/vtwbg/ - VTuber Worldbuilding General

[Anonymous No.]

Previous thread: >>27626879

What if your general was not just a general but a nation, devoted to your oshi and their will? Enter this general where the fanbases and generals of /vt/ are reimagined as countries interacting with each other through means peaceful and militant alike!

FIRE BOMBING AND OPIOIDS Edition

Interactive map:
https://vtwbg.github.io/

Introductory blurb for new anons (Test version, subject to change):
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-intro

CURRENT GOAL:
- Maps!
- NO TIMELOOPS
- Chuubanite doc

>Note that the map isn't set in stone.
>Greentexts of your generals' lore in /vt/ land are much appreciated.
>Flags made for the region your oshi rules over are also appreciated.

THREAD REP TRIPCODE
>/∞/: !XcNdwMsONs, !np2UIvxwi. (backup)
>/pcclg/?: !!S9vZSg00/Br
>/meat/: !!J7IsvbPoQE1

CLIMATE & TECTONICS POSTS (AIDS LORE/PLACEMENT):
Ocean Currents
https://rentry.org/rvqz9
Weather Systems
https://rentry.org/nnvbx
Climate Analysis
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-climate
Tectonic Plates and their Movements
https://rentry.org/dmkyc
Geologic Provinces
https://rentry.org/ztaf99

FLAG POSTS
https://rentry.org/ah74h

LORE ARCHIVE
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HM_UK-qNKXQgFH-ixcWsCC3oAgBnFrxCKRPXdKiPMwQ/edit?usp=sharing

[Anonymous No.]

Anchor post for any story/map/lore. Please reply here for archival purposes. Anchored posts in the last thread will be archived within a day.
If you will be using a rentry link, please use
>http://rentry.org/
instead of .co, as the latter is filtered as spam.
Thank you!
Please also report if there's outdated/missing lore in OP!

[Anonymous No.]

Anchor post for issues to be voted on next time.

>Vote Results
https://rentry.org/44do6
https://rentry.org/np9ke
>Bylaws
https://rentry.org/kuygt
>Vote post archive
https://rentry.org/ofx2x

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CURRENT PROMPTS
Feel free to submit your own prompts to inspire others!

>Clothing
What does the average Joe wear daily? Any formal dress impacted by tradition/culture? Is fashion being split by class or regional differences? Climate or other fantastical wackery making certain attire a necessity? Paint us a clearer picture of who you'll see walking through the streets!
>Food
What crops do your people grow for consumption? What about the food you import, and from where? Do you have unique delicacies? What are the common snacks or meals for the working class, or the rich and powerful? Any food reserved for ritual purposes? How about etiquette when eating? Any special practices during mealtime?
>Entertainment
What kinds of entertainment is popular for your people? How important are they seen as part of life? Do different class people have sufficiently different tastes? How much do the chuuba gods play a role in these entertainments?
>Religion
What religious rituals does your nation have to worship its deities? What's the religious structure look like? What's the official stance on other faiths?
>Alcohol and Drink
what do your people drink and what's is it made from? what sort of culture is there around drinking in your split?
>Development
What are your nation's current goals now? What are you trying to aim for in your development? Would said development make your people happy?
>Funeral Rites
How do your people observe the death of one of their own? What kind of ceremonies are held? How are their belongings handled?
>Music
What kind of musical instruments/music does your nation make/use?
>Name
Does your thread's nation have any naming conventions? What are people named, and why? Do names have meaning? Do people have surnames, and how are those derived?
>Politics
How does the balance of power look in your nation? who are the ruling/most powerful class? Who are they competing with?
>Superstition/Folklore
What sort of superstitions/folklore do your nation's people have, as in, are there things that the people believe in or things they think they know to be real that are not real on a meta level? What are omens of good or bad fortune? What mythical monsters lurk in the forests, or in the depths of the sea? Do some foods or materials have to be prepared in a certain way before they are seen as fit to use?
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>Special
We are making a /vtl/ team! Here are the current suggestions:
https://rentry.org/team-vtwbg
Suggest and add to it!

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[Anonymous No.]

>>27654852
https://rentry.org/vtwbg-intro
Anchoring. Archive anon, please add it either into the notice board section or make a new section above Maps, Flags, Resources, etc. Thank you.

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>>27654797
You forgot the new chuubanite anchor.

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>>27655522
Oh right yeah anyone baking after me please also add it in the OP
>>27654852
https://rentry.org/q92vo Anchoring this as well. I guess we should label this as the "new" one for now?

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>>27655846
I don't think they want it to be archived yet, it was specifically decided that it would be finalized and voted on before being archived >>27623956 to avoid causing any more confusion than necessary. An anchor formatted like >>27627421 with that rentry link included to compile all chuubanite discussion should be fine.

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>>27655997
Alright from next thread on I'll try to include the anchor post while baking too.

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>>27655997
I put it in the archive with WIP for easier access and in case someone lost the link

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>>27656302
Well. It'll probably be fine. Chuubanite anons, whenever you come back consider this the chuubanite anchor for this thread.

[Anonymous No.]

Anchor post for the chuubanite rework. PLEASE KEEP ALL DISCUSSION ON THE MECHANICS OF CHUUBANITE TO THIS REPLY CHAIN. Anons who do not wish to see chuubanite debates should hide this post.
Current proposal: https://rentry.org/q92vo (WIP)

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Holy hell, are we going through two threads a day now?

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>>27656848
To be fair, the chuubanite rework eats through posts like nothing else.

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>>27654273
I'll have to take some time and visualize them. I sometimes have to act out the characters IRL to know how they move and think. But that's kinda gay. My question is what's the deadbeats' opinion on Sanalites handling rowdy Risuners so far in the story? We try to take into account other cultures but Sanalite and Risuner health are top priority. I think Enoch handled the disease discussion well. At least according to OGsuner.

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Also barbecuing Risuners would be a waste. Their meat is tough and stringy. What you want to do is cook Risuner meat in a stew. Their meat should make excellent broth that should go well with some leek, carrots, and potatoes.

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Here's last thread's word cloud before I head off to bed.

[Anonymous No.]

where would you guys say the holoimperial language originated? i have a general idea of somewhere on the coast of /hlgg/

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>>27656992
They honestly will try not to interfere in their foreign relations unless the risuners are really shitting the bed and escalating, otherwise they'll look from the sidelines and snicker at their antics. The main reason the Deadbeats are there is because Risu's cheap wood and proximity makes it a very important ally, even only on economic/military grounds, so they want to strengthen this bond. But on a personal level the Deadbeats are a bit annoyed by the risuner's lack of organization and planning. They still like em, but they might roll their eyes once in a while.

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>>27657318
It should be spoken widely among Holo nations even before the transportation event. I guess the one that's widely spoken in /hlgg/ and other Holo nations right now would be the one you are talking about. But it's quite different from the old language that was shared between the Holo Nations before VTE. The old language is still studied but modern Holo Imperial is the lingua franca of the Holo Continent.

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>>27657319
In Mac's mind Risuners are a bunch of horny teenagers. Not to talk down to Risuners. Mac understand there's a lot of things Risuners don't know about us. He plans to use their curiosity as an advantage. The gamble is Risuners learn more through play time than studying. We shouldn't underestimate Risuners intelligence. They are sentient creatures even if their culture is primitive.

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As another note I do want some Sanalites to talk to deadbeats. Notably Caroline will want to talk to Desuvious as they are both equal ranks. The other deadbeats should relax around space Aussies once they figure out shitposting is a joke half the time. Knowing deadbeats they have their fair share of bony puns.

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>>27657606
i only needed to know where to attribute the origin on the document, i don't plan on making a proto-conlang before anything else. but this raises a new question, did it arise from one language? because one widespread language typically does not remain the same for over a thousand years (at least a thousand if we're talking from before VTE), see how latin became italian, french, romania, and spanish just to name a few. if it evolved anything like latin, i would have to make at least a half dozen major languages just to cover the greater powers of the holocontinent

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Apparently Ive been namedropped multiple times in the last thread.
I just got back home from work.
Who the fuck impersonated me?! I will defend my title!

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>>27659081
Unlike Latin, although /hlgg/ shattered into various nations, the Empire proper still survived. The language the various Holo nations speak should be decided by the reps themselves. They can be mainly derived from Holo Imperial (so like irl romance languages) or a language they spoke before the /jp/-/v/ split. The origin of the most popularly spoken Holo Imperial can be originated in the Coastal areas like you said. Since it's kind of trade and diplomatic language used by visitors from all over the continent it is coincidentally the lingua franca of Holos. I'm not as familiar with languages but maybe HoloImperial within /hlgg/ itself has a few variants, not just dialects but fully-fledged languages.

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>>27659545
>maybe HoloImperial within /hlgg/ itself has a few variants, not just dialects but fully-fledged languages.
i'm thinkin' something like dalmatian to romanian, or german and dutch. I had the same idea, and for a long time, before mass media, even french had splits considered different languages, if mutually intelligible.
everything else you said was right, though, and that's exactly what i expected to happen/had happened. and yeah, i wasn't gonna declare holo imperial the holocontinent's one language, just wanted to know if it was a lingua franca or was a derivative of an old one which became multiple (again referencing latin), where it seems to be the latter or something similar, correct?

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>>27659510
Do you like to eat s'mores?

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>>27659510
One of your squirrels was having a blast falseflagging, apparently. He was impersonating me as well. the fucker even saved my pics to be extra convincing.

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>>27654852
>>27654913
Also, finally taking the advice of "just write niggers" and pushing out a small rentry, relating to our favourite old man.

Let me know how I did, it's been *checks calendar* dear Sana, it's been months since I wrote anything of note!

https://rentry.org/TheReturn

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>>27660238
>When posting online nobody knows your a squirrel.
>Risuners discover anonymous shitposting on /nasa/'s network.

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>>27654852
>>27660360
Oh also, I guess this would go into the "Meta" tab, since it's not related to anything specifically. Thanks for your continuous work, Archiveanon!

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>>27660238
I thought there were only 3 of us squirrels!
show yourself fourth one!

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>>27660479
I think it was 2suner or whatever? Not sure though.

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>>27660419
>Risuner asks anonymous online forum if anyone wants to nut inside.
>Shitposters spam pics of squirrel genitals.
>Ironically this makes Risuner horni.

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>>27660516
I am Ri2ner kek. i've been away for the past 8 hours

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>>27660683
Welp, guess it wasn't you then. What's the 3rd tree rat called again?

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>>27660745
Stew. He's going to be made into treerat stew. Is /meat/ fond of stew?

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>>27660880
Now now, let's not get too hasty now. No need to travel to /meat/, there are plenty of meat enjoyers at /nasa/ :)

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>>27660360
Yes.
The time for war is now.

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hihihi

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>>27661151
Oh, you got that named pic as well. Good job.

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>>27661124
So I did good? I tried to really make you as poweful as possible. :D

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>>27661193
soon i will be every poster in this thread adn none of you can stop me!!!!!

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damn
ri2ner lost his throne to an actual shapeshifter

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>>27661347
You know all this charade is gonna do is make me adopt a tripcode, right? I ain't opposed to those.

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>>27661430
Boo!
Don't worry, I don't plan on making this a thing.

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>>27661294
Around what era did this revival occur? I would love to make some lore about how quiet and peaceful little /uuu/ was effected by the call of Waranon

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>>27661494
Eh, it's ok. I was mainly worried one of the squirrels would attempt some serious falseflagging while I was at work or sleeping, resulting in our rep melting into goo of REEE again. One of them did mention some secret plan or something...

>>27661547
Well, the mention of the half fairy (pomerlane) and the foolish queen of 100 nations (alice) would place it sometime into the future, but not that far, as pomerlane is still alive, albeit on his deathbed. Originally I wanted to have a paragraph detailing the battlefield in more detail, making it clear that this was /risu/ that burned, what with all the fights over there lately, but in the end I decided to keep it ambiguous.

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>>27661672
I think OGsuner's the one with the secret plan. I'm not even a squirrel desu.

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>>27661830
I think it was ri2ner actually. But at this time, I honestly don't care, not in the mood to shitpost anymore. You still ain't getting any dick though, squirrels. I gave you plently of reasons for why not.

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bump

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>>27661547
OH also, this isn't the first time WARanon revived like this. Idk, I would say this is his 6th time, maybe? And not all of them were spaced out by a millenia, we were just really peaceful the last 1000 years, all things considered. So really, you can write a piece about any of the previous revivals, since I doubt your forests changed much since then.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZV2FiUub2qI
Time to check if /meat/ can produce psychotropic honey for no particular reasons

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alright, /vrt/ anon is finally back, turns out that sana pic of mine last thread was too spicy and got me 3day ban immeaditly,

but i as i went to the red boards for boredom in the meantime i found some /vt/ outcasts already camping there adn the lovely ladys were very welcoming and took care of me, they even helped me become my true self

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>>27661547
ohh sapling, can you give me some input into my story and how the saplings would deal and react?

https://rentry.org/qf5fh

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>>27668777
Absolute fucking sex. Hey /vrt/ anon, you wanna get dicked by huge space cock?

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>/become/ cultists have started to infiltrate /nasa/
>A strange vial was inserted into the ship's cloning facility
>The surgery robots' codes were found to be tempered with
>/nasa/ starts to reactivate its in-atmosphere aerial vehicles and arm them with less-than-lethal weapons

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>>27669171
>The serum couldn't completely change us however, due to Sana's blessing
>We come out looking like this
I welcome this change.

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>>27669289
cunt sanalite been an elfriend this whole time?

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>>27669314
All I'm saying is, if I wasn't a filthy EOP, flare would definitely be one of my most watched chuubas purely on the design, if not even my oshi. She would have some pretty tough competition for that spot though.

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>>27669087
honestly, forget about the shota thing, sana would make for a great futa

>>27669422
understandable and based

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>>27669502
Here's the funny thing, if you'd seen her rm streams, there is very real possibility she gets off on San, and hell maybe even fantasizes about fucking his ass.

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https://youtu.be/0WfY2mB2gDw
Akira eats wasabi

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>>27669708
God her model is adorable every time I see it.

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>>27661347
WRONG FILE NAME YOU DUMBY

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>>27669665
nah, while sana was my councilmember of choice back in the day, i have never been that into her streams that i would scour that far. i can understand why sanalites would scavenge for more of their oshi tho

makes me glad my oshi stream more than i can keep up with

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>>27661347
Show me your best pregnancy post then.

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>>27669985
Not like there was anything to scour kek, she is a pretty well known artist

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>>27670127
ohh i am fully aware of that, in fact it was when she went total radio silence as sana but happily celebrating as her rm that i dropped her, even with an injury, if you can be fully active on one side, at least some tweets as sana to say whats goign on should be the least that one can expect

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>>27670355
Yea, that was a real test of will. Been on the edge of dropping her multiple times myself, but after each of her breaks I just tune into another welcome back stream, hear her voice and remember why she's my oshi in the first place. She really should get someone to help her with the social media aspect of her job though, I agree on that.

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>>27670533
well since then i have found my true oshi and overall the retro chuuba world wich is where i truly belong i feel. before it was just something i watched as a past time hobby but now i actually got a bit of passion in it.

if it wasn't for that i probably would still just be a lurker in here

and the retro world also offers some chocolate^^

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Racist chumbuds should be called finheads.
That is all for now, nora.

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>>27670718
It's really nice when you find that one chuuba, right? Happy for you, onofriend! Also, please stop it with the choco elfs, I'm too tired to be horny rn

Aight ya cunts, I'll head to bed, don't let the bread die while i'm gone, k?

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>>27671015
Goodnight!

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>>27654852
>Ayakkayolian and Phase Connect Campaign
https://rentry.org/q6u26
Never wrote a war thing ever but since the rep for them decided to declare war on nation without active rep, break tech limits blantly with
"maxime guns", "repeating rifles" and "rifled cannons" because we are strategy gamerz!!!1!, ignored my petition to write this together and according to many does this all the time. It is only fair that their fate gets to be the one that someone else decides for them. They had no navy so I made one up, and no talk about coastal bastions, so i made that up too. They won't be a threat to anyone anymore.

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Good morning you beautiful bastards!

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>>27672052
Good evening!

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>>27672052
GOOD MORNING SENPAI!!!! Can you read what I wrote pls?

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>>27672052
Good morning!!

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>>27672139
G'Evening to you!
>>27672155
Good morning miss Alice.

My thoughts
>Correct analysis of why they deserved it. I remember him trying to justify using Selen and Rosemi, but he did not know that it was in fact my maro that convinced Rosemi to play Age of Empires II for one stream.
>The reputation they have seems to be worse than kronies but is ignored because of where they are. After I and others bonked you, its only fair.
>They didn't play along with you when it came to simulating this, and there was no /vsj+/ rep active for months. As far as I am concerned, it is canon based on the reasons you gave and that they aren't taking this seriously anyways it seems.
>I am not certain that you could really level a city with a fleet during this time but I would handwave it considering you justified it.
>I don't know if you could send a bunch of ships of the line up that river or not but probably so that scene works. Funny that you gave it to vshojo.
>Considering the fact that you can just bomb them from a distance, losses seem accurate.

I'll give you the green light myself and won't bonk you for this.

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>>27672247
Good morning Kindred! How is your writing coming along?

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>>27671999
About time those cunts got what they deserved.

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>>27671999
You did well in imitating pomerlane anon, I did think that was him for a while kek. I won't consider this canon though, I think the only way this works is if warfare outcomes a bilateral agreements. I mean, shit, 30 minutes is barely long enough for the boats to get to each other, nevermind finish the fight haha. Fun piece though.

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>>27672634
how long should i take for the fight?

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>>27671999
>cocky words about "maxime guns", "what can a navy do to us?" and "lol come try"
Sounds just like them kek. If we consider what they do as canon, then this should be too. I guess you did imitate him well, i can see it though i do feel your ownness here too.

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>>27672431
Did you noticed i practically stole your little explosion symbol???? Thanks senpai, you inspired me here and i spent 2 hours on this and reading over your stuff to get it correct.

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>>27672690
Naval battles usually take hours, just because both sides are constantly trying to put their thousands of tons of boat into the right positions and that takes time. I think a victory in three hours would be a pretty quick and decisive engagement.

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>>27672951
ok i will fix.
>>27672808
i agree.

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>>27672469
All done! Wrote it all up last night in a frenzy because I was feeling inspired lmao. I tried to hold myself back before making it too horny but I’ll let you guys be the judge of how well I did there lmao
>>27646546

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>>27672851
Oh yes, I certainly did. Did you just get it off google like i did? You did good, it was a fun piece to read them get their teeth kicked in like that. I'm still in shock that their rep told me "Maxim Guns make sense because of our tech investment" and I only talked him down to using Spencer Carbines,a repeating rifle that uses rimfire cartridges that is over 100 years in the future. I had trouble justifying actual rifles in popular use myself, and that blew my mind that a "milautist" would think that is acceptable.

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I wish I can write half as good as the niji anons

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>>27673196
Fantastic work, you write dialogue and build atmosphere/rooms far better than me. Glad we have you here working with us.

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>>27673233
I did get it off google kek

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>>27673307
I'm sure you write well too, anon.

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>>27673307
Im not good at writing, but reading others works helped me a lot, particular Pomerlane senpai on his war things and Rose senpai in his geological things. It is hard for me as an ESL to write in English well as i almost never use it in my own life. I think in French, so reading how they wrote i was able to translate it better in my smol brain. You can do it!!!!

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>>27673233
>milautist
anyone who calls themselves that or 'hobbyist historians' don't give two craps about anything beyond the metallic cartridge era, it's fine to only care about that but to act like that's should be the default is dumb I kinda do want to see buck and ball but I dunno how that would be balanced

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>>27673196
>promises smut
>no smut
What is this cowardice?

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>>27673324
You flatter me! Thank you so much, I’m more than happy to use what I’ve learned from writing for years on end here with you all. I’m always happy to give writing tips and proofread anything you guys write no matter what it is! Smut or not, Kindred or not.
>>27673516
There’s more to smut than just dick penis in pussy sex orgasm cum balls. It’s about making an erotic scene, and my fic had a group of girls fingering and rubbing another girl. That’s pretty smutty if you ask me. Besides, I didn’t want my very first piece of writing here to be too unhinged… I’ll save that for once I get settled in.

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>>27673470
Nah, my writing's probably borderline unintelligible without spellchecker, and every reread just brings up more plot holes in my plot lol

>>27673485
Yeah, you're right. I probably should read more, especially from this setting, although I admit that not being able to internalise other people's stuff in my writing is a consistent problem of mine, if the feedback I got from /wg/ is of any indication.
I'm also ESL but the other language is much further away from English than French, so that might play a role as well

>>27673770
>[smut]’s about making an erotic scene
based and culturepilled

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>>27673510
Agreed, it pains me to think that there are people who think like this. They did a lot of research on the Roman Theme System but instead of making a cool early modern Roman Army (Forgive me, I refuse to use the word Byz*ntine), lets just use maxim guns and spencers because that's cooler than Napoleonic tactics right? And it wasn't like there wasn't any repeating rifles prior. Look at the Air Rifle the Austrians used in the 1780s. It may have not been perfect but it could accomplish what he wanted. Ugghhh.

>Buck and Ball
Could absolutely work if done correctly. Washington ordered it to be used by the Continental army. The only thing I would suggest is that there should be a shotgun culture already in place as that's why the US did it and not other countries. Can't remember the downside, but there probably are some.

>>27673770
>Writing advice
Sure, I'll be sure to ask next time it comes to a scene involving dialogue and setting, but this was my latest attempt, I am getting better thanks to Comfyanon.
https://rentry.org/dmnvn

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>>27673894
I’ll give it a read after work! I’m off in about an hour and 15 minutes. What kinds of things are you specifically looking to improve on?

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>>27673846
>much further away from English than French
Are you the German? Funny story about me. I am from Québec but I have never been good at english because i just cant think in it.

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>>27674006
Basically, Dialogue and atmosphere, i think at least. My Historical Autist brain is so used to writing massive Historical research projects in College that its hard for my creative writing to develop. Not to mention my own difficulties in showing emotions in characters comes from AS as well and not understanding social cues.

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>>27654852
>>27670011

here is my after report regarding the Onobots visit to the pregnancy cult and what he learned:

https://rentry.org/w2ia5

i really liked seeing someone else take on Onobots, you could have felt free to make him a bit dumber if you wanted^^

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>>27674132 (me)
Like being trained like is a blessing and a curse because I think I write top tier historical works and have an understanding of how to build a world. (Also helps I minored in Cultural Anthropology) But you cannot be creative in your historical writing because any quotes you have are direct quotes and not something you made up.

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>>27674033
One of the Chinese languages, actually. I think it's most noticeable when I don't consciously stop myself from using run-on sentences

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>>27674596
OOOHHH That must be tough...

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>>27674596
Ah so you are that anon from HK I see? Because same

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As for the overall Niji's

i hate to piss on your parade but when the other said that the whoel /clg/ /pcg/ ect stuff is mainly ignored unlike the kroniis it was not meant that their stuff is considered canon

if anything its basicly just bunch of noncanon stuff that has no impact to the actual canon of this world. they do not have guns or any other shit in the real canon.

/vrt/ for example would never allow /tsun/ to be the vassal state to anyone just because they got no rep, we would actually fight for theri freedom should any of that shit ever be considered canon

so while i got no issue if you want your warstory to be noncanon to the actual world and canon to whatever that guy has been writing. I am hardly against you guys pushing a canon one sided war, with a resolution that involves hafl a continent changing border as you see fit.

if you however want to continue to pursue this then consider us in war because just as i will never allow any country to impede upon /tsun/'s freedom i will also not allow you to remove land from them.

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>>27674777
>if you however want to continue to pursue this then consider us in war because just as i will never allow any country to impede upon /tsun/'s freedom i will also not allow you to remove land from them.
Phase claimed them as a protectorate yesterday and brought them into the war. Alice just ended that.
>resolution that involves hafl a continent changing border as you see fit.
Pretty sure the resolution was the freedom of occupied territory, the only land that was taken was a small island in /clg/.

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>>27674863
Nothing phase did yesterday is considered canon either. That was retrobro's point.

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>>27674209
Lmao the badly scribbled tattoo got me good.

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>>27674777
This is what i wrote retrosenpai...:
>Without any economy left, a settlement was reached after 3 years of turning them into dust. We keep Isokaze, they forfeit all conquests and their personal unions. End the protectorate over Tsunderia and any other states and now they must import and sell Opium to their masses from us.
This map is their goals that they posted too... not me

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The war is only canon to the guy for phase and Alice. This doesn't affect anything because one guy wanted to have a power fantasy and got blown up.

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>>27674964
ahh okay, sorry i thought this map was yours with the border changes

but yeah, again, none of that shit is considered canon. that whole phase stuff is the ramblings of one anon to himself

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>>27675053
And that's why I wrote that :)... albeit i would like blowing their cities up to be canon at least...

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>>27675053
Really, he should be writing fanfics instead of world building. At least I only wage war against my own nations XD

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>>27675099
No, any actions of that seperate noncanon world is going to be considered canon to the actual world.
IF the bombing of the cities would be the one thing considered canon you also realize you would have unprovoked bombed cities of a nation that has done nothing and would be the sole aggressor in this right?

you can do what you want in the noncanon

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>>27675181
none* not any

also whats with this "secret weapon" stuff?

what are rocket ships supposed to be?

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>>27674682
yes

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>>27675223
fine....but i still want in in my archive.
>>27675223
secret weapon is chuubanite shells loaded with greek fire. I did research on east asian things and thought having a ship that fired primative rockets like a bomb ship was possible. if that's too much, ill take both out.... i was just having fun.

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https://rentry.org/hidhh
Our favorite clock scribe's journey resumes!

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>>27674209
>you could have felt free to make him a bit dumber
Haha I totally will if we work together again! I went along with the idea of “kinda dense but really eager to learn” when I was writing his dialogue, but next time I’ll certainly up the dumb levels. The comments in your story about “maybe they’re rubbing their pregnancy off on her” + the meat tenderizing one made me laugh kek. Thanks so much for working with me!!!

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>>27675454
>this, is the catalog
KINO!

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>>27674777
Not a Nijirep and neutral here, they are just shitting on that guys delusion if anything. But I must ask you because I have noticed this recently bro Do you have a problem with Nijireps overall? I saw you feeling that they ruined some parts of the lore for you and I just want to know if there is an actual problem so it doesn't come off as you shitting on them all the time if you know what I mean.

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>>27675566
NTA, but I think /vrt/anon has always been pretty reasonable and polite about his feedback to the nijireps. They are all new to the thread so there'll inevitably be some growing pains as they get used to how things function.

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>>27675370
just mark it as noncanon and its fine.

but at this point we tried often enough to get the point across of why overpowered tech just for the sake of being the #1 super nation is frowned upon here and if anything the /clg/-/pcg/ rep came at a good time to demonstrate how people will get treated if all this is to them is playing a strategy game to win.

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i hate being misunderstood so much... feels like a timeloop every day and it makes me feel sad because i think its my fault at this point

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>>27675647
how do you mark it as non-canon?
>>27675566
He is fine.

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>>27675722
just say it's non-canon when you anchor it to the archive

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>>27675722
Just add the post number of the post you're referring to and add a small note at the start, I reckon

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>>27675566
when did i ever say that they ruined part of the lore?

i am neither for or against anyone based on company or stuff if that is what you try to imply. i have watched plenty of niji stuff myself and greatly enjoy Gwelu or BelmontXange shenanigans for example

i find the whoel tribal mindset of the board stupid to begin with since i started watching vtuber at a time when holo and niji would collab frequently with each other and that many of them are RL acomplice like Mio and Kagami

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>>27675647
If anything, them getting BTFO'd should prove that point to them.
>>27675566
I don't see it that was as a Nijirep at all. He is being polite and is just trying to understand or make sure we understand. He is an ESL too like Alice so i cut him slack if something comes off wrong (I generally do this anyway)

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>>27675722
yeah just add to teh anchor that it is noncanon and archive anon knows to write it in the description of the archive, could add to it that its canon to the /clg/-/pcg/ verse so peopel know the context of it

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>>27671999
NON-CANON FROM ME, THE WRITER. ONLY CANON FOR THE PHASE JERK.

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>>27675789
>i find the whoel tribal mindset of the board stupid to begin with
I hate it so much too. I don't watch much HL anymore but I watch Rob a lot because he is a funny guy. I want to see the branches collab so much, especially HoloID 1 and Millie because they are actual best friends.

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>>27675680
its fine, i jsut wanted to make clear you understand that the BS from the other rep is not canon since it seemed you thought its actually canon, since i also do not look at what that other rep even does i saw the map for the first time in your post and thought the border changes were made by you so that is totally a fault on my side.

if it was i would not only emphazise but retro ships would be sailing with you in this war because no one fucks with our friends in /tsun/

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>>27661672
The falseflag is pretty obvious. So I'm not falling for it.

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>>27676059
I worded it wrong... thought i said it should be canon for him and me. I missed words and misunderstood what canon for world is vs. just him or me.

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Good morning, everyone. I see Alice has acquired a taste for blood.
>>27673770
>smut rant
Based. Good luck drilling that into these anons' heads, given the quality of the horny posting I've seen in this thread.
I finally read your story, by the way! Sorry I didn't read it last night as promised, Fuuchan kept streaming so long I went to sleep before he finished. Your scene building is quite good! Your vague descriptions of robes and a tent do make me wonder, did you have any particular ideas in mind for Kindred architecture and fashion? I was going to make the Holy Kingdom's architecture a haphazard mash-up of Sengoku Japan and Vatican City. The outer edges of the kingdom would be in a more Greco-Roman style, influenced by the architecture of the Empire as a whole, but as you approach Akuma Castle things gradually get more Japanese. The last Kindred I consulted about this abandoned me without replying so I never did get an actual Kindred's opinion on it.
>flowers
I was going to make Japanese camellias the Holy Kingdom's national flower, since those are the smaller red/white flowers decorating Vox's haori. Make use of that knowledge how you will for future stories. Coincidentally, while I know you just chose those colors because they're Vox's colors, if we do assume the flowers decorating the tent were camellias, the flower language would be quite fitting. Red for passionate love, white for waiting. I don't believe purple camellias have an agreed upon meaning in hanakotoba, but I've seen it represent devotion in other flower languages. Very much the kind of flower language that would be used amongst a cult patiently waiting for the day their god returns to make them all his concubines.

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Tonight.

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>>27676355
You live!

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>>27676355
At long last... Rosebud comes home, with a bunch of spec biology in tow...

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>>27676355
Hey rosebud nice to see yo... HOLY AUTISM ON A STICK

my knees....

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>>27676355
I brought cookies.

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Another Diary Entry from Emylia, pre-war. Stuck currently with the main saga mentally so I decided to run back to this, and show her talking about becoming a mother
https://rentry.org/wn3z2

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I always a feel a bit embarassed about asking people to read my stuff, but since I'll still be out camping for a week still before posting a new chapter, would one of the new anons more into writing like to take a look at this story?
https://rentry.org/cultural-exchange
/meat/anon helped me a bit a while back, but I never got a lot of constructive criticism.

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>>27676868
Ferdinand? Aight this is the prince a Hololive radical needs to assassinate to get things started.
Very cute anon.

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>>27676868
ohh btw deadbeat, the one asking for a reply for some input was me retroanon

i would need the help of a deadbeat tho since i need a character that is of high enough standing to matter as well as who has lost his parents to some sort of creature that is strong enough to not be easily killed by 3-4 people that he is now out to hunt and seeking revenge for his parents

it is in regards to this story:

https://rentry.org/dqf5wu

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>>27675487
glad it made you laugh btw, yeah onobots are very naive and dumb and foolish + they usually take everything at face value.

well the bots already said they would give a warm welcome if you ever decide to visit so pls feel free

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>>27676868
What kind of feedback are you looking for? My oshi is streaming at the moment but I can give this a read when he's done.

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>>27677124
Oh man how did I miss this one, as I mentioned I've missed about half of the threads in the last few days, this is awesome!
Okay, let's see, I see three possible ways to go about this. First would be that the Deadbeat is a ronin, a blade for hire basically, usually hired as bodyguards, assassin, or hired to challenge someone to a duel and kill them. He'd tend to be more independent and antisocial, but if he's experienced he'd be a fantastic close quarters fighter, as well as be pretty good with a variety of ranged weapons such as muskets, rifles, crossbows, throwing weapons.
The second would be to make him an ex-priest. Going off on quests of vengeance is not a part of their duties, so that's why he probably wouldn't be a part of the faith anymore. But he'd still have his training and experience. Priests are usually specialists with ranged weapons and demolition/explosives, excellent snipers, stuff like that, while the priestesses fight on the frontlines. But his skeleton and muscles would be a bit tougher than a normal Deadbeat because of the higher chuubanite concentrations within (priests spend more time near Mont Mori than most people). His eyes might be a light pink.
The third would be to make him a Black Fleet sailor he'd probably have the most means to help organize operations outside of Moriji, and besides being a top tier sailor would be a dangerous fighter if he's seen any combat. If he's an officer, I think he'd be a lieutenant. A commander or higher would probably have the pull to resolve his vengeance by using the resources of the Black Fleet instead of relying on the help of foreigners.
Also, remember that Deadbeat skeletons are mostly iron by weight! That could help the Onobot relate to them...
Hope this helps, any questions?

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>>27676355
ROSEBUD ANIKI!

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>>27661072
so, is it just me or are the nations that have cannibalism growing? is this perhaps a sign that /meat/ cultists are successfully infiltrating them?

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>>27678066
/who/ has had a long and proud tradition of consuming long pork, even before /meat/heads started raiding the Eastern shores of the Holo continent

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>>27676216
Hopefully I write enough smut here to the point where anons realize you can write a smut fic without like, "actual" sex. Anyways, moving onto the important things...

Re: flowers
Admittedly my knowledge in the language of flowers is limited to Western interpretations, so I'd need to look more into Japanese flowers and Hanakotoba before I really decide, so I left it vague in that story since I didn't have too much time to stop and research. I'm too indecisive; I probably wouldn't have come to a conclusion yesterday anyhow... I do like the idea of using red camellias as the national flower! Yellow and white ones would be great accents as well since they represent longing and waiting respectively. Kuroyuri flowers have a nice look to them, but the interpretation for them seems to be both love and curse, and I don't know how I feel about having curse there to represent the cult... Hm. Much to think about.

On the topic of clothing, I didn't imagine the robes in the story to be normal/daytime clothes since that's a big ritual deserving something more than your normal attire. I was lowkey imagining something sheer and sexy like picrel to really convey the mood since the girl is about to, y'know, get laid for the first time. Nothing overly fancy because I imagine "waste not, want not" is a big theme for the cult, as is with most cults. No need to be overly extravagant because if you have the money to buy lavish clothing, that's money that could have been put to better use by creating or buying offerings for Vox.

Architecture isn't my forte whatsoever; I don't know any styles by name and couldn't distinguish any from one another if you held a gun to my head. I could give it some research though!

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>>27678066
Yes, and you'll join us too...
it's probably just because we have many more active splits here now

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>>27678000
out of the three, the second sounds closest to what i want tho i would have to switch aroudn my ideas a bit since i was expecting a close range fighter liek the first one

overall i wanted it to be a bit younger person who just a while ago lsot his parents to said beast and now is out for revenge while others are liek "no you cannot, there is no way you would survive alone if even your parents could not." and he be liek "i do not care, i will have my revenge and restore theri honor!" while beign teary eyed

and yeah i did make sure to udnerstand deadbeats as best as i can, the guy in the ontro at the end is from the retro reich and part of the All-Bones Clan who are a merchant clan of ours that primaly deal with trades regarding /morig/ thus he is physicly a deadbeat for all purposes.

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Pomerlane Chapter XXXII: It's Dragoon Season.
https://rentry.org/kmdix

/meat/ would like this chapter.

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>>27674132
Just got home a little bit ago and gave it a read. It's funny, I'm the opposite of you-- I have no problem with creative writing, but I struggle with academic writing because I'm so used to writing all "flowery" for my fics that I end up using wayyyy more words than necessary in academic essays. Anywho, I don't have much context since I haven't read the chapters prior to this so apologies if any of my tips are things you already covered in previous chapters I haven't read yet. One thing I thought of was if you could provide examples-- for instance:

>Pomerlane explained to her that he really did feel betrayed by everyone around him
>It was then that Emylia revealed that this whole time she had, indeed, been trying her hardest to pull strings behind the scenes for his cause
It could definitely enrich the story if you provided examples when discussing a character's feelings. When Pomerlane mentions feeling betrayed, why is that? Did something happen to him that would lead him to feeling suspicious of other people? Could you reference an event that happened in a previous chapter and use it as a catalyst? Feelings generally don't just come out of nowhere, so I think it would definitely enrich both the character and his dynamic with Emylia if you sort of ground his betrayal in something. Same goes for Emylia, if you maybe offer a snippet of one of her letters to the King and Magnus, that could help emphasize what she's done to help Pomerlane.

Another general tip is to paragraph break whenever someone new speaks. Not so much a dialogue tip as it is just a formatting one, of course. This should be split into two paragraphs since two different people are talking: >The courier knocks on the door and opens it quickly, immediately regretted his decision. "M-My M-My Apologies..." and shuts the door. Pomerlane shouts at him "Never mind us, you clearly have important news and I need to hear it. Is Quedlinburg here?"

One of my personal favorite tips is reading dialogue out loud to yourself! It can help you realize that maybe something flows a little awkwardly or just doesn't sound... right. Think about how you speak, about how friends and family speak, or how anyone around you speaks-- casual speech and written speech often sound different because most people just don't talk the way they write and vice versa (case in point, academic essays) so if you read a character's dialogue aloud to yourself to determine how natural they sound, that can help enrich it. Personally I thought this dialogue was phrased in a kinda clunky way when I read it out loud to myself: >"How confident are you in them on the field?"

Really great work otherwise! I'm always really happy to see how other people write and pick up little intricacies from them.

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>>27678669
>It could definitely enrich the story if you provided examples when discussing a character's feelings. When Pomerlane mentions feeling betrayed, why is that? Did something happen to him that would lead him to feeling suspicious of other people? Could you reference an event that happened in a previous chapter and use it as a catalyst? Feelings generally don't just come out of nowhere, so I think it would definitely enrich both the character and his dynamic with Emylia if you sort of ground his betrayal in something. Same goes for Emylia, if you maybe offer a snippet of one of her letters to the King and Magnus, that could help emphasize what she's done to help Pomerlane
Read chapters 25 to 27, its in there and comfy anon helped me with that.

Thank you so much for the help. I will try to start doing that and revise things in the future, I appreciate your time greatly.

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>>27678742
Sounds great!! I'll go back and read more. I figured there would be some things I bring up that were already addressed in prior chapters since I was reading this one was a standalone piece. You're more than welcome, anytime!

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>>27678742 (me)
Going to literally copy and paste posts like that in a docs file so I do not forget with ADD

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>Comfydant is a lit autist who gives detailed writing advice
>Kindred is a lit autist who gives detailed writing advice
They are...?

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>>27678832 (me)
this one as a standalone*

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>>27678832
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRbjyPu0Z3QmezZuL8jbtqRhzHz78ceQH1qlGhKfiG_V0q4R7FAN_maEIPzib4gG6D8MFQl-2R_K05y/pub
This will help you find things. I have wrote a lot...

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>>27678865
Nijisanji literally has this weird dynamic already with Alice and PAnon. Now Rosebud needs another biology autist.

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>>27678881
nta but 49... You have wrote 49 things already....

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>>27678970
>49
50 actually, I wrote Alice's Navy introduction for her.

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>>27678922
>alice and panon
Those two are more like siblings than similar writers.

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When your at the national botanical garden and you take pics for world building autism.
Wtf is wrong with me?

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>>27679055
Did you not see Alice's war story further up this thread?

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>>27679055
She's more like my apprentice.
>>27679075
This, she did good.

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Still trying to fathom that this man probably has wrote as much lore as a 1/4 of the total archive in less than a month, including his detailed maps and drawings.

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>>27677406
Ah, my brain works a bit uncommonly, so I often wonder if the more complicated scenes can be visualized easily by the reader or it's a bit muddled. Also, any general writing tips or narrative suggestions you might have.

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>>27679157
>Less than a month
Checked and I started on the 16th of last month. I have written up to 4 a day but usually 2 or 3 until recently where its been one big one or two smaller ones.

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>>27679070
Yes and...?

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One of my favourite things about this thread is you have lit autists like Kindred and Comfyanon, who are polar opposites to Pomerlane Anon as a example, and both are excellent in what they do. This is like advanced writing general imo.

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>>27679108
Well, she is like an apprentice to you but she is also like your little sister. its cute watching you interact sometimes ngl.

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>>27678161
keep in mind /meat/ was /sbg/ before /who/ existed.

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>>27678644
Very tantalising... thanks for the treat.
I kind of imagine /meat/ fighting to share some similarities with that (although obviously we take more than just a cup of blood). It makes me kind of want to write something like that, even though usually I don't write fighting that much (ironically, I guess?)

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>>27678474
Got, the priests take on a ranged role, but that's more because the priestesses are supernaturally suited to close quarters, the priests are top tier frontline fighters as well, and a katana would be a very common sidearm of theirs. I could imagine a young priest getting into this situation and quitting his priesthood to go on his hunt, might add a nice extra bit of character conflict, since though it's not punished, leaving the faith once you're in is generally looked down upon.
All bones clan? I love it! Kek

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>>27679418
I think meat probably thinks of it differently as these are basically hunters trying to operate in a fashion that they are used to for two reasons:
1. Scare the shit out of their enemies.
2. The drinking of the blood is something that I felt was a ritualistic act. Like IRL, Hunters after their first kill ritualistically smear it on their faces. https://www.dontheoutdoorsguy.com/features/featured-stories/51-the-blooding-rite-why-do-we-do-it.html

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>>27679403
If strickly talking about modern-day /meat/, we started cannibal posting before its formation. So that would most likely put us earlier than the first /meat/ raider who stepped foot on the beaches of /risu/.

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>Rosenknospe
After remembering that Rosebuta wants to kill of these non-plant rosebuds, I looked back at size of the Boars and realized that these versions of Rosebuds might be quite the match for Rosebutas. Panon, can you tell me more about these Rosebuds as a culture and are they all hunters?

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>>27679597
Well, at least in my headcanon, it's kind of both yes and no. In terms of the reason of cannibalism (apart from just enjoying the taste), the priesthood has the whole shebang of the cycle of life, and thus they would prefer enemies to be captured intact and later sacrificed for the maximum effect (not to mention all the uses a body has when harvested efficiently). The raiders that would do most of the fighting, though, probably have a more similar mentality to the hunters. That said, both classes are aware that disemboweling the enemies and propping up their carcasses do scare the shit out of most of their living brethren, so something like what happened to the Dragoons could definitely be done by /meat/heads, although I imagine it'll be more deliberate, like having the corpses be propped up in some way. Particularly sadistic ones might even not go for the kill. The priesthood (usually) rolls with it due to them recognising the value of psychological warfare, and that most fights probably will end up with enemies unfit for the more ritualistic purposes (like if they're wounded in a way that they won't make the trip back to /meat/land alive either way).

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>>27679838
Good idea, I was thinking about writing a piece on them alone because I am fascinated with hunters and mountain men. Regarding a fight, I'm not going to get into that because Rosebro REALLY wants to destroy them.

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>>27679603
i see this as a technicality at best. /sbg/ is closer to /meat/ than /rushia/ is to /mike/ or whatever it's called because the only change was the name, and we still call ourselves /sbg/ every now and then so not even that really applies. if you guys were being targeted as much as us, you might have another name for yourselves for when you had stealth threads, but for the most part you'd see yourselves as all being in the same group, no matter what it's called.
plus, didn't you say much of the cannibalistic side of /who/ came from /sbg/ some time ago? by all accounts, we are brethren and should take pride in our shared culture, even if you branched out and went through a bit of a rebellious phase.

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>>27679538
ohh yeah that sounds good, gonna be a fun adventuring party

yeah the all-bones clan worships are smaller chuuba in the /vrt/ pantheon that is advocating that dying isn't all too bad and everyone should at least try it once

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>>27680304
I was demonstrating that /who/'s cannibalistic tendency was quite old and not at all due to /meat/'s recent push for infiltrating the various countries of Vitubia. If I gave the impression of competing for "who started eating human flesh earlier" I apologize for giving a wrong impression. Please have this leg I harvested from a captured schizo as a gift.

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>>27680523
It's fine, we always like others to feel the joy we had in our... peculiar diet, even if it's something they discover on their own. In fact, part of me thinks that /meat/ probably won't mind it too much if their push results in independent cannibal cults that have nothing to do with /meat/'s plot - if nothing else, we can always compare recipe.
Also, thanks for the gift!

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>>27680304
>didn't you say much of the cannibalistic side of /who/ came from /sbg/ some time ago?
No one said that I think, but it'd be incorrect.

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>>27680637
Didn't you give risuners some of that mystery meat without them knowing where it came from?

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>>27679267
I was only saying most people don't look at shit in museums and think "oh hey I can use this for that thread on 4chan"

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>>27678865
Just like our oshis!
>>27678240
I sincerely wish you luck with your smut endeavors.

I'm pretty into flower language, if you have an idea of what kind of meanings you'd like your cult's flowers to convey I can offer suggestions! Research into hanakotoba might be a bit difficult, I've noticed English sources often muddle a flower's meaning in hanakotoba with other flower languages, so if you do look into it you'll want to check multiple sources. As far as red camellias for the national flower go, I thought they would be especially fitting since when presented to a warrior they can mean "a noble death."

Regarding the kuroyuri, I think this would actually be incredibly fitting for your cult. The origin of the "curse" meaning for the flower is a story about about a samurai and his beloved concubine, Sayuri. The samurai loved Sayuri more than he loved any of his other mistresses, and one day, she became pregnant with his child. The rest of the household became jealous of her, and conspired against her while the samurai was away from home. When he returned, they had fabricated evidence presenting her as unfaithful, and claimed the child she was carrying was not his. In anger, the samurai slaughtered Sayuri's entire family despite her proclaiming her innocence, before finally killing her as well. With her dying breath, she again insisted on her innocence, and cursed the samurai -- by the time the black lilies bloomed, his entire clan would fall to ruin. In the context of your cult, the flower could serve as a warning never to grow spiteful towards one another lest it lead to destruction.
>clothing
Ah, yes, that makes sense. On the subject of the girl getting laid, there was mention of her mate. Does the cult's family structure work any differently from the Holy Kingdom's as a whole? I don't imagine there's any particular conflict, but I'm trying to get a better picture of how you've imagined the societal aspect of the cult.
>architecture
No need to concern yourself with it if it isn't of particular interest to you, I just wanted your thoughts if you had any. If you don't particularly care either way, that's fine too.

I hope I'm not rambling too much, feel free to tell me to just shut up if my essayposting ever gets out of hand.

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>>27668949
I've been looking through the archive to try and picture what an Onobot is exactly but can't find the right link. If it what I think it is though, in this story it would be a AI Intelligence Gathering robot that is poorly disguised as a tree and would thusly be immediately spotted out by Saplings due to their innate sense of what is truly a part of the natural landscape. At first, Saplings would probably approach it cautiously curious like those videos of animals interacting with spy robots and then once their curiosity with touching it or jostling it they'll probably leave it alone especially if it makes no reaction. Shamans would probably look upon it very distastefully and avoid it completely. Post-human Saplings (Particularly Treants or Nymphs) would be the ones to most likely damage or destroy Onobot outright as they would see it as a corrupted tree and they would fell it like they would any other sick tree, which would make for quite the datapoint to be attacked by a motile tree

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>>27680864
Risuner...But I'm sure people do go "oh hey I can use this for that novel I'm writing" a lot
Just because you are posting the result on the Funny Chadian scuba diving forum doesn't mean it's that strange.

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>>27680819
Yes, and it's good that they seem to like it, even if they don't have enough of a craving to ask the /meat/heads how to make it. The 5head part is that the mystery meat isn't actually human flesh, but probably from one of the endemic species, which is why the Risuners can't recognise it. If they do crave it in "the right way", though, the /meat/heads would teach them how to make long pork cuisines.

[Anonymous No.]

You wanted a good thread today. Sorry but I'm here. My trip out of town got cancelled. Anyway I'll see what I can do for writing today.

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>>27680974
Onobots are basicly just Robot people. Dumb ones at that.

This one particularly had all his inanrds just put into a tree so he can pretend to be a sapling.

he will literaly walk up to saplings like:
"Hello fellow Saplings, how do you do? it is me, your fellow Sapling, remember? hey about this very obvious thign that we all of course know, would you mind explaining it to me again?"

and yes, everyone and their blind grandmother would notice immeaditly that it is not actually a tree or sapling but just some very poor attempt at disguise.

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>>27681555
checked and sorry

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>>27681677
/nasa/'s rep ruins everything as usual.

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>>27680986
Huh. Well then fucking kek. For those wondering btw it will be about 2-3 days before I'm back home to continue stories. As far as I'm aware the saplings had no interest in writing a response story to visiting risuners but I think hoomans did. Did you guys do it to the last one I forget?

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>>27675454
why's no one talking about Kronies researching teleportation?

[Anonymous No.]

Oh and I don't know if I posted this or not but because it's extremely funny the place I'm staying at is across the street from a strip club LETS FUCKING GO

[Anonymous No.]

>>27681824
Risuner no!

[Anonymous No.]

>>27681824
better find some hookers, better have sex, better post pictures

[Anonymous No.]

>>27679963
they'd probably torture the ones who couldn't make it back, given that suffering is one of the steps of the cycle. some of the bodies might be recognizable to people who knew them, maybe, but they certainly wouldn't just be a few ounces of blood lighter
>>27680647
something like this conversation was had some time before, i think around the time /who/ started working on their society. someone noted the connection and they said something like that. i mentioned the cults because of the sanalite, but i figured the conversation transitioned to whether or not "modern day /meat/" could be considered separate enough from /sbg/ to say /who/ has no connection to /meat/ and was cannibalistic before /meat/ existed, which is why i responded the way i did.

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>>27681747
The latest one is about Jayawan's trip to the library right? I don't recall there being any new stories written regarding the tri-fleet from /who/'s perspective but you can always check the new story archive to see what you missed. https://rentry.org/wgfvd As for the sapling rep they just came back from a trip, maybe they will want to write one after you post a few more logs.

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>>27681849
Risuner likes to fuck who would have thought that.

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>>27681904
Ah yes. His goal is to research and learn hooman then go to your leader and demand sex to be legal everywhere. Jayawan was specially chosen for hoomans because of his radical ambition.

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>>27681943
when I was 4 years old, I like to sneak on my mom when she's asleep and rub my wiener on her feet
yeah
even as a toddler I was messed up

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>>27681864
Back in the day /meat/ lore was going on about how they retook the beliefs of a forgotten past or something, I haven't really read /meat/ lore again, so I'll keep the thing of cannibalistic tendencies developing separately in our countries.

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>>27682067
Ok man, you really need to learn how to shut the fuck up, jesus christ.

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>>27682070
That lore is regarding the old Akira posts on /jp/
I found out that before /vt/ was made, Akira was posted on /jp/ like a boogieman. anons fear her name
So the fact that /sbg/-/meat/ loves Akira while our ancestors fear her it's like a revival

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>>27682067
boy...

[Anonymous No.]

>>27682067
what the fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>27682067
Please stop hornyposting in the worldbuilding thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27682067

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>>27682067
dis nigga was born horny holy fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>27656539
so, what have we been working on thus far regarding the chuubanite stuff. i have been trying to make my cylinder analogy better and otherwise looking for more stuff to add to my rentry. is anyone else doing anything?

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>>27682257
>>27682206
we have two kronies?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27682206
>>27682257
Wait we have 2 kronies here? Quick, someone apprehend them both! One of them could be a kronie from /inf/!

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>>27682359
The inspiration left me and ive spent the entire day just sitting and trying to get myself to do something.

I think risuner's confession helped, the shock pulled me out of the pit a bit

what does the cylinder analogy look like right now? Consider drawing a picture in paint to go along with it, visual guide usually help with understanding maths

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>>27654852
The Rosenknospe
https://rentry.org/6fxfao

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>>27682070
>>27682160
i thought the idea was that /sbg/'s culture mixed with natives to become /meat/ sometime after the transition from /jp/ to /vt/. because there was a time when /sbg/ was still alive in /vt/, but it later became /meat/ when someone unfamiliar with /sbg/ made a thread that /sbg/ infiltrated that got way more posters, and lasted much longer, so /sbg/ started using that name because it was more effective, not because anything changed in the thread.

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>>27682359
I've been working on compiling stuff for the actual proposal, especially because archive anon adding our unorganized ramblings to the archive feels vaguely threatening it's just a lot to sort through. I might have something presentable ready later tonight, but it depends on when my oshi stops streaming. I like you all just fine, but my cute wife is being on the telly is priority.

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>>27682067
This isn't the fucking risuner btw. Even for me that's fucked up.

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>>27682582
Why are you writing on rosemi when you are the rep for /rose/ i feel like you just do this to piss rosebud off.

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>>27682286
>>27682335
Just wanna say I was not the hornyposter this time. Some people are even more fucked than me
T. Risuner

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>>27682865
The two of them already discussed this. Pomerlane anon's writing about rosebuds in /nijien/ not the ones in /rose/.

[Anonymous No.]

Holy fucking slow. I'll just wait a few hours before I post again. Internet is shit here for some reason

[Anonymous No.]

>>27682865
1. This is for EN General mainly
2. There has always been Pomudachi who have strong affinity towards Rosemi and much as Pomu
3. In LazuLight General, we have had Rosebuds ask if Rosemi can join our general. There is also a belief amongst some that Rosemi is part of LazuLight (not literally)
4. A Pomudachi resurrected Rose. Do you know who that was? It was me because I am one of those Pomudachis i mentioned earlier

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>>27682567
so i want the shrinking of the radius to be gradual, and to slowly approach 0. if you imagined a graph, it would be a curved negative correlation between the number of units of vagueness (broadness now, since that is more accurate) and the radius. the size of the radius should not affect the mass of the cylinder, so changing the radius will change the height accordingly. the mass of the cylinder represents the total amount of fuel. the size of the radius can be thought of a pan that boils water on a stove. the larger the radius, the more surface area the pan has to boil the water, the more water starts to boil and turn into steam. the time it takes for the water immediately touching the surface to turn to steam is one unit of time, and the height is how much water there is to be turned into steam. height is related to how present a concept is. the waxing and waning of the moon is a good example. the more present the concept is, the larger the height of the cylinder at that given moment.

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>>27682906
>>27683108
That might be true but I have watched you interact with him and push him aside like you did with dragoons early on and now with this as if this should be the ideal rosebud. Im not an anti, i just feel there is a little malice and control freakishness with you.

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>>27681661
That sounds pretty funny. And I think Saplings would respond the same as my previous statement but as far as dialogue goes, Saplings would probably answer the questions truthfully because they wouldn't know any better, Shamans would be silent/avoidant. Post-humans Saplings speak in ancient and unknown tongue.

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>>27683381
t. imported nijischizo
NTA but really, rosebud and pomeranon literally discussed this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27683381
If you say you are not an Anti, i wont try you as one. I am a bit of a control freak but I do not have any malice towards someone i respect a lot.

[Anonymous No.]

This is my problem with this thread. You cannot criticism someone who things they did wrong without being labeled an anti or a schizo. Not the only one who notices this either

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>>27683687
I've criticized Pomerlaneanon multiple times without being a called a schizo. If you participated in the thread more actively you'd know Rosebud himself asked about those nijiEN rosebuds and Pomerlaneanon is collaborating with him. Also I don't really see how these can be ideal rosebuds when they're not even plants, baka.

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>>27683381
I don't disagree with you that Pomerlane anon can be a bit of a control freak. His intentions don't seem malicious, however, and in this specific instance he and Rose-senpai already discussed this at great length, and it was agreed that he could do with /nijien/ rosebuds what he'd like. The rosebutas won't like it, but that's an in-universe conflict that does not, and should not, result in actual meta hostilities.

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>>27683687
Ive stated my case. If you choose not to believe me nor my intentions, thats up to you.

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>>27683345
I would suggest to follow anon's suggestion to make a drawing, and also lay out what the steam and water correspond to in the analogy.

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>>27682582
Magnificent work. I can tell you have been a lot of thought into this complexity and it makes sense given the context you gave below. Its hard to write about this sort of thing because it takes an understanding of how cultures develop, at least i think.

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>>27683826
i know i'm butting in where i might not be wanted, but my philosophy with schizos, anti's, and trolls in general is that if they have good criticism they're benefiting me, and if they don't then their ideas can't stand on their merits, so i might as well back the idea into a corner and leave them with the ruins, but with that said, i enjoy fruitless argumentation over nonsense, whereas the average person obviously doesn't and sees it as a waste of time. he is surrounded by so many schizos that it makes sense why he would be quicker to give up on a conversation, but i would like to see him work with the ideas presented to him more, especially since he can sometimes dismiss what i see as genuine criticism on the grounds of it not being worth his time. at the very least, i think /vtwbg/ would benefit more from a culture like mine, but i'm biased so of course i would think that.

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>>27684180
>might as well back the idea into a corner and leave them with the ruins,
I mean... That's petty and a waste of everyone's time, so I tend not to do that. Don't bite the bait and whatnot.

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>>27684180
I can agree with the philosophy that if shitposters have an actual point then it can be beneficial to heed their advice, but biting bait on purpose... Don't do that. Ultimately, you have to remember /vtwbg/ is something people do for fun. Most people don't find arguing fun. It's mentally exhausting and can drain a person's entire will to work on the project. Even if the argument has nothing to do with them personally, scrolling through a thread on fire is something most people find exhausting. I do also think he has sometimes dismissed legitimate criticism, but the thing about criticism is that even if you listen to and understand it, it doesn't mean you're obligated to agree or take it to heart. In the end, so long as Pomerlane anon doesn't get to the point where he is actively harming the project by pushing aside other people's work (as in the case with the misunderstanding about the Dragoons' dragons) I don't think it's worth getting too worked up over.

I don't want this to be taken as me simply defending him due to us both being Nijis. I was one of the people who thought he was out of line in the case with the Dragoons, but in this instance, both parties involved are in agreement. It's not an outsider's place to decide what is and isn't okay for Rosebuds when both the anons writing for them have already talked it over.

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>>27684180
Well, i think i showed >>27683108
that it couldnt stand on its own. There is no point in trying to convince someone who thinks you have malice after you laid out why you do not. Thats a worthless argument. Criticism is fine but I dont debate perceived emotions I “have” based on someone’s elses perception of me that they have concluded. I can be an asshole and a control freak. I am not perfect at all. But arguing emotions is not worth time.

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>>27684180
>Idea cant stand on its own merits.
Well I did that>>27683108 i tried to explain things in a reasonable way. But truth be told, arguing with someone because of the way they personally feel about me is completely useless. Its up to the other person to believe me or not when i make my case. I can be an asshole control freak, I am certainly not perfect. I sometimes misread things because i am tired or under stress irl. But I will always in my right mind take well founded criticism seriously.

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>>27684300
as i said, i enjoy arguments. it's an opportunity to challenge my logic, even, and especially if it's disingenuous. if there's no easy way for an autistic person like me to tell the difference between a stupid question and a dishonest question, and i enjoy answering them regardless, i might as well give them the benefit of the doubt and support my position. i don't expect anyone to have a similar mindset, i just think that it would be nice having a few other people who enjoy that kind of thing.
>>27684446
no worries, pomerlane can do what he wants, i was just giving my own personal philosophy on the matter. ultimately, unless it involved or effects other people's lore, pomerlane has complete control over his stories, i just don't want people to criticize /vtwbg/ because he makes a few decisions someone doesn't like, and the rest of the thread defends his right to make those decisions.

[Anonymous No.]

Ignore my practical double post. Internet decided to tell me I didnt post the first one for like 5 minutes

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>>27683498
he basicly just wants to see how to make friends with saplings so he can bring that info back and they can actually send diplomats over

right now the onobots fear that saplings hate them sicne they are not nature, yes i know its stupid but they convinced themselves so now they have to be reconvinced that saplings actually don't even know about them and got nothign against them.

he is just there wanting to make friends basicly

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>>27684448
that's fair, i consider the subjective to be one of those corners you can back people into before leaving them with nothing. it's just that i want to make sure there aren't any loose ends when i leave, so if their subjective response has anything they could use to build a more objective seeming shell around, i like to crush it while it's still in it's conception. i don't see it as petty because it's exhilarating for me, but i am a random retard who spends way too much time on meaningless bullshit, so you don't have to take my advice on anything if you don't want to.

[Anonymous No.]

He may be a jerk, arrogant and a control freak but he is also one of the sweetest anons too <3! He help me out a lot and he does it for others too, so while all things may be true, I love him for who he is!!!!

[Anonymous No.]

>>27684974
Fair, I am a retard who spends too much time on my own shit too. I don't mind debating, i just don't find it exciting like you because with most people it doesn't change anything. I'd rather have good criticism on what I write than schizo reason about feelings, and I am happy to give criticism on what others write too.
>>27685083
I'm happy you feel that way about me Alice, I do try to help others out because I want to see everyone succeed really.

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>>27684117
CRAP. Sorry for missing this.Thanks! I would hope I understood cultures and how they develop considered i minored in it. Glad you like it.

[Anonymous No.]

Blows my mind Alice wrote that war piece. How do you actually learn to write from reading someone elses work? Thats advanced autism.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27685487
It's 4chan. Everyone is an autist.

[Anonymous No.]

Mfw world building general becomes philosophy general.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27685701
First time? This can be also:
>War Autism General
>Trade General
>Horny General
>Science General
>Magic General
>Menhera General

[Anonymous No.]

How is WAR anon good at war when he has never actual fought in one?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686025
>he doesnt know

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686025
he isn't good at war, but he really likes it.

[Anonymous No.]

So......uh, how do I catch up on all the lore?
Do I need to go back in the previous threads and read them all?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686531
Google doc in the OP

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686590
Man.....that's alot of reading.....

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686669
I have 50 entries alone in my doc file in the docs. Good luck

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>>27686669
you dont have to read it all, I havent, but if you want to get into this i recommend you check your home thread's loire if there is any

most of the reps are eager to answer any questions in the thread so you can always just ask if you have questions

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>>27682582
Rosenknospe have a lot in common with the Sunwalkers, that’s kind of neat. Except Sunwalkers are close range hunters, while Rosenknospes seem to favor long range. Strange seeing /NijiEN/ Rosebuds portrayed as such manly men, though.

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>>27686025
>

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>>27686807
These are what we like to call “OldPomuBuds” you should be well aware of them.,

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>>27687084
I don’t mean this in an offensive way, but whatever “OldPomuBud” means just sort of sounds like a word vomit of a name. But if that’s the case, how are actual /NijiEN/ Rosebuds portrayed? I’d imagine there are a lot more of those than “OldPomuBuds”.

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>>27687223
Depends. Some in general are pussies, others are manly mfs. The latter fall into What I made. I dont know how to make the wimps from all of our fanbases in our general except probably as slaves or something. The strongest survive NijiEN general

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>>27687360 (me)
I made up the word vomit, but it basically refers to the Rosebuds in general that are t schizos

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687360
Eh, yeah true. Shame though, would’ve been nice to see some less jacked and more normal type people in /NijiEN/.
>>27687405
Little confused, do you mean OldPomuBuds are schizos? Or non-OldPomuBuds are schizos?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687360
Even if the societies as a whole are tough it's not like every single citizen has to be a tough warrior type. Do your nations not have civilians?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687489
They are not schizos. They are basically a mix of oldbuds and pomudachi.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687536
Of course, not everyone needs to be strong. My point is that NijiEN is a hell hole.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686669
if you tell us what you are looking for specificly we can help you if you want.

also jus tinterested in reading or are you also interested in participating for a certain thread?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687536
as someone who has been there, its HLGG without meidos.

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>>27687644
>>27687710
Right, but you're talking about how you don't know how to represent the "wimps" in your general. Would they not just be civilians, with your society having a radical difference between the tough warriors who are constantly at war and the sheltered civilians who are sheltered inside the city walls?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687784
They are, dont get this picture from what I wrote that everyone is strong. Far from it. Im not even sure about the slave thing, that probably represents the schizo wastes more. Im just spitballing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27686669
and i'm about to add six pages of shit to it!
https://files.catbox.moe/pdvjhf.pdf
>>27654852
is this the right anchor for languages?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687974
Wooo, you go conlang anon!

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687974
yo wb conlang anon

[Anonymous No.]

i mean in all fairness, most of our stories and lore ect focus on the more "interesting" people of the world and not jsut some random civilians

not that these don't also exist. i shall never forget you mister hooman fisherman

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688131
Same is true IRL. Only certain kinds of autists actually care about your everyman

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688253
You guys aren’t that kind of autist?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688365
nta, but I am

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688365
Sadly not. History helps me escape from life via its stories. It’s respectable but not my style

[Anonymous No.]

I think we're going to leave the buggy behind and continue to /nasa/ on foot. Unless that's a bad idea because of how fast Risuners run on all fours. I like to imagine them running like squirrels. Then again running on all fours takes energy. And its going to get fairly cool beyond the /uuu/ border.

[Anonymous No.]

Tbf, living back in this time on the frontier would make you more hardy. NijiEN sort of is like that.

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>>27688538
True, but aren’t you kind of falsifying some of the fanbases because of it? At the end of the day, the nation should be a representation of the fanbase(s) that live in it. /NijiEN/‘s nation doesn’t give me that vibe. The original anarchic yet begrudgingly cooperative version that it was initially made more sense to me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27687656
Just want to know everything

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688745
I mean, it still is like that. Nothing has changed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688745
I dont see how PAnon is falsifying anything with what he wrote. Him just mentioning a possibility isnt canon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688131
I should do a story about the fisherman and him meeting one of those silly robots, into the list that goes.

[Anonymous No.]

I am back gentlemen.

[Anonymous No.]

What is wrong about NijiEN?????? Am i missing something?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689130
Think someone unironically confused themselves…

[Anonymous No.]

>>27676355
ROSE SEXPAI

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689098
Since Risuners have a tail can they run on their hands and feet?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688745
Literally nothing changed bro. What is the issue? Sorry but I am out of the loop here and after rereading this 10 times still dont get the issue

[Anonymous No.]

>>27681802
The idea of teleportation has been tossed around and discussed in the thread before, with the conclusion being that the /voms/ desert serves as a nexus of sorts which acts as the default location you'll end up at if you're not careful. Lorewise, this is because of the blessing given by their magnet goddess when she fell. The kronie ship incident is actually something that's been in the archive for a while https://rentry.org/xmc88 which is what is being referenced in this story.
>>27656539
Anchoring to the chuubanite reworks as well since this will have to be handled in some way.

[Anonymous No.]

Since ID and KR no longer exist in Nijisanji, how does that impact the world

[Anonymous No.]

>>27656539 anchoring for hiding possibility

>>27681802
>>27689337
Research into the mechanics is fine
actually achieving useful teleportation is not

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689217
They mostly use all fours for tree climbing. They just run normally.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689394
Considering both get talked about in EN general and their own threads, probably have some migrants..

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689410
Here I was thinking squirrels run like squirrels. Also your opinion on this? >>27688527

[Anonymous No.]

>criticize pomerlaneanon
>everyone shits on me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689394
Did anything happen to their threads? I don't really keep up with them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689402
I always liked the /voms/ teleportation gag desu. Is there any reason to omit it, especially from a nation that has so little established lore and no current rep, or is this just the arbitrary line in the sand that's being drawn?

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689505
Theyve been merged into larger ID and KR threads

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689565
Personally, sounds like a Chuubanite thing so I cant tell you and NTA

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689565
as a one time miraculous event or as am uncontrollable force of nature (like is the case with voms, sort of), it is maybe fine. The problem arises when a person or nation or a faction becomes capable of affordable and controlled (as in, they can choose when to leave, when to arrive, and from where to leave and where to arrive) teleportation

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689475
Calling them squirrels seems to be misleading because they are in fact humans just that they have furry ears and a tail. In every other aspect they are human. Also yeah if there is not enough room they you guys could take them or just leave it there it's up to you. Risuners don't mind running.

I wonder if hooman got my answer to when they asked about risuner relationships and how they work.

As for /uuu/ any update from you along the way or nah?

[Anonymous No.]

When we made the deal risuner… how long till city is done????

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689805
>When
Assuming this is /2434/ it will probably take some time desu. Building an entire city is no east feat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689881
..sure but was asking how long in real world it takes.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689728
True, controllable teleportation would get out of hand very quickly. Though I would like there to still be something in that vein as a nod to /voms/ if possible and so that things that were once allowed don't get destroyed in the reform.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27688844
>>27688987
>>27689332
Well you see the truth is
I’m retarded.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27690037
just like me frfr

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689767
I have them nut crushing teeth though. I figure they would have some beast features like claws to dig into tree bark in their fingers and toes. Though the claws would serve very little in combat outside of climbing your opponent.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27690037
Nah, you good. Im a fucking idiot too because I made it confusing by not thinking about average people and immediately thinking slavery.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27689728
i honestly believe this is, besides a fun gag, a good countermeasure upfront to simply have teleportation not be a thing as a whole for anyone.

[Anonymous No.]

>>27690024
iIam personally a fan of the idea of using that /voms/ lore as one of the ways to make portals and teleportation impossible: 99% of the time you end up with a one way trip into the middle of a desert.

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>>27689985
Time moves at the speed of plot, so you could write about the finished city now if you wanted. Or you could go the /nasa/ route and stay close to realtime speeds and write about the city being built up. Just note what year it would be in the story so people know where it fits on the timeline. Maybe this deal actually happened a bit in the past and the city is done in the present? Up to you and the risuner.

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>>27690142
Or you end up in /meat/s arena, schizolands, or in someones bedroom

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>>27690184

id like it done now so lets go with past since no rep for us until me

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>>27690187
or parts of you end up at those locations. All the metal and your clothes in the desert, your head and torso materializes inside a /meat7 arena, your left leg and one of your eyeballs appears inside some kronie's bedroom, your wrists and dick materialize inside the NASFAQ Stock Exchange, etc etc

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>>27689985
it takes how logn you want it to take, the world moves at the speed of plot, if you anyone want to do something with the city while it is beign build so be it but if there is no "workers building a new opportunity for themselves" kind of story but rather do something that involves a finished city then it can be kind of considered done. usually with such a thing people tend to wait a few days so everyone gets an opportunity to react and do something with it, wich kind of is the symbolic passing of time, but its not like stories cannot be in the "past" like the whoel pomerlane saga or my origin story for the trade alliance.

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>>27690311
This. The world is kind of floating history anyway, so even if the city isn't done in 1120s Vitubia there's nothing stopping you from writing about the finished city in 1130 VTE.

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>>27690381
think ill have it done 20 years in past

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>>27690381
however, it would be nice if you mentioned when your story happens and when the city is built if others want to reference the city in their stories

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>>27690417
This actually brings up an important question. When did /inf/ first contact /risu/ and get them to open their borders to the world? Has it been 20 years for them yet?

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>>27690485
i would like it around the time of others but after inf if that makes sense.

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>>27690485
no one has done a story timelime yet

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>>27684089
so, instead of calling it a cylinder, think of it as a container for fuel that you put on a stove of infinite size, there are kettles, pans, and things in between. a pan with sides that go up to the height of a kettle is called a pot, and it can contain more fuel than either a pan, or a kettle of the same radius and height, respectively. the radius is the surface area of the container that touches the stove, and thus the area where heat is transferred from the stove to the container, and finally to the fuel. how much fuel can the container contain? it's not just how tall it is, because a sufficiently large pan could contain more fuel than the average kettle. if we had x ounces of fuel, and we decided to represent the size of pans, pots, and kettles that would be at max capacity with exactly that amount of fuel, we would notice that the height would decrease at an exponential rate as the radius increased, and vice versa, and that the larger the radius, the more surface area for the fuel to come into contact with the stove on. this means the fuel burns faster the larger the radius is. as we reach absurdity in scale, we'll notice that the largest possible radius that contains the fuel is a flat disk that is only as wide as the fuel is spread out, so there is a limit to how large the radius can be, whereas the largest possible height that still contains the fuel would approach infinity as the radius gets closer and closer to 0, never fully reaching 0 because then there would be nowhere to contain the fuel. in a similar way as the square-cube law, the closer the radius gets to 0, the faster the height approaches infinity.
the fuel represents the energy from chuubanite of any given affinity. the surface area represents how fast the energy can be converted into magic power (steam) and is affected by how broad the chuubanite's concept is. the radius decays at an exponential rate in relation to broadness. the height represents how long it would take for chuubanite of that affinity to run out of energy and is affected by how present the concept is in the universe at any given time. this analogy exists to determine the strength, and longevity of the ability of chuubanite of any given affinity while in use. chuubanite with a highly specified concept that is highly present in the universe would have a pot (large radius, large height) shaped container, and would be able to burn a large amount of fuel over a long period of time. a highly broad concept that is highly present would have a kettle (small radius, large height) shaped container, and would be able to burn a small amount of fuel over a long period of time. a specific concept that is not very present would have a pot (large radius, small height) shaped container, and would be able to burn a large amount of fuel over a short period of time. a broad concept that is not very present would have a cup (small radius, small height) shaped container, and would be able to burn a small amount of fuel over a short period of time.
there are a few variables that have yet to be defined, some that are unique to every concept, and therefore must be done for every new type of chuubanite. 1) the value of a single unit of each variable is left undefined. ideally, we will decide on a specific number for each variable that will then become axioms that will be used whenever they are necessary going forward. 2) every chuubanite ability will require a different amount of energy to have a different degree of an effect, this may be determined by balancing as decided by the thread. 3) every chuubanite ability will last for a different amount of time, this can be mitigated in-universe by explanations on how it's ability can be used in a more energy-efficient manner. 4) every concept will have a different degree of broadness, this will be determined by how concisely a concept is described, or "how many parent concepts are required for the existence of said concept". 5) every concept will have a different degree of presence, this will be determined by how expansively the concept can be applied, or "how many child concepts require the existence of said concept".
i feel pretty good about this explanation, but i have no concrete idea as to how to make this a single, unified equation with dynamic, and responsive variables that can help us determine how best to represent each chuubanite concept and ability. mathanon, if you don't mind, this is where i would like you to come in. hopefully you can understand all of this well enough. my drawing sucks, so the image may be deceptive in some areas, but just remember that the written section takes precedence over anything you might see in the visualization.

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>>27690510
Well, if your risuner, tell me how early we can set up. I think it makes sense after inf but around same time as everyone else

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My post writing reps need to improve when I am talking about something on my phone. My goodness, that timeloop was on me.

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>>27690629
not a risuner

So, you would be setting up before the tri-fleet and risuner explorationb arcs then?

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>>27690676
Same time as that… or a little after depends on what makes sense to you. Before maybe too but dont want to mess it for you

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>>27690629
the trade alliance certainly set up a bit more recent after risuners themselves started openign up to the world and /inf/ already was set up there and the road was done

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Due to stort arcs being delayed /nasa/ has adopted speed of plot.

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>>27690767
For context, the nasfaqg company ive written stories about got there at the beginning of the tri-fleet saga, but I'd imagine that the serene republic has had contact with risuners ever since the kronies contacted them, since nasfaqg has contact with kronies, and the option of transporting goods across /risu/ was discussed for one of the trade deals

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>>27671999
>Phase and allies all blown up, all lands returned
Phasebros…. How are we supposed to conquer the world without any cities? I thought we were strategy chads… cough… how could a girl beat us… its over

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>>27690776
>>27690849
Given my lore has us as big trade power, should we be like nasfaq in time???

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>>27690924
if the historical friendship proposal goes through, the two nations may have heard of /risu/ around the same time

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>>27690977
Ok.. sounds good considering we do share common interests with drugs, pirates and trade

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>>27690924
i mean the trade only really started with the trade alliacne comign together there, before that it was more like hauling some goods across /risu/ for /inf/ to avoid the longer travel, wich with your position is not really a thing?

so you probably would start building the city shortly after you hear us starting our construction there? wich would mean the city is a bit behind since we didn't construct full on citys over there

i dunno this is how it sounds the most logical to me, considering that with how we set it up the trade alliance was part of advising /risu/ in the negotiations

but if you got problems with that we can change it too i think

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>>27690523
this is just thermodynamics with added quantum physics

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>>27691133
Well… maybe we imported a lot of laborers refugees from our ID to get it done faster.

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>>27690523
Mathanon here, this actually clears up a few of the questions I had about your original analogy, so thanks. It's looking like I'll be a bit busier than expected, so I may not be able to get back to you with more detail on this until the weekend. Here's a couple initial thoughts I had while reading this. The mass of the vitubium sample being used would presumably put a limit on the height that the concept's presence would normally give. I imagine that the vitubium is normally only active for relatively short periods so for our purposes we can most likely treat variables like presence and broadness as constants in our equations. There are other possible models we could look at such as the flow of water through a hose or the current in a wire with the magic quanta giving rise to an electromagnetic field of sorts. Though the pot analogy would probably work just as well for deciding the output of chuubanite effects.
Disclaimer: not a physicist
>>27691148
always has been

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>>27691207
Not him but yeah, that does make sense. You could finish it faster thanks to that and proximity

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>>27691207
i mean sure, if it matters that much to you. for me it does not change the relationship we had so far.

for me it does not really change much, might need to double check if i need to rewrite something for my origin story for the trade alliance but it would be minor changes if that at all.

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>>27691352
double check, what year did you finish?

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Feel like I just saw paragraphsanon roast someone in the catalog.

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>>27691520
where

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>>27691533
Was it a Sana bait thread?

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100 years in the future

>Risuners have crashed the gem market
>Gemtree production is so efficient that now all gem powers can be used in everyday life
>Grape agate blasters are the primary weapon for the military and the signature weapon of /risu/
>Cannons fire prismatic bombs from diamonds that were originally imported from /morig/ but have since been replicated via gemtree
>Technology is still not much of a thing as gem magic replaces any need for it
>New gem powers are still being discovered with the recent introduction of topaz being used for electricity.
>Rose stones are used everywhere in all gardens for growth and light instead of campfires.
>Original rosebutas are honored for their kindness during the first expeditions and for rose stones being a key in risuner life.
>A bunch of other shit I won't even bother listing because phoneposting and new bread should be here soon

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>>27691352 (me)
i am sorry, let me rephrase that, reading it again this might come off as unnecessary passive aggressive

what i wanted to convey is that, if we go with /inf/ has setup first, then came trade alliance after that and then shortly after /2434/ and alliance advised /risu/ in the negotiations for that city then nothing in the lore it changes nothing as it had been established so far no amtter if the city is finished first or not

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>>27691600
>meanwhile the rest of the nations are setting up space colonies

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>>27691600
Youre forgetting the part where Risuners are all Opium addicts and you wake up

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>>27691638
No!! I didnt see anything wrong, i just want to know what year it would be started in.

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ill bake

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>>27691689
i actually cannot name an exact year, the origin story of the trade alliance is not finished yet and i cannot see any years dating the construction of /inf/'s stuff atm so a risuner might need to confirm an exact date for stuff.

a fun fact i just read right now however:
There was a plan to try and move an ironclad to Demeter to further shore up defense of its ports. However this was scrapped after the ironcald started to take on water while on open ocean and nearly sank, forcing it to return to ∞.

so there are not even ironclads in demeter wich was a big talking point a few days ago so much for that, seems /inf/ actually balanced them a bit by them not being able to cross the ocean^^

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>>27691261
this analogy exists only to determine the strength, and longevity of the -ability of chuubanite- of any given affinity -while in use-. so the energy of the chuubanite only effects how much fuel there is. correct me if i'm wrong, but i thought vitubium the ore converts into a different element when it's supply of magic quanta decays while in use like unstable molecules decay into different substances at the rate decided by their half-life until they become inert, whereas the magic quanta itself decays into a different affinity passively like waves harmonizing with their surroundings. i'll admit i understood the nuclear interpretation of chuubanite a little more than the quantum one, but i'm still trying to figure it out. if you can find a different analogy that serves the same function and is easier to explain, i'd be fine with it. ty and hope to hear from you again soon.

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>>27691643
Yeah 1850 tech and space colonies....bruh

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>>27692065
its after the Global Alliance takes down the /nasa/ heretics and uses theri tech to travel to teh stars

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>Tags chuubanite discussion posts

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>>27691955
Ok! I will just assume city is finished and let risuner decide

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>>27692100
Good point. Although risuners would keep a sanalite for breeding purposes. We would love to have bigger cock risuners.

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>>27691955
I guess their ironclads are coastal casemate ones then. Shit, if I knew that I would have told Alice to not worry because any big ship can BTFO them with 60 pounders.

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>>27692136
Let's say it can be done once I get home from DC trip in 2-3 days until then it's under construction.

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>>27692136
i mean if your city is done before the trade alliance and we have been going strong there already for a while than it has been done a while ago too^^

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>>27692173
big cocked risunsers are a crime against mother nature and should be exterminated on sight

The risuner population will remain subject to the tiny PP eugenics program that assures all risuners will be small and cute. Their presence as stress relievers on exploratory vessels is of paramount importance, and their cuteness factor cannot be jeopardized

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>>27692194
in all fairness, no one knew this fact it seems, must have been something that either was done just in the rentry and never talked about here or kind of got swept under other stuff.

if anythign tho, this should hopefully be some relief to you guys so you don't need to feel that you gotta come up with countermeasures over countermeasures to defeat a foe that really cannot come and attack you.

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FRESH BREAD:
>>27692283

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Yeah no. The station will just explode if we're overwhelmed by an invasion. Cunt Sanalite shitposts aside we haven't done anything to harm Risuners yet. Except blue ball them.

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>>27690523
i read this, but I think im going to need to digest it a bit to properly understand it. I think I get the general idea of it though.

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>>27692021
That makes sense to me. I'll brainstorm a bit over the next couple days and see what I can come up with.