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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>29331590

>> No.29478243
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.29478311
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was five story posted in the last thread.

The Sleeping Angel: Tags: Nazuna, somnophilia, sex, NSFW:>>29332377

Barrett's Privateers: Tags: (Marine, song, SFW, parody):>>29339160

The Hormoning Ch.3: Tags: Shishiro Botan, Hakui Koyori, NSFW, action, comedy, apocalyptic(?):>>29366828

First Train and Kafka (The Anthology) Stop Four: Close to You, Forever and Always: tags: anthology, multiple chuubas, abuse, dark themes, extreme fetishes:>>29369769

Bleeding Of Affection: Tags: Gura, chuuba abuse, torture.:>>29384911

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A spinoff chapter of The Hormoning in which Luna tries, and spectacularly fails, to rape you. That is, until she pulls out a gun.:>>29337814

Gura pissing herself in a diaper.:>>29339148

I'd like to see a story where Choco and Lamy compete on who could do a better GFE streams and the loser has to eat the spiciest udon in Japan:>>29339383

Mori desperately denying being into women even as she’s having gay sex:>>29341070

Educating Kronii about Hololive orisongs then fucking her.:>>29348761

Kronii being tied down and fondled/groped by her fans as she fucking loses her mind from raw anger from being objectified.:>>29351981

Mori and Ame being turned into Suisei and MIkos milk cows/sex slaves after being beaten by them:>>29369419

Selen using her barbed dragon dick to correct pomu and enna:>>29412254

Tying up Kiara and forcing her to lay an egg.:>>29420906

Pomu, the tooth fairy, collects your baby teeth as a child and gives you money in return. Of course, once you grow all your adult teeth she stops visiting. Wanting to see her again (either for the sake of seeing her again or for more money), you start getting into fights and knocking people's teeth out to put them under your pillow.:>>29431022

An Incestous Relationship with your Foxy Onee-san.:>>29437498

Bae being excited to find out she has a cult dedicated to her, only to then be horrified when it's actually violent anarchy type chaos they like and not quirky pranks:>>29445585

Fucking your dumb maid Aqua's armpits after convincing her it's an erogenous zone.:>>29454316

Fubuki and (you) are very good friends.:>>29455090

Yagoo is sitting at his desk, taking a break from work. His daughter, Sora, has her head in his lap, giving him a killer bj.:>>29360618

>> No.29478911

I kinda wanna manhandle this angel

>> No.29479366

>>29478153

>> No.29483141

So, this is how /wg/ finally dies.

>> No.29483682

>>29483141
yes, now we will have a /wg/ thread for each individual talent which will overrun the board

>> No.29484946 [DELETED] 

>>29473586
It's Ame. Or was.

>> No.29485773

>>29478243
I lust for that angel like you wouldn’t believe. Those hips were built for bearing my children.

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>> No.29492330

>>29483141
Can't be. There's no thunderous applause.

>> No.29493331

>>29489291
ahh, the tortellini...

>> No.29493501

>>29489291
>Kanata would be better in bed

>> No.29493663

>>29493501
She has no rhythm in her hip shake. All she has is a nice and tight ass. Kanata actually has the moves.

>> No.29493737

>>29493663
you forgot the thighs

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>>29493737
Kanata has nice thighs too

>> No.29495278

>>29493884
I know. my point was that Twappi has more than just a nice butt

>> No.29495937

>>29489291
Towa..

>> No.29496644

Any other comfy romance stories like Warm Air, Warm Feelings? I’ve read this one and the previous chapter like 5 times each already I need mooooore

>> No.29497050

>>29496644
Out of the Blue if you want something warm and fluffy.
Hating me Hating you if you want something with a similar(ish) protagonist.
Paradise Lost and it's sequel if you want the obligatory shock fic recommendation.

>> No.29497089

>>29496644
Exposure Therapy

>> No.29497132

>>29492330
Kek

>> No.29497586

>>29497089
it's been so long since i remember that fic being mentioned. i remember when it was THE /wg/ fic.

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> get home to your wife and daughter
> see this
What do?

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>>29498193
Leave and seek refuge with Fubuki.

>> No.29498505

>>29498193
make it a threesome and join in

>> No.29498542

>>29498193
Ask if I can eat their shit, of course.

>> No.29498957

>>29498496
>>29498505
>>29498542
You're fucking disgusting

>> No.29499344

>>29498957
No, you.

>> No.29499367

>>29498957
>he wouldn't have hot steamy oyakodon sex with Mio and her daughter.

>> No.29499451
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Yikes. Writing Suisei is about as tough as I expected it to be. If you don't take the Suicopath route, you need to be pretty good at spotting her mannerisms because otherwise she's just a very normal, confident girl with no noticeable verbal ticks. I'm making progress on the Suisex fic but I'm definitely gonna consume as much Suisei content as I can after I'm done with it to do some rewriting.

>> No.29499459

>>29498957
>he wouldn't eat mio and daughter's hot steamy faeces

>> No.29499557

>>29499451
She's pretty domineering, I imagine she'd be taking control 90% of the time and I don't imagine she'd focus too much on your pleasure

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>>29498957
Oi
Why am I >>29498496 included.

>> No.29499945

>>29499451
Close to finishing yet?

>> No.29500039

>>29499945
Depends on who you are

>> No.29500087

>>29500039
Huh?

>> No.29500105

>>29500087
I'm about half done I suppose I could say

>> No.29500148

>>29500105
Cool, looking forward to this one since you mentioned it

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>>29499451
I mean with suisei there's like two ways I can see to interpreting her character. The first is the Confident Ace (i.e the character on the surface) and the second is the Aspiring Autist (see picrel).

>> No.29500517

>>29500177
>doesn't understand why people would want to kiss each other
i volunteer to educate her

>> No.29501448

>>29500177
this is actually fascinating
sometimes I hate being an EOP, knowing that people who can understand Japanese have a much more in-depth understanding of the JP girls' characters than I ever will

>> No.29501461

>>29499451
Yeah, this is probably why there's so few normal suisei fics in the archive. She's always sounded like a normal person to me so I'd constantly be second-guessing myself over getting her character "right".

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>>29500517
>ywn turn Suisei into a total kiss slut

>> No.29501689

>>29500177
She sounds autistic.

>> No.29502577

I am thinking about making this into a longer green text
>POV
>You are Fauna
>you are at the first SNOT off collab
>you are in a hotel room with 2 queen sized beds
>you just cut your nails
>Gura is rounding third on a carton of mango tango
>Kronii is currently moving Mumei's wheel chair to the corner of the room because it was "in the way"
Also not sure what is the funniest way to end it, if I should end it just with mumei freaking out and no piss, mumei realizes she never went to the bathroom and she pisses the bed, not Gura. Gura pisses the bed and it gets blamed on Mumei, or they both piss the bed, but it gets blamed on Mumei

>> No.29503292

>>29502577
Is this how you're planning to write that greentext or is it just an 'outline'? Because I think if you write it in a more conventional greentext style the buildup should lead to what the conclusion should feel.

>> No.29503662

>>29503292
just an outline so far. Basic idea is that Fauna and Kronii are planning on hooking up and the story will be about Mumei having an autism fit because she is stuck sharing a bed with Gura and cant reach her wheelchair and cant calm down and explain herself because her autism support dog animal isn't there to calm her

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>>29478311
Sora getting Aped

>> No.29505184

>>29505139
Virtual Gorilla's too good for that hussy.

>> No.29505218

>>29505139
uwaaah apeist

>> No.29505730

we need more same size unbirth fics.

>> No.29505772

>>29505730
you get right on that then

>> No.29507793

if only someone was writing facfiction about vtubers

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>>29507793
I would, but... I'm actually kind of retarded.

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>>29507793
Yeah, if only... instead, I'm watching a remix of Feel Good Inc mashed up with the 'steamed hams' skit from the Simpsons.
https://youtu.be/aRsOBFhNjVM

I wanted to grow up to be an architect building castles when I was a kid...

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>>29507793
Working on it.

>> No.29508411

>>29507793
Too busy watching hags play Mahjong.

>> No.29508463

>>29507793
Later, I'm catching up on stream

>> No.29508995

>>29507793
I keep forgettign what I was going to write when I start to write. Just got some fragments in my head

Attempt to sneak into Lamy's apartment
Daifuku Bear mode karate chop from behind
Wake up
PUNISHMENT TIME
MC never leaves her apartment.

>> No.29509217

>>29508995
This sounds like setup for a become Lamy thing where it ends with two Lamys leaving the apartment.

>> No.29509360

>>29485773
I enjoyed this one. Could have been a bit longer, but I felt the passion coming through your earnest words.

>> No.29509381

>>29509217
Or maybe something less cringeworthy, like anon slithering up Lamy's asshole and wearing her like a suit.

>> No.29509679

>>29509217
>>29509381
or
she puts your penis in her vagina and moves up and down until you cum in her womb

>> No.29509961

>>29509679
But what about Lamy's penis?
What is she going to do with it?

>> No.29513382

>>29478311
Tracking down war criminal pekora
https://files.catbox.moe/x0d1x1.mp4

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bump

>> No.29517222

>>29516585
Booba

>> No.29517577

>>29500177
Now I'm wondering about Anemachi.

>>29501448
Only sometimes?

>>29501689
That's the whole point of the pic.

>> No.29518792

>>29516585
mel's ass > mel's tits

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>>29518792
Mel's short hair > everything else

>> No.29519757

>>29519630
mel's bobcut is really cute

>> No.29520049

>>29518792
>>29519630
Mel's punes > everything else

>> No.29520124

>>29520049
what the fuck is a pune

>> No.29520289

>>29520124
I'm assuming he meant to type 'pubes'

>> No.29520354

>>29520289
i thought as much but was thinking

why would it be pubes

we haven't seen any official pubic hair, have we? as far as we know her panties are actually armour plating that conceal a vacuum where her groin would be

>> No.29520385

>>29520354
because this is /wg/

>> No.29520543

>>29520354
I have seen Mel's pubes in my dreams and they are glorious.

>> No.29520551

>>29520385
o ok

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>>29499451
Im trying to write two because, honestly, sui is the only chuba i watch, so i at least somewhat understand what she does compared to the rest of them. It's tough though

and no, neither of them are suisex

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>>29521480
>and no, neither of them are suisex

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>>29521480
Is one of them the long awaited long, slow burn romance with femboy Suisei?

>> No.29522074

>>29521480
What the prompts for them then? I'm also slowly chipping away at my suisexless fic as well

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>>29522074
>suisexless

>> No.29522349

i'm gonna have to write some good ol' suisex myself aren't i...

ok that doesn't sound bad at all when i put it like that. i already have a kind of fantasy i've put down in greentext/daydreams before.

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>>29478243
First Train and Kafka the Anthology Stop Five: I Am a Human.
Tags: anthology, multiple chuubas, dark themes, extreme fetishes

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQie07soIKtPOfdv67v92IzSnwjaksftWT2PLEpoGKwKZq0g5PNzbNOceckQEQkdCLZnooC1tUNEnhW/pub

I'm going to start taking things up a notch now. I've got the six stop already half way done so if you think this one is bad, just get ready.

>> No.29522484

>>29500177
How can one girl be so perfect?

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>>29522349

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>>29521843
That story is just a journal of whichever unlucky person ends up with me. I should write a story like that though.

>>29522074
One of them is Suicopath and she finds your address. The other one is just a peek into her life away from the lights and cameras

I will say, the hardest thing about writing with sui is that she doesnt really show any "weakness" that you can progress with like other chubas

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>>29522349
I would write suisex myself, but im horrible at smut. Mostly because im a kissless, sexless virgin who hasnt even held hands with another woman or man

>> No.29523147

>>29478311
OP is a faggot.
Tricking Suisei into believing your semen has powerful remedial properties for dermic and mucous membrane applications! Enjoying life with Suisei constantly sucking your dick to help her throat and asking you to cum on her!

>> No.29523212

It just isn't /wg/ without suisex

>> No.29523300

>>29523147
imagine being suichan's doctor and using her sheltered nature against her to tell her the only way to cure the damage she's done to her throat is by letting you ride her ass

>> No.29523398

>>29523300
Imagine being Suisei's gynecologist

>> No.29523440

>>29523300
>>29523398
Sex is fun but medical stuff is gross and y'all niggas need Jesus.

>> No.29523509

>>29523440
It's just looking at Suisei's pussy, not giving her a colonic irrigation. You a fag?

>> No.29523571

>>29523212
Step aside, Fubuki. This is comet town now.

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>>29523571
Nah I still wanna fuck Fubuki especially Fubuki nee-san

>> No.29523693

>>29523571
i looked up the number of stories she has in the archive cuz i wanted to go "yeah nah not even close" but surprisingly it is actually quite close
67 versus 85

>> No.29523742

>>29523212
Or violence. I had an idle fantasy earlier about another Hotline Miami themed story about a jaded and scorned unicorn going around Japan to track down and murder the talents who have had anything like boyfriend yabs in grandiose fashion, no matter how much security they throw at him in the process. Returning to his shitty cube hotel at the end of every massacre, drifting off into an adrenaline-laced nightmare...

>> No.29523781

>>29523671
God bless Akua for making Ojou Fubuki Onee-san.
Also hope someone runs with that for a fic concept.

>> No.29523797

>>29523742
you just like hurting people

>> No.29523811

>>29489291
All this and she still can't satisfy her boyfriend

>> No.29523841

>>29523671
demonsauce?

>> No.29524103

>>29523841
https://twitter.com/entergram_info/status/1552579637150367745
It's from Aqua's VN being released later this year.
Fubuki is your Older Sister there.

>> No.29524126

>>29523671
still not sure what the logic was behind choosing one of the animal girls to be the main character's sister

>> No.29524141

What are some prompts you'd like to give a spin someday?

>Yandere little sister polka hates your gf, sabotages your relationship with her and then rapes your drugged body while sending her pics
>Chuuba getting by with her children after losing (you)
>Chuuba trying her best to confess to you, only to fail miserably and seeing someone else steal you away.

>> No.29524185

>>29524103
no, i just saw デーモンソース and, knowing like 10 kanji, was unable to decipher the rest

so i'm stuck with one word, wondering how the hell it fits into context

"demonsauce"

>> No.29524210

>>29523797
You're right, I do. But only in fantasy. Else empathy kicks in. But that still allows me to think about a blood soaked man staring coldly down to a cowering Matsuri as she frantically tries to crawl backwards, one hand raised in a pleading motion as she blathers a torrent of apologies and pleads for her life only to be met with the already-badly-bent end of a rusted pipe directly to her face, over and over again.

>> No.29524327

>>29523671
I want to get molested by Fubuki.

>> No.29524366

>>29524327
I want Fubuki to peel my skin off with a rusty paint scraper.

>> No.29524389

>>29524141
>(you) are a prepper living innawoods after the collapse of civilization who adopts a stray chuuba

>> No.29524499

>>29523781
If someone does pick up that prompt, I kinda hope it isn't oneeshota. Feels like that's the natural choice for that kind of fic but I want a protag that's fully aware of the consequences of having an incestuous relationship with their incredibly hot older sister.

>> No.29525002

>>29524327
I have a fic that's gathering dust on my writings folder about aunt Fubuki coming to terms with her pedophilic tendencies and grooming little you.

>> No.29525147

>>29525002
post it now

>> No.29525241

>>29524499
I hope so too.
Nothing makes that forbidden romance and love between brother and sister better than them knowing and accepting how fucked their relationship is.

>> No.29525266

>>29525147
It's a WIP. Here's what I wrote.
https://rentry.org/rcox4

>> No.29525620

>>29525266
This is fucking excellent, but I can see you were taking something a slower build-up. Did you just lose motivation? Become unsure of interest in the subject? Get distracted by other ideas?
Regardless, it's a crying shame this got dumped. Thanks for posting it, at least, I was glued to it.

>> No.29525733

>>29525620
>Get distracted by other ideas?
Yes, I was writing a fluff series at the time, and after a week of uni exams I just shoved writing aside in general.

I'm currently working in another series which has taken most of creative imagination, but I'd like to come back to this fic someday. Perhaps I will once I need a break from my current series.

>> No.29525836

>>29524141
I'm actually working on that third prompt as a sort of side story to something i'm writing

>> No.29526388

>>29522360
hot
>I'm going to start taking things up a notch now
hot

>> No.29527018

>>29525266
You're BBD aren't you

>> No.29527340

>>29525266
This is honestly a really interesting concept that I'd love to see continued just to see how far it'll go. Also I have to ask, is Anon a foxboy here?
I hope you'll come back to this.

>> No.29527888

>>29527018
Building block doll anon?
No, I'm the one who wrote Sad,genuine smile and To be 17 again.

>> No.29528164

>>29527340
>is Anon a foxboy here?
Anon isn't described as anything, other than being male and a kid. The imagination of the reader can fill the rest of the details about him as he sees fit.

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>>29524141
(You) and Suisei go on a test of courage and of course she gets scared shitless. She's clinging on to you like her life depends on it while you're constantly trying comfort her.

>> No.29528619

>>29528361
suisei isn't good with horror?

>> No.29528699

>>29528619
She's absolutely awful and scares really easy. Hit up some of her horror game streams

>> No.29529103

>>29527888
You're pretty based

>> No.29529262

I'm writing third person, what can i name the male mc other than anon? Do we have some sort of preference/shorthand or do i just go with anon? It's not particularly self insert but some of it is based on life experiences

>> No.29529360

>>29529262
Call him Mike :)

>> No.29529367

>>29529262
I think you're free to name the MC whatever if it's not really self-insert. Say can you see did that and no one batted an eye.

>> No.29529442

>>29529262
Credit Where It's Due sneakily referred to its OC by title rather than name.

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Poruka!

>> No.29533522
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29533522

>>29532250
oruka

>> No.29533606

>>29507793
I have been bombareded with an exam this monday and work all week around, I can finally finish some things up now that it's the weekend

>> No.29534144

>>29532250
I'm imagining waiting until the takoyaki is right up against her lips, then yanking it back and sucker punching her with my left arm

Be like "Bitch, the last thing you need is another god damn takoyaki!"

>> No.29534445

>>29532250
I'm imagining the takoyaki is steaming hot inside and I know it but tell her that it's already cold and for her to take a good bite.

>> No.29534640

>>29478243
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQbX8KmOTK2M7FfkmefN3kMeY2UUoGq9dVz5pEVastrVpYGZPAaTcg7naGMATh2b9iPr8ssvkyRdOR1/pub

Just a wholesome Shylily smut

>> No.29535774

>>29534640
I wanna like this, Chris, but as soon as I saw you named yourself...

>> No.29536556

>>29534640
it's not great

>> No.29536658

>>29534640
from what i've seen of her she sounds like veibae lite, but imma do you a solid and read it anyway

>>29536556
some real fuckin useful feedback you've given anon

>> No.29538138

>>29534640
aight there were a few strange things i noted. i'm on a phone so i'm gonna keep it short.
>Chris
don't do this. feels like i'm holding on to someone else's wank sock.
>Her body pressed into yours, causing your dick to immediately rise to attention. The same thing happened to her, and she seemed embarrassed, laughing nervously.
your wording insinuates she's got a dick too.
>"It makes me happy when people touch them." You said simply.
why in goodness name is he saying that? i think you meant to say "touching them makes me feel happy."
her going from seductive and happy to fearful because he rubbed her ears kinda jolted me out of the experience a bit too
>"People shouldn't be touching each other like that." She said while licking her lips.
dude WHAT is this dialogue? this feels like it's a direct transcript of a dream you had, without altering any of the weird nonsensical shit that happens in dreams

to save some time, most of the dialogue is stilted and strange. the smut is decent-ish in terms of feeling, but i am having serious trouble picturing the poses you describe, ESPECIALLY during anal. she lies flat on the ground but uses your body as leverage? leverage for what? she's flat on the ground.
you're fucking her pronebone but then raise your arms above your head and she brings hers down onto yours for support? what kind of quantum Twister-themed sex position is this?

overall, anon...
>it's not great.
sorry.

>> No.29539061

>>29534640
Was this your first time writing, anon? Not meant to be condescending, genuinely curious.

>> No.29539102

>>29539061
Nah, it's me using KoboldAI to write the story.

>> No.29539236

>>29539102
This explains so much... It's quite impressive for an AI, though.

>> No.29539296

>>29539102
could told me that before i bothered putting effort into giving feedback

>> No.29539307

>>29478311
The princess of Pekoland is hauled before the Hague for war crimes.

>> No.29539332

>>29539236
You can even blame KoboldAI for giving the anon a name.

>> No.29539399

>>29539296
Admittedly, I should have, but I didn't, so sorry.

>> No.29539610

>>29539399
only one way you can apologize, anon.

how do i get myself a piece of this koboldai, huh? this is surprising quality for auto-generated responses

>> No.29539629

>>29507793
I haven't written anything in two months because I've spent nearly every free minute between streams and other stuff catching up on over a decade of Breaking Bad

>> No.29539868

>>29539629
>show that relies on its protagonist taking the dumbest, most illogical action possible at every opportunity in order to tell the story it wants to tell

i can't remember the last time i've been so frustrated over some writing, i swear to god

>> No.29539930

>>29539868
t. brainlet who doesn't understand ego, Breaking Bad is and always will be the highest rated and most beloved TV series of all time. Seethe more

>> No.29539975

>>29539610
https://koboldai.org

>> No.29540014

>>29539868
>Prideful man who loves being a criminal does criminal things to keep himself an active criminal
I-It's just unexplainable!

>> No.29540044

>>29539930
sounds like walter white resonated with you on a personal level

>> No.29540066

>>29539868
I do feel they hammed it up excessively at some points, but the overall execution is far more positive than negative. Think it's deserving enough of its acclaim personally

>> No.29540071

>>29540044
That's not the gotcha you think it is.

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>> No.29540334

>>29540014
>i'm going to bully and yell at everyone around me trying to help me because they either secretly are plotting to kill me or they just don't GET it, man
>but i do, i'm the only one that gets it, i am the danger
hack writing. anger and paranoia are only an acceptable excuse for so long before they stop being believable.

>> No.29540411

>>29540172
>"Anon, look! Taiga reached Maturity! His ascension is finally complete! May we all be so lucky as to have such a beautiful from when our time comes!"

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29540480

>>29540334
Shut up shut up shut up shut up shut up

>> No.29540507

>>29540066
It's pretty amazing that in a show with neo-nazis, kid killers, drug kingpins, and hitmen the most hated character is a housewife which is deserved imo.

>> No.29540536

>>29540334
>hack writing
>He says in a fanfic general.

>> No.29540568

>>29540334
Hating the popular thing is not a desirable personality trait

>> No.29540629

>>29540536
>>29540568
both deflections, i win, you've got shit taste

>> No.29540791

>>29540172
Last time Mio and an insect got together it didn't end too well for her

>> No.29541009

>>29540629
What's your favorite show?

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>>29498193
Ask what the heck Mio was thinking, getting started without me.

>> No.29541180

>>29541009
firefly

>> No.29541266

>>29541180
Good taste. Been a while since I last watched that and Serenity.

>> No.29541547

>>29541266
yeah, amazing show. writing's not fantastic, but still good - but the setting and the actor's performances, man. amazing cast and an interesting universe

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>>29478243
Let Me Feel Your Pain, Chapter 9

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSdBRdq2-khEhyr2BIzaP8pgpJLi0xIT4wxgPO9RLugOt_fqCESzyrG8HTONvUjWJ789OWrsyguC6Tn/pub

Tags: (you), Roboco, Fauna, romance, chuuba abuse, sad, tragedy

>> No.29542918

I released a cascade of white to 'Cascade of White'.

The whispering and dirty talk is really hot.

>> No.29543011

>>29542918
TMI

>> No.29543085

>>29542918
I believe HagOrgyAnon said he wrote that to practice dirty talk so that's a good complement.

>> No.29543579

>>29543011
The best feedback a smut writer can get is someone saying they nutted to a fic- Lao Tze

>> No.29543722

>>29542146
good chapter, wasnt expecting the series to come back
kinda feel a bit disappointed since during the first chapters i though that reine was going to be the romantic partner

>> No.29543997

>>29543722
Just had a little roadblock in how I wanted the Fauna romance to proceed. But now that I have a vague idea of how it'll work, expect a lot more chapters a lot quicker. I have like 40% of the rest of the story mapped out, I just needed to bridge the gap between this chapter and the rest of what I had in mind.

Reine doesn't really feel right for what I have in mind, though I can bring her more into the story. Might be good to have someone more down to earth to balance out how sickly sweet Fauna is. But yeah, Fauna is gonna be the love interest I'm afraid.

>> No.29544378

>>29507793
I shot my load on a shit story and will never write again. But I will read

>> No.29544457

>>29544378
What was that "shit story", anon?

>> No.29544511

>>29544457
If it's a shit story, why would I ever confess what it was lol. But I've been reading some dank shit here. The quality of work being released here has shot up astronomically recently. Idk wtf is going on

>> No.29544622

>>29544511
Because everyone thinks their work is shit. It's up to us whether or not to exonerate you.

>> No.29545405

Is A Predator's Touch on hiatus?

>> No.29545881

>>29545405
All series are dead until updated.

>> No.29546134

>>29544622
Well sorry to say but I will not be telling.

>> No.29546384

>>29546134
Seems a waste to put all that effort into writing a story and then shoo curious people away from reading it, anon, but you do you.

>> No.29546958

Reading some of these stories makes my private area feel funny. What's going on?

>> No.29547116

>>29546384
There was little to no effort in writing the story. Here's something good that you can read (not by me) https://rentry.org/n5eff

>> No.29547184

>>29546958
Secret subliminal messaging in some of the stories you've read has activated the children within you. That funny feeling in your privates? Bunch of wasps eating their way through your subcutaneous fat deposits. They'll burst through your crotch soon.

>> No.29547245

>>29546958
Chlamydia

>> No.29547319

>>29547116
Already read that series and given feedback. Personally I wish it would apply a great deal more focus to Anon and Botan, but the author stated he "needs his plot points" (I presume that means he enjoys writing them) and I can respect that.

>> No.29547457

>Chris
>don't do this. feels like i'm holding on to someone else's wank sock.
This is why i asked about naming a male mc. I don't want this to happen

>> No.29547824

"I thought you wanted to dance" was incredible. Really captured that perpetual feeling of dread in old chuuba abuse stories, and I thought I was oversaturated in fanfiction to ever feel that again. Bravo. Cut off as it got really interesting, but perhaps that was the best possible place to end.

Fucking Matsuri. NEVER stick your dick in crazy.

>> No.29548423

>>29547824
Bro why do bad bitches gotta have the best sex?

>> No.29548477

>>29548423
Because they're hunters and the sex is the bait

>> No.29548577

>>29547457
it genuinely isn't an issue for anyone sane. it's like getting upset that porn features people that aren't you.

>> No.29548711

>>29548577
>it genuinely isn't an issue for anyone sane.
So it's best avoided here.

>> No.29548734

>>29547457
Don't listen to >>29548577, he just wants your stories to bomb.

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>>29547824
Thank you, that compliment means a lot! I mentioned a while ago that I had some ideas for a sequel but couldn't really get a substantial plot going that I felt was good, so you're likely right that it ended where it did.

>> No.29549058

>>29548577
>it genuinely isn't an issue for anyone sane.
Shame you're on /vt/ where people here are mentally sick in the head and actually think the vtubers loves them and think they care about them

>> No.29549077

>>29548734
if a story is good when the main character doesn't have a name, then it's better when he does.

>> No.29549359

>>29549077
Lol

>> No.29549503

>>29548865
Yeah, I don't know if anything else would naturally have the same impact. I really want to know though - did Matsuri shoop that pic of Oga and Foobs banging? For what purpose did she send that sex vid to Korone?
I expected it to end on blackmail, not like it actually did.

>> No.29549617

>>29547824
Oga has taught me to never put my dick in crazy especially if I were a VA.

>> No.29549904

>>29549617
Nice shoehorning your homos into a discussion

>> No.29549918

>>29545405
Nope. Still working on it, just that ironing out plot points is taking up some time. Besides that, I also plan for it to be a bit longer.

>> No.29550030

>>29549503
>did Matsuri shoop that pic of Oga and Foobs banging?
No that was when Oga caught Fubuki in the stairway when she fell.

>For what purpose did she send that sex vid to Korone?
Advertisement. I didn't mention cause I thought it ended better before Fubuki sees what the video is, but it was supposed to be Matsuri filming you fucking Choco.

>> No.29550059

>>29549058
Don't generalize us, I just think they're streamers and nothing more.

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I've been slowly pulling down stories from the archive, about 20 now, the ones people notice get published again, the ones that don't I erase forever. It seems like a good way to cull out the trash from what is actually liked.

>> No.29550374

>>29550030
>it was supposed to be Matsuri filming you fucking Choco.
Bwuh? Where did Choco come from?

Is this an unfinished and discarded plot thread? God, I'm so interested in seeing more of this now... Any chance you'd try picking it back up again? I know it's unfair to ask after you've explained you couldn't figure out a satisfying way to continue, but... you miss every shot you don't take!

>> No.29550499

>>29550259
What is good becomes average without the context of the poor to put them in perspective.

>> No.29550505

>>29550259
attention whore

>> No.29550540

>>29550259
bad larp

>> No.29550604

>>29550259
attention whore

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29550682

>>29550374
I had Matsuri mention Choco when she was floating the idea of (You) banging other women because Choco's a lonely woman rapidly approaching her sell-by date and she makes my dick hard.

>> No.29550724

>>29550259
bad larp

>> No.29550732

>>29525266
>>29478243

>> No.29550892

>>29525266
Is there no names or tags?

>> No.29551078

>>29550259
Which writer is starting their menhera breakdown arc this time?

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>>29478243
A story about helping your girlfriend Miko go through her period cramps

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQDi0Bl5HkDHVjk26E-ce2oovhPGp2UrqLfHqA5m600IG1NaUH6Dq6jE18FfU0f5DD_71gEvD3oGbWU/pub

Tags: Sakura Miko, SFW, Fluff

A surprising turnaround for me and a bit shorter than I normally write as a result. Hopefully, it's satisfactory. Feedback is appreciated as always.

>> No.29551125

>>29550732
>>29550892
I didn't add tags because I didn't want to anchor it.
I'll anchor the post once I write a real, proper chapter for it.

>> No.29551294

I will write Suisex (with Migo)

>> No.29551483
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>>29551294
Which one of them will have a cock?

>> No.29551744

>>29551483
both

>> No.29551805

>>29551483
Suisei of course!
It would be weird if Miko was a boy...
Though it would explain the pekomiko rape in universe.

>> No.29551814

>>29551125
Then why did someone anchor it if you didn't to anchor it?

>> No.29551836

>>29551814
beats me

>> No.29552079

>>29551483
Neither. The cheeky anons who also replied despite not being asked better also deliver their Suisex story.

>> No.29552122

>>29551814
>>29551836
There’s a fag who always does this shit, it don’t matter if the writer explicitly states that he doesn’t want the story anchored, he’ll do it.

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>>29551111
That was an incredibly adorable fic, Anon. Nice work.

Miko's POV is a little weird with her past dialogue being italicized but not in quotes and her internal monologue not being differentiated from the narration, but that's just a formatting niggle so it's whatever.

I'd hate to deal with Suisei on her period...

>> No.29552343

>>29492330
>July 29, 2022
>no epic-length chuuba Clone Wars fiction

>> No.29552540

>>29551111
Miko is gay unless the MC is a fem

>> No.29552712

>>29552540
Yeah, 'gay' for my unprotected cock.

>> No.29552739

>>29552122
he didn't state that until after i had already done it. go cry about something that matters.

>> No.29552939

>>29551111
Weirdanon, is this you?

>> No.29552965

>>29552712
Miko hates men

>> No.29553051

>>29552939
>he can't recognize writers by how they format their posts containing new fics

>> No.29553126

>>29552965
who aren't me

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>>29553051
>he can't recognize writers by how they format their posts containing new fics

Given how this thread has accused like four different people of being me while saying wildly different things in the same split, I can assure you that your ability to 'detect' anonymous posters is a schizo delusion.

>> No.29553161

>>29552965
This is why everyone hates yurifags.

>> No.29553189

>>29552739
I think not anchoring anything implies everything there is to know, retardchama

>> No.29553196

>>29553152
Sounds like you're a massive shitposter, anon.

>> No.29553233

>>29553126
I made this post (from my phone while porking Miko from behind). I hope you can forgive my phoneposting, bitch bucks like a bronco.

>> No.29553742

>>29542146
I wasn't expecting Robocco to not be the main love interest. What's her relationship with Anon going to be evolve into now? Friendship? 2nd gf?

>> No.29553750

>>29551111
You've been trying to improve your fluff game, right? Well, this is certainly fluffy. It's practically cotton candy.

>> No.29554171

>>29551111
This is really fucking good fluff fic with a good plot holding it all together. It's cute.
If you're the anon who the rest of the thread thinks you are, then this is your best fluff fic yet.

>> No.29554215

>>29478311
Playing Mahjong with hags preferably with Fubuki, Koyori, and Lui. Then, after you lose, they rape you.

>> No.29554835
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>>29553742
Oh I've got plans for her. Don't you worry

>> No.29554936

>>29523130
I'm not crying your crying :(

>> No.29554996

>>29554215
Getting beaten up by the hags because you keep eating their Mahjong pieces!

>> No.29555196

>>29552257
Thank you. I flipped-flopped a lot on the formatting for Miko's POV so I'll keep your words in mind next time I try something like that

>>29552939
>>29553750
>>29554171
Unless I got some sort of nickname I wasn't aware of I don't think I'm the author you guys are thinking of. Still, glad you guys enjoyed it.

>> No.29555527

>>29529262
Cover high and holocalypse both had protags that hadn’t been named Anon iirc and rather given a nickname so their actual names are unknown, if that’s a way you want to do it. Everyone in the thread calls them Anon anyway, though.

>> No.29555742

>>29555196
you're bbdanon. i can tell by the formatimg of this post >>29551111. i could go into specifics but i'm too lazy.

>> No.29555907

>>29555742
It's not me kek. I'd never write a period comfort story.

If this is a low key push to get me to work on BBD, I'm working on it. Just give me a bit

>> No.29555913

got a bunch of wanna-be detectives on the loose

>> No.29556014

>>29555742
This the second time you've accused someone of being the bbd anon. Give it up anon.

>> No.29556034

>>29555196
Until I connect the dots better you'll be weirdanon3.

>> No.29556308

Some people really miss the username-based culture they're familiar with. Or they take Ame calling them investigators too seriously

>> No.29556422

>>29556014
that wasn't me who said that before. and unlike him i had an actual reason though. trust me, my powers of guessing which anon wrote which fic based entirely on the formatting of the post still work most of the time. and in hindsight it should have been obvious it wasn't him since there was a description before the link, which i don't think he's ever done before. the link is always first.

>> No.29556595

>>29555742
>you're bbdanon
Nope.

>>29556034
What makes Weirdanon(s) weird anyways?

>> No.29556663
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>>29556422
>he's literally got my habits memorized down to how I format my post

Kinda creepy not gonna lie. What are my tells, if you don't mind mt asking?

>> No.29556666

>>29556595
>What makes Weirdanon(s) weird anyways?
scatfics, bugfic, snakefic, several bestiality fics, probably more i don't know of

>> No.29557048
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>>29556663
NTA, but you post like 20 chapters/fics a month dude at some point you can just kind of recognize it.

>> No.29557063

>>29556663
Your old tell was posting everything in one document, alongside the chapter formatting.

>> No.29557154

>>29542146
We’re back babyyyy
ngl I really hope you don’t go the Fauna route, the robot deserves some love.

>> No.29557266

>>29556663
actually, looking at the archives, you're way less consistent than i remember. in my mind it was, from top to bottom, link, title, tags, comment. always with an image of a relevent chuuba. but you actually haven't stuck to that at all. what good is memorizing how each writeanon formats their posts when they don't keep it consistent. at least there's always search by filename.

>> No.29557543

>>29557048
I always feel like I post to few lol. Even now I want to post another chapter of another story because I always feel like I'm slacking certain stories. I want to give them all equal attention and never can.

>>29557266
I usually just don't even pay attention anymore because I can't be fucked.

>at least there's always search by filename.

Ah god don't scare me like that. If only you knew some of the shitposts I've been responsible for. I'll be sure not to post those images here then.

>>29557154
Really? I'm surprised people are saying that.

Well, I may just grant that wish. However it may be a monkey's paw. I suppose we'll just see.

>> No.29557549

>>29556666
Oh that guy. Yeah not him

>> No.29558030

>>29478311
>>29554528
>Imagine inviting mormon Selen into your house, slipping viagra pills into her tea and then raping her all day long after she gets horny

>>29554819
>getting Selens 10 inch dragon futa cock rock hard and bursting out of her pants, her hot precum dripping on your forehead as it hovers over your face after she pushed you down on the floor, overtaken by arousal

>> No.29558954

>>29551111
Nice, I liked it. Although,
>Anon slightly shits and he turns towards her
Might wanna fix that, lest this fic will require a scat tag.

>>29555742
You might want to level up your formatting analysis skills, this is nothing like his writing.

>> No.29559292

>>29556422
>my powers of guessing which anon wrote which fic based entirely on the formatting of the post still work most of the time.
Oh yeah? Name all the authors of the stories last thread and the thread before.

>> No.29559447

>>29558954
Good catch, I just fixed it.

>> No.29559458

>>29558954
i said the formating of the post with the link to the fic in it. not the fic itself.

>> No.29559519
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29559519

>There is anecdotal evidence that Viagra may increase sexual pleasure in women. We know that Viagra works in men by increasing the blood flow to the penis. In women it's thought that Viagra could increase blood flow to the female genital area, increasing lubrication and aiding orgasm.

>> No.29559803

>>29559292
well that's easy. i wrote them all. me. i did it. i wrote every fic.
t. the author of every fic in the archive.

>> No.29560061

>>29478311
a chuuba gets raped and likes it. and is ashamed that they liked it.

>> No.29560437

>>29558030
Nobody cares about Nijisanji, so don't even bother.

>> No.29560598

>>29560437
hi earlyfag

>> No.29560806

>>29478311
someone teaches suisei that "shooting star" is not another word for comet, but another word for meteor.

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>the retard that thought he could identify authors has to resort calling someone an earlyfag for stating the truth.
This has been a ride.

>> No.29560962

>>29560835
that sounds like something *spins wheel* incest anon would say

>> No.29561264

>>29559519
Viagra is too powerful....

>> No.29561424

>>29478311
we've already found out what it would be like if luna had a gun. but what if EVERY holo had a gun? who would be the sole survivour?

>> No.29561569

>>29560962
If this post had a pic from DMC I would call you AA.

>> No.29561717

>>29561424
boring answer: Ollie cause she can't die
meme answer: suisei, she's pretty good

>> No.29561794

>>29561717
isn't a bullet to the brain like, the one way to kill a zombie for good?

>> No.29561915

>>29561569
Or a sad and shriveled character/cat

>> No.29562080

>>29561569
the problem with picture identifying is that everyone can just google them and use them

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>>29562080
Nobody has been autistic enough to save images other people use to use them here as well

>> No.29562726
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it is i, the one you are enslaved to: archivist anonymous. you can tell by the D.M.C. image i have posted. i hereby decree, that this is no longer a vtuber fanfiction thread, but a vtuber eye color discussion thread. for all your eye color discussion needs and desires. that is all.

>> No.29562763

>>29561424
This reminds me of that one story from AGES ago about being selected to participate in a hunger games like scenario where you and a few Hololive fans are hunted down by various talents and you have to survive them for a date or something. Never got continued, and I forgot what it was called.

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>>29562726

>> No.29563128

>>29562726
>enslaved
PLEASE dont give the weirdos ideas

>> No.29563386

>>29478311
slavery fic featuring slavery.

>> No.29563776

I want Miko to enslave my penis inside her vagina

>> No.29563899

>>29563776
Not sure what you mean. Further clarification needed.

>> No.29563917

i want miko to enslave me inside her vagina.

>> No.29564065

>>29563917
So, you're inside her completely? Like vore?

>> No.29564219

>>29564065
yes

>> No.29564369

Should I do horny or not horny, serious replies only

>> No.29564603

>>29564369
Decide by yourself.

>> No.29564622

>>29564369
Not horny

>> No.29564765

>>29564369
Horny

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>>29564369
Tell me what you want to write first.

>> No.29564863

>>29564369
something horny, but not so horny that i wouldn't have plausible deniability if i were to read it in public.

>> No.29565010

>>29562871
What?

>> No.29565023

>>29564369
not horny

>> No.29565025

>>29560835
This

>> No.29565146

>>29565010
he's just posting chuuba eyes in a vtuber eye color discussion thread.

>> No.29566024

New thread
>>29565346

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>>29564823
I'm playing around with a CYOA software called Quest that (You) can play in your browser. I don't know what to do for the first story, I just really want to see if it works.

>> No.29566596

>>29566117
Well I'm fucking around with Twine to write an 'interactive' fic.
Personally think you should stick with non horny since writing an interactive sex scene is fucking stalling my writing hard and just stick to something simple playing around with a branching narrative.

>> No.29567273

>>29566596
Wish me luck, hopefully it's not too big for one man. Can't wait to play yours when it's done.

>> No.29567688

What's the most amount of effort you've dedicated to a story? I've watched two movies, six seasons of an anime, and put about 50 hours into two games to write an in-depth story. I'm not saying I wasted my time, but it's funny to think about how I wouldn't have played MGRR if I didn't want to understand the memes

>> No.29567834

>>29567688
I read a section of a wiki page about a character

>> No.29568042

>>29567688
Watching clips on chuubas I'm not familiar and researching building layouts and school curriculums.

>> No.29568330
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LUNA RAPE

>> No.29568335

>>29567688
I've googled a lot of mammalian gestation periods.

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>>29568335
Bros... Vorefags aren't real... right?

>> No.29569062

>>29568849
Anon do you know what gestation is

>> No.29569184

>>29569062
>read "gestation" as "digestion"
THEY'RE IN MY HEAD AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH

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>>29567688
Watched a two-hour documentary about the Golden Age of Piracy.
Watched an hour or so of videos covering 18th-century cooking
And a few hours of deep diving into various 18th-century ships and their layouts, equipment, and so on.

Only to decide I'm going with a bit of an anachronistic setting

>> No.29569461

>>29569062
unbirth is a kind of vore

>> No.29569944

>>29568335
Ah.
PD;PT?
I remember you having to do that to justify the fast hyperpregnancies.

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>>29542918
Glad you enjoyed it anon, and that you found the dirty talk to be the high point since it's what I wanted to accomplish out of that story. Have a complimentary lion.

>> No.29573057

>>29567688
Watched a clip or two, then switched over to Miko clips

>> No.29574013

>>29567688
Rewatching a mid-tier anime multiple times to get characters and scenes right.

>> No.29575104

Luna rape delicious yummy princess cunny

>> No.29575217
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Sluts

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