/wg/ - Writing General - Hana Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>10295271

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>10465295
Officially requesting an FMG story with Fujikura Uruka from Phase Connect. She takes some weird expired cough drops or something and ends up growing hyper muscles bigger than the Hulk. Sudden rush of confidence, tons of flexing and showing off and bragging, especially her biceps and pecs. Optional: Lia and Tenma lusting after her muscles, Pippa doing something that makes Uruka even MORE musclebound for the lulz.

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New Holofantasy chapter when*

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>>10466276
I'm sure you'll get someone to make this someday.

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>>10466276
I've been watching a few clips of your chuuba and even turned into her chill jams stream today. I don't know how accurately I can get everyone's personalities but I do want to try writing something once I take care of life stuff.

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>>10470575
And so the prophecy comes to fruition, and the 'post the same prompt every thread' thing has now worked at getting a writer eventually, thrice now.
I believe with the first two times being with mori prompts.

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>>10470783
Four times. Pekofag managed to get dog maggots written by posting it at the start of the thread.

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>>10470783
Not a herculean task. It literally takes a minute to do, and the new thread always seems to come up at the same time of day due to pekoanon, or seafuckers, or whoever trying to spam it to death so they can make a new fake thread, with the fake rules, fake links, etc. My fucking Eggo hadn't even popped up yet. The longest part is filling out this damn capcha.

>>10470575
Cool. Thanks. Not sure if you specifically mean my story request, but either way, i just want to get more eyes on these girls. I really think Uruka and Pippa are something special.

Is this the person I talked to before who said their main was Fubuki? I am so sorry the fucking scum are focusing on her now. They are still coming after Coco/Kson, look at the whole Playism debacle. I know fox friend is strong enoigh to persevere.

Of course, if you are talking about my requests, pectorals are my favorite.

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>>10471292
Neither SeaN-words nor pekoanon have been happening for many days now. Case in point, the thread died about 7 hours later than the usual schedule.

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>>10471449
It's okay anon, you can call them seaniggers here.

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>>10471532
I don't need to pretend to be racist to fit in.

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>>10471549
lol homo

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>>10471449
>Neither SeaN-words nor pekoanon have been happening for many days now.

Please don't jinx it.

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>>10471957
If it happens it happens. At this point the thread mostly has regulars and lurkers. Just don't bite bait and continue on as normal if it happens.

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>>10471957
He said he was leaving after shitting up the thread for ages. It's not as if he got chased off, so one can assume it was because of boredom or something else. Either way, the last week has been peaceful, if slow.
I think he's gone, anon. Maybe seek therapy for your PTSD.

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>>10471292
Different anon. Had no idea about the fbk situation but it sounds rough. Just also realised I've been glossing over FMG everytime without reading (female gaze?). Pectorals aside, it doesn't sound like you want any smut, just an episode with the girls dealing with a buff Uruka if I read it right?

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>>10472346
I think it just means "Female Muscle Growth" here so it's already covered by the rest of the prompt

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What's in the works, writeanons?

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>>10472939
A time travel fic

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>>10472939
For the past week I have been making a fic where Mio unbirths Ayame. Literal first time writing something erotic so it'll probably be complete ass but I'm having fun making it.

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>>10472939
Everything is paused until my body stops trying to kill me.
Severe pancreatitis is probably the worst thing that’s ever happened to me and I wouldn’t wish this on anyone

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>>10472346
Female Muscle Growth. And yeah, little to no smut. Tons of hyper muscle growth, tons of pec flexing, some bicep flexing, some ridiculous strength, but no sex, enough of her clothing stays intact that she's somewhat decent, etc.

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>>10473461
[Spoiler]Been there. At least if they end up having to take out your gall bladder, it's one of the easiest surgeries in the world, with little recovery time needed, maybe a couple weeks?[/spoiler]

On an unrelated note, anyone else hear that Hime Hajine is back? Any stories about her? She actually has setups for hyperpreg and planetary breast growth in her canon. Right there in her debut stream.

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>>10473461
At least if they end up having to take out your gall bladder, it's one of the easiest surgeries in the world. Stay strong anon.

On an unrelated note, anyone else hear that Hime Hajine is back? Any stories about her? She actually has setups for hyperpreg and planetary breast growth in her canon. Right there in her debut stream.

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>>10473742
>>10473840
Ogey

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>>10472939
>Aiming for an 8k Miko fic
>It's 16 fucking thousand words and not even finished

>>10473461
Sounds like shit anon, I hope everything works out for you, good luck.

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>>10473079
Holy shit, someone started writing that? That's hilarious. I can't wait to see what you come up with.

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>>10473840
>vshojo

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The word of the thread is...

Laconic adj. (of a person, speech, or style of writing) using very few words.

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>>10473079
I'm glad(?) that I helped the conversation that led to this.

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>>10475124
Coward.

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>What does clay taste like? ...I actually used to have a really strong urge to eat clay used in school, I don't know what kind of clay it was. But it was gray and you had to use water so it stayed moist, and then you'd put it in the kiln afterwards. But the smell was very pecu- peculiar. Peculiar, and nowadays it's what the kids would say 'mm good soup' uh, but back then, I dunno I definitely wanted to eat it though

>Yeah moist clay, because it would get this kind of milky texture, right, kinda like it's- it's like ice cream when, if you mix milk with your ice cream a little bit, and your ice cream is still solid for the most part, but it has that like milky film around it. That's what the clay would turn into. It was... I mean I wanted to eat it, I didn't, I stopped, 'cuz obviously you can't eat it.

>Another thing I also had the urge to eat- why is this music so loud? Another thing I had an urge to eat was um... paper maiche, like when you dip the newspaper in the glue it smells really good, maybe that's the scent of glue. I think I would've been a glue eater, um, if I hadn't have been- I wasn't one. But I definitely would've been a glue eater. Did you guys eat glue?

>None of you ate glue? Oh some of you eat glue, I see I see

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>>10477901
She can't keep getting away with this.

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>>10465295
I've already posted it before and someone expressed interest in it already, but in case that anon forgot or someone else wants to give it a go:

(You) died young from an exceptionally severe pneumonia (or tuberculosis, up to author) and go to the afterlife. Or at least, that was the plan. Fortunately, the Grim Reaper's apprentice offers you a deal: She would give you a new body in exchange of becoming her assistant for her side gig as a live streamer.

After your reincarnation, you decide to hold a journal to chronicle your thoughts and experiences about this new occupation, the rather colorful coworkers you now interact with, as well as your growing feelings for the pink-haired beauty who gave you a new lease on life.

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>>10479558
Why the fuck would she want you, a random worthless nobody, to become the apprentice of an apprentice? There's just no world in which this story makes sense without being forced.

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>>10479617
Pity from having your life cut off short maybe? There are a few ways to make it work, I trust you guys to choose whichever you'd like the most.

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>>10475124
Thank you, Bookworm-chama.

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>>10480429
Bro there are babies dying of cancer and fetuses getting aborted out there and you think that logic applies? I think you're not only ignoring the fact that she is an immortal and thousands of people die everyday, you're not special. It's why I hated that one story where you somehow traded your soul for a second chance at life. Bro if just a simple pleading is enough for her to decide that she would have lost her job already. Mori's attitude should be a uncaring girl that just comes in "another one huh? Oh well *slash* let's go" and done.

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>>10480858
Dude it's a fanfic, the reasoning can be that the mc has a big dick.

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>>10480960
Laziness is not an excuse. You could not have given a worse answer honestly.

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>>10480858
>that one story where you somehow traded your soul for a second chance at life.
If it's Psycho Killer you're talking about, you clearly didn't read it. It's made explicitly clear she's not doing it empathetically.

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>>10479617
>Why the fuck would she want you, a random worthless nobody
This could apply to a lot of things in the archive, why even bring this up?

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>>10481190
Doesn't matter. It didn't make sense in the first place, she's already taking your soul, how can you offer it in the first place? Also she's not the devil, what kind of Death makes deals for souls? That story was full of plotholes, I read it full. It wasn't shit because of the writing but the story itself was forced. That guy is trying to make another forced story with basically the same starting plot and not giving a fuck that it is forced.
>>10481254
Yeah do you want me to call out all those other stories too? Just because your standards are low doesn't mean it should be the same for every next story to come. Always give a proper reason as to how you actually met the chuuba, that's one of the most important plot points.

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>>10481416
>Yeah do you want me to call out all those other stories too?
Yes.

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>>10481079
Tell me then anon, what stories have you contributed?

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>>10481416
Time for /vt/ reviews

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>>10481416
Are you seriously sperging out over a fucking fanfic?

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>>10481534
No
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>>10482078
No
>>10482157
Of course I am, this stuff makes me mad. "I already stepped in shit, might as well step onto another one" this is not acceptable behavior bro. I have no idea why so many people are arguing against this, do you not have any fucking standards? Why do you think it's okay to just give up on the plot because you can't be arsed to care enough?

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>>10472939
Still haven't worked on writing out the Holo-LWA fic I had outline. Thinking if I should lore drop the world in the opening or just slowly show and expand it throughout the story.

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>>10482369
That's not the kind of hill I'd want to die on personally (especially given that the reason you're so assblasted could apply to litterally every prompt in the archive as someone else already pointed out), but ogey.

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fuck I wanted to make a Saruei green but I realized I know zero french

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>>10482369
Holy shit you're acting like a retard and you haven't even written anything? HAHAHAHA go fuck yourself

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>>10482384
How much lore do you have thought out? I feel it would be pretty overwhelming if your dumped a massive amount of lore in the beginning. Maybe exploring the mostly relevant stuff at the start and spread everything else out.

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>>10482369
>this is the kind of retard now squatting in /wg/

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>>10482505
I have an overall skeleton/outline for the whole series, albeit I'm still adding on to it as I go. The base concept of the world, and the mechanisms of magic have also been thought out. My main concern is introducing the world early enough to make readers interested, but at the same time to not dump everything where it seems overwhelming/boring. It's hard to strike the balance.

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>baitposter returns
>everyone immediately jumps on bait
anonchamas..

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>>10483027
Unless his posting style radically changed, it's just a garden-variety retard

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>>10483027
No fucking way this is bait, he's too adamant about it to be a troll.

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>>10482926
I feel your pain, my guy.

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>>10482453
I'm a native French speaker, I can help you out if you want.

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>>10483436
your wine's alright but your cheese sucks

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>>10483436
>french anon helps writer anon with French for a saruei story
>over the course of writing the story writer anon gains a deep understanding of French anon
>they start talking outside of this thread
>they both feel emotions for each other but don't know how to describe it
>one day writer anon confesses his love for French anon in French
>French anon does the same in English
>they fall in love and marry each other
>and then they both lived happily ever after

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>>10483582
Nothing can be done in this thread without the faggots coming out to smear their balls all over it

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>>10483611
>writing general
>get mad at writing
?

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>>10483839
You aren't a vtuber, faggot, stop writing about yourself

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>>10482926
Oh yeah that's definitely quite a dilemma there. How are you gonna go about dropping the in the start?

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>>10483582
Alright, I'll admit I laughed at that one.

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>>10483886
???

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>>10483560
I'm actually form Quebec, but thanks LMAO

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>>10483582
shut up, french doesn't make me horny or anything

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>>10485368
omelet du fromage

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>>10487408
baguette surrender

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>>10467487
I dunno. Eventually. Life issues have curbed my desire and ability to write for the past month or so. More than that, I'm unsure of how I want to continue. I have plenty of ideas of stuff I'd like to see done, but I don't want the story to overstay its welcome. Despite the fun I personally have with it, I'm sure the novelty has been lost on others. Just been idly fleshing out the world with the lore document quietly in my incredibly small amount of spare time.
>tl;dr - If I knew, I'd tell you

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>>10488463

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>>10488463
Hey! I'm the you of tomorrow, buddy, and I've got something I wanna tell you!

It only gets worse.

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>>10465295
Genuinely want to read 'eating Fubuki's diarrhoea'

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>>10490723

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>>10491234
Yes, I imagine it would look something like that, just from a different hole

It has slowly wormed its way into my brain from the first time that image macro was posted and something dark is awakening within me

Smooth white cheeks and a river of brown

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Gladly would have written about drinking the frothy soup produced by any of the true diarrhoea hags from EN but instead the prompt had to specify Fubuki baka...

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>>10491936
>from EN
>>10491234

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as someone asked in the last thread: no, i wasn't bullied away by criticism and in fact haven't even read it since I was away from this board entirely.

I just have a writing block that I'm not working hard enough on overcoming specifically, trying to tackle a Kronii gaslighting/abuse theme that isn't totally derivative from the Ame content people wrote as well as a fairly wordy sequel that i am not motivated enough to finish because it's not like people have cared about the first part specifically, Mio/Choco discipline.

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>>10493424
I have no clue how you'd put an original spin on time travel abuse with Kronii substituting for ame but given that I'm pretty sure your omelasanon I think that style you have may be a big enough differentiator.

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>>10488463
I think your fics are far too good to worry about them overstaying their welcome. I still re-read the Kiara rapist quadrilogy, and I don't think Holofantasy has fallen off in any way.

I hope things get better for you.

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>>10495011
This by a wide margin.

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>>10482369
Some authors will put a lot of effort into making things make sense, others will just wave over things so that the story can progress. It doesn’t fucking matter. We’re writing bloody fan fiction on a Mongolian basket weaving forum, not every story has to be perfect and appeal to your tastes. If you don’t like it, don’t read it. Simple as that

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>>10468447
Yep, I'm still here. Thanks for the kind words, Anon. I'm glad you liked it.

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>>10497294
Why are you even paying attention to this retard ?

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>>10499065
Well, which retard should he pay attention to?

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>>10499142
None, preferably, but we're all retards here (including me), so I'd have to say the least retarded ones.

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>>10499142
Me, now go write about Ko'one

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Do you think you can handle some feels, anon? Are you bad enough dude to deal with your waifu crying and rejection?

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>>10503729
>Spoiler 1
yeah sure
>Spoiler 2
please.... I already deal with that enough in real life...

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>>10465295
Domestic life with your wife Coco!

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>>10505162
she would make a terrible mother, but I would still want to pound that dragon ass.

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>>10505162
I want to forcibly impregnate her and then leave Japan to avoid child support, leaving her alone to support the child without streaming since no one wants to simp for an e-thot that got knocked up.

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>>10505162
Making Coco angry by drinking almost all the milk from her coco's and leaving just barely enough for your growing child!

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>>10503729
I think I can, that was what the first fic I wrote here was about.

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>>10465295
I need more painful tragedy fics.

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>>10514246
What ones have you read so far? Just so I can get an idea

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>>10503729
more than that, i want to be hurt. i'm a fucking bookworm and visual novel enthusiast, and i've read so much that very little actually gets me emotionally invested anymore
usually it's organic tragedy (i.e. not truck-kun) related to likeable characters that does the trick

but really, anything in this bitter, cynical world we live in that makes me feel is welcome

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I have come once again to humbly request comfy snuggle sex with juniper

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which stories have the most SOUL?

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>>10518074
Depends on your definition of SOUL, I guess. I think a lot of the comedies are full of SOUL.

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>>10518128
in this case I'd define it as "the writer isn't a powerhouse by any stretch but he's doing his best"

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>>10518188
Not sure. I'd like to assume everyone is doing their best all the time. NTA but I'd also put a lot of comedies in this bracket, but I think I get what you mean. Probably some fluff I can't name off the top of my head falls here.

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>>10465258
https://rentry.co/advfn

Another chapter of Anon Finds A Ritual Book!

We're on chapter four now (five technically), and I'm surprised I made it this far! I've abolished my solid day deadlines because as other anons have told me, rushed stories aren't that good in compared to ones that have had more time put into them.

In this chapter, love!

Criticism is greatly appreciated as always, friends! Even if there's stylistic differences, let me know what you would have done in my place because I like to think about alternatives to what I do.

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>>10519725
Nice, I’ll be saving this for later.

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>>10519725
Neat!

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>>10519725
Very cute. The confession had some stuff that made me feel weird, maybe Anon came across as too forceful and desperate with his admission that he's worried he's crazy, but that could just be me. The cooking stuff reminded me I'm fucking starving. Good and cute.
>>10519988
There's no smut if you mean that.

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>>10520074
You underestimate me, I haven’t looked at a female for so long that I’d cum to a good heartfelt confession scene.

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>>10519725
Damn, now I want a rat GF...

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fellas, lately I've been consumed by the need to breed Lamy. Is the allure of hags overtaking me once more? I already wrote the Botan femdom story and suddenly the urge to write a sequel featuring that fucking elf is popping up in my head.

Gods I hope the Lamys don't hear me saying this

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>>10520897
Fear not Anon, for I am oft consumed by this same burning lust. If you want to make it, I'll gladly read it. I came to Lamy for the first time after months of glancing at the Lamy thread and it felt like a tidal wave of relief crashing into me.

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>>10518074
Honestly if you're looking for that kind of raw "doing their best" energy, you might be better served going to the Kronii thread. The local thread culture here is kind of, for lack of better word, aspiring to create better that raw SOUL won't really be seen.

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>>10521026
NTA but do you mean that first time writeanons are still kinda intimidated by what the regular writeanons bust out here? If so, I would understand considering that there's a fair amount of critique for works here(which writeanons appreciate), and that pushes for better quality of works, which in turn further intimidates first timers from giving it a shot. I mean, when you see works like Holofantasy, Cover High, any of the ongoing series, Kintsugi, etc etc I suppose one could feel like they will never measure up to it.

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>>10521231
No I mean everyone here puts out long form work... well long-ish , but you know what I mean; Pretty much a majority of the work here is pretty big, especially in comparison to /infinity/ where a lot of the work is still raw greentexts and horny energy.
Though their archiving system is dogshit. Seriously who fucking thinks a system where works done by their big authors get their own page, and not have them be indexed in the main page would fucking work. Searching for something there is so bad.

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>>10521231
I really hope this isn't the case, I'm always happy to see new writeanons popping up and submitting their works. I recently went back to read my first story I submitted here so many months back, and instantly wanted to die so yeah, everyone's gotta start somewhere and all that. I also bloody hell hope nobody is intimidated by the garbage that I call my series.

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>>10519725
not having started this series before, i went back and decided to start from the beginning. i read the first two chapters.
your prose is fantastic, personally speaking - events do not jump all over the place, but rather it's one progressive scenario in each chapter thus far, and contains a great mix of horny and of self-referential humor.
i don't watch baelz so can't comment on staying true to character, but i honestly think that's a plus here, as i quite enjoyed the haughty trickster attitude.
the pace is smooth, not dragging its heels on the ground, and you've got a clear introduction, a little character development on the part of both actors, and it all ties into some delicious raw fucking at the end. this is great, as some authors make the mistake of writing in accordance with how they're feeling rather than what the story demands, and so the pace tends to jump around, with lurching tonal shifts or improperly established emotional scenes.
my biggest criticism in chapter 1 was that if erotic writing could be compared to penile girth, then you'd have a micropenis - there was incredibly little on display, and the fact that what was there was good made it all the more disappointing that there was barely enough to get a chub on.
however, the extended sex scene in chapter 2 was great! it was detailed and extensive enough to paint a clear scene, yet not so incredibly verbose as to prevent imagination from taking over the parts i wanted to focus on.


tl;dr it's a fucking good read, anon, and my mt st helen had a vicious eruption, if you know what i mean

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>>10521940
> not having started this series before, i went back and decided to start from the beginning. i read the first two chapters.
> your prose is fantastic, personally speaking - events do not jump all over the place, but rather it's one progressive scenario in each chapter thus far, and contains a great mix of horny and of self-referential humor.
> i don't watch baelz so can't comment on staying true to character, but i honestly think that's a plus here, as i quite enjoyed the haughty trickster attitude.
>this is great, as some authors make the mistake of writing in accordance with how they're feeling rather than what the story demands, and so the pace tends to jump around, with lurching tonal shifts or improperly established emotional scenes.
Have an example? I like criticism like this because then it gives me a good idea of things I may have missed. Not the author of that piece, by the way; just curious.

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>>10521940
>this is great, as some authors make the mistake of writing in accordance with how they're feeling rather than what the story demands, and so the pace tends to jump around, with lurching tonal shifts or improperly established emotional scenes.
Have an example? I like criticism like this because then it gives me a good idea of things I may have missed. Not the author of that piece, by the way; just curious.
>grossly fucked up the quote
Fuck

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>>10522317
sorry, no fingers shall be pointed by moi

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>>10522422
Alright, alright. Was just wondering. I worry about such pitfalls

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>>10520897
We see you, anon.

[Anonymous No.]

Everytime I think of Pekofag, I imagine meeting up with some femboy and making him cum with his prostate then kissing passionately in bed afterwards. If I don't get my dick wet before I'm done with uni I'm gonna turn gay and fuck a femboy then regret it for the rest of my life...

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>>10525076
Very relatable having came to the stories several times, but having fucked a femboy before, stick with the fantasy. No matter how cool they seem, they all have some nightmarish quality to them. Even the sex is middling at best. Get a toy you can stick your cock in and live out the perfect, idealized sex in the theater in your mind.

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>>10465295
Fluffy smut please.

Bump

[Anonymous No.]

Fuck I was blazing through writing but after 1.5k words I suddenly fizzled out. I know I'm somewhat tired from work and shit, but damn are these signs of burnout?

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>>10527532
Bro I have had drawing as my passion for the last two decades of my life and I draw only 30 minutes at a time. It's called motivation.

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>>10527597
This. You'll probably get better after resting a bit. If you still don't afterwards, THEN you're probably having a burnout.

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>>10528014
No. I draw 30 minutes at a time, once every one or two weeks. It's not rest. It's motivation. It comes and goes and you shouldn't try to force it.

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>>10465295
Can we get a story about niggers gangraping Ayame? Thanks.

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>>10529121
That's not a nice word.

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>>10529121
eww no

[Anonymous No.]

>>10529802
Your face isn't nice yet you still show it to everybody.

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Ah shucks

[Anonymous No.]

Does anyone have that semi-official futa list? (the one with all the chuuba cock stats) It was a great reference but I forgot to save it & need it now for what I'm writing. Cheers

[Anonymous No.]

Is the story about a chuuba bullying you with a false love confesion still in the work ?

[Anonymous No.]

I like your thinking. With no replies, there are no (You)s, and thus nobody to seek them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10525332
>having fucked a femboy
I have several questions.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10532898
It's Holofuta in the archive.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10533333
That's exactly the one, thanks.

Also checked

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>10534958
Gura's thighs need more love. everyone just focuses on haha shark flat

[Anonymous No.]

>>10535207
Ok pedo

[Anonymous No.]

>>10534958
uoh

[Anonymous No.]

...

[Anonymous No.]

...

[Anonymous No.]

I haven't been able to get that Nene Corruption stuff out of my mind, I'm gonna do some stuff with it later tonight I think.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10538944
Please write her with a thick penis.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10539107
Wrong type of corruption, friend.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10538944
Please write her with a tight pussy

[Anonymous No.]

>>10538944
You too, huh? Go for it, my dude.
I keep imagining her going from doing cutesy Super Nene Punch bullshit on street hooligans to just straight up butchering entire buildings worth of lowlifes like a fucking Hotline Miami character.

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>>10539262
>Nene in the bear mask

[Anonymous No.]

>>10539262
>NENE FUCKING HATES THESE PEOPLE

[Anonymous No.]

>>10539262
>Do you like hurting other people, aru?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10538944
Please write her with a fat hog cock, a tight bear pussy and no corruption

[Anonymous No.]

>>10539955
Is this even the same story..?

[Anonymous No.]

Fact: dogs don't really care about humans wearing masks as they still can recognize them by sound and mostly smell, but a mask that looks like a face standing by itself is enough to fool a dog into being uncomfortably suspicious. Write that in your next story.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10543044
I feel like there's few chuubas you could write this about

[Anonymous No.]

>>10543044
The only potential idea I can glean from this is: Chuuba has dog, wears the 'face' mask for some reason, dog doesn't recognize, mauls chuuba to death due to suspicion.

I don't know why but I find the idea kinda funny.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10543538
So korone mauls okayu to death due to a prank?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10546266
IT'S JUST A PRANK

[Anonymous No.]

>>10546266
Yes just a 'harmless' little prank

[Anonymous No.]

Writeanons, how much does having others read your work drive you to write? How sweet are those (You)s to you? Or on the other hand, have you accepted that even if it barely gets any attention here, you're writing to fulfil your own fantasies and the (You)s are just an icing on the cake you don't necessarily need?

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>>10551800
I like writing for the sake of it, but getting feedback is a big plus. I like hearing that stuff I created made people feel things or put ideas into their head, and every so often, that it made them cum. I feel like everyone, to some degree, wants to have their work acknowledged.

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>>10551800
I don't really like writing. The (You)'s are the only reason I still do it. If they stop I'll be going back to other stuff. I'd pump out one or two stories more, and if still nothing, gone like the wind. What's a clown without a circus? Just a stupid fucking clown.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10551800
I write because I want to, I do it for the thread because this place got me back to writing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10551800
>>10553272
>>10553828
>>10554964
t. not crippled by self-doubt over the high expectations you yourself chose to build up for others, and are currently suffering over

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>>10555111
What the fuck are you trying to say please speak like a normal person

[Anonymous No.]

>>10555205
They're projecting their insecurities.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10550154 good descriptions.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10551800
Although I do enjoy the (you)s, I know better that if I'm not writing for my own sake, I'll never be able to create works that I'm truly proud of. I believe that if you make a work that is truly good, (you)s will naturally come. Believe in yourself, and keep up those writing reps.

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>>10519725
Gonna be honest here Bae feels like she's in that weird characterization deadzone where the character feels off but not really off, like the uncanny valley of being close but not close enough that she feels like her.
Is this a product of this story starting before character development hit?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10551800
Getting (You)s is great and the ones with good feedback and criticism are invaluable but at the end of the day I still write for myself. I wouldn't be able to try my best if I wasn't writing for myself first.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10557360
Same.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10557360
>>10557552
God I fucking hate you people. Everytime I'm forced to say this but I will keep saying it. Humans are social animals, we are biologically designed in such a way that not being accepted by the "tribe" will make you want to kill yourself. Loneliness and being rejected are two of the worst emotions one can feel. Stop being delusional, you are doing it for others. There's no "I'm doing it for myself :) " you're in denial. Literally just accept that it's okay to do things for approval, that's totally fine, but please stop being a cunt and saying this shitty fucking line over and over again like it will somehow be true one day if you keep saying it. You know it's not true when you are in bed thinking about life. You know it's not true when you're jerking off and your reflection appears in the screen. Just stop.

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>>10558751
That's just your opinion man. Don't get me wrong I do write for (You)s but I also just have a lot of delusional fantasies in my head that I need to get down on paper, so it's half and half.

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>>10558751
Stop projecting your insecurities jackass. Not everyone is as desperate for validation as you.
Some people are just doing this out of love.

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>>10560589
>>10561167
> Just your opinion
There's no answers that are right other than "Yes, I do it for attention, and the attention makes me happy so doing it for attention is doing it for myself.". It's not "my opinion" believe it or not, there's this thing called "science" out there, dunno if you've heard of it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10561216
This guy’s right. I also read the scientific report on “why people write fan fiction on 4chan about women who are half real”. Trust me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10561167
Also should say that denial straight into anger is a classic. You may think you're special or something but with basic knowledge of science and biology you can read anyone like a goddamn book, it's amazing. Doesn't matter if you don't believe me, after all that's what denial is all about. So long as I'm that little tumor in your head that will make you think about how shitty a life in delusion is, I'm fine with it. >>10561896 (You)

[Anonymous No.]

Well, guess we’ve got a new resident schizo. /wg/ just can’t catch a break can it?

[Anonymous No.]

>tfw I'm an Egoist

[Anonymous No.]

>>10562548
Probably for the best. This place is dead as fuck without them. At least this one's a genuine schizo - thus is funny to watch - and not just a troll.

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>>10562786
I wanna fluster Pekora until she can't resist anymore and turns into a whimpering bright red mess.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10563374
Honestly this place being deadish isn't even that bad especially since even when we're "dead" we still maintain the thread culture and aren't just a dead zone with no discussion like the draw thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10565028
I just want to suck her penis.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10565553
Anon... They aren't mutually exclusive...

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>>10563374
I'd rather dead than schizos. Besides I wouldn't call it dead, just relaxed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10568284
Cool opinion, dude. You sound like that freak who said he'd rather the thread die than have early threads. You're just as much of a schizo as he is.

[Anonymous No.]

for fucks sake

metaposting is for fags, you nerds.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10568603
What is this finger thing anyway?
And why does it turn me on when I see it now?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10491234
Fuck off

[Anonymous No.]

>>10572138
You know how holding your fingers like that looks like a head with ears... like a fox.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10572604
Y'know...now that you say it, I feel like a dumbass.

[Anonymous No.]

hol;y fucking shit, remembering how to love her was both disgusting and unbelievably erotic

author, if you're still here, god bless. that was amazing. it's a rare fic that makes me actually feel, particularly feelings of disgust and hatred. and then i busted one out, too. i feel like a whore. it was wonderful.

>>10572837
it's okay, i didn't really understand it at first either. i suspect it was chosen as a cute character trait and somehow, it stuck around for years

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573011
It is cute. I've seen it with that new Touhou fox chick first then started seeing it with Fubuki. I want to fuck both. And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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>>10573130
a-archiveanon? is that you?
the writing style did seem extremely familiar...

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>>10573328
Yeah, I'm almost always around barring the times when I finally go to sleep, even if I'm not posting. I wrote it way after the other things in that "series" because someone asked for it and I have a fetish for being taken advantage of.

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>>10532985
Someone is writing something like this?
That's news to me, haven't heard anything about that.

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>>10573482
damn, dude. this and lies come to light are two of my most favourite fics in the archive. god bless.

i still go back and re-read the latter occasionally. the visceral force in all the violence... it's exhilarating. but imma stop before i start gushing like a broken fire hydrant. bless you, anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10465258
>the door lets out a loud creak as you enter the building
>cold wind from outside blows in snow before you quickly close it behind you
>inside is...a fucking massacre
>blood goes at least halfway up the wall on both sides and the floor is littered with bodies
>you softly step over a man missing his head and right arm
>there’s a staircase at the end of the hall, with a man whose head is cleanly split down the middle on the landing, along with an adjoining hallway half down that contains a similar amount of gore
>you stand in the intersection of halls and give the area another once over
>there’s a compartment in the wall where a fire hose rests, except the latch is broken and the door hangs by a single hinge
>there’s a hook for what you’d probably guess was an axe, if it was still there
>that explain the cuts and missing limbs, but that’s not normally her style
>hmm...
>you pull down your scarf from around your mouth
“Nene?”
>your voice isn’t any louder than your normal speaking level, which isn’t that loud to begin with
>still, you hear loud footsteps running from above you over to the stairway and the teddy bear quickly descends the stairs, nearly slipping in the pool of blood on the landing
>“Anon, Anon! All the bad guys are gone!”
“I can see that, so what’s up?”
>”Nene...didn’t do it.”
>you just raise an eyebrow, and she briefly panics
>”Ah-They were already like this when Nene came in! Someone already dealt with them, but…”
“You can’t find who?”
>she nods very rapidly
>you rub your chin as you start to think of who the perpetrator could be
>the list of people willing and capable of doing this are slim, and thankfully Hololive has done a good job, either incidentally or purposefully, of corralling most if not all those personalities into one place
>so the most likely conclusion is that it’s someone you know, and if it’s one of them…
>maybe this night will be more productive than you thought

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>>10573856
>you look back at Nene who’s rocking back and forth on her feet, waiting expectantly for your insight
“Well-”
>the hairs on the back of your neck stand up when you hear the scrapping of metal on the floor and a quiet grunt of exertion over the sound of your own voice
>you reflexively jerk your head back just before a blood stained axe embeds itself in the wall right where your skull used to be
>still not quick enough to avoid a large cut on your cheek being opened by the flying weapon, but better than dying
>you wince as the line of fire on your face throbs and you close your eyes to try and collect yourself
>you hear Nene move in front of you to put herself between you and whoever threw the axe, but her voice catches in her throat when she sees who did it
>taking a deep breath, you open your eyes and look past Nene to the perpetrator
“...Suisei.”
>Hololive’s shooting star looks surprised at Nene's arrival
>she straightens and raises an eyebrow
>”Nene? What are you doing here?”
>”Eh? Umm, Nene’s here to fight bad guys. I-Is Suichan here to do the same?”
>”Bad guys?”
>Suisei looks around at the bodies littering the floor
>”Y-yeah, I’m here to fight, uh, ‘bad guys’ too. I didn’t think you were the type, Nene!”
>that wasn’t very convincing, but Nene seems takes the answer in stride and puffs out her chest while you stare a hole into the back of her head
>”Nene’s on a quest to become the strongest idol! Beating bad guys is just a part of that!”
>Suisei squints at her, before turning her questioning gaze over to you
>”And is that...Anon? Are you in on this whole ‘beating bad guys’ thing too?”
>you stay silent but Nene decides to answer, still unbothered by the presence of her kill-stealing friend
>”Nope! Anon is just here to help Nene! He always knows what to do, so Nene can focus on getting strong! Nene-”
>she turns to look back at you, but her happy expression falls when she sees the look on your face
>a drop of blood from your cut rolls down your cheek and falls to the floor, the sound audible in the sudden silence
“Nene.”
>She looks down at the floor, her bangs covering her eyes
>”...Suisei’s not here for bad guys, is she?”
“No, she’s not. You know why she’s here.”
>the blue haired girl pauses in the middle of trying to wipe a specific stain of blood from her orange tights
>”Eh? Uhh…”
>Suisei just shrugs and smiles
>”You got me! I don’t know what this ‘bad guy’ stuff is, I was just here to kill.”

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573956
>Nene’s fists clench and you place a hand on her shoulder
“You’ve still got a chance to get stronger tonight, Nene. Go on.”
>she clenches her teeth and despite being out of the cold her breath is still visible when it comes out of her mouth
>”Hey! What are you-”
“Do it.”
>and just like the the air throughout the hallway shifts
>Nene turns her head to speak over her shoulder
>”...Why did you lie to Nene?”
>”I didn’t REALLY lie, I just thought you-”
>Suisei is interrupted when Nene reaches past you and yanks the axe out of the wall before rapidly approaching her fellow idol
>”Whoa, Nenechi, I didn’t mean to make you upset! I think there’s been a misunderstanding, I-”
>”Nene just needs to listen to Anon, and everything will work out. Anon knows how to make Nene stronger.”
>Her eyes dart to you before back to Nene
>”H-Hold on, is this…”
>you just turn and fish a handkerchief to press against your open wound
>Suisei stops trying to get answers from either of you and shifts her stance to a more fighting appropriate one
>It probably won’t do her much good though
>you’ve already seen Nene fight much more dangerous foes and come out on top
>Suisei, an unarmed Suisei even, shouldn’t be too much fuss
>...
>by the time you stem the bleeding, the sounds of combat had ceased
>looking over, Nene is on her knees beside a motionless Suisei on the ground
>there’s a red splotch on the side of her jacket by her kidney
>Suisei’s body is still clutching a small knife she must have had it hidden on her
>that’s...unfortunate
>You put a hand on Nene’s shoulder and she winces as she stands
>”Ne-gah. Nene’s okay.”
“Yeah. You’re okay.”
>You hug her from behind and rest your chin on the top of her head
>Nene gingerly leans back against you
>”...why are so many of my friends bad guys?”
>It comes out as a whisper, almost as if she hadn’t meant to say it out loud
>you don’t answer, instead just pressing your hand against the stab wound to put pressure on it
“Come on, let’s get you taken care of. My apartment isn't too far.”
>”Y-Your apartment? Nene’s never been there yet.”
“Yeah? Well, don’t get too excited. It isn’t anything special”
>You spare a glance back at Suisei’s dead body
>Apex Predators
>Comets
>soon enough, Nene will dealing with people whose power borders on deific
>but that’s okay, she’ll be ready
>you’ll make sure of it
>Momosuzu Nene will be the strongest idol

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573856
>>10573956
>>10573995
>Suisei
I knew this was going to happen but I'm delighted about it anyways

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573995
I fucking love this Nene corruption arc and seeing it get updated is so fucking good.
The buildup for this is fucking great, genuinely excited to see how you'll handle Nene's 'true' fall into darkness or how painful you can make it feel.

[Anonymous No.]

Sarueis lore was she was a soldier right? Maybe something related to that or helping her get over trauma from that

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>>10472346
>Having gigatons of muscle mass is nice and all but it's gonna make playing the violin really hard.
>Pippa climbs up Uruka's pecs, finds her head among all that muscle mass, and throws a kazoo into her face.

[Anonymous No.]

Stay motivated, writeanons.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10579967
Thanks Pekofag, I can feel the drive to write.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10580061
Aaaaand it's gone.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10558751
Alright, schizo-chama, time to take your meds.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573995
Definitely going to keep an eye on this story especially after the Weird Route in Deltarune Chapter 2.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10562786
Is that why you larp as pekora pekofag Chama?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10579646
>Huge meteor threatens Phase Connect office
>Uruhulk flexes her pecs against it, it slams against them, doing no damage to her
>Phase Connect is saved
>New rock home.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10580940
iirc that was what got this whole arc started in the first place

[Anonymous No.]

>>10581101
That would be pretty funny, not gonna lie.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10581259
Aye, that's great then.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10577815
A *french* soldier? What trauma could she possibly have in that position?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10583584
PTSD over Freedom Fries.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10583584
Maybe she was a French solder during the Franco prussian war

[Anonymous No.]

>>10583584
Got stuck up in various TOTALLY NOT NEO-COLONIAL ADVENTURES in Africa that France's been doing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10573856
>>10573956
>>10573995
for archiveanon's convenience:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTMQg_p_osZgtmIzqV8ErrsN-WJCzQ-8GEav-lDiDc7x5WOZ-IvK_bePSi0z9350OqRpiSrPjhUXlri/pub

Tags: Nene-centric, Suisei, SFW, Corruption, Gore

[Anonymous No.]

>>10583584

[Anonymous No.]

thinking of soft femdom sex Lamy makes me hard... bros, help me before it's too late.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10587685
Anon you can't show your weakness. They may be weak but they are still a threat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10584067
Kek.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10465295
Basicslly this >>10585830
If I had to throw out some specifics
>(You) catch Kronii in a public area, like a crowded bus or train
>Eventually decide to feel up her massive tits
>she doesn't do a thing a thing about think becuase of her absurdly low self esteem
>things just escalate to full on rape and she just sits there and takes it while trying to make as little of herself as possible

[Anonymous No.]

>>10589071
taking advantage of someone weaker like that is crazy hot, honestly

[Anonymous No.]

>>10589561
Just imagine her going all
>Sorry about that
under her breath every time she ends up moaning too loud. Diamonds.

[Lamy No.]

>>10587685
I can be your mommy anon~

[Anonymous No.]

Is there any story where (you) fucked more than one chuuba at the same time ?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10465295
>>10589071
This but in reverse. Kronii is so narcissistic that she actually think you should be glad she raped you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10590721
>>10589071
Why not just both? It's not like being a narcissist and having low-self esteem are mutually exclusive

[Anonymous No.]

>>10590898
uhh, narcissism most definitely is mutually exclusive with low self-esteem

[Anonymous No.]

>>10574926
>>10577021
>>10580940
Thank you! I do have a few more ideas for this, though I don't know when exactly I'll be able to write them.

>>10583777
Thanks a ton

Could you add an 'out' between 'fish' a handkerchief' for me?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10592380
done.
I got an idea too. it'd escalate things quite a bit though, so I'll probably tag it as a fan-sequel if I manage to get around to writing it to avoid stepping on your toes.

[Anonymous No.]

I want Marine to suckle on my cock like a pacifier and drink its warm milkies while cooing and moaning.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10595498
Is this before or after she paints the walls of your innards white with her foot long penis?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10595542
>foot long penis
Don't lie. Marine would totally be a micropeen futa.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10595724
Projection, much?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10595724
Is there something you want to tell us, anon ?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10596134
Yes.

The fucking shitposting spammers are back.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10595750
>>10596134
Listen, I'm just saying that Marine probably doesn't have the schmeat if you catch my drift. There's just no way I'd have anything other than a micropeen.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10596335
It's just the freakish futafags trying to kill the thread again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10596369
Yeah? Well, I reckon Marine has enough "schmeat" that she could slam it tip-down on your head and suck you into her hairy balls.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10596469
Tell me how they are in any way different from hagposters? I'm in a good mood so I'll entertain you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10597360
I'm not playing your game, futafreak. Stop trying to derail the thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10597977
Figured as much. Guess there's another schizo still in the thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10598381
No shit! Maybe you should leave?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10598381
>>10598469
Would you two fuckfaces stop shitting the thread please ?

[Anonymous No.]

Just ignore the bait.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10599593
Jesus fuck, this thread has become a trainwreck.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10599664
It's like it's destined to be haunted by shitposters.

[Anonymous No.]

finally... the shitposters are back... we're no longer dead..

[Anonymous No.]

>>10601029
Goddamnit, i finally got someone showing interest in my request, so i have to check the thread semiregularly, and now i have to put up with this shit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10601148
I mean, it will or will not get written regardless of whether or not you actually check in. There's no reason you have to put up with the futafags.

[Anonymous No.]

How come there are so many futafags but only one has been making futa stories for the past month or two?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10601988
The rest are socks.

Futa cock socks.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10601787
Yeah but not all stories get archived, and sometimes stories get removed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10602157
Stories only get removed in incredibly odd circumstances and unless something is missed and no one says anything it'll get archived.

[Anonymous No.]

Oh dang I just realized the implications of >>10469444 . It's quite sad, weirdanon said he never wanted to abandon his maximalist writing style and yet he swallowed his pride and did, publishing smut from the shadows in completely different style. But it got no attention, no one even bated an eye, it must be soul crushing, your actual full effort not turning out as you want to and your desperate attempts at getting better failing miserably. An actual identity crisis in progress, poor little fella. Hope he figures his shit out eventually. I did jerk off to his smut, but no one really acknowledged him so...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10602437
Yeah, I hope this didn't kill his motivation. No one deserves to feel like that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10602198
Pretty sure the only thing that doesn't get archived are like the short greentexts like that gura talking about eating clay on last thread.
Even then I am pretty that can get archived if it's compiled into a compilation.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10605268
Anon, that wasn't a story anon... Gura actually said those things, it was a transcript.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10604617
NTWA but honestly I'm probably going to make one more story for this place because I promised it to one guy that's been waiting a long time and really take a good look at what am I doing here. I don't know if I truly am just tired of writing or if I'm just tired of life in general (not in the kms kind of way), and if I should really keep doing it. But that's the personal problem, I feel like this place isn't really the right audience for a lot of people and that won't really ever change, that's the main problem.

[Anonymous No.]

gib me a Saruei scenario to write and i might do it maybe idk

[Anonymous No.]

>>10605739
Bruh just make an Archive of our Own account. It's free iirc, and your odds of serious feedback will go way up, compared to here. Or just touch grass for a while, so to speak. Unless someone here is actually commissioning you, you don't owe them anything.

Although curious which story you are interested in doing. Since we cleared out (most of) the shitposters there has at least been some activity here.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10605739
Covid, man. EVERYONE is tired of life in general. You're not alone, if that helps.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10602437

I was hesitant to respond initially but since your comment has made me out to be some poor wretched thing, confusedly scrambling around the gutters of stylistic identity, I will make an exception.

Firstly, I sincerely appreciate your misplaced concern. Secondly, as of now, I do not know if I will continue to post stories here. I have two stories in the works currently; they may see the light of day, they may not.

Finally, maximalisim is far too interesting to ever abandon. I will happily admit that I have not figured out yet how to incorporate smut into this style effectively but you can sleep soundly knowing that I will do my damnedest to do so, be it a Sisyphean task or no.

Glad you managed to get a fap out of something I've written.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10606123
Bruh i vote post it. Every post here that contains actual content is a post that isn't about Marine's dick, or pekofag, or "put that in your next story", etc.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10605917
It's not even that. I never really took much of an interest in writing and this place, for a moment, made me feel like maybe it was something that I could work with. But it feels like people simply don't care about... I don't know. It just feels like it's all the same, everyone wants the same thing and talks about the same thing, the same types of stories get the same attention, and a lot of writers just get left out to dry out in the sun with a pond next to them if they don't conform. Saying this gets you labeled as some schizo or shitposter, or bait. It's very tiring. If there's no joy in writing, and the people don't care about what you write even if you do, what is even the point? I'm already struggling with managing my time, I virtually abandoned my main hobby to write in this place, trying my best to share my initial spark of love with others but there's just no giving back anymore. I don't think I even read a single new story in the past month inside the archive willingly (that to say, I wasn't asked to). If I don't feel like providing and the thread doesn't provide anymore... I don't know what I'm doing here.
>>10606011
I always thought life was a straight line, easily sketched out, knowing exactly how things will go. Straight out of high school go to uni, then get a job, settle for a 6k salary and get a love interest, maybe start a family then pursue my hobbies. That was the ideal. But now after 2 years of doing fuck all, failed to get into university in time, now I'm waiting another fucking year, everyday I question myself if I'm just bored or depressed, sleeping for 12-15 hours a day and still feeling tired all the time, not improving much on any front. Eating the same food, playing the same guys, watching the same 50 clips of "the good ol' days" of Hololive. Life is just so... bland right now. Even if I have fun here and there, at the end of the day I'm still doing nothing productive, still alone, still so fucking tired all the time. I hope life can finally start moving again next year, maybe I'll finally get into uni, maybe I'll get a cool little job to support myself, maybe I'll finally find another women to love. Maybe maybe maybe, I don't know what the future holds.

thanks for coming to my blogpost

[Anonymous No.]

>>10606960
>everyone wants the same thing and talks about the same thing,

Well, desu, with one IP for every 5 posts, there is a LOT of samefagging.

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>>10606960
>the same types of stories get the same attention
I get what you're saying. I mean, I don't really read anything other than fluff because I'm not really here for my love of writing, more to read and write gosling fuel about chuubas I like to fill the void in my shitty life. Everyone here has different types of fics they like to read and some genres or tags are just too weird or niche for most people.

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>>10606960
What exactly are you writing to get that sort of reaction, if you don't mind my asking? I'm not trying to come across as accusatory or anything, just genuinely curious. I try to give feedback to everything I read, but it's true that certain things will end up getting far more of a response than others, sadly. I'm glad to see more and more stories getting responded to, but it feels like there's always one or two which get little. That makes me feel pretty shitty.

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>>10606960
You seem like a lot on your plate. But you're also looking for validation on 4chan. That's a bad fucking move. This place is a hobby, or a sport, or something you check while you're standing in line or waiting for a Hot Pocket to warm up. If you want validation as a writer, go to AO3. If you want validation for smut, go to Deviantart, or open up a Patreon. If you want validation in real life, you're only going to find it there.

I came to this thread a month ago when i saw there was a writing request thread, and wondered if someone might want to try to write my favorite chuuba with my favorite fetish. I know my story will probably never get written, but I took a minute to request it each new thread, and tried to help out the board by reporting all the seaposters and sameflaggers and pekoanons. But they were never jannied out, and eventually the thread died. That's the disposable nature of 4chan.

Take it from someone who has given up on life and realizes he will never be great, or even good, and will die alone and forgotten. You have dreams and aspirations. That already puts you ahead. You're self aware. Use it.

-UrukaHyperPecsAnon, signing off.

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>>10608790
PS not gonna An Hero. Who knows, maybe i'll get lucky someday.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10608790
>>10609006
Wish you the best, anon-chama. You'll make it someday, I'm sure of it.

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>>10609006
Your dedication is admirable.

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>>10583584
>>10577815
She has a lore video, check it out

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JyHwTouOWwI

[Anonymous No.]

>>10609563
No, I won't. But thanks for the kind words.

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>>10606960
I think I get you; for lack of better words, this place kind of has 'expectations' for what vtuber fanfic should be that while aren't written hard in stone you can kind of see if you lurk long enough.
Still I don't really think it's a product of this place specifically but more like general 4chan writefag culture since this specific 2nd person style that's used here I could also see in a lot of other 4chan originated stuff; but more because vtuber Fanfiction, emphasis on the fanfiction part, is still niche as fuck that at most there's like a hundredish, gjve or take, people interested in fanfiction discussion of chuubas.
Seriously even going by ao3 its still niche with this place effectively being one of the few places that has a fanfiction community for writing about vtuber stuff.

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>>10611482
Hey, as long as there's life, there's hope. So don't give up just yet, okay ? We're all gonna make it someday, just believe in yourself, like I believe in you.

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>>10605739
>>10606960
On the off chance that I might be that "one guy": Even though I would be grateful if you did, please don't feel forced to write something you're not that interested in on my behalf.
And regardless if I'm that guy or not, I feel like I understand your struggle. I've experienced a similar kind of pull toward the status quo in my own (non-writing-related) craft. However, I have been fortunate enough to find a small intersection between what I want to do and what others like, and I've been able to fill that niche happily. Of course, there are times where I stray outside of this, working on things only for myself, and my efforts are usually met with the soul-crushing response of silence. Still, having that small niche to fall back on makes things much easier. I sincerely hope you can find that sort of niche for yourself, whether it's in writing or not.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10611918
Thanks.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10612724
No problem, my guy. Again, best wishes for you.

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>>10611633
What's the expectation, if you don't mind my asking? I'm curious. I notice there's a big thing with fluff and, well, the meme of Fubuki exists for a reason.

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>>10613192
Style, Themes and General Content. As I said before the lines for what's acceptable here aren't hard set and can move but lurk long enough and you'll know what generally gets positively received here. Personally I believe it's just a thing that's happens here because of the fact that vtuber fanfiction is a very small niche such that there's only a few people that are actually interested in discussing it on a mongolian basket weaving forum... even if that forum is one of the few places that lets it be a thing.

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>>10606518
What are you trying to say?

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To all anons who feel like there's no outs left, and nothing seems like it's worth it anymore, just remember that the only person who can be you, is you. Hold your head up high, and take your next step forward. Tomorrow's always worth seeing, so I hope to see you there as well.

Hear it from my son:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B0-mDEzbzl4

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>>10619287
I wanna call it a mood swing and move on but that would imply that I have a medical condition and if I do I'll never accept it. Also fuck you Google
> "Men with low testosterone can experience fatigue and commonly have mood swings,” he says. “It's also one of the major causes of depression."
My testosterone levels are fine. Hmm yes this seems more likely...
>"Schizophrenia: People with schizophrenia have hallucinations or delusions that cause them to experience an altered state of reality. Schizophrenia significantly impacts quality of life."

Also Watame singing opera has too much soul, she sounds so goofy, it cheers me up:
https://youtu.be/Wk81L-SFX9I
And this Kanata clip:
https://youtu.be/U_nP-CJ1JKk

[Anonymous No.]

>>10618976 serves as an inspiration for writing. There are no stories here crafted with such well perfected grammar and knowledge of the past.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10620003
Watame...erotic and soft...

[Anonymous No.]

>>10621299
Stop it, Watame is cool and sheep!

[Anonymous No.]

>>10620003
Fuck me, guess that makes more sense. "Prolonged usage of prescribed antibiotics can cause fatigue and overall sense of tiredness". Thanks for the warning doc. Add that to the fucking list of side effects I suppose.

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>>10622463
I find medicine terrifying honestly, especially things like anti depressants. If our emotions, thoughts and feelings control our actions, and we ourselves, as an individual, are chemicals in our brain; isn't taking medicine virtually identity murder? You're changing what makes you, YOU. It scares me so much to the point that if I were diagnosed with depression I wouldn't take the meds.

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>>10622711
By that logic, doing things like therapy, meditation, or illicit substances would also be identity murder. But I really don't see it that way. (You) are much more than just a momentary collection of emotions, thoughts, and actions. (You) are an ever-dynamic being with a range of options to change parts of yourself, for better or worse, with or without your conscious involvement. In that sense medications simply represent one of those options (again for better or worse).

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>>10591660
they are both tipically correlated, it's not a logical state of mind (what is honestly?)

[Anonymous No.]

>>10465295
Mumei dismembering you very slowly, like an owl would do to their prey, i want it to be very sadistic and gory, please writeanons make this come true

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>>10621666
I can't help it, I'm boring and Watame seems so soft and cuddly. I want to rest my head on her stomach and take a nap.

[Anonymous No.]

>>10465295
beating the shit out of Haachama

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>>10624889
Why the sudden gore?

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>>10625914
Some people are into snuff.

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>>10624889
Is she a serial killer in this prompt?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10626164
She's just a hungry predator, Anon.

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>>10626264
So, it’s just a story about animals?

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>>10626328
Either that, or she's a cannibalistic killer.

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new thread
>>10626380

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>>10626366
Is Mumei even human to begin with?

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>>10465295
Onegai write anon.....

[Anonymous No.]

Love you guys.

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>>10632950
Do i deserve love?

[Anonymous No.]

>>10633333
Yes, Anon. Even you.