/wg/ Writing General - The Rain Shaman Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>34104335

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Giving your oshi a foot massage:>>34107447

Chuubas compete in an all-out fight to the death in order to obtain Yagoo's dream: the one true "Hololife":>>34109198

Try a comfy fic with Gen 0:>>34110958

marriage with Polka, pregnancy care with her, and then childcare with Polka:>>34117112

Consumating your marriage with your new sisterwife Elira:>>34122522

Wolves “force” themselves on Mori and Mumei:>>34136524

A chuuba oyakodon that isn't incestous sex with your daughter and wife.:>>34159526

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So, this is how /wg/ dies.

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>>34218520
we are reclining. The thread's days are numbered. /wg/ is graduating from /vt/

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Good morning USA
I'm glad that the Kiara nazi story isn't dropped. In Limbo, sure, but not dropped.

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>>34217033
Fucking Kobo who's wearing a Miko cosplay

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>>34217033
A fic that uses the ambiguous nature of 2nd person point of view to hide that (You) were a chuuba all along.

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>>34216954
whoskullface.gif

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I hope whoever creates the threads learns a valuable lesson. Nobody wants to post any stories in a fucking Mori edition

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>>34222851
My excuse is that I'm working on two stories at once.

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>>34223195
TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITS HOLY SHIT I WANT TO SUCK ON HER FAT WHALE TITS SO BAD

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>>34218520
>>34219220
Don’t worry, maybe next year you’ll get it.

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>>34223248
It's not like she can say no.

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>>34224279
I haven't kept up with Chole at all. Why is like brainwashed in half of her fan art?

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>>34224490
She did some hypnosis stuff on stream.

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>>34224549
I'm not even that big of a hypnosis fan, but goddam.

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>>34216954
post that one Kobo Incest pasta

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>>34217033
The war has ended. The government's super soldier initiative, a program designed to train children from birth to learn how to fight and ONLY how to fight, has been cancelled and the soldiers are now all free. It is immediately clear that they have no way of integrating into modern society alone as they have no knowledge outside the mechanisms of war, thus a new program is created by the government. (You) are one such man selected by the program to take one of the young adults under your wing and help them learn to become a functioning member of society. Basic customs you had taken for granted are thrown out the window as you take on the gruelling task of teaching a machine made to kill how to be human.
I would write this myself but I have wayyyy too much shit to write. If it doesn't get picked up I might consider it. Also, which chuuba would be good for this?

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>>34225047
the what now?

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>>34225217
Anyone from HoloX would be a good candidate.

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>>34225047
Dozo
>>32381020

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>>34225217
For some reason this makes me think of Aqua being a complete retard for everything except fighting and killing.

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>>34225491
This just makes me wish that the Kobo uoh fic we got wasn't so half baked.

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>>34225491
Kobo split was wild

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>>34225491
>Reposting this to scare the Femanon away
my fuking sides

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>>34225861
I want to suplex the Ayame sheep.

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>Error: Our system thinks your post is spam. Please reformat and try again.
You don’t know what fucking spam is, Hiro. Fix your shitty website.

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>>34226574
whatever you had to say was clearly low quality garbage

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>>34226726
>nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga
I can somehow say this but not a simple greentext.

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>>34226911
impressive what you had to say was even lower quality than that

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>>34226911
Those niggas? All me.

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>>34226911
Pretty sure you got caught by a word filter.
Just stick that shit on rentry and call it a day.

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Aquwife

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>>34227627
Akuwife

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>>34227627
aqusex

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https://japaneseasmr.com/49037/

I really like this ASMR work and think you should all listen to it too.

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>>34227627
I never did get around to reading that Aqua story matthewanon wrote way back when. Maybe I should fix that.

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>>34227627
Cucking this anon by fucking his wife Aqua

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I just had to cut 700 words from my story... I know things like that are necessary to refine your work but it feels like a step backwards.

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>>34231556
Sometimes that's just how it goes. It won't feel so bad once you've written 700 words to replace the ones you got rid of.

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>>34231556
It is a step backwards. Get back to work and write 700 words again

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>>34231556
It is what it is, sometimes you write something that isn't actually a step you wanted to take and taking the step backwards is for the best for the story.

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>>34231556
I don't care. Write or don't write, it's none of my business.

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>>34225669
that happens when you gather SEA and Yuro pedos in one place.

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>>34233722
>Don't talk about writing in the writing thread
I fail to understand what people hope to get out of posting things like this.

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>>34235042
Just ignore them. They’re obviously not authors.

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>>34233722
Marco Pierre White as an author

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>>34217087
/wg/ is reclining...
>captcha : ASM4D

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>>34216954
Is the old archive still available? I don't like the new one, also I cant check the newest fics with this one

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>>34236552
The old archive is literally in a window inside the new one, you can scroll down there for the latest entries. I think AA's just been busy and didn't include the last couple threads' worth of submissions.

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>>34236759
He's dead. He's fucking dead and we killed him

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>>34237382
He can't die before I release more Polka smut. He won't.

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>>34237382
ahh, koro-san...

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>>34239457
Would you fuck furball Korone?

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>>34239498
Depends on how big she is

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>>34217033
Lui finding out your much more experienced them she is even though you're like have her age

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>>34239596
As big as medium sized breed of dog.

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>>34239678
Yeah, that's fine.

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>>34239648
poor single OL

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>>34239498
I may have a problem but I actually prefer to fuck the plushie/smol versions of the Holos rather than the real ones

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>>34240844
wtf why?

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>>34240844
I mean, plushies are actually real as opposed to the chuuba's 2D and 3D models. So you're ahead of the pack there.

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>>34240892
There's a whole aspect to it of using them rather than just having regular sex, a miniature version of my oshi but still with her personality, her voice, her feelings, there's something about it. Maybe it's the control over them, the fact that you can literally use them as a fleshlight, or that they look so cute and unatural. I'm not sure myself. Maybe it's ownership, maybe it's the fact that you can handle them more roughly because they look so squishy and huggable.
https://litter.catbox.moe/v7g4oq.png
https://litter.catbox.moe/u16rvv.png
https://litter.catbox.moe/rx8wcz.png
https://litter.catbox.moe/bkdm3c.webp

>>34240903
That's not true, if anything it's less attainable. I don't want a plushie to fuck that looks like my oshi, I want to fuck a plushie that IS my oshi. Her personality, her soul must be there or else it's just as sad as fucking a fleshlight by yourself.

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>>34241458
>That's not true, if anything it's less attainable. I don't want a plushie to fuck that looks like my oshi, I want to fuck a plushie that IS my oshi. Her personality, her soul must be there or else it's just as sad as fucking a fleshlight by yourself.
Oh, sorry to hear that. But have fun with your fantasies, they sound cool

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>>34241458
So if you had a perfect teeny tiny clone of you oshi, would you torture it?

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>>34241758
But then it's not a perfect clone

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>>34241758
YOU'RE IN A FLOATING CASTLE IN THE SKY THERE'S NO DOORS NO WINDOWS IT'S FILLED HALFWAY UP WITH WATER AND THERE'S A TINY LITTLE OSHI WHO HAS ALL THE SAME MEMORIES, NO HEALTH PROBLEMS

WOODY ALLEN IS ON THE T.V AND LITTLE OSHI IS GETTING A LITTLE BIT PEEVED, BUT SHE ISN'T QUITE TOO SURE WHY, AND SHE ALSO HAS A TINY LITTLE DAGGER, BUT YOU HAVE TWO MATCHES IN YOUR HAND AND YOUR WALLET. TWENTY SEVEN CENTS INSIDE.

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>>34216954
You should really start having Nijisanji in the OP. Add some variety.

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>>34242923
The only chuubas that get in the OP are those who have 4+ stories about them, sorry

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I love mommy

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>>34243137
Do not squeeb.

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>>34242923
The earlyfag is a major tribalfag, but we get Niji OP pictures here and there. Last one was Inui, I think.

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>>34217033
Little Red Riding Hood with Mio as the big bad wolf and Ayame as Red Riding Hood.

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>>34244538
That the wolf is the mother of RRH and the daughter of the grandmother is a great plot twist

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>>34217033
Mio is going on a vacation for an entire month. Fubuki decides to try and hold of from jerking off until she's back. When Mio gets back, she finds a crazed and backed up fubuki who isnt going to stop until she puts a baby inside Mio

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>>34243137
Amogus

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>>34217033
Korone grooming then fucking Risu.

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>>34245776
That baby? Me.

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>>34246608
This, but it's oyakodon with (You)

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Should I split the next chapter of "Your Time is gonna come" into two shorter chapters or wait until it's all done? The first half is finished, but I don't know when the second half will be done.

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>>34249584
If it has a decent ending in the middle, why not

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>>34249584
Depends, is the split going to feel like a good stopping point or is it just going to be a cliffhanger?

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>>34249611
>>34249898
I think I'll do it, it ends on a small cliffhanger and the next scene takes place elsewhere. Going back and editing the first half might give me ideas on the next part.

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>>34250083
Yeah but my real question is... how much [Fucking Kronii in the ass] does part one have?

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>>34250146
Unfortunately there won't be any ass-fuckery from now until the end. This is the start of the finale and its probably going to be three or four chapters. I kinda regret going too deep at the beginning with setting up a plot, because now I gotta conclude it and use some of my cool ideas for a story I started because I was horny. I should've separated the smut and the plot into two stories instead.

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>>34241758
>So if you had a perfect teeny tiny clone of you oshi
Immediately goes up my arse.

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>>34243137

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>>34250780
Unfortunate, since your smut was pretty hot, but I get it. Honestly, I don't mind - a story that goes from turning Kronii's asshole inside out to a more serious, dramatic tone is an interesting shift, so godspeed.

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What are your favourite books?

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>>34253360
I like Bone

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>>34253360
Here are all the books I've read in my entire life:

Diary of a wimpy kid (1-10)
Hunger games
20 thousand miles under the sea
Animal farm

I really liked animal farm.

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>>34253360
For sci fi it's a toss up for either Dune or Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep.
For fantasy it's the Hobbit
When it comes to classical literature it's Moby Dick. The Illiad is a phenomenal work but I like whales more.
Still need to read House of Leaves.
>>34253388
Bone is pretty comfy

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>>34253360
Three body problem and Of Mice and Men.

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>>34253360
Fuck this series is so fucking underrated holy shit.

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>>34253360
When I was young I read a lot of fantasy books like Skulduggery Pleasant, the Ranger’s Apprentice series (which had major shonen anime vibes, I’m 99% sure the author was an early weeb), the maze runner series and the hunger games series to name a few.
As I got older I started to read a lot more Stephen King, like his gunslinger series, a few of his horror novels (Pet Sematary was great) and some others. I also recall trying to read middlemarch but gave up, maybe I should give it a go again. I never really enjoyed reading them as much as the grand adventures I read about when I was young.
Nowadays I read a lot of short stories, like the Fantasy & Science Fiction books that are a collection of short stories. I also started reading a biography about a sniper that served in the Gallipoli war.
My favourite books of all time probably are the Ranger’s Apprentice books (except the last one, I’m pretty sure I hated it) though I barely remember what happened in them other than the fact that they were really fucking fun to read. Childish, but I don’t think I’ll ever recapture that feeling I had reading them.

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>>34255535
Holy shit I remember Skulduggery Pleasant. I remember the only reason I got the book was because there was a cool skeleton on the cover.

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>>34255805
Spooky scary...

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>Try typing something up on my phone so the thread has at least a little bit of momentum
>It's about Gura having to work a fast food job and getting raped by her manager
>Also, she has a tan
>Get 500 words deep into it
>Get bored
>Give up
FUCK! FUCK, DUDE! FUCK!

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>>34256463
Pathetic.

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>>34231556
Cut and paste on a different text file.
You can save them for later, maybe even use them in a different fic.

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>>34256463
>>Try typing something up on my phone so the thread has at least a little bit of momentum
>>It's about Gura

You could have at least TRIED to make it interesting.

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I'm going to write the fluffiest Marine fic ever known to man.

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>>34256463
The only thing I can write on a phone is greentext. Did you seriously try to write prose on a phone?

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>>34255535
>Ranger's Apprentice
Man, that brought back memories. Only read like six of the books but they were fun reads.

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>>34253360
I vaguely recall reading a lot of generic pop teen literature when I was in elementary and middle school but it's all fled my mind. If it counts for anything, two names that pop to my head when I try to recall are the Ender's Game and Beyonders series, but even those I don't remember much about besides me enjoying them

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>>34251688
Now you're cooking with portals

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>>34217033
The results of the Bae vs Miori game of lesbian chicken (Hot gay sex)

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>>34256773
Yes. I was away from my pc so I thunk it'd be a good idea to pass the time. Lordy, was I incorrect.

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>>34259293
What's the lore on this?

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>>34259783
Bae knows her from a past life.

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>>34259293
Who the fuck is professor car?

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>>34236759
Yeah. Been dealing with some personal health and familial health stuff. I'll add the two story that are missing after work.

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>>34259783
Bae's past life defeated Miori Celeste in a game of lesbian chicken. Miori is pretty good at yuribaiting but she said she got utterly btfo'd by bae's gayness and had to tap out
The brrats at /rrat/ were talking about it and now i kinda want it

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>>34261392
The cancer is back... I'm so sorry...

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>>34261411
Now I'm just curious what that rat could've done to defeat Miori of all people

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>>34261392
>Doctor checks clip board
>"Yep..seen this before...TCD."
>Pensive AA asks what that is
>"Terminal Clussy Deficiency. Same thing happened to my brother. I'm sorry, son"

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>>34261726
Well bae has mentioned she dislikes long fingernails and that she keeps them short to do ''stuff''

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>>34261411
I just looked up Miori and she seems pretty cute

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>>34261392
>The doctor asks AA if he wants to hear the good news or bad news first
>AA says he wants to hear the good news first
>The doctor replies, "The good news is that we're naming the disease after you."

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>>34261526
>>34261794
>>34262253
It's just a bad wisdom tooth giving me Hell on Earth while I'm waiting on an oral surgeon alongside something else that I won't be able to get seen for/treated until fucking mid-November, but thank you.

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>>34262892
Oof. Sorry to hear about that. I'm glad I finally got off my ass and got the two wisdom teeth I had left removed a few years ago, after waiting over a decade since the previous two. I was already in a bad spot, can't imagine what a decade or two more would do...

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>>34262892
> he didn't remove all his wisdom teeth as soon as they began poking out
Assuming American? Otherwise there's no reason to NOT remove them. I'd even remove my appendix if the surgery wasn't invasive. Keeping your wisdom teeth is just inviting trouble for future you.

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>>34262892
Thank god I had my wisdom teeth removed years ago

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>>34263344
Americans actually remove their wisdom teeth more than they should. About a third of Americans don't need the surgery but do it anyways for some reason. I know I only had mine removed after a year or two of discomfort.

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>>34264054
> don't need the surgery
Even if wisdom teeth aren't doing the only thing they are known for doing which is causing trouble, it's still teeth that are way too far back in your mouth for you to properly brush, which is another reason why they are often removed. There's no "don't need the surgery" when it comes to wisdom teeth. It's 2 days of pain to prevent any of the possible 20fucking things that can go wrong by keeping them

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>>34264633
>he fell for the orthodontics jew

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>>34264633
Thinking like that is why most kids nowadays are circumcised and on amphetamines

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>>34264695
I don't pay for dentist, free healthcare

>>34264943
Lil bro, cite any benefits to keeping your wisdom teeth AND THEN you can make that comparison

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>>34217033
Watame OD's on Asacoco, dies, respawns and then gives Botan her corpse for money, with the implication this happens regularly.

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>>34264991
What fucking country do you live in? Cause coming from one that does, dentistry, and elective surgeries for that matter, don't count.

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>>34264991
There are no benefits just like there are no benefits of having them removed if you don't need to. Same goes for tonsils. You wouldn't just take tonsils out if you didn't need to.

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>>34266883
I want to marry thsi half-elf hag and lay to rest all her worries about being seen as undesirable by society

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>>34266883
This is the first in-text caption thing I've see that actually looks and reads pretty good. Then again I mostly look at really heavy fetish captions so that's more an indictment for them.

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>>34266131
Tonsils are actually very important to the immune system. There is no other useless part of the body like the wisdom teeth, so there's nothing to compare it to

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>>34216980
Time (s)Mutt

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQZDUqgS2UHjp8sPxC_JdEOBpEuReM2dUdeLE5Y_yVqSJsfa5axdsZgMZIIdCeXAVnvXhXVBM-Enhbi/pub

"I accidentally lewded my dog" -Ouro Kronii, 2022

Tags: NSFW, Kronii, Bestiality

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>>34262892
Hey AA, looks like "Gura's Cousin Chapter 7" is actually linked to PD;PT Kurokami chapter in the Series archive.

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>>34266883

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>>34267965
>There is no other useless part of the body
Appendix?

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>>34268888
There's talk of it being important to the immune system too, though the whole thing is still a bit in the air. It's pretty amazing how little we know about our own body. Even if it is useless, removing your appendix is a very invasive surgery. Wisdom teeth is 2 days of eating yogurt

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>>34268992
>Wisdom teeth is 2 days of eating yogurt
And taking oxycodone if you want to risk getting hooked on opiates.

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>>34269525
Unless you're actively trying to abuse the stuff, a couple days' worth of oxy isn't going to get you addicted.

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>>34269525
I took basic pain killers for the first day and nothing else. Why are Americans like this.

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>>34269825
Doctors getting people addicted to opiates is far from a burger-only problem

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>>34269825
I didn't get opiates for my wisdom teeth getting either and I'm a burger

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>>34270019
As far as I'm aware, opioid usage is heavily moderated in most countries with common sense, especially Europe. Hell, even my backwards third world country I have never even seen an opioid in my life despite having had leg surgery. I wouldn't be surprised if US is cutting back on it now, because opioid abuse was a real problem in the media like a decade ago.

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>>34267984
Sorry that your story is getting ignored. We got like two or three fags who would rather talk about off-topic bullshit than talk about writing or stories in /wg/.

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>>34269825
Because the Pharma companies heavily pushed for painkillers in the 90s and no one did anything about it until it became a problem which led to more problems.

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>>34270296
I'm not reading a bestiality story.

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>>34270296
If it's that important to you then why not give it some feedback instead

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>>34270296
don't mind
I'm just here to have fun

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>>34270332
What baffles me is that these people take it as if it's the status quo. I genuinely can't tell if Americans believe people do things like they do or that they just don't know that what they do is retarded

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>>34270296
I don't even know why they're talking about pharma or healthcare. Seems jarring to see that shit discuss here on a board dedicated to vtubers.

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>>34270387
Stop wiggling. We'll have none of that here.

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>>34270463

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>>34270387
[spoiler} there should be a version of this where she's going faster but instead of speeding up she slows down to a halt

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>>34270387
T-Towabeast.... onegai....

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>>34270630
won't be my next one, but it might be the one after that, or at the latest, 2 after
next one I'm deciding between
>Azki and Roboco gangbanged by lust virus wireframe men
>Towa, Laplus, Choco, Ayame(and maybe Irys) as part of a giant demonic lord's slave harem
not sure which one I want to go with

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>>34270217
I mean, unless my dad actually broke his leg teleporting to America and not falling off a balcony, I'm liable to say he was prescribed opiates when he didn't need them if his brother didn't get any for breaking his back.

I'm done arguing about this regardless.

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>>34270387
faster
>>34270426
As an American I can safely tell you that most of us don't think about what other countries are doing.
For example, most Americans are unaware that you can eat food that isn't made with HFCS. I blame the Atlantic and Pacific Oceans.

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>>34270960
It's true. Americans in this thread didn't even know they were eating sweet pancakes and not regular ones all along

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>>34270296
>You have to like bestiality
If you're so sorry then read it yourself and write your own feedback.

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>>34270802
If you can pull off the latter, I'll actually call you a god.

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>>34271604
Well now you've challenged me.
Now that you're at least a little invested, I'm going to enlist a little help from you, though.
Is the dick just barely at the size where you can stretch a girl over the tip, or is it so big that it isn't even remotely possible?
I've been flip-flopping on this since I came up with the idea.

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>>34271779
NTA but I'm a big fan of cervix penetration.

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>>34271779
I'd prefer if the dick isn't monstrously huge but just big and skilled enough to conquer women and make them fall in love with the dick

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>>34270802
>>Towa, Laplus, Choco, Ayame(and maybe Irys) as part of a giant demonic lord's slave harem
Please pick this one. This sounds like the exact kind of trashy smut I've been waiting for.

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>>34271779
Big enough to stretch 'em out and make 'em look preggers as they get fucked.

Don't worry, they can handle it. They're celestials.

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>>34272505
Now you've got me second-guessing the size in the first place.
It's definitely going to be huge, that's non-negotiable; some of the scenes I have in mind won't work otherwise.
>>34272843
I think I'll settle for 2 feet long, and somewhere around 5 inches thick. That way it still counts as huge but I can still work it in the holes somehow.

[Anonymous No.]

I-I-I-I-I got this feeling yeah you know
Where I'm losing all control
Cause there's magic in my bones

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>>34217033
> Okayu admits she met Korone when she was around 18~ years old
> Korone has over a decade's worth of an age gap between them
> Okayu, fresh out of high school, met Korone when she was about to turn 30

So this is what the groomer talk is all about... Okayu was groomed into becoming a lesbian...she's doing the same to Risu, and now the gap is almost 20 years. Why is Korone like this? She can't keep getting away with it!

Also, fic.

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>>34273030
I'm in love with this hawk.

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>>34273909
Would you wake up early to catch her worms for breakfast?

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>>34266883
First Summer Memories doko?

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>>34267984
Good stuff. I like how you characterized Kronii as a degenerate who knows it and that fact gets her off, it makes her dirty talk and actions being "routine" much hotter. I also think you got a real knack for how to write cock worship. no homo.

My only real complaint is that I feel like it could have been longer. Like I enjoyed the titfucking scene, but I feel like there could be more to it like tongue or something.

>>34272858
Big enough to leave a bulge in their stomach but not horse cock huge IMO. Make it an inhuman dicking but not a monsterous dicking, you know?

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>>34274085
I wanted to keep this one short, didn't feel like stretching it out too long, so I'm happy with where it is. Thanks for the compliments on it, though.
As for my next fic, I probably am going horse cock huge desu. I don't have too many ideas for monsterfucking when it comes to chuubas and this is honestly the best one I have in the bag, so I'm gonna hit the fetishes I have that I can with it. Sorry to disappoint.

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>>34274039
I want her to spit chewed up worms into my mouth if you catch my drift.

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>>34274379
>I wanted to keep this one short, didn't feel like stretching it out too long, so I'm happy with where it is.
No worries I understand completely. It's more of a nitpick anyways and "I wish it was longer" isn't the most constructive criticism.

> Sorry to disappoint.
It's your fic my man do what you want, so long as it hits the mark anything goes really. It's all fantasy anyway.

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>>34274680
You want to her little bird?

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>>34253360
Lord of the Rings or the Silmarillion. Depends on which of the two I read most recently

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>>34275410
Hell yeah, you wouldn't?

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>>34266883

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>>34274039
Hawks don't eat worms, s'wit. They eat small animals like bunnies or mice.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34276476
Peko-chan...Bae....

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>>34276476
They'll eat whatever I write them eating, you n'wah.

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>>34276562
Getting eaten by the hag hawk. A little bunny, squealing in terror as this huge bird holds her down, taking everything she wants from her. Bae, cowering as silent as she can, heart racing, watching the scene before her eyes. She knows she's next, that her doom is inevitable. Still, she can't look away as the petite rabbit is violated by the natural predator.

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>>34276890
The face Pekora makes when she sees Lui swooping in for the kill.

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Finished, Lui looks up, Pekora's juices still covering her face. The rabbit, beaten, thrashed, and eaten lies in the grass panting, juices still dribbing out of her. Lui launches herself into the sky, silently peering down to the ground, her razer sharp vision honing in on moving blades of grass. THERE! Before Bae knows it the raptor is on her, pinning her to the ground. Bae tries to turn over, tries to run away, but Lui's hands are steel. She looks directly into her predators eyes and accept her fate just as Lui begins to feast on her.

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Before Lui can properly begin her meal she hears a roar overhead. Looking up she spys a C-130, and two parachutes opening. Squinting against the sunlight Lui sees it's Okayu and Korone. They must have come as backup, or to detour Lui from overhunting. "Not safe for a hawk to be out in this weather," she muttered as the duo drifted lower, "It's raining Cats and Dogs."

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>>34277695
lel

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>>34225592
Haven't actually started working on it but I do have some ideas for more scenes to put in between the whiplash, though if anyone has any as well I wouldn't mind hearing them.

I have one where you'll be drugging Kobo's candy bars with an aphrodisiac and watching her touch herself from a hidden camera in her room at night. Another is that her parents put her in charge of managing their water usage, to have her feel like she was contributing and helping their financial situation any, which led to them sharing bath's and showers so Kobo actually finds it comforting to bathe with somebody else. Doubly so if that person can explain and replicate the funny feelings she's been getting after bedtime.

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>>34216980
Reine Rises
https://rentry.org/d5oz2z

Tags: SFW, Reine, contemplation

A few weeks ago, /mep/ pitched the idea of writing a fic with less than 1k words and this is my attempt at it.
Feedback is very much appreciated.

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>>34278848
Two Questions:
1) Why isn't Reine's mom queen
2) Rulers fuck around all the time so why would Reine worry about having all her hobbies go away.
Sorry for the autism. I don't watch Reine so I can't give a proper critique. Although, a fic of Reine being a princess could be pretty comfy.

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You, I'm talking to you. Erase it. Do not forget. At all costs. Do not forget. You are... I... I am...

[Anonymous No.]

>>34274379
>I wanted to keep this one short, didn't feel like stretching it out too long, so I'm happy with where it is. Thanks for the compliments on it, though.
Yeah, but enough about the dick.

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>>34279232
1. Voluntary abdication was what was in my mind
2. Not all rulers are lazy fucks. Galienus and Kavadh I come to mind. And to my knowledge, newly crowned monarchs have a shit ton of stuff to do like currying favor with the local elite and reaffirming diplomatic ties, which often lead to their own problems down the line.

Figured these details aren't particularly too important to include, especially for a fic that's supposed to be less than 1k words.

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>>34279799
Leisure ≠ being a lazy fuck
Napoleon, for example, was fond of riding horses and being a cuck.

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>>34280404
Oh well if that's what you meant, its just how I imagine Reine would feel anticipating when she gets burdened with more responsibilities than what she's grown used to.

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>>34281432
I get it now.
If you have the time, you should write a fic where queen Reine forces a peasant Kiara to have sex with her.

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>>34278829
>whiplash
Pretty sure if you're planning on expanding the fic like this it wouldn't have that whiplash anymore it would just have a normal narrative arc unless you're planning to keep it ambiguous until the 'big reveal' that (You) were grooming Kobo.
Still it's good to see you're going to go back and expand the idea. I really liked the potential the fic had.

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>>34278848
Your vocabulary could use a touch more range and variety, but other than that it’s pretty decent writing. You were able to paint a pretty good picture at the beginning and the image stuck around in my head until the end. I can’t say much about the actual contents because this seems more like a writing exercise than something that tries to tell a story, but I guess if that’s the point, you did a good job.

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>>34284228
>this seems more like a writing exercise
Essentially, yeah. Make a fic with less than 1k words was the challenge, as well as my first attempt at writing something SFW for once.

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>>34268107
Fuck me. Is the author of GC around with a link to 7 or is it going to be an archive dive?

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>>34286363
Pretty easy archive dive desu
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQxPPEIvSoDdvzTZxiGV3xHq-FLwS3ceQdKLnSK8UbplV9avufAiiB9sRLCqEHa5LsAEuEcvMMs9422/pub

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>>34286363
NTA, but diving the archive with "Gura's Cousin" gets me this:
>>28459024
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQxPPEIvSoDdvzTZxiGV3xHq-FLwS3ceQdKLnSK8UbplV9avufAiiB9sRLCqEHa5LsAEuEcvMMs9422/pub

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>>34286561
>>34286586
Thanks, I appreciate it.

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>>34276476
>>34276562
>>34217033
Your hawk mother Lui catching a small rodent girl for you to practice hunting on.

[Anonymous No.]

Lui owes me sex

[Anonymous No.]

>>34291872
Wait your turn.

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>>34291996
I want to fill that hag's ovaries with gallons of my semen. She's run my tap dry in an hour.

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>>34284855
>less than 1k words was the challenge,
NTA but my first thought in regards to doing something like that would be by telling the story entirely via dialogue and as little narration as you can get away with, with the plot being something dead simple like abuse, cheating, etc. Perhaps while intentionally using as much whitespace and laconic prose to add to the theme.

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>>34291996
God what an erotic hawk...

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>>34261411
>Miori and Bae drinking some weak alcohol so bae can keep up
>Bae cant open her can.
>Miori calls her cute
>Bae tells her no, YOU are cute
>game of chicken start
>Miori tells her that she's cute as a button
>Bae tells her she's cute and sexy
>Miori starts getting heated up but tells her people would line for the chance to have sex with her
>Bae tells her no one would line up for Miori because she wouldnt let her get out of the bedroom
>Miori notices she's getting beaten
>She tells bae she's all talk and no bark . Probably even kisses like a virgin
>Bae Laughs, scoots closer and whispers ''you would love that huh cherrygirl''
>Miori is stuttering and overheating
>Bae starts touching her thighs and whispers that she wouldnt mind teaching her how to kiss
>Miori taps out, clearly outdone
>Bae tells her she needs to do a punishment game
>Miori Accepts
>''close you eyes, open your mouth and stick your tongue out''
>Miori braces for a spicy thing
>French kiss and making out
That's all i have,maybe someone can work with that

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>>34291872
That me? Me.

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>>34292814
She strikes the perfect balance of sexy, pretty and cute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34295633
>One MMD animator on Twit. is making an animation of her jerking you off
>All this
Hnngh.

[Anonymous No.]

ARISE

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>>34298371
J-just give me a minute. It takes a little when I'm nervous to get going...

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>>34299212
So how's it going?

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>>34299905
I'm gonna need the pill for this I think. He's a bit shy right now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34299973
How's birth control going to help?

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>>34300207
I think he means viagra

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>>34298371
dont you mean AWAKEN MY MASTERS

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>>34283322
Getting rid of the whiplash is the plan yeah. It only exists because i was lazy

[Anonymous No.]

>>34301201
Holy shit this guys Twitter is a fucking rollercoaster

[Anonymous No.]

I don't want to see your fucking face right now, AZKi

[Anonymous No.]

>>34306697
Tower...

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>>34306697
devil SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

[Anonymous No.]

Do you think it's possible to become someone who can make art like Berserk, HunterXHunter, Made in Abyss or Attack or Titan or is it really the same as having an Einstein or a Mozart; that legends are born different from the "rest" and no matter the effort you can never reach them? There are people here who seem to have a passion for writing that extends beyond fan fiction, so I wonder. Do you think you could ever reach their level if you tried hard enough?

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>>34306697
>>34306973
>he wants to see some weird boy instead of AZKi

That's pretty gay anon, but you do you.

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>>34308603
Yes, just like how IQ isn't a limiter, but more-so an indicator of how hard you'll have to work to understand concepts granted that you aren't retarded.
Art competency and storytelling can be trained.

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>>34308603
>comparing all that dogshit to berserk
The battle was lost before it begun. But to answer your question yes it is possible to get on the level of Berserk and Vagabond. You just need to practice. Same goes for writing. Also, there are some fics in the archive that are legitimately better than published books that I've read.

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>>34292758
I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the suggestion!

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>>34309118
Berserk's author started the series at the age of 22. How much practice do you think he had, being fresh out of college? Basically none.

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>>34309682
He was drawing all throughout middle school, high school, and college. He even won an award for the manga he drew in high school. That's a lot of practice and time to hone his skill as mangaka.

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>>34309809
But is it enough practice to write Berserk? Apparently so for him, yet there are thousands of mangaka putting the same if not more amount of effort and they can't come close to compare

Personally, I think some people are born gifted, natural geniuses, and that yes you can reach their level, but it takes an insurmountable amount of effort to reach even near them. That is not to say these geniuses aren't also putting effort, but there's something different about it.

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>>34309996
Well if that's how you feel then I can't convince you otherwise.

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>>34310217
Not false

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>>34310217
This was not about convincing each other it was more of exploring the mindset of someone who thinks otherwise

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>>34308603
A little of column A, a little of column B. I'm someone who has a pretty significant visual disability, and because of this my growth as an artist was always painfully slow, because what is art if not your ability to translate what you see into a canvas? I can study the theory as much as I want; "a body is X heads tall", "perspective is done with x amount of points", "red and yellow mixed will make orange" etc., but if I struggle to see the world around me in the first place, I will struggle to draw it on a piece of paper.

I say this because natural talent is absolutely a factor on how quickly someone can grasp certain concepts, but practice and hard work ultimately can make someone who is less talented be a much better artist/writer/musician than someone who's talented but lazy. Talent is a leg up, no doubt about it, but it's not something that can't be overcome with practice.

Ultimately once you attain mastery, natural talent becomes irrelevant and what ends up setting you apart is your creativity, and how you apply your skills. Even in the art world, some people are much better suited for certain things than others; look at ONE for example and how One Punch Man's original manga is regarded as having "incredible paneling" and yet the art that fills those panels is supbar. Lots of artists are amazing at coloring, but once you put their knowledge of anatomy to the test you start seeing some fucked up shit.

Being a "legend" is equal parts talent, hard word and luck, to be honest. Luck always plays a factor. Just because you find it hard to match up doesn't mean you shouldn't do it. The world is literally inhabited by mediocre people, there's no shame in being another one of them.

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>>34310670
>reddit spacing
>content with mediocrity
Pottery.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34310941
Since when are line breaks considered "reddit"?

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>>34311911
I wouldn't bother responding to the retard; anyone declaring a line break to be "reddit spacing" has gotta have severe brain damage.

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>>34308603
No. Hard work will only get you so far, as will talent; you need both to reach the stars.

Hard work will get you to professional level, though.

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>>34312574
I occasionally think about this in a sort of timeloop. People naturally will be born better than others, and there's nothing you can really do about other than bust your ass to achieve what comes to them naturally. I then think to myself "that's unfair as fuck" but then remember "wait, the world IS unfair". The people who still think the world can be a fair place are the ones who suffer the most in my opinion.

[Anonymous No.]

Has anyone noticed any fics in the archive written in passive voice? I'd like to see one in the wild

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>>34314821
Entirely in passive voice? I don't think you'll find much examples since that'd take a lot of planning, editing and deliberate writing in order to get a good story out of it.
I'm sure you'll find some examples in the archive but I don't think anyone really writes in passive voice deliberately given that common wisdom is to write in active voice 99% of the time.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bs0SPxrg7DU
I haven't watched one of her streams in quite a while and I forgot how much I want to hear her chirpy, energetic voice making slurping sounds as its owner sucks my cock

[Anonymous No.]

>>34314821
We're not writing in Latin so that would be very hard to do in English.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34317679
>I haven't watched one of her streams
That's okay, anon. No one here watches streams.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34317949
Kill yourself, indog.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34317679
NO LEWD FRIEND!

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>>34318478
Sorry, but I really want to tie up and impregnate my hag friend.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34318478
She's such a babe though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34317723
Sounds like fun could be had though, if it was written well.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34317679
>still making phasmophobia streams

almost as bad as ff14 streams

[Anonymous No.]

>>34319219
Can't believe she has been streaming that for 4 years

[Anonymous No.]

Your wife Marine asks for an open relationship!
Marine tries to get your trust by letting you fuck one of her coworkers!
Marine hates seeing you enjoy yourself with her!
Marine dies inside while you get all lovey dovey with her coworker!
Marine being emotionally unable to find another man despite the fact the wanted it to begin with!
Marine hearing crazy wild sounds from a one night stand with another one of her coworkers!
Marine crying herself to sleep in a separate room while she knows you're having intimate cuddling with your new partner!

[Anonymous No.]

>>34319219
At least it's an entertaining game. FFXIV is a slog like all MMOs.

[Anonymous No.]

I won't write this for a while, but for a fic about a chubby Moona trying to lose weight with sex, the best title would be "Waning Gibbous", right?
Cause it's a big moon(Gibbous) that's getting smaller(Waning)
Would probably be better than "Full Moon" or "Waxing Moon"

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>>34320010
Please don't try to make a fic based on a pun you came up with

[Anonymous No.]

>>34320772
No, it's not based off the pun. The pun is based off the fic.
I just want to write chubby moona getting dicked.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34320821
Why chubbr

[Anonymous No.]

>>34321303

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>>34320010
Yeah, that'd be the correct title.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34321390
>What are you gonna do with it.
You're lucky my penis doesn't fit through an USB port.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34321390
Why do you think chuuby Moona is hot

[Anonymous No.]

>>34321806
Why don't you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>34321806

[Anonymous No.]

>>34322561
Fucking gross, dude

[Anonymous No.]

>>34323831
Faggot

[Anonymous No.]

>>34323831
It's ok, anon. I accept your raging homosexuality.

[Anonymous No.]

which chuubas would be the best suited for a lovey dovey harem with their dad(you)?
That kobo pasta gave me some ideas

[Anonymous No.]

>>34324805
>which chuubas would be the best suited for a lovey dovey harem with their dad(you)?
None since I assume most, if not all of them, think Incest is wrong and illegal.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34324068
Porka

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>>34324068
currently writing a sequel to the thing that inspired that image for the record

[Anonymous No.]

>>34324805
This seems like it's a case of either pick all the cunny you the author likes, or pick all the chuubas that are vaguely in the same family structure like Subaru and Ayame.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34324805
Probably the ones that act the most childlike/immature:
Nene
Luna
Miko
Kobo, obviously
Gura
Bae
Pekora
Ayame
La+
Haachama

Godspeed. I wish you luck.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34325638
Based.

[Anonymous No.]

Kobo has a bad day at school, Regis comforts her in a wholesome way: They prank the shit out of Axel

[Anonymous No.]

>>34331605
this except it's anon not regis and anon pranks kobo with his dick

[Anonymous No.]

>>34331605
add in Bae and vesper having tea in a new age bar, with vesper ranting about how jar are not glasses

[Anonymous No.]

I wanna pin down Ina and forcefully lick the sweat off her waif body.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34336300
Should have just let the thread die, no point in trying to bump it at this point.

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>>34278848
In terms of it being a story, it's fine it gets across the idea but it felt more restrained but the format rather than embracing it, by which I mean the way it sets the scene and characters makes it seems like it wanted to have more words to try and say more but found itself not really having the room to grow so it has those first few paragraphs eating up word count like a normal fic but then it has to rapidly close out the story before it hits the limits.
Still it's a good attempt at a writing challenge.

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>>34267984
>"Wha-GWAAAAK!" As she was deep in her thoughts, she leaned too far back in her chair for a moment, tumbled over, and crashed to the ground. She lay flat on the floor, staring straight up at the ceiling. "Yeah, that's about right. Guess I'll just stay here for a while."

Yea that's solidly Kronii

[Anonymous No.]

>>34336430
And not mention squid sweat? Can't do it

[Anonymous No.]

>>34336842
I was very proud of that one, kek

[Anonymous No.]

>>34337601
Me on the right.

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>>34325071
/thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34338424
Based Hermitbro creeping on the weird octupus girl who shows up outside my cabin at night asking if she can come and see if I "have any good pigments inside"

[Anonymous No.]

>>34274379
thought about this
...do I give him an actual horsecock, even?
I know I want to do something with it other than it being a giant purple human penis

[Anonymous No.]

>>34340829
Personally think you should reserve the horsecock for when you actually want to make some horsefucking a giant demonic bitchbreaker seems enough.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34341365
Fair enough. Definitely doing something to at least put a little flair on it, though

[Anonymous No.]

Just caught Airi's Ringfit stream and it was a fantastic symphony of moans the whole time. I hope the anon working on that story picks up where he left off.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34341980
>Ringfit
That's still a thing? I thought it was a passing fad.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34341980
Who?

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>>34341801
Honestly unless you're just planning for the fic to just be 'Demon Lord fucks his slave harem' the scenario seems packed enough already, especially if you're going to do something like showing how he caught and broke all of them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34341980
Who the hell is Airi?

[Anonymous No.]

>>34342772
Looks like some Indonesian indie vtuber.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34342879
Forgot the link
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcrJWJBgpZ1A-EoFKqRRzOg

[Anonymous No.]

>>34267984
Nice

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>>34342909
Ah, a literal who. Never mind.

[Anonymous No.]

>>34337832
You should be proud, its funny

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>34343389