/wg/ - Writing General - The Paintings of Ina'nis Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
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>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>39069874

[Anonymous No.]

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Mio NTR: Tags: Ookami Mio, NTR, NSFW:>>39175309

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Mio NTR: Tags: Ookami Mio, NTR, NSFW:>>39175309

[Anonymous No.]

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Tying up Mori and then raping her breasts while listening to her mocking you about how you can't get any girl without raping them, her rant and glare makes you harder and more aroused, she also told you after she was free your life will be over because she will report you to the police, you talk back by threatening you will impregnate her with your rape baby if she did that, you both keep arguing back and forth until you finished on her face, she told you how gross and stinky your cum is, but you ignored her and continue to rape her breasts again.:>>39070488

Marine making a buttered toast, then realizing she doesnt have butter and going out to buy it:>>39072546

Fauna gathers all of her saplings and lovingly milks them for their cum, forcing them to squirt into a glass bottle. once all the saplings have been milked she'll drink then rate each sapling by the amount, flavor, and texture to determine who's mommy's favorite:>>39073482

I NEED Fubuki nursing handjob.:>>39076191

A chuuba in a world where they are just a streamer switches bodies with herself in a fantasy world where they're their 'lore' self, now they must survive in a fantastical world while pretending to be themselves, all the while looking for a way to switch back.:>>39080148

Comparing Elira and Selen's tits as well as their breast milk:>>39082835

Sora wants to know where A-Chan is, and you have to lie even as A-Chan sucks you off underneath your desk not even trying to be stealthy. To your horror, Sora decides to stay and try to make conversation.:>>39126357

Sex with Pekora in her new outfit:>>39144970

How has this thread gone on for so long without a single Reine/Pochi okayodon:>>39174240

I want a more assertive Mio sex fic:>>39176640

Treating Mio like the pet she's always wanted to be:>>39179417

Refusing to sex Marine until the two of you are married:>>39188406

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Ina is such a babe

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>>39175309
I gotta ask, why is Mio the primary target for NTR in hololive? She seems to be the most prominent chuuba in NTR images in pixiv

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>>39189826
Haku E. Koyori: Genius, uses various inventions and her wits to try to steal anon's semen.

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>>39193192
This is just pure guesswork but I think it's a combination of model and haghood giving her a lot of 'slottability' for NTR plots.

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>>39193199
That's so stupid. It's like saying "Swiper no swiping" but like..."Koyori no stimulating".
I'm not saying it's stupid in a bad way, but it's really funny.

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Not yet.

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>>39189826
Lamy leading the Christmas elves in a rebellion against Santa.

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>>39189826
Mio going hiking and being eaten alive by a pack of starving wolves.

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>>39193199
>Koyori traps anon in a dark room, a warehouse full of her supplies
>builds a Rube Goldberg-type machine that leads to a vacuum-like hose that's supposed to latch to your dick and drain your semen into Koyori's mouth on the other end
>Anon finds a rod-like object his mistakes for a candle
>the machine activates and sucks up the "candle"
>anon is left in the dark
>the candle gets sucked down the complicated tube,
>koyori's mouth hangs open on the other end
>the candle wedges into her mouth
>you're shown it's a stick of TNT and koyori blankly looks at the foreground and pulls out a sign that reads "uh-oh"
>the stick explodes and her face is covered in soot and her hair is frizzed up
>"I swear anon, I'll get your semen next time!

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>>39198551
do wolves partake in cannibalism?

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>>39189776
nice legs

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>>39193192
massive milf energy coming from her

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>>39198710
I'd love to actually read a shitty slapstick fic about Koyori failing to get your semen. The idea of it just ending with her asking if you want to go on a date and getting a confused "yes" is appealing.

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I've been thinking about how to use Suisei as a character in a non-modern day/non-idol focused work.
So far my idea is pretty much just run with the 'last romanov' rrat and fantasy-world it by presenting her as a child of a fallen bloodline she doesn't really care to claim going on the road as an adventurer as her method for chasing her dreams. With the rrat basically being used as part of her 'plot hook' to use as a substitute for the idol thing since so much of suisei's characterization and motivation is locked up with the 'idol' concept that she kind of needs something similar if you want to have suisei's normal characterization.
Also speaking of suisei, do you prefer 'blue haired girl' or 'bluenette' when it comes to referring to blue hair?

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This thread sucks.

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>>39202784
I'm imagining it like she's obsessed with you and tries her best to have sex with you just for it to end horribly wrong, she gets comedically hurt in some way, she accidentally kisses an ugly bastard and needs to run away from him, her clothes fall apart in public.

shenanigans ensue while anon just goes on about his day and it ends with her plopping at his feet asking to hang out, giving up on sex for the time being

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>>39202979
This an outline or something in the works?

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>>39203243
Kinda?
The characterization I'm going to use it for is specifically in a sci-fi fic but I think it would be more generally applicable for something fantasy-like since I'm generally going for a softer scifi.

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>>39202979
"bluenette" sounds more like how someone would refer to her in speech, probably by someone sassy or snarky.

During like the normal introduction "blue hair" works fine.

I like the idea though. I honestly haven't been sure how I would best put Suisei into a fantasy setting.

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You're making progress on your WIPs, right anons?

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>>39189826
Noel finds out about your tryst with Flare

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>>39206537
I know that word :D

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>>39206537
Why do people coin these terms? It does nothing but alienate readers who don't know them. You very well could've used the word affair and it would've worked just fine

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>>39207026
NTA but 'affair' implies more than just a 'tryst' in it being a continuing relationship.

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>>39206537
I got good news for you then. That's a bit I thought a lot about for HJ. Gonna give Noel plenty of time to seethe about it too as she slowly learns of the budding relationship between Anon and Flare through the letters she gets from her favorite half-elf,

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>>39207026
Read more books brainlet

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>>39207026
>It does nothing but alienate readers who don't know them
You sound like those faggots who whine for more difficulty modes in games. Putting accessibility over quality is a great way to end up with a watered-down mess with no character.

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Keep at it, writeanons.

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>>39208559
No!

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>>39208559
Too busy playing Outer Wilds.

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>>39207222
Sounds rad, I-

>thirteen chapters

Well, time to get reading.

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Ayame fucking won

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>>39211398
Ojou's unbeatable

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>>39208559
me reading interrogation or the marine chapters

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>>39211398
Won what?

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>>39211727
Ina has cancer and Nabi graduated, literally wiped everything about her off the internet, without even a notice.

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>>39211575
If you were to graduate tomorrow, I'd live for 3 more days, just so I could find someone suitable to hear the tales about the lady known as Ayame.

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>>39211884
Don't know where you got the Ina thing but that Nabi news is old. Sucks too because she had a lot of covers with holos that are gone.

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>>39189826
Healing fic featuring a chuuba of the author's choice and (You) as a scarred war veteran trying to readjust to civilian life while battling severe trauma from the shit you've seen and done.

...an example, Watame has you lay your head down on her comfy lap while she sings you lullabies to calm your nerves after hearing fireworks during a festival

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>>39206515
Yeah I managed to stealthily write 1400 words on my phone during my flight back home. Certainly hope nobody was being nose behind or next to me and saw me writing filthy incestual sex at a public place.

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>>39213760
incest with who?

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>>39213760
..Fox Family Christmas?

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>>39214437
Correct
>>39214109
Fox daughter

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[Anonymous No.]

Oh right, one more thing Laplus. Next time, stay in the car!

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>>39206515
Almost done, probably 5-10 more pages before editing.

[Anonymous No.]

Finally finished my fic. Now for a copious amount of editing.

[Anonymous No.]

You can't control the outcome, you can only control your actions. So plant that tree, and worry only if it will grow tommorow.

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>>39213760
I heard a story on a podcast once about someone observing exactly this. Mayhaps your weird Japanese smut will also be immortalized

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>>39208559
I'm trying my best bro! this one's kicking my ass pretty good

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>>39220929
Why does that hand have command seals?

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>>39208559
I'm almost... done with the first entry to a series I'm starting but damn am I tired. I think I can post it some tome today.

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>>39208559
I've been randomly feeling like throwing up for the past 5 days, so no writing until that's fixed. For now, I'll just sleep for another entire day and hope it goes away

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>>39216094
>>39213760
I really want to believe in this Christmas miracle.

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>>39206515
Yes and no. I'm currently writing an outline of what I want the story to be and what happens in it, but that's about it.
I was planning on writing a singular long-ass story, but I think I'll turn it into a series instead, as I think it'll give me more time to flesh things out (or at least try to) and also because I've never done it and would like to try.

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I just jerked off in less than a minute

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>>39227074
then you better start cranking again, the chocolate elf needs her daily dose of cum and I'm too busy

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>>39210215
The part you're interested in is still a ways off, so don't force yourself just yet if it's not what your eyes are itching for at the moment.

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>>39227720
Y'know I wonder, how far in advance have you got stuff planned?

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>>39226901
What is Noel going to do to Flare on that bed?

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>>39224312
I'm doing my best, had just a lot piled up at the end of this year and then other things came up that caught me by surprise. Had planned on having some drawn pieces to go along with the text but I'm not going to sweat it too much at this point.

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>>39228124
If you really wanna know. Loads.

I don't have the exact order of events yet, but things like how ill introduce marine, lamy, and mio are pretty detailed so far. I also have future conflicts and events jotted down for when they eventually become right to do.

How Noel comes back into the story is planned to, but i havent decided on the when yet. Usually when I complete an arc I can better choose what should come next, Marine is likely after this arc I just started though.

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>>39198551
>>39198719
>>39227074
>>39227225
What the fuck is going on, what was wrong with any of these posts

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>>39230101
Hypothesis: janny got their paycheck today, raged at not getting paid, then decided to powertrip. I say we double their pay! Oh wait, two times zero is still zero. They do it for free!

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Am I gonna have to break the rentry links I'm trying to post? The damn filter thinks it's spam.

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>>39230407
Just use Docs like every other sensible human

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>>39230407
Use .org instead of .co

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>>39230101
>>39230319
It's not just the tranny jannies, I actually got banned for one of those posts. "off-topic"

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>>39230453
Maybe next time. Already went ahead and got these done.

>>39230477
Seems like it'll work.

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>>39230101
I honestly have no clue

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>>39189797

Escapades & Sexcapades

An episodic series of fics where stream-based happenings occur with (You) and another (likely Hololive) chuuba. Each of these encounters are normally in two parts. The "escapade" being the first chapter with the all set-up and a bit of spiciness. The link to the stream it's inspired by is also there since that's where it matters most. Then there's the "sexcapade" with all the full-blown smut in case you just want to skip all the fluff. Any addition beyond that is probably just extra (smut). Aside from that, the occasional "collab" where multiple chuubas will share their own moments together, both eventful and erotic. These'll likely be one-shots.

Endurance: Training
https://rentry.org/62d287
Tags: Baelz, NSFW, Fluff, voyeurism, Masturbation

Endurance: Testing
https://rentry.org/i2htq
Tags: Baelz, NSFW, Rough Sex

Endurance: Breaking
https://rentry.org/zr2vn
Tags: Baelz, NSFW, Mindbreak, Rough Sex

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>>39231650

Like I said above, most of these'll be done in two parts but I made this one in three. Reason one being I started writing this before I intended this to be a series because reason two being I promised /rrat/ I'd write this after Bae's first Ring Fit stream. Reason three being I got too into it, wrote to much, didn't want to delete and feel like I wasted time.

Granted it took so long since I was dealing with mental stuff and kind of burnt myself out. But now that this is done, I think I can kind of just write freely without forcing myself so I don't know the rate at which I'll be dropping new installments but when I do I'll drop both parts together. Deciding on what to focus on next between someone in Myth or Council since I'm going for English speaking chuubas until I'm confident my can get anyone other girl in Hololive right. This is the first time I've written something like this and actually posted so it probably won't be as good as everything that comes after this.

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>>39228498
So not this year either? That's two christmasses late, anon.

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>>39231650
Im halfway through the first one and imma continue a bit later, but so far the feedback i have is
>Format it a bit better
You have a bunch of really wordy paragraphs and it gets heavy to read
>You go on tangents
While you got Bae down to a T, it feels like the scene just keeps going on because you want to include everything. Learn how to trim the fat and distribute things a bit
Overall good work for your first time

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>>39231650
Wowzers, this is a monstrous work anon. great job
I'll give my review later

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>>39233923
>Format it a bit better
Yeah I fugred the wordy paragraphs were gonna be a bit much. Didn't know when to break it up or keep one togther if it was still the same idea.
>You go on tangents
Yep. What you said was exactly right. I know I did this time and I hoped I explained why in the post below. Works will definitely not be this long. Maybe at most 2/3's at most but it'll be formated better towards the type of 2-part/optional 1'st part type of story. And getting Bae right was the thing I cared about the most about so thanks

>>39234922
Thanks. It is quite lengthy though

[Anonymous No.]

I am super fucking horny but recently rubbed my dick raw and it hasn't quite healed up. What do you do in this situatuion?

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>>39237918
Post pics of dick so we have a better idea of how bad it is

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>>39237918
You can either think of something disgusting, work it out with exercise or try to use something that'll diminish the friction and try not to go too fast. You could use story I wrote above since...

>>39231722
>>39233923
>>39236554
The story being based of an endurance stream is kind of intentionally fitted for edging if you want and "endurance challenege" of your own

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>>39238864
Your story caused the problem in the first place. It's a good read by the way, but littered with grammatical errors and typos. Could seriously benefit from some polishing. I absolutely adore the amount of smut you've put into this, shit's fantastic, but I can't jerk it.

I know, this is a bit like a poor uni student watching food porn tv shows, but I couldn't help it and now I'm in a bind.

>>39238762
Nice try buster.

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>>39239190
>Your story caused the problem in the first place. It's a good read by the way
Thanks (and sorry I guess)

>but littered with grammatical errors and typos. Could seriously benefit from some polishing
Yeah, you're right. Granted it's way more polished than before I released it and I kind of just wanted to be done with it and thought I cleaned it up "enough" and just submitted it.

Any error anyone wants to tell me about I'll just go in and fix it sooner or later

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>>39228498
Any chance you can split the story into two parts? One to release this christmas and the other for whenever you're done with it

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>>39244151
I have some time off from work this week to wrap it up; the story is fine but I won't have time to draw the illustrations I wanted to go with it by Christmas, so I'll probably do those later when I have more time. No need to split it, even if it's already close to 40 pages long.

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>>39244921
>40 pages long
>illustrations
This is for a Christmas special?

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>>39189826
Kronii looping to save TimeCat and ending with
>My cat has passed away today and I will be taking a break. Thank you for your understanding in advance

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>>39189826
Eating Luna's candy-flavored asshole.

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>>39189826
Requesting comfy fic of you and a chuuba making hot chocolate

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>>39246412
Being a cat in hololive is a death sentence.

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>>39249461
Okayun...

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>>39249888
trips for the fatto catto fucking dying.......

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>>39249955
As was foretold in A Cat's Life.

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How do you write good when you're writing from a chuuba's perspective, i.e in something like third person limited?

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>>39250948
Write how the chuuba would act.

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>>39250948
Would changing to another perspective really affect your prose quality that much? Why would you only need to know how to write good in third person and not second?

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>>39250948
Go back to writing in second person perspective like a decent God-fearing citizen.

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>>39252448
I'm already using second person perspective for You/Anon, common wisdom is to only have one character linked to the main perspective so it's clear when it switches to another character that it's not the previous character.

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>>39252653
>common wisdom is to only have one character linked to the main perspective
Could you elaborate on what you mean by this? I’m assuming the main perspective is (You) in second perspective, so how does that affect the chuuba in third person?
>it's clear when it switches to another character that it's not the previous character.
That’s what you want, right? So switching from second person (You) to third person chuuba would make that clear.

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>>39252833
>how does that affect the chuuba in third person?
I don't really know how to write third person good, especially in a way that isn't info-dumpy for shit I want to show.

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>>39250948
It's not that different from writing second person. Just include a good balance of what the chuuba is doing and what they're thinking about as they do it.

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No writing less than 1k words allowed, kiddo. This place is only for the writers who have real dedication. Go write or go home.

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>>39253986
Yeah, sure... so why don't you do that more often, huh?

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>>39252867
I’d say just write it exactly like you would second person, except instead of you and your it’s they and their.

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>>39254011
I'm busy standing out telling people to write

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>>39253986
1k… all up?

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>>39254047
The 1K must be written after the creation of this >>39253986

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>>39208559
I've just lost that loving feeling.

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>>39253986
Sorry Wata-hulkster. You can't stop us 500 word per day bros.

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>>39254248
But is there a time limit?

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Anon who is going to write friends to lovers with Calli
A-any update?

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>>39254637
I decided to stop writing the fic. The reason for this is I decided to actually watch some of her streams to get a better grasp of her personality, and I wanted to kill myself after just one. Instead of friends to lovers, I'm writing something I think is more thematically appropriate for her - friends to dog food.

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>>39254487
There is now

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>>39254637
That's not me, but I do have an old outline for one of those just waiting to go. Well two versions. The problem was I couldn't pick which one so it fell to the bottom of the pile. Some day...

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>>39254679
I'd read it.

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>>39254679
Yeah we heard you jamal, now hurry with that iphone, you are falling behind in your quota
>>39254713
Well some progress its better than no progress, cheers mate

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>>39254710
Yes, what is it? How long do we have?

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>>39254822
I'm not telling you. But there is a time limit

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>>39253986
1k total, or...?

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>>39254898
Less asking and more writing

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>>39254958
Ok

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>>39189826
Aqua being gangraped by niggers in the alley behind a convenience store

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No.

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>>39257191
This isn't the Ui-mama thread.

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>>39256920
With an outfit like this, she's practically asking to get raped

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>>39257456
Many of her outfits are rapeable. I think the default outfit is the least rapeable though. I love the braids hairstyle outfit of hers. Would love nothing more than to see her get railed by 3 ebony footlongs at once

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>>39256920
If I ever include niggers in my stories in any capacity it'll be chuubas lining up to hang them from the god damn trees.

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>>39257848
An interracial fic would be in character for deep web underground.

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>>39257848
Why would PoC vtubers hang your stories from trees?

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>>39189826
Lovingly raping Aqua and taking her hand in marriage when she tells you she's pregnant with twins.

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>>39258646
NTA but because story I write is so bad that you'd want to lynch them.

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>>39259200
You should work on your English.

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>heheje le niggers
>WOOT? NIGGER? KILL KILL
grow up already

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>>39259174
How do you 'lovingly' rape someone?

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>>39259295
And that is one of the reasons why!

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>>39208559
1200 words today.
I'm feeling it.

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>>39208559
>>39259489
I love you Shirouposters. Thank you for being here.

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>>39259474
Like millions of husbands throughout history. You're reasonably considerate and tender, and she is either unable to resist or resigns herself to letting it happen.

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>>39254013

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>>39259474
Basically what >>39259632 said but you also make sure she's comfortable with her fate and that you don't hurt her too much.

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>>39259474
Rape doesn't have to necessarily be violent to begin with. Especially with someone like Aqua who's very socially inept and very shy, it's really not out of the realm of possibility that she would go along with something she didn't want to do simply because she's too much of a dummy to say "no".
Basically all you'd need is to woo her a bit and to be pushy and forward, not really stopping when she puts up a bit of resistance. Make her body feel good gently and assertively, make her doubt her own hesitation. That's the best way to go about it.

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>>39261260
Strongly reminds me of this old Miko rape prompt I have had in my "ideas" tray.
>>25853770

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Post your wordcounts, and be a tease by hiding a bit of the fic behind it.

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>>39261641
That's basically what I was hoping for, yes. I thought the prompt was cute (even if it was fucked up) so I thought Aqua would fit that role but I wouldn't mind seeing it happen to Miko as well.

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>>39261771
I have commitment issues.

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>>39263824
Let me guess, Hagorgy anon?

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>>39261771
Progress, but slow. This one of the Aqua mecha fics?
>>39263824
>Saliva pooling
>Sex allowing droplets...
You're about to have more than commitment issues if you don't stop fucking teasing me with shit like that!

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>>39261771
[construction noises]

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>>39264374
>Aqua mecha
Yep, trying to get the Mecha fight finished so I can publish this by Christmas, if I can't I'll publish the first two parts and see if I can get the fight out by new years.

>That fucking wordcount
This makes me remember an old reply to you about how holofantasy chapters aren't chapters anymore they're books.

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>>39264816
Hey, fuck yeah. Looking forward to seeing it; the mech concept has been intriguing me for a while after I've been ruminating on my own ideas over them, excited to see it.
Still shorter than 6, but it's not about length. I should throw all these in a single document at the end for a final result of book one.

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>>39261771
I was poking at an old thing, so old I don't remember why I started writing it in the first place. I guess I was depressed cause it's just a collection of chuubas sacrificing themselves for (You)

>>39263824
Is that...IRyS tooth brushing?

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>>39264280
Yup.
>>39264374
Man, share a little bit of that ability to glide over the page with me. You write a chapter half of what I've written in 18 months, I can't kneel any harder...
>>39266809
Uhh I guess you could say it is, except you're brushing her fangs with (your) tongue.

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>>39267803
Sounds even better, I pray for your good health and writing inspiration

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>>39261771

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>>39267803
>Spoiler
Hoo boy. That sounds dangerous. When and if it's ever out, I'd love to read it.

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>>39268055
My god, your eyes must have gotten triple cancer by now from reading with those filters and colors

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>>39270103
It's not a filter. It's just dark mode plus orange text. Word count on docs also darkens the background for some reason.

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>>39261771
Trying to find a section that either wasn't a big moment or potentially hitting the cutting room floor was harder than I thought

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>>39272859
Is this 'Cooking with a Comet' sequel?

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>>39202979
You can only use bluenette if you also use blussy.

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>>39253986
I've compeleted your challenge for the day Watahulkster, I'm not gonna stop there either. I'll double your bench press by the end of the day.


>>39261771

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>>39259933
You must have some sort of mental obstacle stopping you, because that’s exactly how it works for me.

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>>39273004
Yep, please look forward to it.

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>>39274057
You bloody bet I'm looking forward to this. Can't wait.

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>>39274057
I'm also looking forward to it. The premise is extremely cute.

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>>39274262
>>39274437
That's very encouraging to hear, thanks. Hopefully, I can get it out soon.

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>>39261771
Still a rough draft.

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>>39275112
Moonlightspeed anon

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>>39275112
Take my power.

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>>39267875
How does one write armpit fucking? Focus on the girls reaction?

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>>39282305
I think you focus on the armpit

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>>39282305
Read Nyeh! in the archive. It's short but it's got some nice wakipai.

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>>39253986
>Write one word
>Copy and paste over 1000 times
>Word count : 1001
This shit is too easy.

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>>39287370
Just write a list of 1000 words that could appear in your story and then make sense of it later in editing.

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>>39193192
>wholesome chuuba
>sane fanbase
It's just changs trying to get You's from Miofa. Everyone who writes NTR is a cuck or a troll

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>>39288090
I jerk off to NTR in secret to troll people

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>>39288090
Actual retard.

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>>39289119
I try to get into NTR but its just so fucking boring
99% of the time its some stupid scenario where the girl gets dicked by an ugly nigga and that makes her turn into a turboslut. Like aside from the fact that she just instantly turns into a parody, why so many ugly dudes? If im supposed to self insert in the bull i dont want to be a fatass or a balding manlet

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>>39289348
t.cuck

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>>39289944
You're not supposed to self insert as anyone you're just supposed to jerk off. Either way, most NTR porn is shit but the good ones hit the right spot. Anything related to mind control, mindbreak, blackmail and married spouses you can just filter out and nothing will be lost

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>>39288090
What if you self-insert as the one who cucks

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>>39290858
Then why not just fuck her

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Mama Mio Bump

[Anonymous No.]

Bump

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>>39294000
So, you want to discuss something, or are you just going to bump a dead thread?

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Bump