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[Anonymous No.]

Pizza Time Edition

Previous Fat: >>27311361

Literature Link(s): https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQs75WOnqh9vkZp4UuDgoNxwnMYaBAQSmDicUxgw9zioeuGZCE5oRVX4-zlB0aIF8MJf0men21IN7N-/pub

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>>27466085
This isn't necessarily a recommendation you do the same, but all of my narratives are first and foremost made to get people off. Beyond the exposition (which gets wordy on occasion), all further plot development directly or at least tangentially relates to the fetish, so I will never take a step back and add a purely comedy or purely drama scene without at minimum sprinkling paragraphs about flab and eating throughout. Ideally I won't even have to do that and the comedy/drama is directly a result of flab or eating.

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>>27466085
All I really care about is enough of the character's personality. Like I just wanna feel like this is how they'd react to gaining weight and how it'd affect their life.

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>>27466591
>Koyori slurping on noodles
https://youtu.be/KiNvpODBHmg

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>>27466867
Good approach honestly, I get instantly turned off when I see someone writing them out of their character. Sometimes you need to flanderize a bit though, unless you want to write a book.

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>>27466867
i still want one of mori where she constantly shrugs it off before she becomes a behemoth

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hey, the first of the lost ones has returned, welcome back architecs

may you fill your big fat spot on the board as you should