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/ag/ Architecture General

>> No.1662451

First for making girls taller and wider

>> No.1662581
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There's a subject field for a reason

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>>1662011
Thanks OP, I was gonna make one, but you did it for me

someone did mention a suisei one last thread but that idea felt kinda redundant

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>>1662581
The way Marine talks about her ass I'd think it'd look more like this Watame

>> No.1662697

>>1662011
>>1662581
She already gets off on being weak and useless and has a massive ass. She's only a small push away from going full cow
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tYGQ_0Rqk0A

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Ina RFA starting soon

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>>1662697
well didn't marine say her ass was pretty wide? also could explain why that shit hurts for her

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>> No.1664637 [DELETED] 

Thank you based jannie for spoiling that shit.

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>>1662011
>no subject
>unspoilered mega fatty
Come on, anon, step it up. Ideally the OP pic should be something middle-of-the-line that even most non-architects can enjoy to maximize thread participation.

that said thanks for posting my commission. i'm working on getting a subaru full-color two-parter
>>1664637
He's low-test but I'm also thankful for him correcting OP's laziness instead of just nuking us

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>>1664980
Thread creation should be left to the professionals.

>> No.1665390

>>1664596
>>1665313
Still some of the best holofats

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>>1665313
i don't care, that aqua ass is to die for

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also sora starting to get some bigger art

>> No.1666351 [SPOILER] 
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Mamatsuri looks good chonked up. Pretty large you were warned

>> No.1666984

>>1666351
holy shit, sauce? her expression is perfect. this is what i've been looking for from holomilfs

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>>1666351
fuck it, i'd rather see fatsuri so lyger dies

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>>1667730
>lyger dreads fatsuri
what's the source of this rrat? he subbed the clip of her talking about being a huge glutton at beyond the stage pretty enthusiastically. did he have some huge spergout on plebbit or twitter or something?

>> No.1669542

>>1669515
no, i just hate lyger and wishes he offs himself, thats all

>> No.1669660

>>>/d/

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>>1663096
>didn't marine say her ass was pretty wide
https://youtu.be/elAKQZ1Oj9o
https://youtu.be/4CKnEBOOZAQ

CAN YOU IMAGINE

>> No.1669860

What the fuck is wrong with you people?

>> No.1669911
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i'm stuck continuing with a narrative outline i've prepared because i keep waffling on who it should be about. i need a chuuba for which it's plausible they have a super secret M-streak where they want to be fed like a pig, and one with a maybe not so hidden S-streak that'd jump at the opportunity if they found out

>> No.1670440

>>1669911
Maybe Takamori? Or perhaps Noel and Flare

>> No.1670455

>>1670440
there already was a really nice noelflare one

>> No.1670521

>>1669798
>my ass were to have a hitbox

Is marine autistic? god i love her

>> No.1671008

>>1670440
>>1670455
looking for a bit less of a low-hanging fruit so i can create a certain dynamic between the two. they don't have to have hardly interacted at all, frankly. my initial thought was mori/ina, but i can't help but feel there's a better choice for one or both

>> No.1671042

>>1671008
again, i know thats what we gotta avoid: devoid content that becomes repetitive

>> No.1671083

>>1669911
Polka and Watame.

>> No.1671262

>>1671008
Polka and Reine!

>> No.1672346

>>1669860
Our brains are broken. Forgive us.

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>>1669860
sometimes life can get carried away

>> No.1673064

>>1671008
Reine and Ame

>> No.1674301

>>1673064
>>1671262
reine would be a good option anyways

>> No.1674537 [SPOILER] 
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>>1669911
Sora feeding Achan?
or shota Flare feed-d
oming A-chan

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peko feels easy to do one, but i feel the general "oh she eats a lot and gets fat" storyline is lazy for her

>> No.1676915

Can someone post that story about anya not getting physically fat but one she turns back into a sword she's a broad sword now?

>> No.1678716

>>1674537
sora doing it to A-chan would be funny

>> No.1678748 [DELETED] 

>>1676915
That's hilarious.

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>fat rushia is overdone
>but then remember her outfit and remember how damn good the idea of the fat growing and bursting through her outfits, and making her larger
you're not seeing the bigger picture

>> No.1679412

>>1678748
>>1676915
Got it. It's very short though.

>attempt to feed anya into submission
>it never seems to work, she doesn't grow a belly or even get taller
>in a rage, you try having her returned to the pawn shop you got her from
>when she turns back to her sword form, you realize she has become a massive buster sword and that you can't hope to lift her

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>>1679412
Didn't need to be drawn out. Well done.

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>>1662011
>>1662581
>>1662584
>>1662657
>>1662697
>>1662818
>>1662851
>>1663096
>>1663985
>>1664019
>>1664500
>>1664547
>>1664596
>>1664637
>>1664980
>>1665313
>>1665390
>>1665427
>>1665533
>>1666351
>>1666984
>>1667730
>>1669515
>>1669542
>>1669660
>>1669798
>>1669860
>>1669911
>>1670440
>>1670455
>>1670521
>>1671008
>>1671042
>>1671083
>>1671262
>>1672346
>>1672922
>>1673064
>>1674301
>>1674537
>>1676904
>>1676915
>>1678716
>>1678748
>>1679050
>>1679412
>>1679620
disgusting.

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>>1679830
mass replying should be it's own class of bannable offense. kill yourself faggot

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>>1679941

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Marine as the architect for Gen 3 instead.

>> No.1681539

>>1674537
>that spoiler
>that image
I'm feeling inspiration, anon.

>> No.1682312

>kinda want to get something with Suisei
>can’t think of any outfits that would expose her gut

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>>1682312
any outfit that ends in a miniskirt can ride way the fuck up on a fat gut and wide ass if it's not sized up. also consider having her in undergarments

>> No.1683186

>>1682796
Elaborate

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>> No.1683818

>>1683799
Guh indeed, lmao

>> No.1683948

>>1664980
No issue mate. Was about to head off to work before I noticed a missing thread so I decided to start one off
>>1662581
Sorry mate. Didn't notice it until I finished up making the thread

>> No.1686784

>>1662011
I can't believe it took me this long to realize that there were architecture threads in /vt/

>> No.1686892

>>1686784
It's better if we keep a somewhat low profile just in case, but yeah

>> No.1690284

>>1676904
i mean her breakfast is creampuffs after all

>> No.1691742

I'm currently in the middle of a 72h fast. Please stop posting fat and happy chuubas.

>> No.1692331

>>1691742
Fuck it, just remembered it's friday and I want to get drunk. Some other time then, feel free to post fatchubas.

>> No.1692377

>>1692331
Don't give up so easily, anon. You could be buying that alcohol for your oshi instead of yourself

>> No.1694489

>>1683818
I don’t know why I hated it when in reality it’s the best holofat image I’ve seen

>> No.1698590

don’t die on me damnit

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why is this place dead? page 7 takes an hour now? sheesh

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Very large(warning) peko mama and pekora

>> No.1699971

>>1699868
Well someone's been getting paid as of late drawing moms, it seems

>> No.1700021

>>1699868
why blobs?

>> No.1700246

>>1691742
Don't do 72 hour fasts, are you stupid?

>> No.1700261

>>1700246
I've done it before. It's not a big deal. Although I didn't do it this time, as I'm currently drunk.

>> No.1701514

>>1700261
Doing it for lent?

>> No.1701866

>>1699868
>how massively fat Pekora must be
I don't like blobs
I don't like blobs
I don't like blobs

>> No.1702619

>>1701866
Blobs only really work for me when written, and even then only if the writer doesn't spend too much time emphasizing how huge they are. The 'concept' of them getting so big is nice, but when you have to look at it too closely it stops being so appealing for me

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4wZFhz9NWpk
Bros...

>> No.1703732 [DELETED] 

>>1701866
Yeah, they cease to be characters anymore. They're just mounds of flesh. It's fucking gross.

>> No.1703752

>>1701866
agreed: blobs are fucking bad and the absolute worst one can get for fat

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where do you people even come from

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>>1703687

>> No.1703866

>>1703789
Alabama.

>> No.1705008

>>1703789
from outside the programming that tells you malnourished sticks are supposed to be pretty. any reasonable human actually into female bodies rather than primarily intellectual stuff like femdom or rape or whatever would prefer a bit of meat to play with during sex if they hadn't been brainwashed during adolescence.

now, the blobfags, i have no idea what's going on in their heads

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>>1703789
sometimes you gotta have meat

>> No.1708278

did subaru get fatter again? shes talking about potato chips now

>> No.1708426

>>1708278
She's going for a new angle to be 'the fat one'

>> No.1708538

>>1708278
for girls gaining 1 kg means they're "fat"
don't get your hopes up.

>> No.1708550

>>1708538
i know but she said shes very lightweight. same for aqua

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Writefag prompts cuz this thread is slower than I like
>Mio seems to pamper Ayame a tad too much
>Gura discovers Sushi, doesn't discover how to stop
>Polka! That food was for an entire circus audience!
>Risu's hibernation stash is empty, maybe Moona knows something
>Lamy takes over Roberu's bar, on the rocks please...
>Iofi uses alien tech to make her taller, but now she's wider
>Pekora receives and eats an entire carrot cake gift from Miko, then Moona, then Kiara
>Luna is so cute it makes Marine wanna sit on her
>Towa takes everyone's sweets, how devilish
>Miko has been stealing food from the shrine for a bit of time now
>Suisei bulks up her figure for flirting with "shonens"
>In an act of petty revenge, Ame fucks up the timeline and now all of EN is fat
>Hololive sponsors some soda brand and Sora-chan gets hooked and bloated
>Ollie tries to bankrupt that noodle-shop that's in her home by eating all of its stock
>Haachama becomes a judge for Mel's cooking and it is not good on the waistline

>> No.1710699

>>1703687
THAT'S IT! I'm going to become a super athlete and fuck that fat ass!

>> No.1711132

>>>/d/

>> No.1711181

>>1710699
Anon then terrified Marine with his overkill amount of muscles.

>> No.1711586

>>1708823
i've been kind of busy lately, sorry. i'd be much obliged if other potential writefags would assume nothing from me and give it a shot themselves.

that said, i very much like three of these in particular, so i now have four narrative shells to work with and choose from whenever i get some time

>> No.1711986

>>1708823
i think the lamy, polka, peko and i think sora ones could be pretty good

>> No.1712526

>>1711181
Nah, I'd only get enough muscle to lift 2-3x my weight as a ORM. If anything it's going to be the Ultra Marathon running and Century Biking that will scare her.

>> No.1712622

>>1712526
That's still a lot of muscle, especially since the amount will go up the more weight you try to lift.
Assuming you're around 170 you'd be trying to deadlift 510ish pounds

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You're all lifting to carry your Oshis even when they're fat as fuck right Anons?

>> No.1715658

>one day, polka has an entire audience show up for her circus performance, and polka had a nice magic "trick" planned for her audience today
>every holomember was there in performance, so polka was planning something, rather large
>she wanted to perform a trick where she appeared larger for a few minutes, and revert back to normal.
>polka already had practiced this trick beforehand with gokisei members, and they all were impressed, but this was on a bigger stage
>she started off with her usual intro "OHAPOL", and started the show with a regular set of tricks and magic performances
>most of the performances were cheesy, but the crowd was rather happy with the way she performed during the night
>then began the final act: her growing and getting back to normal
>she planned on eating a massive platter of fast food in front of her, getting to a comical size, and then being able to revert back to normal size
>"and for my next performance, I am going to grow and then shrink back to normal in the blink of an eye!"
>the crowd was amused, but was confused as to what polka had just said
>her plan was to try and distract everyone that the food went into a suit, and then she would dispose of it behind the stage under the table where nobody would see it, something she took away from penn and teller
>however, she didn't connect the suit to her body, making the food still go into her body instead of the suit as a result
>polka began to gorge on the burgers, fries, shakes and other assorted goodies on the set, openly enjoying herself as well
>the crowd was silent for this, as they didn't realize how quickly polka gorged on the food
>then they took notice of her body, rapidly getting larger and larger by the moment
>As a result of this newfound attention, polka started to yell "MOTTO MOTTO" for the crowd to care now
>her legs were quickly swelling up, alongside her stomach and ass, almost comically as a result
>this went on for nearly 30 minutes as well
>her body was swelling at an incredible rate as well, and the crowd started to get disgusted as well
>her body was almost three times her original size, with her suit having rips on the thighs, the tutu ripped apart with the size of her hips and ass now
>polka's stomach was now exposed to everyone also: a massive beer belly that was clearly burgeoning with the fatty fast food she had just consumed
>her breasts might as well be balloons at this rate, reaching a comical S cup: her nipples were also visible
>when it was all said and done,polka finished nearly 50 burgers, 100 packs of fries, 20 sets of tenders, 30 packs of onion rings, and 10 milkshakes in that span.

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>>1715658
>>1715658
>the crowd was now visibly disgusted at the size of polka: they could not believe that she had just done such an act in front of everyone
>some members laughed at the comical size of her, and others just left as well
>polka, with her face blushing and almost aroused, had said that she will make it vanish in just five minutes as well
>she looked for the plug but at the worst time, realized that the suit wasn't even on: she was eating that the entire time!
>polka panicked and quickly tried to make up an excuse that it'll get fixed, all while shaking around her new body
>she was getting aroused as well being this large, and didn't care as well because she just pigged out on food that she enjoyed
>30 minutes passed, and she still was massive, resulting in the circus all leaving as a result
>who could blame them? They just saw someone gorge on ford in front of a massive crowd, become this massive fool, and fail the promise she had just said
>polka was now left alone, massive and filled with food. She didn't care because she was already happy looking like this bloated mess
>the first thing she did was also look at her massive beer belly, and feel pleasure with the size it was
>she rubbed the stomach, and started to masturbate on the empty stage, caring less and less about her being
>even as a larger clown, she still desired more from crowds
>she waited a few months to get a tad smaller and the cycle began again, and that was her circus now: gorging out on stage and making herself comically large just to impress others as a result
>however, it was always tough for her with the massive size she had gained


another attempt i did at writing, I clearly need to fix my fetish writing

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>>1715658
>the crowd was now visibly disgusted at the size of polka: they could not believe that she had just done such an act in front of everyone
>some members laughed at the comical size of her, and others just left as well
>polka, with her face blushing and almost aroused, had said that she will make it vanish in just five minutes as well
>she looked for the plug but at the worst time, realized that the suit wasn't even on: she was eating that the entire time!
>polka panicked and quickly tried to make up an excuse that it'll get fixed, all while shaking around her new body
>she was getting aroused as well being this large, and didn't care as well because she just pigged out on food that she enjoyed
>30 minutes passed, and she still was massive, resulting in the circus all leaving right away, disgusted and let down of a promise
>who could blame them? They just saw someone gorge on ford in front of a massive crowd, become this massive fool, and fail the promise she had just said
>polka was now left alone, massive and filled with food. She didn't care, for she was already happy looking at this newly body attained
>there were fat rolls on her arm, and her thighs were massive as a result
>she look at her ass: a massive shelf that could probably act as a cushion as well
>her stomach, however, was the best thing that she had grown now
>polka looked at this new beer belly of hers, and started to become aroused by the size
>she rubbed the stomach, and started to masturbate on the empty stage, wondering if her genmates thought less of her
>this was little more of an afterthought, as she bursted out and was pleased, knocking out on stage and passing into a deep slumber
>when she woke up, polka soon realized she could keep making the circus go if she just kept eating and making herself become larger.
>every month, she'd go around and find a new place to perform. her comical size obviously went down, but the fat did not
>her fat kept exponentially growing on stage as well, making people both aroused and disgusted
>polka took pleasure in people noticing: she felt like she was truly the center of attention because of this
>her clothes also kept bursting out after each show, resulting in a new size being made each month just to contain this mass
>for polka, this was a ride she wanted to keep going and gained more attention with every passing moment
>even on the stage, she would burst into excitement and ejaculate whenever her costume bursted or even ripped and teared
>to her circus, this became her life anyways: more fast food and glistening oil. she could never escape the taste of a juicy hamburger or a thick milkshake


another attempt i did at writing, I clearly need to fix my fetish writing, and it shows here

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>> No.1719273

>>1715658
>>1716566
i have some advice. i think you have a lot of good concepts, but you need to set aside time for revision ideally at every completed line or at least once at the end of the whole passage. the "flow" of the prose is a lot more important in erotica than for other genres, because every little thing that distracts from the reader's attention pauses their building arousal in place or in worse cases, actually sets it back

first of all, there's basic proofreading. tense should be consistent everywhere. it shouldn't be jumping around between lines and *especially* within them. avoid run-ons, keep capitalization and dialogue conventions consistent, avoid punctuation and spelling mistakes, etc. etc. the odd mistake or two tends to just be autocorrected by the brain while quickly parsing, but multiple in succession or a high total count starts to create a nagging distraction in the reader's mind. take the line
>her plan was to try and distract everyone that the food went into a suit
may have benefited you to reread that one

next, when you think of a line in your head, say it out loud before writing it down. you'll probably notice yourself pausing for beats at certain points and/or giving certain words or phrases emphasis. make intentional and frequent use of punctuation and other symbols to ensure that what you write will be naturally read to match that cadence. commas, semicolons, colons, quotes, asterisks, and the like are your friends. in text editors less limiting than the 4chan reply box, italicization and bolding are also viable options, though try to be consistent with how you indicate emphasis if you plan to do it frequently. generally avoid ALL CAPS AS A METHOD OF INDICATING TONE BECAUSE IT DISTRACTS FROM THE MOOD AND DRAWS IN THE READER'S EYES LONG BEFORE AND AFTER THEY GET TO IT. it's fine if it's literally meant to indicate a character shouting in dialogue, and i think your "MOTTO MOTTO" is an appropriate usage.

finally, look for ways to avoid repetition wherever possible, in both specific words and in details you're conveying to the reader. for example,
>one day, polka has an entire audience show up for her circus performance, and polka had a nice magic "trick" planned for her audience today
in your second clause here, you use "polka" again even though there's been no subject change in the interim. it's not *technically* grammatically incorrect, but it doesn't sound good. pronouns should be used instead until such time as the reader could potentially mistake what they're referring to with another subject. even then, ideally avoid referring to your subject in the same way too may times in a row, as you do in the next line and frequently elsewhere throughout. basic descriptors ("the bloating girl", "the hyperactive idol", etc) can fulfill the same purpose of identifying what you're talking about and additionally allow you to inject some description into the scene.

in regards to repetition of information, take the first line again. you lead off with "one day", but just a few words later specify "today". in the fifth line, she "started off with her usual intro", then "started the show". later, "polka began to gorge on the burgers..." and then in the next line, the crowd "didn't realize how quickly polka gorged on the food". you see the redundancy? looking for ways to rephrase things and places to (ironically given the subject matter) trim the fat from the information you're trying to convey can work wonders for making your story sound engaging and natural.

thanks for coming to my ted talk.

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>>1719273
actually, thanks. I still want to try and become a better fetish writer, and I need to try and fix those things anyways

>> No.1720095

reine's eating again

>> No.1720287

Ame revealed her interest in architecture in the Minecraft collab.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=okuGibvAAJE&t=4165s

>> No.1720335

>>1662011
This board is already /bvt/ except for the general they kind of mod sometimes.

>> No.1723439

Also, try and not use the greentext model if you can

>> No.1725275

>>1701514
To prove to myself that I can. It's a willpower thing.

>> No.1725313

>>1705008
>if you don't like fatties you must like anorexic stick figures
I'm a fatfag too but holy fuck people like you are obnoxious.

>> No.1725323

>>1701866
Blob shit is the worst. Give me those curvaceous Bamboo Ale girls.

>> No.1725441

>>1725323
>Blob shit is the worst
>Give me those curvaceous Bamboo Ale girls
You're just asking to get monkey pawed here

>> No.1725471

How about the next time you feel like bitching about someone else's taste you post something you like instead

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Dumb comedian usagi after eating too many breakfast cream puffs

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Big monsters!

>> No.1732714

>>1725441
The worst he can do is make a giant fat ass

>> No.1734912

>>1732714
you clearly haven't seen his older work

>> No.1735128

>>1732714
He was THE blob guy like less than a year ago.

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CHUBBY TENTACLES CHUBBY TENTACLES

>> No.1737952

>>1735128
wait he was? fuck i don't keep track of art like that...

>> No.1738805

>>1737284
Imagine fucking her belly button

>> No.1743943

>>1737284
Ina looks like she's been on the Krabby Patties

>> No.1748408

>>1737952
the difference between what he did for his first several years online and what he's been doing recently is striking. he had loads of almost formless blobs that stretched into the horizon and had flaps and rolls of flab all over the place with no regard for anatomy. what he's been doing in the last several months is absolute gold by comparison, though i do wish he'd add in a little more tummy again

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>>1748408
as long as he keeps it up, its all good

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>> No.1754764 [DELETED] 

>>1754733
Haachama was made for milking.

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>>1754764

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>> No.1757685

>Haato gaining because of Haachama

>> No.1758247

>>1757685
>in order to gain control, haachama must gain weight to overtake haato

>> No.1763131

>>1754764
Haachama cooking with her own breastmilk

>> No.1764767

>>1763131
I can't get any more erect.

>> No.1769015

Suicopath tying up and force feeding your oshi!

>> No.1769156

>>1769015
I don't see it

>> No.1769372

>>1769015
Suisei entering an eating contest and going full tryhard

>> No.1771200

>>1769372
Would suisei really?

>> No.1771943

>>1703789
from the ancient civilization of breeder chads that made the 1st Fat venus idol duh... it was the precurser to the vtuber craze

>> No.1772308

I’m trying to still conceptualize how suisei would even look as a chubby person. Just doesn’t fit at all

>> No.1772517

>>1771200
Yes.

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>>1772517
again, I do not see suisei as someone who'd make herself go into an eating competition unless there is a logical reason

also she feels like an untouchable next to friend

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>> No.1772769

>>1772588
it's interesting you think that way. i also think of friend as an untouchable, but suisei is lewd as fuck to me. she's very candid and has an unhinged streak, which when put in contrast with her natural idol talents creates a huge potential for gap-ero. knowing that she has the skills to make it as an ideal idol, but a character filled with gaps for temptation and otherwise non-seiso behavior to slip through if she's not careful makes it really easy to imagine her fetish scenarios

>> No.1773164

>>1772769
i think suisei is lewd in the way she already is and doesn't need the architecture

but sora? sora could use it

>> No.1773363

>>1773164
yeah i agree honestly, it's kind of hard to imagine her letting herself go.

now, in lingerie straddling another girl's engorged gut and shoving cake after cake down their throat while panting in arousal? that is very easy to picture

>> No.1774311

>>1773363
i think its easier to see someone who constantly streams letting themselves go anyways

>> No.1775109

One day fatchads will get a Vtuber of our own. A cute, plump anime girl with an outfit designed to show off her extra weight, who openly talks about her insatiable appetite and playfully whines about her rising weight while she shares cute details about how her weight gain affects her life.

What kind of theme would even be good for an architect approved chuuba?

>> No.1775182

https://twitter.com/evutenkai/status/1373705984086921216

>> No.1775251

ina....please make it less obvious that you are fat

>> No.1775323

>>1775182
>thanks cakecatboy for the prompt
kek, i thought she was trying to get in with the vtuber crowd normally? she's even provided the EN girls those little colored blankets they use occasionally. pretty ballsy to start publicly asking for fat fetish art of them, though not like i'm complaining

>> No.1776613

>>1669860
High T

>> No.1776685

>>1703789
/fit/

>> No.1778302

Towa...

>> No.1778722

>>1778302
towatecht...

>> No.1780263

>>1775251
I don’t watch Ina, what’s your evidence/reasoning behind her being fat?

>> No.1780550

>>1780263
There is none. In fact her roommate looks unhealthily thin.

>> No.1783851

>>1772699
Would you still think your oshi is cute if she were fat /ag/?

>> No.1783926

>>1780263
She's an unathletic hikki artist with terrible endurance, but she's probably the super skinny type

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>>1783851
but she already is...

>> No.1784828 [DELETED] 

>>1783851
Depends on how fat, but that's only in terms of looks. Doesn't make her personality any less precious.

>> No.1785397

>>1783851
Again, depends on how fat as well

>> No.1786639

Can someone repost the Noelflare story? That one was very good

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>>1786639
i'm sorry again about my rate of productivity, or lack thereof. i've gotten back into my bad habit of turning basic concepts into novels. i've already written 5 pages of what amounts to little more than a prologue for a flare/A-chan story, and don't see myself reaching a good break point for /ag/'s viewing pleasure anytime this week even in the best case scenario. might just put it on the super long-term backburner and open myself back up to tiny prompts that better suit greentexting

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>>1786918
also image

you have advice for writers anyways who want to try and get better at this also besides the one posted above? I still feel like I have to learn fetish writing some more, especially after that embarrassing polka one I attempted

>> No.1787512

>>1787248
all that basic flow shit aside, i'd hesitate to give advice on the direction to take a narrative, because different people enjoy different things. you may have noticed that practically everything i've written involves a girl starting thin and being slowly corrupted by some means into lethargy or perversion, and that's just because that's my personal preference. i'm sure plenty of people here prefer different scenarios, like rapid/magical weight gain, focusing on them being fat from the start, that humiliation guy, etc., so you can see how it's hard to say whether a given scenario will be "good" in the eyes of the collective.

what i can say is, reading is better practice for improving your writing skills than actually writing. i've been reading fapfics and erotic material for like two decades, so i have an immense wealth of examples to draw from in regards to phrasing, vocabulary, tropes, narrative structure, etc. if you don't have a really good understanding of what makes your favorite stories so memorable and enjoyable, you're not going to be able to reproduce their level of quality. go find some of the fapfics you've personally found the most erotic and compare them with each other and with lesser works. what specifically sets them apart? which details do you particularly enjoy? is there anything you *dis*liked about them that you wish the author would have handled differently?

there are no original ideas; writing is just cobbling together dozens and hundreds of things you've seen before elsewhere in a unique arrangement. you shouldn't feel lost or like you're totally improvising at any point, rather, the process to me feel like taking a bunch of lego bricks i'm familiar with and putting them together in slightly different ways each time. most of the time, the only significant difference is taking a few basic details from the characters and setting i'm writing about and using them as the foundation to build everything else upon. everything else is just stream of consciousness muscle memory regurgitating my favorite phrases in random order while stopping every once in a while to make sure i'm not being repetitive

>> No.1788854

>>1787512
that too can help

Thanks anon

>> No.1789041

>>1737284
Ina, please. I can only get so aroused.

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>> No.1792336

>>1775251
I think the fact that Ina is definitely not fat at all is probably part of the reason she gets so much fat art

>> No.1796405

>>1789147
I wanna hug the belly

>> No.1796586

>>1792336
It’s the contrast that’s fun
She’s a twig so it’s fun to make her pack on the pounds

>> No.1798849

Which chuubas have the most architectable outfits for moderate pudge, and which for huge growth? Some of them are only suited for one body shape, like, Flare's is begging for her to have a massive ass

>> No.1800565

>>1798849
said it before, but i'll say it again: rushia

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anyone have that mio one?

>> No.1804192

>>1798849
Shion and Marine are just begging to have massive bellies

>> No.1804473

>>1775109
You will get a fat bara ojisan and you'll be happy.

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>>1798849
Marine probably for a moderate pudge, although extending from there is not unreasonable

>> No.1806148

>>1804192
shion belly yo...

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>> No.1809713

>>1737284
ina shoving those chubby tentacles all the way through me!

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I can barely tell but I think this is flare

>> No.1809958

>>1809779
Pretty sure that's Jean from Genshin Impact

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>>1803807

>> No.1810710

>>1809779
yeah that ain't flare

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>> No.1811811

>>1809713
imagine her trying to domme you by seductively binding you up in those pudgy tentacles only for them to run out of energy after suspending you for like ten seconds and collapse into sweaty limp blobs that you can massage and caress as you reverse the situation and stuff her into a food coma

>> No.1812438

>>1811811
P-please anon! I can't get any harder, fuckkkk

>> No.1812804

>>1798849
Sora's new outfit and Reine are top architectable Holos. Anyone with an exposed midriff is really

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>>1812804
i still see it clearly

fucking perfect for milf

>> No.1816525

what does a fat tentacle feel like?

>> No.1817985

>>1810741
>preg
Anon that’s not what a pregnant belly looks like

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>>1817985
>>1810741
too many hamburgers

>> No.1819248

Where did you guys develop your fetish for feeding/bbw? I'm genuinely curious. Was it something th a happened on your life that turned you this way or was it excessive internet use?

>> No.1821024

>>1819248
Expansion/growth

>> No.1821051

>>1662011
>architecture
Just come out and admit that it's just an obesity fetish general instead of misusing terms like architecture.

>> No.1822469

>>1821051
>not understanding its a brosdan meme
come on man

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>>1822469
I love brosnanposting

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man, squidchads just can't stop winning

>> No.1828369

>>1823585
>Implying Planet Fitness would be worthy of blowing up.
That place kicks you out for lifting to heavy, and gives you a free god damn pizza for entering.

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>>1828369
>and gives you a free god damn pizza for entering.

>> No.1829486

>>1725275
It primarily proves that you're retarded

>> No.1829769

>>1716906
I wish her breasts were bigger to be proportionate with the chub

>> No.1829923

>>1814680
>thumbnail seems like she has massive tits
>she doesn't

>> No.1830020

>>1819248
>Where did you guys develop your fetish for feeding/bbw
Mommy

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>> No.1832533

https://mobile.twitter.com/MASSGRAVE_ART/status/1374468337279791112

>> No.1833025

>>1831342
Can you edit that and make it say milk truck instead?

>> No.1836263

>>1833025
i actually dont know: i need to find an original one

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really gonna need to find more writefags...

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Suisei...

>> No.1840239

>>1840077
i am aroused and i hate it

>> No.1840248

>>1840077
NICE also wow that dress looks like it must've been a huge pain to draw

>> No.1840397

>>1840077
>stuffing to weight gain

Not enough people do this, based

>> No.1840649

>>1840077
Excellent

>> No.1840821

>>1840077
Holy
That second panel is just
god damn

>> No.1840850

>>1840077
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dezfnxL_7ZQ

>> No.1840947

>>1831088
Holy shit this is amazing

>> No.1840964

>>1840850
Now I want fatsuri....

>> No.1841458

>>1831088
>that swollen belly
hhhhhhhhhhhhh

>> No.1841606

>>1831088
Ina was made for fattening up and stuffing full of food.
Ina big belly, belly pop out of shirt, make me go unga. Big Erotic. Big Love for Big Girl.

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>>1838883
Guess I could share some more prompts
>Ina uncovers the Ancient Ones Cookbook and the calories are impossible for the human mind to understand
>Nene gets Botan to test her SUPER ULTRA MAX DELUXE AMAZING cooking
>Ame uses her detective skills to find Haachama in Kiara's Usual Room to only be caught herself
>Fubuki inhales burgers until she's too heavy for even Oga to pick her up
>Matsuri takes a trip to Luna's candy kingdom
>Kanata puts Coco on a diet and eats the dragon's share for good measure
>Long live machine, the future supreme, man overthrown, spit out the bone
>That Terraria stream where Coco gets attacked by King Slime
If I was bold and had disposable income, I would commission stories
>>1840077

>> No.1842170

>one month ago i hated the very concept of this
>now i fucking like this fetish
i hate this site

>> No.1843037

>>1842170
just accept that tummy is the best and chubby chuubas are great anon
don't fight it

>> No.1844834

>>1843037
yeah but breasts and ass too

>> No.1844979

>>1842170
Open your eyes to the flabbiness and be smothered in its loving embrace

>> No.1845138

>>1844979
She's like a blanket, made of flesh, that you can make moan.

>> No.1845519

>Kanata puts Coco on a diet and eats the dragon's share for good measure

This is Diamonds material

>> No.1845555

>>1845519
>kanatan and coco both do it as a challenge

>> No.1845775

Also guess we are on autosage

Rest In Peace

>> No.1846644

>>1845775
By the power of Reine's appetite, bump!

>> No.1846797

>>1846644
It isn’t working


Looks like we might be out of here

>> No.1846914

>>1845775
>autosage
Y tho

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Amelia...FATSON

>> No.1847142

>>1840077
The notion of a dress basically turning into a shirt through weight gain is one of my favorites.

>> No.1847211

>>1838883
>>1840077
>Suisei sits at the table apprehensively, the rich scent of meat filling the air around her. An excited crowd is gathered, and her sister waves at her from a ways out.

>She's surrounded by several somewhat plump-looking men and women, all staring deathly serious at the mounds of seasoned festival food in front of them. Her lithe, picturesque figure looks totally out of place.

>It's a hot dog eating contest.

>She swallows nervously and wonders again how she'd gotten roped into this.

>Anemachi had burst into her room this morning and shuffled her here in an impulsive fervor, babbling something about how the winner would get a Fantia coupon or something.

>Before she'd even been able to ask for details, she'd found herself seated before dozens of sizzling platters of pork, waiting for an announcer to blow the starting whistle,

>She claps her hands to her face; the situation may be a little unexpected, but she's no quitter. No matter the competition, she plays to win.

>And besides...

>*grrrrrrrrllllllllll*

>She licks her lips. Most people don't know since she has to stay in perfect shape for her idol gig, but she positively adores event food like this.

>She'd once prematurely ended a trip to a theme park with some friends' families as a child by eating over ten people's leftovers at lunch and rendering herself glutted into immobility.

>Actually, Anemachi'd probably had a pretty good idea what she'd been asking this morning.

>The whistle blows. Suisei's opponents take off, shoving bite after bite of grilled meat into their mouths and chewing rapidly.

>They don't hold a candle to the starving blue-haired girl to their sides though.

>Suisei hardly wastes a millisecond deepthroating an entire dog, bun and all, and chasing it down with a thick gulp of water. She mewls in pleasure as the rich flavor of the meat fills her mouth and the compressed mass of calories begins to slide down her throat.

>There's no time to relax and savor the taste, though. Before the first dog is even halfway down her esophagus, she's pushing a second soggy tube of meat through her lips and preparing a third.

>The minutes pass. Some of the casual contestants are beginning to slow, reaching their sixth or seventh hot dogs, and even the veterans are beginning to feel full, but the furious blue hurricane between them is still practically inhaling her food. The crowd is starting to grow entranced with this beautiful dark horse.

>The girl's stomach is bulging tightly against her checkered dress, plain for everyone to see. It looks massive and tight on her thin frame; she must be practically stuffed to the gills by this point.

>...right?

>As if totally unaffected by the over two dozen hunks of meat and bread filling her guts, Suisei happily throws down dog after dog. The savory taste is simply intoxicating, and the sensation of increasing pressure on her stomach lining is making her head go fuzzy, like a potent high.

>Only two minutes remain. Almost every contestant has dropped out by now, but even the few remaining know they stand no chance at this point. While they're struggling to get even fragments of meat down their gullets, their giddy opponent hasn't slowed in the slightest.

>Even in her overexcited state of mind, Suisei is starting to feel her limits. Her stomach is painfully turgid, and her skin is tinted a light red.

>Worse, she's realizing she didn't think through her state of dress enough before starting. Her stylish belt is pressing tightly into her engorged flesh, and it's starting to hurt.

>She can't slow down though! She promised Anemachi she'd win, and she'll be damned if she makes herself a liar.

>With only a minute left, she redoubles her efforts, ignoring the angry rumbling coming from her lower belly. She finds that focusing on the mouthwatering taste of the pork allows her to forget about the queasiness assailing her.

>The obscene swell of her stuffed flesh is starting to escape the bottom of her dress and causing it to ride up on her sides, exposing her lacy lingerie, but she's too focused to think about the crowd staring at her. She has to go even faster... fill her belly even more... truly stuff herself silly!

>But even still... this... damned... belt......

>...*POP*...!!!

>Even after having ridden several centimeters up her swollen torso in response to the pressure, the weakly-stitched clasp must have had enough. With a violent ripping sound, it shoots off of the blue leather and goes flying into the crowd.

>Endorphins rush Suisei's brain.as the sense of pressure biting into her gut is suddenly alleviated. Without any outside resistance, the warm sensation pressing on the insides of her guts feels heavenly, and she's filled with a second wind of appetite.

>> No.1847254

>>1847211
>In actuality, she was the clear winner ages ago, but she's too engrossed in filling every corner of her tummy to the brim to even think about stopping now. The light pain still assaulting her tummy, the shouts of the crowd, the progress of her opponents, none of it matters as much as the burning need to stuff her throat full of as much meat as possible

>The whistle announcing the end of the competition finally blows. Suisei gets through a whole extra hotdog before the MC grabs and raises her arm into the air victoriously. Mouth still stuffed with soggy bread, she slowly snaps out of her delirium and looks up at the cheering crowd before scanning to her left and right and seeing a wave of defeated contestants. Anemachi is frantically waving and jumping in joy. She's... she's won!

>Her high wearing off along with the tense atmosphere, the adrenaline filling her system fades, and all of a sudden she feels like she can hardly move a muscle. Looking down at her stomach, she's shocked.

>The swollen organ is bigger than it's ever been in her life. It looks like someone glued a boulder to her torso, and it feels about as heavy. The thick mass of flesh is gurgling angrily and drenched in sweat, pushed to its limits. She feels like all the energy in her body is going into processing the torrent of meat and bread filling it.

>Feeling herself begin to drift off into a much needed sleep, a golden trophy is suddenly pressed into her limp hand, and she's told to smile for a commemorative photo.

>With the last of her strength, she grips the award just enough to keep it from falling and gives a pained grin to the camera. The moment the shutter snaps, she slips off into dreamland with a dumb grin and a stream of drool slipping through her lips. Fantasies of meats and sweets dance through her thoughts, and just before they cut out entirely, something mildly unpleasant comes to mind

>...What's going to happen to her once all this digests?

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>Suisei stands in front of her mirror with a thin, forced smile and twitching eyebrows. She's still wondering whether or not she's dreaming. She... must be dreaming, right? She's a pure, athletic idol that embodies the ideals of hundreds of thousands of idol fans. There's no way she could actually look like this.

>There's no way she could actually look like this tubby girl in the reflection!

>Suddenly feeling her insides churning, she reaches a hand down to rub her gut and realizes it's still digesting. Memories flood her mind, and she remembers with a grimace the ridiculous antics she got up to yesterday.

>Forty-six hot dogs were not kind to her figure.

>Looking back up at herself, she observes a soft layer of pudge coating her previously toned muscles. The tight definition of her arms and legs is totally gone, her thighs are packed with enough blubber to nearly touch just while standing, and... and her big, fat, wobbling gut......!

>Even though she understands that part of the reason it's still sticking out this much is because she's not done processing last night's feast, the swell of adipose is still clearly magnitudes larger than it used to be. Stretching out several inches from her torso and sagging slightly over her hips, the poor organ inside must have expanded in capacity at least threefold from the torture it'd been put through. The result is an embarassingly belly-heavy figure, the jiggly orb standing out even compared to the rest of her plumped-up assets.

>Face burning in shame, she begins to get dressed for the day while dreading how she's gonna explain this to management when a sudden hitch comes up.

>She can't clasp any of her belts around her middle.

>Come to think of it, her dress had been awfully difficult to slide her plump limbs through, and her lower half feels awfully breezy right now.

>Surely, things hadn't gotten this bad, right? She'd definitely gained some weight, but it's not as if she'd become so much of a fatass that'd she'd already outgrown her wardrobe...... right!?

>Pulling as hard as she can manage, Suisei manages with a huff to finally set her belt, albeit on the widest notch. Nervously grinning into the mirror, she feels a wave of satisfaction come on at managing to get the uniform on.

>"Still fits!"

>Relaxing her tense muscles, Suisei lets out a relieved sigh...

>...only to hear a quiet *snap* and feel her gut droop slightly.

>She's a broken a second belt in as many days.

>Tearing up slightly in frustrated embarassment, the blue-haired idol stomps off to the kitchen. She'd love to think about anything but her current predicament right now, and a pint of Haagen-Dazs sounds like a damn good distraction.

>Feeling the sweet, creamy taste of vanilla melt onto her tongue, Suisei relaxes into her couch. She's definitely gonna diet all this off some day... but that day is not today.

>She takes another bite.

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>>1847211
>>1847254
I had several formatting issues while making this and waffling between whether I wanted to post it as a greentext or link to elsewhere and structure it like a regular narrative, so it looks fucking gross, and I apologize.

I figured I'd post the plain text in the thread since it's dying anyways for whatever reason, but it looks rather ugly. Here's a justpasteme if you'd prefer that
https://justpaste.me/OwEA

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>>1847254
Fucking nice writing

Keep it for the next thread

>> No.1848757

whoever makes the next OP, use just a thiccish image to keep the jannies off our back. might draw in some people on the borderline and let us convert them as well, think that's already happened like five times.

it's really annoying that we hit some autosage criterion just as we started to get a wave of OC

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