/wg/ - Writing General - Pomu Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>19317658

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STORY ANCHOR
POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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>>19422367
more like dumb whore edition

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>>19422403
Kiara's lesbianism is a coping mechanism for the heartbreak she suffered at (You)r hands. She thinks she's done with men, and at the same time fantasizes about stealing (You)r new girlfriend Mori Calliope from you.
Watching (You) and Mori on dates, holding hands, displaying affection and sneaking kisses fills her with unimaginable despair and rage.

By the way, how many repeated requests is too many?

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>>19424046
This is just my personal opinion but generally when it gets to the point that fucking no one responds and just treats it like noise at the start of the thread like that fag that reposts a solid string of 5 really niche fetish prompts every month or that point in the thread's history where there was just a solid wall of reposted prompts at the start all specifically to try and start shit.
I won't shit on you for trying this, since there is actually history of reposting at the start actually working and getting picked up.

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>>19424046
>>19424545
i'll shit on you for being an ENfag though, kys fucking leeches

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>>19424545
Yeah that's what I assumed.
I still got replies last thread so I thought it'd be fine to repost it next thread.
Maybe I'll be coming back posting it once every 2 weeks or something

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>>19418788
She falls under the sweet spot of "JP only but has enough clips for EOPs to know how to write her". She has this special type of horniness that is more casual than the others and I like, or liked her for that. She makes me horny in ways Marine can't achieve.

>>19419492
Too slow for me I just wanted to jerk off desu but well, if it makes for a better pay off then I have no reason not to.

>>19420048
Anon...

>>19421326
For context I added that description because I deliberately used a title that was similar to a previous work of mine, Marine's curiosity. This passing thought in my head considered making this a reoccurring thing in which I take something a HoloMem has a deep interest about and turn it into smut about her exploring it, usually with (You), but I came to the conclusion that it would be dumb to not just keep on writing as normal and eventually that "prompt" would be satisfied anyway instead of forcing it.

>>19421373
Ye

>>19421803
I always wondered what the follow up of this pose would be like. Matsuri humping Fubuki's ass is pretty hot but that's only because I have futa in mind.

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>>19426899
It's true, I haven't really checked anything from Ui-Mama in a while and I haven't seen any good or recent lewds of hers that would spark my interest even if momentarily. Atm it's dead in the waters and one should not expect a sequel, but maybe Ui-Mama might do something so SEXU in the future that I go for it again. That being said, I feel as if I explored most of the content of Ui-Mama rape already and anything beyond it would be milking it.

I'm so fucking tired, I should go back to sleep...

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>>19427797
you should get a better sleeping schedule, is what

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>>19427797
>That being said, I feel as if I explored most of the content of Ui-Mama rape already and anything beyond it would be milking it.
I mean I agree with you in that you've throughly explored the Ui rape scenario but I think a potential sequel has storytelling space in exploring Ui after her rape correction. Something like Ui hungering for cock after it and willingly going back for another round, or dragging subaru in to it, etc.

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>>19427900
Over my dead body, which might happen soon at this rate. I'm the most creative and horny late at night between 10PM and 7AM.

>>19428171
Right, it's rape correction... Eh, I think that corruption scenarios are effectively just butchering a character so I don't do them often. I'd love to write Subaru though, but I don't have the slightest handle on her personality beyond the outdated generic tomboy view.

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>>19427797
>Anon...
what
i did cum again btw

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>>19428245
Is it that bad to butcher a character? Fanfiction is all about taking an existing template and exploring it as suits your fancy.

Unless it doesn't suit your fancy, of course

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>>19428374
Pretty sure there's a whole other thread about butchering characters.

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>>19428550
Hah. Nice one. Not what I meant, though.

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>>19422378
https://sys.4channel.org/derefer?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2Fe%2F2PACX-1vRwEXLEX2Qwtde9lV3QKxXf5-rjQIF1AlGaTELRm09YPEydku6_s3iexRiRMil3_F9dGAZHBUtHPN-V%2Fpub

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>>19422378
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRwEXLEX2Qwtde9lV3QKxXf5-rjQIF1AlGaTELRm09YPEydku6_s3iexRiRMil3_F9dGAZHBUtHPN-V/pub

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>>19428288
Good, then all is forgiven. Cum to the cum god.

>>19428374
I just generally find it hard not to make it bland. Corruption through gaslighting for example would take years, but you don't have enough time to develop such a thing in a story. Corruption through mind break, then mind break itself is boring because it's distasteful and bland (+ not my fetish), corruption through Stockholm Syndrome is for abuse and very hard to pull off naturally. The list goes on.

Addressing the "bad to butcher a character", I have some pretty strong views on that as I have expressed before, but I think my most lenient or tolerant view on it is that so long as the character feels like themselves you can mess around with their traits like backstory and such. Like, one could make Marine a hard ass pirate that commands her crew with an iron fist and hangs the guts of her victims on the mast of the ship, so long as you have her masturbating several times in a row in her private quarters once the crew is asleep, for example.

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>>19428656
(Not saying it's impossible to do good corruption, but I'm saying that a thread posted story does not have the necessary length to pull it off, no matter how good a writer you are. It's all about build up with this genre)

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>>19428634
You only have to post it once dude. It'll get archived whenever AA wakes up.

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>>19428656
>Corruption through mind break, then mind break itself is boring because it's distasteful and bland
isn't that exactly what happened in bunny trap???

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>>19428929
That was a commissioned fic.

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>>19428974
ah i see
lol, lowkey insulting the commissioner there

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>>19428929
Eh. Kind of? Again, I say that it's not impossible to do it well, so long as I have the necessary amount of words to work with, which I did. If I were to do a corruption fic I'd definitely start with rape and climb my way into roping her friends into joining her though, which fits the Ui-Mama which makes it hard to make sense of this...

It's not really a diss >>19429094 I just said to my commissioner that I instinctively start with rape but that wasn't really asked of me so I changed it. And then again, I made that with my own fetishes so naturally it wouldn't be bad in my eyes.

Perhaps I'm just speaking nonsense. I'm sure I enjoy corruption here and there, even mind break, it just needs to be done right is all. I don't think that's an unreasonable thing to say.

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>>19428837
I think a series has the necessary length in order to show off the slow fall into corruption. But I think a thread posted story would be able to present a sexual corruption story if it was less one continous scene and more like 'short slices' into the process. The writing equivalent of those corruption sequence pictures where the progression/descent tells the story... though thinking about it more I'm reasonably sure that's basically like a series of greentexts that gradually show the fall into corruption since it basically summarizes the fall rather than fully showing it.

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>>19429299
It isn't an unreasonable thing to say. I didn't take it as a diss, either. I strongly believe that if you're going to radically change a character's attitudes towards something - in this example, Pekora's attitude towards sex - then it needs to start small and build from there if you want to keep it organic.

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>>19429466
>if you want to keep it organic.
what does this mean?
also that's pretty forgiving of you, i wouldn't take that shit if the dude i was payrolling turned around and said my interests were distasteful

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>>19429602
It means believable, in this context.
I don't think he meant any harm.

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>>19429602
NTA, but I think they meant keep immersion by making sure characters acting OOC is foreshadowed/justified within the context so that the reader never has a X would never do this moment.

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>>19429704
Exactly this.

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>>19429466
Yeah that's were rape comes in. Technically rape but not rape rape I mean. The reason Pekora developed too quickly was because of the feel good from the get go stuff. I don't think I'm good enough to pull off defiance whilst still having the girl orgasming to the point of passing out, or so I think because people seemed to enjoy it all the same. But the alternative is mentally scaring her. Again, these are two extremes ONLY because I'm not a good writer in this genre.

Man, it's hard to collect my thoughts rn but my sleepiness is completely gone

>>19429602
I'm pretty sure he knows I mean no ill intent, but just in case, there's nothing he asked me to do that isn't something I'd usually not do by myself. It just means it's not my area of expertise, so I pull it off poorly and generally have biased views on them due to that. For example maggot birthing. Is it my fetish? Nah. Am I disgusted by it or by people who have said fetish? Not really. Would I have ever written it if he didn't commission me? Fuck yes, remember that Korone maggot prompt? I was going to write that.

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>>19429686
>>19429704
gotcha, thanks for explaining it to my dumb ESL ass
also not trying to cause any bad blood, my last post sounds pretty shitposty, i thought bunny trap was great and you guys do you guys

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>>19429831
And to expand on this, when I say distasteful what I mean is that a lot of hentai do it cheaply and completely fuck it up, the genre is over saturated with cheap corruption which soils the genre as a whole. But I jerked off to some great corruption tentacle doujins like 2 days ago.

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>>19429831
>remember that Korone maggot prompt? I was going to write that.
Dogmaggots? I actually thought you were the prompt maker.
I really wish I saved that story before the author went nuclear, god damn it.

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>>19429943
Well yes it was my prompt, but as most of my other prompts I never expected someone to pick it up since it wasn't Fubuki so I was going to write it myself. And honestly WeirdAnon's version of it didn't do anything for me at all, not to speak ill of him now that he is gone, but it's completely unlike what I wanted from it. If I didn't have such a strong opinion on two people taking the same prompt, maybe I would have still written it.

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>>19422403
Legally marying gonkisei! Satisfy all of their sexual needs

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>>19427797
>I always wondered what the follow up of this pose would be like.
I imagine Matsuri is breathing in hard so that catch her breath for what she's going to do next.
Which would be actively breathing that Fubuki scent, moving her hands to feel all of Fubuki's body, all the while seeing what bits of Friend's clothes she can take off while she isn't fighting back.

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>>19430036
>If I didn't have such a strong opinion on two people taking the same prompt
Is it two people taking the same prompt inevitably invites comparison?

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>>19370708

How you say? Haachama Everywhere System engaged. No matter where you go she's lingering in the weirdest places. Mostly harmless but she just keeps fucking showing up as an obsessed stalker. Probably kills the horror and leans into humor with her in various costumes and disguises and shit.

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Has anyone picked up any of the prompts from the archives? How would anyone know if anyone has written them?

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>>19430435
Anecdotally, I've made up to 50 prompts and... 2 of them got done. So I wouldn't count on prompt delivery too often. It's pretty sad to "write it yourself" but I find it that when stepping on shit it's best not to walk slowly and just get it over with.

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>>19430435
Honestly it's a prompt archive, not a request board. It's intended purpose is to spark ideas for anyone looking for one.
As for knowing if a prompt in the archive has already been fullfilled... Well the archive is still reasonably small enough that you can find a fic by the assumed tags. Besides there isn't exactly much stigma in picking up a prompt and giving it your own spin so it's not like it matters if the story already exists, it would very much be a "holy shit two cakes" situation.

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>>19422403
It's been a week or so but I still wish for Okayu to bully my dick

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>>19431027
A week since what?
But also same.

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>>19431300
Since I last noted that I want Okayu to bully my dick

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>>19431300
>>19430197
>>19429943
>>19429834
>>19429602
Cute ESL. You should write a story

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>>19431489
Do you actually think those are all the same person?

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>>19431802
He's just shitposting Anon. Leave him be.

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An old community that I was a part of found out about the Rabbit Hole story that I did. Starting to get harassed again. Guess I won't do a follow-up on that one.

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Stand up for GOD in the land of the fire
Bring on the madness you're born to destroy
Beyond the trail of Tartarean riders
ARMATA STRIGOI!

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>>19433167
Why do you care about anonymous fuckwits have to say?

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>>19433375
I guess I'm more hurt about the fact that the same people used to like me when I was still in the vogue. Now it feels like anything that I do faces some sort of scrutiny, regardless of context.

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>>19422403
Write about how your oshi would handle feeling jealous over you speaking to another woman in less than 500 words

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>>19433518
She wouldn't care. That's it.

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>>19422403
Waking up in the morning next to Shion with no memory of the night before

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>>19435361
uoh

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>>19433444
What did you do?

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>>19437171
your mother

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>>19430373
Yes. Perhaps it's just a result of me being bitter or jealous of others success, or something like that, but I am very much so against the two cakes analogy. The world isn't so black and white and I've seen a writer here bring up his shortcomings on a prompt done twice for like 7 months before going radio silent. I think having someone doing better than you despite you putting in your full effort into it is pretty hurtful to your self esteem and this doesn't only apply to writing.

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Seen my first dream involving VTubers, and it had some R-18 content
I guess I am beyond saving now

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>>19439940
Who did you dream about?

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>>19440081
Ayame
It was a dungeon where everyone was presented with a distinct lack of clothes. (Don't remember the others, but I have associated their poses with all the Hololive R-18 art I was browsing before. Not specific images, just a connection). I had a feeling it had "look but not touch" rules, but Ayame for some reason initiated and I reciprocated. It happened 2-3 times more, as some sort of flashbacks, all in the same way and without any distinct feeling.
Also somehow I was "cheating" on her with presumably Fubuki which Ayame somehow could read in my status, like in a video game, although no scene of cheating itself.
It was pretty bizzarre.

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>>19440081
NTA, but I had one too.

I was going to college while sharing an apartment with Suisei, Iofi, Sora, and another brown-haired holo(Mumei I think?). It wasn't particularly exciting, and it jumped around a lot, but the highlight was I fucked Suisei on the kitchen table and afterwards when she went to clean herself up Iofi came in and demanded I do the same to her. I woke up when she kissed me though.

I really only watch Suisei out of them all.

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>>19440715
Would you say it was a bizarre adventure

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>>19440824
That sounds super, especially the Suisei part. I wish I could dream about her in any capacity.

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>>19440081
NTA but I dreamed about impregnating Polka while in an abandoned house once

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>>19430435
I’ve written a couple of stories based on some prompts in that archive. I go there whenever my inspiration is running low.

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Damn you guys are lucky. The most I've managed is a dream featuring Gura singing at the foot of my bed while I went to sleep. She's not even my kamioshi.

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>>19440081
I really want to have a dream of a vtuber... Or at the very least remember one.

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>>19441120
Thinking about it now, yeah it was hot, but dream me was mainly worried about how awkward living living together would be while being too autistic to say no

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Vtuber sex dreams are fun, I had one where I was playing dungeons and dragons with Mori but then Walter White burst in looking for the money I owed him. I ran away and met Doug Dimmadome and he let me stay in one of his safehouses because I beat him in a game of poker. When I arrived IRyS was also hiding out there but the safe house was only the size of a closet so we were squeezed in super close and we fucked.

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>>19440824
Sounds way better than mine

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I mentioned this in a vtuber dream thread a while back but my latest chuuba dream involved Lamy riding a motorbike with me sitting behind her as the pillion. She started going really fucking fast and I suddenly felt like anal so I started rubbing my dick against her leggings as she continued to speed up. Woke up with cum everywhere. I mean I do own a motorbike but...
I know I’ve had other chuuba dreams but they’ve faded from memory. Wish I wrote them down.

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>>19442695
Anal with Wamy sounds fantastic...

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>>19442784
Very roundabout way of getting there though.

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Y'all's stories reignited my interest/obsession with lucid dreaming
If I can pull myself together and achieve consistent lucid dreams, I will try to implement some of the stories written here and see where I end up

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>>19440081
I had one where I was trying to explain to Luna what Yoohoo was.

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>>19442914
True but I would crawl through a mile of broken glass to feel my cock sliding into her fat asscheecks and past her sphincter if I had the chance, now that's roundabout.

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I had a dream recently where I was dating Fubuki but while she was distracted by the surprise party I'd set up in our home for her birthday, I snuck away to fuck Marine in the bathroom.
Captcha: VTJAP

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>>19440081
My most recent chuuba dream was of Anya of all people. Somehow, some way, she wormed herself into it. I think she was just adding commentary onto what was happening in the dream, the most notable event of which I remember is being in the car with my grandpa and he was drifting around dirt roads like a professional.

I've had many dreams of chuubas but recently I've been dreaming of 4Chan from spending too much time here too. It's really annoying. I click on a thread and see comments, actual comments with words in them but the further I read the less sense it makes so I realize it's a dream. But most recently I got tricked 4 times into waking up to the same comment thinking it was real.

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>>19444188
Based. Marine is a good friend, draining the first cum shot out of you so you'll be more resistant to cumming when you fuck Fubuki's brains out. Honestly that could be a good NTR story for those who want to be the one cucking rather than vice versa.

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>>19444322
I like how this dream implies Anya was streaming your life.

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>>19444641
>chuuba's disembodied voice providing running commentary of your daily life
could be interesting

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>>19444641
>The Anya Parable

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>>19444844
>"Don't you have any copyright-free music to listen to?"
>"You are a voice inside my head, and I will listen to whatever the fuck I want."
>"You're gonna get me stricken again."
>"...'again'?"

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>>19440715
Ayame dating her customer and getting jealous sounds like a decent base for a fic.

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>>19445551
A lazy whore is a jealous whore.

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>>19422403
We need more enemies to lovers stories

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>>19446145
There's a genuine lack of common trope fics like enemies to lovers and such, I wonder why.

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>>19446265
If I really had to guess it's because no one wants to make something tropey. Either they see it as below them or they're worried they're going to fuck up the execution of a basic concept, one or the other.

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>>19446265
Writing series is hard. It requires planning, and commitment, and even then if it goes smoothly on your end as a writer, nothing says some board drama/chuuba incident/just real life won't take the wind out of your sails.

So must people write oneshots. But writing oneshots with structural nuance is very hard. So in order to get good content out quickly, most people prefer to center their oneshots around a single set piece (usually involving a chuuba's vagina and the penetration thereof), rather than around a particular development.

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>>19446265
To give a theory I have.
I think it's because the thread started at niche abuse then slowly overtime is catching up to the common tropes.

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>>19446468
>must people
MOST people. Jeez.

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>>19422403
Wouldn't mind seeing what sort of story this picture would generate.

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>>19446468
I guess there is also something to be said of the fact that the series here tend to require a bit more effort to setup compared to other fandoms that already have the setting of the world they want to write their fic in already pre built and established.
While the closest thing to that here would be the vague idea of "Japan, (You) work for cover for some reason. The girls look like their avatars, don't think too hard about it".

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>>19422378
Separating this part in two because Elden Ring has taken up a lot free time but it ends on a nice cliffhanger so it's not too bad. Turns out I don't have the drawing of pregnant FBK saved.

Tags: NSFW, Fubuki, Nursing Handjob, Lactation, Pregnant, Feet

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRsjd7holXK8PTcoFD2T1__NGWFuISdh8KiP-R3O0YcwSDYlI5MAI2ZDiCami6Vuf7a2Y7Dykhzpgjt/pub

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>>19447311
This fic continues to have the best goddamn fetishes. Holy fuck that nursing handjob scene, and that Fubuki monologue before it.
Also I'm confused. Is koyori a hag?

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>>19447162
Yeah, while writing Hololive Subjection I’ve stalled the hardest on world building… I like to think I’m not particularly irony poisoned at all but even then coming up with something that doesn’t make me cringe has been hard.

>>19447311
>those fucking tags
>single handed saving the archive with lactation preggo sex
You dropped your crown, king. And by crown I mean the one pregnant Fubuki picture I’ve ever seen.

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>>19447311
> A feeling of warmth overwhelms you from inside. You want to be coddled by Fubuki; to be entirely dependent on her. Tears start to well in your eyes so you bury your head in her chest. Fubuki pats your head. In a soft motherly voice she says, “Now, now. Don’t get upset. Mommy’s here for you.”

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>>19447311
I... I kneel, Anon... These tags will be the end of me. You singlehandedly made my night. Thank you.

>>19448629
>Hololive Subjection
Oh hey, good to see you around still, friend. Not that I mean to pressure you, but is there hope for an update soon? I eally love your work so far and would really like to read more!

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>>19447311
You're insane, you know that? The propagator of a renaissance of lovey fluffy sex

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>>19448605
yeah it surprised me when I found out too
>>19448629
There it is, thanks that pic will come in handy
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>>19448955
>>19448976
glad you enjoyed it!

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Bump

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I know shit all about guns, so should I just make up my own firearms for my story? Or do some research and try to gunfag?

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>>19447162
NTA but I've had a story of a fantasy style adventure with Mio floating around in my head for like a year now, got a few paragraphs in but then it stalled. Not because of world building, that's easy for me, but for putting Mio into it, since she's clearly a modern day person at the core, even if I'm leaning into the mystical wolf girl aspect of it, and I hate writing shit out-of-character.
I know it's fanfics, but I don't want it to be *bad* fanfic.

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>>19453763
Do some basic research. Don't be like Kiara who thought you can reuse bullets.

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>>19453763
Depends on the setting. You could make some alt history breechloading shit or futuristic nonsense rifles. Modern day you should do some very basic research on what is what for a gun.

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>>19453763
Research. It'll add nuance for people that don't know and credibility for those that do.

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>>19447311
I love you anon

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>>19454057
if you love him so much you should impregnate him

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>>19453864
>Don't be like Kiara who thought you can reuse bullets.
Don’t worry, I’m not that clueless (that is funny though). I know how the firing pin and the primer all work to propel bullets and whatnot, I just don’t know the complicated stuff. It’s more a question of whether I should make up my own guns and calibers or be realistic. I feel like if I used real guns I’d end up getting some of the details wrong.
>>19453892
I’m thinking of setting it in the very early 1900s, a time when self-loading pistols are starting to become a thing. There’s also magic involved though so I guess I could use that as an excuse for a divergence.
>>19453918
Yeah, alright. I’ll probably try not to go too wild in that case.

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>>19454926
>There’s also magic involved though so I guess I could use that as an excuse for a divergence
All the guns are actually just bullet wands, every cartridge just has a bit of solid magic at the back that propels the bullet when willed, with the gun acting enhance and direct the bullet.

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>>19453820
What about having Mio be the one that has been isekaied into the fantasy world with (You) being her Fantasy world first boy that helps her in her quest.
Let's you keep both the fantasy setting and let's you have current day Mio characterization.

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>>19456585
Ehh, I wouldn't go that far, the basic principles of firearms will probably stay the same with the exception of enchanted bullets or something. To be honest the main reason why I'm considering doing my own thing is because I want a revolver that's chambered in a caliber that's ridiculously large, but every revolver cartridge in the early 1900s was too small.

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>a particularly harsh winter leaves a weakened Fauna in dire need of life energy (read: semen)
>a hunter is searching for the cause of a series of disappearances in the forest, accusing the nature guardian of being the cause
>unable to prove her innocence and with little other choice, Fauna offers to do some quid pro quo
This isn't a prompt, because I want to do something with it. With that said, are there any extremely obvious issues with this that should be fixed before committing?

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>>19459372
Depends on if you want to introduce the Nemu lore from that video she did introducing her mascot.

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I finished my chuuba military brat story but I'm waiting for them to read it before publishing it

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>>19459570
Please utilize Vtuber images when posting from now on.

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>>19459726
NTA, but suck my dick.

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>>19459726
No

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>>19459726

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>>19459372
>extremely obvious issues
I would be absolutely remiss if I didn't get this out of the way first - Fauna really shouldn't shave her pussy or armpits. Also, the sex should end in pregnancy.

With that said, nothing really jumps out at me, lorewise? Maybe >>19459509 but I can count on one hand anybody remembered a chuuba's mascot creature in the 700+ stories on the archive. Even Selen and Elira, who literally have their mascots as rigged parts of their model, don't really get much reference to them in the few Niji stories we have.

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Extra spicy Kainen sex
https://ehsex dot blogspot.com/2022/03/not-quite-basic-training.html

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>>19461014
I mean it was more in reference to the lore from that mascot introduction video where it's implied Fauna seized the position of guardian of nature from Nemu through the use of her golden apples.

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>>19454475
I will

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I bet if y'all actually went through a real child birth you wouldn't be fetishizing this stuff

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> Matsuri's Curiousity
AA? You can just copy paste the title to avoid misspelling ya know? Or is this some Br*tish English thing?

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>>19461014
>Fauna really shouldn't shave her pussy or armpits
I didn't even think about it before, but if there's going to be anything about hairiness, it's going to be about shaving it off. Not as a monkey's paw, but because it would better fit the theme.

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>>19463222
Nah, it's not a *proper* English thing, he just made a typo

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>>19457478
I actually had a spark while I was writing that previous statement.
Mio is eternal, and the world has moved on, post-apocalyptic fantasy

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>>19463011
So do you mean like, it's impossible to go through birth and sexually fetishize pregnancy, or it's impossible to witness a birth and sexually fetishize pregnancy?

Because I know the former is wrong unless multiple women I've talked to were literally insane, and I know the latter is wrong from personal experience.

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>>19463561
>>19463222
Yeah, I added it right after I woke up, whoops.

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>>19463495
>Shaving Fauna's pits and pubes to turn her into a proper woman
>Then taming mother nature with your cock to make her yours.
Holy based.

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>>19463495
>>19464009

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>>19447311
This fic just made me cum on my face (by accident)

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gotta say, out of all the civil-war arcs these threads have gone through, shaved vs. unshaved is probably the weirdest

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>>19464921
The shaved vs unshaved debate only exists when two different countries with two different climates collide in a single place. It's not a discussion you'll easily get out of someone who lives near you.

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>>19464921
I have strong opinions on the issue! That said, anons have the right to say they like their women to look like little girls down there. I think it indicates awful taste, but certainly people have the right to awful taste.

Now, pregnant vs not pregnant? That's a life or death issue.

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>>19465489
I think that if a normal person would call you a freak for your tastes, then you're undoubtedly in the wrong. Fetishizing pubic hair falls under that, pregnancy much more so

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>>19465653
'Normal' people supported lobotomy in the 50s and still support infant circumcision today. You'll forgive me if I don't give a shit about the opinions of normalfags. Particularly not bizarre, clearly manufactured ones like 'women should look like they haven't gone through puberty' or 'women should not have children'.

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>>19465896
Americans don't fall under normal people anon.

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>>19465653
>in the wrong.
>for a fetish
kill yourself

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>>19466238
I think if someone likes fucking dead children they can be in the wrong

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>>19466334
Don't kinkshame.

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>>19466334
no they can't, faggot, as long as it's kept in fiction

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>>19466422
You really think the guy wouldn't suck on some pregnant women's milkers if given the chance?

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>>19464313
Which part?

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>>19461014
Look man I thought you were based at first but you're getting annoying. I'm not against unshaved girls but not every prompt has to have one.

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>>19466713
are you being facetious or legitimately stupid?

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>>19463613
>1900s technology
>Post Apocalyptic Fantasy World with technology mixed with magic
>Eternal person from before the apocalypse
Isn't this just arknights

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>>19466843
Please forgive me, I have autism.

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>>19467135
Uh, >>19463613 and >>19454926 are different people. I'm >>19454926 and have only ever heard of arknights once before, never played it.

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>>19467230
You are forgiven

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>>19447311
Absolutely top tier stuff and I can't wait for Koyori to get involved in the next part, however I just wanted to point out that in paragraph 24 "while Fubuki strokes your air" there's a small spelling mistake (should be "hair" at the end).

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>>19467135
Its a Dark Towerreference

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>>19469918
>the series that convinced the world Stephen King is a pseud

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>>19469985
Yeah, you can't really recover after literally inserting yourself in the story.
Still, as abstract as those last few books get they still got good moments.

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>>19469809
Thanks for the pointing out the spelling mistake. I fixed it.
>>19469985
Wish King died of a crack overdose

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>>19422378
You huff into your hands to warm them up, then rub them together to ward off the cold. Each puff of air of yours leaves a hot mist in front of you, this weather was truly rough. Coming out so late at night was a bad idea. You nervously check your phone to see the time. 2:37AM. She's late. Fuck this, you knew it was a catfish, you weren't risking going to jail for-

"Well, howdy pard'ner. I take it you're CNYLover208?" A small girl calls out from behind you with a southern accent.

You slowly turn around, expecting the police to be pointing guns at you, but there was no one but her. A tiny little girl with a shark tail, white hair and flat chest standing at a whopping 1,40cm in height.

"Well, are ya? You gotta open yer mouth to speak ya know?"

"Uh... what if I am?"

"Ah, I see what's goin' on 'ere. You think this is some sort of ruse don'cha? Well I guarantee you this cowboy is one hundred percent alone. No need to fear!" She gave you a warm smile with her sharp teeth.

"I'm guessin' it's yer first time doin' something like this, so I can see why you're worried. But fret not, Gura is here to help ya!" So her name was Gura. Totally unlike her username, OceanCowboy69.

She stepped towards you innocently, you took a step back in return. She looked at you funny and cracked a smile at the gesture. Then she stopped, right in front of you. Her body was so small her head was barely above your groin whilst standing up. She then raised her tiny little hand up to yours as if to invite you.

"Well, shall we?" And with a gentleman-like voice, she asked you to hold her hand. You gulped, and hesitantly took it.

"First, let's get outta this cold. I can see ye shaking in yer boots from 'ere." She chuckled.

Gura then guided you to a place down the dark alley, a sketchy heavy iron door under a blinking light. Despite her size, she managed to pull the at least 200 kg door with one hand rather easily. She just looked at you and smiled, beckoning you to go inside first.

Inside was rather cozy, it was some sort of bar, though it seemed empty or abandoned even. Despite it, everything seemed in working order, even the heater.

Gura walked up to the drinks behind counter and grabbed herself a bottle of whiskey.

"Ya want some?" You shook your head.

"Ah well, more for me." She then popped the cap, poured herself a glass and downed it in an instant.

"Whew, that hits the spot. Nothin' like a hard drink to warm ya up in the cold season." She poured another glass with even more whiskey and downed it once more, this time a shiver went up her spine prompting her to make a "brr" noise and smack her tail on the ground.

"Alrighty, that's enough of that. All warmed up!" She made a popping sound with her lips when saying "up".

"So here's the deal, mister. You're gonna get on that couch, and then we're gonna fuck. Pretty~ - simple, right?"

You just stood there in silence, still unsure if you were being set up. Surely not right? They wouldn't make a child drink alcohol for a sting? You had to make sure. You walked towards the counter and grabbed the bottle.

"Heyo~ ya listenin' to me? Guess yer thirsty but geez, at least say somethin'." You took a swig directly out of the bottle. Yup, that was definitely alcohol, stronger than what you were expecting too, you almost spat it all out.

Okay, so it was established this was not a police sting. That's good. You looked over to the little girl right next to you, scantily dressed in only a blue hoodie giving you a worried look.

"I don't mean ta insult ya or anythin', but do ya have brain damage perhaps? Empty noggin' or somethin'?"

You sighed and closed your eyes, making up your mind. As soon as Gura opened up her mouth to say something, you grabbed her with both hands manhandling her over to the leather couch in the bar's corner.

"Woah there pard'ner! That's more like it!" She seemed very into it letting herself be carried.

"Let's get this party started!" Gura then eagerly took off her hoodie and dropped it to the ground, revealing her incredibly petite naked body underneath it, pale soft skin, a couple of gills and scars, but you did not mind. Her ribs were peeking through her chest, but she did not seem to be malnourished, given that her hips were large, plump and curvy. She had no breasts though, poor girl. However, given your tastes, that only made it hotter.

"Ya know the deal, fill me up reallll~ good and make sure to really pound me hard! Don't worry about hurtin' me, this cowboy isn't in her first rodeo!" She gave you a smirk and a wink, laying down onto the couch.

You knew what you had to do. She made that very clear when you first talked to her online. Meet her up in the morning, go with her to her secret spot and then treat her like a toy, fuck her without restraint. She said she had a massive fetish for having her tiny body being dominated and played with, that kinda stuff. It seemed too good to be true at first, but it was actually happening.

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>>19470931
There better be more, anon!

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>>19471048
Nope, no more. I'm done for tonight.

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>>19471091

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>>19469918
Oh, I’ve actually just started reading King’s dark tower series.

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>>19471048
I'm still... considering it. I wasn't sure if I even wanted to do this idea. I think given that she has an accent I should've made this in google docs to make sure I get to correct it, but then I probably wouldn't finish it.

I knew I wanted to do Gura because for some reason NO ONE does smut of her here, but I'm assuming there's a reason for that and that's assumedly poor reception to cunny works

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>>19471228
>poor reception to cunny works
What.
Literally most people here would love to get more cunny smut.

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>>19471501
Well, I remember very clearly the first time I tried cunny with Laplus and it got like 1 (You) and I think someone said cunny doesn't translate into writing, so I left it at that.

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>>19471228
That's fair.
Literally most people here hate cunny and would prefer pedophilia doesn't exist.

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>>19471596
You'd need to emphasis the size difference essentially, that's about the best thing you can do - and it's still hot.

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>>19470931
Honestly I find the accent a bit too thick in terms of her character but otherwise I think this seems like it's going to be good.

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ANOTHER yab. Expect the board to pick up speed once again.

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>>19473961
Doesn't seem to be as apocalyptic at least

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>>19473961
So... Who wants to write the yab ritual this time?
Nene ryona does seems appropriate this time.

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>>19473961
It's not that bad desu

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>>19474833
>literally tracing artworks into your own likeness and selling them for a profit
it sounds pretty fucking bad to me to be honest

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Well, bad news. I WAS writing the next part to this >>19470931 , but this motherfucking shitty ass garbage phone made by the Chinese completely froze up. Had to restart it and lost all that I wrote. So I'm not doing this shit anymore. God I fucking hate this thing, it's software is such a goddamn mess. And to make matters worse, I decided to just angrily finish my nut while waiting for it reboot and it was fucking trash so now I'm double pissed. Cunny lovers, this is not your day.

You can archive what I made, or don't. Doesn't matter. What I was writing wasn't coming out very good anyway so I doubt I'll pick it back up.

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>>19475179
That's why you gotta use docs, it'll automatically save your stuff.

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>>19475179
At least you can use all that money you're raking in to get a good fucking phone.

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>>19475323
Fuck no do you know how expensive good phones are in Brazil? Here's a hint: very. I would have to write at least 50K words to get a new phone. People here don't change phones until they forced to ie broken or stolen. I'm stuck with this piece of garbage for at least two more years before I drop it on the ground and break the touch screen or some shit.

>>19475310
Yeah I'm fucking pissed this might be the end of my thread posting.

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>>19475483
>I would have to write at least 50K words to get a new phone
Well, then. All the more motivation to start thinking of some filler.

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>>19475483
>this might be the end of my thread posting.
well at least something good came out of your phone being trash.

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>>19475572
Sounds like a good investment. Spend 2 months writing to spend it all on a new phone to avoid a 2 minute inconvenience and lose all my money.

Advice: don't buy a Xiaomi phone. The specs are not worth it. Fucking Chinese piece of shit. They probably are making it buggier because I'm insulting them in the first place but fuck them.

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>>19475745
nta are they really that bad? I got a redmi note 7 and it served me well past 2 years

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>>19475745
Kek. Yeah, Xiaomi phones are pretty bad. I went back to the Galaxy line, specifically the Note 10.

My little bro, who has sold phones for a living the past 6 years and is a ridiculous gadget head (replacing his phone every 6 months or so), actually went back to an iPhone a couple years ago and has been with them since. I've always scorned Apple products but after hearing that, I've been considering trying an iPhone out.

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>>19475745
>buying chink shit to begin with
Though it sounds like you had no choice.

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>>19470931
the good part when?

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>>19475760
Also NTA, but yes. Get a cheap moto if possible, Redmi are better, though. You ideally want a One+ if you're going chink shit.

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>>19475483
How much for 50k words of Towa sex?

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>>19477034
>How much for 50k words of Towa sex?

>anon pays the price
>he gets a txt file
>it's "Towa sex" repeated 25000 times

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>>19477069
I'd still wank to that

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>>19477034
50k words could net you a Towa sex story with a multi chapter series attached to it. Even my commissioned works I've been hitting a minimum of 6-7k words average, with the upper limit usually being 10k-ish words. Would probably be a fun writing task if the series was interesting enough too.

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>>19477316
>cumming on Towa's face and she tells you to tell it down

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>>19422403
haven't been to this general for almost a year, so not sure if someone has already posted a similar concept, but here's the prompt: your relative has passed away, and from them you inherited a large estate, when you arrive there, soon after another person shows up - a purple haired girl in a maid outfit who gives you a letter from your relative explaining that he hired her in case you decided to move in, to help you take care of the estate since it would be exhausting to do it alone. From there your life with this seemingly competent (?) maid begins.

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>>19479045
This, but the purple haired girl is Towa, believing she's being devilish by tricking you into thinking she's Aqua.
You realise this quickly, yet say nothing, and gaslight her into sex, "because that's what a good maid should do for her master".
Towa being Towa, she fails to use birth control, and winds up pregnant. The two of you have a shotgun wedding, Towa afraid that her genmates will look down on her.
On the day of the wedding, all of Hololive is there, congratulating Towa, and questioning how the two of you met. You're luckily both able to evade the questions, yet as the reception kicks into full swing, a short onion-haired girl approaches. She hands the two of you a letter, stamped with your uncle's seal.
Opening the letter, you skim it's contents, revealing that your uncle has hired this onion girl as a maid for your's and Towa's estate, since it would be exhausting for the two of you alone.
Thus begins your life with Towa, endlessly pregnant with your many children, whilst the seemingly competent (?) maid remains an ever present part of your family life.

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>>19479590
and also you're black with a 9" penis

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Someone should write a story about Marine fucking investors.

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>>19422403
A fic about getting a hug from your oshi of choice while she tells you good job and compliments you about how hard you worked after a long day.

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>>19480917
I got you buddy.
https://rentry.org/6rtyh

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>>19422403
All of these yabs made me think of a prompt.
(You) are a lead manager at Cover who assists every single talent with problems, and you have a variety of skills perfect for preventing yabs; essentially creating the best timeline. You prevent Aloe from being doxxed via muddling information/doxxing the doxxer himself, do a better job at protecting Coco from the chinks and convince her to stay by brute forcing her manager to ease restrictions (or just prevent the Taiwan yab in the first place), throw hands with the doujin author so Marine and Miko don't have to worry about him throwing a tantrum, tell Mori and Rushia to calm down and stop being fucking menheras which calms Mori down from the Connor yab but also effectively prevents Rushia from breaking NDA, convince Nene that her fans will love her drawings no matter what and that tracing is stupid, etc.
Along with this you also improve Cover overall by doing things like programming better 2D and 3D tech, getting rid of shit managers, securing more streaming/music cover rights (restoring all the old VODs from the holocaust in the process), etc.
You end up overworking yourself to the point of collapse, but all the girls appreciate your efforts and Cover actually gets known for being a yab-free and competent company.
Writing it all out really makes me wonder how they've made it this far, and these are only the recent yabs.

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>>19477189
Get help.

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>>19469918
Well i was thinking more along the lines of Nier, where civilisations were able to rise again and there wasn't a real link to the discernable past truth. But Dark Tower is definitely one of my favorite series, and the madcap magic in there would allow for more bullshit.

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>>19482791
So Mio would find herself in a hololive alternative style world where stuff that's familiar to someone from 'our' world is still present yet different and it's all hiding some dark truth about how the current world came to be.

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>>19482783
You telling me you want to help out? Like, you stroke, and I play with my balls?

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>>19482954
More like Mio is living throughout the rise and fall of civilizations, and the story would be taking place during a "medieval european" point in time.
You know what, I'll just post what i have started on when i get home. Maybe that'll get me started on it again. It's probably playing elden ring that has me bringing it up.

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>>19477034
This was an actual question, btw. How much?
Towa sex would be preferred, but I can pick a different topic if you'd rather.

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>>19484611
Perhaps you should send him an e-mail if you're interested, rather than clog the thread with personal commissions.

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>>19484611
Yeah just drop me an email. You can find it under one of my latest works, A Festival of Sensations.

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>>19485316
Anon... he's talking to pekofag.

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>>19485432
NTA but you aren't gonna get clients if you don't fight for them.

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>>19485558
Kek, true

[Anonymous No.]

Marine sex.

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>>19485432
Ah, that's my fault for assuming otherwise then. I'll just let the dude pick whoever he thinks is the best fit then.

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>>19485586
This, but Pekora

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>>19485836
Cheeky little blighter, aren't you.

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>>19479045
Honestly this prompt made me think two things. The first, "Wow have we seriously not had a (You) are Aqua's master fic"? The second, is wondering how many "low hanging fruits" like these exist that have apparently never crossed anyone's mind here. Only one I can think of right now is a fic where (You) are literally Haato's School Senpai or or (You) are Shion's rival in Magic school.

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>>19447311
Are you gonna include all the animal chuubas?

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>>19487256
Anon... How can you not notice that theme is the hag impregnation and not the animal ears.

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>>19488227
It can be two things. We still have at least 3 other animal hags to get through.

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>>19484611
Just shoot me an email pretty much. Bunny trap and Shrunken troubles both have it at the end.

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>>19489680
>Just shoot me
wish i could

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>>19490608
based

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>>19487070
>(You) are Shion's rival in Magic school
>She challenges you to a magic duel
>You punch her in the gut, throw her on the ground, and rape correct her
fuck w*zards, do not suffer a witch to live

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>>19490747
wish i could shoot you too, faggot

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>>19491061
Based.

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>>19489416
The series won't have Korone, Okayu, or Polka only because I don't see then in a sexual way.

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>>19491337
How you gonna say you don't find clussy sexy?

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>>19491337
I understand Korone. But Okayu and Polka?

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>>19491337

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>>19490608
With your hot cum?

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>>19422403
Removing Mori's tattoo with a potato peeler

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>>19491398
>>19491611
Haven't watched really watched Polka that much desu

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>>19492961
You don't have to watch her much to realize she's sex.

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>>19492961
I just can't accept that a man can't see this cat as sexy

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>>19495210
>>19496638
Guess I just have bad taste then.

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Okayu and Polka I understand, but Korone is a hag. How can you not see a hag as sexy? The only thing more arousing to me when I think of her than her hairy dog pussy, is the idea that she can start and hold an adult conversation. My god. Truly, hag erotic.

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>>19491337
>Okayu
Impossible

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>>19491045
>Leave Magic academy before anyone else finds out
>Pack Shion in your bag like she was luggage.
>Escape to the countryside where no one can find the two of you.
>Impregnate and raise a family with the rape corrected Shion.

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>>19498804
How can you not see Okayu as sexy? That webm about her tits popping out has done some bad things to me

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>>19502543
>How can you not see Okayu as sexy?
There's nothing sexy about a lazy woman.

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>>19504566
Choco...

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>>19491337
Nevermind I dont love you anymore anon

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>>19502543
My post was less about Okayu not being sexy (I like her) and more that the PD, PT has been all about HAG SEX so far, so omitting Korone struck me as odd. No accounting for taste, though.

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>>19504566
>There's nothing sexy about a lazy woman.

>Be (you)
>Lie in bed
>Feel someone hop into your bed.
>It's Okayu.
>She lets you pet her head, scratch her ears, hold her.
>She's only wearing your dress shirt.

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>>19422403
So a thread ago a guy floated an idea for an incest story with Mori as your useless alcoholic mom and Kiara as an eccentric wine aunt.

I liked it, and I’ve been sitting on the concept for a bit, but I just cannot find Mori that interesting after her constant self-doxxing.

Is there a similar Holo that can fill the role of a useless deadbeat mother with an obscene hag body, who you’ve been taking care of for years and years because she more or less abdicated all responsibility the second you hit puberty? Someone MILF enough to physically fill the role, but also insufferable enough to justify brutal, mutually-abusive incest impregnation hatesex?

I’m thinking, maybe, a particularly PTSD’d Botan, but I’m not sure.

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>>19505493
If you want to go the way of the rrat then korone would be a good choice.

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>>19505041
> then you gotta get up to clean the dishes because it's been there so long flies are buzzing around
> the shirt she's wearing hasn't been washed in weeks so it's unpleasant to stay around her, she says she likes the smell
> gotta cook for her too, she doesn't even get out of bed to get the table ready for you
> keeps bringing dead mice and pigeons home so you gotta throw them out all the time
> suspiciously smells of dog fur whenever you come back home, but you're not sure why

This is what an Okayu gf would be like. You wouldn't want this, would you?

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>>19505041
>>She's only wearing your dress shirt.
So, now I have to clean up my shirt from any furs, how is that sexy?

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>>19505642
> If she’s a fellow slob she’ll be fine with paper plates.
> Fuck me imagine the smell, next you’ll tell me she doesn’t shave thinking it doesn’t make her hotter. My God, the stench. Just fucking ponder it. I literally breathed in more deeply on this line.
>I’m into free use, I don’t mind her staying in bed as long as she spreads her legs on command
> My cats already do this all the time and they’re not cute anime girls
> Guaranteed Korone threesome

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>>19505743
That guy never had a cat to know how problematic it is to sleep next to cat fur. Even if you don't have allergies, if you stay around that long enough you'll start getting problems. Not to mention you have to wash your hands extra hard before eating or else you'll be eating cat fur. Really annoying.

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>>19505493
Coco, so now you’ve inherited a bit of fire resistance for your dick to survive in both her and Kiara

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>>19505642
Okayu is an excellent house guest and she always smells of lilac

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>>19506536
Made me think of that temperature play greentext that got posted last thread. Hot.

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>get big commission
>know what I want to write, and how the story to progress
>can't think of a good setting

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>>19508433
Maybe if you stop blogposting, it wil help you.

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>>19508433
What's the comm?

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>>19505940
Don't forget the heat cycles.

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>>19509161
segs

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>>19509319
Then just put it in any setting, doesn't need to be insane. Just imagine the environment and what you want to happen and go from there.
>>19505940

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>>19505942
>That guy never had a cat to know how problematic it is to sleep next to cat fur. Even if you don't have allergies, if you stay around that long enough you'll start getting problems. Not to mention you have to wash your hands extra hard before eating or else you'll be eating cat fur. Really annoying.
This. So much of this. I'm a cat person, but I know they're a hassle.

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>>19511704
People don’t own cats don’t know how life is with them.

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>>19513654
Cats are assholes. All cats should be shot on sight, including Okayu. Owners of cats are irresponsible, inconsiderate people.

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>>19509319
I think anyone writing smut and a story kind of faces this same dilemma at some point of whether they should focus on the story or the smut... Luckily you're commissioned and as such can absolutely just ask the other guy what they want from it.

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>>19515059
The answer's always the smut, btw

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>>19515028
Better than pitbull owners.

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>>19515443
Not better, on the same level.

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>>19483386
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRpA4Tp3NvqRb6Y2hCY7GjnuL-lL4ClXm-1oK_toH4g1NJ63zEj9ltBVPTVDvzgjxSh-s9FvS6GOEw6/pub

WIP post. I stopped writing because I wasn't sure where I wanted to take it, as discussed in the reply chain. I'm not really one for -just- SoL, but that's how my mind was heading (something like Spice and Wolf). When I'm writing I always want to do something heavier to the reader, so when the story like this doesn't feel like it's going to get a big enough payoff, then I get bored.

I'll keep playing Elden Ring and see if that brings up any more ideas, but veering into the Dark Tower might be more appropriate. Or just letting sleeping dogs lie and let it go, some stories just don't want to be written.

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>>19508433
Was it the Towa sex guy?

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>>19491045
INT vs STR build

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>>19506536
We need a dual orange women story desperately

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>>19518584
ORANGE WOMAN...SEXY
ORANGE WOMEN SEXIER

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>>19516975
The meeting and first few interactions with Mio felt a bit rushed and forced but other than it wasn’t bad. A little too short to say anything else about it but that’s because it’s a WIP so it can’t be helped.

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>>19515028
Personally, in my opinion, what I honestly think and this of course is only my take, is that cats are really bad for the environment. So long as you keep them inside so they don't literally drive millions of species into extinction, they are fine.

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>>19516975
It's interesting I'll give you that.
Since this is just a wip I'll reserve any judgement of the full thing but I will say that I would read through this if you make this a series since I like how it reads.
Though I can understand if you're not feeling it for writing this out since a series does require commitment to making it.

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>>19519514
Nah cats are cool.

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>>19520542
Low IQ opinion.

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>>19520999

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If you could spend the night cuddling with a vTuber, who would it be?

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>>19521573
Kanae

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>>19521573
Marine

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>>19521573
Aqua because she looks so damn huggable

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>>19515152
I mean obviously in a fic written for smut the smut is always the favored son there but given the context of a huge commission you kind of need the story to act as the glue holding it together since nonstop sexual action would both be difficult to write and would also not be that good in keeping the story together. Even a blatant harem sex series at least needs some context going between scenes.

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>>19521573
Watame

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>>19521573
One choice

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>>19521573
Sora because she is built for love and care.
Also Rushia.

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>>19522079
>Also Rushia.

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>>19521573
Migo. Every time she talks I get this intense, burning desire to hug her. That or Rosemi because she's too precious for this world.

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>>19521573
You're planning to write a monkey's pawed chuuba cuddling fic with this information right?

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>>19522705
>you cuddle with Okayu all night long, occasionally waking up from a very light, dreamy sleep to whisper sweet nothings into each other's ears
>then suddenly, 50 giant 8ft tall niggers burst into the room, breaking through the walls like the Kool-Aid Man!

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>>19522705
I would bet more "relatively inane question to speed up the thread right before the bump limit so he can make a new thread"

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>>19521573
Please don't make me think about it... no... it's already settling in... the mental image...

> coming home from work very late at night
> exhausted as fuck, can barely muster up the strength to take off your work clothes
> do it quietly as to not make any noise
> enter your bedroom, see her there, on the bed
> Watame, sound asleep
> she looks troubled by something, she's shivering
> turns out she left the window open, the room is cold
> tiptoe over to it and quietly slide it shut
> tuck her under the bedsheets and slide into bed with her
> her troubled expression turns to a warm smile
> you gently hug her, trying not to wake her up
> she ends up waking up anyway
> isn't mad, just says "welcome home"
> wraps her arms around you, bringing your body into her warm embrace
> her soft wool and fluffy blonde hair smell really nice
> her skin is so warm
> she begins to pet your head gently, softly carressing your hair
> she whispers a quiet lullaby into your ears until you eventually fall asleep

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>>19522840
>then suddenly, 8 giant 50 ft tall muscle dudes you'd see in your anatomy 101 book burst into the room, breaking through your entire city like the Kool-Aid Man!
>led by a giant skeletal spider-centipede thing with long hair

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>>19522705
it was just gonna be a question to stir you guys into thinking of fluff ideas, but then >>19522840 happened and thus was born this >>19523223

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>>19523285
Attack on Chuuba would still be a million times better than the dogshit copout ending SnK got. God, Isayama is such a fucking coward.

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>>19523223
>Then you wake up.
>Thank God, It was just a nightmare.
>Someone besides you stirs.
>She gives you a hug from behind
>You turn your head around.
>The moment you see her you recoil in shock and the both of you fall from the bed the two of you were in.
>You had just spent the night with (Insert chuuba you hate here).

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>>19523371
>Angry fandead starts the rumbling because his oshi got terminated
I'd read it.

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> I sure hope no Attack on Titan or Elden Rings spoilers are discussed in this threa

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>>19523568
Ardyn is the bad guy and Noctis dies at the end of the game.

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>>19522032
>"It's okay... I'm right here."
>You listen to Okayu's breaths as they become quieter... Quieter... and...
>Nothing.
>She wasn't even able to close her eyes and go to sleep.
>You closed her eyes and cried uncontrollably.
>The vet leaves you to grieve.

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>>19523568
>>19523753
The Notcis we could have gotten if XV was still Versus XIII picks a fight with Sora after they end up in Shibuya.

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You can say spoilers all you want I have a bum eye so I can just read the first word with that eye and hide the post if it sounds like the beginning of a spoiler

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>>19508433
Is this the Towa sex commission?

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>>19523933
>>19523988
And with these dubs, we shall commence the downfall of this thread.

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>>19523768
Why does Okayu get taken to the Vet and not the human doctors?

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>nighttime, finally some quiet
>try writing smut
>get so horny I can't even think
>jerk off to hags
>will to write porn fades in the afterglow
>play Age of Empires 2 instead, then go to sleep
I've been time-looping like this for over a week. Is there any way to break the cycle? I'm starting to think I might just not be cut out to write porn.

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>>19524041
The AU where the animal chuubas are your pets

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>>19437171
Pissed off an influential niche. They've been slandering me for over three years now because of that. I mean yeah, I could just continue doing what I enjoy but I hate the fact that everything I do gets screencapped and mocked elsewhere.

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>>19524058
I hear not blogposting helps.

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>>19523768
> hadn't cried for 8 years
> my dog I spent most of my life with was diagnosed with kidney failure
> hospitalized for 2 months
> everytime we go there to visit him, he gets better
> gets worse when we are away
> despite this, he has to stay in hospital
> one day his condition just gets too bad, kidney completely shut down
> receive the news, go there visit him to put him down
> completely neutral, hug him and as I start to say my goodbyes, suddenly burst into tears
> cry for hours
> different man afterwards

This brings back memories man... I miss him...

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>>19524102
Who the fuck cares about what they think. If it bothers you that much creating a new account to host fanfiction is free. Fucking no one can track you from your writing alone unless you use a consistent formatting in everything so a fresh start is always on the table.

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>>19524365
Children and teenagers.

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>>19524102
Pseudonym up.

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New thread
>>19524468

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>>19524421
He's got the pseud part down pat already

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>>19498804
>Korone is a hag

>Be (you)
>living with grandma or aunt Korone.
>you got rejected by your childhood friend Fubuki
>as you're crying in your room, Korone comes to you and gives her signature advice.

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>>19523768

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>>19524560
Oh yeah, I'm really pretentious for being upset over losing all my friends and respect that I've garnered over almost a decade of content creation.

Get fucked.

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>>19524739
4chan isn't a great fit for you. Sounds like you want tumblr instead.

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>>19524739
Look dude, I get it. That shit sucks. That's a nightmare scenario. But you can only let it affect you as much as you want to let it affect you. There's no getting revenge or any epic shit like that. All you an do is change names and move elsewhere; that's the greatest part of the internet. Jump from name to name, keep your head low, sprinkle what you want where you want and vanish into the night. The only one keeping you anchored to such feelings is you by letting schizophrenics run rampant in your head.

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>>19517472
>>19523988
No, it's not me. I haven't even thought of a solid idea for what I want beyond "Towa sex".

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>>19525055
I suggest rather than 50k words, you start with a smaller scenario with an open ending that leaves room for a sequel. 10k should satisfy. Planning a small story is much easier.

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>>19524739
looks like by losing your cool you've made yourself a target for the shitposters lurking here now. i suggest any future works you release here, if you DO decide to continue, don't tie them to rabbit hole or let on that you're the author of that fic at all or else they'll shit on you for fun

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>>19525055
Well you can start by saying what fetishes you want to include in it, what kind of sex, what positions. If the plot is entirely just Towa sex, one can still set up a scenario just by knowing these things. Can't guarantee you'll get 50K but a comfy 3-8K should be easy

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>>19524739
you know, if the so called "friends" and "respect" you've gained over the decade were lost just because of a single incident that assumedly was blown out of proportion by said community, do you really think that these are the people you want to continue to stick around with? And even if there are some good people in there, you're at the point where cutting your losses makes more sense and for you just to start anew

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>>19525190
Yeah 50k words is like enough room for romance and smut but you don't commision a smut writer for that kind of work.

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Bump

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Rape Luna