/wg/ - Writing General - Owl Pals Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>21138431

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Shishiro Botan's Impregnation Fuck: Tags: NSFW, Botan, Impregnation, Vanilla:>>21142432 >>21142481

Sad, genuine smile. Ch. 3.: Tags: Amane Kanata, Kyriu Coco, Tokoyami Towa, cheating male, netorare, threesome, unwilling sex, cuckquean:>>21182324

Sad, genuine smile. Epilogue: Tags: Amane Kanata, Kyriu Coco, Tokoyami Towa, cheating male, netorare, threesome, unwilling sex, cuckquean:>>21182324

Building Block Doll: tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff:>>21204497

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Luna's attempts to rape a goose cuz she thinks it's Subaru:>>21149715

Sex with Mio... inscestuously!:>>21150193

Taking Risu to her first hockey game:>>21152147

More of this:>>21153566

Gen 5 in zombie apocalypse. Botan is their main firepower, Porker is their brawler, Nene is the driver, Ramy is nurse and cook. Hidden Aloe included:>>21154271

Story about marrying this cute retard:>>21168525

Even if the rrat's probably false, Bakatare Gyaru Bully Gang still sounds hot:>>21171640

Watching your introverted girlfriend Aqua get bullied live by her extroverted teammates and comforting her after the stream:>>21172743

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>C*unc*l
I express my doubts.

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>>21230995
Right, so I was asked to write a fic where you cum on a vtuber's face right before she has to stream (not as a vtuber, though, imagine it's an actual facecam girl who looks like the avatar), and she does the whole thing covered in cum. First person. Feel free to write one of these yourself, I just know I'll do one. Probably 6 to 7 thousand words.

Gotta figure out which one, though, I have a few roads I wanna go down, and they're all pretty good. Can't decide.

1) Choco's your mom, and she's been slowly seducing you to take the place of whoever the hell your father is. Fed up with the hints, insinuations, and other stuff, you just claim her mouth, tits, and face right before she has to go live. Doing a swimsuit ASMR stream. Streaming with her beloved son's cum all over her fucking face. Maybe even giving an incest blowjob and doing JOI, after already having been facialized once, with her KU on stream. Ends with Noel and Fauna walking in on you two, holding their ASMR equipment, licking their lips, and disrobing; as you twitch in a cum-drained heap on the floor, your loving mother still gently trying to suckle you back to hardness.

2) Gura is your bratty little sister. Your mom, Natsuki, is a total whore. Took your virginity the night you graduated middle school. A MYLF, yes, but still a whore. Six kids by six dudes (You, anon, are the oldest), and she even fucked a SEAnigger to produce your younger sister Konae. She's been pushing your younger sisters to fuck you for ages, now, and Gura's up first. You're tired of this little brat wearing nothing but a shark-themed sweatshirt and socks around the house--she owns no panties, so you can't even jerk off into those. You catch her getting ready to do her RFA stream in a sports bra and yoga pants and figure that's a good time as any to wreck her kusogaki mouth and face.

3) You no longer live at home, but visit quite often. Your mother, Botan, is someone you've always had kind of a weird relationship with. Single mom, kind of a tiger parent. Being a professional gamer, she worked long hours despite mostly being at home--and spent more time outside getting shitfaced than at activities with you. So she was simultaneously there and somehow also NOT there. One night, you show up at home, seeing Botan deep in the cups with her drinking buddies. While not the first time she's been caught out like this, or even the first time you've seen her doing it socially, they were lounging around on the couch in their underwear. Things...happen, and a shitfaced Aloe, sex pest that she is, convinces your mother to "make up for her failings as a parent" by blowing you in the living room. In front of your friends. In her lingerie. With her and your godmother, Lamy, fighting over whose face gets more of your hot load.

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>>21231937
>they're ALL mom incest prompts

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>>21231937
http://poal.me/idq1jr right, time to vote gentlemen

>>21232132
I want to do a Sora 3D live gangbang but I don't have the chops yet. Might do a Nachofamily fic where your mom, Nacho, basically whores your sisters out to you and turns them into a harem where she's the harem master (and slave to your cock along with her daughters).

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>whoreowl

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>>21232296
>my two favorite designs in council
>owl fucked a fucking nigger
>nature mommy is probably married
Killed the gen on arrival for me. Maintaining kayfabe is paramount and if a chuuba can't be fucked to do that before she even debuts I can't be fucked to tune in.

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>>21230995
Anon and his girlfriend, Amane Kanata, have been mutually schlicking over the past few days to reading "Sad, Genuine Smile" from this very general. They have a moderately healthy sexual relationship and are constantly looking for unique things like this to spice up their sex life.

Only, one thing: Anon finds himself drawn to Coco's role in the story moreso than the self-insert's. Getting it drawn out of him in a horny fervor, he finds his beloved Kanatan pressing him to let her cuck him, wetter than ever at the thought of him becoming her masochistic plaything. Unable to deny his true feelings, he spirals into degenerate play with his sadistic tenshi

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>>21232465
>owl
No way

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>>21232465
Yeah, EN2 could've conquered the stars if the scouting was better. Bae could've done so much better if she wasn't pigeonholed into being the le random one. Thank God for HoloX.

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>>21232855
>hag erotic
>shapeshifts into cunny erotic
My reps are not nearly enough... I NEED to understand JP hags 100% that I might abandon myself to them.

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>>21231937
>>21232262
Extremely based tastes anon. Whatever of these you choose to write I'm reading them.

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>>21233032
Thank you kindly. Looks like it'll be Choco, but I'll let it sit for a few more hours before I write tomorrow.

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Refer to me the darkest and greatest history of chuubas. I have an old TTRPG timeline I want to adapt to /wg/. Oddly enough it's way easier to think of graduated chuubas that were relevant for the very worst reasons than to think of graduated chuubas that left on a high note.

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>>21234221
Anon I'm going to be honest with you you're going to have to do your own reps here since any summary done of vtubing history is going to be grossly oversimplified.
But to give some big historical 'yabs' to start your research.
.Live and Sio, The Kizuna Ai alt VA saga, maybe that company that literally replaced their chuuba VAs.
Outside of that you're going to have to do some of your own research, (and interpretation of course), towards vtubing history and what you think might count as a relevant yab or event to include as part of whatever fantasy thing you're doing.

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>>21234221
Do your reps on Upd8. Two holo chuubas come from that retarded company.

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>>21234879
>upd8
Man.
If there ever was a good company to get used as a an analogue for crumbling empire that preceded the current settings fantasy kingdoms that would be it.

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If the author of Sad, Genuine Smile is present, would you like to provide a series description?

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>>21232820
Jannies usually snipe it pretty quick but yea it's well known her bf is some species of subhuman

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>>21234879
Polka and...?

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>>21235579
Okayu

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>>21232855
AAAAAAAA HAG COYOTE SEEEEEEEEX

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Hag sex has been taking up too much of this thread. It's not healthy

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>>21237384
You're right. It's not healthy the amount of eggs that are going to waste

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>>21237384
Yes, Too much Hag Sex.
Not enough Hag Romance, or Hag Domestic Life.

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>>21237384
You're right. There needs to be more hag marriages.

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>>21237384
I can stop whenever I want

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>>21237384
Yes, we need also to ponder the immediate consequences of hag sex, such as hag lactation and hag hyperpregnancy.

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>>21237384
It’s their own fault for being so goddamn desirable.

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>>21232713
>Cucked by the CoCock
At least she gets her revenge in another story.

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Do you want half cunny now or full cunny later?

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>>21240758
Full

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>>21240779
Ighty then. I'll let you hagfags keep this thread and go work on my other fic for now. Cunny will come out eventually, maybe with three sex scenes for each of her holes.

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>>21240758
Full cunny

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>>21237384
Does Choco count as hag? I’m gonna write incest with her so

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>>21241537
Reasonably certain 'Hag' is a roommate age designation either >25 or >30.
Pretty sure Choco isn't one yet

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>>21241776
Hag is >=30. Which is why Marine will become one this year.

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Shit hypothetical time!!! Let's say you've been friends with Fauna for a couple months now, enough time to fall in love with her (bear with me here, hypothetical). You make your move on her and start dating. You date for 2 weeks with no sex though, you still enjoy her presence. But then one night you receive a selfie (pic related) of her in her underwear asking if you wanna see more. All good right? But what if she follows it up with an image of her sucking someone's cock, and then a photo of her face covered in cum. She then asks if you want that to be you. , assuming those photos were taken in the now as she talking to you, wdyd?

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>>21243750
Tell her yes, I'd love to be sucking on that cock, and to introduce me as soon as possible.

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>>21244132
That's not what I meant, that's not what she meant either, but hey, I'm sure she'd be down for that after the initial surprise.

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another dead night but with hypotheticals like that it may be for the best

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>>21245342
The hypothetical was to revive it, not meant to be good

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This with any of the HoloEN girls

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>>21245933
This isn't the draw thread.

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>>21219888
You're welcome. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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>>21245342
I mean at this point the general way to generate discussion is to ask for specific ideas.
Like, Give some Gyaru fic ideas.

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>>21246421
gyaru Okayu keeps hanging around in the home economics clubroom just so she can eat the food you make while she lazes around and reads manga. in exchange she sucks your cock once the other club members have all left.

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>>21246595
So what would the focus be on?

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>>21246938
depends on how much buildup you want. it could either skip right to the blowjob, or it could also focus on her giving you little peeks at her slutty underwear while you’re trying to focus on your cooking

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>>21245342
/wg/ is dying. It's time you accept it.

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>>21247112
>Okayu subtly trying to tease you/get you horny while you're autistically focused on cooking.
>Slowly gets less and less subtle as it goes along.
>By the end of it after you finish cooking and cleaning up she drags you to another room and fucks you there because she got worked up trying to tease you.

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>>21230995
Wholesome date with Watame!

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>>21247557
the joys of being a dense anime character

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>>21247765
This but for some reason the narration is paranoid, constantly looking for signs that something has gone wrong and that the fics about to get monkey's pawed. But there isn't, it's just a wholesome date with Watame

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>>21230995
Retelling of Jaws with Gura, and instead of eating people, she "eats" people, if you catch my drift. Local sheriff Amelia, biologist Fauna, and sea captain Marine team up to bring an end to Gura's reign of terror.

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>>21248689
She vores people?
That sounds very hard to take seriously.

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>>21248745
Nigga are you dense? When I said, "instead of eating people, she "eats" them." I mean that as in she rapes them.

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>>21247557
now you're speaking my language

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>>21230995
Becoming Aqua's boyfriend and having a sweet relationship with your lovable onion.Meanwhile Shion plots to steal you and make you her boyfriend because of her jealousy of Aqua the introvert neet getting a boyfriend before her.

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>>21249119

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>>21249119
This but it ends with you uppercutting Shion in the stomach so hard she vomits after you chastise her for thinking she could break you and your loving girlfriend up

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>>21249119
This and it ends with you uppercutting Aqua because she still clings to you even after you dump her for Shion

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>>21249166
...
But Aqua sees you doing that. She doesn't hear your chastisement, all she sees is her boyfriend violently assaulting her best friend; the girl puking her guts out, you with hate on your face.
She runs off screaming. You can't catch her. All that's left is that smug brat writhing in pain, laughing in between clutching her stomach in pain.

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>writing a story late at night
>decide to stop for now and pick it back up again tomorrow.
>not feeling the story at all anymore the next day.
What is the cure for such disorders?

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>>21249166
This, but Aqua sees you responding to Shion's flirtations in public and uppercuts you in a fit of uncharacteristic rage, before pulling the trousers off a nearby onlooker and blowing him right in front of you. Shion, watching your pathetic frame crumple, cracks up in a fit of laughter so intense in nature that it proves fatal, as she is unable to breathe for a full minute and her brain shuts down.

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>>21249877
Finishing the whole thing in one sitting. You'll probably never write more than a couple thousand words that way, though.

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>>21249877
Genuinely the key is finding a good stopping point you can easily continue on from then deciding that "this is where I stop for the night", if you do that when you pick it up later you can easily get back into the swing of it, otherwise you'll be stuck where you are right now with having difficulty getting back to writing where you were.

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>>21235427
Just got home from the gym, so sure.

After a long journey trying to win over Towa's heart, she fell for you and became your girlfriend. Everything is perfect in your love life, except for one small detail; Towa and you never had sex, and it would start getting under your skin, letting venomous thoughts grow in your head. It wouldn't be until a fateful night during a gen 4 sleepover when you would get your long awaited sexual release, except not from her. That night too would cause a huge amount of trouble, placing yourself between pleasure and pain, wrapping your heart with thorns as you try to fix things, all while you do your best to keep your beloved girlfriend in the shadows about what you did.

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>>21251422
Affirm. Changed should be reflected. Thank you for your input and hard work on the story in question.

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>>21251885
I know it's from copying the tags from their post but the 'Kiryu Coco' tag in that stories archive entry is mispelt.

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>>21252023
Thanks for pointing that out.

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So anons, what's the works?

These are some prompts I want to give a spin.

>You meet Ame before she joins hololive through a party of mutual friends, the party sucks, she leaves and you follow her. A fun night ensues.
Based on this video, so not a happy story either.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INNkO4WnBT8

>A sad, emotionally distraught Kiara cries in an alleyway you happened to cross. You comfort her and later learn that she got stood up by her pink woman girlfriend. Kiara has sex with you because you're in a hands reach and needs comfort, you accidentally become more involved with her, dealing with her mememe personality, helping her get over her insecurities. You cuck mori right in front of her at the end.

>Kronii getting love and pregnancy correction.

I'm out of creative juices for now, but these topics picked my interest.

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>>21238051
Honestly if you aren't mating pressing your hag three times a day and shooting your load deep inside while yelling "GET PREGNANT!!!" what are you even? A tubo faggot?

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>>21253037
>all EN

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>>21253162
It has nothing to do with me preffering EN over JP, it's just that they fit the roles I want them to play out.

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Into the Taiga, deep in the dark
The land of the wild at your hand!

Blood in your veins and the Bible in hand
We conquer the unpromised land!

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>>21253578
How's that holoBerserk fic coming along?

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>>21254332
I had a manic episode and it mutated into this tabletop gamebook thing.

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>>21254432
You what now?

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>>21254464
Did I stutter?

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>>21254643
bro what the fuck

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>>21254643
How did this even happen?

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>>21254794
Some guy goaded me a couple of threads back that just re-threading Berserk would be boring and unoriginal and it's been living rent-free in my head since.

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>>21254432
>>21254643
How in the fuck?
No seriously how? That fucking concept started from Suisei sacrificing hololive in the eclipse to become part of the god hand. Last I asked it mutated into becoming "Berserk but chuubas". A jump into scope creep but a reasonable jump that I can see happening to me if I were writing the concept.
This is a bigger jump than that. It's like writing for a fantasy novel somehow mutating into writing and coding a video game mod.

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>>21254828
I'm going to eat that anon.

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>>21254643
Yo what is this app/program? I need something like this in my life

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>>21253037
Still writing about Botan seggs. Question: would the fic be elevated if towards the end a drunk Lamy shows up and fucks you while Botan plays with your hair/fondles your balls?
>>21254643
Godspeed Anon you beautiful bastard.

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>>21255022
>and coding
Fuck no. What you're seeing is a virtual tabletop I use to run my RPG campaigns on, I had nothing to do with creating the infrastructure.

My initial idea was to maybe make a public room to run the game in so people would have live access to different anime backgrounds/music and a place to roll dice, so a lot of info ended up there (thus the screenshot), but then I realized that even *if* I could handle the amount of work, giving 4chan even limited access to my Foundry host would be a terrible, terrible, terrible idea, so I've been trying to pare it down to a CYOA I can just upload on google docs, and just use the VTT as a nice way to format info in cool screenshots.

As for how it ended up like this, I was already trying to do a sort of tragic fantasy/gothic setting with chuubas, so then when I started plotting out Holoberserk, I was like, 'well there's a ton of overlap here so maybe instead of doing two things I should combine all my ideas into one'.

>>21255214
https://foundryvtt.com/
It's fantastic.

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>>21255104
NTA but fuck it, if he isn't writing that Suisei causes the Eclipse prompt I can take it. I have that thing half plotted out anyway, it'll be a oneshot obviously, but I pretty much have the core concept of it being You are Casca, Mori is Guts, Suisei is Griffith. PseudoMirror Scenes from the Golden Age Arc as appropriate in flashbacks. Story starts with The Band of Comet finding themselves in the Eclipse, Everyone but You and Mori die horribly, Insert Flashbacks as appropriate, Suisei mindbreak rapes you like Casca, etc.
Don't expect it anytime soon but I've thought of the concept enough that I think I can do it.
>>21255571
Anon that was a metaphor for how big the jump in concept for what you were writing became.
Shit's kind of a big fucking jump.

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>>21255977
Bless you anon. Take all the time you need.

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Kiryu Coco, who is now "dead" and goes by the name "Kson". she stands in front of Rushaki Mikenekoyama.

Mikeneko - Finally, come and let end it
Kson - Mikeneko....
Mikeneko- Do you come alone?
Kson - Mikeneko enough...
Mikeneko- Coco-chan, Are you going to stop me? You are one of the few true friends in Hololive!
Mikeneko- can't help it. You are someone who loves by everyone and doesn't believe that hate can overcome love.

Kson - Mikeneko.... You still haven't thought of giving up, have you?

Mikeneko- Well, no matter what! I'll drag them to hell together! Everyone!

Kson - Korekore, Narukami and those bastards are trying to use you.
Kson - The goal of the KoreKore want to destroy....

Mikeneko- I know it all ! I know everything!
Kson - then why?
Mikeneko- As I said, Coco-chan after you graduated out of Hololive.
Mikeneko - I don't have any friends! I can't trust anyone!
Mikeneko - Because of this, I went to visit old friends like Korekore and Mafumafu.
Mikeneko - And I know they are drama sellers who wants to profit with my drama.

Kson - ํYou knew but still did it?

Mikeneko - Of course. I don't want to lose like this! I don't want to be the one who was bullied and had to leave like this!
Mikeneko- I love Hololive but Hololive didn't give me a second chance.
Mikeneko - But even that, Hololive still talk about you and miss you! Kiryu!
Mikeneko - Since you left I feel like my most important friend in Hololive is gone!
Mikeneko- Then I decided. I'll do everything to have security! So that one day I disappear
Mikeneko- I will be able to determine my own destiny. I will drag them down with me to hell!

Kson - with the price which our friends in Hololive had to pay and suffer?
Mikeneko - Yes.
Mikeneko- Marine-senjo, Peko-chan, Kanatan and everyone and I'll take your beloved Hololive away from you.
Mikeneko- This will be the first time that I can control my own v-tubing life.

Kson - By doing that, what good things will happen? Mikeneko
Kson - Do you make your own destiny without making yourself happy? You're just running from the truth!
Kson - If you really want to change your life! You have to accept that bitterness and not flee! Mikeneko !
Kson - Don't run from it !

Mikeneko- Urusai !!!
Mikeneko- Why aren't you trying to understand what I'm trying to do!? You should understand me the most?! Do you forget what they did to you!?

Kson - Mikeneko.......
Mikeneko- What!?
Kson - I understand your "painful" feeling.
Kson - I too... had to choose to lose what I love the most.
Kson - Even if we want to, I can't go back to the past before October 2 years ago.
Kson - We can't escape the claws of fate that have wrought us.
Kson - So.......
Kson - Let's eat together. (We've got to settle this.)
Mikeneko- Yeah, let's eat. (Yeah, let settle this.)
Mikeneko- Our struggle has to end!

(Both of them took off their shirts)
(Kson has a pink dragon tattoo on the back.) (Mikeneko has a green butterfly tattoo in the middle of her back.)

They run and exchange fists and the song 龍が如く極 - For Who's Sake is playing.....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdTNkqnzcgM [Embed]

EX- Hololive 3rd generation Hololive Fantasy
Rushaki Mikenekoyama.

(After fierce battle ended)

Mikeneko - I'm sorry...
Kson - よかった

>No. I won't take my meds

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>>21255499
Elevated? That's an understatement, the fic will evolve into something so powerful. I am fucking orgasming right now just thinking about it

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>>21253037
Working on a yandere Mori fic right now, but feeling kinda stuck not knowing how to proceed.

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>>21253037
Decided to write a compilation of short stories which was supposed to be for the anniversary but i got busy

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>>21258838
What are you stuck on specifically?

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>>21249408
Drinking Shion's vomit!

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>>21259184
I'm kinda insecure about my writing in regards to scenes that are supposed to be heartwarming or romantic. I keep erasing and rewriting sections because I get paranoid that they're shit.

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>>21259260
Don't be paranoid. They ARE shit.

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>>21259438
ok so what do I do then

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>>21259260
Anon....
Write it all out first. Erasing and Rewriting is for the editing stage. Get the first draft of the story finished first then see what you can do in regards to making a scene work better afterwards. That's my high level story level advice.
Now as for your particular problem in regards to writing out a romantic scene. Plan it out first, what do you want to happen, what do you want the characters to say, what do you want them to feel, plan it out then work from their; though obviously as writing is an art don't be afraid to stray from that once you start feeling good about what's happening. But in general if you can't see how to proceed you try and see what needs to be done for the story then work it out from there.

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>>21259459
Stop writing.

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>>21259658
>writing thread
>just stop writing, bro
Stellar advice

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>>21259260
Do it anyways. If it sucks, take it as a learning experience on how to do better next time.

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>>21259693
You're shit, so don't do it.

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>>21243750
I'd say i'm down.
And ask her for a picture of the guy to see if he's cute enough for a threesome.

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>>21259739
This.
Writing is something you get better at as you do it but it's not something you learn from just doing sometimes you need learn from feedback.

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>>21230995
(You) suggest to your girlfriend Mori that she's had enough drinking for tonight, and that her drinking habits worry you.
In response, she beats the shit out of you.
(Mori, abusive chuuba)

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>>21260771
Mori performs the yab ritual on (You) in response to you having a yab.

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>>21258838
Give Mori the old pregnancy correction.

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>>21262051
I'd rather fuck a cow.
Actually, that's no different, bad example.

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>>21259693
>responding to the local schizo
Anon…

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>21262203
https://youtu.be/OgF_BXg19lk

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>>21262203
https://youtu.be/OgF_BXg19lk
I fucked that post up so bad it's not even funny but get a better quality picture

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>>21262408
>he fucked it up again

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>>21262441
>>21262203
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QEzhxP-pdos

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>>21262203
Realistically speaking which holo has the biggest bush and why is it Botan.

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>>21259658

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>>21254828
>>21255104

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>>21263783
Why is Watame so ugly, bros.

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>>21264269

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>>21264269

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>>21264403
Mount the sheep.

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>>21237384
I'm addicted to hag sex

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>>21264346
This Watame looks dangerously cute and funny.

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>>21243750
I'd vigorously masturbate to this, then ask her to do it again next time we meet

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>>21262633
Mio, being a wolf girl, has an even thicker, curlier bush and even darker pit hair.

Fubuki could give them both a run for their money, but she trims her bush and shaves her pits in a thoroughly misguided attempt to put up a girlish front. Pregnancy correction is required.

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>>21267305
Well, time to go jack off to gamarenji's hag art again

https://files.catbox.moe/ll1khu.jpg

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>>21264346
>>21264403
Of the hags, though, it is Watame whom I have taken to the peak of degeneracy. I had her shave and wax until she was smooth as a baby’s bottom, then creampied her multiple times a day for weeks until she took. Then, I forbade her from shaving. You must understand here, Watame is a sheep - her body hair keeps on growing no matter what, without limit, unless she trims it. Thus, by the end of her pregnancy her bush and armpit hair were soft beds of curly white fluff, thick as a winter blanket, with a scent so heavenly it nearly made me cum on the spot. She’s already given birth to five of our beautiful sheepgirl daughters, but I refuse to lift my shaving ban, and she’s given up on me ever doing so. Already she is pregnant with our next set of children.

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I like reading stories that aren't about having sex with hags or underage girls but women in their 20s

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>>21269188
That’s most of the archive. Matsuri is right, there are no lolis in Hololive, not really, and so you can count the amount of cunny in the Archive with one hand.

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>>21267976
Fuuu… what a position, incredible. There’s truly a clear divide between porn artists who actually fuck and the ones drawing off a reference image set.

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>>21230995
A hurt/healing story where (You) take care of an extremely depressed Shion as a glimpse of her life in between streams. A little like Fire Remnant maybe.

She made an offhand comment in one of her recent streams about feeling like she doesn't want to live, and her member posts are low-key depression diary entries. She always laughs it off but I've always wondered how bad it gets off stream.

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>>21230945
Another chapter of Building Block Doll

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT-q0Ug086EkdqXM3pUEncTmOnrZmponsaGcGYv1Nccy9V3LFe-Xq4as1eiakk1yrqyvv00HJak2FM5/pub

I've got another story on the way but I ran out of energy just before completion. Hopefully I'll be able to post that one soon.

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>>21271643
It's an odd thing. These girls have to be some of the most loved people on the planet, but it often rings hollow to them.

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>>21272537
Why would it be anything else but hollow? It's the same as complimenting an author here. You don't really love them, you love what they can do for you. What they can make. You don't know who they are behind what they present on the surface, their 'character'. You can say 'I love you' and any combination of compliments and gushing under the sun to them, but it'll always be among the most most baseline, surface level pleasantries at best. You won't be there for them in the dark times - you can't be. Because your love, your care, is only there when it's convenient.

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>>21267976
Wow... please tell me there's more of this.

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>>21271653
This chapter was lovely. It's going in a nice direction by exploring Sora's own perspective to their relationship, beyond the original awkwardness she felt at finding out about Sui-tan. Previous chapters were very Suisei-centric I think, and Sora was more like a face for the service provider at the nursery than a fully fleshed character.

It'd be nice to see Suisei lose her inhibitions over time and grow into her role as Sui-tan when she is with Sora. What kind of plans do you have for this going forward?

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>>21271653
My desire is Sora breastfeeding.

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>>21272885
You're kinda ignoring the whole existence of gachikois who would kill themselves if their oshi died, but sure.

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>>21274540
You're missing the point. They love the entertainer, the idol, and maybe only ASPECTS the person themselves, but not the entire package. They love their IDEA. Real, actual mental and emotional issues can't be well-wished away by a group of insane people you've managed to charm as a persona, because they can never truly and intimately know you on a personal level.

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>>21272537
It's not just about external validation. Forgive the blogposting but I'm also depressed as fuck when on the surface I'm as successful as a professional in my field can get at my age. I'm not any less depressed because of it and in reality I'm just distracting myself with work to avoid the constant brain fog I fall into when I'm left alone with my thoughts. It's probably why Shion is my oshi, because I see myself in her.

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>>21274246
So glad you liked it! I'll be sure to put more of Sora's perspective in as well.

Not quite sure honestly. I have a few scenarios between Sora and Suisei I know I'll try (which I can tell you if you're fine with spoilers) and I'm considering making an arc between Wamy and Robocosan that's either lewd or starts lewd and slowly becomes more like Sora and Sui's relationship.

I'm not entirely sure where or how it'll end though. That's the main problem I'm having. This story is very much a ship without a clear direction. I have one possible idea but I'm still mulling it over.

>>21274494
I wouldn't dare let you down then.

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>>21274670
Unless you start a cult. If anything the problem with chuubas isn't that they go too far but that they don't go far enough. Imagine if Rushia had the brains to set up a small church.

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>>21267979
>Hag Scentplay
Ah, the patrician tastes of a Hag enjoyer.

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if you write the most stories immediately gain control of the archive

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>>21278965
What did he mean by this?

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>>21279049
Clearly he believes writing enough stories will summon Archive Anon for an apocalyptic duel for control of the Archives.

Of course those of us in the know understand that true control of /wg/ lies with the martyr who will write a novel-length series packed with single-digit-year-old chuuba cunny and loli pregnancy.

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>>21279380
Jesus christ man. Matsuri is sooo hot.

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>>21279380
Imagine a chuuba version of Lolita (the Nabokov book)....

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>>21279592
Which chuuba would be Dolores?

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Question. I'm about done with the third chapter to a story and I want to use two images to prove a point. Can I put that in the Google Doc or nah?

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>>21279728
No

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>>21279437
Don't stick your dick in crazy anon. It isn't worth it.

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>>21279769
FUCK. Readers will have to take my word for it then

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>>21279728
A picture or two should be fine.

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>>21279728
Of course you can. I don't get why you'd even ask for permission.

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>>21279827
I don't really know what the limitations are here. I only started writing schizo shit last week. Im a newfag

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>>21279380
no fight the password is just emailed to you

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>>21279728
Yes?
You can just put in an image either straight to the doc or via link.
Personally don't like doing "tricks" like adding images but since this is a story on the internet you do have that option to have images imbedded to your fics.

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>>21279788
Matsuri is the only menhara I'm willing to stick my dick in. I accept the dire consequences.

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>>21230945
Say, Can You See? Chapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTyuSWDTdeyG6aTcmtiaHjdEX1oXzuwpsIhpnAqEotkSgzzqY6zPaV5ib7AENaIP9fa3SLDEWideAOt/pub

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>>21271653
Christmas Sora is probably sweeter than maple syrup with 10 tons of sugar

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>>21280158
It's easier if you don't force AA to read through a story to figure out the tags

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>>21280232
>>21280158
Right.
Tags: Okayu, Shion, Aqua, SFW, Fluff, depression

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Hello anons. I took the criticism of my smut segments in Sad, genuine smile to the heart, and tried my best short at rewriting my favourite scene from the story -Kanata's birthday gift- as an excercise

I tried to be more descriptive of the sensations and add an all around air of sexyness in the story. It turned out twice as long and I'm rather proud of the result. I hope this is good enough to bust a nut for some of you.

I've also taken the effort to work better on my punctuation.

I'd still like to ask for your critique, and if possible to refer me to your personal favourite smut fics that you think my prose would benefit from, or even erotic literature in general, as it is so fun to read.

For archiving purposes, I've given it this title.

Sad, genuine smile: Kanata's birthday gift extended.

https://rentry.org/rmn7o

Corny, maybe, but it works for me.

tags: Tokoyami Towa, Amane Kanata, cheating male, netorare, creampie.

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>>21280865
Oh, and if by any chance the anon who wrote the original prompt is in this thread, I'd like to hear his thoughts on how the story turned out if he didn't tell me in the last thread, as his posts were the most helpful ones.

Thanks to all of you for enjoying my fic. Your replies made my day.

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>>21280865
*hits LIVE button*

I cannot think or comprehend of anything more cucked than being Towa. Honestly, think about it rationally. You're loving, appreciating, kissing, and pining for Anon for at least a year solely so he can go and have sex with Kanata. All the hard work you put into your handsome Anon - hanging out with him after streams, giving him disappointing blowjobs, failing to please him with your worthless cooking, boring him when you lose against him at video games. All of it has one simple result: Anon's body is more enjoyable for Kanata-chan when he eventually fucks her in every hole.

Found the perfect lover? Great. Who benefits? Kanatan benefits. She gets to have Anon push his unprotected prick into her angel pussy every single night. She gets to be pregnant with Anon's children. She gets to marry Anon while you sit cucked in the bridesmaid's corner. She gets the benefits of his kind and sweet personality that you delude yourself into thinking came from the way you love him. She gets to emotionally abuse Coco into letting Anon make her pregnant too.

As Towa, you are LITERALLY dedicating your life to Anon simply so Kanata can enjoy him while you STILL aren't pregnant with his kids. It is the ULTIMATE AND FINAL cuck. Think about it logically!

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>>21279682
Gura

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>>21281248
Any of Gura's less fantastical outfits.

La+ if she ever gets a less gaudy model.

Shion (pushing it since she's 20 and acts her age even if her model looks younger).

Koyori (forma de cunny).

Matsuri (forma de cunny).

And yeah that's it. Hololive needs more lolis.

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>>21279682
Beatani

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Gee wiz. Look at this game... Elden Ring? I was just about to write a chapter but what's the harm in playing 30 minutes...

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>>21281533
Im going to fuck you raw do your fucking work

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>>21281533
Sucks for you. Good thing I can't buy it, so I don't have that problem. Instead I could write, or I could... sleep... or I could... uhm...

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>>21281533
I was incapacitated for like 2 and a half weeks, and I played pretty fast compared to a lot of people I've seen. Don't throw yourself into the abyss

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>>21281533
Perhaps those of my stock might remember entreating writers to work like this.

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>>21281676
Fifty lashings for every day you don't write

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>>21280158
This story continues to read well while having that great contrast coming from protagonist and their interactions with the girls...
Really fucking hope the plot kicks in soon, fluff really won't be able to keep this story together unless you handle it with a steady hand.

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>>21281533
Ten hours later.....

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>>21282733
While there's a plot, and there's a peak, the nature of the story won't promise anything drastic. He's the US Ambassador to Japan, there's not many avenues for the story to take that doesn't result in the story shooting off into /pol/and (Which I always had a deep fear that I was straddling the line on). But thanks for giving that bit of criticism. I'll take it into account.

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Tell me a hot cucking/cheating plot you want to see done and I'll pick the best one.

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>>21284941
Mori leaves you for a short man wearing a top hat.

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>>21284941
Matsuri crawls your PC when you leave her alone in your room for a moment and finds loads of girlfriend x charao NTR and femdom in your history. She confronts you over it with sultry excitement and gives you a handjob to the idea of her fucking another guy, only letting you cum if you if give her permission to do it.
Can either expand into a whole netorase VN plot or just jump forward to a scene where she returns home with filled condoms tied to her underwear or something

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>>21284941
You rape the lesbian out of kronii, cucking moomers

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>>21284941
irys cucks roberu by teaching bae the deepest pleasures of the female form.

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We need more ageplay stories

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>>21284941
Cuckquean or bust.

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>>21284941
A series of fluff fics that initially purports to be unconnected wholesome fluff with a random Holo... That ends each part with you witnessing the girl you were with fucking the same guy that's been cucking you the entire series, shamefully running off then giving a hint at the next girl in the series. Rinse and repeat to keep baiting and switching ad nauseam, until you either run out of interesting Holos that cuck you or run out of interesting ways to catch getting them get fucked.

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>>21284941
Oxymoron

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>>21294415
>cuckquean story gets fantastic reception on /wg/
>NTR spergs instantly start trying to troll for (You)s
Quick, Smile Anon, write another one. It's a bit like being a kid and pouring salt on slugs.

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>>21295691
I don't think oxymoron means he's calling them a moron. He just doesn't know the difference between cheating and being a cuck

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>>21295789
>Anon discovers what oxymoron means

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>>21295789
He's saying it's impossible (i.e. oxymoronic) for a cuck plot to be hot, which is true for anybody who's not an NTRfag.

I'm pointing out that it's a weird coincidence NTR trolls resurfaced after a cuckquean story got popular (cheating on girls being like an antibiotic to NTR).

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>>21295886
>>21296001
Oh I thought oxymoron was that term for when two words mean the same thing so there's no point in making a distinction between them

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>>21273762
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=gamarenji+ookami_mio+&z=5

His Mio is like Kujira Pasta's Fubuki, as in they really nail what's great about them

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>>21296773
No it's two words that shouldn't really work together but somehow do, like plastic glasses or old news.

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>>21296854
>that one of her riding
My dick hard

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>>21296875
half naked is probably the most used one in the english language

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>>21230995
(You) and Kiara fall into a bad crowd after her original attempt at getting into the idol industry, and helping her escape it after she gets the opportunity to join Hololive

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>>21297160
Half naked works though. Half of your body is exposed, the rest isn't.

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>>21293337
>>21296001
Okay if if it's actually cuckqueaning ideas that people want how about...
A series of fluff fics about Miko finally getting her dream of a blonde girl, initially starting with her dating Haachama/Ame but at the end of the part finding that she's gotten cucked by (You) as she watched the two of you fuck before shamefully running away, a hint given at the end to the next blonde in the series.
Rinse and repeat till you get the grand finale of Miko shamelessly watching and schlicking as you fuck every Blonde girl she likes right in front of her.
Potential twists to keep it entertaining:
MIko wanted this, and intentionally/unintentionally made sure you also got in contact with the Blonde she wanted to date.
Suisei masterminded this and made sure to leak who Miko was planning on going after next.
(You) aren't even real but a manifestation of Miko's desires to see the Blondes get fucked. In reality she just ran off when the date was nearly close enough to be a success, hampered by her delusional desires.

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>>21298467
In general, the Archive has a severe deficit of stories where (You) are Kiara's hero, even though her story is by far one of the more dramatic ones pre-Holo.

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>>21298945
>mgs style story where Kiara is Big Boss and she recruits you in Outer Heaven to defeat the Phoenix Slayer.

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>>21230995
Impregnating a 60 year old hag Marine!

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>>21296001
By "NTR Trolls" do you mean people sperging about NTR content, or people offering genuine, non-reverse NTR prompts, because I assure you there is zero irony in my enthusiasm for the genre. I'm an emotional masochist desperate for content

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>>21298467
This but (You) are the bad crowd she fell in with and discover her attempt at getting away from You via joining hololive.

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>>21298945
>Would perform to empty rooms only to go home to a dingy apartment and lie on the floor, not even eating until she starts having fainting spells
I'm so happy for Chimkin it's not even funny, her existence sounded like the one of the most miserable things somebody could go through that's not actual torture.

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>>21301337
Same. Yagoo really saviorfagged the shit out of her.

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>>21293337
This is sex

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>>21298488
Isn't that basically every oxymoron?
They don't work on a surface level but the context, either cultural or linguistic provide the reason why the phrase makes sense despite that.

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>>21298945
Now that we know Subaru lied about all of her backstory, that may just be true. Kanata is bad, going deaf is no joke + the whole eating grass stuff, but it's not as bad as Kiara. Watame has some bad stuff but it's mostly summarized as abandonment.

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>>21302820
>Watame has some bad stuff but it's mostly summarized as abandonment.
Her's is still worse than normal abandonment because either you never see them or they at least pretend they kinda love you, but her dad told her to her face that he basically doesn't care about her and would have put her up for adoption if she wound up with him

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>>21296875
>two words that shouldn't really work together but somehow do
They don't have to work together. It can be used for inane nonsensical bullshit as well, thus "oxymoronic" most often being used in the derogatory context as above

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>>21302808
half naked isn't an oxymoron because "half" and "naked" aren't conflicting in any context.
>b-but naked means COMPLETLY naked
then half conflicts with pretty much everything.

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>>21302820
I think Mio has it the worse desu. She's gone all these years without experiencing the joys of being a mom. Someone needs to knock her up. I nominate myself.

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>>21303148
I concede the point for half naked but in general an oxymoron is more like a combined idea formed from seemingly conflicting ones.

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>>21303734
>seemingly
It's just conflicting ideas slapped together, that's the only operative point. Whether or not some deeper meaning can be extracted from the combination has no bearing on its qualification as one. A "purplish-green" is an utterly meaningless oxymoron, but an oxymoron nonetheless

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>>21281533
>and author anon wasn't heard from for 3 days...

I hear hes still stuck on Godrick.

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>>21296854
Goddamn you can feel the affection for her ooze out of those images. It kinda makes me want to write mio.

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>>21304575
>mfw the word oxymoron is an oxymoron

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>>21280865
>>21230945
This definitely needs to get anchored.
I will say your smut has improved. Your strengths being in the positions and 'imagination' for the sex. As for your weaknesses it remains the lengths of each individual action and the 'detachment' of the narration to the smut, the best part of your smut writing generally being when they intersect with the story and have the emotions of the narrator cut in i.e. my personal highlight for this smut piece is the thoughts of Towa coming to mind as you came in Kanata.
As for recommendations on smut to try and learn from I'd reccomend Festival of Sensations and Lies come to light from the archive. Festival of Sensations for the fact that it's good smut with great integration to its own plot, Lies come to light for the fact that it's a great example of narration stained with feelings and emotions.

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>>21285709
>>21291771
Too short

>>21287210
Kronii is asexual so I don't see her with Mumei

>>21287831
Lesbians can't win over the cock

>>21293337
Sounds like the pickle man from Chris-Chan. You should watch those documentaries instead.

>>21286336
Poorly worded but this has the most potential for some quick, hot smut. The clear winner.

There, I picked one like I said I would. Now all that's left is for someone to write it

[Anonymous No.]

>>21306203
Uh.... cuckbeats??? Explain this screenshot NOW.

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>>21306203
Where is this from? It looks like cropped porn fanart.

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>>21271653
It's really hard to not self insert in Suisei eventhought that wasnt your intention in this fic. I still enjoy it very much. Keep going anon

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>>21306203
>Poorly worded
I'm willing to work with any curious authoranons to workshop something that'll pique their interest. I have a hard time making them nonspecific enough to act as a good hook and allow creative freedom.
Thanks for the images at least faggot

[Anonymous No.]

>>21306203
>There, I picked one like I said I would. Now all that's left is for someone to write it

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>>21306951
I mean of the works that focus on the cuckoldry aspect here, a general problem I've seen is tepid dialogue that's barely dirty talk, it feeling too consensual (come on it's a fantasy go wild), and being really bad at conveying what makes it hot.

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>>21307500
Ah, the "they just don't get it" anon returns. While I share your sentiment that no attempt thus far has really hit my sweet spot, I wouldn't say that's a "problem" with the writing. Escalating netorase is a niche within a niche after all, so it's hardly fair to complain about works being derived from the most common NTR tropes.

Your post did give me some thoughts though. Perhaps specifying the western term "cuckoldry" as opposed to "netorare" will serve as better explanation of what we're hoping for, because the latter term encompasses an enormous breadth of tropes. Netorase at its heart is a very intimate and personal thing for the cuck, and yet a huge amount of NTR works focus almost exclusively on the girl and bull, have no S/M aspect at all, don't bother to establish a strong relationship between the girl and cuck, etc. Someone hopping on the panda real quick and searching the tag as their only research isn't gonna do much good.

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>>21308101
I don't think a change of terms is going to magically change the image of what people think of what they think of a situation, a label of NTR or Cuckoldry doesn't exactly change the image much.

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>>21308101
NTA but one thing I noticed is that I find NTR hot, but finding a doujin that properly pulls it off is SO HARD that I don't even bother trying anymore. It's all fucking shit, blackmail; mother with non active husband; incest; drugs; bla bla bla so tiresome man. I'm glad the fetish filters me out though from how shit it is, otherwise I'd have way worse brain rot than I already do

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>>21308821
I guess this more recent image is more fitting than HoloID getting blacked

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>>21308877
First Nina and now Pomu and Feesh. Nijisisters can't stop losing.

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>>21308821
>>21308877
Okay, that secondary image and first post makes me think you're more interested in the femdom/humiliation side of it. I.e. Spicy dirty talk, humiliating putdowns, shame at being interested in it, etc.
Which leads me to a question, What do you find about NTR so hot?

[Anonymous No.]

>>21308721
>>21308821
Not to be rude, but see, neither of you even understand what I'm talking about because of your preconceptions about the genre. It's hard to convey with just words that the subgenre is extremely distinct from most people's experience with the term "NTR", and so even using more specific terminology just sort of gets filtered out in your minds. Have a couple examples instead
https://exhentai.org/g/1720150/ed148845e4/
https://exhentai.org/g/2127132/b2b10f5bdf/

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309209
'mon brah they ain't gonna be able to get through the panda, you need nhentai for these newfags

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309209
>let me tell you why MY flavor of diarrhea is better than yours
God this was turning out to be such a nice thread too.

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309323
ntrfags just have to ruin everything.

[Anonymous No.]

>>21308877
kek, nipplesanjifags on suicide watch

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309181
I search for this strange feeling I can't explain. For example, when I saw Risu and ID saying the stuff in >>21308821 I got this faint feeling in my stomach (kinda like butterflies but not the happy kind) like I just found out about shocking news or something, as if she was being stolen from me for commenting on those guys so enthusiastically while I'm helpless to do anything about it. That's the feeling I search from NTR. I love the whole stuff of fucking during stream without viewers knowing, but they have to suspect something is going on for to be interesting. I can't think of any more examples, that's the one that comes up the most with me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309323
Maybe this discussion should shift into discussing hags in desperate need of breeding. Pic very much related.

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309683
Why would anyone care about your favourite flavor of diarrhoea?

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309683
>discussing hags
Can we discuss something else or is this just going to be routine now?

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309127
Speaking of, that whole Nina thing of her meeting up with two Nijimales and the discussion of her getting spitroasted by them after having so much fun drinking with them on stream without caring about the viewers is also my taste

[Anonymous No.]

>holo states she's attracted to men
>IT'S NTR
Are you not a man?

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309814
Incels aren't men, no

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309814
It's more of a "hey you're supposed to be giving me attention, not them. Why are you talking to them so much? You never have this much fun with me"

[Anonymous No.]

>>21309683
Just hagpost to bump limit, I guess. NTR niggers need to literally pay writers to inflict their shit on their archive because no one actually wants to write this crap, so it only makes sense that we ignore them and discuss stuff that actually gets fics written.

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>>21309965
You do know you don't know her right?

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>>21309780
Better than talking about NTR.

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>>21310025
Disagreed.

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>>21310017
Yup. I am chat as the collective. Even though I have never once talked in the chat of those chuubas, it's as if chat is just one individual in my mind, and I'm that individual.

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>>21309780
We can discuss cunny.

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>>21309181
>Spicy dirty talk, humiliating putdowns, shame at being interested in it
Lots of what gets me, you seem to understand. Moreso than the typical sense of loss/inferiority though, having the girl actually aware it makes the cuck aroused and actively teasing it provides an indescribably sensual experience. The sense of being totally under her thumb, powerless to resist as she humiliates/denies me due to a fundamental inferiority of mine to someone else, is extremely humbling and arousing. I guess the best way I could summarize it would be "fetishizing the gradual loss of control", whether that control be over the relationship, how one's life is going, one's access to his SO's pussy/heart, and/or in extreme scenarios, his own ability to ejaculate.

>>21309323
It's actually probably even more pathetic than your usual target, sorry to disappoint. I can't help what gets my dick hard

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>perfectly calm, analytical discussion of NTR and derivatives
>hagfags immediately flip their shit and chimp out
Many such cases!

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>>21309642
So something like that "Rushia NTR" fic in the archive? Is that the kind of feeling you like from NTR?

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>>21310141
I literally wrote that so kind of

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>>21310141
Forgot my pic

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>>21310166
>pekofag is the one encouraging NTR discussion
color me surprised

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>>21310209
That image is too comical. This one invokes a better feeling by far

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>>21310313
Cheers, saved.

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>>21310113
So like stuff like chastity cages, losing them, etc. Sounds almost lie fetishing getting your life ruined by your desires/fetishes.
Unironically have you tried looking at raceplay discussions or art, when the cuckold is actually involved in them I tend to notice their sexual inferioty and lesser status tends to get brought up a lot. Though it's mostly in the /trash/ subgenre that has something approaching stuff like that. More mainstream raceplay stuff just has uses racist language and stereotypes to add some spice.

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>>21310324
>>21310461
> hagfag literally going lalalala I'm not listening to you
"Color me surprised"

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>Unironically trying to shill BLACKED
I'm not one to shout Psyop but like come on

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>>21310407
NTA but I really like raceplay of either gender, whether it's white guy(s) on black girl(s) or black guy(s) on white girl(s). Interestingly I haven't seen much of anything involving hispanics or asians.

Black girls are unbelievably hot and I wish Sana was actually dark-skinned, not this horrible shade of tan.

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queen of /wg/

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>>21310407
NTA but I'm not into the raceplay or chastity cage stuff, I find raceplay to be too comical and takes me out of it and the chastity cage prevents me from getting pleasure which is not what I want

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>>21310517
He's actually just spamming the thread and should be banned for this.

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>>21310612
Indeed!

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>>21310407
>So like stuff like chastity cages, losing them, etc. Sounds almost lie fetishing getting your life ruined by your desires/fetishes.
Absolutely on the mark.
In regards to raceshit, it tends to come across as overdramatized and occasionally comical to me. I understand the appeal to people with similar tastes, but it's not for me. I'd rather the fundamental difference be one's overall success at life and social relations, with an impressive dick size just being an added bonus as though the heavens are rewarding them for acting like a chad. I'd rather lend my girl to a tanned rich playboy than a druggie nigger

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The earlyfag really must be seething.

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>>21310772
It's not the earlyfag, that one guy super into pregnancy, bushes and hags is just that obnoxious

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>>21310804
the subjectionfag

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>>21310772
the earlyfag is actually the only person to ever post in /wg/

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>>21310804
>>21310851
I fear the day we stop blaming everything on the earlyfag. Blaming him for everything is the only thing keeping this place civil.

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>>21310835
I don't think it's him. I mean the guy who goes "so pregnancy is degenerate now?" and says every Holo has a stinky busy whenever discussion about it comes up. If that's really subjectionanon then my opinion of him has changed drastically.

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>>21310799
Also, having found this image in my folder, I must remind AA that he has yet to deliver Pekoyakodon.

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>>21310851
If I had a dollar for every time I got accused of being earlyfag I'd have five bucks.

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>>21310681
Honestly I do find the race angle usually gets stupidly overplayed, but what I was saying is more that that genre also has a subgenre of the girl domming the cuck after getting NTRed. To give an example Numbersguy on Pixiv has some of that kind of Girl domming the cuck stuff.

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Someone should write some Fubuki NTR

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>>21310911
Blaming the earlyfag is like blaming the devil. He is scapegoat that holds the sins of /wg/ so that we may think of everyone as mostly good reader and writers.

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>>21310993
Doesn't that already exist.

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>>21310993
Purposefully inflammatory fics rightfully get shit on whenever they're posted because they are transparent and terrible, even when an author is commissioned to write it

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>>21311126
Member when that used to be the pekofag? This thread can't live without a scapegoat. I wonder who'll be the next boogeyman

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>>21311199
t. butthurt Fubuki fan

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>>21310973
>a subgenre of the girl domming the cuck after getting NTRed
Yes, that's the critical point. Rather than being totally absorbed with the bull, it's hottest if they go out of their way to humiliate and emasculate the cuck. However, I'm more a fan of the subtle, intimate type of domming where a girl teases the cuck's inferiority bit by bit in a one-on-one session as opposed to say, kicking him in the balls before standing on his back to kiss the bull. Extreme shit like that tends to call into question the girl's affection for the cuck, which weaken the effect for me a lot, so I'm not a fan unless it's built up to. Try searching for "soft femdom" and applying those principles to NTR

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>>21310920
I'm in this thread right now, and I've been some random anon's earlyfag-equivalent for about a month now. No idea why my name came up, but hello I guess.
That said I do like pregnancy, hags, and bush - but if it were only me who ever referenced it I would have to be juggling some six or seven different IPs while being schizophrenic, regularly awake at 4AM, and the writer of both PD PT, Summer Hag Love, and that Botan sex fic from a couple of threads back (and I am neither of those three writers).
Regardless, I do approve of any and all hagposting and lewdposting, particularly as a way to ignore trolls baiting for replies. Have a Mio.

>>21311228
Pekofag is transparent as hell, though. He writes his posts like the chuuni rival in a poorly translated shounen manga, and never references other stories because by his own admission he doesn't read them.

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>>21311199
That's mostly because spite is a terrible vehicle for making any kind of quality work. It's a great thing to use to help start up something but making something good requires revision and/or refinement of what you're doing, spite burns out way too quick that unless you can spark genuine interest in what you were doing before you're just going to have a halfbaked idea marred by being made in the haste of hatred.

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>>21310930
He never said he would.

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Less than twenty posts left. I wonder who'll be in the OP

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>>21311383
True, I only shit on the stories that I have read, and since those are so few in numbers, that rarely is my topic of discussion. There's some writers that I really have a bone to pick with here from being utterly disgusted by their ideals, but that hasn't been a problem for a while now. Also, I'm glad you're not that guy, at least.

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>>21311611
NTR discussion will continue next thread

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>>21311644
>There's some writers that I really have a bone to pick with here from being utterly disgusted by their ideals
who?

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>>21311611
>>21311651
I don't know what he thought was gonna happen lol. "Oh yeah let's bump the thread super fast, that will stop them from talking!", if anything you'll now be stuck on a thread with NTR discussion way longer when it could've just died here

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>>21311683
Subjectionfag and Pekofag

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>>21311734
rent free

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>>21311753

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>>21311683
Eh, I promised AA that I wouldn't flame others anymore so I'm not gonna say who. But I've made my opinions very clear, so you should know if you've been around

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>>21311611
Kanata-chan, certainly.

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>>21311779
That's false by the way, I shouldn't say promise otherwise I'll be held accountable for it. There were no words exchanged, I'm just respecting his wishes

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>>21311708
>people who like NTR are cucked out of their discussion
>People who hate NTR are cucked out of a good thread
I guess that means NTRfags still win cause they're kinda getting what they want

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>>21311861
The NTR bait would be treated as low effort trolling on any board with actual moderation, though. There's not really much equivalence.

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>>21311708
>Ooh who has pekofag's ire he's so mysterious oh my god

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>>21311779
nigger you hate on everyone, especially any and all named authors. you've even referred to AA as a terrorist before, not to mention you shit on the idea of taking commissions and yet are now bending over backwards to write all kinds of weird shit

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You guys can’t have a nice, comfy thread, can you?

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>>21311923
lol you wish, incel

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>>21311965
I'd like you to say what you think I said about commissions, considering the fact that I've always wanted commissions from way before I ever joined this place

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New thread
>>21311998

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>>21310949
>Fubuki having even lewder clothes underneath her normal clothes.
Hot.

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>>21312049
>Fauna
Alright that's kinda funny

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>>21312035
i'm not going to search through the archive looking for your posts but your retarded ass dialogue about bread and jesus plus every time you've stated artists shouldn't get paid more than like fucking fifty cents for their work or they're scamming people

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>>21312083
Because of the cuck hypothetical?

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>>21311965
>referred to AA as a terrorist
What thread did I miss where this fucking happened?

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>>21312099
Alright then. I figured you had no idea what you were talking about, so I'll clarify. What I said was "artists think too highly of their own self worth and constantly overcharge people", what happened to me was my commissioner insisted on paying me more than what I asked for, even after I asked him if he was really sure of it. That's of course because I don't hate money, but I'm not narcissistic enough to ask people for minimum wage pay for typing some words onto paper lol. This does not contradict any statements I've made before

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>>21312099
>artists shouldn't get paid more than like fucking fifty cents for their work or they're scamming people
Keep in mind he thinks that because he draws on his phone with his finger, so it has to not be hard for people with tablets to draw

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>>21312209
>What happened was some shit I never mentioned before which conveniently proves you wrong

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>>21312219
This guys sounds like a retard.

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>>21312199
>AA removes his non-chuuba works from the archive, saying they'd be reinstated if they were changed to include chuubas
>Pekofag refuses, stating "I don't negotiate with terrorists"

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>>21312268
fucking kek

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>>21312219
Which voice in your head said that?

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>>21312306
Welcome to the past couple months of having to deal with him

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>>21312357
>past couple months
try three quarters of a year

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>>21312327
AA negotiated with terrorists is the implication

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>>21312386
>"i don't negotiate with terrorists"
>nuh-uh it was AA doing that not me

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>>21312386
>Wanting hard and fast rules for the archive is terrorism
He should go to clockgen if wants unhinged metafagging to be saved

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>>21312219
It's so funny he considers himself an artfag and allowed to have opinions on all artistic processes when he's essentially Chris-chan with mspaint

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>>21312416

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>>21312209
>what happened to me was my commissioner insisted on paying me more than what I asked for, even after I asked him if he was really sure of it.
if you actually had principles you would have refused and stated that you would only take fucking ten pennies or whatever you think artists should be paid
but all it takes is a wad of cash waved under your nose for you to abandon your opinions
fucking pathetic desu

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>>21312593
Dude he's Brazilian. He probably steals lit cigarettes out of peoples mouths

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>>21312593
Stop bullying the subjectionfag

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>>21312469
Man, seeing "This way you don’t have to look at the hell that is /wg/" always gets a hearty laugh out of me everytime I see it when I go back there to check up on their archive.

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>>21312670
that's pekofag, subjectionfag's writing is so shit nobody is willing to pay for it

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>>21312684
>This way you don’t have to look at the hell that is /wg/
>Literally the first three pages are just clocksuckers fellating each other

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>>21312742
So what you're saying is PF's writing is good then?

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>>21312765
Kronies are weird.

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>>21312777
he's not a bad writer, just an absolutely terrible person and massive shitposter

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>>21312632
>Dude he's Brazilian. He probably steals lit cigarettes out of peoples mouths
Holy shit I laughed for like thirty seconds straight

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>>21312049
Good to know you fags are ruining the new thread.

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>>21313004
Door's over there.

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>>21312976
I said that because the only Brazilian guy I speak to had that happen when he went to lunch with mother.

They went out because she wanted to cheer him up after he was robbed at knifepoint earlier in the day

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>>21313042
Let me guess, it's either São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro or Floriánopolis where that happened?

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>>21313042
Yeah, I believe it, Brazil's that kind of shithole. That's why it's so funny

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>>21313136
I haven't asked, mainly because I sincerely doubt it matters

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>>21313313
If it didn't matter I wouldn't have asked, or known, such specific choices for when someone mentions robberies. Gringos will always believe the whole of Brazil is like Rio de Janeiro

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>>21313398
oh my fucking god pekofag is actually nationalistic
you can't make this shit up

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>>21313537
If someone says something misguided, there's no reason not to inform them of the reality

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>>21313537
You should have seen his pro-Brazil screed that got deleted for being off topic where he tried to claim that poor Brazilians are happier than middle-class Finns

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>>21313620
holy fuck when was this?

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>>21313690
>>20280368

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>>21312670
What do you dislike about my writing, anon?

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>>21313737
that's actually so pathetic to read, but it does fit in with his creed of ignoring reality in favor of fantasy

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>>21313620
I deleted it for being off topic. Not a jannie

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>>21313737
Kek

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>>21313737
I suppose he's gotta hold on to at least one fantasy when his life is shit he has to resort to grandstanding on a fanfiction writing forum.

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>>21314376
What makes you think my life is shit btw? As in what did I say.

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>>21314411
>Jobless
>On /vt/ for 16 hours a day
>Brazilian
>Likes Risu

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>>21314411
I can't believe you've got the audacity to still ask that after all your whinging.
Wait, I guess I can... this is you we're talking about. Bet you're loving the attention, huh?

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>>21314441
W-what's wrong with liking Risu?

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>>21314542

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>>21314441
Tbf he's jobless because he's a barely legal zoomer

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>>21314667
>barely legal zoomer
i always imagined some morbidly obese, balding middle-aged incel bleating about how much sex he gets and how great brazil is

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>>21314718
Those two last assumptions have nothing to do with the stuff you said before them

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>>21314718
nah he's mentioned on record that he's crossdressed as Astolfo and is "decently attractive" when crossdressing according to his friend's words. Why do you think he explicitly RPs as a fag?

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>>21314667
Don't you enjoy the taboo?

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>>21314848
You take him at his fucking word?

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>>21314860
I mean if I could fuck PF I would.

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>>21314848
I'm unironically considering getting a Pekora cosplay but that isn't cheap because it'd have to be imported

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>>21314979
He'll talk a big game then chicken out and run at the last second, but not before sperging out about how embarrassed he is.

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>>21314984
Can't you just get a local bunnysuit from a girl, and get the rest of the ensemble tailored by a tailor? Save on the carrots by buying local as well.

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>>21315054
It needs to not have large breasts which bunny suits always do. Not to mention if I buy the real thing it will be real leather jacking the price way up

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>>21315051
Who said anything about consent?

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>>21315051
It's true desu. I wouldn't go to an IRL meet and fuck unless there was something in it for me othe than the sex. I guess in some, ways that makes a prostitute?

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>PF enablers suddenly come out of the woodwork once people stop believing a word he says
Hmm...

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>>21315356
Subjectionanon and I are the most active ones at this time of day. He just happens to be my biggest enabler by coincidence