/wg/ - Writing General - Pomu Edition

[Anonymous No.]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
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>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread: >>13147915

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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>>13175443
A subtle yandere Botan greentext
>Very calmly keeps sipping her coffee, a perfect mask of unbroken calm on her face.
>Closes her eyes.
>Takes a deep breath.
>Counts down from ten.
>Opens them again.
>Picks up her phone and makes a call to a friend.
>You of course, know none of this is happening.
>You do, however, notice the missing person posters that start popping up around the city while you're at work one day.
>You don't exactly stare long enough to read them, though; just looking at that face is enough to turn your blood cold.
>Besides, you have other things to think about.
>Your boss says you need a vacation.
>Your wife agrees.
>Also, by some weird convenient fluke, she apparently won on all-expenses-paid trip for two to Costa Rica.
>A trip which lasts precisely as long as your boss told you to take off.
>You swear, your wife is up to something...

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>>13175443
A subtle yandere Botan greentext
>Very calmly, Botan keeps sipping her coffee, a perfect mask of unbroken calm on her face.
>Closes her eyes.
>Takes a deep breath.
>Counts down from ten.
>Opens them again.
>Picks up her phone and makes a call to a friend.
>You of course, know none of this is happening.
>You do, however, notice the missing person posters that start popping up around the city while you're at work one day.
>You don't exactly stare long enough to read them, though; just looking at that face is enough to turn your blood cold.
>Besides, you have other things to think about.
>Your boss says you need a vacation.
>Your wife agrees.
>Also, by some weird convenient fluke, she apparently won on all-expenses-paid trip for two to Costa Rica.
>A trip which lasts precisely as long as your boss told you to take off.
>You swear, your wife is up to something...

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>>13175523
Botan going on a CIA sponsored mission to kill Central American dictators!

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>>13175443
I sort of wrote a greentext that I was thinking of making a proper story, but I’m kinda reluctant due to it being an unofficial sequel to another story in the archive called Grab as much (as you can) and I don’t if that’s allowed or not.

Okay. I'mma run somethin' by you guys.

>Get a call from the school your daughter, Thali, goes to
>Her teacher wants to talk with you and your wife, Mori.
>Turns out they had done an activity, "Draw yourself having fun with mommy and daddy"
>Your daughter has apparently peaked on you having sex
>And has drawn a cute crayon drawing depicting this "Wrestling"
>And has drawn herself joining in
>Teacher isn't judging, but thinks it best to address these thoughts she's having

It really wasn’t serious, just a slice of life continuation of a finish story.

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>>13175477
Kusatori request. Mori is tired of chimkin's whiny shit and finally agrees to fuck her. Mori's flaccid cock is bigger than a telephone pole stretching her like a living condom, and after she finally crams it in chimkin, her cock grows fully hard, bigger than a skyscraper inside her, and she busts a few octillion nuts and cumflates her before chimkin bursts with Mori's cum across the far reaches of the universe. She revives, of course, but knows her place afterwards.

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>>13175477
Requesting Hime Hajime death by paizuri. Hime decides to give some unlucky huge-cocked anon the titjob of his life. But even after he cums, she keeps titfucking him. He cums again and again regardless of what annoying or stupid or screechy shit she says. Eventually anon goes from cumming buckets to cumming oceans, and dies from cumming too hard.

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>>13175641
It was more along the lines of going away until the heat of the investigations disappear.

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>>13175477
So, the fetish is "juice that makes you cum super hard". One casual sip and you can't stop cumming.

Fuck it, let's make this a Holodeath request, that's a new thing, right?

So Mori is super excited for an off collab with Rushia and Ollie, who flew in from Indonesia just for this. But while she is alone setting up the tech, she sips this "juice that makes you cum super hard", immediately gets the most gigantic erection of her life and starts cumming nonstop. She's still cumming endlessly when Rushia and Ollie arrive, end up taking sips, and now all three have massive erections and can't stop cumming for hours on end.

Then they somehow have to stream like this.

Optional ending: hours later, all still cumming, someone (probably Ollie) is just like, fuck it, let's all chug a few gallons of this stuff and see what happens.

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>>13175477
Requesting a fic about Gen One shortly after their debuts, before the whole covid thing, taking a trip to Las Vegas to bury Hitomi Chris' corpse in the Nevada desert and never speak of it ever again before having a fun romp through a casino and getting into wacky trouble!

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>>13175477
Try a comfy fic with Gen 0 (AZKi, Sora, Roboco, Miko, Suisei). I notice they don't get a lot of love as a group, but from a fiction standpoint if might be interesting to see their personalities bounce off of each other. Maybe they're all at AZKi's studio for a recording session and sleepover?

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>>13175443

I sort of wrote a greentext that I was thinking of making a proper story, but I’m kinda reluctant due to it being an unofficial sequel to another story in the archive called Grab as much (as you can) and I don’t know if that’s allowed or not. Author, if you’re here, do I have your permission to write this unofficial sequel? I’ll understand if you say no.

>Get a call from the school your daughter, Thali, goes to
>Her teacher wants to talk with you and your wife, Mori.
>Turns out they had done an activity, "Draw yourself having fun with mommy and daddy"
>Your daughter has apparently peaked on you having sex
>And has drawn a cute crayon drawing depicting this "Wrestling"
>And has drawn herself joining in
>Teacher isn't judging, but thinks it best to address these thoughts she's having

It really wasn’t serious, just a slice of life continuation of a finish story.

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>>13176460
>if might be interesting to see their personalities bounce off of each other
What are their personalities?

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>>13176460
This, but it's a bodybuilding contest. All five girls have muscles bigger than the Incredible Hulk, especially gigantic pectorals. They're all hanging out backstage, casually chatting and lifting impossible amounts of weight. But it's all light-hearted and cheerful. Lots of flexing to show off for each other. Then they each take the stage to do their posing routines, all growing with each flex, then the final posedown together on stage.

My personal preference: AZKi wins, she ends up getting bigger than everyone else with even bigger pecs, but she's humble and honored to be on stage flexing with her honored friends.

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>>13176507
>>13176893

My headcanon?

AZKi: shy, but hard working and dedicated, a consummate performer

Sora: the elder statesman of Hololive, very dedicated

Miko: kind of a brash idiot, but very charismatic

Suisei: bit of a psychopath

Roboco: sorry, not wholly familiar with her. Isn't she the chill one?

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Okay I have to ask to the prompt reposter.
Are you trying to imitate the polka promptspammer?
Because if so you're doing a pretty poor imitation. Since the annoyance from that fucker wasn't from the reposts but from the length it took due to joining together multiple prompts such that it devalued each one into being a giant text wall.

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>>13175443
First time doing coming here, I want to contribute something so here’s a story about my indie slime oshi. Hope you all enjoy. It’s my first time doing this so any criticism is welcome. I also took some liberties with the character if that’s okay.
>be a student of Leaflit
>Seduces You into a quivering mess by slipping bits of her body down your shirt and remotely manipulating them to jerk you off as she teaches
>Offers private lessons because she knows damn well You can't concentrate in class
>The twist is, she's actually a dependable tutor 1 on 1 and not so lewd, making you feel that as a woman she's trust worthy and not simply a cock-craving whore
>Generally Ara ara whenever you two are alone
>Manipulates this reversed relation ship of publicly, sneakily lewd and privately trustworthy and dependable.
>You don’t know when this will end, or if you want this to end in the first place since the taboo is tantalizing

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>>13177374

I let 3-5 threads go by before posting my stuff. Even more than that. Not every single thread. Hardly spam. Fuck there was even a period where I couldn't post for weeks. Chill the fuck out.

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>>13177606
I feel like this needs some lengthening and descriptions. However, I do now want to fuck this slime.

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>>13177374

Sorry for doubleposting but I just comprehended what you were actually asking.

This is shit I legit want to see, and don't want to get it buried under oceans of drama. Now that the smoke has cleared and the dust has settled, I thought I'd try again.

>>13176893
Fuck yes.

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>>13177606
appreciate the effort but it's barely more than a single paragraph

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>>13176506
I'd be extremely flattered, by all means go ahead.

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>>13179987
Then why the fuck am I with her? Those deals are awful. 6cm could work - I guess I'd like Luna or Polka fuck me if it wasn't some monster - but don't essentially gridlock me into something I told you I'm not comfortable with you bitch.

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>>13182346
But anon, sex is a very important part of a relationship. Imagine your girlfriend never gave you head because she doesn't like it? Sure you can do fine without it but it would still suck, especially if you give her head. If it were to go up to fucking, it would be worse. She has a cock, she wants to use it, she wants to use on the one she loves but you don't want it. That's a relationship that will fail right there.

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>>13182599
Then help work me through it? I'm completely fine with sucking it, giving her a reach around, that kind of thing, but don't put up a "Unless you let me do the thing you're very uncomfortable with we are never fucking again" sign. That just makes me not want to be with her.

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>>13182599
NTA but you're right in that it will fail; however, in reality, I don't think a relationship could have begun in those circumstances in the first place

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>>13182694
Hmm, so a similar deal as before. She lets you fuck her like a regular relationship, but a couple times a year she asks you to let her fuck you. Assuming you're in a happy relationship with her but it WILL fail if you refuse it too often, would that be better conditions for you? Indulging her fetish that you're not into for her happiness?

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>>13183023
>Indulging her fetish that you're not into for her happiness?
I already fuck other girls because my girlfriend is into me cucking her. That notion is normal to me at this point. Yeah, sure.

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>>13183218
>I already fuck other girls because my girlfriend is into me cucking her.

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>>13175477
Watching one of the chuubas masturbate without them realizing

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>>13183501
You think I'm joking. I just want a normal, vanilla relationship. I hate meeting new people. I hate making sure I'm not going to be fucking killed by someone's jilted lover. I hate so strongly.

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Stop blogposting, no one cares.

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>>13183715
You're forced to meet the girl and whoo her? Your girlfriend doesn't even set you up to it? That's a lot of fucking effort... does she ask for pics or descriptions?

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>>13183922
No more derailing. Didn't plan on continuing that line of discussion. However, if pressed at metaphorical gunpoint and assuming said chuuba isn't packing a megabuster in her pants, fine, whatever. We can do it every so often.

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>>13183988
The things you do for love...

I asked because I have a small interest in making an NTR fic but ok...

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So question about Sakura Summer, as I am at a bit of an impasse.

I can add a bit of a flare too it that could enhance the overall experience, just not sure if anyone might go for it, especially since it'll function just as well without the inclusion.

I could write it as you might expect, or I could write it with (you) having hermaphroditism. I'm fine writing it either way, it'll be engaging with or without. It's really up to the thread what they want. I'm perfectly fine with either and would like to hear what the thread thinks

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>>13184755
You might want to explain more to people who have no clue what you're talking about if you wish to get more opinions on it

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>>13184709
>Spoiler
You fucker. Fine. For the sake of content, here. Please no more after this.
They sort of press me by subtly gesturing me towards other girls. I ask if they're in the mood for it and they give me an answer. If yes, I do the footwork on something like Tinder or some such. I specifically mention the exact circumstances I'm in on the profile and do a little digging. You'd be fucking amazed by how eager some people can be with true NSA and knowing they're cucking somebody else in the process. Give or take a few days and it's all set up. I tell her where I'm going, show her who it's with, etc. May bring evidence of the act if they're really burning for it. She accompanied me and watched once but it was too much for her to handle.

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>>13184812
Hermaphroditism here would mean (you) are starting to grow boobs and you have a pussy and a non-functioning penis. I could dial it back a bit and just go with gynomastia as I've done previously if that's getting a bit crazy. Or of course, just not do it at all.

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>>13184955
The more you talk, the more questions I have. But for the sake of respect, I shall ask no further. Your situation is quite intriguing.

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>>13185414
Sorry. I'd just prefer to not derail things. I hope at the very least it helped shed some insight into willing NTR stuff, I guess? Though I suppose it's not really NTR if one party is into it, is it? Unless it's some sort of subgenre, I dunno. Like I said, I can't stand that shit. What's your story currently looking like?

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>>13184755
This is the suisei, mio and miko one right?
Genuinely I think the idea is already packed as is with needing to accommodate all of those as characters that if your still going with 2nd person reader (anon) insert you should just go for a more conventional vague body in regards to the reader insert.
Otherwise you might as well make it not (You) for the viewpoint character and make them someone with a name since the ideal for the reader insert is well someone the reader can insert into.

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>>13185656
It's a subgenre known as Netorase where the person wants their partner to fuck someone else. In the west it's just known as being a cuck. I really don't think it's derailing because discussing fetishes can spark a lot of interesting stuff, many fics have been created from people randomly talking about fetishes. But you do you.

The story is... well... not in the works yet. I'm still thinking about which plot I want it to have, and also I'm already working on too many fics currently.
I've been considering the plot being you being cucked by your gf (Matsuri, Ayame, etc) then a really sweet chuuba comes to comfort you (Watame, Fubuki, etc), you fall in love with her and she turns out to be cucking you as well.

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>>13186092
>Spoiler
I pray for your success but I will not be reading that. Again, I hate NTR with all of my fucking heart. Me avoiding talking about it is probably, ultimately, in my best interest. However, I hope that you managed to get something you could use out of it.

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>>13185656
NTA, but no netorare kind of needs that feeling of 'betrayal' for the spice to be netorare. That pain is pretty much the core of the genre.
>>13186092
Is this going to be that chain cucking idea that got thrown around a couple of threads back where you get cucked, find relief in another chuuba you know, only for them to also be getting fucked by the same guy, repeat ad nauseum, like that terasu mc h-doujin.

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>>13186400
I've thrown the idea out before as a joke but the more I pondered about it, the more it seemed like the perfect plot to go with. Not sure if I'm the one you're referring to though.

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Does this thread permit CYOAs? I used to write some a few years back but I'm not sure if anyone would be interested.

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>>13187100
Yes

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>>13187100
It's been discussed a few times. Generally considered difficult because people don't want to artificially push the thread. Maybe with a poalor something?

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>>13187100
this thread permits just about everything as long as it's chuuba-related

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>>13186906
It was one of those joking extensions to the idea that proposed the thing should be a series where you get continously cucked because each chuuba you find comfort or fluffy relief from cucks you with the same guy as the other chuubas.
>>13187100
Do you mean point build type CYOA, Quest Style CYOA, or Braching Path style CYOA?

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>>13187129
>>13187167
Cool.

>>13187161
So just posting updates in the thread and appending polls for actual voting? I mean that works for me.

>>13187239
I'm not sure, I was thinking a casual Bromont style CYOA, nothing fancy like whatever /qst/ or /tg/ does. Mostly because that's all I know.

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>>13184755
>>13185047
that sounds really interesting actually. it would certainly go a long way to help the story stand out from all the other abuse fics that are out there. plus, i just think it'd be neat.

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>>13187314
Oh.
I'm guessing from context you mean a vote for choice/option style CYOA and not qst style game.
Yeah that seems like it'll work, especially with a polling site making sure that votes don't unnecessarily bump the thread.

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>>13187556
That was pretty much the idea. I guess a poal would also allow for freely added write-in options and also discussion which would mitigate those from adding to the actual thread.

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So much for me waiting to repost my requests until after the shitposting blew over...

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>>13187556
Polling would definitely help it. I'm looking forward to it.
>>13188632
Shut the fuck up you stupid cunt. This is actual discussion. Neck yourself.

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>>13188449
I don't think write ins would work via polling site.
Shit kind of needs a thread in order for people to get convinced.

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>>13188753
Well that's what the discussion collumn of the Poal would be for, ideally. I suppose some in-thread discussion could work if absolutely necessary but it shouldn't cause too much unnecessary bumping.

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Okay /wg/, which of the smut fics are of quality for you. I want to get inspired for the story I'm making

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>>13189191
Anon please...

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>>13189457
Fuck off, retard.

>>13189191
They say the quality of a chef is measured against their fried rice. Why don't you do some Fubuki smut? Everyone and their dog has written something about her.

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>>13186092
That spoiler. I feel like I've requested a prompt like this before but without the person comforting you to end up cucking you as well. I'll still look forward to it either way.

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>>13189633
seconding

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>>13189191
The nursing catto series

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>>13189191
Nursing catto but not its sequel

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>>13189191
The Watame NTR fic

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>>13189191
Pretty much anything by AA, Disciplining Nene, Nenecchi's Morning Milk, Milking your Wolf.

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>>13189191
ahem..

Sleeping Beauty

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>>13189191
Lies come to light.
Fuck man that story is so good at the ryona it makes the other ryona fics that came after it look bad in comparison. The emotion and violence mix together to make one of the best stories in the archive.

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nutted to foxes over ducks again

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Is adding smut to my series a nice bonus or destroying the integrity? Seggs with Chuubas seems to be what everyone wants and I also get horny thinking about it but It doesn't really add anything to the overall plot or characters, or should I do a separate story unrelated to my ongoing series?

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>>13192194
Personally I'm going to add sex to my series but not smut. I think it is distasteful and shameless. If I wanted to make someone jerk off I wouldn't do it through something I actually care about, I'd just write more smut.

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>>13192194
I mean I've never done anything with chuubas but when I had this conundrum in the past I just made a separate non-canon smut side-story that didn't affect the actual story.

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Following up on the CYOA thing, here's a tentative initial poll for what kind of person the protagonist should be:
http://poal.me/jzavvm

On a related note, I'm not sure if I should go for a full blown fantasy scenario where all the lore is canon, or a more grounded one. Should I make a poll for that?

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>>13193358
Come on man you can't make a poll for small shit like that...

I feel like this is gonna end up becoming a more obnoxious version of HoloFantasy dice rolling.

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>>13192790
>>13192809
Yeah, don't think I'll make any smut canon, not the explicit porn ones anyway, not that I'm even working on anything like that for now.
>>13175443
Anyway, chapter 6 of Girl-boss Watson.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRGtDofVhj3JMsH4SQCElUweD3fSB9BL4ef36yohIxKY4qX5-V7sXrLWwHryUbwaXiBR2HlbXYHg17i/pub
Tags: Amelia, Mori, Towa, Marine, SFW, gore
Someone thought the last chapter is the start of a new arc, sorry dude, that'd be this chapter. This chapter is mostly intermediate.
Again, if I don't get the Chuubas' personality quite right, I apologize. Ironically, I've been watching fewer streams and been writing more, so I'm not up to date how their newest developments IRL. If anything is too egregious let me know, but I need to take some creative freedom to write the story I want.
Marine is my JP oshi, so she'll be making more appearances in the next few chapters, God I just really love her. Too bad I can't have her character be completely herself like her streams.
A bit more backstory revealed for Anon, I'm trying to keep his personality apparent while also relatable, I feel it's pretty alright.

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>>13194120
I mean I'm not really sure what people would want from a chuuba CYOA to begin with. Like it could be dumb hijinks, some kind of adventure with chuubas in an alternative setting, daily chuuba life or something else entirely.
>HoloFantasy dice rolling
I don't think I'd even consider doing something that involved. I'm more into the Bromont style of doing things loose and on the fly and I'm not great at writing purely serious prose anyway.

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>>13194187
lol the Death Note opening is a really stupid joke but I laughed. I really like your Towa here, she feels like herself under the circumstances of your story. being the joker/comedic one until Baelz arrives and out trolls her while Anon sees that she's grown from who she was, a very good dynamic I can picture in my head. Bealz doesn't really feel too much like herself when on stream, this is more like her based on her lore, but if since you need her character to advance the plot and fit the role, I feel it's perfectly reasonable. Ame getting jealous of all the women is a good part too, and Anon just completely blushes her off like Chad and turns around to be very scared of zombies is funny. I really like how she takes the initiative to hasten the progress of their switcheroo, it's a subtle display of her character. Asking Rushia to join the party makes sense and is a logical action given her abilities displayed last chapter, I wonder if you'll have someone die later on to be brought back by her, and if that'll spark any conflict.
you're really good on foreshadowing and reincropration of past plot elements. Ame's phonecall before meeting Anon in chapter 1 comes back to be important. And during his explanation of his past, the narrative doesn't directly correlate to what he's saying. You're doing great building his character without revealing too much, but I think I know who he's supposed to be, there are many hints this chapter on who he actually is, I can't wait to see if I'm right or not.
This is a really good story, writeanon. Your writing is great and there's not any glaring issues with the story. If I have to point out anything wrong I'd say some of the jokes don't land for me, but that's subjective and not a good criticism.

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Should one use chuubas who have inhuman traits or backgrounds in a realistic fic, would it be too weird to try and make use of those traits like Mio going feral on a full moon or something? It sounds dumb just to think about what they could be so probably.

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>>13196799
People seem to have no problem incorporating traits such as heat and the like in their stories, so I don't see why not.

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>>13194187
Honestly I find it mildly hilarious that Baelz's two for three in getting portrayed as lore flavored chaos rather than as Bae. Personally, I find getting the character wrong like this bad on principle but for what's essentially gag side characters it's honestly fine.
As for plot, I would have thought you would have 'shown' rather than 'told' the conversation/argument about death and inevitability of it just a bit more since when you last posted it seemed like it would be a key plot point moving forward so having Calli and Ame's views on the issue be more expanded upon in a 'friendly' enviroment seems like a missed opportunity.
Great to have this back btw.

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>>13193358
>third option
Isekai HoloFan Anon RIGHT NOW

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>>13194120
Wait so the options are chuuba, a new Anon or an Anon from another story?

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I wanna say something but I forgor so good night

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>>13194551
I mean generally it's on the author to decide on what kind of concept they want to write.
If you're asking conceptually, then for something mechanics light is probably best suited for something like drama, comedy or SOL since the lack of mechanics make it unsuited for something based around action.
So if you're looking for an idea. How about have it be a work comedy where you are an intern in cover corp helping the talent out.

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>>13194551
Finally, you and Polka are alone. Silence fills the room as she awkwardly coughs whilst checking her phone settings to pass the time. Now's your chance, you:

> Go over to her and greet her
(Link to this option)
> Leave the room, you got better things to do
(Link to this option)
> rip a fat fart and pretend it didn't come from you
(Link to this option)

This is how most people here imagine a CYOA and that's why they say it's a fucking pain to write it. I was going to do it like that but I gave up on that story after certain events. Not sure it counts as a CYOA if you're just getting the public's vote for the next action instead of having multiple ending bullshittery

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>>13197970
Wait, you were going to write something for every scenario? I can see why that would be too onerous to write, I was only going to give a few select choices and write something for each winning vote.
>Not sure it counts as a CYOA if you're just getting the public's vote for the next action instead of having multiple ending bullshittery
I mean I see your point but in my non-/tg/ and non-/qst/ experience that's how it's been done, although admittedly my experience is limited to Bromont's old threads on /a/ and RWBYgt on /trash/.

>>13197546
No, that's just the baseline concept to open up the next level of possibilities. OC could be an original new gen chuuba, a manager or someone else entirely that somehow gets involved in a chuuba story. The "other story" concept is literally anything that could already exist, it could be an anime, a game, a comic, a visual/light/regular novel, a movie or anything else.

>>13197693
That's fair. I wanted to at least get a broad opinion on the concept to make it at least somewhat interesting to a fair number of people in the thread but I suppose just going with my own instincts and seeing if it works out may be the more viable option. And yes, I'm more inclined towards goofy stuff over anything mechanics focused, again much like Bromont.

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>>13198449
I mean to expain the various types of stuff marked as CYOA, there's the CYOA book style that's well like the CYOA books where every option branches out much like the books they're named after, the Quest style like your talking about where only the option the thread chooses gets written like most things marked as quests, and the point build CYOA image that's associated with jump chain.
OC chuuba quest sounds like a fun quest. But only as like one with mechanics since playing as like a fictional 2view that got a lucky break into hololive sounds fun if it the mechanics to support it.

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>>13198893
>Guide your chuuba into being a pure seiso idol or a degen slut

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>>13198916
Guiding Aqua into a degen slut.

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>>13197970
I still think you could do it if you kept it as a short story... but fuck man writing like the 8ish branches to have it matter just sucks thinking at it from a complexity point of view.

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>>13198893
I appreciate the explanation, I just wanted to clarify that I wasn't planning on anything intensive since that's probably too much for both me to write and asking too much of readers here anyway.
>OC chuuba quest sounds like a fun quest. But only as like one with mechanics since playing as like a fictional 2view that got a lucky break into hololive sounds fun if it the mechanics to support it.
That's the sort of thing I had in mind if people happened to be interested. Although it kind of hinges on what these mechanics actually are and whether I can deliver on what people want...

>>13199429
I mean I'm not going to write branches, I'm just going to do one entry per winning vote to keep things simple. Short story format was kind of the idea, but it's just a general concept episodic/on-running story that could last as long as people have patience for it, really. I probably won't do too much too frequently since that's what burnt me out last time I tried this but I don't really mind a long-term thing if readers are happy with that.
I did actually try to make a split-path VN in RenPy based on something I'd written some time ago. It didn't go very well.

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>>13175477
Not a meme prompt:

Sora catches you raping Ankimo. You can make Ankimo either sentient or not.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13176507
Roboco eats
AZKi is never there
Sora is just an average chick
Miko is a giant baby
Suityan is very smug

[Anonymous No.]

So I've mentioned multiple times that I've felt burnt out and dissatisfied with my current writing works, but I genuinely want to get back to writing HoloRealm. I know the previous chapter isn't exactly up to par and I really want to find ways to improve it. Do you think I should pace it out further, e.g. just having chapters of the plot not exactly progressing(either by having training shit, world exploration, etc), or keep the pace of action because I have quite a lot planned for this series, and I genuinely want to see it through. Any sort of suggestion or things you would like to see would be helpful as I'm starving for inspiration.

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>>13200874
As long as you don't drag your feet too hard on the actual plot if you have a story you want to tell, some fuck around chapters in which characters are developed more could be good if it's what you want to do. Don't do a HoloFan and take too long to get stuff rolling in the real plot department, but also don't nose to the grind stone it if it's killing you inside. Take the opportunity to strengthen your characters ties if you feel it will help.

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>>13200874
For holorealm specifically, I think you need to work on it's strengths focusing more on the characters, interactions and making the plot mean something by giving it room to breathe.
Because the weak parts from holorealm and also in Menhera Wrangler was in the parts when it just felt like the movement of plot towards the next plot point.
So to give my two cents, put on the breaks, focus on making what's' already good better, and maybe get over your taboo of editing stuff post releasing it to thread.

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>>13175477
Hot sweaty sex with Suisei.

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>>13175477
Sucking Suisei's raging seven incher after a difficult day while she tries to squirm out of it and talks about how idols don't do those things (or have penises) until you finally break her down and fuck her in the ass after she cums in your mouth.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
Engraving the sensation of a hot, sloppy creampie upon Aqua's mind.

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>>13176072
>Requesting Hime Hajime death by paizuri.
Those are some very big tits.

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>>13199707
>That's the sort of thing I had in mind if people happened to be interested. Although it kind of hinges on what these mechanics actually are and whether I can deliver on what people want...
I mean I was thinking something along the lines of the mechanics being based around having a successful channel while keeping the OC chuuba sane, and in the good graces of her fellow talents, the company and her fans.
Which while I was initially thinking would need like a big fucking quest system with rolls, random events, etc... could probably be done pseudo mechanic less by just having a character sheet that's updated each update with how the current status of our OC chuuba. With the GM just making the effects of each choice as they go along and keeping an illusion that the quest has crunchy mechanics.
Though this probably isn't what anyone else was thinking.

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>>13205979
I mean, I could keep track of things like sub count, average views, SC, member count, etc., as well as the chuuba's non-streaming activities and how it affects her state of mind and relationships but I'm not sure I have much confidence in doing actual systems since it's an entirely alien concept to me.

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>>13202448
I don't even watch Suisei but this image is doing something to me...

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>>13176893
I dunno, I fear that this would bring about Buff Uruka drama 2: Electric Boogaloo. Last thing I want is that.

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>>13207070
True, we've had some decent fetish freaks recently but can't forget the brapfag and the bearschizo

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>>13175477
Ina pai/chestzuri!

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>>13206168
If you don't want to do mechanics like that you really shouldn't.
This whole mechanics idea thing is just some idle ideas thrown at the wall, if you just want to make a casual CYOA without any mechanics you should do what you want to do.

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>>13175477
Constantly making Shion flustered and slowly breaking her smug persona by confessing your love to her everyday!

[Anonymous No.]

>can't stop thinking about manhandling a tantruming Luna to try and calm her down until it's revealed that your accidental gropes and squeezes has given her tiny dick (complete with bow) reason to wake up
I don't even like futa but holy shit I want to break Luna into a sniveling mess by teasing her royal peepee

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>>13193919
So, I used the text synth form this thread, and then this happened.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRJxgDDX2ARuIFS85tt8JkDeVRacDUK8kUcmTjEiS_GSyKPbYmu87IMz0-wMjO4PGHm5bFGgRKNB0dJ/pub

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>>13207070
>>13207333
I am still 100% confused that the Uruka fic was commissioned and false flagged as coming organically.
Fucking no one on this thread has ever written in that pseudo shitpost style, and just coming in here to drop a fucking 4ish chapter story with details that could only come from a phase connect superfan. Sounds way less believable than they got tired of waiting for someone here to write it so they just commissioned it, sent it here and pretended it was organic. With the avatarfagging they did to burn their reputation and respect here as cover for the fact that they were from phase connect management.

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>>13207763
Plausible, given how insanely quick it got picked up by management and given to Uruka for her stream.

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>>13207476
Now, I'm no doctor, Anon, but it sounds to me like you've come down with a serious case of the gay.

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>>13207847
This can't be happening! No! Noooo!
I haven't written porn in ages and could use a break from the other thing so I may hammer it out tomorrow. Luna needs more smut. Stupid sexy erotic princess.

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>>13207807
Yeah that's also a relevant detail.
I think they initially came here to try and fish someone here to write a short fic Uruka can read on stream since FMG is kind of a weird fetish but it's still relatively acceptable in that it's not that fucking out there.
Unfortunately for them with no one really biting they just said fuck it, bit the bullet and commissioned someone who could write in shitpost so they could justify their time trying to fish for a fanfic and sent it to management after they posted it here.
Honestly though I do wonder if the writer for that is still here. That would probably shoot a hole into this pet rrat of mine but they did write in a pretty good style.

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>>13175443
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSjVSbCAZugtuyEyjjeRp_b1YbKcGaffKxDhUxLK91nPOQHA8e5AM78vwtzxdFxSehph5RsJmLVP_C_/pub

I only got one yes and one no, so here's a teaser to Sakura Summer. This snipit is hermaphrodite anon. If you like it let me know, if not, I'll write it without. This will be the general theme of the entirety of the story. I hope you enjoy, was pretty hard to write.

I also changed it from Suisei to Reine. I felt she fit the role a bit better than Sui-chan did.

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>>13208266
I enjoyed this teaser. I won't lie anon being a hermaphrodite is definitely weird and I would usually would be against it, but since this isn't gonna be a smut-centric fic, I think it could be interesting if utilized well. Either way good job.

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>>13208266
This feels a bit too weird... Especially since in your pitch for this as an abuse fic, you said it'll be even more fucked up than the Suisei one. The hermaphrodite thing just seems like a weird way to have female parts while keeping a 'male' pov.
I really don't think this'll work, but honestly you do you.

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>>13207743
What the hell kind of fourth dimensional clothing does Mio wear

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>>13208266
i am both thoroughly disturbed and thoroughly compelled. this is pretty much my dream abuse fic and i'm very much looking forward to more. and as for the hermaphrodite thing, i think it worked pretty well, just a regular male anon would still be very good, but this makes an already very interesting fic even more so and offers something that isn't easy to find.

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>>13194187
Glad to see the next installment of this series anon, it was a fun read and I greatly enjoyed this chapter

“Impossible. My sense of humour is cultivated, I’m a Redditor.” I'm embarrassed to say that this made me laugh harder than it should've
I constantly find it incredible how you can write dialogue so stupid that it makes it feel like my IQ is dropping as I read then drop lines like "If the weakness of the heart is indeed malignant, then maybe you yourself are the most in need of rectification." Reading your works is a constant tonal whiplash of stupid comedy and incredible prose that I can't help but commend you for
I'm not gonna talk about your portrayal of Bae since I don't really watch her and others have already talked about it but I have to say that I really liked your portrayal of Towa, it reads like she's a massive dork who tries to act cool which is really sweet
As always the banter between Anon and Ame continues to be one of the best parts of this fic and I'm looking forward to more of that in the future now that there're more characters in the setting. Hopefully you'll give the new ones a chance to shine in the future
Also, is there gonna be a plot reason as to why Anon is cucking Marine's boyfriend? Genuinely curious why you wrote that one in, not that I hate it or anything, just asking

>>13192194
I mean, if you want an example then Holofantasy does it pretty well by making the smut non-canon and writing it as part of Holofantasy ALT. You could write it like that and I'm pretty sure AA won't mind if you copy his idea.

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>>13208727
>>13209245
So glad you both liked it. I think I will just keep it normal anon for the sake of easy reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll be putting out more at some point. This'll take a while to write down.

>>13208887
It'll only be physical abuse at the very end. The majority will be a mix of physical and emotional abuse as well as gaslighting.

And that's totally alright. It's more of a flourish. With or without, the story will remain largely the same. I can just do a bit more with herm anon as opposed to regular.

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>>13208266
is this link going to be updated with the rest of the story? or is the real story going to have it's own link?

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>>13210170
The full version will be it's own link. I'll need to retool it now that I'm doing it with normal anon.

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[Anonymous No.]

I want Haachama to say "poggers, daddy" over and over on my cock so I can cum just from her hot breath alone.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13212297
I wanna ravenously eat Haachama's pussy until she gives up on trying to speak all together

[Anonymous No.]

>>13212297
I want Haachama to fart on my dick

[Anonymous No.]

I want Haachama to take her education seriously, stop acting like she's on reefer whenever she's on stream and settle down with a man that will take care of her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
Chuubas raping anon pls

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>>13212476
Nerd

I want Haachama to meet me at a college party so I can get her drunk and fuck her

[Anonymous No.]

going to bed at 6am in the morning
damn chuubas have utterly and completely fucked my sleep schedule
>>13175477
a story about getting fubuki the j
intervention she desperately needs to stop her from playing phasmophobia

[Anonymous No.]

>>13176893
Fuck the drama. That was with a completely different company anyways. I just want to legit see this written...

[Anonymous No.]

>>13198966
> guiding yourself into degen slut Aqua

[Anonymous No.]

>>13212476
I want Haachama to give me head under the table at the college library while I hit the books.

[Anonymous No.]

Goomba UooOOOHHHHhhhhHHHHH GOOMBA CHILD BELLY EROTIC LIGHTSTICK EROTIC I WANNA STROKE IT UOOOOHHHH

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>>13175477
Fucking a chuuba that's stuck in a door or fence

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>>13207070
Drama happened because of rrats based on how fast Phacon found it. This is a totally different company, gen 0 wont be reading it on air. This person seems to be piggybacking on an old existing request. Seen these requests before, not with that addendum.

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>>13216050
>The phantom

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>>13217095
You're a g-g-genuine dicksucker.

[Anonymous No.]

Just finished catching up on the last couple threads, and am I going crazy or was the latest Hakos story already posted here months ago? I could swear I had already read that one.

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>>13217646
Just checked and you're right

>>/vt/thread/S9473161#p9519619

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>>13217746
>>13217646
Though, it was never archived, so...

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>>13217746
>>>/vt/thread/S9473161#p9519619
I thought it seemed familiar!
>>13217820
True, but it's strange that it was being presented as new.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13217746
The plot thickens

[Anonymous No.]

>>13217746
>promptspammer was still around
Ahh, the good old days. Now THAT was a shitposter. Dude was so universally reviled that we actually stopped responding to like 90% of bait.

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>>13218346
Come to think of it, I guess he was doing all the impersonating too, since it hasn't happened in months.

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>>13218346
People stopped responding to bait after the pekofag came out out hiding. That guy was always shitposting with him but his baits were shittier.

[Anonymous No.]

>dream about Polka
>make her a cake from scratch
>have a really hard time remembering numbers and stuff so I'm proud I got the right number of candles
>she sees this as me bullying her for her age and she's angry with me the rest of the night
>wake up feeling like shit
I just wanted to do something nice for her...

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>>13219462
Anon, you shouldn't use individual candles for someone above the age of 10. It's a fire hazard. I think she just thought you were too stupid because half the cake was candles.

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>>13219462
What an ungrateful bitch, you should have given her a good beating to teach her a lesson.

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>>13219764
She actually told anon she was on a diet and that she didn't want cake. She specifically said she didn't need any party but anon decided to do it anyway. The candles actually spelled out "happy birthday to my favorite clussy" which was so long he had to stick some of it on the cake's side. When you get her side of the story, it makes more sense.

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>>13219462
I wanna write a sad Polka story so bad but I'm waiting for the draw thread to pick my request first.

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>>13219925
>She actually told anon she was on a diet and that she didn't want cake.
Now that's a bold-faced lie if ever I've heard one.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175443
I had a lot of fun writing this so thanks to the anon who requested the Fubuki prostate story from le worst thread ever. Though this is more fluff than comedy I'd reckon.

Tags: Fubuki, Fluff, Comedy


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTOD6rXPKUWLQmh3inTJ6x9s8RLCNXS7Wyk9UpGOiGPMSgXgY8S9kS2AfyGyQ_OvZDDhDJqHzd3eTRi/pub

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221293
ｷﾀ―――(ﾟ∀ﾟ)―――― !!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221293
Just a wholesome SFW story about prostate tickling I'm assuming.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13207763
>>13207807
>>13208128
I didn't think this would still be talked about after a while, but when I first saw the prompt I didn't give it much thought since FMG seemed pretty out there. Eventually I picked it up since it had been posted for a while. I don't know who the requester was, but I never talked to them aside from telling them I'd write the story. If the story came out suspiciously fast, than that's because I spent more time than I should have over a week or some days writing it. I don't know about how it was picked up so quickly, but I have written one thing in a shitpost kind of style, being MINNA NO RAMEN. I wasn't really a Phacon superfan, so I watched a few clips here and there to get a gist of their character, and honestly came out liking Temna and Lia's streams the most.

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>>13221469
there's not a lot of prostate stuff unfortunately

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221833
Yo just letting you know that MINNA NO RAMEN is one of my favourite stories in the whole archive

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>>13221293
Well, this was definitely not what I expected, but it was absolutely cute, despite the whole prostate exam thing. Not big on the concept personally, though.
Well, it was still fluffy either way and it was enjoyable, so good job on that Anon.

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>>13221841
Well guess I'm not reading it then.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221833
Oh, sweet, you're still /here/

>>13176460
>>13176893

Does this interest (You)?

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>>13207743

> I poured some cooking oil in my cock,

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221293
Not a premise I expected but that was pretty cute and got a few chuckles out of me. Good job anon! Btw Shien's second name is spelt 'Kageyama' not Kageyuma'

[Anonymous No.]

>>13223721
I misread the website. Thanks for letting me know (I fixed it)

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>>13221833
Thank you for writing my request. I am legit thankful. And thank you for checking out my favorite bear, and her friends. I only sperged because i was terrified that Uruka was going to be disgusted by it... turns out she liked the effort put into it as a story, and only really cringed out when trying to imitate her genmates' voices.

I was going through severe, violent depression and uncertainty at the time. Most of that has cleared up, but thank you for helping me through it. Not just the story, but listening to me rant about my oshi as well.

I won't shit up your boards again. I'm sorry.

t. Foreman Spike, not a Phacon employee

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>>13226090
Bro, just don't be a fag like that and everything's cool. No one but you can point out who you are unless you tripfag. NTA but I'm glad you got something you really enjoyed out of the thread. It was another rare case of 'chuuba actually reading something on stream' that everyone seemed to get a good time out of. Just be chill.

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>>13221977
Cheers. I think it got a pretty good response first time, but I was still newish then and didn't really pick up on it.
>>13223372
Yep. Not writing much right now but there's a few ideas I have.
>>13226090
Glad to hear it. I also didn't realise how much of a flashbang the story was to read, as everything felt pretty normal when I wrote it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221833
Well this was the quickest I've seen a rrat get killed.
Have to say. You make some good fic. Was absolutely convinced at the quality that it was commissioned.

[Anonymous No.]

>Much prefer writing hand-to-hand/melee action scenes over gunfights
>Start writing a story set in the present where guns are the best way to kill someone
>Give the characters access to an armoury early on
The fuck was I thinking?

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231344
Something along the lines of 'ALRIGHT BOYS, TIME TO PUT SOME FUCKING LEAD IN EM"

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231344
You weren't, that's the issue. Give everyone an extremely limited ammunition capacity - due to space for other supplies, ammo scarcity, financial issues, whatever - and then have them run out early on. Conveniently at the same time as their opponents - but if you'd rather turn them into pincushions, that's fine too. If that's the case, please do describe it in detail.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13221833
>>13226090
>>13226810

So if the writer's not a Phacon employee, and the requester's not a Phacon employee, how did they find it so fast?

My rrat is Phacon just has people, maybe Pippa, searching their names on Warosu regularly to see people's reactions to them outside the bubble that is /pcg/

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231575
Well, anon, here's something nobody seems to have considered - maybe he's lying. Can't prove anything even if it was the case, and it's not like it particularly matters anyway, but remember that people don't always tell the truth, from reasons ranging everywhere from personal gain to shits and giggles.

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>>13231575
Honestly that's an angle I didn't even think about.
We had like a thread every day-ish. Anyone ego searching Uruka would get the fucking prompt that was copypasted every thread so they'd be pseudo aware that there was a fanfic request. So when it dropped, they just took a look and found it was good enough to send for a stream.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
Disappointing Fubuki after accidentally revealing you're nearsighted but prefer to wear contacts to glasses.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13233109
Fubuki torturing you and comforting you till you break and can't ever bear the thought of wearing contacts.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13233257
>Fubuki walks into the offcie to find you squinting one eye and feeling aorund on the ground
>You ask her to help you find your contact
>She looks at you like you just said you wanted to rape and kill her

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231575

[Anonymous No.]

>>13233109
Disappointing Fubuki by revealing you're nowhere near as well-hung as Oga, and as punishment for your lack of endowment, being manhandled into a chair by the demon himself and forced to watch as he runs a train for the thousandth time on your crush.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234490
You seem to have forgotten that Fubuki is a shotacon. She likes them small.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13233465
>Fubuki is crying into Mio's Lap while Mio tried to comfort her.
>'It's like I don't even know him'

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234632
Right, because everyone has exactly one sexual preference and is defined by it.
Test FAIL. Sit in the chair and pay attention to how Oga moves.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234725
>Right, because everyone has exactly one sexual preference and is defined by it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234725
>Sit in the chair and pay attention to how Oga moves.
kek

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234725
Sounds like you just want Oga to fuck you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13235165
Maybe I do, bitch. Whatcha gonna do 'bout it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>13235353
Write a shitty greentext about it, probably.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231533
Yeah, but you can only conveniently run out of ammo or conveniently get the gun knocked out of your hand so many times. Eventually you run out of excuses to remove the gun from the equation.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13234632
Sure she does. Surely size doesn't matter and ALL women don't know what they actually want.
> t-theyre just virgins!!
> wdym horse sized dildos are popular?? T-thats false cause this woman on the internet once told me it's okay to have a small prick!
> women totally aren't disappointed from seeing smaller dicks!!
Cope

[Anonymous No.]

>>13235874
Steer them away from situations where they're able to restock. Access to supplies is limited, port's been raided, or is in lockdown, or in a civil war, mission's underwater... the same logic can be applied to any opponents nearby - everyone is at the mercy of a disrupted logistics chain.

You're not helping yourself by disagreeing anyway lol

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236073
>t.incel

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236073
Dumb. Sit in the chair.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236073
>Doesn't think every Holo is a pure virgin
>Doesn't know the majority of horse cock sales are as a joke
>Doesn't know you can just lie to women about your cock size just like most men do about their height already
Just outted yourself as a newfag, virgin, AND manlet.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236250
Wait, how many layers of irony are we on right now? I can't tell who's shitposting anymore.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236279
It's shitposts all the way down.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236279
Shitposting?

[Anonymous No.]

Where's the sexual motivation rabbit when you need her

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236250
>mfw most women greatly overestimate the size of cocks

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236073
It's not about the size of your dick, it's about the size of your bank account.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13231344
>>13231533
Either that or learn how to write tense gun fights/ learn to un /k/ yourself and write gunfights as wacky and unrealistic as what you think of your writing on melee fights.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236741
Uhhhh

Motivation. Keep it!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13195412
>>13197154
>>13209270
Great, thanks for the feedback, Anons. Im happy that this chapter is more or less appericate and there isn't anything wrong. I try to mix in the humor when appropriate, in situations where the characters would be motivated to make jokes.
I watched a few Baelz streams but found her personality doesn't really match her lore, since she doesn't play a major role I'm not bothered that I couldn't get her down right 100%
I didn't feel having Ame and Mori debate after the end of the first part fits tone-wise, it'd drag out the chapter too long. It's a conflict they'll have over the course of the entire story so I'm in no hurry to spell out everything now.
Marine having a boyfriend is a minor aspect, it's not what it seems like too. But it doesn't really matter to the overall story

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236741
I was going to wait until bump limit, but if you insist.
What >>13237016 said. Get motivated, you!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13237758
Wait, is the implication that she doesn't actually have boyfriend. Was what you were going for? Or is this just me misreading

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
Hate sex with Fubuki after she finds out you got LASIK just before she was gonna ask you out!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13238986
Waking up one day with your eyes replaced by nearsighted ones because Fubuki wants you to wear glasses.

[Anonymous No.]

Can this get archived? It almost plays out like a mini story honestly.
>>13224354

[Anonymous No.]

>>13237016
>>13237799
Sex! Sex rabbit erotic! I feel it...the power!!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13239408
BUNNY CUNNY

[Anonymous No.]

>>13236139
Nah I’m not disagreeing, sorry if that’s why it seemed like. I’m just running out of ways to write CQC scenes, but I’ll take your advice, thanks.

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>>13231344
Apply Murphy's law. Everything is going right, you're armed to the teeth. Suddenly, some shit happens and before you know it, your gun bag is 30M underwater, you have a bullet wound on your leg and your handgun is running out of ammo.

People don't seem to realize this but Murphy's law ultimately is what REALLY makes for an interesting story.

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>>13239391
Anon that's a pretty old copypasta already.
Would love to see it as a bigger story though not gonna lie

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>>13238200
I think the truth will be revealed in two chapters, but Marine doesn't tell the boyfriend's name or have any traces of him at her place. Those are the observations Anon makes during his visit.
I honestly just saw that as a prompt some time ago and thought it'll be interesting as a snippet, it really doesn't matter that much. I know /wg/ went through an NTR arc a bit ago, but this isn't meant to be that.

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>>13238986
I would never

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[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
a fic where (You) are the yandere

[Anonymous No.]

>>13244803
>Tfw no story about Risu hunkering down to take a nap with her face buried in your crotch
Writeanons onegai....

[Anonymous No.]

>>13244881
When a guy acts like a yandere, he's considered a creepy stalker or abusive. Yandere is only cute when a girl does it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13245255
Risu stop posting on /vt/

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>>13245313
if you consider yandere cute in anyway a reserve the right to beat you over the head with a 2x4 for having terrible taste.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13245342
I'm not Risu! I'm a dude from Ohio staying up really late! That sounds convincing, right?

[Anonymous No.]

Migo...

[Anonymous No.]

Story idea.

If you could drop any chuuba into any GTA game to be the new protag, who/which one would it be?

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247198
Dumb fucking idea.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247198
Sakura Miko in San Andreas.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247198
Suisei, GTA4 and Roman is Anemachi

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247198
Pekora as Trevor in gta v

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247198
Kiryu Coco in Vice City. Something about seeing big titty dragon with that 80s aesthetic gets me rock fucking hard.

[Anonymous No.]

Luna wears bloomers, right? I cannot fucking find info on this

[Anonymous No.]

>>13247881
Yes she does

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>>13247944
Thanks pal. Futa Luna smut hopefully sometime within the next day or two. Writing on a phone fucking sucks cock.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13248050
You can get a Bluetooth keyboard if you want to make it easier to write on phone. They aren't amazing but at least they can work better than just typing in via touch screen.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13248963
I tried after they were mentioned last time. I'm still out of state and the nearest place that carries them is a bit far away to comfortably try and get to for the sake of writing. Won't matter much longer, but it's on the list for the future. Thank you, though.

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>>13248050
Hmm...

What kind?

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>>13249067
Refer to >>13207476. That "what would you do with your futa Holo GF's cock" discussion put the idea in my head. Sucking Luna's tiny dick that she's still convinced you're repulsed by before ravaging her throat and finally her ass while giving her a reach around is in the near future.

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>>13248050
I used to only write on my phone, man how foolish I was. There are so many features missing + the increase in typing speed is enormous. That being said, writing isn't such a big part of my life that I'd waste money on a Bluetooth keyboard just to do it on the go.

I'll be watching your Luna's personality with close eyes, for research and for other reasons, of course. You better impress me...

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>>13249131
Based beyond belief. I await patiently.

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>>13249150
I hope it'll live up to your standards, truly. I've not done more with Luna because I'm nervous about getting her properly, but that's a longstanding fear I've had that's never really been called out. For example - nanora. Is it acceptable to have, say, a comma before it? More than that...is Luna the type to be incredibly afraid of you leaving her if you find out something she was keeping secret from you? I'm not worried about going full insane like if someone was adding 'Peko' to the end of everything and trying to keep it appropriate, but yeah. I'm maybe halfway done and I'm worried I'll need to go back and rewrite parts of it due to not capturing Luna in a way that feels authentic.

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>>13176460
>>13176893
>>13177143
>>13221833
>>13223372
>>13226810

May not fit the flow of a bodybuilding competition/exposition but maybe a sequel or other chapter?

>Giga muscle hyper pecs Gen 0 end up at an abandoned military outpost deep in the desert, miles away from anyone.
>Tons of bombs, tanks, planes, even some aircraft carriers.
>Miko: it's just like my American GTAs!
>Sora reveals they've been commissioned to destroy all this weaponry with just their muscles, government program or some shit.
>AZKi, biggest and most pumped, initially refuses because she doesn't want to hurt any humans, all life is precious.
>Hacking from Roboco reveals this is all above board, and there's not another living soul for miles around. Nobody is gonna get hurt.
>Suisei is pissed at that thought, but whatever.
>Proceed to the girls yeeting bombs at each other, juggling tanks, bending aircraft carriers in half.
>Maybe a picnic.
>After a light workout, already biggest AZKi decides to honor her genmates and dear friends by showing them how big she gets when she REALLY flexes her pecs.

Ideas cobbled together from a Metal Slug fic I realized I'm not talented enough to write.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13249333
I will tear you apart, boy. If you don't get her right this time, I'll make you get it right next time.

>spoiler
No. Luna isn't menhera.

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>>13249400
Forgot pic related, for extra threat effect.

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>>13249333
Honestly for using nanora there's like ways to put it across. UWU speak like how the official subs do it, or just having it end sentences like thisnanora.
Honestly It depends on what works better for reading it. There's pros and cons for both approaches so decide based on what you want to write.

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>>13249400
>Menhera
Do any and all anxieties, no matter how reasonable they may be, count as menhera? It isn't a "oh no they think I'm fat so they're cheating on me" thing, which I would peg as menhera. I feel like 'they do not know I have a penis and I don't want them to be disgusted by it' is something else entirely.
>>13249450
Oh. It's you again. Hello, untilted Ina poster.

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>>13249494
It depends on what you will use it for. Sure, she'd be insecure. Any person would be. I think you could probably compare it to getting into a relationship when you have a micropenis but haven't told her yet. You'll be anxious as fuck, but you probably won't cry or make a fuss about it like "I'm sorry for hiding this from you" or some cliche shit. You'll just be relieved if she accepts you, like taking a major weight off your shoulders, but a little doubt will still remain when doing the act. "Is she/he really comfortable with this? What if they are lying?" and this little doubt will break off in due time, with proper love and care. This is how I feel about that spoiler, personally. Depending on how you want your story to go, I think this is kind of the way she would act.

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>>13249628
This is a great answer to that question, Anon. Thank you very much for your feedback. I'll try to do good on it.

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>>13247262
Seconding this

[Anonymous No.]

Please describe in 5 words or less what Marine's anus would taste like.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13250453
Disappointingly; kept Clean.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13250453
Desperation.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13250453
The sea. With turds.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13250453
probably like poo

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
After much pleading and cajoling, Marine finally talks you into indulging her hypnosis fetish. But once she's hypnotized, you just command her to do mundane shit like laundry/cleaning/dishes/etc.

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>>13175477


>>13176460
>>13176893
>>13249348

For easy access

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>>13250552
>>13250873
>>13251141
>>13251489
What, uhhh... what would Ayame's anus taste like?

[Anonymous No.]

>>13251589

Marine washes your ass, details your car, makes you a cheeseburger, blows you, and flies away

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252042
Whatever the opposite of desperation is.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252042
Dry. Very dry.

Because streams only happen every few months.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252042
Oji-san cum

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252135
It would carry the refined flavour of dry, huh?

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252042
Like thirty-seven cocks.

[Anonymous No.]

Aqua ass taste like onion

Shion ass taste like garlic

I want them bitches to come ass-to-ass over a plate of spaghetti

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252640
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=dS2QwKRhnds

[Anonymous No.]

Following up again on the CYOA thing, I have a basic idea for what to run with going by the poal results. That said, would people rather I give more options for what kind of OC to build before I run with what's planned? The current plan is for a new gen chuuba, with readers choosing the specifics for the character (I've already drafted an outline for the genmates but I'll adjust them as necessary for how the MC is customized).

>>13207350
It's not exactly that I don't want to do it so much as I really don't know how, it's outside my area of expertise. I'd be willing to give it a shot but I think doing something less complex would be easier for me.

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>>13249400
If you're still here, another question. Rather than ask you a bunch of little questions, just hit me with it; what is your take on Luna? I have my own ideas and understandings, but if you're truly a large fan of her, I'd like to hear what you consider to be the platonic ideal of Luna. My own understandings are that she's sweet but occasionally a little bratty and prone to throwing minor temper tantrums. She can be demanding at times (even to the point of being a bit of a nuisance) but it's never actively malicious as much as it is being childish. That's my read on her, at least; there's more to it than that, but if you could provide a more in depth analysis that'd be greatly appreciated.

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>>13253899
Honestly I think it'd be fun if we had like a character creation thing to customize our OC chuuba character when they were still a 2view/before joining.
Like a simple disadvantages/ advantages point build system where you get a point for taking disadvantageous traits like (Insert traits vt generally considers debuffs here). With the points you can the thread can use to take (insert buff traits here).
Don't know about the OC gen cast though. Seems like a bad idea considering our MC would effectively have to interact with them for a fair bit and not interact with the actual chuubas we care about.
Though if it proves too difficult to design something like this I'd still read and vote since the concept does sound interesting.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13252042
She legit has IBS, it's probably gonna taste the most like shit compared to everyone else.

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>>13254722
I mean I'd be very happy to establish the MC's background as part of the customization process, that seems like a good idea for framing their character. And I've done a points system for stuff like that before and while I don't think I'm good at it I can at least give it a shot.
>Don't know about the OC gen cast though. Seems like a bad idea considering our MC would effectively have to interact with them for a fair bit and not interact with the actual chuubas we care about.
This probably reflects poorly on me as a writer but having some characters that I don't have to worry about in terms of meeting reader expectations of how they're supposed to behave takes a lot of pressure off me when determining the MC's character and the initial story direction. Basically not worrying about whether I'm presenting Gura/Pomu/Pekora/Ai/whoever accurately and making sure readers aren't frustrated with OoC stuff would let me concentrate on making the actual core introduction and MC coherent and engaging enough to actually make headway with the rest of the narrative. Though if people would rather the MC be a standalone new girl ala Irys then I can still do that, but I might struggle to get things off the ground and slip up on characterization and continuity.

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>>13254722
>>13255031
Oh and you can ignore the implicit "girl" part, the MC could be a guy or girl depending on what people want, I was just using examples.

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>>13255094
>the newest Holostar Anonny Mous
>bro it up with collabs
>get ratts made about you fucking another chuuba because you exist in the same zipcode

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>>13255031
Honestly if you want to use the oc gen as like a way to get in the saddle of writing the quest I'm fine with it.
I think the concept is a fun enough idea that if you need to use it to get used to writing the CYOA, I'd be willing to read and vote as long as you write good.

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>>13255239
That could work. If that's what people want. You could even have a mechanic for lowering your rrat level to prevent schizo unicorns from hunting you down IRL or something, maybe.

>>13255455
The thing about the genmates was that they'd either have to be prebuilt by me to make the early interactions easier for me write, or have readers customize an entire gen of chuubas. The latter of which seemed a bit excessive, especially as they'd just end up as NPCs anyway. Or people would have to make decisions voting for an entire gen of chuubas which sounds absolutely nighmarish to both read and for me to actually write.
>I think the concept is a fun enough idea that if you need to use it to get used to writing the CYOA, I'd be willing to read and vote as long as you write good.
Well I appreciate the vote of confidence, I hope I can actually deliver something worth people's time once I've got everything figured out.

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>>13255873
>The thing about the genmates was that they'd either have to be prebuilt by me to make the early interactions easier for me write,
Honestly if the whole point of having an OC gen is to make it so that you have an easy starting point to write and get into the groove, I don't see why they shouldn't be a bunch of prebuilts.
If you want to compromise I guess you could have the thread choose which prebuilts concept is going to be our genmates... But that sounds like it'll be a tedious round of like 4 votes while having to come up with like a couple of characters, half of which we'll never see again... unless the fucking unchosen characters become our OC generation's rivals because they debuted at a similar time in a rival company.

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>>13256371
>unless the fucking unchosen characters become our OC generation's rivals because they debuted at a similar time in a rival company.
I hadn't even considered that as a possibility. I did actually write something like that in a CYOA some years ago but I don't know if a rivalry really works in this kind of situation since it doesn't seem to really occur naturally between corporatate chuubas, at least publically. It's an interesting thought though.

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>>13175443
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTE5EAyV5ycxMttRL0zF4RbYJLiZDZGfEb2GJbts7B55D3gRtrSPQloGFVWGd8JU4xeMbu9AkFlOmbb/pub

Here's the first few chapters of Sakura Summer. Hope you enjoy. I'll probably continue chapter four sometime later today. Just need a break from it for a bit. Do tell me your thoughts

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>>13256371
>>13256739
>11+ OCs
This is going to be a mess no matter what. To date there are 0 /wg/ CYOAs, and it looks like even after including this project there are still going to be 0 /wg/ CYOAs.

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>>13257014
Nah, at this point I'm just spitballing ideas, I already have one set of genmates drafted and failing anything else I'm just going to use those.

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>>13175421
how many pomu threads does /vt/ have to have?

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>>13256963
Well anon you certainly have a knack for making me feel uncomfortable while reading your fics; made me feel a little sick. And I don't if it's just me but I do feel it's a tad bit fast-paced but apart from that I enjoyed it. Good job. I look forward to the next chapters where it ramps up.

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>>13256963
I have to agree with that other anon, if the intent was to have tension and unease while reading this. You are absolutely succeeding. Eagerly awaiting the continuation of this.
Goddamn you are a writing a machine. Do you have secret to how you manage to write so fast and so good as consistently as you because it's quite impressive how you write so much.

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>>13254538
I think this video is a good reference material:
https://youtu.be/YwDX8YfiNDU
These two are old Luna but they may be helpful:
https://youtu.be/3qMu03Rz1sQ
And for a more serious tone:
https://youtu.be/ZXN3I6biChM

I'm not a Lunaito by any means, but I really like 4th gen a lot and that also includes Luna. If you mean the character she plays, I'd say she is a spoiled little brat who wants what she wants and if she doesn't get it she'll either act annoying or just throw a tantrum. She sometimes drags some words when she wants to be annoying and laughs when she succeeds. In reality I see a very mature person who is very smart, resists teasing and is a pretty good teaser (like sitting on Subaru's lap and staring her right in the eyes when Subaru had to confess to her). She is one who downs whiskey and begins to have more serious talks when sad or troubled but is conscious enough not to drink too much, at least in other's presence (though you can she is drunk on some really sad streams). She also is a very talented girl who graciously plays her instruments on her free time, making everyone in her presence go quiet in awe and admiration.

I think, in short, Luna is a good girl with a good heart. She playfully teases you and acts like the little spoiled princess that she is but sometimes you can see her more serious, though obviously still keeping her childish charm, when the topic is important. I don't think this helps much but well, you asked.

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>>13258369
It was a bit fast paced now that I look back on it. I'll add a bit of fluff to even it out some.

I'm glad though, that's the feeling I was aiming for.

>>13258907
Excellent! Exactly the reaction I was hoping. Expect it to get worse lol.

Right now I've got a bit of an advantage because I'm trying to fix my sleep cycle so I'm loading up on coffee. Nothing helps you write like being over caffeinated.

But mainly it's because this is my passion. There is no hobby I have or do that gives me so much satisfaction. Before coming into this thread I had stopped for a few years and naturally I've built up all sorts of ideas in that time. I've got a lot of material to burn through. For stories like Sakura Summer, it's therapeutic in a way you'd not know. I'm glad you find it impressive lol, to me this is just doing the hobby I love most.

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>>13259227
Plus I should say she absolutely is an S in bed, but she'll play along if you want to be the dominant one. She has no trouble pretending to be the bottom. I don't think you get to see Luna flustered very often.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13259838
Your hobby is killing you, Anon. You're falling apart, piece by piece. You're decaying from the inside, you just don't know it yet. I'd say, be careful. You won't last long at this pace.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13256963
approximately how many chapters is the finished story going to be?

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>>13259968
It's like the only productive thing I do outside of homework so may as well. Otherwise I just play vidya and stare at a fucking wall for hours and daydream.

>>13260375
If I had to guess, it'll be 10 at minimum, 15-17 at maximum. I'm still trying to decide what to include and what to omit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13175477
Watching the lunar eclipse with Fubuki

[Anonymous No.]

>>13249348
NTA but I'm intrigued...

[Anonymous No.]

what japanese vtuber is most likely to be willing to piss on me

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268165
Your best shot

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268165

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268165

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268165
Matsuri

[Anonymous No.]

>>13269382
>All of cover lining up to piss on me

[Anonymous No.]

>>13269382
>Astel right in the middle
I NEED THAT TWINK DESTROYED!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13269590
He needs to be small so Aqua can kiss him without a stool

[Anonymous No.]

>>13269382
>oga the tallest
kek

[Anonymous No.]

>>13269382
> tfw there will never be a fic about actually fucking every single one of them

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270468
>from Mating pressing Luna on Monday to buck breaking Oga by Sunday

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268165
Probably the ones who are genuinely degenerate and not faking it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270779
Marine…

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270468
ooh, that is a spicy pic
saved

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270943
Redditor

[Anonymous No.]

>>13268690
Matsuri isn't much a degenerate. But the cat >>13268532 is

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270943

[Anonymous No.]

>>13270943
Why are you like this

[Anonymous No.]

Would I be retarded to post fics I’ve written elsewhere here for feedback? I pretty much exclusively do futa stuff and I’m content with that, but feedback other than “futa sux lol” or “breddy good” would be nice even if you tell me my writing is ass or something.
I have a “futa Kronii gets a boner in class and (you) meet her afterwards to help her calm down” fic in the works, but I haven’t gotten to the sex yet.
Also, I’ve noticed futa Fauna fics are popular which is odd as she has no futa art (yet) but I’m not complaining.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271171
futa's for faggots in denial
>>>/lgbt/

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>13271137

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271171
I don't know how much legit feedback you'll get, but there's nothing wrong with posting your stuff here

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271171
I don't touch HoloEN 2 fics even if they are futa. Nothing personnel kid. HoloEN gen 1 fans live rent free in my head so I've come to hate Gen 2 much more automatically. They can be summed up as:
> rrat mating press
> kronii voice paizuri
> fauna GFE with boyfriend
> Mumei forgor retard owl
> Sana macca dog died less go

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271207
There are no futa threads in there, anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271645
be the change you want to see

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271670
The futa threads over here got shot down by jannies, don't see why it would work there

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271298
Understandable, I mostly write IRyS, Kronii and Fauna anyway, and most of that is futa x male/reader. Not overly into Bae and Mumei myself so I seldom write them.
I did do this Risu and IRyS x (you) one recently https://rentry.co/qzww9
It’s my only non greentext fic so far, the rest are more like this one - https://rentry.co/gquat (futanari Fauna raping (you) as Kronii watches)
Lastly this is the most recent smut one I did https://rentry.co/7tha5 (sex ed with futa Kronii)
I have a bigger archive that the archivists from the Kronii threads made. I don’t plan to post it here as it feels like too much self-promotion, but I can if any anon wants

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271730
>The futa threads over here got shot down by jannies
because this is not a board for faggots
>don't see why it would work there
because lgbt is a board for faggots

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271207
>>13271645
>>13271670
>>13271730
>>13271886
I know this is a bait chain, but I'm pretty sure that the futa writefag board is actually /trash/, in all seriousness.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271859
I'll check out the Risu one. I rarely ever give feedback so consider yourself to be my lucky fifth. That being said I won't be nice.

The Kronii archive was already posted/we are already long aware of it. There's no need.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13259227
Thanks! That's perfect. I was having it being that once she sort of got comfortable with you looking at her dick she was playing at being dommy but melting as soon as you asserted yourself far more than she ever could.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272043
Thanks anon!
It wasn’t the full archive I was referring to, just the one for my own fics. But you’re right I don’t need to post it here
I did have a prompt about being raped, abused and murdered by futanari Fauna after being forced to cosplay as Kronii for her (since she’s not allowed to hurt the Council itself) but I don’t know if I’ll actually write it

[Anonymous No.]

>>13271171
I’d say go for it. There are a few people here who like futa so you might get some feedback

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272447
>I did have a prompt about being raped, abused and murdered by futanari Fauna after being forced to cosplay as Kronii for her

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272521
Sounds based idk

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272521
>>13175443
This was the prompt -
Fauna wanting to punish and abuse Kronii!
Fauna being unable to harm Kronii because of being bound by the council rules!
A suspiciously accurate Fauna cosplayer approaching (you) at the con!
Fauna convincing you to come home with her!
Fauna making you crossdress as Kronii!
Fauna threatening to strangle you with bindweed if you refuse!
Fauna lifting your new skirt and spanking your ass!
Fauna’s delicate hands touching you softly but scratching you with the nails!
Fauna probing your ass with her fat horse dick!
Fauna demanding naizuri from you and cumming on your chest and down your throat!
Fauna holding your head by the clock as you swallow her seed!
Fauna scolding you for being worse at sex than Kronii!
Fauna punching you in the face and stomach!
Fauna using you as a punching bag!
Fauna pulling your hair, scratching you and biting you as she pins you down with her Kirin strength!
Fauna kicking you to the floor!
Fauna throttling you with vines!
Fauna dripping wet as you drip with blood!
Fauna wringing you dry as she clamps her hands around your neck!
Fauna asphyxiating you as you cum inside her a final time!
Mama nature unhappy with your performance and sticking her cock in your ass!
Losing consciousness and fading away with Fauna!
Your bloodied Kronii outfit makes you look kind of like the real thing!
Dying dressed as Kronii!
Fauna sending Kronii the photos!
Fauna!

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272413
Yeah, I wouldn't exactly say that's how Luna works. It would be very hard to actually outdom her in my opinion.

>>13272447
Not really into the abuse stuff (nor the fluff) but the idea sounds creative enough. Forced crossdressing and being made into the futa's bitch can be pretty fun if done well.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272700
Alright. So even when Luna’s being facerape she should be fighting back. Got it. Thank you Anon. You've been a big help.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272788
I am now interested.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272788
I mean... i didn't mean it that way. She's like 1,42cm, of course she can't fight back against something like that. I meant it in a more romantic way. But if you want her to jam a finger in your ass while you facefuck her to get back at you, then go ahead I suppose.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272924
Well, yeah. Before my fucking power went out I stopped at a point where after finishing Luna off via fingering her ass and letting her cum in your mouth you quickly took advantage of the situation to shove your otherwise untouched dick into her mouth after she was trying to face hump you and failing due to having such a tiny dong. I don't expect her to be the kind to try and bite it off or anything like that nor be able to actually really fight you off if you were pinning her down. That thought will come more into play during the actual sex then which is soon enough. Just need to figure out how to swing it when she's getting split open.

[Anonymous No.]

>>13272700
I think Fauna is good for both gentle and primal sex and I like the idea of her treating it as mating where she has to bite, scratch or mark you as hers for breeding, whether she’s a regular dom or a futa dom. Equally the idea of the Kirin in heat just fucking you like an onahole is extremely hot, aftercare optional but preferred. Imagine Fauna’s cute ASMR whispers as you take mama nature’s seed…
Angry Fauna sex is good too, like her being disgusted she’s so horny and just raping you whilst keeping you gagged or her deciding to grow herself a cock just to fuck with you (or Kronii of course, but I haven’t done much futa x female)

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>>13273157
I'm glad your work is going to be focusing more on the futa rather than on subduing her and making her cock useless like other people like here. How does one fail to facehump? She literally couldn't reach it or what? Maybe watch some ringfit videos or videos of her being lewd for reference to the sex, it might help.

>>13273160
Her showing you a bigger cock than yours is mandatory. Also showing you what a real thick load is like.

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>>13274005
>she literally couldn't reach it or what?
Yes.

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>>13274206
> pausing the sex to let her grab a stool so she can facefuck you

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>>13256963
Just read this. Holy shit that was actually very uncomfortable.

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>>13272447
Feedback posted on next thread btw

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I wanna rape Luna's little mouth so bad

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I WANNA FORCE FUBUKI TO GIVE ME A RIMJOB WHILE I JERK OFF AND LUNA WATCHES ME ATTENTIVELY AS I SPRAY CUM ON THE FLOOR UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORGGHHH IM COOMINNGGGG