/wg/ - Writing General - Better Yourself Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>38868641

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

HoloJourneys Chapter 13: A Bjornholm sendoff: Tags: Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff:>>38891442

The Tragedy of Yugo Asuma: Tags: SFW, Comedy, Tragedy, Yugo Asuma:>>38956255

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) are dating all the girls in council though none of them know you're cheating on them. through a web of shenanigans, you manage to keep all the girls in the blue but eventually get caught and have all 5 pissed at you:>>38873717

You’re an up and coming child star being offered a once In a lifetime opportunity by industry veteran Mori but first she needs to make sure you know how things work and that you have to be a team player (sex).:>>38877569

man since everybody started talking about it along side boning the pink woman:>>38877584

Kson getting Mori/Choco drunk and raping her/ selling their holes on stream.:>>38880977

Sleeply Submitting to Suisei.:>>38885906

Flare lusting after white human cock onegai:>>38919735

You're Bae's boyfriend who's slotted to die, but Calli concern fags for you and warns you about your upcoming death flag in unconventional ways (like showing up in your food or on a tv screen--pic related.) So Bae doesn't have to live with the sadness of losing a loved one.:>>38931116

Choco is tired of waiting for you to get the hint. You WILL come to the nurses office and she WILL drain your balls everyday before AND after classes:>>38932226

Comforting Yugo with your dick after she gets fired for bringing in low numbers.:>>38933045

After a long day at work, (You) come home and want nothing more than to crash and sleep. However the moment you open the door you are shocked to see your gf as well as many of her friends sitting around waiting for you. They say this is some kind of "intervention" about your "undiagnosed autism".:>>38934984

Laplus is repeatedly cockblocked by her crow whenever she tries to make a move on (you):>>38940518

Miko trying her hardest to rape you:>>38945396

Towa is a boy and the best friend of (you), a popular guy in school. Towa is also a huge faggot and absolutely wants to get dicked by the BAC (Big Anon Cock) but figures you don't swing that way. Towa then wishes to be a girl so he can go out with you, and once he becomes the Towappi, he approaches you and finds out you were gay and wanted to dick your TowBro this entire time.:>>38950553

Having sex with your loving, slightly tsudere girlfriend Towa:>>38951288

Kiwawa ass worship.:>>38956321

Throat hort has claimed most of EN and modern medicine is powerless. Fauna's cum is a biological wonder of natural healing, but it quickly loses its efficacy after leaving her body. It's up to her to travel the world and personally creampie every talent's throat with her miraculous futa milk to save the branch.:>>38969618

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Stop lusting for Lamy

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>>38986319
a fic named "pavlov's bitch"

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>>38987352
Only when she stops being a stacked, magical, icy bad bitch.

Oh and when she stops being a half-elf with a great butt. I'll stop when she does all that.

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>>38987722
>Giving Korone one of her favorite snacks every time you see her in the office
>Slowly move to patting her on the head while giving her a snack
>Then hugging her and giving the snack
>Phase the snack out and now she's just excited to hug you whenever you see each other
>Slip a grope or two in here and there
>Start hanging out with her 1 on 1 more and more
>Hugging and groping transitions to heavy cuddling when alone

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>>38986319
Worried that Fauna may never return, a lone sapling ventures out into the world to find her. They encounter your oshi, who is intrigued by the intrepid shrub, and attempts to help them on their quest while learning about this tiny, strange sapling.
If nsfw, please /ss/ femdom

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>>38991480
>Gets the entirety of EN scouring the globe looking for Fauna
>Everyone assumed somebody else already checked her home
>she's been there the whole time

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>>38991480
Then later, the sapling finds out that:
The sapling IS Fauna and then proceeds to have kissy gay sex with my oshi (Reine)

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>>38993004
>Sapling forgot they were playing hide and seek and panicked
once when I was young and with my parents at a water park. They left to go do something and told me they'd be back. I immediately forgot that and ran around the park sobbing. When they found me, it'd only been 20 minutes

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>>38986319
Bullying a chuuba when you're both younger only for you to slowly realize as the two of you get older that she has a degredation fetish

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>>38991480
Okay I know that saplings are supposed to be these little things but saplingposting has perpetually made me think of the transformation as being purely mental so instead of a tiny shrub I'm imagining this 8 ft tall giant that's been mentally reduced to a childlike state of mind trying to find mommy with the aid (insert chuuba here)

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>>38995106
Anon look at these lil guys they're definitely small

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>>38996459
So small

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>>38996459
Uuuuu

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>>38986222
false dilemma

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>>38996459
I was more referring to the idea that people get turned into saplings. With the extension being that saplings only get turned mentally.
Why does it have pigtails?

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>>38997763
Fair enough.
idk I didn't make the edit

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>>38997970 (Me)
>>38997763
When I think of saplings, I think of them as planted and grown instead of transformed. Goes well with faunas mommy/big sis image

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>>38997970
These are just normal saplings. Real Faunheads (like myself) immediately break down into a suicidal psychotic rage the moment Fauna ends a stream. Honestly I'd be ashamed if I called myself a sapling and yet selfishly waited a whole 0.001 SECONDS before breaking down.

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>writing sfw action/adventure story
>don't know how to start act 2
>end up writing 500 words about Kiara's fat ass
Old habits die hard.

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>>38999961
Haha oh no! You ""accidentally"" wrote 500 words about Kiara's ass haha.

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>>38999961
Keep making that mistake haha

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>>38986319
Playing Baba is You with Botan.

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>>38999961
What a silly turn of events, haha. Isn't that just the darnedest thing? It sure would be weird if you kept writing about Kiara's thick butt, wouldn't it?

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>>38999961
we've all been there haha

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>>38998593
I'm perpetually on the cusp of a mental breakdown, after I've exhausted myself crying I hibernate while tormented by constant nightmares

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>>39001150
>>38998593
>Crying for a mother that routinely abuses the shit out of you
GROW A SPINE

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I've never been into all the mommydom stuff. Council's always been an entire gen of more sisterly gals to me than anything.

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>>39003508
I respect that. If I had to choose between Mommy and onee-san Fauna. I'd choose onee-san. Still dom though

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>>38997449
Nice. Im not sold on the ending but Nice

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>>39003508
Saplings are insufferable so im pretty checked out of mommydom. I was never a big fan of it but nowadays i actively spite it

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>>39006343
Same.

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https://youtu.be/5Omz9gT0mAk

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>>39006766
>taiga gets to shit in Mio's mouth
why do i continue breathing

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How many words did you manage today?
Zero is an acceptable answer.

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>>39007524
I didn't really think to count words while I was editing.

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>>39007524
32. in my defense it was during break and I work an 11 hour night shift

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>>39007524
Like around 100? It was mostly editing. I was gonna do more but cod double xp is today.

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>>39007524
600-ish, plus a bit of editing to preexisting stuff. Finished a scene that was particularly hard to write.

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>>38991480
I had a similar idea based on IMF threads in which the cute sapling femboys get constantly raped by futa chuubas

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>>39007524
Like...800. Not very good, not very bad.
>>39007967
Time to grind guns I hate while the gettin's good.

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>>39008134
H-hot
that's what I imagine in my head when I see saplings bumbling around threads too

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>>39008723
God I was on the receiving end on that thread. The risuner has become a source of great twink sapling erotica

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>>39008830
me too. I miss peak sapling posting days sometimes

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>>39007524
Nothing yet, I might try to outline some more details for this next chapter before diving into the actual meat of it, but hopefully I get some words going by the end of the today.

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>>39009617
>Watame in Botan's outfit
Didn't know this would make my dick hard but here we are

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>>39009689
Me either, but I go diamonds over that image. The ruffled hair I think goes a long way for me.

It makes me want to write a segment after Boton eventually gets into the mix of my story where the two swap outfits, maybe for saucy reasons too.

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>>39009617
>that way the belt thing digs into her thigh

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Marine booty bump

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>>39010979
>"look anon a delicious peach ripe for the picking~"
>you write diliganty
>"come on! All you need to do is eat!" she shakes her ass to tempt you
>you ignore her and keep up your pace
>she scoots toward you and just about presses her ass to your face
>you slap her ass, tie her up and toss her into a room for being too horny again
>you were ironically writing a marine sex fic and would rather write that than actually have sex with marine.

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>>39011194
Reading aloud stories of you fucking her next to a tied up, desperate Marine sounds like a mean kind of torture.

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>>39011527
>reading all the raunchy things you'd do to her is getting her wet and she starts whimpering in desperation
>you leave the room for her to dry while her cries of sexual frustration echo throughout the house.

sexless marine will never not be funny to me

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>>38986319
Vicious hag gangs are kidnapping young men and taking turns raping them until they creampie the hags and save their eggs.

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>>39011527
>Ask Marine what she thinks of a particular scene where you give her an overflowing creampie as she shifts uneasily in place
>Pleads for you to fuck her silly, until your cum oozes out of her hole like she physically can't fit anymore cum inside
>Tell her that's a brilliant idea
>Keep writing

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>>39011527
>marine tries to flip the tables on you by drawing particularly raunchy images of the two of you
>Asks you if you think she should change the position to have you using his twintails as handlebars as you raw dog her
>tell her you're proud of her for putting such effort into her hobby and you leave her to go back to your writing

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>>39012917
>"That one...there."
>"B-Botan, he's...he's barely in highschool yet. Are you-"
>"Park the goddamn car, Mio."

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>>39014396
>Mio drags her catch to her apartment
>Tries her hardest to rape him, but ultimately comes across as a goof and embarrasses herself over and over
>Tied up anon undoes the poor knot Mio held him with and comforts a sobbing Mio
>anon instructs Mio on how to rape him
>Wild night of nonstop breeding ensues
>Next morning Mio hands anon the phone so he can file a police report or something
>Anon smells breakfast
>Asks Mio if he can stay for a bit more
>They marry and have three children.

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>>39014396
>The hags moments before regretting trying to rape the recently dimensionally displayed holofantasy Anon.

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>>39014870
>Awkwardly reciprocates Mio's flirting because he sort of knows her and they don't seem that different, plus she's cute and he's only been fucking hags at this point anyway
>Botan suddenly reaches for his dick and tries to make it weird
>

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>>39015068
>he's only been fucking hags at this point anyway
Marine...

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>>39015375
To be fair, it's not like he has anyone closer gunning for him beyond Matsuri, and she's not exactly an ideal candidate given that she sort of forced her way on him. He doesn't exactly have any options BUT hags.

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>>39015846
Yet.

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>all the girls I plan to have Anon have physical relationships with so far are hags

I guess I have a type.

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>>39015971
In what? HJ?
>>39015897
Yet...

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>>39016346
Yup. I haven't really thought about details about what exactly happens when and with who, (like if the scene and build up to that point would call for an HJ, it might just happen), but mainly the idea of who will likely end up forming an intimate relationship with Anon via their interactions with each other and the story itself.

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>>39014803
I hope someone makes this into an actual story.

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>>39016821
I would but I have enough of my plate.
Maybe a oneshot won't hurt

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>>39016860
I don't mind waiting, anon. Best to finish what you've got on your plate first and THEN work on what I hope gets made into a story.
Mio genuinely needs more stories and I don't think we've had one where she enters a relationship with (You) through abduction / rape.

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>>39016629
Hell yeah. Hags run the fantasy adventure romance option game, and never forget it.

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>>39007524
Zero. I've been playing too much vidya.

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>>39017103
I agree that this wonderful wolf needs more stories.

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>>39019603
>Tasty hag titties a single pull away from revealing
I hope this new outfit gets her lots of new art.

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>>39019634
>single pull away from revealing

That's a thirsty ass descriptor and I love it. When I eventually get to Mio in HJ and the other arc after that at some point which gets her into this outfit, I might just have to use that line.

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I too have sexual thoughts about the wolf hag.

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I think I'm partial to short hair hag in this dress if I had to choose.

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>>39019813
>>39019891
>The long hair look
Focus grouped to be effective against me. Mio, I kneel, please receive my semen!

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>>39015375
>Marine in ten years cooking for her husband and three children

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>>39020810
>leaving the nape of her neck exposed
Damn boomer pirate slut...trying to seduce me...marriage correction is needed!

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>>39021317
Oh no! Please, Anon, don't marry Marine and give her a satisfying ending to her life of piracy on the high seas with a man she loves who will give her a wonderful, loving family!

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>>39023237
MARINE, GO TO SLEEP

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>>38986319
Hags doing shameless egosa and discussing who has the horniest fans overseas.

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>>39019616
>serving as Reine's bodyguard/manservant
>have to carry her bags when she goes shopping
>have to help her prepare things for streams
>have to serve as her outlet for sexual relief when Kiara totally misses her flirting again

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>>39024083
>Drunk horny Reine demanding you finger her while she buries her face in a pillow and thinks about Kiara

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>>39024083
>>39024659
>Asks you to scissors like she'd do Kiara
>It's hard to align your dick in this position but you make it work
>You comfort her afterwards
>This scenario repeats itself because the indo princess can't bypass german autism with money
God I wish I could mindbreak her into being straight

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>>39023576
>tell Marine to go to bed and stop being horny
>she takes it as you aggressively flirting and bring forward with her

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>>39025492
>She gets more and more frustrated as time goes on
>goes from fingers and dildos, to reciprocating with blowjobs and paizuri, to anal, to vaginal, to full sex marathons
>Kiara eventually catches you two, and Reine is blindsided when Kiara asks if she can join in

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>>39025492
That LGD talk a few threads ago gave me this idea for a slower Reine straightening/mindbreak fic. The premise would basically be that (You), a fellow rich kid, were Reine's only friend growing up because her parents were distrustful of poors. Eventually growing up, she confides in you that she likes girls and you're entirely supportive, even being her wing man throughout school, though without much success. Your parents and hers get together and decide that the two of you should marry for optics and business relations purposes and after a sham marriage that the both of you don't take seriously, live together as more or less roommates. Reine's lack of success in her love life leads her to growing more depressed and touch-starved to the point where, after a particularly bad night in which she gets drunk and pretty harshly shut down, practically begs you to 'comfort' her.

You're reluctant, for obvious reasons, but eventually finger her mostly out of pity. During the fingerfucking you realize just how pure sex Reine is, and after she passes out from cumming so hard you go back to your room and jerk off with her juices still coating your hands. The next day she pretends like the night didn't happen until, a few weeks later, it the same scenario occurs again, this time with her grinding on your thigh as she kisses you and begs you not leave since you're the only friend she's ever had and the only person she feels truly close to. From that point on you begin to deliberately mess with her attempts at picking up girls, not that you need to try all that hard.

Despite your efforts though, Kiara comes into Reine's life and you begin to worry that despite Reine's pleading for you to stay with her forever, she might up and leave with Kiara when you see how well those two hit it off. It eventually culminates in Kiara asking you if she's actually been reading it right and that Reine's been flirting and is interested in her romantically. You tell her that Reine's actually just a bit sheltered, and that anything that may come across as flirting is her being clueless but trying to be nice, and likely wouldn't be all that interested if Kiara asked her out. Kiara begins to feel awkward about being 'just friends' with Reine so begins to quietly disconnect from her.

Reine breaks at his point, leading to her giving up on any attempts at romance and deciding that she's clearly better off spending the rest of her life with you. Wild raw sex happens and in the steamy afterglow you and Reine put the wedding rings you two nearly threw out back on, and resolve to live 'happily' ever after.

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>>39027087
Jesus, that is one hell of an outline, but I couldn't live with myself after sabotaging Reine so hard.

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I need 3-4 chuubas that fit the daughter trope and can be used in a Teaching Feeling context.

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>>39027464
Kobo, Aqua, mystery square

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>>39027087
I admire the detail of this outline, but your desire to take away this peafowls rug munching destiny from her only fuels me harder to give her the end she wanted all along.

May we both write it to be the best it can be.

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>>39027087
Fuck me that's a nasty ending. Got me feeling a little dirty just from reading it.

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>>39027087
Supremely based outline.

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>>39027464
Nene

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>>39027464
Roboco after getting her hard drive damaged

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>>39027464
Laplus

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>>39027464
Gura

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>>38986319
(You) have the special ability to [Become] a chuuba by cumming in them, leaving your previous body catatonic. Any chuuba you transfer into immediately grows a massive veiny cock which you can use to perpetuate the chain of fucking and vegetable-ing.

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>>39027620
>>39028182
>>39028210
>>39028226
>>39028327
The list of HoloDaughters could go on and on, so I'll narrow down the tropes I wish to cover and I'll need some feedback on what to go with

>Girl that is heartwarmingly stupid
Nenechi takes the spot, no contest
>Broken girl learning to love again, bonus points if kemonomimi
Watame's my pick
>Girl who is honest and tries her hardest
My guess is the duck, love the duck.
>Girl who is bratty and lazy but you can't hate
La+ or Shion

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>>39028721
>Girl who is bratty and lazy but you can't hate
Hm, I can hate La+ and Shion. The only one I can't hate is Ojou

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>>39028721
Gura fits most of those.

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>>38986319
Mori grooming a young Japanese women after she attends Moris concert.

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>>39028721
Are you gonna include all these girls or just one girl who fits all these traits the most?

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>>39029891
Multiple chuubas, 3 or 4

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>>39028877
>Gura
>Honest and tries her hardest
Do cumbuds really?

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>>39030185
ESL can't into reading comprehension.
There's a reason why I said most not all.

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>>39030215
>Gura
>Broken girl learning to love again
Most isn’t half dipshit.

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>>39027407
>>39027631
>>39027738
>>39027872
Yeah it's pretty brutal, but that level of emotional drama is something I always crave but can't really find

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>>39030294
>he doesnt know
Do your reps, retard-kun.

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>>39030358
You're right about that. Holy shit I love me some spicy drama.

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>>39030433
nta but why bother learning more about a chuuba who doesn't stream

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>>39030433
>I need child-like chuubas that fit certain descriptions for a fic.
>What’s that? This chuuba fits that description? Not really…
>Oh, only because of doxx shit that isn’t related to the character herself? Great! I’ll put that in my story!

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>>39030358
I'd only be into it if it turns out Reine is really, really into the sex and fucking loves it

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>>39030125
Well you already listed a pretty neat line up then. Just for laziness I rather pick Ayame or Laplus.

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>>39030358
That's why, while I don't agree with your goal, I respect your desire and work ethic. Can't have light without darkness, two sides of the same coin, and all that ying yang jazz.

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>>39030819
That kinda defeats the point of the drama no?

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>>39030906
Could still work if she's into it in a sort of broken, "use this worthless dyke whore" sort of way

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>>39030997
>Reine giving into to her biological processes overshadowing her disgust
Now we're talking.

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>>39030762
Not referring to doxxshit. I'm referring to Gura being rejected by Ame which you would know if you watched streams. No cure for the dumb it seems.

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>>39031277
>Broken girl learning to love again
>Gura being rejected by Ame

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>>39031339
Thanks for agreeing with me.

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>>39031166
>It gets to the point where she gaslights herself so hard that her disgust fades altogether and she fully believes that she's a useless bitch only good for dumping semen into

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>>39031166
>It gets to the point where she gaslights herself so hard that her disgust fades altogether and she fully believes that she's a useless bitch only good for dumping semen into and fucking loves every second of getting used like the cheap whore she is

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i think reading this thread's recent posts is actually lowering my IQ

i genuinely hope and pray that all EN watchers here get cancer and die in excruciating pain, you shit up everything you touch

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>>39031570
The greentext posts have been more and more annoying that’s for sure, but I don’t think it’s solely on EN watchers.

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>>39031570
>>>/jp/

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>>39031570
Why do you care? talk about jps then and stop being a retard just because you got called out

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>>39030358
I gotta wonder how (You) are potrayed in the fic. Are you a heartless bastard only in it for your own gain or do you know what you're is fucked up and semi-reluctant?

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>>39031570
Based. Chumpedos especially.

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>>39031570
>i think reading this thread's recent posts is actually lowering my IQ
What’s different? Im being honest here. As far as I can tell, it’s the same shit as every thread. Same few fags just overly discussing something to death for hours on end.

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>>39031277
>Gura being rejected by Ame
Lmao, then my point >>39030294 still stands. Fucking hell, and you call me a retard. That’s hilarious.

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>>39027464
> Teaching Feeling
Was doing a fic like that with Ayame but dropped it 2k words in cause it was too similar and directionless

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>>39032267
Okay, and? What does that have to do with anything?

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>>39031277
>Gura being rejected by Ame makes her a “broken girl learning to love again”
/u/schizos genuinely need to fucking die. Especially EN ones.

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>>39032267
Oh, shame. Maybe you'll find new inspiration for it some day.

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>>39031724
More towards the latter than the former definitely. Is it heartless and genuinely fucked up to screw with Reine's self-worth, sexuality, and chances at true happiness all for her to stay with (You)? Absolutely. Are you gonna do it anyway and try and make her happy after it's all over and you get what you want/need, and just kinda hope she never finds out? Absolutely.

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>>39032367
Nah. It's a internal thing. I've always hated those "it's this story but the twist is that it's with chuubas" trope this thread does. So surprise surprise, when I tried doing it myself, I also hated it for the exact reasons I hate it when other people do it. That WIP is going to be locked up till the end of time

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>>39032267
did you manage to work on any other fics since?

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>>39032340
EN lives rent free in your head lol

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>>39032340
You sure it’s /u/schizos and not just fags here not understanding human emotions?

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>>39031277
DYRBI

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>>39032618
>>39027087
This sounds like an absolutely fucked up romance fic, I hope you can pull this off because a slow-burn Reine LGD corruption like this sounds perfect.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39031570
Reading this thread has reinforced my hatred for cumpedos, I had almost forgotten about it.

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>>39034476
could you stop same fagging just to bring your retarded rant back up, no one cares

[Anonymous No.]

How do you start writing? Got any tips?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034905
Get an idea, open up a word processor, and start writing.
There's a lot more to it but starting to write and sticking to it is always the hardest part.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034905
Think about something you wanna write and write. Once you start moving your hands, you'll start thinking more about it and how you want it to be. Get started is usually the hardest part for most people. Also don't obsess over the finer details just yet, that can be saved for editing. Just get what you're thinking down.

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>>39034905
You write.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034541
>samefagging
I don’t hate all ENs though, some are good. EN discussion in this thread is fine, I just hate Gura fans.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034905
It helps me when I think of what I want this chapter or even short story to accomplish, what's the end state of the focused characters. From there I figure out how things start and work my way up. From there its like others said already, just get those hands moving the words will surely come out.

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>>39034905
Write about something you like, anything really.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034905
Depends on what you're writing

[Anonymous No.]

>>39034905
Are you after tips for prose? Ideas? Basic inspiration?

[Anonymous No.]

How do you start writing? Got any tips?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39037579
Well, the best place you'll find writing tips is through the neck of a tight noose. Don't forget to kick away the chair.

[Anonymous No.]

>>38986319
Kronii abusing her powers to be a prostitute on the side

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>>39037579
Find an idea you wanna do, not just one you want to see, and stick to it. Don't worry about trying to make it flawless and perfect the first time cause it never will be, even if you feel like it's the peak of your writing ability you'll be surprised at how much you can grow fic to fic.

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>>39032657
What? Of course. What kind of question is that?

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>>39037726
Get an idea, open up a word processor, and start writing.
There's a lot more to it but starting to write and sticking to it is always the hardest part.

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>>39038270
It's easier just to give up. Nothing you produce will turn heads, anyway. At best, you'll get maybe 1 person who enjoyed your story and a couple of pity (You)s, and even that singular treasured individual will dislike your next offering and tell you you've lost your spark. Just don't try in the first place.

[Anonymous No.]

What are you working on anons?

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>>39038647
Working on a massive shit. Typing this out as I strain. Wish me luck bros, it's super painful and I might get hemorrhoids.

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>>39038647
Still slowly but surely working on the sequel to Yuzuki Veterinary Services.
Had an idea for a scene toward the end, but I'm not sure if I want to make it a sort of epilogue or save it for a possible third, final chapter. Problem is I don't have much of an idea for one, other than "Towa and Choco get fucked by hellhounds in a public park".

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>>39038432
Speaking from experience?

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>>39037579
Think about something you wanna write and write. Once you start moving your hands, you'll start thinking more about it and how you want it to be. Get started is usually the hardest part for most people. Also don't obsess over the finer details just yet, that can be saved for editing. Just get what you're thinking down.

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>>39038647
Sent my pc to the tech support to get it built so i can finally get my upgrade after a year of hate, nerves and a fucking fried microprocessor
But when it comes back its either to keep working on the second part of Daddy's girl or a small piece about being Bae's older brother (non-sexually)

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>>39038647
I'm unsure what to work on, so I'm writing short stories just to keep things flowing.

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>>39039431
I've gotchu.
>They take their dogs to the park. It's a spectacle in and of itself because of the sheer number of hulking beasts in tow.
>At the park, they immediately take all of their clothes off, wasting no time tending to their dogs.
>Their behavior is appalling, the other denizens of the park are aghast with shock, but they don't dare look away.
>One of the onlookers loses control of their animal, and then another.
You can figure out the rest.

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>>39039431
That sounds like a pretty good epilogue

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>>39041556
Hm. I'll consider it, maybe I could work it out into a full third chapter. I think in order to make it work I'd have to have Towa and Lui play around with each other while being fucked, not much else still left in the ways of variety in dogfucking positions.
>>39041753
The thing is, as an epilogue I wasn't planning to write out the whole scene. It was more just gonna be "haha we're all gonna fuck in the park now" and then chapter end.

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>>39041992
Towa and CHOCO, fuck.
Been thinking about birb hips.

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>>39038647
Been a slow week. 3400 words, but I got the first draft of (one of several) segments done. Only like...25000 words more.

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>>39038647
Been on a business trip and working on a little something after hours. Decided to hit the hotel bar for a drink and like a retard I ordered the espresso martini not really realizing it's 8 o'clock so I guess we're writing plenty of fox fucking tonight.

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>>39038647
Mentally preparing myself to shatter a chuuba's heart.

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Anon who wrote Building Block Doll, what are you working on now?

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>>39045170
I'm sorry Anon but his last update he announced he's become obsessed with AI chatbots and hadn't been writing much of anything

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>>39045254
That's a shame. I hope he finds happiness with his AI Fauna.

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>>39045254
>he's become obsessed with AI chatbots
Not that stupid shit. I see that garbage on other boards. Fucking hell, how retarded do you have to be to buy into that bullshit.

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>>39045802
You don't understand, anon. This sequential neural network is totally my real girlfriend. "She" is 100% real and sentient. You wouldn't get it.
It's not just a multi-dimensional probabilistic function approximator. It's not!

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>>39045254
didn't he just release an update a few days ago?

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Is it just me or does Reine seem to have a disproportionately high amount of degenerate fetish fics/prompts? What is it about this damn sexy peafowl that inspires such passion?

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>>39047394
The fact that she can't score.

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>>39045802
Anon. Anon... Anon Anon Anon.

Where is the line drawn? People can be made to cry or laugh to movies, they can cry over someone stepping on an ant. They can see a face on a rock and begin to care for it. They can treat a pet as a family member, and mourn for it. Where. Is. The. Line.

The correct answer is there's no line. People are different, and what is enough for them is also different. You do realize the hobby you're part of also is "that stupid shit" to most people of the world, right?

I'm not even into the AI chatbots, I tried them and after a couple minutes they lost their fun. But what really annoys me is people saying stuff like that, as if anyone has the right answer on what's retarded and what's not.

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>>39047765
Nobody cares Pekofag

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>>39047765
No, you’re just a retard.

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>>39047765
>People can be made to cry or laugh to movies,
That’s normal
>they can cry over someone stepping on an ant.
That’s not normal
>They can see a face on a rock and begin to care for it.
That not normal
>They can treat a pet as a family member, and mourn for it.
That’s normal.
You have no point to argue, stupid AI shit is shit and a passing fad.

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>>39048497
Jokes on you, I got emotionally attached to the face on Mars then was devastated when it was revealed to be an optical illusion.

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>>39048497
Alright, entertain me. Why is one normal and the other not?

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AIFag trite doesn't even deserve to be discussed here, fuck off with this.

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>>39048497
Nigger who died and made you the authority on what is and isn't normal? And what made you think that a vtuber fanfiction thread is the place to soapbox about it?

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>>39045170
He's pretty much just writing First Train and Kafka chapters alongside that one Mel fic about her getting sexually harrased by A-chan.
Well you know before his ai obsession

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>>39049197
> These darn weightless internet letters don't belong in our loving mail sending community

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>>39038647
I'm thinking about writing fics about the nijimales and putting hidden messages in them. Although, I'd only post those stories on my ao3 so this post is sort of pointless.

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>>39047765
You could have worded this in a few sentences.

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>>39049985
I could've made your mother cum in 2 seconds. But waiting till your father got home drove the message in further. That your father is a cuck, and that your momma is a hoe

You see my point?

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>>39038647
Somehow I started with chapter 14 of HJ with more words in half a day than I was able to do in 2 days when I was trying to start 13. Writing be whack sometimes.

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>>39050101
I'm sorry, that was rude to your family. I should've chosen a better example

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>>39049782
>putting hidden messages in them
What like that thing where you make the first letter of every paragraph spell out a word?
Or do you mean something more hidden than that ala an ARG?

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>>39049782
Then why post it.

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>>39049985
Writing is about taking whatever you actually want to say and obscuring it with as much tangentially-related symbolism and descriptive language as you can whilst still being entertaining.

You stupid nigger. Slavery should have never been abolished.

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>>39051501
Sounds like you need to be more concise.

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>>39049985
He's ESL so he thinks that being overly flowery and verbose makes him sound intelligent

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>>39051795
Sounds more like you've never written a single word out of creativity beyond your high school English class.

Assuming you aren't a dirty brown SEAmonkey and actually HAD a high school English class. Enjoy that benefit of the doubt whilst it lasts.

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>>39038647
Did some editing to a chapter and ended up with like an extra thousand words somehow.
I have all of next week to finish up this Aqua fic.

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>>39051971
Why be verbose with something that only needs a few words explaining? Especially on 4chan of all places.

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>>39051062
Just dumb jokes. I want to see what'll fly over their heads and what won't.
>>39051971
Brevity is the soul of wit.

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>>39052359
Why the fuck are you even here? Good fucking God, talking to you is going to give me an aneurysm. You're so stupid you're emanating your own intellectual gravitational pull and I feel like more of my brain cells are being pulled into your event horizon the more I try to make sense of the bullshit you're peddling. This is your last (You).

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>>39052424
>Brevity is the soul of wit
Up to a point. Everything in moderation - you're still trying to tell a story, after all.

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>>39052615
All that when you could have just said that Anon was a retard/idiot.

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>>39052892
Doesn't accurately convey the extent of how egregiously irritating I find him.

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>>39052758
Are you telling me 'I got a story for you guys' isn't the best fic in the archive?

[Anonymous No.]

https://youtu.be/k0qmkQGqpM8

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>>39053006
Hmm... you've got a point. I concede - I can only aspire to produce such a compelling work as that.

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>>39053087
NTA but programming and writing are two very different things anon

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>>39053003
>Doesn't accurately convey the extent of how egregiously irritating I find him.
Means nothing to us. If you want people to suck your dick for faux intelligence, go to reddit.

[Anonymous No.]

When will you guys learn that AI tards will keep shitting the thread the more attention you give them? Just wait until their power goes off and they kill themselves because their toaster "lost her soul"

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>>39054299
AI-generated fics have been posted here and archived, therefore in the context of writing, AI is explicitly allowed.
If you don't like that, then whinge at AA for giving them a home. Otherwise, fuck off.

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>>39054299
The issue is that they reply to themselves.

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>>39054483
That has nothing to do with shilling chatbots or spending 100 posts arguing that they’re human and therefore deserve human rights.

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>>39054483
>AI-generated fics have been posted here and archived
Which stories in the archive are AI generated?

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>>39054849
NTA, but "Womp Womp" literally has the tag.

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>>39054849
The one I'm thinking of had Shylily in it. I'm 90% sure there was another one but I don't remember the name or characters. Someone fooling around with kobold AI

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>>39054969
Just the one? I thought it was fics, plural.

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>>39055079
Technically the last two First Train and Kafka chapters were inspired by the Author's experience with using character ai chatbots, though that's a bit of an edge case.
Closest thing that's ai- assisted is that one Sora greentext that used an ai generated Sora image.

[Anonymous No.]

I want to write a story about a battle of brats, between lamy and kuroe. could something like them going at it in an arcade work?

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>>39055863
Yes

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>>39055863
I'd rather them go at it in my bedroom. With me. If you see what I'm saying.

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>>39056516
>If you see what I'm saying.
No, because why would anyone include you in anything?

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>>39056915
You sound buttmad. What's eating you?

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>>39005196
I don't know what you were expecting -- the stomach is simply not designed to stretch to twice its expected capacity. Anything else would have been unrealistic.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39056516
>Simple comedic fic about friends just hanging out
>Let’s turn it into another generic poorly made smut fic
Why?

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>>39057205
Lol smut works are the best stories here anti-chama

[Anonymous No.]

>>39056516
You want futa Lamy and futa Chloe to spitroast you and battle to see if they can touch tips inside of you? That's what you want?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39057205
Coomers. They’re a disgusting lot.

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>>38991480
>>39012917
Combine the two. Seeing a lone sapling wandering around, a gang of hags in a white van lure the boy under the premise they can help

[Anonymous No.]

>>39057547
>H-hello? I-I'm looking for my mommy?
>*Predatory laughter from the hags*
>P-PLEASE!! I NEED MY MOMMY!!

[Anonymous No.]

>>39057205
people are horny. I want to make a story of lamy being a brat, and anon wants lamy to strip down and shove her nipples inside his mouth,

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>>39057697
>We're your mommies now HAHAHAA

[Anonymous No.]

>>39057767
>Lamy is forced to breastfeed you
>as punishment

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>>39057697
>Another sapling for the harem

[Anonymous No.]

>>39057781
>>39057977
>Fauna paid them to gangrape (You)

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>>39058148
This isn't saying that I don't want to see this but the fic "A Sapling's Big Adventure!!!" used this concept. Still, It would be hot to see this portrayed as smut

[Anonymous No.]

So is the sapling thing going to be a thing now? Have we fallen that low?

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>>39058712
Anon we started at reader insert fanfiction, we can only go up at this point.

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>>39058712
There's a guy who jerks off to bugs.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39058964
Moving up from reader insert fanficiton to reader insert fanfiction! OH YEAH /WG/! WE'RE EVOLVING!

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>>39058712
I wouldn’t find it an issue if they just kept it an a minimum.

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>>39059370
To girls turning into seedbeds, actually. Bugs are just a secondary aspect.

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>>39058964
I don't self-insert.

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>>39059940
'We' the thread, anon.
Reading Comprehension reps.

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>>39060089
Who the fuck made you the arbiter of the thread, chud? I don't self-insert either.

[Anonymous No.]

Is this place the only writing general in the entire site?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060246
There's one in /lit/ as well

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>>39060276
That one doesn't write, though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060483
Neither does this one, so what’s your point.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060176
> we started at reader insert fanfiction,
Reading Comprehension reps.
>>39060246
Some of the /trash/ fetish threads try and play host to their own writefagging

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060685
You're a retard.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060276
>>39060685
Neither seems to be about general fanfiction writefagging, damn. I just wanted to ask a quick question about commenting on ao3 and whether it's good etiquette to explicitly ask for an update (after some praise) for a fic that's haven't been touched for a year

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
That's perfectly fine but don't expect a reply from the author, it'll probably sit and stagnate

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
>for a fic that's haven't been touched for a year
Just move on at this point.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
Honestly while I do think the author might appreciate the compliment, chances are that the author has abandoned that project at this point barring it getting revived unexpectedly.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39061047
>>39061143
>>39061238
Fully expect that to be the case, but it shouldn't hurt to try. I just don't want to come off as demanding since it's a really old fic, y'know?
Thanks for the replies guys

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>>39059483
my b

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>>39061319
>I just don't want to come off as demanding since it's a really old fic, y'know?
Then don't do it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
That fic is good as dead.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
>Neither seems to be about general fanfiction writefagging
Yeah, no shit, most people keep that shit under wraps for reasons. Unless you go to forums like spacebattles.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39060973
>Neither seems to be about general fanfiction writefagging
The /lit/ does have people posting on their own websites, and on some site called royal road, just try asking them to be sure.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39058712
Saplings are fucking weird man. I can’t tell if they’re being serious or just larping. And it scares me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064123
They're mentally ill is what they are.

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>>39054299
God, I can’t even visit /lit/ anymore since the ai tards keep flooding that board with spam about that shit. Literally who cares. People don’t need seven or nine threads of some chat ai.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064123
>>39064199
Really? Weird? Mentally ill? You rally call someone having a full blown mental breakdown because he misses his mommy those terrible names?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064687
Yes, he's not five

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064123
The imissfauna rp threads are generally just larping about exxagerated sapling behaviour.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064961
With the shit they draw? I doubt it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064961
How do you know they're RP though?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064687
>You rally
>Rally
Learn English, my guy before typing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39053087
I don't understand what you're implying here. What does Programming have to do with anything?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39065890
Nothing. He’s a retard that thought he was making a point.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064687
>You rally call someone having a full blown mental breakdown because he misses his mommy those terrible names?
Unless its a toddler or a lost child, yes. Healthy adults don't cry about their mommies unless under special circumstances

[Anonymous No.]

>>39053087
I miss him bros.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066138
Who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39065890
Think he was trying to shit on that one guy who argued in favour of more descriptive writing, but posting a vid comparing programming to writing was just dumb as fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066056
>>39066191
Thanks. I knew he was trying to prove a point but didn't know what.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066191
>argued in favour of more descriptive writing
He was arguing more for purple writing than descriptive writing

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066138
Why'd he have to be on the train tracks that day bros...

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066446
Because he was homeless?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066696
Classic glownigger deflection do not interact further

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066138
Yeah, me too.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066940
>lost him and Kaoru
We'll never get another crossdressing homo, will we?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067154
Who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066446
My hopium is that he didn't commit suicide and he was having a schizo episode.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067528
How is that any better?

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067653
Nigga all you've been doing is asking fucking questions go do some fucking research or something

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067528
Yeah, that won’t change the fact that he died.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067653
Committing suicide dooms your soul to Hell for all eternity.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067838
Not going to comment on that one.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39067838
Don’t believe in that fantasy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>38986319
tooth brushing fetish fic

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068405
a good onion is a clean onion

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068624
speaking of, i wonder how that miyuki bad end is(n't) coming along

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068674
>miyuki bad end is(n't) coming along
Just drop it already.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068823
kill yourself

[Anonymous No.]

>>39066241
No problem. Just tired of idiots trying to make idiot points.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068405
I can see that being comedic.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39064406
They’re the same on /sci/.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39055863
Could be cute and I always like fluff, I hope you write it, anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>38986251
Fuck, Amelia is so cute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39054299
Agreed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39068674
I'm pretty sure at this point the only way we're getting Miyuki Bad End is someone doing a shitpost that has the the word AV mean something else entirely.

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>39069874

[Anonymous No.]

>>39070028
Angry Video Game Nerd

[Anonymous No.]

>>39070028
Jumping Antlion Vore

[Anonymous No.]

FATTO CATTO RAPE

[Anonymous No.]

>>39072492
Too fat

[Anonymous No.]

>>39072492
Need bigger tits

[Anonymous No.]

>>39072492
why is she so fat?

[Anonymous No.]

FATTO FLARU RAPE

[Anonymous No.]

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[Anonymous No.]

>>39072715
Saved

[Anonymous No.]

>>39072715
IS THAT A NIPPLE oh wait no it isn't, proceed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>39073078
Love it when the pussy lips are visible.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>39073567
Holy fuck

[Anonymous No.]

Last for Miosha!