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Ars Amatoria. Vol 3 >>88695021
Tags: Murasaki Shion, Romance, Fluff, Fantasy, School life, Drama.

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The /wg/'s Fall / Halloween 2024 Contest is over. Thank you to all the writers who participated. The entries can be found at rentry.org/wgoctober
Voting is currently ongoing and will end on Nov. 5th. Please do your civic duty give them a read and vote!
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>>88850417
Bodyswap my beloved...put girl in their oshi's bodies so they spend a lot of time taking nude selfies and masturbating

>>88851037
Chloe bodyswapping right as Shion is about to get mating pressed by an oji-san...

>>88850086
You get the ultimate and final cuck: Your oshi genuinely loves somebody else.

No mindbreaking, no blackmail, just a guy who's a better fit for your oshi because you took her for granted.
Cue when you see pictures of her in her socials with a happy marriage and a baby on the way.

>>88851743
>the ultimate and final cuck
Aqua daughter falling in love with a kirito clone/type?

>>88850086
Sexual intercourse with this thing

>>88851994
Luna is a cute princess, not a thing

>>88851994
>>88850086
Marine attends the kindergarten in a bear costume because she loves it, but needs help taking it off to go pee. You, the caretaker, help her.

You take this opportunity to do unspeakable things.

>>88840458
Tower of Tattle is entirely hosted on Github, it's the only story that's hosted there but given that it's a really major work I figured it was worth spending the effort to archive it.

There were a few links I didn't bother with because of the complexity and how rare they are. There's a story on Pixiv and another on Deviantart that are nightmarish to programmatically extract, and since it's just two it didn't feel like a good use of time.

>>88854252
>Wuffians! Welcome to the stream! Baubau!
>Un un!
>Today is a vewy special day for Moco-chan!
>Un!
>Today she gets bred by a dirty stray dog!
>Un-! W-Whaet-?
>Hard cut to a feral mutt jumping on top of Mocochan, and thrusting until his cock is rammed right up her asshole, paws off the floor and clinging to Mococo's meaty thighs
>One Mococo is a mess, with her hair frizzed and the dog drags her to the floor for the knot to shrink, the wet pop of the knot exiting Mococo's asshole echoes through the room
>F-Fuwawae... Whae-!?
>Oh, Mogo-john, I said breed! Now you have to do it again!
>WHAE-?!
>A second mutt rushes Mococo while she is in the floor. Mococo screams as a second dog cock fucks her pussy
>The audience roars in laughter and claps.

>>88851951
>Marine being forced to be the reasonable one as (You) are in hysterics over the mere idea of Aqua dating

>>88857303
>Aqua dating? No! I don't want that! I want her to be single for the rest of her career! Even after she graduates I want her to stay single for awhile! Ten years at least!

Live

>>88855095
Having your supply of oxygen cut off by Miko's plump arse!

>>88859918
>Be you, dying in a hospital
>Miko's fat ass accidentally unplugs your machine
>Death by booty, in the worst possible way.

>>88837957
Thank you for your service.

>>88850110
I love older-looking Ayames

>>88860606
Not what I was expecting but I hate that you brought an actual smile on my face just imagining that dumb scenario.

>>88857899
>Aqua standing there awkwardly with her diploma
>"So are you proud of me... or...?"

>>88860727
Can you believe she's only 89 years old?

>>88863294
That's still a young brat in oni years....

>>88863294
She told me she was 1500 at least

Live

>>88860727

>>88867374
I'd gently lick her sphincter, wriggle my tongue in and nibble on her stubborn butt nuggets. Can I get a hell yeah?

>>88863294
Wow, that Oni's '89' years old!? (Small picture of Ayame's face)

Don't forget to vote

>>88873557
The zoomer republic has my vote!

Live

So uhhh anyone got anything to say about any stories?

Word processor?
Opened
Instant ramen?
Ready
Video essay of something I literally know nothing about?
Playin'
Edgy leather jacket?
On
Meds?
Flushed down the toilet.

Yup, it's writing time.

>>88878232
I recently re-read brat correction and I felt like writing a fan chapter.

>>88860727
yes, especially in the chest area

>>88878448
any names you might wanna share? or is it chicken again?

>>88878448
What's even there to write a fan chapter about? Continuing the molesting by Kiara?

>>88878792
>Kiara invites Mori over, and of course, (you) are there because big sis Kiara offered to take you off your parent's hands.
>By now it's regular for you to come to Kiara's place, and she does get touchy, sometimes against your will, but even if she will slap you to put you in your place she will lovebomb you afterwards
>Mori acts all cool even if she's a bit autistic, but she's always nice to you and you're all ove her when she's over
>Naturally, since you're such a young innocent, totally not molested shota, she doesn't feel weird about having her massive fucking tits hidden with no bra
>She tries to set some boundaries, like asking you to step out of the room while she and Kiara change, but Kiara insists that, again, you're an innocent, pure shota and that you don't look at girls that way
>"Or do you wanna step out, Anon? Hmm?" Kiara asks, almost like a test
>You can spota hint of jealousy in her voice, but you decide to stay, even if looking away
>You hear Mori's clothes rustling and those things flop, and while trying to peek it's Kiara who tells you to keep looking at a corner. She herself stays topless a bit more just to mess with you
>Mori sneaks up on you scares you and laughs her ass off at your flushed reaction
>Kiara then says that you should change too, because of how sweaty your clothes are
>Except you haven't been playing
>Now Mori gets flustered
>Kiara forces you, makes sure that Mori can see your little erection
>With a sadistic smile, flops your little cock onto your belly and says 'Look at you-! Ohhh, oh, you're naughty!' Before dressing you back up.
>Mori is suddenly super awkward around you whenever she's over and you're there
>Kiara slowly grooms her into the idea of trying you herself, and shows off just how obedient you are.

I keep getting boners in the middle of my writing

>>88878232
I'm getting a bit burnt out on White December and it's definitely affecting the overall quality, so I'm going to actually start really writing a story about Choco grooming Iofi into a poly sex cult. I wanted to to Mel but she didn't feel like the right fit for this one. Plus, Yopi doesn't get enough content for how much a sweetpea she is.

It's going to be less of a fap piece and more of an Apple of Her Eye piece as well. Been a while since I wrote something with some weight to it.

>>88879834
>poly sex cult
So like sister-wives with the cult leader or free love/free use cult type?

>>88879393
Not bad. My idea ( that i wouldnt write just because i dont do well with fan chapters) would be that Mori is the one that introduced Kiara into the shotacon fetish but has never acted.
Until Kiara tells her and shows her a video of anon fucking her on her bed.
This prompts Mori to try and hunt for one for herself, getting a more "active" kid that also is named anon? dunno

If you get goofy you could write an entire friend circle of shotacons getting each of the archetypes lmao

>>88880013
The general premise (that I have so far) is that Choco is going to groom Iofi into joining this "club" to help people recovering from mental illness and gradually work her way up into doing more and more inappropriate sexual things while also employing blackmail and manipulation to keep her locked into it.

I'm still very much sorting out how I want it to go but for now I have enough of an idea for a few chapters. I usually get an idea for a full plot two-three chapters in.

>>88880013
>>88880013
But I guess to answer your question because for some reason I got caught in the details, it's going to probably be both. Choco is going to have favorites and maybe some "wives." But that may change as the story continues, I'm still not fully committed to what kind of cult it's going to be.

it won't be something like weird sacrifice religion or anything. Just an excuse to fuck, basically.

>>88880339
>weird sacrifice religion
>Choco sacrificing the milk and cum of their ritualistic orgies in order to summon the new demon queen

>>88880972
Hot

>>88878232
I wanted to like the ratcest fic but I felt like it jumped to the actual smut far too quickly.
Also we need more fics with older sisters

>>88879834
Not to downplay any burnout you might be feeling, since it can be very real and come at the most inopportune times, but I'm curious to how you feel the quality is being affected from your point of view. You just were pretty jazzed up and blew out that latest chapter in what seemed like a short time frame, and that was a nice read.

It sounds more like you are more entranced by your sex cult grooming thing and want to focus more on that since it might seem more fun to you in this moment. Which is also valid and fine. Sometimes a shift of focus is just what we need.

>>88878232
I read For We May or Might Never recently and it fucked me up pretty hard, kudos to the author if he's still around

>>88882183
I can feel myself wanting to rush through the bottleneck a bit. We're reaching the halfway point in the story and I want to be as delicate and as careful as I can to make the midpoint climax really nail it home and make the final half all the more meaningful as a result. It may just be a small and temporary thing but I want to make sure that urge to rush things settles a bit so I can make this as good as I envision. I felt that the conversation Botan had with the old couple and Civia's interrogation were not nearly as good as I wanted them to be so I think it may be a good idea to take a brief break so I can put the breaks on a little if that makes sense. I definitely haven't lost my passion for it, I am so eager to launch the second half but that eagerness shouldn't make this half suffer.

I find having two projects you can shift between benefits both in my case. Building Block Doll was helped by this immensely. Whenever the well dried up, I bounced to the other project I was doing at the time and vise versa. It benefited immensely from it because I didn't force out chapters. Rest assured though, my passion for WD hasn't died, I am actually so enthusiastic about the interest you have in it. I have worked super hard on making sure it's just right.

>page 10 in 15 minutes

i really wish i wasnt commited to a WIP because im listening to Nerissa yap and call me "so smaaart" and "so braave" and i want to bully orgasms out of this pillow princess.

Something like involuntary NNN where you had to go for a trip and when you are back your dumb bird wife is waiting for you to do the deed because how dare you not attend to her

>>88878368
King shit. Whatchu writing about?

>>88879658
That's a good sign, try to hold off on cooming so you can keep the horny buff for longer

>>88878368
>video essay while writing
Do zoomers really?

>>88884401
Related, which chuuba would force you to fail NNN quickest? Who would tease you all month long? Who would encourage you so after the month long wait you two can have extremely intense lovemaking afterword?

>>88885898
>which chuuba would force you to fail NNN quickest?
You'd wake up the morning of Nov 1st, and she'd already have taken care of your morning wood

>>88885898
combine the last two into Zeta
>Whispering on your ear that is day 23 and its not long until you can use her like a toy
>Pretending to be nonchalant but is clearly horny and wants you to give in the tentation before her

>>88884980
One shark, two dicks, and an adventure soon cumming to you

>>88885111
You don't watch videos of serial killers brutalizing and raping their victims while writing fluff? How do you it?

>>88850145
I'm doing my part!

>>88850086
You encouter Marine's doppelganger, Warine! She's her mirror image, her inverted opposite. She is everything Marine is not, in all the ways that are bad and all the ways that are good.

>>88892075
>Warine the 03 year-old navy admiral, as flat and tall as a stick with a negative sex drive.

>>88878232
I read The Last September and while I like the theme/subject matter it tackles to use of a certain name isn't exactly gelling with me. I don't really think NOT using is possible given the subject matter but man, the fic straddles a line.

Are there any good sports fics

>>88894874
I hated that fic. Pretending that a chuuba would want to be anally impregnated by you is one thing, but implanting your rrats about a real person's life decisions into their head is frankly just weird.

>>88882787
That's a better compliment than you think it is, because hearing "Yeah the first fic you wrote for anything ever holds up" surprises me whenever I hear it. Still no clue what the hell I was thinking with the formatting, but nevertheless thank you for the shout!

>>88896419
I'm a little more lenient on that stuff, its fiction after all and you need some kind of narrative for the themes to make sense and what are rrats but narratives? I did roll my eyes at the IPO thing though.

>>88901144
anon that's a doll

>>88894874
>>88896419
What's it about?

>>88901931
yes, a very fuckable one

Live

>>88850145
Felt wrong to make my vote without at least sharing some thoughts so here:
>Anon survives?
Meh, felt too generically yandere/ thread meme rather than a good chuuba fic.
>A Chance Encounter By The Moonlight
Too much bloodborne, not enough of its own original spin.
>Let's Go Back to Those Peaceful Days
Standard Amesame angst but somehow the most chuuba ficish fic so far. I like it, even if this is rather standard fare for the ship.
>The Last September
Man... I know it's kind of the point to use roommate-san names here but using actual people names just makes this uncomfortable from a fic reader pov. On some artitstic level I kind of get that being the point but still, I dislike the use of it.
>Black and Wright
Unconventional, and honestly not good outside of the gimmick (which isn't even fully comitted to given that it doesn't try and do full rhyme). Like it's a fun fic don't get me wrong but there''s not much to it outside of that.
>The Midnight Sea
Another anon mentioned how 'stuffy' the prose felt and I have to agree. The dream sequence felt like it should have been a rapidfire skim through the consciousness but instead it felt like it was getting dragged through the water. Even after that it kind of feels like it could have all gone through an editing pass to cut down words and make the prose flow better.
I still like despite that, even if the gags in the latter half aren't as smooth flowing due to the prose.
>Stinky and the Brain
Gigi talking this smart feels weird.
I disliked the central gimmick of absolute buffoon talks without a 'straight man' to counterbalance.

>>88902192
Cecilia dressing like the stinkiest girl at my highschool's smoke pit

Not even a good stink either it was the 'I don't bathe so my relatives don't rape me' stink that truly is stomach churning

>>88904381
I would personally like to see midnight sea win overall, black and wright is sweeping the other categories anyway

Dozo?

>>88906679
NO DOZO

>>88907408
would

>>88901931
I know. It's why my cock got caught in her groin ball joint. But do I care? No. Why? Because I chose to.
And I will choose to get my cock pinched by that same ball joint again!

>>88907408
Does this bird Rissa have a cloaca now?

I'm ashamed to admit it, but CC has given me a newfound doll fetish

>>88909291
I'm not ashamed to admit it, CC had given me a humilliaton fetish.

>>88909291
Oh, that CC.

dozo!

>>88909291
It's foolish to think that you're getting cucked if you marry off your daughter to someone else. You need powerful allies if you want to conquer the world and blood ties are the ultimate way to gain them.

>>88911687
meant to quote >>88851951

>>88909465
Which one

>>88913527
Our resident cuckold. I want an absolute stacy of a chuuba to make me cry and then have her pamper me.

>>88901945
If I had sum it up? Vtuber identity. It's one of the contest entries so go read it.

>>88914267
chapter 2 did a real number on you, eh? I wonder if chapter 3 is coming any time soon

>>88916049
Couldn't help it. I don't consider myself a cuckold, but the scenes where Chloe demeans Anon and everything threads on this fine line between psychological abuse that would make him kill himself, and 'I love you so much I can only think of you when I'm getting plowed by someone else' is such an exotic, fascinating feeling to me.

I personally like my NTR with the girl getting emotionally stolen, so SD showing it from the perspective of Anon's insecurities was peak.

>>88850086
You find out that Mio, the perfect wife, was an absolute whore in her youth, and there's video evidence if you dig deep enough.

>>88892780
>Negative sex drive
Marine is such a femcel that it makes me believe her evil twin would be an absolute beast.

>>88917852
>there's video evidence if you dig deep enough.
>Digging deep, you find the source
>A black and white documentary from the early 1900s about wolves mating in captivity.
>Despite the age you recognize Mio in wolf form

>>88918126
Ability to get sex does not always equate to sex drive. Mirror Marine might be a smooth operator, but the difference might be that she has to be 100% into whoever her partner might be.

>>88850086
Begging your girlfriend Kronii to use her time powers so you can have a threesome with various alternate timeline versions of herself

>>88919969
>Needing to beg
She would have done that the first chance she got, and probably hasn't invited you before.

>>88920120
Well yeah SHE has done it (with herself), this is more about her letting you join. Even though you're not cheating as you're still fucking 'Kronii', I think she'd still be jealous and not super open to the idea.

>>88920238
Nah, as long as she gets to make out with her double, you're probably free to do whatever you want.

>Proton notification
>It's a TOS update
WRITE YOU WORTHLESS FUCKS
I'M STARVING

Die!

>>88850145
>>88850110
What a beautiful millennia old demon

>>88911687
Unintentionally relevant reply?

Who is your side-character oshi and from what fic?

>>88850059
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTDsrsLlEle_B095NnITpa6YHhoasDNhVDPDuBw54lJ3jBAdtqTFdFihw_LU3Ft8ErOSUWqbR0cLSqF/pub
First time posting a story here, I wrote a very self indulgent smut fic, please let me know what you think if you feel like it
Tags: Natsuiro Matsuri, Tokoyami Towa, NSFW, bondage, yandere, noncon

>>88925086
After a lot of research and analysis, I can definitely assert: Suisei is pure sex.

>>88921133
I'm on siesta

>>88914916
Just read it. What a weird fic and it's not weird in the ha ha funny way like Paradise Lost or Shrunken Troubles, but weird in a creepy way. What a strange fic. I'm surprised it didn't mention Mori's unfinished webcomic.

Are there any good fic fics

>>88931545
I'm not sure there are any.

live

>>88931545
Omelas had a few fan sequels right?

>>88927802
Hello, new friend. You're welcome to post here, but yuri fics don't tend to attract a lot of attention. You might want to look into other sites to cross post to if you plan to keep writing them. But anyway, here are some thoughts I wrote down while reading:

1. Typos are inevitable, but try not to have one in the first sentence lol
2. This fic probably would have benefitted greatly from some more set up and/or back story, especially when Towa is so OOC.
3. The descriptions of sex are sometimes a bit mechanical and rushed.
4. There are many ways to show us how a character feels without just telling us what emotions they're feeling. For example:
"Matsuri was feeling very conflicted. She very much had a bondage fetish and had dreamed of being bound and used like a toy by someone, and she couldn’t lie, she had thought Towa was hot..."
If you remove this paragraphs first sentence, it still conveys the same information. If the reader knows the characters thoughts, they shouldn't need to be told how they feel.
5. Some of this dialogue is a bit much even for porn.

I'm not that into yuri or bondage so I'm not exactly your target audience, but it was overall fine. Probably needed to be a bit longer for proper pacing.

>>88927802
What fics from the archive have you read so far?

>>88934149
I see for the yuri fics. Yeah, from the few times I read this thead, vtuber x viewer seem more frequent here?
Argh, I should have reread the fic another time for typos lol.
Yeah, Towa is very ooc here. The main reason I picked her and Matsuri is because I like their dynamics of Matsuri pursuing her casually and towa rejecting her bluntly while still being friends and thought exploring a what if case where towa's response was only a front could be interesting, but it resulted in her acting very different than usual
For 3 yeah, I felt like I drew some blanks when it was time to describe stuff, so I reused a lot of terms instead of giving myself more time to find the right words.
Thanks for 4, I'll keep that in mind.
By 5, do you mean that the dialogue is really unrealistic?

>>88850086
Super Nenechi fights Godzilla!
She flies to the moon, grabs it, and brings it down to dunk it into Godzilla!

>>88937744
I'm for it, sounds like a fun and silly idea.

But mainly because I want another giantess fic

>>88937744
Super Nenechi gets possessed by Baby and becomes Super Baby Nenechi!

>>88936262
Yes, the majority is male self insert stuff, usually written in 2nd person because I think the thread was started by internet boomers or something. Though there does recently seem to be increased interest in female self insert fics.
Lines like
>I’m so sorry for kidnapping you and hurting you, I promise you I’ll talk to you about any problems I have before doing this kind of thing again.
are very over the top, in my opinion.

>>88938358
>another
What was the other one?

>>88936769
nice back

>>88938488
I'm not ready for Nene to BOOYAHHH all over the place.

>>88940249
With Nenechi? No, but there was a guy writing one with Ao a little while ago.

i suddenly want more chloe content for some reason, namely her suplexing me through a table so for a mere moment i get a gimpse up her skirt before my skull meets the ground

>>88926645
Kanata from Lost and Found. She and Anon have good chemistry.

>>88942257
Towa is my lsot and found oshi. Guess we'll have to fight to the death

>>88926645
Kiara from holoslavia. I love powerful women that can sic death squads on my ass

>>88926645
Coco in SGS because I loved watching her suffer.

>>88946023
Flame paizuri......

>>88926645
Rushia from Holofantasy if only because AA got the essence of her pre-yab character down but also unintentionally screwed her over for screentime.

>>88946132
>The flame doesn't actually burn the tip of your dick
>Instead it feels like running your dick into a warm feather duster. It's all smooth and fluffy, with many tips of downy blue fire brushing your head from all sides.
Damn...

>The flame is actually ERB's erogenous zone
>You rub it, and it's like some kind of flaming clit
>She doesn't know this, so she freaks out and gets overwhelmed by pleasure when you accidentally rub it

>>88937744
This but 90% of the fic is her standing international trial for thoughtlessly disrupting our orbit and tides

>>88942872
I guess so.

>>88948751
I want to read more chuuni fics where kanata fights demons and whatnot, bonus points if she eventually gives into temptation and becomes a fallen angel

>>88948751
>Lost and Found
>Lost And Found Side A: Angel of the office
>Lost And Found Side B: Underground Devil
>LAF: Boys day out
>LAF: Shojo hen(told from Bae's perspective)
Hello. its me, john japanese media industry and i ask of you to come up with like 40 different spinoffs to a fic to mil-i mean give fans what they want
>>88949943
A fic where Kanata is a recurring antagonist, only to jump in your defense at the last second in the last battle as she "falls" and her theme becomes "Runaway" by Linkin Park.

The fic that creates the cultural reset

>>88949943
>gives into temptation and becomes a fallen angel
Nah that's old hat. Kanata should instead slowly lose her humanity as she becomes more and more filled with righteous, holy fervor.

>>88949943
>gives into temptation and becomes a fallen angel
Yes... Becoming a fallen angel to cock by abandoning her pure yuri love.

>>88950530
what if it was an angst fic about your wife/best friend/girlfriend/Whatever Kanata getting chosen as an angeland slowly eroding her humanity away as she turns more and more into a servant of the heavens until she can no longer feel emotions because those will impede in judgement

>>88951367
Make it more tragic.
Have Kanata be assigned as your "divine partner in the heavens" but she's still a dead fish even in heavenly sheets.
The Twaa comes in

>>88952452
BOO! GET OFF THE STAGE!

>>88850145
AAAAAAND WE HAVE OUR WINNERS!

Best overall fic:
The Last September

Autumn Leaves Award:
Black and Wright

La Creatividad Award:
Black and Wright

Thanks to everyone that participated!

>>88952452
Untastefully edgy AND trying to shoehorn a dead horse concept? Good grief this guy STINKS!

>>88951367
I like the idea but I'm not so sold on the "chosen" aspect. To me, the tragedy/angst should come from the two of you demon hunters unknowingly causing Kanata to slowly lose herself to her very nature. A compromise would be Kanata always having Angel blood that manifests. But I like the idea of Kanata being "assigned" to you and the two of you fight demons because "demons bad" until you realize too late what is happening.
To God, Angels are tools to be used.

>>88952746
Ummm where are my graphs???

>>88952746
Pachi pachi
Congrats to the winners!

>>88955547

>>88952746
The Last September winning Best Overall is one hell of a surprise to me but congrats!

>>88955822
>12 votes
Maybe /wg/ really is dying...

>>88956045
I'm gonna be super honest I didn't really like any of the fics I read so voting seemed like a waste of my time

>>88956045
>12 votes
All me.

>Bite the bullet and make an outline for my series
>It's over a thousand words
I was keeping all that in my noggin? Shit.

>>88958908
nice of god/the universe/evolution to gift us the same fleshy hardware as the greatest creators in history

>>88959237
In all fairness, we can't be 100% certain if Shakespeare had a frontal lobe or not.

It's not over for the AnencephalyAnons out there!

>>88958908
Just wait until you start making those character/setting/plot notes, Anon. You ain't seen nothing yet

Its a beautiful day to write about chuubas being raped!

>>88960524
I'd rather they rape me...

>>88938576
To be honest at the end I just wanted to wrap up the fic and move on so I rushed it, yeah it certainly could have used a bit more time in the oven

>>88935563
I read A Brat's Punishment before and really liked it, and a Mio fic I couldn't recall the name of for the life of me

>>88956045
I was going to vote but it closed too soon. I assumed it would close at midnight UTC -12.

>>88956045
i didn't feel like I earned my citizenship yet

>>88964996
Service guarantees citizenship and all that, get to writing.

Is fascism REALLY that bad, when you think about it?

>>88966985
It's not bad when cute girls are the ones in charge

>>88966985
No when it's hot bitches in leather suits whispering "Belle für mich" in my ear

>>88966985
Yep because when suddenly Da Leader decides (You) are the next undesirable to be cast out, it often tends to be a not-so-pleasant experience.
If the "Kemono Menace" were to be wiped out today, who's to say they wouldn't wipe out the "Anon-ian Menace" tomorrow?
>B-B-But I'm one of da good Anons...!
You're neighbors with Storm Brigade Officer ERB and you happen to look at her chest flame the wrong way one morning while she was drunk. She immediately calls Geschultzpoopenkommandant Kiara and Il Duce Tutti Frutti Regimentatta Raora, suggesting you could be put to “good use” in the state’s popcorn fields.
Your fate is sealed when, at dawn, the FuwaMocoStaffel knock at your door and they say you will be arrested TODAY and banished to Camp Auschsandwich TODAAAY~!
The charges against you? Crimes against the state: wrongthink, thoughtcrime, crimethought, and - worst of all - the crime of whistling I’m Your Treasure Box out of tune two years ago.
And while they haul you away, the full weight of fascist caprice dawns upon you. It no longer matters if you were "one of the good Anons." No previous loyalty, compliance, or small acts of patriotism will save you from the whims of a regime that defines loyalty as obedience to a human and thus ever-shifting standard.

>>88966985
Western fascists would probably ban anime because it's "tranime"
We need 731% yamato damashii otaku fascism

S-Seriesanons doko???

>>88904381
I said this to the last Anon but the stuffiness was generally intentional, its supposed to mirror the storm outside and emulate a "It was a dark and stormy night" kind of story. Not to say that it couldn't be trimmed to be smoother in some parts, that I can see. The Marine scene that was pointed out was a good example and so I have no doubt that's is the fics Achilles heel.
My idea for the dream sequence was to emulate those dreams in which scenes just kind of happen in sequence with no delineation, where one moment just merges right into the next. I wanted it to feel disorientating but it sounds like it suffers from the same general stuffiness.
I was originally going to make this a comedy fic but reneged on that because I didn't think such gag could last an entire fic. So instead I decided to play it straight and hope that the comedy came from that with the gags at the end being a signal of normalcy.
Thanks for reading though.

>>88952746
Congrats to the winners. The Last September is an interesting fic about a topic I always liked the philosophy behind. Balck and Wright was a fun one too, we don't usually get poems.

>>88967880
i cant feel my legs but planing stage is going really well for this chapter. still not writing until i get this damn wip out of the gate and until i stop getting blindsided by life

>>88967880
I posted something last thread!

>>88967880
What's it to you?

>>88967459
>you could be put to “good use” in the state’s popcorn fields.
At least it's a better fate then being sent to the ice-cream mines. Where men and equipment go into the dairy laden Earth, and only dairy products return.

>Sibling incest isn't hot because it's taboo; it's hot because it's beautiful. Siblinghood is the logical extreme of platonic love, and so combining that with romantic love results in the platonic ideal of love itself. It's the perfect union of lifelong sweethearts, married at birth. They are each other's other half genetically and mentally. They're one soul in two bodies, and the only way to merge them back together is through inbreeding (nakadashi whilst handholding with interlocked fingers) and raising a beautiful healthy family.
>If your opinion on the appeal of sibling incest differs at all, go fuck yourself.

>>88971376
I read that as sisterhood not siblinghood.
So I thought it was going to be lesbian incest with La+ also that brings up the possibility of the other sister getting tailfucked

>>88971376
Laplus, you're not allowed to have sex with your older brother until you turn 18, get over it

>>88972569
Laplus is the older sibling though

>>88971376
There's like 40 variations of incest and im supposed to settle for one just because your text is green?
get real retard, go fuck your father(gay)

>>88971376
Laplus randomly going on an incest tangest (specifically about the pure love between an onee-san and their ototo) sounds like it would be a fun gimmick for her in a semi-serious fic.

>>88974118
>-and you know, we were both latchkey kids, or parents weren't there to tell us how what we were doing was some horrible thing, so it was only natural that the older sister would do her best to guide her growing brother. So, at the end of the day, when there wasn't authority figures arbitrarily deciding what's right or wrong, we as siblings came out of childhood with a closer bond than any 'normal' relationship ever could! That really tells it all, I think.
>what was the question again?
>Oh sure I'll go to Starbucks with you

>>88964352
That is one of the best BDSM fics in the archive, I wish it would get a sequel. Great consensual dynamic between the characters

The Nechi wrote 5 words today
what about you?

>>88975016
I also liked Hot Like a Star and A Hedonist's Reckoning/ The Oni's Rebellion after going through the other bondage fics

>>88976208
the best yuri bdsm is Heaven Hell & USDA for what my opinion is worth

>>88976507
I had just gone through them the first time around, but after a more thorough read, yeah I like them too! The Kanata and Towa relationship is nice and the sex writing is hot, although I wish there was a little more written

>>88978983
And a chip chong nihon to you too Chloe, you funky girl

>>88974118
>>88974629
She goes on this 11 minute long tangent while you both sit for some coffee
>"Lap, just fuck your brother already, fucking hell"
>She gets all embarrassed and indignant, "I-it's not like that, jeez! You just don't get it!"

>>88967142
I support cute girls in sexy uniforms in an authoritarian government with complete control of the state.

>>88967142
>>88984246
i want to be the barracksboy for the totalitarian cute girl secret police

>>88971326
Ah, yes. Sometimes, a random schmuck hits a hot fudge vein while mining for vanilla oreos, subjecting an entire mine to a scalding hot chocolatey demise. The State knows this, but it still keeps sending men down there. After all, "Work Scoops You Free."

>>88985884
im more into the leader herself

>>88988024
The leader can come play to the barracks too, it will be a teambuilding exercise and she can get manhandled by some girls while waiting her turn.

>>88988024
Fat rat ass
My face

You do the math

>>88988550
>"Private Elizabeth ive heard you are an Ass-Kisser. Come here and give an example"

>>88967142
Imagine Kronii's boot stomping on (you)r face forever
Then imagine she gets mad because you're not supposed to be enjoying it

>>88990336 (me)
kek, I don't know why I spoilered that pic

>>88990336
>Kronii getting frustrated because you end up enjoying every punishment she gives you

I HATE revising first drafts.

>>88850054
How do you draw Ayame and make her look uncute?

>>88988550
Maybe its Warhammer brainrot but im starting to think about how this totalitarian regime breeds supermales to keep their soldiers happy.
Like the porn equivalent of a spacemarine where they give you super stamina, they take out your refractory period and send you into barracks full of horny women.
>SISTERS, I AM PLEASED TO ANNOUNCE HIGH STALLION ANON HAS BEEN APPOINTED TO OUR BARRACKS!

>>88850086
Laplus gets her brother a job at HoloX to stop him from moving far away, but now she has to keep the other HoloX members from taking her brother's virginity without arousing suspicion.

>>88994168
I see... The popcorn fields are actually a euphemism for turning 'the good ones' into spacestuds.

>>88952746
Congratulations to all of the writers
For making Halloween a little brighter

>>88990336
>>88991553
what if she was really big huh? how'dya like them apples?

>>88994168
>"Officer on deck!"
>The Regloss unit scrambles to their feet, saluting in their naked state. You stand up too, saluting, as Raden hangs on from your neck.
>She also gives a weak salute, but the fact your cock is inside of her means she's about to bust at any second.
>Commander Kronii steps in
>"At ease ladies. Good to see you in top form."
>They all relax, Raden tries to stiffle her moan as she releases all over your cock.
>"High command wants you in Pluto in two solar cycles. Bugs have gotten very comfortable there and its your job to clean them"
>"YES M'AM"
>"I said ladies, High Stallion. You are getting shipped elsewhere"
>"Yes M'am! Permission to speak?"
>"Granted"
>"Have i failed on my relief duties? Was my sperm count below the metrics?"
>She gives an amused smile, shaking off her coat
>"Quite the opposite. Your metrics are frankly surprising, we might be even looking into a Supreme Impregnator promotion"
>"Thanks M'am!"
>Her belt goes off and her pants drop.
>"But before that, You are being transfered to Ursa Major, to the Infernal Kemono Batallion"
>Her eyes glint
>"And right before you go and test your mettle there, im taking a bite to see what's this all about."
>"Of course M'am! Glory to the Watalian Empire!"
>"Glory!"
>The girls salute and start shuffling towards the door. Kronii raises her hand
>"Oh im not above mingling with the troops, please...join us"

>>88994168
sounds like what Skaven would do

>>88995917
this gave me an erection, thanks

>>88996603
you should use that to breed a new batallion soldier

I've done it... It's finally done!

>>89000811
Cheers to you, friend. Looking forward to seeing whatever it is.

>>88995449
Oh no! Sounds horrible, I really hope she doesn't stuff me into her bra for hours at a time or sit on me!

>>88995449
man it would really fucking suck if i got put inside her boot before she went out to the battlefield haha...

New girls just dropped

>>89006609
the blonde one has fangs and looks like she will spit on my mouth if i ask....which is exactly how i thought shiori was gonna be....

Wait a second....Shiori WOULD spit on my mouth! she'd just do it nicely instead of being dom about it

>>88850054

>>89012514
>when you already have a jetpack

>>89006609
Holy fucking SEX

>>89014121
Dekai...

>>89014121
Looks like a bimbofied Shishio Chris. I kinda hope that's what happened I miss that crazy bitch

This girl and Raden look like a duo that would wind up getting me expelled from college for the shit they rope me into but that it'd be worth it because I hit

up

how do I write dialogue w female characters if I don’t talk to girls

>>89019604
Go outside with a phone and a microphone and pretend you're filming a tik tok and ask girls leading questions so you can use their answers as your dialogue.

>>89019604
This a hobby built around interacting with girls as a gestalt entity. You've technically talked to girls already if you've watched a stream

>>89018828
the oreo phenotype must be studied

>>89019604
Watch streams

>>89019604
Just write it according to your ideal; otaku media is all about idealization. Forget the real world.

>>89025748
Terrorism

>>88966985
Depends on which brand of fascism you're going for, there's actually quite a few types. I prefer Hitler's original vision to Musolinni's and I prefer both over the Christo-Fascism/Nationalism.

>>88967880
The anon from this thread who was worried I was considering ditching White December got me motivated to write another chapter so I've written a few paragraphs. I am in an unusually good mood so so far it's been nothing but good feelings. It's the christmas episode most likely and I've been waiting for this chapter for a while.

I've titled the WIP about the sex cult a Bed of Coals and it's making some good progress. I am trying to come up with a believable insighting incident that guides Iofi to the cult and I'm having a bit of trouble figuring what would be good. If all goes well though, I'll have two chapters to post by next time.

okay shotacons. where is the sister shiori fic huh?

>>89029167
Sorry, I take my molesters with a little less blood relation and way more molestation

>>89031860
i meant sister as in nun...the point was the small town nun actually being a freak...you SHIGGER

>>88850086
After a couple girls ask you to speak to her on their behalf, you confront Kanade about her rampant molestation problem. She misunderstands and begins to molest (You) now.

>>89031860
It's still weird to think they weren't blood related.

>>89029167
the realistic shiori shota experience

>>89033246
Is "this woman is technically, emotionally, and spiritually my mother" a valid form of blood relation?

>>88850086
Taking Mococo to a science museum and forcing her to look a the circulatory system they have on display

Personally I'm thinking about making the Himemori Dynasty.

>>89036367
More interested in the Shishiro Pride myself

>>89032714
I'd let Kanade grope my butt

>>89033847
We'd have to take it up to the Incest Council. Maybe the judge will rule if their bond is strong enough to be considered blood related.

>>88904381
>not enough of its own original spin
Duly noted, I'll keep that in mind for the next time I'm writing an AU.

>>89037999
You want to be sexually harassed by a slurpy retard?

>>89041512
This just makes me imagine mouth breather chuubas like Nenechi "molesting" you by touching their own bodies

>>89041754
"You like that? You enjoying this?" while she just rubs her own breasts in a closet together and she refuses to let you even touch her

>>89034907
This, but the circulatory system is Mococo's that she donated to science.

>>89042900
>"That's nice and all but I've got a lot of work to do can I leave now?"
>"NO! N-Not until Nene's done!"

>>88850086
Nutting inside your sister Suisei only for mom to reveal you weren't blood related later on

>>89045659
>Look Mogojan it's you!

>>89041754
>Nene, Kanade and Miko running around like a pack of Hyenas

up

Live

>>89033847
As the presiding spokesman of the Incest Unity Party, we rule that there must be at least 1/8th consanguinity between the two parties before it can be considered a "blood relation".
Otherwise, Fubuki is merely a step-aunt.

>>89036418
This Anon is gonna get his balls bitten...

>>89053296
Ideal female form.

>>89053296
>Imagine if I just put your head between my thighs
>have you ever seen those videos of women crushing watermelons with their thighs
>your head is smaller than a watermelon, it'd probably be gross if I squished it though

>>89041754
Imagine getting manhandled by some absolute idiot with retard strength, as she moans and gropes random parts of your body, too weak to wrestle out of her grip so your you're forced to listen to stupid dirty talk that makes absolutely no sense.

>>89053841
>Neee, you won't mind if I pop this here?
>She smirks, her hand draws low
>She caresses your fucking knee.

>>89054456
>Hehe, betcha you'll like this~
>Starts trying to jerk off your elbow

>>89051633
God I hope so.

>>89027957
>I am trying to come up with a believable insighting incident that guides Iofi to the cult
You could have Choco walk up to her and ask "Want to join my sex cult?" It'd be enough to convince me to join.

>>88850086
Getting into a nasty argument with your gf Shiori in front of your friends, and you just won't budge that cannibalism isn't a superior expression of love as wanting your gf to get you pregnant.

>>89055722
I want it to be something of a slow dance where Choco rachets it up just little by little and makes it all that harder to escape. Been trying to look into cults and how they form and I have a good idea about how that can work. But I don't want Yopi just to be like "yeah sure let's go for it, you seem trustworthy."

If it were just fap material then yeah, I'd agree. But this is going to be sakura summer stuff. I'll figure it out eventually.

>>89055166
Not my weenus...

>>89003960
man it would be terrible to be stuck under her sole for hours, practically melting insider her hot, sweaty boot, hoping she eventually remembers you're in there

>>89029167
Sister Shiorin would quote the most out of pocket bible verses to make cryptic and bizzare points in the context of your current conversation with her.

>>89058066
>If it was good enough for Lot, it's good enough for you *Wink wink*

I have hired this Azki to stare at you.

For all intents and purposes... it is finally finished.

>>89059401
I'm gonna cum

>>89059718
May... may I read it?

>>89060281
Since you asked, sure.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRfmW2OgYdVK45rK228feat-vbVOueIaogmCIVQZPvrpGSRK_Nd5hy0E1srLIY9nXGN7q2HtnOBP3zS/pub
It's the first draft, though. Besides, I might rewrite more than 60% or 70% of it since I got (what I think is) a better idea for where the story should go. I'm just burned out as shit and need to write something else for a change.

>>89061519
Yo, Hlsanon!
Nice to see you again.

>>89061629
Hello. I was supposed to pass that thing in for the contest, but I missed the deadline and got stuck for a good to three weeks. I just wanna do something else for a change. Oh, I don't know. Write about Ina and capybaras or something.

>>89060005

>>89065534
Stop looking so smug, you didn't catch me staring at your feet, I was just uh....

>>89063548
>>89065534
>>89065537
aside from the obvious "Holographic AI wife that lives in the suit that jacks me off" i think a fun role for Azki would be like a supervisor of sorts (in a job/guild setting) and she makes you freak out because she's always looking into your soul but its because she thinks you are extremely cute and would look cuter handcuffed to her bed (consensually)

>>89066330
AZKi staring at you from her desk. You think it's cause she doesn't like the report you gave her, when she's internally debating the best way to sneak into your apartment while you're asleep.

>>89067256
More than Yandere i guess i like the idea of her being straightforward with what she wants and that leaking out of brain.
Like she knows she wants to put a leash on You so she goes "goodboy!" When you do something good

>>89067256
>My beautiful boss Azki's gaze is too intimidating!

>>89061519
It's well written, but I think you might have played your hand too quickly in a story that would be better served by subtlety. I figured out pretty much everything that was going to happen after that first Anon Azuki meeting scene and I wouldn't describe myself as an astute reader.

>>89068850
>AZKi has a dog collar on her desk
>ask her if she has a dog
>she looks really intensely at your neck and she sighs
>"I wish I could have one"

>>89056539
and then she pretends it was her plan all along and "rewards" you by making you her footrest at the beach...

>>89072794
Thanks for taking a look.
Yeah, that's exactly the problem I have with the first draft. I was pretty much a third of the way done when I realized it, too, so there was already a lot of work that had to be thrown away.
What I'm worried about is whether or not the new plot would be just as predictable, but I wouldn't know until I actually get it on paper - which would be a lot later

>>89075945
Your plot points aren't exactly original, but that doesn't mean they're bad. Besides the very ending, those scenes were rushed.
I think you could fix a lot of the problems by cutting all the Suisei PoVs and making Anon/the reader work a bit harder to figure out the situation.

>>89076953
Ui's asking for it

>>89077276
It annoys me there are kanji for things like 先輩 and お前, but at the very least in omae's case I can figure it out by context. Kanji that you can fill in the blanks amd guess are good. Still, I hate kanji for simple words that shouldn't really be kanji. It's like...having a special symbol to say "you" except the "y" isn't part of it. That's 前. So dumb...

Anyway, if you're curious she's just saying:
Hey, look at this
What should I do, huh?
What should I do?
Hey 3x
It's your fault
Really, you idiot
I said hey

>>89076599
You know what? Sure, I'll try that. Thanks, Anon.

>>89018828

>>89072908
>Offer to help her pick a dog at the shelter
>You both go but none of them seem to strike her fancy
>About to go home when she asks you if you can help her with one small thing at home
>Agree and head back to her place
>"Actually Anon, there was *one* dog I reeeeeaaaaalllly liked in the shelter...."
>She goes into her room, coming back out with a leash in hand

>>89078840
>Koganei Niko
>“If you can't bring yourself to a smile, just say my name!”
>The jokester of FLOW GLOW.
>With a strong passion, she's willing to give even her life to see people smile.
Yeah that sure doesn't sound like a woman who's a fucking maniac

BAKER DOKO??

>>89079809
If no one's baking, I'll bake

New bread, AZKi-flavored:
>>89081067
>>89081067
>>89081067