the reader in the dark for too long, but I guess the former could be seen as "telling not showing" and might seem like an exposition dump. I've seen actual authors do both, though the former option seems more common. What do you guys think?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 11:53:31 No.41432395 >>41430196 Nothing to do with /wg/ unfortunately. It's just Nenechi

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 11:57:17 No.41432496

>>41431923
Honestly fanfiction has an advantage here, you can just give their name and do that slow gradual reveal of the relationship while you can trust that the reader already knows the character.
Now obviously you still need to give them an introduction in narration but you can run with more showing than telling here since it's fanfiction.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 11:59:01 No.41432547

>>41431923
Leaving the reader in the dark can be valuable, and show don't tell is a rule for film that only marginally applies to written works.
It depends on the context and ultimately the preferences of the audience - I'm fine with inserting the beginning of a Wikipedia article sometimes instead of forcing things into the dialogue.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 12:16:04 No.41433145 >>41432547 Brainlet

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 12:29:19 No.41433654 >>41428042 aqua getting blacked unwillingly behind the local konbini

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 12:30:07 No.41433679 >>41432547 Generic Hollywood screenwriting and its "rules" have been a disaster for literature.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 12:43:46 No.41434176 >>41433654 this but instead of a negro it's an abyssal void creature that absorbs all light

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:14:05 No.41435329 >>41428042 Flygon getting brat correction from Hags. The Shota should fear the Hag.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:15:29 No.41435386 >>41435329 Isn't that a pokemon?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:16:42 No.41435420 >>41435329 also, why flygon? if you wanted a shot why not go with a male kirlia or one of the starters?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:29:31 No.41435892 >>41428042 A literal fly getting mating pressed by futa Fubuki

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:32:39 No.41436013 >>41435329 This is referring to that one voms guy right?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 13:32:56 No.41436027 >>41435386 >>41435420 Welp I'm blaming this one autocorrect it's Flayon. Guy's name still sounds like a pokemon though.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:15:42 No.41437377
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>>41428019
Partners in crime, chapter 1: Surviving the first day
Tags: Kurokami, Fubuki, fluff, SFW

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTu9kWLKWwPwthRchwTRZRjuKIZPBYY0eCNeDlpYKKnyOjSKBNy4saLQY7uOmZtW9xCE0uezEsF75Zs/pub

Special thanks to the brave soul who accepted being my beta reader. As always, feedback is deeply appreciated.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:23:24 No.41437588 >>41437377 Ahhh, just as I'm about to sleep. I'll give my thoughts on it when I wake up.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:32:44 No.41437857
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>>41428042
(You) are a demanding and ambitious man, working in upper management for a trending entertainment company.
Your rule is strict - some would even call you cold, but that's just impartial fairness manifesting, according to your own words. The staff - talents and fellow managers alike - admire you regardless.
One day, one of the company scouts introduces a new talent - one that turns out to be an old acquaintance of yours. Hoshimachi Suisei.
You promptly voice your concerns, strictly against nepotism hires, but the other staff ask you to reconsider and give her a chance.
Besides, she shows a ruthless drive and ambition seldomly seen in other talents.
Time passes and like an unstoppable avalanche Suisei keeps on moving forward, until it turns out that the root cause for her incentive is nothing other than... to win back the love and affection of (you), her older brother.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:40:48 No.41438100 >>41437857 >Stellar Stellar was actually a song she wrote about how she didn't want to be your damsel in distress, but actually how she wanted to "become a prince" and reunite with you by any means necessary

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:44:25 No.41438209

>>41437377
Not bad. The overly-long light novel title got a chuckle out of me. Things seemed a bit rushed though, like the narration was sprinting from one scene to the next. Granted, Anon was basically in a constant state of panic for the entire chapter, but in the future I think it'd be a good idea to slow down a little.
Also, a formatting note: there were times when you put the comma after the quotation marks instead of before (“Thank you, Fubuki”,) or included an unnecessary comma after an exclamation point or a question mark (“I told you to stop calling me that already!”,).

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 14:52:18 No.41438437 >>41438100 What caused the breakup between the two of you? Also what is it with this months and people wanting suicest?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:09:50 No.41438998 >>41434176 there's a difference?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:12:02 No.41439087 >>41437377 >As always, feedback is deeply appreciated. mwanon???

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:21:01 No.41439387
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>>41437377
I liked it. The novel title also got a laugh out of me. You're pretty good. I also felt the scenes were going by pretty quick, but I had that same exact issue too. Formatting wise, it might be personal preference but I like to separate the thoughts of (You) on a new line from the dialogue from someone else in question that prompted the thoughts. All in all, it's cute. I'm liking the potential character dynamics you might be setting up. Looking forward to next part.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:21:19 No.41439395
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>>41438437
We can play with a few things.
>Simply put, your parents separated. Suisei went with mom, you went with dad
>Since you were so young, you only have vague memories of a girl with blue hair, whose brilliance shone like a comet in your eyes.
>Even though the quality of those memories were like the faded lights of a film, it always felt as if at the turn of every corner, every glance of your shoulder, you would see her
>That's why you never really got into other relationships in high school and college. All the girls who were ever attracted to you knew that you weren't looking at them, but somewhere far, far away. At a distant comet shooting through the cosmos
>Having wasted most of your youth, you decided that it was high time for you to reclaim what's left of your life. You applied to Cover Corp, since you always admired the brilliance of their talents. They reminded you of that girl in your dreams. By this point, you're not even sure if she was real anymore. Just the way her smile twinkles in your memories like a star's afterimage
>(You) worked diligently, hoping one day that you would see that azure brilliance shine once again.
>And it did, the moment your eyes met with Suisei's, after all these years
Ehhh something like that

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:36:29 No.41439843
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>>41437857
>this has the making of something compelling and has opportunities to show how pure ambition can help push yourself to new limits and places in the world
>Always love me a story where Suisei gets to strut her bad bitch work ethic
>Spoiler
Never change /wg/, you almost had me thinking it WASN'T going to be that.

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 15:53:33 No.41440391

>>41439395
For backstory I was more thinking along the lines of
>(you) and Suisei are from an unsuspecting family, somewhere in the suburbs
>both parents are academics, so they have little time, little love and expect academic success from all their children
>children cope by sticking by each other, they get along splendidly and fill the empty house with life
>a bit too splendidly, as it turns out looking at Suisei and you
>things escalate, maybe by (you) stealing your middle schooler sibling’s first kiss (or she yours)
>you’re done with High School by then and run away from home in an attempt to flee from your forbidden feelings and to protect your sister
>bury them deep, sedate yourself with studies and work
>enter initial prompt

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 16:02:38 No.41440694

>>41440391
We can combine them by doing it like 5 centimeters per second where (You) and Suisei are already having this teenage almost-romance.
>But with the separation of your parents, nothing could be done. You and your sister would be separated, maybe forever
>So you decide to bury those feelings, shut yourself off from other people. You find yourself unable to open your heart to anyone else but your sister, whose memory slowly but surely fades as you bury your feelings deeper and deeper within yourself, compensating by studying. To be better than the boy who failed to fight for his one true love
>Until you met her again, that is, all these years later

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 16:20:57 No.41441333 File: 92 KB, 400x300, Suichanwa.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What is it about this comet that makes incest with her such a hot concept?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 16:38:05 No.41441906 >>41441333 Because on one hand being related is a reason for her to love you from the start, but on the other hand the forbidden fruit aspect of incest goes into the same direction as Suisei's hard-to-get reputation.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 16:49:04 No.41442252 >>41438998 Yeah, the void creature lets you keep your bike.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 17:46:22 No.41444268 >>41442252 Void creature let me keep my bike?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 18:44:17 No.41446239 >>41444268 Yes.

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 18:44:44 No.41446258 >>41446239 That's not how the song goes

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 19:39:30 No.41448019
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>>41437857
>>41438437
>Family wasn't particularly wealthy growing up so (You) had to start working early once you realized your dream of working in the music industry wasn't going to be a cheap endeavour
>Between work and school, you never really had time for much else and almost all the money you made went towards saving to go to the school with the best music program in the country
>The little you had left over would pretty much always go towards doting on Suisei, your little sister who's probably the only person you're kind of close to
>She shares your affinity for music, and always came to your defence whenever people at school tell her you're cold and unapproachable
>Eventually, you're separated once you graduate and go to the school you wanted which happens to be on the other side of the country
>Before you go, Suisei promises that she'll get into the same program so you'll be re-united
>You tell her you'll hold her to that
>In the first of sibling-separating tragedies, she doesn't
>In another, she gets lost trying to go visit you one holiday after a fight with mom and dad so your parents/Anemachi forbid her from trying to making the trip again and think (You) are a bad influence on your younger sister getting her to run away from home
>In a final, You tell you're getting a new phone number and will call her with it soon, but she loses her own phone before then and it's a while before she gets a new one, that has a new phone number too
>She spends days trying to find a way for you to get in touch with her to no avail
>Doesn't give up, now just stuck having to go the really hard and long way to seeing you again
>After YEARS you finally re-unite once she is able to use her connections to figure out where you work
>She gets thrown off because that 'cold and unapproachable Anon' that she always said wasn't the real you is all she sees now
>Even so close, Suisei still has to work to find the loving older brother that inspired her
>That motivated her
>That she fell in love with

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 20:55:12 No.41450581 File: 58 KB, 699x439, 1648695137045.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is it Suichan or Suityan?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 20:56:29 No.41450627 >>41450581 She's Suichan if she's cute that day, Suityan the other times

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 21:04:10 No.41450867 >>41450581 She's Sui-ted Dumbbell Press

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 21:06:53 No.41450973 >>41450581 Suisex

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 22:11:45 No.41453302 What are the best fics in which the chuuba beats the shit out of (you)?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 22:20:53 No.41453589 >>41453302 I've been brainstorming a fic where the chuuba dismembers your body and devours you Does that count?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 22:29:13 No.41453947 >>41453589 not til its written

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 22:36:12 No.41454218 File: 676 KB, 828x665, 1673566873347267.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41453947 It's next on my list after this other story gets finished

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 23:30:13 No.41456404 >>41453589 Who's doing the chop chop and chomp chomp?

>>	Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 23:35:22 No.41456602 File: 951 KB, 1448x2048, 1648685987141.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41456404 She is

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 23:55:17 No.41457374
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>>41428019
Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 7
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTzquGpnszH7cwoVjpX2DnN1KAs1OGoT33iiDswdNE9k2vlXw9_Bf1GdMBFTubgJ927XYvgAvQUSGmI/pub

Tags: Botan, vanilla, SFW

After quite a long time on hiatus, I got motivated to write again. The chapter isn't long and it's certainly not as good as chapter 4 but it feels good to be back.
Next chapter will take a while cause I'm working on another pretty big(ish) project of mine that I'm really excited about, you'll know when it comes out.
t. Italianon

Anonymous Sat, Jan 21, 2023 23:58:43 No.41457531

>>41453589
A little much for my tastes, but that reminds me of an old idea for a fic I had where Korone is your yandere ex and bites off your ring finger when she hears you're with someone new, but that girl had already dumped you a few months before and left you heartbroken so you're actually happy Koro's come back into your life, even if it cost you a finger.

It mainly stems from this artists https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/12631703 oddly sensual cannibalism stuff.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 00:12:44 No.41458157 File: 440 KB, 635x512, 1674166793224034.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41457531 oddly sensual indeed

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 00:31:29 No.41458985 >>41456602 The fucking suicest posting is making me think Suisei is eating her brother in order to become 'perfect' like she's cell.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 00:51:40 No.41459845 >>41458985 >Suicell Absorbs Noel >her chest expands for a few seconds >then it deflates as a balloon, sound and all >she starts sulking

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:04:06 No.41460420
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>>41458157
Yeah...

Damnit, looking through them is giving me more ideas. Like that Ishtar one makes me think Mel getting a real craving for blood and asking to suckle on your finger to take the edge off, only to lose control and bite it off cleanly and suck the blood out of the stump.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:18:29 No.41461099 File: 175 KB, 376x293, 1671371260527521.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41460420 Don't be mad if I steal your ideas haha

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:20:22 No.41461195 File: 153 KB, 972x1199, BotanBlood.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41461099 Hey more power to ya man. Less for me to write

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:54:55 No.41462966 now we have literal cannibals here. any other fucked up fetishes people wanna inform the class of?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:56:05 No.41463037 >>41462966 Um... I got a fetish for hand holding.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 01:58:01 No.41463158 >>41463037 bruh...

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:04:51 No.41463569 >>41462966 What's wrong with cannibalism?

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:18:37 No.41464471
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>>41457374
It's been quite the ride so far, looking forward to seeing where this goes and if what Anon did will actually bite him in the ass or not in someway, since from how it looks, he's got nothing to worry about. Glad you're back by the way.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:21:12 No.41464624 >>41462966 >he refuses to be baked to perfection by his oshi live on air before being shared amongst his peers

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:21:53 No.41464671 >>41462966 You're trying to tell me you never wanted Suisei to decapitate you and use a straw to drink from your severed head's neck hole like you were a juice box?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:30:50 No.41465257 >>41462966 Cannibalism lacks the complex dom/sub dynamic and intense stimulation of conventional same size vore. Where are the fics about chuubas giving into their hedonistic impulses and swallowing each other whole?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 02:47:38 No.41466417 File: 394 KB, 692x789, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41462966 I like Armpits

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 03:06:05 No.41467624 File: 20 KB, 557x550, 1657659931204.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41462966 Yeah I like it cumflation, especially when it comes out of the other side.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 03:17:39 No.41468425
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>>41466417
So as someone who can't understand what the appeal is. Can you try explaining what they do for you? I'm still on the fence about making the sheep into pits in my story mostly because I can't wrap my head around what it's like.

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>>41462966
The very specific subgenre of snuff where the girl wants to be killed.
For over a year I've fantasized about pounding Kiara's ass from behind and cutting her throat the moment she cums, listening to her gurgle and bleed out, and then having her resurrect so we can do it all over again.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 03:38:49 No.41469708

>>41468425
NTA but it's like a little gaze into eroticism.
There's nothing sexual about armpits by themselves, just like feet, but what they lead to is what counts. Armpits are right next to the sideboob, should your gf lift her arms, you see her pits leading into her tits.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 03:45:00 No.41470155
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>>41468425
Also NTA, but it can be for a variety of reasons. Smellfags might like the smell, sweatfags might like the sweat, bushfags might like them hairy.
I am none of those, but I still find them pleasing to look at. There's just something appealing about the sight of them that I don't fully understand.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 03:45:19 No.41470187 >>41469708 >There's nothing sexual about armpits by themselves, just like feet Speak for yourself, uncultured fellow

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 04:00:50 No.41471121 >>41469708 >>41470155 Gotcha, that makes sense to me. I can work with that angle, a particular section or even article of clothing that leads to the real prize is something I can easily put into writing. Thanks bros.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 04:25:33 No.41472809
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>>41468425
Im that anon
For me, its a combination of smell (i like smelly girls) sweat, embarassment and as >>41469708 said, they are connected to a lot of sexy parts.
The girl that initiated me into this was a 3dpd but my favorite pitslut is Mia from fire emblem
She's constantly flashing them, wearing clothes that draw your eyes to them and she's on the bigger side of the boob alliance. From hololive, while i like watame because she shares my fetish, i like Bae a lot because she also flashes them and doesnt seem to notice how erotic they are

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 04:32:36 No.41473274 File: 86 KB, 917x237, 1652291104028.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41468425 >>41469708 They're not remotely analogous to feet you stupid fucking jackass cow

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 04:42:55 No.41473971

>>41462966
This is more 'weird' rather than fucked up but I really like that thing in prose/art when things like corruption/sensitivity/etc gets quantified by a number/percentage.
I think this is mostly from autism but adding numbers just gives it a sense of scale that makes what's happening hotter.
Though I'm pretty sure this is only really achievable/justifiable as a 'gimmick' in either mc/corruption app stories or things set in a system based fantasy setting.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 05:42:14 No.41478098 File: 711 KB, 3000x2000, KoroFurballBlood.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41462966 I know there's some guy who wants to fuck the weird joke smol version/mascots of chuubas around here somewhere

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 05:50:47 No.41478598 >>41478098 Literally what's wrong with that. They are hot

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 05:52:50 No.41478744 >>41478598 I didn't say anything about whether it was right or wrong, just that I knew you exist

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>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 07:51:34 No.41484235 >>41484054 >ywn have to tardwrangle NePoLaBo at some high class corporate party where they all get drunk and get pressured into an orgy when you bring them back to their hotel

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 07:56:45 No.41484398 >>41484235 Anon Botan is twice your age and Polka has lived more experiences than a WW2 vet. Lamy is a yakuza princess. You're not tardwrangling anyone but Nene.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 08:11:20 No.41484870 >>41484398 qrd on porka?

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 08:20:13 No.41485139

>>41437377
I read through this, and I have to say; your prose is really fucking rough. Please vary your sentence starters, you may be writing in 2nd person but that doesn't mean you have to start every other sentence with You.
Anyway it's cute and has potential but you really need to tune up your prose.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 08:23:14 No.41485235 >>41485139 Yeah, well you really need to suck my prose.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 08:25:45 No.41485295 >>41484870 She is a fragment of Tamamo-no-mae, her escape from the killing stone being the cause of the cracks that eventually caused it to break last year.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:00:40 No.41486310 >>41478098 That's not a fucked up fetish, that's just having eyes and libido.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:04:20 No.41486404 >>41473274 >hates the feet comparison >shares post about tickling and exposing them wdhmbt

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:39:53 No.41487345 >>41484870 Polka is an actual legend

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:49:56 No.41487580 >>41484398 What was that part about a yakuza princess?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:53:02 No.41487644 >>41487580 Her family isn't anything big but she is one

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 09:57:37 No.41487750 >>41487345 On what map?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 10:01:18 No.41487832 >>41487750 Hololive only ever two big hires. Gura is Her, but Polka is HER. Actual entertainment legend.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 10:04:51 No.41487900 >>41487750 Well we don't got the exact flight she skydived out of or the exact bridge she bungiejumped off of ...

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 10:12:31 No.41488076 >>41487832 >nobuhime >big lmao

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:10:05 No.41489480 File: 1.13 MB, 2792x3457, My vampire's broken. She's not biting me.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41460420 Thanks for posting this. Now I'm horny for Mel again.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:22:49 No.41489776 >>41487750 She's the legend on the treasure map guiding you towards hag love.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:41:03 No.41490200 >>41489480 >filename Get a better blood type, anon.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:43:32 No.41490270 >>41490200 What should it be? What's the "best" blood type?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:45:53 No.41490322 >>41490200 Sadly Mel doesn't like the taste of blood.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:46:24 No.41490334 >>41490270 I mean if you're talking about practicality, O- is the universal donor. Everyone wants some of that sweet sweet Oh neggy. If you want to be a greedy fucking whore then AB+ is the universal recipient.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 11:47:02 No.41490353

>>41490270
How should I know? I'm just trying to offer you a solution to help your vampire in biting you again.
>>41490322
I heard she likes the taste of cum though. She drinks it straight from the tap and she doesn't let up until your dick is literally sore and can't produce anymore cum.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 12:00:05 No.41490691 >>41490353 Then she takes care of your erection by drinking the blood in your corpus cavernosum

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 12:05:29 No.41490847 File: 423 KB, 626x885, 1668729851416969.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41490353 I am now horny for Mel.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 12:05:37 No.41490849

>>41437377
that was pretty good! I got barely anything to add to the others. Scenes could've been a bit longer, dialogues more extensive and grammar maybe a bit more polished. But all in all, a solid set-up.
I'm looking forward to see how you plan on continuing to play the Fubuki/Kuro/Anon triangle - there's certainly room for plot points/drama there!

>>41457374
while I'm still a fan of the premise of the story, the problems from earlier chapters seem to only solidify. I'm particularly talking about the rather sudden decision of Botan and Anon getting together with rather wonky reasoning. That may be one of the reasons why the supposedly emotional scenes with Botan don't evoke anything in me. It honestly makes Lamy seem the more reasonable between the three although she changes from "voice of reason" to "jealous rival" rather suddenly.
Concerning the prose, I'd call it rough around the edges. It's not quite clear who which line of dialogue belongs to at multiple points and the conversations appear a bit... weird? Almost the-room-esque. Like this,
>“Huh?”
>“None of us can tell her what to do, but we can try to convince her.”
>“Are you retarded?”
just doesn't read very well. You also have a few switches into first person that might throw the reader off. Example:
>Botan is your first girlfriend ever and you’ve never been good at talking to annoyed girls…
I wish you the best of luck my friend.
Be that as it may be, I still wish you good luck on your writing journey and with the other project!

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 12:09:13 No.41490949 >>41490691 That won't make my penis limp forever, right?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 12:22:16 No.41491318 >>41490849 you've actually given me an idea I think the next chapter will be from Lamy's perspective to kind of explain her behaviour and maybe also justify Botan's need for actual love

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 13:43:31 No.41493769 File: 3.26 MB, 1351x2043, 91109320_p0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] What are you working on anons? Bonus Question: Has an alt outfit or mv ever inspired you to write something?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:28:47 No.41495158 File: 180 KB, 850x1086, 457247.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41493769 I want a story about Kanata's alt outfit

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:30:38 No.41495201 >>41495158 What are you thinking about writing for her outfit?

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:33:08 No.41495271
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>>41438209
Yeah, I intended to create a sense of panic, but I may have overdone it. The following chapters are gonna be a bit slower paced.
Someone forgot to check punctuation. Thanks for the heads up, it should be all fixed now

>>41439087
I wish I had his ability to make titles

>>41439387
>>41490849
Thank you for the kind words. I do plan to make the character interactions the focus of the fic, I just hope I can land then.

>>41485139
Thanks for the feedback! I made an active effort to not let this be stuck in editing hell, but I clearly ought to spend a bit more time in grammar/prose on the next chapters.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:33:55 No.41495294 >>41473274 Feet are usually exposed during sex. My gf puts her feet on my face during missionary

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:34:58 No.41495329

>>41493769
I’m still being a WIP whore with commitment issues but I’ve managed to somewhat centre my focus around one story, The Cover Job chapter 2. Put 3k words towards it in the past week so… eh.
>Bonus
Suisei’s MV for dazzling (which coincidentally is her best song IMO) was solely responsible for inspiring the Suisei rooftop talk/kiss scene in Holocalypse. The shorter one, not the 3D sex MV.
Damn, that was a long fucking time ago.
Ina’s alt outfit with her casual clothes and beret gave me ideas for a story about nerdy art girl Ina dating the school’s rough and brash delinquent. The idea of two students from completely different ends of the spectrum somehow falling in love and trying to make their unorthodox relationship work appealed to me greatly. Wrote about 500 words then off to the infinite WIP pile it went. As always, plenty of ideas and little motivation to write them out.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:43:53 No.41495593 File: 1.45 MB, 1553x1417, 1674397988581134.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41495294 Nice

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:52:07 No.41495878 >>41493769 Debating whether a day at the beach with foobs should end with sex or just a fluffy scene after a blowjob in a changing booth.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 14:59:50 No.41496151 >>41493769 Left my WIPs to simmer in my head for a bit, I'm a bit saturated so I'm taking a break >Bonus Mio's more casual outfit made me write a bunch of fluff involving her in a housewife setting.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 15:20:32 No.41496950 File: 310 KB, 480x480, 1669047842975983.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41495294 LUCKY BASTAAARD

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 15:25:08 No.41497109 >>41493769 Taste of Sin 2 and another fic which is close to being done. >Bonus Battle maid Suisei and fallen angel Kanata really get me going, I want to try writing with them.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 15:36:50 No.41497520

>>41497109
What kind of fic are you thinking of writing with battle maid Suisei? The only idea that I can think of with that alt Suisei is the suicest prompt from earlier this month. I can't really think of any good scenarios where she becomes a maid, she always seems like she'd have to be forced into that role by either circumstance, hypnosis or in-univer roleplay.
As for Fallen angel Kanata, the only idea I can really think with her is the 'cliche' Angel falls because she loves you more than serving her purpose. Cue tragic romance

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 15:59:30 No.41498360
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>>41497520
I was thinking about the suicest prompt but decided against it because I don't want to do another suicest fic so soon. The other idea i had was a mix of the Romanov rrat.
Kanatan on the other hand, it may be cliche but the tragic romance really appeals to me. Although, a part of me does want me try explore the idea more and do something else.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:09:20 No.41498742 >>41495878 Sex, please. The desire to breed the white fox is overwhelming.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:09:44 No.41498758

>>41498360
>a mix of the Romanov rrat
Explain.
Because those words make me think (You) are some noble jackass that Suisei has decided to work under in order to manipulate you to get her throne back.
Only for her to actually fall in love with you while being your servant/ get mind broken when you decide to break her in.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:15:09 No.41499013 >>41495878 A fluffy scene after sex

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:15:34 No.41499032
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>>41493769
Next chapter of HJ is going well. With any luck I can dress up some of the scenes a bit and wrap it up soon.
>Bonus
This Mio outfit makes me want to write about taking this beautiful hag wolf to the ball and then pulling down that sad excuse for breast support she calls her blouse and going to town on her. It'll happen eventually, but that don't make waiting any easier.
Also Suisei battle maid is something I also really want to use.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:17:40 No.41499129 >>41495878 Just fade to black and cut to the next scene.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 16:32:30 No.41499832
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>>41498758
I have two ideas. The first is pretty the one you explained.
The second idea is about being one of the assassins sent to take her life but eventually turning to her side to help her out. The reason for the switch being that you lose agaisnt her and make the proposal to supply her infomation and a hand if she spares your life. (Death is certian if you return home without her head) You can also get a liitle enemies-to-lovers thing here as well.
After joining her side, the two of you moonlight as maid and butler in your journey to the throne. I feel like this idea has less focus on the maid aspect but I still like it.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 17:33:22 No.41502442 File: 65 KB, 867x521, 1673806354931751.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I sat down for 6 hours and wrote 74 words. 74 fucking words.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 17:35:38 No.41502520 >>41502442 Were they good words?

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 17:47:22 No.41503004 >>41502520 They were words. By themselves, 70 words aren't good nor bad

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 17:49:00 No.41503057 >>41502442 Take a break bro. Do something else. You're not under a time restriction.

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>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 19:04:18 No.41505919 >>41428042 Mio is hungry for some cum and the only person who can help her out is (You). Only you aren't in the "mood" right now so if she wants cum that badly then she's going to have to get you in the mood for it.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 19:40:10 No.41507536

>>41505919
This, and she tries (and fails spectacularly) to rape you, trying to sound dominating and forwards but ends up laughing and making a goof of herself.
Then, of course, you proceed to have ball slapping sex that ends up in a mating press that shatters the bed and Mio ends up impregnated with triplets.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 20:02:52 No.41508492 File: 500 KB, 608x711, 1651352298070.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41507536 It is a total failure to rape the willing.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 20:20:06 No.41509285 >>41507536 You know, even though it goes against her character I would have loved to see a Mio who is in heat and completely dominating you (even if she's doing a poor job at it) in bed.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 20:21:13 No.41509323 >>41509285 >A Mio who forces you to be a power bottom I can get under this.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 20:47:19 No.41510339

>>41428019
Bird Watching
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTq0WX6ZYQoJzQidkqFfSjOYqr6QStMBDvB0NN58Q_YEr5ELLucYy8t0J0oSNEz2JN42v5njR3v0LeN/pub

Tags: Yandere, SFW, Mumei

A short story to get my feet wet on how to write yanderes. Feedback would be very appreciated.

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:08:31 No.41511228
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>>41510339
I think you did a decent job showcasing the the possessive and insecure thinking of a yandere with this. Your punctuation could use a little work though, some sentences were strung together by too many commas.
Overall I like the idea a lot. The premise that Mumei latches on to the first person who shows her kindness and is unrelenting in how she wants to just be near them is pretty cool. I think this could benefit a lot from giving more details to the scenery and going more into their interactions and even giving Anon's POV on the girl. Like I would have liked to see his rationale behind leaving the window open after a certain point. Bonus points for how much of an owl she acts like.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:21:40 No.41511857 >>41510339 You wrote a yandere. That's all. There is very little to indicate this is the character you say it is. With the title and namedrop removed, it could have been anyone.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:30:43 No.41512272 >>41505286 I want all 3 of them in a circle around my cock as they lick it

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:32:43 No.41512378 >>41512272 but there's like 7 of them there

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:34:50 No.41512487 >>41428042 Mel asking you to relieve her of her vampiric urges by letting her nibbling on your arm because her teeth are achy.

>>	Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 21:40:07 No.41512736 >>41512378 I have a learning disability

Anonymous Sun, Jan 22, 2023 22:16:06 No.41514280
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>>41493769
I started outlining a Towa fic but nothing more to say beyond that.

>Bonus
I try to incorporate alt outfits where it makes sense since I'm autistic about wardrobe changes. But to answer more directly, Unison inspired me to write a Marine fic and Marine Set Sail and her newest outfit only added fuel to the fire. I should probably publish that. The contrast between Sora's idol outfit and her casual one makes me want to dig out that "Sora childhood friend" greentext chain but I got enough on my plate right now. Seconding the Suisei battle maid stuff and speaking of Suisei, her appearance of TFT is making me feel a certain way.

>>41495329
Ah I feel you! That MV partially inspired the twilight picnic scene in Cooking and a Comet, specifically, the part in the MV where she's looking over the city. Granted that part in the MV is happier than my scene but I knew I wanted the moment of truth to be at night (for theming reasons) and in a spot Suisei felt was special. The MV helped make that scene more concrete in my mind. Great MV and song. The follow-up song in the concert scene was originally going to be that song.

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>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 00:01:46 No.41520858 >>41510339 It's compelling yandere writing but like that other Anon said, there's very little Mumei coloring it. You've gotten the yandere side down but you need to get better at incorporating the character into it.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 00:17:04 No.41522089

>>41520858
That's alright, it was what I was aiming for. The reason why it's not revealed that it's Mumei until the end is because even I though that anyone would've worked, and it was only halfway through writing that perching on a tree and just watching would fit her, so I included a few nods to her slight tsundere/can't spit it out tendencies in the hopes of making it a bit clearer. It didn't work, but oh well.
Now I'll go with the original plan and get to work on turning it into an actual story. I just wanted to get my yandere writing down first. So consider it more of a teaser.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 01:21:16 No.41526502 File: 71 KB, 720x720, 1664064554127491.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] finally done with a rough draft for my first short story

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 01:41:32 No.41527711 >>41526502 post it

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 02:57:18 No.41532855 File: 178 KB, 850x1421, __kazama_iroha_hololive_drawn_by_teru_teru170__sample-4ce8b1d65fe9ba2ad6c317724dd1728f.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 03:28:14 No.41535638 File: 133 KB, 850x1328, IrohaKneeling.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41428042 After a failed attempt at a coup of HoloX, Iroha is set to perform seppuku and asks you to be kaishaku.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 03:51:03 No.41537715 >>41505286 Way does this guys style for these things make me so horny?

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 03:52:56 No.41537840 >>41535638 This but the only sword that will be penetrating her is (you)r cock and holox hired you to correct her Bonus points if you also made a secret deal to correct la+ afterwards

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 04:05:34 No.41538796 File: 47 KB, 344x344, 1671768395057701.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41537840 The idea that Lui pays (You) to correct her teammates when she is in the most need of vitamin D is pretty good.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 04:09:59 No.41539152 >>41537840 This but it does 'kill' her in a way because it mind breaks Iroha.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 04:10:10 No.41539170

>>41538796
>by the time you correct two teammates she tasks you to correct the other two
>Chloe so she can finally remember to bathe and Koyori for being such a horny scientist
>you become mad with power and start correcting Lui for making you rape her friends.
>the entirety of the secret society is fully corrected to worship your cock

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 04:18:23 No.41539830 >>41539152 I can get behind that version too

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 04:36:38 No.41541229

>>41493769
>Working on
I wanna say on the next chapter of Lost and Found, but the reality is that i have been playing so much fire emblem that i think the second i see a person wearing red i will punch them.
>Has an alt outfit or mv ever inspired you to write something
Ghost Mv makes me wanna write about suzy but i dont know what

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 05:39:22 No.41545681 >>41514280 >specifically, the part in the MV where she's looking over the city. Yeah, exactly the same here. It was that part.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 05:49:25 No.41546288

>>41541229
>Ghost Mv makes me wanna write about suzy but i dont know what
Unless I'm severely misunderstanding the mv+lyrics the 'obvious' fic would be something like a tragic romance with regretful overtones in the future scenes, with the epilogue promising that they may one day reunite.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 06:06:44 No.41547530 Your most wanted story WILL come out

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 06:09:55 No.41547742 >>41547530 I want a high-quality translation of Hollow Ataraxia

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 06:50:52 No.41550050
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>>41493769
Been working on the prompt an anon suggested earlier about the boys needing to scrounge up cash after losing absolutely everything in monopoly. I think it's going okay so far, but I'm still deciding on if I want their get rich quick scheme to end in success or failure.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 06:55:38 No.41550291 >>41547530 Thanks, AA. I'm really looking forward to that Kanata ALT chapter.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 07:15:04 No.41551366 >>41547530 Interrogation spin off with different chuubas and different interrogation methods? Pagman

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 07:35:19 No.41552472 >>41547530 /wg/ cinematic universe? Yeah, nah.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 07:45:49 No.41552944 >>41547530 HoloFantasy final chapter (20k words long)?

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 07:48:03 No.41553077 >>41552944 I'm pretty sure AA breaks that wordcount regularly even for 'normal' chapters.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 07:55:12 No.41553440 What are your favourite NSFW fics?

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 08:06:00 No.41553905
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>>41553440
In no particular order, but ones I enjoy and go back to often -
Festival of Sensations
Matsuri's Baby Carrot and Disastrously tight ass
A Brat's Punishment
Your Time is Gonna Come
Certain PD;PT chapters
Milky Sheep

And I'm sure I'm forgetting others.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 08:46:48 No.41555455

>>41553440
Shrunken Troubles, Dammerung and Bunny Trap 2.

Vanilla-wise, just about everything Fubuki-related will get a rise out of me. Most recently, Fox Family Christmas and Auntie's Little Secret both have me hooked.

After thinking about it, there's an absolute boatload of titles I could put here, but it'd just end up being something of a giant mini-review list so I'll leave it to my two most recent favourites.

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>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 10:35:12 No.41558901 I just wrote quite a bit but I didn't get a boner a single time so it's possibly all useless...

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 10:36:04 No.41558925 >>41558901 Nah, probably not. Guaranteed someone's going to get off to it.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 11:09:02 No.41559933 >>41547530 My most wanted fic is someone writing a hypnosis fic where (You) get hypnotized by a chuuba, and I'm pretty sure the anon that picked up the fujocast prompt said they weren't doing that aspect.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 11:12:50 No.41560073

>>41559933
I think last thread ago some anons came up with the idea of most of HoloX hypnotizing you to fuck your brains out while Iroha uses the hypnosis to have (You) to be her sparring partner and lovingly praise her. I'd love to see someone try that one out

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 11:28:07 No.41560508 >>41559933 As someone who's tried and failed to be hypnotized on multiple occasions, it's hard for me to imagine what it feels like.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:17:44 No.41561970

>>41560073
Went back to reread the discussion.
I think it has potential but it really needs something to act as the plot for it especially since it would be a story where Iroha is the main girl.
Maybe something like (You) are a do-gooder/superhero that's been messing up holoX's operations. One day they manage to develop a mind control program/drug and expose you to it while dueling Iroha.
Cue holox subjecting you to all of their fetishes by way of playing the role of their Older Brother, Owner, Husband, Kendo Teacher, and (Whatever the fuck Chloe wants you to be). With the 'plot' outside of the MC scenes being about Iroha feeling guilty and eventually freeing you from the Mind control.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:22:16 No.41562093 >>41553440 Nothing beats Petting Your Fox (both parts) and Foxfriend and Overly-nice Boyfriend for me, even to this day. Perhaps nothing will, for a long time.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:35:13 No.41562420

>>41561970
what if instead of simply freeing you because of her guilt, maybe she can free you to find out how real your feelings are. to perhaps she fell in love with you and she can't stand the idea of your praise only being because of hypnosis.

there could also be a time limit to how long the hypnosis lasts and Koyouri needs to re-apply it daily. maybe strenuous training can reduce the limit to how long the hypnosis drug lasts like it can escape through enough sweat.

just spitballing ideas.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:35:28 No.41562431 >>41561970 Don't do this to me, I already have too many WIPs

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:48:31 No.41562786

>>41562420
Funnily enough, this exact idea was one of the suggestions during the discussion two threads back >>41261469
I guess it could work if you wanted the concept to be less 'iroha centered' since the freeing you from mind control thing would 'close' off the metaphorical routes of the other girls.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 12:56:45 No.41563040

>>41562786
may be reaching here but we could always have Iroha rebel against the other members, stopping the hypnosis drug from being re-applied because she can't take the idea of You telling her sweet lies

this could lead to you escaping and making you the nemesis of the secret society once again, which could be somewhat of a set for a sequel where each time you and Iroha encounter one another you can't actually hold your blade against her because you actually did fall in love with her and every word of praise was genuine

over time you and her can have a secret relationship where each time HoloX does their next big scheme Iroha low-key sabotages it and then throws the fight between you and her just so it ends faster and she can run out to have a date with you

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:09:24 No.41565021 File: 130 KB, 850x1461, __kazama_iroha_hololive_drawn_by_nishiki_yuno__sample-94c7203c9cc45882d7584719d03ccdf7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:21:32 No.41565419

>>41563040
For some reason this made me think of ALL of them throwing fights because you have secret relationships that they keep from the rest of holoX.
>Laplus still has you come by to her apartment to get her reward for letting her beloved onii-chan get away.
>Lui has you reenact scenes of marital bliss after issuing she issues the 'wrong' orders.
>Koyori comes by to receive praise for being a good girl that let her owner escape.
...
I still have no clue what Chloe would do with (You).

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:25:09 No.41565521 >>41561970 Chloe's exorcist

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:29:11 No.41565663 File: 501 KB, 800x1131, __sakamata_chloe_hololive_drawn_by_meow7tail__3cacddd41108790694377a2528258722.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41565419 She wants you to be her sugar daddy.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:31:32 No.41565730

>>41565419
>Chloe wants you to clean her via sponge bath or scrub her with your dick
>she secretly becomes your soap girl

as much as I would like it to be strictly iroha with the secret relationship for the fluff, this is also a pretty funny idea of the girls all arguing with each other who gets to spend time with (You) and destroy themselves from the inside out,

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:34:33 No.41565817 >>41565021 You must really want an Iroha story.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:36:29 No.41565871 >>41553905 Your time is gonna come makes me disturbingly hard I hope anon gets to fuck both the void chick and mooms

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:37:21 No.41565900

>>41565817
I think Iroha is criminally under used. some fail to see her potential.
>have a cute wholesome romance with Iroha
>have occasional accidents where her nipples poke through her bandages
>one day once she's comfortable she gives you her first time

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:47:27 No.41566226 >>41565900 I can write the seppuku story.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:48:50 No.41566265 >>41566226 only if it's the mind break one

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 14:58:04 No.41566584

>>41565730
>HoloX collapses from the inside out.
>All four of them organize their latest caper such that (You) bring them all in.
>When it comes time to prosecute Laplus, Lui, Koyori, and Iroha pin Chloe as the real mastermind because she was the only one who wasn't all that 'in' to the hypno boyfriend thing.
>Chloe goes to super jail for life while the rest of HoloX gets off with a plea deal
>They now openly have a relationship with (You) while being reformed heroes.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:01:24 No.41566699 File: 211 KB, 850x830, __sakamata_chloe_hololive_drawn_by_fed_giba__sample-067666d221c48c883c6b5e53e9edae7d.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41566584 Poor Chloe

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:21:11 No.41567291
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>>41566584
>chloe goes to super jail.
>gets Pekora as a cellmate
>hijinks ensue where the both of them attempt to escape with the other supervillains in the prison

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:23:57 No.41567372

>>41562786
>Lui wants to try and be a housewife
>hypno shit ensues, her cooking is so horrid you break out of hypno
>beats herself up about it
>she wants to be someone who people can rely on, so she uses you as practice
>you see the chance to run but instead pretend to be unser mins control and tell Lui that theres nothing wrong with leaning on you, her husband
>cook for her, she loves it
>hold Lui and have her fall asleep on your chest

>Koyo is into pet play
>super awkward about it
>cringe breaks the spell
>turns out she's insecure and really needs someone to make her feel like she's enough
>tell her she's a good girl her tail wags, asks you to walk her on a leash
Can't think of anything for la+

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:25:01 No.41567390 >>41567291 Chloe sets out to get revenge by raping you, and now had to beat Anon's harem to get his dick Yakuza fighting ensues

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:35:20 No.41567672

>>41567372
>la+ wants to live out an incest fantasy
>acts like a brat for you to correct her
>she actually gets on your nerves so much that you snap out of anger
>it turns out she just really wants to be doted on.
>be big spoon and cuddle up with her in bed to make her feel safe while stroking her hair as she falls asleep

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:37:37 No.41567728

>>41567372
This is just me spitballing something for la+ based off the Older Brother thing.
>Laplus wants to do incest.
>Unfortunately the scenario she comes up with is so mired in chuuni lore that you have to awaken just to keep it straight.
>You honestly can't keep up with the scenario and just play up the role of generic big brother that gets seduced by her bratty little sister.
>She falls to basic acts of brotherly affection even before the incest.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:38:34 No.41567755

How does this sound?
>You open your eyes only to see a blood-infested soil. Your head hurts, it's a piercing pain that invades your brain. Everything looks blurry, and you can't hear anything. You try looking up with your fizzy vision, and your body completely paralyses when you see an army with dozens of men in the distance. How did you end up here? Why? And most importantly, who are you? You can't seem to remember.
>"..non..!"
>You don't remember anything at all. Not even your own name…
>"ANON!"
>The person shouting right next to you was wearing an armor and was wielding a katana. His words felt empty, as if they had no effect on you whatsoever.
>"You need to get up now! The next wave is coming!"
>He looked terrified, his eyes were completely hollow and his gaze only made you feel in danger.
>"W-what are you talking about..?"
>"Are you stupid! Did you hit your head too hard or what?! Get up and run no-"
…
>It was like a petal, falling to the battlefield without anyone noticing. A woman, a beautiful woman with long white hair, had just silenced that man in less than half a second. Her katana left a tail of blood after her swing. His head fell to the ground near you. You look up to find that she's already gone. The other people standing behind you were swinging their swords almost randomly in hopes of blocking her, but she killed all of them before they could even notice her presence. That woman had just killed 7 men without any hesitation whatsoever, and now she was pointing her katana at your throat. You can finally see her face. Big red eyes that almost blend perfectly with her bloody face, long white hair that moves following the wind, and two long white horns that come out of the top of her head. An oni. Is this it? Is this how you are going to die, without even knowing why you are fighting in the first place?
>The oni gives you a cold gaze and then walks away without looking back. Your life has been spared by that woman. The army that you could see in the distance some moments ago is now running past you, completely ignoring your presence. The sounds of men screaming and swords colliding invade your head. You fall to the ground once again.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 15:47:55 No.41568034

>>41567755
If this is intended for a greentext fic it's a bit too wordy and needs to get condensed a bit more. Also fix this
>wearing an armor
If it's for prose, you have a bit too many emotional tells in your narration, that could probably be filled in via tone, and as such could be cut.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 16:12:40 No.41568844

>>41567372
>>41567672
>>41567728
>While your body obeys them, your soul is conscious of everything and genuinely likes the girls
>they sadden thinking they're only lovably through hypnosis
>they all separately set out to win you over
>anonbowl ensues
>unable to leave one behind, anon asks Koyori to make the strongest aphrodisiac known to man
>you take it, crack your neck, and have an all night orgy with all four that ends up with all of their cunts overflowing with cum, and 4 very happt chuubas cuddling you in bed
>marriage ensues

Captcha: papa4v

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 16:22:50 No.41569176 >>41568844 >4V H-How many papas has Lui had?

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 16:24:47 No.41569240 >>41568844 What did Chloe do to you that the rest of HoloX decided they need to screw her over?

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 16:28:14 No.41569381 >>41569240 shes the intern. Literally no other reason needed.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 16:35:43 No.41569620 >>41569240 Chloe actually orchestrated the boyfriend thing so that she would rise to the top in holox while everyone was roleplaying with you Now she runs everything Chloe was merely pretending to be retarded while she was a mastermind

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 17:00:35 No.41570586 >>41569176 Her biological father Daddy Anon (hypnosis) Daddy Anon (non-hypno) Dad Anon (father of her children)

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 18:12:42 No.41572999 File: 88 KB, 1133x638, 1648412931164.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 18:50:28 No.41574446 >>41572999 I wanna breed this creature and uplift my race

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 19:05:19 No.41575070
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>>41574446
>explaining to a tipsy Aki how she's an ubermensch and how she got all the benefits of being elf(Beauty, Youth) without any of the drawbacks (Ears, Ego)
>She just thinks your flirting

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 19:41:08 No.41576634 >>41575070 Pointy ears are beautiful

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 19:47:02 No.41576898 File: 165 KB, 900x1200, FlareBikini.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41576634 I agree, but you can't argue that they're not controversial

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 19:54:32 No.41577236 File: 2.44 MB, 985x1296, 1674500719075433.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41576898 I don't care how controversial it is, I would pound an elf in a heartbeat.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 19:56:04 No.41577300 >>41576898 i dont know what the context of the picture is but it always looks like she's waiting for a bukkake

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:00:16 No.41577498 File: 165 KB, 900x1200, FlareBikini2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41577300 Going of the artists tweet accompanying the picture, it's her being sorry her boobs are big

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:01:38 No.41577580 >>41576634 >>41576898 >>41577236 Elves are disgusting and smelly. You're polluting our beautiful towns by acting like this >captcha

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:04:30 No.41577701 File: 2.54 MB, 3000x3000, 1669696825113910.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41577580 They're only smelly after 4 hours of nonstop sex.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:05:26 No.41577738 >>41577300 >Girl nervously awaiting a bukkake hey thats my fetish!

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:13:21 No.41578089 File: 84 KB, 1024x725, 1674504270283905.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41577580 Still better smelling than Chloe.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:14:42 No.41578148 File: 344 KB, 500x500, 1670318381732053.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41577498 >her being sorry her boobs are big Are you kidding me, they're basically in the goldilocks zone of perfect chest size.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:18:10 No.41578315 File: 33 KB, 561x169, bb.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41578148 Forgot to mention it's probably about something involving Pekora

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 20:29:25 No.41578815 >>41577300 that's because all elves are for covering in copious amounts of cum

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:08:43 No.41580495
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that one gamers fic broke me. now all I can think of when I see this purple creature is slapping her cushy bare butt until she stops protesting and starts moaning in pleasure. how do i deal with this

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:09:49 No.41580546 >>41580495 by getting better taste

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:17:17 No.41580870 >>41580495 Which fic?

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:20:35 No.41581018
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>>41580495
Maybe one day if I write a follow-up to Lazing Catto I will include this.
>(You) and Okayu's daughter does something she needs to be reprimanded for
>Going to give her a few slaps on the butt
>Okayu stops you and you jokingly say you're going to beat her instead
>She playfully agrees
>One light slap, and it awakens something in her
>The house at night is filled with the sounds of fatto catto buttslapping

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:28:27 No.41581370 >>41580870 sex with hags

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:30:17 No.41581452 >>41581370 My dick thanks you.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:31:20 No.41581487 >>41428042 You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 21:57:24 No.41582642

>>41581018
Okayu does anything you want - footjobs, paizuri, any amount of filthy blowjobs that she's exceptionally good at, thighjob, anal, anything. Even if she's not in the mood she'll gladly do it for you.

Her condition is that she's a naughty cat and needs to be punished first.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 22:17:11 No.41583603 >>41582642 Any other headcanon you'd like to tell us?

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 22:28:58 No.41584176 >>41428042 You wriggle up Lamy's ass and explode out of her stomach, killing her instantly, as an innovative new means of assassination

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 22:30:53 No.41584278 >>41584176 >>41581487 Stop.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 22:38:28 No.41584668 >>41553440 Brats Punishment Hedonists Reckoning Sex with Hags Collaring Iroha Extrapedestial More bdsm fun onegai...

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 22:56:00 No.41585522 >>41553440 Winner Winner Chicken Dinner Miso Soup Paradise Lost Paradise Regained Miss Sakura Kronii/Mori Scatfic I'm just a lover of scat fics.

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 23:10:44 No.41586141 Mi esposa es la mas linda

>>	Anonymous Mon, Jan 23, 2023 23:23:47 No.41586737 File: 202 KB, 1145x864, watamexican.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41586141 No pendejo, mi esposa es la más linda!

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 00:39:13 No.41589966
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Brainstorming more for Holoturismo and I think I've hit a wall on exactly what the supporting subplots could actually look like.

I'm not super against an episodic monster-of-the-week type of story progression until the inevitable Sora showdown, but I'm blanking out on what would be cool or interesting side plots along the way. Your typical racing game/movie often has a lot of group animosity or hot rivalries, not exactly what I wanted to go for.

What kind of non life-or-death struggles could (you) help the chuubas with while chasing them down at high speed?

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 00:50:40 No.41590502

>>41589966
I think you could set each gen as something like an 'arc' with each of them having a similar problem solved via car. That should tie in each monster of the week race into each other while still letting each gen be independent.
Now for specific sub plots, I can't really think of anything. Maybe have each 'arc' have a heroine that starts a relationship that fizzles out by the end of their capstone race?

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 01:13:23 No.41591584
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>>41589966
Maybe have some chuuba caught between two careers, racing and something else, or at the point where for whatever reason she has to give up racing and is going way too hard in the few races she has left to do

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 01:26:53 No.41592217

>>41589966
There’s a lot of different things you could add to switch up the story.
Introduce allies, maybe have Anon be a solo racer for some time before he joins a group with some other holos that work together to take down Sora.
Maybe bring in an enemy that isn’t necessarily a rival, just an evil person who tries to run the racers off the road.
With each group Anon faces he could have to employ different techniques to beat them on “their terms”. Like in the beginning he would only have to beat people in a regular canyon run, but another group might require him to pick up drifting, or maybe a daredevil group prefers to race in the city where his reflexes and skill in avoiding traffic will be tested.
Add some drama, maybe slot in a girl that tries to win over Anon’s affection. Then she gets kidnapped and Anon has to chase her kidnapper through the snow.
Have Anon continue adding new upgrades and mods to his car, and show how those changes affect his races.
There’s a lot of other subplots you could add as intermissions, it doesn’t have to instantly go from one race to another.

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 02:03:11 No.41594102

>>41590502
The way I have the story structured, each Gen holds a certain territory area and specializes in that type of terrain, so there are high speed highway sections, more technical mountain roads, tighter city circuits etc. Should make it for interesting storytelling because (you) will always find something new to learn.
Each arc having a heroine or chuuba that's either more friendly or more chummy is a good idea though; I did have an alternative "romantic interest" already in mind, so that could be an interesting dynamic.
>>41591584
They're all still idols at Hololive, so that's their primary occupation. The racing is a way to de-stress, and events are held to decide who shows up in official Hololive collaborations/shows etc., or birthday lives and what-not.
>>41592217
>Introduce allies, maybe have Anon be a solo racer for some time before he joins a group with some other holos that work together to take down Sora.
Anon will have a pretty big ally showing up this next chapter, and as the story progresses I guess he's going to leave behind a line of girls rooting for him too.
>Maybe bring in an enemy that isn’t necessarily a rival, just an evil person who tries to run the racers off the road.
You know... This might be a little cliche, but I actually think I can insert this. Someone with a grudge, a little unhinged, and very menhera.
>Have Anon continue adding new upgrades and mods to his car, and show how those changes affect his races.
Definitely. You can't compete with the kinds of cars anon will encounter later on with a stock 4G after all.

I might actually go with the "evil" character sabotaging, or just being a menace. Although that might be too much of a rip off of Shinigami R32.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 03:08:11 No.41597771 >>41594102 >I might actually go with the "evil" character sabotaging, or just being a menace. Although that might be too much of a rip off of Shinigami R32 Calliope Mori as Dick Dastardly...

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 03:16:52 No.41598360
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>>41594102
>They're all still idols at Hololive
Ah. Maybe something like Ayame's absences are because her car, some vintage thing she's sentimental about, has reached the end of it's viable lifespan for hard racing but she's too attached to it and has spent her time trying to fix it when it's too far gone.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 03:50:00 No.41600460 >>41577701 >>41578089 Don’t be a race traitor.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 03:54:44 No.41600741 File: 230 KB, 1080x1080, 1668474318208037.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41600460 I'm gonna race betray all over the damn world, and there's not a thing you can do to stop me.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 03:58:17 No.41600951 >>41578089 Yeah, but they're elves. I couldn't care less if Chloe smells a little. I'll just spray her with a hose. Better than immutable genetic issues like Elves.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:28:52 No.41603144 File: 1.17 MB, 1380x2100, 261124a75bdf854b26f5d4765ee40b28.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:29:49 No.41603207 >>41603144 Yeah, I'd give that a shot in the ass.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:31:56 No.41603357 File: 217 KB, 850x1397, NoelNeedle.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41603207 For rabies?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:33:05 No.41603434 >>41603357 Nah, for my pleasure and hers.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:33:12 No.41603441 File: 825 KB, 638x921, 1655437758072.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41428042 Impregnating Nenechi and realizing after a few years that your children are really dumb

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:40:02 No.41603842
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>>41603441
>Nene's too much of doting mom for her kids to have any life skills or learn anything
>'Doting' as in 'does things for them when they cry and never corrects them because they're trying hard'
>'Does things for them' as in 'Trying and failing, then crying until you do it for her'

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 04:59:55 No.41605143 >>41576898 >>41577236 >>41577498 Might as well fuck an animal while you’re at it. Because that’s what having sex with an elf is at the end of the day.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:03:10 No.41605351 File: 584 KB, 2000x2340, 101648534_p0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41605143 >Might as well fuck an animal while you’re at it. NTA but I definitely would

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:05:38 No.41605485 >>41605351 A human cosplaying as an animal doesn’t count.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:06:04 No.41605510 File: 855 KB, 836x733, KoroFurballSex.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41605143 Maybe I will do that too

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:12:36 No.41605823 File: 2.58 MB, 1400x2047, 96397898_p0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41605485 This a joke or not? Need to know before I call you a retard

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:21:54 No.41606358 >>41583603 It's a prompt, you fool

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:37:44 No.41607282 File: 156 KB, 707x1000, 1662116177352538.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41603842 >Nene feels bad making you do the hard stuff >slips into something sexy to apologize >one month later, she's pregnant again

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:41:52 No.41607508 Which chuubas would let (you) gently bite and suckle upon their nipples?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 05:53:04 No.41607986 >>41607508 Gura, but only if you let her do the same to yours

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 06:25:04 No.41609254 >>41607508 Watame

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 06:31:16 No.41609496 >>41603144 Is she trying to seduce another shota?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 06:32:26 No.41609548 >>41609496 Nah, that's just my wife's choice of evening wear after she gets out of the shower. It keeps her cool, and is easy to take off when she feels like milking my cock.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:13:15 No.41611103 >>41605823 She doesn’t display any animalistic traits.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:14:05 No.41611143 >>41611103 Retard

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:23:15 No.41611448 >>41611103 I mean, she has a tail and Fox ears, but other than that, she’s basically every Vtuber that uses a kemonomimi as an avatar.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:26:02 No.41611550 >>41605823 Has it ever been explained why friend has that one earring on her fox ears?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:29:41 No.41611673 >>41611550 Not that I've ever heard. If there is an explanation, it's probably buried in her lore, like the key she's got on her default outfit It's probably just aesthetic taste on the part of Mito

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:36:35 No.41611906 >>41609548 I thought her evening wear was that black shirt she wears over her body?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:37:19 No.41611927 >>41611906 Sure, she wears that too, on occasion. She's got more than one outfit, though.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:37:53 No.41611947 >>41603144 Wait a minute. That's not Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:40:00 No.41612016 >>41611947 You need to get your eyes checked. That is Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:40:36 No.41612040 >>41611947 It's boob-job Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:43:17 No.41612138 >>41611927 Oh. And here my retarded brain thought she only wore one outfit in the house when not at work.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:50:46 No.41612373 >>41612138 Nope, she wears plenty. She usually wears loose-fitting clothing as evening wear. Occasionally she'll wear naught but underwear in the middle of summer, but the only time she sleeps naked is after sex.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:52:42 No.41612452 >>41612373 That has been my experience as well.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 07:53:02 No.41612464 >>41612452 Am I talking to myself?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:20:28 No.41613402 >>41612373 Damn I genuinely wish I could wear a different set of clothes when I'm not working. I usually just wear the same pair of clothes for a week and usually just change my underwear every five or seven days.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:22:22 No.41613441 File: 328 KB, 1920x1080, 1666332106192750.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>41613402 > I usually just wear the same pair of clothes for a week >usually just change my underwear every five or seven days.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:33:54 No.41613766 >>41613402 Have fun with your UTI.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:35:23 No.41613825 >>41613441 You don’t buy the same clothes?

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:38:06 No.41613895
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>>41613825
I have varied outfits, and that's beside the point - you said the same PAIR of clothes, meaning one unique combination. Don't wriggle your way out of this one. You are one stinky little beaver. If you're not a hot anime girl, then that is fucking gross.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:39:41 No.41613935 >>41613895 Yea, same pairs of clothes. I have like the same ten light blue shirts and sports shorts. People do that.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:40:25 No.41613955 >>41613935 So you're an ESL... Which country?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:41:21 No.41613976 >>41613955 England.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:41:52 No.41613992 >>41613976 I don't believe that for a second. Which country are you really from?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:42:27 No.41614004 >>41613992 England.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:43:18 No.41614024 >>41614004 Probably an indog. One with social autism, too. That sucks for you.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:47:15 No.41614112 >>41613895 You, uh, do know people actually buy the same pair of clothes for simple living and to manage their weekly budget right?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:47:52 No.41614134 >>41614112 Not talking to you anymore, indog.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:50:48 No.41614210 >>41614112 Ignore him. He will never understand the minimalist lifestyle.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:57:11 No.41614382 >>41614210 Don't buy toothpaste to save money next

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:57:26 No.41614392 >>41595019 What is pop-lit?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 08:58:11 No.41614413 >>41614382 >Using anything with fluoride How dumb can you be?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:02:34 No.41614548 >>41614413 He probably drinks from the tap.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:04:05 No.41614592 >>41614392 Presumably popular literature. With that original post probably refering to original web fiction/serials.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:04:08 No.41614593 >>41614413 >>41614548 Bless you two brave souls going after Big Toothpaste.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:08:30 No.41614720 >>41614593 I’m not even going after big toothpaste. I just don’t like adding poison to my mouth. Use an activated charcoal in toothpaste. It helps in removing tartar and mild stains from your teeth.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:09:48 No.41614762 >>41614720 Don't swallow toothpaste retard

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:10:52 No.41614786 Dont you guys have some writing to do?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:11:13 No.41614798 >>41614762 Who says anything about swallowing toothpaste? Are you really this ignorant in the dangers of fluoride?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:12:59 No.41614845 >>41614798 Who doesn't get fluoride poisoning: Billions of regular toothbrushing people Who gets fluoride poisoning: children who swallow toothpaste on a daily basis Hm...

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:13:35 No.41614863 >>41614845 How much does big toothpaste pay you?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:16:39 No.41614944 >>41614786 I'm enthralled by the arguments that's being had.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:22:17 No.41615124 That stupid, spamming indog is the earlyfag. Who'dve thought.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:24:13 No.41615176 >>41614992

Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:24:36 No.41615188

>>41613766
I don't know what that means and the only thing I can notice is that I smell quite bad. But then again that's what happens when you haven't had a bath in over a month.

I'll probably have one as soon as my bathroom doesn't feel really cold.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:25:46 No.41615226 >>41614720 Wasn’t it reported that charcoal toothpaste damages your teeth since it’s more abrasive? Feels like you’re endangering your teeth for something stupid.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:28:34 No.41615295 >>41615226 You’ll be surprised by the length people will go once they believe in something. People in Louisiana still believe Huey Long was a great governor and not a socialist fuck who had it out for big oil.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:31:51 No.41615388 >>41615188 Does the tip of your penis sting when you pee? If it does then congratulations you have a Urinary Tract Infection.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:32:22 No.41615405 >>41615388 It does, but I think that's more to do with all the sounding I do.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:35:08 No.41615480 >>41615388 It doesn't, no.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:40:15 No.41615623 >>41615388 Bro do you not have foreskin? How are you getting UTI from dirty clothes

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:40:47 No.41615636 >>41615623 >Bro do you not have foreskin? The jews attacked me at birth

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:46:11 No.41615749 >>41615623 It happened to Chris-chan so I assume it can happen to most people who live in filth.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:52:28 No.41615883 >>41615749 Well I don't live in filth so maybe that's why I don't have a UTI despite wearing the same clothes and not having a bath in over a month.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:53:05 No.41615899 >>41615883 You are the filth.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:54:39 No.41615936 >>41615883 bro, just take a shower, what are you trying to /become/ Chloe?

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 09:59:46 No.41616049 >>41615936 The shower isn't installed in my house. We only have a bath and I only have one when my bathroom isn't really cold or if I somehow end up having diaherra. And no, I'm not trying to become Chloe.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 10:01:27 No.41616097 >>41616049 You are the filth

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 10:03:08 No.41616151 >>41616049 why don't you go to a hotel or a truck stop or something? shit get yourself a little tub and sponge yourself in the living room or some shit to get the grime and crap off you, you have other options!

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 10:03:23 No.41616156 >>41616049 >diaherra Nice. Been a while since I've seen such terrible spelling.

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 10:31:04 No.41616828 >That animation of Korone violently pegging you at knifepoint while biting your fingers Hmmm

>>	Anonymous Tue, Jan 24, 2023 11:10:03 No.41617754 >>41616828 source?

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