/wg/ - Writing General - Take your meds Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

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>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>38678655

[Anonymous No.]

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

Curious Tenshi: Tags: NSFW, Kanata, foreskin play, smell, long:>>38680137

ඞ: Tags: SFW, Mumei:>>38732505

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) reenacting the events of Rance Quest with hololive:>>38687470

Mio transforms magical-girl style into her queen-of-hearts outfit to kick your ass.:>>38689787

vanilla sex with your childhood friend You Kururu:>>38690291

You start blackmailing and corrupting Mori into a seiso pastel bimbo:>>38695855

Nene scaring Pekora by bringing over her pet beetles only to start crying when Jill eats them:>>38703157

Against your parents wishes because there's been reports of rape near the high school you go to you decide to take a shortcut home completely unaware that there's a extremely horny wolf stalking you with naughty thoughts running through her mind.:>>38703923

A chuuba makes a Vodoo doll of (you) and constantly molests it:>>38705665

Reine pulls a knife on Mori and starts threatening her to stay away from Kiara until she realises Mori’s panties are drenched and having a knife pulled on her made Mori soaking wet.:>>38720737

Taking Fauna out on a date in her new outfit (no mommy shit).:>>38724179

More chuubas nursing you back to health after getting sick/injured:>>38740355

Botan is adamant about enforcing her sleeping habits with (You):>>38740932

Bae has figured out a work around to sleep with a guy in the cuckshed with her parents none the wiser, or even if they did find out one was there how they wouldn't care. Only problem would be if they found out what was actually going on the reaction would probably be worse than just bringing any random guy for sex.:>>38742392

Storming the U.S. capitol with Pippa:>>38750373

[Anonymous No.]

What are you working on anons?

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>>38755281
shionamongus.jpeg

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>>38756009
Sorry I only have it as a png.

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>>38756972
Thanks, I somehow never saved that image until now.

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>>38755484
NFS

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>>38755484
A story I probably should rewrite

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>>38755281
>>38680137
The first section is really fucking rough. I take it that was your first section written? Because it's a rough start for the rest of the fic.
As for your narration, it reads really weird. Which combined with the referring to Anon as you in second person thing really makes reading the story a bit of slog since it doesn't really get a good flow going at the start since it's either a second person sentence or a weird feeling action sentence popping up that takes me out of the fic.
You really need to have stuck to just refering to Anon with third person pronouns rather than second person, it takes me out of it way too much given that the fic is ostensibly written in first person. Which I think is part of the reason this fic was such a slog to get to through, since you can write good enough prose that flows forward, it's just that it stumbles so hard that with this aspect that I had to read this fic in small bites since I inevitably have to put it down for a bit.
Other than that... your dialogue is pretty good. At least when it's not Anon and Kanata, for some reason there dialogue is is weirdly stilted in some places.
I gave up at around the sex scene the awkwardness of the prose just made reading this a fucking chore. Genuine question. The last line says this is a commisioned work. How the hell did that guy greenlight the weird 2nd person pronoun use? Is this one of those things were the 'actual' version sent to him had (His actual IRL Name) alongside the he/him or did he actually just greenlight this as is?

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If i write a fic set in a specific time period should i give a brief explanation about said time period for those who don't know much about history or just leave it be

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>>38759617
Show don't tell. Just leave it be and let the reader get a sense for the time and setting through the story itself.

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>>38759760
even if some events that happened on the time period are important to understand the fic?

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>>38759617
Show don't tell is generally the way you show that something is in a certain time period, as the alternative of 'just shove it in their face that it's the 1800s' is going to turn off readers more than interest them.
>>38759979
Anon, show the event, or if it's after that event show the aftereffects of the event on the time and people.
It's better to have it appear organic too, you can't just have an infodump shoved in the reader's face and hope it works.

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>>38759979
Just have characters mention that important event in passing or something. That combined with you showing off the surroundings and living conditions would give the reader a good idea of when the story is set.

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>>38755484
I liked the old format with a bonus question better.

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>>38750957
this feels like all of your knowledge from Baelz comes from the catalog, considering even her fanbase name is wrong, it just makes it feel plastic and kinda mean spirited
also the OC, even for a slimy ojisan, its a bit too much, and its name its fucking cringe
The writing is good, its the contents for me

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Wake

[Anonymous No.]

Post your wordcounts,alongside a bit of text behind it to be a tease.

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>>38763996
fuck it why not?

I'm hoping I can wrap this one up for proof reading and editing tomorrow or the day after. I might immediately try to jump into the next part after, it should be a fun time.

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>>38763996
Slow progress is still progress

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Fauna is literally made for NTR

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>>38764998
What do you mean? Look at this nerd.

[Anonymous No.]

A question for the thread. What are some 'generic' smut scenarios you think might fit well with a certain chuuba?
(i.e stuff like mind control apps, bimbofication corruption, monster rape, etc)
Inspired by that discussion last thread about Mori bimbofication.

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>>38764998
There are certain chuubas that are built for NTR, that's true, but that's because they're so pure and cute that you just get the primal urge to see her break down and cry
Look at pic related.

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>>38765124
Pet play with botan (or really any sub kemonomimi)

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>>38765228
Nice art, but she should have opened her tit zippers as well

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>>38765228
I want to lick Lui's feet

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>>38765303
What 'level' of pet play feels right?
Because with Kemonomimi chuubas it almost feels right for it to go harder than conventional 'consensual' pet play due to them being presented as a different fantasy race from humans.
Unrelated, but this reminded me of a couple of kemonomimi prompts from a while back. The one stuck in my head being the one about Nene being (You)r pet/slave that you share the bed with nonsexually and getting caught in the middle of the kemonomimi revolution.

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>>38764947
... What is this.

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>>38765303
Huh, that seems like a very obvious idea and yet there's no pet play yet.

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>>38765866
Cover High

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>>38751942
>>38761853
>her fanbase name is wrong
I was under the impression that it was spelled Baerat but pronounced Brat.
Regarding the name, Midas is very obviously not his real name.
>“Mister… Mek… Malf… Mitl…”
It would be harder to believe someone super high up doesn't ever get named. In any case, the choice was deliberate and will be explained eventually.
>>38752200
>your character said a bad thing therefore that must be what you think
This was something I expected.
That said, I'm going to call you a speedreader because he says upfront that it's about the money.

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>>38766053
Weird how the only pet play fic we've gotten is a iofi one.

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>>38763996
super slow progress. Maybe I can get something done during the holidays. Maybe

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>>38765754
It could be extreme. I just imagined it being as demeaning as possible.
I suppose as long as it doesn't turn into a slavery dynamic but stays as a caretaker dynamic it'll be good.

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>>38767085
I'm guessing this is for a new series/long one-shot?

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>>38765355
Get in line

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>>38766173
>more Cover High
If I could kiss you through the internet right now, I would no homo

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>>38766451
Other chuubas would definitely be more fitting thematically, yeah. The prompt that inspired me to write Extrapedestrial was by an Ioforia, and I would have felt bad if I used the inspiration but took out their oshi and replaced them with someone else.

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>>38765228
Which chuuba would be the most delightful to break her heart?
My money is on pic related

[Anonymous No.]

What are some good series I can binge read?
I'm down for anything

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>>38767352
yeah a new series I've been meaning to write, only that I haven't been writing.

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>>38767704
Nah, it's gotta be a chuuba who's by all accounts worse than Lui. Really twist the knife and make her wonder whats wrong with herself that somebody would cheat on her with a girl who seems inferior im every way.

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>>38767902
I've always hated people who say shit like "Ha, look who they cheated on me with!"
I need a chuuba that would just take the pain to herself
SO SHE'S PERFECT FOR IT

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>>38767804
If you want series that are completed, Our Cures or Menhera Wrangler.
For ones that are still in-progress, I'd recommend Holofantasy, First Summer Memories, Cover High, Holocalypse, and HoloJourneys.

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>>38768017
>Lui gets wine drunk and sends an anonymous superchat to Watame crying over being cucked and makes Watame cry too

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>>38767804
I was gonna suggest any series with botan in it, but there's a lot so that doesn't help. Also I'm not exactly impartial so...

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>>38763996
I haven't even gotten to any real combat yet, so I figure this is likely gonna be as long as the last one

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>>38765754
For me, petplay and kemonomimi should behave like race-roleplay. Its such a degrading yet primal fetish for them that the sole idea of owning a collar for this type of play makes them antsy.
I also dont think its hotter in the lighter side, like calling them good girl and mentioning breeding or shit like that without going full on "you have no rights"
Again, just my 2 cents

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>>38732505
I thought it was funny, but it doesn't go far enough before going for the low hanging fruit. Alternatively, the fruit you are going for isn't low-hanging enough to really cross the line twice, eg Iofi should call Mumei an infidel for rejecting her suggestion before she hangs up.
>“An absolutely pathetic height for a guy. That’s how short.”
>“So, 5’11?”
>“Shorter.”
>“...5’10?”
>“Shooorter.”
>Mumei winced, “...5’8...?”
>“Even shorter than that. Try to work with me here, if you naru my hodo.”
>Mumei grimaced. “Can that even be called a man?”
>“Well, yeah. Short kings do exist. Um, I’m looking for one around Gura’s height.”
Mori should also offer more brooches if she has a binderful. The joke would be that all of them are extremely similar, or something of the sort because the central idea is riffing on the horrific suggestions that other people might give.

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>>38765754
I like petplay that goes hard on the discipline and the unequal power dynamic, but it should stay or at least become consensual - even if only because the kemonomimis are naturally submissive and pet-like. I don't like reading about unhappy pets.

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>>38755177
Hot, hot summer.

Anon cuddles his gf, Botan in a hot summer day.

Short little piece of lewd fluff I felt like writing.

https://rentry.org/4oeof

Tags: Shishiro Botan, fluff, slight NSFW, slightly /ag/

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>>38767691
This except full homo

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>>38765754
>>38755212
>getting caught in the middle of the kemonomimi revolution
Damn, that makes for an interesting concept, actually.
>(You) are an average Joe, living with your kemonomimi pet wife.
>Society sees the kemonomimi race as inferior and thus uses them as slaves in all aspects of life.
>(You) never cared about that, instead treating your "slave" as the love of your life that she is.
>Enter the kemonomimi revolution - humans are now free game, hunted like prey.
>Meanwhile, your pet wife struggles to convince her brethren that you are not a danger to the cause
>In the end, the only option to ensure your safety might be to claim you as her pet human.

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>>38771082
I would be lying if I said I didn't wanna see what'd happen if anon just booked it. Surprisingly cute though.
>The lovers returned kisses back and forth
Odd perspective shift.

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Currently on the ropes about writing a zombie apoc fic along the lines of Project Zomboid. That got me thinking though, how will your oshi fare in such a scenario?

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>>38771713
This, and you enjoy being her pet because you're kinky like that.

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>>38771082
While I agree with the other Anon about the odd perspective shift line, I want to fuck this sweaty fat cat in bed more than you know.

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Lui Booty Bump

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>>38774262
She'd either be surprisingly handy or die straight away. No inbetween.

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>>38776416
That just looks severely uncomfortable. I mean, okay, yeah, I wanna grind against that ass until I cum and watch it slide off her butt and she says something a little demeaning, but still.
>>38764947
Hell yeah. How long do you think it'll be?

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>>38776551
You're right, ban pants for all hags!

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>>38774262
She’d laugh at the whole situation and in the zombie’s faces then get killed.

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>>38776416
>>38776854
oh god, these lui pics are triggering something in me fierce

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>>38778308
I enjoy that there is no shortage of thirsty and dominant lewds of most of HoloX. It's pretty easy to find inspirational images that way.

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>>38778578
>Fear of needles
>But also strong, direct contact and aggressive stripping of clothing to prepare for what comes after
This is a cocktail I could get hooked on.

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>>38778669
>forces you to drink something that will make erections last longer than 4 hours
>so what if your cum is pink now? Sounds like a positive side effect

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>>38779002
>get drugged by Koyori
>turns you into a horny beast and attacks her
>you cum pink which behaves like an aphrodisiac for her causing her to become just as horny
>24 hours of nonstop mating
>you secure the future oh HoloX's army

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>>38778308
Lui triggers the Sex with my wife whom I love neurons

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>>38778578
I need Koyori to rape me NOW.

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>>38779203
Lui's 5d chess plan centered around 1 D is terrifying, horrific even.

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>>38779203
>You will never wrestle a hormono crazed Koyo-chan trying to outrape each other.
FUCK

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>>38779864
>trying to outrape each other

I think you just gave me the perfect idea of how to swing potential Koyori SEX later.

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>>38755281
>>38765303
>>38765754
>your friend asks you if they can ship a package to your house since its closer and cheaper. You tell him to just mail it to the agency, its gonna cost next to nothing there.
>the package comes when you are spending time with Mio (Like a good manager should), you tell your homie you are gonna open it to check if everything is in order. Mio looks over your shoulder, curious, before freaking out
>What the fuck.png
>Whats the problem? Its just a bunch of dog clothes, chewing toys, some treats and
>a dog collar?
>Mio looks utterly nervous, as you take of the collar from the box
>Ask her whats the problem. She just tells you its a sensitive theme for kemonos
>Two days later, after your friend picked up the stuff, Mio is still weird around you
>Decide to investigate. Get exposed to a new fetish
>Every single almond in your body is activated
>You carefully prepare yourself, make sure Mio has calmed down before striking
>''Miosha... you are good with pets right? could you come help me pick something for my friend's pet?''
>Mio is oblivious to the truth,thinking its a date with her beloved manager you take her to a mall to get some dog toys
>You suggest a walk, down a nice street
>Until you reach a very obvious shop, that sells goods for kemonos
>The jig is up, she looks mortified yet somehow aroused at the same time
>Ask her if she can help you choose a very special collar
>she cant even speak
>you tell her to wait outside if she's nervous. You go in as the bell from the door rings
>a few moments later, the bell rings again, and a Sweaty and almost hyperventilating Mio is behind you
>you gently take her hand and guide her down the aisle
>''What do you think? i dont want the poor thing to choke, but a loose one will definitely look bad yknow? it has to wear it everyday after all''
>she just mumbles through every single question you ask, her face is flushed and her tail cant stop waging in all directions, something she's triying to subtly stop with her hands
>you keep peltering her defenses, keep pressing. Soft enough to weaken but not hard enough to make her run away
>Until it happens, as you are showing her another collar, her eyes snap to one in the shelves before snapping back to you. A little too fast
>You can hear her holding her breath as you pick the Black collar from the shelve and toy with it a bit
>''This one looks great! what do you think?'' She mumbles again, before you take a step in her direction
>''It even has a place to hang a tag'' you take another step, your pants suffering to keep your erection in check, she looks at you with a terrified yet pleading look
>You step in front of her and tell her that this is the last chance, that she can turn around and forget this happened
>She stays there
>You gently put the collar in her neck, she's vibrating, her face red and her entire body emitting body heat
>CLICK!
>You come closer, your erection rubbing against her stomach
>''There is a love hotel down the street'' you whisper
>She whimpers
>Fuck
>You pay for the collar and a tag with shaking hands, Mio barely keeping her hands to herself
>you drag her as fast as you can out of the shop and into the alley, forget the love hotel
>The next day, in the office, you both experience a walk of shame
>You, full of kiss and bite marks, not to mention the multiple scratches you sport all over your body
>Mio, somehow proud despite looking red like a tomato, sitting on her desk with her new collar and Tag

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>>38780283
so what‘s the lore behind putting a collar on a kemono in this world? Are you now her owner? Her husband? Is she just tamed and available for human use?
Also,
hot.

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>>38781356
seems more like a kink if anything in this case. A kink that more or less puts you in SOME form of a relationship.

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>>38769814
Damn, I hadn't even thought about Iofi calling Mumei an infidel or that Mori brooch idea. Thanks for the feedback and for reading.

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>>38759476
Actually, the commissioner was the one who requested the fic be made in this way, and to them, it was perfect. The version you're seeing here is the version they asked and received. That's why it's such a shame that everyone in here couldn't get through reading this because of the perspective, but everyone has their own tastes I suppose.

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>>38781356
I feel like its a point inbetween her husband and a kink.
Like, it implies a level of ownership and trust over them, but it has to be consensual

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Can't believe I missed the hagposting.

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>>38755212
as sort of an extension to the NTS Lui cuck fic except Lui takes (You)--her husband out on a date and shortly after she leads you to a love hotel where you and Lui have vanilla sex.

She cuddles you, kisses you, and reminds you how much she loves you and only sleeps with other guys because you like it.

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>>38782257
Well I guess it's their money.
For what it's worth your first person prose is pretty decent, aside from the weird perspective thing, you do manage to make a couple of sections that flow well and make the reader think Kanata is narrating this. It's rough but it has potential.

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>>38784876
First person has its flaws but one thing it has going for it is that it allows you to get much closer to someone's raw unfiltered thoughts than possible. It's also much more chaotic. That being said, I still prefer the usual style, so I can for now just consider this practice for in case someone commissions me first person again, because I'll likely not write first person myself.

I say that as if I'm writing non-commission stuff a whole lot.

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>>38755154
Kanata injecting viagra directly into my dick and balls because I'm still not done fucking Coco yet

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>>38784044
Still slogging away at the main body of it, rest assured, but I'm not doing this, doesn't do anything for me. Already planning on a light edit in a few places to more closely fit your tastes after my personal version is done, that's about as far as I'm willing to deviate. Need my girls to be a tad mean and controlling personally.

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>>38755212
Fubuki pulled your pants down in front of the entire office as a joke

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>>38765228
I think that's more chuubas built to be ntr'd and not chuuba made to be an ntr target.

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>>38784044
Doesn't this completely reverse the power dynamic? At that point you're pimping out your wife out for your own benefit. It's more degrading for her than for you.

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>>38780283
>every single kemono chuuba watching in a mix of horror, shame and envy

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>>38789304
>Mostly envy

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This kemonomimi petplay discussion has gotten me to dig up that Kemono Nene prompt that was stuck in my head
>>38755212
>>22812841
>>22814630
>>22815184
>>22816659
>>22820177

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>>38789421
honestly? you could argue that they have wildly different takes on it
>Koyori thinks its nice Mio is on a relationship but collars dont do anything to awaken her instincs, at least not like blood does
>Polka is seething with envy
>Okayu thinks its degradating and weird
>Botan is utterly mortified because she wants to also be collared but she wont accept it because she thinks she's a top

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>>38790792
>at least not like blood does
Huh?

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>>38791545
hey dude some girls have specific turn ons
Like Polka wanting you to choke her or Bae having a breeding kink

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>>38790792
>Polka is seething with envy
But I already gave her a collar.

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>>38780283

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>>38792262
Oh, I thought it was an animal girl thing and not a link thing.

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You are writing your fics, right anon?

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>>38794775
Yes, Mumei.

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>>38794775
Managed to tear myself away from Freedom Planet 2 for a bit to write a couple paragraphs
Going back in tho this game's too fuckin good

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>>38768888
Well I'm excited to see this next April.
Also hope the anon writing cover job manages to get another part out too

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>>38794775
i really tried mumei, but halfway through i nutted to kson again and i stopped

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>>38794775
Yes Mumei. There's no need to ask for proof, I'm doing it, I swear.

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>>38765124
i really want that mori bimbofication fic to happen man
just imagine her fully aware of why you are treating her like a princess, her slowly getting curvier and softer and her body getting more fertile so you can make a football team with her

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>>38788511
she could just like having sex and is willing to satisfy her sexual urges and his desire for nts.

I actually read an nts manga that did just that and it ended on a pretty funny note with the main girl getting railed by this gigachad she knew from highschool. while getting nailed she kept saying "I love you" to her bull then sent the vid to her bf.

"you kept saying I love you just then...could you be falling for me?" the bull asked smugly

"uh--No! i only said that because my bf thinks its hot" she snips back.

Something about it set me off which inspired this extension. but it appears cuck anon really likes getting his balls stepped on. no judge I'm just a soft boi

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>>38794775
I've written 3 things in the past 6 months, two of which received lukewarm reception

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>>38795562
...so no.

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>>38795330
>Forced ovulation
the best and most underappreciated fetish

[Anonymous No.]

quick question, working on A chuuni type story and I have this idea how magic works. Do I have it explained to the reader in one burst, (would be in a classroom setting so I'd have choco sensei explaining how magic behaves in their world) or do I just leave it and trickle information throughout the fic?

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>>38795330
Speaking of chuubas getting bimbofied.
Suisei.
Imagining her getting her brain fryed and body turned into a parody of itself gets my dick hard. Bonus if she eventually awakens to despair over what she has become, only to get broken again.
Really makes me want to unabandon that Suisei awakens after getting mind controlled for years fic I'd abandoned for lack of time.

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>>38796164
it entirely depends on the setting IMO
for example if the setting is a school, it isnt far-fetched to have a class about it, but if its a medieval world for example, you could have a farmer ask whats the deal with the magic
anyway how you decide to present it, its better to move it in small bite sizes always following it up. Big infodumps can work but they require skill and excellent timing

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>>38795562
Oh noes not lukewarm reception
>>38796164
I think it would work in one go if Choco is explaining it in universe.

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>>38794775
I keep getting distracted.

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>>38796164
The basic fundamentals are okay to explain in a short blurb.

and also like >>38796344
said, bite sized explanations work best, and you can expand upon it and go into more detail later when it's appropriate.

Also, don't feel like you have to establish all the rules at once, let things become apparent organically.

>Take Chocos class since I want to zap people with magic and shit
>Its just her teaching me the magic of sex
>Not very cash money, but I'll take it

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>>38796383
>>38796344
>>38796611
Alright, Thank you bros

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>>38796164
I think a mix of both is acceptable, especially if you're working with something like chuuni willpower magic. Especially if you can have the lecture scene be dual purpose in having some character building/establishment so it's not just a pure info dump.

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>>38796212
https://twitter.com/suiseichu/status/1517062213475115009
Bimbo suisei is a fucking succubus

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>>38795125
GRAB THIS NIGGA'S LEGS

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Share a scene you really want to read/write but have no fucking way to insert into a story
>Koyori congratulating you on your higher than average sperm count and teasing you about ''who you wanna impregnate huh?''

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>>38798802
That image...
>Gura being your ocean swimming instructor who manages to get you behind some cover to begin jerking you off and wanting some "payment"
>Sexually aggressive Ollie who is determined to make you see her as a girl and not a zombie

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>>38798802
I wanted to make an op and ed as a joke for my story, but I'm not sure how to smoothly describe how the op should look along with the music playing

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>>38755212
Going spear hunting with Vesper.

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>>38798802
dragging marine to a broom closet and fucking her so much she pees herself and it leaks from below the door

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>>38799861
Reminds me of that train groping prompt that ends with you railing her somewhere in the station

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>>38798802
It'd probably be most of the autistic worldbuilding I've done for the aqua mecha fic.
Though for something more specific.
>Chuuba ryona boxing match like in one of those ryona fetish doujins.
Mostly because I don't write that kind of smut despite finding it hot.

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>>38790792
>she thinks she’s a top
Botan openly admitted to being a sub.

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>>38798802
Cumming into Koyori's ass so hard that it bloats out her guts and forces her to start puking it out to make room for the second half of the load

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>>38795562
Then you should work to improve so you get more (You)s.

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>>38798802
Being pampered and mothered by Korone who doesn't feel the need to ask but knows (You) live a hard life.

I had a faintest idea for a fantasy thing where you are an void magic using assassin and your connection to the void is better the hungrier and more tired you are, so every time you had to kill someone you basically went without food or sleep for like the two days previous. Then after every job you'd use your money to go to Korone's bakery where she'd give you your favorite pastry and let you sleep at one of the tables even after the store closed because she knows from experience how good it is to be able to feel safe and rested after being hungry, exhausted, and on the run.

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>>38800525
The mental image is doing wonders for me.

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>>38800525
That sounds impossible to write out in a 'serious' smut fic that's not aiming to be comedic. It can work in art but I can not imagine that being hot written out in prose.

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>>38800814
>The closer you are to death the stronger your connection to it
Huh. That's a neat concept. If you could find a way to lock yourself into a constant state of that without the negative effects weighing you down like altered perception, lack of strength, etc...

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>>38798802
A futa fuck-fest/free for all
i have no idea how you could handle such a scene with a big number of characters

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>>38800868
Vines...

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>>38800868
Eh, there are ways. I've done it before, I can do it again.

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>>38798802
Sharing a nice evening drive(2011) through a long winding highway with Irys after a romantic date

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>>38798802
>Suisei forcing you to have sex with her so you'll stop having lewd thoughts about her

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>>38799191
Is that from Rondo Duo or just same artist?

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>>38755212
Suisei's rags to riches storyline has her finally get into an idol company despite the many prior failures, and even managed to convince Cover to let her in without a rebranding. A giant outlier in the industry. How she did it is by learning the tools of the trade. Bribery via sexual favors.

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You know, maybe we can incorporate AI art in our stories. I like how that was implemented in that short fic about Sora. Hope more of us could use it.

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>>38779203
>4-7 pups a litter
>60 day gestation period
I hope Koyori produces enough milk

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>>38806470
Same artist, I don't remember anyone looking like that in Rondo Duo.

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>>38798802
Turning Mori into your personal obedient hyperslut through willing hypnosis

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Didn't expect Noel to be into NTR to this degree, but based.

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>>38779203
>once Koyori gets enough data to show how well her drug works she administers it to you again but allows you to fuck the rest of holo X
> for several years the base of holo x is a nonstop orgy where the girls are constantly pumping out your offspring
>your army of kids and your five wives help you rule the entire world

On second thought this makes me think of the plot for Honoo no Haramase

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>>38809086
I’d sooner start using Koikatsu screenshots.
Now fuck off AIshart

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>>38811552
I second this

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>>38810834
?

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>>38811781
Her plans for Christmas:
> On the 23rd she'll do a GFE ASMR stream with erotic ASMR that doesn't quite lead to sex
> On the 24th, she'll do a roleplay ASMR where she isn't actually streaming and is just enjoying herself with her boyfriend, thus cucking her viewers

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>>38811977
This isn't jumping to conclusions, the whole basis of it was her talking about NTR and coming up with this idea.

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>>38809086
I mean AA has played around with that for a couple of pictures in the holofantasy character sheet.
That's pretty much like the two applications of ai art with their current limitations relevant to fanfics; pin-ups of a character in certain positions/fetishes (novelAI/SD) or big landscape/background shots where the specific details don't really matter (Midjourney).
As for implementations of it in your fics, it's basically a question of how do you place the images; do you place it in-text or as a link, do you modify your writing to accommodate the images or do you write as if they take the job of describing something. Though this is more of a question of multimedia implementation than something specific to ai art, other than the fact that you can get it to fit in easier than audio/music or video.

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>>38811977
Kishi-dan certainly have...interesting taste.

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>>38812051
I get the feeling it’s not “Noel” doing this

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>>38812051
>>38812454
They are the ones doing the cucking in this scenario, they aren't the cucks

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>>38812611
It's basically cucking a cuck version of yourself. Pretty complicated

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>>38810834
This is Migo and her eroge brain rot's fault, before anyone gets any ideas. Now that isn't to imply I wouldn't be down to send videos to Noel's witless boyfriend of me and her doing all the wild dirty sex stuff she told him she was too nervous and shy to do, because I absolutely would, but still.

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>>38812712
This is literally the plot to an Ange Katrian doujin

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>>38811977
Thats not what she said.
On the 24th her viewers are the boyfriend so they are the ones doing the cucking not the cucks.

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>>38812716
Miko's brain rot certainly makes her one of the ideal targets for the "masturbating to being cucked while crying" trope.

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>>38812828
Miko getting NTR'd sounds like it would equal parts tragic, and hilarious.
Could also be hot if she gets seduced by the NTR vid and turns it into a threesome. Yes I know this sounds trashy but LGD is fucking hot.

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>>38813473
LGD is hot as fuck but I'm a sucker for good plot and I want the actual act of sex to be the climax to a longer, drawn out corruption of a dyke into being desperate for cock, but it's usually kinda just they get raped or it's barely addressed why they're okay taking dick.

Getting to bone Misha in KS is near to what I want, but that's treated as a realistically tragic and terrible idea such that it's not really fappable.

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>>38813925
Suppose it's a difference between how you use it as a 'spice' I think LGD also works well for short-form smut the same way that corruption can be pretty hot even if it's not done as a slow burn gradual fall.
Which isn't to say that a long-form LGD corruption fic wouldn't be hot as hell but my point is more that it might still be hot as a one-shot thing.

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>>38813925
That's one thick Miko.
>>38814846
Depends on how long the longform is. Now, like, a series or something could be pushing it unless it's really done masterfully. A good one-shot on the concept could still be of decent length and be fulfilling/fappable.

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>>38816170
A series length LGD fic would probably be less focused on being a smut fic and more on being a corruption drama or fucked up romance fic.
Well at least with how I'm envisioning this theoretical Miko fic in my head with the eventual smut being the climactic ending of her losing to the cock. Obviously an LGD Miko fic that starts with her getting dicked would have a completely different structure for her fall.

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>>38755212
Myth gather at Inas grave to pay their respects

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>>38817250
This but it's done in the style of the Weird Al biopic where it starts off feeling relatively realistic but gradually starts becoming a complete shitpost as it chronicles the rise and fall of Myth as if they were akin to rockstars rather than vtubers.

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>>38817250
I can only imagine this going like the ending of jojo part 2, with Ina crashing her own funeral and delivering an unfunny pun with everyone reacting with a WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT

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I don't know what to write....

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>>38818620
Hmmm. Well, if you're struggling for ideas, why not write about Miko becoming a human nursery for an oversized tarantula?

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>>38818620
WataMiko sex

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>>38818620
Write a sci fi fic, there's like 3 anons dabbling in writing one at this point if you count the Mecha writers.
The fifth possible chuuba fic setting needs to be established.

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It would be pretty funny if Fox Family Christmas isn't finished again this christmas. Surely that won't happen. Right?

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>>38818620
Chubba OOC decides to fuck a self insert for the reader, genius i know

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>>38820900
>Chubba
Away, demon of architecture

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>>38818620
NTR

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>>38820784
It's not going to happen. The author is notorious for never releasing anything. Besides, has the guy even posted here at all in the last couple months?

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>>38821046
I'm reasonably certain they're either incestanon or the holoturismo guy, either way according to their ao3 they released a fic last month.

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>>38755212
Bae getting mouthraped by Mori. Extra incest and a sprite please

[Anonymous No.]

What's a story you wish to see posted before Christmas eve?

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>>38822802
Aqua starring in an Adult Video

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>>38822802
Mine...

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>>38823047
Oh that's my fic, I should be done with it by new year's but I'll see if I can finish it up before Christmas.

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>>38823135
Good luck

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>>38823135
What a broad broad.

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>>38824123
a thick broad broad

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>>38822710
stop triying to rape my little sister

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>>38755212
Teaching Mori how to play Bloodborne then beating all of the bosses for her.

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>>38826883
tell her to stop being so rapeable

[Anonymous No.]

Rolled a random story and got
>Your Endless Summer With Sora
I remember liking this story when I read it in the thread it got posted in, but man, the prose reads really weird. I can't tell if it's because I'm in editor mode right now but the 'tell' sentences for how you are feel or think in this just feels weirdly wrong.
If i had to take a guess it's because the story feels 'closer' compared to girl of emptiness where in that fic the 'distance' the prose gives to the reader works super fucking well at establishing a subtle wrongness with the world. Meanwhile in this fic, where the story is reliant on your 'closeness' with Sora, the distant telling of what you say just doesn't work as well.
It does eventually gets into a good 'rythm' but the initial dip into it is rough if you're not ready for a different style of 2nd person fic. It sort of works in this fic but to use an analogy, it's like a human body where 99% of it's there... but for some reason it doesn't have skin. Which exaserbates any flaws you can see while making the entire thing feel kind of weird.
Unironically this feels like a fic where it would have been very well regarded if it was written more conventionally rather than in this 'telling' style of 2nd person. Because this fic is actually really good outside of that, it's just hamstrung by the fact that the style that worked for Girl of Emptiness does not work for this story's plot.

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>>38820784
Just believe....

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>>38826907
>Mori rips the controller out of your hands the second you enter the pot room

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>>38832044
>the animation of her getting fucked with this audio
I have lost a shameful amount to Calli

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>>38828410
I got Punch Whore. Man it's a goofy greentext but I would love nothing more to see someone turn it into an actual fic.

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>>38832044
>>38832129
Mori has to be a dumbass otherwise she could tap into her sexo powers and bring vt to its knees

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>>38822802
San busting a nut in all of his sister's friends

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>>38822802
That FutaSanaXFauna someone was working on here

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>>38828410
Okay

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>>38833908
>Maid ASMR with lubed handjob sfx
>Fat tits
>Pink hair
>Red eyes
>Great outfits
>INCREDIBLY bangable mom
Mori is a fucking gold mine of raw fap potential burdened by her penchant for idiocy. Jerking off to her feels like I'm hatefucking someone who knows I can't stand them but also can't resist them at the same time, so they just smugly wring the cum out of me before saying something like "See you in a few days" as I storm out of the room in disgust at myself. But I always come back.

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>>38755212
All the hags were turned into lolis! (You) have been tasked with watching them while the other holos work on a cure!

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>>38838050
Have fun keeping loli!Friend under control.

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>>38836629
...I think I'd be a bad choice for that task

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>>38836629
https://files.catbox.moe/hm844x.jpg
>Mori constantly teases you about wanting to bang her mom
>accidentally does it front of her mother
>Mamamori happily agrees and decides to help teach her daughter how to really have sex
>her only request is that you livestream it to her husband
>papamori is banging some co-ed's brains out when you start the video call
>Mori now has to deal with that her parents are in an open relationship

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>>38822802
Cover job 2

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>>38838633
Same.
>The other holos finally have a cure and return
>Every last loli!Hag is happily pregnant
>None want to go back to normal now that they can finally have children of their own

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>>38838712
people meme about this but Mori is definitely the type to talk big game and be a a mess just in pre, very shy during the actual act and ultimately, as you are pounding her, slurring that she loves you and that you should put a baby in her.
Then a cuddlebug until morning where she tries to avoid you like the play

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>>38839120
So a shy slampig?

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>>38839120
Please yes.

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>>38839120
>>38839764
>>38839490
>Mori desperately whispering in your ear that you absolutely have to make her a mom
>Literal gorilla gripe leglock prevents you from pulling out
>Soft voice Mori for the rest of the night planning what she's gonna call your son, then the daugther you are gonna have

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>>38818620
Korone decides to get a pogo stick, she's extremely good at it. However the rest of OKFAMS are mad jelly and want to get in on the bounce action. Hijinks ensue when they each attempt to steal the pogo stick and ride it some indoors, others outside. Everyone, that is, except Mio who has her Moon Shoes from the late 80s.

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>>38840419
I wanna breed this dorky autist so fucking bad bros...

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>>38843895
If you're a short japanese man who makes terrible music then you have a pretty good chance.

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>>38845397
that second part doesn't sound so hard.

How bad a mixtape do you got to make to get Cali in the mood? Soundcloud mumble rap levels?

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>>38845547
I'm imagining an oddly romantic scene where you play up a comedically bad mixtape and you make Calli laugh in earnest then she shows you her equally bad mixtape and the both of you talk shit about each other's tapes while laughing together.

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>>38845547
Rhyme english words with japanese ones. That'll make her wetter than the Niagara Falls.

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>>38845673
That sounds incredibly cute and endearing, someone who has an actual understanding of how this wigger talks should write it.

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>>38843895
>Sweaty tits
>Tongue piercing

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>>38755177
Auntie's little secret. Ch. 2.

After putting off finishing this chapter for a long time, I decided to put this one out of WIP hell. I guess my creativity's pilling up again, so I hope I can write more chapters for my other fics as well, some people on /wg/ are holding out for them and I don't want them to die guessing what happens.

https://rentry.org/bwfdv

Tags: Fubuki, NSFW, /ss/, Grooming, Fluff, Dark

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>>38833898
Same, the concept is dumb but a skilled writer could make it a very funny comedy / drama if they go down that timeloop route.

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Is there a psyops going on here to indoctrinate people into jerking off to Calli?

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Would it be weird to use a very Japanese onomatopoeia for laughing like "fufufu" in an English fic? The problem is that English ones are way too fucking limited and don't really fit for what it's supposed to convey, but I'm always wary about putting in too many Japanese-isms for fear of it sounding awkward.

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>>38847651
No psyop, just, y'know. I wanna cum in Calli's mouth.
>>38847677
Nah, it's fine to use. As long as you don't go overboard, it's completely acceptable.

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>>38843895
>>38845673
>>38846056
>you meet Mori in the back of the school, triying to be cool. Seeing her cough her lungs out and start retching after triying a cigarette
>You guys go to a party, Mori is constantly teasing you. ''Dont feel bad if you go home alone tonight champ''
>End up in her home, making out with her, because she was frustrated that no one took her home
>she tries to be sexy but she puts the condom backwards, gets exposed as a virgin
>Years go by, you become her roomate because ''its easy this way''
>Both of you triying your luck at odd jobs, but sooner or later you get fired
>Every time you have a bad day or a date with someone else goes wrong, you fuck. At some point both of you stop going on dates with other people ''because its easier''
>in one of your steamy sessions, Mori blurts out ''I love you''. You blurt it back
>Next morning you guys agree that it was a spurr of the moment thing, and that it was kinda weird
>But both of you keep saying it, over and over. Your sessions become more sensual and passionate
>At some point, Mori starts being on the pill, so you stop buying condoms
>You find yourself caressing her stomach and bellybutton during sex, she picks up on it and asks you why.
>You blurt out that you want to make her a mother
>The next morning, you apologize for being weird
>but the next day, in the middle of the lovemaking, she whispers you that she wants your kids
>you empty your balls inside her
>By tomorrow morning, when you ask her about it, she just tells you to stop being weird about it
>but this continues for an entire week
>until one day she pops in from the bathroom with a test
>Well... it would be weird to explain your kid (later on you learn Kids) why you guys are not together, so we might as well marry
>>38847651
No, i just really want to pump her full of kids

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>>38847651
Further investigation is required.

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>>38848149
>awkward friends with benifits into an oddly romantic couple despite their best efforts to not become a couple

such a strange dynamic, but it's one I can get behind. have moments of accidental cute fluffy moments followed by her blushing and calling you a fag and you got the ingredients of a really cute fic

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>>38847677
Depends on the setting. If you're running with the default assumed setting of Modern Day Tokyo 20 Minutes into the Future then a couple of those japanese onomatopoeia will add flavor rather than take away.
Use your own writing sense to see if it fits in the setting your using.

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>>38847677
Japanese: capable of making entire 6 minute songs using only onomatopoeias
https://youtu.be/tyneiz9FRMw
English:
Boom. Kaching. Fap fap.

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>>38847677
Can you really classify laughter as an onomatopoeia though?

[Anonymous No.]

>>38848149
...Fuck...

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>>38848149
>lazy half clothed sex while you two bitch about your luck
>You dont get why your parents keep asking about your relationship with Calli despite being quite clear you two are friends
>You two pretending to be a couple to get discounts. Calli boast about how great she is at pretending to be your girlfriend
>practicing kissing behind school with her because none of you two know to kiss
>Walking into each other masturbating to some weird porn and later on re-enacting it at bed
>animalistic hardcore sex, followed by kissing and talking about the future
I dont know if this has a name but i vibe really hard with this dynamic
>>38848669
>bothering each other for no reason always ends in heatfult kissing or in rough sex

[Anonymous No.]

>>38849709
Lovers in denial?

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>>38849709
>lazy half clothed sex while you two bitch about your luck
Damn imagine Mori, wearing only your shirt, riding you as she bitchs about how shitty her day at applebees was, and if yousay something she doesnt like she grinds you until you shut up

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>>38849709
>>38850252
God damnit.

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>>38849709
>>38850252
>early in the morning she walks around in one of your shirts
>if asked about it she grimaces and tells you she's short on laundry and your shirts fit her well enough
>any time she bends at just the right angle you see her bare ass but she doesn't care enough to cover herself.
>if you tell her she looks sexy her face will burn up and call you a faggot
>she "accidentally" mages too much food for lunch and packs your lunch box before the both of you head to work.
>the both of you come home dead tired and the both of you strip back down to your underwear.
>you plop on the couch, she plops right on top of you despite there being enough space to lay somewhere else and one of you flips on the tv to catch up on any anime you've been watching.

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>>38850845
>Feeling Mori's plush ass grinding against you as she acts like nothing is happening, forcing you to harden up against her
>Looks back at you over your shoulder and asks what the problem is despite knowing exactly what she's doing

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>>38851144
>Tell Mori she can just ask for it
>says "Shut up faggot" and slides it in
>The most obscene, lecherous cowgirl in existing ensues, and as Mori cums and you shoot your seed deep into her womb she finally yells "I love you!" and you tease her nonstop afterwards

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>>38846508
There's some weird point of view stuff but other than that I liked it.

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>>38851144
>Cuddling with her after sweaty sex in summer
>Both of you complaining about the sweat, the heat and the smell but none moving
>In winter she's like a cat, constantly searching you to cuddle. If you bring it up she stands up and leaves
>Eating her ass so she washes the dishes for you
>her sucking you off so you cook dinner
>sometimes she just sits in your lap, lotus position, and as you both make out, you spill your heart out. Multiple ''I love you'' and ''Dont leave me''

[Anonymous No.]

The downside is, to get all this you'd have to deal with hearing her "music" throughout the place constantly.

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>>38847651
If there is, it's not working. She is so wholly and unimaginably unsexual to me that I don't think my favorite smut authors of all time could depict her in a way that generated a stiffy in me

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852026
>>38847651
If there is, its working as intended. I want to cover every inch of her skin in my seed

[Anonymous No.]

>>38846508
I loved the blowjob scene at the end and I do hope Fubuki gets into more "naughty" mischief with her favourite nephew in future chapters.

[Anonymous No.]

>>38851230
>>38851843

>the two of you watch anime together while she's sitting on your lap
> she's in one of your shits again and she reaches forward to grab the remote
>she gives you a fill view of her ass and pussy
>you casually slip your fingers into her pussy
>she lets out a sharp gasp
>"w-what are you?" she tries to speak in adversity but she just sits back down and slowly starts spreading her legs as you tease her clit.
>you spend hours teasing her body, pulling the shirt off of her and caressing her breasts, and sucking the side of her neck,
>she violently squirts and screams your name in pure lust
>you try leaving her as a twitching mess but she violently grabs your pants and pulls you right back
>she unzips your pants with her teeth and forcefully pulls your cock out
>"My turn fucker!" she shouts at you while shooting a fierce gaze at you, all the while her face is bright red.
>she slips your cock into her mouth and because she's so familiar with your shape and size she effortlessly slips your shaft all the way down to her throat without gagging
>skillfully deepthroats you while her tongue drags along the underside
>goes so far as to lick your balls when she holds her head at the base of your shaft, glaring at you the entire time.
>she makes you cum buckets and you shout that you love her while she casually swallows your seed,
>"That's *huff* what you get for *huff* being a cheeky little fucker..."
>you stumble down into your seat and she soon straddles you, her expression is a bit more intimate
>"what, you aren't done are you? did one little blowjob already take you out?" she teases you before your cock stiffens right back up and slaps the crack of her ass.
>spend the remainder of the night lovingly making out and fucking on the couch.

>you later have to rewatch the episodes of the anime that you let autoplay while the two of you were having your session.
>bickering as to what episode you left on ensues.

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>>38846508
Holy shit, it's finally out. This is something I can't wait to get home for.

[Anonymous No.]

Everybody shut up I don't want to jerk off to the pink woman

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852890
you don't really mean that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852890
Fag

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852890
PINK (haired) WOMAN SEX

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>>38852449
>chilling in the couch with her, watching tv
>''what do you want for dinner''
>''eeh, i dunno, you decide''
>her hand autopilots and starts jerking you off lazily
>you return the favor, fingering her with a bored expression
>''Well im hungry so decide''
>''i told you im fine with whatever''
>Start bickering, rythm gets faster
>things scalate, making out, clothes fliying
>the only thing you can hear in the apartment is the grunts and moans, sometimes a scream as you fuck like animals
>both of you lie in the sofa, drenched in sweat and body fluids after your primal rut
>''Pizza is fine?''
>''Yeah''
>''Pizza it is''

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852890
succumb to your desires

[Anonymous No.]

>>38852449
>>38853114
>Years have passed
>You and Mori haven't married cuz it's such a fucking drag
>But, you have 3 kids, all raised with love and care
>You've been living together for almost two decades
>Thought thick and thin, you've stuck together
>Mori is now old, all that resembles her is how cheery's she's remained
>One day, you say fuck it and buy the ring
>Ask Mori to marry you
>She tells you're a fucking faggot as she cries of excitement.

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Has Mori ever actually said anything lewd to warrant people lusting after her?

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>>38853314
Hatefucking is one hell of drug

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>>38853314
she's been acting more sexo lately but i've always wanted to fuck her

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>>38853114
>>38853280
>the two of you walk to a party
>the both of you brag about how hard the both of you will score and find a hot booty call
>get to the party
>the both of you get separated somehow
>both of you are somewhat popular and get hit on by different people.
>a hot guy tells more how sexy she is and how much he would bang her
>"uh-huh" she speaks flatly while looking at her phone
>you give a similarly bored response when a girl tries to act all sexy to you.
>you get a text from Calli that reads "yo, this party sucks, lets bail :P"
>you agree and walk out together
>"everyone in that party was so fucking lame I think I was about to fall asleep" she shouts while practically throwing herself at you dramatically.
>"yeah, the girls there were just your typical skank" you respond, your arm instinctually wrapped around her.
>Her eyes glance at a love hotel.
>she turns to you with a slight blush on her face
>"hey since neither of us could find a date...do you wanna just go to that hotel and pretend we met at the party?" she asks almost timidly
>you spend the night making love in the apartment,
>neither of you realized that just about the entire time your hands were locked onto each other.

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>>38853787
>Going to a party with Mori, both of you want to score
>Get shitfaced, wake up in your room with her
>both of you chalk it up to bad luck
>this keeps happening
>turns out, everytime both of you get shitfaced, you jump at eachothers bones
>people in parties just assume you are a couple

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>>38854448
Why would I jump at Mori's bones? Is this some weird proverb?

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>Go to a party with her after a fight
>she sees you talk with a few girls
>walks to you, drags you to the closest bathroom
>15 minutes later she emerges, smug as hell, with her clothes all crooked
>you can barely walk after it

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>Antics with Mori happen
>Sex ensues

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>>38854448
>>38854810
>the both of you scramble around the shopping district.
>her eyes furrowed she runs around from store to store with you
>"how the fuck did you forget to get Christmas gifts for your family!?"
>"it slipped my mind! maybe if someone didn't wake me up with their ass in my face while sucking me off I'd remember!"
>"oh, so now it's my fault!"
>the both of you bicker while looking for toys for your cousin's sons.
>you look at a complex lego set "this would be good right?"
>"your cousin has a 5-year-old and a 3-year-old! how the fuck do I know more about your family than you!"
>the both of you browse at the younger toy section...
>looking through all the baby stuff gets your mind rolling a little
>"you ever thought about kids?" you ask blankly
>"...what the fuck?" she turns you with a look of disgust
>"just a thought, you know! w-wouldn't it be cool if we both had kids? haha!" you try to save face but there's nothing you can do
>"you're being really creepy right now dude, get back to looking for toys"
>you return to your endeavor embarrassed by your question.
>"a-anon..." she mutters from behind you
>"hmm?"
>"I've...always wanted a son" she speaks plainly before wandering off to a different part of the store to blush her face off.

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>>38855063
I can't relate any of these things to Calli but go off I guess?

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You guys would fuck a hippo if it was hidden behind an anime avatar.

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>>38855945
To be fair the idea is that if you slap Mori's personality onto her Vtuber body she's incredibly fuckable. This is pretty much what everyone means when they say a chuuba is sex.

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>>38855945
i dont see you posting this while people jerk off at okayu or polka you Indog

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>>38855945
I'll be honest, the whole friends to lovers with a splash of tsundere added is such an appealing dynamic to me that I fell in love with this idea.

not sure about the other two anons who were green posting along with me but I'm honestly tempted to pick this up as a side project

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>>38856174
The difference is Okayu and Polka are likable.

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>>38856330
>It doesnt count because i say so!
Kill yourself shitskin, you are just mad people are talking about a woman you dont like

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>>38856282
Please do, I love this dynamic so much.

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>>38856525
stop arguing with retards and go back to green posting! I was enjoying the show

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>>38856282
>>38856577
Seconding this, I don't even like Mori or want to fuck her, but friends to lovers is a kino formula.

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>>38856525
I haven't posted in this thread before that at all you dumb deadbrap. Unlike you I have enough self control to not chimp out over things I don't like without bringing up other chuubas.

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>Finish classes, its really pouring down outside
>You didnt bring an umbrella
>Mori appears, smug as shit
>''well well, looks like youll have to share MY umbrella''
>Her umbrella falls off as she opens it
>Both of you put your phones in a bunch of plastic bags inside your bag and make a run to the station
>Mori trips with a bump and falls face first into a puddle, you jump the bump but slip and fall in the same puddle
>You both start laughing as you walk to the station, completely drenched

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>>38848149
I've never been sexually attracted to Mori before. Despite her hot body, her personality just feels weird to me.
....HOWEVER,

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>>38854796
Deadbeats are skeletons anon, this is known.

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What's the Mori fic most people spilled their seed to in here?

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>>38859465
Shrunken troubles. The description of the way Mori impregnated Fubuki really got me going.

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>>38859465
The yandere one

>>38859677
>Shrunken troubles
Stupid shit like this is why this shock fic has no meaning anymore.

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>>38860315
>Stupid shit like this is why this shock fic has no meaning anymore.
That and AA finally tagged it right so idiots can stop posting it every chance they got.

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>>38859465
grab as much as you can keeps that record with 4 nuts

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>>38859465
That one that will never get a sequel despite that it should.

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>>38861026
That warning emoji is a genius way to warn it's a shock fic without actually changing the author tags desu.

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>>38861372
care to elaborate on which one?

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>>38859465
i didnt nut to it but i quite like Elyseum just for the pregnancy reveal. Its such a cute moment in a very rough fanfic

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to any anon good at names, what would be a good name for the friends to lovers mori fic?

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>>38862190
Bros before hoes?

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>>38861639
The one where Mori kills everyone you know and love.

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>>38862190
Fornicating with the Fatopotamus

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>>38862190
The Dangers of Alcohol
or
Beer Goggles

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>>38862190
The name is usually the last thing I do bro. Some people probably work in the opposite way, where the name help form the ideas and details they want for their fic, but I tend to want the content I write to help me make the name afterward.

Maybe you can do some kinda wordplay on how the more you listen to something such as music, the more you begin to like it despite it being grating on the ears at first.

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>>38862301
it's some sort of ocd thing where I work in order of what people would see.

but I'll take your advice and not worry about it till later

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>>38862190
I like ''Right behind you''
>it implies friendship by covering each other backs
>You cant find love because its right behind you

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>>38862190
Personally I'd have it be 'Untitled Friends to Love Mori fic' until I think of a better working title as I write it.
Eventually you'll keep finding better and better titles until you're ready for release and can finalize the title.

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>>38862301
The name is the very first thing I do and often is what shapes my entire fic

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>>38862466
That's so simplistically deep that I love it.

I gotta jot that down and use it at some point, I don't know with who or when, but it sounds like a great dynamic to explore.

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>>38862190
If you write it as some of the greentexts here, maybe Failling Upwards work. The idea is that Both you and Mori are failing in life but by doing that you keep growing closer

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I'm thinking super hard about kemonomimi/mythical creature chuuba slice of life, in which they have humanized characteristics because of their species and that Mio pet play greentext from last thread was so FUCKING HOT HOLY SHIT.
>Okayu is extremely cuddly, rubs on you constantly, sniffs you as you get home
>Nenechi has massive super strength, and often playfighthing may result in injuries that she tries her earnest to treat.
>Mooms can turn her head 180 degrees, sometimes creeping you the fuck out
>Ayame won't let you touch her horns because only lovers can do it, yet she absolutely wants you to manhandle her by the horns
>Towa speaks in strange tongues that causes your eyes to bleed, she constantly apologizes
>Botan is extremely horny, and will not take no for an answer
>So is Pekora
>Canine chuubas wag their tails when they see you, and try to hide it
>Gura is extremely sensitive to the smell of blood and never gets sick
>Risu keeps burying stuff she likes onto the floor
I'd call it something like "The Holopedia of Kemonomimi and other Fantastical Idols." and present the stories as if they were a documentary dialogue.

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>>38863004
I made that Mio greentext, count me in if you need help with other chuubas
Personally i would add
>Fubuki likes to steal shiny stuff and play with it
>Bae has fantastic balance and can climb lot of stuff effortlessly
>Chloe has trouble with empathy

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Idk man this thread isn't doing it to me either...

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>>38863004
Please consider including my trash panda son. Only because the idea of him sprinting around at night digging through people's trash cans is fucking super funny to me.

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>>38863451
at least there was a good amount of fic discussion, right?

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>>38863451
>we actually get people talking and writing
listen i dont like Mori either but take your bitching elsewhere, it cant always be about things you like

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>>38863004
I think an interesting way to have this be given aside from the SoL scenes would be to have like an in-universe encyclopedia/writings about the mythical creatures at the end of each chapter; something like at the end of an Ayame chapter there would be a section about Onis relevant to what just happened.

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>>38863972
But I'm the main character

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>>38801166
>If you could find a way to lock yourself into a constant state of that without the negative effects weighing you down like altered perception, lack of strength, etc...
Damn it, Anon, don't go getting my creative juices flowing for a fic I have no intention to write. Because the simple answer is being an actual zombie and I'm thinking about a yandere Ollie trying to extol the virtues of zombification to you like it's all upsides, even though it's obvious she's only really interested in turning you into a zombie because she's lonely.

Also MAN all that Mori talk was hot as fuck

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>>38755154
> Kanata thread
> No Kanata fics or discussion

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>>38867965
Thread was raided by deadbraps

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and now its raided by crybabies

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>>38868069
That's exactly what you're doing, yes

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>n-no you

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New thread
>>38868641

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KANATA RAPE