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>>7061831
>Uto edition
That's not Uto...

>>7061831
>Uto edition

>>7061831
Fuck uto

>>7062327
here is a story from the lamy transformation thread >>7033324

fyi for the author of "A Brat's Punishment", you wanna use soi wax for wax play because it has a lower melting point than paraffin wax.

>>7063070
anon, a quick google shows that onions wax melts at around 120- 180 degrees while paraffin wax melts at 115-150

>>7061831
Fuck off, leech

>>7063174
you can make wax out of onions?

>>7063070
Honestly, Paraffin is fine, aslong as there no additives. What should always be done however, is that the dom tests the wax on his hand first to make sure not to hurt the sub.

>>7063195
anon, a quick google shows that onions wax melts at around 120- 180 degrees while paraffin wax melts at 115-150

>>7063214
you can make wax out of onions?

>>7063195
dont know how i fucked that one up, think my brain went on auto pilot.

also fucked up the re post dammit

this

I want to pour hot wax on shion's chest

FFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK i forgot that was a fucking thing, now i look like a fucking moron

whatever, my point still stands

>>7063290
i mean yeah

i just want to cum on it but you do you

>>7063335
And make Aqua lick it.

Pochi discovers a young artist with a taste for older women.

She could tell just by looking through his art, and decides to pursue him.
Upon first contact, he admits that he may have been "inspired" by her art.
So she figures she ought to take responsibility and "take him under her wing".

>>7063381
pochi mama could rape me and id say thank you. that women is fucking sex personified

Prompt: you somehow manage to ask out Aqua and you two start dating. However it turns out she's such a sperg she needs one of her friends from Hololive around at all times to act as an interpreter for when she's too flustered to talk to you. Including in the bedroom.

>>7063315
inchem says 50-57c (122-134.6f)
http://www.inchem.org/documents/icsc/icsc/eics1457.htm
soi wax depends on the purity, looking at this page
https://www.candlescience.com/wax/aak-gw-464-certificates-of-analysis
113-118f is typical of very high purity soi

>>7063495
i think that's going beyond friends there
like just how close would they have to be to aqua to figure out from her incessant fidgeting, stuttering and autistic slurping "anon, she wants you to fuck her in the ass now"

>>7063495
Shion tries to figure out what Aqua wants to do but you get fed up from waiting too long and cuck Aqua with Shion

>>7062464
I'm in bed right now with her. You'll get your turn later, okay?

>>7064221
Nice job anon keep going, I don't want her

>>7061831
>Uto Edition

I hope when I'm bleeding out from multiple bullet wounds after retaking the capital from the shapeshifting pot bellied goblins in the 2023 battle of DC the last thing I see is a happy married life with my oshi.

>>7063381
I NEED this

Thread’s a bit slow, so I figure it’s time to ask the age-old question:
What’re you lovely writeanons working on?

>>7066633
Nothing at this very moment chief

This has been bothering me. Is the bulletin board done away with? By which I mean the anchor post that usually includes the links to the prompts archive and the prompt submission form?

>>7067810
I think it's more along the fact that people forget it exists.

>>7067810
I think someone mentioned a while back that they were getting a new one made, as the old one had become somewhat outdated.

Alright we have a bunch of cucking aqua stories but what about cucking another girl WITH Aqua? Cheating on your gf/wife with the resident retard of hololive?

>>7067810
It was just in the last thread though? Maybe they just forgot to post it in this thread.

>>7068020
Yeah but those links are valuable, especially to newcomers. They should be accessible in every thread near the top.

>>7067947
New one would be fine but I think the og was perfectly serviceable and pretty funny too.

>>7066633
I read some of the stories in the archive today that I've been sleeping on and got inspired to write some Fubuki fluff.
So far I got the setup figured out and the situations that will play out, but I can't pick between the two ways I have planned for the story to go.
Just brainstorming for now, but I really want to write it.
As a certain Anon here said - can never have enough Fubuki fluff.

>>7067947
Can you reference a post where someone said that?
Cause I get the feeling a early thread poster just didn't feel like including it because they wanted to shitpost.
I say this cause the prompts from last thread were updated in the post, and stories are still being added to the archive.

>>7068361
It was threads upon threads ago. Not sure if I could find it if I looked.
I think the anon in question also mentioned that their friend was the one who made the original, but I could be wrong.

>>7067810
I just forgot to post it this time, and this OP is clearly just here to shitpost so of course he can't be trusted

>>7068146
God bless, anon. Keep us updated.

>>7068497
Since they literally posted it last thread I'm going to go with the shitposter theory. Do feel free to yell at me tho

>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>>7068575
I don’t think I will.
Guy just said he forgot this time, anyway, so it looks like there was nothing going on after all.

>>7068146
Isn't it fun, though? You don't have to pick which way the story has to go - you can do both! Alternate endings, epilogues, and what-ifs; they're all fair game

I mean this thread isn't that old yet someone can still post the bulletin.

>>7068629
Should probably also point out that I did not make the bulletin or the image, I just posted it the last 4 or 5 threads
The original bloke doesn't seem to be around right now. Might have been a casualty of the nightmare threads

>>7068764
Towa accidently drinks bibi's pee and gets addicted to drinking bibi's pee and triese to make bibi pee more than usual

>>7063463
>>7065528
>You seem to be quite interested in drawing mature and motherly women, Anon-kun.
>But you need a little guidance to reach your full potential.
>I could certaintly *show* you a thing or two about a mature woman's body...

>>7068764
Hopefully he isn't gonna but just wasn't able to post it as early as you. It really is sad though how much this early thread bullshit has affected everyone.

>>7068950
Business as usual for the rest of us. Gotta keep the thread warm for when they inevitably return.

>have never watched suisei in my life
>have dream where I spend like two hours just hanging out with her in an after-school setting
>remember saying outloud "hah. I ge tit now."
To the author who wrote the most recent suisei story this is your fault. Thanks.

As long as archive anon is still fighting the good fight we should be ok. Going to start preemptively tagging my own works from now as a mark of respect.

Even if the board pic is no good, the links still serve a critical role and should be at the top around the anchor post. I suppose I'll throw em out if a shitpost happens agian.

>>7069252
The apocalypse one? That was a good one.

>>7068764
I was asleep. I still need to update the proper archive on top of it.

>>7066633
a Nene story where she has a crush on (You), the older brother of one of her coworkers. what follows is a series of cute and dumb attempts at forcing (You) into romantic escapades. what she seems incapable of realising is that (You) are actually an assassin in the midst of a war for Virtual Tokyo's underworld

>>7069593
that went from 0 to chuuni real quick. nene shenanigans is impossible not to like as she is just the fluffiest ball of sunshine out there

>>7066633
Mori potty training.

Struggling to figure out which direction tonally to take it. Currently trying to decide between either: cutesy/lighthearted or gross/explicit.

Out of curiosity, anyone have a particular font they like to write in when making a story? Years of school have made it so it's basically uncomfortable to use anything but Times New Roman,

>>7070024
Is this an adult Mori we're talking about? Is it possible to make that cute? It sounds impossible. Maybe a comedy

>>7070044
I should write a Polka fic in comic sans.

>>7069294
I'm here. Had to get the stories from the last thread. I had a very fun time saying "I can't believe 'Tommy Vercetti' is a tag now" when grabbing the Scrappy story. I'd appreciate it. The Anon who made a story anchor successfully is my greatest friend at the moment on top of it.
>>7069320
I'm glad it got so much mileage, it was a birthday gift from a friend. If I'm awake I'll post it early on as normal, but I was very deep asleep this time. This early thread stuff has thrown me out of wack a bit, trying to adjust, but I doubt I would've made it for this thread's inception either way.

>>7070044
I use notepad++ when writing, which after some poking around uses Courier New as its default font

>>7070230
Seriously considering writing a fic where the thread makes tender love to you

>>7069252
Consider yourself lucky. I've been reading all the Suisei stories and I'm yet to dream about her.

>>7070424
>Seriously considering writing a fic where the thread makes tender love to you
finally, a fic about my oshi

>>7069252
Lucky bastard. I can't dream of chuubas no matter how hard I try. Only time I did, I was holding Matsuri's hand and she was very shy and embarrassed. I would do anything to go back to it.

>>7070610
Maybe listen to some of her streams as you sleep? Perhaps karaoke? I've been listening to Fubuki's asmr as I go to sleep and have had a couple dreams about her so far. I don't remember one of them very well at all but strangely the other one was going fishing with her in a dinghy

>>7070716
Fuckinf archive anon in the mating press position! Lovingly filling archive anon up with your cum! Getting archive anon pregnant through the sheer force of your pure love! Raising dozens of beautiful children with archive anon!

>>7070895
We sure started early.

>>7070795
This. Hugging a pillow or bunching up blankets or something and holding it also helps. Just to be sure you should probably look into lucid dreaming techniques too.

>>7066633
after some of you fags have been begging for it, I'm trying to expand on "Petting your Fox" at the moment. I-it's not because I want to write it myself, I swear!
Like I mentioned before, I got a bit off rl stuff going on right now, so no promise if or when I can deliver on it...
Writing it is kind of a filthy, filthy - god, I am so sorry, Fubuki way to relax a little in the evenings, for now.

>>7070990
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH OH MY GOD HE'S DOING IT HOLY FUCK MY ENTIRE WEEK HAS BEEN MADE

>>7070778
It's never chuubas I actively watch either. I've dreamt of Subaru a handful of times, Luna (which was actually a bit like yours), some indies...never Polka, for example. I wish I knew what the fuck was going on in there.

>>7070990
So how does it feel to be writing hot, messy and sticky sex with everyone's favorite chubba matthew anon?

>>7070202

>Is this an adult Mori we're talking about?
Requester didn't specify but my impression was adult so I'm going with that.

I think it would be possible to make cute, maybe I'm wrong maybe I'm not, but one thing you are 100% correct about is that it will have to involve some level of comedy, whether that comedy is intentional or not is another matter.

>>7071089
I guess I was little lucky since Matsuri is my 2nd most watched holo, just behind Suisei but it's not enough. I NEED MORE.

>>7070990
You sir have single-handedly MADE my whole week.
I kneel before you as I eagerly await the continuation of this amazing story.
Thank you for your work and please don't worry about dates - take as much time as needed.

>>7068632
It's definitely fun, yes. (You) have a point too. I will go with scenario #2 first and write #1 if I feel like it. I think #2 is more dramatic and will probably make for a better happy ending, so I'll be going with that for now.

>>7068549
Thank (You) for the interest, Anon. I will try to!

>>7071218
I think that's a given regardless, because your stories are always an interesting read even if I need to read some of them on an empty stomach

>>7071160
I'm dreaming big. I want to write a story that Fubuki herself couldn't help but touch herself to. After her initial bout of pure disgust, of course.

Holy fuck I feel motivated now.

>>7071527
Thanks anon

>>7071582
Ah godspeed you absolutely beautiful bastard.

>>7070895
Hoo boy

>>7070895
Imagine archive anon keeping all of your children's school projects sorted in a box so you guys can proudly show them off to other people.

I also had a weird dream involving chuubas


The only real important/interesting parts where that I experienced some intensely traumatic events and wind up becoming a mental illness riddled mess
And that I suddenly find Ina in a crowd, years after she's graduated from hololive, and I only recognize her from her voice.

God, now that I think about it, its just like all those greentexts about old men struggling to remember their oshis. They must've affected me.

Only dream I've ever had involving chuubas was a few weeks ago, when I dreamt Ame and Coco somehow arrived on my back porch, and we just sat there eating donuts, which Coco had mysteriously brought.

I remember crying. For some reason.

>>7068900
> (you) are an online artist
> pretty talented, been doing that in your free time and has amassed a small following
> you draw anything, but mostly focus on tall, older, well-endowed ladies
> you never, for some reason, draw anything lewd, despite hundreds of requests
> you can draw extremely suggestive poses and facial expressions - you wouldn't draw as little as a rogue nipple peeking from the clothes
> nevermind drawing actual genitalia
> one day, some burner account messages you with a commission
> huge money, but you turn it down because porn
> pretty average day so far
> "Why won't you draw anything... Spicier than usual?"
> you copypaste the response, "It just doesn't come out right and ruins the whole picture etc. etc."
> "Are you a virgin?"
> you pause and reply "Yeah"
> a long pause, then a notificaton
> "@lizhi3 has mentioned you in a tweet "Wanna fix that?"
> below is a sketch of your OC, and one of her OCs having hot leglocking sex

>>7072533
Decades from now when half of us are suffering from the early stages of dementia, we'll be describing our oshis and the other old people will think we're talking about our actual deceased wives.

so anons, where is it?

>>7072677
>she was the most retarded girl I've ever seen, and I loved her with all my heart

>>7072749
>a biography that treats its subject with undue reverence.
Kinda fits this thread.

>>7072677
>"Boy, I tell you, she couldn't sing to save her life, but she was the best damn singer I ever heard. Out of tune, sure, but I hung on every word..."
>"O...kay, Reg."
>"And I've never known a woman since who hiccuped so much. I tell you, give 'er a bowl of soup...lessee, I think broccoli was 'er favorite...and she'd be lettin' off at least 7 an hour, probably more."
>"I see...(what is this fool on about...)"
>"She also LOVED 'yo mama' jokes...sure, they got old for a while, but when they landed, they LANDED..."
>"You take your medicine today?"
>"What d'you take me for, a schizo?"
>both men stare at each other, confused

>>7072629
I'd cry too if an absolutely stacked redhead and a blonde shortstack wanted to hang out with me.

>>7072749
>Meticulously documenting the bodies of hags

>>7073354
> Anon fucked so many hags that he came up with his own measuring units for tightness, sensitivity, stamina etc.
> just like that guy who was bitten/stung by 70-ish different species of insects/spiders(?) that he invented his own scale of pain and placed each species on it

>>7073496
>Each entry includes things like how fertile they are
>Every single one ends with something along the lines of "I absolutely need this, my cock has never been this hard" or "AAAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHH GET PREGNANT GET PREGNANT GETPREGNANTGETPREGNANT"

>>7072749
The entire archive. 99% of it has fics with hags in them.

>>7049949
Ame in the VW lead the way down I-95 until they hit road construction. Odd, she'd watched the news this morning and didn't see anything about that, that's why she specifically chose this route. No matter, she'd just take a back road. She pulled off and, right on her ass before the Mystery Machine could follow, a dark grey Ferrari 308 pulled behind her. Came out of nowhere too. "Damn!" Ame swore, startled. Still, she was adaptable. She attempted to slow, and pull to the side of the road to allow the rude Ferrari to pass, however, much to her surprise, instead of going around her the car slammed into her back end. "What the hell?!" The detective exclaimed, speeding up, only for the car to hit her again. She floored it, but the faster sports car easily kept pace. Ame had never been great at offensive driving so it was all she could do to keep the VW on the tight winding backroads. At times she'd see a place to pull off only for the Ferrari to pull up beside her, sideswiping her. She looked over to ID the driver and her eyes widened there wasn't one. The car was empty. She blinked and turned her attention back to the road, and saw she was heading towards an extremely sharp corner. She hit the breaks but they were locked. 'Oh God please don't let this car break on me now!' she thought. Fine, she'd take the corner at 80 even if she rolled the bug. She turned the wheel and almost broke her wrist: it too was locked up. "No no no no please, God, this isn't how I want to go!" She screamed as the Bug flew over the curb and into the forest. Ame closed her eyes and held the steering wheel, which began turning of it's own volition. Opening her eyes she stared in amazement. The car was dodging trees by itself! Amelia wondered if she had finally gone mad when she saw the lake ahead. She covered her face with her arms, expecting to run right into it but the car screeched o a halt. The door popped open too. "Go on, get out," the car said. The. Car. Said. "C'mon if we split up we can lose him!" "Who? What? I don't..?" Ame spouted questions but obediently grabbed her stuff and jumped out of the talking, self driving car. "I'll tell you when I get back! And I will come back. Oh, names Bumblebee, by the way, glad to meet you Amelia Watson!" The door slammed and the car drove off, back toward the road. Ame sat down hard on the bank of the lake wondering what the hell had just happened.

>>7063070
>>7063198
Understood. I'll keep that in mind if I ever get the craving to write more wax play.

>>7075504
The plot thickens, and still you haven’t missed a beat yet.
I’m legitimately excited to see where this ends up.

>>7076019
more shion bdsm would be very much appreciated. the last one was hot as fuck

Elves are attracted to the scent of human males. In a bid to make Flare like her more, Noel begs you to continually cover and fill her with your scent as much as possible.

>>7077341
wouldn't this result in flare falling for you and noel getting cucked?

>>7077591
Yes. Ending up with you having a cockdrunk Flare AND a mindbroken Noel.

>>7077654
IKUZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>7076718
That's definitely on my ideas list. I wasn't even all that into BDSM when I decided to write that story, but I think I may have developed a newfound appreciation for it.
Right now though I've got rabbit fluff to attend to.

>>7068575
Miko goes to grove street and tries to hang out with the gang and act like a gangster. Says the N word multiple times without knowing what it means and is forgiven because she's Japanese.

>>7077975
this but instead of being forgiven she's shot 42 times

>>7078032
and then you fuck her!

>>7077746
>Noel desperately giving you blowjobs/paizuri regularly letting you creampie her
>Flare gets incredibly clingy with Noel yet she has this yearning for the opposite sex that she never quite had before
>Flare tails Noel one day and it just happens to be one of Noels scheduled raw fuck sessions with (You)
>Flare watches in amazement at the things your strong male human body is able to do to Noel
>Nearly cums just from the scent of you
>Meets up with Noel only a little while after you and her finish and begs Noel to let her eat her out
>Noel nearly loses it from having this much sex in a single day but is BARELY able to keep it together
>The entire time flare is digging Noel out with her tongue she thinks about the exact directions to your place and resolves to go there the next day

this but /u/

>>7061831
Thats not Uto tho thats her sister

>>7069252
Heh. You're welcome. don't forget to subscribe to this cute dork

>>7080355
Someone MUST turn this dyke straight!

>>7080411
speaking of that, I always think its funny how the Nabi "family" actually do look like they could all be related to each other
ya know, just assuming there's a yellow haired fathere in there

>>7070990
I'm glad you want to continue with the story, as it's already one of my favs in the archive. Don't push yourself further than you want to go!

this bitch mentioned playing Bionicle and watching Power Rangers in her childhood with her male friends.

bros.... I want to write a fic of growing up with tomboy Selen, bringing your your Bionicles to her house and letting her be the Toa(heroes) while you played the part of the Bohrok(villains).

>>7068575
I've never been into rape before, but the idea of raping Coco has seemed really hot to me recently, I need a fic about it

>>7068575
Please make me happy again.

>>7061831
>only one futa on (You) fic
we can do better

>>7081445
Are you gay anon?

>>7081445
I was making a Risu futa on (you) but i dropped it/put it on the shelf for now in favor of a futa fuckfest with Mori & Cocock and the funnies.

>>7081445
That’s pretty gay, anon…

>>7081546
>>7081609
Maybe, but only female dick is acceptable

>>7081546
>>7081609
There's nothing gay about pleasing a woman. Doesn't matter if she has a cock or not.

>>7081671
Taking dick up your ass is inherently gay

>>7081694
It makes you a little sub bitch, but it doesn't make you gay if only girls do it for you

>>7081445
with the constant noelcuck-posting, I'm just imagining Noel becoming pointlessly paranoid about Flare leaving her for a man that can get her pregnant, so she decides to impregnate Flare first

>>7081415
Nobody can make you happy again, tired shark anon.

>>7068575
Lamy begging and pleading to suck milk straight from Noel's tits.

>>7081776
I can. I'll make them the happiest Anon in the world. As my wife.

>>7081776
I figured as much. Guess this is it.

>>7081895
Lamy begging to suck milk straight from your tits.

>>7082027
B-but Anon it would be l-lewd if Lamy tried to suck milk from my masculine nipples....

>>7082106
What if she made you lamy first...

>>7082022
I'm gonna SAVE
HUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH

>>7082163
I'm Not My Oshi! I'M ME! ANON THE HORNY!

>>7082337
(YOU) ARE ALLREADY LAMY

>>7082337
You sound like the very worst kind of back-of-the-newspaper comic strip.
And I love it.

>>7081895
Man... as a lactationfag, the idea of Lamy and Noel simultaneously drinking from each-other's tits in a titty sixty-nine is incredibly arousing. Not a lot of that around, no matter the media.

>>7082469
>lactationfag
I bet I could name any fetish and someone in this thread would have it

>>7082449
>>7082467
JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?! I'M ANON! MY COCK, IS THE COCK THAT WILL PIERCE (YOU)R OSHI!

>>7082555
I want Polka to bite me to the point of bleeding then lap at my wounds while stroking my peepee.

>>7082555
That is fair but lactation is a patrician fetish

>>7082566
Yes, that's right, you are.
Now let's get you back to bed, grandma...

>>7082692
Anon..... I'm sorry but your grandma.... your grandma is gone...... I'm.. I'm me.

>>7082749
MY GRANDMA IS GONE, SHE'S DEAD

>>7082785
GUUUURRRRAAAAAA MY GRANDMA DIED! LEEETTTSSSSS FUCKING IKUZOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

>>7082749
No, not grandma! How could this happen?!

How did I get roped into shitty RP? And why am I enjoying myself?

Please wait for bump limit to shitpost onegai...

>>7082812
Because you love derailing the thread.

>>7082832
Not really. I was probably gonna stop there. Can't speak for the others, though.

>>7082618
It is and I can't believe I only wrote it into one story so far.

>>7082918
Writeanon onegai.......

>>7082918
You mean Nenecchi's Morning Milk? Cause that's good shit and I'm not even all that interested in lactation.

I am the thread anon. No one can derail the derailer

>>7083400
If you actually are I will no longer tolerate the existence of any and every Lamy

>>7082980
Yep. Most likely will do something with Aqua or Watame next time around.

>>7068575
Ahem......Gyaru Holo's...that is all.

>>7084016
I agree with this post.

>>7084016
Does that fucking gen 5 in high school series count as gyaru or not?

>>7084016
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnAo2PXQcJg
There can never be enough gyaru holo content.

>>7084079
Well bullies aren't necessarily gyaru but assertive personalities ARE an aspect of gyaru.

>>7052262
Please write more I need sappy fluff about tending my pregnant Selen wife

>>7083400
B-Boss Lamy your here

>>7084768
That's not boss lamy. They go by a tripcode. Also they aren't polite at all, nor do they speak like Boss Lamy. At this time they are sleeping i believe.

https://youtu.be/H_fmVsG--tQ
One of us, one of us

>>7084815
Ah I see an imposter trying to make us look bad how rude

>>7084016
Ogyayu makes me horny like you wouldn't believe

>>7084880
He's not wrong though. "Boss Lamy" uses a tripcode, which Lanomymous doesn't. They also both speak completely differently.

>>7084880
>Never got around to writing the story about fucking Boss Lamy until Lamyfication takes over
shit

>>7085027
YOU STILL HAVE TIME TO CORRECT THIS ANON

>>7084721
I'm already thinking of a sequel where I give the child Bionicle toys to play with while letting her know that her mother used to play these in her childhood.

Yes, her latest stream really hit me. yfw you will never have a childhood tomboy female friend who plays Bionicle and watch Power Rangers with you.

>>7085366
anon why

>>7085075
Eventually. I don't think I have the strength to write back to back chain sex before the condoms run out and it ends with lovey-dovey final-actions-as-Anon sex.

Lazulight lesbian lewd prompt?

>>7085366
>Two autistic retards pretending to be power ranger in one of their backyards
>The two of you roughhousing and she overpowers you because tomboy
>Disassembling your bionicles to try and make a cooler one than each other
>As you both grow older you just never have any interest in the opposite sex because you always compare potential partners to each other
>Eventually you both realize that you're just retarded and you've liked each other all this time
>Start dating at very young age
>Lose virginities at very young age
>Everyone says you'll eventually break up because young relationship but you're both too autistic and stubborn to ever leave each other

>>7085634
then she gets hit by a car and you sit by her side as she dies

>>7085541
Pomu is too retarded to understand sexual contents or even lesbianism itself, so Elira takes advantage of this for some easy retard rape and the slightly more knowledgeable Finana gets brought into the mix when she tries to stop what's going on but realizes Pomu is really good at eating out despite being retarded (also she's Pomu)

>>7085661
Haha no it's only fluff and happy haha

>>7085694
Who's Pomu?

>>7085726
nothing good lasts forever, and eventually that fluffy happiness will give way to grief and despair as you long for the happier times, when everything was better and life seemed perfect, but those times are long gone, and so is she

>>7085754
I'm Pomu!

>>7085807
DepressionChama...

>>7085634
yes this is good, something I will mull on.

>>7085661
if you want pain, you don't cop out with something as easy as this. You want it to fester and grow like mold until it's too late.

>accidentally get her pregnant one day
>she wants to keep the baby, but you tell her that you two retards can never take care of a kid properly.
>arguments increase and compound. You're stressed about how to take care of a child with your financial status, Selen remains stubborn to keep the baby.
>reach a breaking point where you accidentally hit Selen in a bout of anger, she takes a hard fall.
>Selen has a miscarriage due to her fall, and your relationship is forever scarred.
>she (rightfully)breaks up with you, and you never see here again.
>the two of you become husks of yourselves for the remainder of your lives.

Please don't make me write pain again. I can't stop the dark thoughts once it starts.

>>7085988
you're right, it's sad that we only have one miscarriage story because they're such an excellent source of pain

>>7086075
wait which fic?

>>7086150
"While my guitar gently weeps." It's one of my personal favorites and in my opinion the saddest story in the archive

Holy fuck it's so hard to write 4 characters all in one scene. If i focus on a conversation with one i can't do the reaction to the others and it feels like they've been silent for too long so it feels wrong. Fuck's sake what do i even make Gura say while she sits on a cock and it's owner is talking to someone else about someone else also in the room. This is absolutely not an easy task. Shit, I'm gonna have to go back and add some thoughts she might be having, she's been silent for too long. Worst is there's like less than 5 stories in which chuubas interact on more than 1 on 1 so i can't get much reference.

>>7086303
shove something in her mouth

>>7086334
I already literally butchered Shion's character by having her not speak at all in the last 1k words from having a cock in her mouth so I can't do the same with Gura. I am planning to, just not yet. I can't even add thought dialogue to Shion because this is technically through Gura's perspective.

>>7086383
There's only one thing you can do, then.

Gura has to be busy rimming you. She has to have her tongue in your ass.

>>7086463
There's no (you) in this story. That's why it's so hard and why I'm (kind of) doing Gura's perspective. It's 4 girls fucking each other. I think i got this, as soon as that cock leaves Shion's throat I'll try and add some dialogue to her. fuck, her throat is gonna be full of cum i can't actually give her much dialogue

>>7068575
Pekora was not a princess! she was only pretending and cannot even pronounce the name of the royal family, she's actually a low ranking commoner!

>>7086557
4 girls ? But then where the penis coming from.....Anon

>>7086185
oh yeah that fic, that one fucking broke me man i definitely agree its one of the saddest/ hardest hitting fics to come out of these threads.

>>7086616
The real penis was the friends we made along the way.

>>7086621
It's even sadder for me since it's about my oshi, only fic that's actually made me cry a little

>>7086303
Have you tried changing up your writing style a bit? The most common format of writing big paragraphs of descriptions seperated by dialogue doesn't work that well with a lot of characters doing something at the same time. If you seperate dialogue with just one or two sentences of how the others react, it could make your life easier.

For example, instead of:

Gura: "Anon, Anon!"

Anon: "I am going to eat your ass my friend."

Shion: "*Muffled cock sucking sounds.*"

<Insert one long paragraph describing everyones actions, reactions, and some other stuff. Somehow.>


You instead do this:

<Insert Guras behaviour right before talking>

Gura: "Anon, Anon!"

<Insert Anons behaviour as he notices Gura calling him>

Anon: "I am going to eat your ass my friend."

<Insert Shions reaction of trying to get herself free from the cock in her mouth to talk, but failing>

Shion: "*Muffled cock sucking sounds.*"

<Insert short paragraph of other stuff>

This makes writing multiple characters easier, but makes the text more chaotic to read. But with this many characters, it's bound to be chaotic anyways

>>7086383
"Damn that's some tight cunny," moaned Coco. Her sharp fingers scratched at Gura's hair who managed to talk between gasps. "insert cute and funny speech here... and gasps" She said. Mori leaned over, face flushed as Shion went insane of her cock. "Guh! You need to use this brat after." Gura watched awed as Shion took a cock longer than her arm. Coco clutched Gura's flat chest. "Oh I'll have Shion give me some good fucking moaning trust me."

I guess just throwing dialogue in between like that might work. I'm not really sure what this example is but it was fun

>>7081445
>>7068575
Polka goes on a menhera tantrum, whining to Botan about how she'll always be lonely and never experience the joys of motherhood, expecting emotional support from the hag who must surely understand what she's going through.

The solution-minded lioness instead declares that she has a way to solve Polka's problem for good.
Without anymore explanation than that she unzips her skirt, pulls down her tightly-fit underwear, and shows off her massive barbed cock.

>>7086788
>barbed cock
Accurate for a lion but also still terrifying

I'm concerned with the amount of futafags recently. Where are they all coming from?

>>7086867
Pretty sure they’ve been around for a while. They’ve been a bit more vocal as of late, but I don’t think they’re all that new.

>>7086788
Okay but what if someone wrote that without them being gay together and botan being a futa?

>>7086927
the only thing worse than futa is lesbianism

>>7086867
Would rather have them or the piss, shit, and fart people?

For one I'm tired of (YOU) being the one fucking.

>>7086936
I did preface that last part with an >without anon.

>>7086927
It's about Polka getting pregnant. rubbing pussies together can't make you pregnant.

>>7086959
I would rather have piss and shit, not fart though, otherwise HE might appear again

>>7086959
to be fair, they ARE comedic masterpieces

>>7087001
I’ve been here, acting like a civil anon, just so you know.

>>7086975
Then what's the point? She just has a cock and that's it?

>>7086982
And I basically said what if its not about sex but the support that fennec wants?
If she absolutely needs a child there are other ways to give her one, and you probably shouldn't put the dick you don't have in crazy.

>>7087035
NTA but i couldn't tell you were here unlike literally every other thread and it seems like that anon couldn't either so congrats, you assimilated. keep doing what you're doing

>>7087173
If it allows me to shake the reputation my NyQuil/head-cold spree gave me, I’d be glad to.

You have no idea how much bullshit people have been blaming on me because of all that.

>>7087173
they did always just pop in and then ducked out, so i think they had been assimilated for a while now

>>7087238
It's like a kid saying they got drunk on fucking juice trying to use it as en excuse. Holy shit you already said this 50 times. You even went and said you got drunk on fucking syrup. Just admit you're retarded and stop it. Just stop bringing this shit up. You also don't have to reply whenever someone mentions you, it literally just makes you look worse. Hopefully this is the last time i have to reply to your bullshit.

>>7087314
i appreciate that sometimes you gotta vent and lay the smackdown on schizos but don't forget that extreme hostility was how we got the earlyfag and the subsequent spammers

We need some anon on anon smut to breed some love in this thread so we can all come together and be filled with the love our neighbors

>>7087399
He triggered me out of my writing zone. I couldn't help it. Now i gotta get back into the groove. And unlike those examples, this guy is the real deal, not bait, which makes it much worse. I just wanna stop talking about this already every single thread.

>>7087453
go have a tug, it'll refresh your brainium

>>7087453
Last time I’m going to say anything about this, then we can hopefully drop it. I’m getting tired of dredging it up as well, it only makes me look worse as things go on:
I said COUGH syrup, implying the alcoholic medicine I downed over a third a bottle of. Call me retarded, but at least get your facts straight first.

>>7087064
Easy for you to say when you aren't with a girl that looks like this begging for a lover to fill her cervix with cum.

>>7087506
Look, I’m tired of inadvertently derailing threads whenever I’m here. I feel legitimate remorse for my actions.
I probably wouldn’t have even said anything in my defense if I hadn’t been misblamed for some schizo’s autism earlier tonight.

I hope this is the last I ever have to say on this topic. I just want to move on.

>>7087830
you still haven't quite figured out what it means to be anonymous. the brapfag is an autistic schizo and that'll never change here, but if you didn't reply stating you were him, we wouldn't have known. so just don't announce yourself.

unless it's the brapfag identity you care about, in which case 4chan isn't for you. try reddit.

>>7087902
Very well. That’s the last you’ve heard from him, in that case.

>>7087972
glad to hear it, anon

Would Gura be able to casually (kind of) converse with her genmate while sitting on a 9 inch cock? Or is that too much against her character? I'm going for a "cracking jokes to try and dismiss the dire and sudden situation she is in" kind of feel but i might be too casual about this. I don't watch EN too much, i think i got Mori well enough but Gura is harder. At least i finally sat down and wrote over 1k words in one go. Maybe i should just sleep on it.

>>7088345
id ont think anyone could converse when they are getting impaled

>>7088549
See, there's more context but if i go into more detail/keep asking for advice it would be better to just post the whole damn story.

to keep it short, Coco penetrated her like 1k words ago, but just left her sitting on her cock while she talked to Mori which would supposedly give her time to recover.

>>7066633
Korone punishing Okayu for just hiding dirty dishes in the cupboard instead of washing

>>7066633
A weird-ass dream sequence.

>>7088630
you're writing something i'm INTENSELY interested in, anon.

>>7088941
I'm aware some people here may be enthusiastic about what I'm doing. I'm mostly new to writing so I'm hoping to deliver a good end result. Unfortunately for you, I'm quite lazy, taking roughly 2 months to draw something, and writing is the same. I'll probably finish this by the end of next month if you're lucky lol

>>7089286
as long as it gets done, i'll be happy. Best of luck to you.

I know it's been asked before to writeanons regarding expectations and stuff, but I'd like to ask something slightly different to break the monotony.

Writeanons, what do you feel when someone mentions any of your works, whether it be in a good or bad light, or just giving you some (you)s. Does it make you feel self-conscious or you don't really care since you've already banged it out?

And for readers, what are the works that you're glad about in this general?

>>7076178
You and me both man


>>7075504
Bumblebee crashed through the brush and slammed directly into their pursuer, the Stunticon Wildrider. The Ferrari was wholely unprepared for the collision and went off the other side of the road into a grove of trees. Rolling and slamming the gray car stopped, stunned, upside down. With the ratcheting of complex mechanisms Bumblebee transformed, Stinger at the ready. He lept, coming down hard on the center of the stunned car and opened fire into the Decepticon's exposed undercarriage, each blast melting metal. Bee hated this. He wasn't normally this cruel, didn't normally aim to kill, but when dealing with any of the insane Stunticons you had to disable, Wildrider, the psychopath, was the worst. Bringing him near death...even killing him was the only way to get him to back down. Wildrider began to get his bearings, and immediately tried to transform, but Bee had already partially melted his transformation matrix, next to his spark core, so the Con just flailed around into a mess of metal not able to fully transform. Bumblebee lept off the bigger robot, who was screaming in hatred and pain, and saw the exposed spark core. Knowing he didn't have time to waste but still wracked with guilt he leveled the Stinger and fired.

Watson was where he'd left her, of course, and he pulled back in to the spot by the lake. "Sorry that took so long, Ma'am. I'm back." Ame stood with her arms crossed. She'd head the fighting, the explosions. "I'm glad you're ok." The human smiled. "Now can you tell me what's going on?" Bee pushed aside his feelings of what he had to do, and with a chipper "Of course, Miss Watson!" Opened his door for her. "I can talk on the way to Miami. Lets go, I feel trouble brewing and I'm not just talking about the Decepticons." "Ok sounds good!" Ame climbed in. "What's a Decepticon?" Bee smiled to himself. "Well, let's start at the beginning." He maneuvered himself back onto the road, and headed towards Miami.

>>7089734
I'm just happy for the quick dopamine fix. And if they have criticism that's actually constructive, I'd be glad to hear it.

>>7089734
I'm always very, very happy whenever someone cites my works as something that they consider inspiration or their favorites, few and far between as it is. I try not to be so hung up on criticism/praise but it's ingrained in me, I guess. Criticism sort of strikes me through like an icicle but I do take it to heart.

>>7089734
(You)s and constructive criticisms are always appreciated especially since I'm an ESLfag. It also feels good when people say they've shed liquid over my works, be it tears or cum.

Kintsugi and Girl of Emptiness are probably my favorites. My fucked up attention span usually makes it hard to read long stories but they somehow managed to keep me interested until the end.

>>7089734
I personally love it. It's encouraging to know that others are reading and hopefully enjoying my work. Intelligent critiques and criticism are always nice too, and there are times when someone has said something that has effected the story greatly. A prime example is when I was still writing the Big HoloEN story and had made Ina into a Mary-Sue character. I received much feedback on that that solidified going back and toning it down. To this day I still appreciate that. As for kind works, well who isn't thankful for those! Be it appreciation, support, criticism, and critique I am always happy to receive feedback.

https://youtu.be/H_fmVsG--tQ
>The chances of Ollie/Risu having read our fanfics has gone up slightly once again

>>7089776
Freddy put the pay phone back on the hook then breathed a sigh of relief and returned to the front of the store where everyone was waiting. "Like, you ok man?" Shaggy asked. "Normally you don't pull off for a bathroom break." Fred shot him a grin and in a voice that sounded hollow in his own ears replied "Yeah Shaggy, I'm great! Did you get all the snacks you wanted?" "For sure man!" He held up a bag brimming with junk food. "Haha! Alright! Let's blow this joint!" He got Daphne and Velma's attention and went back to the van, where Scooby waited. After a while of driving and talking the rest of the gang left to go get high and fool around in the back, and Fred was finally alone with his thoughts. Boy, did he feel shitty. He knew that he was doing what he had to, and how right Mr. Vercetti was about Ame, but he still felt awful. He hated working with the mob and, hated selling out Scooby's old girlfriend, hated the fact that he had to gaslight his friends into doing this, hated lying about Scrappy, all of it. But he didn't have a choice. They had him by the balls and they both knew it, if it ever came to light that he was dating a guy that dressed like a girl his dad would disown him. He couldn't be written out of the will, no sir! He needed his families money for...well lots of things. He sighed and was passed a joint, which he gladly took a toke of. It tasted like Daph's pussy, and that was nice, then he handed it back. He wished he could have talked Scoob out of going to Miami, but...he sighed and dropped the line of thought because at the end lay a hard truth that he'd been struggling with this entire time. He may have to kill Scooby-Doo.

>>7089734
Thinking about my writing, I love people talking about it. I don't like creative writing to start with because of the mental stress, so all the satisfaction comes from the smiles on your faces and the stains on your tissues.

As a reader, I'm a smut lover. I read fluff and whatnot as it's posted in the thread, but I don't go hunting for it in the archive... unless it's Fubuki. I read smut and I write smut, and often the sexual thrill isn't the main attraction - I usually don't even get off to it - but because sex feels like the culmination and celebration of a relationship.
So as much as I'd love to say I value all works that are generated, I do love some more than others.

I respect and love all you writeanons though. I've only been here about 3 months but I love this thread. It feels like a home away from home

>>7090301
>Ollie used to write fanfics
>OLLIE COULD BE WRITING FOR US RIGHT NOW

>>7091383
>There is a chance Ollie got off to a fanfic written by any of us
>There is a chance you got off to a story written by Ollie

In English? Slow down, buckaroo
>>7091714

>want to see how many stories I've put out
>Can't sort by things I've created because of everything I put in G. Docs for the archive
I didn't think this through.

>>7092623
Should have put them all in one folder zero-foresight-chama

>>7089734
I've only ever posted one story here, but it seemed to be well received by Anons, which I'm very glad for.
I haven't seen my story mentioned anywhere in talks, but when it comes to anything I've created (be it a story, drawing or whatever) I always feel an odd sense of pride if my works have been cited as a source of inspiration or enjoyment. I take criticism a bit like a slap in the face, but I always take it to heart and try to learn from it as much as I can.

As for stories that I'm glad exist - Exposure Therapy, Petting Your Fox, Fubuki Comfort, Menhera Wrangler series, Mioposting, Fluffy, "No Friend, Waifu!", "Fubuki and Overly Nice Boyfriend", "Doing Fubuki in her butt", "While my guitar gently weeps", "Devilish Deeds" and Kintsugi are among the ones that come to mind.
I love fluff and smut equally, but always lean more on the fluff side, which is why I appreciate fluffy stuff in my smut immensely. Truth be told, I don't really get off to smut. It does turn me on most of the time, but I've always seen sex as the culmination of a relationship, so I actively look for fluff-filled smut.
Out of all the stories, I actively seeked out the ones that had Fubuki in them. The rest - I happened upon by chance and ended up loving.

Also, let me just express my gratitude to all the writeanons in this thread. All of (You) guys are incredibly gifted in writing (or coming up with scenarios) and I love all of you. I've been here for a relatively short time (like 4 months or so) but you guys make this place feel like a home away from home.
So, for all the hours spent reading your stories - thank you.

>>7093537
What did ya write, anon?

>>7089734
Makes me really happy when people talk about what I have written. Does not really matter to me if it's in a good or bad way, I'm just glad that people are acknowledging my efforts.

>>7083634
that pretty rough :(

>>7093716
Pretty much this. As small as it may be, it's a wonderful, reassuring feeling.

>>7093706
Cuddly fox.

>>7089734

As >>7089845
>>7089854
>>7090048
>>7090050
>>7091214
>>7093537

have aptly put, it is almost exclusively a positive experience when someone mentions your work. The only time it is not, is when non-constructive criticism is used. For example I have seen some anons (and this is rare I will admit) complain about stories because it has a fetish or something they hated, despite the prose itself being perfectly good quality. But on the whole there is a good relationship between writers and readers (apart from the odd schizo) in this general from what I've seen and hopefully it stays that way.

As for stories I personally enjoyed :
Love Bites 1 & 2 and other stories by that writeanon
Imagine Mori's Smell
A Deal with Death
Bibi's Valiant Battle
Hidden Sea Buried Deep
A Brat's Punishment

And many more plus there is still a lot of stories I haven't read yet so I look forward to that too. Keep up the good work writeanons and readanons alike.

>>7089734
I love most of the stories from this thread but I especially love Exposure therapy because of the Anon's background. Makes me imagine him as Kiryu Kazuma for some reason and that brings a giggle to me everytime.

>>7094010
>A Brat's Punishment
Thanks for the dopamine, doc!

>>7094316
You know that's one thing I've been increasingly interested as well. I love reading about the chuubas but it's a cherry on the top when the anon or (you) in a fic has nice well written characterization.

>>7094010
I'm glad to see that my Love Bites stories are so well received here. I also wrote A Deal with Death and I already started writing the sequel.

>>7094007
Just read the whole thing! Saccharine-sweet fic, anon, like eating sugar-glazed candy floss.

>>7095377
As far as I can tell you're the only writeanon that tackles those types of themes, what I would call exploring the sensual/loving aspects of gore/cannibalism which is incredibly interesting to read, for me at least. And I'll also say I've taken a good deal of inspiration from your prose for my own stories too.

> I also wrote A Deal with Death and I already started writing the sequel.

Brilliant, I'm already looking forward to it! and best of luck writeanon, you keep doing you.

>>7089734
Its cool to receive any sort of compliment or criticism.
I'm also fairly certain I inspired someone else to write a fic, and that's so fucking cool, you have no idea.

>>7094810
It’s strange, these are supposed to be self-inserts but I quite like it when the protag has a backstory and character development.

>>7095658
I think that consensual guro is a topic that deserves much more recognition but barely anyone writes about it so I decided to take matters into my own hands. The background lore of the girls I have written about practically begs for stories like that (shark-human hybrid/time travel device/pact with otherworldly gods). I can also see Kiara fit in perfectly into a story like that with her phoenix background.

The problem with gory stories like that or with smut in general is that you eventually start to repeat yourself and that's basically what keeps me from writing lately. Every time I try to write some gore or smut I realize that I have written the exact same scenes before. I mean, how do you even bring some variety in a cannibalism scene? Make her eat a pancreas instead of a spleen? But that's just my blogpost.

>>7091383
she wrote that one deal with death fic, bet

>>7094007
Hey dude, I just read your story. Like the other anon said, it was incredibly sweet - your writing is clear and concise, you know how to write dialogue and frankly if I was a gosling for FBK this story might have done critical damage.

Only criticism I have is purely subjective, so it can be completely ignored, but for posterity's sake I thought it was too sweet. FBK deliberately keeps everyone at arm's length, and it's a constant pain that one must accept if you oshi her; seeing her written so devoted to you actually felt out of character. Call me a faggot schizo if you like.

Thanks for the read anon. I hope to see more from you in the future, because it was a cute little yarn.

>>7089734
I won't lie, whenever I post a story i always have a nagging feeling that it'll disappoint, so eventually when people say it's good and stuff makes me happy. But it's when people really get into talking about how much my story has affected them is where I would say I feel the proudest about my story. When I finished the menhera wrangler series and people mentioned how the bittersweet ending really hit hard, it did feel like I managed to accomplish my goal with writing the story. I also appreciated the criticisms that came with it, and I'll use it in my future works.

As a reader, I'm genuinely glad to read through most of the works. Some I use for inspiration for characterization and storytelling like holofantasy, holocalypse, cover high, etc, but also just as masturbatory material and fun(I've read Sleeping Beauty multiple times just because of the incredibly sensual descriptions).

All in all, I'm genuinely glad to have stumbled, contributed and take part in the collection of anons that reside in this thread. Keep writing, keep reading, and keep shitposting /wg/

>>7096535
too on the nose
she probably about Matsuri or something

>>7096187
hey, good for you, anon. it's a swell feeling when something you create changes others.

>>7096771
sleeping beauty was something else. you can tell the author is pouring their passion for butt stuff into the work. the descriptive text was so sensual it pulls you in, as if you're there yourself. top-shelf in the spank bank, that one

also i have gushed over your menhera series many times before so i'll keep it simple and say thanks for making me cry, anon

>>7093537
It's really nice to know that my first ever fic No Friend, Waifu! is actually someone's favourite. Brings a genuine smile to my face.

>>7062327
I tried to write something grander but felt it subpar, so I settled for the only section I'm somewhat satisfied with.

Polka and Rain: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQxFzsrqdtsfvuoTFCGmxlKIINB0ifyz3CcoNKylnIiM77RCRf_t_SDCsrOOHjNdF0uid6RdsqgAvr2/pub

Feedback would be appreciated.

>>7097710
Jesus fucking christ anon that hurt
Amazing job, if this was subpar to you i can only imagine your peak. Gambare, authanon!

>>7094010
Glad you enjoyed my weird towa bibi smut. Funny how that's the one I expected the least from.

>>7097710
I felt a massive disconnect between what you seemed to want me to feel and what I actually felt. You established Polka has been spiralling out of control over her feelings of inferiority, noting that she was, for lack of a more fitting phrase, acting like a cunt. But as we listen to her abuse you, her sole caretaker and companion - ie, the only person she has left whom she can rely on - there's a sudden massive tonal shift as anon says something hurtful and we go into depression mode. This isn't just lurching in itself, but rather the string of increasingly alarming actions by anon to redeem himself in the eyes of an attention whore wallowing in self-pity for the capital offence of raising your distaste.

I didn't feel anything when Polka died and to be honest, I felt anon's suicide was richly deserved.

I would feel empathy in a real life scenario, but in this situation I'm keenly aware that the author's intention is to evoke an emotional response and I felt like the sudden lurch in Polka's character development at the start built one particular attitude then suddenly asked me to take a drastically different one.

Last thing I want is for you to think I'm a dickhead taking the piss out of your work, I read the whole thing and wrote this because I wanted to respect your work by putting effort into an opinion.

Writeanons, which aspect of your writing do you think needs the most work?

>>7095622
Thank you for the read! I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it! Your words genuinely made me happy!

>>7096569
Thank you for the read, as well! I'm glad you found it enjoyable!
As for your criticism - I absolutely agree with you. Even after reading through it so many times, I kept thinking that maybe I made Fubuki a bit too out of character. But to be fair, my headcanon is that while she does keep everyone at an arm's length as you said, I do think that if she were to get in a relationship, she'd be extremely devoted. Not in an unnerving kind of way, but still quite devoted.
Overall, I agree with your criticism, I could've done better when characterizing her, but at the end of the day, I wanted it to be just a fluffy story for my personal enjoyment (and hopefully others' as well).
Regardless, thank you for the criticism! It's greatly appreciated!

Thank you for the read as well! Hearing you say you want to read more from me makes me extremely happy!
I'm currently brainstorming on a other Fubuki story I feel like writing, but I can't tell when will that be.

>>7097710
I didn't need tears before noon man

Is today polka day? I was gonna do a polka fic too.

>>7099308
I'm working on some polka too

>>7099122
Dialogue and proofreading. I know enough to know that I absolutely suck with the both of them. I don't know about any other aspects of work as weird as that sounds. I genuinely don't know if I'm bad at writing or if I'm just being too hard on myself.

>>7099122
probably need to turn down the grandeur, or keep things simpler. When I write a story that focuses on multiple characters, some unfortunately fall into the dreaded "npc" or "filler" role which I am trying to avoid. I do however, genuinely wish to write a story where I can impart a genuine lesson/message in it. Heroism, sacrifice, compromise, and making hard choices are things I always have a thing to insert in the works I write.

But i suppose that needs more writing reps from my end.

>>7099122
Varying sentence structure, better vocabulary, and overall just getting better at describing both actions and environment.

>>7099122
Paragraph structure and not misspelling names in the first sentence.

>>7099122
Actually putting in the effort to write. I've got all these ideas I'd like to put to notepad, but that means struggling with my brain for hours on end to find the words to express these ideas, and it's so much easier to start up a video game...

>>7099708
Ah are you the anon that wrote that Botan short fic a few threads ago?

>>7099708
boton?

>>7099738
>>7099743
Shit you caught me.

>>7099122
Length. I really put an effort into something I think is good, and it tops out at 2000 words. I have no idea how people regularly extrude 8k word bricks.

>>7099761
it was pretty funny, anon
i'm having a little chuckle thinking about it

>>7099709
are you me?

>>7099787
There's nothing wrong with 2k words. If you can finish the story you wanted to tell, then it doesn't really matter how long it is.

>>7099122
I think I need to have more confidence in my writing. Like I find it difficult to read through my own fics to improve myself because I end up cringing way too damn much.

Also side note, does anyone find it weird to write about your oshi while watching your oshi at the side? I find it uncomfortable especially while writing smut about them but I want to keep on working even while watching Fubuki.

>>7099812
If it made you laugh would it count as a fluffy tragedy?

>>7099919
not quite. the double suicide was a sombre affair

>>7100055
It was so they could go find each other faster in the next life though, so its not all bad.

>>7099900
Honestly... it turns me on more. You know how you imagine someone speaking something, but for various reasons, you might not be able to reconstruct their voice well in your mind? Hearing her voice tends to make it easier for me to apply that voice to the scenes I'm writing.

>>7100095
I sure hope there is a next life for their sake, then!

>>7099826
Yes I am, Adrian. I'm your conscience reaching out to you in a medium you find most comfortable. Neither of my posts actually exist.

You know why I'm appearing here, don't you? You've been avoiding this thought for a long time, but you can't escape your own mind.

You jerked off into her panties. You shouldn't have, but you did, and now she's pregnant - and who's taking responsibility for that child?

>>7096771
I'm pretty honored you've read my story multiple times and found it useful for inspiration!

>>7097360
I'm glad you feel that way about Sleeping Beauty. I thought it went kind of unnoticed when I posted it and don't see it brought up much so I was wondering if it ended up either too long or wasn't too interesting, or if Rushia just isn't popular.

You're right though I did pour all my lust for Rushia's ass into that story and I'll fuckin' do it again.

>>7100687
authanon, it is no lie that Sleeping Beauty is an incredible piece of smut which I am sure will be lauded through the ages as long as /wg/ exists.

You've also made her a prime chuuba I would like to plow endlessly into, regardless of her menhera qualities, and I'm not usually one for lolis, much less crazy ones.

>>7100687
you are right, the tsundere rushia is kind of unappealing

>>7068575
You decide to mess with your girlfriend Rushia by pretending to be throw a yandere fit after she streams with Tamaki. You get a touch too into it, but she really enjoys it.

>>7099122
Need more shitposts and autistic jokes. Atleast every second sentence needs to be able to trigger an epileptic attack

First time being a writeanon. Currently writing that Aqua prompt where she accosts you with marriage proposals after you saved her from falling down a flight of stairs. This'll unironically be good practice for when I actually begin my more original works.

>>7102261
Hey I requested that! Thank you writeanon for writing more retard Onion.

Question to writeanons to gauge level of skill. Would (you) be able to write academic text like pic related on a chuuba with your current vocabulary and knowledge/skill?

>>7102504
Hahaha, no.

>>7102504
I'd rather make people cum, cry, or heave a happy sigh rather than fall the fuck asleep or stop reading

>>7102504
No, absolutely not. I may know what those words mean, but being able to recall them when attempting to express an idea is a whole different skill.

>>7102611
>cum, cry or leave a happy sigh
sick rhymes bro

>>7102504
Main issue with theses like this is the amount of needlessly obtuse academic-level english which looks impressive but is saying very little with lots of words

>>7102646
Thanks, I didn't mean to when I wrote it.

If you highlight text before replying it will automatically quote

>>7102504
I'll be honest, anon, half of those words sound straight out of Corporate Bullshit Generator and most likely have no real-world use outside of the circlejerk that is academia.

So while I'm pretty well-acquainted with corporate bullshit and I could probably write 500 words or more but say absolutely nothing coherent or of real value, but sound cool doing so to a panel of self-important C-Level narcissists, I'd much rather write something fun instead.

>>7102504
Unironically yes.

>>7102731
>If you highlight text before replying it will automatically quote

oh shit

>>7102731
i'm phoneposting for reasons i'd need to move to a different ip to explain

>>7102774
Unless you're using some app it works when you phonepost too

>>7102774
Venezuela or SEA?

>>7102836
yeah, it's just a massive pain in the ass working with the touch screen

>>7102860
straya

>>7102504
I'm sorry is this a real paper or just some BS someone made?

>>7102878
Wait if Straya then why do you need to protect yourself? Are you being hunted by chinks or something?

>>7102909
There's another thread currently about it. The OP has the full document linked.

>>7102909
Enjoy
http://su.diva-portal.org/smash/get/diva2:1562108/FULLTEXT01.pdf

>>7102937
oh, no specific reason. just couldn't mention it on 4chan

>>7102996
Wantedcriminalchama...

New thread
>>7103113

Reminder to post here until archive

>>7103215
fuck you i won't do what you told me

needed to post the usual anchors

>>7102996
McAfeechama?

>>7102504
I've already written academic texts but in my mother language. I'm not sure if I'd be able to do that in english.

>>7103018
>>7103404
no and no, i'm not in legal trouble. it's a bit simpler than that

>>7103537
Running from mafiachama?

>>7099122
the will to write part

>>7102504
I can. But I don't because I operate under the assumption my readers want to have fun and don't want to read someone writing up pseudo intellectual term paper.

>>7102504
Someone made a story about Towa raping Kanata that was pretty much made exactly like this. The overuse of long words, almost as if to fill up the story, was pretty comedic and actually gave me an unexpected chuckle. I think it was the weirdanon who made it. Whilst reading the whole thing i was wondering what the hell am i even reading. Can't help but wonder if that was their goal.

>>7100944
I guess since I don't really pay much attention to her I don't get off-put by some of her behavior, but she has a design and a persona that I absolutely want to wreck sexually.

>>7100873
Well I'm glad I managed to wake your lust for the tiny >imagineable necromancer. I want to write a sequel where she's fallen completely for the pleasures of the ass.

Eventually I might write a follow-up to Foxfriend and include some anal as well, because who doesn't want to molest Fubuki's cute little butt?

>>7102504
I might even prefer it to creative writing honestly
I just dont think anyone else would be interested

>>7104878
I think it could work if you picked the right setting, like some sort of fantasy world dictionary or encyclopedia for example. I doubt it would ever work in smut tho, that would just be annoying probably.

>>7102504
>>7105495
I think it would be a fun exercise if I wrote a wiki for >my fantasy world
Too bad I have to actually finish that first before this would make any sort of sense.

>>7104666
I gotta respect your ass fixation even if I'm not quite the same way. It's led to some amazing work.

>>7102504
Those kinds of texts are way easier to write than creative works imo. I hate writing them, but they're mostly just formulaic and if you want to put in a bunch of nothing words to look smart you have google. I actually have to come up with ideas and interesting ways to write when I'm writing a story.

>>7104878
>>7105495
We have the Barkeep and Hierophant report written in a reasearch paper/SCP style: https://pastebin.com/cMs9Ldj8

I WANT TO BURY MY DICK SO FAR UP PEKORA'S ASS, WHOEVER PULLS ME OUT WOULD BE CROWNED FUHRER OF PEKOLAND

>>7110487
Gay. Anal sex is extremely homosexual. You have the choice to fuck the hole exclusive to females and yet you choose the one males have.