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Story recap!
There were no stories posted last thread yah fookin wankers

Gonna be a rough one fellas. Try not to drown

I want to write Justice vs Advent smut, but I need to get to know the new girls first...

>despite how fast the board is zooming one anon dares to rise up against the tide against all odds
You're one crazy son of a bitch, but I commend the desire, and will fight along side you to the best of my ability

A.N.O.N~
the new generation has been revealed for eleven and a half hours, how come you haven't written any fics about them yet?
Are you worried it'll considered it cheating on your current WIP? It's alright anon, I'll forgive you if you want to write the new girls~ you owe it to yourself to write those fics you like~ but you owe it to me to allow me to read those fics! So...WHAT'S TAKING YOU SO LONG!!?

>>78503572
Got your back buddy, we are in this together

>>78505425
Azki is really scary. I'm glad she won't be able to pinpoint my location.

>>78502391
Creepypasta about whatever happened to the fifth Justice Member to only make them a four-man gen.

>>78506388
it's an honor. Just make sure you don't slow me down, alright?

People already hate Elizabeth.

>>78508634
>>>/vt/Catalog

>>78507273
Reminds me of that grassroots attempt this board had to spread a creepypasta about IRyS' missing genmate. Kuzu Lillian I think?

>>78508685
>Kuzu Lillian
Yeah, Lillian was a fun concept. Especially since she kind of took IRyS' underused despair part of her angel of hope shtick so she kind of had a little bit of a concept even if she didn't really exist. (Though the whole screaming out to the void her existence thing is also an interesting alternate angle).
Too bad doing a similar thing with Justice kind of needs post debut details in order to use the bits of their lore they don't use as a basis.
...
Okay unrelated but this making me imagine posts from an alternate universe about Mococo (one of the FOUR members of Advent) having a sibling, and having a pseudo-Lillianesque creepypasta tone to it about Mococo's deleted sibling Fuwawa.

>>78510086
I like the idea of a fic where the concept of "I'm the only one who remembers this person exists" but I feel like that's more suited to a thriller than a creepypasta. (Also runs the risk of aging poorly)

>>78508681
its fascinating how starved dramafags are that they are anti-ing people before they are even debuting.
what a pathetic bunch

>>78511518
I'm pretty sure the only one that's "safe" for that will be Fuwawa or Mococo since by nature the pair will go together, so a fic where one of them doesn't exist isn't implying anything metatextualy as much as other chuubas while also having a really easy plot thread with the surviving sister. (Yes, I know the old Fuwawa isn't real joke.)

>>78513441
Oh I wasn't talking about Advent specifically but you are right in that they are overall the safest choice. I guess the real question is whether or not one can write them in a serious context.

>>78515746

>>78505425
N-no Azki I would rather uhhhh focus on my current wip! Which I'm totally doing right now!

>>78503555
The important question is, who would capture and dominate who?

>>78502391
Getting into an arranged political marriage with Luna

>>78517373
You wouldn't happen to be lying to me, would you anon?

>>78519988
And you two cheat on eachother!

>>78521596
Man all this Azki posting has got me itching for an actual fic for her

>>78511739
Is this about red interacting with dinobro?

Justice cant be cool because how the fuck does ADVENT get away from you for like an entire year

Also, Ninnisani Scenario bro, sorry for the harsh reception you got in news. Those were fuckers. Know I got your back with your project.

>>78522179
He replied to her (I think she also thanked him as well) but basically yes.

>>78522326
They have to be serious jobbers to fail to catch them for almost an entire year

>>78522326
They just got hired. I presume THE CELL tried to cover their own asses for a while before admitting yes they escaped and no they can't catch them.

>>78522326
>>78522506
They're not employees of the prison, they're freelancers that are just starting the mission.

>>78522349
They probably didn't know that the project started long ago when NijiEN was still respectable either

>>78522461
Of-fucking-course. What was the deleted post? Probably some cuckshit

>>78523783
See, you get it. You saw the shitshow too then?

>>78523895
You mean the post I self-deleted, basically it was:
>"People already hate Elizabeth".
Do pardon my wibbit spacing.

fuck off dramanigger

>>78523998
Never apologize for proper spacing.

Has someone seen Ayame's shirt? It has gone missing

>>78526072
Yeah, I have it, don't worry, I'll get it back to her...

>>78526333
Give it back now.

>>78526072
Perfect breasts for her.

>>78473891
Not that I would mind but are you also doing this? Or is it just NTR ragebaiting, feel like I've seen that in the last few threads. I'm genuinely sailing along pretty smoothly on it myself

Live

>>78502391
Taunting Koyori after she accidentally turns herself into a coyote

>>78522617
Imagine being the schmuck that has to give that report almost a year later, after numerous bullshit reports and cover ups that yes, you did fuck up and these high value prisoners did escape, almost a year ago.
Better hope whoever you report to is merciful...

>>78528625
NTA but I think it's less ragebaiting and moreso people taking the piss.

Survive!

>>78521596
Me? Lie? C'mon Azki you know me, I'd never do that!

>>78502325
https://dullachan.itch.io/ninisanni-scenario-2
Here's a fic for the archive.
Ninisanni Scenario 2: The Harem End

School's out and now everybody's hanging out at the mall! Watch as MC and the cast join the working force, and undergo working woes.
Six new girls!
Here are the new roles:
>Meloco: Russian Transfer Student
>Aia: Blackmailer
>Kotoka: Friendly Gyaru
>Maria: Cursed Doll
>Scarle: Local Crime Boss
>Zaion: Small Business Owner

>>78522349
Well I was redditspacing by accident, so I probably deserved it.
No worries, I was just planning on posting it here and then going to work, but this thread was dead, so I thought /news/ seemed like a good place to let people know it's out.

>>78538125
I do some cool things this time around. The mall is now a hub area where you can walk around, shop, and choose which girl's scenes you wanna get into.
You can buy clothing, key items, music tracks (that you can set the mallwalk theme to) and even a dress up doll. Actually, you'll need a dress up doll if you want to make use of the clothing.

>>78538377
But all the clothing isn't available from the start. You unlock certain clothes for purchase after you complete certain scenes. For instance, take a bath with Maria and you may unlock a rubber ducky. Win against Selen in a fistfight, and it'll unlock the champ's belt.
The dress up doll minigame was the extra this time around. It was tricky to get it working, but I found a surprising number of outfit combos I thought looked cool.

>>78538724
I'd recommend playing it after at least having completed the Reimu subroute in the common route of Ninisanni Scenario 1. Ideally the Reimu ending too.
You can play it without playing the first, but you'll miss a lot of wacky references to the first.
What else, what else...?
Oh, it's sixteen hours I think. So there's a lot to do, and you can choose what you want to go for. If you wanna play it only for the Petra scenes and nothing else, that totally works!
Actually, there's quite a few Petra scenes... It might take you a couple runs.

>>78538724
>But all the clothing isn't available from the start. You unlock certain clothes for purchase after you complete certain scenes. For instance, take a bath with Maria and you may unlock a rubber ducky. Win against Selen in a fistfight, and it'll unlock the champ's belt.
That's a pretty neat innovation, I like it. I just hope it feels good to play, not tedious like having to endure minutes of a boring bath scene for access to the rubber ducky.

>>78540222
I saw all the feedback from the first one, and I really tried to correct it with this one.
In the hub, you can choose which scenes you go for, meaning you won't have to sift through scenes to get back to the choice structure.
Also, while there are a couple main plot related scenes that appear every run (mostly character introductions), I added the option to skip a good number of them after you finish your first run.

Also, the economy should be pretty balanced, and there are ways to make a lot of money really quickly, or trade for certain high cost items.

>>78538125
OHHHHHHH
IT’S OUT
A DAY BEFORE THE ELDEN RING DLC!! FUUUUCK!!
Well done Anon, go take a well-deserved break. I’ll give this a play and a review, which could honestly be months from now.

>>78542204
It's a good week for news! HoloEN, Elden Ring DLC, Nintendo Direct, etc.

I'm gonna shill until I pass out from exhaustion, and then play Palworld for fourteen hours straight.
After that, I'll get started on my book backlog.

Take your time on the VN, it's not like it's going anywhere.

>>78538125
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS.

>Freesia
>Immerheim
>Great Exardia
>Romance Empire
France, Germany, Britain and Italy? I'm guessing these stand in for IRL nations in Holo lore.

>>78545223
Frisia is in the Netherlands, silly goose.

>>78545223
>Romance Empire
I know where I'm going to find a wife, see ya later losers

>>78545526
it sounds similar but they are referencing France

>>78538125
I've been reading this for hours and feel like I've barely scratched the surface. Larger, sexier, more emotional. Honestly have the dumbest grin on my face right now, haven't enjoyed a VN or piece of prose this way in quite a while. Looking forward to the rest of it but especially to more of my favorite bratty penguin

>>78538125
>Ninisanni Scenario 2: Shadow of the Doki

>>78549354
More like the Shadow of the Zaion, holy fuck her route is packed

>>78538125
Yo lets go. What a great thing to see after getting off work.

>>78538125
I wish my oshi got awesome VNs from you

>>78538125
Let's fricking go, dude. Can't wait to crank my hog to the Scarle scenes.

>>78528625
It's one of those plot bunny concept wips I've made an outline out of. Not fully committed to writing it out but I've been slowly adding on to it when it distracts me from my main wip.

>>78502391
Kobo losing increasingly lewd bets

No dying

>>78532053
>Taunting Koyori after she accidentally turns herself into a coyote
This but Koyori accidentally turns herself into a cat, she gets bred and gives birth, then leaves behind her kitten in not!europe after finally recovering her sanity in order to reunite with HoloX.

>>78560259
This, but she gets bred by a dog, leaving behind these horrid hibrids.

>>78561314
>hibrids
You've written more than you've read.

Cute

>>78560259
>>78561314
Alright that's a wacky origin story for Raora and Mococo, what other pink creatures can Koyori's womb create?

>>78562539
Ewuwhehd

>>78502391
Killing Nene by beating her with a lead pipe

>>78502391
>Pretty much every fucking prompt is either a corpo chuuba or fetish or both
>Or super hyper fucking specific to the point the person could've just put pen to paper themselves
Goddamnit, I was hoping for good inspiration here.

>>78567136
Anon... Corpo chuubas are the only chuubas with fanbases large enough to support an anonymous fan fiction community on 4chan. If you want to connect with the 3 other guys interested in fanfiction of your indie oshi you're going to have to connect with them personally.

>>78567136
Well just like the board, corpos are the focus. Altough people are probably gonna give your indie a shot if you are not a fart sniffing cunt and engage in good faith.

but as a heads up, your post comes across a bit hipster-ish so try and not be that guy if you can. The last thing we want is meaningless fights over what virtual entertainer we like or we dont

>>78553035
The lower-case i as in AZKi really completes this image macro.

>>78567136
I personally don't read stories about indies because since I don't watch them I can't tell if it's on character or not, and at that point I may as well just be reading a book about complete fiction. This also applies to corpo chuubas of course, but since I have at least an idea of basically every single one of them, it's much rarer

>>78567646
You're telling me nobody wants a shylily rapefic?

>>78569671
Fair enough I guess

>>78567983
Well, I did sort of want to fulfill a prompt, is the thing, but also I watch like 98% indie chuubas (and the rest is Vshojo, whereas most prompts here are holo), was the source of my frustration

What even counts as a good prompt anyway?
Vague enough to slot in any chuuba but hoping for a specific one?
Hyperspecific for a chuuba the requester wants, with details to bait in writers?
A pseudo-cyoa thing with options on where to go?
Just posting an outline and hoping someone else picks it up?
Posting a scenario and a what would you do?

>>78570385
The only indies that get discussed somewhat regularly are Mint and Filian. As far as vshojo goes, I don't think I've ever seen one discussed besides Matara. Not many fans of the shylily style thotty twitch egirls. Not that there's anything wrong with that, but this thread mostly prefers more subtly horny girls, the older the better.

>>78545223
Love this doll

>>78571332
Its just the perfect idea at the perfect time that (ideally) births a nice fic.
Cursed dagger is an example. the pitch was extremely basic and barebones. The joke was amusing but one note and yet someone saw potential there and gave us a good anya fic.

The truth is that every prompt is "good" as long as it works as a trigger. Ive seen some real good prompts go completely ignored and others as simple as "x rape" can work.

Hell, the elven border is just our resident gokkun lover crawling out of his crackden like a smiling friends character and going "YOU KNOW WHAT? ELVES SHOULD DRINK CUM!" except this time someone went "You know what? you are right...they should!"

>>78538125
Played through twice already and it seems pretty great so far. I'm way too monogamous to properly enjoy the whole harem setup, but since most of the scenes focus on a single girl at a time it's pretty easy for me to just mentally gloss over the bits I don't care for. In fact, I've already figured out at least one combination of scenes that let me be about as faithful to a single girl as the game will allow!

I've only run into one issue so far that feels significant enough to be worth reporting: even though I was employed by Zaion on both runs, the Obysidia ending seemed to assume on at least two occasions that I had worked for Scarle instead. First time was during the conversation at the fountain; second time was while hitting the stores with Petra.

>>78570385
>shylily rapefic
...are there ugly bastards involved?
Uh, asking for a friend.

>>78571979
>Cursed dagger
Man, that was a good fic. The only thing I didn't like about it (or at least bugged me) was the fact that it had potential to be a great fucking (mini) series if the mind reading gimmick got extended out into like a helping chuubas anthology thing.

>>78545223
Hmmm, this actually fits in oddly well with my idea of The Cell rewriting history.

>>78572964
eeeh IMO the concept cant really go much further without slowing the romance/shenanigans to a crawl.
Then again i could be wrong and you could squeeze a few chapters out of it, but you would need some solid ideas for it to work

>>78572188
Petra will always take you to Zaion's Rumor and Rosemi will always take you to the D+B. It's just kinda a thing. I realized while playtesting that it wouldn't make sense for you to hit up the D+B before you've even seen it, but I decided "eh, what are the chances they'll pick Obsydia and Rosemi" before working for the D+B. Though I could gate it... I dunno, did it seem out of left field for you?
Also, that conversation at the fountain (I'm assuming during the Obsydiend) should stay consistent based on main routes. The topic is pretty similar, but if you noticed something was off, I'll take a look.

>>78571806
Doll sex when? I want to know how one would even describe it.

>>78573745 (me)
>>78572188
Also, I kinda feel you on the monogamy bit, but I think that was what Ninisanni 1 was for
I didn't really make an effort to only go for one girl, oddly enough the VN is pretty on theme in dropping other girls in scenes and playing around with collabs.
Glad you're liking it!

>>78573957
If i like the doll i promise i will write sex with her and write CLANK CLANK CLANK GET PREGNANT

>>78573957
>>78574273
doll seems to be deadpan which only makes me harder. Imagine the deadpan sarcastic threesome with Kronii

>>78573745
Just skimmed through the script files for that scene to double-check, and I think I've found the problem: you must've made some kind of tiny mistake with the variable that checks which job the player has.
The fountain scene briefly branches after the MC says he liked his job, but I definitely got the Scarle version despite having worked for Zaion.
Similarly, the scene where you hit Zaion's store has different dialogue based on whether you work for her or not, but I got the one where the MC claims that "this is for rejecting my application!"
The "correct" versions clearly exist in the code, but just didn't trigger for me.

>>78575137
Oh fuck lmao. I see exactly what went wrong. I set the variable to false midscript while playtesting

>>78574880
she is smug though?

lots of expressions on this creature

>>78576785
>>78577013
i want to cum in her armpits and make her walk around stinking to get her flustered and on the verge of tears

>>78575137
>>78576280 (me)
Okay, that bug is fixed. I just pushed the build so anyone downloading it won't have that problem anymore. Please let me know if you see any more bugs, it's really helpful

>>78577231
She’s cute but they really should’ve made her deadpan and move her face like a doll does imo. IF THERE ARE ANY COVER EMPLOYEES READING THIS PLEASE GET HER TO PLAY DEATH MARK!!! mary rabu

>>78502391
Timesmith sex

>>78577231
>>78577715
Using your cum as lubricant for her joints, think about it

>>78578575
forgot pic

>>78578575
>>78578665
A really hot idea which is also useful for Roboco is them "turning off" the pleasure sensor in their brain to taunt you about your dick but their body convulses and squirts like crazy during sex anyway they just cant feel it.
Like, she's cumming so hard she's pissing herself and yet she doesnt feel it so she goes "oh im sorry? were you fucking me?" with a smug face

>>78573957
this is activating something in my brain.
A pure emotional romance with an automaton. At some point, she yerns for physical affection even though she doesn't 100% understand what sex is, she just knows what sex looks like. she isn't built anatomically correct, so penitration is out of the question. despite that, just rubbing the smooth surface of her crotch is enough to arouse her and satisfy the desire for sex

>>78578982
>She loves you so much that the close intimacy is enough to get her to cum even though she can't physically feel it
...I'm filing that one away for later

lots of dolllovers experts ITT

>>78571332
As someone who considers themselves a "prompt hunter," what I consider an interesting prompt is one that's a bit out of the box and has a clear throughline. Most prompts to me suffer from being a decent idea but no room for plot. Or rather, it's a question of "where does this go?" that often comes up blank. "Cooking dinner for Suisei" to me is more interesting than say, "Suiseiggs" (Nothing wrong with Suiseiggs though). Also, having a specific chuuba helps because there are a lot of chuubas I want to write about but don't have a specific idea for them. I wrote A Cursed Dagger precisely because it was an Anya prompt. I wish I could give a better answer than that but looking at all the fics I did that were prompts, there isn't a real commonality. I just thought they were neat or offered me an avenue to either challenge myself or experiment.

As for details, the answer is somewhere in the middle. Too vague and generic that *any* chuuba will do and I ignore it. Perhaps paradoxically, something that is a grand idea but otherwise "vacant" like the Battle Royale/Three Kingdoms -esq prompt we got last thread, is also a no-go for me. It's too much work to put simply. It's not just the characters that I would have to decide on but the plot, themes, etc, and at that point, I would rather just work on something of my own.
I want to use Horror Intolerance and There Are Days That Last Forever as examples of two prompts that were given a lot of detail. The requester for HI had a clear idea of what they wanted and even gave scene ideas, yet were willing to let me do what I thought was best. I genuinely think that was the best prompt I have taken on because of that fact so if there's a fic you really want to see, follow that example.
As for TADTLF, that was a challenging fic to write in part because I had very specific beats I had to hit. This isn't a criticism, I took on that prompt precisely because of that, but I feel like it's worth mentioning that outlines may not be attractive to the average writer.

Discussion of a prompt can make said prompt more attractive, There are a lot of good greentext compilations of people spitballing that can serve as a jumping-off point but that requires both genuine good faith discussion and not being derailed instantly by our various fetish factions.

Idk does any of this rambling make sense? I should be in bed.

>>78567136
Did you look at the prompt archive? It's pretty unused now, and only ever got a minority of prompts entered into it.
If you want inspiration, it's best to give your direction and ask, anyway.

Catalog is zooming

I hope the robot acts like Aigis from Persona 3. That'd be funny.

>>78502391
Kiara and Cecilia having angry sex in German

>>78583425
Ugh...I probably know why...

>>78585456
Yeah it's called 'The biggest company's most well known branch gets 4 new surprise additions', unless you're crying about unicorns specifically in which case please do that somewhere else

>>78582027
breaking a lance in favor of the factions, its easy to toot our own horns and go "ugh, fetish derailment" but i think every bit of greentext and discussion works as long as its made in good faith.
I dont like wedgies but those fellas get their fix and stuff by discussing, same as the ntr crew that also have gotten one or two fics off the ground.

What really kills the discussion and possible fics IMO is people writing off any prompt that isnt an instant jackpot or not asking questions. Case in point, the dollfucking discussion,fetish aside, has some interesting points of how to write an authomaton love story.
The other side of the coin, of course, its that writers have to get inspired and lets not pretend that playing to a fetish or a writer's tastes isnt the fastest way to put a fire under their ass.

AS a last point. I kinda dont like Image bumping for that reason. ITs fine for a few times, but i feel like bumping with questions or engaging with the thread makes it live more

>>78582027
Didn’t read, hurry up and release the second chapter of By That Sea please

>>78585703
>AS a last point. I kinda dont like Image bumping for that reason. ITs fine for a few times, but i feel like bumping with questions or engaging with the thread makes it live more
You're afraid of Azki, aren't you

>>78585686
T. Unicorn

>>78586919
we all should be

I get his point all the same, though in fairness I mainly bump with pictures because I don't wanna let the thread slide off thinking up a scintillating prompt

>>78587074
Man I've written about the boys probably more than you have don't start

>>78587291
Fair enough then. But we all know who the rest of the site is...

>>78542204
Elden Ring during the day, Ninisanni Scenario at night.

Honestly image bumping is fine since sometimes you just need to get the thread off of page 10/11 before it gets archived and there's at least a chance a cool/erotic image might inspire the thread to get more lively compared to just typing out
>bump
Ideally it would be better if all bumps where like ideas, replys to an idea, or questions to spark off discussion but in times like these thinking those up might risk the thread getting knocked off if it's been half an hour.

>>78589220
>>78502391
Telling Mio you HATE her favourite cheese

Risu's a lot of fun to watch. She can even make Indonesian sound sexy.
I'm struggling to get a grasp on writing her dialogue, though.

>>78589701
It's easy to write Risu. Just fuck up the grammar and follow every other dialogue tag with "and then she cackled wildly".

>>78589701
Have you considered a gag?

Anon! since you're being such a diligent writer, you should show me your word count for your wip! don't be shy! I bet your word count is really big!

>>78593468
Can we have Lappy and her ruler back? She was cuter and less menacing

>>78572964
>>78573666
> cursed dagger
The one where Anya gets fucked in every hole, or...

>>78593698
There's one fic called 'A Cursed Dagger' in the archive anon what the fuck are you talking about

>>78593564
You're crazy asking for another woman in front of her.

>>78594185
I think they're talking about an unlisted pekofag fic, I remember them making an Anya fic once.

>>78556572
I'm be excited to read anything you have to share honestly whenever you're comfortable. These girls have been getting me feral recently

>>78502391
Around the world in 80 days with AZKi.

>>78598177
i can see her pooch through those undies

>>78521779
There's a prompt I sent to the archive about Suisei, I'd be fine with someone changing it to AZKi if they wanted. It's the most recent one.

>>78521779
There's like three in the archive.

>>78598938
>Looks it up
>Suicopath
I have to ask at this point, why do you like suicopath?
That's generally a concept most of the general isn't so hot on since it simplifies suisei's character into a bloodthirsty blue woman. So why do you like the concept?

>>78502391
(You), being an information peddler, trade Advent's info to Justice for certain items and favors.
Bonus points for portrayals of savy negotiating, abuse of leverage, bamboozling and generally anything that makes the deal heavily lopsided in (You)r favor.

>>78598985
I want more

>>78599347
Is this is a smut prompt

>>78599132
I'll be honest, I don't have a deep reason for why, I was thinking about a story where a member of Hololive starts murdering all the other members and they have to figure out who it is and Suisei was the first member I thought of to be the killer

>>78600189
It can be but it doesn't have to be.

>>78585703
I wasn't really talking about the nature of discussion in and of itself, just how it relates to "a good prompt." I can take or leave most fetish talk because, at the end of the day, it bumps the thread so I don't care, even if I find it to be a bit reductive at times. Greens can make a prompt more attractive because it lets the potential author pick and choose ideas and helps kick start their own idea. You can pick some ideas verbatim, or maybe you like the idea of one green but not the details so you take what you like and leave the rest, or maybe all of it spurs your own "greentext." But like I said, that requires other Anons to be willing to engage each other and work off ideas already presented.

I don't really know what makes an appealing smut prompt since I don't write it but I agree with you that appealing to the author's fetishes is the best way. "Sex with X" or overly convoluted setups that end with "sex with X" to me don't seem very appealing. I would rather see "Sex with Lap while she tries to stay chuuni" over "Lap Rape" but the point of smut is to titillate so maybe its a distinction without a difference. At least put a fetish or something in with the prompt I guess.

>>78593468
It's 11cm...I mean 1100 words!

>>78600262
Is it a horror story, or a cathartic tragedy? I don't really get the goal.

>>78603060
Horror story

>>78603309
Hm, those aren't nonexistent here - but usually more complex, less extreme. You're probably best off writing your idea yourself, that way you have full control and can improve your skills.

Can I request that someone write a Filian vore fic?

>>78602164
>1100 words
Pathetic.

>>78604336
Not really, but you can write a prompt about that which might inspire someone. The more interesting and detailed, the better.

>>78604336
You can yeah

biblically accurate Kanata

>>78605585
Where does the bible talk about breast implants

>>78605838
look man, I didn't write the book, I'm just here to spread the word

>>78605838
in the new new testament of course

>>78605980
Before or after the main character gets nailed?

>>78585903
Brother I hear you, I FEEL you

>>78605838
>He doesn't know about the Pads...

>>78605585
True form: KanaSatan

>>78609531
Kanata O' Cherubim

>>78609531
>>78610001
https://youtu.be/jtJIMeyzh48?si=Hf8xmBHSeS5g8uv-
>Repent son of man!
>If you wish to make an enemy of Ya[!@#]O you must get through me first

>>78593468
24.5k

>>78593468
I just liberated Rubicon Azki! ill write...later!

>>78610828
you still gotta do another 2 times

>>78610919
well yeah but i gotta write too

>>78594287
It's purely business!

On topic of angels, can anyone tell me about Uto's personality? Trying to see if she could possibly fit as "The Mind," in whichever way.

>>78611369
Sorry, I only know that she had a shotgun

>>78610564
>Holofantasy Pure Black
>True Maou ending
>From Petty Thief to Demon Lord
>Neither fully Bibi or fully Anon
>A demon ascending from a dark world abandoned by the gods.
>Standing against heaven to rip the unworthy gods from their thrones
>And create a new world free from the darkness that created him

>>78502391
Yagoo, A-chan, Sora, FBK, Peko, Calli, Gura, Moona, Miyabi, Roberu and Regis all walk into Anycolor HQ to serve the buyout papers to Riku Tazumi in his office.

>>78610828
This is handeler AZKi. It sounds to me like you're making piss pour excuse, not to write, Raven. I'm sure you can install Openoffice or Microsoft Word in your AC and get some words in while scouring Rubacon for its precious resources while killing any corporate dog in your way.
You better have a 25k word mecha fic on my desk by the time you return to base.

Since someone mentioned factions earlier, what is your current favorite writing faction and why? They could be alive or dead. What do they do for you? What do they promise to give you? Why would you fight for them?

>>78615112
I bet she sits like that because one of her classmates told her she'd look "cool" doing it.

>>78615817
Wait, there are factions?

God I need to impregnate this cat already

>>78502325
Performance Probation, a futa on male Buffpup story
https://archiveofourown.org/works/56789260

>>78615817
I will fight and die for my fellow hag enthusiasts, inshallah.

>>78615817
Flufflords rule the north, utterly unimpeachable

>>78615112
My daughter

>>78618783
Your daughter is kinda.....special

>>78615817
I will KILL AND DIE for the Incest Party! NBRfags will be treated as seditious malcontents and will be put against the wall

>>78618865
I know. She's... adopted.

>>78615826
Aqua-sama would look MEGA cool if she showed me her panties.

>>78620202
Please do not take advantage of someone who is possibly (but adorablely) retarded and would be easy to take advantage of.

>>78620908
I'm tryong but she is so rapeable dude

>>78619958
You sure you didn't have her with your sister, Suisei?

>>78623295
Look Suisei I know you love Aqua but you can't be making outrageous claims like that. Besides we're not even related.

>>78616820
Are second person perspective self inserts common on other sites?

>>78624614
Can't really say, but the 2nd person format is less common across writing as a whole. Most self inserts use first person, but 90% of what I've seen or heard was written by and for women. I personally think the 2nd person perspective is powerful. I may have my own bias, but it feels less invasive than first person, and let's you shift the perspective and let the reader be privy to details the first person character may not be able to be aware of at the time. It also just looks prettier to me on paper.

>>78624614
like with >>78625622 most probably with women who write for other women, but imo mostly if they're the subject of the conflict in a disassociative kind of way (which sounds very interesting to look into)

>>78626645
reminds of something I heard before (but i can't remember the full extent of it) where girls tend to insert themselves into situations when playing with toys. As opposed to boys who tend to come up with more scenarios based on other characters/things

>>78624614
Common on AO3

>>78626645
I'm getting exposed to more romance fantasy fiction as my wife continues to share some with me. I just listened to first book of the Flames of Chaos (which is apparently one of her favorite series) and while I got my own thoughts on the prose and presentation, it kinda tracks with what you said about women writing themselves to be the subject of a conflict but not always in the sense that they caused the conflict directly.

>>78627238
From what I've been exposed to so far, I think you what you heard makes sense. Neither way is inherently right or wrong, but it seems to be a trend at least in the literature intended for the respective gender audience. I know from my own personal experience that when I played with figures I craft the stories around them and where they might best fit.

>>78627868
>women writing themselves to be the subject of a conflict but not always in the sense that they caused the conflict directly.
Makes sense, having people fight over/for you is a more common experience for women.

This conversation reminds me of pic related

>>78628220
I'd be okay with this hagpire stalking me a little.

>>78627238
probably this image
>>78627868
i get my daily dose of women's psychology from the xhitter but when i compare that to prior knowledge on fanfiction demographics sometimes the wires cross in profound ways

>>78628428
yea that's it, thanks anon

>>78628428
>Daily dose of women's psychology
>on fucking xhitter not less
As a practiced man of medicine, I'm gonna have to tell you to stop. Your mental health is at great risk if you keep up that routine. Since you already braved the worst in the name of science, I'd be interested to hear where the wires crossed. After that though, no more putting yourself at risk like that, we can't lose you.

>>78628428
Twitter people are not real people. They're far too cowardly to do the things they preach online.

>>78625622
I think 2nd person is better in any scenario where you don't have a fully fleshed out main character. Which for this thread, is almost all of them. (This isn't a bad thing, just a quirk of what most people are writing in here.)

>>78629123
You say that but I feel we've had our fair share of fics that do flesh out (You).

>>78629278
You can make a 2nd person perspective work that way no problem, it's possible for sure, I just think the strength of that form over other ones generally shines best on stories with a less developed MC.

>>78629427
Isn't the idea of most stories to have the MC flesh out and growth via the progression? I know that's not a hard rule or anything, but characters will naturally grow over the course of their experiences that you join them with.

>>78629578
I mean, most of /wg/'s stories aren't very long or about character development.

>>78629647
Most, yeah, but by god the exceptions are great.

>>78613392
>handeler
>pour

>>78620908
It just sounds like you don't want Aqua to be super mega ultra cool!!

>>78629894
>>78502391
Convincing Aqua that she'd look mega super cool if she got a bunch of fetish tattoos like the queen of spades, the queen of hearts, etc, a swastika, a communist symbol, and more!

>>78629647
I'd say a good chunk of what we got keeps the character of the (You) in mind if the story spans for more than a few pages. In fact, even the shorter oneshots can have an anon developing through the brief events more than some way longer first person stuff does. I'd also argue that when most writers here start a story, they present an idea of how their anon starts out to the reader. It doesn't go too deeply sometimes, but enough that it feels like an organic and unique (You).

>>78622625
I don't blame you. I'd probably do the same but I'd like to have her consent first.
>>78629894
There's being cool and then there's being a naughty person who's taking advantage of her pure, naive mind because you somehow convinced her that its "cool" and totally normal for girls to show off their panties.

I'd probably do the same thing you'd do ngl. She's just so damn adorable for her own good

>>78630716
Don't be manipulative, be kind and honest. She'll reward you for it.

>>78631008
She'd be really cool of she became my girlfriend!!

>>78631081
Untrue. No onion sex for you.

>>78631008
If anything I'd be the one getting manipulated.

>>78632653
Aqua using her dumb ditzy facade to manipulate anon into buying her games, snacks, doing her homework, ect.
Secret mastermind manipulator.

>>78632891
Dear God, what's next in her master plan? Tricking me into taking her to prom?

>>78633390
She'll make you exchange phone numbers!!! Play video games together!! Go to the movies together!!! And the final step of her diabolical plan:
Holding hands!!!!!!

>>78632891
Homework is one thing I always had difficulty with (because my autistic mind went school is school and home is home) but for Aqua, I'm willing to make an exception just this one time.
Hope she doesn't mind possible incorrect answers though. Yeah I'm not very smart but I'm twying my best here!

>>78632891
>guys think they're manipulating Aqua
>bringing her gifts and doing stuff for her in exchange for sexual favors
>she's actually pretty smart and hedonistic, just shy and manipulative also

>>78629647
The best fics in the archive are all under 3k words.

>>78633390
Aqua tricks you into taking her virginity at prom, but forgot to pack a condom and gets pregnant

>>78633594
AIIIEEEEEEEE. HELP ME OUGAMAN

>>78634332
Shrunken Troubles is almost 10k tho

>>78634332
That can't be true, none of my fics are under 3k

>>78634487
Cute and hot idea, I'd love to see this written.

question for some of our seriesanons. What do you think its a good wordcount for a chapter?
I know some series have way longer chapters and others are pretty short, but what do you think its a good middlepoint?

>>78635701
3k

Nerds!

>>78636294
glasses are to be hit with cum

>>78635701
>What I think it'll be
7-10k
>What ends up happening
15-20k
Recently I've started trying writing out everything I want in the next installment and then splitting it out into smaller chapters from there where it's appropriate. At the end of the day to me it's about what I want to include in the chapter and how I want the story to progress next.

>>78635701
whatever it takes for the chapter to feel complete

Look I know Shadow of the Erd Tree is coming out but thats no excuse

>>78640416
I'm going to wait a few weeks to play it, I WAS going to buy it day 1 so that I could play it with everyone else, but FUCKING of course everyone has already watched streamers playing it before everyone else + leaks. /v/ is completely full of spoilers, I had to filter basically everything Elden Ring related. Just trash.

>>78632891
>>78633594
>Aqua thinks she is playing 4D chess and that by acting cute and ditzy she will get (You) to fall in love with her
>The twist is that she is not acting
>The "demands" slowly "escalate" culminating in her taking her to prom
>Double twist is that her master plan works
I feel something forming in my mind's eye... Just gotta decide what kind of person Anon will be... Aqua's deeper motivations...

>>78642460
I mean there's two real options here for maximum contrast. Either an idiot that makes Aqua look like a genius in comparison or someone smarter who's too trusting to think she's being manipulative.

>>78642460
Anon should be so cute that her interest slowly transforms to love.

>>78645989
I think the latter is better, you can show subtle mind games between the two in contrast to Aqua's surface level demeanor. Make that Anon book smart but too trusting and kind of dense and inexperienced when it comes to romance so Aqua's plays actually work despite being blatantly transparent to any outside observers.

>>78645989
I was thinking more of the latter. My initial rumblings is to have Aqua be in the middle of the rung: she's not popular, but she's not unpopular either. Have (You) be someone like a Student Council Prez or someone top of the class. So Aqua thinks that to get the attention of someone like that she has to horseshoe her faults until they become appealing. Then, when she finally gets what she wants, she has a bit of a crisis because she thinks her relationship is "based on a lie" which it isn't, because she's not really acting. Whether (You) are fooled or not is undecided, maybe a 50/50 thing? I think the whole "Aqua you're not really acting" sells better with some awareness but then I'd need to figure out an obstacle for (You) to overcome.

>>78649180
>Student Council Prez
And this is making me imagine the setup like a remixed version of the Our Cures setup.
Like (You) are on a quest to get everyone in the school to smile, Ayame's a girl you helped previously who gets caught up in Aqua's scheme, and Aqua is the last girl on the list for you to make smile.

>>78502391
a rratBotan scenario where she's actually a cowardly lion that puts on a brave and cool facade

>>78651638
You can't just call every alternate persona idea a rrat!chuuba.

im going to do unspeakable things (in writing) to this doll

>>78655121
shut it rratAnon. Now help me write this lionzoomer because this is a prequel now

>>78502280
kino

>>78651638
Couldn't you just craft a situation that would break down Botan's normal exterior in the face of scary things? I think crafting something strong enough to make her quiver and run for protection would hit much harder than an alternate persona.

>>78661431
eh cool as a cucumber is Botan's thing, and while she does get emotional she never gets scared.
I think an exploration of the cowardly lion is a fun idea as a what if. A more proper botan fic would be helping her come to terms with something that exposes her weaknesses without taking away that thing that defines her

>>78657695
Young Botan gets my cum

>>78657695
>rratAnon
What would that be, a paranoid schizophrenic who thinks every woman he knows secretly has boyfriends?
....
Okay that sounds like a wacky character to pair with your rrat Botan, maybe with like an explanation of him thinking the front she's asking him to help build with her is actually her boyfriend or something in that vein.

>>78665624
maybe something like you meet Alt/rrat/Nigga Botan in highschool and you make a paranoid rant about why she's following you (she wanted to make a friend) but she cant deny it since she's spineless which leads to shenanigans of her triying to grow a spine and you triying to "expose her"
with the ultimate climax being you trusting her and her doing something brave

and then the epilogue is both of you, years later, together. Botan is now her cool self and you take your meds

whoa now

Why do you want to see your favorite chuubas suffer?

>>78670231
I'm a hugw ryona fag, and it's because nothing get me going quite like the urge to protect my girlfriend

>>78670231
I want to see my favourite chuuba and her beloved suffer

>>78656343
>Be handler. Assigner your own killer marionette for cleanup and dirty work
>You and Cecilia bonding mission after mission. Discover she has a soul
>Learning to love, learning to be human yadda yadda
Am i playing too much shooty robot game? yes. Do i think the relationship between a handler and their paramilitary soldier has a lot of sexual tension and kind of a petplay undertone? also yes.

>>78656343
more like Cecilia Impregnate

>>78674425

>>78675065
Source.

>>78675565
https://youtu.be/oGLt5pZtb1A?si=aZQEDrbszQYhmy5h

>>78675721
>Porcelain Maid
I see. I can use this I think, thanks.

>>78650286
Maybe have (You) be the president or a member of a Helper/Voulenteer club or something? Gives (You) a good reason to go along with Aqua's "scheme." I dont know if I'm 100% sold on the idea though. I want (You) to help because you want to not out of a club obligation, regardless of how selfless you are.
Also, dont really want to do an "I like him cuz he's nice :)" kind of plot.

>>78677401
Go hard on the cuteness idea, make anon an adorable manlet that Aqua finds more and more attractive

>>78677401
I mean this motivation
>I want (You) to help because you want to not out of a club obligation, regardless of how selfless you are.
Is pretty well handled by making the
>I want to make everyone at school smile at least once.
Quest be (You)r main motivation instead of it coming from a club. So you've been going around school building a rep for making everyone 'happy' that Aqua's autistic brain misinterprets as you being a rrat!Ayame tier man whore that she needs to concocts this autistic plan so she isn't just pumped and dumped.
>>78680370
Anon as rrat!Ayame's cute sibling? With the "Anon is a manwhore" misunderstanding coming from Aqua hearing news about Ayame's sluttery?

>>78538724
My dude, how did you get Ren'Py to do all that?
>>78682153
"Nakiri is a slut"
"Which Nakiri?"
The fact that Japanese tend to call people they aren't acquainted with by their last name helps a lot, as well as the fact that both English and Japanese people's last names aren't gendered

>>78673318
>Do i think the relationship between a handler and their paramilitary soldier has a lot of sexual tension
Never thought of it that way but you're right. There's something romantic about being in charge of a girl that's so powerful she could kill you in the blink of an eye.

>>78683267
That's what makes the best fantasy dominance and submission dynamics too
A powerful girl that could obliterate you but chooses to submit and serve out of romantic and sexual desire

>>78684044
Well, when you put it like that...

>>78682672
>My dude, how did you get Ren'Py to do all that?
I fought against the program and won.
So basically, Renpy is structured around labels and screens.
The labels are the script that just runs on its own when you click like a VN should.
Screens are a menu of sorts. The main menu is a screen, the game menu is a screen, options and jukebox etc. are all screens. What I did is take the language found in the game menu and just mix it around a bit. There are actions to hide and show screens, so when you click on a textbutton in the Dress Up Doll screen, it can take the clothes on or off by showing or hiding another screen.
Screens pause the action, but you can always set a back button to take you back to the script.
The mallwalk segment is more interesting. Essentially what every mallwalk screen button does is summon a label, and then instantly deposit you in another specified screen. And if you click on the characters, it will deposit you to the correct scene for that character.
In the future, I plan on making a dungeon crawler with Renpy. With my code, it's certainly feasible. Ah, but that's if I don't drop the engine for greener pastures before then.
Renpy certainly... has it's problems.

>>78682153
That's a creative tie in and would make Aqua cunning in her stupidity
>>78686247
You know she could just rip those ropes apart and kill you with the sword

>>78574273
Its more clack clack than clank clank tbheych

>>78688360
I still don't understand how you got the characters in. Maybe I'm jsut a brainlet....

>>78689812
Which characters? The sprites?
I screencaptured their screens during their streams (often an outfit or 3.0 reveal because they use greenscreens sometimes). Then I put it in photoshop, cut out the background (which is a lot more time consuming than you would think, working through forty expressions for some characters).
Then I cleaned up the edges from the greenscreen blur by using the color replacement tool on photoshop.
Then I toned down the saturation and lightness and put some default photoshop filters to make them blend in more with the backgrounds.
Admittedly more arduous than it looks, but drawing then would have taken longer. Though I probably spent more time gathering art assets than I did on UI/extras/non-script programming combined.

>>78688360
When the going gets tough and your desires grow larger than Ren'Py... Alice in Dissonance switched, despite their tricks with Ren'Py perspective and throwing fake Ren'Py exceptions as part of a story lmao

Any Towa prompts?

>>78693193
But that's Lappy...

>>78693545
I don't see the difference.

>>78693193
Towa wants to go out, but her mother stops her by saying "not dressed like that, young lady?"
What's wrong with Toyota's outfit? She looks like a fucking nerd, and not slutty enough.

>>78693970
What if Towa's mum's idea of "normal outfit" was something really, really girly and feminine.

>>78694723
Towa should swap outfits with Flare, really.

are there any other boards with ao3-core writing generals? I know lit has a thread but it's always unreadable and pretentious

>>78693193
You start mindlessly playing with your girlfriend Towa's tail on the train, forgetting it's an erogenous zone. After She drags you into a bathroom after the train stops and has you take responsibility.

>>78682153
>Quest be (You)r main motivation instead of it coming from a club. So you've been going around school building a rep for making everyone 'happy' that Aqua's autistic brain misinterprets as you being a rrat!Ayame tier man whore that she needs to concocts this autistic plan so she isn't just pumped and dumped.
Alright thats pretty funny.
>Aqua standing there in her poofy prom dress, holding back tears, "I lied to you, because I knew that was the only way to keep a m-manwhore... like you tied down!"
>"...Wait what?"
>You pause, "Then that math test you failed... that was on purpose?
>Aqua hisses, and that tells you the truth
Add in a line towards the end about how the only person to make Anon smile is Aqua and I think you got some gas

Wake up

>>78696840
As far as I know
/trash/ has like caption threads that are basically short form smut next to images
/jp/ basically has random writefagging pop up in random/fetish threads alongside the Hakurei Shrine Experience basically having a small writing community all centered around one community project.

>>78693545
Towappy...

What are some chuuba specific gimmicks you'll probably never use, but really want to?

Today will mark the dawn of the first day lads...be prepared for the battle that accroaches the horizon and be sure to stand your ground for the best of our ability.
for the glory of /wg/

>>78700894
Lui's Hawkeyes. I think they're really cool but I don't think I'll ever write a situation for her to use them.
Aqua being an actual maid.
Not sure if this counts but id like to incorporate Misoji Marine into a story but I feel like CEO Marine is the better "older" Marine.

Why does Hajime (re:gloss) have eyes that have their light gone?

>>78700894
honestly, I can't think of any, if its a gimmick that fits the setting I'll think of a way to add it, and if it doesn't fit the setting it just doesn't get added.

>>78700894
I really want to do a fic where speech gimmicks getting localized (degozaru -> I dare say) is like a bit foreshadowing bomb that goes off to make the reader realize something in like a multi-chapter fic. Unfortunately that would require me to commit to a multi-chapter fanfic.

>>78703093
Ayame's hazing for the new Korean member went too far and broke her.

>>78703388
Wait, Hajime is Korean?!

A little bit more

>>78703552
No, >>78703388 confused Kanade and Hajime like a newb.

>>78704924
Ah, I see.
And now since the thread has past bump limit, can we get a Hajime thread as the OP? I did watch her play SMB and that little dance animation thing she has running before she ends the stream was the most adorable thing I've ever seen.

>>78705520
This one, right?
https://youtube.com/watch?v=WtOskFeLmr4

>>78706280
That's the one!

Baker doko

>>78693802
Oshi reflects chat I guess lol