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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>21436482

>> No.21540883
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.21540927
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.21541006

Hey OP, talk to me, say something cool

>> No.21541012
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Story recap! There... were two stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Building Block Doll: Tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff:>>21438778

I could have named this Ram Ranch: Tags: Female POV Lone Star Colt MMF Wesley K Dance:>>21478032

>> No.21541157
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Sharing your extremely nerdy hobby with a chuuba. I'm talking like the absolute most extreme autistic pastime like building model trains or H.E.M.A. or something.:>>21443878

The horrifying eldritch conclusion to this:>>21447239

Korone visiting Fukushima as part of her fascination with morbidity and getting attacked by rabid, starving dogs. Emphasis on her screams as one of her legs has chunks taken out of it:>>21447869

A fic about this historical vtuber event.>>21452304

Being stuck on an island with a chuuba eventually giving in to both of your sexual desires:>>21462456

How about filming sex with Suityan?:>>21466754

Kiara as a flirty teacher who often hits on her students:>>21470847

Based on a dream I had the other night, drunk public sex with Mori:>>21478485

A comedy fic about Towa being forced to release an anti smoking PSA:>>21494160

Smut about Towa blowing smoke on your cock:>>21494234

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so this faggot is just going to cycle snipe this thread with all these western cumdumps now?
this board has gotten nothing but worse for the past few months

>> No.21543770

>>21543189
It’s funny how you haven’t realised that the more you complain about EN the more threads are going to be EN.

>> No.21544207

it's funny how you have severe mental illness

>> No.21544687
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>>21540883
Holofantasy Chapter Six, Part 4 ~ Bully and the Butterfly

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR6L_dTIt3_xe51uDT7G7b0rx-weujO_WTERcYURWFEHgchIv0yHcJjhhrmhvlYzZQ9nt_0GODxapPF/pub

Due to the dice rolls, be warned that there's a fair bit of NSFW involving Mori and major character death.

>> No.21545225

>>21544687
>Marine dies
Holy shit.

>> No.21545237

>>21544687
>kicked in the groin
>3 DMG
Yeah nah. Anon should be doubled over with his health halved.

>> No.21545283
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*writes more EN NTR*

>> No.21545417 [DELETED] 

>>21541006
I love nigger cock and I unironically get off to the thought of thousands of kilometers of pure nigger cocks entering my oshi's holes every hour of the day
EN love

>> No.21545442

>>21545283
Are you really?

>> No.21545554

>>21545442
You think I'm joking?

>> No.21545741

>>21545417
Why are EN fans like this?

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>>21545417
based

>> No.21545902

>>21545554
I'm of the position that spite makes terrible fuel for creating good fiction since the spite kind of clouds the needed self critique that lets you write good... but then again you have the 'body of work' known as every NTR plot imaginable so it's not like it's going to be difficult to make up a plot, put in a slot in you can write reasonably well, then write the smut.

>> No.21545915

>>21544687
AA, were you high when you wrote this? The fuck am I reading? Why is Anon acting like some drugged up sex addict, lusting after some woman who just slaughtered two of his friends?

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>>21544687
I went from sincere horror that my docs had been broken into into a fucking huge sense of washing relief. Fucking Hell dude. Yeah, sure. I'm glad I didn't release Pt. 4 last night then.
>>21545915
Read the dice sheet.

>> No.21546228

>>21546073
Well now I feel retarded.

>> No.21546563
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WE need MORE soda SEX fics

>> No.21546622

>>21546228
'Tis the season.

>> No.21546711

>>21544687
Now this is what I call quality shitposting.

>> No.21546844

>>21546563
I do agree with this - Sora is unbelievably hot and her kind, relaxed demeanor only assists in highlighting the fact that she would be a fantastic lay. Thoughtful, explorative, and considerate of her partner whilst also maintaining a healthy focus on her own pleasure.

That being said, I don't watch her, and whilst I could take a rough stab at characterizing her, I certainly wouldn't be able to create an accurate representation.

>> No.21546948

>>21545283
>>21545554
Please tell me you're the writer that wrote 'Stolen Dreams'

>> No.21547107

>>21546844
Yeah. I agree, a proper Sora Sex fic absolutely needs someone who has a good grasp on her character. Since you'd be threading the line between having her being completely plain and normal, and her being way too OOC.

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>>21546844
Why not take a crack at it anyways? Even if her character doesn't quite land in the end, it'll be a learning experience.
Besides, it's not like people here don't ever play fast and loose with characterization.

>> No.21547415

>>21547290
Mostly because if I was going to start another project, you'd somehow have to convince my libido to think about girls other than Suisei and Fubuki.

>> No.21547485

>>21547415
>you'd somehow have to convince my libido to think about girls other than Suisei and Fubuki.
Well shit, I'm not a miracle worker.

>> No.21547494

>>21546844
Honestly I just write Sora as this bitch who has no time for low lifes and would only ever use your presence as a way to relieve her stress with. Which is exactly how my last story with her went. But I did have her behaving seiso at first I guess

>> No.21547590

>>21544687
>that spoiler
Well you fucker now I'm scared to open the link.

>> No.21547644

>>21546073
Fungus...

>> No.21548338

>>21544687
Honestly this is a really good fan chapter and I hate that I didn't also come up with the idea to write an april fool's fanchapter for a series I like here since I'm still stalled out writing that anniversary fic that's... about a week late at this point.

>> No.21548367

>>21540927
(you) are a virgin who decides to enter a brothel in the spur of the moment, first you try nenechi, but she's so hyper you don't have sex, turns out none of her curstomers have fucked her, they just enjoy being silly with her

Another day, you try a hag but you're too nervous, she comforts you

finally, you go for subaru, little did you know, it was her first time as well.

From there on out, the story can go whatever direction you want.

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>>21544687
Oh you fucker. I was about to launch into writing a massive paragraph about how shit this was and why the story went down this path, but yeah, ok. I had my suspicions about halfway through but you fucking got me. Nice job, that's a lot of effort for a shitpost. I hate April Fools'.

>> No.21548415

>>21548338
better time than the fubuki christmas fic at least

>> No.21548534
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>>21544687
This was an absolute rollercoaster from start to finish, an exceptional end to the longest HF arc so far.
While the NSFW stuff isn't my cup of tea, your incorporation of the Lamy transformation was an interesting surprise. Shame it never went all the way.
While I liked the story generally, the character of Anon felt a little different to usual, though given the circumstances, it's not too far off.
For as exceptional as the writing was, you did leave a couple loose ends story-wise, that I hope you can close off in future chapters.
Lastly, I'm so glad that you killed off that whore, Marine. It was probably my favourite part of the chapter, and it was a really nice twist of the dice that improved the story in it's entirety.

>> No.21548553

>>21546073
>broke in
AA... Your opsec...

>> No.21548788

>>21548534
A-Anon... I can't tell if you're being serious.

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>>21548553
It's bad enough that fucking 17 people apparently saw an incredibly early draft of a post combat sequence with Calliope due to them trawling my goddamn Pastebin. It wouldn't surprise me if someone is trying to get in just to see what I'm working on at best or blackmail me for photos of my cat at worst.

>> No.21549311

>>21547415
If you were going to take a stab at it, you can take 10 minutes to look at Sora's official 4koma, "Tokino Sora Records." It runs on for a good amount and it gives a good rundown on her personality.

>> No.21549576

>>21548788
This is what happens when you don't read dice sheets

>> No.21550589

>>21549576
It's what happens when you don't let Jesus into your heart. You get trashy EN fics. Go to church this Sunday.

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Motivation is overrated. Don't bother trying anything, ever. Fuck you.

>> No.21552486

>>21552192
words you've been living by for a half-year now

>> No.21552610

>>21552192
Thanks, Peckers. I'll be sure to sleep all day tomorrow, and all day the next, and so on into eternity. As you said, I'll never achieve anything, nor is there any purpose to trying.

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>>21544687
You got me for a bit, but after a point I had the distinct feeling that there was no way AA was this freaky.

>> No.21552896

>>21552192
Giving Pekora Alter mindbreaking sex till she turns back into normal Pekora!

>> No.21552953

>>21552192
Oh shit it's Shadow Pekora!

>> No.21553043

>>21552192
way ahead of you

>> No.21553336

>>21543189
YWNBJ.

>> No.21553402

>>21553336
japanese site

>> No.21553439

>>21552192
<img class="xae" data-xae width="32" height="32" src="https://s.4cdn.org/image/emotes/e54792d7_KEKW.png">

>> No.21553518

>>21552953
Fuck!! She's hot!?

>> No.21555574

>Almost p.10 after 30m
Nyoom

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haglove bump!

>> No.21556118

>>21552953
What would Shadow Pekora even say to normal Pekora?
I.e. in a persona style try to get Pekora to reject her shadow.

>> No.21556438

>>21556118
Normal Pekora tries to be mostly sfw and seiso since she's an idol and knows there are kids in her audience.
Shadow Pekora fully embraces her rabbit side and wants to indulge in all of the sexual pleasures of which the normal Pekora denies herself.

>> No.21556638

>>21556118
I found you faker!

>> No.21557726

>>21556438
>Shadow Pekora grappling Pekora down
>Molesting her breasts and rabbit cunny
>Whispering to her about the pleasures she's missing out on.
>All of those she could easily get if she gives in.
>If she stops being a princess and idol for a while and becomes rabbit in heat.
>Which is when (You) come in
>See Two Pekora, One molesting the other
What do you do?

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>>21557726
Dark route: you and Shadow Pekora rape-correct her normal self into becoming a degenerate slut addicted to sex, and she becomes your personal plaything.
Light route: after the obligatory boss battle, Pekora accepts her shadow and becomes a romance option. If you pursue it, she marries you after retiring from the idol life and you breed her bunny cunny until she's knocked up with your kids.

>> No.21560297

>>21557726
i call the cops

>> No.21561324

>>21553402
If you want a jp site so bad, then why don't you go to 2ch ?

>> No.21561879

>>21561324
You mean 5ch?

>> No.21562047

>>21553402
It's an anime website, not a japanese site.
>muh hiroshima nagasaki
I acknowledge not the rule of the usurper.

>> No.21562417

>>21561879
Yeah, that one. Sorry, I'm a bit of a retard <span class="xae" data-xae="clown">🤡</span>

>> No.21563079
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Writefags I need some lore explaining how a phoenix turn old. Did she lose her phoenix powers ?

>> No.21563236

>>21563079
Pheonix get old and die, then are reborn they aren't eternally youthful

>> No.21564276
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>>21563079
Yeah, she'll just die of old age then get resurrected all young again

<span class="xae" data-xae="baw">😭</span>

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I'm terrified of any fics or prompts posted for the rest of the day

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>>21566204
God, I want to fuck Coco's fat ass.

>> No.21567101

>>21566342
I feel like her ridiculous tail would get in the way terribly.

>> No.21567197

>>21567101
Yeah, when trying to pull out. You wouldn't be dealing with the average leg lock.

>> No.21567326

>>21552192
based honestly

>> No.21567561

>>21567197
>break free
>coco slams her tail onto you, causing you to reinsert your dick onto her and cum inside.

>> No.21569383

>>21567561
I'm okay with this.

>> No.21569648

>>21545283
t.american

>> No.21571105

>>21552192
<img class="xae" data-xae width="32" height="32" src="https://s.4cdn.org/image/emotes/e54792d7_KEKW.png"><img class="xae" data-xae width="32" height="32" src="https://s.4cdn.org/image/emotes/e54792d7_KEKW.png"><img class="xae" data-xae width="32" height="32" src="https://s.4cdn.org/image/emotes/e54792d7_KEKW.png">

>> No.21571121

>>21546948
that story NEEDS a fucking sequel

>> No.21571227

>>21544207
>he doesn't expect mental illness on a Rwandan cave painting forum
Where do you think we are ?

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>>21540883
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQuZ33gmM6aR9CLCJ7sBZhUdGh3j6zh4zumH_L9l6m4k0UYYvzmSlARXStYgKYJjBhFMX3xGqSniepF/pub

Nonsense Speaker
Tags: (you), Flare, Noel, Lamy, Reine, dark, sex abuse, physical abuse, emotional abuse, neglect, age

I wanted to make something in response to some people wanting a Noel sex abuse fic. This is going to be a very weird one, probably one of the weirdest things I've ever written as you'll see. If it's a bit to odd and out of left field or if it seems a bit to hammy and overly emotional, let me know and I'll rework the entire thing. I'm totally alright with it if you think its too strange, so feel free to not pull punches.

>> No.21572381

>>21560297
Based

>> No.21572897

I was on such a roll and now I'm fucking stuck. Fuck this

>> No.21572962

>>21572897
What's got you stuck?

>> No.21575044

>>21571105
>3 emotes at once

NANI!?!

>> No.21575253

>>21572292
Alright, I gotta ask because it's come up a few times now in stuff you've written, and feel free not to answer if it's too personal or whatever, but

Are you hermaphrodite?

>> No.21575346

>>21575044
>he doesn't know

>> No.21575786

>>21572292
this definitly has the potential to be a really powerful abuse fic, but since it's just one short chapter, i don't really have a whole lot to say other than "that hurt" and "more please".

>> No.21576934

>>21572292
>Noel sex abuse
*unzips cock*
The time has come. This better not be an April 1st joke.

>> No.21577037

>>21576934
>he doesn't know

>> No.21577336

>>21572292
Certainly a funky subject you got here but I like what you've got so far and I hope to see more. Like the other anon said, it's only the first chapter so there isn't too much to say about it other than I like it.

>> No.21577515

>>21577037
JUST

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>>21575253
It is a distinct possibility. I will say that I am (thank god) not a tranny.

>>21577336
>>21575786
Glad to hear it isn't to strange. The reason I made it just a chapter is because I wasn't sure people would go for such an out there concept. I'll keep going on it then.

>>21576934
Never. I find that shit so annoying. So many youtubers are doing that right now and it makes me want to blow my fucking head off.

>> No.21578412

>>21578072
Alright, I gotta ask because it's come up a few times now in stuff you've written, and feel free not to answer if it's too personal or whatever, but

Are you esl?

captcha:0k420

>> No.21578631

>>21578412
Is my grammar or spelling bad enough to make you think that? No, I'm a natural English speaker and am partially proficient at speaking Bahasa Indonesian. My indo is far worse than my English.

Normally I just don't pay as much attention as I should to the fine points of grammar and spelling kek.

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>>21578631
>bahasa indonesian

>> No.21579556

>>21579124
I'm weirdly apt to it. I tried to learn both Swedish and French and for the life of me I just couldn't get my brain to absorb it.

Meanwhile with Indonesian I've gotten to partial proficiency in just over six months. It's taken a lot of commitment on my part but the effort is showing for sure. Maybe one day I'll write a story in my second language. Unfortunately I just don't have the vocab that I enjoy with English.

>> No.21580239

>>21579556
Damn disregard the bantz then that's impressive

>> No.21582004

>page 9 after 30 minutes
/vt/ is truly inhospitable.

>> No.21582372

>>21582004
And to think this is one of the more tamer April Fools we've had on this site

>> No.21582848

>>21582004
Sorry, I was gone. I'll autisticly monitor the thread for another...I dunno, 2 hours before I need a nap.

>> No.21583006

>>21582372
This thread wouldn't have survived the candy contest <img class="xae" data-xae width="37" height="32" src="https://s.4cdn.org/image/emotes/0ee48fb4_longcat.png">

>> No.21583942

Are there any chuuba fics not from /here/ that you can recommend?

>> No.21584241

>>21583006
God this whole site was unusable all day. I kind of miss it.

>> No.21584390

>>21583006
We'd be drowned in a torrent of cum.

>> No.21587080

>>21572292
THANK YOU ANON

>> No.21590816

>>21541157
>How about filming sex with Suityan?
Would she be into it and try and do her best or would she be embarrassed about it?

>> No.21592605

>>21583942
There's a writer from hentai foundry which characterized the chuubas so damn well that I haven't seen anyone from /here/ do better yet, and is one of the main reasons I decided to visit this place. But it's futa, so imma not post it

>> No.21592876

>>21592605
>hentai foundry
I forgot that fucking site existed.

>> No.21594125

>>21592605
Well don't be coy give a name at least.

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>>21540927
Let's go on a rape-field date with Mel!!!

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>>21590816
She'd do her best but that would mean she would treat it more like a modeling thing and keep trying to get the right poses and autistically look at the camera and demand a reshoot when she's not happy with it

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>>21594125
The beginning is pretty cringy with the Rushia stuff so I haven't read it and just skip it, but afterwards I think Marine and Coco are on point

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/MatoKuroshira/45137/Hololive-Cross-Gen-Sleepover-Collab/118394/Chapter-1/Konpeko-its-your-express-delivery-dick-sign-here-peko

This is a two parter than I believe is good but nothing particularly amazing. It's yuri Coco x Kanatan

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/MatoKuroshira/45390/A-Life-beyond-Hololive/119050/Chapter-1/Angelic-Compassion-with-added-passion

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/MatoKuroshira/45390/A-Life-beyond-Hololive/120008/Chapter-2/Spa-Session-gone-wrong

>> No.21595475

>>21595299
There's also a 12 part absolute fuckfest of many Holos on AO3, some chapters being futa, others not. I think it's called Horny Hololive Smut, and personally, some of its chapters are my favorite fics from outside of /here/

>> No.21595839

>>21540927
Some Groundhog's day stuff where a chuuba of your choice has died. Saddened, you go to bed early only to find yourself a waking up one week in the past, chuuba still alive. This happens every time they die. So it's up to you to change fate, save the chuuba and break out of the loop. Succeed or go insane trying.

>> No.21596383

>>21595839
This but it's about saving your Oshi from a career ending yab.

>> No.21597549

>>21595839
This but it’s Stein’s Gate and she keeps dying over and over before your eyes and there’s nothing you can do to save her

>> No.21597646

>>21594137
Slow the hell down google it's just a vegetable garden

>> No.21598222

Just growing my rapes

>> No.21598465

>>21595839
This could actually be a really interesting story. (You) are just a regular fan with no special connection to a chuuba, but you quickly learn that her death is the reason behind this time loop as you keep going back on the night after her death.
In order to escape, you’re forced to fly to Japan and somehow track down this chuuba, constantly messing up or being too late and having to try again, more efficiently each time. Eventually you manage to find her, but what the hell are you supposed to say? You’re just some random guy to her and there’s no way she’ll believe you when you tell her she’s going to die in a few days.
Fuck, writing this out actually sounds fun. I really shouldn’t start another story though...

>> No.21598518

>>21598222
Rapeseed is a plant you know.

>> No.21598978

>>21598465
How many are you even working on?

>> No.21599658

>>21598978
Shit uh, hold on.
Nine stories as of right now, not including this prompt.

>> No.21599743

>>21599658
Jesus fuck. What are they?

>> No.21599760

>>21598465
Sounds interesting, especially from the chuuba pov, imagine some random gaijin that can barely speak your tongue trying to save you from dying/save your career.

>> No.21599777

>>21598978
>>21599658
Make that ten.

>> No.21600894

>>21599777
Anon...

>> No.21601104

>>21599777
focus on one or two of them

>> No.21601179

>>21599777
Jesas, Just pick one to hammer out and pretend the rest don't exist while you're making that one.

>> No.21601697
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>>21599743
Well we've got a story about Shion being your bully in high school but then the two of you switch bodies forcing her to feel guilty.
The rrat!Ayame story where she has fucked every guy in school and you're the only one left but you don't want to fuck her which makes her execute all sorts of plans to have sex with you.
Road trip with chuubas, still in its early stages.
Chapter two of The Cover Job.
A story about being the sole member of the school music club until Towa joins, who believes her voice is too deep and it's your job to convince her otherwise (has been sitting there for over half a year).
Part 7 of Holocalypse, more in betweens and the alternate nightmare chapter.
Another fucking series on top of everything, about a world where mythical creatures like vampires, werewolves, fairies, the kraken, the nine-tailed fox and more exist, with your job being to hunt down and kill them for a certain organization... one that is hiding something from you. About 5k words into chapter one so it'll be a while before this one sees the light of day. Honestly this ENTIRE thing was just inspired by Mel sex (because I really want her to sit on my lap and suck my blood out) and Mio sex (because hag sex).
(You) wake up after a big night out with little to no memory of what happened in your drunken stupor, and need to retrace your steps in a comedic journey as various chuubas tell you the ridiculous things you went through last night.
Towa fluff! (You) sign a contract with this cute devil for something you desire in exchange for your soul, but it turns out, Towa being the dumb dork she is messes up the contract and makes it so that the two of you can't be more than 5 metres apart or else you'll die! Towa moving in with you! Clingy Towa constantly following you around! Towa!!
And yeah, the tenth one is that prompt because I've just opened a new document.
I have a fucking problem.

>> No.21601951
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>>21540883
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-q0Ug086EkdqXM3pUEncTmOnrZmponsaGcGYv1Nccy9V3LFe-Xq4as1eiakk1yrqyvv00HJak2FM5/pub

And another chapter of building block doll, this time finally with some LamyxRoboco.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-q0Ug086EkdqXM3pUEncTmOnrZmponsaGcGYv1Nccy9V3LFe-Xq4as1eiakk1yrqyvv00HJak2FM5/pub

Tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff

>>21580239
Terimah kasih. Thank you.

>>21587080
You're very welcome.

>> No.21603062

>>21601951
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-q0Ug086EkdqXM3pUEncTmOnrZmponsaGcGYv1Nccy9V3LFe-Xq4as1eiakk1yrqyvv00HJak2FM5/pub
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-q0Ug086EkdqXM3pUEncTmOnrZmponsaGcGYv1Nccy9V3LFe-Xq4as1eiakk1yrqyvv00HJak2FM5/pub
what did he mean by this?

>> No.21603083

>>21601697
>and Mio sex (because hag sex).
Based, nothing more needs to be said.

>> No.21603498

>>21601697
As I said before you really need to commit to making one of these WIPs, while I'm sure some of them get more attention than the others by necessity and your own personal interest and mood.
I think if you see this as a problem that needs fixing you're going to have to put the majority of your focus into one. Perhaps while putting token attention to the others via loose thoughts and planning getting noted.
>Chapter two of The Cover Job
Now for my personal bias. This onegai.

>> No.21605045
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>>21603498
>Now for my personal bias. This onegai.
Shit, The Cover Job definitely hasn't had a whole lot of progress, mostly because I'm a little stuck on where to take the plot. The initial premise was interesting but I'm just not sure what to do from there. >>21600894 >>21601104 >>21601179 You're all right though, I should really finish one story at a time, it's just that starting new stories on a whim is too damn fun sometimes.

>> No.21605732

Quick, what is the most underappreciated work of smut in the archives right now?

>> No.21605925

>>21605732
Honestly the ones that get mentioned are usually the most recent ones, the biggest ones and MatthewAnon, so it's hard to say.

I'd personally go for Interrogation. Never seen anyone other than me talking about it

>> No.21605951

>>21605732
My balls

>> No.21606316

>>21605045
>Cover Job
I mean the premise set by the opening chapter does set a pretty good 'structure' for an episodic series with a myth arc that goes through the entire fic
With a general structure of problem that needs to be solved by murder, problem getting resolved by Anon, interaction with hololive members and staff interspliced between those occuring with whatever myth arc points and themes getting shown there, then it ends with 4chan posting.
Now as for what that story wide arc could be... Honestly it's up to you. I could see it being something like Anon getting into a relationship with a Holo and finding humanity in there, with the associated drama that would occur as it happens and eventually gets discovered; Or perhaps have it be about people trying to discover who's doing all the murders; Or maybe about his streaming career somehow inclining despite his best efforts.
Point is you have options where to take this and an open path to take that story wherever you want.

>> No.21606447

>>21605732
>what is the most underappreciated work
well that's an interes-
>of smut
nevermind.

>> No.21607681

>>21605732
Probably some of the earlier smut written last year that didn't get much of a response when it was posted, that's gotten read more by vitue of early placement but hasn't gotten any new feedback.

>> No.21608463
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>>21601951
Oh yes. This is the stuff. Exceptional work, Anon. I absolutely can't wait to see how you continue this next chapter.
Regarding the writing, there's only one mistake I could find. You call Roboco "Robosa" twice in the story. I'm not sure if that's some other name you use for her, but it's also the name of her fanbase, so it's a bit clunky to read.
Aside from that, the break from the SuiSora to the RoboLamy section is very sudden, and you don't have any dividing marker. Not a problem, just a bit unexpected.

>> No.21608732

>>21605732
The Shion anal/wax play/bondage story is a favorite of mine to be honest but it hardly ever gets mentioned.

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>>21601951
>Her mom and dad never believed in her, they simply expected it in the same way you expect a repairman to show up on time to fix your TV. As was with this expectation, there was no praise, no congratulations, only a vague acknowledgement that it had been done.
Stop attacking me you fucking prick. Why would you go there?

>> No.21609291

>>21608732
That one really was well done, and I'm generally not a guy into bdsm.

>> No.21609644 [DELETED] 

>>21608732
It got a lot of attention from what I remember, and I occasionally see it being mentioned. Try harder

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>>21603062
I don't know why I copy pasted it twice. Dumb brain I guess.

>>21608463
Robosa is another fan name for her (Robocosan, Robosa, get it?). But if it's to jarring I'll just call her Roboco. I'll make sure to put a divide line in here in a moment. I didn't even think about that.

Otherwise, glad you liked it. The RobocoxLamy story arc is going to get really steamy.

>>21608766
Had to go for where it hurts. I'm sorry you resemble that.

>> No.21611014

>>21606316
>I could see it being something like Anon getting into a relationship with a Holo and finding humanity in there, with the associated drama that would occur as it happens and eventually gets discovered; Or perhaps have it be about people trying to discover who's doing all the murders; Or maybe about his streaming career somehow inclining despite his best efforts.
It's all three of these actually, but mostly the first and last. The problem is I can't really think of any situations/scenarios for Anon to find himself in where the plot gets to develop. Like for example a stars collab where he finds out streaming is kind of fun or a 'date' with the main love interest where she grows suspicious of him, things like that. I can't think of many of those, if that makes sense.

>> No.21611232

>>21611014
I remember thinking of ideas for back before I posted it as a prompt and was considering writing it myself, and one was the Za Hando incident where Anon is suspicious of Matsuri's story but decides to go along with it and find the guy only to find him at Matsuri's place.

>> No.21611404

>>21611232
Story where anon tries to go back in time to stop Za Hando, only to end up being Za Hando and 100% confirming that Matsuri was telling the truth

>> No.21611616

>>21608732
>>21609291
Glad you liked it.

>> No.21615003

>>21611404
This but it's a pseudosequel to Lies come to Light and you witness everything that happens that day, even your own beating and raping of Matsuri.

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>>21605045
Finish Chapter 2 NOW!

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>>21616810
I'M TRYING

>> No.21620356

>>21601951
I have never felt so related to a character since I discovered Ryan Gosling. I'm becoming Suisei...

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>>21622253
Damn female coyote...

>> No.21623341

>>21622253
Koyori went to New York before?

>> No.21625273

I remember some threads back there was an anon posting about writing a Futa Luna fic that was almost done save for some last character checks.
If you're still here close are you to finishing it?

>> No.21625356

>>21625273
He isn't done yet and won't work on it for a while, or so he told me. Maybe if you show interest it may push it up on him calendar though

>> No.21625408

>>21622253
Koyori exhibitionism...

>> No.21625650

>>21622253
welp, time to fap to My Koyori Romance again

>> No.21626637

>>21625273
Needs more time in the oven. Starting a new job tomorrow night means that it'll be even longer as my energy is raped out of me. I wanted to get HoloFan 6 done before then but right now it's like... 80% written before rewrites.

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brrr

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>>21628796
Oh sweet God it's going to go into her brain! She needs something to chew on before it kills her!
>Just had the visceral vision of those teeth snapping from the weight

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Has anyone tried doing Hololive Noble Phantasm chants? Seems like the best way to practice and improve your writing by taking it to its limits in my opinion.

>> No.21629654

>>21629302
That's genuinely too chuuni even for me.
Like I get the necessity of having them were I writing some chuuni action stuff as not having them in that kind of thing is not doing the genre right, but outside of that context I don't see myself writing one of those.

>> No.21630176
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Do you have moments where you suddenly flip a switch and your writing gets better by tenfold? I wonder how good of a piece one could manage to write if they were to stay in that state for the entirety of the fic. Worst thing is I don't know what exactly triggers it. I know there's the whole "getting immersed" thing in writing, but getting immersed seems to be entirely arbitrary in my case.

>> No.21630578

>>21630176
It's generally delegated to things you really, really wanna write.

>> No.21630668

>>21630176
Anon, that's probably just you getting into a state of 'flow'. Which is generally only achieved when you're writing something you really like while also not finding what to write going forward as 'too boring' or 'too hard'.
It's mostly arbitrary but when you get into it it does tend to make writing feel very good.

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>>21630578
You know, that's actually a pretty nice way to put it. There were some moments in some fics which I had a burning bright vision in my head of exactly how much detail I wanted to put into it, and that's when I manage to go completely all out. Shame it doesn't happen more often though

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>>21630693
It'd be nice, wouldn't it? But you gotta take what you can get, unless you sit and stew over everything in hyperclear detail for days on end until you've got everything absolutely perfect in your head, and then manage to first-try convey it onto paper.

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>>21630752
Ironically, if you WERE to just sit down and think things through for days, that's when the writing would turn out mediocre. Truly fucked up that this hobby punishes you for thinking things through, but rewards you for spontaneously writing whatever comes to mind on a total whim of the brain. That of course is in the case of detail. When it comes to plot it's obviously the other way around.

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>>21630908
It's frustrating as all Hell, but that's just how it is.

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>>21630908
???
Anon? The fuck are talking about. Just because you find your best work coming out of spontaneity doesn't inversely mean that thought and well planned out stuff will come out as shit.

>> No.21632706

>>21631255
I never plan stuff so idk

>> No.21632740

>>21631255
I love this image whenever I see it

>> No.21633250

Guess it's about the right time to ask this.
What are you working on writeanons?

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>>21632740
I wonder what this image is gonna be

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>>21633250

>> No.21633554

>>21633387
Jesus the amount you write never fails to amaze me AA.

>> No.21633559

>>21633387
God seeing holofantasy's word count always scares me.

>> No.21633583

>>21633387
jesus fucking christ

>> No.21633634

>>21633387
I hold no particularly strong emotions towards this image

>> No.21633807

>>21540872
nigger

>> No.21634254

>>21633807
racist ass cracker, get outta here

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>>21601951
>that cliffhanger

>> No.21635473

>>21633807
Sana isn't a nigger

but she sure acts like one

>> No.21635771

>>21633387
Is this a late April Fool's joke? I feel like it is.

>> No.21635807

Sana lactates choco milk, pass it on

>> No.21635961

>>21635771
Anon, Holofantasy having an order of magnitude larger word count than anything else in the archive is pretty common knowledge... It's still pretty strange to get it pointed out.

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>>21635771
No.
>>21635807
GOD

>> No.21636730

>>21635961
True, I guess. Still though, chapter 6 has been separated into different parts so combining them together suddenly seems a bit weird, not to mention this final part of chapter 6 is gonna have to be fucking massive because chapter 6 is nowhere near 100k words right now.

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>>21635807
So does Flare.

>> No.21636784

>>21636767
I want that half-elf to sit on my face

>> No.21636993

>>21635961
Actually never mind, chapter 6 as of right now is nearly at 80k words. Holy fucking shit.

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>>21636730
>Suddenly
It's actually always been one colossal WIP. I just copied the document a few times to cut off the different individual chapters. That's why the parts came out relatively close to one another/at the same time. I've just been writing in the main WIP this entire time.
>Fucking massive
Maybe? Pt. 1 is 62 pages and 28k words. Pt. 2 is 64 pages and 29.6k words, Pt. 3 is 36 pages and 15.9k words, and 3.5 is 13 pages and 5.7k.

>> No.21637246

>>21637037
What the fuck is wrong with you. I mean that as a compliment.

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>>21557726
You know exactly what I do!

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>>21637246

>> No.21637573

>>21611014
I mean conceptually the story does lend itself to 'stealing material' from drama and yabs, perhaps with a side of theoretical rrat scenarios exaggerated for effect. (I.e steal inspiration from real events and exaggerate them)... Or maybe you're looking for ways to have the psychopathic protagonist to have growth in which case I think there may be a plot in having him investigate and find the targets to kill himself which has a side effect of justifying him needing to interact with Holos in order to cover his tracks as well as tying the two sides of the social and murder together nicely.

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>>21637246
I just like making stuff and sometimes I get a little carried away. Thanks for reading it, though.

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>>21637573
The former idea could be fun to write, like killing Mel's manager, saving Matsuri from Za Hando™, etc. but I don't want each girl to only be there for one chapter then leave the story forever. The latter is the most likely route I'll take, but I definitely want the focus to be on Watame (when I asked this thread which girl is the most likely holo to fall in love with a serial killer, she was the top answer) with her being the only one to learn of your secret.

>> No.21638430

>>21634930
I need to write a reverse paizuri story with this lewd elf where the slobbers all over your balls and asshole. Uoooh.

>> No.21638597

>>21637387
>Miko appears
>Suddenly Shadow Pekora stops her assault
>Deep seated, repressed feelings bubble up to the surface
>She remembers that night
>The hot summer of 20XX
>She remembers what Miko did
>Those feelings of powerlessness, of confusion, of shame
>Pekora... Pekora won't let it happen again!
>Her head feels like it's about to explode but her resolve is steel.
>I am thou. Thou art I...

>> No.21638746

>>21635473
sana isn't a nigger
but she sure is raped by one, every day, 3 times a day
(like the rest of holoEN and ID)

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>>21638597
Well if you'd rather fight instead... ORYA!!!

>> No.21639645

>>21638317
Yeah avoiding the pitfall of MW in having the concept be too episodic is probably for the best unless you're either looking for a way to stretch out an arc with a throw away murder or use the introduction of them via this 'case' as a way to have the chuuba be more relevant to the story due to being the heroine of the episode.
As for ways to implement the latter, I guess it could be done as a way to add complications to actually doing the murder by way of have to find out who needs to get killed to properly resolve the attacks against his fellow Holos; or it could be like a way to have a mystery arc about trying to find out which Holo has betrayed the company and has been leaking information, organizing attacks, and has been masterminding the entire plot thus far.

>> No.21641290

>>21639645
>spoiler
Sounds a little too grand and probably not where I’ll take the story, but a mystery aspect of finding out who the stalkers are is what I’m writing into chapter 2 right now, so that’ll be an aspect of the plot for sure.

>> No.21641727

>>21641290
Yeah thought so too.
Besides the only reasonable culprits would either be Artia, which really wouldn't fit the near future setting or Rushia which is honestly still too fresh of a yab to be done in good taste

>> No.21642171

>>21641727
It's never too early to make fun of a vapid whore.

>> No.21642225

>>21641727
Fuck Artia. Backstabbing bitch.

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>>21540927
Marine finding out that her father had an affair so she has a younger half-brother. She's excited to have cute little shota to toy with, only to find out you've just finished high-school and are like half a foot taller than her

>> No.21643280

>>21642709
Only half a foot? So (You)re supposed to be a 5'5 manlet?

>> No.21643284

Hey AA question, why is present day present time still listed (well half of it) in the main page when it already has a series page? Shouldn't that get squeezed into a series link?

>> No.21643357

>>21643280
>Japanese 18-year old is a manlet
Y-yeah?

>> No.21643628

>>21642709
I feel like there's a dumb comedy fic here of Marine letting You share her apartment with her expecting Erotic situations, teasing that it might turn sexual but getting hit by the unexpected normal result, repeat ad nauseam.

>> No.21644013

>>21540927
You and Ayame are locked in an endless spiral of fighting each other, with the winner dominating the other during sex.

>> No.21644342

>>21643284
Wait did I not trim PDPT
Fuck

>> No.21645812

>>21644013
This but the fighting is with swords.

>> No.21646148

>>21645812
This but the swords are an euphemism for cocks and all onis, even the female ones have cocks

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>>21540927
Pikamee in 3D has given me a mighty need for something featuring her.

>> No.21648283

>>21540883
>>>>21609771
Save Haachama's plan

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How does the thought that your oshi might be sucking someone's cock this very instant that isn't yours make you feel?

>> No.21648775

>>21648614
The thought? Makes me feel bad. The reality? Impossible as she's sucking mine RIGHT NOW. Your oshi's helping her too.

>> No.21648780

>>21648614
I watch JP chuubas so I don't know. But you watch westoids so elaborate for us

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>>21648614
Pretty hot actually. The thought that while I'm here cleaning the house thinking what I'll say in my next akasupa, she may be lapping up her boyfriend's cum of her face and mounting him on bed to fuck with no condoms and no pill as they've been trying to make babies for 2 weeks now is pretty hot

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>>21638430
All I can do to encourage you is to post more lewd Wamys.

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>>21638430
Yeah, you do

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>>21638430
She also enjoys breathing into her mic and telling chat what her breath smells of.

>> No.21650613

>>21650066
Of course she's already been pregnant since day 1 of their "fuck 6 times a day" routine, but she didn't tell him because she wants to keep this routine going. Not that he would care

>> No.21650864
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>>21650483
Bro's...Wamy's too cute I can't take it anymore...

>> No.21651925
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21651925

Posting a picture to save the thread. I'm almost done with the update I promise

>> No.21651981

>>21651925
What update?

>> No.21652002

>>21651981
Update is a bad word to use. I'm not AA or anyone important. I mean update to a schizo fic

>> No.21652079

>>21652002
I mean that's got me even more interested. What's the schizo fic?

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>>21650864

>> No.21652615

>>21650198
>>21650257
>>21650483
>>21650864
>>21652165
/wg/ - Wamy General

>> No.21652838
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>>21652615

>> No.21653022
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>>21652615
That reminds me, I really loved Moonshine Blues. Has that anon written anything else?

>> No.21653233

>>21653022
That's HCAnon that wrote it, so yeah he's written quite a few things

>> No.21653705

>>21633380
what the hell

>> No.21653745
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>>21540927
Polka sex

>> No.21653747

>>21633380
no way

>> No.21654161
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>>21633250
A fic about (you) being kronii's neighbor, slowly getting to know her and falling in love.

This is all held back because of Kronii's haughty personality, so I wish to shine some light onto shitty troubled past that shows she's like that to avoid getting hurt again, ending up with her having sweaty, passionate baby making sex finally showing herself as she truly is.

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>>21633387
>ch.6 WIP
>97k words

I bow to you, oh great one

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>>21633250
Ehh, not a whole lot, only like...

8 fics fuck my life what's wrong with me

>> No.21654368

>>21654239
How does he even do it. I write 10k words and I'm wiped for the week. What is his secret?

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>>21654368
You know, it's hard to understand it until I realize that I have 1.5K hours on Terraria and Ark, and 1K on Minecraft, 500 hours on the souls series, and so on so forth. For him, writing is that one hobby that you can spend a lot of time on without getting bored. Honestly, I bet we've spent more time jerking off than he has spent writing. It's not that bad when you compare it to other things

>> No.21654651

>>21654570
I mean, he also plays video games a lot too so I think it's moreso him just being able to write really fucking fast

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>>21633387
Longest fic I ever wrote was around 12-13k words with all three chapters combined, it could've been more if my prose wasn't so barebones.


80k words is the lenght of the average modern novel, and this nigger wrote 97k for ONE chapter.


I don't have a reaction image kneeling hard enough so just have this classic.

>> No.21654891

>>21654651
You know, humans on average spend 1/3 of their life sleeping. This means that if you make it to 80 years old you'll have spent almost 30 years sleeping in bed, doing absolutely nothing. Maybe he just doesn't sleep.

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>>21654891
Speaking of. Few things terrorize me more than the extremely high chances of a person just spontaneously dying from cancer or an aneurysm without being able to do anything to prevent it, and that is the fact that we will spend, at the very least, one whole third of our lives in bed. It is a fact I simply can't cope with.

>> No.21655386

>>21655202
Just get over it. Everyone else did when they were 15

>> No.21655439

>>21540927
A smut about getting a slow, drawn-out handjob from a gloved and reluctant Suisei.

>> No.21655526

>>21655386
That's what life's about, isn't it? Just ignoring one big problem to the next because we can't do anything about it. Just wait till you reach your 30's kiddo, that's when it will really set in

>> No.21655795

How much of animal habits do you put in the animal girls to avoid either making their ears and tail just token cute things, or making it really weird with them having to be walked on a leash and them marking territory?
I think heat cycles fall somewhere in the sweet spot, if done correctly.

>> No.21655924

>>21655795
Theoretically, the animal girls should behave as close to human as possible when inside society or near others because it would be rude not to, and would only return to their animalistic nature when by themselves or around others of their kind who understand their situation enough not to judge

>> No.21656109

>>21655795
It sincerely depends on the story itself. Petplay with animal chuubas is a no-brainer, but to be honest a fair few of them already share traits behavior-wise with the animals they draw from

>Korone- Very active, emotional and excitable
>Okayu- Laid back and lazy
>Fubuki- High energy
>Risu- An annoying fucking pest

>> No.21656146

>>21655439
I need this very much.

>> No.21656217 [SPOILER] 
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>>21655439
>>21656146

>> No.21656789
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>pick a kronii story at random
>she's portrayed as a desperate cuckquean
>check another
>and another
>and another
>...
Are there ANY stories where she isn't cucked? How come you all decided she needs to be cheated on? How could you possibly know what gets her off?

>> No.21656880

>>21655795
Kemonomimi in heat is some of the hottest shit and I won't hear otherwise

>> No.21656983

>>21655795
I like having them as really hairy. Like, really hairy. Like 'huh that's not part of her tail, it's just her pubic hair peeking through her asscrack' hairy.

I absolutely don't mean this as a shitpost, either. I picked this fetish up from Yuel lewd fanart back when Granblue first started getting big.

>>21656789
I think it's more some anons find her annoying so they like hurting her emotionally.

>> No.21658597

Would Fubuki, by the virtue of being a kemonomimi of a predator animal, be a slight bully? Like, in a school setting, would she pick on guys she deems weak and try to tease them a bit before letting them off, leaving them feeling really strange in their nether regions?
> be anon, a token nerd of the school
> Fubuki gets on your case every morning, she's the reason you are late half the time
> try to arrive to the school unnoticed, succeed, but not for long
> this turns into a cat and mouse game where Fubuki tries to guess where you are infiltrating the school from, and you finding new routes and ways to screw with her plans

>> No.21658775

>>21656789
You see clockgen took a lot of the low hanging fruit for kronii concepts so any that gets written for here is either going to be higher concept or weirder fetish.

>> No.21659014

>>21658597
Foxes aren't bullies anon. They are very squeamish and run away from any fights unless they are cornered, you just have to google it. Foxes are predators, sure, but not like the other usual predators you're accustomed to

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>>21658597
>Bully Fox

>> No.21659421

>>21659014
But that's when there is actually a fight, like (you) confronting her about a prank that went too far and her losing all steam and being really apologetic. Before that, you are a prey to be toyed with, right?

>> No.21660006

>>21654651
HCAnon said I wrote really fucking fast when we cooperated for the crossover, but there's also days where I can't do anything to save my life. It's just bursts of bipolar energy or scenes I've been thinking about for days before actually writing out, which is why it ends up taking so long. It doesn't help that this one had some bonus plot points that were addressed.
>>21653745
This artist's Polka...she is 100% evil but the kind of evil you want to forsake the world for a taste of. God I love her eyes so much. I just noticed the hearts but I love the slightest hint of a smile she conveys. Also her fat fucking thighs.

>> No.21660066

>>21659421
Foxes aren't petty. If you threatened her and she fought back, next time she'll just avoid being around you completely. Foxes are too smart to get themselves into the same type of trouble twice

>> No.21660336

>>21659421
> Fubuki finally crosses the line
> when you confront her, she is suddenly really meek and apologetic
> she says she will do anything
> anything, huh
> you ask her to act like your boyfriend for a week, then act like she got dumped
> as in your eyes there is nothing more humiliating for a good-looking girl like her to act all lovey-dovey with a bottom caste, then be dumped
>or just straight up smut, I don't know

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>>21660336
> you ask her to act like your boyfriend for a week, then act like she got dumped
Fuck me that's brutal.

>> No.21660592

>>21660066
That's good and all, but would a fox pick on weaker targets if she miscalculates their capacity for violent responses?

>> No.21660698

>>21660592
Same as any predator, but that would be like trying to hunt a rabbit and then it turns around and transforms into a honey badger - completely unexpected.

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>>21658597
>>21659014
>>21659421
>>21660066
What I'm saying is, in short, that if you have your own headcanon for what Fubuki should be like, just write it. You're not an animal expert, you don't know how they behave, most people here don't. The fact that I take the time to do a simple Google search just shows that I'm autistic about realism, the others won't be. Write what you want to write.

you're doing it anyway, completely ignoring what I'm saying and going for your next wrong theory, so doesn't really matter. Have Coco tiddies (I had to convert this into like 10 different file types to work so please praise me for my effort)

>> No.21661245

>>21660698
Yeah, but Fubuki is not entirely a fox, she is a human with fox traits, and she's not in nature, she's in a society
An animal can just look at another animal and evaluate its danger levels through sheer instinct. You can't really do that with a human in a society
Even a meek goody-two-shoes pushover, when provoked enough, can go completely off the rails and stab the bully in the eye, conspire to ruin their family, or plant drugs on them and get them arrested etc.

>> No.21661259

>>21660902
Anon, these questions are for stirring up discussion and putting out ideas, mostly for fun but also for the off chance a writer sees it and mines it for ideas.
Sometimes it's an author asking if their ideas are viable, other times it's just dumb ideas getting thrown out there and getting a response. With some of those ideas for fics or concepts occasionally getting built upon in discussion.

>> No.21661362

>>21661259
I mean yeah, it's stirring up discussion, but imo he's going about it wrong. He should just ask "would Fubuki be like" instead of going "since Fubuki is a fox, would she *false statement about foxes*"

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>>21660902
Yeah, good tiddy, thanks, have a Fubuki
It was me just rambling with a sleepy head, like one of those > imagine posts
Are you some sort of animal expert btw?

>> No.21661601

>>21661490
Not really. I just am really interested in Biology or the study of living things in general, I guess Scientology because I search for all things of science. Though if I wasn't pursuing my current career, I'd be a biologist. I think there's a lot of good material to extrapolate from how animals act, to the point where you really don't need to make false assumptions about them

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>>21661362
I was just trying to map out my image of predator-prey dynamics with a cute foxgirl in a school setting, and the image in question was wrong
Have another Fubuki

>> No.21661812

>>21661662
>predator-prey dynamics with a cute foxgirl in a school setting
Just write a nature fic then.

>> No.21661831

>>21660902
You got a proper version of this without the stupid censor?

>> No.21661871

>>21661831
Pretty sure this was an April fools thing so I doubt there's a real one.

>> No.21662012

>>21661831
>>21661871
Never mind I'm stupid and didn't watch the whole gif.

>> No.21663037

>>21661601
I dunno if that's what Scientology means, anon

>> No.21663333

>>21660336
>Romcom fic built around 7 days of Fubuki being your girlfriend. The "Will they or won't they" being whether you two stay together after this... Or have that magical romcom scene where she pretends she's gotten dumped but You decide to try and get her back.
I mean I'd read it.

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>>21663037
Well it should be. Fucking English.

>> No.21663517

>>21661601
Why do you repeatedly try to impress people here only to embarrasse yourself?

>> No.21663608

>>21663517
It's... impressive to like watching documentaries on animals?

>> No.21663675

>>21633380
pretty funny

>> No.21664881

>>21661362
I mean from my experience with asking questions to stir up discussion here it's usually better to have some guiding details rather than having it be an open question. Since an open question leaves it too reliant on anyone having interest in the topic while an already interesting question means "the bait" is already set as it were and people can respond with their own ideas.

>> No.21665495

>>21663343
Stop fucking people from England

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>> No.21669220

>>21642709
Are you allowed to marry half-siblings? Asking for a friend

>> No.21669339

>>21655526
I just reached 30 and the only that set in is that I just really want a wife and children now.

>> No.21669818

>>21544687
Do I tag this as AF or does it not being in the series archive give it away enough?

>> No.21670787

>>21653022
Thanks, I’m always happy to hear someone liked my story. If you’re after more comedy I’m quite proud of Dramatic Miopost, and Dense Treasure is another one I wrote. It’s /wg/‘s birthday! was also a comedy-ish story I recently published.
>>21660006
That’s because you DO write really fucking fast, with really good quality/prose first try. It’s insane.

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Care to explain to me why you're not working on your WiP, anon?

>> No.21672341

>>21672303
Because I have a life outside of this general?

>> No.21672357

>>21672303
I saw Testament's new model and have been on a several day long masturbation bender

>> No.21672506

>>21672303
The story I'm writing makes me feel gross to write. My body is tying itself in knots as I type it.

>> No.21672580

>>21672506
Come on, insect rape isn't that bad.

>> No.21673205

>>21672303
Video games.

>> No.21673447

>>21672303
I have a life, unlike you.

>> No.21673772

>>21672303
I’m sorry Lamy!

>> No.21674244

>>21672303
Anon, this is /wg/, the WIP General. If we finish our WIP works, there'll be nothing to talk about.

>> No.21674741

>>21672303
warhammer

>> No.21674829

>>21669818
NTA but put April fool's in katakana so the joke isn't immediately given away but should make anyone seeing it be suspicious.

>> No.21674924

>>21674829
Won’t that just give it away?

>> No.21675291

>>21672580
you misspelled the word "incest"

>> No.21675378

>>21675291
Wait. Wait, is this the Calliope prompt?

>> No.21675480

New thread
>>21674955

>> No.21675791

>>21672580
Fuck, I wish more people would write insect rape. I wish I didn't detest my own writing with every fibre of my being so then I could write it myself and get off to it. Whilst I'm dreaming, I wish I had a pony, too.

>> No.21675885

>>21674924
It'll give it away if they're paying attention.
If they're not, they'll get fooled.
It provides enough fair warning while not making it too obvious.

>> No.21675963

>>21675378
Mori. Y-You mean as in the Mori Calliope? He's ACTUALLY writing about her? Ewww I think I'm gonna be sick

>> No.21676226

>>21675378
There was a Mori/Insect rape prompt?

>> No.21676260

>>21676226
No, but there's at least three incest related ones that I'm interested in.

>> No.21676984
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>>21675963
AND I'm having fun doing it

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>>21676984

>> No.21678429

>>21676984
I gasped with my jaw agape, then sighed IRL (in real life)

>> No.21678700
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>>21672303
Cause I just spent two days lapping Sebring and my brain is still shaking in my skull. But man, all the money spent and changes I made were more than worth it.

>> No.21678892

>>21678241
Don't post CRyS at me she loves both Mori and incest she'd be on board with what I'm writing

>> No.21679113

>>21672303
Because I only start WIPs to tell people I'm working on them and get them excited for it but never release it

>> No.21679625

>>21676984
Is this you get into an incest relationship with your alcoholic mom Mori, or is it ‘Hades, but Mori rules the underworld and she wants your incest dick’? Those were the two big ones.

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>>21679625
That first one is by SubjectionAnon, I'm working on the latter, as well as two others. A sequel to To and Fro and another fic where Mori convinces You(her brother) to breed Lui while she watches

>> No.21680596
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>> No.21681451

Don't do it, don't you do it

>> No.21681608

>>21681451
I'm holding out, don't worry

>> No.21682164

/BECOME/ YOU ANNOYING FUCKS YOU RUIN EVERYTHING

>> No.21682449

>>21682164
I always wanted to have a huge orgy with all the Lamyes desu...

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