/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

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/wg/ - Writing General - Nina Edition Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:06:44 2022 No.16989953 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>16817455

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:07:15 2022 No.16989989 File: 1.74 MB, 1200x1768, __nina_kosaka_nijisanji_and_1_more_drawn_by_terupancake__550ac4bb65181d46e9ea652548f9085e.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] STORY ANCHOR POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:08:18 2022 No.16990036
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:39:37 2022 No.16991895 I'm horny, suggest me a fic to write

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:42:35 2022 No.16992056 >>16991895 Hidden (public) sex with Fubuki

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:43:19 2022 No.16992094 >>16991895 Don't tell me what to do

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:52:12 2022 No.16992659 >>16991895 Marine hypnosis

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:52:15 2022 No.16992662 >>16992056 the journey home was a good one, although more is always welcum

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:52:27 2022 No.16992672 >>16991895 Your wife Fubuki giving you a handjob while whispering in your ear about how much better the dude she was fucking a few hours ago is than you

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:52:45 2022 No.16992694 >>16991895 Watame and the blackening.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 00:59:43 2022 No.16993117 File: 913 KB, 1737x2820, 1642982898810.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16991895 Koyori dosing (You) with aphrodisiacs to help her deal with her heat

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:01:36 2022 No.16993227 >>16992672 You're probably shitposting but I would still love to read this idea. I think her cheeky personality is underutilized in smut.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:04:12 2022 No.16993375 >>16993227 I am not. I find kind, trusted partners performing gentle humiliation/denial play for a masochistic hubby's sake to be one of the hottest scenarios imaginable.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:06:40 2022 No.16993522 >>16993375 >gentle humiliation/denial play for a masochistic hubby's sake I, uhh, don't think fucking another guy then comparing you negatively to him during sex is gentle. Still want to read it, though.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:07:40 2022 No.16993586 >>16993522 I think the implication is that she's just pretending she fucked another guy as part of the roleplay.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:09:38 2022 No.16993731 >>16993117 PLEASE

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:09:41 2022 No.16993735 >>16993586 > lmao, sure thing bud

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:09:55 2022 No.16993750

>>16993522
>I, uhh, don't think fucking another guy then comparing you negatively to him during sex is gentle
You'd be surprised. This kind of thing seriously has to be specified in NTR circles because the comparatively harsh scenario (spitting, bitchy attitude, forcing the guy to slurp cum or crossdress like a faggot) is equally as common as what I enjoy.

>>16993586
No, I want her to cuck me. Gently, that is.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:19:16 2022 No.16994432 >>16993750 Based. I might write it but no promises since I haven't wrote anything in 2 months and it will be my first time writing NTR.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:22:37 2022 No.16994674 >more NTR For fuck's sake, I almost started believing the thread had begun to heal

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:22:57 2022 No.16994708 >>16993750 I stand corrected. You're just weird.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:23:18 2022 No.16994736 >>16994432 That's cool, dude, this is just a hobby thread. No pressure. WRITE IT PLEASE

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:23:49 2022 No.16994767 >>16994674 Door's over there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:26:00 2022 No.16994933 >>16994432 Ah damn, I was gonna write it but I guess there's no need

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:26:18 2022 No.16994957 >>16994432 there's a first time for everything heads up; you'll probably get schizos shitting themselves over it if you do

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:26:33 2022 No.16994977
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Mumei kidnaps you and forces you to breed with unwilling victims Bae and FBK to spawn more baebies and potential demigods as part of her very unethical scientific experiments.
I'd also love it if you can find a way to introduce Mumei's cannibal tendencies.
Eternally grateful to whoever decides to pick this up.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:26:49 2022 No.16994992 >>16994933 Why do you think two writers can't write the same prompt...?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:27:53 2022 No.16995070 >>16994992 Originality, clash of concepts, better cake than the other, etc. People may say "holy shit two cakes" but if some people eat more of one cake than the other, it's still gonna hurt the baker.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:28:09 2022 No.16995085

>>16994432
>first time writing NTR.
Please don't fall into the trap of just copying an NTR erodoujin's structure and hoping it works out. I've seen it happen 2 for 2 times in this thread already.
I don't want to discourage anyone but damn does the NTR from people writing it for the first time usually doesn't satisfy anyone either from the normal readers or the NTR enjoyers.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:29:08 2022 No.16995140 >>16995085 How do you think NTR should be written?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:29:33 2022 No.16995167 >>16995085 That's it, dude, pile up the standards. I'm sure that'll get writers interested.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:33:20 2022 No.16995420 >>16995085 don't worry, I've been jerking off to cuckold captions for writing reference and i got a pretty good handle on it

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:33:43 2022 No.16995436 >>16994767 Whatever you say, newfag.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:41:54 2022 No.16995989

>>16995085
>Please don't fall into the trap of just copying an NTR erodoujin's structure and hoping it works out
Eh, come on, I don't think that's at all the issue. Think more highly of the talent here. They're just not looking at the type of doujins that cater to our taste, unsurprising since it's uncommon amidst rapeshit and low-effort blackmail

>>16994432
Thanks, anon. It's really just an extension of femdom, with a lot of focus on the male being dominated rather than the megadicked uberchad.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 01:44:42 2022 No.16996196

>>16995140
With a focus on the emotional gutpunch such that it enhances the smut/other erotic elements present. Like how the erodoujins use it to make their art stand out more due to the cheapshot getting to your head.
>>16995420
>cuckold captions
Unironically that's probably the best material to use as inspiration for writing NTR due to the fact that it's also a medium focused on (You) being dominated and having masochistic feeling towards her/

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 02:26:19 2022 No.16998783

>>16995070
Nah I’m gonna stick by “holy shit two cakes”. I’ll always come back to Kintusgi and Dramatic Miopost as an example for this, because while it was two authors working on a single prompt and Kintsugi became much more loved, I still enjoyed writing DM and was happy with the reception it received. Seeing someone else’s different take on the same prompt was extremely interesting.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 02:41:50 2022 No.16999806

>>16981292
This is well written and good, but like the other anons have said I don’t think it’s necessary to pay homage to a schizo that shat up the threads. The cursed night was fine though, and I think a quick paragraph on the abuse thread roots that /wg/ came from could also be added.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 03:21:13 2022 No.17002516 Is the anon writing the fic of being Suisei's househusband done? What is the story called? I saw a couple of his posts a week or so ago.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 04:44:00 2022 No.17008366 File: 623 KB, 1216x719, BotanSmile.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16990036 A fic about Botan unexpectedly being called pretty for her age

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 04:55:45 2022 No.17009302 A series like interspecies reviewers except about fucking different vtubers instead https://twitter.com/HouDuKi_H/status/1485198777367822339?t=le0OlM3CFc_dEw1gS3dQ3g&s=19

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 04:58:32 2022 No.17009476 >>17009302 >chuuba brothels I'd read the fuck out of it

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:01:49 2022 No.17009713 >>17009302 i was just listening ti Hanabira Ondo thats a good idea

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:01:57 2022 No.17009725 >>17009302 As I said last thread the little voice called 'self respect' inside of every writer /here/ is the only thing keeping one of us from writing out a full series of trashy smut/haremshit.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:02:45 2022 No.17009784

>>17009302
> each gen is its own brothel
Ngl that sounds hot but impossible to write, no matter how good of a writer you are. For this to work, you need the variety, and for variety you need knowledge of EVERY SINGLE chuuba and how they would behave as brothel workers. It's a task beyond men.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:04:07 2022 No.17009864 >>17009725 Literally nobody cares what you said

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:06:53 2022 No.17010028 >>17009784 Sounds like good collab material though.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:29:30 2022 No.17011382 >>17009302 This has already been done to death in various greentexts, all of which very clearly have the author's fetishes projected only on the ones they like. Anyone trying to do it would immediately be shouted down for being biased.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:30:46 2022 No.17011448 >>17009725 I’m already writing a full series of trash haremshit though?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 05:44:32 2022 No.17012156 >>17011448 Is your series literally just dicking downs and build up towards the dicking downs?

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:03:56 2022 No.17013082

>>17009725
Only a feeble-minded peasant like yourself even thinks that's a good idea

Yes, I know what you said. You clearly think otherwise, though, because the rest of us who actually don't care for a series like that don't even think about it.

Although, just because it's haremshit doesn't make it bad, though it certainly is more likely to be; the smut is just a means to an end, and what's really important in ANY story is the context behind the events taking place

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:11:23 2022 No.17013430

>>16999806
I'll be honest, the inclusion of the faggot was because, whether for better or worse, he is history of this general. But I'll see what it can be changed to.

As for the origins of /wg/ and homages to some of the iconic works, I have this.

As grand and wonderful as the floating city of /wg/ is, it wasn't always this way. In the wild and barren plains of degeneracy, there lived a small tribe of barbarians whom thrived on abuse, on inflicting and receiving pain, living on the razor thin edge of their lives, be it physically and mentally. This tribe mainly kept to themselves, shunned by the more civilized nations as their almost ritualistic acts of giving and receiving pain was viewed as horrid and self emasculating.

However, on one faithful day, a certain tribe member received a vision. A vision that once made manifest, became a holy tome to the rest of the tribe, illuminating their hearts and lighting the fires of their souls. This vision, granted by a white fox goddess, was wonderful yet horrible, pleasurable yet painful, enlightening yet maddening. While other members had also been granted minor visions, none had their works were as influential as this one at the time. It's name was Omelas, a wonderful utopia in which happiness was eternal, with the only price being a single person suffering. And it was a turning point for the tribe, as the light of that creative work spurred them onwards, building, creating and dreaming of more wonderful visions made manifest. Such fervour did the tribe show that within a few moons, a whole city was built and many different works of wonder were created.

Thus, the city-state of /wg/ was born, as the once primitive tribe was now enlightened, seeking and pushing the boundaries of knowledge and wonderment which they had once tasted before. Some works have rivaled, or even eclipsed that of Omelas as of late. A fantasy world of lucky young boy and his powerful female companions, a high school life full of pranks and laughter, or yet another torturous life of loving someone whom your heart did not truly yearn, having it broken and patched up like gold-laced pottery. One could find many such stories within the almost labyrinthine shelves of The Archive. Such bedazzling wonderment did the city generated, that the people made the city float and fly, ever traversing across the archipelago of /vt/, giving, learning and above all, writing for the sake of themselves and for others.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:11:39 2022 No.17013440 Why are there so many self righteous weirdos about porn? Not everything has to have some grand story

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:13:02 2022 No.17013509 >>17013440 What?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:13:35 2022 No.17013535 >>17013440 I don't know. Why ARE you here? In any and every hobby forum there will always be elitism.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:14:35 2022 No.17013575 >>17013440 the oven too hot for you, sweetheart? maybe consider leaving it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:16:17 2022 No.17013645 >>17013440 >why does the thread about stories expect things to have a compelling story? Retard

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:17:11 2022 No.17013683 >>17013645 You shouldn't expect something to have a compelling story. You SHOULD expect people to put effort into it, at least

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:21:36 2022 No.17013868

>>16989989
Bahamas express.

I was struck by a bolt of inspiration to write this. For those who do read this let me know if you want a hag edition.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSVfSLwA4QtBq4yVZVltrPL3ih3Dr4vKoZC0DqiyUIpP6flj_3gwK-Orcm8EXagZbe9CxuxmAAvsxWu/pub

Tags: Mori, Okayu, Shion, Laplus, Comedy, NSFW

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:23:37 2022 No.17013955

>>17013430
As cool as the thought of a flying city is, we don't actually go anywhere. Aside from the occasional containment breach, what happens in /wg/ tends to stay in /wg/. The deserted-island idea some anon came up with months ago feels more apt to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:24:48 2022 No.17014002 Thread's dying, by the way.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:25:14 2022 No.17014023 >>17014002 We know, anon. Shut up.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:27:29 2022 No.17014128 >>17013955 The deserted island idea is what birthed the Pekofag, quite literally. Do you remember?

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:28:35 2022 No.17014180

>>17013430
This is worse and should've stopped by the third paragraph of the original post. You can give AA one blowie for maintaining the archive and that's it. No other post in that map thread bores the readers with an origin story that nobody outside of /wg/ cares about, because this is a map-making exercise, not a world history lecture.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:31:12 2022 No.17014306 >>17014128 I thought he was around before that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:35:21 2022 No.17014525 >>17014306 NTA but he is correct, that thought exercise was exactly what birthed the story. Like Lord of the Flies with faggotry instead of murder

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:36:53 2022 No.17014607 >>17013868 Good combination of humor and erotica, surprisingly fun read. I would support a hag edition

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:49:41 2022 No.17015248 >>17014525 I would ask how that anon who made the idea feels knowing he created PF, but I'm pretty sure he was one of the first to jerk off to them in that thread, so I guess pretty happy.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 06:54:19 2022 No.17015455

The isolated community of /wg/ occupies a small island in a remote corner of the world, inhabited by an eclectic band of authors, poets and scholars. The island, at least on paper, is neutral in all foreign affairs, taking no official stance on any major conflicts between the various empires of the world. Their primary concern is the creation, accumulation, and archival of written works.

Though they began as an isolated hedonistic cult, reviling in suffering inflicted upon both others and themselves, over the ages the more vicious elements of their culture began to ebb away, and today the nation stands as a mostly functional society of eccentric artsy types. But the darker side of human imagination never truly left that tiny island, and morbid tales of pain and abuse continue to find their way into the archives to this very day.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 07:07:32 2022 No.17016040

>>17013955
I'm using the idea of a floating island because the OP is always changing in the "featured" chuuba, so having it tie in with the floating island making landfall on other cities sounded like a cool idea to me.

>>17014180
Then go ahead and use the previous post instead. From what I see in the worldbuilding thread, some of them are going crazy with their lore, going as far as thinking out the mythology and religion of their own nations. I'm writing this more on a whim and it's entirely up to you guys on what you feel best exemplifies /wg/

>>17015455
Ahhh the island.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 07:19:03 2022 No.17016583
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>>16990036
Oneshota with Elira in a scenario where the shota innocently confesses to her and she is going to politely brush him off until he gives her a look that completely flips her switch and causes her to give him a night he'll never forget

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 07:21:01 2022 No.17016675

>>17013868
Eh kinda mid, I think a format like this needs to dive deeper and be longer for each individual section in order for it to actually work, as it is right now it feels a bit half baked even if it got a chuckle from me in regards to the Mori section.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 07:51:15 2022 No.17017835 >>17015248 I was the guy who told the thread about my deserted island dream, but anything after that I had nothing to do with. I absolutely despised the fucking gay ERP shit and did not intend for that to happen.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 07:53:44 2022 No.17017918 >>17014180 Have you even visited the /vtwbg/ thread? This is pretty tame for some of the shit I’ve seen anons writing there.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:02:56 2022 No.17020188 This is a bit unrelated but Anya sounds pretty nice when speaking in English, I never knew. Perhaps I should give her a chance. She's cute. https://youtu.be/R4F2Hk6pdq4

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:04:15 2022 No.17020231 >>17020188 Yeah, you should totally do that. She is totally cute.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:15:59 2022 No.17020613 >>17020188 I like the way she pronounces d's and t's.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:31:02 2022 No.17021140 >>17013683 Well obviously my point is there's half a dozen stories about various girls getting ass fucked where the plot really isn't relevant at all but the idea of a harem story is to much?

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:31:57 2022 No.17021167
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>>16989989
>People last thread talking about me and the references I make being a bit too much sometimes
Well shit, here is more references to stuff, chapter 8 of GB Watson
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRb7DIkUhDJxjfmedKZcUTim_c7kZg5Iu34Bd9jwtaRok_KobbxwOGE_zq3Y6xbFuCzlbbpzuAL7S1D/pub
There's nothing that happens in this chapter besides characters bantering and hanging out, which is the type of writing I'm the best at. And writing military dialogue and conversation.
There're some pretty obvious references and some more subtle references, it might be too much, but I dunno, I really had fun writing it. I honestly want more time to flush out the characters, but then this story will never end.
It's also a nice coincidence that someone mentioned me just when I was done editing a chapter to update.
I FUCKING LOVE WAR. I WANT TO FUCKING KILL PEOPLE FOR MONEY, DESTROY CULTURES AND HISTORY

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 09:43:01 2022 No.17021535 >>17021167 >I FUCKING LOVE WAR. I WANT TO FUCKING KILL PEOPLE FOR MONEY, DESTROY CULTURES AND HISTORY based

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:01:43 2022 No.17022175
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>>16993117
Decided to do this one, last time I wrote a fic here people said it was too short and this one turned out to be the roughly the same length but it's mostly sex with little build up so it should be fine. As always, feedback is appreciated.

Tags: Hakui Koyori, Drugs, Sex, NSFW
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSgFiiziPfBviiVUrpEcMrV9jKZ6tTz4SiKN4qHue0LuzXKXJ9yt3Sob2yqeN1d0i4NTQNQUIhDfdYJ/pub
>>16989989

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:08:07 2022 No.17022394 >>17022175 Are the the "~and-then-they-fucked~" guy? Looking forward to letting you indirectly stroke me off in a little bit

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:08:37 2022 No.17022418

>>17021167
A few criticisms, Aqua feels nothing like Aqua in this story, she feels too sassy and confident. I dunno, just doesn’t speak of what I think Aqua is like. After a few sentences into the scene where Anon and Amelia are inspecting the guns with all that /k/ stuff and pop culture references, I just started scrolling to skip over it. It just really didn’t seem necessary and felt like a chore to read through, but that’s completely my opinion, some people might love those references.
I quite liked the other interactions with Amelia though, they’re always good, but I don’t have much else to say about this chapter.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:24:24 2022 No.17022949 File: 991 KB, 2000x1200, 1643019570411.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17009302 > you enter a brothel > see this > they all say "welcome, master. Please come inside." What do?

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:26:13 2022 No.17023019 File: 3.59 MB, 2000x3209, 95719095_p0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17022949 Thank you, I think I will. Second from the left, please.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:26:41 2022 No.17023040 >>17022394 no, that's not me sorry

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:32:07 2022 No.17023205 >>17023040 Ah. My mistake. Still gonna jerk it to your work, though. Think of a really tall, lanky white guy stroking a tiny dick with index finger and thumb while reading something you wrote.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:32:30 2022 No.17023218

>>17021167
I think the changes to aqua in regards to her context within the story do work since it's a least believable given the framing of the setting. Also I liked the gun showing scene since it's effectively a little character piece between the two of them. Also liked the little bits of worldbuilding that you throw in.
Fucking called Marine having a fake boyfriend.
Also a mispelling I noticed levitations ->leviathans

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 10:39:14 2022 No.17023437 >>17022949 Come inside every single one of them and then marry Fubuki, of course.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 11:09:03 2022 No.17024366 File: 1.15 MB, 1462x1535, 20220123_153212.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I want to put a child in this hag

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 11:12:27 2022 No.17024503 >>17024366 Kill yourself, earlyfag.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 11:27:46 2022 No.17025032 >>17024503 I'll put a child in you too you fucking whore

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 11:29:27 2022 No.17025081 >>17023019 Friend's melons seem very oversized today.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 12:02:16 2022 No.17026275 >>17025081 It's a GMO version of Friend cloned and grown in a lab tube for the ideal personalized waifu.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 12:36:54 2022 No.17027528 >>17026275 So this is the result of Mumei's breeding experiments.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 12:54:28 2022 No.17028113 >>17027528 No ENs allowed in or near this lab.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 13:00:00 2022 No.17028296 >>17028113 based

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 13:23:21 2022 No.17029093
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>>16989989
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR_G2YFcXmDOZFifeZW2XVd3Gmgre0PDnaaN38YYM3MrQFuPb3vrmvZiDEB_DAew9WeZdzWffSErPsB/pub

Tags: Ayame, SFW

I posted a snippet of this a while ago for some feedback and finally finished the first chapter.
I hope you guys can enjoy this and if you have any criticism, lay it on me.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 13:49:03 2022 No.17029975

>>17029093
Oh hey I remember the initial snippet for this getting posted last year.
Gotta admit I liked the initial confrontation from the old version more since it was bigger on the misunderstanding which is a dumb trope I love but honestly from a 'this is going to be a multi-chapter series' point of view this is a much stronger prologue.
Eager to see more of this anon. In particular I love the narrative voice here, the kind that's perfect for a long series.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 13:57:12 2022 No.17030227

>>17029093
Oh hey I remember you from a couple months ago, it's a pleasant surprise that you decided to continue this.
First off I want to complement the opening paragraphs, they were nice to read, well written and made for a good insight at setting the scene/setting up this police officer's character. A small thing I'd like to point out is maybe the words 'you', 'your' and 'you're' were used a bit too much. Obviously it's a second person story so they're going to be abundant, but writing something like "Taking her in for questioning is probably a good idea" instead of "You should probably take her in for questioning" and things like that to reduce the amount of times 'you' is used can help the writing flow a little better, in my opinion at least.
One glaring problem I found with this though was (You) shooting to kill Ayame, then suddenly she gets hungry(?) for whatever reason and you randomly feed her some food. I did not understand this transition at all and the whiplash from that was insane.
Overall though it wasn't a bad story, would like to see more. Good job writeanon.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 14:25:06 2022 No.17031236

>>17009784
Honestly thinking about it theoretically, it's only a problem of nailing down the characterization of a generation. You don't need to know ALL of them, just the particulars of a single gen.
With the overall idea of brothel gens still being up to getting picked up by other anon's that have other gens/groups as their favs.
As that other anon said, probably a decent shared universe thing like that proposal a thread back.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 14:46:14 2022 No.17032116

>>17029975
Thanks for reading. Yeah I changed the confrontation because I didn't want her to be too insufferable to deal with at the start, more just simply annoying because I do plan to mellow her as the story goes. Anyway thanks for feedback!

>>17030227
Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked the opening. The 'you', 'your', and 'you're' problem is something I should put more thought into, I didn't realize it was sooo abundant through out the story. As for the feeding, now that you point it out, I can see the apparent tonal shift. I probably should've put emphasis and work on it so it would flow better. (I did stop writing after the gun shot scene for a while so I guess I forgot where I was heading with it while writing.) Thanks for the feedback, it's greatly appreciated.

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>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 16:02:02 2022 No.17034504 >>17034266 Thank you for sharing with the class Anon, very cool

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 16:10:13 2022 No.17034781 >>17022175 Short and sweet. I always really like the "animal girls stuck in heat" bit.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 17:01:18 2022 No.17036583

>>17022175
Not bad. The highlight was definitely the way in which she chose to administer the drug. Although, I would have liked to know the expression of her face, knowing what it would do to you, and its taste mixed with the taste of her. Would have kicked it up a lot.
The biggest problem I think is how little of the potential of the premise you use. Medically induced nymphomania is a perfect excuse to go to the extreme, but the following act isn’t much more than vanilla. The reversal of the relationship could be put to better use, her trying to stay in control to begin with, only to be ultimately forced to use her own concoction out of desperation to keep up with the beast she has awoken. Something like that.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 17:16:41 2022 No.17037098 >>17022175 Thanks for doing my prompt. The coyote desperately needed some love.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 17:29:13 2022 No.17037549 >>17037098 She really doesn't. She just debuted. There's no way anyone could think she deserves more love when there's those who've been in the business for years unloved. Never trust someone who's oshi is less than 6 months old.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 18:05:01 2022 No.17038979 >>17037549 Whose

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 18:13:51 2022 No.17039350
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>>17037549
NTA and Koyori is certainly not my oshi but I have a kemonomimi fetish and pink hair is S-tier, so I'll agree that a girl whose design is pure sex is in high demand at least for me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 18:26:24 2022 No.17039811 File: 486 KB, 491x850, BaelzDrunk.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16990036 Taking home a drunk Bae and molesting her

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:07:27 2022 No.17041237 >>17039811 I never realized how stacked she was

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:11:16 2022 No.17041362 >>17022175 Hot I got hard

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:13:01 2022 No.17041420 File: 169 KB, 850x601, BaelzCharSheet.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041237 The rrat's body is unbelievably breedable. >YWN do Roberu a favour and get Bae off his back by pumping her full of your kids

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:14:23 2022 No.17041467 Fuck. I want to write a Roboco fic, she's too much sex and the cybernetic parts make her even hotter, but I don't know her personality reeeee. Maybe I'll just write some more cuck shit instead... I guess.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:18:12 2022 No.17041592 File: 2.97 MB, 2000x2800, 1643027691395.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041420 The things I'd do to that Aussie brat.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:28:31 2022 No.17041985 How goes the works in progress for everyone? I'm not even half done this chapter

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:29:37 2022 No.17042028 File: 10 KB, 305x277, Update.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041985 Forgot pic fuck

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:35:57 2022 No.17042322
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>>17041985
Something like this I guess.

>>17041420
Anon finds a Ritual Book is what steered me towards rrat, and now I can't help but be unbelievably horny for that sexy shortstack body. Her new year's outfit gets me intensely stiff.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:42:31 2022 No.17042590 File: 13 KB, 332x431, Screenshot_4.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041985 3/4 done

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:44:24 2022 No.17042669 File: 7 KB, 255x286, 0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041985 Glacial.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 19:54:52 2022 No.17043087 File: 234 KB, 670x332, 1643016738458.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16990036 Requesting description of these drinks as if it was their futa cum

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 20:39:31 2022 No.17044900 >>17043087 This but it's their breastmilk

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 20:45:17 2022 No.17045124 >>17043087 Risu's loads would be way too thick to drink through a straw...

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:30:50 2022 No.17047527 File: 75 KB, 850x478, CocoBaby.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Baby Bump

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:31:11 2022 No.17047544 File: 85 KB, 600x519, IMG_20220124_183101.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:35:19 2022 No.17047812 >>17047544 >where did you guys going

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:42:07 2022 No.17048245 >>17047812 The dude is Japanese, at least he tried. Can't say the same from you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:45:13 2022 No.17048431 >>17021167 >I FUCKING LOVE WAR. I WANT TO FUCKING KILL PEOPLE FOR MONEY, DESTROY CULTURES AND HISTORY You waited too long, the Taliban aren't hiring anymore.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:48:16 2022 No.17048626 >>17009784 You don't have to give everyone major roles, or a role in which they aren't bound and gagged to the point that their personality doesn't matter much. It's not easy but at least writing bits of it doesn't seem too daunting.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 21:49:56 2022 No.17048724 >>17047544 Pinning Gura down and strapping vibrators to her dual cocks and streaming the resulting explosion.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 22:11:31 2022 No.17049961 File: 360 KB, 1203x2239, welcome.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16991895 /ss/ with babysitter Sora

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 22:29:25 2022 No.17051047

>>17021167
Enjoyed this chapter, feels like not a lot of stuff happened other than some character interactions and some hints of world building but I also enjoy those kinds of stuff so that's fine by me. Hopefully the story picks up soon since the things you've been teasing are pretty interesting and I wanna see how it all turns out.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:05:48 2022 No.17053100 >>17020188 I miss big titty Anya so much...

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:07:14 2022 No.17053208 >>17049961 Would it be gentle or violent

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:21:01 2022 No.17054046 >>17053208 She would ruin other women for you and get away with it.

Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:26:59 2022 No.17054395

>>17022175
Got a nut out of me, very nice to see some coyote in writing. I think anything actually constructive was already mentioned by the other anon.
>>17029093
Oh hey, I remember this. Glad to see you finally release it. Like the other anon said, not using 'you' too much could really help the story flow. You'd basically be doing that thing in first person where you tiptoe around the subject of a sentence. I remember saying I liked how you gave Anon a bit more character than expected, and also one bit where Ayame seemed to appear out of nowhere, which isn't there anymore. Other than that, hoping to see the next chapter.

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:29:04 2022 No.17054507 File: 36 KB, 640x443, cfff7895ac3e8b3c42d851e0af1e3972.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16991895 Pagan forest deity Fauna snatches you from the village as her virgin sacrifice

>>	Anonymous Mon Jan 24 23:55:43 2022 No.17056088 File: 2.70 MB, 1654x2339, scary.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17053208 Gentle but firm. Sora would be in total control knowing she can have you anytime she likes.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:14:10 2022 No.17057166
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>>16989989
Whatever, decided to write it myself since I knew no one else would. This obviously is inspired by the HoloFuta collection of cock descriptions, but I tried focusing on the taste, smell, and cum instead of the cock itself.

Futa HoloIDrinks

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR4PnpXuzehjuh4l1-PoHJP8RHHvOasqUBO77hor5A7l_B9_g9jsJp5YolLVyt0jq01T8rMCUm1BrG7/pub

Tags: NSFW, HoloID, futa, gokkun

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:28:38 2022 No.17057973

>>17057166
Suprisingly erotic.
My dumb ass didn't realize that the flavors were based on the actual juice till I opened up the image, making me question how Anya cum would taste like ginger. Other than that it's a pretty good 'description' fic. It goes into enough detail for each section while having each be a good individual part .

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:30:51 2022 No.17058094 >>16990036 Rushia flies into a yandere rage and murders Ui with an axe while gushing about her genmates’ music Patrick Bateman-style.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:36:07 2022 No.17058403 What do you guys think about showing pictures in fics as context. Like for example, a chuuba shows you a picture and below the text is the picture that she shows you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:38:36 2022 No.17058545 >>17058403 I think it's unnecessary and that you could probably just describe it. Writing is all about putting pictures into someone's head through words, why would this be different?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:43:22 2022 No.17058806 >>17058403 Plenty of books back in the day had illustration, so no reason why you can't use the same, provided the text can stand on its own.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:43:59 2022 No.17058844 >>17058403 Happens in light novels all the time.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 00:45:14 2022 No.17058918

>>17058403
Personally find it a dumb trick, but I will acknowledge that sometimes not using words can have just as much impact as writing it out and well we are writing this shit for and on the internet. Using other resources to enhance the feel and impact is something that you can absolutely do.
Shit's dumb but so long as you're not being lazy about using it, it should be fine.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 01:05:47 2022 No.17060310 File: 115 KB, 768x1169, Big Botan.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16989953 Big Botan finds (you) cute and brings (you) to her lair so she snu snu (you) to death. I've fantasized about it. But maybe I'll write something down.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 01:10:14 2022 No.17060639
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>>17058094
>“I think Marine’s undisputed masterpiece is ‘Ahoy!!’ A song so catchy, most people probably don’t listen to the lyrics. But they should! Because it’s not just about the pleasures of embracing your inner pervert, it’s also a personal statement about the vtuber herself! HEY UI! AAAAAAH!”
>THWACK!
>“TRY GETTING A COLLAB WITH TAMAKI NOW, YOU FUCKING STUPID BITCH! AAAAAGH! YOU! STUPID! BITCH!”

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 01:37:49 2022 No.17062060 >>17057166 great job, this is a solid companion piece to the HoloFuta descriptions

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 01:42:28 2022 No.17062297

>>17057973
Unfortunately I didn't know of Anya's diet to say why her cum tasted like ginger so it was indeed lacking. Everyone had a reason why except hers, and I kinda want to change that, Anya thread cares more about memes than actually enjoying their oshi so I didn't really get any answers from them. Personally I would've liked to have done more with Moona but I didn't really know how to describe hers well.

>>17062060
If only that anon was still here, I wonder if they would be proud of me... I did see a EN gen 2 cock description recently but no JP 6 as of yet. Maybe they're still out there.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:05:13 2022 No.17063445 >>17058403 Not a substitute for description, but can be used to great effect as a supplement.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:06:32 2022 No.17063504 File: 4 KB, 251x211, man.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041985 I'm not even 1/4th done yet, holy fuck. I feel like writing but I keep on getting stuck on a lot of places. Cons of being an ESL, I guess.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:10:58 2022 No.17063729 >>16990036 >>16850606 >>16857272 >>16859602 >>16860964 >>16867740 >>16868878 >>16872078 >>16877617 >>16878072 >>16878451 >>16880265 Can we please get this outline made into a full fic.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:36:44 2022 No.17064922 File: 242 KB, 889x1433, DF68D215-38DC-4683-A8C4-116147221B94.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Maintain your motivation.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:43:22 2022 No.17065265 >>17021167 >…What is her name? K-some…? K-something, I don’t even remember >Woah, hol’up now, cowboy! I hate to be a Karen here but I’m having issues with your logic, pal! Fucking kek, let's hope the jannies don't catch a wind of this chapter

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 02:46:41 2022 No.17065454 >>17065265 I mean there’s a thread on this board dedicated to discussing Kson and Coco, not to mention it’s pretty much standard knowledge that they’re one and the same.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 03:01:36 2022 No.17066228 >>17057166 On second thought please use these tags instead Tags: NSFW, Risu, Moona, Iofi, Ollie, Reine, Anya, futa, gokkun It's very long but no one would ever search the term HoloID so there's no point.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 03:35:08 2022 No.17067978 File: 433 KB, 3306x683, Fuckme.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17041985 I need to pick one and fucking stick to it. One of these have been sitting in my docs untouched for nearly six months.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:12:23 2022 No.17069847 >>16990036 In light of recent events that have occurred in the past 48 hours, can someone write a fic of Mori sitting at her computer and increasingly losing her shit while she reads social media?

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:24:06 2022 No.17070411
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>>17057166
Based futafag, I will give this a good read. I don’t watch ID much but I’m always up for futa fics
>>17054507
NTA but I like this prompt, but I already have so many Fauna fics to write…
Also, on a related note I have a Valentine’s themed smut fic in the works, should I wait until the time or post it as soon as it’s finished? I’m planning on posting it in the Kronii thread since it involves her and another chuuba (not spoiling it yet)
Also have a kroner

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:28:14 2022 No.17070588 >>17070411 Save it. Holiday-themed stories are best when they’re released on the holiday they’re supposed to be about.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:49:19 2022 No.17071441 >>17069847 I don't there's any kind of writing that can equal the hilarity of what actually happened. >>17070411 I'd say save it for the week of valentines. Holiday stuff works better in season, especially if you're making holiday themed smut.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:51:11 2022 No.17071529 >>17071441 What DID happen? I haven’t been following any of this

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:54:42 2022 No.17071674 >>17071529 >>17017293

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 04:59:09 2022 No.17071814 >>17071674 I’m glad I haven’t been following any of this

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:02:09 2022 No.17071935 Bumping in to say "Petting your fox" is still a masterclass story. Has Matthewanon written anything else since then?

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:06:35 2022 No.17072110
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>>16991895
taking a depressed Kroni to a 3 day long retreat to a log cabin in the woods which beings with teasing and touch-play on first day; transitioning to discovering her love of anal on the second day. Followed by heavy sex on third, winding down with a silent drive back to airport and finishing with a long kiss goodbye.

Goodluck and thx

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:07:50 2022 No.17072159 >>17071935 Nnnnnope!

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:13:12 2022 No.17072375 >>17071935 Completely dropped off the radar.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:21:14 2022 No.17072727 >>17072159 >>17072375 A shame. He can write emotional moments so well.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 05:25:11 2022 No.17072919

>>17021535
WAR IS PEACE
>>17022418
Yeah, I honestly agree. It's bascially impossible to put Aqua in a serious environment and have her be competent at anything, but since it'll be boring to have Marine as the only named sailor around, Aqua might as well be here as a better version of herself. I could've also written her as pure autism and cringe, but I feel it doesn't fit the atmosphere and her role. It doesn't matter that much overall though, the focus isn't on her
As for the /k/ stuff and references, Ame's gotta have some firepower going into the next few chapters, so I thought I'll make the setup scene not completely boring to myself at least. It's totally fine if you gotta skip it, I fast forward through lots of stories that doesn't appeal to me too
>>17023218
Thanks man, glad you liked it.
>Fucking called marine having a fake boyfriend. Nice, I remember that too, always happy someone notices the subtle hints to payoffs in the future.
Thanks for the correction also, they slip by sometimes
>>17048431
I would, but I don't wanna stick my dick in a goat that doesn't speak japanese
>>17051047
Thanks, next chapter is lots of naval stuff, so that might not be for everyone, after that it's mostly Ina stuff until the arc ends. I do feel my pacing is a bit off at places, but I really wanna let the characters have their time to themselves to really develop
>>17065265
Fucking jannies, I just want to do my roommate reps without googling it

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 06:03:05 2022 No.17074579 >>17069847 alternatively, Mori being forced to physically apologize for her actions by offering her body to a bunch of disgruntled deadbeats to vent their frustrations

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 06:03:41 2022 No.17074610

>>17071529
Basically about a week ago on a Pokémon stream, Mori got an aka supa that told her to stop letting one of the Trash Taste guys talk shit about Hololive members being talentless. Mori gets passive aggressive and goes on to say that the dude apologized to everyone. A day later Kiara debunks this by saying that she wasn't in contact with the Trash Taste guys and that no one else in Hololive would have their contact information in the first place. Couple days later Mori randomly replies to a drawing of a deadbeat getting cucked by the Trash Taste guy (drawn in the style of rent of girl friend chapter 218). Then proceeds about an hour of Mori digging a hole for herself on twitter and the hololive subreddit. Ends with Mori saying that she was drinking "lean" which caused her to act weird. This of course causes another shit storm, because she said that she drinks "lean" which is combo of 7-UP, cough syrup, and jolly ranchers. She tries to back track by saying that "lean" is a new aged word that she didn't know, and that she always called drinking alcohol "lean". Couple minutes after the "lean" tweet she tweets that she's going on a indefinite break for the foreseeable future.

Thus the saga of Calliope "I fucked up my public relations in less than an hour" Mori ends.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 06:09:55 2022 No.17074913 pekofag, i just fired ropes again to your ui-mama story god bless

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 06:50:06 2022 No.17076789 >>17069847 Soon

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 06:53:02 2022 No.17076902 [DELETED]

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>>17074913
Don't be too thankful, lately I've had no interest outside of futa and I've been pumping exclusively that. It's very unlikely you'll get more anytime soon.

That being said, currently I have a plentitude of ideas in my head, and not all of them are futa. That is not to say, of course, that they aren't niche as well. I'll just list everything I have an interest in currently, or for the future. My interest in them dwindles a lot and a lot of times I just write something I never even planned for. If given enough time, you can probably expect some of these to come out.

> A bad date with Polka where she can't stop messing up, and the night ends with you jerking off onto her face as tears form in her eyes from the terrible sex she gave you
> Aqua is a terrible girlfriend who rarely ever has sex with you, and when she does, it's not good at all. So you decide to accept the offers of her friend, Shion, to come out late at night to meet her. Aqua catches wind of it eventually and intentionally, and things escalate from there.
> Watame being gang"raped" by all the predators of Hololive (Mio, Okayu, Botan, Fubuki, etc)
> Fubuki cucking you and whispering her stories in your ear as she jerks you off
> Roboco being used as a sex bot
> some sort of weird hidden sex stuff in the holo house between Kanata, Coco and Suisei, possibly Towa too(?)
> Risu's nut jars (already being worked on)
> tons of futa ideas that pop in and out of my head
> Fubuki or Korone insect rape

Honestly, you might get Shigure Ui rape finale soon, or never. It all depends on if the /rape/ threads entertain me enough to actually motivate me to write more. The "sex" "no" posting is getting tiring so it's not looking good desu.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 07:05:30 2022 No.17077424 >>17074913 You know what? I forget the blogpost. Thanks. It's rare for me to not write futa but when I do it seems that it's always well received, so that's good. If only futa still had a big audience as well

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 07:12:28 2022 No.17077738

>>17076902
it doesn't necessarily matter if it doesn't get finished (although i certainly wouldn't complain); what's there is already great. it's light on descriptive prose, or but the smut is succinct, punchy, and every little bit is impactful, reflecting many elements of what makes rape hot.

>>17077424
i too wish oviposition had a substantial audience, but alas. anyway, thanks for the sex homie

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 07:34:56 2022 No.17078612 File: 1.08 MB, 2896x4096, 20220117_142725.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17077738 Juniper oviposition ooooooh

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 07:53:24 2022 No.17079151 Hypothetically speaking, if one were to write a brothel story involving gen 3, which girl would you most want to see "picked" for the evening?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:00:47 2022 No.17079376 >>17079151 >Not picking the deluxe sixsome wiht sankisei option Though unironically Rushia onegai.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:03:50 2022 No.17079507 >>17079151 i'm kind of ambivalent towards them but if i was there for sex, i'd pick marine because regardless of whether she's skilled or not, she'd undoubtedly approach the night with enthusiasm

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:11:04 2022 No.17079828
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>>16989989
Ame's "special" shake

Something I got into the mood to write after reading these prompts >>16909554 >>16910764 >>16911105 in this other thread

Tags: Gura, Amelia, NSFW, abuse, futa
https://r.entry.co/2qawi (just remove the dot from the link, I thought rentry wasn't being flagged as spam anymore)

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:12:24 2022 No.17079887 >>17079828 Use Rentry.org, not .co

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:12:53 2022 No.17079911 File: 142 KB, 1000x1422, 43084526248.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17079151 Pekora or Rushia but I'm leaning more towards Rushia

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:14:33 2022 No.17079982 >>17079887 alright thanks for the advice, let's do it right this time https://rentry.org/2qawi link for this fic >>17079828

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:36:27 2022 No.17080828 File: 174 KB, 850x1555, FlareBeach.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17079151 Keeping the sun-kissed elf pussy to myself, since nobody else will.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 08:39:49 2022 No.17080964

>>17079828
>>17079982
I'll be honest, the plot isn't my cup of tea despite me being the one who made one of those prompts in that thread. I think if you went in a direction where Ame let Gura only lick the tip of her cock, and then she jerked off onto her tongue, that would've been better. But who know? Maybe it's my anti penetration bias speaking. Not much to say about the writing itself, it's quite clear that you're new, but if you wish to keep doing it, I'd suggest making things less chaotic. The whole internal monologue stuff felt odd and was structured strangely.

It will be unfortunate if this is the only criticism you get but I already jerked off and emptied my sack like 2 hours ago so it's harder to please me atm.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 09:08:59 2022 No.17081800

>>17079828
Honestly this could have used a run-through checking it for grammar and flow before posting. Especially with the trouble in tense usage I'm seeing.
This was rather arousing, my big problem was honestly in how it's structured. It could have used more paragraphs to split dialogue, and reduce confusion.
Other than that it does pass the boner test, so I did find it hot.
Also you really need to find a way to integrate the dialogue in the '()'. Even just having that shit in italics would look better, even if having it in an internal monologue paragraph would probably work out better.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 09:29:58 2022 No.17082376 >>17041985 >three smut WIPs >another that's done but it feels like I need to rewrite it a second time because of characterization issues so I'm not pushing it >brain keeps coming up with more ideas FUCK

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 09:52:09 2022 No.17083047
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>>16990036
Being rewarded with sex from the other members of HoloX for being one of the few people who can successfully tard wrangle La+

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 10:54:19 2022 No.17085007 >>17079151 Marine makes me uncomfortably horny so her.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 10:55:51 2022 No.17085046 >>17083047 I just can't take this seriously as I just imagine La+ horns stuck in the ground like a lawn dart and her arms unable to push enough to get unstuck.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 11:34:59 2022 No.17086191 >>17079151 Marine only to discover she's 2hardcore4u

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 12:05:22 2022 No.17087257 >>17083047 I like the idea of (You) being one of the few people Laplus tones down her chuuni bullshit for, and tries to speak to you like a normal person.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 12:28:34 2022 No.17088086 >>17085046 That's a great idea for a position

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 13:00:04 2022 No.17089243
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>>16989989
Yo remember that time I told you guys that chapter 4 was 80% done at around 18k words? Yeah that was a fucking lie so here's chapter 4 with around 26k words.

First Summer Memories Ch. 4 - Day worth remembering
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSf3xc1oNFuud83XPPOX8cwU2PltWvDSyWgVz8_1nJ-WWic3JbE7JTFIwnCT-ap4ctAui_-nWRL5kCG/pub

Tags: Flare, SFW, Fluff, Romance

As always I would appreciate any criticism you may have as I am currently dead tired and I would like it if you guys tell me of anything dialogue or sentences that feel off or just plain wrong altogether and I hope that the people looking forward to this are happy with this chapter cause it took so long to finally publish. This mostly focuses on the relationship aspect and not much else in the memory ones but I hope people still enjoy it regardless
Also I finally got the chance to finally read through the entirety of HF minus chapter 6 and and holy shit is it good. Like damn, I feel a little intimidated by AA in a good way cause fuck was it fantastic.
Did the romance feel nice or is it off in a few areas? CH Anon was right and that romance is fucking difficult to write so I hope I did whoever was looking forward to this a service.
Also, if the final two parts feel a little rushed or are weird in a few areas please let me know so I could change it. Those are the parts I feel most troubled by and if you guys find anything do let me know.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 13:01:39 2022 No.17089305
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>>17087257
>You're one of the only few people where Laplus shows her vulnerable side to
>She's actually a shy girl beneath all that chuuni and she's easily flustered by you.
>She also has a weird habit of invading your private space and looking as if she wants to hug you but always holds herself back.
>The rest of holox knows her true feelings for you and tries to help her out but you're too dense and dumb

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 13:29:57 2022 No.17090493 >>17089305 This activates my fucking almonds.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 13:59:13 2022 No.17091910 >>17089243 I just finished the date half and I’m going to cry already, what a painful reminder that this will never happen in my lifetime and I’m going to die cold and alone.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:00:46 2022 No.17091984 >>17091910 Yep, s'true. You are going to do that. What, did you expect pity? Grow up.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:03:26 2022 No.17092104 >>17091984 Nah but thanks, I’m all sobered up now

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:05:14 2022 No.17092173

>>17089243
I honestly forgot that flare had gotten some of her memories back at the end of the last chapter, which made me mildly confused at the start.
By the way fucking love the relationship focus for this chapter.That date, the kiss, the apartment scene. Fuck me I can feel the warm and fuzzy feelings. This is some damn good romance.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:05:47 2022 No.17092189

>>17089243
Finally, it's here. The payoff.
The romance feels nice, even if it does veer into melodrama a bit sometimes, but given that it is the focus of the entire story it's all good and expected. You did a pretty good job in portraying Flare as a person who's simultaneously able to dish out and take banter, a tease, and also deeply afraid and lonely, as she should be given her situation.
While this was the climax for the romance, I'm eagerly waiting for the climax of the amnesia, that being Flare reuniting with the rest of gen 3 and their reactions to what has happened. Specifically Noel's reaction, and Flare reaction to her reaction.
>Gi melin
>what the fuck is gi melin
>google fu
>"I love you" in elven language
Fuck you, my heart.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:58:42 2022 No.17094609 I love Nina so much bros….

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:59:41 2022 No.17094659 >>17094609 Why are there so many fucking Ninas

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 14:59:55 2022 No.17094669 >>17094609 cuck

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 15:24:55 2022 No.17095899
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>>17089243
You need more self-confidence man, this is the GOOD shit. The tension, the romance, the writing, it's all brilliant and honestly makes me a little envious. The only criticism I have is Anon's speech about wanting to become a teacher, I felt like that was kind of long and unnecessary/unimportant, unless it actually is important and you plan on brining it up later on in the story. Overall I absolutely loved this chapter, especially towards the end. Amazing job.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 15:26:49 2022 No.17095992

>>17089243
Going to echo the other sentiments and throw out my 'damn you' for making my heart swell with tender feelings for a goddamn knife ear. On a more serious note, I think you did a great job with the romance overall; really knocked it out of the fucking park. I was looking forward to this one and it did not disappoint. I'm glad you enjoyed HF, too. Thanks for that.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 16:05:45 2022 No.17097806 >>17089305 Need fluffy romance fic about reconnecting with your childhood friend laplus.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 16:08:53 2022 No.17097971 >>17079828 Rough around the edges but still hot, good work

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 16:25:57 2022 No.17098791

>>17080964
>>17081800
I appreciate the feedback. I do admit I rushed the fic cause I kept changing stuff over and over and wasn't getting anything done. By the end I just wanted to post the rough draft I had since I decided to do this in a whim. It was mostly practice so I'm grateful you could give me tips to improve in the future, in fact I'd like if you gave examples of the fics you consider a must read so I can learn from them

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 16:44:20 2022 No.17099528 >>17098791 Unironically, you'd probably improve best by just reading and writing more in general. Your fundamentals need work but that's the kind of thing that's improved by general experience.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 17:02:03 2022 No.17100156

>>17089243
I'm basically going to repeat what the Anons before me said, but fuck it.
I absolutely love, love, LOVE the way you write romance. It pulls on my heartstrings in all the right places and I simply can't get enough. You're doing great job, Anon!
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this story!

>>17089305
>>17097806
Seconding these. I'd love to read that.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 17:54:54 2022 No.17101977
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>>17089243
Your concerns about the quality of your works are unfounded.

Gosling'd hard at the entire thing, particularly sleeping with Flare. Not having a genki half-elf hag who loves me is getting to be too much.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 17:56:50 2022 No.17102053

>>17098791
A lot of it is in the formatting. Using new paragraphs when different people are speaking lets you switch between two characters without having to specify after every line of dialogue. After establishing Gura and Ame are the only ones in the room, a simple exchange between them could be written like this:

Gura looked up from her screen. "Hey, everything okay in there?"

"Y-yeah...everything's fine! Don't worry!"

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:00:14 2022 No.17102194 >>17058403 They're good when they are black and white. I think pictures with colours would stand out too much

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:00:55 2022 No.17102217 >>17102053 Oh thanks thanks. I did notice these paragraphs were becoming a mess once I hit the middle point, I just wasn't sure when to split the paragraph

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:01:52 2022 No.17102253 >>17088086 But she's just going to be flailing her arms and legs around that way. And the Crow's probably gonna like peck your dick off.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:25:19 2022 No.17103211 >>17102253 Nah, the crow's a real one he wouldn't interfere. He knows what the kusogaki needs

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:31:06 2022 No.17103442 >>17103211 >Fistbumping the crow who pecks out 'GIVE HER THE DICK' in Morse Code

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:49:02 2022 No.17104148 What would you guys say are your biggest weaknesses as a writer? Do you try to shore those up or focus on your strengths more?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:51:52 2022 No.17104272 >>17104148 Dialogue, connecting scenes, being able to end a scene. Having sanity and mental clarity to write something that I can remember how I was thinking when I come back to look at it..

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 18:55:23 2022 No.17104436 >>17104148 I feel like I rush to the finish a lot, and what would be the falling actions and conclusions aren't given given the care that the rest of the story usually is.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:13:36 2022 No.17105280 >>17104148 Not enough variety in sentence structure. Weak descriptions of the environment. Characters who only feel KIND of like their actual personalities. But right now my worst enemy of all is writer's block.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:16:28 2022 No.17105417

>>17104148
I’m god awful at writing sex scenes for starters, couldn’t write smut to save my life. I’ve only written two NSFW fics so I can definitely say that I don’t shore those up, and probably stick to my strengths.
Planning ahead, while not exactly a ‘weakness’ per say, is still something I should do a lot more of to create better and more intriguing plots. The current me is agonising over the shit past me wrote, and it’s not fun.
Other than those big two, pretty much all aspects of my writing could use a little work.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:17:48 2022 No.17105483
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>>17104148
Characterization is my weakest. I try to do my best but I feel like I create facsimiles at best.
>>17105280
This about sums up all my issues with my own work. I'm prone to repetition and I'm never quite sure I'm doing enough to convey the locales in my stories without overly dwelling on them.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:33:46 2022 No.17106201 >>17104148 From the looks of it, world building is my weakness, as well as plot consistency and character motivation.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:55:48 2022 No.17107172 >>17104148 Pretty much everything >>17105280 and >>17106201 said. Plus the fact that I usualy procrastinate a lot and take much longer with any of my stuff than I want to.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 19:57:41 2022 No.17107269 I wonder if we can guess which writeanons these are based on their responses

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 20:10:24 2022 No.17108258 >>17107269 Only the people who gave the criticism to those writers can guess who they are, at least in my case. I simply paroted what people said about my stories.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 20:13:15 2022 No.17108434

>>17089243
Yeah anon I don't think you have worry about any of the romance because that was just plain beautiful. Had a smile on my face and a warm feeling in my chest the whole way through.
Also Sans Undertale was completely unexpected. It destroyed me.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 20:48:35 2022 No.17110546 >>17105417 >Planning ahead, while not exactly a ‘weakness’ per say, is still something I should do a lot more of to create better and more intriguing plots. The current me is agonising over the shit past me wrote, and it’s not fun. Series writer?

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:00:28 2022 No.17111128

>>17104148
I fall into a very consistent pattern of ending sentences/paragraphs/dialogue with a certain type of setup/emphasis, which I think works to great effect in short stories and blurbs, but quickly begins to read samey after repeating a few dozen times. Makes me cringe when rereading my longer fics or several of my stories in succession.
My dialogue also tends towards the overly-clinical at times, makes it hard for me to accurately characterize certain types of personalities.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:36:48 2022 No.17112807 New question: what do you think you’re good at? Or at least semi-competent.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:38:09 2022 No.17112868 >>17112807 i know i'm pretty good at pleasuring your mom

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:39:06 2022 No.17112906 >>17112868 Heyooo

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:39:28 2022 No.17112929 >>17112807 I'm good at conveying feelings and moods, at least so I've been told. Also this >>17112868

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:41:13 2022 No.17113010 >>17112807 I've been told I'm good at writing dialogues, as well as small romantic scenes. Also this >>17112868.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:42:45 2022 No.17113080 >>17112807 I'm really good at pissing people off and playing the devil's advocate, as well as causing them to have deep introspection into their thoughts and idelogies. Oh, writing? I can make people horny I guess.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:44:18 2022 No.17113165 >>17113080 I hate that I immediately recognized you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:45:25 2022 No.17113230 >>17113080 How's the Oga story going?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:46:03 2022 No.17113261 >>17113080 >causing them to have deep introspection into their thoughts and idelogies. Well, I guess the question was what you THINK you're good at

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:52:24 2022 No.17113579

>>17112807
I suppose the most apparent thing is that I'm really able to hurt a reader emotionally. Either causing some wet tears of sadness, or the gnawing abyss of emptiness in the cavity of their hearts. And they... like that?

But at the same time, people seem to enjoy my sickly sweet stories as well, especially domestic love stuff.

Oh, and my smut. You guys seem to really enjoy the smut I write.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:52:43 2022 No.17113600

>>17104148
Personally, I noticed that I tend to write my dialog very samey. "Dialog" then action. So I've been making an effort to spice up talking scenes even if you really can't do the motion and talking that people actually do in a story. People's actions and tone change on the fly during conversations and I'm struggling to capture that and capture it smoothly.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:53:38 2022 No.17113654 >>17112807 SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXX

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:53:53 2022 No.17113672 >>17113579 I like that I immediately recognized you.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:56:33 2022 No.17113811 >>17113165 Now can you link me up to the "what you're bad at" posting?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 21:59:19 2022 No.17113933 >>17113579 MWAnon?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:00:37 2022 No.17113986 >>17113811 Containing your autism.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:16:08 2022 No.17114719 >>17112807 That’s not an easy question to answer. I’m intimately aware of what I’ve done wrong, but I don’t really know what I’m doing right. Only that I’m doing SOMETHING right, since people tend to respond positively to my stuff.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:17:11 2022 No.17114768 >>17112807 I guess I'm semi-competent at erotic prose, although it feels arrogant to say so Also this >>17112868 Your mother sure does the rounds bro

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:17:40 2022 No.17114792 >>17114719 If you were actually good you'd know it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:18:55 2022 No.17114857 >>17112807 Decent enough at smut I guess. I'm not a fucking paragon of it but if anything I put out ever gets mentioned it's usually porn related, so there's that.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:19:57 2022 No.17114918 >>17114768 Shes divorced. That’s just how they get.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:21:03 2022 No.17114966 >>17114857 Smut's easy to generate an emotional response in the reader with - don't take it personally. >>17114918 kek

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:25:41 2022 No.17115149 >>17112807 I think I'm good with dialogue, which is more a symptom of being a DM, which improves your ability to ad lib.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:25:48 2022 No.17115158

>>17114966
There's a guy here who came apparently like 20 times to one line of iirc Fubuki going "hrng" as she orgasmed.

I came like 6 times to Matsuri baby carrot part 1 just from the singular line of smut that fic has.

Yeah. Smut is easy. If you can't do it it's probably not a hobby you should pursue.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:28:00 2022 No.17115254 >>17115158 I guess I'm more of a visual guy because that sounds completely insane

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:30:32 2022 No.17115384 >>17115158 Wasn't there also a guy who said the hardest orgasm he's ever had was to some FFXIV ERP? Some people just don't have standards.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:49:20 2022 No.17116203
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>>17115254
You're just not in it hard enough boy. It goes something like this:
> porn
> jerk off everyday
> consume a lot of content
> hard to find new stuff
> expand your horizons
> get into new fetishes
> consume those fetishes, they introduce you to other fetishes (take horny threads introducing people to feet fetish or armpit)
> consume the fuck out of these new, niche fetishes
> run out of content on them
> jerk off to the same favorites over and over, getting bored
This process generally takes about 5 years or so of jerking off everyday at least once. At this point, two things can happen. You go in HARDER, scat, vore, CP, bestiality, etc... or you lower your standards. Going for smut fics is lowering your standards.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:50:48 2022 No.17116275 >>17116203 >pic As opposed to rape in a consensual manner. An important distinction.

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:53:17 2022 No.17116390

>>17115158
>There's a guy here who came apparently like 20 times to one line of iirc Fubuki going "hrng" as she orgasmed.

Gonna go out on a limb here and assume you're talking about me; wasn't Fubuki, was Suisei in "Just a little crazy". The build up was perfect and the mental image of desperately clutching this hot, crazy idol girl as she clenches hard around you, listening to her involuntary gasps as she reels in pleasure at the feeling of rope after rope of warm, thick semen flooding her womb - the mental image of that scene just always hit right

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:54:42 2022 No.17116466 I wonder if the cum-tribute guy is still here.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:55:21 2022 No.17116495 >>17116466 I mean, he came here after the nightmare thread so probably

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:56:23 2022 No.17116550 >>17116466 The Mio guy? He was here a couple months ago, at least

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:56:37 2022 No.17116563 >>17079151 rushia!

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 22:59:36 2022 No.17116736 >>17079151 Hm, I might write a description for each girl's brothel description from each gen. Sounds like it could be fun saying who's the most popular and why. I would answer your question but if I'm going to write that I'd rather not spoil it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:10:20 2022 No.17117288 >>17115158 I still don't understand how you came 6 times from that one line. I really wasn't going for anything arousing there.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:15:53 2022 No.17117602 >>17116466 Why does it matter?

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:18:07 2022 No.17117783

>>17117288
I often see people who can't jerk off to something that has comedy in it. I'm not one of those people. Comedy or not I'm jerking off. The idea of Matsuri having a tiny little cock, jerking it off right in front of you while you ridicule her, and she just keeps doing it because she's too immersed in the pleasure, ending up splurting her pathetic load on you and being angry that you laughed at her feelings afterwards, it's pretty hot. I think it's that I don't mind SPH so the humiliation of you laughing served as comedy but also as a fetish material.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:23:12 2022 No.17118372 >>17117602 Curiosity mostly.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:35:12 2022 No.17119672 >>17116203 I want to clean every inch of Marine's body with my tongue, twice to be incredibly thorough. Fucking God.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:38:03 2022 No.17119959 >>17119672 Even though she has a cute little phimotic smegma riddled cock?

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:42:54 2022 No.17120419 >>17119959 gross

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:44:15 2022 No.17120582 >>17120419 Weak. Imagine Marine standing right in front of you, naked, sweaty and ready to be licked, but you don't just because she also has a cock. Why are you such a faggot?

Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:48:42 2022 No.17120973

>>17072727
still lurking. Glad that my stories are still on people’s minds. I‘m currently in a bit of a hole when it comes to motivation, so I don’t know when I‘ll have something new.
Honestly, I‘ve been enjoying streams less and less for a while now – to the point where I find the stories about chuubas here much more interesting than chuubas themselves…

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:55:54 2022 No.17121690 >>17120973 So it goes.

>>	Anonymous Tue Jan 25 23:59:36 2022 No.17122030 >>17120973 yeah, been feeling the same way a long while

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:07:39 2022 No.17122734 >>17120973 Can't say I relate but I'm glad to see you're still around! Thank you very much for all the fantastic work you've put out so far! Looking forward to more, whenever that may be.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:12:55 2022 No.17123104 >>17110546 Yeah... lots of regrets about the earlier chapters.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:13:45 2022 No.17123158

>>17120973
I haven't watched a chuuba's stream for more than 6 months now. I've seen maybe 10 clips total in that time.

It's not even getting tired of Vtubers. I literally just binge watched a ton of really old clips and they made me smile just like I used to. I'm just not interested in all the fake shit they do now.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:16:09 2022 No.17123350 >>17123158 pretty much. hololive does not feel "real" anymore. too many yabs, too many chuubas, way too much management

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:16:43 2022 No.17123380 >>17123158 This is why you only buy organic teetee. The manufactured stuff sucks

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:19:20 2022 No.17123667 >>17123104 Best to write things sort of open so you can adapt if you don't write out a complete fucking huge outline.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:22:58 2022 No.17124014

>>17104148
My language skills, since I'm usually writing in English even though it isn't my native language. To improve, I have read and want to continue reading books in English (since they're better place to gain an understanding of a language from than the Internet, generally). I have read 1984, LotR and Timequake so far.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 00:41:53 2022 No.17125694

>>17112807
I don’t actually know other than >>17112868, but everyone seems to be good at that. There’s never really been one particular aspect of my writing that people always point out and complement. Whenever they do it’s usually different for each story.
>>17116390
Oh shit, hey man good to see you’re still here. I’m glad you liked the story but I’ll admit it was a pretty bad flanderization of Suisei’s character, and I’ve been meaning to write some regular comet to make up for it.
>>17123667
Fuck I wish. Past me thought it’d be a good idea to foreshadow/allude to a hundred things without planning on how I’d integrate them into the story, so now I’m stuck on a narrow path of ticking off/delivering for all the things I wrote in the past and trying to salvage the story.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:12:21 2022 No.17127727 This was a nice thread. I'm glad we had this thread.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:14:27 2022 No.17127857

>>17125694
Don't feel pressured to go in hardcore on foreshadowed things straight away. You're doing the best thing you can do given your situation, though, which isn't handwaving it, so good for you on that at least. Once you've gotten out of the debt of previous chapters it'll be a learning experience at least.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:16:01 2022 No.17127981 >>17127727 Enjoy them while they last.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:17:35 2022 No.17128091 >>17127981 Why are you always like this

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:27:25 2022 No.17128969 >>17127857 Thanks man, I’m hoping that once the nightmare chapter where I address all the shit I once alluded to is done, I’ll steer the story in a different and (hopefully) better direction.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 01:29:48 2022 No.17129179 File: 169 KB, 1020x850, the other two are off having sex or something.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17116736 I will wait curiously.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:06:15 2022 No.17132277 >>17116736 You know this discussion about gen brothels reminds of this post about hololive as a brothel >10796647 >10796703

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:07:42 2022 No.17132390 >>17132277 Nice tagging dumbass

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:17:11 2022 No.17133176 File: 718 KB, 1390x579, 1642982804811.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>16990036 Appreciating Moona's meaty body onegai

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:21:17 2022 No.17133512 >74 IPs hold on a second, what the fuck?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:24:56 2022 No.17133806 >>17133512 A clear sign of a dead thread

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:25:31 2022 No.17133862 >>17133512 I wonder how many people out of those 74 IPs actually read stories. Apart from the series entry this thread, most stories only get ~4 (You)s. We had more feedback a year ago with 40ish IPs.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 02:52:19 2022 No.17135764 >>17133512 Why are you surprised? Other threads reached 70 IP, you newfag.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:00:49 2022 No.17136365

>>17133862
You don't get it huh. More IPs but the same amount of stories means that this thread does not actively engage the tourists that come here. There are more IPs because these threads are lasting longer since no one is writing and that also kills the bumps that would be the feedback to those stories.

But yes, people are giving less feedback as well. Even big series get like 1 serious feedback for every 10 "it's finally here! *never reads or talks about it*" posts.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:07:46 2022 No.17136840

>>17133862
I don’t write stories but I do enjoy reading whatever this thread and /infinity/ puts out. Occasionally I do post if I see the thread stagnating or have something I want to say like now, but I don’t like to post in general because I can’t contribute much and watching anons having insightful discussions is fun for me. Sorry if this might be a bit of a blogpost, but I think most lurkers feel the way I do regarding these threads.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:16:20 2022 No.17137397 >>17136365 Pretty much this. I've said it before, but it's all numbers to these people. A good 60% of posters here are tourists.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:18:38 2022 No.17137562 Metaposting about thread health kinda sucks, guys. You know what they say about talking of the Devil. If you've got spare time to kill, why don't you write a story about Fubuki going for a walk in the forest and spiders laying eggs in her?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:20:09 2022 No.17137665 >>17137562 This but (You) are the alien mind of the spider.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:24:41 2022 No.17137967 >>17136840 If you see a story you enjoy you should definitely say something. Even a small “this was good” can work wonders for writeanons, I speak from experience.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:25:12 2022 No.17137997

>>17137562
I would but we're too close to bump limit. I wanted to write so many things but above 200 posts it's just a turn off for me unfortunately. The reason? Feedback. It's already super sparce, and having to link a story from another thread to give your feedback is too much of a hasle and so it only cuts it down further.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:28:04 2022 No.17138147 >>17137997 Now's about the best time, actually. By the time you're done writing whatever you want to write, we'll undoubtedly have a new thread. We're 5 posts off.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:29:00 2022 No.17138221 it might be time. anons... we may have to advertise. on reddit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:29:44 2022 No.17138271 >>17138221 >on reddit. I'll rather make a discord.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:30:47 2022 No.17138339 >>17138221 I would rather let us die a natural death than hook our rotting corpse up to that godawful excuse for life-support.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:30:56 2022 No.17138347 >>17138271 why would you want to remove anonymity?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:33:32 2022 No.17138525 New thread >>17138389

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:34:14 2022 No.17138573 File: 849 KB, 1180x661, 1634128259687.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17137562 >spiders laying eggs in her? Oh hello there bugchama, good to see you're just as much of a freak as ever.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:34:14 2022 No.17138571

>>17138221
Ew.
Though unironically I think we need a better way to get new writers than what I assume is the pipeline of
>Get into vtubers
>Want to read vtuber fanfiction
>Get dissatisfied with the other sources of fanfics, like ao3 and wattpad.
>Go to /vt/ because there's a writing thread.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:35:04 2022 No.17138642 >>17138221 And get doxxed? Nah

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:35:48 2022 No.17138701 File: 63 KB, 1056x498, 1643056586352.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>17138573 Good to see you too!

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:37:06 2022 No.17138777 Gaaay.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:39:31 2022 No.17138942 >>17137562 > spiders Booorinngg~

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:40:57 2022 No.17139028 >>17138942 I mean, I posted it more as an attempt to shift the topic. I'm down with almost anything.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:49:59 2022 No.17139640 Any new story ideas you'd like to share with the class?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:52:04 2022 No.17139765 >>17139640 2 thousand words into fubuki being BLACKED rn

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:52:36 2022 No.17139791 >>17139765 Are you actually? That sounds hot as fuck.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:53:52 2022 No.17139863 >>17138221 I don’t know if you’re joking or not but this is the worst suggestion I’ve ever seen in this thread

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:54:42 2022 No.17139900 >>17139791 Nah. But I've considered it a lot. I don't really know if I want to contribute to the number of fubuki fics even if it's out of spite

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:55:30 2022 No.17139952 >>17139863 it's literally the only other hub apart from ao3, and to be quite honest i'd rather redditors - seeing as this board is already infested with them - than the fujos that inhabit ao3

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:56:57 2022 No.17140064 >>17139900 >even if it's out of spite Well, best way to do that then would be to just not write anything about her, because as a sukonbu, I'd read anything Fubuki related.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 03:59:38 2022 No.17140254 >>17139900 Yeah spite is a good motivator to start shit but damn is it not a good motivator to continue making shit afterwards... or to make it of quality.

Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:00:36 2022 No.17140310

>>17139640
(You) are constantly pestered by an ethereal "Chat" that follows you everywhere and makes running commentary on your life. Mostly telling you to fuck every girl you meet, or otherwise bullying you and giving intentionally bad advice for their own amusement. You can't tell anyone about it because it would make you sound out of your fucking mind, so you mostly just pretend to be normal and suffer in silence while in the company of other people. Until one day you meet a girl who suffers from the exact same otherworldly and annoying affliction as you.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:02:53 2022 No.17140487 >>17140310 Forsen and Nina origin story PogU Pog Pog :heart:

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:07:02 2022 No.17140829 >>17140487 are those actual vtubers or are you just pulling names out of a hat?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:08:14 2022 No.17140904 >>17140829 Forsen is THE face of twitch. You'd know if you were not a pleb.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:18:52 2022 No.17141634 Ok, now I remember why I gave up messing with my car; it just never ends. Spending my nights was just so much comfier than constantly figuring shit out.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:20:04 2022 No.17141695 >>17139952 >than the fujos that inhabit ao3 You joke, but given the differences in ways men and women seem to use tags on fics that have been posted here, it’s highly likely a few ao3 fujos have already moved in to /wg/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:20:22 2022 No.17141713 >>17141634 Bro just give up on that fucking car take it to a mechanic man you've been nagging about for 6 months now what fucking thin g are you doing are you building a goddamned monster truck?

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:20:56 2022 No.17141737 >>17141634 Spending my nights writing* rather.

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:31:02 2022 No.17142263 >>17141695 There is no fucking way there are women that write here they'd have to pass through like 3 fucking filters (Not liking ao3, not getting filtered by 4chan, and not getting filtered by the use of 2nd person)

>>	Anonymous Wed Jan 26 04:32:59 2022 No.17142347 >>17142263 Wait, is 2nd person perspective really that hated?

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