/wg/ Writing General - Schizophrenic Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>33610252

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

OPERATION LANDFALL: Tags: Cyberpunk, dossier, Zer0Gen: >>33618292

Let Me Feel Your Pain: Chapter 15:tags: (you), Roboco, Fauna, romance, ryona, tragedy:>>33670129

Samurai Showdown:Tags: SFW, Fubuki, Mio, blood:>>33681141

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Noel is in her last days of training before she is officially a knight:>>33614796

Matsuri gets fucked by an oji-san in a dark alley.:>>33615730

Story about Noel being slowly embittered over years of taunting from fellow female knights about her “unsightly” (read: monstrously thicc and inhumanly stronk) body, burying her misery and self-consciousness under her knightly persona and mostly genuine kindness and altruism.:>>33626811

Haneru and Mea "bully" Roberu live in front of an audience:>>33642581

Something concerning Chisaka Airi from Phase Connect?>>33645085

Lui goes into AV to fund HoloX:>>33655321

Anything with Mio triying to look younger than she is:>>33660709

Ame fantasizing about Shien while being fucked by Altare.:>>33660804

Fic where Miko is your Older sister and you have incestous sex with her.:>>33677039

Beating child chuuba for wetting the bed and punishing her with humiliation:>>33681383

Chuuba pity-fucking you or vise versa:>>33684854

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low productivity today, only got about 800 words in, got distracted by chuuba streams and fapping, might get a bit more done before I sleep though. finally getting to some of the good stuff, at least.

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Alright it's not the best. I'd even go as far as to say it's pretty bad. And worse still it's the first time I've ever written smut, and the first and last time I'm writing a (You) story but I told the anon from /pcg/ he'd have his smut in this thread and dammit he will. The pacing is weird because I've never been in a tall building and I have no idea how much timee you have to molest a girl on a public elevator but I did what I could with the greentext provided and I really had fun here and there despite feeling insane writing in 2nd person. So here goes nuttin.

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Question for fellow writers: do you find it easier to have a single WIP that you focus your efforts on, or have 2 or more that you jump from depending on what your mood is? I've been sticking with the former, as I'm horribly ADHD ridden and I feel if I get distracted making WIPs I'll never finish anything, but I've been considering keeping 2 running at once so I can pick and choose what I'm feeling.

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>>33695103

TAGS: Airi, (You), Chikan, Whatever else you guys think. I threw in some art because even I kno it's a blue ball of a plot.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT_MPZkAAk2UNiDTHJ2d5BujtAi8tbNtXKQD_hkDSnCmqwvKs9o5eqNDD6_lPUzhc7U3gmUjGhN6KVS/

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>>33693054
Hey I noticed while doing an archive dive this marine fic never got archived.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSce-bsQLB9tGJWqVnldV_jw7-t-26EJIy1-mBbXdnaaVv3a8H04t5vpAkwC2EVPQUB1CBEtXoWnYha/pub

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>>33695230
Looks like it was abandoned midway.

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>>33695210
It says the file doesn't exist. Did you publish it yet

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>>33695210
Anon you're supposed to give the published link google gives you not the one in your address bar.

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>>33695364

i checked and my links still works i must have fucked up a digit or something?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT_MPZkAAk2UNiDTHJ2d5BujtAi8tbNtXKQD_hkDSnCmqwvKs9o5eqNDD6_lPUzhc7U3gmUjGhN6KVS/pub

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>>33695130
I'm strictly a one at a time kind of guy because I find starting things to be infinitely easier and more addicting. If I let myself run free I would never finish anything.

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>>33695575
Gonna give you the advice I was given when I was a newfag.
Formatting. Up your line spacing and ESPECIALLY your paragraph spacing. Then break it into more paragraphs.

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>>33695210
>>33695575
You forgot the 'pub' at the end.

It's pretty hot. I don't know this girl so I can't say much for accuracy but I do agree that it's kind of a blue ball, though it feels less like the story has them interrupted and more that it ends before the build-up really does if that makes sense. The pictures aren't really necessary I don't think.

>>33695130
Stick with the former I beg you. Cause soon enough just having one other WIP turns into 3, then 4, then next thing you know you have over a dozen.

>>33695230
Case in point, I posted that WIP kind of as a joke if you see the thread it's from.
I don't really want that archived just yet.

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>>33695644
I'm paranoid about touching formatting because i'm illiterate dealing with google tools, and its always obscure as fuck how to fix something after you completely fuck it up. which ironically is exactly what happened writing this and why i didn't get to bed by 1AM.

I'll take your advice for when I finally get around to publishing the 3 WIPs I actually care about.

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>>33693117
Inspired by previous thread's "Luna Rape" shitposting:
A fic where everything is trying to rape Luna, but turns out she's a slut so she consents to it every time, so they lose motivation and stop. The fic then becomes about Luna trying to find someone or something that actually wants to have CONSENSUAL sex with her, and isn't only interested in raping her.

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>>33695130
I stick to one project at a time.The exception is when I reach the editing/redrafting phase, in which case I might start a new project and work on that in between editing.

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>>33695828
TTRPGs (in person) and book clubs (online)

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>>33695728
Her characterization is actually fucked up on her own part anon. She was hired to play a ditzy big boned combination of Noel and the female MC from Kakegurui who masturbates on the toilet playing online poker, but then real life got in the way 4 weeks after her debut and now 2 months out shes just a walking argument for why it sucks to be an overworked azn who sends all her stream money to her mommy because that's how being korean works apparently. She can be convinced to do anything by her stream, even buying a 2000$ microphone just a few days after her twitch oil barons dropped 8k dollars on her (half of which went to mommy.) She's really pitiful and hot, I wish I could play fetch with her and cheer her up.

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>>33695575
oh my fucking GOD

leave a fucking line between paragraphs, PLEASE

i am not going to strain my eyes reading this

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>>33696099
I don't mind the request but it feels a little random, since I've been writing on the internet for 12 years since the Delta Green fandom was still alive and the formatting meta was basically the same as a published book, but I'll try to make it look like something on ao3 even though my brain cells are slowly fizzling away as it is because of this work

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>>33696550
Btw to save myself the gigantic headache from ever happening again HOW THE FUCK do you remove a Line Indentation.
What the FUCK google Automattic basically built this system for you and you deliberately make it more unintuitive to be different.

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>>33698310
shut up azki, it's been a bad day

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>>33698310
I'm working.

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>>33693117
Kiara getting tied to a rocket to make a fireworks display on new years eve.

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>>33681141
The concept seems interesting, but it ends too soon for me to really judge it. The prose is good, barring a few grammar things here and there.

Overall a promising start

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>>33700259
What does it promise?

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>>33695130
A writing session for me consists of jumping between (an average of) 3 WIPs. It’s very rare for me to focus on a single fic when writing because the ideas stop coming for the one I’m focusing on, then start flowing for another one, which I switch to so that I can avoid hitting my head against the desk.

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>>33695130
One WIP because any more will slay me.

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>>33695130
I prefer to write one thing at a time. Once I start working on something I obsess over it until it's done.

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>>33695130
I used to do multiple WiPs but recently just switched to just one or two. When I'm stumped with one, I just work on the other.

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HAIL TO THE KING! HAIL TO THE ONE! KNEEL TO THE CROWN! STAND IN THE SUN!

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How are those projects coming along?

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>>33703332
3k words yesterday. 2,583 so far today.

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>>33703332
I think I've finally settled on the intricate worldbuilding needed for the Aqua AV fic. Still need to do some research in order to get her dialogue right since that's kind of core to how I plan this fic to work.

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>>33703332
Got a few hundred words out. Lower output than usual, but work was particularly hard today.

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>>33703332
Shit, I haven’t written anything for three days. Even today all I did was watch Pomu’s papers please stream and a bit of Elira’s DMC 3 then go to work. I need something to motivate me more.

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>>33704266
Applying motivation. Hold still.

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>>33703332
Slow and steady.

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ඞamogusඞ

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>>33703332
762 words in 4 days

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>>33703332
Currently stuck in outlining hell

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>>33704504
Miyabi my beloved.

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Holy fuck, this board is a literal hellscape. Tourist redditors and schizophrenic unicorns are going to war and spreading their diarrhoea across the catalog. I used to think /vtg/ would be unnecessary but having been here for over a year now I’m starting to reconsider. In terms of posts per minute we’re second only to /pol/ after all, and /vg/ exists. Would save all the bumping.

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>>33706222
It would cut down on the surviveposting and the schizo tourists, that's for sure.

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>>33698310
Are you ever going to write a fic with the "survive" scenario?

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>>33706460
What kind of fic would that even be? A dying man hearing the voice of a vtuber they like telling them to survive, a voice they keep ignoring but somehow getting closer. Until she pops.out of their computer all because she wants him to survive.
Or something like that?

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Yo, Kiara speaking Austrian was pretty hot ngl

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>>33706724
Would it get you to stop posting that image (assuming you are the only one that does it) if I said yes?

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>>33707344
No I don't post that image, I was just spitballing ideas.

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>>33707477
Oh, then disregard what I said then.

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>>33707051
In her GTA stream? Do you have a time stamp?

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>>33708052
No, she has a German channel where she will do only Austrian speaking videos, supposedly so she can kick start HololiveGER, at least that's her idea

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>>33693117
You meet a chuuba at a club/party/bar and end up going back to her place for a quick, one time fuck. She wants to feel you properly so you go without a condom. Your pull out game is too weak and you burst a load of semen into her womb, and though she takes a pill, within a month it turns out that she’s pregnant. Feeling partially responsible, you decide it’s time to step up and awkwardly bumble your way through to becoming a father to raise a child with someone you barely know.

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>>33709859
Who'd be best suited for this?

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>>33710705
A chuuba loose enough to have a one-night stand, but with the potential to be made an honest woman.
Choco? Marine? Chloe maybe?

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>>33710935
Choco would not do a one night stand without a condom, EVER. The other two whores probably would if you got game and though

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>>33703332
1.7k in three days. Not good but not terrible either.

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Out of curiosity, what's the longest fic (series or one-shot) in terms of word count?

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>>33711624
Holofantasy is the longest, and it’s not even close.

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>>33711068
Seriously? The fic is an obvious setup for "Choco tricks you into becoming her husband out of responsibility". She convinces you to not wear a condom because it "feels better", then "accidentally" wraps her legs around you, keeping you in at the finish. Oh nooooo, she's pregnant, guess you have to marry her and raise a family together.

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>>33710935
If you argue that they’re drunk and feeling desperate/depressed over something and looking for instant pleasure, you could probably widen the margin if available chuubas and just have them regret it later on. Someone who’ll panic at being pregnant would be nice, maybe Kiara or Haato.

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>>33711624
I just wanna throw in this little fun fact:
The longest fanfic in general is The Loud House: Revamped, with a word count (as of writing this) of 16,777,215 which is just one word short of the amount of colors in the RGB space.

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>>33711917
Actually now that I think about it, I would love to see Kiara in this, and I don’t care if people say she’s a lesbian (she quite liked the shirtless men in Yakuza). Imagine her freaking out and having a breakdown when she realises she’s pregnant, worried that she’ll have to raise a kid all by herself because of one stupid mistake. The relief she feels when you take responsibility and decide to help out, despite virtually being a stranger.

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>>33709859
This could be a really cute fluff story about falling in love with someone you didn't even know that well. Or an awful drama story about having to do the right thing at the expense of your own happiness with someone you don't click with.

Matsuri, Chloe, Polka (forma de depression), Aki, Choco, Mel, Haachama for Holos
Maybe Sara, Noraneko, Ange or Gundou out of Nijisanji.

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>>33712021
It takes a special kind of mental illness to write that much in only six years.

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>>33712122
Ange would be great.

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>>33712021
I thought it was that autistic smash bros. story?

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>>33711917
I'd like Kiara. Both for the sex part and the 'holy shit I'm pregnant' part

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>>33712273
The loud house fic dethroned it.

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>>33710935
it can work with irys or bae, who are relatively young and you can play with the very young mother angle

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>>33712122
>Noraneko
Raising an autistic child with an even more autistic wife! Having to save the life of your child multiple times because your wife’s stupidity nearly gets it killed! Wrangling both your child and wife, at the cost of your safety!

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Has heartbreak Tokyo 2 been released?

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>>33710935
Nene is like the perfect fit
>mentally ill
>retarded enough to go without a condom
>cute enough to guarantee you stay
>ultra retarded so you feel guilty in case you want to leave
>absolutely fucking braindead so she needs you to keep the child

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>>33695130
The later. Precisely because I need to brew my ideas beforehabd and sometimes I come up with good shit that fits nowhere on my current story

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>>33710935
Probably unlikely but what do you guys think of Miko?

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>>33703332
Fairly well.
I might post two chapters of two of my series next week

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>>33712021
>16,777,215
That’s probably longer than the entire archive combined. AA... think you can write 17 million more words for Holofan?

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>>33712580
What series?

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>>33712473
I had Nene in mind as well. Only thing is she’s a little cautious IRL so one night stands don’t really seem her thing. Then again, maybe she got drunk and wanted to show off her sexiness or something.

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>>33712549
i cant get hard with miko fanfics because my brain defaults to her retarded voice or somehow my brain plays her
>DE DE DE DE DE DE DE DE
as the bgm, so i just end up chuckling

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>>33711905
Choco is not that cheap bro. She is completely full of standards.

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>>33712333
Bae is trapped in the shed for a reason.
Also, checked.

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>>33712549
As much as I’d love to raise a kid with her I cannot see Miko hooking up with a random guy.
>>33712122
Sara would genuinely make an incredible, caring mother, and she’d absolutely be down for a quick fuck. A good candidate.

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>>33712620
Hormoning
Auntie's secret

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>>33712795
>fic where bae and other chuubas make a prision break with the intent of hitting town and having sex
with (you)

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>>33712889
Oh I read Auntie's secret yesterday, made me uncomfortable. Good job

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>>33712889
>Hormoning
Just gave it a quick glance and saw Abe fucking die. Made me laugh, I might give it a read later.

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>>33712962
That is one of the greatest compliments I've gotten. Thanks anon.

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to the guy that wrote the Miko armpit fanfic, great job it was great
Now im asking >>33693412
A fanfic about sniffing, fucking or cumming into chuuba armpits

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>>33712450
It has not, I'm still working on it.

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>>33712889
>>33713076
Alright, I read the first chapter. I love the setting of the story, first off, it’s so ridiculous but does what it needs to and is a pretty hot fantasy. I find it a bit strange that the general public seems to be still functioning normally, though, I think in reality if something like this happened there’d be measures that the government would be taking like lockdowns for women.
One thing I noticed about your writing (and it’s pretty common) is the overuse of adjectives.
>looking at him lecherously and obscenely
>lustful laughs
>the most lecherous look you could imagine
While adjectives are fine to use, I’d recommend not using them too much, especially when describing facial expressions because it feels a bit lazy. Describe her mouth, is she licking her lips? What about her eyes, what are they doing, where are they focused?
Overall though, it’s a fun set up and I’ll read the rest later.

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>>33712586
I hope the I can't/won't but I'm sitting on like, 8 chapter ideas at this point.

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>>33713310
Thanks, it was short but I wanted to get it out of my system. I'll look into adding more of Miko pifucking in my upcoming story about her, but that'll be a while until it's released.

>>33712385
>Suddenly enter a panic because your daughter is climbing a tall, heavy shelving unit and run to save her
>Look over to the side, enter a panic because Noraneko is bending a fork next to a power outlet

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>>33695575
Its fine but it kinda feels a copout? i dont know the girl so i cant tell if she reacts accordingly but its kind of anticlimatic how it was building to this big scene and it ended in nothing, not even cum blasting all over a toilet
Also this is more of a general nitpick, but the other people in the elevator being kind of frozen in time takes you out of it

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>>33714318
>measures from the goverment
I can't answer that before it's due time.
>adjectives.
I know you're meant to kill your adjectives, but it's one sin I can't let go of.
Thanks for your feedback anon, reslly means a lot to me

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When I write scenes or edit, or just normal male dialogue or inner monologue I use a computer. It works well, but for some reason I cannot write women unless I'm typing from the phone.

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>>33714742
Yeah I know. Its just an expanded green text and I may have followed my plan of of just expanding the green text into a fic too literally because when I got to the end and it just ends with
>"plan to do this a lot"
I had to figure out how to expand that into a scene and by that time I was well into the night and I didnt want to spend more time on a shitpost than necessary for a Chuuba nobody cares about. That said for what it is, that being a fic I wrote out of an obligation I felt for rejecting a request for non-Hololive material *one thread* after i was complaining theres not enough non-hololive material, I had fun with it, I oiled the gears in my brain to keep working on my main WIP and it may inspire someone to give Phase Alias if not Airi herself a try.

I think greentext stories should ideally end with a jumping off point to something more interesting. Like Mori sees you cheating. To this day I wonder what the author imagined manlet-kun's punishment to be and if anyone has ever expanded on that. Did she actually beat him bloody on the floor like in the fics where shes a drunk abusive alcoholic? Did she kill him and refuse to harvest his soul over and over? Did she force him to eat her out with the kind of energy a pinp would have forcing a working girl to suck his dick as a sign of submission? Forced Anal play? Did she make him clean her boots with his tongue? Write "cheater" all over his body and force him to walk around naked in the underworlds streets on a leash while random demons compliment her on having a cute pet human? Did he have to pay off her bar tab?

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>>33716195
sexist

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>>33716967
Escalating tortures ranging from beating to full on Higurashi nail pulling. Probably lose a molar or two in the process, just for funsies.
Source: I wrote that story eons ago, now.

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>>33717289
>Mori sees you talking to another girl
>You SEE her witnessing you talking to another girl, blood drains from your face as your heartbeat seizes for a moment
>She smiles at you
>You apologize to her later and inform her that she was just a coworker and it was work related talk
>She nods without saying anything
>Days pass with seemingly nothing wrong. But that's the problem.
>She's not even doing the usual stuff to you. No talking down to you, no threats. She's been completely polite.
>Polite to the point of it coming across as malicious.
>Anxiety begins to well up within as you begin to agonize over what exactly is going to happen to you. You know she's pissed. You know she's angry.
>Finally after days of agonizing you break down. You can't handle the waiting anymore. You've lost sleep and weight in equal measure from stress.
>You anxiously approach Mori, who regards you almost smugly, before begging her to just do whatever it is she wants to do to you and get it over with. You beg to the point of groveling at her feet like an animal.
>Mori just smiles at you again, although from your current position it's hard to see. Carefully, she reaches down to pet your head, the sensation of which causes you to jolt in a panic...before gripping a handful of hair, ripping you up to meet her gaze. A part of you relishes the feeling of pain, knowing that at the very least the pressure of unknowing is being abated somewhat.
>Another part of you is fucking terrified. This is more in line with the Mori you know. Your body's pain receptors kick in as your fight or flight instinct slams itself into 'flight' full force, but you've already been caught.
>"The bitch is already dead and gone -- not that you've been paying attention to anything, with all your worrying. I didn't even need to do anything to *you*. You took care of that for me. It's been a real nice show. But now that you're here, begging and all...I've been going over some things while you've been shaking like a leaf. Some ideas...some punishments. And now, we're going to go down the list real slow."
>She stands and effortlessly brings you up with her. She gives you another small smile that gradually unfurls into a malicious grin.

First posted 1 year ago.

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>>33717780
>1 year
Yep. An eon. A little baffling to see how far I've come from hammering out GTs in 10 minutes versus whatever the fuck it is I think I'm doing now.

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>>33717843
Are you like 12, anon? Ypu dont have to give me an answer but I'm at the age where a year is just... a year. I'm not floored unless I see something I did from 10 years ago when was a teenager.

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>>33717934
While time's flow has done nothing but rapidly accelerate as I've gotten older, the 'eon' comment was more referring to work done/effort expended on writing between then and now. It's a sort of feeling that a lot of time has passed between then and now, but eh. Though, encountering something truly ancient is always an eye opener too, if you really want to be hit with 'burden of time'. I think the oldest thing I have up is something from 2014.

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>>33718272
Post it

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>>33717780
>Mori lifts you up over her head undertaker chokeslam style
>hangs you by your shirt from the door
>takes off your belt and hangs in beside you
>she runs her cold, lifeless hands up your thighs, touching lingering in places, brushing over at others
>savors the sound of the pop from every segment of your zipper as she eases them off
>she puts her hand on the belt again.
>she starts to pull your pants off while your legs flail helplessly
>"Do you want me to use this belt, or do you want to go outside and cut me a switch?"
>your throat is too dry to respond, the choice between humiliation and pain feels surreal.
>mori chooses the belt for you.
>she paints your legs with stripes like a barber's pole.
>minutes pass as she beats you. Sometimes she strikes the exact same place over and over like a carpenter hammering nails into a piece of hard wood.
>you hold your breath at first but she keeps pounding you with your own belt harder and harder
>finally you scream. You scream and scream and keep screaming.
>Mori finishes by whipping your dick once.
>she grabs you by an ankle and lifts up your legs.
>you know shes always complimented you for having nice legs, and the situation might have been arousing if not for the fact that your dick was in shock
>she manipulates your legs so she can inspect your bloody calves, your bruising pale skin, the back of your legs, your flushed red thighs
>Mori lifts you again and gently sets you down on your knees
>your eyes swell with tears and emotion as you thank her repeatedly, sincerely, and gratefully.
>refuse to make eye contact with her, bowing your head until she signals that you can look at her.
>savor the feeling of relief pouring into you from her welts on your legs
>knowing that you'll carry the soreness, the pain, the stinging for days, maybe weeks because you heal so slowly
>your balls ache, your penis burns, any temptation you'll have for awhile is gone now. You only want to please Mori
>she tells you to boil some water so you can wash up for what's to come.

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>>33703332
I'll probably (assuming I wake up) do some more work on Let Me Feel Your Pain today. I've been on a roll with it lately and want to keep the momentum. Don't feel like working on much else. Maybe Lemon.

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>>33719487

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>>33719487
Well now I'm curious.

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How long is too long

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>>33720775
Depends on what you're writing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33720775
24cm

[Anonymous No.]

>>33720775
Entirely dependent on story.

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>>33720275
>>33719927
What are these reactions?

Did I post cringe or something?

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>>33720838
Depends on the girl. Risu could probably handle that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33721294
Indonesian are actually pretty small. She probably can't handle more than 15cm. At least that's what I use to cope

[Anonymous No.]

>>33721920
16 cm is the low end of her ideal size, I think 21cm is at the high end. She may be a size queen bit her expectations seem more realistic than I expected. I also converted my stats to French gay numbers and my penis sounds huge in metric.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33722106
>my cock is big enough for Risu
feelsgoodman

[Anonymous No.]

Hitting Risu's cervix with each thrust!

[Anonymous No.]

>>33722106
>>33722322
16cm isn't "in the low end of ideal" category, it's in "bare minimum for me to even feel it and not just turn you down on the spot" category.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33723157
Sorry I remembered wrong.
Her range is much more specific and her high end is lower, 17 to 20 cm.

https://streamable.com/nzxtpw

[Anonymous No.]

>>33723423
She's a small virgin LARPing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33723423
I'm 17,7 cm I think I'm good bro

[Anonymous No.]

>>33723673
Ha. That's very naive of you. Unlike Finana, Risu knows what she wants from experience, not from fantasy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33714138
Ok thanks

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>>33723935
She's had bigger. You'll be "ok" but you'll never be "amazing"

[Anonymous No.]

>>33724075
Fun facts about Finana!
>Finana owns a virgin killer sweater!
>Finana claims she is in fact a virgin!
>finana claims that she has never been kissed!
>finana claims that she has never held hands except with Pomu!
>Finana had her braces removed to be better at having oral sex!
>Finana uses a dildo to masturbate because she doesnt have a hymen!
>Finana has "Given birth" to vibrating eggs to re-enact a scene from The Sagara Family eroge!
>Finana's sexuality is believed by people on the internet!

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>>33724913
Do you really belib it?

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>>33724913
I don't actually watch Nijisanji I just hear she's a big virgin pretender. It's obvious she's probably had at least one or two guys before

[Anonymous No.]

>>33724811
It's not the size of the ship but the motion of the ocean.

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>>33725445
Risu will tell you otherwise. No really, she will. Chat has already tried saying that, she laughed in their faces and explicitly said "no, size matters"

[Anonymous No.]

>>33725445
Uhhuh. Right. Yup. Totally correct.

[Anonymous No.]

My wife is a closet fujo that probably never saw a dick in her life so my extremely average dick will shock her

[Anonymous No.]

>>33725591
Please, don't. You're making this too easy, it's shifting from funny to pathetic

[Anonymous No.]

Oshi thinks your dick is too small? Just get a smaller oshi!

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>>33720275
I was just thinking of https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Temperature_play and maybe have mori watch Anon wash his bloody, wounded legs in almost boiling water. Maybe he would cry. Maybe she would ignore him and leave the room but that feels more like neglect than torture so maybe she'd hold his hand while she pours hydrogen peroxide or alcohol on his legs. Something sweet like that feels like it should come at the end of the fic though so she'd probably just talk down to him. BDSM is very ritualized, ceremonial washings like that can be like a symbolic way to renew the submissive after humiliation, so after the washing maybe she'd do some verbal play and make anon grovel more, recite a promise about how he will control his behavior around other women.

After that I have no idea. I wish I had more but I self censor even in my own head a lot when I get into femdom or abuse because... well I'll be honest with you anon because my mother would whip me until my legs bleed every time I was caught masturbating to normal porn because she didn't want me to become a sex freak with weird complexes and I'm scared/ashamed to talk about this stuff and being very short is already enough of a debuff with women. Thanks momma

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>>33726044
Well, that's a different take on what was implied, but I guess it could be sweeter.
Sorry about your mom though. That shit sounds insane.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33725533
t. virgin

[Anonymous No.]

>>33725773
Post it

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>>33725533
Have you ever had a massive dick inside you?
Serious question. I'm a bottom and I like 5 to 6's the best precisely because massive dicks hurt.
Size queens exist, but more often than not the "it's how you use it." stands true.

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>>33726203
Well he would still ideally end up tortured after his promises, I think the only difference between me and the original author is I would write about the boyfriend realizing that instead of fear he can only feel gratitude that Mori still loves him enough to punish him and how happy he is that she's jealous of him, and relieved that he can finally atone for his awful terrible guilt because she's always right and he will always trust her to be right.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33726816
Do... do I need therapy or a very specific girlfriend?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33726795
Theres a difference between taking a dick in the whole you push children out of and taking dick in the hole you push turds out of gaytard.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33727010
The g spot button is at the entrance to the womb while the prostate is way closer, it's pretty reasonable what that guy is saying

[Anonymous No.]

>>33693117
suisei (or another chuuba as long as they are bottom heavy) getting stuck in a wall and fucked by a bunch of people

[Anonymous No.]

>>33727010
Ironically, it's much easier to train the ass to take larger insertions than the pussy because the rectum is stretchier, and the sigmoid colon can be trained to straighten out and accept penetration past the sphincter.

Women rarely feel pleasure from getting pounded in the cervix, despite it being pretty hot in fiction because of obvious reasons.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33726570
What, more Gooba?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728083
>Women rarely feel pleasure from getting pounded in the cervix
I mean I've heard that's actually kinda painful for them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728083
>Women rarely feel pleasure from getting pounded in the cervix
Can confirm. My sister had a boyfriend who was really chill and pretty likeable, but from what she told me, he had a pretty impressive dick and that made them finish their relationship because she didnt find it pleasurable at all to be rammed by that log of meat
she showed me a photo of his dick and it was like a salami. They still talk and it seems his dick is a dealbreaker for a lot of his relationships

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728707
Your sister really should've been a doll and spread her arsehole for him.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728246
If the dude is going ape mode then it can lead to the cervix being bruised which as you can imagine is quite painful.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728118
Yes, more Gooba.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728798
i dont inquire (or care) about my sister's sex life but i dont think taking an entire season of the sopranos up the ass is healthy on the long run

[Anonymous No.]

>>33728999
>is healthy on the long run
Whatchoo talkin' bout? Frequent anal sex has no effects on health at all, ceteris paribus. You should knock and your sister's door and explain to her she'd have been much happier with a gigantic dick up her ass.

Then whip yours out and take her for a spin.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33727628

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>>33730280
How's that creepy? Fuck off, that's actually hot. At least it's not more of his pedophilia fantasies.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33730280
He's creepy? Is the guy talking about femdom not creepy or is he just a regular who people learned to filter?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33730579
the only people that find incest hot never had a sister so im with that guy, he is creepy

[Anonymous No.]

>>33726935
>Do I need therapy?
Well let's break this down.
>mother beat you whenever you masturbated giving you a discipline fetish
>implied that physical abuse is proof of love
>wants to be micromanaged and controlled by a woman
>desires to basically be an islamic wife in saudi arabia in reverse
>wants to BLEED for the woman he loves
Therapy wouldn't be able to help you at this point

>Do I need a very specific girlfriend?
You're not gonna find any real women who are into femdom, but if a very tall physical woman that you're attracted to ever implies that shes down, I think you should go for it anon. I think she would make you really happy, it might be difficult if you have kids though if they ever start questioning why their father asks mommy if he can go to the bathroom at the movies or something.

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>>33730844
Dude, it's a fantasy for a reason. Do you think the bugfag wants to get eaten alive by wasp larvae?

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>>33731526
That's a fucking loaded question and you know it

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731640
Howabout: Do you think people into lolis are pedos?

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>>33730844
How 'bout you read that reply chain first before replying, bucko?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731761
Are people who play GTA murderers?

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>>33732556
There's your answer.
It's a fantasy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33732556
No. Just like people with an incest fetish don't actually want to fuck their relatives.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731761
yes

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>>33731761
They sure fuckin act like it

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731761
I'll just tell you something: don't browse through related if you use the loli tag on pixiv

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>>33724913
This stupid fish once went on a tangent about how it’s totally normal for a girl to pee all over herself during sex, after all it’s in all the comics. When chat called her out on that being retarded, she argued with them.

I generally err on the side of gleefully stomping out unicorn delusions, but if Finana isn’t a virgin she’s a great fucking actress.

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>>33733607
I actually had a girlfriend who always peed during sex so I think Finana was just using doujins as an excuse to argue for her personal experience

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731761
people into loli ARE pedos
>no i actually masturbate to this child ironically!

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>>33726795
Not massive per say but penetration doesn't feel all the good to start with, much less someone >6 inches. Can't speak for others of course but it's an opinion I've seen reflected frequently.

It *can* feel good, but the motion of the ocean doesn't really hold up in practice. Most of the time it just hurts and doesn't get the good part (the clit) as good as say fingering for instance. Plus, no dick can vibrate and that's always going to be a step up no matter the size. I've never been penetrated anally so perhaps there's something about that that's different.

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>>33733563
Already know about that. Pixiv is too busy dealing with diversity and not the literal cp on their site.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33733607
Either that's her fetish (which I could 100% believe) or she needs to do some kiegles. It is not normal to pee yourself when doing sex.

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>>33734969
>perhaps there's something about that that's different.
there isn't, it just burns. you get off on the context

[Anonymous No.]

>>33734969
Are you a girl?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33735138
I wish I knew before I got a new fetish

[Anonymous No.]

>>33734969
Women can cum from whispering in their ears. They also can cum from being penetrated. Fucking foul creatures they are. One thing I know for sure though is that I'll never ever try to make one of them cum

[Anonymous No.]

>>33735793
>Women can cum from whispering in their ears.
Not a woman but that shit is ridiculously hot and whilst I couldn't cum that alone, it's a massive booster

[Anonymous No.]

>>33731761
You can't phrase the question this vaguely or you'll get retards like this >>33734146 strawmanning you. The point is that despite many people having the base impulse to enjoy all sorts of crimes and bad behaviors, from petty shoplifting or bullying all the way to murderrape, the vast majority of humans have functionally integrated into society and thus don't actually act on those impulses.

But then of course the argument always turns to "but isn't consuming media like that creating real criminals by enabling their bad behavior?", and we tell them to cite literally any study confirming this hypothesis or compare it to the "videogames cause violence" craze a couple decades ago, and then they clam up or hurriedly change the subject, and then we laugh at their expense.

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>>33736236
Don't bother, the twitter trannies cannot be argued with.

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>>33735270
I'm the herm, so take all this with a grain of salt.

>>33735793
The thing I've notice with me (and some others) is that RP or the build up matters a lot more. It's why a lot more women are into erotica while guys find it easier to bust just from porn (again, not a hard and fast rule, but something I've personally seen).

I know for me, sexual pleasure is a lot more about the experience around it over the simple act of the friction. A lot of times, even if it does feel good, women struggle to orgasm because of a mental block or anxiety or disinterest. So even if you have a king sized hog in your trousers, it's not always going to save you, nor is motion of the ocean. Women can be aroused just in being swooned to their tastes.

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>>33734969
I agree with the fingering thing, but something common in women and bottoms is that most pleasure is psychological.

[Anonymous No.]

Due to extremely recent events I now have a desire to write Kronii beast smut.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33736603
So I'm curious, do you have balls or just a penis?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33736603
You say that but 20% of women who are raped actually orgasm despite desperately not wanting to, some more than once even. The whole mental block shit is a myth, it really is just that some men can't cut it

[Anonymous No.]

I really hate these recent threads. They've been zooming for no reason.

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>>33737225
Feel free to leave anytime.

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>>33737102
Penis and vag. But I'm not going to answer a whole lot more than that.

>>33737167
That's a minority though. 7 out of 10 of them aren't going to get much out of it besides trauma.

It is true that a lot of men can't hack it a lot of the time, but there is a lot of truth in psychological blocks. I can't tell you how many women I know who say even masturbating is difficult because of that. It's more like... you need the right headspace for it or it becomes tedious or impossible.

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>>33728118
no
https://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6589259

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>>33737065
...
What kind of animal?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33737894
Apparently a dog according to the Finana image bait thread

[Anonymous No.]

>>33737065
btfo'd unicorn or just a horny clock?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33737894
a nigger

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>>33717289
>>33717780
>>33719487

Well one of you has to do this now, even though I hate Mori Ill admit she has a nice JOI voice so I can see it.
>>33726935
Lotsa ways to be loved I guess so long as you arent into Feminization.

>>33731761
It really depends, I think a lot of people into Lolis legitimately dont want to fuck them, I think the very pretty highly stylized petite girl lolis like Pekora arent loli at all they're just small girls. In fact I think a lot of LolI shit actually comes down to a size fetish because small women make your dick look bigger.

>>33736603
You've been saying that forever but there are no True Hermaphrodites anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33737894
yeah it's dog.
>>33737978
Neither. Horny straight male starsfag. Yeah I'm surprised I exist too

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738067
not truly, no. I don't have ovaries and even if I did, I'm completely sterile so it wouldn't matter. My body is just a weird fluke. Just easier to say herm than it is to say kleins or intersex or any other term.

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>>33738127
Nice, can you please make it so all of council swings by a surprise visit and sees her naked, drenched in sweat and knotted, freaking out because they saw her? that's really hot
also what kind of dog?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738067
>I think a lot of people into Lolis legitimately dont want to fuck them
Not me, I absolutely want to fuck them.
>actually comes down to a size fetish
But this is also correct. I'm absolutely a fiend for shortstacks and draphs, and I'm not attracted at all to women over 160cm tall.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738450
whatever kind of dog Time Mutt is

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738127
A lot of the dudes in STARS seem like a lot of fun to have a drink with so I think more of your kind exists.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738127
Hey, you and me brother.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738067
> fuck lolis
I mainly want to get sucked off by a bratty loli. I feel like trying to fit my dick into cunny would be uncomfortable for both sides
> size difference
Don't know if that's true, but I am into yordles, fairies and the like. Maybe lolis are a middle ground for my minigirl fetish

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738542
>>33737065
If you're gonna bring in drama, at least fucking quote what the chuuba said

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738408
Feel free to not respond if it's uncomfortable but this is just pure medical curiosity, but can you get an erection too or is it not exactly functional.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738505
Nta but I try to like shorter girls because I'm short and I've basically accepted that nobody has an unironic preference for short people, but then big lady mean to me cum pant

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738882
She was talking about her dog time mutt and accidentally called it time smut.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738906
Stop

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>>33738542
and how are you gonna get that info unless her roomate happens to have photos of it huh? if you are taking suggestions im gonna say Doberman
>>33738882
what drama? anon didnt came in yelling rrats, he just came in saying that he wanted to write kronii fucking a dog dude chill

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738906
Like I said, I'm not going to answer more than what I have already. That's all I'll say further about it. I just wanted to give my two cents about PiV pleasure and size because I first hand experience.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739103
I think I'll wait for the inevitable Wataamage image and base it off that

[Anonymous No.]

>>33738968
Time smut would unironically be a great name for a Kronii series. I used to be a fan of Kronii but dropped her (I am not an anti shes fine and I hope she does well I just cant watch everyone all the time) and all I've written about her was a thing about her basically becoming the terminator to stop Ame's shenanigans.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739186
That's totally fine, completely understandable.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739205 (me)
HE ALREADY FUCKING DID IT, WHAT THE FUCK

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739103
It better not be, because this is probably the Choco dog writer and using another doberman would be doing the same thing again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739961
Dude works fast.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739103
>>33740012
yeah it is in fact chocobeast anon again.
so uh, anyone know what breed this dog actually is
https://files.catbox.moe/hd9li8.png

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740012
I liked the doberman, that's why i suggested it but you are right
>>33739961
link it faggot, im not diving into the shitfest that is the catalog

[Anonymous No.]

>>33739186
>I first hand experience.
Woooooow, a real cuntboy... Did your uncle not care about your penis when he fucked you or did you get beaten up afterwards?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740289
Kinda looks like a shiba inu

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740319
I'm not that anon, but klinefelters syndrome is a chromosomal issue, one of the bond girls that was a tranny had the condition.

They dont actually have vaginas though, because, and this is a telling element of the condition, females cant be born with klines.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740289
>what breed this dog actually is
I don't know if the brown coloration in its belly is an artifact, shitty textures or what so I'm going to assume it's all one color. Based on the ear and tail shapes and the pointy snout, overall build and size, I'm inclined to say it's a Samoyed. Model isn't furry enough but again it could be because of textures.

An Akita is also possible, they're similar, but the muzzle on those bois is a lot more square compared to a Samoyed's, and their coats is also somewhat shorter, so either or. Akitas are stronger, larger dogs though so... Take that information as you will.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740745
Why would he be telling us about how it feels to get a dick rammed up his coochie if he doesn't have a vagina? You suggesting he's a LARPer?

Yeah, he's probably a LARPer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740745
yeah I'm technically male but I still have XXy chromosones. Do with it what you will but this is why I don't (and shouldn't have) brought it up. I'm not trans and never will be. Sooner die.

[Anonymous No.]

Why is it so hard to even think up a good scenario for a fic to be picked up?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741001
So you're cuntless but still telling people what it's like to have a cunt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740916
Considering it's name is "Time Mutt", I'll write it as an Akita/Samoyed mix.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741042
>for a fic to be picked up?
Because you basically gotta tailor all elements of the fic to appeal to one individual writer to maximize chance of them liking it enough to write it. Have fun trying to do that on an anonymous image board.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741148
No. But it's not like I can provide proof so believe what you will. You only have my word to go off and that isn't worth a lot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741276
You're right, you're so full of shit it's pouring out your ears. Don't talk.

[Anonymous No.]

>Early morning in Indognesia
>The highly contentious posts start coming out

Like clockwork.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741148
Yeah I got a little annoyed too thats the only reason I wasted the post mentioning it so you guys would stop posting about the nonexistent cunt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33740289
I'm inclined to think it's a Shiba Inu with a low poly model.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741364
>nonexistent cunt.
There is a massive cunt here, it's just that it's >>33741276, not a vagina.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741327
>you're not allowed to talk about things that happened in recent streams or you're dramafagging

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741325
I won't bring it up again. Was stupid because it always results in an argument and I'm too proud not to participate. Was stupid to say anything.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741243
That works.

>>33741372
Could be a Shiba Inu model, but shibes are relatively small dogs, shoulders are more or less at knee height for most adults, so the size in the picture doesn't compute.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741442
You done having a hissy fit?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33742134
If anyone's likely to be having a hissy fit here, it's you, trannoid. Fuck off to AO3 and stay there.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33741460
This is the last reply I'll make because for whatever reason the thing you consistently keep bringing up and identifying yourself with despite the fact that you're a recognizable author here is also the thing you keep saying is a sensitive issue so ill just drop it since I have no actual beef with you.

But I have an autistic and vast array of knowledge and lore at my disposal. Useless trivia which I have acquired through years of forever alone homeschooled rural faggotry in western alaska with mostly unfettered internet access, no TV and a mother who believed masturbation was unnatural and unacceptable in any circumstance. I have read things you people would not believe. Literally the most obscure names I could write volumes on but have never heard even mentioned a single time by another human being. Some of the names on my shelf here beside me are Friedrich Salomo Krauss, Havelock Ellis, Stanisław Leśniewski, Ferdinand Christian Baur, Mario Bunge, Michael C. Rea, Ahti-Veiko Pietarenin and 15 volumes of the Nijihoff International Philosophy Series.
I am not a smart man. But I have virtually unlimited time and resources on my hands to horde vast and useless tidbits of mental wealth to keep me from losing my mind to the midnight madness.

If you claimed to havemixed gonadal dysgenesis or some kind of mosaicism I wouldnt have said anything but you specifically chose Klinefelters syndrome for some reason. Now it's entirely possible you HAVE klinefelters after all it's a condition that people have, but I know for a fact that you do not have a vagina because you have SAID SO. It was dumb. So is this reply. No hard feelings nothing but love for you homie keep writing that fucked up shit I wish I was brave enough to work out my femdom urges here.

Peace.

[Anonymous No.]

This was such a stupid fucking argument.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>33743274
You gotta call people out on their stupidity, anon. It's the only way they'll learn. Even trannoids like >>33742134.

[Anonymous No.]

So everyone knows lolicons arent pedophiles, but what about /uoh/?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33743062
That wasn't me who said that. And I'm not a tranny. I didn't mean to cause a stir, just was giving some thoughts.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33744002
>just was giving some thoughts.
By lying?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33743139
I know you said it was your last reply and you don't need to say anything after, but I wanted to apologize. I didn't mean to get heated. I won't bring it up again.

Truly I mean it. I'm sorry I got snippy, just one of those things.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>33744179
Np

>>33740289
Yeah I know the breed anon, in fact I own one and that looks like an actual pull from the Google 3D animal model but if I tell you you're going to write MY girl being turned I to MY dog's bitch and I'm just not sure I want to help you with that anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33745426
>don't want your dog to fuck your oshi
ngmi

[Anonymous No.]

>>33745426
*MY girl into MY dog's bitch.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33745506
Sell me on it, writerboy

[Anonymous No.]

If you really think about it, writing for vtubers who hate their fans is inherently cringe anyway. Why not instead write for someone who appreciates her fans and is a canon horse girl?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33693117
hag sex

[Anonymous No.]

No really, literally name one (1) reason you'd let your own dog fuck your oshi beyond oral and I'll play along

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746572
>literally name one (1) reason you'd let your own dog fuck your oshi beyond oral

Because it's hot

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746572
You draw the line at oral?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746874
>>33745889
My god fine it's an akita, the guy who said it's a samoyed has literally never seen a samoyed in his life, a samoyed comes up to your knee, but his second guess was right it's an Akita Inu. They come in a lot of color variations. Mine is basically spitting image of the picrel.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746986
If a woman told me she was wasted and tried the peanut butter trick, whatever I could eventually get over it.
If she actually took a dog's knot, and recieved pupberger dna into her womb I would cut her out of my life forever.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746076
Hags like their fans too.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746997
Meant to tag >>33740289

[Anonymous No.]

>>33746076
Anon the only reason to write a non-group/corpo chuuba is if you like them enough to want to write a fic since you either love them for Oshi reasons or you like them enough that their 'low hanging fruit' fic ideas are enticing. Either way you are probably the only one who can write for them... sans commissioning someone else to do it for you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33747280
>pic
Damn, son... That's hot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33744179
>>33744002
Don't apologize, you did nothing wrong. Don't give these guys your attention, they don't deserve it. You're beautiful the way you are and you don't have to explain yourself to anyone.

[Anonymous No.]

>>33748103
Is this a troll?

[Anonymous No.]

>>33737065
Just wanted to note that eerie meme magic has retroactively caused ESLs to think dogpill and dogpile are the same word. Yes, almost all of these conversations are about Kronii or Amelia.
https://archive.alice.al/vt/search/text/dogpill*

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>>33747280
Jesus saw white girls fucking dogs at the garden of Gethsemane and still decided to be the savior of mankind. What a homie.

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>>33747618
fauna and mumei are horse girls

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>>33748288
So is Gura. Anyone else?

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>>33746572
I haven't read any of the preceding conversation but I'm a cuck so that sounds pretty top

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>want to write
>too tired from work
>too late for coffee

I hate this.

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>>33748948
the eternal struggle

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>>33749168

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Are there any SPE fics?

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>>33751765
There is one. Try Paradise Lost

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>>33751885
Is this the fly story again?

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>>33752020
No, no flies in Paradise Lost

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>>33752068
>scat

No thanks.

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>>33752141
Oh, fuck, the tag.

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>>33752141
Read Moon viewing festival

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>>33752725
>daddy/daughter

Also no thanks

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>>33753108
Well, shit, you're getting all these great recommendations and throwing them away. Think you oughta pick your own fics, chump.

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>>33753108
I forgot I added tags lol

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Can I get a quick rundown on why fauna fics are so uh...crossdressing heavy?
Is this a sapling thing or a fauna thing

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>>33756356
Saplings are mentally sick.

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What is this Kronii dog pill rrat going around? As a unicorn turned anti I demand to know

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>>33758066
>unicorn turned anti
Ain't gonna tell you. Fuck off, retard, this isn't any place for you.

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>>33758066
She called her dog, normally referred to as Time Mutt, Time Smut. That's it.

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>>33758066
A
FUCKING
MONKEY

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>>33758216
She did then freak out about it HARD and said "I accidentally lewded my dog" to be fair

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>>33758066
/vt/ will be dogpilled by the end of the week.
https://youtu.be/g8y6N29Dn14

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>>33758308
I mean, I would have never expected Kronii to be smooth about a fuckup that hilarious.

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>>33758490
Nice indies you got there. Not watching them.

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>>33758593
>I would have never expected Kronii to be smooth about a fuckup
You could have just stopped there

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Fuck off back to global already

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>>33758619
I dont watch indies.

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>>33758865
Yeah you do, kiddo. You posted two of 'em.

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>>33758865
Or is everything outside of Nijisanji and Hololive "Indie" in the /hlgg/ sphere of influence

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>>33759011
Nijisanji is indie, you retard.

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>>33760761

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>>33760810
I don’t think it’s bait, some people are that mentally sick that they dump for corporations now.

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>>33693117
Fauna undergoes an experimental treatment to be able to feel asmr tingles, and starts orgasmic ever time she hears a trigger or a whisper.

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>>33693054
What is Haachama doing lately?
I haven't watched her since like, July, when she got so deep into her Return of Haachama arc she just spammed insane videos

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>>33762110
I think she showed off her underwear or something?

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>>33762110
July of 2021. Damn.

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>>33762155
Ah so she hasn't gotten better. Sorry to hear. Should've never let a teenager who got famous on bilibili literally lolibaiting old men with her outfit join the corp.

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>>33762273
Hololive was very different when she joined.

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>>33762408
Haachama's original gimmick was in line with their content 4 years ago. I remember Haachama's first collab with Ame is THE reason I started being an Amelia Anti

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>>33762596
Why?

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>>33762155
She should have streamed her jerking me off using them.

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New thread
>>33762563

[Anonymous No.]

Is there any interest in finding one-on-one writing buddies? It'll probably be more practical to bounce ideas off one person, compared to potentially spoiling plot points for the entire thread readership. Asking on behalf of Baelz NTR

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>>33763313
It'd be pulling teeth for most of the thread but there could be someone willing to drop you an email over it. Could always just ask and leave an account you're comfortable with being contacted on.

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>>33762626
Tldr Ame is retarded

Long version:
I have an ELO score of around 1100 in chess, and that's not a great number and it's not something you say to get laid by any means but at 1100 you can appreciate what chess is and you develop a respect/hatred for the game.
Ame talked up her chess abilities so hard leading up to the streams, she later played with Kiara too I think. She was soooooo cocky it was borderline arrogant. Then she starts playing with everyone and she acted functionally retarded.

Not as retarded as Haachama, but Haachamas brain is always doing a horny chipmunk impression so I didn't expect much. But this smug bitch didnt even know what a PROMOTION was. She didnt even know what the name if the BISHOP was. This fucking stupid whore was so fucking smug and she painfully pushed every piece of wood on that board around with no idea what she was doing. I have no idea how to even explain what I was seeing and why it made my blood boil so much because to most people they would just see a bad chess game that takes too long. I was watching 4 retards one after the other humiliate themselves at this game and everyone admitted they had no idea what they were doing except Ame who insisted to the end that she was great at chess.

This fucking bitch thought promoting a pawn to a queen was a new rule they added for streamers. PROMOTING THE PAWN IS OLDER THAN THE MODERN FUCKING GAME. PROMOTION IS OLDER THAN HALF THE FUCKING PIECES ON THE BOARD, BEFORE THE SPANISH EVEN ADDED THE QUEENS RULE EVERYONE UNDERSTOOD WHAT A PROMOTION WAS. Fucking bitch.

If I ever get my hands on Amelia I will find a way to combine chess with rape correction I swear to Bobby Fischer.

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>>33763684
Uh huh...hey quick question what do you think about Okayu?

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>>33763684
DAMN BRAT, DISRESPECTING THE GAME
CHESS CORRECTION IS NEEDED!
>Shoves a pawn up her fucking urethra

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>>33763684
I started playing chess when I was 9 years old.
This ficking spic retard opened with black pawn to h6. WHAT. THE. FUCK. Even when I was 9 years old I realized you wanted to open from THE MIDDLE. YOU OPEN THE MOVEMENT OF ALL YOUR PIECES THAT WAY. THE ROOK CANT MOVE. THE PAWN PLACEMENT. GOOOOOOOOOOD DAAAAMMNIT.

>>33763855
Why are you asking?

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LUNA RAPE

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>>33763961
She needs the whole fucking board up her ass

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>>33763684
I understand your pain. Watching any of the holos play chess makes me want to kill myself. elo is 1500 btw.

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>>33763313
Put a burner down for if you're interested in pen pals, although maybe don't be too surprised if you don't get a response. Could always ask AA, pekoanon or mwanon and if they're too busy, then the thread will have to suffice.

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>>33764445
Then you understand.
Why would you even move the pawn to the of the fucking BOARD if there was mo promotion? Do you just want to fucking sit there? Do you want to turn around and go back??? DO YOU THINK THIS IS JUST A GAME OF RED ROVER

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>>33763684
>anon got suckered by the bit

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>>33764680
I understand all too well. I've gotten a headache once from watching Ollie play because she actually tries but somehow misses the most basic moves. She definitely gets tunnel vision.

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>>33764728
Dont you dare fucking imply that you can be THAT BAD at chess on purpose. I have no idea how you could even pretend to not know what the aim of the game is THAT BADLY. And if Ames smugness is just a bit, she deserves to have her asshole gaped one piece at a time

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>>33764843
Ame's bit has always been acting overly smug and confident, then failing spectacularly at whatever she's doing. The failure likely isn't a bit, but the overconfidence ABSOLUTELY is.

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>>33764835
Ollie had a good trainer I'll give her that, but its not just the ability that annoys me. I dont care about bad chess so long as you're having fun.

It was the fucking arrogance. The gall. The fucking stones on that little whore.

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>>33764931
So she wants to be raped is what you're saying.

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>>33765037
TAGS: Free use, Ame, Chess, Rape, Anal Destruction

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>>33764971
If her trainer is so good then they should tell her to stop looking at one spot on the board.

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>>33765198
Cramling has an ELO of 2150, I'm not going to give her shit, you cant turn an indog into a russian.

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>>33765318
Fair enough.

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The only vtuber game of chess I’ve ever enjoyed was Roberu and Izuru’s and that was because they had an excuse for not knowing what the fuck was going on. They had never touched chess or even watched it in their entire lives and seeing them learn what the pieces could do and make theories (like when they thought the bishop had feelings and didn’t want to die therefore couldn’t move) was funny, and can be enjoyed as long as you don’t go full chess autist.

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>>33766009
the fact that Izuru was so fucking far ahead only for it to end in a draw made it all the more fucking hilarious.

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>>33731761
I haven't seen any statistical evidence for it.

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>>33766009
I know I'm being autistic but Amelia just grates on my nerves. Maybe it is just a bit though.

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>>33766009
Cute

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>>33766249
I just remembered in the game with Kiara neither of them could figure out what the fuck was going on and after like 5 full minutes Amelia dumped out what a CHECK was. I'm not mad. I'm not mad.

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>>33766366
Didn't that game end in a draw? A lot holo chess games end in draws.