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Story recap!
There were 2 stories posted last thread.

A White December, Chapter Four >>77903113
Tags: Military, Romance, Sora, AZKi, Botan, Civia

Luna just wants to eat sweets >>77913782
Tags: Luna, Marine, Comedy

>>77954732
>>77955738
Need more chuubas getting high

I miss coco

>>77956244
Same here, friend.

>>77955893
Women taking drugs is so hot.
>have one of the Holos do a heroic dose of magic shrooms
>(You) are their channeler
>have wild, psychedelic sex

>>77957570
I don't know, the hottest thing in that image is the implication of Kanata having an Asacoco plug up her butt or pussy.

>>77957570
The prompt about a holomem vacation with (you) turning from a normal, if not a bit boring affair where you were essentially their errand boy and fixer, to a fuckfest where your POV is borderline incoherent reflecting how many illegal substances you were pressured into taking
I would really love to see how someone would write such descend into madness but that's a bit of a Joker's trick because it would never be good enough

>>77958228
I think the only way to give that descent into madness the portrayal it deserves means you're going to have to some shit with twine or like a neocities site so you can go all out with format breaking and pacing.
Though I'm sure pure prose could still do some thing similar. It would just have to be in some alternate format compared to doing it with normal prose.

I prefer alcohol.

>>77960042
>Forgetting Ayame's an Oni and going out drinking with her!
>By the time she's getting tipsy you're nearly passed out.

>>77961342
I really like ideas and fics that explore the non-human aspects of holos. Lots of potential there.

>>77954692
Holocalypse - Part 2: Mud in the Water
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQP5ujx7v0JsDES_6q407N7cbEwYpA6ZFtTaMgLkKfVJCGihodXaZbRH53loBCOpH8q8ET9j5P3WsVD/pub
Tags: Amelia, Aqua, Botan, Ririka, Rikka, SFW, Action, Post-apocalypse, Drama, Korone, Suisei

With this, Amelia's story has come to a close (for now). It's Botan's turn to take centre stage from here and I'm excited to finally get the plot rolling now that the necessary lore tidbits and set-ups are out of the way. Hope you guys can enjoy this and everything that's to come.

On a side note, an Anon reached out to me a few weeks ago asking about what other fics I've written. I thought it'd be the perfect opportunity to copy what some other writers have done and put together a page listing all my works since I won't always be around. I got a little carried away made a rentry for myself so check it out if you're curious:
rentry.org/hcanon
If the Anon hosting the Rolodex sees this and slaps this on the document I'd be grateful.

>>77962174
Woah, you wrote loads of awesome fics. But I'm glad I didn't know until now.

>>77962174
It's always a surprise to learn what fics are written by the same anon

>>77962174
>same guy that wrote miss sakura also wrote our cures

>>77962174
Glad that this is here to sink my teeth into. It was a very entertaining read. The exchanges with Botan have good bite to them, and I really enjoyed the simmering intensity of the Amelia part of the story.
Found a small typo “But no, I’m calm at all. - I think this is missing a "not" in there. The plot presentation is really good and your music choices are top notch. I can't wait to see more. Sorry if I don't have anything more detailed or profound to say, it's still early in the morning for me, but it was a good way to start waking up.
Checking out your rentry makes me feel absolutely small in comparison, due to the sheer quality and range of works you deliver with expert craft. It's both an inspirational and a little intimidating, but I'll keep doing my best with that as one of my measuring sticks.

>>77963989
shiori stop spinning, you are gonna get dizzy

>>77962174
Absolute powerhouse of a writer. Pray tell, what fic may be updated next good sir?

>>77964802
Inside you there are two writers

>>77964802
Wait, really?

>>77964802
>The cringiest fic I read of this thread was written by the same guy who wrote one of the best fics in this thread.
How in the FUCK did you make such a leap?

>>77968452
The premise of curing a lesbian with your dick sounds mega based though

>>77955893
Mori lean time

>>77968640
Yeah but you didn't answer his question though, anon.

>>77969887
Sorry but I can't read the author's mind

>>77962174
Oh, typo?
>Well, it’s safe now,” she grins wearily, holding out a peace sign.
>You can’t tell if he’s joking or not.
Should maybe be a “she’s”?

>>77970199
Fair enough.

>>77970199
I can and it makes me scared because of how many of them can detect me intruding in their thoughts, dressing me up as their oshi in their minds, and plapping me into next week.

>>77970804
Am I going to enter some sort of telepathic battleground if I write and publish a story here?

>>77971002
Yes, you gain a mighty but dangerous power. You can go into the head of people, but they are in control there. So don't get caught.

>>77971002
>>77971144
So JoJo but chuubas are stands?

>>77971527
I don't know that

Random thought: the "Suisei pleases ojis sexually for favors" prompt sounds likea nasty rumor certain groups could circulate.

>>77971942
I'm the guy, and I'm not even exaggerating here, who has made at least 99% of Suisei/Ojisan prompts and I actually once also made a prompt where it's all just a rumor and Suisei is innocent: >>58968914
>Grim alternate reality where Hololive is a real life idol agency instead of a vtuber company. Suisei is an incredibly beautiful indie idol who gets into the company outside their own talent pipeline (super harsh idol schol) which makes her a hated outsider and a target of bullying. Rumours spread that Suisei got in by offering sexual services and that she’s prostituting herself to major shareholders and important figures in the entertainment industry. Suisei tries to stay strong but eventually it becomes too much even for her. Anon meets Suisei when she’s on the verge of a total breakdown.

>>77972192
Huh. This greentext has some potential to rock like Grand Leviathan's Polka tale (also had to sexually please ojisans)

>>77971942
It's a hot prompt, but I would never write it in a realistic way for that reason.

>>77971942
>>77974360
I have a WIP about Suisei doing just about everything to get her foot in the door, and one of those things is pleasing Ojisan that ends terribly for her.

>>77974439
How terrible are we talking? Terrible enough to consider drugs? An hero maybe?

>>77974439
Man, it feels nice when what you've, for almost a year, tirelessly fought for is finally becoming reality and see the world change for better.

>>77974865
I know that feeling.

This was me when I finally am helping with what essentially is the next step of my childhood autism.

Funny fennec... i love you...

>>77974645
Worse, abortion

>>77976164
Oh boy. I'd rather wait for it to be completed if at all

>>77979202
God I want to watch Suisei pee her skirt. Just watch the stream go straight down. So erotic.

>>77954732
Kanata loses her wings and halo and becomes a normal woman.

>>77971527
>"A Fubuki type stando." Anone grins. "Could be anything, best keep my distance."
>His opponent, Antwo, takes a step forward, and suddenly he gets big, and bigger, and bigger...?!
>No, wait, Anone is getting smaller!
>"I told you, Anone," Antwo smirks. "My stand, Shrunken Troubles, is quite the dangerous one."
>"You've shrunk me, yes, but my stand, My Hypercompetitive Dragon Wife Can't be This Cute is still at full power!"
>Antwo chuckles. "I'm not done! Shrunked Troubles, sub stand! Buzzed and Bothered!"
>The fucking fly shows up, and Anone is dressed up as Fubuki.

>>77954732
Queen Bitch Kiara, the nastiest and strictest cunt in the office, gets home to a perfectly clean apartment and her husband making her her comfort foods.
She then complains about her day and Anon brings out the bib and pacifier while giving her a lot of affirming words.

>>77981800
Is it supposed to be tragic, or is she doing it for a good reason?

wg i'm here to ask you all for shion-aqua wedgie fanfiction ideas. i'm having a pretty shitty week so my brain isn't firing on all cylinders

>>77982677
Dealers choice. It could be a tragedy-esq story in which Kanata has to adjust to being human. Unable to read people's souls, she now questions every interaction and relationship. Not to mention the existential dread of being cut off from your creator. Or it could be more slice of life with a where you help her adjust to human society. Or it could be a mystery where you try and find out what happened and team up with some other supernatural holos to fix her.

spanking. discuss

>>77984793
why not discuss a fic instead?

>>77985227
we can discuss a potential fic about a lioness getting what's coming

>>77984562
I was thinking about her giving up her powers and immortality for her husband's sake.
Maybe even upon his death, when she wants to die with him.

>>77985436
I think Botan would work pretty well in a more playful spanking fic, where she's happy to take it and you're happy to dish it out. Just some slapping and banter while you two enjoy yourselves.

>>77983012
Shion tries a spell to steal Aqua's tits but she ends up stealing some obese woman's lower body and her tight panties have to accomodate it

>>77985620
yeah, something like Botan accidentally scratching you with her claws while you cuddle, then being like "i need to be taught to be more careful. Hey, how's that for an idea!"

>>77986132
You could have her suggest it like that, the power bottom way. My instinct would be to have you two just hanging out together, and as you both get horny and flirty you eventually give her a spank after she teases you. She smiles and bares her butt wordlessly, and lets you grab her to put her in position over your lap.
No pretense or roleplayed "punishment", just a tight-knit couple that shares kinks and understands each other.

>>77986699
I think a coy “my butt is cold” could work too.
B: “hmm. my butt is cold”
A: “well sit on a heating pad or something”
B: “no, I don’t like that”
A: “ok, so what’s your plan?”
B: “I was thinking maybe you could ‘warm it up?’”

>>77986699
it's less literally punishment and more "hey, i hurt you, now you need to hurt me so it's fair", all while you're being awkward and she's enjoying herself

>>77987835
It could, but it shouldn't be such a long and obvious back and forth. Just have her say that her butt requires kinetic heating or something.

>>77987982
Yes, the power bottom way. At that point you should probably make it so you suspect her of hurting you intentionally to get what she wants.
It's an okay method, I just like equality and a dom with initiative more.

>>77985734
No

>>77988648
They're both maids and spend all the time arguing about who has to do what and who is better at X, only to get nothing done. As a punishment they are hanging from the chandelier by the panties while their employers have dinner below.

>>77988838
>Aqua cumming and pissing herself as her juices drip onto my wine
Ahh, fine dining

>>77964802
>>77968452
I thought I’d be a little saddened by these comments but in all honesty I’m finding them quite funny. I’m not embarrassed to admit I wrote that cringefest anymore and it’s great to know I’ve improved. Funny you should mention Our Cures too, the Anon in that was essentially a result of the thread not liking the Anon in Miss Sakura.
>How in the FUCK did you make such a leap?
I guess I just listened to feedback and learnt how to become (somewhat) self aware of my writing. Without the disaster that was Miss Sakura, there’d be no Our Cures.
>>77965728
Thanks for reading, I was worried Botan would be too thorny and the Amelia portion had stretched on a little, so it’s nice to know you liked those parts. Got that typo too, thanks for pointing that out. As I said before the lore dumps are out of the way, so now the real plot can get underway, which I hope you look forward to. No reason you should feel that way about your collection, a lot of my works are short and/or not very good anyway. There’s only a couple in there I can feel really proud of.
>>77966859
I think I’ll keep at Holocalypse for a while longer (since I want to hurry up and introduce Korone and Koyori) but inspiration is a fickle mistress so there’s a good chance I’ll release something else in the meantime.
>>77970209
Fuck me, another one. Thanks.

>>77989898
Botan is rightfully thorny given the context. I'd also part of the enjoyment of the Amelia portion was getting more of a window into the anon you made.
>Spoiler
For whatever it's worth, I think a lot of your stuff is very good, and some are good motivators for me in addition to being fun stories. The dedication and passion you put into your stuff shows, and it makes me want to work harder too to give myself and other people a story they can enjoy.

>>77985531
I feel like that's the obvious thematic conclusion right? Regardless of which route you choose, Kanata giving up her divinity for some cause would hit.

>>77989898
While you're here, I got your email and did what you requested
>Wrote /wg/'s birthday, Our Cures, Cover Job, Dense Treasure as well as everything else
Holy fuck. Good shit, the /wg/ birthday fics in particular are some of my favorite, they always make me laugh.

>>77989898
If anything, I think this revelation shows that authors shouldn't get discouraged due to a fic's reception. It's an iterative process.

>>77962174
Good chapter, even if it's treading water a bit. Necessary I know, and not even bad, I enjoyed every bit. I love the way you write Ame, I think you capture her cadence and attitude very well. >She mouths something; a message consisting of three words. You don’t dare decode it. Oh yeah, that's the stuff. I like Ririka as well, so her attitude at the end was a bit heartbreaking. Hopefully, she's still around since she's not the kind of person to survive out there, but neither is Aqua. The bunker flashback is well done in general. Great ratcheting of tension and when the breaking point hits, you truly get the sense that the world is over.
I think Botan is alright writing-wise, but maybe a bit too prickly. The history is there but I feel like it could use a bit more unspoken tension. They both care for each other but maybe should be a bit more hesitant to mend their relationship, especially with Aqua around. Botan is both too chummy and too prickly at the same time if that makes sense. Nothing much more from me. Good chapter, looking forward to more.

Question though, what made you decide to put the flashbacks in italics? I'm writing something that goes from past to present but I'm unsure how to quickly communicate that to the reader that diegetic.

Hey nerds!

>>77997968
You’re one to talk, dweeb

the geek shall inherit the earth

>>77988838
Well now I have a boner but no inspiration to write. Hmm.

>>77989898
>Without the disaster that was Miss Sakura, there’d be no Our Cures.
Hey, well said.
Some of my shittier fics have been my stepping stones too.

>>77983012
>They go shopping
>hey can you reach that thing on top shelf shelf, Shion asks
>uhhh Aqua isn't much taller, but she cou-
>let me help you lolololol, Shion says
>magic lifting wedgie, but Aqua's underwear just snaps
>Shion gets to go ask the clerk for help reaching the shelf with a new underwear mask

does anybody know a good dark mode extension?

>>78006264
Dark Reader

>>78006961

>>77954732
being Kiara's personal trainer and getting to molest her (she's grinding against you)

>>78008522
this outfit is making my wip lose characters

>>78009220
WIPs are Lost & Found because of Kiaralust.

>>78009220
This outfit reveal demanded my full attention. This fucking chicken cannot become any hotter. I need to fuck her while she's wearing this or I'll drop dead.

>*colonizes ur thread*
EUGODS

>>78009220
brratbro...

>>78013212
Once again i'm asking for the bae cuckfic that no one will write

>>78013790
Once again I'm not writing your bae cuckfic request

>>78008522
I'd rather be Kiara's personal chair

Kiara's big sweaty tits have been sitting in the back of my mind since her dirndl outfit, I'm glad they're now becoming unavoidable for everyone else

>>78006264
If you use firefox/librewolf you don't extensions since there's reader mode. That's how I always read fics.

>>78021019
Kiara's massive boobs haunting the dreams of Anons everywhere

>>77997106
I’m trying, my beautiful geographer…

>>77954732
>You're a middle/high (pick one according to your taste) school teacher but in your private life you're an ameriboo gun otaku who loves action films. You get busted dating an underage student but you completely forget that this is Japan and that you're not gonna spend the next billion years in jail over something as petty as this so you start a one-man armed struggle against the entire Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department to avoid arrest. All of this is narrated from your point of view as a heroic struggle for the right to love against morally corrupt authorities.
>First part of the epilogue is a report by an investigative journalist which presents a counter-view to Anon's narrative and tells the aftermath of the Anon vs Tokyo Police showdown. Second part of the epilogue is an excerpt from the girl's diary; the most reliable account of the three. The third epilogue is a flashback of an earlier scene that wasn't fully shown: the scene of your first kiss together after she gives you a birthday present.

>>77954732
You come into the COVER offices for your shift only to discover that someone spread a rumour that you were diagnosed with a terminal illness so your entire day has chuubas coming up to you in tears

>>77954732
Getting trapped in a small box with Anya

>>78028723
Is an elevator a small enough box?
>Love in an elevator
>Lovin' it up when I'm goin' down
>Love in an elevator
>Livin' it up 'til I hit the ground

>>78029135
If you're not basically forced to play twister it's too big

>>78029522
What if there is more room but Anya presses herself against you anyway?

>>78029522
>>78029853
What if someone forgot their bag in the elevator and it's got twister set in it.

Boards zooming, let’s hope we can weather the storm.

>>78032292
Sisters angry about the Q4 report I see?

>>78032471
more like everyone's pissed off cover's entertaining the notion of allowing the bugmen back in

>>78032292
we just gotta hold the line to the best of our ability

>>78032500
Anon, you're not suppose to think rationally and say things like that!

>>78032471
Kobo had a stream on Billibilli (or however the fuck it’s spelled) and now everyone has assumed that Cover will be opening a HoloCN branch.
I’m of course a little worried if they decide to re-enter the Chinese market because I don’t want the talents to be harassed again, especially because the CCP guidelines are even more strict now, but at the moment it’s a standard case of /vt/ overreacting.

>>78032639
>/vt/ overreacting.
i don't think it is
if anything i think the entire western fanbase is underreacting
this prospect needs to be squashed full force before it ends up with every chat filled with chinese spambots again

>>78032639
Correction by Izuru needed

>>78032687
Them pulling out now because of backlash would only make conflict more likely, I feel. Send counsel in private and support on non Zhang channels if you feel like you have to do something against the danger.

>>77988213
"Next time could you please grab and pull my tail while spanking me?"
"What do you mean, next time?'

>>78034010
That sounds like it was a one-time thing

>>77991256
Thanks Anon, do your best out there.
>>77991529
Appreciate it man, that's what I was after.
>the /wg/ birthday fics in particular are some of my favorite
That's hilarious, I gave those fics about a day each to be written and made them as dumb as possible. Great to see my comedy fics get shown some love.
>>77994848
Thanks for the read! It's a relief to hear my Amelia was liked, I've always found her difficult to write. Ririka was actually a last minute addition to the story (same with Rikka) so it's also good to hear she was liked. I definitely get where you're coming from with Botan, I think I may have had tunnel vision trying to capture her goofy side that she usually wears on stream. The result was losing sight of the setting and where her relationship with (You) was, which made her flip flop a bit.
As for the italics, it was mostly a style choice. It's pretty easy to tell if it's you're reading a flashback in Holocalypse since the world hasn't been nuked (or has been freshly nuked), but I added a "~~~~~" every time there's a time shift and wrote it in italics to indicate it anyway. All the flashbacks are basically memories, so I guess italics give the narrative a kind of hazy feel. You could try giving italics a go for your story, but it's not too difficult for the reader to pick up on where the part they're reading took place if you drop enough hints. Heartbreak Tokyo did a good job at this if I recall.

>>78035754
I guess I'll give Heartbreak Tokyo another read then. Thanks for answering.

>>78036777
Thumbnail (was about to say "gumbnail") made me think this was short-haired Towa in a wedding dress.

Would you strangle me if I wrote a romance story involving your oshi and played it straight for the most part but then purely for banter made Anon take a tight turn for the gay route in the climax of the story?

>>78039175
No, I'd just choke you non-lethally

>>78039175
I would not - not in the slightest. However, that's only the case if it's foreshadowed quite well to me or if I knew what I was getting into from the start.

If Our Cures had Anon fall for Mark's hitherto unnamed brother Jerry off-screen... I probably wouldn't find it funny because the anticlimactic feeling of being cheated out of an excellent story would prevent me enjoying the twist.

>>78039883
the idea of a twist is that if it works its because it was foreshadowed.
Literally any twist that is "AND NOW THIS HAPPENS" out of nowhere is the author steering the ship into a glaciar due to incompetence or bad faith. AKA its the mark of a bad writer

>>78040022
>AKA its the 'mark' of a bad writer
heh

>>78040116
ina show me your stinky bush or shut up

>>78039883
Episode 4 of Monthly Girls' Nozaki-kun executed this perfectly. Adapted into a chuuba fic it would work something like this:
>Anon's male friend goes above and beyond to selflessly support Anon's quest for chuuba pussy
>In the crucial moment when Anon is about to confess his love to [your oshi] something is nagging him
>Anon's mind is flooded with memories of his friend's unbelievable kindness, generosity and warmth
>The seeds Anon's friend has planted have finally truly reached the depths of Anon's soul
>Anon realizes that he has fallen for his friend
>"Weep, you girl. My penis has given you up. Now it penetrates men's behinds. Goodbye, wondrous femininity!"

>>78040796
And then a volcano erupts

>>78040825
Yes, Mt. Fuji

>>78039175
>gay route
Eh, given that by nature of pretending to play a romance story straight whatever character development is mostly going to center around the girl; I don't see a way for this to work outside of a short bait and switch shitpost. Anything longer form would need to start the foreshadowing that it's not a typical chuuba romance so early that the surprise factor would have to get killed.
>Yuri route
This could honestly work, and could be played for a couple of routes. Especially since it could be used as like a context shift letting the character development from the alleged romance be used post twist, rather than abandoned. From purely platonic, to wingman for the hidden lesbo, to accepting heartbreak from realizing it was never going to be.

>>78040796
i cant believe im debating a comedy show but there the twist works because Nozaki and Mikorin are too autisticand gay to pick the correct options+they have a skewed idea of romance.
which is why when the unconditional support of Tomoda breaks them and they decide its time to write him a girlfriend, they decide on MC.

SO ACKSHUALLY it would be about an anon failing at his relationships while getting close to his friend until he gets homolust and decides biology be damned, he's getting rio pregnant

>>78041017
Well, I said adapted. Not just copypasted.

>>78041099
sorry didnt catch that, too busy fucking boys

>>77954732
Choco invades your dreams to feed herself, but there she comes across an atrocious blasphemy.
You are having a wet dream about demolishing a boy, and she's absolutely horrified when the load that she was aging and letting stew gets blown in your boxers.
If she doesnt act fast, months and months of hard work and semen are going to be stolen from her! she might start looking like a hag even!

So now its up to Choco to show YOU the wonders of the feminine body before homolust consumes you.

Now with dual options
>Choco amazon presses you and wrings you dry
>Choco's advances are shit because she's used to being chased after and as such you start getting more and more homolust just because girls are stupid which makes her more desperate

>>78041124
What are the implications of Ayame holding a white stick with a suggestive facial expression?

>>78041421
>she might start looking like a hag even!
Does that mean she'll turn into that crusty old hag the queen disguises herself into in Snow White?

>>78041509
She wants to play with your cock and balls (it might hurt)

>>78042174
worse...she'll start falling asleep during movies or need an alka seltzer after drinking

>>78042752
Umm.... is that suppose to be a bad thing, anon?

>>78042752
>Choco will never on her reading glasses in front of you in order to read her trashy romance novel
Why even life

>>78044570
Like, a romance novel that she merely owns? Or one she wrote and reads to you?

>>78042478
I'm not the target audience for it, but I feel like Ayame would have potential as a playful dominatrix. Kind of the reverse of the Botan spanking scenario further up.

Survive

>>78044570
what if this anon is a haggot and so his ultimate goal is to starve choco until she becomes a true hag that cant even last a round without asking for a glass of water and to turn on the AC

>>78044644
A novel that she owns. Imagine: it's after dinner and you're in the living room watching TV. Choco comes in with her book and glasses case and sits down next to you. She opens the case of her reading glasses, slips them on and opens her book to where she last left off. The two of you silently enjoying each other's company.

>>78047000
>>77954732
Your cake chuuba GF slowly embracing her hagdom

>>77954732
Your writer chuuba GF reading her WIPs to you

>>78048550
What kind of fic would your oshi write?

>>78050494
Something fluffy with cute girls.

>>78050494
she used to write naruto fanfics and action self inserts

>>78050494
A fic where she grooms me!

>>78050494
Tryna fix Jin P3.(I forgot his actual surname and ICBA to google it)

Why doesnt Ame get granted the range of Femcel if she used to read TF2 fanfics?

>>78052080
You could write her like that. But let's say that it would be unrealistic.

>>78052377
Yeah, because of ME.

>>78052080
Because she isn't a femcel by definition. Do words have any meaning to you people?

>>77954732
Surviving the holocat invasion

I wish there was more focus on backs during smut. But I guess they're niche, and more suited to a visual medium.

Rise

No dying in my lunchtime.

>>77962174
first of all, I love your dedication to rewriting this fic. I've always been a sucker for power fantasies and post-apocalypse stuff, and I can tell it's already tons more fleshed out than the old rendition (even though it's been a while since I read that).
I'm also thoroughly enjoying the story - all the interaction ITT puts to show that writing truly is a journey and improvements can be made. It's also nice to see you've been around ever since Golden Duck - pretty sure that was one of the first fics after the thread transitioned from "chuubas being abusive" to /wg/ proper.
Since you say that feedback helped you improve, I want to offer my two cents on Holocalypse as well.
First of all, Amelia. Other's have said it already, but she's great. And I say that as someone who doesn't care for the "real" Amelia at all. As for why, I'd have to guess that much comes down to the synergy between Anon and her being somewhat similar to the one in Our Cures. There's banter (which you excel at), there's tension, flaws in both characters and a kinda climax (that you pussied out of - "not enough energy"? Never have gayer words been written). She just feels really two-dimensional - in a good way. At least that's how it seems to me.
That brings me to Aqua and Botan. Well, banter doesn't really work when someone is as retarded as Aqua, but she's cute enough. It sometimes feels a little too "trope-y" with her, like you go out of your way to make her extra useless, but you don't have to take this as a complaint. That's her role, I get it.
Botan... doesn't really catch me so far. She seems like this really badass squad leader, but with the sweet-as-a-kitty side she only shows to you. My personal preference, but that's a little too crass of a split in personality for me. Yeah, (you) and her have history and I'm sure once that's revealed she'll turn more likeable, but so far it feels rather on the nose. Nevermind that having open sexual relations with your subordinates wouldn't work in the real world for shit.
It might have been better to keep the affection and happenings between (you) and her a bit more ambiguous instead of going full "remember that mission where you begged me to fuck your ass?" Just my opinion though.
The conflict in the bunker was good enough, seemed heavily inspired by Fallout 3. The reasons why "you really, totally have to leave right now and Amelia definitely can't come with" felt a bit forced, but that's alright.
I was going to write that you could maybe keep an eye on how many supporting OCs you add, but that was before I realized Rikka is actually a VTuber. My bad. This way, it's probably just the Kai-guy, maybe another guard I've already forgotten about.
I mean, if you need them to get the story going, be my guest, but the odd "Mark" or "Takeshi" usually work because they're over-the-top comic relief. Just don't expect anyone to give a shit about them when you add more in the future.
My last point would be dedicated to the main character. He is a LOT better and more likeable than in the old version but he still suffers from being this "hero in a bad guys pelt". Kind of like in those powertrip anime, where the main character totally is a bad guy and only ever does all those kind things because they miraculously fit his even bigger evil agenda.
(Your) way of reasoning just isn't very relatable, at least to me. Like, why does he hang onto Aqua despite his own absolute goal being revenge? Why does he fight off 20 guys to help Botan in one moment and then refuses to fight 20 more to recapture Albatross?
Maybe you do it on purpose, to keep (your) motives more shadowy, but I find it a bit irritating that I, the reader, get to hear some of the characters monologue and reasoning, while other parts are not explained at all.
That's it. I hope that didn't come off too harsh. Like I said, just my opinion. And I really love the story, don't be mistaken! Now, a few closing words to wrap things up:
>"Mark route when?"
pairing Aqua with a nameless fag instead of him must be the biggest waste since that guy who used his bitcoin to buy a pizza. I'm still seething.
>Miss Sakura
actually don't have any animosity towards that fic at all. Reread it a couple of times. Thought it was inoffensive enough. Smut could've been hotter. Probably would've been loads better if anon didn't insist on calling Migo "Miss Sakura" until the very end, though.

>>78058739
The reddit spacing scare and its consequences have been a disaster for 4chan

>>78059812
The funniest part is "reddit spacing" has always been a thing on this hellhole.

>>78020141
>Post-workout Kiara giving you a 'private lesson' by sitting her huge sweaty ass on your face while she plays video games all night
>Mocks you when you complain you can't breathe
>The scent of her sweat, perfume, and pheromones all mixed together is permanently etched into your brain
>Manage to somehow survive all night
>"Same thing tomorrow?", she laughs, throwing her sweaty shorts at your face as your 'payment'.

Who is the sportiest chuuba?

>>78062362
Koro or Subaru

>>78059812
>* correctly knew when someone was reddit spacing.

What sorcery is this?

>>78063916

>>78064088
Rat sex

>>78060159
Most are too much of a newfag to understand what reddit spacing is.

Adding a line break is a normal way to format posts


Reddit's formatting was so fucking bad, you had to add to new lines before it registered one.


Which lead to these huge gaps between paragraphs that we then referred to as "reddit spacing."


Sadly, as people misisnterpreted it, we had people calling regular formatting reddit spacing.

And people who refused to format their posts properly because of it.

>>77954732
Lamy making Nenechi bite the curb while her friends watch.

My WIP is QUEEN WORD COUNT, your word count SMALL!

>>78067483

>>77954692
Another one to the pile
TAGS: Azki, Fuwamoco NTR, Physical Violence, Parody, Meta

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSyMeFmDtCf5r-NaZy6Dcmyv38imHXetmzdpIaBmxZ0Xz3Y8-oJOQ6GTrCQ659d0IrlUkDfQnbDYyZ8/pub

I have a bit of time before going into disney's cock and ball exploder, so have this quick piece which i had a lot of fun writing because its dumb

>>78067998
Good show anon. I kek'd, chuckled, and chortled.
I like how you captured my lifestyle at the end.

>>78061415
guess I'm jacking off to Kiara tonight...

Writers, how do you write your oshi (and other chuubas I suppose) and get into her mind?
I used to write a bunch, and it comes pretty naturally to do so with characters I come up with, but it feels different for a real person

>>78067998
>The older twin just looks at you two with her blue eyes
Mococo is the one with blue eyes

>>78068627
anon....they're anime girls on the telly.

>>78068437
thanks. it is weird that you claim to live like i do, but oh well
>>78068688
i might be stupid. it is now corrected

>>78069155
>it is weird that you claim to live like i do, but oh well
Cheers to having good taste mate.

>>78068921
I can't in good conscience agree after meeting some of them in person, Anon.
Plus, I strive to write the best, most believable stuff possible, and minimize dissonance. It just wouldn't be right for Snuffy to be a stuck-up, haughty cunt in the fiction when all of her streams have her giggling like a madwoman and being generally turbo-chill.

>>78068627
I mean, I don't generally write them in circumstances that I know them in because it's a fictional setting and/or they're having sex with me. At least for your oshi, you should know her personality well enough to translate it to different circumstances - and there's a good amlount of leeway, because it's not like people only have one possible reaction to things. As long as it makes sense with the character under the circumstances, it's okay.

>>78069578
I think you missed the point. The chuuba on the telly is the "real person" in your case. There's also a lot of artistic liberties you can take since ultimately your writing will not match the oshi in their life experiences in every aspect. As long as you have a feel for their personality and can adapt it to your story, it'll work fine.

>>78069578
This is probably a difference in vtuber ontology between us, but I don't believe you can meet a vtuber in person.
Similar to how you can't meet Mr Bean in person, just Rowan Atkinson.

>>78068627
my 2 cents is drawe hard lines in the sand and get stuff wrong on purpose.

I dont try to be 100% accurate with any of the chuubas i write, and maybe i flanderize them a bit. But i do that because i want to separate the real person from the avatar.
I respect the creators too much to allow me myself to put EVERY detail of their life in my fanfics, so i just filter them.

For example. Bae has stomach problems thanks to a shitty period of her life where she starved herself. That's never getting in because in my world this version of her is happy.and deserves the world but ALSO i respect her and i dont want to put a bad period of her life in my fic for the sake of "realism"

>>78070364
I'll concede there's a certain amount of performance and wearing of masks when it comes to vtubers, but I think a fair bit of who they are leaks through online, sometimes in ways society wouldn't approve of, such as expressing an interest in trying a little cannibalism, as a treat.
To quote Oscar Wilde
>“Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth."
But by no means are you getting the full of it, especially especially not from corpo chuubas.

>>78070113
I think it's a difference of philosophy, as with the other anon I quoted above, though do rest assured I know what you were driving at.


>>78069788
Sure, I just am not sure I can get a satisfactory handle on the nuances of another person that really sells the illusion, and goes the extra mile. The devil is, after all, in the details.


>>78070449
I like your approach, maybe I'll think of doing something like that.

>>78071228
I trust that you can do it, you're obviously thoughtful.

>>78071228
What did Oscar Wilde even write anyway? The fics here are much better.

>>78071910
>Everytime Kiara gets posted, A song of ice and fire loses another chapter

>>78071910
Broken clock, twice a day

>>78067998
10/10 best meta parody of the year.
Unrelated but this making wips is cheating bit just made me remember the brrat anon and Lost and Found in the context of this. Makes me imagine him and Bae having a long distance relationship where he promises to come back, but for some reason he keeps finding delays... Because Kiara keeps providing "inspiration" at the cost of him deleting pages off his wip.

did anon ever write the matsuri little sister fic?

>>78072714
That new Kiara exercise video outfit has most likely done irreparable damage to that anon’s neurons

>>78072714
>>78073380
thanks for reading and while yes, Kiara remains lodged into my brain, college fucks me harder than she does

>>78067483
post it coward

>>78077100
I need to fuck this dragon

I wanna write something about an indie chuuba but I need ideas or at least prompts.
If it helps here are some of the ones I've watched the most
>Bao (oshi)
>Sinder
>Trickywi
>Filian
>Several smaller ASMR vtubers who do RPs
>KKCyber (2view teetering on 3view)
>JuniperActias
>Lyra (mothgirl)
>CottontailVA
>Grimmi

>>78077930
What genre of stories do you like? What might be the end goal of your story?

>>78067998
>I love mapple syrup
>Chekov's bat
>ALL YOU GAVE ME WAS A GREENTEXT
I shouldn't have laughed this hard but here we are.
Stellar work. Funnily enough, Kiara and Bae weren't in it.

>>78071910
A bunch of faggy garbage.

T. read most of his works just to say they're all shit.

>>78078010
That's the tricky part I have no fucking clue.
Although...the stuff I've enjoyed reading as fanfic goes is fluff/slice of life and hurt/comfort. But with most of those I'd have a hard time finding a point or end goal, I just have an urge to get something down on paper.

>>78067998
as Yandere Azki's lore grows deeper, so too does her ability to will herself into existence. it's merely a matter of time until this parody becomes reality for us all. we must heed the prophets' warnings and never overload ourselves before it's too late.

>>78078383
>phoneposter
>retarded opinion
Checks out.

>>78078488
I should add I really like getting into a character's inner workings and feelings and their relationships to others, and that sort of thing

>>78077311
the real question is, will you be having sex with the dragon, or will she be having sex with you

>>78078766
Depends on the time of the month. Somewhat paradoxically, Coco when she's in heat is more submissive and lets you take the lead pounding her into the ground while when she's normally horny she'll take you whenever and however

>>78077930
This thread has, by my count, at least 3 Filian fans. So the choice is obvious.

>>78078383
Fuck you, The Importance of Being Earnest is great. Wasn't too big of a fan of the others I read though, admittedly.

>>78078766
>>78079139
there's that Fue doujin where there is one day where the succubus get horny but dont produce contraceptive and that's super hot but also embarassing for them because they can get pregnant.

Just saying that Coco could maybe get really concious about mating when its the biggest day because she loses control and becomes submissive

>>78079664
>Embarassed but powerless, Coco backs up her dump truck of an ass into you and grinds you, trying to act snarky or fiwrce, but her body's giving way.

>>78080241
>hugging Coco from behind when you know she's in heat, not even explicitly trying to do anything more
>She gets catty and tells you to back off, but her tail wraps around your waist and she unconsciously grinds against you

>>78081167
Coco wearing panties...no...

>>78081569
You're right I'm sorry

>>78081569
why wouldn't Coco wear panties

>>78080241
>Coco's usual cowgirl is fucking you into a crater
>Coco's cowgirl this time is her shivering and triying her best not to cum in insertion
>creaming herself halfway through and having her hips "give out"
>bullying orgams out of her because she's not able to lift herself from your dick and just whining as you dick her

>>78081724
Fuck you Coco.
You're not seducing your way out of your years long chaste romance.

>>78079664
Source?

>>78081167
why you need fanfic on things that's already reality
Kson is a huge slut.

>>78083058
https://exhentai.org/g/1175123/9e3bca8355/
this chapter

>>78083465
i love this slut

>>78083465
Because several thousand word accounts of me breeding her don't exist yet you gormless third worlder.

>>78083746
Thank you sir I will file this away for the future

>>78083814
>>78083922
Is it weird that i still lament the death of that Kson slampig wip one anon lost? he described a rimjob on it and i still havent recovered

>>78081984
dragon ass too fat

>>78085276
It's a very natural human thing to long for incredible sights and experiences we never had a chance to

>>78085401
>Anon WILL fuck this

>>77954732
Celebrating little Flare's 50th birthday!

>>78086729
Eventually

>>78086759
Speaking of Elfriends, I just discovered she has made regional variants.
The ones with the beret are JPs
The ones with a clock on their bowtie are kaigais.

>>78090398
That's a broad broad.

>>78092297
Please don't talk about my mistress/wife's girlfriend like that

>>78092781
Okayu assisting you as you fuck Korone sounds like an idea with potential.

>>78093136
Okayu getting her friends laid by insisting that you fuck them first, to their great chagrin. Hanging out nearby and encouraging them in the process too.

>

>>78094984
We both know number is never happening. Because by the nature of the dice they'll have the most tender and slow lovemaking out of everyone.

>>78094984
Fucking Kanata and inadvertently unlocking some kind of hyper giga-nymphomania would be pretty hot ngl

>>78086759
Has Flare always been this "brain rottingly" cute?

>>78095959
>"brain rottingly" cute?
>Flare you're so skibidi!
>Let me rizz you up!
>Let me be your sigma!
Flare vs Brain rot

>>78096154
I won't lie that's not what I was thinking of when I said "brain rottingly" cute. I was thinking it more as in she's that cute and adorable (is that the same thing?) that she physically causes your brain to rot.
...But I also won't lie and say that what you just wrote made me smile just a wee bit. It also suddenly made me think that you in this scenario are Biboo's younger / older brother and you adopted her cringe speak and say what you will on the fly.

>>78095373
>Angel falls in love
>Angel asks the rest of the harem what to do about this
>Fast forward
>The strongest creature on the planet tries to hold back when having sex and kills Anon after destroying his room instantly

>>78095959
She's been trying to cutify her appearance and reputation since her debut

>>78094942
Okayu, the lesbian-curing cock missionary?

>>78096788
BE NOT AFRAID

Fuck my loli ass

>>78058739
Thanks for reading, as well as providing this lengthy feedback post.
>Amelia
Man, it is good to hear she's liked. Amelia was the character I was honestly the most worried about. The climax was like that on purpose - (You) had plenty of energy to reply to Amelia but wanted to avoid confronting your feelings on the matter. "Too tired" was just an excuse. This will hopefully become clear in the future chapters.
>Aqua
Makes sense, I think I did overdo her uselessness a bit. Some of it however is part of my plan for Aqua's character growth.
>Botan
Yeah, I absolutley agree with your criticism here. As I mentioned in an earlier post I was torn between angry Botan and goofy Botan and ended up mashing the two together, but that should hopefully be amended in the coming chapter. She's going to be the main heroine for the next chapter or so, meaning I'll have a chance to expand on her relationship with (You) and clear a thing or two up.

I've actually never played Fallout 3. I just needed a plot that would split you and Amelia up and arrived at what you read, which, as you noticed, did feel a little forced. That was one of my worries as I was publishing this fic but I couldn't think of a better way to achieve everything I wanted. As for OCs, aside from the antagonist, no OC will ever play a major role in this fic. I add them when I need a character for the plot but don't have a Vtuber to fit the mould, or if I need a minor role filled. You're free to give zero fucks about them if you wish.
As for character motivations...
>why does he hang onto Aqua despite his own absolute goal being revenge?
There's a reason for this but it exists in like chapter 10 or so. Sorry. There are some hints in the first chapter when he agrees to help her, though.
>why does he fight off 20 guys to help Botan in one moment and then refuses to fight 20 more to recapture Albatross?
Well, ten guys mostly armed with melee weapons are a much less significant threat compared to about a hundred guys holed up in a fortified military base with access to an armory. That and securing Botan's safety was the main objective -- now that she's safe, you have no reason help with her revenge mission.
>I find it a bit irritating that I, the reader, get to hear some of the characters monologue and reasoning, while other parts are not explained at all.
Right, that might be something I need to work on. I'm trying to drip feed information at the moment but I guess I'm not doing it very well. Basically every motivation and reason for (You)r actions will be explained in time. Probably.
>I hope that didn't come off too harsh.
Not at all, I'm always grateful to any kind of feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to read all this and tell me your thoughts. I'm glad you're enjoying the Holocalypse remake, I've got a good amount planned for it.

In Our Cures I tried to imply that Aqua ended up with the Anon in A Good Onion is a Clean Onion, but in hindsight you're right in that Mark should've dated her. Before its release though, I was unsure of how well Mark would be received and if the thread would even like him. Maybe I'll sneak in a little reference in another fic. As for "Miss" Sakura, that was mostly a bad decision on trying to translate the "-san" honorific, and the fact that in Japan only those close to each other use given names.

>>78067998
I read this in public and kept grinning like a retard because I love silly, short comedies like this. It's also as painful as it is hilarious because Anon is literally me. Thanks for shoving a boot up my ass, I'll get back to work so I can have a pool with hags in it.

>>78073500
>college fucks me harder than she does
College Dean Kiara making you delete words off your wip for academic success (and sex)?!

>>78099815
You don't have that

>>78100286
>>78073500
>you hand in a paper last minute
>Kiara holds it over the shredder while you're forced to eat her out

>>78100206
Aqua doesn't feel right to me unless she's socially awkward and ditzy, but extremely competent at something related to her task. To represent her FPS prowess.

>>78100539
Of course I have, I'm Laplus.

>>78100726
Proof?
>>78100206
I like the reference to AGOiaCO but then Mark needs someone else. Subaru would be a good fit since she's sporty and has an out-of-universe link to Ayame.

>>78100807

>>78099815
>Bijou is fed up with you not taking her hints

>>78100879
put some pants on young lady, you are out in public
>>78101649
that goes for you, too!

>>78101649
I want to punish this cute brat but not in the way /wg/ does.

>>78102065
Something like this?

>>78102282
Isn't that like, overkill, anon?

>>78102065
You never know if someone shares your fetish, so out with it!

>>78102282
Has anyone got the image of Lize Helesta compressed into a cube shape naked?

>>78102282
This would be hot if it was a box that you could open, and that she would have room to uselessly wiggle in while you torture her (consensually).

>>78102361
- Put her in timeout.
- Scrub her mouth out with soap / washing up liquid.
- Spank her bare bottom with my hand (the slipper or belt is for drastic measures).

Kinda "tame" punishments which is a mood killer. But it would at least hope "curb" Biboo's naughty attitude and if it persists, then the belt / slipper comes out for smacking (even though it'd make me feel like absolute shit).

>>78102509
This would've been a great opportunity to bring up ping pong balls again, it's a traditional Thai thing after all.

>>78102509
>Kinda "tame" punishments which is a mood killer.
They wouldn't be a mood killer if you both enjoyed them.
>(even though it'd make me feel like absolute shit).
You can always make it so she doesn't enjoy it in the moment, but appreciates your dominance - and your effort to correct her.

If you're indulging your fantasies, find ways to make them as perfect for you as possible.

>>78102509
I'm not into spanking but I do appreciate a good bum

>>78102646
>A ping pong show (Thai: โชว์ปิงปอง) is a form of stage entertainment that takes place in strip clubs. It is a type of sex show in which women use their pelvic muscles to either hold, eject, or blow objects from their vaginal cavity. Ping pong balls are the most iconic objects used.

^I'm not sure I think I'd enjoy that tbphwy, anon.

>>78102662
>They wouldn't be a mood killer if you both enjoyed them.

But it would be a "mood killer" for /wg/ because its not the response they would be thinking. to them correction means something like sex.

>>78102732
Same.

>>78102509
>Put her in timeout.
Jesus dude, I know we used to be an abuse thread but what the fuck.

I'm pretty into rape myself. It's super unfortunate that it's often, sorta unfairly tbqh, painted in a negative light.

>>78102903
Hey, this isn't a hivemind! I would enjoy a simple spanking or mouth-washing if it was written sensually and between loving characters. And you don't have to advertise it in a misleading way, anyway.
>>78103046
What you enjoy always says something about you, in the end.

>>78102903
>^I'm not sure I think I'd enjoy that tbphwy, anon.
What if she used diamonds? That would look pretty impressive.

>>78103046
I know right? I'm a pedophile myself. It's so unfair how my fetish is always painted in a bad light. I dunno what's up with that.

>>78102732
you can always do the ol' fakeout where you put them over your knee bare-butted but proceed to caress/grope/finger them instead

>>78103046
>>78103243
>An elite team is formed from convicts who are given a chance to redeem themselves
>Rape Ranger! Pedo Ranger!
>The gang is here to protect the world!

>>78103095
>Hey, this isn't a hivemind!

Its not? I genuinely thought it was because if its a fetish folk don't like then the scenario itself won't be picked up.

>I would enjoy a simple spanking or mouth-washing if it was written sensually and between loving characters.

Kinda the same but sadly its usually for characters that I'm not interested in reading about. Like, I don't HATE Ayame or anything... but is she honestly the only one the majority of this thread wants to spank?

>>78103228
Balls that sparkled like diamonds?

>>78103523
>Its not? I genuinely thought it was because if its a fetish folk don't like then the scenario itself won't be picked up.
Something being picked up depends on the independent whims of a few individuals, the anons actually writing stories. You only need one to pick up your prompt, but if your prompt appeals to none of them - tough luck.

>Kinda the same but sadly its usually for characters that I'm not interested in reading about. Like, I don't HATE Ayame or anything... but is she honestly the only one the majority of this thread wants to spank?
I'd gladly spank every holo, but I only wrote about doing it to my oshi. At most I could write short paragraphs about spanking different holos, like the hag review fic or the descriptions of holos as prostitutes. Only ideas a writer is highly commited to turn into proper fics, everything else remains in our fantasies. I mean, you yourself are not writing the very Biboo fic you wish for.

>>78103820
I suppose that's fair on your first point.

>I mean, you yourself are not writing the very Biboo fic you wish for.

That's because I genuinely do not know how to write and am only better off at writing scenarios (that may or may not turn out to be really, really dumb). And like, I'm not that bothered if anyone wanted to write Biboo being spanked but its just really, really weird that only a certain group of writers want to do that, no?

>>78103523
I dont care for spanking but I like smut with Ayame so its good enough for me. and she does need correction of some kind in her more rraty forms

I'm tired of hearing excuses like "I can't write. I don't know how. It's too hard. I can only do X." We've had several authors come up from nothing and are now writing things people wait patiently for. If they can do it, so can you.

>>78103922
>And like, I'm not that bothered if anyone wanted to write Biboo being spanked but its just really, really weird that only a certain group of writers want to do that, no?
What do you think is weird about only 1-2 writers being interested in a niche fetish, given that there aren't that many writers here?

>>78104171
Oh, so you want something like:

- Character gets butchered in a way that they only the character in name.

Because that's what you'll get if I attempted to write.

>>78104195
>What do you think is weird about only 1-2 writers being interested in a niche fetish

Do you know about that prompt where Towa sticks your dick in her mouth to calm her nerves / curb her smoking habit? I genuinely get weird feelings in myself when there's a few anons that actually like that prompt.

...Or am I having difficulty trying to understand what you're saying?

>>78104490
1. You have to practice to get better
2. If the setting is different from real life and you write about a chuuba that isn't super popular, you can do almost whatever you want with the character

>>78104490
I want you to not act like a defeated little bitch and give something an honest try while not being afraid of failure.

>>78104490
I wrote Extrapedestrial without knowing much at all about Iofi, and it worked out just fine. Noone here watches Iofi, and her whole character in the fic revolved around a fetish anyway.

I recommend reading The Art of Dramatic Writing by Lajos Egri. It was quite helpful for me.

>>78104720
Yeah, see the thing is that when I want to write, it has to be a chuuba that I REALLY like. And she's not one of those "not popular" ones too. The one I'd want to write about it Fubuki.

Why don't I want to write about her? Well other than possibly flushing her character down the loo, I just aren't "motivated" enough to do my reps and get her character down (plus I don't know a lick of Japanese). Here's what I do know about her though;

- She has white hair.
- She has a cute giggle.
- /wg/ (and possibly me) want to be wrung dry by her on a daily basis.
- She "never" loses her cool.

And like, I've a REALLY stupid way on typing (to the point you'll think I'm ESL) which is why I'm more comfortable with doing scenarios instead. But even though are a hit and miss (a perfect example was that Suisei one and me not knowing what "stakes and tension" meant).

>>78105222
Just write a fic where a guy dreams about fucking her, in a way that's most enjoyable to you. That way noone can blame you for her being out of character, because it's just a character in someone's dream and not actually her.

>>78105222
So why don't you want to try in the hopes of getting feedback in regards to getting her character down more? Also gonna point something out
>I REALLY like this chuuba
>no I don't want to figure out more about her
If you're just horny writing that's fine, just grow the balls and do it. Also no ones gonna crucify you if a chuuba's character is off, they might keep you stern and pointed feedback, but that's what you want if you're starting from scratch.

>>78105876
>So why don't you want to try in the hopes of getting feedback in regards to getting her character down more?

- Write story (say its a really, REALLY shit one but it has an interesting plot).
- People give real good feedback (or shite I'm not that bothered) and tell me how to improve.
- While I'm taking in what they've said to me, there's a 99% chance it'll just fly out my head and it'll "feel" like I haven't took in what you've said at all. This means another possible bad chapter (because my brain is fried trying to keep readers happy but tripping myself up trying to see where I went wrong).

This is why. I'm "certain" there was an author who did get proper feedback and "still" didn't write what folk liked on here, this is how I fear I'd turn out (next to my horrible way of writing and possibly flushing your favourite chuuba personality down the loo).

>>78106220
That just goes back to >>78104839
You're afraid and making up these worst case scenarios in your head to justify your fear.

If you want to write but you don't do it, I don't think you really love writing, probably not the hobby for you. I imagine you'd like to express the ideas you have, and writing can achieve that, but it is only a means to an end. Personally I enjoy the act of writing itself and that's why whenever I get an idea, I go straight to writing, or I did, when I was still a young lad full of heart.

>>78106220
I used to be a lot like you until i started writing and posting my work here. More often than not if your writing is bad but you come in with a good enough concept you'd be surprised how many anon go out of their way to help you out just to watch your work flourish.
Nothing is set in stone and there's a chance you think you pumped out a banger but it turns out to suck, you just gotta get back up and keep trying. Just don't criticize your work while you're writing it, let other people do that for you. because even if you don't like your writing for some oddly specific reason, you may find someone who thinks its really good.

Look if someone can go from writing Miss Sakura to Our Cures then nobody has an excuse to not try.

Hmm, thinking of adapting the Formula Holo streams into fanfic. I dunno how exactly I'd go about it tho. Maybe 1 race=1 chapter and from that race's winner's POV.

>>78105222
It's not about the woman, it's about your fantasy.

>>78107851
You know, I'm almost somewhat tempted to write something to prove you wrong on why I shouldn't write, you just need to give me a chuuba that's sitting in your head right now and I'll attempt something real nice and short (hopefully).

>>78107851
quality aside its always funny to see genreswitching like wedgiefag writing a pretty good incest smut or brratanon getting molested after like 5 vanilla romance stories

>>78108952
Nigga why the fuck would I give you a chuuba when you are already deadset on not trying? So you can have an excuse? Miss me with that. The only thing people want from you is to try and have the desire to improve. Nobody here started writing masterpieces from the get go. That was my point.

I would simply not respond to a shitposter criying and shitting himself

>>78109801
>Nigga why the fuck would I give you a chuuba when you are already deadset on not trying?

Because I was curious and I had a silly scenario that popped up in my head that forced me to open up "text" on my chromebook?

>>78108952
Just write the biboo spanking story

Considering that JP Nijis are somewhat obscure here and with /vt/ being quite sour on Nijisanji, would it be a total waste of time to write a story about Mito? Would anyone here read it? Well, at least Mito has some level of name recognition here.

>>78109999
No, I love Mito.

I was looking for rat fics and I noticed Bae has two fics tagged as Hakos Belz and one as Hakos Baezl lol

>>78109987
>Biboo tries to seduce you by sticking her backside out in a "suggestive" manner while showing off her cute panties (polka dot).
>This fucking brat has been trying to do this to you the past 3 weeks and so far she's dead set on trying to get a reaction out of you so you'll "correct" her.
>First you've tried telling her to "knock it off", then you tried putting her in timeout for 2 hours which also failed (because you didn't know she could still do those "suggestive things" to you), heck you even tried forcefully scrubbing her mouth out with soap (you had no washing up liquid) in hopes that she'd never do it again.
>But so far she STILL hasn't learned her lesson. If she keeps doing what she's doing you might just snap and REALLY give her the correcting that she wants badly.
>In your mind you chuckle evily. This stupid brat is going to have a VERY SORE backside when you get your hands on her and "discipline" her for acting like a "naughty brat trying to seduce you"

Then it would end with you with her over your lap (after you've chased her across the house) and her cute polka dot panties pulled down and your bare hand smacking her bare arse really, REALLY hard. I would have wrote more but Ayame is sitting in my head right now.

No, I don't want this anchoered.

Baker-san doko

It's over. This time it's genuinely for real the final episode of /wg/.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0XdAFR4eUqo

>>78110855
Well, I'm looking forward to your short Ayame story.

>>78110855
NTA and I don’t want to be inflammatory, but quite frankly, this barely counts as a story. All these lines are basically short extensions of the ideas Biboo prompt from earlier? If you put a bit more time and effort into it I’m sure you could add a little more meat into the story.

>>78104171
well then I (or someone else) tries it and I get bitched at for not knowing how to do it so lol.

This thread can be a little rough with its critiques sometimes apart from HJanon. I get 4chan is not a hugbox but it's not fun to branch out into something new that you know you aren't good at and get reamed on as if you've been an expert in that genre for your whole life and should know better.

>>78110991
ill bake just so this faggot shuts up because he's clearly just spamming self pity posts to accelerate the thread

>>78112170
did we really just find a new strategy to force bake new threads? Excellent.

>>78111841
Yes, anon, that was entirely the whole point that I made the story. To show you that I CANNOT write and going any further destroys her entire character.

>then why are you in this fucking thread? clearly you cannot write, give the community something nice to read and are just a massive faggot who needs to khs.

Because I'm ADDICTED to this general.

>>78112306
>>78112306

Baked, migrate and stop feeding shitposters you dimwits

>>78112390
NTA that was barely an attempt. You already made a very loose outline, and now just comes the part where you formulate the step by step scenes and put them onto paper. Hold yourself accountable and make a new word doc with a title. If you let your imagination take the wheel, you'd be surprised at how the words can flow. They may not be the best and will need edits later, but you'll have taken the first steps toward completion.