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/wg/ Writing General - Queen of /vt/ Edition Anonymous Wed Jul 20 06:30:50 2022 No.28659401 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>28469348

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 06:31:43 2022 No.28659471 File: 384 KB, 1261x2025, FXiGGSZUYAAJFXj.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em!

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 06:32:47 2022 No.28659534
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 06:35:32 2022 No.28659751
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Story recap! There... were three stories posted in the last thread.

Brown, Black and Blue Because I Love You: Chapter 3: Tags: Flare, Noel, Lamy, abuse, racial abuse:>>28470697

Gura's Cousin, Final Chapter: A: Tags: Gura, incest, engagement.:>>28556761

Gura's Cousin, Chapter 6 and 7: Tags: Amelia, BDSM, Petplay, Rape, Violence, Blood, Possible Death, NSFW:>>28556761

Towa Constrictor: Tags: Towa, NSFW:>>28623859

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 06:39:48 2022 No.28660022
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Noir, Regis, Axel, Magni running a train on Amelia Watson.:>>28473259

Impregnating Mio's dusty womb:>>28479492

I want to see someone write a date with a HoloMem just to see an autist trying his best to pretend he knows how to flirt and how the chuuba would react to said flirting.:>>28479958

Hag bondage.:>>28499658

Amelia rapes one of the Tempus boys via amazon press when everyone is watching. Everyone is pissed at her but she doesn't care, she's going to get that seed, and they can't do a thing to stop her.:>>28513449

helping your gf Miko go through her period cramps:>>28519168

Anthology series of Mumei molesting every holoEN:>>28552857

Taking your revenge on Chloe by living within her walls and harassing her in her sleep.:>>28555025

Sex with a hag where in she gets increasingly more embarrassed over how much older she is as she does the mental math comparing your ages:>>28579808

/wg/ getting sex corrected. As in, all the coomer thoughts are gradually washed away by thoughts of love and care until animalistic lust is no longer in the equation compared to the desire to take care of the chuubas instead of violently fucking them raw and leaving them:>>28584451

Drunken gentle femdom sex with Lamy.:>>28595743

Yer pal Fubuki is as tiny as a thumb! Fubs taking a relaxing soak in a hot mug of tea!:>>28598453

Kobo prompt:>>28632546

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 07:17:22 2022 No.28662527 >>28659401 >Queen of /vt/ Whatever you say, at least you didn’t use that whore Noel.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 07:24:51 2022 No.28662929 >>28662527 Hello Noel/Marine schizo

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:09:13 2022 No.28665358 >>28662527 Noel has a good reason to be a whore, she was molested as a child. Which is why Marine is better, she's pure.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:33:36 2022 No.28666752 >>28665358 Marine was masturbating to porn since she was 6 years old. She was going to an all girl's Catholic school and molested by her uncle in her early teens TWICE. Of course she would grow up weird.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:34:38 2022 No.28666814 >>28660022 Why do people still bother with these? The delivery rate is somehow even worse than the draw thread

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:38:51 2022 No.28667047 >>28666752 >Marine was masturbating to porn since she was 6 years old. wtf how did she even find out about it so young?

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:39:24 2022 No.28667072

>>28666814
Prompt-making requires little effort, so even if you get a few posts of discussion going it's worth it - and if you get a story written (which isn't extremely rare if you exclude the worse prompts) you gained a lot for basically nothing.
Ultimately, it's on the writers to write what they want.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:40:27 2022 No.28667129 >>28666752 That makes me really sad.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:41:22 2022 No.28667188

>>28667047
She found a porn magazine from her dead in bathroom. She straight up confesses to Pekora that she was doing it from early age. It's quite fucked up if you think about it. Usually, children who get into masturbating too early are abuse victims or sexual assault victims, but I'm not sure if that was the case... Marine does seem weirdly broken, but it's hard to tell.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 08:42:44 2022 No.28667266 Going to take old fanfics, replaces the names, and post it as my own!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:03:30 2022 No.28668318 >>28666814 it's fun to brainstorm ideas, even if it doesn't end with something getting written

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:08:43 2022 No.28668561 >>28666752 I was the uncle ama

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:09:38 2022 No.28668600 >>28668561 Ama is a stupid name

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:39:32 2022 No.28670201 >>28666814 Because prompt making is fun and the recap post does cut down on previous thread prompt reposts.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:55:05 2022 No.28670995 File: 75 KB, 611x302, 1658298932972468.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Keep up the good work.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:56:12 2022 No.28671060 >>28670995 i mean harlotry is a pretty hard working profession, to be honest what it lacks in laborious physical stress it makes up for in occupational hazards

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:56:17 2022 No.28671065

>>28659534
Going through increasingly absurd home and then industrial processes to soften Kanata's hands enough for her to be able to safely give you a handjob, anywhere from soaking them in lotion for 10 hours to putting then to a metal grinder (which breaks, of course)

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 09:59:10 2022 No.28671221 >>28671060 My job has me on my knees a lot. I immediately gained a huge respect for whores in that regard.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:10:30 2022 No.28671902 >>28666752 >>28662527 I appreciate the context of posting this in the writing general. fine bait.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:11:07 2022 No.28671930 >>28671065 Then it ends with (You) finding the real ingredient to making Kanata's handjobs safe. Love.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:14:31 2022 No.28672093 >>2867106 >>28671930 If she's too hard, you're too soft.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:15:33 2022 No.28672139 File: 383 KB, 601x778, 1632867257616.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28672093 (me) The first one is supposed to be >>28671065 of course

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:15:59 2022 No.28672160 >>28671065 you know you could just put it in her vagina

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:22:01 2022 No.28672412 File: 89 KB, 640x685, TowaIfSheWasAGirl.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28659534 Image prompt: This Towa edit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:22:41 2022 No.28672443 >>28672412 Who is she supposed to be?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:22:44 2022 No.28672445 File: 33 KB, 577x577, 1658167398388340.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28672412

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:24:24 2022 No.28672509 File: 2.46 MB, 2048x1522, 1634785698453.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28672412 Lapras Towa

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:27:43 2022 No.28672676 >>28672443 No clue, I just found the edit and thought it looked like a human Towa.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:28:44 2022 No.28672737 >>28672676 I'm not sure Towa without her devilishness or banana has much potential, but let's see.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:29:26 2022 No.28672762 >>28672412 Fuck this is so much hotter than normal Towa.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:30:27 2022 No.28672811 File: 89 KB, 850x1391, RurudoShorts.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28672676 I think she's supposed to look like her mama

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:31:07 2022 No.28672838 >>28672509 >Thought she was wearing a fucking cut-off face on her chest Leatherface style

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:33:46 2022 No.28672960 >>28672509 >Laplus at 50% of her true power.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:43:59 2022 No.28673341
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>>28659471
Here's the start of something I've mentioned a few times now. Had an idea near the end that I'm interested to see where I can take it. Updates will be infrequent though, as I work through my WIPs. I get to cum now!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRVFBzL8xoqT_G4ARsW6CoBNO2K9Vl6hFMQeg40uYDL5Hhol71a3FYzBXKBo_CR-PmarRR5HCL9B9PI/pub

Comments and critiques are welcome, as always.

Tags: SFW, Polka, Rikka, Sora, Coco, Nazuna, Kson, Gore, Action

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 10:52:33 2022 No.28673684 File: 209 KB, 850x1182, sample-6384b8eb0645436d162893044dad50d0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28673341 >spoiler No, you don't. You can't until you finish your entire WIP pile. Those were the terms.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:41:49 2022 No.28675237

>>28673341
I like it. It flows pretty well for the most part until the "meeting" and the last part which is kinda confusing. Maybe that's on purpose? But the last part especially felt kinda awkward to read with the somewhat weird prose. Nonetheless, definitely looking forward to more of this from you!

Also, hats off to the Hoolstars tshirt reference. Only a real starsfag remembers that shit

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:46:26 2022 No.28675394

>>28673341
Well this was unexpected, also really fucking good (works really well with the hotline Miami OST too).
The action had the right amount of ultraviolence to it, and the budding plot building up has a lot of promise.
Sucks that I'll probably have to wait till next year for another chapter but this is the strongest first chapter we've gotten in a while.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:47:15 2022 No.28675417 >>28673341 Is gore considered SFW? Or does SFW just mean no sex here

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:52:35 2022 No.28675611 File: 241 KB, 500x750, Tony2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28673341

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:53:57 2022 No.28675660

>>28675417
Honestly NSFW is basically de facto a shorthand tag for smut fic here since it works at excluding non-smut. Due to NSFW being on character longer than SFW.
Though to answer your question, the violence in that fic is non-sexualized so it shouldn't get gore NSFW since that would point to something like R18G Content.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:56:38 2022 No.28675770 File: 2.96 MB, 1416x2788, 1658169422819837.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28659534 Requesting meeting selen at a rave and fucker her after the rave or during the rave or both

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:58:00 2022 No.28675831 >>28675770 fucking*

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 11:59:12 2022 No.28675874 >>28675831 nah you meet a fucker who fucks her after the rave or during the rave or bothohn

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:28:25 2022 No.28677279

>>28623859
I think AA might forget to archive this considering he updated the archive early this time.
As for what I think about this fic.
...
It's honestly way too short and probably not sexualized/fetishized enough to satisfy the guy who asked this for fetish reasons, while not really having anything to give it much of a point. Like it starts off with a half-baked joke about an APEX tutor and doesn't really do much with both that or the constricting snuff scene.
Honestly seems like it should have either gotten a few more days to cook if you were serious about taking on the concept.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:28:51 2022 No.28677304 Have we got any fics of Suisei giving a blowjob? I don't think so... looking through all the NSFW fics now but asking in case I'm blind and missed something

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:32:54 2022 No.28677529 File: 33 KB, 591x887, 1658320373787.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28677279 I'll get it, I'm just in bed right now.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:35:56 2022 No.28677707

>>28623859
I missed this last thread. It doesn't really come close to a predation fetish. You've written a lot about fear and pain, but neither of those have much place in a fetish. I would have imagined Towa taking more of a morbid interest in the snake, fantasizing about being eaten by it would feel like, and accidentally allowing it to get close while her head is in the sky. Then after she tries and fails to shake it off, she just relaxes, and allows it to happen. Pain would be there, but there'd be something of a masochistic element to it as well, like her getting bitten and crying out in pain, but noting the feeling of venom flowing into her veins, the numbness associated with the area shortly afterwards, and her thighs rapidly getting wetter. That sort of thing.
Thank you for giving it a shot though anon. I really appreciate it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:40:15 2022 No.28677992 >>28677707 Constrictors aren't venomous.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:46:22 2022 No.28678374 >>28677304 Suisei gives a blowjob as part of the ending sex scene of 'Safety Spats'. The fic is honestly a really cute romance fic.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:51:35 2022 No.28678684 >>28677992 Letting the rules of reality affect your fantasy is bad, anon. Just don't call it a constrictor. It's a fairly common element in this kind of porn.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 12:52:18 2022 No.28678720 >>28678374 That's not Suisei, dude. Because Suisei's not a dude, dude.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:00:55 2022 No.28679229 >>28678720 Just because she has a penis doesn't mean she isn't Suisei.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:03:14 2022 No.28679349 File: 63 KB, 220x232, 1381952983409.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28679229 >Just because she has a penis doesn't mean she isn't Suisei.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:03:52 2022 No.28679394 >>28677304 Now that I think about it. There was (You) sucking Suisei's dick before Suisei sucking your dick.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:09:15 2022 No.28679680 >>28679349 Futafags are delusional, more news at 11.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:09:34 2022 No.28679698 >>28678720 She's also not actually a blue-haired anime girl living in Japan, but that doesn't stop fanfiction writers from inventing things.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:14:59 2022 No.28680011 >>28679394 No pretty sure safety spats came out first before "Otoko ja nai, Suisei desu"

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:20:12 2022 No.28680357 >>28679698 Should have expected a doxxfag to be unable to tell the difference between the character and the actor

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:21:24 2022 No.28680416 >>28679698 people are used to arguing that genitals determine gender irl and you cant change gender (which is correct) and bring that mindset into discussions around fiction (where anythings possible).

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:22:09 2022 No.28680463 >>28679680 It was a Femboy fic not a Futa fic there's a difference. ... The difference is that Suisei is a boy there.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:23:00 2022 No.28680513 >>28680357 >Should have expected I think you mean "not surprised". Either way, you're right.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:23:38 2022 No.28680550 >>28679698 But Suisei is a blue haired anime girl? >>28680463 Boy do I look foolish.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:23:58 2022 No.28680569 >>28680513 Yeah, that, my bad

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:27:06 2022 No.28680761 >>28665358 >>28666752 I saw Marine talk about how she got into porn at a young age on two occasions. But where did she and Noel talk about being molested? No seriously, did they actually talk about it on a stream?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:33:10 2022 No.28681137 >>28678374 i jerked off to that the other day and imagined it was pekofag

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:47:06 2022 No.28682021 File: 87 KB, 266x266, SuiReally.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28681137 You imagined a fluffy romance and sex with pekofag?!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:47:36 2022 No.28682053 File: 42 KB, 460x332, stoprightthere.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28681137 Words cannot express my disgust.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 13:54:36 2022 No.28682492 >>28682021 yeah. skinny petite boy, tiny cock, sexually hungry but a sub in bed. basically got pekofag written all over it. was much easier to imagine him than suisei

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:01:43 2022 No.28682930 >>28682492 So you imagined pekofag as suisei's roommate?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:04:16 2022 No.28683100 >>28682930 just substituted her for him and changed the story to accommodate. was a great wank. felt immoral.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:05:19 2022 No.28683159 >>28683100 >felt immoral. You should be feeling more than just immoral.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:07:35 2022 No.28683344 >>28683159 well, i also felt really fucking good as i came. does that count?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:08:18 2022 No.28683386 >>28682492 Cannot believe you managed to make one of the faggiest goddamn stories I've ever read into something even more gay.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:09:31 2022 No.28683474 >>28683386 i don't think it was anywhere near as gay as pekofag's orgy, and EVERYONE wanked to that when it was released

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:13:03 2022 No.28683718 >>28683474 Anon, it would be less gay were that fic just femboy sex, but more than half of that fic was a gay romance.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:16:30 2022 No.28683965 >>28683474 just email him and confess already

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:17:33 2022 No.28684025 >>28683718 that's fine isn't it?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:18:27 2022 No.28684085 >>28683718 Would you say that's more gay than the Vox fic?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:18:35 2022 No.28684099 >>28683965 i don't feel romantically inclined towards him. you wouldn't fall in love with a blow-up doll, would you? oh wait, this is kind of the wrong fandom to be applying that logic

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:18:38 2022 No.28684104 >>28683474 >everyone wanked to that Speaking for yourself, faggot.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:19:18 2022 No.28684139 This is why no more Femboy fics will be written

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:20:39 2022 No.28684248 >>28684104 and for me

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:21:07 2022 No.28684280 >>28684139 because they're too popular?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:21:27 2022 No.28684300 >>28684085 Unironically, Yes. I liked that fic but goddamn am I not going to deny that it's the gayest fic in the archive

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:22:41 2022 No.28684390 >>28684139 Shame, they're gayer (better) than futa fics.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:26:31 2022 No.28684637 >>28684139 oh well, at least we got that femboy Pekora fic

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:30:40 2022 No.28684921 >>28684139 Don't worry anon I'll take your legacy (for the femboy fics not your ringo stuff) and make a multi chapter Suisei romance fic that reveals Suisei is a boy in the third chapter then continues till I end it on a gay marriage chapter.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:31:15 2022 No.28684952 >>28684085 We had a gay Vox fic?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:31:28 2022 No.28684962 File: 737 KB, 1600x1122, 1637796430881.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28684921 based

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:32:08 2022 No.28684993 >>28684952 Yeah this one https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTbaFQ6l6EtGiv622RYTkOgJdomIZWjXRHHOZfRwSBzjJK0V2BgxMEEgOmHKMeI9S1NG-JuLh_uIrRq/pub He sucks (You) off under the table.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:35:24 2022 No.28685176 File: 2.20 MB, 1968x2016, 1654958082233.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28684921 I fucking hate that you figured out I also did ringo stuff. well anyway, I lied. There is one more fic in the works....

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:36:02 2022 No.28685211 >>28685176 micheal...

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:37:27 2022 No.28685305 >>28685176 Michael Cocko..

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:39:37 2022 No.28685432

>>28685176
...
Wait what.
I assumed you were the writer for the 'smut focused' femboy fics and not the author of safety spats. I didn't know you wrote /ringo/ stuff but I did know the safety spats anon was mostly a ringo/ag writer that occasionally came here so I guessed wrong because I thought it would have been funny.
...
Unless both of the femboy fic writers were /ringo/ writers as well?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:42:17 2022 No.28685585 >>28685432 the latter

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:58:38 2022 No.28686512
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>>28659534
Miko is extremely in love with Suisei. Suisei, being a psycopath, is unable to return these feelings genuinely, but she's been reciprocating anyways for pragmatic reasons. As their relationship grows deeper, Miko's requests grow needier, making the relationship less worthwhile to Suisei; until eventually, Suisei has to 'remind' Mikochi of her proper place. With violence. (Or threats thereof.)

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 14:59:08 2022 No.28686534 >>28665358 Marine worked in a soapland before Hololive though....

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:00:15 2022 No.28686609 >>28680761 Noel was never molested. Marine's molestation story was on her roommate back in the day.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:00:39 2022 No.28686637 >>28672762 Yeah she goes from looking like a 'girl that will never win a harem anime' to '1st girl of a harem anime'.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:02:39 2022 No.28686746 >>28686534 Yeah, I also make shit up on the internet.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:03:27 2022 No.28686785 >>28686746 Do your roommate reps

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:04:36 2022 No.28686851 >>28686746 >he doesn't know

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:04:59 2022 No.28686876 File: 768 KB, 1280x1829, 1658329118645258.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28686534 hot.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:06:18 2022 No.28686966 File: 454 KB, 3497x1408, 1646224119285~2.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Marine has a husband I doubt that she worked in a soapland

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:08:55 2022 No.28687125 Damn, the marineschizo really likes this thread for some reason.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:09:06 2022 No.28687141 >>28686966 Cope

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:11:23 2022 No.28687267 >>28687125 Funny thing is I'm pretty sure this is the actual marine schizo and not a larper like the last time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:12:40 2022 No.28687352 >>28686876 > boyfriend literally needs to wait like a dog on a welcome mat until 2 AM to be acknowledged but, considering > Marine in cosplay it may or may not be worth it

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:16:04 2022 No.28687564 >>28686966 oh, good for her. those 'old lady too late to get married' jokes by her chat don't feel so bad now

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:31:47 2022 No.28688472 Anyone have chuuba fic ideas they want to brainstorm?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:34:05 2022 No.28688606 >>28688472 We need more daughterwife fics.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:38:06 2022 No.28688813 >>28688472 we need more femboy fics

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:41:50 2022 No.28689032 >>28688472 I want more sfw fluffy family fics. I've read Ice Cream and Parched at night too many times. I need more.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:43:31 2022 No.28689126 >>28688472 Laplus comes to visit you while you're sick and tries to take care of you, with mixed results

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:47:28 2022 No.28689361 >>28686609 Source ?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:48:48 2022 No.28689422 >>28689126 Laplus' entire visit consists of trying to do things you do to help sick people and needing (You) to help her out when it goes wrong. By the time she's left she hasn't done a single thing to really help but you do feel better.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:54:44 2022 No.28689742

i didn't add much, but finished chapter 2. decided to refocus this writing as a story about A-chan, since it's in more of a "realistic"/behind the scenes style. someone made a good point that getting into roommate territory might be uncomfortable, so i steered away from focussing on the talent any more than in passing.

https://rentry.org/nko46

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:56:51 2022 No.28689849 >>28689032 I mean conceptually who'd be interesting to run as the 'mother' in such a scenario?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:57:20 2022 No.28689870 File: 892 KB, 220x220, 1639373014432.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28673341 https://youtu.be/IaE20aXxCz4 Cool story, looking forward to see where this goes

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 15:57:27 2022 No.28689877

>>28689422
>tries to make you some porridge, only to cause a fire in the kitchen
>has you take some experimental medicine she got from Koyori, but the side-effects end up being worse than whatever it was trying to treat
>tries to tidy your place up a bit, but ends up making an even bigger mess and/or finding your stash of "magazines"

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:03:25 2022 No.28690207

>>28689877
>Laplus seems to take it all in stride but by the end of it she's in tears.
>Starts crying about how useless she's being
>Hug her.
>Tell her coming over was enough.
>Spread your sickness to her and bait the audience for the sequel where you take care of Laplus.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:05:00 2022 No.28690288

>>28689849
For maximum fluff, chuubas that exude their motherly aura, the obiovus Mio, Aki etc. But personally I'd like see someone who seems like they don't have much experience with children but learning along the way with (You). I think anyone within StartEnd would be a good contender.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:05:04 2022 No.28690295 >>28690207 >unbeknownst to (You), your sickness was actually covid and over the next two weeks you both die choking

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:05:43 2022 No.28690331 >>28689870 RIP ZYZZ

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:06:39 2022 No.28690383 >>28672443 It's supposed to be Sio.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:11:55 2022 No.28690699 File: 207 KB, 1277x1950, 1654379433541.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28681137 You need to move on, anon. I'm not about that life anymore.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:14:14 2022 No.28690858

>>28688813
What other kinds of femboy fic is left, 'straight' sex between a Femboy and a normal chuuba?
I guess there's still creative room to tell more dramatic stories based around the 'trap' aspect or the gender dysphoria aspect. As well as just doing the old 'cunny' chuuba is actually a man thing.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:15:35 2022 No.28690951 >>28690858 what is this attitude that once an idea has been written out once, it can no longer be done again? are you daft?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:15:37 2022 No.28690955 >>28673341 certified banger, please write more hotline miami-aligned stuff

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:20:08 2022 No.28691228 >>28688472 More slice of life, with some drama in the background but not too much. Like First Summer Memories.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:20:58 2022 No.28691289 >>28690699 What, not tempted to write out a gay romance in order to reclaim the throne for gayest fic in the archive?

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:31:06 2022 No.28691864
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>>28691289
That spot will always be taken by the HomoStar fics, SFW or not, and their respective authors. There's a world of difference between wanting to fuck a man because he looks like a woman and wanting to fuck a man because he is a man.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:39:51 2022 No.28692301 >>28689742 >>28659471 You should have anchored this to make people see this as a fic and not just a random rentry link.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 16:52:57 2022 No.28693074 >>28690699 absolute bullshit you back alley skank aren't you the risu poster preying on saplings

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:06:36 2022 No.28693920 >>28690699 Playing hard to get is an unattractive quality in anybody.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:10:39 2022 No.28694163 >>28692301 na ho ne, i'll remember it.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:19:10 2022 No.28694620
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>>28659471

What goes around, comes around.

Pikamee, you childhood best friend has accepted to have you over for a few days so that you may find a place of your own, and she would take her one and only chance to express repressed feelings she had for you, only for you to be extremely confused.

https://rentry.org/ustr9

Tags: Amano Pikamee, NSFW, childhood friend, fluff.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:19:50 2022 No.28694660 File: 3.65 MB, 562x480, 1658197065970941.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28694620 LET IT BEGIN

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:19:53 2022 No.28694668 >>28686534 Was that the black company, or a different job? I'm guessing the latter, but... >>28686609 Yeah, Mel was the one who nearly got molested by a friend.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:25:34 2022 No.28694985

>>28694620
gonna rub my penis to your work, anon. starting off with slow, gentle strokes, then speeding up with a death grip as we get to the good stuff, i'm about 7 inches long if you wanna jerk off to the thought of me jerking off to your amano pikamee story. maybe i'm jerking off to the thought of you jerking off to the thought of me jerking off to your story, though? that's for me to know, but post your dick and you'll find out ; ))

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:27:12 2022 No.28695074 >>28694985 Thanks for jerking off to my work, anon.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:28:47 2022 No.28695163 >>28695074 you're welcome sugarplum

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:31:59 2022 No.28695326 File: 40 KB, 1154x719, 1654772676368.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:33:08 2022 No.28695389 File: 89 KB, 218x227, 1646271356852.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Is this what's known as "coomstructive feedback"?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:35:41 2022 No.28695520 >>28695389 It's certainly flattering whenever someone tells me they jerked off to one of my stories

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:39:43 2022 No.28695730 >>28695520 Sounds gross to me. Like keep that shit to yo self, dawg.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:41:35 2022 No.28695832 >>28695389 It is a bit gross, but the point of writing smut is to make it hot, if someone jerks it to it, it means you succeeded.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:41:57 2022 No.28695847 File: 345 KB, 750x730, 1637437269856.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28695389 good one

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:43:37 2022 No.28695931 >>28695832 As if you'd ever dislike being told someone came to your smut, pekofag.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:55:10 2022 No.28696588 >>28695931 Oh, sorry, I'm not pekofag.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:56:08 2022 No.28696649

>>28694620
An extremely cute story. To really pull off the childhood friend angle, you've gotta be prepped for the long run, and that's exactly what you've done. I don't even like Pikamee that much and I still thought it was cute.
The smut's in a really bad spot, though. It comes out of nowhere in a really awkward spot, right after their first kiss, and is really short afterwards. It's not lengthy enough to get off to, and the prose is more on the romantic side than the erotic. It kind of feels like you weren't interested in writing smut, but included it for whatever reason. I don't think it needs to be there, and that's speaking as someone that loves smutfics.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:58:24 2022 No.28696778 >>28696649 My smut has always been my weaker aspects, I have to admit. Thanks for your feedback.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 17:58:47 2022 No.28696805 >>28695832 This is true. The biggest compliment my writing has gotten was when some guy said he accidentally shot cum on his face while reading a fic I wrote.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:01:52 2022 No.28696974 >>28696805 WHAT

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:04:13 2022 No.28697098 >>28696805 No way that happens by accident, dude was aiming. Might have been a /fit/izen making sure his gains don't escape.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:17:25 2022 No.28697898 >>28696974 It was one of the chapters from Present Day, Present Time. I forgot which one but it was one of the earlier ones.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:22:21 2022 No.28698172 >>28673341 This is the Hotline Miami stuff I was talking about. Good shit anon, I look forward next chapter.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:24:24 2022 No.28698297 This thread is just terrible.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:25:08 2022 No.28698336 >>28698297 door's over there, fag

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:27:24 2022 No.28698478 >>28698297 It is, but don’t say anything because Fags will just defend it. B

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:44:51 2022 No.28699508 >>28698297 it's a fanfiction thread about virtual hoes, what did you expect

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:53:04 2022 No.28700001 >>28698297 What would be your suggestion for improvements?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:54:40 2022 No.28700090 >>28699508 I'll have you know my oshi is a pure maiden.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 18:59:27 2022 No.28700337 https://rentry/9oi7s

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:00:21 2022 No.28700371 >>28700337 linkchama?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:00:58 2022 No.28700409 >>28700337 KRONII MORI SCATFIC WARNING

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:05:32 2022 No.28700625 >>28700337 dns error.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:05:34 2022 No.28700626 >>28700409 It's called /ringo/, and it's art.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:07:04 2022 No.28700685 >>28700337 Complete link: https://rentry.org/9oi7s

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:07:26 2022 No.28700712 >>28700337 the narration admitting Mori has a thing for black girl asses still takes me out of this fic, faster than the shitting part. Ironically

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:09:26 2022 No.28700807 >>28700685 somehow i never even noticed it missing the .org, fuck

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:14:14 2022 No.28701065 >>28700712 What did you expect? Mori is from the hood, she gotta swing that way.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:14:18 2022 No.28701073

>>28700685
well, i don't know what i expected. the other dude posted a warning, yet i looked anyway, and got exactly that. an EN fic. i feel sick to the stomach.

oh yeah and i suppose paradise lost and regained no longer hold the title of king scat fics anymore.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:17:02 2022 No.28701196 >>28700685 This fic was so dogshit that I couldn't help but laugh my ass off. If you intended this to be a comedy then you succeeded. Kudos to you. Mori should get tested for arrhythmia.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:17:49 2022 No.28701239 >>28701073 it isn't even the best fic in the ringo archive, in fact i'd put it among the bottom ones

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:20:12 2022 No.28701340 >>28700685 that's pretty good, anon, I expect to see more from you in the future

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:20:33 2022 No.28701358 >>28701239 so do you really get aroused by the poopoo? because i think every scat fic we've had so far with the exception of paradise lost has been a troll or a comedy

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:21:17 2022 No.28701397 Having /ringo/ here was a mistake.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:21:41 2022 No.28701414
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>>28673684
Too late!

>>28675237
The 'meeting' is definitely meant to be off in that way, but yeah I understand that feeling off the final scene. I realize now that me trying to be a little vague about who's who just throws it off a bit. Thank you! It's a charmingly bad shirt

>>28675394
Thanks, I think that's high praise considering the starts of some series we've had! I hope I won't take that long but I'm better off not promising anything.

>>28675417
SFW just means no sexo in the archive. I don't plan to include smut, but if somehow it comes up naturally I won't shy away from it.

>>28675611
Dude all these pictures fucking rule

>>28689870
Sexualizer never really stood out to me all that much. Not that it's bad or anything it's just not high up on my list.There's joke involving chuubas and New Wave Hookers that I'm not clever enough to try and make. Thank you!

>>28690955
>>28698172
I do plan on it for sure, just can't say when.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:21:56 2022 No.28701427 >>28701239 That said, where IS the ringo archive? I'd have assumed they'd put it in the OP, seeing as /ringo/ is pretty much dead and the threads needed to be merged

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:24:06 2022 No.28701529 >>28701397 i don't mind them here. i'd prefer those stories be tagged properly though

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:25:46 2022 No.28701625 >>28701529 We just need the /wg/ and /ringo/ catalogues merged properly

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:26:01 2022 No.28701638 >>28701427 There is no reason to put it in the op, just being in the archive is enough. It isn't fair for meat and ag, if only ringo gets special treatment

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:26:17 2022 No.28701654 >>28701427 >>28701625 No, fuck off.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:27:27 2022 No.28701720 >>28701638 then why not a great unification of writingfags? as a /meat/head myself i'd be happy to see it live on

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:28:03 2022 No.28701754 >>28701358 It depends from person to person. I like domination abuse aspect of it, don't particularly care for the poop outside of the embarrassment angle

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:29:01 2022 No.28701793 >>28701427 lol you're not getting it in the OP, bub. you're a guest here, don't forget that.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:30:20 2022 No.28701855 >>28701720 >write fic >tag it properly >anchor it There, unification completed

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:32:56 2022 No.28702017 >>28701793 We're all guests here, it's only a matter of time before jannies double down on being faggots and run every ounce of creativity off the board.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:35:07 2022 No.28702124 Well, just in case the jannies behave like Reddit mods again, where will we migrate?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:35:47 2022 No.28702161 >>28702017 Just like what happened to /tg/...

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:36:11 2022 No.28702183 >>28659471 >>28700685 making sure it gets anchored

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:37:05 2022 No.28702230 >>28701397 Agreed. They can’t even behave properly.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:37:13 2022 No.28702241
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>>28702017
This nigga deadass compared the writefag and drawfag threads to a bunch of piss drinkers and shit eaters. These ringotards might be annoying but at least they're funny.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:37:15 2022 No.28702244 >>28702124 I'd be posting my fics in ao3. Sucks about the lack of engagement, but what can you do

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:38:25 2022 No.28702315 >>28701427 /ringo/ is not dead. We’re on /d/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:38:54 2022 No.28702340 >>28702017 There is an obvious and notable difference between writing in a ringo thread and ringo in a writing thread.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:39:39 2022 No.28702397

>>28701239
The writing is well structured, although sometimes redundant. Kronii and Mori's interpretations are on point as well, their interactions within the fic are credible and are consistent with their official behavior. I can't say much about the scat part myself though, I'm not a fan of it and i felt the ending a bit rushed, its not like they could be inside the stall forever but in retrospective it felt sort of short.

>>28701638
They are fics, I believe they belong in the general poll, they won't be a bother if they are tagged properly, it is unfortunate that /ringo/ had to be moved, since they produce literature, semi original content that not many boards can have the privilege to count with.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:40:14 2022 No.28702432 >>28702241 When we're all refugees in search of another board you'll think of me, and regret not treating me like brother

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:41:24 2022 No.28702503 >>28702432 Why would anyone treat a parasite as a brother.

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:41:31 2022 No.28702511

>>28701427
There's a /ringo/ refugee camp set up in /d/, with links to our archive. I don't know about merging our archives with yours, but if an author wants to repost one like that anon did, there's nothing stopping them. They should at least be courteous enough to tag it properly. I still don't know if that story was a shitpost (pun not intended) when originally posted in /ringo/, because it shares text from a an old post on /jp/

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:43:40 2022 No.28702634 >>28702503 Don't forget, to the eyes of the world we're the same. Sweaty neckbeards who thrive off of GFE

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:44:19 2022 No.28702673 >>28702432 No, no I won't you faglord.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:44:33 2022 No.28702691 >>28702183 >anchoring the work of another author without permission It wasn't enough to just post it to troll people, huh?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:44:33 2022 No.28702692 >>28702634 >Sweaty neckbeards who thrive off of GFE I don’t like GFE and I treat vtubers about the same as regular female streamers.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:47:57 2022 No.28702896 File: 427 KB, 590x623, 1657528354373.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28702691

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:48:14 2022 No.28702913 >>28702634 >Sweaty neckbeards who thrive off of GFE You can stop projecting.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:48:20 2022 No.28702921 >>28702634 But i only watch male bro vtubers..... like selen

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:48:35 2022 No.28702936 If you retards keep replying to the shitfags the jannies will come for us.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:48:53 2022 No.28702954 >>28702692 What are you doing in /wg/ then

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:49:06 2022 No.28702975 Anyway...anyone working on a Sana fic before her graduation? I think she has like five stories in the archive

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:51:50 2022 No.28703135 >>28702975 I never cared enough for Sana to write something about her. The graduation doesn't change anything

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:54:22 2022 No.28703269 >>28702975 She doesn't have many viewers here I think, plus her debuff of never streaming killed her momentum. Big shame.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:54:32 2022 No.28703280 >>28702975 I thought about it because of the current situation and because I liked her in the anatomy review hosted by Mumei, but I have no inspiring idea for a fluff story and she's not one of the chuubas I'd consider most attractive either.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:55:35 2022 No.28703350 >>28702975 Still more than Anya or AZKi

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 19:55:42 2022 No.28703359 >>28702954 You know some people just watch for the gameplay, right.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 20:11:26 2022 No.28704323 >>28702921 sorry, anon, you're still one of us...

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 20:13:42 2022 No.28704478 >>28702511 At least /ringo/ and /ag/ live on, but is /meat/ truly dead...?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 20:16:33 2022 No.28704667 >>28702975 She has like five stream archives as well, so it's appropriate

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 20:39:18 2022 No.28706274 File: 30 KB, 1024x994, 1641515705739.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28694620 This... This is very cute and sweet anon. The build-up is cute and the sex is also cute with the right flow. Great job.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:19:10 2022 No.28708892 Spooky ghost stories with Chloe pissing herself when also being fucked by a ghost

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:28:59 2022 No.28709601

>>28701414
>Sexualizer never really stood out to me all that much
Yeah I get that, I like it but it's not my favorite I was gonna put like le perv or roller mobster but I dont blow my load early and use my favorite songs on the first part, you know save the fucking ultra bangers for the final parts
Also how many parts do you plan on making?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:36:31 2022 No.28710109 >>28659401 any stories with images? i cant read without images

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:37:41 2022 No.28710197 File: 1.40 MB, 2110x3296, __elira_pendora_and_franzj_nijisanji_and_2_more_drawn_by_soapyak__3648316f736fa886cca7f809f5a1aa56.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28710109

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:39:49 2022 No.28710325 File: 1.35 MB, 2110x3296, __selen_tatsuki_and_franzj_nijisanji_and_2_more_drawn_by_soapyak__1b587ae2f3880324b560a83b40d66fd9.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28710109 >>28710197

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:40:37 2022 No.28710378 >>28710109 Fubuki and Bae are trapped in a room while Mumei films has images though be warned the fic is dogshit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:44:32 2022 No.28710659 >>28710109 I remember the Ina JOI having images

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:49:28 2022 No.28711035 >>28710659 The Risu one also has images.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 21:58:04 2022 No.28711638 >>28659471 Here's the walking Iofi as your pet story. There's pet play/training, a challenge and a bit of associated nudity, but also wholesomeness. Extrapedestrial Tags: Iofi, BDSM, Pet Play https://rentry.org/ravy4

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 22:28:59 2022 No.28713567

>>28673341
I like it, the violence got just enough detail in it to make it impactful without going full in on the gore. Also setting up further mystery is always a plus in my book.
However, in regards to the last bit, I'm not really sure how the KsonCoco is going to work. Like you have one in the dream and the other in reality, so how does that work in the setting? it makes me question the world if that makes sense.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 22:31:43 2022 No.28713758 >The urge to give a bait and switch ending to sweet fluff fics in which the chuuba suffers

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 22:47:01 2022 No.28714673 >>28713758 I feel like you gotta perfect the execution to pull that off well. Anything less than perfect and you end ruining the whole fic.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 22:57:59 2022 No.28715363 File: 533 KB, 854x1200, 1629004755715.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28711638 Well shit. I might have a new fetish now.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:05:38 2022 No.28715942 >be (you) >Nazuna keeps insisting she's boing-boing >(you) don't believe it >she takes her shirt off and unwraps her chest. >Sana-sized Boing Boing

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:07:52 2022 No.28716092 Do not write stories about Magni.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:17:33 2022 No.28716752 >>28711638 Excellent, both wholesome and fetishy. I'm glad you used the catbox image as a reference for Iofi's ass.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:17:35 2022 No.28716755 Do write stories about Magni.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:20:04 2022 No.28716918 >>28715942 >Nazuna Literally who?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:24:22 2022 No.28717249 >>28715363 Glad you enjoyed it. As the fic probably shows I'm not into pet play for its own sake, but the domination/obedience aspect is nice.

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>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:36:22 2022 No.28718113 >>28704478 They got banished to and are still stuck in the /trash/ dimension. They tried to break to /jp/but that didn't work

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:44:52 2022 No.28718743 [DELETED]

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>28709601
I can't really guess that well, but looking at how long this one was...five or six?

>28713567
Thanks! I do have plans to address those two, but I don't want to give that away just yet. One thing I will say is that Anon never actually met Coco, so 'dream' Coco is less 'real' than either The Rat or even Sora.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:45:08 2022 No.28718766 >>28716752 Thank you! The image was very nice and kind of what kept me thinking about the prompt. Short but stacked girls are great

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:48:44 2022 No.28719182
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>>28709601
I can't really guess that well, but looking at how long this one was...five or six?

>>28713567
Thanks! I do have plans to address those two, but I don't want to give that away just yet. One thing I will say is that Anon never actually met Coco, so 'dream' Coco is less 'real' than either The Rat or even Sora.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:56:10 2022 No.28720179 >>28711638 >Extrapedestrial I love that pun.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:59:04 2022 No.28720637 >>28659534 (You) are the judge assigned to IRyS & Bae's 5th divorce...of the month.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:59:16 2022 No.28720665 >>28720179 I thought about making it Extrapetestrial for the triple pun, but I feared it wouldn't be understood and/or come across as too messy. Hope you like the story as well

Anonymous Wed Jul 20 23:59:26 2022 No.28720685

>>28710109
"Life of the Party" is pretty much the first and only 'caption' fic (mildy related image and really short story) here.
We probably don't get more of that kind of fic since it takes a slightly different prose style to write while also needing the author to do some mildly tedious image editing, so unless we get a bored image editor it's unlikely we'll get anymore of that kind of fic.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 00:30:15 2022 No.28724512 >>28718113 A truly horrible fate. I'll miss the /meat/ threads, they were oddly comfy

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 00:39:19 2022 No.28725554 >>28673341 Loved your way of storytelling, it's very dynamic. also >Just to scare some broad You couldn't bring yourself to rape her, could you? I don't blame you. >Konanon! I chuckled heartily.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 00:43:59 2022 No.28726230 >>28713758 This feels like something where you need to foreshadow that shit just enough that it's going to be obvious to anyone paying attention unless you are deliberately going for it in a comedic way.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 00:55:33 2022 No.28727895 Writing is hard, I have dumb fetishes no one likes, and keeping characters in character is difficult. These are my complaints for the day.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:00:41 2022 No.28728808 >>28703359 What are you doing in a fanfiction writing thread then?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:03:05 2022 No.28729280 >>28728808 I like reading, anon. Just because you watch real women who use anime avatars as replacement girlfriends, doesn't mean others do.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:08:36 2022 No.28730228 How much of the series in the archives that are officially discontinued?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:08:37 2022 No.28730231 File: 2.62 MB, 2339x3174, PolkaAngry.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28725554 I mean, it's still attempted kidnapping. Plus who knows what like a few dozen homeless dude would do to her if they did

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:10:51 2022 No.28730610 >>28730228 At least half of them

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:11:46 2022 No.28730741 >>28730228 assume that all series are dead in the water until a new chapter comes out

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:18:15 2022 No.28731825 >>28724512 /meat/ and /ringo/ filtered the bad anons, ironically they have the best anons from /vt/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:22:49 2022 No.28732380 >>28729280 You sound like those people that claim they only like things 'ironically' because detachment is 'cool'.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:24:20 2022 No.28732535 >>28732380 I've been watching streamers since 2016, anon. vtubers aren't any different.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:29:49 2022 No.28733061 >>28732535 Oh so do you read RPF of your favorite streamers on ao3 then?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:31:11 2022 No.28733203 >>28733061 Nah, that's on the discord, but some of them are weird, so I only read up to the first paragraph.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:31:43 2022 No.28733260 >>28719182 >One thing I will say is that Anon never actually met Coco, so 'dream' Coco is less 'real' than either The Rat or even Sora. Hmm. okay, I think I see what you mean, I won't speculate further. I'm looking forward to the reveal in any case.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:46:20 2022 No.28734558 Is it just me or did this thread fill up faster than usual?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:47:09 2022 No.28734622 >>28734558 I think something happened at night that allowed it to be at 150+ posts in the morning

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 01:49:28 2022 No.28734822 >>28734558 Marine schizo or the earlyfag as people here like to call him, started shitting up the thread.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:07:08 2022 No.28736273 >>28734558 It's what happens when both good fics get posted and bait is present.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:10:15 2022 No.28736607 >>28734558 /ringo/ fags got uppity.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:24:41 2022 No.28738057 >>28736607 It's just one fag, and he seems committed to trying to bring down /wg/.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:28:04 2022 No.28738386 >>28738057 Why? What did we do to piss them off? Pun intended

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:30:18 2022 No.28738616 >>28738386 Just read the thread, anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 02:43:03 2022 No.28739725 >>28738616 He doesn’t even need to read the entire thread. Just scroll up a couple times and he’ll see it.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:14:12 2022 No.28742224 File: 1.20 MB, 572x541, 1658271355595570.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] imagine being mad about a fanfiction thread lmao

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:16:42 2022 No.28742430 >>28742224 We just don't want this general to fall even further.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:26:10 2022 No.28743237 >>28719182 So pretty much they're the dream meetings from the first game only sans the added weirdness of the coma. With Sora maybe being more than the other two by being the 'Richard stand in' of the three.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:26:39 2022 No.28743264 >>28719182 >kson Do people here still like her after joining vshojo?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:27:52 2022 No.28743360 >>28743264 No, she outed herself as nothing more than a common whore. I’m glad I never miss her.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:29:00 2022 No.28743450 >>28743264 inter-corporate politics are for the rest of the board. I’m just here to write.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:29:58 2022 No.28743518 >>28659401 Since this is a writing thread and all, how would (You) write a description of Marine's leotard? All the creases and stuff. I want to learn to describe things like that so I can write SMUT

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:32:05 2022 No.28743681 >>28743518 I would dodge describing it by tearing it off of her in the blaze of lust leading up to the sex.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:32:07 2022 No.28743684 >>28743518 >how would (You) write a description of Marine's leotard? a unisex skin-tight one-piece garment that covers the torso from the crotch to the shoulder

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:32:27 2022 No.28743698 >>28743681 >>28743684 Mediocre.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:36:13 2022 No.28744030 >earlyfag trying to astroturf again yawn

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:37:24 2022 No.28744138 >>28743698 I'll say mine is more passable than mediocre. You have to remember you're writing fanfic, no one will care how you describe things, so long as it's not absurd.

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:38:14 2022 No.28744198

>>28659401
>>28659471
"A-chan" - https://rentry.org/nko46

tags: A-chan, OL, romance, realistic, SFW (for now?)

--

there is a chapter 3, it's fairly long, and a smattering of edits throughout. but most of the groundwork is done and we can start getting sweet with this wonderful office lady.

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:45:11 2022 No.28744801

>>28744138
I want to write smut, anon. In my world, it would be something like
>a gossamer-thin leotard that hugs every one of Marine's curves to perfection. Glossy fabric pulled taut over the curve of her prow with creases over the valley of her generous cleavage connecting one plush breast to the other. It delineates her waist, bares the soft recess of her navel, and dips between her milky thighs leaving little to the imagination. Whenever Marine moves, the material pulls taut here and there, hints of fair skin visible under the chocolate garb.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:47:14 2022 No.28744946 >>28744801 >I want to write smut Anon, that just further proves my point. All the smut readers care about are the sex scenes. Not the descriptions. I mean, have you taken a look at Literotica?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:47:18 2022 No.28744950 >>28743698 If you're not good at describing shit in your own words then dodging having to describe shit is a probably a better answer to your smut writing since then you can concentrate your words on shit you can write better.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:48:04 2022 No.28745016 >>28744946 A better question is: do you think that's good smut?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:49:57 2022 No.28745176 >>28745016 In general, fairly average.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:51:17 2022 No.28745273 >>28745016 NTA but that description is way too 'purple' and detached but that's a personal bias of mine since I prefer more blunt, attached narration that's closer to the scene.

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:54:21 2022 No.28745539
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>>28743237
Yeah kinda, though I think it's closer to the three being like Richard in 2

>>28743264
After everything she's said, I think she's just more dumb than anything. VShojo reminds of all those other Informal YouTuber companies that die or became shells when all the popular ones leave it, and "TALENT FREEDOM" has nothing to do that. So I'm not gonna be convinced that they didn't roll out the red carpet for one of the biggest indies around or that a fucking company using IRC is anything impressive.

I'm a sucker for fat tits, though...

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:55:24 2022 No.28745643 File: 55 KB, 665x120, saru_tldr.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28744801 I hate purple prose. There's no need to write a billion words to say "she's wearing a leotard and has a nice body". t. smutreader

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:55:26 2022 No.28745648

>>28743264
I do, if only because I believe she's still the same fundamental person. But I won't deny her announcement disappointed me in her, but life happens, and people's situations and opinions change. I wish her the best.
Although that debut stream was cringe.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 03:58:33 2022 No.28745930 >>28745273 I can respect that. One of my things is detailed clothing descriptions, hence the length. >>28745643 Brainlet shit.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:00:44 2022 No.28746106 >>28745643 Alright, check this out then >Be you >Having sex with Fubuki >Cum in her >Fall asleep on top of her Is that good?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:10:19 2022 No.28746893 >>28746106 Jesus, anon, this is a blue board.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:15:08 2022 No.28747272 >>28744801 That's commendable goal, but you're wasting it here anon.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:23:38 2022 No.28748023 >>28744801 This is superb, don’t let the others discourage you. We need more fics that focus on quality.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:33:57 2022 No.28748874 >>28748023 agreed, smut is the one place purple prose is... more than acceptable, it's necessary for a quality wank

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:43:08 2022 No.28749594 >>28745643 t. can't picture an apple in his head

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:46:36 2022 No.28749858 >>28749594 Le fils de l'homme

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:47:30 2022 No.28749911

>>28694620
This was really fucking cute. Only real complaint is that the flashbacks were really weirdly placed, like I can almost think they were placed there because you thought up a childhood memory to place there and did so without thinking of the flow. I think is best exemplified by the last flashback which is weirdly in the middle of a sex scene.
Still cute as fuck, and a nice complete story in a one-shot.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:54:37 2022 No.28750420 Why are you guys so fucking horny all the time

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:55:28 2022 No.28750480 >>28750420 Because we have no women.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:55:46 2022 No.28750500 >>28750420 I’m not.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:55:57 2022 No.28750512 >>28750420 Horny brings us together and creates unity. A healthy atmosphere of horny leads to a good-quality thread and lots of camaraderie.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:57:24 2022 No.28750612 File: 43 KB, 1078x650, 1658373252543416.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28750420 I'm not

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 04:57:44 2022 No.28750638 File: 802 KB, 900x1500, MatsuriSweaty.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28750420 Have you seen the women we write about?

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:01:12 2022 No.28750897 File: 182 KB, 975x1400, wonderofu.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28749858 I really liked what Araki did with the idea.

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:06:22 2022 No.28751253 New thread >>28750557

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:10:16 2022 No.28751524 File: 570 KB, 2048x2048, UWAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>28750638

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:11:25 2022 No.28751580

>>28720665
Yeah, that would have been too much I think.

>>28727895
This is too familiar. I can't even direct my fetishes at most chuubas, it's too weird.

>>28743264
I don't care, really, if she's corpo or not, as long as the content's good.

>>28744946
Yeah but this helps make a good sex scene.

>>28745643
That's nowhere near as bad as some stuff, dude. I actually like it.

>>28748874
Exactly!

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:14:02 2022 No.28751776 File: 119 KB, 489x513, FX9wC1tUIAAds3u.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] LUNA RAPE

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:18:26 2022 No.28752046 >>28750420 I'm so fucking lonely I have nothing better to do other than dream about women I'll never meet

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 05:52:59 2022 No.28753922 >>28752046 Fics for this feel?

Anonymous Thu Jul 21 06:06:24 2022 No.28754536
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OH NYO MIO IS BLINDFOLDED HAHA SHE SURE LOOKS EXCITED TO TASTE WHATEVER IS IN FRONT OF HER I WONDER WHAT IT NIT'S MY DICK IT'S MY FUCKING DICK SUCK MY DICK YOU DUMB SEXY WOLF WHORE SWALLOW MY CUM UFAAAAHHHHG

>>	Anonymous Thu Jul 21 06:06:38 2022 No.28754549 >>28753922 I don't imagine most people would want to write about how lonely they feel. But I think there might be some in that archive

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